第一篇:英語寫作
語言第一位
四級六級寫作重點考查考生的英語表達能力。閱卷老師最重視的是語言,考生最需要提高的也是語言。有的同學以為使用一些高難詞匯就能取得高分,其實不然。中英文寫作都講究“平淡如水”、“簡潔就是美”、“絢爛之極,歸于平淡”。美國作家海明威經常使用小學詞匯,但他是諾貝爾文學獎的得主,可見語言的好壞不在詞藻的華麗與否,而在于使用得是否得當。中學詞匯用好了,完全可以取得各種英語寫作考試的滿分。當然基礎較好的同學,恰當使用高難詞匯有助于提高分數。但是不要盲目追求難度,“與其寫一個錯誤的復雜句,不如寫一個正確的簡單句。”
四、六級寫作話題、觀點和字數都有嚴格限制,它只是一個展示你英語書面表達能力的平臺。因此,考生應該把構思的時間減到最少,把主要精力放在推敲語言上,力爭將語法、拼寫、標點等低級錯誤降至最低,力求用詞用句準確恰當,表達地道。這樣,即便沒有使用高難詞匯和句型,也可以保證穩得及格分數。切記作文不是口語,語言永遠第一,它決定了得分高下。
閱卷老師在語言方面主要從兩個方面進行評判:
1、基本正確四、六級考生的最大問題不是寫得太簡單,而是嚴重錯誤太多。基礎一般的同學即使使用小學或中學詞匯和句型,只要使用得基本正確,也可以得到及格分數。考生最常犯的語言錯誤有三類:語法、拼寫、標點。最常犯的語法錯誤包括:時態、冠詞、主謂一致、名詞單復數等。
2、豐富多變
基礎較好的同學,要想取得四、六級寫作高分,應做到豐富多變。豐富多變體現在詞匯和句型兩方面。同一詞語在一句話、一個段落乃至一篇文章中最好不要重復出現,應盡量使用同、近義詞替換(無法替換的關鍵詞除外)。例如:think可以替換為reckon, assume, argue等詞。如果想不到同、近義詞,可以使用上義詞進行替換。此外,句型也應富于變化,不要拘泥于主謂賓句型,可以使用主系表、過去分詞和現在分詞短語作狀語、不定式短語作狀語、狀語從句等多種句型。
四級作文如果量化成句數,只需寫10句左右;六級只需12句左右。全文應以短句為主,長短句相結合。所謂短句是指10個詞左右的句子,不能全篇都是5、6個詞的短句。同時,全文應有一定數量的長句,一般15~20詞即可,太長則易冗贅。有的同學以為只寫長句不寫短句,就能取得高分,實際上老師看長句會覺得很累,以為你不會寫短句,通常不會給高分。如果一篇中文作文每句都30多個字,定然晦澀難懂,英文也不例外。精煉的短句可以放在段首表示強調;復雜的長句可以進行具體的論證、舉例或描述。
高分真經
1、背誦
背誦是提高英語綜合能力的法寶,可分為以下5個層次:(1)精彩詞匯,(2)精彩句型,(3)精彩句子,(4)萬能框架,(5)經典范文。注意句子和句型不一樣,精彩句子應作為單詞來記憶。背誦前,確保自己已充分理解所有內容。
語言學習有兩個關鍵詞——輸入(INPUT)和輸出(OUTPUT)。聽力和閱讀屬于輸入,考生處于被動狀態,只需在考場上將聽到和看到的東西弄懂。應對這種題目的技巧很多,容易在短期內提高。但口語和寫作屬于輸出,考生必須變被動為主動,這很難在短期內突破。沒有大量的輸入,很難進行自由輸出。
四、六級寫作需要在30分鐘內完成一篇短文,共計120或150余字,很多同學叫苦不迭。但若將其改為中文作文,大家就會覺得易如反掌。原因何在?俗話說:“熟讀唐詩三百首,不會做詩也能吟。”同學們從小到大背誦了大量中文佳作,可以隨意組合,自由輸出。然而,在英語學習中,多數同學只沉溺于背單詞、摳語法、做閱讀,很少有人背誦英文文章。正因為沒有大量輸入,寫作才始終處于“擠牙膏”狀態,想一句說一句,說一句翻譯一句。
提高英語寫作要多讀、多背、多寫、多改。多讀、多背是首要任務,是積累輸入的關鍵。考生應大量積累經典英文句型、表達和范文,平時勤于背誦。
有的同學問我,說自己背過很多英文文章,但上了考場還是大腦一片空白,什么都想不起來。這種情況很常見,主要有兩個原因:一是沒有進行造句的工作,只是盲目背誦。二是背得不夠熟練。學習任何東西都講究先求質,再求量。大家英語學了很多年,文章看了很多,為什么寫作還是學不好?關鍵是量鋪開了,但質沒有上去。一篇文章應背到脫口而出的程度,如果還需要過腦子,就證明背得不夠熟練。一知半解,背得再多也是徒勞。
2、默寫
背完經典范文后,進行默寫。然后對照原文糾錯,搞清楚錯在什么地方。多數同學在寫的時候都會犯小錯誤,如拼寫、單復數、大小寫等。這些就是你在寫作中的弱點,也是閱卷老師最不能容忍的地方。培根說過:“Writing makes an exact man.”(寫作使人精確。)只有默寫下來你才會發現自己常犯哪些錯誤。
3、中譯英
中譯英也是提高寫作的好方法。根據范文的中文譯文,將其按自己的理解譯成英文。譯完后,你就會發現自己的翻譯和原文有很大差距,這些差距就是取得寫作高分的關鍵。這時,對照范文,看看原作者是怎么寫的,思考為什么這么寫。同樣的一句中文,范文中使用了哪些詞匯和句型?你使用了哪些詞匯和句型?學習范文使用不同的詞匯和句型。通過不斷練習,你的寫作水平不知不覺就提高了。
4、寫作
模仿范文寫作新的文章,套用范文的精彩詞匯、句型、句子和框架。最初套用時可能比較生硬,但隨著不斷的積累,組合起來會越來越順手。
上述的高分策略是提高四、六級英語寫作水平最有效的方法。在練習寫作的初始階段, 可勤查語法書和字典等工具書, 背記常用詞和短語, 以擴大詞匯量, 拓展知識面。背單詞時要深刻理解所背詞語的內在含義, 并了解其使用環境。備考時,熟記一些過渡詞、句型和范文,并進行仿寫。考試時,使用學習過的、熟悉而有把握的詞匯和句型,沒有把握的句子,盡量采取“回避政策”,切忌自編自造漢語式的英語詞組和句型。
第二篇:英語、寫作
Letters of Complaint)【例一】
Florence Trunkemeyer
College of Business
Ball State University
Muncie, IN 47300
November 15, 1998
General Computer Corporation
Engineering Department
P.O.Box 73219
Fort Worth, TX 76108
Dear Sir:
With reference to our order No.W 98, the 120 computer sets supplies to the above order were delivered the day before yesterday, but we regret that 20 sets were badly damaged.The packages containing the computer sets appeared to be in good condition and we accepted and signed for them without question.We unpacked the computer sets with care and can only assume that damage must be due to careless handling at some stage prior to packing.We shall be glad if you will replace all 20 sets as soon as possible.Meanwhile, we have put the damaged computer sets aside in case you need them to su(轉載自本網http://www.tmdps.cn,請保留此標記。)pport a claim on your suppliers for compensation.Yours sincerely,(Signature)
【例二】
Sunny Company
Zhongcheng Road Jinlian Building
Shanghai
September 12, 2001
Sales manager
Elegance Clothing Company
West Street, Nanjing
Jiangsu Province
Dear Mr.Chang:
On September 10, our order for 280 womens cotton sweaters was duly received, but we regret to say that 40 cotton sweaters in white color were seriously soiled.We had the case investigated immediately, and the result shows the damage was due to improper packing, for which the suppliers are definitely responsible.Needless to say, we have suffered a great loss from this, as we cannot sell the sweaters in this condition to our customers.We ask you to conduct investigation at your end and reply to us.Sincerely yours,Sunny Lee
Manager
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1、投訴信
