第一篇：專四寫作講座之作文閃光點

作文是各類英語考試中得分率最低的題型之一。同學們在掌握了一定的作文模板，和基本的語法、詞匯、句型用法之后，如果能在作文中創造一些詞匯和句型的閃光點，必定會使你的作文如虎添翼！

高分作文標志

1、是否長短句交叉；

2、是否會使用插入語；

3、用詞是否多樣，準確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞；

4、關鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復詞；

5、句型使用是否準確、地道。

下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項：

1.適當用被動替換主動，這樣能更客觀的反映事實, 句子開頭不要總是用we / I(比如寫結尾時不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.)舉個經典結尾2004年六月六級作文的最后一段：It is, therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入語，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語放在中間，一般放在主語、動詞或者助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。

如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間，一般放在動詞，助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。

比如說： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …

3.一定要學會換詞，換形象，具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子applicable替換proper, approaches替換ways, implement替換carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替換enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物競爭力)

下面舉一篇某位同學寫的優秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何運用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

Computer and I By Simmy

I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替換 very

thrilling 替換 exciting

sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb.be interested in sth.google 替換 search

an army of 替換 a lot of

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing numbers of individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個精彩句型，用來描述在某個時期發生了什么事情；

Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular

Coincident with … 非常地道的句型，表達“與…一致”的意思，替換 With …

Advancement 替換 development

Pour into(flood into / swarm into)替換 enter into

Current(currently)替換 now

Appeal to sb.替換 sb.be interested in sth.Growing numbers of individuals 替換 more and more people

It is no exaggeration to say 經典句型，說某事是毫不夸張的

For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替換 To begin with

We can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法

our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被動

Additionally 替換 In addition / Besides Deliver 替換 send

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence , obscene, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個句子有三個精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個句型，還有however作為插入語，function in the disservice of 替換 do harm to

Emerging 替換 appearing(fading 替換 disappearing)

Net citizen 網民，屬于精彩用詞

As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should , therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替換 Every coin has two sides

Computers do play，do 強調

Positive 替換 important / good 等

A slice of 替換 a part of

Unfavorable 替換 bad

Impacts 替換 effects / influences

We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入語

Fruits(而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替換 advantage(defects 替換 disadvantage)

Facet 替換 aspect

各位同學，上面的作文里有這么多精彩的閃光點，作文怎么會不得高分呢！

以下是30個最經典的替換詞，各位同學可以參考一下。

1.individuals,characters, folks替換(people ,persons)

2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替換good

3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill(有害的)替換bad

如果bad做表語，可以有be less impressive替換

eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms.When it approaches to graduation, as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many。。, if not most)替換many.注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有詞。

Eg.Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理 用most, if not all ,替換most.5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替換some

6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think

(因為是書面語，所以要加that)

7，affair ,business ,matter 替換thing

8: shared 代 common

9.reap huge fruits 替換get many benefits

10for my part ,from my own perspective 替換 in my opinion

11:Increasing(ly),growing 替換more and more(注意沒有growingly這種形式。所以當修飾名詞時用increasing/growing.修飾形容詞，副詞用increasingly.Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替換hardly 13..beneficial, rewarding替換helpful, 14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替換customer

15.exceedingly, extremely, intensely 替換very 16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable...替換 unnecessary, avoidable

17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替換sb take interest in / sb.be interested in

18.capture one's attention替換attract one's attention.19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect 20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear 21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替換cause.22.There are several reasons behind sth 替換..reasons for sth 23.desire 替換want.24.pour attention into 替換pay attention to

25.bear in mind that 替換remember 26.enjoy, possess 替換have(注意process是過程的意思)27.interaction替換communication 28.frown on sth替換 be against , disagree with sth 29.to name only a few, as an example替換 for example, for instance

30.next to / virtually impossible,替換nearly / almost impossible

希望大家能夠在平時的學習中多總結精彩、地道的詞匯和句型閃光點！常用連接詞

To Add: and, again, and then, besides, equally important, finally, further, furthermore, nor, too, next, lastly, what's more, moreover, in addition, first(second, etc.)，To Compare: whereas, but, yet, on the other hand, however, nevertheless, on the other hand, on the contrary, by comparison, where, compared to, up against, balanced against, but, although，conversely, meanwhile, after all, in contrast, although this may be true

To Prove: because, for, since, for the same reason, obviously, evidently, furthermore, moreover, besides, indeed, in fact, in addition, in any case, that is

To Show Exception: yet, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, of course, once in a while, sometimes

