第一篇：中考作文的創(chuàng)新表達范文

中考作文的創(chuàng)新表達

一、點擊關(guān)鍵詞

創(chuàng)新是作文的生命。尤其是面對“開放型”的話題作文，誰最有創(chuàng)新意識，誰寫出有新意的文章，誰就能取勝。各地中考作文的評分標準中都有這樣的一條：“鼓勵有創(chuàng)意的表達。”雖然只有這簡單的一句話，但給考生以很大的寫作“自由”。這種“自由”，包括“精神的自由”和“筆墨的自由”，簡而言之，就是“用我筆寫我思”。

二、寫作支招

考場作文創(chuàng)新可以從下面四個方面入手。

（一）選材出新

古人云：“良桐方能斫美琴”，材料不新鮮，是不能有創(chuàng)意出新的。我們生活在一個多元并存、共處競爭的時代，社會上的新聞熱點，構(gòu)建和諧社會中的風云事件，校園里的激情辯論，無不跳動著時代的脈搏，涌動著創(chuàng)新的氣息。例如，武漢市中考滿分作文《“我”為我服務》，作者把眼光投向高科技產(chǎn)物——克隆人。表現(xiàn)了隨著“克隆人”的服務和替代，人類不斷退化、萎縮，表達作者對社會生活熱點問題的關(guān)注和憂慮。社會熱點問題很多，如戰(zhàn)爭與和平、北京奧運、信息高速路、博客、素質(zhì)教育中的綜合素質(zhì)評價等。

（二）立意出新

立意是一篇文章的靈魂。要使立意充滿創(chuàng)意，可從下面兩個方面著手：

1、多一點對立意“公式”的否定。用蠟燭比喻老師，用蜜蜂象征勞動者……這些立意公式“歷史悠久”，千篇一律，毫無新意。只有沖出了立意公式的羈絆，尋找到獨特的心靈感悟，文章立意才會高人一籌。

2、多一點對立意角度的選擇。在立意的角度上，可以正面著墨，也可以反面著筆。例如一“雪”為話題，一般人立意總是贊美雪的潔白無瑕，這種思維并無新意。如果逆向思維，立意貶雪，抨擊雪的虛偽（見不得陽光）、兇惡（依仗狂風，不可一世）、冷酷（千山鳥飛絕，萬徑人蹤滅）和懦弱（任人踐踏），這樣的立意就很有新意。

（三）形式創(chuàng)新

同樣的立意、選材，得分有時因表現(xiàn)形式的不同而有高下之分。因而作文要升格，就要

根據(jù)自己的寫作特長，選用一般考生少用的文章形式，如書信、日記、寓言、童話、科幻故事、戲劇小品等，這樣會使你的文章脫穎而出。即使寫常規(guī)的三大文體，也要盡可能使文章形式新穎些，如寫記敘文，可以設(shè)置題記、設(shè)置懸念、設(shè)計小標題等。

（四）語言出新

語言是思維的外殼，是情感的載體。怎樣才能使語言富于個性呢？

1、寫出語言的新鮮美。活用新詞語，為文章增添生機與活力。

2、寫出語言的詩意美。適當引用詩歌名句，可以增加文章的內(nèi)涵和文采。

3、寫出語言的修辭美。巧用修辭，妙用句式，加強對語言的包裝。

三、滿分作文示例

以“力量”為話題的滿分作文： 開在雪山之顛的鮮花 文/吳銘

古之立大事者，不惟有超世之才，亦必有堅忍不拔之志。-----蘇軾

寒冷的冬夜，鵝毛般的大雪紛紛揚揚地落下，把地面鋪得厚厚的。狂風呼嘯，卷著雪片在空中形成了一個個旋渦。

“孩子，考驗你的時候來了，家庭的每一個人都要經(jīng)歷這一關(guān)。背上行囊，徒步到雪山上去采摘屬于你的那一朵鮮花吧。”老者的聲音緩慢洪亮，帶著一種不可抗拒的威嚴。

“可是，父親，為什么不用家族與生俱來的神力讓每個年輕人飛到山頂呢？”這聲音還帶著一絲若有若無的稚嫩，充滿了疑惑。

“不，孩子。這花是用你的血汗?jié)补嗟模删壑阍谘┑厣狭粝碌囊粋€個艱難的腳印。沒有自己的艱辛，花朵就不能開放。”

一陣長久的沉默，只聽見兩人沉重的呼吸。“時候不早了，上路吧。”還是那個緩慢的聲音打破了沉靜。

陰冷的月光灑在雪地上，看到了一行歪歪扭扭的腳印，很深很深。

年輕人的身影在雪地上慢慢移動，在他眼中，只看見遠方的高山，那才是他惟一的目標。遠處傳來刺耳的笑聲：“年輕人，像你這樣走還要走多久啊，別聽你父親的，快用你的神力飛向山頂吧，哈哈哈……”

雪地上還是那個頑強的身影在艱難地移動，一次一次邁出腿，一次一次踏進雪地里，再一次一次地把腿從齊膝深的雪層中拔出來。腳印一個一個留在身后，汗珠一滴一滴地從額上滴下來，和腳印融合在一起。

雪片還在往下落，曠野中，四面八方都回響著大雪的威脅。“年輕人，不許再往前走了，否則，我會讓你葬身在雪地之中的。”

年輕人似乎什么也沒有聽到，依然在重復著那個機械的動作，邁腿，踏雪。因為鮮花就在前面。

寒風更猛烈了，大雪更瘋狂了。好像要埋沒雪地上那一行行血汗凝聚成的腳印和瘦小的身影。不過，這一切都是徒勞，所有的威脅都不能嚇倒這個頑強的年輕人。腳印還是那樣清晰可辨，是什么力量使他不畏艱難險阻，攀登不已呢？

蘇軾的回答就是最好的詮釋。

[滿分揭秘]

這篇作文運用豐富的想像力，虛構(gòu)了一個奇幻的故事，詮釋了一個深刻的主題：理想（志向、信念、目標）激發(fā)人無窮的力量。

小作者力避議論文、記敘文等一般文體，而是大膽采用小說這種文學形式，虛構(gòu)了一個奇幻的神話般的故事：一個年輕人不畏艱難險阻，攀到雪山之巔去采摘鮮花。這里的鮮花有著深刻寓意：象征著人生的目標、志向、抱負、理想。而青年冒雪攀峰的經(jīng)歷也昭示著人生的奮斗經(jīng)歷。只有不畏艱難、不懈奮斗的人才能實現(xiàn)人生的目標。這個立意如果采用議論文來闡述的話，肯定沒有采用小說來得形象、生動。

