第一篇：研究生考試英語作文王江濤大全
2011考研英語
（一）寫作真題詳解及參考范文
2011年考研英語已經塵埃落定，寫作部分比起2010年超綱的“告示”和“變態”的火鍋，難度大為降低，現解析如下。
Part A: 小作文
Directions:
Write a letter to a friend of yours to
1)recommend one of your favorite movies and
2)give reasons for your recommendation.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use”Li Ming”instead.Do not write the address.(10 points)題目譯文
給你的一位朋友寫一封信
1）推薦你最喜歡的一部電影并 2）給出推薦的原因。
真題詳解
令廣大考生欣慰的是，2011年小作文并未考察大綱中已提到六年但并未考察過的摘要題型，也未考察2010年剛剛考察過的告示題型，而是考察了廣大考生最為熟悉、從2005到2009已經連續五年考察的書信。
回顧剛剛過去的2010年，中國內地電影票房成功突破100億元，成為旭日初升的朝陽產業。從年中的《唐山大地震》、《盜夢空間》、《山楂樹之戀》到年底的三大賀歲片《趙氏孤兒》、《讓子彈飛》、《非誠勿擾2》，電影已經重新成為全民關注的話題。今年的考研小作文即考察了“電影”這一熱點話題。
本題屬于推薦信，在拙著《2011考研英語高分寫作》第64-65頁詳細講解了推薦信的注意事項、寫作方法，提供了經典范文及十大萬能句型。同時，該書76頁提供的關于《八十天環游地球》的讀書報告范文完全可以用于本文寫作，下面的參考范文即由該文改寫而成。
需要注意的是，寫給朋友的稱呼應該直呼其名，不應寫某某先生或女士。本題屬于半正式文體中的私人書信，文中最好使用3-5次縮寫、省略句或口語表達。兩點提綱可以各寫一段，第三段進行結尾。首段無需進行自我介紹，開門見山表明寫作目的即可；第二段應該分析兩到三點原因。
參考范文 Dear Bob, As one of your closest friend, I'm writing the letter in purpose of recommending one of my favorite movies to you, Around the World in Eighty Days.The primary factors for my recommendation as as follows.For one thing, this is a movie of science fiction which tells us an exciting story about an English gentleman,Mr.Phileas Fogg, who makes a bet with his clubmates and managers to travel around the world in eighty days.For another, it gives us a vivid description of the many difficulties and incidents which happen on his journey.Wish you enjoy the movie.Looking forward to your reply.(104 words)Yours sincerely, Li Ming 參考譯文
鮑勃：
作為你最好的一位朋友，我寫這封信是為了向你推薦我最喜歡的電影之一：《八十天環游地球》。
我推薦的主要原因如下。首先，這是一部科幻電影，講述了一位英國紳士的一個激動人心的故事。菲力·弗格先生跟他的俱樂部伙伴打了個賭，并設法在八十天之內環游了地球。其次，電影生動描述了他在旅途中遇到的困難和發生的故事。
希望你喜歡這部電影。期待著你的回信。
你真誠的，李明
Part B: 大作文
Direction:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing.In your essay ,you should 1)describe the drawing briefly, 2)explain its intended measing, and 3)give your comments.You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.(20 points)（圖略）
文字說明：旅程之“余”
真題詳解
不出意外，2011年大作文自2000年以來連續第十二年考察了圖畫作文題型，三點提綱也與2008年以來的提綱完全一致，考察了考研寫作六大話題之一：“環境保護”。
“環境保護”這一話題考研寫作已是第五次考察：第一次是1991年考察了提綱作文“城鄉環境差別”，第二次是1999年考察了圖表作文“保護野生物種”，第三次是2000年考察了圖畫作文“保護海洋資源”，第四次是2009年考察了書信“限制使用塑料袋”，今年是第五次考察了圖畫作文“旅游與環境”。今年的考試再次提醒廣大考生：考研寫作歷年真題是考研寫作復習的重中之重！
參加過新東方培訓的考生應該覺得今年的考題易如反掌。我們的內部教材《考研英語寫作分冊》第29-32頁提供了1999和2000年考生的三篇高分作文，很多表達均可使用。幾乎我所有的班上均詳細講解了2000年高分作文那篇萬能框架，并仿寫過三道最新真題，大家應該印象深刻。同時，我提供的二十必背范文中有三篇關于環境問題的范文，均可參考借鑒。我們還詳細總結了考研寫作六大必考話題，尤其關于環境的表達要求掌握。
拙著《我的滿分考研寫作書》（湖南文藝出版社，2010年11月）150-153頁詳細講解了1999-2000年真題，在考研大作文十大必背范文中，有三篇關于環境的范文：分別是211頁2000年真題范文以及228-232頁關于“全球變暖”和“低碳經濟”的兩篇模擬題范文，諸多表達均可使用。另一本拙著《2011考研英語高分寫作》（2010年3月）第154-159頁詳細講解了1999-2000年關于環境問題的真題，并提供了四篇經典范文；198-199也也提供了關于“環境保護”和“環境污染”兩篇必背范文；232-233頁還總結了關于環保的很多補充詞匯。廣大學子如果認真研讀過上述兩本寫作書籍，今年應有喜出望外之感。
值得注意的是，近三年的考研寫作真題與專業四級寫作真題存在某種微妙的聯系。2007年專四寫作考察了“網絡”這一話題，兩年之后2009年考研大作文考察“網絡”；2008年專四寫作考察了“志愿者活動”這一話題，兩年之后2010年考研小作文考察了“志愿者活動”；2009年專四寫作考察了“旅游與環境”這一話題，兩年之后考研大作文再次如約考察“旅游與環境”。2010年我在班上曾經專門分析過這道題目，沒想到一語成讖。
之所以出現這種現象其實可以理解。考研寫作命題組成員多為全國各重點大學英語系教授級人物，對于英語專業學生必考的專四考試當然了如指掌。
本題文字說明是：旅程之“余”。“余”字的雙引號一語雙關，一方面指旅游之后，垃圾遍地，環境遭到嚴重污染和破壞；一方面指作為個體的”我“在旅游之中應該提高意識，潔身自好，注意愛護環境。
根據三點提綱，最好寫成三段。首段圖畫描述，越充分越好，切忌使用太多模板或萬能句型，引起閱卷教師反感。首段是最重要的段落，也是判卷教師最重視的段落，亦是考研大作文難點所在。每點提綱各占三分之一分數，即七分。首段不描述圖畫直接扣七分，歸入低分檔，切忌發表太多空洞的議論。描述越多越好，議論越少越好。首句可進行總體描述：人物+動作+環境；次句可進行細節描述，力求詳細；尾句可翻譯文字說明或點出象征寓意。
次段意義闡釋，五句左右即可。一般首句是主題句，點出象征寓意；中間進行具體論證，可從因果、舉例、正反等多方面進行論證；尾句進行小結。末段可寫成歸納結論或建議措施，呼吁人們提高公德意識，在大力發展旅游的同時，加強環境保護。
本文只要寫成與環境或環保相關即可，即使沒有提到旅游或者公德意識，也不用過多擔心。只要語言基本正確、結構比較清晰、內容沒有跑題，即可取得及格分（12分左右）；如果語言精彩、結構嚴謹、論證充分，即可高分在握（16分或以上）。祝大家夢想成真！
參考范文
As is subtly portrayed in the cartoon, two toursits are taking sightseeing on a small boat while discarding their picnicing leftovers casually into a lake.Unfortuantely, the lake is already littered and teamed with flowing rubbish like plastic containers, fish-bones, banana skin, watermelon rind, bottles, tins, food wrappings, and so on.And below the drawing, there is a topic which says: “after” the travel or “me” in the travel.From the portrayal, we can conclude that the painter wants to convey such a message: a good many popular places are flooded with visitors, who spoil the beauty of nature by creating and leaving behind God-knows-how-much trash.On the one hand, tourism, as a multibillion-dollar business, is booming everywhere.Some people, laboring under the belief that tourism serves as an engine of economic growth, seem to ignore its negative effects on the environment.Nevertheless, it is my view that these are not concerns that we can shrug off lightly.On the other hand, tourism has exerted great pressure on the environment we are living in: water is polluted, the ecological system is disturbed, and natural resources have been excessively used.Undoubtedly, tourism could not be banned in any country as it does help to shore up the economy in places which offer few sources of income.The significant point is that the unchecked growth of the travel business may render the development of an economy unsustainable.It is high time that we enhanced people's awareness to rectify this by taking the environmental protection into consideration.(255 words)
參考譯文
如圖所示，兩名游客正在一艘小船上觀光，同時把野餐的剩余垃圾隨意丟入湖中。不幸的是，湖中已經堆滿了漂浮的塑料盒、魚骨、香蕉皮、西瓜皮、瓶子、罐頭、食品包裝等各色垃圾。在圖畫下方，有個小標題寫明：“旅程之‘余’”。
從漫畫中，我們可以得出結論：畫家想要表達下述信息：成群的游客涌入很多景點，通過生產并丟棄大量的垃圾從而破壞了大自然的美觀。一方面，旅游業作為一項數十億美元的產業，正在世界各地迅猛發展。有些人認為旅游業是經濟發展的引擎，似乎忽視了其對環境的負面影響。然而，我認為我們必須充分關注這一問題。另一方面，旅游業已經對我們生存的環境造成了巨大的壓力。水受到污染，生態平衡遭到破壞，自然資源被過度開發。
毫無疑問，由于在其他收入很少的地區，旅游業確實有助于發展經濟，因此任何國家都無法禁止旅游業。重要的是旅游業毫無節制的發展可能使得經濟發展不可持續。通過考慮環境保護因素，我們早就該提高人們的意識來扭轉這個現象了。
第二篇：研究生考試英語作文
1：投訴信
Dear_______,I am.(自我介紹)I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about_______.The reason for my dissatisfaction is ______________(總體介紹).In the first place,_________________________(抱怨的第一個方面).In addition, ____________________________(抱怨的第二個方面).Under these circumstances, I find it ___(感覺)to ____________________________(抱怨的方面給你帶來的后果).I appreciate it very much if you could_______________________(提出建議和請求), preferably __________(進一步的要求), and I would like to have this matter settled by ______(設定解決事情最后期限).Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely
Li Ming
2：詢問信
Dear ______,I am _________________________(自我介紹).I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding_______.(要詢問的內容)
First of all, what are _________________________________?(第一個問題)Secondly, when will________________________________?(第二個問題)Thirdly, is _________________?(第三個問題)
I would also like to inquire _________________________________(將最重要的問題單獨成段).Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects?
