第一篇：考研寫作

北京新東方學校國內考試部考研寫作主講教師，王江濤

2011考研英語寫作的復習

一、考研寫作的命題趨勢

二、考研寫作的學習方法

一、考研寫作的命題趨勢

（一）王江濤老師

1990年北京外國語大學本科英語專業

1998年北京大學 碩士

2003年開始在新東方教寫作

（二）分析2010考研英語

1、比較難

2、教育部公布的復試分數線：絕大部分專業的英語復試分數線比09年低

至少降低1分；最多的，藝術專業降低了10分，09年42分，10年32分

3、為什么10年分數線降低？因為英語難，尤其寫作難。

4、考研大綱5年一變化：

04年增加了新題型，寫作變成了2篇

10年，研究生分為2類，一類叫做學術型研究生，一類叫做專業學位研究生。

5、教育部規定，考研英語分為英語

一、英語二。對英語要求高的專業，像法律碩士、醫學碩士考英語一，一些專業學位類，像工商管理碩士，藝術碩士考英語二。

6、英語一是201，稍微難一些，英語二是204，稍微簡單一些。

（三）分析2010考研英語寫作

1.英語一小作文考察的是告示：代表研究生會寫一篇告示，招募志愿者。

2、考研大綱提到的2種題型：書信類應用文---書信、備忘錄、報告

摘要---給一篇中文文章，寫一篇英文摘要。

3、2010年考察的告示在大綱解析中有提過，不屬于超綱

4、英語二考察的是書信。

5、針對考研寫作，王江濤老師希望大家全面復習，并送給一句話：Nothing is impossible。

6、2011考研無論考英語一還是英語二，小作文有三種題型：這三種題型的可能性各占1/3，即：書信類應用文：書信、備忘錄、報告；摘要；告示7、2010英語二的大作文考察的是圖表作文，關于手機入網。

8、2010英語一的大作文考察的圖畫作文：畫著一只火鍋，火鍋里面有很多文字，像儒，佛，道，仁，禮，包括啟蒙，后現代，人本，結構，莎士比亞，愛因斯坦，老舍，畢昇，功夫，天鵝湖，梁祝，京劇。另外圖畫下面有一個文字說明，文化火鍋既美味又營養。