To Show Time: immediately, thereafter, soon, after a few hours, finally, then, later, previously, formerly, first(second, etc.), next, and then

To Repeat in brief, as I have said, as I have noted, as has been noted，To Emphasize: definitely, extremely, obviously, in fact, indeed, in any case, absolutely, positively, naturally, surprisingly, always, forever, perennially, eternally, never, emphatically, unquestionably, without a doubt, certainly, undeniably, without reservation

To Show Sequence: first, second, third, and so forth.A, B, C, and so forth.next, then, following this, at this time, now, at this point, after, afterward, subsequently, finally, consequently, previously, before this, simultaneously, concurrently, thus, therefore, hence, next, and then, soon

To Give an Example: for example, for instance, in this case, in another case, on this occasion, in this situation, take the case of, to demonstrate, to illustrate, as an illustration，To Summarize or Conclude：in brief, on the whole, summing up, to conclude, in conclusion, as I have shown, as I have said, hence, therefore, accordingly, thus, as a result, consequently, on the whole

一、常用句型及單詞

A.開頭

1、There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: ______________.2、______________ has become a hot topic among people, especially among the young, and heated debates are right on their way.3、Recently, _________has been brought to such popular attention that _________

(e.g.Recently, the problem of global warming has been brought to such popular attention that governments at all levels place it on the top of the agenda.).4、One of our ancient philosophers said, ______________.Chinese people have always been holding this idea to be one of their standards of morality.5.No one，regardless of race, religion or nationality, would deny that...或：Everyone would agree that...B 結尾

1)Only in this way/Only when……/Only through……, will/can we……或：It is only if/when……that we will……

It is only if all sides of society take their roles fully that we will achieve the society we want.2)As long as……we will be able to……/the problem is bound to……

As long as we persist in spreading scientific knowledge among the masses, all the superstitions are bound to go out of our life.3)With a constant/steady improvement in ……(或With the gradual worsening of……)sth.will……

With a steady improvement in our legal system, this problem will sure be solved earlier or later.4)In a word there is every/little chance/probability/possibility that.……in time to come.A

In one word, there is every chance that this Chinese traditon will continue to entertain millions of Chinese citizens.C.中間

1．建議和解決方法

1）.A great number of solutions are being offered.Some people suggest that ______________.Others argue that ______________.2）.But I don’t think it is a very good way to solve ______________.For instance, ______________.Worst of all, ______________.3）.My suggestion to deal with/solve/relieve the problem are as follows.In the first place,….Secondly,….Finally

4）.If we let the situation go as it is, ….By that time, ….如果讓這種情況繼續發展下去，那么到那個時候，……。

5）If……, will there be anything that can make me even happier? 如果（我們怎么怎么做），那將沒有比這令我更高興的了。

2.It 結構

1）It is advisable to exercise（擁有）patience in dealing with such complicated situations.2）It is necessary that young and old people should communicate more with each other.3）It is certain that fresh air and exercises are more enjoyable and beneficial than medicine.4）It is well known that many of our problems are caused at least in part by failure to communicate.5）It seemed to me that the only thing that matters is to learn through failure.6）It pays in the long run（從長遠的角度看……）to introduce new technique.3.動名詞或分詞結構

1）Drinking，eating，and smoking excessively can do severe harm to even a young person's health.2）The art of communication requires learning the language and culture of the audience.4.遞進式結構

1）Fresh vegetables are nutritious（有營養的）；furthermore，they re cheaper than frozen ones.2）Helping others will not only bring joy into other people's lives，but also added happiness into our own.5.表示重要性或必要性

1）It's important to set aside time for relaxation，hobbies，and entertainment as well.2）A harmonious atmosphere is essential（necessary / critical / indispensable）to achieve success.3）Global warming can endanger our lives so much that we are obliged to make a careful study of the problem and try to find out a lasting solution to it.6.表示目的1）The purpose of a test is to show what you have leaned about a subject.2）The intent is not to catch everyone but rather to catch enough to spread the word.3）Competitive sports are recommended to young adults to prepare them for the competitive world of college and business.7.表示結果

1）Too much work and too little rest may lead to loss of health.2）If you try to learn too many things at a time，you may get confused.3）By consistent hard work we will be able to achieved our objectives（目標）.8.表示對比和比較

1）Jobs and work do much more than most of us realize to provide happiness and contentment.2）Work is more than a necessity for most human beings；it is the focus of their lives，the source of their identity and creativity.3）Rather than a punishment or a burden，work is the opportunity to realize one's potential.4）The more scientists find out，the more questions they are unable to answer.9.表示條件或假設的結構