用詩一樣的語言作題目，新穎、生動。引用蘇軾的名言作題記，含義深刻，這些都值得借鑒。

四、熱身訓練

[考題回放]（2006年江蘇省常州市中考題）

請以“告別”為題寫一篇文章。

要求：①將題目補充完整；②文體不限（若寫詩歌則不少于25行）。

[思路點撥]

這道作文題非常自由，除了在文體上要求寫成詩歌不少于25行外，在審題、立意、選材上對考生都沒有設(shè)置障礙。半命題的形式，能使考生迅速打開記憶的倉庫，找到寫作的素材；考生可以用第一人稱寫自己某段有關(guān)告別的經(jīng)歷，也可以用第三人稱寫他人告別的場景，還可以談一談自己對告別的看法。如果考生的語言功底不錯的話，寫篇抒情散文也同樣不錯的！要寫好此文，可以從以下幾個方面著手：

⑴立意要高遠出新。人的一生，伴隨著許多多的告別，告別童年，告別朋友，告別親人，告別這個世界，和心愛的事物告別，和自身惡習告別……在告別中，我們不斷長大，漸漸成熟。告別引發(fā)了我們美好的祝福，惟有相思似春色，江南江北送君歸；我寄愁心與明月，隨風直到夜郎西；沒有我的歲月里，你要保重你自己……告別意味著新生：已是隆冬季節(jié)了，春天還會遠嗎……

⑵選材要獨辟蹊徑。選材創(chuàng)新的關(guān)鍵在于“人無我有，人有我新”，在選材上應從小處著手，避開人易選的材料，巧妙地選取自己熟悉的而又與眾不同的一點入文。比如同是寫告別老師的，一般的同學只是通過回憶，寫老師深夜批改作業(yè)，冒雪給我補課，“下雨天背我們過河”等寫濫了的材料，而你卻獨辟蹊徑，先寫自己告別了網(wǎng)吧，再寫自己告別了不及格，最后寫自己告別恩師，在最后一節(jié)點明是恩師幫助我告別了網(wǎng)吧，提高了學習成績。這樣的選材立意肯定是令人刮目相看的。

⑶形式要不拘一格。文章形式也應追求多樣，方能錦上添花，有所突破。比如同是寫告別網(wǎng)吧，如果你用一般記敘文的形式寫，則很難收到好的效果，如果你用相聲的形式寫，那效果就大不一樣，此外還可采用鏡頭組合，小標題連綴、書信日記、對話訪談等形式創(chuàng)新，讓閱卷老師耳目一新。

⑷語言要亮麗出彩。語言是文章的外衣，不同文體的文章對于語言有不同的要求，那么，我們的作文就應該體現(xiàn)出所選文體的語言特點，如記敘文的語言應該簡明、生動、形象、傳神，而議論文的語言應該鮮明、準確、概括、邏輯性強等，生動的語言會讓你的文章，聽來生動悅耳，讀來朗朗上口，看來光彩照人，考來脫穎而出！

[新題設(shè)計]

閱讀下面的材料，你一定有很多想法，請選擇你感受最深的一點為話題，按要求作文。

有一個故事，事情發(fā)生在1997年12月11日。美國著名的“悄悄話”專欄女記者辛迪·亞當，想約克林頓總統(tǒng)的夫人希拉里來個單獨采訪。多番努力，終于搞定，希拉里同意在她出席了紐約曼哈頓大學俱樂部的一個婦女集合后，跟辛迪談一個小時。

采訪就定在曼哈頓俱樂部里。這個俱樂部有著百年歷史，注重傳統(tǒng)，古色古香。辛迪先到，在大廳候著。到了時間，希拉里還沒有來，她坐不穩(wěn)了，悄悄地把手機拿出來，打個電話問一下。守門的老頭過來了，說：“夫人，你在干什么？”

女記者說，我跟克林頓夫人有個約會。老頭說：“你不可以在這個俱樂部里使用手機，請你出去。”說完后，老頭就走了，辛迪收起了手機。

一會兒老頭又來了，看見這女人沒走，還與克林頓夫人在大廳里高談闊論，在場的有總統(tǒng)府的高級助理們。老頭不樂意了，說：“這是不能容許的行為，你必須離開。”克林頓夫人說：“咱們走。”乖巧地拉上辛迪就出去了。

要求：⒈題目自擬。⒉立意自定。⒊文體自選（詩歌除外）。⒋600字以上。⒌話題不能超過故事所能涵蓋的范圍。

[思路點拔]

這是一則材料作文，可以選擇的話題較寬。只要你能從這則材料中得到某一方面的啟示，就可以把它作為話題。當然你的啟示一定要有根據(jù)，有道理，不能牽強附會，超出故事意義的范圍。你可以用發(fā)散思維的方法，選擇一個角度來確定話題。

⒈從看門人忠于職守，堅持原則的角度分析，確定“職責”、“原則”為話題。

⒉從看門人不畏權(quán)貴，不因為自己的身份地位低下而屈從的角度，確定“平等”為話題。

⒊從看門人對于自己的職業(yè)的選擇，感到自信的角度，確定“自信”為話題。

⒋從辛迪和克林頓夫人沒有以權(quán)壓人，禮貌地離開的角度，確定“修養(yǎng)”為話題。

確定話題后，再圍繞話題去立意。如選擇“原則”話題，立意可以是：堅持原則，才能辦好事情；堅持原則面前人人平等，就能贏得別人的尊重……如寫記敘文，選擇材料從小角度切入：（1）班長不肯打掃教室，身為負責班級清潔衛(wèi)生的干部，你要班長補掃，并且按規(guī)定罰掃一天。班長不從，你是如何堅持原則，迫使班長遵守規(guī)定的？事后，班里發(fā)生了怎樣的變化？你是否贏得了同學們的尊重？（2）還可以講述小人物堅持原則的故事。（3）也可以寫不堅持原則而導致失敗的故事。

[作文素材]

[名言警句]

⒈人在履行職責中得到幸福。就像一個人馱著東西，可心頭很舒暢。人要是沒有它，不盡什么職責，就等于駕駛空馬車一樣，也就是說，白白的浪費。

（[蘇]羅佐夫）

⒉有一種事做不做全看一個人愿不愿意，那就是他應盡的義務。盡義務不能靠說漂亮話，要靠果敢的行動。

（[英]簡·奧斯丁）

⒊有的人本領(lǐng)平庸，但做事盡心竭力，他們比那些本領(lǐng)出眾但做事敷衍塞責的人強。

（[英]簡·奧斯丁）

⒋對待工作的嚴肅態(tài)度，高度的正直，形成了自由和秩序之間的平衡。

（[法]羅曼·羅蘭）

第二篇：中考書面表達

中考書面表達范文

1.Introduce yourself

My name is Li Lei.I was born in Fuzhou on December 15, 1994.I’m studying at Yucai Middle School.I learn Chinese, math, English, physics, chemistry, politics, and so on.I like English best.My favorite sport is football.My hobbies are drawing and computer.I’m very happy to live in a happy family.There are 3 people in my family.My father is a doctor.My mother is a teacher.We love each other very much.2．以My Hobbies為題，要求60～80個單詞。

I love collecting stamps.I collect all kinds of stamps.I think collecting stamps is great fun.It can bring me happiness, friendship and knowledge.I can also learn a lot about people, history and special times from the stamps.Some of them are very valuable.I like them very much.I am going to give you a very nice stamp.I hope you will like it.What are your hobbies? Can you tell me?

