第一篇：2012年上海高考英語作文及評析

2012年上海高考英語作文范文及評析

又一年高考落下了帷幕。2012年上海高考英語作文題較有新意——假設作者上周在一所小學觀摩兩堂繪畫課，以日記的形式描寫兩幅小朋友的繪畫作品，并談談從中獲得的啟發。其中一幅是小孩用腳蘸了顏料在畫布上踩腳印，另一幅圖是小孩用畫筆在紙上畫山水。

這不是一篇容易寫的文章。同樣是圖片作文，今年的難度要高于2010年的《課堂一角》。首先，提供的圖片有兩張，提高了對于描寫的要求。高考英語作文已經不再僅僅考察學生的議論能力，它有些借鑒中文作文，要求學生夾敘夾議。在敘述中，如果只是平鋪直敘那顯然得不到高分。描寫的關鍵在于捕捉事物的特征，而高考作文往往要求學生在短短幾句話中描寫到位，這其實是不低的要求。在筆者看來，精妙地運用幾個動詞是這部分制勝之道。相反，要少用形容詞和副詞。馬克吐溫曾說：“當你看到一個形容詞時，殺死它。”雖然這樣說不無夸張，但好的動詞確實能讓文章充滿力量，生機勃勃。如，以下是筆者為2010年高考作文原創的范文，請看這里的描寫：

In this picture, the pupils are all beaming.They are scrambling to answer a question as if they have full confidence in themselves.The excitement and the eagerness to participate gush out of the picture.This is reminiscent of my own classes at primary school.At that time, we each wore the same innocent smile, fought with a jungle of other hands, and single-mindedly believed our answer would impress the teachers most.I enjoyed these classes for they sparked my interest in many subjects and taught me that competition could be fun.其次，圖片的含義并不是顯而易見的，需要看出每張圖背后的意思并將兩張圖結合起來說。2010年的考題也是開放性的，但相對來說學生比較容易展開。可以具體分析為什么小學生會積極舉手發言，而年齡越大課堂參與感越弱。如以下這樣論述：

Such fond memories they are!Unfortunately, as we grow older, we are increasingly reticent in class.There are many possible reasons for this change.It may be puberty that is to blame because we dread losing face.It may be that our body and mind are straitjacketed by the education system.It may simply be humans’ desire to conform to their peers—“Since nobody is putting their hand up, why should I?”

Whatever the reason, our carefree and innocent years at primary school is a reminder that we are always children at heart.Behind that cool facade, we can still be enthusiastic and committed to what we love doing.而今年的考題可以表達的含義則更為多元。有些學生認為這兩幅畫體現了傳統和創新優缺點，筆者并不完全同意。單單從創作的角度來說，用腳畫畫談不上創新，腳印的堆砌也構不成藝術。而用畫筆畫山水也不盡然都是傳統。因此，用這兩幅畫分別代表傳統和創新不具有很大的說服力。既然話題是開放性的，繪畫可以只是個表象，在繪畫背后的寓意則更深刻。一個個腳印可以代表腳踏實地，不拒絕做一些樸實而基礎的事。相反，山水畫代表著鴻鵠之志，代表著對未來的憧憬。而這兩種特質應該是一對矛盾統一。就像Facebook的創始人馬克?扎克伯格說的一樣：“把眼睛盯著繁星，把雙腳踩在地上。”顯然，這樣的立意更耐人尋味。

再次，文章要求考生用日記的方式寫，對熟悉了議論文、圖表作文和書信等較正式文體的廣大考生來說，是個不小的挑戰。即如何體現出日記的風格，保持一種真實、清新、內省的筆調，而不是一副架勢十足的虛偽樣子。但是，作為應試作文需要有一定的規范。考生可能會疑惑是否可以使用俚語、習語、縮寫或網絡流行詞。確實，筆者認為既要考慮日記的特性又要兼顧考試的規范是一件令人糾結的事。盡管如此，還是可以通過一些手段，如將較正式的it is縮略為it’s（面對自己，我們無需如此正式）或運用如would be better off這樣較口語