Thank you for you kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.Yours sincerely
Li Min
模板一：圖畫作文
This illustration depicts_________(圖畫中的人物)Ving, with______________(補充說明).Recently it has become common for people in many walks of life to_____________(進一步闡釋)
It seems to me that the cartoonist is sending a message about _______(圖畫主題), which is ______________(進一步的說明).He seems to be saying that_______________(給出細節).In my opinion, ___________(個人闡述).This simple picture is a wake up call for ______(所涉群體，如the whole of the human race).Therefore, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to put an end to _____________(問題所在).One the one hand, we must _________________(建議一).It is clear that the drawer of the illustration is urging us to _________(進一步說明).On the other hand, ________________(建議二)Only in this way can we___________(展望前景).模板二：圖表作文
The chart gives us an overall picture of the ____________(圖表主題).The first thing we notice is that_______________(圖表最大特點).This means that as __________, _________________(進一步說明).We can see from the statistics given that _______________(圖表細節一).After ving_________(細節一中的第一個變化), the _____Ved+幅度+時間(緊跟著的變化).The figures also tells us that_________________________(圖表細節二).(數據位置，如In the second column), we can see that ____________accounts for _______(進一步描述).Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that___________(結論).The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that_____________(給出原因)./ It is high time that we Ved(發出倡議)
模板三：利弊型作文
Recently the issue of whether or not______(討論話題)has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public.There are two major arguments that can be made for_________.For one thing, __________can bring
____ to_____________(優點一).For another, it is widely hold that people usually ____when ________________________________(優點二).But we must not lose sight of the fact that there are also drawbacks to__________, among which are ____________(列舉缺點).For instance, it can be __________to _____________(舉例說明).In addition, many people find it ________(形容詞)to _______________(第二個缺點)
When asked to __________, I tend to ____________.This is because I _______________(原因一).Furthermore, _______________________(原因二).Finally, ______________(原因三).模板四：展望未來型
With the rapid advances of _____________ in recent years, ___has____________(引出現象).However, _______ has________________, as____________(提出問題).As a result, _____has ____________________(指出影響).The effects ___________ has produced on____________ can be boiled down to two major ones.First , __________________(影響一).More importantly, ________________(影響二).Hence, I believe that we will see a ____________(提出展望)/ Nevertheless, I do not think we will see a ______(或反面展望)
There are numerous reasons why ____, and I would like to explore a few of the most important ones here.The first is that the more(比較級)_____, the more(比較級).In addition, we all agree that________________________(第二個原因)
3：請求信
Dear___________,I am writing to formally request to___________(請求的內容)
The reason for ______________is that______________________________（給出原因）.I________, so I ___________________________________(給出細節)
I would also like to request ________________________(提出進一步的要求).I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.Thank you for your attention to these requests.If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at____________(電話號碼).I look forward to a favorable reply.Yours sincerely
Li Ming
4：道歉信
Dear ___________,I am truly sorry that_________________________(道歉的原因).The reason is that ______________________________________(介紹原因)Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.Yours sincerely
Li Ming
6：建議信
Dear ___________,You have asked me for my advice with regard to _______, and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions:_________________(建議的內容)
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.Good Luck with your_______(祝愿)
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
7.求職信
Dear Sir or Madam,I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in____________(報紙名稱)of________(廣告發布時間).Not only do I have the qualifications for this job, but I also have the right personality for a __________(工作名稱).In the one hand,_______________________________(第一個原因).On the other hand, __________________________________(另一個原因).Should you grant me a personal interview, I would be most grateful.If you need to know more about me, please feel free to contact me at any time at _______________(電話號碼)
Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you.Yours sincerely
Li Ming
8：邀請信
Dear________,There will a ________________(內容)at/in________________(地點)on___________(時間).We would be honored to have you there with us.The occasion will start at ___________(具體時間).This will be followed by a _______(進一步的安排).At around______(時間)，____________________________(另一個安排)
I really hope you can make it.RSVP before ____________(通知你的最后期限)
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
