第一篇：高中英語寫作難點調查及啟示

高中英語寫作難點調查及啟示

應玉璐 浙江師范大學

摘要：本文先結合國內外研究探討寫作在英語學習中的地位，闡述新課標的要求，以及分析不同范疇的寫作難點；然后開展問卷調查，對調查結果進行定量分析，以找出高中英語寫作的現存難點；最后，為師生提高英語寫作提出了一些可行的方法。

關鍵詞：寫作；寫作難點；高中

一、引言

寫作是英語四項語言技能之一,也是最難的一項。Tribble 強調學生應“寫中學”而不是“學著寫”(Wang, Mochu 2)。然而,我國高中英語的寫作狀況卻不容樂觀。寫作是一項輸出的活動，能夠反應語言的輸入好壞(Gu, Yuhong 2)，盡管研究眾多，卻很少有關注英語寫作難點，涉及中國高中英語寫作教學的就更少了

二、文獻綜述

（一）寫作的作用

寫作在英語學習中起著重要的作用。王初明教授的《外語寫長法》(2005)認為寫作是一項綜合語言技能，可以提高外語能力。根據其對于寫作和詞匯記憶方面的研究，王初明認為在寫作中運用過的單詞更易被學生記?。╕ao, 2005）。

（二）寫作難點分析

高 中生英語寫作中存在的問題綜述如下。語言知識層面，包括詞匯、句式和語法等。詞匯方面：詞形誤用，詞義誤用，搭配失誤，臨時造詞。句式方面：漢語句式，漢 語詞序，句式混淆，詞語堆砌。語法方面：思維定勢，知識負遷移，細節遺忘。篇章結構方面：忽略關聯詞和忽視主題句，致使語句雜亂無序，行文不流暢，語境主 題思想不突出。高中生英語寫作難點調查

3.1 研究問題

1.高中生英語寫作的難點有哪些？

2.有哪些辦法來提高其英語寫作水平?

3.2 研究對象

75名來自浙江省東陽中學的高二學生參與調查，他們的英語水平不一。

3.3 數據收集

數據收集采用以問卷調查的形式，參考《大學生英語寫作難點》(王文宇,俞希

32)。

3.3 結果討論

高中生在詞匯，語法，內容和語篇組織有困難。其中，詞匯和語法是最大的困難。學生的詞匯量有限，寫作時單詞量沒有變化，習慣中式英語，用中文逐字翻譯。英語寫作難中占主導地位的困難是語法困難（Peng,2003）。學生傾向簡單句，習慣中文思維，錯句病句連篇，作文只停留在字面意思上，只根據題目綱要機械翻譯。大部分學生不知道要寫什么，怎么寫。

未完........原上草職稱論文

第二篇：高中英語寫作教學的啟示

高中英語寫作教學的啟示

1.全國高考英語書面表達題命題方向預測

（1）進一步體現高中英語新課改理念，引導考生觀察生活，關注社會

《普通高中英語課程標準（實驗）》提出了我國高中英語課程改革的要求，也為高考英語語言測試提供了依據。其中關于學生語言技能目標八級的寫作要求是：能根據所讀文章進行轉述或寫摘要；能根據用文字及圖表提供的信息寫短文或報告；能寫出語意連貫且結構完整的短文，敘述事情或表達觀點和態度；能在寫作中做到文體規范、語句通順。筆者認為，2012年全國高考英語書面表達題命制的基本方向是：進一步體現高中英語新課改的方向，引導考生觀察生活、關注社會、注重語言基礎和語言能力運用、注重語言及選材的時代性、注重語言隱含的情感態度及文化意識。

（2）凸顯發散性、開放性的設題理念

近年來，高考英語命題專家都在不斷總結經驗，探索在應用文、記敘文和論說文這些體裁中，簡化提示語言，找到短文寫作題開放性與限制性之間的結合點。這種寫作題型要求考生在給出的特定情景下按照特定的要求，開放式地發表評論、抒發情感，讓考生有最大限度的發揮，突顯了議論文的特點，對考生的語言組織能力和創新能力提出了更高的要求。

發散性、開放性的短文寫作題能培養學生的想象能力和發散思維能力，能更加真實地考查考生實際運用語言的能力，能有效地拉開考生的成績檔次，有利于高校選拔人才。筆者相信，發散性、開放性的設題理念是高考英語書面表達題命制的主流方向。