9、2010英語大作文的主題是什么？

是正面圖畫還是反面圖畫？

如果認為是反面圖畫---跑題了。

如果認為正反都有---跑題了。

這個圖畫是正面圖畫。

如果你空洞的去寫文化，那是沒有分的。

這個圖畫的主題應該是文化融合，或者是多元文化，也就是文化融合對世界有好處。

10、針對2011年考研寫作大作文

英語一：70%考圖畫作文，圖畫或照片

30%會考圖表作文，表格、數據、另外還包括提綱作文，一道題目，三點提綱，；以及情景作文，一段話，可以是中文的，也可以是英文的，沒有提綱，也沒有圖畫，圖表

英語二：70%考圖表作文，30%考圖畫作文，情景作文和提綱作文

（四）小結

不管你考英語一還是英語二，考研英語都會越來越難，寫作也會變難；

小作文，書信，告示，摘要這三種題型各占1/3，希望你全面復習；

大作文，英語一重點是圖畫作文英語二重點是圖表作文，但也希望你全面復習。

二、考研寫作的學習方法

三個階段，六個字：六字真經

（一）背誦

-----背誦是提高考研寫作最好的方法，也是提高英語實力最好的方法

1、背什么？----20大必背范文，10篇小作文，10篇大作文，小作文100字左右，大作文200字左右

2、文章都背了，但是上了考場還是不會寫？---有2個原因，第一個背的不熟

第二個沒有練過

3、背誦的程度---滾瓜爛熟，脫口而出，多多益善

4、學好寫作：大聲朗讀，大聲背誦

5、語感養成：大量背誦

6、要想考上研：每天早晨：半小時晨讀，大聲朗讀20大必背范文

（二）默寫

1、仔細對比原文，發現寫作弱點----拼寫、標點、語法錯誤。

2、默寫的程度：小作文8分鐘100詞，大作文15分鐘200詞。

（三）仿寫

1、思考詞匯、詞組、句型，換別的話題也能用。

背誦之后合上書，根據記憶仿寫。

2、用什么練習仿寫：用真題。

考研的詞匯固定、詞組固定、句子結構固定、篇章結構固定、選項設置固定、出題規律固定、考點固定 《考研英語高分寫作》以真題為主

考研寫作真題如何研究？----小作文05-09年一直在考書信，有2種書信反復考，第一種道歉信，考過2次，05，08年，給對方寫過一封信，表示道歉；

第二種建議信，給對方寫一封信提出建議，考過3次，07給圖書館，08給房東，既是道歉信也是建議信，是兩種書信的結合。

考研寫作的命題規律----反押題，逆向思維

最常見的出題思路：將以前的經典考題，改頭換面，再次考，比如今年的告示，是06年6月17號四級考題；今年的火鍋是02年的考題

考研寫作大作文六個話題反復考：

健康2次：96年提綱作文（健康），97，圖表作文（吸煙）

愛心5次： 95年（希望工程），98年（企業），01（愛心是盞燈），06（小作文：給希望工程捐款）

環境：91（城鄉差別：住在城里還是鄉下），99（圖表，保護野生動物），2000（世界商業捕魚簡史，圖畫作文，保護海洋資源，），09（小作文，限制使用塑料袋）

兩代關系：92（父母與子女溝通），03（溫室花朵經不起風），05（養老足球

賽）

文化5次：1類----文化交流、文化融合：02年、10年

2類-----流行文化：93（電視廣告），06（偶像崇拜），09（網絡）

（四）小結

考研寫作復習方法：六字真經，三個步驟----

第一步驟：背誦----滾瓜爛熟、脫口而出、多多益善

第二步驟：默寫

第三步驟：仿寫

背誦內容：20大必背范圍

提高考研寫作最快的方法：背誦考研寫作范文。

三、總結

1、命題趨勢：小作文：書信、告示、摘要各占1/3

大作文：英語一70%圖畫作文，英語二70%圖表作文

2、學習方法：背誦、默寫、仿寫

第二篇：考研寫作

高級英語階段性能力測試

考研看圖作文模板1……針砭時弊型

As is vividly depicted in the caricature/cartoon/picture, [ detailed description] ……At the sight of the picture, many people would immediately associate it with ……, which is in accordance with normal perception.But it doesn't hold true for this particular picture.In my personal sense, what the drawer intends to mirror is the fact that ……

In the increasingly materialistic society of fast development, the social phenomenon of ….is nor rare to be seen and has continued year after year.A good case in point is that……This evokes a question: why …….Some people would argue that…., with the reason being that…...Others, however, don’t see eye to eye with this argument, protesting that ……Admittedly, both of the statements have some truth in it,but they fail to catch the essence of the phonemonen.As a matter of fact, the fundamental reason accounting for this occurrence is that……..The list of causes could go on, but they are already enough to indicate that these …… are producing more and more negative effects on the people as well as the entire society.They have not only made it impossible for…..to…… but also made it harder for man to……..If allowed to run its course, I am afraid, this trend will certainly bring more serious threats to all the living things on the Earth, mankind included.Therefore, it is time we rethought and took some effective way to put it right such as……I am fully convinced that as long as we have strong determination and willpower, the days when……is not far away.考研看圖作文模板2……人生哲理型

Cartoons are often used to represent current public figures or issues symbolically and often satirically or embody something desirable or something that is essential for human beings to survive or survive.This holds true for the drawing presented to us for the time bieng.Vividly and dintinctly, the picture depicts ……What is the message that is supposed to be converyed? Different people may have different intepretations due to their different social expericen and education background.Chances are that some people would probably it indicates the importance of……while others prefer to conclude that it symbolizes ……In my personal sense, this picture is the true reflection of the significance of …..in …..In the present society where competition is becoming growing fierce, people often feel frustrated and depressed in their struggle for success.The reason behind this, I assume, is mainlythe lack of…..A growing number of evidence has proved that …..is key to success.Let me cite a typical and convincing example.If he(or she)had not been ….., he would never be enjoying great fame and popularity with people home and abroad.Another good case in point is that***who once was a constant loser in his study(word, research)but eventually made his mark and brought great contribution to the welfare of human beings.As these examples have illustrated, if you have ….in what you choose to do and in what you want to achieve, you must become the winner in the end.As British novelist and poet G.Eliot puts, it never rain rose.When we want to have more roses

高級英語階段性能力測試

we must plant them.In other words, miracles sometimes occur, but one has to work terribly for them.It could be safely conclude that to ensure one’s ultimate success, being ……is the most important quality one must possess.