3.談談如何預防疾病，保持健康，養(yǎng)成良好的衛(wèi)生習慣。要求60～80個單詞。

It’s very important for everyone to keep healthy.We should have good habits.For example, we should wash our hands before meals, wash our clothes often, not drink cold water and so on.At the same time, exercise is also important.We should often take exercise, because it will make us strong and germs(細菌)will have little chance to get through our bodies.We also should eat healthily.We’d better eat fruit and vegetables, because they are good for our health.If we are healthy, we can live a happy life.4．2008年北京奧運會就要到來，談談你將為奧運會作些什么。字數(shù)80字左右。Beijing will host the 2008 Olympic Games.What can we do for the Olympic Games? First , I think we must study hard from now on.We must learn to speak English better that we can help foreign visitors who come to China in 2008.Next, we must behave well and improve our environment.We can plant more trees and grass to make our country more beautiful.Then in 2008, we can go to Beijing to be a volunteer(自愿者).We are sure the 2008 Olympic Games will be successful.I can’t wait.5.根據(jù)所提示的內(nèi)容寫一篇日記。（字數(shù)80左右，要求語法正確，語氣通順。）

1.時間：2007年10月1日2.和同學們?nèi)ノ骱珗@游玩。

3．吃完冰激凌后隨手把紙扔在地上。4．一個女孩把紙撿起扔進垃圾箱。

5．我們感到慚愧，決定在公園里幫助撿垃圾，為環(huán)保盡自己的一份力量。

October l, 2007Sunny

Today is National Day and it is sunny.My classmates and I decided to go to the West lake Park.We had a very good time there.We bought some ice-cream there and after we finished it, we threw the paper to the ground.Just then a little girl ran to us, picked it up and put it into a dustbin nearby.We felt very sorry and decided to help collect rubbish in the park so that we could make contributions to protecting our environment.6.假設(shè)你是李雷，請根據(jù)下列內(nèi)容給你的英國朋友吉姆寫一封信．告訴他你和同學們上周去鼓山郊游的活動和感受。字數(shù)60－80。要求：意思連貫，符合邏輯，所給的提示詞必須

都用上。

你們上午7:00在校門口集合，大約8:00到達鼓山…

meet, arrive, at the foot of, climb, on the top, have a party, play games, see, beautiful, proud, live

Dear Jim,Last Sunday, my classmates and I went to Gu Mountain.It is a very famous mountain in Fuzhou.We met at the school gate at 7: 00 and arrived at the foot of the mountain at 8: 00.As soon as we got there we began to climb the hill.It took all of us an hour to climb to the top of the mountain.Then we had a party and played games.From the top we could see the beautiful sceneries of Fuzhou.We are proud that we live in Fuzhou.Write to me soon.Best wishes.Yours,Li Lei

7.談談如何利用好網(wǎng)絡資源，要求60～80個單詞。

The Internet is becoming more and more important to us.Without it, we can’t do work better.We can go shopping without going out of our houses.And we can listen to music or watch movies on the Internet.It can also help a lot with our study.We can learn much knowledge on different subjects, and get information as soon as possible.But now, some of us work, study or play on the Internet for long time, especially for young people to play computer games.It’s bad for our eyes and health.If we make good use of the Internet, it will be our best friends and help us a lot.8．Great changes in my hometown

More than twenty years ago, my hometown was just a small, old and poor town.Most of people were

farmers.There were few factories.The people didn’t have enough food to eat and wore old clothes.They had a hard life.Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years.The people have found a lot of ways of making money.Now there are many tall buildings.They are very beautiful.Roads are wide and clean.People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work.Many

people have cell phones and personal computers.People’s living conditions have improved a lot.Thanks to the government’s efforts.my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful.9．Make our world more beautiful!

Protecting the environment is becoming more and more important to humans.It’s our duty to take care of the nature around us.Animals and plants are our best friends, and we should share the world with them.We shouldn’t kill wild animals, and we must protect forests because they are animals’ home.We must plant more trees and grass, they can make the world greener.The more beautiful the world is, the happier lives we will have.Let’s do our best to make the world beautiful.10．How to learn English well

As we know, English has become an international language.It is more popular than any other language in China.English is widely spoken in the world and it is the most useful language around the world.But how to learn it well?

The best way is to use it all the time.If we can talk in English, think in English we can learn it well.At school, we should learn to hear, speak, read and write carefully.We should

spend enough time in practicing English.If we keep on working hard at English, we will be able to be good at it one day.11．根據(jù)提示寫一篇詞數(shù)不少于 50左右的請假條。

假如你叫陳飛，母親病了，醫(yī)生要她在家里躺兩三天。你不得不呆在家中照顧她，因為家里沒有其他人。請據(jù)此用英文給趙老師寫一張假條，請兩天的假，要求注意格式；時間是五月九日。

Dear Miss Zhao,May 9th

I’m sorry that I can’t go to school today.My mother is ill.The doctor asked her to stay at home for two or three days.I have to take care of her at home because there is nobody else.Now, I’mThank you!

Chen Fei

12.根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容以Bill的名義寫一篇失物啟事。

昨天（3月20日）下午在化學實驗室丟了一副太陽鏡，請撿到的同學與他聯(lián)系，電話號碼：776600。

Lost

March 21, 2008

Yesterday afternoon(March 20th)I lost a pair of sun-glasses in the chemistry lab.Anybody who found them will you please ring me? My telephone number is 776600.Thank you very much.Bill.13.招領(lǐng)啟事

FOUND

A handbag with some money and a notebook was left on the school playground this morning(March 7th).Will the owner please come to Class 2 Grade3 or call me? My telephone number is 776600.14.通 知

NOTICE(口頭)

Boys and girls :

Your attention, please.Here is a piece of exciting news to tell you.There will be a concert at 7:30 p.m.tomorrow.It will be held in School Hall.Some pop singers will sing then.All of you are welcome.Please don’t forget to take chairs with you.Thank you for listening your attention.NOTICE（書面）

A lecture will be given on how to learn English well by Prof.Green from Shanghai Foreign Language Institute in School Hall at 8:00 a.m.on Saturday.Teachers and students are welcome to attend the lecture.Teaching Affairs

Office

March 3rd ,2007

NOTICE(口頭)

Boys and girls :

Your attention, please!