化的表達。

在本次高考結束，筆者又特地創作一篇范文，供讀者參考。筆者水平有限，如有錯誤，請不吝指正。

范文：

Date: June 8, 2012

Last week, I sat in on two painting classes at a primary school.In one class a student dipped her feet in ink and made a painting out of footprints.By contrast, the same student used a brush to make a breath-taking landscape painting—so vivid that one could almost smell the refreshing rivers and hear the chirping birds.Though standing in stark contrast, the two paintings both intrigued me.In fact, they reminded me of what Facebook founder Mark Zuckerberg said, “Keep your eyes on the stars and your feet on the ground.” It’s this maxim on success that lends insight into the two paintings.The first painting represents that we should remain grounded and be cautious of being carried away with temporary success.A kite stays afloat because it’s attached to a reel;otherwise it will instantly lose its balance before eventually crashing into the ground.So it is with us.However, success requires more than being simply down-to-earth, with a lofty ideal being another crucial factor.So grand was the scenery portrayed in the second painting that it embodied the reach of our dreams.Instead of ignoring the gleam of light, the spark of wisdom that flashes across our mind and worshipping the luster of the sky of geniuses, we’d be better off trusting that the gleam and the spark will one day shine as brightly as a search light if we have faith in ourselves.The paintings taught me to dream big and act small.And I believe, by doing so, the warm light of success will cascade into my life.

第二篇：2013上海高考英語作文參考

上海博物館擬舉辦一次名畫展，現就展出場所（博物館還是社區圖書館）征集公眾意見，假設你是王敏，給上海博物館寫一封信表達你的想法。你的信必須滿足以下要求：

1.簡述你寫信的目的及你對場所的選擇；

2.說明你的理由（從便利性、專業性等方面對這兩個場所進行對比）。

Dear exhibition organizers of Shanghai Museum:

My name is Wang Min, a student studying at Shanghai XX High School.I am writing to offer my views on the place where the exhibition should be held.As far as I am concerned, the painting exhibition should without doubt take place in Shanghai Museum instead of the community library.The reasons why I hold that opinion are as follows.First, in terms of convenience, Shanghai Museum is a much better choice for visitors who may not know well about Shanghai.Located near People’s Square, the best-known transportation center and tourist site in Shanghai, it is absolutely easy for anyone to find it.Considering that it is an exhibition of famous paintings that will attract guests from all over the world, the broad streets will serve as another advantage to provide easy access and sufficient parking space.Another advantage that Shanghai Museum has over the community library is that it has considerable experience in organizing such exhibitions.It is quite common for Shanghai Museum to be in charge of a wide range of activities.We should hand a task to a professional rather than an amateur and Shanghai Museum is just the professional who will fulfill the task skillfully.Modest as my reasoning may seem, I believe it makes sense.I hope you will include my views when you make the decision.Thank you!

Yours Sincerely

Wang Min

第三篇：上海高考英語滿分作文匯總

June 8th

Dear Haiqing，I hear you are very unhappy these days because your parents can‘t afford to buy you some brand-name shoes and garments you like very much.And I write you this letter to share with you what I think about this matter.To begin with，beauty is just skin deep.Don‘t you think it silly to pay so much attention to your appearance？ He is a shallow person who judges others by their appearance； in the same sense，he is a shallow person who thinks that a brand-name garment can add to his glamour.So please，just forget about those brand-name things.What really matters is not whether you wear brand-name shoes or garments but whether your clothes fit you.As a student，you have to wear the school uniform on the weekdays and to be honest，you look very smart in it.Then why do you have to bother to buy the expensive brand-name things？

Secondly，I know your parents are both average workers.Hard as they work，they don‘t earn much.Despite this，they do their best to give you a lot of things on demand.Look at the callus on their hands and wrinkles on their faces，how can you have the heart to ask for more than they can afford，which will surely break their hearts？ Remember，parents don’t owe us expensive summer camps； they don‘t owe us Sony Walkman； nor do they owe us Nike shoes，If you really want those fancy things，you should take a part-time job to contribute to their purchase rather than ask your parents for money to add to their already heavy burden.Don’t you think so？

