第一篇：GRE作文經典背誦句式Argument

GRE作文經典背誦句式（下）

二、邏輯問題分析論證句式

1.The mere fact that ticket sales in recent years for screenplay-based movies have exceeded

those for book-based movies is insufficient evidence to conclude that writing screenplays now provides greater financial opportunity for writers.唯一的事實 這些年以劇本為基礎的電影所賣的票已經超過了以書為基礎的，是不充分的證據，來得出寫劇本現在提供更多作者更多的經濟機會。

2.It is possible that fees paid by movie studios for screenplays will decrease in the future

relative to those for book rights.這是有可能的，電影工作室付給劇本的錢，相比于書，在未來會減少。

3.The argument fails to rule out the possibility that a writer engage in both types of writing as

well as other types.論述沒能列出可能性，即同時參與兩種形式以及其他的形式寫作的作者。

4.In any event, the advertisement provides no justification for the mutually exclusive choice that

it imposes on the writer.在任何情況下，廣告沒有提供互斥的選擇的理由，而這個理由是被強加在作者身上的。

5.The argument simply equates success with movie ticket sales, which is unwarranted.論述簡單的成功等同于電影票的銷售，而這是沒有根據的。

6.The author assumes that physical capabilities are the only attributes necessary to operate a motor vehicle.作者假設硬件性能是唯一一個運作摩托車的需要的屬性。

7.Moreover, the author provides no evidence that the realism of color photography is the reason for its predominance.更進一步，作者沒有提供任何證據表明彩色照片的寫實主義是它卓越的照片。

8.This assumption presents a false dilemma, since the two media are not necessarily mutually exclusive alternatives.這個假設表明了一個錯誤的窘鏡，因為這兩個媒體沒有必要互斥的選擇。

9.Common sense tells us that a photographer can succeed by working in both media.常識告訴我們攝影可以在兩種媒體中都獲得成功

11.The major problem with the argument is that the stated similarities between Company A and B are insufficient to support the conclusion that Company A will suffer a fate similar to Company B’s.論述主要的問題是陳述的A公司和B公司之間的相似形式不充分的，來支持結論，即A公司將會承受與B公司相同的命運。

12.Consequently, the mere fact that Company A holds a large share of the video – game hardware and software market does not support the claim that Company A will also fail.結果，這個唯一的事實A公司擁有大量的錄像分享-游戲硬件和軟件商場 不能支持作者宣稱的A公司會失敗。

13.Thus, the author unfairly assumes that highly – rated public television programs are necessarily widely viewed, or popular.因此，作者不公正的假設了高等級的公共電視節目是廣泛需要被看的，或者說流行的。

14.While this may be true in some cases, it is equally possible that only companies with products that are already best – sellers can afford the higher ad rates that popular shows demand.在這個可能在一些情況下成立的同時，有相同的可能就是只有那些已經有暢銷產品的公司可以支付更高的廣告水平，即歡迎程度表明了需求。

15.Admittedly, the vice president’s reasoning linking employee benefits with company profits seems reasonable on the surface.顯然的，副總統的推理將雇員的利益和公司的利益聯系在一起在表面上看起來很有道理。

16.One can infer from the survey’s results that a full one – third of the respondents may have viewed the current benefits package unfavorably.一個人可以從調查結果推斷：一個滿的1/3被告可能已經看過了當前的利益和不利。

17.Lacking more specific information about how these other employees responded, it is impossible to assess the reliability of the survey’s results or to make an informed recommendation.缺乏更多具體的信息關于這些雇傭者怎么反饋的，這是不可能來評估調查的可靠性，或者得出一個可靠的推薦。

18.It is unlikely that the brief one – week periods under comparison are representative of longer time periods.19.If so, even though 3 percent more accidents occurred after the change, the author’s argument that changing the speed limit increases danger for drivers would be seriously weakened.21.In addition, while it is true that many voters change their minds several times before voting, and that some remain undecided until entering the voting booth, this is not true of everyone.22.Without knowing the extent and nature of the damage resulting from the bad publicity or the reason for the violation, we cannot accept the author’s conclusion.23.The author’s proposal is inconsistent with the author’s conclusion about the consequences of adopting an ethics code.24.To begin with, the author fails to consider health threats posed by incinerating trash.25.The author’s conclusion that switching to incineration would be more salutary for public health would be seriously undermined.26.However, this is not necessarily the case.27.The author’s implicit claim that incinerators are economically advantageous to landfills is poorly supported.28.Consequently, unless the author can demonstrate that the city will incur expenses that are not covered by the increased revenues from these projects, the author’s concern about these issues is unfounded.29.First of all, while asserting that real incomes are rising, the author provides no evidence to support this assertion.31.Moreover, the author fails to consider and rule out other factors that might account for proportional decreases in spending on food.32.The author ignores other likely benefits of agricultural technology that affect food pieces only indirectly or not at all.33.In the first place, a great deal of empirical evidence shows that sequels are often not as profitable as the original movie.34.However, unless the original cast and production team are involved in making the sequel, there is a good chance it will not be financially successful.35.Since the difficulties inherent in this process make it hard to predict whether the result will be a success or a failure, the conclusion that the sequel will be profitable is presumptuous（武斷的）