1）Without the distraction of TV，they might sit around together after dinner.2）As long as the brain is given plenty of exercise it keeps its power.3）Were it left to me to decide whether we should _______, I should not hesitate a moment to prefer the latter.4）Without a degree and with no vocational experience their chances of getting good jobs are slim.10.表示舉例

1）Take______for example，2）An illustration（例證）may make the point clear.11.表示采取措施

1）The government should be taking effective（有效的）measures to overcome current difficulties.2）As college students, we are obliged to make every effort to help support the Olymic Games.3）The school authorities should invest more energy and money in improving working and living conditions for the teachers.12.表示讓步關系

1）While it may be more convenient to possess a car，it is also expensive and troublesome at times.2）Although I do not earn a great deal of money for this job，the pleasure I receive from the work makes it worthwhile.13.表示因果或前提關系

1）Because of(owing to)the pressure（壓力）of examinations，many students are left with little or no free time.2）Perhaps it's because few of us know how to accept compliments（贊揚）gracefully.3）That is why housework is considered as such a dreary grind（乏味的苦差事）。

4）The reason for this is that

14.表示存在的問題

1）One of the greatest problems facing the 21st century will be what to do with all the rubbish produced in the world.2）To travel abroad is a desire shared by many people，but few can afford to do it.3）Cheating is now considered to be a major problem in colleges and universities.4）Many people find it harder and harder to keep up with the radical changes that characterize our time.5）At first thought，the problem seems far too involved（復雜），but it can certainly be solved when seriously dealt with.15． There be結構

1）There are other techniques that might help you with you studying.2）There is much that we can learn from the Chinese classic works.3）There is no sense（道理）in leaving important decisions to inexperienced people.精彩廢話萬能句

The rapid progress in science and technology has given a powerful shove-ahead to the productive forces of the world and the economic and social development of humanity.科技的快速發展帶給世界生產力和人類經濟和社會的發展一個強勁的推動力

…can help one stand tall and aim far, broaden one's vision and give full play to one's intelligence and wisdom on the broad arena of the modernization drive.站的高看的遠,開擴自己的視野,在現代化建設的大舞臺上充分發揮個人才智

Let’s join hands and work together to contribute a greater part to the harmony of our society.讓我們攜手共同奮斗，為建設和諧社會作出更大的貢獻！

Famous scientist Marie Curie once said,” Nothing in life is to be feared;it is only to be understood.” In the same ways, once we understand the causes of this phenomenon, we can confidently believe that we will solve the problem with the following means:

精彩虛詞

1.admittedly 應當承認: Admittedly, a few governments have taken timid measures.2.simply 簡而言之: The answer is simply money.3.surely 肯定地: This is surely the most short-sighted policy you could imagine.4.increasingly 不斷增長地 While money is eagerly collected in vast sums with one hand, it is paid out in increasingly vaster sums with the other.

第二篇：專四英語便條寫作 之祝賀信（范文模版）

專四英語便條寫作 之祝賀信

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Letters of Congratulations

１．Introduction

?按西方國家的習俗，親友之間在重大節日要寫祝賀信或贈禮物，如圣誕節、新年、婚禮、生日等等。當親友晉升、考試成功、畢業、喬遷新居、獲得工作、新業開張以及獲獎等等，也要寫祝賀信。

?祝賀信要寫的及時，得到喜訊后應立即動筆。信中要提到具體的喜事，表達出寫信人的喜悅心情，并致以衷心的祝賀。總的來說，這類書信只需寥寥數語，但用詞必須親切有禮，表達出真誠的喜悅。

2.Commonly Used Sentences

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?請接受我給你的生日禮物，禮物不在于他本身的價值，而在于它表達了我對你的思念。

?Please accept my gift for your birthday, not for its own value, but for the sake of the thoughts it represents.?I am writing to express my heartiest congratulations on your…

?Please accept my sincere congratulations from the bottom of my heart on your…

?I wish to congratulate you on your finishing high school and entering Peking University.?I am much delighted to hear/learn you have passed/won…As one of your friend, I’m very proud of you.?It’s the kind of news I like to hear, because it proves once again a

hard-working man always gets ahead.Let me offer my warmest congratulations.I know you are going to be a success in…

?I was delighted to hear that you have won the first prize of the English Speech Contest.?Hearty congratulations and best wishes for your success in your English learning.?謹祝你的新居將為你全家帶來鴻運和安康！

