第一篇：詢問建議書信書面表達

書面表達：

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Since you are very interested in China’s culture, you should, I think, take up courage and devote more time and energy to learning Chinese.Here I’d like to give you some suggestions.First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow classmates.Then, watching TV and reading books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible will also help.Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.You can also make more Chinese friends.They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.OK, try and write to me in Chinese next time.Best wishes!

第二篇：高中英語書面表達--書信作文

高中英語滿分書信作文模板——投訴信1 Dear ______, ①I am ______（自我介紹）.②I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about.③The reason for my dissatisfaction is ______（總體介紹）.④In the first place, ______（抱怨的第一個方面）.⑤In addition, ______（抱怨的第二個方面）.⑥Under these circumstances, I find it ______（感覺）to______（抱怨的方面給你帶來的后果）.⑦I appreciate it very much if you could ______（提出建議和請求）, preferably ______（進一步的要求）, and I would like to have this matter settled by ______（設定解決事情最后期限）.⑧Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.高中英語滿分書信作文模板——建議信

Dear ______, ①You have asked me for my advice with regard to ______ , and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.②In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ______（建議的內(nèi)容）.③I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.Yours sincerely, 高中英語滿分書信作文模板——請求信 Dear ______ , ①I am writing to formally request to ______（請求的內(nèi)容）.②The reason for ______is that ______（給出原因）.③I ______ , so I ______（給出細節(jié)）.④I would also like to request ______（提出進一步的要求）.⑤I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.⑥Thank you for your attention to these requests.⑦If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at ______（電話號碼）.⑧I look forward to a favorable reply.Yours sincerely, Li Ming Dear Sir or Madam, ①I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in ______（報紙名稱）of ______（廣告發(fā)布時間）.②Not only do I have the qualifications for this job, but I also have the right personality for a ______（工作名稱）.③In the one hand, ______（第一個原因）.④On the other hand, ______（另一個原因）.⑤Should you grant me a personal interview, I would be most grateful.⑥If you need to know more about me, please feel free to contact me at any time at ______（電話號碼）.⑦Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you.Yours sincerely，（求職信）

Li Ming 高中英語滿分書信作文模板——邀請信 Dear ______ , ①There will be a ______（內(nèi)容）at/in ______（地點）on ______（時間）.②We would be honored to have you there with us.③The occasion will start at ______（具體時間）.④This will be followed by a ______（進一步的安排）.⑤At around ______（時間）, ______（另一個安排）.⑥I really hope you can make it.⑦RSVP before ______（通知你的最后期限）.Yours sincerely，Li Ming 高中英語滿分書信作文模板——道歉信 Dear ______, ①I am truly sorry that ______（道歉的原因）.②The reason is that ______（介紹原因）.③Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.④Hope you can accept my appologieze and understand my situation.Yours sincerely，Li Ming

Li Ming 高中英語滿分書信作文模板——感謝信

模板一：

Dear _________(收信人)

I am writing to express my sincere thanks for __________(感謝的原因).If it had not been for your assistance in ___________(對方給你的具體幫助)，I fear that I would have been _______(沒有對方幫助時的后果)。

Everyone agrees that it was you who __________(具體幫助的細節(jié))。Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you!Please accept my gratitude.Yours sincerely

Li Ming

模板二：

Dear ________(收信人)，I am now writing these few lines to express my sincere thanks for ________（感謝的原因）.I?d like you to know how much your __________(對方的幫助)meant to me.I not only enjoyed __________(具體細節(jié))，but also __________（具體細節(jié)）

I repeat my thanks again for your _________(感謝原因).Please give my kind regards to your _______(問候?qū)ο?.Yours truly

Li Ming

模板三： Dear

______ , ①I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for ______（感謝的原因）.②If it had not been for your assistance in ______（對方給予的具體幫助）, I fear that I would have been ______（沒有對方幫助時的后果）.③Every one agrees that it was you who ______（給出細節(jié)）.④Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you!Please accept my gratitude.Yours sincerely，Li Ming 高中英語滿分書信作文模板——詢問信 Dear ______ , ①I am ______（自我介紹）.②I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding ______（要詢問的內(nèi)容）.③First of all, what are ______（第一個問題）? ④Secondly, when will ______（第二個問題）? ⑤Thirdly, is ______（第三個問題）? ⑥I would also like to inquire ______（將最重要的問題單獨成段）.⑦Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects? ⑧Thank you for you kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.Yours sincerely，Li Ming 高中英語滿分書信作文模板——推薦信（求職/求學）Dear ______ , ①It affords me much pleasure to recommend ______（要推薦的人）to you.② During his/her graduate years he/she was my ______.③As his/her ______ I found him/her ______（介紹與此人的關系）.④His/Her performance in the school years was outstanding.⑤First, he/she had been and showed great talents in ______.⑥In addition, he/she has a very pleasant personality.⑦He has developed a strong sense of ______, and working with him is always.⑧I can state that he/she has all the qualities of being ______.（介紹此人的能力）

⑨Therefore, I here recommend him/her to you with all my heart.⑩Should you favor him/her with a position in your company/Should you accept him/her in your university？I am sure that his/her future conduct/academic work will prove worthy of your confidence.I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest possible moment.Yours sincerely, 高中英語滿分書信作文模板——祝賀信 Dear ______ , ①I have learned with delight that you ______（祝賀事由）.②I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______.③You must be ______.④And I feel very happy for you.⑤ ______（所取得的成績）is quite exciting news!⑥I know this is surely owing to ______（被祝賀人過去的努力）.⑦It is a reward you richly deserve for your ______（被祝賀人的優(yōu)點）.⑧Kindly let me know when you ______（咨詢對方何時有空）.⑨I hope ______（表達自己的愿望）.⑩My best wishes for your further success.Yours sincerely, Li Ming 開頭句

論述的展開提出觀點：

◆No one would deny that…… 沒有人會否認......◆Now it is widely believed that…… 現(xiàn)在人們普遍認為，......◆When it comes to……, some think…… 當涉及到......，有些人認為......◆There is a public debate today that...有今天的公開辯論......◆A is a common way of……, but is it a wise one? A是一種常見的方式......，但它是一個明智的嗎？

◆Recently the problem has been brought into focus that+同位語從句…… 最近帶來的問題已經(jīng)成為關注的焦點+同位語從句......◆Different people hold different opinions.不同的人持有不同意見。◆Opinions are divided.意見分歧。

◆People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards …… 人已經(jīng)采取/采取了不同的的態(tài)度對......◆With the rapid improvement in……/growing awareness of……，more and more……

隨著迅速改善....../意識不斷增強......，越來越多......（e.g.：With the rapid improvement in building industry，more and more structures are being erected to set the people?s minds at ease.）