Directions: You live in a room in college which you share with another student.You find it very difficult to work there because your roommate always has friends visiting and has parties in the room.Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term.You would prefer a single room.Explain your reasons.Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express/air dissatisfaction/disappointment/concern regarding accommodation.I would prefer to move into a single room next semester, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate’s inconsiderate behavior.For one thing, his friends are constantly visiting him;for another, he regularly holds noisy parties.To solve this problem/surmount this difficulty/improve this situation/crack this hard nut, I hope to draw the attention of the authorities concerned.I am sure you will agree that the only solution for me is to move into a room of my own.Therefore, I would be grateful if you could find a single room for me, preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible.Yours sincerely, Li Ming
2、推薦信
Directions: One of your friends wants to apply for a job working with foreign teenagers.Write a letter to recommend him/her, describe his/her past experience, and explain the reasons.Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to recommend one of my best friends, Zhou Botong, for this post.With his outstanding leadership and cheerful personality, he was elected chairperson of the Student Union of Tsinghua University several times.Busy as he was, he completed his major, teenage psychology, with an outstanding school record.Upon graduation he was assigned to be a teacher in Tsinghua Middle School.What is more, he loves his job and enjoys working with children.This won him great popularity among his students.Therefore, I do not hesitate to recommend him as an ideal candidate for the post you advertised.I am sure you will make a wise decision in hiring him.Yours sincerely, Li Ming
3、感謝信
Directions: After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by Mr.Shakespeare.Write a special letter to express your thanks.Dear Mr.Shakespeare, I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude.I am referring to that unfortunate accident the other day, when I was knocked off my bike by a taxi.If it had not been for your timely assistance in giving me first aid, I fear that the consequences might have been much serious.Everyone agrees that it was your quick-witted response in that emergency that has led to this satisfactory outcome.Although nowadays people in mounting numbers talk about the need to be unselfish, we see very few people practice what they preach.If there were more people like you, this world would be a much nicer place.Yours sincerely, Li Ming
4、邀請信
Directions: You want to invite some friends to a party.Write an invitation letter to them individually, elaborating on the reason why such a party should be held, and what activities will be arranged for them.Dear Wangcai, I will hold a dinner party at my house on April 1, 2008 to celebrate Mr.Guo Jing’s marriage with Ms.Fujiwora.As you are a close friend of us, we would very much like you to participate in the celebration and share our joy.The occasion will start at seven o’clock in the evening, with the showing of their wedding ceremony.This will be followed by a dinner party.At around ten, we will hold a small musical soiree, at which a band will perform some works by Bach and Strauss.If you do not have any prior appointment on April 1, we look forward to the pleasure of your company.Yours sincerely, Li Ming
5、告示
Directions: The Students’ Union of your department is planning a Chinese Speaking Contest.Write an announcement which covers the following information: 1)the purpose of the contest, 2)time and place of the contest, 3)what is required of the candidates, 4)details of the judges and awards.You should write about 100 words.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use Department of Chinese Language and Literature at the end of the announcement.Chinese-Speaking Contest January 19, 2008 To improve students’ ability to speak Chinese and enrich after-class activities, the Students’ Union of Department of Chinese Language and Literature is organizing a school-wide Chinese-speaking contest to be held on Saturday next week(26 January)at the Students’ Auditorium.Those who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before Tuesday next week.Five professors will be invited to be judges.The first six winners will be given awards.Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest.The Students’ Union Department of Chinese Language and Literature