The English corner of our little library in our class has been opened.We hope these books are helpful and useful to us all.Everybody can borrow books from our little library now.You should do the following :

a.Borrow only one book every time;

b.Keep the book for just two weeks and return it on time;

c.Take care of the book.Welcome to our little library.Thank you.Class1 ,Grade3

15.留言條

Lin Tao :

I arrived here by plane this morning.I am staying at Room 123 of the Friendship Hotel.Please come as soon as possible.Give me a ring call as soon as you read this note.My telephone number is ***.Li Lei

9:00 a.m.Monday

16.賀 卡

To dear LiLy

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!

Thank you for helping me with my English!

We hope you will be in good health and do better in study!

Good luck!

Best wishes to you!

From your good friendLi Lei

Dear Miss Zhou,Thank you for your three-year hard working and teaching us so well.Make our best wishes to you!And Happy Teachers’ Day!

Class 1,Grade1

17.條例規(guī)定

明天，初三（6）班的同學到化學實驗室去上開學以來第一節(jié)化學實驗課。假如你是班長，請將實驗課注意事項在班上宣讀。80個詞左右。

內(nèi)容要點：①未經(jīng)許可，不能進入實驗室；②必須仔細聽，按照要求去做；③遵循老師的指導，不準亂摸任何東西；④實驗結(jié)束后，請打掃實驗室，物歸原處；⑤關(guān)上燈和窗

戶，鎖好門后才能離開實驗室。

Boys and girls，May I have your attention, please？I have something to tell you．

1.Don' t go in if you aren't al1owed by the teacher.2.Listen to the teacher careful1y and do what the teacher tell you to do.3.Follow the teacher's instructions.Don' t touch other things that have nothing to do with your experiment.4.Tidy the 1ab and put everything where it was after your experiment.5.Be sure to turn off the lights, c1ose the window, and lock the door before you leave the lab.That's all, thank you!

18.事故報告

When : 9:30 a.m.April 25th , 2008.Where : Guangming Road

Who : A girl , she was talking with her friend while they were riding.What : Her bike hit a car , and she hurt her head and legs badly.Result : The police came and she was taken to hospital.19.電話留言條

rdMessage :

Caller’

第三篇：#中考書面表達專題精選

英語中考書面表達滿分范文精選 Class ____________ Name ____________

1.E-mail（電子郵件）

Dear Mr and Mrs Brown, I’m a Chinese boy.My name is Li Hong.I’m very happy to know that I’ll stay in your house for the English Summer Camp.I’d like to say something about myself so that you can know me well.I’m fifteen years old.I have a happy family with three people.I’m studying in No.1 Middle School.We learn eight subjects.I’m interested in all of them.I like reading and playing the piano.I like English very much, but my English is not good enough.I think you can help me with my English.I hope to meet you soon.Best Wishes, Li Hong

2.An announcement（口頭通知）

Please be quiet, everyone!I’ve got something important to tell you.Since we are going to have a medical examination in the People’s Hospital on Monday morning, you can’t eat anything.Please gather at the gate of the hospital at eight.That’s all.Thanks.3.NOTICE（通知）

There will be a meeting for all the monitors of our school in the small meeting-room, at 9:00 this morning.The teachers and the students of our school are going to see a film at 4:00 this afternoon.The classes this afternoon will begin at 1:00.be sure not to be late for school, please.The Students Union

June 4

4.A diary(日記)March 8, Sunday Fine I was doing some shopping at ten o’clock this morning when one American couple came into the shop.They told the shop assistant that they wanted to buy a camera.But the assistant didn’t understand what they had said, and they didn’t understand what the assistant said either.They were all very worried.I went over and helped them.They bought a camera at last.They were very happy and thanked me again and again.I’m glad that I can talk with foreign friends in English.5.奧運會

Everyone knows that the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing.All Chinese people are proud of it.As a Chinese young man, I want to go to Beijing to be a volunteer of the Games to service the visitors from all over the world.I think it is very excited because it will make foreign visitors to know the Chinese people and culture better.I will practice my spoken English hard.Because it will help me to communicate with the foreign visitors and service for them better.I believe that my dream will come true in 2008!

6.自我推薦 Dear Chairman, I am a boy student from Class 1, Grade 3.I’d like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club.I am well.I work hard at my lessons.I like helping others.I get on well with my classmates and often help them with their lessons.On my way home, I often help old people cross the street.On the bus, I always give my seat to women with babies.Sometimes, I pick up rubbish in the park.If I join the club, I will be able to make more friends.Besides, I can do more for others.I’ll be glad if I’m received, I am waiting for your answer.Yours, Wang Lin

7.The Changes in My Hometown（家鄉(xiāng)變化）

In the past, my hometown was very small.People lived a poor life.The house were old and small.Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere.The traffic was not convenient, so few visitors came here.Now great changes have taken place in my hometown.The environment has become more beautiful.The mountains have turned greener, the rivers clearer and the sky bluer.There are trees, flowers and grass everywhere.People live a better life.Their houses are large and bright.Many people have their own cars.Every year, thousands of people from all over the world come to visit our city.I’m sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.8.悔過書

Thank my friend, Mike, for telling me not to play computer games.I have realized it’s bad for me to go to bed so late for playing games.As a result, I had to sleep in class.I couldn’t listen to the teacher carefully.I regretted it very much.From now on, I want to change it.I want to start a new life.I want to study hard, I have made up my mind to listen carefully in class and finish my homework on time.I can get much knowledge on the Internet.I will play basketball with my friends in my spare time.I think I can do that and I will be a good student.9.失物招領(lǐng)

Found A school bag was found on the playground yesterday afternoon.It is black and orange, with a lot of things in it.Anyone who lost it please go to Class 1, Grade 9.I’m Zhang Daming.10.My Pleasant Trip（旅游）

One day when I was in Grade 7, I went to Jiangxinyu Island with my friends by boat.First we climbed the hill, then we flew kites.At noon we sat on the grass having a picnic.The weather was pretty fine that day.In the afternoon we met several soldiers who were only a little older than us.So we could play games together and they also told us interesting stories.We laughed and laughed happily.What a pleasant trip!I will never forget it.11.人物介紹 Dear Alex, How’s it going? I’d like to tell you something about Hong Zhanhui, a great Chinese boy.He was born in a poor family.During the 24 years, he looked after his brother, adopted sister and his sick father.Because when he was a child his mother left the poor family.He took his sister to go to the college.The life he lived was difficult.But he studied hard and after school he did part-time work.He never asked someone for help.It’s very moving.I think everyone must learn from him!