當然，這種書面表達題型要寫出高質量的文章，會有一定的難度，不可避免地會出現考生偏題、漏要點等問題，這也給試卷評閱工作增加了不少難度。

2.高考英語書面表達題備考方略

寫作的過程是對語言的認知過程，寫作能力在很大程度上反映了考生的英語認知水平。高中英語教師在高考復習中，要立足基礎，不斷加強考生短文寫作基本功的訓練，提高他們的語言組織能力和創新能力。

（1）培養能力，加強英語短文寫作基本功的訓練

高考是一種終結性評價，高考命題的指導思想是知識立意與能力立意相統一?！镀胀ǜ咧杏⒄Z課程標準（實驗）》強調：終結性評價要注重考查學生綜合語言運用能力。從本質上說，知識屬于認識的范疇，而能力屬于實踐活動的領域。知識與能力是相互依存并相互促進的，兩者都是學習的結果。能力的形成和發展離不開知識的積累，知識的積累又會更好地促進能力的形成和發展。

高考英語書面表達旨在考查考生綜合運用語言的能力，包括用英語獲取信息、處理信息、分析問題和解決問題的能力，以及用英語進行思維和表達的能力和跨文化交際的能力。

學生的短文寫作是一個創造性的過程，也是一個解決問題的過程。教師應讓考生清楚高考英語短文寫作對自身能力的要求，加強短文寫作基本功的訓練，培養他們快速捕捉話題和情景要點的能力。高考英語書面表達的基本功主要體現在以下幾個方面：

一是卷面整潔、書寫工整、文理通順、前后連貫、有點有面、層次分明、有條不紊；

二是能在限定的時間內，準確、快速地捕捉短文寫作的話題要點，不偏題，不漏要點；

三是能熟練地運用自己所學的詞語、句型結構和修辭手段去遣詞造句，努力做到長、短句交替運用，開頭和結尾相互呼應；

四是能在句與句之間使用一些能清晰表達邏輯結構的連接詞或句子，使文章上下銜接自然、流暢。

（2）立足基礎，處理好閱讀與寫作的關系

閱讀和寫作都是建立在語篇的基礎上的，閱讀可以為寫作積累材料和寫作經驗。在高中英語教學中，教師應立足基礎，幫助學生盡量擴大閱讀量，并注重精讀與泛讀的結合，有計劃地閱讀各種體裁與題材的語言材料，尤其要涉獵交際功能強、實用性強、有時代感的應用文、說明文。

通過學習、借鑒、模仿、操練、強化、鞏固等潛移默化的閱讀環節，考生就能較好地掌握詞匯、語法、固定句式、固定搭配、習慣用語等方面的基礎知識，構建穩固、豐富的英語寫作語料庫，提高短文寫作技巧與語言組織、運用能力。

教師還應注意的是，對考生英語短文寫作的基礎知識一定要反復抓，抓反復。浮光掠影、淺嘗輒止、知其然而不知其所以然、似懂非懂、一知半解都是高考備考的大忌。

（3）總結經驗，掌握英語短文寫作的答題要求和答題方法

首先，考生要認真審題，讀懂題目所給信息，搞清楚具體的要求和內容，然后迅速啟動信息儲存，激活有關背景知識，盡快進入角色和寫作狀態。在寫作過程中，考生應組織好有效的構思，確定好內容要點，并在信息整合的過程中盡可能地優化信息，不在一些無關緊要的方面“流連忘返”。

其次，考生要在優化信息和構思立意、初步確定要點內容的基礎上，列出寫作提綱，統籌安排布局；要注意短文寫作的有關文體格式，考慮好先寫什么，后寫什么。每年高考都有些考生短文寫作時自我感覺良好，走出考場“興沖沖”，查分后卻“灰溜溜”。其主要原因就是在這個環節上考生主次不分，沒有把寫作要點條理化和有序化，沒有重視思維的邏輯性和文章的條理性。

最后，考生要認真檢查，修改潤色。不少考生常常會有意或無意地忽視這個環節。其原因一是沒有預留足夠的認真檢查，修改潤色的時間；二是沒能抓住這個環節的重點?？忌懦粫绣e的心理定勢的干擾，對優化的信息要點進行再檢驗，對寫好的文章逐句進行查漏補缺，檢查一下要點是否遺漏，標點、大小寫是否正確，詞數是否符合要求，并對個別行文錯誤和用詞不當的地方稍作修改。