Thirdly，we have such a wide variety of things available these days which are both nice and inexpensive.What‘s the point of paying much more for those brand-name things that are not much better？ My friend，take my advice，and you’ll be a wiser consumer as well as a more considerate child to your parents.Poverty，sometimes，is a good thing.It can test a person‘s character and it makes a man out of a boy faster than anything else.Keep working hard，and you are bound to be able to afford those things in the near future.Now you may as well focus on your study.Anyway，wouldn’t it be funny for a would-be achiever to be so preoccupied with brand-name things all day long？

Keep in touch.Yours

Huangping 459 2012 As is vividly described in the picture, the foreign pupils are raising their hands, eager to answer the teacher’s questions.Judging from the smiles on their faces, they must be very happy, relaxed and free.This reminds me of my primary school days, which was totally different from theirs.As far as I can remember, my teachers as well as my parents always told me to keep quiet and sit straight in class, not to do anything without the

teacher’s permission, including smiling and speaking out our viewpoints freely.I did as I was told.Frankly speaking, I’m fond of the atmosphere in western classes.But on the other hand, I still treasure the strict discipline learned when I was young.As a matter of fact, I think it is different cultures that make different classes and also different students.I am glad to see that the education of China is undergoing a significant reform, which aims to reduce students’ learning burden and encourage students to be more imaginative and creative.I firmly believe that in the near future more and more Chinese students will enjoy a free and open classroom atmosphere.192 2.As is described in the picture, a group of foreign students are raising their hands to give answers to the question in a joyful and active way.The purpose of the picture is to show us how active the class performance is in the foreign country.Compared with the class performance in local China, the difference is quite obvious.We Chinese students stay quiet in class, keep taking notes and listen to what teacher is talking in a careful way.I ask myself what causes lead to the phenomenon? Why class performance of Chinese students is quite different from that of foreign students? Possible reasons can be listed as follows.Most important of all, education system in China is the key reason.The first day we become the primary student, our teachers tell us to obey the rules in class.We put our hands back and stay quiet in class.Lecture-model teaching is the traditional way in Chinese class.Teacher is the leading actor or actress and student is always the supporting roles.Gradually we get into the habit of staying quiet in class and lose the ability to raise questions and give the answers.The second point to be mentioned is that Chinese students hold different attitudes toward study.In our minds, we always think what we should learn instead of how we should learn knowledge in a smart way.We behave us as a passive listener, but foreign student act as a active learner.As a saying goes, it is better to teach to fish rather than give a fish.Taking what has been discussed above into account, there is no doubt that we need to think it over whether we are supposed to be a learner or a quiet listener.193 2009 ?

It is said that a summer camp is to be held by your school and a few courses are available to choose from.I am interested in gardening, in that I believe it features my character and personal benefits.?

During the learning period, I expect to gain some unexpected knowledge.A radical technique I’d like to obtain is to know how to tell difference species of plants and flowers apart.This helps me to have a clearer outlook of those in my garden.Furthermore, the proper cutting time and frequency to water are some other skills I want to learn.A little knowledge concerning choosing suitable soil or reasonable positions will also be a good choice.? The main reason why I choose gardening is that I want to help my parents with their work in the domestic garden.In addition, I find that we students generally lack the knowledge of gardening, missing a chance to have a word with nature, so that knowing the surroundings is imperative.Last but not least, by attending the courses, I will have a meaningful summer vacation, and drowning myself between plants will by all means add a brilliant touch to my life.200 2008 1.A group dancing competition will be held in our school and the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in it.While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure.Generally speaking, there are two reasons for my decision.First, it is a good opportunity for me to relax myself, which will enable me to study more efficiently.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, so goes the saying, which clearly shows us the importance of relaxation.Besides, I think I am a good dancer after learning dance for more than five years.Participating in the contest will be a golden chance for me to show my dancing skills and make some contributions to the class.For the two reasons mentioned above, it is no surprise that I have such a strong enthusiasm for the group dancing competition.155

