第一篇:中考英語作文寫作高分框架結構
議論文的框架
(1)不同觀點列舉型(選擇型)
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文題目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 觀點一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一 _______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___觀點一_____.People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___觀點二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand,___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___觀點二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __觀點一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.(2)利弊型的議論文
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文題目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __題目議題_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___優點一______.And secondly ___優點二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, every coin has two sides, __討論議題______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺點一______.In addition, ____缺點二______.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __討論議題____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____討論議題___.(3)2015年中考英語作文模板:現象說明文
Recently _______,what amazes us most is______________,it is ture that__________.There are many reasons explaining__________________________.The main reason is____________________.what is more_________________________.thirdly__________________________.As a result_______________.Considering all there,________________________.For one thing_____________________,for another________
____.In Conclusion____________________.(4)2015年中考英語作文模板:說明原因型
Currently,A has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory---nothing is more valuable than A.It is clear that ______If you _____, as a result ,your dreams will come true.On the contrary, if you_____failure will be following with you.It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that _____.You donn't have to look very far to find out the truth , in respect that we all know_____.It will exert a profound influence upon _____.With reference to my standpoint ,I think _____.(5)2015年中考英語作文模板:說明利弊題型
說明利弊題型
這種題型往往要求先說明一下現狀,再對比事物本身的利弊,有時也會單從一個角度(利或弊)出發,最后往往要求考生表明自己的態度(或對事物前景提出預測)
1.說明事物現狀
2.事物本身的優缺點(或一方面)
3.你對現狀(或前景)的看法
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First----------------(A的優點之一).Besides-------------------(A的優點之二).But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that----------------(A的第一個缺點).To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二個缺點).Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to---------------(我的看法).(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way,---------------(對前景的預測).)(6)2015年中考英語作文模板:闡述主題題型
闡述主題題型 要求從一句話或一個主題出發,按照提綱的要求進行論述.1.闡述名言或主題所蘊涵的意義.2.分析并舉例使其更充實.中考英語作文萬能模板:解決方法題型 要求考生列舉出解決問題的多種途徑 1.問題現狀 2.怎樣解決(解決方案的優缺點)In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.First,------------(說明A的現狀).Second,---------------(舉例進一步說明現狀)Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,---------------(解決方法一).For another-------------(解決方法二).Finally,--------------(解決方法三).Personally, I believe that-------------(我的解決方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future isawaiting us because--------------(帶來的好處).一、開頭句型
I....has both advantages and disadvantages.??既有利又有弊。例如: 1.Obviously television has both advantages and disadvantages. 很顯然電視有利也有弊
2.Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages. 居住在城市有利也有弊
3.Compared with cars,bikes have their advantages and disadvantages. 和汽車比較,自行車有它的好處也有它的不好處 舉一反三:
1.Although computers bring people a lot of convenience,they have many disadvantages. 盡管電腦給人們帶來許多方便,但它們仍有許多弊端
2....has many advantages.For example,...However,just as every coin has two sides,...has its disadvantages.
正如每枚硬幣有兩面一樣
(本例將利弊分開講,轉折過渡自然。just as every coin has two sides也很值得背誦。)
II....play(s)an important role /part in...??在??中扮演重要角色/起重要作用。例如:
1.Computers play an important role in science and technology. 2.Computers play a more and more important role in our life. Computers play an increasingly important role in our studies. 3.Education plays an important part in developing our mind. 4.Addiction to alcohol and drugs play a role in homelessness. 除了酒精和藥物在無家可歸者身上發揮作用 舉一反三:
1.Advertisement plays an informative role in our daily life. 廣告在我們日常生活中扮演著提供信息的作用
2.In the past,letters played a decisive role in long-distance communication.But now,telephone,email,fax have taken their place.
III.With the development of...,隨著??的發展,例如:
1.With the development of our economy,m any Chinese families can afford a car. 2.With the development of our economy and society,pollution is more and more serious. 3.With the rapid development of science and technology,people can get a college degree by taking online-courses at home. 4.With the current social and technological developments,employees with more knowledge and higher academic degrees are needed. 舉一反三:
1.With the rapid increase of China's population,housing problem is becoming more and more serious. 隨著中國人口的急劇增加,住房問題越來越突出。
2.With more and more women entering society,people's attitude towards women is changing.