第三篇：考研英語寫作必備

考研英語：寫作必備詞匯(一)

中華民族的喜慶節日(Chinese Festivial)國慶節 National Day

中秋節 Mia-Autumn Festival春節 Spring Festival

元宵節 Lantern Festival兒童節 Children‘s Day

端午節 Dragon Boat Festival婦女節 Women’s Day

潑水節 Water-Splashing Day教師節 Teachers’ Day

五四青年節 Youth Day

考研英語：寫作必備詞匯(二)

中國獨特的傳統飲食(Unique Traditional Chinese Foods)

鍋貼 guotie(fried jiaozi)花卷 steamed twisted rolls

套餐 set meal盒飯 box lunch;Chinese take-away米豆腐 rice tofu魔芋豆腐 konjak tofu

米粉 rice noodles餛飩 wonton

火鍋 chafing dish八寶飯 eight-treasure rice pudding粉絲 glass noodles豆腐腦 jellied bean curd冰糖葫蘆 a stick of sugar-coated haws(or apples, etc.)

考研英語：寫作必備詞匯(三)

中國新興事物(Newly Sprouted Things)京九鐵路 Beijing –Kowloon Railway中國電信 China Telecom扶貧工程 Anti-Poverty Project中國移動 China Mobile菜籃子工程 Vegetable Basket Project十五計劃 the 10th Five-Year Plan溫飽工程 Decent-Life Project中國電腦聯網 Chinanet安居工程 Economy Housing Project三峽工程 the Three Gorges Project掃黃 Porn-Purging Campaign希望工程 Project Hope西部大開發 Go-West Campaign

考研英語：寫作必備詞匯(四)

大陸中國 Mainland Chin鐵飯碗 iron rice bowl

紅寶書 little red book大鍋飯 communal pot

紅色中國 socialist China關系戶 closely-related units四化 Four Modernizations外出打工人員 migrant workers終生職業 job-for-life

關系網 personal nets, closely-knitted guild

五講(講文明、講禮貌、講衛生、講秩序、講道德)the Five Merits focus on decorum, manners, hygiene, disciplines and morals

四美(心靈美、語言美、行為美、環境美)the Four Virtues are golden heart, refined language, civilized behavior, and green environment

考研英語：寫作必備詞匯(五)

基層監督 grass-roots supervision婚紗攝影 bride photo

基礎稅率 base tariff level黑心棉 shoddy cotton

婚介所 matrimonial agency機器閱卷 machine scorin

婚外戀 extramarital love

即開型獎券 scratch-open ticket/lottery

集中精力把經濟建設搞上去 go all out for economic development

價格聽證會 public price hearings甲A球隊 Division A Soccer Team家政服務 household management service

加強輿論監督 ensure the correct orientation is maintained in public opinion假帳 accounting fraud叫板 challenge;pick a quarrel

矯情 use lame arguments漸進式臺獨 gradual Taiwan independence借調 temporarily transfer

擴大中等收入者比重 Raise the proportion of the middle-income group.擴大內需，刺激消費expand domestic demand and consumption

安居工程 housing project for low-income urban residents

信息化 information-base ormationization

智力密集型 concentration of brain power knowledge-intensive

外資企業 overseas-funded enterprises下崗職工 laid-off workers分流 reposition of redundant personnel三角債 chain debts

素質教育 education for all-round development

豆腐渣工程 jerry-built projects社會治安情況 law-and-order situation民族國家 nation state臺獨 independence of Taiwan臺灣當局 Taiwan authorities臺灣同胞 Taiwan coMPAtriots臺灣是中國領土不可分割的一部分。

Taiwan is an inalienable part of the Chinese territory.西部大開發 Development of the West Regions

可持續性發展 sustainable development

風險投資 risk investment通貨緊縮 deflation

擴大內需 to expand domestic demand

計算機輔助教學 computer-assisted instruction(CAI)

網絡空間 cyberspace網上購物 shopping online

虛擬現實 virtual reality應試教育 exam-oriented education網民 netizen(net citizen)學生減負 to reduce study load電腦犯罪 computer crime總裁助理 assistant president電子商務 the e-business綜合治理 comprehensive treatment安居工程 housing project for low-income urban residents

信息化 information-based;informationization

智力密集型 concentration of brain power;knowledge-intensive

外資企業 overseas-funded enterprises

下崗職工 laid-off workers分流 reposition of redundant personnel下海 plunge into the commercial sea下網 off line

小康之家 well-off family;comfortably-off family

新秀 up-and-coming star, rising star

新新人類 New Human Being;X Generation信息港 info port形象小姐/先生 image representative of a product or a brand

虛擬網 virtual net學生處 students′ affairs division研究生畢業證/學位證 graduate diploma/graudate degree′sdiploma

搖錢樹 cash cow以人為本 people oriented;people foremost義務教育 compulsory education易拉罐 pop can

應試教育 examination-oriented education system

考研英語：寫作必備詞匯(六)