書面表達是另一個訓練的重點，先抓基礎詞匯、基本寫作句型，在此基礎上，靈活運用“五步法”，具體說來包括：一審、二提、三聯、四查、五寫。另多看往年的高考試卷，了解高考寫作的類型，“最后能背5~8篇不同的范文

第三篇：高中英語寫作

一、圖表作文框架

As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in 作文題目的議題 the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), has been on rise/ decrease(goesup/increases/drops/decreases), significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____.From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.There are at least two the good one due reasons accounting for _____.On the other hand, hand, ______.On to the fact that ______ is ________._______.to that In addition, _______ is Maybe there But are it some responsible for other reasons show ________.the is generally believed reasons are commonly above mentioned convincing.As far as I am concerned, am sure I hold the point of is both view that _______.I sound and my opinion well-grounded.二、書信作文模板

Your address

Month，Date，year

Receiver's address

Dear …，I am extremely pleased to hear from you.And I would like to write a letter to tell you that_____.…… I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/I am looking f0rward to your replies at your earliest convenience.Best regards for your health and success.Sincerely yours，XXX

三、話題作文

Nowadays，there are more and more __ _ in __ _.It is estimated that ___.Why have there been so many ____? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is ______.Besides，_____.The third one is _____.To sum up，the main cause of it is due to _____.It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing，_____.For another thing，_____.All these measures will certainly reduce the number of _____.四、對比觀點作文

(1)要求論述兩個對立的觀點并給出自己的看法。

1.有一些人認為。。

2.另一些人認為。。

3.我的看法。。

The topic of ①-----------------(主題)is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持 A 的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二).Moreover, ④---------------(理由 三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持 B 的理由 一).Secondly(besides),⑥------------------(理由二).Thirdly(finally),⑦------------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的觀點).The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.(2)給出一個觀點，要求考生反對這一觀點

Some people believe that ①----------------(觀點一).For example, they think ② 1

-----------------(舉例說明).And it will bring them ③-----------------(為他們帶來的好處).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④-------------(我不同意該看法的理由一).For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反對的理由之二).Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我對文章所討論主題的看法)

五、闡述主題題型 要求從一句話或一個主題出發，按照提綱的要求進行論述.1.闡述名言或主題所蘊涵的意義.2.分析并舉例使其更充實.The good old proverb----------------(名言或諺語)reminds us that----------------(釋義).Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of all,-----------------(理由一).For example,-------------------(舉例說明).Secondly,----------------(理由二).Another case is that---------------(舉例說明).Furthermore ,------------------(理由三).六、解決方法題型 要求考生列舉出解決問題的多種途徑 1.問題現狀 2.怎樣解決(解決方案的優缺點)In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.First,------------(說明 A 的 現狀).Second,---------------(舉例進一步說明現狀)Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,---------------(解決方法一).For another-------------(解決方法二).Finally,--------------(解決方法三).Personally, I believe that-------------(我的解決方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because--------------(帶來的好處).七、說明利弊題型 這種題型往往要求先說明一下現狀，再對比事物本身的利 弊，有時也會單從一個角度(利或弊)出發，最后往往要求考生 表明自己的態度(或對事物前景提出預測)1.說明事物現狀 2.事物本身的優缺點(或一方面)3.你對現狀(或前景)的看法 Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First----------------(A 的優點之一).Besides-------------------(A 的優點之二).But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that----------------(A 的第一個缺點).To make matters worse,------------------(A 的第二個缺點).Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to---------------(我的看法).(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way,---------------(對前景的預測).)