詞匯類
一、近義詞匯：
1.完全：absolute, unconditional, unlimited, complete, unrestricted, unmixed, perfect, entire
2.好：extraordinary, amazing, miraculous, marvelous, stupendous, excellent, good, well, wonderful, fine, nice, of high quality, pleasing, surprising, agreeable
3.小：small, diminutive, puny, little, pocket-sized, petit, minute, tiny
4.多：big , enormous, large, gigantic, vast, tremendous, gargantuan, huge, immense, a lot of, lots of, many, much, plenty of, a great deal of, a number of, an amount of, a great many, a good many, many a, scores of, dozens of, a great quantity of
5.高興，快樂：delighted, delightful, pleased, pleasing, charmed, pleasant, cheerful, cheering, merry, happy, gratified, glad, gay, agreeable, friendly, content, satisfied, light-hearted, joyful
6.真的：True, truthful, veracious, faithful, accurate, loyal, staunch, genuine, honest, real, trustworthy, constant。
7.全，都：all, whole, entire, complete, perfect, total, the whole number of , unbroken , gross
二、常見的連接詞
連接詞根據其本身的意思和文章連接所需要的邏輯意義可分為幾類：
a。表示開場to begin with , in the first place , in general , generally speaking
b。表示總結to summarize , to sum up , to conclude , in conclusion , finally
c。表示舉例a case in point , a good illustration / example of … is …,d。表示原因because , since , for , the cause of , the reason for , now that
e。表示結果as a result , as a consequence , consequently
f。表示比較both , like , likewise , similarly , in common , in the same way
g。表示對照on the contrary , on the other hand , despite , in spite of , however
h。表示列舉first , firstly , in the first place , first of all , to begin with
i。表示強調especially , particularly , certainly , surely , chiefly , actually
j。表示讓步even though , although , in spite of , however , but , yet
1.經濟的快速發展the rapid development of economy
2.人民生活水平的顯著提高/穩步增長the remarkable improvement/ steady growth of people‘s living standard
3.先進的科學技術advanced science and technology
4.面臨新的機遇和挑戰be faced with new opportunities and challenges
5.人們普遍認為It is commonly believed/ recognized that…
6.社會發展的必然結果the inevitable result of social development
7.引起了廣泛的公眾關注arouse wide public concern/ draw public attention
8.不可否認It is undeniable that…/ There is no denying that…
9.熱烈的討論/爭論a heated discussion/ debate
10.有爭議性的問題a controversial issue
11.完全不同的觀點a totally different argument
12.一些人?而另外一些人?Some people…while others…
13.就我而言/就個人而言As far as I am concerned，/ Personally，14.就?達到絕對的一致reach an absolute consensus on…
15.有充分的理由支持be supported by sound reasons
16.雙方的論點arguments on both sides
17.發揮著日益重要的作用play an increasingly important role in…
18.對?必不可少be indispensable to…
19.正如諺語所說As the proverb goes：
20.?也不例外?be no exception
21.對?產生有利/不利的影響exert positive/ negative effects on…
22.利遠遠大于弊the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.23.導致，引起lead to/ give rise to/ contribute to/ result in
24.復雜的社會現象a complicated social phenomenon
25.責任感/成就感sense of responsibility/ sense of achievement
26.競爭與合作精神sense of competition and cooperation
27.開闊眼界widen one‘s horizon/ broaden one‘s vision
28.學習知識和技能acquire knowledge and skills
29.經濟/心理負擔financial burden / psychological burden
30.考慮到諸多因素take many factors into account/ consideration
31.從另一個角度from another perspective
32.做出共同努力make joint efforts
33.對?有益be beneficial / conducive to…
34.為社會做貢獻make contributions to the society
35.打下堅實的基礎lay a solid foundation for…
36.綜合素質comprehensive quality
37.無可非議blameless / beyond reproach
39.致力于/投身于be committed / devoted to…
40.應當承認Admittedly，41.不可推卸的義務unshakable duty
42.滿足需求satisfy/ meet the needs of…
43.可靠的信息源a reliable source of information
44.寶貴的自然資源valuable natural resources
45.因特網the Internet（一定要由冠詞，字母I大寫）
46.方便快捷convenient and efficient
47.在人類生活的方方面面in all aspects of human life
48.環保（的）environmental protection / environmentally friendly
49.社會進步的體現a symbol of society progress
50.科技的飛速更新the ever-accelerated updating of science and technology
51.對這一問題持有不同態度hold different attitudes towards this issue
52.支持前/后種觀點的人people / those in fovor of the former/ latter opinion
53.有/提供如下理由/證據have/ provide the following reasons/ evidence
54.在一定程度上to some extent/ degree / in some way
55.理論和實踐相結合integrate theory with practice
56.?必然趨勢an irresistible trend of…
57.日益激烈的社會競爭the increasingly fierce social competition
58.眼前利益immediate interest/ short-term interest
59.長遠利益interest in the long run
60.?有其自身的優缺點?has its merits and demerits/ advantages and disadvantages
61.揚長避短Exploit to the full one‘s favorable conditions and avoid unfavorable ones
62.取其精髓，去其糟粕Take the essence and discard the dregs.63.對?有害do harm to / be harmful to
64.交流思想/情感/信息exchange ideas/ emotions/ information
65.跟上?的最新發展keep pace with / keep abreast with the latest development of…
66.采取有效措施來?take effective measures to do sth.67.?的健康發展the healthy development of…
68.有利有弊Every coin has its two sides.No garden without weeds.69.對?觀點因人而異Views on…vary from person to person.70.重視attach great importance to…
71.社會地位social status
72.把時間和精力放在?上focus time and energy on…