6、交通問題
Directions: Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay in which you should 1)describe the pictures briefly;2)interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them, and 3)give your point of view.The pictures vividly reveal that heavy traffic is becoming increasingly serious all over the world.In the first photo, there is traffic congestion on the road with numerous cars, trucks and buses.In the second picture, hundreds of people are waiting for a train.We can deduce from the pictures that the photographer is trying to attract our attention to the issue of heavy traffic.First of all, every year men and women crowd into cities in search of employment, a decent living, and the excitement and stimulation of urban life.As people in mounting numbers flood into cities, city services and facilities have been strained to a breaking point.In addition, since in a city with booming industry, land is precious and cannot be extravagantly used by traffic, traffic flows constantly rise to fill whatever scale of roads and highways are provided for them.It is imperative for us to improve this situation.For one thing, the number of private cars should be limited while more bus routes should be opened up because buses can accommodate more passengers.For another, more streets and roads should be constructed.Since neither of the suggestions can effectively solve the problem, there is an increased awareness that the two solutions may be combined with other possible solutions to produce the best effect.7、網絡問題
Directions: Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay in which you should 1)describe the picture briefly;2)interpret the social phenomenon reflected by it, and 3)give your point of view.In recent years, people are developing an inseparable relationship with Internet.As is vividly depicted in the picture, it is convenient for us to click the mouse when surfing on line, either to entertain ourselves or to meet the work’s needs.Actually on-line visiting has become a routine activity in our everyday life.However, it seems rather ironic to use a chain instead of normal wire to connect with the mouse in this picture.The exaggerative and impressive portrayal has subtly revealed the duality of the relationship between man and Internet.Discussion on the duality has become very popular in newspapers or in people’s chats.On the one hand, no one denies that Internet is currently one of the most useful media in our daily life.People from all walks of life are benefiting considerably from its powerful function of information communication.But on the other hand, a great many people admit that they are too much addicted to Internet to maintain a regular and wholesome lifestyle.Cyber-living resembles the experience of looking constantly into a kaleidoscope which displays both colored patterns and illusions.Such a waste of time inevitably leads to their failure in their life and work.Accordingly, it is necessary for us to use Internet in a reasonable way and restrain from overindulgence.For one thing, college students in expanding numbers get on line every day to learn the news, to study English by registering for web courses, to exchange information through e-mails with their net friends and to download their favorite music, flash, film and pictures.Being veteran on-line shoppers, they frequently purchase books, CDs at much lower prices.For another, once indulged in the fictitious world, people can barely concentrate on real life.Consequently, many students just chat on line or play computer games immoderately everyday, skipping many essential classes.After all, Internet is invented to enrich our life, to connect you and me, and to improve the efficiency of our work rather than shackle us with a chain.8、環境問題