（在建筑行業(yè)的迅速改善，越來越多的結構正在架設，設置放心人心。）

◆ Recently，sth'/the problem of……h(huán)as been brought to popular attention/ has become the focus of public concern……

近日，一些事情/問題......一直頗受關注/已成為市民關注的焦點...（e。g。Recently，the problem of unemployment has been brought to such popular attention that governments worldwide are committed to finding useful solutions.）（最近，失業(yè)問題已帶來了這種頗受關注，世界各國政府都致力于找到有用的解決方案）

◆ In the past few years，there has been a boom/sharp growth/decline in……

在過去幾年中，一直存在著繁榮/急劇增長/下降了...（e。g。In the past ten years，there has been a sharp decline in the number of species。）在過去十年中，一直在物種的數(shù)量急劇下降。）

◆ Nowadays，more/most important/dangerous for our society is……

如今，越來越//我們的社會最重要的危險.....（e。g。Nowadays，most dangerous for our society is the tendency to take advantage of each other in political circles。）

如今，為我們的社會最危險的傾向照顧彼此在政界的優(yōu)勢。）

◆Now there is a growing awareness that+同位語從句...現(xiàn)在有越來越清楚地認識到，+同位語從句......◆It is time we explore the truth of...這是我們探索真理的......進一步提出觀點：

Li Ming

◆…of them hold the opinion that ….（不同觀點）

◆…of them are in favor of the idea that…（不同觀點）

◆People who are for/against the idea think …（不同觀點）

◆However, each coin has two sides.（不同觀點）

◆Different from those…., …people think ….（不同觀點）

◆On the other hand, … people object that（有些人反對道…）.（不同觀點）

◆A is but one of the many effects.Another is...◆ Besides, other reasons are...提出假想例子的方式：

◆Suppose that...◆Just imagine what would be like if...◆It is reasonable to expect...◆ It is not surprising that...舉普通例子：

◆For example(instance),...◆...such as A,B,C and so on(so forth)

◆We can take something for example.◆A particular example for this is...引用：

◆One of the greatest early writers said...◆Knowledge is power, such is the remark of...◆As somebody once put it, “…”

◆.......How often we hear such words like these.提出原因：

◆There are many reasons for...◆Why....? For one thing,...;for another thing,…

◆The answer to this problem involves many factors.◆Most people would agree that...◆Some people may neglect that in fact...◆Others suggest that...◆ Part of the explanation is...進行對比： ◆The advantages for A outweigh the disadvantages of...◆Although A enjoys a distinct advantage...◆Indeed , A has more advantages than B when sth is concerned.◆ A maybe..., but it has the disadvantage that...承上啟下：

◆To understand the truth of..., it is also important to see...◆A study of...will make this point clear 讓步：

◆Certainly, B has its own advantages, such as...◆ I do not deny that A has its own merits.結尾：

◆From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that...◆In summary, it is wiser of somebody to do something

◆In short...注（圖表型）

◆According to the information given in the table/graph,we can find that。。

◆As can be seen from the table/graph/figure，there is an obvious and rapid increase /decrease/decline/favorable（an unfavorable）change in。。

◆ As we can see from the table/graph/form /figure above, great changes have taken place in。。over the period of time from。。（年份）to。。（年份）

◆ The table/graph shows that there is a（n）declining/increasing trend of。。from。。（年份）to。。（年份）

◆ Anyone who takes a closer look at the data in the table/graph can be surprised to find that。。

第三篇：高中英語書面表達--書信作文

高中英語滿分作文模板

一.書信體 投訴信

Dear ______, ①I am ______（自我介紹）.②I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about.③The reason for my dissatisfaction is ______（總體介紹）.④In the first place, ______（抱怨的第一個方面）.⑤In addition, ______（抱怨的第二個方面）.⑥Under these circumstances, I find it ______（感覺）to______（抱怨的方面給你帶來的后果）.⑦I appreciate it very much if you could ______（提出建議和請求）, preferably ______（進一步的要求）, and I would like to have this matter settled by ______（設定解決事情最后期限）.⑧Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.建議信

Dear ______, ①You have asked me for my advice with regard to ______ , and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.②In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ______（建議的內(nèi)容）.③I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.Yours sincerely, 請求信 Dear ______ , ①I am writing to formally request to ______（請求的內(nèi)容）.②The reason for ______is that ______（給出原因）.③I ______ , so I ______（給出細節(jié)）.④I would also like to request ______（提出進一步的要求）.⑤I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.⑥Thank you for your attention to these requests.⑦If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at ______（電話號碼）.⑧I look forward to a favorable reply.Yours sincerely, Li Ming Dear Sir or Madam, ①I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in ______（報紙名稱）of ______（廣告發(fā)布時間）.②Not only do I have the qualifications for this job, but I also have the right personality for a ______（工作名稱）.③In the one hand, ______（第一個原因）.④On the other hand, ______（另一個原因）.⑤Should you grant me a personal interview, I would be most grateful.⑥If you need to know more about me, please feel free to contact me at any time at ______（電話號碼）.⑦Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you.Yours sincerely，（求職信）

Li Ming 邀請信

Dear ______ , ①There will be a ______（內(nèi)容）at/in ______（地點）on ______（時間）.②We would be honored to have you there with us.③The occasion will start at ______（具體時間）.④This will be followed by a ______（進一步的安排）.⑤At around ______（時間）, ______（另一個安排）.⑥I really hope you can make it.⑦RSVP before ______（通知你的最后期限）.Yours sincerely, 道歉信

Dear ______, ①I am truly sorry that ______（道歉的原因）.②The reason is that ______（介紹原因）.③Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.④Hope you can accept my appologieze and understand my situation.Yours sincerely，Li Ming

Li Ming 感謝信

模板一：

Dear _________(收信人)

I am writing to express my sincere thanks for __________(感謝的原因).If it had not been for your assistance in ___________(對方給你的具體幫助)，I fear that I would have been _______(沒有對方幫助時的后果)。

Everyone agrees that it was you who __________(具體幫助的細節(jié))。Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you!Please accept my gratitude.Yours sincerely

Li Ming

模板二：

Dear ________(收信人)，I am now writing these few lines to express my sincere thanks for ________（感謝的原因）.I?d like you to know how much your __________(對方的幫助)meant to me.I not only enjoyed __________(具體細節(jié))，but also __________（具體細節(jié)）

I repeat my thanks again for your _________(感謝原因).Please give my kind regards to your _______(問候?qū)ο?.Yours truly