73.擴大知識面expand one‘s scope of knowledge
74.身心兩方面both physically and mentally
75.和?直接/間接相關be directly / indirectly related to…
76.提出折中提議set forth a compromise proposal
77.可以取代“think”的詞believe，claim，maintain，argue，insist，hold the opinion/ belief that
78.緩解壓力/減輕負擔relieve stress/ burden
79.優先考慮?give（top）priority to sth.80.與?相比compared with…/ in comparison with
81.相反on the contrary.82.代替replace/ substitute / take the place of
83.經不起推敲cannot bear closer analysis / cannot hold water
84.提供就業機會offer job opportunities
85.社會進步的反映mirror of social progress
86.毫無疑問Undoubtedly，/ There is no doubt that?
87.增進相互了解enhance/ promote mutual understanding
88.充分利用make full use of / take advantage of
89.承受更大的工作壓力suffer from heavier work pressure
90.保障社會的穩定和繁榮guarantee the stability and prosperity of our society
91.更多地強調put more emphasis on…
92.適應社會發展adapt oneself to the development of society
93.實現夢想realize one‘s dream/ make one‘s dream come true
94.主要理由列舉如下The main reasons are listed as follows：
95.首先First，Firstly，In the first place，To begin with
96.其次Second，Secondly，In the second place，besides，in addition，additionally，moreover，furthermore
97.最后Finally，Last but not the least，Lastly，98.總而言之All in all，To sum up，In summary，In a word，99.我們還有很長的路要走We still have a long way to go.100.加大了?的可能性increase the chances of
第三篇：三步六法成就作文王
三步六法成就作文王
744411甘肅省平涼市靈臺縣星火鄉老戶小學 楊德福
提起作文，說他容易的人不多。對于小學生來說，就更是難上加難，平時寫起作文來就像母雞生蛋一樣，怎么也生不下來。但作文非寫不可，它占語文考試成績半壁江山。我經過三十幾年的作文教學實踐和研究，采用三步六法作文教學法，收到了較好的效果。
一、“三步”使學生作文上路
第一步、硬著頭皮寫下去。初學寫作，是件頭疼的事，寫作文只能硬著頭皮寫下去。其實，小學生作文只是簡單的寫作，不是作家的創作，它姓“小”，在新課標中定位為習作。這種習作，只是讓學生把自己在生活中看到的、想到的、做過的事兒記下來。對于小學生的習作，要求不要過高，不要用作家的眼光去要求，應低下頭，俯下身子去看待。小學生作文簡單地說，就是把話寫通順，把事說明白就是一篇好文章，也就是用五官寫作文。
1．用眼睛寫作文。眼睛是心靈的窗口，每天只要你睜大好的眼睛，就會看到許多新鮮的事物，筆下就有寫不完的事兒。如早晨上學路上，看到日出，看到天空飛過的小鳥，看到大自然的花開花落，看到田野里忙碌的人群;在學校里,你目睹校園隆重的升旗儀式，在課堂上聆聽老師娓娓動聽的講課情景；在校園你參加豐富多彩的課外活動；在家里，你整理房間，拖地掃地，刷鍋洗碗，看電視，讀書，上網；在街上，你坐公交車為老人主動讓座，看到人們搶救暈倒的病人，行人為殘疾人募捐的情景，這些事兒用手中的筆記錄下來，就是好作文。2．用耳朵寫作文。在日常生活中，我們會聽到許多新鮮的事兒，只要我們用耳朵細心去傾聽，就不愁作文沒話可寫。如上課聽老師精彩的演講，課外聽同學們講故事，回家聽姥姥講童話神話故事，街上聽到好人好事都可以寫下來。同時，我們每天上學會聽到各種各樣的聲音；如汽車喇叭的滴滴聲，街上嗚里哇啦的叫賣聲，大自然中甲蟲的嗡嗡聲，家里養的小狗的汪汪叫聲，槽頭邊小牛的咩咩聲，湖邊潺潺的流水聲，下雨天噼里啪啦的雨點聲，教室里朗朗的讀書聲，操場里飛揚的叫喊聲。寫作文時，能形象的寫出聽到的聲音，就會使你的作文增色不少。
3、用鼻子寫作文。每天我們的鼻子會聞到各種各樣的味道。早晨起來，晴天會聞到清新甜潤的空氣，霧霾天氣，會聞到沙粒的苦澀味。走進花園，沁人心脾的花香會迎鼻撲來。走進果園，清香甜美的水果讓你吃個夠。在家里，廚房里不時飄出的香噴噴的飯菜，在街上吃火鍋時，麻辣味會迎鼻撲來。生病時，你必須服下難以下咽的苦味藥片。寫作文時，把自己用鼻子聞到的各種各樣的氣味寫下來，作文就會有聲有色。
4、用嘴巴寫作文。語言是心靈的窗口，寫作文時，恰當地描寫人物的語言，能反映人物的精神世界，表現人物的精神品質。如在課堂上，回答老師提出的問題，在課后和同學交流學習經驗，在班會上和同學們發言討論的情景；在家里，父母安排我們干家務活，噓寒問暖的情景；在街上，和同學熟人打招呼的對話，在商場買東西時，和售貨員討價還價的對話；還有我們的嘴巴嘗到的酸甜苦辣，都可以寫上作文。
5、用手腳寫作文。寫作文時，把自己做過的親身經歷的事寫下來，使人感到有身臨其境的感受，倍感親切。如早晨我們在上學路上看日出，聽小鳥唱歌，攙扶小朋友過馬路；到校后，參加升旗儀式，聽老師講課，回答老師提出的問題，參加主題隊會，在校園做游戲，開展讀書讀報活動。在家里，看電視，玩電腦，干家務，和父母聚餐，照顧生病的爺爺奶奶，帶小弟弟玩耍。在田間，幫父母放羊，幫父母收割麥子，看管蘋果園。還有跟父母到公園去玩，看到機靈活潑的猴子，兇猛可怕的老虎，這些都是寫作的上好材料。
第二步、順著小路走下去。
學生學會用多種感官寫作文，雖然懂得作文的門路，但寫起作文來還是一頭霧水。教師不能只出題目要求就完事，這樣學生只能望“題”興嘆，所以教師要幫學生走出作文的困境，為學生指明作文的路線圖，1、擬好題。題目是文章的眼睛，好的題目能調動起學生的寫作興趣。在作文課上，教師為學生命題時，力求新穎一點，如“鄰居胖大嬸”、“媽媽是個好媳婦”、“我家鬧西游”、“家庭大戰”、“我們班的五大王子”等等，這些題目就比較新穎，可以吊起學生的胃口，引起小學生的極大興趣。考試作文，為了避免學生背作文、抄作文的現象，內容常常是話題作文、材料作文，所以更應該訓練學生的命題能力。
2、選好材。材料是文章的血肉，一篇好作文由一個個小小的材料拼湊而成，選擇典型材料能突出文章的中心，引起讀者閱讀的興趣，同讀者產生共鳴。如果選材平淡乏味，別人讀了如同嚼蠟，誰還愿意去讀。所以，教師在平時的作文教學中，教給學生選材的方法，使學生選材時努力做到“人有我無，人有我精”。選材時，第一選材不能選，第二選材不能選，因為別人都在寫，你肯定沒有別人寫的好。第三選材可以寫，因為寫的人少，可以以新取勝。如“我的傻外公”這篇習作選材內容是這樣的：外公平時很吝嗇，每次上街，給我連1元錢的小吃也不買，可汶川地震后，他卻把自己辛苦攢下的200元捐給了災區，你說外公傻不傻？
3、構思好。有了材料，還要進行構思，如怎樣開頭，怎樣結尾，怎樣分段。運用什么寫作方法等。構思通常采用橫向構思法、縱向構思法、發散構思法。俗話說“人貴在直，文貴在曲”，事敘寫人的文章中應多編故事，且故事情節應該一波三折，跌宕起伏，這樣才能吸引讀者。關于波折就有一個故事：古時候，一個秀才為母親祝壽，家里來了許多客人，按照當地的習俗，坐首席的要先作一首詩，所有秀才都啞口無言，這時一位農民打扮的人竟坐在首席，別人想把他轟下來，這時這位老農即興吟了一首詩“這個婆娘不是人，好似仙女下凡塵。兒孫個個都是賊，偷來蟠桃慶壽辰。”其他人都拍手稱快。這個故事說明作文時，要寫曲折一些，方能打動讀者的心靈。
4、分好段。段是文章的骨架，初寫作文的小學生，教師要引導他們，可寫三段，而且這三段應該開頭像鳳頭，中間像豬肚，結尾像豹尾。五六年級學生可以寫八段十段。文章段落的安排可以按事情的發展順序安排，按時間順序安排，按總分總的順序安排，按事情的性質安排，按人物的出沒安排。這樣寫的文章就層次清楚，涇渭分明。寫好中心。中心是文章的靈魂，一篇文章應該有一個中心，向讀者介紹說明什么，歌頌贊揚什么，批評什么，指責什么，都要觀點鮮明，不能有一點含糊。一般是開頭點明中心或在結尾點明中心，有能力的同學，在文章的結尾，可以進行議論，談一談自己的感想，以深化主題，點明中心。
5、寫好字。字是文章的臉面，一手好字就等于作文成功了一半，因為你的作文是給老師同學讀的，你寫的潦草誰還愿意去讀？所以作文時教師一定要指導學生把字寫好，寫規范，這樣你的作文就能拿到較高的印象分。
6、修改好。文章不厭百回改，好作文不是寫出來的，是改出來的。教師在平時的作文課上，要教給學生修改作文的方法，作文起草好后，要多讀多改，改標點、改錯字、改句子、改段落、改中心、改題目。作文起草好后，還可以念給同學聽，可以同座互改，可以全班評議。
第三、張開翅膀飛起來。通過以上的訓練，學生的作文能力就會大大提高，學生就會具有命題能力，選材能力，構思能力，就可以自己去寫作文了。學生的作文再不是拖著走，扶著走，而是可以張開翅膀飛起來。如自己教過的學生朱娜，白慧梅、2006年考入蘭大的我縣理科狀員喬赟，2011年考入人大的我縣理科狀員史靈平等同學的作文都能寫10多頁，字數可達3000多字，寫出了很多優秀的習作。我還指導學生辦起了《苗苗》文學社，指導學生發表作文70篇。如《生命在輪椅上放歌》、《用生命護綠的人》、《媽媽是個好媳婦》等作品。
二、“六法”成就作文王
1、讀書法。閱讀是寫作的航母,讀書可以豐富學生的知識，充實學生的內心世界，提高學生的寫作能力。教師要引導小學生從二年級開始就讀書，二三年級學生可以讀畫冊、小人書，高年級學生可以讀國內外的名著，如《西游記》、《水滸傳》、《三國演義》、《魯賓遜漂流記》等名著，也可以在網上讀書。讀的書多了，積累多了，腦子里的好詞好句多了，寫起作文來就會信手拈來。
2、積累法。積累是構建語文之塔的金磚。讀書時，要學會積累。教師可引導學生養成良好的讀書習慣，不動筆墨不讀書，讀書時可隨身攜帶一個袖珍筆記本，一邊讀書一邊記錄書中的優美句子、段落。長期堅持，就會積累很多寫作的語言材料。作文時，可打開筆記，用上好詞、好句、好的材料，把自己的作文打扮的更加亮麗。