Directions: Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay in which you should 1)describe the pictures briefly;2)interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them, and 3)give your point of view.The pictures symbolically illustrate pollution is becoming increasingly serious around the globe.In the first cartoon, a man is scorching the earth on a chimney.In the second one, a famous ancient Chinese poet, Wang Bo is astonished by the heavy smoke poured by chimneys into the air and dirty river polluted by a factory.We are informed that “the autumn river is the same color with the sky”.The drawer is sending a message about the significance of the need for everyone to fight against the danger of environmental pollution.There is no denying that the industry is indications of civilization, progress and development.Unfortunately, as industry develops, so will the number of factories, and the amount of industry pollutants.We are so development-oriented that we almost can sacrifice our blue sky and pure water in order to obtain a little material gain.As a consequence, it is imperative for us to take drastic actions.On the one hand, the factories should be equipped with devices which can dispose of waste gas and water so as to prevent them from polluting our planet.On the other hand, there should be an increasingly loud voice from the public for firm actions against poisonous gas sent off and unhealthy water polluted by factories.9、職業道德
Directions: Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay in which you should 1)describe the pictures briefly;2)interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them, and 3)give your point of view.The cartoons vividly depict people in expanding numbers are engaged in open and rampant cheating in business.In the first drawing, a boy has no courage to have dinner in front of delicious foods in that there may exist pesticide pollution or poisonous elements in the foods.In the second picture, the administrative office, salesmen, breeding families and forage shops are laughing at the hanging of a poisonous duck.Professional dishonesty has a very damaging effect.In the first place, since cheating in business reveals the moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weakness of those businessmen who engage in it, the dishonest practice will ultimately exerts a perverse influence on the whole society.In the second place, it not only puts honest businessmen at a competitive disadvantage, encouraging those who did not cheat to adopt similar practices later, but undermines the very foundation of professional ethics in business.It is often painful to impose sanctions in a specific case.But it is worthwhile.For one thing, to eliminate professional dishonesty thoroughly, serious forms of punishment for a willful offense—a suspension of the offender from business—should be applied.For another, since the incentives to engage in cheating in business are mainly due to a lack of adequate precautions, drastic actions should be taken to prevent one form of cheating or another
10、青少年問題
Directions: Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay in which you should 1)describe the cartoon briefly;2)interpret the social phenomenon reflected by it, and 3)give your point of view.The cartoon vividly illustrates a gang of youngsters, holding axes in their hands, are rushing to fight with others.The caption reads, “Juvenile delinquency is increasingly lower than normal age.”
Careful deliberation of this problem has given me several ideas as to why this should be so.To begin with, with the rising divorce rate, some children are not properly taken care of, and are easily led astray by evildoers.What is more, devoid of the nourishment of education and a school environment, the teenagers failing in various entrance examinations become full of resentment at a society which they feel has rejected them.Last but not least, inexperienced and gullible young people plunge into the illusory world of electric games, on-line chat or even pornography.Such alienation from proper social values is the slippery slope to crime.It is my view that, first of all, the whole of society should attach great importance to the sound growth of youngsters.Furthermore, proper guidance and protection of adults and schools are vital to teenagers.To sum up, if we exert every effort, the juvenile crime rate will undoubtedly be brought down and effectively controlled in a short while.