The classification for the commodities

1.frozen food 速凍食品 5.personal-care supplies 個人護理用品

2.dairy products 牛產品6.toys 玩具

3.packaged foods 包裝食品7.car-care products 汽車護理用品

4.cleaning supplies 清潔用品8.yard-care products 庭院護理用品

考研英語：寫作必備詞匯(七)

Different stores

1.Convienience store便利店2.Grocery store小賣部

3.Supermarke超市4.Drug store藥店

5.Department store商場6.Discount store打折店

7.Factory outlets廠家直銷點8.Specialty shop專賣店

9.Shopping mall/shopping center購物中心

Houshold department

dish 碟子silverware 銀器cooking utensils 廚具

pots 壺pans 鍋

第四篇：考研寫作講義

考研寫作講義

考試類型: 應用文寫作(俗稱小作文, 10分, 建議考場15分鐘完成, 建議字數在100-120之間最好, 低于75字會扣分, 分值10分)

看圖說話作文(中國特色之”看圖大作文”類型, 20分, 建議考場35分鐘完成, 建

議字數在200-230之間最好, 低于160會扣分, 分值20分)

攻克重點: 通常講,所有的國內外高端考試(國內考研, 國外雅思托福GRE/GMAT, 都是字數

要求多的要寫好), 但考研是”雙管齊下”, 小作文重在詞匯，大作文重在內容和表

達。

評分標準:

1． 一共6個檔次，對于坐在這個教室的同學來說只需要關注”四五六”三檔,其他的無意義, 三檔會得到14-18分, 四檔會得到20-24分, 五檔會得到26-30分.2． 所有的作文考試基本都是從四個角度去考察和評分: 觀點, 結構, 論證, 語言,考研也一樣.3． 針對于具體的評分, 我們把握這么一個順序: 很好完成任務, 較好完成任務,基本完成任務.(考研的評分標準依然借鑒的是雅思)

考試內容:

1.小作文包括信件(商務信函和私人信函), 備忘錄, 摘要, 報告, 告示.(前兩種最

可能考到, 從2005年開始小作文到現在這4年考的均為信件, 其他形式沒有出

現過, 05年辭職信, 06年尋找被資助人, 07年建議信, 08年道歉信)

2.大作文主要為圖畫作文, 這是中國人具有”中國特色”的一部分, 目前兩圖和一

圖均出現過, 具體統計為: 兩圖寫作（99、00、03、06、07）一圖寫作（98、01、02、04、05）98年母雞承諾下蛋;99年人口上升和野生動物滅絕加重;00

年海上捕魚95年之對比;01年愛心是盞燈;02年文化影響;03年溫室花朵的兩

種反應;04年終點與起點的意義;05年養老足球賽;06年貝克漢姆崇拜;07年個

人自信;08年一起走南闖北

3.不需在開頭寫題目.4.格式選擇”齊頭空行”或者”每行縮進”均可.5.語言需要使用書面語，比如 ad—advertisement, TV—television, lab—laboratory,exam—examination, dorm—dormitory, can’t—can not（疑問句除外）

6.拼寫選擇美式英語和英式英語均可, 但盡量保持一致, 同時盡量不要出現

chinglish.應考策略:

1.三表原則

表述要……………………..表達要………………………

(詞, 句, 篇, 語法錯誤分析)

表演莫………………………..2.熟悉題型與內容

小作文的類型: 私人信函和商務信函

小作文的內容: 感謝信, 投訴信, 邀請信, 致歉信, 失物招領信, 求職辭職信, 建

議咨詢信.(注意現在的”合二為一”趨勢)

3.確定結構

無論大小作文, 都需要”總分總”模式.4.理由分類（后面有英文部分）/ 5

A.健康(飲食營養/心情放松/生活習慣/煙酒傷害/生命財產安全)

B.便利(交通/娛樂/吃喝/休閑/購物)

C.交流(技巧提高/家人/朋友/同學/同事/領導/網友)

D.習慣與心理(習慣/興趣/樂趣/風俗/傳統)

E.成就感(成功/榮譽感/自信/財富/動力)

F.環保(生態平衡/從植物保護/環境污染)

G.經濟(就業/旅游/收入/稅收/投資)

H.品格(自信/有經驗/堅韌/上進/獨立/負責任/寬容等)

I.教育培訓(科技發展/知識增加/職業選擇)

J.國家文明(民族/社會/世界/文明)

5.語言潤色（復雜句式的練習）

6.話題預測

熱點話題: 房子, 股票, 油價的價格上升

地震給人們心靈和社會帶來的影響

奧運會舉辦的積極意義

網絡道德的嚴重性和法律干涉的必要性

恒久話題: 人際關系(自己與周圍的人以及和社會或者政府的關系)