Yours, Zhang Lin 12.英語學習

Everybody has different ideas about learning English, but I think learning English should become our habit.I love English and I have been studying English for four years.I have two foreign pen pals.We write to each other in English.They often tell me much interesting news about their countries.I enjoy telling the stories to my friends at school.I think English gives me lots of fun.And the more I learn English, the more confident I am.In my school, I am the monitor of English.I’m other students’ god example.I’m often praised by me teacher.English helps me succeed in studying.English has been a part of my life.13.環(huán)保

Water is very important to humans.It is used in homes, in farming and so on.We know that much water has been polluted.Some factories are pouring waste water.For example, they often forget to turn off the taps.If we don’t have enough water.Land will be dry and crops will die.We can’t live without water, so we should try our best and encourage everyone to protect water resources.We must save water and stop polluting it.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don’t do this, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.14.My Mother

My mother is very kind and easygoing.She helps me a lot.She takes good care of my daily life.For example, every morning, she wakes me up and cooks breakfast for me.When I’m in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and cheers me up.I still remember that once I argued with my best friend and was upset.My mother talked with me the whole night and finally helped me solve the problem.With her help, I became a top student in my class.I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me.I believe she will be proud of me in the near future.附：英語中考滿分技巧

一、充分準備，打好基礎(chǔ)。

為了提高書面表達水平，平時應加強閱讀，多背誦一些句形、段落甚至短文。俗話說：“讀書破萬卷，下筆如有神”，只有多讀，多記，多背誦，才能出口成章，下筆成文。此外，還要掌握一些應用文體的寫作方法，如書信、日記、通知等，它們大多有固定的格式。

二、認真審題，明確要求

仔細看清寫作要求和提示，分清材料的主次，接著確定體裁、格式和人物、地點等要素；最后確定時態(tài)，同時考慮相關(guān)的語態(tài)搭配用法。

三、遣詞造句、表達規(guī)范

用詞要恰當，不可逐句把提示翻譯成英語。寫作時，應盡量選用你最熟悉、最有把握的詞和句型來表達思想。如果有些單詞不會些，有些句型不會表達，可以設(shè)法繞開，用熟悉的同義詞、同義短語或同義句來代替。要學會善于運用適當?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞，如and, or, but, so，because, since等，以使行文邏輯緊密，自然流暢。

四、認真撰寫，卷面整潔

如果考試時間允許，書面表達一定要先寫草稿。在抄寫入答題卷前，要先進行檢查修改。首先檢查所寫內(nèi)容是否切題；之后檢查主題是否明確，表達方式是否恰當；最后檢查所用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、人稱是否符合要求，前后是否一致。英語作文卷面要求：

1.標題應寫在第一行的中央。標題中的每一個實詞的第一個字母均應大寫。2.段與段之間，一般不空行，但每段第一行應縮進3 – 4 個字母所占的位置。3.書寫要工整，字體稍大，詞間距離要一致，行間距離要一致，盡量避免一個單詞隔行書寫。

第四篇：中考作文表達技巧 (二)

考場作文必須修改

認真修改過的考場作文，質(zhì)量會更高一些。

修改的時間主要安排在提綱列出、草稿初成之后，已抄寫謄正的作文也可作少量的修改。修改的步驟如下：

1.緊扣主題修改

這是首要的一步，是抓住關(guān)鍵的一步。考場作文在突現(xiàn)主題上出現(xiàn)失誤，主要有三種情況，在修改中須特別注意。

（1）、沒有扣住主題或是由于套用原先熟悉的材料，或是審題失誤，或是對材料理解不當而導致失誤，導致扣分。若發(fā)現(xiàn)這種情況要馬上調(diào)整全文的語言，盡量扣住主題。

(2)、主題不鮮明文章或淺、或淡、或散，這時要適當調(diào)整結(jié)構(gòu)，適當 增加一些語言表現(xiàn)手段來增強主題的色彩。

(3)、先緊后松即寫著寫著偏離了主題。在檢查發(fā)現(xiàn)之后要立即重寫部 分段落，設(shè)法將文思拉入準確的軌道。

2.緊扣文題修改

作文題有時能表現(xiàn)主題，有很多時候則表現(xiàn)不了。扣住文題修改，既要看 自己的作文能否表現(xiàn)文題所要求表現(xiàn)的主旨意趣，也要看自己的作文是否突出了文題所要表達的重點。修改中應注意：

(1)、看文體色彩如要求寫“讀后感”，自己在文體特征上是否真正寫出了“感”的味道。

(2)、看文章內(nèi)容如要求描寫“一個場面”，自己在作文中是否將其誤成了“一件事”。

(3)、看表達重點如要求文章表現(xiàn)“珍惜”的意趣，而自己是否將其談化為“難忘”。

(4)、看材料審讀如文題給了一則寓言，自己從寓言中提煉出來的觀點是否正確。

(5)、看理解含義文題要求寫“我在花季”，而自己是否寫成了“我們在花季”或“我在春天”。

3.對照要求修改

（1）、看表達方式是否按要求使用；

(2)、看文章字數(shù)是否符合規(guī)定的范圍；

(3)、看試卷的“規(guī)定”是否已經(jīng)執(zhí)行；

(4)、看其它特別的要求是否已經(jīng)落實。

4.局部敷色著彩

（1）、檢查病句、錯字、標點、格式；

(2)、重寫若干句子；

(3)、重寫個別段落；

(4)、擴展一點細節(jié)；

(5)、增加一點深化主題的手段。

以上四步中所使用的主要方法有：

一刪 刪去重復的、空洞的、與主題無關(guān)的、離題太遠的內(nèi)容。

二改 改換開頭、結(jié)尾的句子，改動部分結(jié)構(gòu)，改正文中有誤的語言因素等。三增 增加細節(jié)，增加深化主題的手段，增加、充實文章的若干內(nèi)容，增加過渡、照應等方面的手法。

5.修改舉例——詞語運用方面的修改

一般來講，作文修改中，對詞語的選擇，應注意以下八個方面的“求”。

（1）、求表意明白

要對作文中不規(guī)范的緊縮語，生造的詞語、語意含混容易引起歧義的詞語 進行刪改。如《統(tǒng)籌方法》中，原有“水開了之后急急忙忙找茶葉，洗壺杯”句，其中的“壺杯”由于“緊縮”而令人費解，后改為“洗茶壺茶杯”。