2.Today the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in the group dancing competition which will be held in a couple of days in our school.But after some careful consideration, I have decided not to participate.There are a number of reasons for my decision.First and foremost, as the College Entrance Exam is just around the corner, study is the top priority for me.Participating in the group dancing competition has to give way because it might take me too much time.What’s more, without any experience of dancing, I don’t think I can be a good dancing partner.I am afraid my poor dancing skills will probably spoil the performance of the whole class.In this case, it’s better for me to be a spectator cheering for my classmates.For these reasons, it seems more appropriate for me to watch the competition than to dance myself.151 2007

A Present for Father’s Day

The Father’s Day will come soon.and I want to give my Dad a present.That is a VIP card of a health club.When I was a little boy, Dad worked hard as a teacher.During term, Mother and I sometimes accompanied Dad in his office till a late hour.From then on, I understood that Dad worked with great effort.There are still too many precious memories which I’ll cherish in my heart.And I want to give this present to express my thanks to him.Time flies and I’m 18 now.As I grow up, Father is getting older.He is now still diving into piles of books.With the health club membership, I hope that he will set aside some time to do more exercise.I think that he will relax in the health club and make more friends as well.150 2.It is widely acknowledged that a good present is of great value to a person and even prone to change his or her life.As for me , one of the most impressive presents I have given to my friends is a watch which I have used for three years.The watch was given to Tom, who is one of my best friends.Diligent and warm-hearted as he is , he sometimes has no sense of time, which causes him to be late for many things and leads to some trouble in work.By giving him such a watch, I hope he will pay more attention to punctuality, which may bring him more credibility in life and higher efficiency in both work and study.Besides, he used to tell me that he might feel lonely in the new environment after leaving the old friends in high school, and thus I hope that such a gift will remind him of the good old days we happily spent together and help him to feel better when he misses me.Anyway ,I do wish that Tom will like this present, which hopefully will bring him good luck.192 2006

Of the two universities listed above, I prefer the one in the north.The main reason is that the tuition is only 5,000 RMB for the university a year, compared with 8,000 RMB for the university in the south.This makes a big difference for a family like a mine, because my father is peasant and the only breadwinner in the family.Studying at the northern university can save my father big money.Another reason I take into consideration is the preference policy the northern university offers.Any candidate who chooses to study there may gain an extra 20 points, which greatly raises the possibility of my being admitted to this university.Of course, it doesn't mean that it will be quite easy to pass the entrance exam because this university has limited the number of qualified candidates to 10 only.However, I have been doing quite well in school, so I believe I can pass the entrance exam with flying colors.162 2.Compared with the northern university, the southern one is more to my liking.It is true that in terms of tuition the former is 3,000 RMB cheaper than the latter.However, that's not a problem to me because I can work my way through college once I get admitted.What counts is the reputation it has.Once I enter this school, my future career is guaranteed.Also, the university in the south recruits 20 new students instead of 10, which means that I will stand a better chance of getting admitted.The competition is very keen, though, as you can see because this university doesn't give candidates any extra points.So all I can do now is study hard, pass the tough entrance exam, and qualify as a student of the university of my choice.135

2005

There is an old English saying that there must be a use for my talent.I have regarded it as my motto for many years.From my point of view, there is no difference between one person and another.With some useful talent, you will make your contributions to this society.When I was ten years old, there was an old man living at the corner of xx Road.He didn’t have the opportunity to study in school, but he learned how to make wood furniture.Every time people went to ask him to solve some problems of furniture, he was willing to help them.To my surprise, in his spare time, he would make some toys with small piece s of wood.Some of them were sold to the toy store and others were given to us.The moment I see the lovely toys made by this old man, I would remember the happy childhood.From this old man, we can see whatever kind of talent you have, you can find your own method to display your talent.The most important factor is your confidence.If you believe the saying that there must be a use for my talent, you will succeed.205