隨著越來越多的婦女走入社會,人們對婦女的態度也在改變。
3.With the deepening of Chinese reform and opening up,an increasing number of Chinese families can afford a car.
隨著中國改革開放的深入,越來越多的中國家庭買得起車了。
(“越來越多”除了常用的more and more外,還可以用an increasing number of,a growing number of,a significant number of,a great number of等來表達。)
IV.When it comes to...,some people think /believe that...,others argue /claim that opposite /reverse is true.There is probably some truth in both arguments /statements,but...當說到??,有些人認為??,但另一些人則持相反的觀點??。這兩種觀點可能都有點道理,但??。本結構先用when it comes to ...引出話題,再用some...others ...這個對立的結構引出了兩種相反的觀點,然后說There is some truth in both...表明嚴謹公正的態度,最后用but...很自然地引出了自己的論點。請看下面這個例子:
TV a good thing or bad thing When it comes to TV,some people believe that it is extremely valuable,as it provides relaxation,entertainment and education. Others argue that it is harmful for it begins to control our lives and deprives people of time to do other activities.There is probably some truth in both sides.But we must realize that television itself is neither good or bad.It is the uses to which it is put that determines its value to society.
二、結尾句型
英語議論文多以簡要總結全文或對所討論的問題提出解決辦法來結尾。總結全文時除常用到in one /a word,generally speaking等外,沒有固定模式。提出解決辦法時卻常使用下一句型。V....take measures to do sth.例如:
1.We should take measures to control pollution in order to save the world. 2.We'd better take effective measures to prevent students from cheating on exams. 3.The government decided to take strong measures against drug abuse4.Urgent measures should be taken to prevent terrorists from carrying out further attacks 常用句型二
一,開頭句型
1.As far as...is concerned 2.It goes without saying that...3.It can be said with certainty that...4.As the proverb says 5.It has to be noticed that...6.It`s generally recognized that...7.It`s likely that 8.It`s hardly that...It’s hardly too much to say that...What calls for special attention is that...需要特別注意的是 There’s no denying the fact that...毫無疑問,無可否認 Nothing is more important than the fact that...what’s far more important is that...更重要的是??
二,銜接句型
A case in point is...As is often the case..這是常有的事??.As stated in the previous paragraph如前段所述
But the problem is not so simple.Therefore然而問題并非如此簡單,所以?? But it’s a pity that...For all that...In spite of the fact that...Further, we hold opinion that...However , the difficult lies in...Similarly, we should pay attention to...not(that)...but(that)...不是,而是
In view of the present station.鑒于目前形勢 As has been mentioned above...In this respect, we many as well(say)從這個角度上我們可以說
However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, that is...然而我們還得看到事物的另一方面,即
三,結尾句型
I will conclude by saying...Therefore, we have the reason to believe that...All things considered,總而言之It may be safely said that...Therefore, in my opinion, it’s more advisable...It can be concluded from the discussion that...從中我們可以得出這樣的結論 From my point of view, it would be better if...在我看來??也許更好
四,能句型
Let’s take...to illustrate this.試舉例以茲證明
let’s take the above chart as an example to illustrate this.It’s remains to be further studied...There’s question is how...so that, so...that...
第二篇:中考英語高分作文如何寫
如何寫出中考英語高分作文
英語寫作是學生學習的一個盲點,缺乏對寫作的專門訓練和反思,老師的工作量大,造成作文講評大多數時候只談現象,因此學生學得也不具體、不深入,忽略寫作技能的提高,甚至誤認為只要句子結構正確,無單詞拼寫錯誤就應該得滿分。同學們應該走出對英語寫作認識上的誤區。那么怎樣才能寫出一篇優秀作文,而在中考中獲取高分呢?