36.This assumption overlooks other criteria for determining a bridge’s importance – such as the number of commuters using the bridge, the role of the bridge in local emergencies and disasters, and the impact that bridge closure would have on the economies of nearby cities.37.Without such evidence, we cannot accept the author’s conclusion that no government funds should be directed toward maintaining the Styx River bridge.38.The fact that the nearby city has a weakening economy does not prove that the city will not contribute significantly to tax revenues.39.Substantiating this assumption requires examining the proper duty of government.40.Accordingly, this assumption is simply an unproven claim.41.The author is presenting a false dilemma by imposing an either – or choice between two courses of action that need not be mutually exclusive.42.It is equally possible that legislators can address both areas of concern concurrently.43.The argument relies on the assumption that the legislators in question（所討論的）have the opportunity to address urban crime problems.44.Finally, the author unfairly trivializes the severity of rural crime by simply comparing it with

urban crime.45.It is possible that the sales trend in a particular location is not representative of sales in other regions.46.However, the author fails to acknowledge and rule out other possible causes of such accidents.47.A third problem with the argument is that the statistical evidence upon which it relies is too vague to be informative.48.If the subjects for the study were randomly chosen and represent a diverse cross section of the population of shampoo users, the results will be reliable regardless of the number of participants.49.Experience alone is far from being enough to guarantee minimized processing costs.50.Given that Olympic Foods does benefit from lowered processing costs due to its years of experience, the prediction about maximum profits is still in lake of solid ground.however, the citizens of forestville are failing to consider other possible alternatives to the increasing car accidents after the raise in speed limit.it is possible that there are more younger, inexperienced, or more elderly, unsafe drivers in forestville than there are in elmsford.it appears reasonable, therefore, for the citizens to focus on these trouble spots than to reduce the speed in the entire area.a six-month period is not a particularly long time frame for the citizens to determine……（時間攻擊中，經常使用）

are there more people in forestville than there were sic months ago?if so, there may be疑問句的形式，句型多變。

overall, the reasoning behind decreasing forestville’s speed limit back to its original seems logical as presented above since the citizens are acting in their own best interests and want to protect their safety.however, before any final decisions are made about the reduction in speed limit, the citizens and officials of forestville should evaluate all possible alternatives and causes for the increased number of accidents over the six-month period as compared to elmsford.(結尾的經典句型）

in this era of rapid social and technological change leading to increasing life complexity and psychological displacement, both positive and negative effects among persons in western society

call for a balance in which there are both specialists and generalists.（整句都應該背下，很有用）

as the head of pharmacology at my university once said(and i paraphrase)引用

this illustrates the point that our societies level of knowledge

simply put, without specialists, our society would find itself bogged down in the sargasso sea of information overload.反說經典。

not only。。，but it can also。簡單，但實用。

without generalists, society BEComes inward-looking and eventually inefficient.without a society that recognizes the importance of broad-mindedness and fora a for sharing generalities, individuals become isolated.thus, while our form of society necessitates specialists, generalists are equally important.

第二篇：新gre寫作：句式整理

新gre寫作：句式整理

新gre寫作：句式整理

一、是非問題分析論證句式

1.Whereas other societies look to the past for guidance，we cast our nets forward(面向未來)

2.It is the belief in a brighter future that gives us optimism.3.Even these days，when not all progress seems positive，the belief remains that for every problem there is a rational solution.4.The job of the parents is to give the children every opportunity while they are growing up and then get out of their way.5.What deference people in authority do command is based on their actual powers rather than on their age，wisdom，or dignity.6.In a society that changes as fast as ours，experience simply does not have the value that it does in traditional societies

7.It has taken a long time to convince the public that free enterprise does not mean that a company should be free to pollute the air，foul the rivers，and destroy the forests.8.The assembly line reduced workers to cogs of machinery and made their jobs unutterably boring，but it produced goods fast.9.Food is prepackaged and shopping is impersonal，but the efficiency of the operation produces lower prices and less shopping time.11.In America，there are no such expressions such as in china where ―the fat pig gets slaughtered，‖ or in Japan，where ―the nail that sticks out gets hammered down.‖

12.This freedom from the group has enabled the American to become ―Economic Man‖—one directed almost purely by profit motive，mobile and unencumbered(不受阻礙的)by family or community obligations.13.Equipped with the money，one can acquire the taste，style，and ideas that mark each class and launch a quick ascent of the social ladder.14.Actually，persons in status societies who are secure in their niches(適當的位置)are allowed more eccentricity than Americans，who rely heavily on signals that other people like them.15.When half the population goes to college，one cannot expect the colleges to maintain the same standards as in countries where only the elite attend.16.Just as not every Japanese is hardworking and deferential to superiors(長者、上司)，not every Chinese is devoted to family，not every American is ambitious or patriotic – or even unsophisticated.17.No one could seriously think that anyone who grows up poor，lives in a bad neighborhood，and attends an inferior school has an opportunity equal to that of someone more favored.18.Americans may not have achieved equality，but at least they aspire to it，which is more than many other nations can claim.19.In many countries，when jobs become available for young people in distant cities，when television begins to dominate home life，when ready – made foods appear in the markets，the culture appears more ―American‖ – although the resemblance could be entirely superficial.20.When the demand for something is greater than its supply，producers and suppliers will sense the possibility of making a profit – the excess of revenues over expenses is the profit.21.As the case illustrates，competition takes four general forms： pure competition，monopoly，monopolistic competition，and oligopoly(少數制造商對市場的控制).22.The classic example of pure competition occurs with a commodity，like wheat or corn，that has so many producers that no one of them can control its selling price.23.A monopoly occurs when one company alone offers a particular food or service and therefore controls the market and price for it.24.Private restaurants serve gourmet food for $70 per person;incentives boosted agricultural production 25 percent and industrial output 80 percent in just three years;farmers are encouraged to raise as much as they can on their own plots，and some become almost rich in the process.(注意本句中分號的使用)