第四篇：上海高考英語作文萬能公式

開頭萬能公式

原理：要想更有說服力，就應該用實際的數字來說明。

原則上在議論文當中不應該出現虛假數字的，可是在考試的時候哪管那么多，但編無妨，只要我有東西寫就萬事大吉了。

所以不妨試用下面的句型：

According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after graduation.看起來這個數字文縐縐的，其實都是編造出來的。

更多句型：

A recent survey shows / indicates that …

結尾萬能公式一：如此結論

說完了，畢竟要歸納一番，相信各位都有這樣的經歷：領導長篇大論，到最后終于冒出個“總而言之”之類的話，我們馬上停止開小差，等待領導說結束語。也就是說，開頭很好，也必然要有一個精彩的結尾，讓讀者眼前一亮，這樣，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子：

Obviously, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果讀者很難“顯而易見”，但說無妨，就當讀者的眼光太淺罷了！

更多過渡短語：

? To sum up, ?

? In conclusion, ?

? In brief, ?

? In short, …

? In a word, / In a nutshell, …

? All in all, …

更多句型：

? Thus,it can be concluded that?

? Therefore,we can find that…

? So, we can conclude that…

寫作的“七項基本原則”

一、長短句原則

工作還得一張一馳呢，老讓讀者讀長句，累死人！寫一個短小精辟的句子卻可以起到畫龍點睛的作用。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主題：

? As a creature, I eat;as a man, I read.? Although the former is to meet the primary need of my body while the latter is to

satisfy the intellectual need of mind, yet they are in a way quite similar.? 如此可見，長短句結合，抑揚頓挫，豈不爽哉？牢記！

強烈建議：

? 在文章第一段（開頭）用一長一短，且先長后短；

? 在文章主體部分，要先用一個短句解釋主要意思，然后在闡述幾個要點的時候采用

先短后長的句群形式，定會讓主體部分妙筆生輝！

? 文章結尾一般用一長一短就可以了。

二、主題句原則

國有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否則會給人造成“群龍無首”之感！相信各位讀過一些破爛文學，故意把主體隱藏在文章之內，結果造成我們稀里糊涂！不知所云！所以奉勸各位一定要寫一個主題句，放在文章的開頭（這樣做更保險）或者結尾，讓讀者一目了然，必會平安無事！

特別提示：隱藏主體句可是要冒險的！

To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully / wellprepared for the exam（主題句）.Without sufficient preparations, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、一 二 三原則

領導講話總是第一部分：第一點、第二點、第三點、第二部分：第一點、第二點、第三點

雖然繁瑣，可畢竟還是條理清楚。考官們看文章也必然要通過這些關鍵性的“標簽”來判定你的文章是否結構清楚，條理自然。破解方法很簡單，只要把下面任何一組的詞匯加入到你的幾個要點前就清楚了。

1）first, second, third, last（不推薦，原因：俗）

2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推薦，原因：俗）

3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推薦，原因：俗）

4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly/finally（不推薦，原因：俗）

5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（強烈推薦）

6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（強烈推薦）

7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（強烈推薦）

8）most important of all, moreover, finally…

9）on the one hand, on the other hand（適用于兩點的情況）

10）for one thing, for another（適用于兩點的情況）

建議：不僅僅在寫作中注意，平時說話的時候也應該條理清楚！

四、短語優先原則

寫作時，尤其是在考試時，如果使用短語，有兩個好處：其

一、用短

語會使文章增加亮點。如果老師們看到你的文章太簡單，看不到一個自

己不認識的短語，必然會看低你的作文。相反，如果發現亮點------一個

精彩的短語，那么你的文章定會得高分了。其

二、關鍵時刻思維短路，只有湊字數，怎么辦？用短語是一個不錯的辦法！

比如：

? I cannot

可以用短語表達：I cannot

? I

可以用短語表達：Iit.I am badly in need /want of it.這樣字數明顯增加，表達也更準確。

文章主體段落三大殺手锏

一、舉實例

思維短路，舉實例！提出一個觀點，舉實例！提出一個方案，舉實例！而且這也是我們揭示一個觀點最好的方式。在任何情況下，只要我們無法繼續文章，不管三七二十一，盡管舉例子！

In order to attract more customers, advertisers have tried every possible means in making ads, such as sound, light, colors, cartoon films and human performances.For instance, to advertise a certain kind of food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they film him or her.更多句型：

? Let’s take ? as an example.? Let’s take ?for example.? For example,?