3、觀察法。大自然不是缺少美，而是缺少發現。提起觀察，小學生最大的毛病就是缺乏正確的觀察方法，一說觀察，學生只能走馬觀花，只能看出事物的皮毛之處。這里向大家介紹幾種特殊的觀察方法。一是風扇式360度的觀察法。就是觀察事物時，像風扇一樣，360度旋轉，對事物進行全方位、多角度的觀察，這種觀察方法不僅觀察到事物的整體，也可以觀察到事物的各個微小環節。如寫“我愛我們的校園”一文時，可采用風扇式觀察法，對校園的大門、花園、教室，旗臺、操場等進行全方位觀察，作文就一定會寫得具體生動。二是鼠標點擊法，也叫定點觀察法。觀察事物時，對重點部位要進行細致的觀察，如寫人物外貌時就要采用定點觀察法。如寫媽媽的外貌，彎彎的眉毛、葡萄似的眼睛、櫻桃似的小口、細細的腰肢，走起路來水上漂，街上的回頭率是99%等。寫“我的妹妹愛跳舞”一文時，要重點寫妹妹跳舞的動作，就可以采用鼠標點擊法，對妹妹跳舞的姿勢進行細致的描寫：他一會兒如蜻蜻點水，一會兒像鷂子翻身，一會兒像鯉魚打滾，一會兒像仙女下凡，觀眾無不拍手叫好。三是破壞性觀察法。對于那些隱藏的事物，不破壞看不出的事物，可采用破壞性觀察法，如蔥、蘿卜可以拔出來看一看，水果可以咬一口嘗一嘗，食堂的飯菜可以吃一口才能品出它的味道。
4、練習法。作文能力是練出來的。教師平時課堂教學，應注重練筆活動，提倡每課一練。學校，班級舉行的體育比賽，歌詠比賽，演講比賽，班隊活動，讓學生把活動寫下來。通過大量的練習，學生從三年級開始，每學期大約寫50篇作文，四年下來，就練習400多篇作文，這樣的練習，小學生作文一定就會走上軌道。
修改法。文章不厭百回改，好文章是改出來的，不 是寫出來的。學生作文起草后，教師要引導學生自己去修改，改標點、改錯別字、改不通的句子、改結構、改中心、改題目。可采用朗讀修改法、同桌修改法、全班交流法、老師評改法，努力使小學生的習作語句順暢，文理通達。
5、鼓勵法。隨著新一輪課改的深入，傳統的評價方法已不適應學生作文能力的提高，而且扼殺了學生的靈性，泯滅了學生創新思維的火花。試想，學生苦思冥想寫出來的作文得到老師的評價是：“書寫不認真，語句不通順，層次不清楚，中心不明確”，這樣的評價如五雷轟頂，猶如囚犯被判了死刑一樣，學生還有興趣寫作文嗎？根據新課標倡導的教學理念，我們應該徹底轉變教學觀念，采用科學的、激勵性的評價方式，重鼓勵、輕指責。在作文評價方面采用鼓勵性評價方法，作文可設佳作獎、優秀獎、一等獎、二等獎、三等獎、進步獎，全班學生都設獎，讓每一位學生都能獲得成功的喜悅。如我在六年級教過的一名學生，第一次寫作文只寫了50多字，我也拿起筆為他評了進步獎，發作文時我還當面表揚他，后來這位同學作文也能寫到500字了。對學生的作文我還提出不同的字數要求，如三年級寫200字，四年級寫300字，五年級寫400字，六年級寫500字，如二年級學生能寫200字，就給100分，寫300字就給150分，寫400字就給200分。為了鼓勵學生多讀書，多積累，作文語言要生動，我還采用好詞、好句、書寫好加10分的方法，激發學生的寫作興趣。這樣的評價方法，學生作文的興趣非常高，他們作文時總想千方百計把字寫好、把句子寫優美，還要多修改，力爭得高分。
總之，在作文教學中，采用“三步”“六法”作文教學法，極大地調動了小學生的寫作興趣，有效地提高了他們的作文能力。
S
1、擬好題。題目是文章的眼睛，好的題目能調動起學生的寫作興趣。在作文課上，教師為學生命題時，力求新穎一點，如“鄰居胖大嬸”、“媽媽是個好媳婦”、“我家鬧西游”、“家庭大戰”、“我們班的五大王子”等等，這些題目就比較新穎，可以吊起學生的胃口，引起小學生的極大興趣。考試作文，為了避免學生背作文、抄作文的現象，內容常常是話題作文、材料作文，所以更應該訓練學生的命題能力。
2、選好材。材料是文章的血肉，一篇好作文由一個個小小的材料拼湊而成，選擇典型材料能突出文章的中心，引起讀者閱讀的興趣，同讀者產生共鳴。如果選材平淡乏味，別人讀了如同嚼蠟，誰還愿意去讀。所以，教師在平時的作文教學中，教給學生選材的方法，使學生選材時努力做到“人有我無，人有我精”。選材時，第一選材不能選，第二選材不能選，因為別人都在寫，你肯定沒有別人寫的好。第三選材可以寫，因為寫的人少，可以以新取勝。如“我的傻外公”這篇習作選材內容是這樣的：外公平時很吝嗇，每次上街，給我連1元錢的小吃也不買，可汶川地震后，他卻把自己辛苦攢下的200元捐給了災區，你說外公傻不傻？
3、構思好。有了材料，還要進行構思，如怎樣開頭，怎樣結尾，怎樣分段。運用什么寫作方法等。構思通常采用橫向構思法、縱向構思法、發散構思法。俗話說“人貴在直，文貴在曲”，事敘寫人的文章中應多編故事，且故事情節應該一波三折，跌宕起伏，這樣才能吸引讀者。關于波折就有一個故事：古時候，一個秀才為母親祝壽，家里來了許多客人，按照當地的習俗，坐首席的要先作一首詩，所有秀才都啞口無言，這時一位農民打扮的人竟坐在首席，別人想把他轟下來，這時這位老農即興吟了一首詩“這個婆娘不是人，好似仙女下凡塵。兒孫個個都是賊，偷來蟠桃慶壽辰。”其他人都拍手稱快。這個故事說明作文時，要寫曲折一些，方能打動讀者的心靈。
4、分好段。段是文章的骨架，初寫作文的小學生，教師要引導他們，可寫三段，而且這三段應該開頭像鳳頭，中間像豬肚，結尾像豹尾。五六年級學生可以寫八段十段。文章段落的安排可以按事情的發展順序安排，按時間順序安排，按總分總的順序安排，按事情的性質安排，按人物的出沒安排。這樣寫的文章就層次清楚，涇渭分明。寫好中心。中心是文章的靈魂，一篇文章應該有一個中心，向讀者介紹說明什么，歌頌贊揚什么，批評什么，指責什么，都要觀點鮮明，不能有一點含糊。一般是開頭點明中心或在結尾點明中心，有能力的同學，在文章的結尾，可以進行議論，談一談自己的感想，以深化主題，點明中心。
5、寫好字。字是文章的臉面，一手好字就等于作文成功了一半，因為你的作文是給老師同學讀的，你寫的潦草誰還愿意去讀？所以作文時教師一定要指導學生把字寫好，寫規范，這樣你的作文就能拿到較高的印象分。
6、修改好。文章不厭百回改，好作文不是寫出來的，是改出來的。教師在平時的作文課上，要教給學生修改作文的方法，作文起草好后，要多讀多改，改標點、改錯字、改句子、改段落、改中心、改題目。作文起草好后，還可以念給同學聽，可以同座互改，可以全班評議。
`通訊地址：甘肅省靈臺縣星火鄉老戶小學 作者：楊德福 電話*** 郵箱236748269@qq126，用”六法”寫出最牛的作文 744411甘肅省靈臺縣星火鄉老戶小學 楊德福
1、讀書法。閱讀是寫作的航母,讀書可以豐富學生的知識，充實學生的內心世界，提高學生的寫作能力。教師要引導小學生從二年級開始就讀書，二三年級學生可以讀畫冊、小人書，高年級學生可以讀國內外的名著，如《西游記》、《水滸傳》、《三國演義》、《魯賓遜漂流記》等名著，也可以在網上讀書。讀的書多了，積累多了，腦子里的好詞好句多了，寫起作文來就會信手拈來。
2、積累法。積累是構建語文之塔的金磚。讀書時，要學會積累。教師可引導學生養成良好的讀書習慣，不動筆墨不讀書，讀書時可隨身攜帶一個袖珍筆記本，一邊讀書一邊記錄書中的優美句子、段落。長期堅持，就會積累很多寫作的語言材料。作文時，可打開筆記，用上好詞、好句、好的材料，把自己的作文打扮的更加亮麗。
3、觀察法。大自然不是缺少美，而是缺少發現。提起觀察，小學生最大的毛病就是缺乏正確的觀察方法，一說觀察，學生只能走馬觀花，只能看出事物的皮毛之處。這里向大家介紹幾種特殊的觀察方法。一是風扇式360度的觀察法。就是觀察事物時，像風扇一樣，360度旋轉，對事物進行全方位、多角度的觀察，這種觀察方法不僅觀察到事物的整體，也可以觀察到事物的各個微小環節。如寫“我愛我們的校園”一文時，可采用風扇式觀察法，對校園的大門、花園、教室，旗臺、操場等進行全方位觀察，作文就一定會寫得具體生動。二是鼠標點擊法，也叫定點觀察法。觀察事物時，對重點部位要進行細致的觀察，如寫人物外貌時就要采用定點觀察法。如寫媽媽的外貌，彎彎的眉毛、葡萄似的眼睛、櫻桃似的小口、細細的腰肢，走起路來水上漂，街上的回頭率是99%等。寫“我的妹妹愛跳舞”一文時，要重點寫妹妹跳舞的動作，就可以采用鼠標點擊法，對妹妹跳舞的姿勢進行細致的描寫：他一會兒如蜻蜻點水，一會兒像鷂子翻身，一會兒像鯉魚打滾，一會兒像仙女下凡，觀眾無不拍手叫好。三是破壞性觀察法。對于那些隱藏的事物，不破壞看不出的事物，可采用破壞性觀察法，如蔥、蘿卜可以拔出來看一看，水果可以咬一口嘗一嘗，食堂的飯菜可以吃一口才能品出它的味道。
4、練習法。作文能力是練出來的。教師平時課堂教學，應注重練筆活動，提倡每課一練。學校，班級舉行的體育比賽，歌詠比賽，演講比賽，班隊活動，讓學生把活動寫下來。通過大量的練習，學生從三年級開始，每學期大約寫50篇作文，四年下來，就練習400多篇作文，這樣的練習，小學生作文一定就會走上軌道。
修改法。文章不厭百回改，好文章是改出來的，不 是寫出來的。學生作文起草后，教師要引導學生自己去修改，改標點、改錯別字、改不通的句子、改結構、改中心、改題目。可采用朗讀修改法、同桌修改法、全班交流法、老師評改法，努力使小學生的習作語句順暢，文理通達。
5、鼓勵法。隨著新一輪課改的深入，傳統的評價方法已不適應學生作文能力的提高，而且扼殺了學生的靈性，泯滅了學生創新思維的火花。試想，學生苦思冥想寫出來的作文得到老師的評價是：“書寫不認真，語句不通順，層次不清楚，中心不明確”，這樣的評價如五雷轟頂，猶如囚犯被判了死刑一樣，學生還有興趣寫作文嗎？根據新課標倡導的教學理念，我們應該徹底轉變教學觀念，采用科學的、激勵性的評價方式，重鼓勵、輕指責。在作文評價方面采用鼓勵性評價方法，作文可設佳作獎、優秀獎、一等獎、二等獎、三等獎、進步獎，全班學生都設獎，讓每一位學生都能獲得成功的喜悅。如我在六年級教過的一名學生，第一次寫作文只寫了50多字，我也拿起筆為他評了進步獎，發作文時我還當面表揚他，后來這位同學作文也能寫到500字了。對學生的作文我還提出不同的字數要求，如三年級寫200字，四年級寫300字，五年級寫400字，六年級寫500字，如二年級學生能寫200字，就給100分，寫300字就給150分，寫400字就給200分。為了鼓勵學生多讀書，多積累，作文語言要生動，我還采用好詞、好句、書寫好加10分的方法，激發學生的寫作興趣。這樣的評價方法，學生作文的興趣非常高，他們作文時總想千方百計把字寫好、把句子寫優美，還要多修改，力爭得高分。
總之，在作文教學中，采用“三步”“六法”作文教學法，極大地調動了小學生的寫作興趣，有效地提高了他們的作文能力。
第四篇：寒假作文王心嵐
王心嵐
寒假作文
指導教師:陳瑞清 晉江市安海養正中心小學六年級8班
關心
2012-1-14 關心如一杯白開水，雖然很小，很淡，但是卻溫暖了我那幼小的心靈；關心如一縷陽光，照亮了我的心房。
小時候，長輩對我是百般呵護，十分關心我。生病了，悉心照顧我，什么事情都幫我準備好。小時候每個孩子都是家中的小皇帝、小公主，我也不例外。
漸漸長大了，園丁又辛勤地培育，照顧我們這些祖國的花朵。在我的心房中記錄著別人關心我的事，至今那一件事情還令我難忘。
那是一天下午放學后，老師走過來對我說：
“如今，你的媽媽生病了，又臨近考試，這段時間你就先住在我家吧。” 我聽后點了點頭，便和老師一同回家了。老師每天都要上課，回來后又忙著給我做飯，接著又給我輔導功課，讓我睡著之后，才去工作。
有好幾個夜晚，我起來上廁所，路過老師的房間，空間里面還亮著光。好奇心驅使我悄悄打開一小縫，我透過縫隙看見老師還在燈光下辛勤工作，批改著我們的作業。
我輕輕地關上門，心里暗暗發誓：老師實在是太辛苦了，這么晚了還要幫我們批改作業。我一定要考出好成績！“皇天不負有心人”，期末考試，我不負眾望取得了優異的成績，老師開心地笑了。這時，媽媽的病也好了，看見我的成績更是笑得合不攏嘴了。
雖然，這件事情已經過去了許久，都是那次在老師家生活的日子，那段美好的回憶卻永遠留在了我的腦海中，令我記憶猶新，至今無法忘卻。
第五篇：研究生英語期末口語考試話題（范文）
Topics for Oral Test 1.你知道轉基因食物嗎？你認為這對健康有害嗎？What do you know
GM food? Do you think it is harmful to health?