25.All these changes in China’s economic life have brought changes in China’s social and cultural life as well，many of which unwanted.二、邏輯問題分析論證句式The argument fails to rule out the possibility that a writer engage in both types of writing as well as other types.2.The mere fact that ticket sales in recent years for screenplay-based movies have exceeded those for book-based movies is insufficient evidence to conclude that writing screenplays now provides greater financial opportunity for writers.3It is possible that fees paid by movie studios for screenplays will decrease in the future relative to those for book rights.4.In any event，the advertisement provides no justification for the mutually exclusive choice that it imposes on the writer.5.The argument simply equates success with movie ticket sales，which is unwarranted.6.The author assumes that physical capabilities are the only attributes necessary to operate a motor vehicle.7.Moreover，the author provides no evidence that the realism of color photography is the reason for its predominance.8.This assumption presents a false dilemma，since the two media are not necessarily mutually exclusive alternatives.9.Common sense tells us that a photographer can succeed by working in both media.11.The major problem with the argument is that the stated similarities between Company A and B are insufficient to support the conclusion that Company A will suffer a fate similar to Company B’s.10.Consequently，the mere fact that Company A holds a large share of the video – game hardware and software market does not support the claim that Company A will also fail.11.Thus，the author unfairly assumes that highly – rated public television programs are necessarily widely viewed，or popular.12.While this may be true in some cases，it is equally possible that only companies with products that are already best – sellers can afford the higher ad rates that popular shows demand.13.Admittedly，the vice president’s reasoning linking employee benefits with company profits seems reasonable on the surface.14.One can infer from the survey’s results that a full one – third of the respondents may have viewed the current benefits package unfavorably.15.Lacking more specific information about how these other employees responded，it is impossible to assess the reliability of the survey’s results or to make an informed recommendation.16.It is unlikely that the brief one – week periods under comparison are representative of longer time periods.17.If so，even though 3 percent more accidents occurred after the change，the author’s argument that changing the speed limit increases danger for drivers would be seriously weakened.18.In addition，while it is true that many voters change their minds several times before voting，and that some remain undecided until entering the voting booth，this is not true of everyone.Moreover，the author fails to consider and rule out other factors that might account for proportional decreases in spending on food.20.Without knowing the extent and nature of the damage resulting from the bad publicity or the reason for the violation，we cannot accept the author’s conclusion.The author’s proposal is inconsistent with the author’s conclusion about the consequences of adopting an ethics code.22.To begin with，the author fails to consider health threats posed by incinerating trash.23.The author’s conclusion that switching to incineration would be more salutary for public health would be seriously undermined.24.However，this is not necessarily the case.25.The author’s implicit claim that incinerators are economically advantageous to landfills is poorly supported.26.Consequently，unless the author can demonstrate that the city will incur expenses that are not covered by the increased revenues from these projects，the author’s concern about these issues is unfounded.27.First of all，while asserting that real incomes are rising，the author provides no evidence to support this assertion.為了提高自己的新gre寫作水平而努力的，非常期望這些能夠幫助大家提高在2011新gre寫作表達能力，備考好新gre考試。

第三篇：寫作背誦句式經典完整版(精華版)

背誦句式

是非問題分析論證句式

Whereas other societies look to the past for guidance, we cast our nets forward（面向未來）It is the belief in a brighter future that gives us optimism.Even these days, when not all progress seems positive(nuclear weapons, air pollution, unemployment, etc.), the belief remains that for every problem there is a rational solution.The job of the parents is to give the children every opportunity while they are growing up and then get out of their way.What deference people in authority do command is based on their actual powers rather than on their age, wisdom, or dignity.In a society that changes as fast as ours, experience simply does not have the value that it does in traditional societies.It has taken a long time to convince the public that free enterprise does not mean that a company should be free to pollute the air, foul the rivers, and destroy the forests.The assembly line reduced workers to cogs of machinery and made their jobs unutterably boring, but it produced goods fast.Food is prepackaged and shopping is impersonal, but the efficiency of the operation produces lower prices and less shopping time.As an American is always striving to change his lot, he never fully identifies with any group.In America, there are no such expressions such as in china where “the fat pig gets slaughtered,” or in Japan, where “the nail that sticks out gets hammered down.”

This freedom from the group has enabled the American to become “Economic Man”-one directed almost purely by profit motive, mobile and unencumbered（不受阻礙的）by family or community obligations.Equipped with the money, one can acquire the taste, style, and ideas that mark each class and launch a quick ascent of the social ladder.Actually, persons in status societies who are secure in their niches（適當的位置）are allowed more eccentricity than Americans, who rely heavily on signals that other people like them.When half the population goes to college, one cannot expect the colleges to maintain the same standards as in countries where only the elite attend.Just as not every Japanese is hardworking and deferential to superiors（長者、上司）, not every Chinese is devoted to family, not every American is ambitious or patrioticmade foods appear in the markets, the culture appears more “American”the excess of revenues over expenses is the profit.As the case illustrates, competition takes four general forms: pure competition, monopoly, monopolistic competition, and oligopoly（少數制造商對市場的控制）.The classic example of pure competition occurs with a commodity, like wheat or corn, that has so many producers that no one of them can control its selling price.A monopoly occurs when one company alone offers a particular food or service and therefore controls the market and price for it.Private restaurants serve gourmet food for $70 per person;incentives boosted agricultural production 25 percent and industrial output 80 percent in just three years;farmers are encouraged to raise as much as they can on their own plots, and some become almost rich in the process.（注意本句中分號的使用）