第三篇:英語寫作
Part V Writing(10%)
Direction: Write a Notice according to the information you have been provided.(10 points)
根據所給提示,用英語寫一個通知。
學生會要組織一次英語講座。假如你是學生會干部,請你用英語寫一則通知,通知時間為2012年6月12日,內容如下:
1.2.3.4.5.講座題目:學習英語的重要性 演講者:北京大學懷特教授(ProfessorWhite)講座時間:6月15日, 星期五下午2:30-4:30 地點:學校體育館 注意事項:散會后回教室就報告內容開展討論,并制定出各自的英語學習計劃。
Words for Reference: 體育館 stadium學生會 students’ union
Part V Writing(10%)
Direction: Write a Notice according to the information you have been provided.(10 points)
假如你校學生會要舉辦一次英語演講比賽,請你用英語寫一篇書面通知,以便張貼到布告欄上。通知時間為2012年6月12日,通知須包括以下內容:
1.比賽目的:提高學生的英語口語水平
2.比賽時間:2012年6月15日下午4點
3.比賽地點:四樓階梯教室
4.評比辦法:由五位老師做評委其中包括Mr.Smith
5.獎項設置:一等獎1名,二等獎3名,三等獎5名
6.報名辦法:到各班班長處報名
Words for Reference:學生會 students’ union階梯教室 auditorium
比賽contest評委:judge一等獎 first prize
Part V Writing(10%)
Direction: Write a Letter of Appreciation according to the information you have been provided.(10 points)
假設你是李華,交換生Tracy剛剛結束在你們學校的學習生活,已經返回英國。作為班長,請你根據以下內容用英語寫一分感謝信,感謝她一學期以來帶給大家的美好回憶,寫信時間為6月12日:
1.懷念與她相處的快樂時光;
2.感謝她對大家英語學習的幫助;
3.感謝她為班級捐贈的英文書籍;
4.歡迎她有機會再來中國。
Words for Reference: 回憶 memory捐贈 donate
Part V Writing(10%)
Direction: Write a Letter of Appreciation according to the information you have been provided.(10 points)
以李明的名義給Mr.Foster寫一封信。寫信日期是2012年6月12日。
內容:已收到他寄來的禮物(一件精美的雕塑),非常喜歡這禮物,把它們放在書架上正合適。得知他將來上海參加你的生日,十分高興。請他將航班告訴你。你將去機場接他。注意:必須包括對收件人的稱謂、寫信日期、發信人的簽名等基本格式。
Words for reference: 雕塑:sculpture 航班:flight number 書架:book shelf
Part V Writing(10%)
Direction: Write a Letter of Application according to the information you have been provided.(10 points)
你校英語外籍教師Boris和Chris暑假期間準備在本地開一家西餐小店,要找若干名大學生為打工人員。下面是招聘啟事:
Wantedcollege students
Do service work and act as translators
Healthy and helpful
Small wages
Contact: bjpub@bc.com
假定你叫李華,愿意應聘。請寫封電子郵件,介紹自己,并說明應聘理由。
Part V Writing(10%)
Direction: Write a Letter of Application according to the information you have been provided.(10 points)
假設你是李華,得知China Daily報社招聘兼職記者,你有意應聘,請按下列要求給報社寫一封申請信。
1.表明自己感興趣。
2.說明自己的優勢:知識面、英語水平、人際關系、相關經歷等。
3.希望得到回復。
Words for reference: 兼職:part-time job報社:agency記者: journalist
第四篇:英語寫作
1.英語文章段落結構特點
英語文章段落結構一般有三部分構成:主題句+擴展句+結尾句
(1)主題句:所謂主題句,就是英語文章段落的中心思想句。它是英語文章段落的靈魂,在英語文章段落中居于主導地位。我們都知道英語文章一般喜歡開門見山,所以主題句一般位于英語文章段落的句首。其他句子都要圍繞它而展開。
(2)擴展句:所謂擴展句就是為主題句起解釋說明或論證的句子。通常我們寫擴展句所采用的方法是舉例子(for example, for instance, such as, a case in point is that---)、列數據(according to the recent study/survey,---)等。
(3)結尾句:所謂結尾句就是總結句。英語寫作也類似于漢語寫作,最后再把自己本段落的寫作目的陳述一下。但是在英語寫作中結尾句畢竟還是少數。因此我們通常看到英語的文章段落結構 60%-70%都是由主題句+擴展句構成。
學會遣詞造句
1.遣詞:
(1)詞匯等級
所謂詞匯的等級就是,我們在寫作的過程中,如果想出一個基本詞匯來之后,能夠在這個基本詞匯的基礎上把它在提升一下,也就是我們一般寫作所提倡的用“難詞”。比如,我們一提到“重要的”,大多數同學首先會想到“important”這個單詞,那么提升一下的話就可以想到它的如下同義詞:significant, vital, main, basilica, crucial, momentous etc