Li Ming

模板三： Dear

______ , ①I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for ______（感謝的原因）.②If it had not been for your assistance in ______（對方給予的具體幫助）, I fear that I would have been ______（沒有對方幫助時的后果）.③Every one agrees that it was you who ______（給出細節(jié)）.④Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you!Please accept my gratitude.Yours sincerely，Li Ming 詢問信

Dear ______ , ①I am ______（自我介紹）.②I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding ______（要詢問的內(nèi)容）.③First of all, what are ______（第一個問題）? ④Secondly, when will ______（第二個問題）? ⑤Thirdly, is ______（第三個問題）? ⑥I would also like to inquire ______（將最重要的問題單獨成段）.⑦Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects? ⑧Thank you for you kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.Yours sincerely，Li Ming 推薦信（求職/求學）Dear ______ , ①It affords me much pleasure to recommend ______（要推薦的人）to you.② During his/her graduate years he/she was my ______.③As his/her ______ I found him/her ______（介紹與此人的關系）.④His/Her performance in the school years was outstanding.⑤First, he/she had been and showed great talents in ______.⑥In addition, he/she has a very pleasant personality.⑦He has developed a strong sense of ______, and working with him is always.⑧I can state that he/she has all the qualities of being ______.（介紹此人的能力）

⑨Therefore, I here recommend him/her to you with all my heart.⑩Should you favor him/her with a position in your company/Should you accept him/her in your university？I am sure that his/her future conduct/academic work will prove worthy of your confidence.I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest possible moment.Yours sincerely，Li Ming ①I have learned with delight that you ______（祝賀事由）.②I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______.③You must be ______.④And I feel very happy for you.⑤ ______（所取得的成績）is quite exciting news!⑥I know this is surely owing to ______（被祝賀人過去的努力）.⑦It is a reward you richly deserve for your ______（被祝賀人的優(yōu)點）.⑧Kindly let me know when you ______（咨詢對方何時有空）.⑨I hope ______（表達自己的愿望）.⑩My best wishes for your further success.Yours sincerely, Li Ming

二、議論文

Along with the advance of the society more and more controversial issues have been brought to our attention, one of which is that....隨著社會的不斷發(fā)展，出現(xiàn)了越來越多的問題，其中之一便是____________。As to whether it is worthwhile X there is a long-running debate.關于是否值得X的問題，一直以來爭論不休.Just as the saying goes: “so many people so many minds”.It is quite understandable that views on this issue vary from person to person.俗話說，""。不同的人對此有不同的看法是可以理解的。

Those who criticize X argue that X They believe that X But people who favor X on the other hand argue that.X 1.To begin /start with 2.furthermore/besides/in addition 3.last but not least.批判X的人認為X。他們相信X，不過，另一方面，贊同X的人則認為X。After a thorough consideration for my part I am in favor of the latter view that

X 經(jīng)過深思熟慮，我較支持后一種看法，亦即X。

三、說明文 Along with the advance of the society more and more controversial issues have been brought to our attention one of which is that X 隨著社會的不斷發(fā)展，出現(xiàn)了越來越多的問題，其中之一便是X。Why have there been so many X maybe the reasons can be listed as follows 1.To begin /start with 2.furthermore/besides/in addition 3.last but not least.為什么有這么多X，理由如下

Obviously it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem For one thing

For another 很明顯，我們現(xiàn)在必須采取一些措施 一方面

另一方面

I think all the measures above can make present situation better.Let us all start to do so by ourselves.我認為上述措施能使現(xiàn)狀變好。讓我們都從自身做起！

四、圖表作文（圖表型）

◆According to the information given in the table/graph,we can find that。。

◆As can be seen from the table/graph/figure，there is an obvious and rapid increase /decrease/decline/favorable（an unfavorable）change in。。

◆ As we can see from the table/graph/form /figure above, great changes have taken place in。。over the period of time from。。（年份）to。。（年份）

◆ The table/graph shows that there is a（n）declining/increasing trend of。。from。。（年份）to。。（年份）

◆ Anyone who takes a closer look at the data in the table/graph can be surprised to find that。。

As is shown by the percentage in the picture X has been on rise/ decrease, X dramatically decreasing from X in X to X in X.From the sharp decline in the chart, it goes without saying that X.There are at least two good reasons accounting for X.In one hand, X.In the other hand, X is due to the fact that X.In addition, X is responsible for X.Maybe there are some other reasons to show X.But itis generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that X.I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.五、話題作文

Nowadays, there are more and more X in X.It is estimated that X.Why have there been so many X ? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is

X.Besides, X The third one is X.To sum up, the main cause of it is due to X.It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing X.For another thing, X.All these measures will certainly reduce the number of X.開頭句

論述的展開提出觀點：

◆No one would deny that…… 沒有人會否認......◆Now it is widely believed that…… 現(xiàn)在人們普遍認為，......◆When it comes to……, some think…… 當涉及到......，有些人認為......◆There is a public debate today that...有今天的公開辯論......◆A is a common way of……, but is it a wise one? A是一種常見的方式......，但它是一個明智的嗎？

◆Recently the problem has been brought into focus that+同位語從句…… 最近帶來的問題已經(jīng)成為關注的焦點+同位語從句......◆Different people hold different opinions.不同的人持有不同意見。◆Opinions are divided.意見分歧。

◆People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards …… 人已經(jīng)采取/采取了不同的的態(tài)度對......◆With the rapid improvement in……/growing awareness of……，more and more……

隨著迅速改善....../意識不斷增強......，越來越多......（e.g.：With the rapid improvement in building industry，more and more structures are being erected to set the people?s minds at ease.）

（在建筑行業(yè)的迅速改善，越來越多的結構正在架設，設置放心人心。）

◆ Recently，sth'/the problem of……h(huán)as been brought to popular attention/ has become the focus of public concern……

近日，一些事情/問題......一直頗受關注/已成為市民關注的焦點...（e。g。Recently，the problem of unemployment has been brought to such popular attention that governments worldwide are committed to finding useful solutions.）（最近，失業(yè)問題已帶來了這種頗受關注，世界各國政府都致力于找到有用的解決方案）

◆ In the past few years，there has been a boom/sharp growth/decline in……

在過去幾年中，一直存在著繁榮/急劇增長/下降了...（e。g。In the past ten years，there has been a sharp decline in the number of species。）在過去十年中，一直在物種的數(shù)量急劇下降。）

◆ Nowadays，more/most important/dangerous for our society is……

如今，越來越//我們的社會最重要的危險.....（e。g。Nowadays，most dangerous for our society is the tendency to take advantage of each other in political circles。）

如今，為我們的社會最危險的傾向照顧彼此在政界的優(yōu)勢。）

◆Now there is a growing awareness that+同位語從句...現(xiàn)在有越來越清楚地認識到，+同位語從句......◆It is time we explore the truth of...這是我們探索真理的......進一步提出觀點：