教育問題(素質教育等)

環保(重要性, 改善狀況, 嚴重后果)

文化差異(積極影響或者消極影響)

個人健康(身體健康和心靈健康)

詞匯匯總：

健康

Dietary nutrition,飲食營養 mentally-relaxed,心理放松 personal life habits個人生活習慣, hazards caused by drinking and smoking抽煙喝酒所帶來的傷害, property security財產安全, life security生命安全

便利

Convenient life方便生活(a wide range of transportation means各式各樣的交通方式, entertainment娛樂, amusement娛樂, recreation休閑, shopping購物)

交流

Communication(communicative skills交流技巧, with family members, classmates, colleagues and netizens網民)

習慣和心理

Personal habits個人習慣

Personal mentality/state of mind個人心態

Local custom/habitual activities當地風俗

Personal interest/preference/fondness/keenness個人興趣和喜好

Family ties/emotional ties/affectionate ties/loving relation/intimate relation家庭關系/情感紐帶/親密關系

Personal likes and dislikes 個人好惡

Sense of achievement 成就感

Succeed/ successful /success/successfully成功

Sense of honor榮譽感

Reputation/fame 名望和聲望

Privilege特權

Fortune/wealth/property/prosperity財富

Well-off/wealthy/rich/prosperous/better-off有錢的Poor/badly-off/worse-off/impoverished貧窮的Confidence/be sure of oneself/hold a strong belief in oneself自信

Motivation/stimulation動機

Mental pressure/stress/tension心理壓力

Environment/environmental protection/conservation/preservation 環境保護

Hold an environmentally-friendly attitude持有環保態度

Ecological balance生態平衡

The preservation of plantation and animals動植物保護

Endangered species/extinct species/fossil瀕危物種/滅絕物種/化石

Pollution/contamination(water/air/light/noise/radiation)污染

Acid rain/global warming/decreased level of icecap/greenhouse effects/stagnant air/gases---dioxide nitrogen/sulphur 酸雨/全球變暖/冰帽水平下降/溫室效應/污染空氣/二氧化氮/二氧化硫/二氧化碳）

Carbon-dioxide)

Economic/economical/financial 經濟

Fund-raising activities 募集資金活動

Investment/input of money, material and labor投資/投入錢物力和人力

Save/conserve/conservation of water/land/material/resources節約用水/土地/資料/資源

Tour/trip/journey/travel/tourism/tourism resources have been overly exploited旅游/旅游資源杯過渡開發

/packed tour/self-help tour/tourguide打包游/自助游/導游

Employment rate/unemployment rate 就業率/失業率

Salary/wage/income/revenue/additional income/earnings/收入

Live within/below/beyond one’s means收支平衡/量入為出/入不敷出

Expense/expenditure/the money one expends花費

Taxation稅收

Quality: experienced/veteran 素質

Competent/competence有能力

Brilliant/intelligent/quick-witted/quick-minded/bright/people with bright mind聰明

Humorous/a strong sense of humor幽默

Cooperative/a strong sense of cooperation/coordination/competition富有競爭力

Persistent/persevering/strong-willed堅持

Aspiring/aggressive/ambitious上進

Independent/a strong sense of independence/live on my own獨立

Responsible/reliable/trustworthy/a sense of responsibility 負責任

Tolerate of/be tolerant of /tolerance寬容

Optimistic/pessimistic 樂觀/悲觀

Modest謙虛

Brave/with courage/heart/daring 勇敢

Kind/warm-hearted/upright/sincere善良

科技

Technology/technological/technician/科技

Technological innovation 科技創新

Education/schooling/upbringing教育/教學/培養

Training 培訓

Advance/progress/development發展

Computer science(cyberize, computerize, insecurity and immorality in the cyber world, addiction in online games)電腦科技（網絡化，電子化，網絡世界的不安全和不道德性，沉迷于網絡游戲

Television(commercial, advertisement, couch potato)電視（廣告，電視迷）

Satellite/man-made satellite/artificial intelligence)衛星（人造衛星，人工智能）

Robots(physical hazards, a big threat to the human beings because of the possible result of unemployment, free the humans from the laborious work)機器人（身體傷害，由于導致失業而對人類產生的威脅，把人類從辛勞的工作中解救出來）

Knowledge(knowledge accumulation, knowledge upgrading, career selection)知識（知識積累i/知識升級/職業選擇）

Job satisfaction, high/low work efficiency)工作滿意，高效工作/低效工作）

About: regarding, concerning, involving, as regards, relating to, with reference to, with respect to, with relation to