(2)、求表達準確

要注意準確使用表達基本內(nèi)容的詞語，也要準確、嚴密的使用修飾語，修改作文時要就在此方面進行刪、改、增。如《向沙漠進軍》中，原有“人類自從有歷史以來就同沙漠作斗爭”句，后改為“有史以來，人類就同沙漠不斷地斗爭”。“有歷史以來”改為“有史以來”，符合習慣的說法，表達準確；增加“不斷地”這個修飾語，表明了人類與沙漠作斗爭的次數(shù)之多，時間之長，使文意表達更加準確。

(3)、求表述簡潔

要盡力地刪去作文中多余的字、詞、句。如《統(tǒng)籌方法》中，原有“因為后二種方法都窩了工”句，后來根據(jù)語境實際，刪去了多余的聯(lián)詞“因為”，將數(shù)詞“二”改為“兩”，這樣不僅使語句的表達更加規(guī)范，而且也使之更簡潔明了。

(4)、求用詞恰切

要注意辨析近義詞的文體色彩、語境色彩、情感色彩等等，在作文中力求某個地方的某個詞的位置是“非它莫屬”。如《想和做》中，有“能夠苦干本來是非好的，但是只顧埋著頭??其實并不值得贊美”句，后來這句中的“本來”改為“固然”，這一改動十分精妙，“固然”表示承認某個事實，但又不表示出明顯的好感，將它放在句中，使句意和語氣的表達非常恰當。

(5)、求表達生動主要從詞語的修辭、詞語的文體色彩、感情色彩方面等方面進行比較、斟酌。如《看云識天氣》中，原有“還有的像山、像水、像棉花，像薄紗”句，后改為“還有的像峰巒、像河川、像雄獅、像奔馬”。這一改動有幾個方面的好處，一是朗讀音節(jié)和諧，二是準確形象，三是動態(tài)色彩增強，表達效果大不相同。

(6)、求表達精煉

精煉比“簡潔”還高一個層次，在修改作文時，對詞、句都要認真反復品味，看還能不能刪去、換用一些字、詞。如《想和做》中，原有“對于一個人來說，學習過程中有若干重要的關(guān)節(jié)”，此句的表達符合“簡潔”的要求，但改動中刪去了“對于??來說”，全句便顯得十分精煉。

(7)、求搭配合理

搭配合理要考慮到詞與詞、句與句之間的關(guān)系。修改時應主要著眼于：詞與詞之間的搭配及句與句之間的關(guān)聯(lián)。如《從甲骨文到縮微圖書》，原有“秦始皇每天寫在竹簡和木片上的文字，有120斤重”句，句中“文字有120斤重”屬搭配不當。后改為“據(jù)說秦始皇每天批閱文書，那些竹簡與木片有120斤重”。

(8)求煉字煉句

煉字煉句比“精煉”又高一個層次，它追求詞語、句式的表達效果。王安石的“春風又綠江南岸”中的“綠”經(jīng)歷了“到”、“過”、“入”、滿”等十來個字的改換才得以確定。《藤野先生》中，原稿中有“責成運送局去找尋，毫無回信”句，后來作者改“毫”為“寂”，這“寂”字鮮明地表現(xiàn)出不僅講義丟失，而且連追尋也是石沉大海，無聲無息，表達了作者的焦急與氣憤。考場作文修改中還應注意避免違規(guī)或扣分。第一，不要在“讀”作文時讀出聲音來，第二，不要在抄寫好的之后再作大的修改。

［練習］修改下文：

星期三，校團總支召開座談會，到會的15名與會者，就共青團員如何為社會主義精神文明建設(shè)的問題展開討論。大家踴躍發(fā)言。有的說，團員首先要起模范作用，當說話做事前，都要想到自己是一名團員。有的說，要提高團員精

神文明建設(shè)的意識，不把這一點重視好，就難以開展這項活動。團總支書記最后指出，對有利于精神文明建設(shè)的事應該大力提倡，對不盡如人意的地方應該注意改進。

1、說說下文應該從哪幾個方面進行修改：

“一字最難寫”的聯(lián)想

據(jù)說著名歌唱家郭蘭英曾向著名畫家李苦禪請教：“什么字最難寫?”李苦禪回答說：“一字最難寫。”初一聽，真不解其意，然而仔細一想，卻覺得含意深邃，那就是，世間最簡單的事，往往最難做到。

這方面的事例在我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪姓媸菍乙姴货r。比如飯前要洗手，開會不能隨便說話，都是最簡單不過了，可是在我們同學中卻有不少人總做不到。再說學習吧。我們班許多同學會做復雜的數(shù)理化難題，可是最簡單的連小學生都會做的四則運算，卻常常做錯。期中考試后，我分析自己的數(shù)學試卷，老師用來拉開檔次的兩道各十分的難題，我一分不少，我的失分竟全在最簡單的基礎(chǔ)題上，這真是最簡單的事往往最難做到啊。

我聯(lián)想到達“芬奇畫蛋的故事。小時候，達”芬奇在老師的指導下學畫。一開始，老師讓他畫蛋。他想，這有什么難，隨手一畫就是一個。但老師還是要他畫，說他畫的不像。畫畫，恐怕沒有比畫蛋更簡單的了，可是有繪畫天才的達“芬奇卻畫不好。

可見，不管是名人達?芬奇，還是普通的中學生，他們的所作所為，都證明了世間最簡單的事往往最難做到。李老的“一字最難寫”的含意的確深邃，的確有道理。

(提示：1.“與會者”可改為“團員和團干”，“建設(shè)”后面要加上“作貢獻”，刪去“當”字，“提高”改為“加強”，“不把這一點重視好”改為“不重視這一點”

2.這篇文章的一個主要毛病，是“想”而不“論”，作者用論題＋事例＋結(jié)論的簡單思維過程代替了闡發(fā)和議論，因此既無深度，又無力度。從議論文的寫作來看，應是先提出問題，點明“是什么”，然后進行分析，講清道理，指出“為什么”，最后解決問題，得出結(jié)論，說明“怎么樣”。可是這篇文章僅僅停留在“是什么”之上，完全沒有指出“為什么”，即為什么“世間最簡單的事，往往最難做到”，因此應在這個“病點”上著力進行修改。這篇文章的另一個主要的毛病，是用“論據(jù)”硬套“論點”，顯得簡單而生硬。如文中寫道：“我們班許多同學會做復雜的數(shù)理化難題，可是最簡單的連小學生都會