◆…of them hold the opinion that ….（不同觀點）

◆…of them are in favor of the idea that…（不同觀點）

◆People who are for/against the idea think …（不同觀點）

◆However, each coin has two sides.（不同觀點）

◆Different from those…., …people think ….（不同觀點）

◆On the other hand, … people object that（有些人反對道…）.（不同觀點）

◆A is but one of the many effects.Another is...◆ Besides, other reasons are...提出假想例子的方式：

◆Suppose that...◆Just imagine what would be like if...◆It is reasonable to expect...◆ It is not surprising that...舉普通例子：

◆For example(instance),...◆...such as A,B,C and so on(so forth)

◆We can take something for example.◆A particular example for this is...引用：

◆One of the greatest early writers said...◆Knowledge is power, such is the remark of...◆As somebody once put it, “…”

◆.......How often we hear such words like these.提出原因：

◆There are many reasons for...◆Why....? For one thing,...;for another thing,…

◆The answer to this problem involves many factors.◆Most people would agree that...◆Some people may neglect that in fact...◆Others suggest that...◆ Part of the explanation is...進行對比：

◆The advantages for A outweigh the disadvantages of...◆Although A enjoys a distinct advantage...◆Indeed , A has more advantages than B when sth is concerned.◆ A maybe..., but it has the disadvantage that...承上啟下：

◆To understand the truth of..., it is also important to see...◆A study of...will make this point clear 讓步：

◆Certainly, B has its own advantages, such as...◆ I do not deny that A has its own merits.結尾：

◆From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that...◆In summary, it is wiser of somebody to do something

◆In short...說明：請大家朗讀熟記各類文體套語，摘抄你喜歡的表達并背誦仿寫。

第四篇：書面表達01應用文類--書信

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應用文類---書信

一、體裁介紹

書信的組成部分：信頭、稱呼、正文、結束語和簽名。

1.信頭（heading）包括寫寫信人地址和寫信日期。通常在右上角。

地址的寫法遵循從小到大的原則。如：門牌號-街道名-城市名-省名-國名。郵政編碼一般寫在省名稱之后。（比較熟悉的朋友之間的通信，地址通常可省去）

日期：通常兩種寫法-月日年 April 14, 2014日月年 14 April, 2014

2.稱呼：通常寫在信頭的下方信箋的左方：Dear....或My dear....3.正文是書信的主體部分，即寫信人要表達的內(nèi)容。一般來說，書信正文的首行與稱呼這一行要距離一行或兩行，正

文每段段首向右縮進5個字母。

4.結束語（Complimentary Close）是書信結尾的恭維話，相當于中文書信最后的“祝好”“致禮”之類的話語，它位

于正文之后，結束語一

5.般單獨成行。常見的結束語有：Best wishes!With best regards!Good luck!

6.簽名（Signature）通常在結束語正下方兩行的位置，首字母要大寫，句末用逗號。常用謙稱：

寫給親友常用： Yours /Yours ever寫給一般熟悉的人用：Your sincerely/Sincerely yours

寫給不太熟悉的人用：Yours truly/Truly yours寫給長輩或上級：Yours respectfully

技巧點撥：常用語

1.寫信給他人I’m writing to tell you about the discussion/ lecture/meeting/activity we had yesterday.I’m writing to ask if you can come next week.2.回信給他人 Your letter came to me yesterday.I have received your letter of 20th July.Thank you for your letter.信箋結尾常用語：

1.Please remember me to your whole family.2.Wish you a pleasant journey.3.Wish you success./Wish you the best of health.4.Looking forward to the pleasure of meeting you.5.Looking forward to your next visit to China.6.Expecting to hear from you as soon as possible.7.Looking forward to your early reply.8.Hoping to hear from you soon.9.Your early reply will be highly appreciated.10.With best regards to your family.11.With love and good wishes.假設你是晨光中學的高中生李華。你校擬選拔一批優(yōu)秀學生，利用暑假到晨曦希望小學為學生輔導英語。你希望參加此活動。請根據(jù)以下提示，同英語給校評選組寫一封申請信：1.對此活動的認識（如對本人、學生及社會的益處等）

2.個人優(yōu)勢（如性格、獨立生活能力、語言能力等）3.你的計劃（如怎樣進行輔導）

注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于100詞 2.可適當加入細節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實，行文連貫 3.信的開頭結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：晨曦希望小學 Chenxi Hope School

Dear Sir or Madam,I am Lihua from Class One, Senior Two._________________________________________________________________

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1.陳述寫信原因2.簡要描述該行李3.說明其重要性4.期待回復并表示感謝

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第五篇：書面表達

中考英語書面表達的考點集匯、講解和訓練

【考點掃描】

書面表達是每年中考必考題型，是考查學生交際能力的一個重要組成部分。書面表達通常有三種形式：

1、書信、日記、通知、留言、假條；

2、看圖作文；

3、根據(jù)漢語提示作文。

無論是那一種書面表達形式，考生所寫的短文都要緊扣主題、文理通順，要素完整，語言準確、得當、格式正確、無大、小寫和拼寫錯誤，標點符號正確，能達到交際目的。【名師解難】 一.訓練方法

1.記。認真系統(tǒng)復習和背誦基礎知識和優(yōu)美的句子、句型。中國有句古話，叫“熟讀唐詩三百首，不會吟詩也會作”。同樣，要使自己具有較強的寫作能力，首先應該熟讀和背誦一些句型和短文。許多同學寫出來的語言根本不符合英語的語言習慣，相當一部分人有對照中文逐字翻譯的不良習慣，不去理會中英文的差異。大量的背誦和閱讀是提高寫作能力的有效辦法，同學們?nèi)粲写罅康默F(xiàn)成語言積累在腦海里，自己寫起文段來，就可以做到脫口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至發(fā)揮。

2.練。每練一篇書面表達題，都要真正學到一點東西，不可貪多而邊學邊忘。平時可以采用循序漸進、靈活多樣的練習方式。從根據(jù)提示詞寫單句開始，到寫單句，然后到寫幾句話，最后到寫流利的文段。盡量嘗試多種形式的寫作，如短信、說明、通知、便條、明信片、看圖寫作、根據(jù)表格或記錄寫短文等。

3.寫。要進行實戰(zhàn)寫作。要求自己在20分鐘內(nèi)寫出100個詞的短文，并且質(zhì)量高、1 內(nèi)容全、形式正確。這樣形成習慣，考試時就能得心應手。二.應試策略