All these changes in China’s economic life have brought changes in China’s social and cultural life as well, many of which unwanted.If productivity measures the efficiency of an economy, a measure of what an economic system produces is its gross national product(GNP), which is the current market value of all final goods and services that a nation produces within a particular period.Current wisdom says that（當前流行的看法認為）if you want a successful product, you need first to perform detailed market analysis, making sure that there are plenty of people who need the new product and that your entry into the market will be able to gain a significant share of that market.Started at the turn of the century, 3M(a giant American company)has been growing at a healthy rate of about 10 percent a year and it boasts of having 45,000 products on the market.An entrepreneur is someone like Tom Monaghan, the man who after brushes with bankruptcy turned Domino’s Pizza into the nation’s fastesteffect relationship, ample anecdotal evidence establishes a significant correlation.Moreover, both common sense and our experiences with children inform us that people tend to mimic the language and behavior they are exposed to.Those who advocate unbridled individual expression might point out that the right of free speech is intrinsic to a democracy and necessary to its survival.In sum, it is in our best interest as a society for the government to censor broadcast media for obscene and offensive language and behavior.While individuals have primary responsibility for learning new skills and finding work, both industry and government have some obligation to provide them with the means of doing so.The suggested reason for buying the car is obvious: it is the intelligent choice.（注意冒號的使用）

In conclusion, I agree that appeals to emotion are more powerful tools than arguments and reasoning for promoting products.Advertising is obviously the most influential art form in this century;it is, therefore, tempting to think that it is the most important.資料來源http://passport.baidu.com/?business&aid=6&un=文庫掌門人#7 雙擊此復制地址下載更多此資料 The lesson here is that advertising, in itself, probably will not achieve as great importance as art.Requiring businesses to provide complete product information to customers promotes various consumer interests, but at the same time imposes burdens on businesses, government, and taxpayer.While I doubt that buildings determine our character or basic personality traits, I argue that they can greatly influence our attitudes, moods, and even life styles.Numerous psychological studies show that different colors influence behavior, attitudes, and emotions in distinctly different ways.Women differ fundamentally from men in childbearing ability;related to this ability is the maternal instinctthat is far stronger for women than for men, generally speaking.In consumersuch as initiative, creativity, technical skills, and business 資料來源http://passport.baidu.com/?business&aid=6&un=文庫掌門人#7 雙擊此復制地址下載更多此資料 judgmentgame hardware and software market does not support the claim that Company A will also fail.Thus, the author unfairly assumes that highlysellers can afford the higher ad rates that popular shows demand.Admittedly, the vice president’s reasoning linking employee benefits with company profits seems reasonable on the surface.One can infer from the survey’s results that a full oneweek periods under comparison are representative of longer time periods.If so, even though 3 percent more accidents occurred after the change, the author’s argument that changing the speed limit increases danger for drivers would be seriously weakened.The editorial fails to take into account possible differences between East and West Cambria that are relevant to how drivers react to speedsuch as the number of commuters using the bridge, the role of the bridge in local emergencies and disasters, and the impact that bridge closure would have on the economies of nearby cities.Without such evidence, we cannot accept the author’s conclusion that no government funds should be directed toward maintaining the Styx River bridge.The fact that the nearby city has a weakening economy does not prove that the city will not contribute significantly to tax revenues.Substantiating this assumption requires examining the proper duty of government.Accordingly, this assumption is simply an unproven claim.The author is presenting a false dilemma by imposing an either-or choice between two courses of action that need not be mutually exclusive.It is equally possible that legislators can address both areas of concern concurrently.The argument relies on the assumption that the legislators in question（所討論的）have the opportunity to address urban crime problems.Finally, the author unfairly trivializes the severity of rural crime by simply comparing it with urban crime.It is possible that the sales trend in a particular location is not representative of sales in other regions.However, the author fails to acknowledge and rule out other possible causes of such accidents.A third problem with the argument is that the statistical evidence upon which it relies is too vague to be informative.If the subjects for the study were randomly chosen and represent a diverse cross section of the population of shampoo users, the results will be reliable regardless of the number of participants.Experience alone is far from being enough to guarantee minimized processing costs.Given that Olympic Foods does benefit from lowered processing costs due to its years of experience, the prediction about maximum profits is still in lake of solid ground.核心句型

1． 開頭

The arguer may be right about …, but he seems to neglect(fail)to mention(take into account)that fact that…

As opposed to(Contrary to)widely(commonly/generally)held(accepted)belief(ideas/views), I believe(argue that…

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There is an element of truth in this argument(statement), but it ignores a deeper and more basic(important / essential)fact(reason)that…

It is true that(True, / To be sure, / Admittedly,)…, but this is not to say(it is unlikely / it doesn’t follow / it doesn’t mean / it won’t be the case)that…

The main(obvious / great)problem(flaw / drawback)with(in)this argument(view / remark)is that it is ignorant of(blind to)the basic(bare)fact that …

It would be possible(natural / reasonable)to think(believe / take the view)that…, but it would be absurd(wrong)to claim(argue)that …

In all the discussion and debate over…, one important(basic)fact is generally overlooked(neglected).There is absolutely(in fact)no(every)reason for us to believe(accept / resist / reject)that… Logical(Valid / Sound)as this argument and I wholeheartedly agree with it, it appears insignificant(absurd)when … is taken into consideration(account).To assume(suggest)that … is far from being proved(to miss the point).A close(careful)inspection(examination / scrutiny)of this argument would reveal how flimsy(groundless / fallacious)it is.On the surface(At first thought), it(this)may seem a sound(an attractive)suggestion(solution / idea), but careful weighing on the mind(on closer analysis / on second thought), we find that…

Too much emphasis placed on(attention paid to / importance attached to)… may obscure(overlook / neglect)other facts…

The danger(problem / fact / truth / point)is that…

What the arguer fails to understand(consider /mention)is that…

We don’t have to look very far to see(find out)the truth(validity)of this argument(proposition).However just(logical / sound / valid)this argument may be, it only skims the surface of the problem.2． 正文

Although the popular belief is that…, a current(new / recent)study(survey / poll / investigation)indicates(shows / demonstrates)that… Common sense tells us that…

The increase(change / failure / success)in… mainly(largely / partly)results from(arises from / is because of)…

The increase(change / failure /success)in … is due to(owing to / attributable to)the fact that…