?I hope your new dwelling will bring you and your family loads of fortune and good heath.Congratulations for Changing Residence

March 25,2011

Dear Li Fang,Congratulate you on your moving into your new residence.You’ve finally got such anice new house that you’ve always been hoping for.I hope your new dwelling will bring you and your family loads of fortune and good health.Wish you plenty of prosperity and good luck in your new house.Yours,Ma Ying

Congratulations on Passing University Examination

March 25, 2011

Dear Li Ping,We are very happy to learn that you have successfully passed the college

entranceexamination this year and have been admitted to Hunan University with honor.Allow us to offer our most sincere congratulations on this happy occasion.Wish you greater achievement in your college education.Yours sincerely,Cindy

Congratulations for Winning a Prize

March 25,2011

Dear Karna,All of us take great pleasure in sending congratulations to you for winning the first prize of the English Speech Contest.I know of no one who deserves it than you.I am sure that the prize you have won is the first of many honors that you will attain in the years to come.Sincerely yours,Doman

Congratulations on triumphal Performance

?Everybody is talking about your brilliant solo last night.I just can’t tell you how much I enjoyed it!

?It was a great triumph.Permit me to send my enthusiastic congratulations.?May all the finest things in life keep happening to you!

Moving into a new house

May 12, 2011

Dear Tom,I just write to express my heartiest congratulations on your moving into your new house.It is really good news you have at last a house of your own designing,located on a scenic hillside.I can imagine how happy you and your family are.I do wish to call to see you and your new house one of these days.With best wishes to you and your family.Yours,Jerry

1996

?Your friend has just won the first prize in the Provincial English Speech Contest.Write a note of congratulations.May 12, 2011

Dear Tom,I am very happy to know you have won the first prize in the Provincial English Speech Contest.And I would like to express to you my heartiest congratulations.Your success comes from your hard work and the prize is just what you should have.I believe you will go ahead and make more progress.Hope I will hear more good news from you.Yours,Jerry

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第三篇：英語六級寫作備考之創造閃光點

高分作文標志:

1：是否長短句交叉;

2、是否會使用插入語;

3、用詞是否多樣，準確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞;

4、關鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復詞;

5、句型使用是否準確、地道。

下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項：

1.適當用被動替換主動，這樣能更客觀的反映事實, 句子開頭不要總是用we / I(比如寫結尾時不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.)舉個經典結尾2004年六月六級作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入語，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語放在中間，一般放在主語、動詞或者助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。

如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間，一般放在動詞，助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。

比如說： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that ?

3.一定要學會換詞，換形象，具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現good, bad , many, thing, think，people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替換proper, approaches替換ways, implement替換carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替換enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物競爭力)

下面舉一篇南京工程學院某位同學寫的優秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何運用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

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Computer and I(By Simmy)

I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替換 very

thrilling 替換 exciting

sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb.be interested in sth.google 替換 search

an army of 替換 a lot of

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個精彩句型，用來描述在某個時期發生了什么事情;Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular

Coincident with ?非常地道的句型，表達“與?一致”的意思，替換 With ?

Advancement 替換 development

Pour into(flood into / swarm into)替換 enter into

Current(currently)替換 now

Appeal to sb.替換 sb.be interested in sth.Growing individuals 替換 more and more people

It is no exaggeration to say 經典句型，說某事是毫不夸張的

For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替換 To begin with

We can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法

our knowledge will be well enriched,and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被動

Additionally 替換 In addition / Besides

Deliver 替換 send

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個句子有三個精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個句型，還有however作為插入語，function in the disservice of 替換 do harm to

Emerging 替換 appearing(fading 替換 disappearing)

Net citizen 網民，屬于精彩用詞

As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替換 Every coin has two sides

Computers do play，do 強調

Positive 替換 important / good 等

A slice of 替換 a part of 滬江四六級 http://cet.hjenglish.com

Unfavorable 替換 bad

Impacts 替換 effects / influences

We should, therefore, take advantage of ?使用插入語

Fruits(而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替換 advantage(defects 替換 disadvantage)Facet 替換 aspect

各位同學，上面的作文里有這么多精彩的閃光點，作文怎么會不得高分呢!