(2)詞匯準確性
所謂詞匯的準確性是指,我們在有一個詞近而想到它的同義詞之后,要結合語境選擇恰當的用詞。在這里必須指明的是,并不是詞匯等級越高越好,必須還要考慮到適合于不同的語境。比如,眼睛大,這個“大的”形容詞,我們首先會想到big,近而想到great, large, huge, vast, titanic, enormous etc。那么是不是用后面的詞就可以了呢?或者說用上enormous等詞更能博得閱卷人的好感呢?答案是否定的。在這里很明顯用后面的詞來修飾眼睛是不可以,只能用big,因為我們聽過一首英文歌曲叫做“I am a big big girl, in a big big world.”big表示眼睛大而迷人可愛的。
造句:
(1)詞組
很多考生平時寫作不太擅長用詞組,對于他們而言最習慣的就是想到漢語,然后對應漢語思維寫出英語句子,這種寫作只能是單詞的羅列組合,談不上什么技巧文采可言,因此,寫出來的文章必然就是所謂平淡如流水,沒有英語的味道。如果我們能夠在單詞的基礎上,進一步想到與之同義的詞組,那么文章就會顯得與眾不同,更具有英語的味道。比如上面所說的“重要的”這個單詞,當我們想到important的時候,如果從語法角度再稍加考慮一下,我們會想到“be of importance”。因為,語法中規定:形容詞等于of加這個形容詞的名詞形式。如果再提升一步,我們還學過一個常用的詞組叫做“play an important role in---”。很多同學說自己的文章湊不夠字數或是沒有文采,那么采用詞組進行寫作是不是就可以解決以上問題了呢?
(2)句式
除了采用詞組,要使文章更具英語的味道,我們還需要變換句式。沒有受過
正規作文訓練的考生,通常采用的句式多為主謂賓、主系表。于是我們看到大多數的文章充斥著這樣的形式:I am a good boy, and I am a student.I study in Shandong University, and I have three years experience in Qilu Hotel.這樣流水帳式的文章顯然不能得到高分。
寫作中閱卷人喜歡的句式有以下兩種:一是插入語;二是倒裝。
第一,插入語。
所謂插入語,英語中有兩種形式。一種是有兩個逗號之間引起的成分稱之為插入語;第二種是有兩個半破折號引起的成分稱之為插入語。如下所示(黑體劃線處):
Jinan, the Spring City, is a famous tourist city.Other people may give us instrumental support—financial aid,material resources, and needed services—that reduces stress by helping us resolve and cope with our problems.插入語的作用主要有兩個,一個是突出主語,比如說:He, who would like to play basketball, is a good student.第二個作用是解釋說明,比如說:People, especially students, should work hard.第二,倒裝
倒裝是我們寫作中需要用到的。雖然略顯俗套,但是卻是很能滿足閱卷人的主觀感受的。常用的倒裝形式有以下幾種:
Only + 時間狀語
Only when all of us join in the efforts of eliminating cheating at all levels can we expect to have a cleaner society and a more beautiful future.Only + 介詞詞組
Only by planning his time care fully can he improve efficiency and make achievements.Only in this way can we master the writing skills step by steps.否定詞位于句首(hardly when;never;not only---,but also---;seldom)在我一生當中很難遇到這樣的人
Seldom in my life have I met such a kind-hearted man.地點方位名詞位于句首
In no other place in the world can one find such enthusiasm for applying for hosting the 2008 Olympic Games.(3)修辭
無論是漢語寫作還是英語寫作,修辭其實非常的重要。它是作者寫作功底具體事例地展現。所謂修辭包括比喻、擬人、排比等等。英語寫作中的修辭問題我已經專門寫過一篇文章(見《英語寫作幾種修辭手法》)。這里僅舉一個比喻例子,還是拿“重要的”來舉例。當你用完詞組之后,如果你用上下面比如句子,則文章就會顯得神采飛揚,試比較:
The bicycle is important for us.The bicycle is of importance for us.The bicycle plays an important role in our life.The bicycle, environmental friendliness vehicle, plays an important
role in our life.The bicycle is like the air, water, and sunshine and cannot be parted with a moment in our life.那么很明顯,最后一個句子是我們最終拿到考場上去搏擊高分的句子。第四,平時要注意積累
很多考生為了寫好作文也作了好多工作,課下也付出了很多,包括背誦大量的文章等等,但是提筆寫作時候,仍不見的有所改觀。問題在哪里呢?高頻詞匯你就不需要了,其實就是四級的單詞...你覺得比較記住的就用用.....加油!