1.審題目：要切中題意。《中考考試說明》指出，書面表達要切中題意。怎樣才能切中題意？就是要認真審題，看到考題后，先不要急于動筆，要仔細看清題目要求的內(nèi)容。在自己的頭腦中構思出一個框架或畫面，確定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下筆，看懂題意，根據(jù)圖畫、圖表、提綱或短文提供的資料和信息來審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關系、故事情節(jié)、主體時態(tài)、活動時間、地點等。

2.圈要點：防止遺漏要點。要點是給分的一個重要因素。為了防止寫作過程中遺漏要點，同學們要充分發(fā)揮自己的觀察力，把情景中給出的各個要點逐條列出。

3.列提綱：為寫作做好準備。根據(jù)文章要點短文的中心思想將主要句型、關鍵詞語記下，形成提綱。

4.定基調(diào)：定出時態(tài)、人稱、順序、開頭、結尾。5.寫全文：寫短文時要做到以下六個方面：

(1)避免使用漢語式英語，盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用，以避免重復和呆板。

(2)多用簡單句型，記事、寫人一般都不需要復雜的句型。可適當多使用陳述句、一般疑問句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語或情態(tài)動詞等較復雜的句型。(3)注意語法、句法知識的靈活運用。1）語態(tài)、時態(tài)要準確無誤。

2）主謂語要一致，主語的人稱和數(shù)要和謂語一致。3）注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。

4）注意冠詞用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能寫成a。

5）注意拼寫、標點符號和大小寫，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。

(4)描寫人物時，要生動具體，例如：

1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。2）服飾顏色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。3）內(nèi)心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。4）感情描寫：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。5）動作描寫：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。

(5)上下文要連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評分的一條原則，因此同學們應把寫好的句子，根據(jù)故事情節(jié)，事情發(fā)生的先后次序（時間或空間），使用一些表示并列、遞進等過渡詞進行加工整理，使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學們應注意下面過渡的用法： 1）表示并列關系的：and, as well as, or… 2）表示轉(zhuǎn)折關系的：but, yet, however… 3）表示時間關系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that… 4）表示因果關系的：so, therefore ,as a result… 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that… 6）表示列舉的：for example , such as… 7）表示總結性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking…

(6)不會表達，另辟蹊徑。中考作文給分是以要點和語言準確度而定，不以文采打分。造句越簡單準確越好，造復合句容易出錯，容易被扣分，閱卷場上有句話：“錯誤面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到個別要點表達不出來或難以表達，可采用變通的辦法，化難為易，化繁為簡。總之，所造句子要正確、得體、符合英語表達習慣。(6)改病句：認真檢查，改正錯誤。中考作文時，由于時間緊、內(nèi)容多，同學們出錯在所難免。因此，改錯這一環(huán)節(jié)必不可少。中考作文評卷是根據(jù)要點、語言準確性、上下 3 文的連貫性來給分，根據(jù)錯誤多少來扣分。因此，中考時花幾分鐘時間用來檢查錯誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯誤應從以下幾個方面入手： 1）格式是否有錯。2）拼寫有無錯誤。3）語言是否用錯。4）時態(tài)、語態(tài)錯誤。5）標點錯誤。6）人稱是否用錯。三.注意事項

書面表達要特別注意書寫工整，卷面整潔。每年閱卷老師在十來天的時間里要看十幾萬考生的作文，工作量之大，時間之緊，可想而知。書寫是否工整，卷面是否整潔與得分高低直接有關。【中考范例】

VII.書面表達（共1題，計10分）

假如你叫張強。請根據(jù)下面美國朋友Bob的來信內(nèi)容，結合你自己的情況寫一篇語言連慣、符合邏輯的英文回信。

要求：1.認真閱讀來信的內(nèi)容，從中獲得你需要的信息。2.詞數(shù)：80左右。回信的開頭、結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。注意：回信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實地址和所在學校的名稱。

Hello！I’m your new friend.My name is Bob.I’m fifteen.I’m American.I live in New York.4 I am a middle school student.I’m good at maths.It is very interesting.My favourite sport is basketball.And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player.I like pop music.My friends and I often sing pop songs

After school, I am interested in getting on-line.I have known a lot about China from the Internet.Now I’m learning Chinese.I hope I will visit your country one day.Please write to me and tell me something about your life.I’m looking forward to hearing from you.Bob Dear Bob, _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ Yours，Zhang Qiang 【解析】根據(jù)前面提到第六個步驟，我們來寫一下這篇書面表達。

1.審題目：通過審題目我們可以知道：本篇書面表達應是寫一封回信，寫信人是張強，收信人是Bob，信的內(nèi)容應是介紹張強自己的情況。

2.圈要點：根據(jù)來信判斷，寫回信必須包括以下要點：

1、收到對方的來信；

2、愿意和對方交朋友；

3、自己的姓名、年齡和住址；

4、自己的身份、特長和愛好；

5、自己的希望。

3、列提綱：1.got your letter 2.glad to be your friend 3.name, zhang Qiang, fifteen, live in Shanxi 4.a middle school student, like English, like sports, good at drawing, 5.hope we’ll meet in China

4、定基調(diào)：1.時態(tài)：收到來信用一般過去時，介紹情況用一般現(xiàn)在時，希望用一般將來時。2.人稱用第一人稱。3.可按提綱的順序來寫。4.開頭和結尾題目已經(jīng)給出。

5、寫全文： Dear Bob, I got your letter yesterday.I’m very glad to be your pen friend.My name is Zhang Qiang.I’m fifteen years old, too.I live in Shaanxi.I’m a middle school student, too.I like English and physics very much.I also like sports, but I’m good at drawing.I know a little about America.Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter? I hope we’ll meet in China some day.I’m sure we’ll have a good time together.Please write(to)me soon.Yours, Zhang Qiang 6

6、改病句：認真復查一邊，如有錯誤，加以改正。【滿分演練】

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華山是中國名山之一。假設外國友人到你校參觀后，準備去旅游。請根據(jù)以下要點向外國友人簡單介紹華山（the Hua Mountain）

1．位于陜西東部，是中國著名的旅游勝地，每年有大批中外游客前去旅游觀光。2．乘汽車去大約要花1個小時；也可以乘火車去。

3．登山便可領略其云海（the sea of clouds）、奇松（wondrous pines）、怪石（unique rocks）等秀麗的風景及清晨美麗的日出。注意：

1．字數(shù)：80詞左右。2．請不要逐字翻譯。（2）根據(jù)提示和要求完成下面短文

假如你（Li Lei）在去年夏令營認識的一個朋友Jim從英國給你寄來一件禮物—— 一件紅色的襯衫，并附有一封信。在信中他向你問好，他想知道你近來在忙些什么。請你給他寫一封回信（100個詞左右）表示感謝。回信要包括以下內(nèi)容： 1.向Jim問好并對他表示感謝。