八、現象說明文 Recently _______,what amazes us most is______________,it is ture that__________.There are many reasons explaining__________________________.The main reason is____________________.what is more_________________________.thirdly_____________ _____________.As

result_______________.Considering all there,________________________.For a one thing_____________________,for another________ ____.In Conclusion____________________.一種事物或現象(負面意義傾向)關于 A 的話題,早已引起了廣泛的社會關注。如今在電視、報紙、日常生活的很多角落，都有越來越多的關于 A 的議論。給 A 一個精確恒定的定義并非易事，因為它的概念涉及了 科學、人性、思想、經濟、社會、自然等廣闊的領域。一般而 言，我們可以這樣描述 A… A 能成為公眾關注的焦點，主要是由于它對個人、集體乃 至整個世界都有著不容忽視的不良影響。認真分析后我們可以看到，A 對社會/世界 /健康的不利有 很多。首先，從最直觀的角度來看，A 的出現直接損害了(這里 加入一句針對性的話，如人類的身體健康和環境的平衡)。(舉 例)。其次，從更深一層次上講，它為人類的精神文明蒙上了 一層陰影。更可怕的是，由于 A 所產生微小利益，卻促成了許 多可悲的人們為其忘乎所以，破壞了人類生存的法則和空間。事實上，A 的出現是社會發展和人類進步的產物，A 所帶 來的危害是人類進化過程中付出的代價。同時，A 的產生來源 于部分人們的自私和趨利性，他們看到的是膚淺和片面的利 益，而從未從整個全局和人類整

體的利益出發去認識和分析 它。這使得 A 始終揮之不去。對此，我奉勸他們，跳出狹小的 角落，用長遠和全局的眼光去重新審視 A。而如今，我們已深受其害，要想消除它的危害，我們必須 從根源上杜絕它的產生，我們每一個人都應給予 A 高度的重 視，用系統的和科學的方法去解決，唯有這樣，避免它帶來更 多損失，我們人類前進的腳步才會更加平穩，更加歡快的邁向 輝煌的明天。One object or phenomenon(negative significance inclination.)A has attracted extensive attention of the society.Nowadays, increasingly more argumentations about A can be found in TV programs, newspapers, ugogo and marry aspects of our everyday life.Since its concept covers vast fields, such as science, humanity, ideology, economy, society and nature, A is difficult to be defined, precisely and fixedly.Generally speaking ,we can describe A as follows:…….A’s status as the focus of public concern mainly results from its in negligible but harmful influence on individuals, collective, and even the whole world.It seems to have a strange power to drive some individuals or organizations to act wrongly.The essence of these wrong actions is:(1)to gain personal, short-term and partial individual interest at the expense of damaging others’ long-term and overall interest;(2)to adopt improper means to win more rewards with less input.Situating under the shadow of A, individuals /organizations and violate natural law merely to obtain temporary, or even illusory interests.However, the result may turn out to be loss of really important and valuable resource or ability.We must keep highly alert of the problems evoked by A, because once the harmful influence accumulates to a certain degree and then spread, it will surely threaten the development of the whole society.Though with various reasons and forms, from the perspective of the essence, the problems brought by A originates from the fundamental principle of human ideology and material production.Thus, we should seek the solutions through setting foot on this principle.Due to the depth and width of A’s harmful influence, we should draft our solutiogogotematically on the basis of deep analysis of A problem.We must acquire our power from technology, management, law and culture terrorm, effectively elimin.九、議論文的框架

(1)不同觀點列舉型(選擇型)There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作 文題目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 觀點一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___觀點一_____.People, this matter.however, Some differ in their opinions on people hold the idea that ___觀點二 _______.In their point of view, on the one hand，___原因一 _______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___觀點二______.firmly support It the As far as I am concerned, I view that __觀點一或二______.is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.(2)利弊型的議論文 Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文題目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __題目議題_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___優點一______.And secondly ___優點二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __討論議題______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺點一 ______.In addition, ____缺點二______.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __ 討論議題____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____討論議題

___.(3)答題性議論文 Currently, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)__作文題目_______.It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.First of all, __途徑一______.In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途徑二_____.Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文題目______, we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.(4)諺語警句性議論文 It is well know to us that the proverb: “ ___諺語_______” has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study.It means ____諺語的含義_______.The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows.(also theoretically)A case in point is ___例子一______.Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____諺語_____.With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____諺語 _____.The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job..ate the shadow of A, and ensures ourselves a bright future.十、實用性寫作(申請信)

Your address（自己的地址，由小到大）Month, Date, year（書信時間）Receiver's address（收信人地址，由小到大）Dear..., I am extremely pleased to hear from you./ to see your advertisement for the position in....And I would like to write a letter to tell you that.../ I am confident that I am suitable for the kind of the job you are advertising..../ I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed.On the one hand,....On the other hand,....I am enclosing my resume for your kind consideration and reference.I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview.I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/ I am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience.Best regards for your health and success.Sincerely yours,