第四篇：英語六級寫作寫作技巧之創造閃光點

英語六級寫作寫作技巧之創造閃光點

高分作文標志： 1：是否長短句交叉;

2、是否會使用插入語;

3、用詞是否多樣，準確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞;

4、關鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復詞;

5、句型使用是否準確、地道。下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項：

1.適當用被動替換主動，這樣能更客觀的反映事實, 句子開頭不要總是用we / I(比如寫結尾時不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.)舉個經典結尾2004年六月六級作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入語，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語放在中間，一般放在主語、動詞或者助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間，一般放在動詞，助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。比如說： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that … 3.一定要學會換詞，換形象，具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現good, bad , many, thing, think,people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替換proper, approaches替換ways, implement替換carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替換enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物競爭力)

下面舉一篇南京工程學院某位同學寫的優秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何運用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

Computer and I(By Simmy)

I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替換 very thrilling 替換 exciting

sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb.be interested in sth.google 替換 search an army of 替換 a lot of

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個精彩句型，用來描述在某個時期發生了什么事情;Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular

Coincident with … 非常地道的句型，表達“與…一致”的意思，替換 With …

Advancement 替換 development

Pour into(flood into / swarm into)替換 enter into Current(currently)替換 now

Appeal to sb.替換 sb.be interested in sth.Growing individuals 替換 more and more people

It is no exaggeration to say 經典句型，說某事是毫不夸張的 For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替換 To begin with

We can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法

our knowledge will be well enriched,and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被動 Additionally 替換 In addition / Besides Deliver 替換 send

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個句子有三個精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個句型，還有however作為插入語，function in the disservice of 替換 do harm to

Emerging 替換 appearing(fading 替換 disappearing)Net citizen 網民，屬于精彩用詞

As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替換 Every coin has two sides Computers do play，do 強調 Positive 替換 important / good 等 A slice of 替換 a part of Unfavorable 替換 bad

Impacts 替換 effects / influences We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入語 Fruits(而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替換 advantage(defects 替換 disadvantage)Facet 替換 aspect 各位同學，上面的作文里有這么多精彩的閃光點，作文怎么會不得高分呢!

第五篇：專四考試寫作

寫作包括兩部分，一是要求在35分鐘內寫一篇150字左右的短文，二是要求在10分鐘內寫一個50--60字的便條。這兩部分均為命題作文，作文內容與大學生的日常生活、學習都密切相關，另外也有社會熱點問題，比如環保、旅游、健身等，題目理解起來都比較容易。

短文寫作部分文體為議論文，一般采用三段式的結構，第一段為論點，第二段為論據，第三段為結論。最高要求為文章內容切題，思想表達清楚，論據充分，論證嚴密，基本無語言錯誤。要想寫好一篇文章，應該注意一下寫作步驟： 

1.審題：作文評分的第一個要求就是內容切題，因此審題特別關鍵。專業四級作文都是命題作文，而且多有中文提示或提綱，所以你首先應了解命題的基本要求，理解題目的真正意圖，然后確定提綱中的關鍵詞及各要點間的邏輯，整理自己的思路，對自己所想到的內容進行組織和全面安排。尤其對要討論的問題，該涉及的內容，所需的事實、例證、闡述、說明和總結等，在頭腦中形成一個整體的構思。

2.組織段落：構思好之后，根據構思的提綱，運用選好的材料，恰當地運用連詞，合理安排段落，使文章條理清楚、內容連貫。段落的組織主要是通過擴展句對主題句的支持或說明來進行的。各段的主題句在審題構思時就應基本形成，主題句確定下來，接著就是通過一系列的擴展句，來說明、論證或闡述主題句的思想。常見的段落展開方法有列舉、舉例、比較和對比、因果、敘述、歸類、下定義等，考試時應靈活運用。

3.修改：也就是說要刪除與主題不相干的內容，檢查句子時態、語態等。特別應注意單詞的正確拼寫；字母大小寫和標點符號；數的一致性（包括主語與謂語以及名詞與其限定語的單復數一致性）；指代關系（包括指代的一致性和代詞的選用）；動詞形式（時態、語態、語氣）等方面。

關于考試過程中短文寫作的時間分配問題。我們知道，短文寫作的時間為35分鐘, 要力爭寫完寫好, 這就要求考生做到有條不紊，忙而不亂，充分發揮自己應有的水平。建議按照如下的方案分配時間: 審題1～2分鐘；組織素材, 細節和關鍵詞: 4～5分鐘； 起草: 20～25分鐘；修改定稿: 4～5分鐘。