D: Hey ,everybody，a few days ago，I read a paper that China have done several researchs on genetically modified foods and have eaten them.As far as I am concerned，The United States is also favor of genetically modified foods , but Europe is against them firmly.what do you think of it?
L: Well, I think it's a great idea to have genetically modified foods.D: Really？Why?
L: Well, genetically modified plants may need fewer pesticides than normal plants.For example, there is a type of corn that is bad for insects——when the insects eat the corn plant, they die.However, the corn doesn’t hurt people.This type of corn is beneficial because famers use fewer pesticides to grow the corn, and so there is less pollution in the environment.Also the corn is less expensive because the farmers don’t have to spend a lot of money on pesticides.So, by using fewer pesticides the corn is cheaper and the environment is cleaner.H: Yes, and there are two another benefits of genetically modified food.One is that they may grow better than normal plants.The other one is that many genetically modified plants stay fresh longer after they are harvested.What’s more, because of its high yield, it increases the possibility of solving the global hunger issues.But do you think the GM foods are all safe?
Y: Well, there is no answer.No effects on human health have been shown as a result of the consumption of such foods by the general population in the countries where they have been approved.So far, there is little evidence that GM foods are harmful to health.However，there are some countries holding the opposite views.D: I firmly agree with that.Everything has two sides, Some European countries such as Austria, their consumer groups oppose the sale of importing genetically modified food, they believe that genetically modified foods affect human health.In Europe, the government's attitude is, genetically modified food are insecurity.Some social groups and organizations called for scientists to confirm the safety of genetically modified foods.Y: yeah, what you said are reasonable.In my opinions, I prefer to eat the natural and common food rather than the GM food.The GM food is mixed some additive genes into a new one by the transgenic technology so that the GM food has unknown effects to human beings if they eat it, such as: people will be allergic to the GM food because it have added some parts of gene which can make people allergic.H: Objectively speaking, we can't simply label GM foods with good or bad labels.So , What we should do is to learn to view things with dialectical thought.That is to say, we should use the objective critical and inclusive vision to treat GM foods.With the development of technology, I firmly believe that someday the scientist will tell us whether genetically modified food is angle or a devil.2.有時候，當你從不同的角度觀察同一件事物的時候，也許會變得不同。你也這樣認為么？Sometimes, the same thing may seem to be different when it is observed from different perspectives? Do you think so? Share your experiences with your partners.What’s your view about this question?
A：Sometimes, the same thing may seem to be different when it is observed from different perspectives.Do you think so?
B：Yes，I totally agree with this statement.Have you ever heard a classical story which reflecting two different attitudes toward the same thing? When looking at a glass with some water in it, people may respond differently.Some may focus on the negative aspect and describe the glass as half empty;others may emphasize the positive aspect of it and regard it as half full.In other words, people may hold completely different ideas about the same thing.C：I also agree with this view.The two different answers to this question represent two different attitudes towards life--optimistic attitude and pessimistic attitude.Chinese old saying indicates, “A blessing in disguise（塞翁失馬焉知非福）”,it means :For a time, though it was lost, it would be good for it.D：Yeah，the words remind me of an inspirational story.The great inventor Edison Thomas have studied more than 8000 not suitable materials of filament, people asked him: “you have failed the 8000 times, what is the use for you to continue this research?” Thomas Edison said that I have not failed.On the contrary, I found more than 8000 not suitable material.A：I also appreciate Edison's optimistic attitude towards life.From another perspective, the thing is different.In life, many people are easy to feel frustrated by meeting a bit of setback.As far as I am concerned, we need to change our perspectives and learn to keep positive and optimistic like Edison when facing difficulties so that we can have more power to pursue our dreams.D：Yeah.Edison's story has been encouraging me to be optimistic.Before reading this story, I always be depressed when there were a lot of mistakes in the homework.But, now I will fell very lucky in this case, because these problems can be found in time before exam.C：Oh , great!So, learn to change a point of view, life is full of hope and happiness.As we all known, life doesn’t always run smoothly, but you have got to think positive.And there is no denying that most optimists have a high happiness index，which can hardly be experienced by pessimists.B：Ok.Speaking of which, I have a word to share with you.Turn around, is another starting point, change an angle, you will find a different scenery!(轉身，是另一個起點，換一個角度，你會發現不一樣的風景！)
3.請針對我們應該如何面對流行病給出幾條建議：
Please give some advice about what we should do when faced with an epidemic.A:As[武漢天氣不穩定，最近很多人感冒了，是吧？] we all known, the weather in Wuhan is sometimes cold and sometimes hot, so , recently ,many people catch a cold, is it?
B: Yeah, of course.Just like me.I've just recovered from a bad cold, I felt dizzy, and cough day and night。
C:I know that you had a bad time, there is no doubt that the flu is a common epidemic in our daily life.However, there are many other epidemics which is hard to be cured.Can you show me an example?[我知道你渡過了一段難過的時間，毫無疑問流感是我們日常生活中的一種常見流行病。很容易治療，吃藥即可。但是還有很多流行病難以治療，你們能列舉幾個例子嗎？]
D:One example just appears in my mind, that is SARS.I still remember it broke out in 2002, at that time, I was just in primary school.It was like a strong tornado [t?:?ne?d??] that swept the whole country and many people were killed by it.A: Yes, I still remember that our life was disturbed and we had to stay at home during those days.We tried our best to fight against the SARS and help each other.Fortunately, we took control of it by the end.B:Ye]ah, another example occurs to me, AIDS.It is a vital [?va?tl] epidemic, and it caused by a virus(?va?r?s)called HIV.What’s more, it was first reported in 1980 in the US, the most common manifestation(癥狀)of AIDS include fever, vomiting ['v?m?t??], headache and so on.The HIV is transmitted by 3 main routes, they are sexual, maternal [m??t?:nl] and blood-borne.C:Yeah,in addition, I know that AIDS will not infect through public facilities, and will not spread through shaking hands and hugging.In a word, numerous epidemics break out, and they have caused the most disastrous impacts on us.D:Yeah,you are right.As the saying goes, prevention is better than cure.Now that there are so many epidemics in our daily life, what should we do when faced with an epidemic, can you give us some advice?