第四篇：高中英語寫作

高中英語寫作模板

模板一：直陳觀點，以例佐證

觀點：More haste, less speed.Before moving to the next step, one needs a practical consideration on what he has already achieved.（欲速則不達）preparation.in one day, it takes one years’ practice to have a good command of the language.If we do not learn from spelling correct words and writing acceptable sentences, we are never able to write a good composition.And without practicing oral English a lot, we can never speak English fluently.If we don’t read and listen a lot and do a lot of efficient exercises, we can not pass English tests.In short, we should have a good foundation if we want to make great achievements in our studies and work or in other things as well.觀點:欲速則不達。移動到下一個步驟之前,需要一個實際的考慮他已經實現了欲速則不達。

從我的觀點來看,我們應做的每一步一步來。人們經常失敗沒有充分的準備。

比如把英語學習。正如羅馬不是一天造成的,它需要一個多年的實踐,有良好的語言。如果我們不學習拼寫正確的單詞和句子寫接受,我們將無法再寫一篇好的文章。練習口語,而很多,我們永遠不能流利地說英語。如果我們不讀,聽了不少,但做大量的練習,我們不能通過英語測試。

簡而言之,我們應該有一個好的基礎,如果我們想讓偉大的成就在我們的學習和工作,或者在其他事情。

模板二：呈現看法，分說原由

觀點：Honesty is the best policy.（誠實為上）

It is true that most of us value honesty highly.Personally I agree that honesty is the best policy.As we know, if one is honest, other people will deeply respect him or her, and are willing to make friends with him or her.In addition, being honest can make people’s life easier and more harmonious(和諧的).There are a lot of examples to support the argument.consumers will not be afraid of being overcharged if dealers are Singapore is a trustworthy society and has a very low criminal rate.There is no doubt that being honest is of benefit to both the state and the individual.We should have the spirit of honesty.這是真的,我們當中的大多數人的價值誠實。就我個人而言,我認為誠實是上策。

正如我們所知道的,如果一個人誠實,別人會非常尊重他或她,并愿意廣交朋友,與他或她。此外,誠實,可以使人們的生活更輕松、更和諧(和諧的)。有很多例子來支持這個論點。舉例來說,消費者不會害怕被索要如果經銷商是誠實的。再比如,新加坡是一個值得信賴的社會,有一個很低的犯罪率。

毫無疑問,誠信雙贏的國家和個人。我們應該本著誠信。

模板三：先抑后揚，肯定觀點

現象：Should the students have the sense of competition?（是否應該培養學生的競爭意識）will do harm to the relationship between people.Besides, don’t want to try hard to succeed so that they can find an excuse of their failure.From my point of view, we should try to encourage students to have the sense of competition because there exists great competition in our modern world.Having the sense of it will certainly be important for students to develop after they leave school.However, we should guide our students to have a correct sense of it, getting them to know that they only have opponents but not enemies.We should also teach our students not to be afraid of failure because everyone may meet it more or less.Instead, try to face to and overcome it.有兩種相反的意見的競爭。有些人認為小,相信它會傷害到人與人之間的關系。除此之外,一些人不想努力成功,以便他們能找到他們的失敗的借口。

從我的觀點來看,我們應該鼓勵學生有強烈的競爭,因為存在著巨大的競爭在現代世界。在這個意義上,這肯定會是重要的,因為學生離開學校后。

然而,我們應該引導學生有一個正確的感覺,讓他們知道他們的對手,但不是敵人只。我們也應該教我們的學生不要害怕失敗,因為大家都可以見到這或多或少。相反,試著去面對和克服它。

模板四：先揚后抑，否定觀點

現象：Can “lucky numbers” bring good luck?（吉祥數字能帶來好運嗎？）lucky numbers that they even spend a lot of money to buy lucky numbers.Many other people hold different ideas about lucky numbers.numbers at all.Numbers and luck are two different things.So far as I’m concerned, I agree with the latter.Obviously, such belief is only a kind of superstition.Perhaps it holds true for some cases, but often it does not.Numbers can never bring good luck to a person at all and our luck is in our own hands.Therefore, everyone can have good luck only if he tries his best.Let’s always remember