Very: fairly, considerably, extraordinarily, remarkably, amazingly, extremely, overwhelmingly, strikingly, exceedingly, dramatically關于

小作文可用詞匯:(開頭目的)

道歉: apologize, make apologetic comments, express my personal sincere apology, express my regret, being apologetic/sorry/regretful.感謝: being grateful/thankful/benedictory for…, thank sb for doing sth, express my appreciation/gratitude/thanks/acknowledgement

投訴: complain about, make my complaints to you, express my disappointment/concern/discontentment/complaints with your…, draw the possible attention from the authority

求學: inquire about the admission to your school, apply for your school, know the detailed procedure of admission to your school

邀請: write this invitational letter to you, invite you to do …, invite you to participate in …, wish you to accept my invitation to do…

求職: being interested in the job/post/position you offered, write the letter to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for the job you offered, as a new applicant of the job you advertised in China Daily, apply for the vacant position of being a … in your company.辭職: quit my job, make the resignation, show my final decision of resigning, send in my papers, leave my current position, find another one to replace me

建議: offer/make my sincere advice/suggestion/suggested ideas/proposal/recommendation, inform you of some of suggested ideas, provide you with some reasonable suggestions for you to consider

結尾詞:

期待: expect, look forward to doing, wish, hope that/hope to do/hope for, long for, desire for, look towards

收到回信: hear from you, receive your early response, be formally notified, await your reply, wait for your early reply if possible

沒有打擾到對方: hope for no inconvenience this might cause, be deeply sorry for the possible trouble, be wholeheartedly indebted to you

盡可能早: as soon as possible, if possible, as early as possible

中間段落的銜接詞:

首先,其次, 然后, 最后: firstly, secondly, thirdly;in the first place, in the second place, in the final place;first and foremost, moreover, additionally, furthermore, eventually, last but by no means least;to start with, to end with, on top of that, in addition to that, added to that, besides, finally, lastly.因果關系: because of/due to/thanks to/owing to/by virtue of/on account of;

Because/for/since/as;as a result/consequence/output;

In consequence/in the end/consequently/accordingly/therefore/thereby/hence/thus 轉折關系：however, nevertheless, on the contrary, by contrast, on the other hand

越來越多: more and more;the number of … is growing/increasing/on the rise/on the increase

A growing number/an increasing number/a rising number of/an expanding numberPeople in growing numbers/in increasing numbers/in expanding numbers

越來越少: 對應換詞即可

第五篇：考研英語寫作

高分范文展示：

The global economy, who is sleeping over that stretcher, like a helpless-sick wreck, is being practiced emergency treatment by worldwidebanking systems, which are trying their best to save the market intensively by cooperation.Conspicuously, that’s a horrible depiction related to/concerning the the world.the top of the list which should never be overlooked.First of all, , as the case of would make its comeback every 10-30 years on the average, so would this time.Furthermore, the overestimation of economic prosperityhas resulted in a great multitude of foams/bubbles in the securities and the realties.gues, who made use of installment policy to speculate in real estate industry, thus, only spending 30% of totally-needed funds in possessing 3 apartments, with the aggregate price over RMB 2 million.Actually, it is not the Day of Judgment.What we are glad to see is the keyword – “cooperation”and we will surely get through this tough period before long.好句寫法：把句子拉長→加修飾：

(1)n.+ who/which/that… 加從句

e.g.Many peopletakeseriously the lifestyle of chasing for luxuries.那些把一個人擁有財產的數量當作評判其社會地位的唯一標準的人們，會很重視追逐奢侈品的生活方式。

(2)n./句子結尾 + v.-ed(en)(被動)/ v.-ing(主動)加分詞（定語后置）

e.g.youngsters, ranging from/who range from 20 to 30 years old ranging fromwith研究發現，和十年前的5%相比，現在有近24%的年輕白領表示不清楚自己想要什么。

(3)n.+ with + n.(修飾語)加限定詞

e.g.A pretty girl → a girl with an angel-like face and a fairy-like figure

e.g.Nowadays, a lot of riches like buying luxurious autos to show/display their success and existence.當今，很多有錢人喜歡通過買豪車來顯示自己的成功和存在。

→These days, withdefined as the typical marks of 句型模仿：

07 閱讀text3最后一段：

From the middle-class family perspective, much of this, understandably, looks far less like an opportunity to exercise more financial responsibility, and a good deal more like a frightening acceleration of the wholescale shift of financial risk onto their already overburdened shoulders.* Looks far less like… a good deal more like… 看起來不像是……而更像是……

