第一篇:領(lǐng)悟英語寫作要點(diǎn)
體驗(yàn)式英語教育先鋒美聯(lián)英語
領(lǐng)悟英語寫作要點(diǎn)
1.副詞短語的使用,如(b):
(a)Steel is commonly used to make knives, razors and other useful tools because of its durability.(b)Because of its durability, steel is commonly used to make knives, razors and other useful tools.2.把句子中一系列的項(xiàng)目作邏輯性的排列。例如:
(1)Tony ate his dinner, watched TV, and then went to bed.(2)Were you bored with years of study in elementary school, high school and institute of higher education?
3.必要時,重復(fù)重要的語詞或概念。例如:
(1)Jackie enjoys the company of ladies.He likes their beauty, he likes their delicacy, he likes their vivacity, and he likes their silence.(2)...the land stretched out without names.Nameless headlands split the surf;nameless lakes reflected the nameless mountains and nameless rivers flowed through nameless valleys and nameless bays.4.盡量用主動語態(tài),因此(b)比(a)好:(a)A pedestrian was struck on the head by a flying stone.(b)A flying stone struck a pedestrian on the head.5.適當(dāng)時候,可用倒裝句和平行句,如:(1)Seven dwarfs lived here in the center of the dark forest.Here, in the center of the dark forest lived seven dwarfs.(2)Severity breeds fear;roughness breeds hatred.(3)Honesty recommends that I speak;self-interest demands that I remain silent.
第二篇:英語寫作要點(diǎn)
英語寫作重點(diǎn)
一、英語大作文(滿分15分)
大綱所列的題型一共有4種,分別是圖表分析、現(xiàn)象分析、看圖說話、正反觀點(diǎn)。其中06、07年考察的是圖表分析,08年是現(xiàn)象分析,09年是正反觀點(diǎn),10年和11年考察的都是圖表分析。看圖說話歷年還未考察過,也要復(fù)習(xí)。
(1)圖表分析:第一段描述圖表,第二段分析原因或影響(按照題目要求),第三段預(yù)測或建議(按照題目要求,一般來說,反映的是正面現(xiàn)象,寫預(yù)測,負(fù)面現(xiàn)象寫建議)。其中每一段的模板參照講義P81-P85頁),其中P79頁和P80頁的兩篇范文是重點(diǎn)。
(2)現(xiàn)象分析:第一段描述現(xiàn)象,第二段分析原因或影響(按照題目要求),第三段預(yù)測或建議(按照題目要求,一般來說,反映的是社會正面現(xiàn)象,寫預(yù)測,負(fù)面現(xiàn)象寫建議)。現(xiàn)象描述第一段的模板參見講義P95頁,第二段和第三段的模板同圖表分析,但需注意把其中的changes替換成phenomenon。
(3)看圖說話:第一段描述圖畫,第二段闡述寓意(即跟社會現(xiàn)實(shí)相結(jié)合),第三段多為建議(因?yàn)橐话銇碚f漫畫反映的是負(fù)面現(xiàn)象,適合寫建議)。
第一段及第二段模板參見講義P96-97頁,第三段模板同圖表分析建議段。
(4)正反觀點(diǎn):第一段觀點(diǎn)綜述,第二段分析正反兩種觀點(diǎn),第三段自己的觀點(diǎn)。模板參見講義P109-P110頁。
綜上,也就是說第(1)、(2)、(3)種作文模板除了第一段模板不同,第二、三段模板基本相同,第(4)種作文獨(dú)立為一個模板。自己需要發(fā)揮的部分呢,最好是把講義P114頁的18大功能句型,以及范文里面的萬能廢話記住會很有幫助。每次模考的寫作范文是記憶重點(diǎn),因?yàn)槟?嫉淖魑氖蔷o扣今年的社會熱點(diǎn),帶押題的性質(zhì)。
二、英語小作文
大綱所列的題型一共有五種:信件(下面包含10中以上不同信件)、便簽、備忘錄、告示、摘要寫作。從2010增加小作文開始,都是考察信件。信件為復(fù)習(xí)重點(diǎn),其余幾種參見書上范文看看格式即可。
信件的格式參考P153頁范文。
信件一般寫3段,第一段:開門見山說明目的,第二段:具體信息,第三段:感謝/道歉/期待/聯(lián)系方式(根據(jù)信件類型的不同靈活選擇其中的一種或幾種)
其中,開頭說明目的以及結(jié)尾的感謝、道歉、期待、聯(lián)系方式的寫法有模板,也就是P153頁-P168頁這些范文的結(jié)尾幾句,范文中用黑體字標(biāo)出來的都是模板。為了避免所有同學(xué)雷同,所以我沒法每一中信件給一個模板。
第三篇:英語日記格式-英語日記格式 英語日記寫作格式及要點(diǎn)
英語日記格式-英語日記格式 英語日記寫作格式及要點(diǎn)
家長千萬別覺得,讓孩子寫英文日記是很難的事情,剛開始學(xué)英語,可以從一句話日記寫起,孩子在思索的過程中,其實(shí)就在培養(yǎng)孩子用英語去思考問題的習(xí)慣,每天堅(jiān)持下去,不僅能提高你們對語言的運(yùn)用能力,同時更能不斷促進(jìn)和復(fù)習(xí)鞏固所學(xué)的英語知識,從而進(jìn)一步提高孩子的寫作水平。
日記是人們對日常生活的記錄,即用來記述自己一天生活的所見、所聞、所問、所思、所感。英語日記格式
sunday may 21,xx sunny
going on a picnic
today was sunday.the weather was fine and warm.the sky was very clear and blue.my classmates and i were very happy,because we went out for a picnic at nanshan hill.we went to nanshan hill by bike with fruits,eggs,meat,vegetables,knives and some other things.about one and a half hours later,we came to a nice place at the foot of the hill.there were many beautiful flowers and green trees.birds sang their sweet songs.how pleased we were!then we were busy with the picnic.some of us were getting water,some were cutting the meat and vegetables and cook,others were sitting on the grass and waiting for nice lunch.at about 13 o”clock,our lunch was ready.we all sat around on the green grass,singing,talking,eating and drinking.at about 16:00 we began packing for our return.what a nice time we were having!