第五篇:英語寫作
英語作文模板
一、英語作文的框機架 對比觀點題型
(1)要求論述兩個對立的觀點并給出自己的看法。1.有一些人認為……2.另一些人認為……3.我的看法……
Nowadays,the topic of ①-----------------(主題)is becoming more and more popular.There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二).Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥------------------(理由二).Thirdly(finally),⑦----------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的觀點).The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.(2)給出一個觀點,要求考生反對這一觀點
Some people believe that ①----------------(觀點一).For example, they think ②-----------------(舉例說明).And it will bring them ③---------------(為他們帶來的好處).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④-------------(我不同意該看法的理由一).For another thing, ⑤---------(反對的理由之二). Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥-----(我對文章所討論主題的看法). 解決方法題型
要求考生列舉出解決問題的多種途徑
1.問題現狀
2.怎樣解決(解決方案的優缺點)In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.First,------------(說明A的現狀).Second,----------(舉例進一步說明現狀)Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,---------------(解決方法一).For another-------------(解決方法二).Finally,--------------(解決方法三).Personally, I believe that-------------(我的解決方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because--------------(帶來的好處).說明利弊題型
這種題型往往要求先說明一下現狀,再對比事物本身的利弊,有時也會單從一個角度(利或弊)出發,最后往往要求考生表明自己的態度(或對事物前景提出預測)
1.說明事物現狀 2.事物本身的優缺點 3.你對現狀(或前景)的看法 Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First----------------(A的優點之一).Besides-------------------(A的優點之二).But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that----------------(A的第一個缺點).To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二個缺點). Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to---------------(我的看法). 議論文的框架
(1)不同觀點列舉型(選擇型)
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文題目.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 觀點一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___觀點一_____.People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that_觀二_____.In their point of view, on the one hand, ___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___觀點二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __觀點一或二_.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.(2)利弊型的議論文
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文題目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __題目議題_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___優點一______.And secondly ___優點二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”,討論議題is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with,缺 點 一.In addition, 缺 點 二.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of 討論議題into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____討論議題___.經典句式
(一)....has both advantages and disadvantages.……既有利又有弊。1.Obviously television has both advantages and disadvantages. 2.Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages.
3.Compared with cars,bikes have their advantages and disadvantages. 類似句式
1.Although computers bring people a lot of convenience,they have many disadvantages.
2....has many advantages.For example,...However,just as every coin has two sides,...has its disadvantages .(just as every coin has two sides也很值得背誦。)
(二)....play(s)an important role /part in...……在……中扮演重要角色/起重要作用。1.Computers play an important role in science and technology. 2.Computers play a more and more important role in our life.
Computers play an increasingly important role in our studies. 3.Education plays an important part in developing our mind. 類似句式
1.Advertisement plays an informative role in our daily life.
2.In the past,letters played a decisive role in long-distance communication.But now,telephone,email,fax have taken their place.
(三)I.With the development of...,隨著……的發展,1.With the development of our economy,many Chinese families can afford a car.
2.With the development of our economy and society,pollution is more and more serious.
3.With the rapid development of science and technology,people can get a college degree by taking online-courses at home. 類似句式
1.With the rapid increase of China's population,housing problem is becoming more and more serious.
(四)It is important for
It is important for everyone to learn English well in our rapidly developing world 類似句式:
It is important/(necessary, difficult, convenient, possible)for sb.to do sth
1、It is necessary to shake hands when you first meet someone
(五)The+比較級..., the+比較級...1,,The harder you work at it, the more progress you will make.類似句式
比較級+and+比較級(The world is getting smaller and smaller.)