2.禮物是你最喜歡的顏色，尺寸很合適，你非常喜歡。

3.告訴Jim你近來很好，上周剛過完生日，生日聚會很熱鬧。詢問Jim的近況，并表示希望他能來中國。

注意1.信的格式已經(jīng)給出。

2.信中不得使用真實的人名、地名。（3）

根據(jù)中文意思和英文提示詞語，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯的英文文段。所給英文提示詞語必須都用上，中文提示內(nèi)容不必逐句翻譯，每組英文提示所寫出的句數(shù)不限。

今天是6月23日星期日，天氣晴朗。你和你的同學張宏參觀了西安市動物園。那里的動物十分有趣，人見人愛。當你看到有位游客在向猴子投喂食物時，就上前阻止并說……

請你用英文寫一篇日記，記述今天的經(jīng)歷。（請注意日記格式）1．fine day, sun, bright 2．visit, Beijing Zoo 3．a(chǎn)nimal, so interesting, people, love 4．see, visitor, throw…to, stop, say（4）

根據(jù)中文設置的情景、英文提示詞語以及表格所提供的信息，寫出語法正確、意思連貫、符合邏輯的英文文段。注意1.字數(shù)60~80。

2.所給的英文提示詞語及表格所提供的信息必須都用上。（可適當發(fā)揮）3.發(fā)言稿的開頭和結尾已給出。

假設你是張斌，今年暑假你將參加學校組織的赴加拿大“綠色之旅”夏令營活動。請你準備一篇在開營式上的自我介紹發(fā)言稿。

name, Zhang Bin, fifteen years old, live in Xi’an, favorite subject, biology…

Dear friends

I’m very glad to introduce myself to you._______________________ _________________________________________________________________________________

That’s all.Thank you for listening.（5）

根據(jù)中文提示和英文提示詞語寫一篇短文。

今年暑假，有一批美國中學生要來你們學校訪問。請你寫一篇有關西安的簡介，以便和他們交流。

注意：1.字數(shù)100左右；

2.必須使用所給英文提示。Capital of Shaanxi, Lie in the Northwest, many places of interest, autumn, best season 9（6）看圖寫話。

根據(jù)以上四幅圖和提示詞語，寫出一篇語法正確、意思連貫、語句通順、符合邏輯的短文，開頭已給出。要求：1.敘述要用第三人稱。2.詞數(shù)60~80個左右。3.要表達自己的看法或想法。

4.選用下列詞語：rush hour, cross, make sure, come over, traffic rules Last Monday, Tim got up at 7:40 in the morning.______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________（7）

請你參考圖文提示，寫一篇60~80詞的短文。注意：1.語言規(guī)范，語意完整，內(nèi)容豐富。2.表達符合圖意，書寫規(guī)范。3.給出自己的觀點。4.文章的開頭已給出。

參考詞：pollute, turn off the tap(水龍頭)，dry, save(節(jié)約 vt.), water resources(水資源)From the pictures we know that ______________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________（8）

請根據(jù)下面四幅圖，寫一篇70個單詞左右的短文。文章開頭已經(jīng)給出，不算入總詞匯數(shù)內(nèi)。

參考詞匯： on fire 著火firefighter n.消防員put out 滅火

Jack was woken up by the shouting “Fire!Help!Fire!Help!...”

__________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________（9）看圖寫話。

要求：1.根據(jù)圖畫所提供的語境，寫出意思連貫、語言流暢、語法準確、符合邏輯的短文。2.至少使用兩種時態(tài)，70詞以上。不得使用真實姓名、地名、學校名。

3.標題和第一句已給出，但不計入70詞之內(nèi)。

One day Lin Tao and Mei Mei were playing in the garden.___________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________（10）

根據(jù)所給圖畫用英語寫一篇約80詞的短文。

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假如你所在的學校要出一期英語壁報。你準備就自己經(jīng)歷的一件事寫一篇英語短文向壁報投稿。下面五幅圖記錄了你上個星期六與老師和同學到南河邊參加植樹活動的全過程。請你就以下五幅圖寫一篇英文短文。

注意：1.短文內(nèi)容要包括所有圖畫中的主要內(nèi)容 2.詞數(shù)：70～90

3.生詞提示： 桶bucket鋤頭hoe

________________________________________________________________ 13 ____________________________________________________________________（12）

請按照下面6幅圖和表格的提示，寫一篇題為“Changes in Our Hometown”的英語短文。（詞數(shù)：50~80，不包括已經(jīng)給出的單詞）

內(nèi)容要點：

過去 現(xiàn)在 舊房 高樓 河水污濁 河水清澈 步行、騎自行車 乘公交車、小汽車 Changes in Our Hometown

Over the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.In the past 14 ________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ 【練習答案】

(1)參考答案：

The Hua Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China.It lies in the east of Shaanxi.Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there.It’s not far from here.It takes you about one hour to get there by bus.You can also go there by train.When you are at the top of the mountain, you’ll find clouds, wondrous pines and unique rocks around you.In the early morning when the sun rises, the sky looks very beautiful.It’s really a nice place to visit.(2)參考答案：

Zhonghua street Xi;an, China June21st, 2004 Dear Jim：

How are you? Many thanks for the shirt!I’m very happy to hear from you again.I love the shirt very much, Jim, and red is my favourite colour!You remembered!It’s just my size.Every time I wear it, I will think of you.I’m fine here in China.Last week I had a birthday party.Many of my classmates came and my mother made us a lot of good food.We really had a wonderful time together.How are you doing in England, Jim? I miss you very much.I always miss the days we were together last summer.I hope you can come to China someday.Please write back soon.Your friend, Li Lei

(3)參考答案：

Sunday June 23rd

It was a fine day today and the sun was bright.I visited Xi’an Zoo with my classmate, Zhang Hong.The animals there were so interesting that all the people loved them.When I saw a visitor throwing food to the monkeys, I went/ran to stop him/her and said, “Animals are our friends and we must take good care of them.”