在一些人眼里,幸運數字能給他們帶來好運。他們認為這樣高的幸運數字,他們甚至花很多錢去買幸運數字。

很多人持有不同看法幸運數字。他們認為沒有幸運數字。編號和運氣是兩回事。到目前為止我個人而言,我贊同后者。顯然,這種信仰只是一種迷信。也許對有些案例,但是經常,它不適合你。數字都無法帶來好運的人,我們的運氣是掌握在我們自己手里。

因此,每個人都能有好的運氣,只有當他試著自己的最佳狀態。讓我們永遠記住”的機會只有做好準備”和“一分耕耘,一分收獲?！?/p>

模板五：確定主題，分步解說

主題：Reduce waste on campus（減少校園浪費）It is certain that the problem of waste is becoming more and more serious on campus and it’s time for us to reduce it.For one reason, we have already wasted a lot of precious resources such as water and electricity.For another, our waste adds our parents and the society a burden.electricity as much as possible.we should not spend too much money.we should stop wasting water when we bath, or clean faces, or wash clothes or dishes.教師是確信無疑的廢物問題變得越來越嚴重的校園和它的時候,我們必須把價錢降低。因為某種原因,我們已經浪費很多寶貴的資源,例如水和電力。對另一些人來說,我們的浪

費我們的父母和社會增加負擔。然而,有些人還不知道怎樣才能降低校園浪費。這里有一些建議。

首先,我們應該關燈,當我們離開宿舍或教室,以便節省電能當做很多當做可能的。其次,我們不應該花太多錢。第三,我們應該停止浪費水,當我們洗澡,或干凈的面孔,或洗衣服或盤子。

事實上,有不同的解決方法,根據不同的情況。因此,我堅信,我們能夠減少浪費在校園。

模板六：（名諺開篇，烘托觀點）

觀點：Failure is the mother of success.（失敗是成功之母）

People often say,the painter, the doctor and the scientist have failed time and again before they succeed in the end.helpful experiences from them and learn little by little what is the right way to our goal.It seems that failures are the steps in the mountain paths leading up to the peak where success lies.You have to climb the steps in order to reach the top.We should all take a positive attitude to failures and keep on working hard so as to meet with the final success in our studies and careers.人們常說:“失敗是成功之母?！睅缀鯖]有任何成功贏得了沒有失敗。一個畫家可以把許多失敗才使圖紙滿意。醫生可能會嘗試了很多次才找到有效的治療一種怪病?？茖W家可能使數以百計的實驗之前,他得到了他所需要的數據。換句話說,畫家,醫生和科學家都失敗了一次又一次地之前,他們成功。

從上面的例子中,我們可以得出這樣的結論:失敗是很常見的。我們可以得到一些有益的經驗,學一點一點什么是合適的方式,是我們的目標。看來,失敗是一步一步的山路上山頂那里成功的謊言。你必須爬的步驟以達到頂峰。

我們都應該采取積極的態度去失敗,繼續努力,以滿足最終成功的在學習和職業。模板七：實證調研，數據為先

現象：Cell phones in China（手機在中國）

number of cell phones was 85,260,000;in 2002, the number was 180,000,000;in 2003, 206,600,000;in 2004, 269,000,000;while in 2005, the number went up to 315,000,000.From these numbers, we can see the increasing use of cell phones.There are many reasons for this development.Firstly, cell phones are very convenient to be carried everywhere.Secondly, cell phones can make us get news, play games, listen to music and chat through sending short messages.Thirdly, the drop of price, including the phone price and the communication price, has made it possible for an average person to buy one and make more use of it.作為一項調查顯示,手機在中國的普及程度越來越高。在2001年,這個數字手機是85,260,000;2002年,這個數字是18萬元;2003年,206,600,000;2004年,26萬9千人、在2005年,這個數字上升到31.5萬只。從這些數字,我們可以看到越來越多的手機。

這其中有很多理由發展。首先,手機是非常方便攜帶。其次,手機能使我們得到消息,玩游戲,聽音樂,發短信聊天。第三,價格下跌的價格,包括電話溝通的價格,已使得平均每人買一個,讓更多的使用它。