A:Oh,I know something about that.For example, people could prevent catching a cold if they dress warmly and have a good rest when the winter comes.But many people get sick so that they have to spend much time and money in seeing a doctor.B: What’s more, I think we need to clean our dormitory every day.What’s more, we should keep our laboratory [l??b?r?t?ri] clean and tidy and open the windows every morning.C:Yes,I totally agree with you.In order to protect ourselves from the epidemics, it’s important for us to eat more vegetables, fruit instead of junk food and do more exercises.We will deserve for a better life.4.在你看來，精英教育培養出來的是什么樣的人？今天的社會需要什么樣的人？ In your opinion, what kind of people should an elite education produce? What kind of people are really needed in today’s society?
A: Hi, good morning!B/C/D: Good morning!A: Do you know what day is it 5 days later? B: Your birthday? A: No
C: Your boyfriend’s birthday? A: No D: I know, it is college entrance examination, am I right? A：Yes, you are right!It is college entrance examination, which we all have experienced about 5 years ago.In another words, we have received 5 years of higher education.Should higher education be elite education or mass education?
B: Wait, wait… what is elite education? I have ever heard about these vocabularies, but don’t know the real meaning of it.C: Let me tell you!An elite education is that the enrollment rate of the right age is below the 15%.It means only a few people can have the chance to be educated.In other words, the elite education is a kind of “individualized” education which emphasizes the development of individual talents.D: Mass education is opened to everyone regardless of your qualifications.In other words, mass education tends to be “universal and extensive”, which emphasizes the utility of education to the whole society.B: oh, I see.Elite education is offered for only a few people, so the education we have taken in the past 5 years is the elite education, am I right? A: Yeah, maybe you are right to some degree.It depends on how you understand the goal of elite education.In your opinion, what kind of people should an elite education produce?
D: In my opinion, elite education is not aristocratic education(貴族教育)though it offers to a few students.Elite education should produce the elites and leaders of this society.And these elites could help with the development of this society.C: However, elite education may also produce people overestimate themselves and not able to communicate with people who do not take elite education, although they may be proficient in several foreign languages.B: Yeah, you are right.Do you think these elites cultivated by elite education are the people our society really need?
A: On one hand, as we all know, Roman is not built in one day, so does our society.The development and prosperity of our society cannot be separated from the social elite, as well as the ordinary people.On the other hand, actually, China is a developing country with large population and scarce resources.We do not have enough conditions to provide elite education.D: Yeah, as a result, for the current stage, the purpose of Chinese higher education is mainly produce practical and professional talents.At the same time, general education also has certain requirements, in order to meet the requirements of the “specialized personnel” in the outline.C: Yes, you are right.I hope our country will combine the advantages of elite education and mass education according to our present situation.In that way, we may harvest all kinds of talents our society needs.5.你是否有經常或偶爾的接近自然來遠離城市噪音？你希望生活在城市還是在鄉村，你更喜歡什么樣的生活？為什么？Do you regularly or occasionally get close to nature to escape the city noise? What kind of life do you prefer to live, the life in city or in the countryside? Why?
Y：What a wonderful day!It’s a good time to go out for a walk.How is your grandfather after surgery ,紫薇?
H: Well, he is slowly recovering after moving to the countryside to live.Y: That sounds comforting.How about living in the countryside ?
H: It’s a good choice!The countryside is so peaceful and beautiful!I just come back from countryside with my parents.I spent my childhood in country when I was a baby.That’s a great memory.D: I partly agree with you, because the countryside is not as convenient as the city.For example, the city offers more opportunities and entertainment.L: I prefer country life to city life.Just like what I have seen on TV, there are too many stunning scenes which can not be seen in cities.For example , in Summer nights, thousands of stars are glimmering in the dark , this beautiful scenery attracted me so much.When I have lived in city for a long time, which makes me find some social ills of city life.D: I know what you mean.But I’m hardly agree with that.The city developed more quickly than the country.Flourishing businesses and advanced equipment are changed every day, which is so exciting.H: I agree with 劉高輝.Because the country life gives us opportunity to close to nature.One can see trees, grass and listen to the birds whenever.It’s a good to health.What’s more ,there is less noise , pollution，pressure and crime.It provides us more fresh air and quite.D: Yes, I see.But country life may not be that perfect.People usually lack culture activities.They are relatively ill informed.Things go fairly slowly there.And people miss some golden opportunities of making a fortune.L: The disadvantages of country did existed.I plan to live in the country,after i retired.Maybe it is a better choice.H: Oh, it just what I think!And Country people have chance to experience the lifestyle of city when they come to cities.D: what is your ideal life like? My ideal life is that i have a right to choose life.so I need to pay more efforts to learn now.How about you ,楊榕瑕?
Y: In my opinion ,the answer is not certain.Whatever life we lead,we can never feel perfectly satisfied, for conveniences and inconveniences always coexist.People wish that they could enjoy the pleasure of both lives.And you,劉高輝?
L: I get ready to work hard when I’m young.For example, I eager to experience more fresh things to broaden the field of vision and social experience before 40 years old.Y: Sounds good!Good luck!
6.什么是快樂？你認為我們應該怎樣獲得快樂？What is happiness? In what ways can we achieve happiness? A：Hi, good morning!Did you eat breakfast this morning? B: yeah, I have eaten steamed stuffed buns(包子)and soybean milk（豆漿）['s?ibi:n;milk] in Gui Xiang Yuan, it’s very delicious.C：Me too.I have eaten hot-dry noodles this morning and feel very full and satisfied.I also feel so happy.D: Wow!You may achieve happiness every time to time, since you are so easy to be satisfied.C: Yeah.There is a saying that “contentment brings happiness”, I do believe it.Indeed, it brings me a sense of happiness.(smile^_^)
B: I’m agree with you, happy people feel satisfied with themselves, and they’re happy with what they have.They may be a little overweight, or may not have the best job, or may not live in a big, fancy house, but they are satisfied with what they have.This feeling of happiness comes from the inside, not from something outside.A: You mean, happy people feel satisfied with themselves, unhappy people are often not satisfied with what they have? Then, I have a question “Do you think ‘阿Q’ , the chapter in Lu Xun’s work--story of Ah Q be a happy person? He is satisfied with what he has, but I think he is poor more than happy.B: 阿Q is a special character in a special background.He lives in his own world and use “spirit victory(精神勝利法)” to get the feeling of satisfied.He doesn’t get the real happiness because he achieves satisfactions from fantasies(幻想), instead of his own effort.D：I see.The real happiness comes from contentment, and real contentment comes from your own effort.In another words, if you have tried your best but still don't get what you want, then you may stop and enjoy what you already have.In this way, you can easily achieve happiness.B: Bingo.This is what I mean.C: I agree with you, too.But I also find that happy people have one in common.That is, they are all optimistic—they look at the positive side of life, not the negative.A：Yeah, when happy people have problems, they assume that things will approve.They don’t worry and think that all bad things can happen, it’s quite normal.So they can take it easy.However, unhappy people are the opposite.When they have a problem, they think about how bad everything is and assume that it’ll get worse.So they make themselves even more unhappy.D: I totally agree with you, and I think another thing can bring us happiness—helping others.It is proved effective every time since I have tried.Of course, I help other people because I can and I want help them, as well as they are really in need, not for the aims of getting happiness.But from this process, I really achieve a kind of amazing and wonderful feeling—it may be called “happiness”.C: You are great.Maybe I should learn from you.Just as the old saying says “Present rose to others with remaining fragrance at hand.” When you are helping others in need, you are helping yourself, so that you can achieve happiness.B: I really hope people with kind-heart and optimistic will achieve happiness forever.7.你相信你是美麗的（英俊）嗎？你有沒有想過整容？整容手術的優點和缺點是什么？Do you believe you are beautiful(handsome)? Have you ever thought about cosmetic surgery [k?z?metik ?s?:d??ri]整容手術? What are pros and cons of cosmetic surgery?
H：夢鴿, what do you think of plastic surgery? like lip implants, breast implants?
D:Yeah , absolutely.I would like now, but four years ago, maybe I don’t agree.H: Interesting!I think the biggest advantage of cosmetic surgery is its ability to turn an ordinary face to a very lovely one.It can make up for your regret of your body, your face or any other part of your body.Y:Well, I agree with that.You may become confident in your daily life, which will make you energetic when you work, so you may make more achievement in your career.Just like the recent phenomenon: more and more people, especially some young girls choose to take plastic surgeries.They argued that this kind of surgery can improve one’s opportunity to secure a good job.D:Do you agree with me?