最后要說明的是，從某種意義上來說，專業四級考試作文有其固定的寫作格式、結構，而對于固定的題型，有固定不變的表達法。因此，大家有理由相信只要訓練方法得當，搞好寫作是不難的。大家不妨試試多背范文和常用句型，包括各類型作文的開頭、結尾句、中間展開、過渡句，以及比較、圖表說明等的常用句型和表達法，然后自己多動筆寫一寫，只要按這樣的方法進行練習，相信在一定時間內就可以在寫作上取得滿意的分數。因為是三段式作文，寫作的時候一定注意第一段提出的論點要簡潔明了，開門見山；第二段的論據要能充分說明論點，論證條理清楚；第三段的結論要水到渠成，切忌草率，嚴謹完整的結尾是取得高分的保證。 便條寫作最主要的是注意格式正確，交待清楚，比如請柬、賀信、道歉函等，要注意稱呼、正文、簽名等的格式，一定要把相關的時間、地點、原因及主要事件內容交待清楚。

小作文范文：

1.邀請便條：

①發出邀請a April 20, 2008

Dear Fiona，I am going to hold a dinner party with several other friends of ours.The party will be held in Room 6 of Lijing Hotel at 5:00 p.m.today, I sincerely hope you can attend and we will have a very happy time together.Please let me know whether you can make it.Yours，Amelia

發出邀請b

April 20, 2008

Dear Fiona，Here is a piece of good news for you.The * will give a performance in the * tomorrow evening.I am sure that you will be happy to watch it.The performance will begin at seven o’clock sharp.I will wait for you at the theater entrance.Please let me know whether you can make it at your earliest convenience.Yours，Amelia

發出邀請c

April 20, 2008

Dear Professor Zhou, I am Amelia from class 052;I need you to give me some suggestion on my project.If it doesn’t trouble you too much, shall we have a meet at your office tomorrow? Time is up to you.Respectful yours，Amelia

發出邀請d（通知）

April 20, 2008

Dear girls and boys in Class 0403，This Saturday evening, from 7 p.m.to 9 p.m., at Singeing dining hall, there will be a ball held by Class 0301.We warmly invite you to take part in it.There you can enjoy yourselves with dance, music and various games.And we’ll have a chance of communication, which will enhance the friendship between us.Come and enjoy ourselves together.Yours，Mike

Monitor of Class 0301

②接受邀請

April 20, 2008

Dear Amelia，It’s so kind of you to invite me to the dinner party, I would like to come.I will go to the place right after I finish my work at about 5 p.m.this evening.(如果是辦在家里：I shall be very happy to call at your house right after I finish my work at 6:30 this evening.)Thank you again for your wonderful hospitality and I am looking forward to seeing you soon.Yours，Fiona

③拒絕邀請

April 20, 2008

Dear Amelia，It’s so kind of you to invite me to the dinner party, I would like to but I have a meeting to attend this evening, please give my best regards to them all and I hope my absence will not cause you any serious inconvenience, have fun.Yours，Amelia

2．請假條

April 20, 2008

Dear Ms.Jiang，I am terribly sorry that I shall be unable to attend this morning two periods of English Class（I‘m terribly sorry to apply for ten days’ leave from the Aug.23rd to Sep.3rd）due to a bad cold and high fever.I will show you the certificate from the doctor to support my application.I will go back to school as soon as I recover.（I promise I will do my best to catch the missed lessons on after I come back.）Wish for your allowance.Yours respectfully，Amelia

3．請求便條

a．講清事情的因由（為什么請求）

b．請求行為

c．請求實現方式

d．致謝

套句：

請求幫助： Would you do me a favor? Would you be so kind as to…?/ Could I trouble you to send this book for me?/ I wonder if you would tell me…?/ If it is not too troublesome, could you…?/ I hope this request will not trouble you too much.請求允許：Please give me a few more days./May I have a look at your dictionary? / Would you mind if I opened the window? / I wonder if I could open the door./ Would it be possible to have a talk with you? 請求做事(要求與暗示)：Let’s go to the bookstore this afternoon./ I want to have a look at your book./ I wish you could…/ I would like ask you to clean the room./ You are making a big mess./ I feel a bit hungry now.What time is it now?