模板八： 正反觀點，各圓己見

話題：Wealth or health, which is the more important?（金錢與健康哪一個更重要?）Some think that wealth means everything.In their eyes, they can have everything done with enough money.Some of them take risky chances to make money only with the result that they get neither wealth nor health.Actually, health is more important than wealth.Health is the foundation of one’s success If one gets sick, it is nearly impossible for him to do his work well.On the other hand, a person suffering from illness, in fact, cannot get any wealth: has to spend a lot of money on the medical treatment;enjoy his wealth.Health is the source of energy and it’s the starting point where everything begins.Therefore, you should exercise every day with proper diet, forming good living habits and trying to avoid any minor disease.一些人認為財富意味著一切。在他們眼中,他們就可以得到每件事,有足夠的錢。他們中的一些人采取冒險的機會賺錢以致他們既不衛生。財富,實際上,健康比財富更重要。健康的身體是事業成功的基礎。如果一個生病,這幾乎是不可能的,他要做自己的工作。另一方面,一個身患疾病,事實上,找不到任何的財富:首先,我來治好他的病,他不得不花大量的錢在醫療;可是對另一位媽媽來說,如果他病了,所以他不能真正享受他的財富。

所以,如果你想變得富有,保持身體健康。健康是能量的來源和它的出發點都開始了。因此,你應該每天鍛煉身體以適當的飲食,形成良好的生活習慣,盡量避免任何次要的疾病。

附：常用英語諺語：

1.Time flies.--------------時間過得真快。

2.Kill two birds with one stone.--------------一舉兩得。

3.Where there is a will, there is a way.--------------世上無難事,只怕有心人。

4.Don’t put the cart before the horse.--------------不要本末倒置。

5.The early bird catches the worm.--------------早起的鳥兒有蟲吃。

6.Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.--------------世上無難事,只怕有心人。

7.A fox may grow gray, but never good.--------------江山易改,本性難移。

8.You cannot eat your cake and have it.--------------魚與熊掌,不可得兼。

第五篇：高中英語寫作

高中英語寫作

作文能力不強一直是同學們比較普遍的問題。其實歸結起來，一共有四類癥狀，深入地剖析這些癥狀，就能找到作文偏科的根本原因，同時寫作時適當地套用一些模板，給寫作能力不好的同學好好進補。癥狀一文體格式混亂

【表現】 讀了作文要求之后，提筆就寫——明明要求寫一封表達建議的書信，結果寫成了議論文；或者明明要求寫說明文，偏偏寫成了記敘文；或者總算文體沒有弄錯，結果寫通知誤用日記的格式，寫書信又誤用通知的格式。

【癥結】平時缺乏作文文體方面的針對性訓練，對英語作文的幾種常用文體及其相應的寫作格式不熟悉，拿到寫作材料習慣性地對寫作要求一掃而過，提筆就寫自己最熟悉的格式。

【突破之道】明確文體和對應格式

常用文體有記敘文、說明文、議論文還有應用文等。近幾年的高考書面表達多以應用文為主，提供的形式多以圖畫、提綱、表格出現，書寫的格式大都是書信、通知。所以，同學們應該掌握書信的稱呼、開頭、正文、結尾、簽名等方面，另外，口頭通知和書面通知的不同要清楚?？傊瑢W們應根據寫作提示分析材料，明確寫作文體和其相應的格式。

癥狀二 時態人稱混亂

【表現】 作文時，時態和人稱運用混亂——時態方面，要么整篇文章都是一種時態（以一般現在時、一般過去時居多），要么就是一段甚至一句話中出現三種以上的時態；人稱方面，要么文章開頭是第一人稱，寫到文中甚至文末就成了第二、第三人稱，要么前面是單數人稱，寫著寫著就變成復數人稱。

【癥結】 英語基礎知識不牢固，對英語中時態和人稱所代表的含義及其運用掌握不足，因此無法根據文體來選擇正確的時態和人稱而濫用或者混用。

【突破之道】 明確時態和人稱

同學們要根據選好的文體和寫作內容確定時態和人稱。一般來說，記人敘事多用一般過去時；發布通知多用一般將來時和祈使句式；發表議論大多用帶有情態動詞的一般現在時；人物介紹、現狀說明常用一般現在時和現在完成時。定準時態后接下來一定要知道各時態的構成及用法要點，但要記住，寫作時時態并不唯一，要依據表達內容而選定正確的時態。人稱方面則要注意前后統一，避免出現前后人稱屬性或者單復數不一致的情況。