一、寫作訣竅
總體把握,要點齊全;人稱時態,邏輯清楚;
關鍵詞匯,動詞第一;組詞成句,結構完整;
組句成文,連詞增色;此路不通,繞道迂回;
字跡工整,留好印象;從句適量,高分有望。
二、寫作步驟
1.認真審題。審題包括要點、格式、詞數以及此篇文章要傳遞給讀者什么樣的信息,告誡讀者什么(即寫作目的)。
2.確定文體和時態。確定文體后,根據不同文體的特點和要求進行組織材料;同時確定出該篇文章的總時態與時態的變化。
3.寫完要點,但不隨意發揮。
4.先草稿,后抄寫。
三、習作點評
[2004年全國中學生英語能力競賽初賽初三組](14分)
Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it.tell the magazine readers.﹒what exactly your hobby is;
﹒when and how you became interested in this hobby;
﹒why you enjoy your hobby;
﹒about your hopes and plans for the future.寫作要求:
1.根據所提供的內容,適當拓展想象空間,靈活地將提供的信息體現在文章中。
2.條理清楚,語句通順,書寫清晰、規范。
3.詞數60-80。
[學生習作a]
My hobby is read books.when i was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like needing books
Because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn
a lot of knowledge from books.Books also can teach me
how to be a good person.Books even can solve many
problems for me.I will read more good books to improve
myself.①改為reading books,動詞作表語時應該用動名詞。
②also的位置應放在can之后。
[點評]:檔次9-11分。
①要點不全,漏掉最后一個要點。
②句子基本無誤,能正確傳遞信息給讀者但文章不流暢,句子與句子之間過渡不自然,給讀者感覺在回答上述① ② ③問題。
③有少量錯誤。
[學生習作b]
My hobby is reading.reading books is very enjoyable.When I was young, my mother used to tell me a story before
I went to bed every night.the stories were so interesting
that I always felt they weren’t enough.So I began to read
books by myself.little by little I became interested in
reading.I can learn much knowledge and many interesting
things all over the world.when I read books , I can enjoy the
beautiful sentences.At the same time I can improve my
writing.I want to be a writer in the future, so I must study
hard and read more books so that my dream can come true.①開門見山、點題。
②真情流露,理由充分。
③文中帶圈的連詞使用得恰當,使文章過渡自然、④巧妙使用句型以表決心。
[點評]:檔次13-14分。
①清楚表達寫作目的,要點齊全。
②語言表達靈活多樣,字里行間流露出真情實感,文章有感染力。
③恰當使用連詞和從句,語言流暢,且無錯誤,是一篇高質量的作文。
[高分突破]
①文體:記敘文。
②要點:what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future。
③時態:一般現在時,一般過去時,一般將來時的自然變化。
內容具有開放性,但它也是“控制性”的寫作試題,因此不能隨意發揮,要善于抓信息,寫完要點。選用這兩篇學生真實習作,一是因為他們選材相同,二是因為他們都是英語成績優秀的同學。同學b靈活使用連詞so?that,so,little by little,when,so that等,恰到好處地使用新句型和短語used to,became interested in,come true??等,使內容豐富,讀起來優美流暢。其實這些表達同學a也會,只是缺乏技術加工。通過這兩篇作文點評,同學們便能悟出其中的奧妙。
四、培養途徑
1.根據老師布置的寫作內容,獨立完成一篇寫作。
2.與同伴合作,交流自己的寫作,通過交流找出各自作文中寫得好的地方和優美的句子,合作創造一篇新的文章,供大家欣賞。
3.找老師點評,請求老師指點,尤其是怎樣潤色。
4.自己糾錯,寫下反思。
五、備考演練
a
縉云山是重慶著名的游覽勝地,每天有大量的游客。請你根據下面提供的信息寫一篇報道,說明現在的游客在環境保護方面的變化。
寫作要求:
1.詞數在100左右。
2.條理清楚,語句通順。
3.開頭已寫好,但不計入總詞數。
Jinyun mountain is a famous place of interest ?