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第四篇:小學(xué)英語日記寫作格式及要點(diǎn)[推薦]
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today was sunday.the weather was fine and warm.the sky was very clear and blue.my classmates and i were very happy,because we went out for a picnic at nanshan hill.we went to nanshan hill by bike with fruits,eggs,meat,vegetables,knives and some other things.about one and a half hours later,we came to a nice place at the foot of the hill.there were many beautiful flowers and green trees.birds sang their sweet songs.how pleased we were!then we were busy with the picnic.some of us were getting water,some were cutting the meat and vegetables and cook,others were sitting on the grass and waiting for nice lunch.at about 13 o"clock,our lunch was ready.we all sat around on the green grass,singing,talking,eating and drinking.at about 16:00 we began packing for our return.what a nice time we were having!
[點(diǎn)評] 小作者能用準(zhǔn)確、地道的語言,簡練的語句非常生動地描寫出了野炊的場面。
這篇文章條理清楚,尤其是“ some …
第五篇:小學(xué)英語日記寫作格式及要點(diǎn)
小學(xué)英語日記寫作格式及要點(diǎn)
日記是人們對日常生活的記錄,即用來記述自己一天生活的所見、所聞、所問、所思、所感。英語日記格式通常由兩部分構(gòu)成,即書端和正文。下面就是英文日記格式各部分的書寫格式示意圖:
Date(日期)Weather(天氣)
Title(標(biāo)題)
The body of the diary(日記正文)
那么,小學(xué)生寫英語日記還應(yīng)注意哪些問題呢?
1.注意日期、星期和天氣的書寫位置。
日期和星期要寫在正文的左上角,其順序多是“星期 + 月、日、年”,也有把星期放在后面的,如“ 2003 年 11 月 22 日,星期一”可寫為“ Monday November 22,2003 或 November 22,2003 Monday ”。天氣情況應(yīng)寫在正文的右上角,如: Fine,Rainy,Cloudy,Windy 等。
2.關(guān)于標(biāo)題的書寫。
在日期和天氣的下一行中間可以寫上日記小標(biāo)題,也可以不寫標(biāo)題。
3.關(guān)于正文的書寫。
正文是關(guān)于一天生活的記載,也是日記的主題。在書寫正文時要做到: 1)要選擇當(dāng)天感受最深刻、最有意義的事件來描述,不要寫成簡單的流水帳;2)日記的內(nèi)容多是親身經(jīng)歷和耳聞目睹的事情,所以要用第一人稱來寫;3)日記多是在當(dāng)天晚上來記述當(dāng)天發(fā)生過的事情,因?yàn)閯釉~時態(tài)常使用過去時,但使用時必須靈活掌握,如景物描寫、議論某事、對話引語等要使用現(xiàn)在時態(tài);4)日記應(yīng)以時間發(fā)生的先后順序來展開,并且要簡明扼要,條理清楚,寫出真實(shí)感。
[精彩舉例]
Sunday May 21,2003 Sunny
Going on a Picnic
Today was Sunday.The weather was fine and warm.The sky was very clear and blue.My classmates and I were very happy,because we went out for a picnic at Nanshan Hill.We went to Nanshan Hill by bike with fruits,eggs,meat,vegetables,knives and some other things.About one and a half hours later,we came to a nice place at the foot of the hill.There were many beautiful flowers and green trees.Birds sang their sweet songs.How pleased we were!Then we were busy with the picnic.Some of us were getting water,some were cutting the meat and vegetables and cook,others were sitting on the grass and waiting for nice lunch.At about 13 o"clock,our lunch was ready.We all sat around on the green grass,singing,talking,eating and drinking.At about 16:00 we began packing for our return.What a nice time we were having!
[點(diǎn)到為止]
小作者能用準(zhǔn)確、地道的語言,簡練的語句非常生動地描寫出了野炊的場面。這篇文章條理清楚,尤其是“ some … some …,others …”句型,以及 singing,eating 等現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語的運(yùn)用,使這篇日記增色不少。本文結(jié)尾使用了一個感嘆句,更加反映出小作者對這次野炊的真實(shí)情感。
[展廳發(fā)布會]
同學(xué)們平時都有用中文寫日記的習(xí)慣吧。在學(xué)過 Lesson 78 之后,再根據(jù)我們今天“作文展廳”的講解,希望你們每天能把中文日記改用英文來書寫。因?yàn)椋刻靾?jiān)持寫英語日記不僅能提高你們對語言的運(yùn)用能力,同時更能不斷促進(jìn)和復(fù)習(xí)鞏固所學(xué)的英語知識,從而進(jìn)一步提高你們的寫作水平。