癥狀三 詞匯運用混亂

【表現】 經常出現亂用詞語的現象，同時使用一些較難的、較長的、用法不熟悉的單詞，或者明明用一些簡單的詞匯就能夠很清楚地表達意思，偏偏要選擇一些難度較大的、不常用的表達方式。

【癥結】 寫作時對文章的脈絡把握不足就匆匆下筆，對其中所需的詞匯和常用表達方式理解記憶不牢固。平時練習時，習慣性地忽略一些形式簡單但用途較廣泛的基本詞匯和表達方式，喜歡選擇復雜的詞匯和表達方式。

【突破之道】確定所需主要詞匯和所用表達結構

應該根據文章體裁和內容逐個確定寫作要點。對于圖畫和圖表可在草稿紙上用中文列出并理清要點，然后選詞造句，要注意語言的準確得當，力求用最簡潔的話表達準確的意思。同時，平時寫作要多進行發散思維，例如，是用ｖｅｒｙｓｏｒｒｙ還是ｔｅｒｒｉｂｌｙｓｏｒｒｙ，是ｓｕｒｐｒｉｓｅｄ還ａｓｔｏｎｉｓｈｅｄ。同學們應學會盡可能避免使用較高級的語法結構和詞匯，如非謂語動詞、復合句等，以免造成過失性失分.癥狀四語序句序混亂

【表現】 作文的語序、句序混亂，通常這里寫一點，跳過去又另起一點，這樣造成要么文章洋洋灑灑一大篇卻全是廢話，沒有中心和重點，什么都沒有表達清楚；要么通篇沒有適當的過渡詞、句，整篇文章一“逗”到底，密密麻麻讓人找不著北。

【癥結】平時練習時不注意表達的連貫性，想到哪里就寫到哪里，寫作之前沒有列提綱的習慣，不去深入

思索怎樣表達才能達到最好的效果，從而造成整篇文章邏輯思維混亂，層次不清晰。

【突破之道】 整理成篇 行文連貫

同學們應該根據寫作內容列好簡要提綱，分清文章的層次，確定詳略，寫好的單句要重新排列組合起來，使之前后連貫成一篇完整的文章。同時選用恰當的關聯詞或句子使文章過渡自然，行文流暢。另外，該分段時要分段，這樣文章才能中心突出，一目了然，整篇作文才能如行云流水般整齊劃一

高中英語作文萬用模板-圖標作文

As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table/picture,____ has been on rise/ decrease, significantly/dramatically rising/decreasing from ____ in _____ to _____ in _____.From the sharp rise/decline in the chart, it goes without saying that _____.There are at least two good reasons accounting for _____.In one hand, ____.In the other hand, _____ is due to the fact that ______.In addition, ______ is responsible for _____.Maybe there are some other reasons to show ______.But itis generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______.I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.高中英語作文萬用模板-書信作文模板

Your address

Month, Date, year

Receiver's address

Dear...,I am extremely pleased to hear from you.And I would like to write a letter to tell you that_____.??

I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/I am looking f0rward to your replies at your earliest convenience.Best regards for your health and success.Sincerely yours,高中英語作文萬用模板-話題作文

Nowadays, there are more and more __ _ in __ _.It is estimated that ___.Why have there been so many ____? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is ______.Besides,_____.The third one is _____.To sum up, the main cause of it is due to _____.It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing,_____.For another thing, _____.All these measures will certainly reduce the number of _____.高中英語作文萬用模板-對比觀點作文

_____ is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some people say ____ is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ____.What is more,_____。Moreover,______.While others think that _____ is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,_____.Secondly(besides),______.Thirdly(finally),_____.From my point of view, I think _____.The reason is that _____.As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.最近，你校同學正在參加某英文報組織的一場討論。討論的主題是：公園要不要收門票?請你根據下表所提供的信息，客觀地介紹討論情況。

60％的同學認為40％的同學認為

1．不應該收門票1．應收門票，但票價不要太高

2公園是公眾休閑的地方2．支付園林工人工資

3如收門票，需建大門、圍墻，會影響城市形象3．購新花木