范文：

April 20，2008

Dear Professor Hu，I am very happy to have the chance to listen to your lecture on “American Literature”.But it is a pity that I was late that day due to an accident on my way to the lecture and failed to get the handout.Your lecture is really instructive for my English study, so I wonder if you could kindly e-mail the handout to the address: zhang123@yahoo.com.cn.Heartfelt thanks.Respectfully yours，Amelia

4．抱怨投訴便條(關鍵詞complain, dissatisfaction)

a．抱怨投訴行為

b．投訴內容具體描述

c．要求彌補糾正賠償

d．抱怨投訴者對彌補糾正賠償等的敦促或威脅

套句：

行為描述I’m writing to bring your attention to the problems I have had with …

Here’s the problem…

解決方式的要求：It would be very kind(considerate)of you to…address this problem soon./ take steps to rectify this situation soon./ turn it down a little? /

敦促或威脅: Frankly, I really can’t put up with the situation any more.You must rectify the situation, or I will take it to the court./ If you can’t give me a satisfactory answer, I will complain it to the Consumer Association.范文：

April 20，2008

Dear Sir or Madam，I went to your store to buy a Radio watch last Sunday.When I mentioned the high price, the No.5 saleswoman replied in a sarcastic tone, “You can go ahead and buy a cheap fake from other stores”.She didn’t know how to treat a prospective buyer!I hope you can improve your service and give me a face-to-face apology.My telephone number is 010-12345567.Sincerely yours，Amelia

5.道歉便條

a道歉的行為與內容，b具體理由，c彌補方法，d進一步致歉。

套句：

道歉行為： I’m writing to show my apology for…/ I would like to express my apologies for not being able to…/I’m sorry to say that I’ve not finished reading it through, and have to keep it until next Sunday./ Excuse me for my delaying in turning in my assignment.道歉理由：I had a minor accident./ I had a minor operation.彌補糾正及其承諾：I am sure I can make up the loss by…/ I promise it will never happen again./ It would be very kind(considerate)of you to give me another chance to…(to give me another two days

進一步致歉： Many apologies./ Do please forgive me.范文：

April 20，2008

Dear Fiona，I am writing to you to apologize for the abrupt way I departed just after the exams finished.It was terribly rude of me to have left without saying good-bye to you.The fact is that I was so excited when I learned I had passed the exams with high marks that I couldn’t wait to get home and tell my parents.I am sure you will understand my feelings.Please accept my sincere apology, and with you a really happy holiday.Yours truthfully，Amelia

April 20，2008

Dear Fiona，I am sorry I missed seeing you yesterday.I know that you must have been disappointed.I also feel worried and anxious in my heart.The fact is that my manager at the last moment asked me to prepare an urgent plan while I could not get to a phone to call you and yesterday I have worked late until about 8:30 p.m.I am terribly sorry.However, I would like to ask you out this weekend to make up for yesterday.Please give me a chance and I am waiting for your reply.Sincerely yours，Amelia

Dear Fiona，I imagine that you must be enjoying your birthday party today.I write this letter to offer my heartiest congratulations and best wishes for many returns of the day.It is a great pity that I cannot be with you.But remember I am thinking of you all the time.I hope that all your years to come will be twice as happy and as merry as those past.

Please accept the small gift I am sending you as a token of my best wishes for your happy birthday.

Sincerely yours，Amelia

6．祝賀

a.祝賀內容

b．表示祝賀

c．積極評價

d．忠心祝福（再次祝賀＋祝福未來）

套句：

祝賀之事和自己的反應： I’m so happy to learn that you’ve just passed your thesis defense./ I’m so pleased to hear that you’ve got the admission by the Cambridge University to further your graduate study.祝賀行為: Please accept my warmest congratulations.對成功的評價和對對方的欽佩；You really deserve it because…/ This meant years of your hard work, and it’s an achievement you can well be proud of./ I have been appreciating your excellent performance in study and ability in your work.美好祝愿； You will have a brilliant future./ I believe our school life will be more colorful under your leadership./ I believe that the knowledge you’ve acquired will enable you to be successful in whatever aspect of life.Congratulations again and all good wishes for your future study.范文：

April 20，2008

Dear Shirly，I am so excited to learn that you’ve been admitted by Shanghai International Studies University as a graduate.Warm congratulations on the realization of your dream.This has meant years of your hard work, and you can really be proud of it.Your success is really an encouragement to me and I wish we can meet there next year, Best wishes to you.Yours，Amelia

7.致謝便條：

套句：

致謝內容，交代感謝原因：I am writing to tell you how much I enjoyed the weekend in your village./ / I am writing to express my appreciation for all that you did for me during my visit in Shanghai./ I am writing to tell you how much I appreciate your hospitality.Thank you so much for your assistance/ for the information your gave us.進一步解釋對方的幫助給自己帶來的好處，再次致謝，回饋承諾Please accept my warmest thanks,I hope I have the chance to reciprocate your kindness.范文：

April 20，2008

Dear Peter，I’m writing to show my gratitude for your invitation to your birthday party.That was a really wonderful party.I appreciate your considerate arrangement and wonderful performance you had prepared.And it also offered me a chance to meet many old friends.I really enjoyed that night and I do hope you will have a wonderful life.Yours，Amelia

Dear Professor Chen，It is just three weeks since I consulted you on how to write a research paper and I’d like to assure you that I really appreciate your help.