Many people would claim that…

One may attribute(ascribe / owe)the increase(decrease / change)to …, but … is not by itself 資料來源http://passport.baidu.com/?business&aid=6&un=文庫掌門人#7 雙擊此復制地址下載更多此資料 an adequate explanation.One of the reasons given for … is that… What is also worth noticing is that…

There are many(different / several / a number of / a variety of)causes(reasons)for this dramatic(marked / significant)growth(change /decline / increase)in..First,… Second,… Finally,…

There is no evidence to suggest that…

Why are(is / do / did)…? For one thing, … For another, … Another reason why I dispute the above statement is that…

It gives rise to(lead to / bring / create)a host of problems(consequences).There are numerous reasons why …, and I shall here explore only a few of the most important ones.It will exert(have / produce)profound(far-reaching / remarkable / considerable / beneficial / favorable / undesirable / disastrous)effect(influence)on…

A multitude of factors could account for(contribute to / lead to / result in / influence)the change(increase / decrease / success/ failure / development)in…

In 1999, it increased(rose / jumped / shot up)from 5 to 10 percent of the total(to 15 percent / by 15 percent).By comparison with 1998, it decreased(dropped / fell)from 10 to 5 percent(to 15 percent / by 15 percent).It account for 15 percent of the total.There were 100 traffic accidents in April, and increase of 5 percent in a five-month period.By 1999, only(less than / more than / almost / about / over / as many as)three quarters(40 percent of / one out of five / one in four)college population(graduates / housewives)as against(as compared with)last year(1998)preferred to(liked)…

3． 結尾

From what has been discussed above(Taking into account all these factors / Judging from all evidence offered), we may safely draw(reach / come to / arrive at)the conclusion that…

All the evidence(analysis)supports(justifies / confirms / warrants / points to)a(n)unshakable(unmistakable / sound / just)conclusion that …

It is high time that we place(lay / put)great(special / considerable)emphasis on the improvement(development / increase / promotion)of…

It is high time that we put an end to the deep-seated(unhealthy / undesirable / deplorable)situation(tendency / phenomenon)of…

We must look(search / all / cry)for an immediate action(method / measure), because the present(current)situation(phenomenon / tendency / state / attitude)of …, if permitted(allowed)to continue(proceed), will surely(certainly)lead to(result in)the end(destruction / heavy cost)of…

There is no easy(immediate / effective)solution(approach / answer / remedy)to the problem of …, but … might be useful(helpful / beneficial).No easy method(solution / recipe / remedy)can be at hand(found / guaranteed)to solve(resolve / tackle)the problem of …, but the common(general / public)recognition of(realization of / awareness of / commitment to)the necessity(importance / significance)of …

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Unless there is a common realization of(general commitment to)…, it is very likely(the chances are good)that…

There is little doubt(no denying)that serous(special / adequate / immediate /further)attention must be called(paid / devoted)to the problem of …

It is necessary(essential / fundamental)that effective(quick / proper)action(steps /measures / remedies)should be taken to prevent(correct / check / end / fight)the situation(tendency / phenomenon).It is hoped(suggested / recommended)that great(continuous / persistent / sustained / corporate)efforts should be make to control(check / halt / promote)the growth(increase / rise)of …

It is hoped that great efforts should be directed to(expended on / focused on)finding(developing / improving)…

It remains to be seen whether…, but the prospect(outlook)is not quite encouraging(that rosy).Anyhow, wider(more)education(publicity)should be given to the possible(potential / grave / serious / pernicious)consequences(effects)of…

To reverse(check / control)the trend(tendency)is not a light task(an easy job), and it requires(demands / involves / entails)a different state of main towards(attitude towards / outlook on)…

For these reasons, I strongly recommend that… For the reasons given above, I feel that…

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第四篇：專升本英語寫作重點句式與背誦

專升本英語寫作重點句式與背誦范文

一 申請信

申請信重點句式

1我特地寫信給貴校，希望能獲得進行英語系研究生深造的機會

I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study in English toward Master degree in your university.2請把相關申請表格寄給我，我將十分感謝

Please send catalog and application forms to me.I shall be greatly appreciated.6如果貴方能給我寄來提供給外國留學生的關于研究生學習設施和獎學金適宜的詳細目錄，本人十分感激

I would be most grateful if you would send me details of graduate study facilities or scholarships in civil engineering which University of Lancaster may be offering to students from overseas

8我寫信給貴方希望能獲得歷史系獎學金來支持我的學習和研究

I am writing to you in the hope of obtaining the scholarship in history to support my study and some research work.10貴校歷史悠久，止血研究，享有世界聲望，如果有幸能夠成為貴校的學生，我將感到無比的榮幸

I will certainly feel honored if I admitted to your university, which, renowned for its long history and a fine tradition of scholarship, enjoys a worldwide fame.11我很樂意為您提供我個人學習和工作經的有關資料

I shall be glad to furnish you with any further information concerning my education and work experience.背誦范文

Dear Sir

I have applied to enter your esteemed(尊重)university to follow a course(課程)of study.However, although I find the academic curriculum suitable, I feel that the opportunities for leisure(空閑)activities are also an important part of student life.Therefore, I would be grateful if you could give me some information about this aspect(外表)of the campus(大學教育).In my spare time, I indulge in(沉湎于)a wide range of sports;I am also interested in music, especially playing the guitar.Specifically, I wish to know if there are any sports clubs, including soccer and tennis teams run by students.Furthermore, I would be keen to join a student band or orchestra, if there is one.Please write and let me know what university clubs I am eligible to join.By the way, what is the procedure for joining campus clubs, what qualifications do I need, and what are the fees for taking part in their activities?