模仿→05大作文：養老足球賽

From our conscientious and clear-minded perspective, much of this behavior, undoubtedly, looks far less like like a 依據我們的良知，毫無疑問，大多數這種行為并不能提供合理分配贍養老人義務的機會，相反，它更像是一種加劇中華傳統美德“尊老愛幼”走向大規模衰敗的危險行為

大作文——開頭what、中間why/effect、結尾how

What——虛開頭（首段首句）

(1)坊間流傳多年的所謂經典套話

As can be seen in the picture given above…

→ Asgiven above…

e.g.悲觀樂觀 man, passion-sufficient and energy-continuous, is climbing upon a ladder to reach to his shining blue print.(2)直接描述

e.g.12002年作文：美國女孩穿著中國傳統服飾

There is a beautiful American girl, who is standing over there in a Chinese traditional costume, smiling just like a flower.a Chinese traditional costume.e.g.2 2010年作文：文化“火鍋”，既美味又營養

those dishes and cooking ingredients in a Chinese traditional hot-pot, including e.g.2012年作文：悲觀樂觀 What——[描述+寬泛、宏觀的點評]（首段第二句）

It is aa significant information that 主題has been in the spotlight in current society主題 has aroused wide concern at any corner of our social consensus.e.g.家庭成員關系 * 首段第二句和第二段首句應該有一定層次感，首段第二句提出一個觀點/現象，第二段首句再將其具體化/細節化，直擊中心。

Why/Effect——實開頭：（主題句）+ 原因/影響（內部：自身 / 外部：社會、媒體）+ 例子

(1)主題句：

Among the topic concerning主題（抽象）, as the depiction/picture shows, the most cardinal tip is related to the issue of主旨中心思想（具體）.e.g.家庭關系

Among the topic concerning the depiction shows, the most e.g.出國留學人數/考研人數/公務員人數(2)引出原因

Several factors could weigh heavily for the happening of ____, yet, suspended at the top of the list are the following two aspects.To begin with, _____.Additionally, _____.e.g.中國傳統文化/美德的缺失(3)引出影響

It is hardly necessary for me to cite all the evidence of the revolutionary influences(that)the 現象 gives rise

to.To begin with, … Apart from… ,* 表示導致的短語：Contribute to Result in/trigger/induce/spell/invite

* 表示原因：inducement/incentive

e.g.人人考公務員 result in.To begin with, … Apart from … , * Apart from用法：Apart from(mentioned above), …(new information)= Besides, … , Google could owe its success to the brilliance of its founders, Sergey Brin and Larry Page.* 表示歸因于：owe/ascribe/attribute… to …

(4)舉例子

A good case blowing my mind now is 人/物, who/which …

e.g.慈善/真正的成功

A good case blowing my mind now is a world well-known man, whose name is Bill Gates, industry after his retirement.* 例子不能單獨提出，例子前面要有一個論點，或者在例子后面要有一個點評和結論，這樣才是一個完整的舉例（名人名言也同理）。

How——提出建議（Suggestion）：規則、思想、行為

(1)制定規則：

Lay down/Establish the effective/reliable/available/practical regulations to …呼應主題.（敬老）（保護環境）（留學）

(2)改變思想：

Deliver the moderate 主題詞 outlook to guide us both physically and mentally.e.g.Deliver the moderate outlook to guide us both physically and mentally.成功觀/生活觀/物質觀/世界觀/知識觀/能源觀

(3)規范行為：

Exert/Implement/Practice the rational 主題詞 manners to live in a much more harmonious/compatible atmosphere/circumstance.circumstance.(4)補充說明方法：名人名言（適用于最后一段提完建議之后）

萬能套話：

As a classic saying goes,千里之行，始于足下

應用：提完建議之后

Yet, it is very probable to say without any exaggerationthat depending on the lack of 主題詞, many citizens/youths would have immersed in such an extreme condition for a long time.Does it have opportunities for us to make achange ? / Is it possible to make a change? Actually, as a classic saying goes, “a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step”.We will surely handle/optimize/refrain from … as long as the above mentioned proposals would be implemented immediately.e.g.養老 Actually, as a classic saying goes, “a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step”.We will surely refrain from as long as the above mentioned proposals would be implemented immediately.e.g.奢侈浪費

Yet, it is very probable to say without any exaggeration that depending on the lack time.Does it have opportunities for us to make a change? Actually, as a classic saying goes, “a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step”.We will surely mentioned proposals would be implemented immediately.特別講解：主體段落的展開（第二段）