做的四則運算，卻常常做錯。”這是言過其實，經(jīng)不起推敲。又如文中寫道：“畫畫，恐怕沒有比畫蛋更簡單的了，可是有繪畫天才的達”芬奇卻畫不好。”這也是言過其實，因為畫蛋并不是最簡單的事。所以，作者為了套“論點”而將論據(jù)進行了“夸大”或“貶低”，對這個“病點”，也應很好地進行修改。)

第五篇：2014屆中考書面表達

1、低碳生活

現(xiàn)在全世界都在倡導“低碳生活”(low-carbon life)，即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低開支的生活方式。低碳生活對我們大家都有好處，請你寫一篇短文向一家英文報社投稿。內(nèi)容包括：你的具體做法、你的感受以及建議。

提示詞語：be good for, everyone, ride a bike, think, make a difference, environment, suggest, reuse

低碳生活★ 范文

Low-carbon life is good for everyone.To help with the environment, I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car.Besides, I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.I think it’s my duty to live a low-carbon life.And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment.So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible.And we’d better not spend much money on expensive clothes.If everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place.2、畢業(yè)感想初中生活馬上就要結(jié)束了,三年的初中生活一定給你留下了很多揮之不去的回憶。請你給大家講一個最值得你回憶的故事。包括時間、人物、事情經(jīng)過和事后你的感想(請不要寫出真實的學校名稱以及真實姓名)。

提示詞語: three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry

畢業(yè)感想★ 范文

How time flies!I have studied in my school for three years.And I will graduate from middle school in a month.I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you.I had so many memories in

three years’ life.One of them impressed me very much.I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult.No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up.As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well.Since then, she has kept helping me.Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it.I think I am so lucky to become one of her students.I’ve learned a lot from her.I will try to help others when they are in trouble.I think it is a happy thing to help others.3、如何減壓讓生活更美好

許多學習生活中的煩惱都會使人產(chǎn)生壓力,為了更好地發(fā)現(xiàn)及解決同學們中存在的心理壓力問題,你們班特意開展了一次以“Less Pressure, Better Life”為主題的英語演講比賽,請你準備發(fā)言稿,談談你的一些緩解壓力的好辦法,與同學分享,內(nèi)容包括:

(1)同學們中普遍存在的壓力是什么;(2)我的壓力是什么;(3)我是如何成功緩解我的壓力的。

注意:文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名。詞數(shù)80~100。

如何減壓讓生活更美好 ★范文Less Pressure, Better LifeHello, boys and girls!

Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world.Students in our class are under too much pressure.Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.I’m always under pressure, too.My parents want me to be the top student in class.So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends.Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother.I told her I was not lazy.I really felt tired.I needed time to relax.My mother

agreed with me at last.So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.That’s all.Thank you!

4、健康生活

⑴健康的生活習慣對于成長中的我們是非常重要的。你認為健康的生活習慣應當是怎樣的呢?請根據(jù)下面的信息提示,寫一篇短文,首句已給出。

信息提示：健康飲食;早睡早起,不熬夜;參加運動,強身健體。

要求:根據(jù)信息提示,把握要點,適當發(fā)揮,不逐字翻譯。字數(shù)在80詞左右。

健康生活★范文

I think healthy habits are very important for us.All of us want to be healthy.First, we should get enough sleep during the night.We can go to bed early and get up early.Staying up late is bad for our health.Second, we must have the right kinds of food.We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat.We should drink a lot of water.We should have healthy eating habits.Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies.Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day.If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.⑵假如你是李華，準備參加學校舉辦的主題為“健康成長”的英語演講比賽。請按要求寫一篇短文。

主要內(nèi)容包括：

1、保持快樂的心情

2、努力學習

3、積極參加體育鍛煉。

注意：

1、字數(shù)80字左右，不包含已給出的句子字數(shù)。

2、要點完整，適當發(fā)揮，意思連貫，語句通順，書寫規(guī)范。

3、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名等相關(guān)信息。

Dear friends, we all want to grow up happily and healthily, so we have to do some things.First, we should keep ourselves happy.Life is not always full of sunshine.When we are in trouble, we should be brave enough to deal with problems.Next , we must study hard.The more knowledge we have, the more confident we will be.Finally, we have to do sports to keep fit.We can go running, play ball games or take a walk after a day’s study.If we do those things well, we will grow up happily and healthily.5、交通問題

越來越多汽車進入我們的家庭生活，改善了我們的生活，但同時也帶來了很多問題，如塞車和車禍，給家庭和社會帶來極大的危害。作為中學生，我們應該怎樣做呢?請寫一篇有關(guān)交通安全的短文(80字左右)

內(nèi)容包含：遵守交通規(guī)則，如走人行道/過斑馬線。別在街道上或馬路上玩耍和踢球。勸父母不能酒后駕車。你可以適當增加內(nèi)容，讓短文通順，過渡自然。

參考詞匯：sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑馬線 注：第一段已給出，不計入總數(shù)交通問題★ 范文

With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life.But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents。

Traffic safety is everybody's business.We must obey the rules.For example, we must walk on the sidewalk, when we cross

zebra-crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast.Don’t play football on the road.we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc。

We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business, can we be safe while driving on roads and walking on sidewalks。

6、城市建設(shè)

眉山，我們共同的家園。作為眉山人，應該為建設(shè)“美麗眉山”貢獻力量。請你圍繞“做文明學生，建美麗眉山”這一主題，根據(jù)提示信息寫一篇短文，談談為建“美麗眉山”，中學生應該怎樣做？

內(nèi)容要點提示：踐行文明（友善、禮貌待人‘融洽相處等）擯棄陋習（大聲喧嘩、隨地吐痰、插隊、亂扔等）保護環(huán)境（花草樹木、水、紙張、食物等）

城市建設(shè) 范文

Meishan is our home.As a student, I think we should do something to make her more beautiful.Here are some of my ideas.First, we should be kind and polite to each other.It is better for us to get on well with others.Second, we mustn’t make noise or spit everywhere.It is also bad manners to throw about and cut in line when shopping.Finally.We should try to protect our environment by saving water and paper.What’s more, to save food is what we should do first.We can also plant more trees and flowers to make our hometown greener and more beautiful.If everyone does so, I ’m sure Meishan is getting better and better.7、光盤行動

今年一月份，我國政府號召全民“拒絕浪費，文明用餐”，加入“光盤行動”。請聯(lián)系實際，以“Save Food and Eat Healthily”為題，寫一篇80-100詞的英語短文,說說我們中學生應該怎樣做。文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。光盤行動范文