I look forward to your reply.二 慰問信

慰問信重點句式

2我們倆希望/祈禱你能很快地完全康復

We are both looking forward to /hoping and praying for your speedy and full recovery.3你的諸位好友真心希望你早日康復

Your many friends are hoping for your quick return to health early recovery /rapid recovery

4真心希望能減輕你的痛苦

I hope you are getting dome relief from the pain.6我們非常遺憾的熟悉

We are very sorry to learn of ?

7我剛剛得知上個星期你的病了

I just heard that you’ve been on the sickness last week

8當我聽說。。。我非常關心

I was deeply concerned when I learned that??

10我希望你能很快地康復

I wish you a complete speedy recovery.11傾向你的家人轉達我們最深切的同情

Please extend our deep sympathy to your family.12我只想讓你知道我們是多么擔憂

I just wanted to let you know how concerned we are

13如果需要我的幫助，請告知

If there is anything I can do to help you, please let me know.慰問信背誦范文

Dear Jason,The news of your accident just reached me this morning.I’m greatly shocked to learn that you were knocked down by a car

yesterday.How are you feeling today?

The only good thing about it is that your mother told me that you are progressing nicely, I hope that you are doing well after the operation, and that you’ll be out of the hospital in about a week.I’m coming to see you on Sunday and trust that your condition will remarkably improve by then.A little package from Rose and me will reach you a day or two.We hope the small thing will interest you.With every good wishes for your swift recovery!

Yours sincerely,Wang Liping

Dear Williams,I am shocked to hear that you have a severe influenza and now are in hospital.I get this news from your mother and I know you must be absent for half a month from the classes.Do be careful while you are ill.Don’t worry about your lesson and I am willing to help you learn it when you return.We are best friends so I will never allow you to fall behind.You can watch television or listen to radio programs to help pass the time and forget your pains while you recuperate.I do hope that I can see you soon and bring you dome funny cartoons.If there is anything you need me to do, just let me know.We all miss you and shall be happy when you are back.Yours truly

LiMing

三 道歉信

道歉信重點句式

1我必須為。。。向你道歉

I must apologize to you for??

2我感到很抱歉，因為。。。

I am terribly/awfully sorry that?..3我做。。，實在太欠考慮了

It is thoughtless /inconsiderate of me to do

4恐怕我給您添了許多麻煩

I am afraid what I have done has caused many inconveniences to you.6我很遺憾的告訴您我不能。。。。

I regret to inform you that I am unable to do?..8請在再次為。。接受我真誠的道歉

Please accept my sincere and humble apology to you for?.9我衷心希望您能夠接受我的道歉

I sincerely hope that you will kindly accept my apologies.12對于貴公司不得不忍受這次延誤，我們十分遺憾

I am sorry that it was your company that had to be the one to suffer the delay

13真心希望這不會給你造成太多不便。

I hope that this does not cause to your too much inconvenience.道歉信背誦范文

Dear Zheng,I am very sorry that I was out when you came to see me yesterday afternoon.The fact is that an engagement with some friends and, ignorant of your visit, accompanied them to the cinema.Not until nine o’clock in the evening did I come back.You must have been disappointed by my absence.I hope you will not leave the city this week, I will take you to some places that may interest you.Please wait for me in your hotel at the appointed time.Yours lovely,LiPinpin

Dear Sir,Thank you for your letter of 26 January.We are very sorry to hear about the difficulties you are having with your new P60 printing press.When our engineers installed the machine last month, they satisfied themselves that it was functioning perfectly.They did, however, have some reservation about the ability of your operatives to carry out routine preventive maintenance.We believe it is essential that one of our engineer come to your factory for a period of two weeks for the purpose of: I.putting the press into perfect working order,II.training at least two of your operatives in routine preventive maintenance

We hope you will agree to our proposal.There will be no charge the press is still under guarantee.We apologize for any inconvenience you have had.Sincerely yours

Li Ming

四 求職信

求職信重點句式

1我特地寫信給貴方，對于您們近來廣告上登出的招聘兼職，我很感興趣

I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised position for a part-time assistant.2這個職位將為我的學習和進步提供良機，他對我十分重要

This position would provide an avenue for learning and advancement, which is important to me.3我對于這個職位可能提供的學習和創造性挑戰十分感興趣

I find the possibilities for learning and productive challenge in this position extremely attractive.4對于貴方廣告招聘網絡工程師一職，本人十分有興趣，特地呈上申請

I am very interested in your advertisement for a Network Engineer, I would like to apply for this position.5我看到貴公司于6月26日在。。。上所登的招聘秘書的廣告，如果您能考慮本人對此工作的申請，我將不勝感激。I have read your advertisement in ?..of June 26 for a secretary, and should be grateful if you consider me favorably as a candidate for the position.6本人非常想應聘貴公司的一個職位

I am keen to apply for a job vacancy with your company.7我很樂意為您提供更多有關我的學歷和工作經歷的情況

I shall be pleased to furnish you with any further information concerning my education and work experience.9我精通。。。

I have a fair mastery of ?../have a good command of ??

10我隨時可以接受面試，請打。。。號碼與我聯系

I am available for an interview any moment.Please contact me a ?../I can be reached at??如果您有任何職位空缺，請在您方便時給我一次面試的機會。感謝您的時間和考慮

If you have any position available, please grant me a job interview at your convenience.Thank you for your time and consideration.12我希望您能夠考慮我的申請，并給與我面試的機會。

I hope you would take my application into account favorably and entitle me to an interview.13隨信附上我的簡歷。

I have enclosed my resume with this letter.求職信背誦范文

Dear Sir or Madam,Do you have any work in your Accounting Department for a part-time employee? Miss Wang, of the University Placement Office, gas suggested that I write to you, since I would like to work for your company after I finish my courses at the University.I’ve heard so much about your company, and I believe it offers a good chance to a man interested in construction work and trained in business.I’m enclosing a resume that gives details of my life so far.My father died when I was twelve years old, and I’ve been on my

own since fourteen.I’m finishing college plenty late but I’ve had some experience along the way, with four years in the military.I could work every afternoon and all day Saturday.Professor He at the university can tell you about my work in accounting.He is Chairman of the Accounting Department and my adviser.Please look over the attached resume.I can come for an interview, if you wish.My telephone number(home)is 8888-6666.Sincerely yours