Y:Yeah, especially when women get older, they will have plastic surgery due to effect of media and society.Maybe they would like to have plastic surgery here or there.L: I partly agree with you.But I don’t have to give up any parts if I were a women.Because many factors influence of the standard of beauty.The believe beauty is more important than external beauty when people get older.Y:AHA.Don’t you want to place it in a more appropriate location , Imagining you get older?
L: I just like enjoy the natural.And there are still a huge danger.Many tragic（悲劇）incidents have been reported recent years that one get hurt or blind or even dead when she adopts a cosmetic surgery.A person only has one chance of life.Nothing is important than life in the world.D: But I think many men may like it, people prefer to pursuit good things, after all.L: Maybe ,of course they do.Nowadays cosmetic surgery is also for men.What about you 胡紫薇 ,do you believe you are beautiful? What will you do if you get a chance to do a cosmetic surgery one day?
H: HAHAHA.....,I like my body.Just like the saying goes :beauty is only skin-deep(外在美不過是表面現象).So I will not to do a cosmetic surgery now.And in my opinion, we should consider the advantages and disadvantages of cosmetic surgery.Now we can also find that there are too many famous people who are not memorized by their appearance, but their personality and special habits.8.你認為“事實勝于雄辯”這句話是什么？請用例子來說明它。What do you think of the saying “Actions speak louder than words.”? Please use examples to illustrate it.1、百說不如一做。理想總是豐滿的，不能空有理想，要付出實際行動。一種被付諸實踐了的行動要比一百種想法都要可靠。舉例：、與我們相近的例子是我們總是在幻想自己能干這個干那個，可是真正到了要付諸實踐的時候就很輕易被打倒，不作為。
A: Good morning, everyone.B/C/D: Good morning!
A:Last night I have read a saying “Actions speak louder than words”, but I don’t know what does it really mean, does it means nonverbal communication is more important than spoken language or something else? Can you help me? I feel so confused.B: Oh, don’t worry.It is very normal, not be confused.Because one word may have different meanings under different context, let alone a saying.May be your understanding is right to some degree.C: Yes, maybe you are right, isn’t it? But in my opinion, “Actions speak louder than words” means what you do is more important than what you say.And if you say you are going to do something, then you need to do it.[引入第一種觀點：實際行動比你說的話要重要的多。“百說不如一做。”]
D: Yeah, I agree very strongly with you!“Actions” means you should do something instead of staying here and do nothing.But in our daily life, too many people, even include me, “words speak louder than actions”.Moreover, plans of action were not always properly implemented.[提出現實卻是相反的，很多人都是“說的比做得多”。計劃也總是不能完全被實施。]
B：Me too!I had planned to read 3 papers this week and complete a course paper.However, I didn’t do as I had planned, and now I feel a lot of pressure(>_<).Moreover, most people I know who waited to travel the world never did.（無奈）[舉例論證觀點一]
A: I've had many similar experiences like you, but I think we should do more than only speak.In other words, talks little but does more.[觀點一總結：少說話，多做事！]Is there any other understanding of this saying?
C：Of course!Another meaning of this saying is that no matter how you are skilled in debate, you can hardly defeat the fact.In this situation, actions refer to the civisms or other debates against you.[觀點二：事實勝于雄辯！]In fact, words are the shallowest portion of all the argument.[事實上，在一切雄辯中，語言往往是最淺薄的部分。] Have you ever heard the story of Yu Gong who removed the mountains?
D: Yes, I know.It describes an old man with very strong perseverance, who finally moved away the mountain in front of the door through he and his family’s continuous efforts.It tells us that unless you give up, you will be succeed sooner or later.[愚公移山的例子] B: You are right.But on the other hand, it also verifies that “facts speak louder than words.” Even though many people have disapproved with him, even questioned him.But he, Foolish Old Man, doesn’t defeat by his opponents, who are skilled in debate.Facts proved that he is right and he is not the foolish man.He is the man who has great wisdom.A: I see.Thank you very much.I don’t feel confused now.And I think I have learnt the real meaning of this saying “actions speak louder than words”.Thank you!(The End[提問者對幾個幫助他的回答者表示感謝！])
9.你認為在現代社會中，失眠是一個嚴重的問題嗎？失眠的原因是什么？對失眠患者的建議。
Do you think insomnia [?n?s?mni?]失眠 is a serious problem in the modern society? What are the causes for insomnia? Think of advice for people with insomnia.A:JOHN B:ELLA C:MARY D:CRIS C: how is it going, ELLA? B: I’m fine, thank you!And you, you looked so tired? C: Well, I just can’t fall sleep at all lately.I didn't close my eyes until early this morning.A: Anything bother you, Study or the other things? D: The Dragon Boat Festival holiday is coming.You were too excited to sleep, weren’t you? B: AHA.I wasn't sure if I had insomnia.I will wake up in the middle of the night, and always do all kinds of dreams.Feeling the whole body tired especially in the morning.A: It sounds so bad.How long has it been like this? C: From two weeks ago.D: You should see a doctor, like a psychological doctor.C: Thank you, JOHN.There are something bothered me and I thought some bad things about my study and my future life? Maybe I need to relax myself, such as do some exercises before go to bed.A: Do you think that insomnia is a serious problem in the modern society? More and more people have been suffering from insomnia, especially for office workers.B: I agree with that.Insomnia refers to lack of sleep or poor quality of sleep, which causes fatigue or discomfort, such as inattention, weakness, poor alertness, low spirit, headache and tension.There are also insomnia patients around us, they are so difficult to sleep at night, that it effected their daily life.D: Yes, Patients with insomnia will be a heavy black eye during the day, and they seem less energetic and absent-minded.C: It’s so bad, just like what I suffered now, you know.I’m eager to know the reason for that.B: I just know little about this question.Physiological factors such as not a bad sleep routine.Most people like drink tea, coffee or alcohol before sleep, which is harmful to body.What’s more, the sudden change of sleep environment, noise, and high temperature, strong light also lead to insomnia.What do you think of that, CRIS?
D: Well, Psychological factor is another important aspect besides physiological factors.Office workers face the pressure of work and life.Excessive anxiety and depression lead to insomnia.C: We can try our best to avoid insomnia in the daily life, although it is caused by many actors.A: I totally agree with you.Keeping your feet worm and making the bed comfortable before sleeping are the things we can do.B: What’s more, Exercising regularly and don’t open the window while sleeping.D: We would have a good sleep habit if those good habits were developed.A,B,C: That’s right!
10.什么是“善意的謊言”？你有沒有說過善意的謊言？你認為講一個善意的謊言是合乎道德的嗎？是，為什么；不是，又為什么？
What is “a white lie”善意的謊言? Have you ever told a white lie? Do you think telling a white lie is ethical? Why or why not?
A：Do you know what is “a white lie”?
B：Yes.On certain occasions, out of necessity, we simply cannot tell the truth but have to lie with good rather than bad intentions.This kind of lie is called a white lie.Here, I can give you an example.I told my friend Sally a white lie when she asked me how I liked her new party dress.I didn't like the color or the design but when I saw how happy she was with it, I told her it looked great.To “lie with good intentions” is very common and almost all of us have done it.Have you ever told a white lie?
A：Yes.In some cases the truth is going to hurt or trouble someone but white lies can give others comfort and encouragement.For example, I told my parents a white lie when I was sick, Even though I was still not feeling well, I smiled and told them I was much better.Just because I didn’t want them to be worried.D：Oh, how sensible you are!Lies have been recognized as a synonym for cheating and hypocrisy and lies are often held in contempt.However, sometimes we need lies in real life, because a white lie can give one comfort and encouragement.If a seriously ill patient can refresh himself to fight against the illness after hearing your white lie, don’t you think your lie is meaningful?
C：It seems that in some cases white lies are very meaningful.But from the perspective of ethics, I still don't support it.Do you think telling a white lie is ethical?
B：Yes, of course.In fact, its existence does not harm the interests of the victims and its motive is kind.To be honest is to make our society more harmonious, to a better development of the society.In this way, white lies accord with the purpose Of honesty.What do you think of it?
C：Oh, I see.But I can’t agree with you.I insist that white lies are lies after all.It’s dishonest to tell even white lies.In my opinion, everyone has the right to know the truth, you have no right to make choices instead of others.Indeed, in some cases, white lies can give you a cure, but who can guarantee that when you know the truth, you will not regret not knowing it earlier.So how about you?
D：Graham(本杰明·格雷厄姆)said that” in human relationships, kindness and lies are worth a thousand truths”.I think he means that in most time telling a white lie is better than tell the truth.So I don’t agree with your presentation.A: Well.Sometimes we need white lies to keep peace.And sometimes we also tell white lies to protect someone.If a girl tries her best to lose weight, but she is still very fat, it’s better for you to say you are very lovely or you really get thinner rather than tell her the truth, “you have put on weight again.” So I hold on to my position.
點擊咨詢 