b
閱讀電視廣告詞:“if we don’t save water,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根據提示,寫一篇60-80詞的短文。
提示:
1.生活離不開水。
2.可飲用水在減少。
3.水污染嚴重。
4.應保護水源,再利用水。
a.[思路點撥]:
①文體:記敘文。
②時態:一般過去時態,一般現在時態。采用正反對比的寫作手法,增加感染力。③寫作目的:告訴讀者保護環境的重要性。
Jinyun mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty.but a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting the environment.they threw their rubbish,such as plastic bags,fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.sometimes they broke trees,picked flowers and killed birds.Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.luckily,great changes have taken place here.tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins,and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking to prevent starting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.b.[思路點撥]:
①夾敘夾議(說明現狀,談談感想)。
②時態:一般現在時態。
③廣告詞的含義——水很重要,應保護和再利用(寫作意圖)。
Water is very important to humans.we can’t live without water.The water we can drink is falling.but some people don’t seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour dirty water into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.if we don’t do this,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop
第三篇:2017考研英語作文,應用文寫作框架結構
2017考研英語作文,應用文寫作框架結構
小編相信大家都應該看考研英語的大綱要求,作文這一項里,包含的應用文的類型是多種多樣的,比如:投訴信、建議信、申請信、求職信、辭職信、求學習呢、求助信、感謝信、號召信、道歉信、簡歷、備忘錄、尋物啟事、招領啟事等等,但是小編根據歷年真題整理出來的數據表明,最常考到的是書信,尤其是在近幾年的考研作文中,應用文考的最多就是書信體應用文。所以小編整理除了一個書信的通用模板的格式給大家,供大家參考。
一、首段的寫作方法
1.問候收信人Dear Sir/Madam2.解釋寫信的原因申請:
I’m writing for an opportunity to work in your esteemed company that boasts of decadesof reputation邀請:I’m writing to request your attendance to a dinner party that is to be held in Beijing onAugust.感謝:I am writing to extend my heartfelt thanks(sincere gratitude)toward…投訴:I am writing to complain about the poor quality of a product that I purchased from yourstore two weeks ago.祝賀:I am writing to extend my sincere greetings, wishing you a happyNew Year, your careergreater success and your family happiness.二、中間段的寫作方法
1.閱讀題目要求,找到可以用到的名詞或動詞。
【示例】Write a letter of application according to the following situation.You saw anadvertisement in this morning’s newspaper.A company needs a secretary and you are interested.Write an application letter to that company.2.注意題目文字暗示,把名詞具體化,把動詞近義詞化
【示例】I am pleased to discover from Beijing Youth that your company is calling for a secretary.Iwonder if you could consider my application, for I am delighted to join your esteemed company.First, I can speak and write English fluently, which happens to meet your current requirement forthe vacancy.Second, I have a good command of Microsoft Office System, Graphic Design andADOBE system.Third and last, I am always ready to help other people because I’m patient,enthusiastic and sincere.Given these considerations, I sincerely hope that I can be a member ofyour esteemed company.三、結尾段的寫作方法(三句話)
【示例】I would appreciate your assistance in this matter.If you have any question, please don’thesitate to contact me.I can be reached at…Look forward to your reply.四、署名在文章右下角署名
一般格式為:Your sincerely…小編這次和大家分享的其實是信件的標準通用模板,即放之四海皆準的框架結構,其實考驗英語作文不乏有出現寫信這種格式的考察方法,那么小編需要提醒大家的就是,信件的寫作一定要注意格式,信件的寫作格式簡直是送
分大家的呀我的童鞋們,如果因為格式問題扣分是不是很冤枉呢!那除了格式之外同學們還要注意的就是信件內容需要把控清楚,不要脫離要求,接下來的時間里,小編或陸陸續續放上來一些應用文的其他類型的模板給大家,比如信件的具體類型,投訴信、建議信之類的,感興趣的同學跟進就好了哦!
第四篇:中考英語作文如何獲得高分
中考英語作文如何獲得高分?
———中考英語寫作技巧指導
墊江第九中學曾令容
古人說得好:“授人以魚,可供一飯之需;授人以漁,斯是一世之用”。在教學中,除了加強英語寫作訓練基本功外,還應該給予寫作技巧的指導,尤其是在考試時間不很充裕的條件下,如何在短時間內寫出好的文章,離不開一定的寫作技巧。
一.寫好起始句。
起始句用得好,可以很快吸引讀者的注意,吸引閱卷老師的眼球。開頭段的寫法多種多樣,常見的有以下幾種。
1.提出問題或話題,例如:
Does food affect your health? And if so what kind of effects does it have?