(1)單向話題：要么褒，要么貶

原因展開：

The factors contributing to… are vastly complex.Some attribute it to ….Others place the blame on / Others place the high value on ….Still the rest complain of/ attach importance to …

e.g.為什么很多年輕人最終會抽煙

The factors contributing to a big rise in are vastly complex.Some attribute it to(2)雙向話題

e.g.中國傳統風俗習慣的改變是好還是壞

According to my humble perspective, every sword is double-edged.is both positive and negative.To begin with, it goes without denying that the new-changed customs and habits have distinct advantages.On one hand, they On the other hand, they eliminate “culture gap” to Although / Whilebidding farewell to the bygones enjoys considerable merits, it still have their own drawbacks when the following point is taken into account.A good case coming to my mind now isof the Chinese virtues – raising seniors.After all, * 舉例子的時候，要實現從手段到效果的跨越（我們要怎么做來達到什么效果）

小作文——Simplified（簡明扼要）字數：100-120

* 大作文的套話和模板不能用在小作文中！

* 小作文寫作時必須覆蓋每個題目要求的要點

(1)Letter——郵件、信件：生活化/接地氣

a)邀請信

學術邀請（充滿敬意）：

開頭：正式邀請（含參會時間和主題）

主體：介紹會議安排

結尾：希望得到正式回復，并確認

Dear Professor ___,It is my great honor to extend you our sincere invitation of an academic forum held on 具體時間 in/at 地點,which focuses on the topic of主題

The forum mentioned above will be arranged as followings.Firstly at 8 a.m.will start the 主題involves.Afterwards, there will be another arrangement, including ___.Then at around 時間, 另一個安排.I really hope you can make it.If it is possible, I would like to ask you for sending me your bank

account, and I’ll pay you 40 percent of the total lecture fees as the deposit.最后期限.落款

范文：

Dear Professor Liu,It is my great honor to extend you my sincere invitation of an academic forum held on Jan.1 in The Nation’s Theatre, which focuses on the topic of Chinese traditional culture.The forum mentioned above will be arranged as followings.Firstly at 8 a.m.will start the opening of the forum, which involves a brief presentation with regard to the prospects as well as plights thatthe promotion of Chinese culture may encounter.Afterwards, there will be another arrangement concerning a micro-movie of the cultural relic exhibition, which will last 15 minutes.Then at 9 to 11 o’clock, you would be highly expected to present us a lecture named “World Needs China”.I really hope you can make it.If it is possible, I would like to ask you for sending me your bank account, and I’ll pay you 40 percent of the total lecture fees as the deposit.Reply, if you please before next weekend.Li Ming,The Supervisor of XXX

b)申請信

學校組織社團評優，要寫申請。你是學校創新社（Innovation Agency）的負責人，請你代表你們社參與評優，寫一封申請信。

范文：

Dear Sir or Madame,Innovation Agency – “Most Improved Organization Award”.private tools’ rebuilding the living.building to make it accessible/easy to wheelchairs..Yours faithfully,Li Ming

c)回復投訴信（對別人投訴的回復和安撫）：承擔責任，嘗試挽回

有人投訴你負責的勤工助學中心某學生表現糟糕，部分原文：

I will not use your temporary staff any more for their disastrous performance.范文：

Dear Sir,temporary administration assistant you received from my organization,.We really care about our clients and that is why we will try to give some explanation about what happened.candidate training.work for you.Yours faithfully,Li Mingd)銷售信（空格處填入產品名）

Last year, we achieved a 215% increase in the sales of our ______.We believe that this happy state of affairs be attributed to two causes.First, we managed to avoid passing on any part of our increased manufacturing costs to our majestic clients.Second, we believe our designs and colors are the most attractive that we have ever produced.And so we are happy to be able to tell you that our new season’s ____ are, if anything, more persuasive than last year’s and our prices will compare very favorably with those of any of our competitors.We believe that your will agree that our samples prove the truth of our claims.We look forward for you to favor us an order.e)現場筆錄證明

You’ve come across a serious crash last night when a taxi heavily knocked down a passerby.Now the police asked you to offer a certificate of witness involving following points:

1.The time and place

2.The process of this emergency

Witness on a Crash

It was 時間 in a 星期 night, 日期, when I was about to enjoy my late snack a first aid to the young and phoned ambulance at once.Signature:Li Ming

(2)Notice——通知、告示

a)失物招領（Lost and Found）：信息要有所保留，不能全部透露

Case: You’ve picked up an ED（電子辭典）

1.Time and place

2.The feature of this electronic dictionary（留一個最大特征來核實對方身份）

3.Your information for contact

Lost and Found

On the evening of 日期regular magazine.of this ED the phone number Sincerely yours,Li Ming