Save Food and Eat Healthily

Our government has called on the people to save food and eat healthily so that we can enjoy our happy life.We middle school students should do something for it.To save food, we shouldn’t waste any of our food.We should eat up all the food.We shouldn’t order the food more than we can eat while we are eating in a restaurant.It is reported that the food that Chinese people waste every year is enough to feed 200 million people for a year.So if we can’t eat up the food that we ordered ,we should ask the waiter for some doggy bags to pack it back home

To eat healthily, we shouldn’t eat junk food but healthy food.It’s good for our health to eat a balanced diet.We’d better not eat in small restaurants.The food and the oil they use are not clean or healthy enough.We’d better eat at school or at home if we have time.8、中國夢

每一個人，每一個國家，都擁有夢想。“中國夢”是目前最熱門的話題。作為中學生，你是如何理解中國夢的？你的中國夢是什么呢？為實現(xiàn)你的夢想，你將怎么做呢？假設(shè)你叫李紅，請以“My Dream”為題，寫一篇70-80詞的英語短文。

參考詞匯：China dream, come true, achieve one’s dreams, give up, hold on to, make up of

中國夢 范文

My Dream

Everyone has his dreams.As young students, we have many kinds of dreams.These dreams are our China dreams.The dreams can be very big, or they can also be small.In fact, a big dream is made up of many small dreams.My name is Li Hong.I also have a dream.I dream of becoming a great scientist.From now on, I have to study hard to achieve my dream.I must learn as much as I can.When I meet any difficulty, I won’t give it up, and I must get it over.I’m sure it’s very important to dream.Some dreams are more realistic, others are not.No matter what our dreams are, we should hold on to them.They can just come true one day.9、中國式過馬路

最近媒體對“中國式過馬路”這一現(xiàn)象進行了尖銳的批評。請你以一個中學生的角色，寫一篇短文，對“中國式過馬路”這一現(xiàn)象加以評論。現(xiàn)象： 很多人過馬路時不看紅綠燈。原因： 缺乏交通安全意識匆忙趕時間。措施： 遵守交通規(guī)則你自己的建議……

中國式過馬路 范文

Chinese style of crossing streets has been a hot topic on the Internet recently.Now many people cross streets without looking at the traffic lights.Why? I think there are two main reasons.Some people lack awareness of traffic safety.Besides, some people are so busy that they don’t want to wait for the green light.However, it has brought danger to themselves as well as to others.So I hope something must be done to avoid traffic accidents.For

example, whoever breaks the traffic rules should be punished.As middle school students, we should obey the traffic rules.What’s more, I will try my best to advise people to obey the rules.Only in this way can we cross streets safely.10、如何學好英語

世界在發(fā)展，文化在交融，英語已經(jīng)成為人們溝通的橋梁。怎樣學好英語是我們一直在探索的問題。幾年的學習經(jīng)歷你一定積累了許多成功的經(jīng)驗，請從聽、說、讀、寫四方面談談你的建議。

要求：1.詞數(shù)：80—100詞(開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))2.字跡工整，語言流暢，表達正確，邏輯清晰。★如何學好英語 范文How to learn English well

English is important and useful to us.How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions.First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs.Watching English movies is also helpful to us.Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible.Don’t be afraid of making mistakes.The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make.We'd better join the English club and practice with others.Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines.It’s good for us.At last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries.In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.11、網(wǎng)絡游戲

題目：李華沉迷于電腦游戲中，影響了學習。作為他的好朋友，你打算怎么幫他呢?請用下面所給的提示詞寫一篇不少于80

字的短文。字跡工整，語言流暢。

提示詞：give up concentrate on be(become)interested in★網(wǎng)絡游戲范文

Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others.As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him.Firstly, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well.He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games.Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes.So he must give it up.I can play more sports with him after school.Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games.And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study.Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects.I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying.At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too.If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon.12、節(jié)約用水

水是生命之源。隨著水資源的短缺，節(jié)約用水是我們每個人的責任，請以此為話題寫一篇不少于80字的短文。

★節(jié)約用水范文

As we know, water is very important to man, we can’t live without water.The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.But some people don’t care about it.They waste a lot of water in their daily life.Even worse, they pour dirty water into rivers.They throw rubbish into rivers, too.Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.Something must be done to stop the pollution.And

I think it’s a great shame to waste while millions are in great need of water.I think what we can do is that we have to save every drop of water as possible as we can.For example, we must turn off the tap immediately after we use it.We can use a basin to wash our hands and faces.It’s also a good idea to encourage my friends and family members to join me!Only in this way can we live happily.If we don’t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.I believe if everyone makes a little effort, we can make a big difference。

13、保護環(huán)境

6月5日(June 5)是世界環(huán)境保護日，我們周圍的環(huán)境變得越來越糟糕，污染越來越嚴重。環(huán)境問題影響著人們的工作，學習，生活等，而我們的工作，生活，生產(chǎn)等又使環(huán)境污染越來越嚴重....。如何保護我們的環(huán)境? 請以“ How to protect/save our environment/world? ”為題寫一篇短文。

提示：存在問題：1.水污染越來越嚴重;2.砍伐森林嚴重;3.大氣污染嚴重;4.白色垃圾等。

要求：如何改善/保護環(huán)境?至少：3---4個方面，80字左右。

★保護環(huán)境范文

How to protect our environment?

The environmental pollution is worse and worse today.Water is polluted;we have no clean water to drink.Many trees are cutting down, some animals are losing their living places.Some factories are pouring dirty air in the sky, and the air is badly polluted.Besides, the population is increasing faster and faster, plastic bags are everywhere.People's health has been greatly affected by all kinds of pollution.Many people died of diseases.In order to live a better life, we need to protect our world。We shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere.We must reuse things.It can help to save money and reduce pollution.Also We should take our own bags while shopping.We must plant more trees and stop people cutting them.We hope our world becomes more and more beautiful。

14、介紹家鄉(xiāng)

以My hometown為題寫一篇60-80字的短文，介紹你的家鄉(xiāng)的地理位置，季節(jié)、旅游、交通、飲食、特產(chǎn)、民俗等。

★介紹家鄉(xiāng)范文My hometown

My hometown Meishan is a beautiful and rich place ,it lies in the south ofSichuan.Meishan is a good place to have fun.It is famous for many kinds of tasty fruits and special local food.the weather is neither too hot nor too cold all year round.there are many wide roads though it ,so the traffic is convenient.When you come to Meishan, you will be impressed with the beautiful scenery as well as the friendly local people.For your next vacation ,why not consider travelling to my lovely hometown ,Meishan?