這兩個問句就是一篇短文“food”的開頭段。這樣的開頭可以吸引讀者的注意力,順著問題思索并有意閱讀下文,以便得到答案。
2.提出觀點。例如:
More and more people like bicycling and it is no surprise.It is fun, healthy and good for the environment.3.引用名言。如:01.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧.02.Time is money.時間就是金錢
03.Easier said than done.說來容易做來難
04.Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成.05.Look before you leap.三思而后行.06.Knowledge is power.知識就是力量
07.God helps those who help themselves.自助者天助.08.Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.心之所愿,無事不成 09.It’s never too old to learn.活到老,學到老
10.No pains, no gains.不勞無獲
11.Once in a blue moon.千載難逢
12.To make the impossible possible.將不可能變為可能
13.Failure is the mother of success.失敗乃成功之母
14.A friend in need is a friend indeed.患難見真情
15.First things first.先做重要之事
16.Great minds think alike.英雄所見略同
17.Rome was not built in a day.成功并非一朝一夕的事
18.All that glitters is not gold.閃光的未必都是金子
19.East or west, home is the best.金窩銀窩不如自家草窩
20.Time and tide wait for no man.時間不等人
4.數字統計
原理:要想更有說服力,就應該用數字來說明。
題目:honesty
According to the latest research, the reason why 78 per cent of the students ask for leave is not real.當然要根據具體的文章體裁來選用,如記敘文就常按時間順序來寫。
二.避免重復使用詞匯
有時一篇作文里需要多次使用相同意思的詞,這時,表達方式的變換,用不同的單詞或詞組表達相同的意義就顯得非常重要。如果表達方式過于單一,不免有黔驢技窮之嫌,而豐富的表達方式則可反映出英語應用能力之高和課外閱讀量之多,如喜歡可用“favorite,like ,be interested in
“enjoy” 或“be fond of”幫助某人,可以說:do somebodya favor ,give somebody a hand , help sb.8歲可以說:by the age of eight , at the age of eight, at eight ,A boy of eight 等多種表達方式。在平時的練習及閱讀中,要注重同一意義的多種表達,正如在數理化學習中我們要注重一題多解一樣。
三.化難為易,揚長避短。
1.轉換角度,殊途同歸。
All roads lead to Rome.寫作中碰到任何陌生的內容均可通過轉換角度,將陌生的詞匯用自己所熟悉的方式迂回地表達出來,若是受題目要求所縛,逐字翻譯,不敢越雷池半步,必然寫不出生動地道的文章。
e.g: 1).Mon stayed with me in the hospital.(媽媽在醫院里陪著我,英語例句中避開了陪著一詞)
2.)He went to Shenzhen and tried his luck there.(他到深圳打工去了)。英語例句中避開了打工一詞。
3.)I hope to see all of you there.(歡迎大家屆時蒞臨。)英語例句中避開了“歡迎”一詞。
一旦碰到較難表達的漢語句子時,應在所學句型和詞匯范圍內快速選擇一種最有把握的方式表達。
4)這本辭典由30多位教授耗費數年時間編成。
①Over thirty professors spent several years on the dictionary.
②It took over thirty professors several years to finish this dictionary.
分析:此句的難點是“耗費”和“編成”,表達的意思是教授們花了幾年時間在這本辭典上,或花了幾年時間才完成這本辭典。
2.揚長避短
寫作時遇到難以表達的名詞,可以利用名詞從句或名詞詞組來化解難點,例如:
1)請讓我知道你的想法。
Please let me know what you think.(在詞句中,名詞what從句代替了想法這一名詞)。又如:
2)這本字帖是內容重要,還是形式重要?
Which is more important in this copybook, what to write or how to write?
(內容和形式兩詞較難翻譯,則用what to write 和How to write 分別化解之。
四. 地道。
1.使用固定短語或句型。
每種語言都有自己的習慣表達方式,英語也不例外。
例(1):我的表壞了。
誤:My watch is bad
正:①There is something wrong with my watch.
②My watch has something wrong.
③My watch doesn’t work.例(2):我買這本書花了50元。
It took me 50 yuan to buy this book.This book cost me 50 yuan.I spent 50yuan on this book.I paid 50 yuan for this book.例(3):近十年來中國發生了巨大的變化。
誤:China has taken place great changes in the last ten years.
正:Great changes have taken place in China in the last ten years.