Your advice has been very valuable, and I have read the books recommended by you with gratifying results.I have finished my research paper, and I owe it to your help.I would like to express my gratitude, along with my best wishes.

Respectful yours

Amelia

8．留言條

誰？時間？ 什么事情？ 要求？

范文：

Apr.20，2008

Dear Yang，A Mr.Liu Bing called you this morning but you were not in.He wanted to meet you this coming Saturday, 9 a.m., at the university gate.If that is not convenient for you, you are requested to ring him up at any time evening from 8 p.m.to 10 p.m.at 123454576.Yours，Amelia

Apr.20，2008

Dear Fiona，This afternoon, I came to your dormitory to return” Gone with the Wind” that you had kindly lent me last week.Unfortunately, you were not here and your roommates seemed to be out as well.I had no choice but to take the book back.I wonder if you could contract with me anytime in the evening so that I could find appropriate time to visit you.Sincerely yours，Amelia

9．廣告（求購與轉讓）

轉讓求購的理由。I will graduate soon./ To improve my listening comprehension, I….? In need of money for an emergent affair, I would like to sell my computer.轉讓求購行為和內容。I have a computer for sale./ Before I leave this college, I’d like to sell my computer./ I want to buy a secondhand walkman to study English./ In need of money, I want to sell my lovely bag at a low price.轉讓/求購事物的具體狀況。The car is still in good condition./ I just bought it last month, and it can work perfectly well.轉讓/求購的價格商定。I can pay it for at most 50 yuan./ I will charge only 200 for it.范文：Offer to Buy

April 20, 2008

Dear boys and girls，I badly need a ticket for postgraduate entrance examination instruction by the New Oriental School.If you have one to sale, I’d like to pay it for twice the original price, for I have been longing for it and hence have canceled my trip to Hong Kong.Call me at 1234567;my cell phone will be on for 24 hours.Yours，Amelia

Offer to sell April 20, 2008

Dear Schoolmates，I’m a four-year student from the English Department.In two weeks, I will graduate from this university.I’ve decided not to bring my bike with me when I leave.So I’d like to part with it, and sell it to someone who might need it.It is half new, dark and light.With curved bars, it is mainly for lady’s use.As far as the price is concerned, I’d like to sell it for eighty yuan.Those interested in it can come and have a look at it before making a decision.Add: Room 402, Student Dormitory Building No.5

Tel: 1668889

10.申請

April 20, 2008

Dear Sirs:

I have learned from the newspaper that there is a vacancy for a teacher of English during the summer vacation.I wish to be considered as an applicant for the position.Enclosed is my resume.I would be greatly grateful if you would grant me a chance for an interview.

Respectfully yours，Amelia

Applying for Studying in a University

Dear Sir，I am seeking an opportunity to study English in your university after my graduation from the Foreign Language Department of Zhejiang Wanli University, Ningbo, the People’s Republic of China next year.Please inform me of the application procedure for admission.I intend to support myself financially during the period of my study in your university.I should be grateful if you would kindly let me have the details concerning the eligibility of a student from a foreign country for any scholarship in your English department.I am looking forward to your reply in due time.

Yours faithfully，Amelia

11.失物招領 Lose

Gentlemen，I took the last bus(No.406)home last night and got off at Zhejiang Wanli University.After arriving home, I noticed that I had left my bag on the bus.It is a black bag made of leather with a zipper.Inside are some books, a bunch of keys and my photos.If you happen to find the above bag, would you kindly let me know about it?

My address: Room 321, Dormitory Building Eight, DMU

My phone number: 4720123

Loser，Amelia

April 20, 2008

Found

I happened to find a bag on the playground yesterday afternoon, in which there are some books, a pencil box and a watch.The loser is expected to come to the office of Foreign Language Department to claim it.The phone number is 4729646.

Finder，Amelia

March 8, 2000

12.咨詢：

Dear Sir，I am a freshman of Wanli University and am greatly interested in registering your club membership.So I would be grateful if you would be so kind as to provide me with certain essential information about the qualification fees, available facilities and activities, and other relative details.I am looking forward to your early reply.Thanks in advance.Yours，Amelia