? For instance,…

? One example is… and another example is…,二、做比較

方法：寫完一個要點，比較與之相似的；又寫完一個要點，再比較與之相反的。世界上沒有同樣的指紋，沒有相同的樹葉。文章亦然。只有通過比較，你才會發現兩者的相同點(through comparison）和（through contrast）。

下面是一些短語：

相似的比較：

likewise, similarly, be similar to?,in the same manner

相反的比較：

on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead,nevertheless, by contrast, in contrast to/with?,in comparison to/with?,on the contrary, compared with ?

三、換言之

沒話說了，可以換一句話再說，讓你的文章再多一些字。

或者文縐縐地說，是讓讀者更充分地理解你的觀點。實際

就是重復、重復、再重復！下面的句子實際上就三個字

I love you!

I am enthusiastic about you.That is to say, I have lost my heart to you.I am wild about you.In other words, I have fallen in love with you.或者上面我們舉過的例子：

I cannot bear it.可以用短語表達：I cannot put up with it.因此可以這樣說：I cannot bear it.That is to say, I cannot put up with it.or I am fed up with/ am bored with / am sick of / am tired of / am weary of it.更多短語：in simpler words,/ put it more simply（簡單地說）

總之，如果我們經常按照上面的方法練習，加上多多模仿優秀范文，就一定能寫出比較好的英語文章。

第五篇：2014上海高考英語改革（推薦）

2014上海高考英語改革

近日，2014年高考改革的消息一直不絕于耳，語法部分的變動是板上釘釘的定論------取消選擇題，替換為語法填空題。

下面，請大家先看一下2013年3月份左右高考考試院內部發布的2014年語法新題型的樣題，牛刀小試一下：

Directions: Read the following passage.For some blanks, there is a word given in the brackets.Fill in each of these blanks with the proper form.of the given word.Fill in the other blanks with words that are correct in structure and proper in meaning.There is a photo hanging above my desk.Whenever I look at that photograph, it takes me back to those early years __1__ everynew experience was important for me.It was towards the end of the school year __2__ it happened.I had been looking forward to that day with such eagerness.I can still remember the shouts of the spectators as I __3__(go)out onto the sports field with my classmates.Two days __4__(early), I had qualified for the finals of the 100 metres.Now looking around, I was determined __5__(win).…

請大家對對答案：

1.when2.that3.went4.earlier5.to win

眾所周知，高考英語的語法題型多年來一直以單項選擇的傳統題型來考查，2014年將全面取消語法選擇題（16題*1分=16分），替換為新題型：語法填空（見以上樣題），2個語篇，共15道題（15分）。

通過樣題，我們可以發現新題型語法填空的形式，基本可以分為兩種，提供提示詞的和沒有提示詞的。前者的考察點在于，以提示詞的適當形式填空；后者則以連接詞、或代詞、冠詞、介詞、固定搭配等為考察點。

相較語法選擇題，鑒于沒有可供排除的選項，故新題型的難度相對較高，需要考生有一個扎實的語法基礎，方可游刃有余的應對此題型。雖然2014年的考生大部分都花了十幾年的時間來訓練選擇題，對選擇題的題型及應試技巧爛熟于心，但是在考綱未發生重大變化的前提下，“萬變不離其宗”，縱然題型有變，但是主考的語法點并未發生變化。只要考生對語法的基本知識有系統的掌握，加之多年選擇題的大量操練，一樣可以應對新題型，無需感到緊張不安。