分析:例1中的take place為不及物動詞,不能帶賓語。
2.活用語法。
有時諺語可以稍加改變引申使用。例如:
Do in Rome as the Romans do.When in Rome, do as the Romans do.When you go to Rome, do as the Romans do.入鄉隨俗
有人按此意將這諺語改換使用:
When in England, do as the English do.All roads lead to Rome.We also say : All roads lead to Beijing.五.結構造句與眾不同。
㈠.簡潔。
㈡.流暢。
使用副詞性連接詞,在寫作中一定要注意發掘要點或句子間的邏輯聯系,從而找到并運用適當的連接詞,使不同的句子間建立起有機的聯系。副詞性連接詞的位置一般放在句首,后邊常常接逗號,它能承上啟下,令讀者對后續的句子產生心理上的期待和準備,因此整篇文章常常因它而渾然一體。以下是一些常見的副詞性連接詞:
⒈表示增加的事實:also, besides, as well as, in addition.⒉表順序:(1).First, second, third.Last.(2).the first, the second, the third, the last.(3).To begin with, then , finally.(4).first and foremost, besides, last but not least.(5).Most important of all, what’s more, finally.(6).On the one hand, on the otherhand(適用于兩點的情況)。
(7)for one thing, for another thing(適用于兩點的情況)。
⒊ 比較對比概念:the way, just as, while ,however, on the other hand.In spite of, instead.⒋ 表結果:as a result, therefore, in this way.⒌ 表達觀點: generally speaking, in my view, in my opinion.I think.I believe
To my knowledgefrom my point of viewI meanthat is to sayin other wordsit seems to me that
⒍ 舉例:for examplefor instanceas an exampleas another examplesuch as
⒎ 表讓步:although(though)no matter how(who)howeverin spite ofanyhowanyway
⒏ 表強調:certainlyclearlysurelyto be sureafter allindeedabove allwithout doubtno doubtmost importantin factas a matter of fact 例如:As a matter of fact , he didn’t know it ,either.⒐ 總結:all in allto sum up in a word(一言以蔽之)in a wordin short
請看一篇范文:暑假將至,同學們就自己的暑假生活安排進行了交流。請你用英語向美籍教師Mr.Brown介紹有關情況以及自己的暑期計劃。
內容應包括以下要點:
1、有的同學打算外出旅游,輕松一下;
2、有的同學計劃在家中多讀書,為將來的學習做準備;
3、有的同學準備參加體育鍛煉,保持身體健康;
4、談談自己的暑期安排。
【范文欣賞】
Dear Mr.Brown,Wow, so quickly!The summer holiday is coming!I feel so glad to tell you something about this summer holiday.My classmates seem crazy when they talk about what they will do on holiday.Some of them plan to go out for a trip to relax themselves.And some want to read a lot of books at home.They want to prepare for the future study.There are also some students hoping to take part in sport activities.In their minds, sport exercise is very important to our health.As for me, I will go to the countryside.On one hand, I want to refresh my spirit and prepare a good mood for the next term.On the other hand, I can experience some country culture and get close to nature.In a word, I will try my best to make my holiday wonderful.Best wishes!
Yours,Monica
【亮點點評】
這封信按照要求將每條都寫全了,行文流暢,思路很清晰,并將自己的暑期安排以及理由寫出來了,用到了短語On one hand,On the other hand,使文章條理很清楚。也用到了一些詞組,如:In their minds,As for me,prepare a good mood for…,experience some country culture,In a word等,這些短語及詞匯的運用使文章形象生動,增色不少。因此,作為畢業班的考生,要想使自己的文章也寫得像行家那么漂亮,我們要做的功課是,平時多積累詞匯、短語、句型,多看好的范文,多學習別人的優點,這樣我們的文章才能越寫越好。
六.結尾段的寫法。
結尾段的寫法要取決于開頭段以及中間部分的展開情況。一般情況下,結尾段應該起到回答,解決問題,總結,概括全文,重申主題,與開頭呼應的作用。當然,出乎意料的結尾如果有助于深化主題也是可取的,有時簡短的一句話也可以結束全文。另外,引用名人名言作結尾也是可取的。請看一個結尾段的例子:
題目:Helping Each Other Makes the world Wonderful