(4)參考答案： Dear friends，I’m very glad to introduce myself to you.My name is Zhang Bin.I’m fifteen years old.I live in Beijing.One of my favorite subjects is biology.I’m interested in drawing.In my free time, I often go camping, draw some pictures of plants, and enjoy the singing of birds in nature.I want to be a biologist when I grow up.I feel lucky to join you.I hope we can be good friends and do our best to make That’s all.Thank you for listening.(5)參考答案：

Xi’an is the capital of Shaanxi with a long history.There are many places of interest, such as the Dayan Pagoda, the Xiaoyan Pagoda, the Bell Tower and the Terra Cotta Warriors.Since it lies in the Northwest of China, the winter here is long and it sometimes snows.Autumn is the best season in Xi’an, for it’s neither too cold nor too hot.One of the most famous traditional foods is “Yangroupao”.(6)參考答案：

Last Monday, Tim got up at 7:40 in the morning.It was the rush hour.He rode his bike to school very fast.He was crossing the street when a car came at that moment.Tim’s bike hit the car and he fell to the ground heavily.The driver was very kind and stopped to make sure that Tim was all right.Then a policeman came over.He told Tim to ride more slowly next time and it was dangerous.Tim thanked him and went to school.All of the young men should obey the traffic rules.17(7)參考答案：

From the pictures we know that much water has been polluted.Some factories are pouring waste water into rivers and lakes.The water becomes dirty and lots of fish have died.Many people often waste water.For example, they often forget to turn off the taps.If we don’t have enough water, land will be dry and crops will die.We can’t live without water.So we should try our best and encourage everyone to protect water resources.We must save water and stop polluting it.If we do that, Things will be much better.(8)參考答案：

Jack was woken up by the shouting “Fire!Help!Fire!Help!...” What had happened? He looked out of the window.Wow!He found that his neighbour’s house was on fire.Jack jumped off the bed and rushed to the telephone.He made a call to the police.Then, he ran out and helped his neighbour(to)fight against the fire.Soon the fire fighters came and in a short time the fire was put out.And the house owner and fire fighters thanked Jack and his neighbours a lot.(9)參考答案：

TAKING CARE OF TREES

One day Lin Tao and Mei Mei were playing in the garden.They found

that a young tree there was dying.They thought they must save the young tree.Then they put a rope around the tree and watered it.Some days later the tree came back to life again.Their mother saw this and praised them, “You are good children!”

(10)參考答案：

Yesterday afternoon Li Ping and I were going to school.On the way we saw an old woman crossing the street.Suddenly a car passed by very fast.The old woman was frightened and fell down to the ground.The apples in her basket were all out on the street.Immediately, we ran to the old woman, helped her get up and picked up all the apples.Li Ping helped her carry the basket and I helped her cross the street.The old woman thanked us very much.（11）參考答案： 內(nèi)容要點：

（1）上星期五老師告訴我們“明天去南河邊植樹”。（2）上星期六（第二天）早上六點半我就起床了。（3）我?guī)е叭W校，同學們帶著桶、鋤頭在校門口等待。（4）到南河邊，我們開始植樹。（也可描寫動場面。）（5）看著新種下的樹，我們都很高興。

Last Friday, our teacher told us that we would go to plant trees by the 19 South River the next day.On Saturday morning I got up at six thirty and went to school with a bucket.My classmates were waiting at the school gate with buckets and hoes.When we got to the South River, we began to plant trees on the river bank.(On the river bank, some students were digging holes, the others were planting or watering the young trees.)

After we finished our work, we were happy to see the young trees we planted on the river bank.（12）參考答案：

Over the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.In the past, the houses in our hometown were very poor, but now many people have moved into tall buildings(there are many tall buildings here and there).The water in the rivers was very dirty, but now the rivers are clean and people can swim in them.People used to walk or ride bikes, but now they can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work.走到茶幾邊，我認出了外婆的杯子，但是哪一個才是媽媽的杯子呢？突然之間，我覺得，自己真得太不了解父母了。當媽媽為我倒水時，我卻不知她的杯子是什么樣的；當媽媽為我夾我喜歡吃的菜時，我卻沒想過他們是愛吃淡一點，還是濃一點。。。2009年到了，意味著過去一年的逝去和新的一年的到來。媽媽為我操勞了一整年，仔細想想，現(xiàn)在的我也應該為她做一點點事了。

于是，我決定先將茶沏好再找杯子。學著爸爸平時沏茶的順序，我先從茶柜 里找出了一罐普洱茶，再往燒水的壺里加入水放在電茶爐上燒，接著，我將爸爸已經(jīng)掰好的普洱茶片拿了兩片放在蓋碗里，等了一會，水開了，我小心地將水注入蓋碗，將蓋蓋上，把蓋碗里第一遍的茶水濾掉，然后再次注水，蓋上蓋，燜一會才兩手并用地將茶水倒入茶海里，因為第一次自己動手，蓋碗的燙手是我所沒想到的，手忙腳亂的我弄得茶幾上一片片的水漬。重復幾次這樣的程序后，我先幫外婆倒了一杯茶，因為外婆特別喜歡喝茶。當外婆從廚房走出來的時候我已經(jīng)把茶都給倒好了，這時，外婆才告訴我哪一個是媽媽的杯子。

媽媽起床了，我雙手捧著水杯送到她的面前，就像捧著一顆溫熱的心。媽媽一愣，隨即臉上露出了微笑，她一手接過水杯，伸出另一只手將我拉進了她的懷里，那手輕輕柔柔地在我的頭上撫摸著，接著媽媽在我的臉上深深地親了一口。雖然媽媽經(jīng)常親我，但這一刻的親吻卻最讓我感到幸福。我抬起頭對媽媽說：“媽媽快喝吧，要不茶要涼了。”媽媽仰起了脖子，張著嘴巴，“咕咚，咕咚”地喝了幾大口。看她那甜蜜蜜的樣子，仿佛微苦的普洱茶也是蜜一般甜。

我記得在我小學的時侯，就讀過一首曹值的七步詩：“煮豆持作梗，轆轂以為汁；秸在釜下燃，豆在釜中泣；本是同根生，相煎何太急”。那時只知其大意，只知道曹操的長子曹丕繼位，他在一些奸臣的影響下，擔心他的同胞弟弟曹值篡位，便逼迫曹值在七步之內(nèi)作出一首詩來，否則處死；結果他的弟弟就在七步之內(nèi)寫出了流傳至今的“七步詩”。當時這首詩對曹丕也是一種極大的潮諷。

幾個世紀過去了，社會和生活都發(fā)生了極大的變化；應該說人的素質(zhì)也應有所提高；一個人生活在世上，是離不開親情、友情和愛情的；有人說：打架親兄弟，上陣父子兵，但是，兄弟姐妹的團結并不是真對與他人打架斗毆，在生活上，21 事業(yè)上應是不可或缺的照應；俗話說“一根筷子容易斷，十雙筷子斷就難”；可見，團結是一種力量，只有團結才有攻不破的堡壘。

然而，就在生活優(yōu)越的今天，兄弟姐妹往往因為一點小事，一點利益而你爭我斗，反目成仇，甚而相殘；我和我的朋友在聊天時有時聊及這個問題，有人這樣評論：一個人生活在世上，如果不顧親情，對兄弟姐妹甚至父母于不顧，那他在這個社會上和任何人都不要談“情”字，特別是友情。

樹大分枝，各自成立家庭后，在生活中一些小事是難免發(fā)生的，但要看你怎樣去對待，把金錢和利益看的太重，那麼，你就會值親情于不顧；看淡名利，注重親情才是做人的底線；爭則不足，讓則有余，在利益和金錢面前，我們何不禮讓一點，做一個有道德、有素質(zhì)、有親情的人呢？

家和萬事興，團結是一種力量，讓我們團結友愛，和睦共處，為個人的事業(yè)、為家庭的生活、為國家的興盛而看重親情、友情、愛情；把金錢和利益看淡一些吧！人過留名，雁去留聲，希望在幾十年之后，當你離開這個世界的時侯，留給后人的不是唾泣，而是美愉。

今天是她父親的生日,她要回家和父親一起過生日.我很理解她的想法,更理解她的思念之情.是的,她父親已經(jīng)六十多歲了,為了子女的成長與幸福,含辛茹苦,真的的不容易.話說過來,人一輩子真的很不容易.人年老時非常希望能夠和子女在一起,即使不能在一起,哪怕一個電話甚至一個短信,父母也已經(jīng)很知足了.我由于長期在外,很想念爸爸媽媽.想起過去,心里真的很辛酸,父母親為了我們的成長真的付出了很多,然而他們現(xiàn)在又生活得怎么樣呢?想起過去的一幕一幕,我心里很難受!我很希望做做子女的我們,踏踏實實地做好每一件事情,不讓父母擔憂,這是最基本的我們應當做的事情.22 談到這里我不由自主地想起一部電影《我的兄弟姐妹》,這是一部關于親情的影片,暫且不管故事的真實性,主要考究它的內(nèi)涵.主人公齊思甜和哥哥齊憶苦、妹妹奇妙、弟弟齊天生活在一個不富裕卻充滿溫馨和愛的家。然而在一個暴風雪的夜晚，他們的母親舊病復發(fā)，咳得吐血了。父親背她去醫(yī)院，卻出了意外，他們倆都亡故了。次日，另一家人搬進了四個孩子的家。性格剛強的哥哥無法忍受這個新家庭的種種，無奈地帶著弟弟妹妹離開了家。他們開始四處奔波，尋找落腳之處。當實在沒有能力照顧弟弟妹妹的時候，他把妹妹齊思甜送給一對正要出國的夫婦；把弟弟送給他的舅媽一家；又把小妹妹帶到一對老人家中請他們收養(yǎng)。他自己和弟弟妹妹們便各奔東西……20年后，齊憶苦在北京當上了出租車司機；齊思甜出國受到良好的教育，成了音樂家；齊天成為東北大學學生；齊妙卻當上了舞廳小姐。在北京的音樂會上，思甜驀然回首的瞬間，音樂霎時凝固了。他們四人擁抱在一起，淚水順著另一支悠揚的樂曲落下，聽眾的掌聲久久不息……終于，他們有了一次永久的重逢。

齊思甜的父親是一個音樂教師，他們一家人都生活在音樂的天堂里，這也為后來思甜成為音樂家打好了基礎。父親說：“人生路上有許多困難的事情，只要有音樂在，你的靈魂便不再寂寞。”這位父親是偉大的，他樂觀開朗，以身作則。盡管他和藹可親，但同時又是一個嚴厲的父親。有一回，齊憶苦偷鄰居家的雞蛋，是為了滿足妹妹小小的心愿。而他卻因此挨了父親的鞭子，還罰他站在雪地里很久。在父親被分配到別的地方邊勞動邊教音樂時，他對這“莫須有的罪名”并沒有悲憤倒下，而是瞞著家人當搬運工挨家挨戶送木材，還干各種各樣的粗活。他也沒有一絲怨言，還對孩子說：“我沒事。”懂事的孩子們也拿起了工具，幫父親干活。他哼著小調(diào)，陽光幸福地灑在他們臉上。

可見,這位父親是多么偉大，他以他的行動告訴了孩子們音樂的重要性及如何面對生活的苦難。

那么，又是一種什么樣的力量，使后來的四個孩子重逢，使他們歡聚，使他們接受心靈的洗禮？

毋庸置疑，是親情。

寒冷的冬天，四個孩子依偎在車站。他們在為下一餐飯而擔心著。“哥，我餓。”、“哥，我冷。”、“哥，我想回家……”弟妹們的話刺痛了哥哥。他說：“只要我還有一口氣，就不讓你們受委屈。”事實上他也這么做了。如果不是親情，他又何必活得如此累呢？他又怎能忘記，那一晚，父母臨走時對他的囑咐：“你是哥哥，要照顧好弟弟妹妹。”

生活改變了許多人和事，也改變了他們。但是，親情是始終不渝的。最小的妹妹齊妙長大后竟成了舞廳小姐！她離開原來的家后，養(yǎng)父母去世得早，加上無人看管，就開始墮落下去了。她在20年后與齊思甜相遇時，大言不慚地對她說她滿足于當前腐朽昏暗的生活方式。但是自那以后，她回憶起以前的一點一滴，又不免傷感和懊悔。她發(fā)現(xiàn)自己對不起所有愛她的人，她的良心受到了譴責。于是，親情的歸來使她的精神方面的巨人復活了！她的靈魂才得以解放。

親情給人以新生，親情又猶如一支鎮(zhèn)心劑。

親情是心中的太陽，照耀著我們；親情是溫柔的春風，撫摸著我們；親情如綿綿的春雨，滋潤著我們。

親情是雪，晶瑩剔透；親情也可以是雷，驚天撼地。

親情可以是燈，溫暖柔和；親情也可以是微弱的燭光，不亮卻很輝煌。不管怎么說，親情一定是無價的寶藏。

沒有了親情，世界變得荒蕪、凄涼；沒有了親情，生命則無法繁衍后代；沒有了親情，生活就單調(diào)枯燥；沒有了親情，人間也成了地獄。

親情是溝通兩代之間思想交流的橋梁，是一條連結兩顆心的紐帶。“兄弟姐妹原是天上掉下的水花，誰也不認得誰。但落在地下后，結成一體，結成冰，化成水，就永遠也分不開了。”

“臨行密密封，意恐遲遲歸”，是親情。“我在這頭，母親在那頭”，也是親情。

無價的親情呵，愿我們在你的鼓舞下，駛向美好燦爛的明天。關于親情的影片..我看這部影片時,心情很沉重,流淚了.我想,不論一個人的出身是多么卑微,只要我們能夠記住親情的鼓舞與期待,只要我們我們?nèi)タ炭嗯?只要我們在心理上能夠戰(zhàn)勝自己,那么我們就是生活的強者!