Hello, everyone.I’m lizhi.It’s nice to talkabout help here.In our life we often help others and also get help from others.When we help our classmates with their study and other things, we can develop our friendship.If we give a hand to old people, we can understand the meaning of pleasure.As we know, patients need help most.When we help them, happiness comes to us.Helping others is especially
important in our life.結尾:I think we get much when we help the people around us.As the saying goes, “Giving is much better than receiving.”最后,有了積累,有了欣賞之后,我們得練筆。俗話說:Practice makes perfect.(熟能生巧)多練、多寫,將各種文體的作文都寫到了,熟悉了每種體裁的寫作套路,那么,當我們上考場的時候,就會胸有成竹,高分也就不遠了
第五篇:2018 中考英語作文高分必備技巧
2018 中考英語作文高分必備技巧全在這(內含作文常用過渡詞組
英語書面表達是對學生的語言組織能力、行文表達能力、基礎知識、語法、詞匯等綜合駕馭能力的考查。這幾年中考英語作文題目由限制性題目到半開放性題目,提示性詞語越來越少,給孩子們發揮的空間越來越大。今天就來聊一聊,中考英語作文怎么拿高分。
考查形式(體裁)
中考英語考查形式多樣:看圖(表)寫作、書信、通知、日記、記人物等。
體裁包括:記敘文、說明文和應用文。
解題方法 1 做題步驟 審題:審清作文體裁(類型)時態、人稱等細節; 列提綱(文章結構框架):分幾段,以及每段大體內容; 寫作:在提綱的基礎上補充要點; 復查:2遍——1遍看查拼寫、語法、標點等問題;2遍不出聲讀查,靠語感檢查語句是否通順、連貫等; 謄抄:不允許做任何的更改。三審、三思、三查
三審:體裁、時態、人稱;
三思:詞匯—>短語—>句式;
三查:要點、拼寫和語法、連貫。
作文框架
作文一般框架:要點+結構+邏輯+語法+亮點 1 要點
實際上中考英語寫作就等于兩個字,翻譯!因為中考英語寫作一般會給出幾個要點,要求必須在文章中有所體現。文章寫的再好,只要缺少要點就會扣分。所以要點,也就是文章的第二段內容,要做到全,圍繞中心。結構
中考最流行的結構就是三段式,深受各地區中考英語寫作閱卷老師的喜愛。為什么呢?因為這種結構十分清晰。“觀點——要點——總結”讓人一目了然。三段式的第一段:簡單明了,開門見山,不超過2句話。邏輯
這里的邏輯實際指的就是邏輯詞。最常用的就是表示遞進的,轉折的,總結的邏輯詞等。邏輯詞 遞進:除了first,second,third,finally等還可以使用高級點的,如first of all(首先),inaddition,what'smore,moreover(都是另外的意思),inaword,allinall(表示總結的)。轉折:but,yet,however等。語法
其他幾點都不是硬性的要求,不那樣做不能說是錯,只能說是不好,但是語法卻是硬性的。如,單詞的使用,時態等。亮點
如果A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇卻用到了attractive,charming,catching等,我堅信正常人都會給B篇高分的。這些高級一點的詞匯,詞組,句型便是我們得到一等文的最有力的絕招。所以,以后寫英語作文要養成一般詞匯限量用的好習慣。
常用過渡性詞語敘事文常用的句子間連接詞 At first;at last;in the end? then/next/after that?
when/while/as soon as/not? until? at the same time;at times;once in a while;so that To one’s surprise/joy Luckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunately? in a word/in all 議論文常用連接詞
表示并列:either?or;neither?nor;both?and;not only?but also;
表示遞進的:besides;what’s more;what’s worse;(moreover);
表示原因的:because;for?;because of?;thanks to?;(for the reason that?);
表示結果的:so;as a result;so?that?;therefore;
表示目的的:so that?;in order that?;(in order)to?;for?;
表示對比的:while;on the one hand + on the other hand;Each coin has two sides.;prefer?to?;would rather do?than do?;
表示轉折的:however;but;
表示舉例的:for example;for instance;such as?;like?;that is to say?
表示總結的:in all/short;in a word;in brief/ total;last but not least;last;
表示利弊的:be good/bad for sb.;be harmful to sb.;do harm to sb.;?have great/much influence on sb.;sth.benefit sb.;sb benefit from sth.;affect;have an effect on sb.;
表示喜愛的:love/like/enjoy?;be fond of?;be interested in?;show great interest in?;lose oneself in?;put one’s heart into?;be good at;be poor at;be weak in;
表達個人想法的:I think/believe?;(as)for me;in my opinion/view;as a student;from the bottom of my heart;personally;
其他:in general;generally speaking;to be short;to be honest;to tell the truth;as we know;make up one’s mind to do;in a way;