(Signature)

Dear Sir,I have read your advertisement in “Xi’ an Evening Paper ” of June 26 for a secretary, and should be grateful if you consider my favorably as a candidate for the position.Since 2000, my main work includes administration and customers and other related duties.I am in charge of writing most of our company letters to foreign parties and customers and drafting agreement and contract for my boss.I am also familiar with the filing system used in many companies, which will help to locate document without difficulty.I will suggest you to use this system to improve office efficiency.I can use electric typewriter and operate any similar machine.I am seeking your employment to upgrade my working knowledge and to have the opportunity meet more challenges.Looking forward to receiving your favorable reply.Thank you.I remain.Yours sincerely,LiMing

五邀請信

邀請信重點句式

1您能接受邀請前來參加6月8號抵達北京會議并發言，使我十分感激

I’m delighted that you have accepted our invitation to speak at the conference in Beijing on June 8th.4我們真誠的邀請王教授來我校做客座教授

We would like to invite Professor Wang to our university as a guest lecturer.5您如果能來出席我們今晚的宴會，我們將十分高興

We should be very pleased if you could come and have dinner with us this evening.6我很高興邀請您參加從。。。到。。在。。舉行的。。活動

I am pleased to invite you to participate in ?..to be held from?.to ?.in?

7如能邀請您參加。。是我莫大的榮幸

It is my pleasure/a great honor for me to invite you to ?..8我希望您不會拒絕我的邀請

I hope that you won’t decline my invitation

11您能否早日告訴我是否接受我的邀請

Would you please let me know as soon as possible if you can accept my invitation?我確實希望您能夠接受我的邀請

I do hope you will be able to accept our invitation.15我期盼著您的來信，并希望能見到您

I am looking forward to your reply, and eventually, seeing you.邀請信背誦范文

Director J.T.White

Environmental Protection Bureau

P.O.Box 751

Portland, Oregon 97207

U.S.A.Dear White,We are very delighted to accept your kind invitation to participate in the program mentioned in your letter of January 24, for

I believe that this program will be of great value and feasibility, and still needs mutual communicating.If performed well, it will surely play an exemplary role in the work on the worldwide environmental protection.And at the same time, we would learn much about the advanced environmental management practiced in America.Therefore, we will put it into practice in our city.Once again, thank you very much for your invitation and we are looking forward to the bright future through our joint efforts.Sincerely yours,Long Chuanren

Zhong Guoxin

六 感謝信

感謝信重點句式

1我特地寫信感謝你來醫院看望我I am writing to you to thank for your visiting me in the hospital.2這封信將滿載著我對你熱情款待的真摯感謝之情

I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for your hospitality.3你能按著日程安排組織信息，我十分感激

I especially appreciated your organizing the information according to the items on the agenda.4我非常感謝你的。。

I am grateful/ obliged to you for??.5我為你所做的一切表示感激

I am greatly indebted to you for what you have done

6感謝你在。。其間給與我無私的幫助

I am thankful/ obliged to you for your unselfish assistance during?.7我非常感謝你的好意，并希望有機會回報你

I deeply appreciate your courtesy and we hope to have the opportunity of rewarding you rendered me.8我借此機會對你所給與我的幫助表示深深的感謝

I take this opportunity to express my deep appreciation of your kind help you rendered me.9你為我這樣做真是太好了，我感激不盡

It was kind and generous of you to do this for me, and I appreciate it more than I can say.10請接受我誠摯的謝意，感謝你及時的幫助，我將難以忘懷

Please accept my most cordial thanks for your timely help, which I will never forget.11感激之情難以言表

Words fail me when I want to express my gratitude to you

12我在此向你表示感謝

Again, I would like to express our warm thanks to you.感謝信背誦范文

Dear Mr.Smith,I am writing to extend my thanks for your serving as director of the new-employee orientation committee during the past year.Under your leadership, our employee orientation program has become the most effective instrument we have for educating new people about the company---its past ,present, and future;its people, policies, and procedures;its high standing in the industry.I’m confident that new people now adapt more quickly to their new environment and bring to their jobs a good feeling about the company, which is so important to morale and productivity.I have been especially pleased at the variety of your program, the professional yet interesting manner in which the speakers brought off their presentations, the effective use of visual devices, and your allowance for participation by the new employees themselves.Please accept my most cordial thanks for your timely help, which I will never forget.Yours sincerely,Vice President

七 投訴信

投訴信重點句式

5我先寫信向你表達對。。。的不滿

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with ??.6我現寫信向你投訴有關。。。

I’m writing to complain about?..7我希望你注意到在。。。方面的一些問題。一方面。。。另一方面。。。

There are some problems with ?..but I wish to bring to attention.In the first place, ??In the second place, ??.8我抱怨的原因如下

The reasons why I complain are as follows.11為了改善局面，建議采取以下措施。其一。。其二。。。

In order to improve the situation, It’s advisable to take the following measures.For one thing ??..for another, ??..12 我希望問題可以盡早得以解決

I do hope that the problems will be solved as some as possible

13我希望你們能夠考慮一下我的建議，以便改善局面

I hope my suggestions will be taken into consideration to improve the situation.投訴信背誦范文

Dear Sir or Madam:

I have recently received a number of complaints from customers about your fountain pens/ball pens.The pens are clearly not giving satisfaction in some cases we have had to refund the purchase price.The pens complained about are part of the batch of 400 supplied to our order.No.612 May 1.This order was placed on the basis of a sample pen left by your agent.We have ourselves compared the performance of this sample with that of the pens complained about and there is little doubt that many of them are faulty;some of them leak and others fail to write without making blots.We are therefore writing to ask you to accept return of the unsold balance, amounting to 250 pens in all, and to replace them by pens of the quality our earlier dealing with you have led us to expect.We trust you will consider this matter seriously and make an effort to prevent the reoccurrence of such things.Yours sincerely,Li Ming

Dear General Manager,During the week-long May Day holiday, my friends and I went to Beijing and accommodated our-selves at your hotel from May first to May fifth.I am sorry to tell you that we are not satisfied with your service, which makes me write this letter after considerations.The focus of our complaint is the following.Firstly, the surrounding environment is too noisy.Even at mid-night, the noise from the nearby construction sites is constant and great.Secondly, I must say something about your food.Your menu is very expensive and the food quality is not so satisfying.Lastly, I must remind you that you should strengthen the security.Sometimes, even salesman came to knock on our doors, which made us feel annoyed and unsafe.The above-mentioned points are the unpleasant experiences during our stay in your hotel.I hope you will adopt some new measures to improve your services, which can prevent the image from damaging.I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Ming

八 祝賀信

祝賀信重點句式

1衷心祝賀您順利畢業

Heartiest congratulations upon your graduation.2對你的高質量工作我們十分欣賞

We much appreciate the high quality of your work.3祝你生日快樂，你是最棒的！

I hope your birthday is especially happy;you deserve the best.4我們祝愿在新的職位取得成功，期待我們的進一步合作

We wish you success in your new post and look forward to closer cooperation with you.祝你好運，祝你幸福

Wish you the best luck and everyhappiness.6在你生日之際，送上我們所有人最衷心的祝福

We all send you hearty greetings on your happy birthday.7我們對你生活中最幸福的事表示真誠的祝賀

We sincerely congratulate on the happiest event of your life.8我相信我將獲益匪淺

I believe I will derive great benefits from it

祝賀信背誦范文

Dear Sir or Madam:

I’m very glad to hear that you have passed the entrance examination and been accepted by a very famous university.I feel very proud of you and I believe you really deserve the honor since you have been working so hard on that.Studying in university has been the goal for most of the high school students.With the rapid development of science and technology, the society is changing fast.As a result, more and more people with high education background are needed.It is no doubt a better choice to pursue further study in university because there are a lot of information and useful facilities for your convenient reference as well as numerous knowledgeable professors for your consultation.So I think you’ve made a correct decision.While in university, you are sure to be surrounded by many smart students as well, and you are provided with many opportunities to broaden the horizon.You can learn a lot from each other and be well equipped for the future.A totally different picture scroll is unfolded before your eyes and I’ll cross my fingers to wish you a bright future.Yours sincerely,Li Ming

九 推薦信

推薦信背誦范文

Business School

Ball State University

Muncie, in 47306

Dear Prof.Terence,Zhao Yigang was enrolled as a student in my Economics course at the Renmin University of China in 1994.His performance in the class was quite outstanding.Mr.Zhao was diligent in his studies and participated in all the class discussion with his own ideas.He was capable of clear and logical analysis of complex subjects with his keen insight and made valuable contribution.In addition, Mr.Zhao has a pleasant personality.He gets along well with his colleagues because of his warm and friendly attitude toward them.Mr.Zhao has proved that he can engage in research work as an undergraduate in our university.I am sure that he will perform well in your college.I recommend him to you with no reservations.Sincerely yours,Wang Ning

(Doctor, Professor)

第五篇：GRE作文遣詞造句

各位GRE-作文版的版友們，大家好，我是Gter-GRE綜合版的版主：Saavedro。在這里我想談談關于如何在相對短的時間內最大最有效的提升自己的GRE-AW寫作語言屈駕和運用的能力。鑒于最近很多版友們（包括GRE版和TOEFL版）都在問這個問題，可見這個問題的關注度越來越高，很多人一直苦于找不到好的方法而處于事半功倍的囧境，苦苦練習了2個月才發現自己的寫作語言能力還是沒有什么本質性的進步。最后AW考試的時候，才只有3分，3.5分等等，殊不知正是因為練習方法不當才導致了這樣結果的發生。我相信收到GRE成績單的同學都可以清楚的看到ETS對于各個分數段的評價和解釋，你會發現3分作文的評語很明顯的強調了：語言上錯誤很多，包括用詞的不精確，語法的錯誤，句子的語病等等。也就是說3分同學的文章先不說思路和構架如何如何的有問題，光是語言的缺陷就已經足夠把這篇文章打入到低分群體中了。

這是成績單上ETS給予3分文章的評語：Displays some competence in analytical writing, although the writing is flawed in at least one of the following ways: limited analysis or development, weak organization, weak control of sentence structures and language usage, with errors that often result in vagueness or lack of clarity.因此如何更有效地提升遣詞造句以適應和達到GRE寫作的要求就成為了當前迫在眉睫的重要任務了，同時也是剛剛準備AW的同學最關注的事了。不可否認他們對于GRE寫作的理解可能還僅僅停留在語言這個層面上，當然平心而論，大部分剛開始接觸GRE寫作的同學更多的問題還不是思路問題，擺在他們面前的第一座大山就是這個語言問題即：如何在相對短的時間內，從四六級和TOEFL寫作的水平提升到GRE-AW的學術英語寫作呢？在我調查了大部分同學剛開始練習AW寫作的時候，他們告訴我，平均第一篇ISSUE都要寫2小時左右，才能寫出一篇大約在450-550字之間的文章，而他們最大的困難還不是思路問題，是語言表達的問題。其實這個也不難以理解。像GRE這樣最后要達到：45分鐘寫出至少650字的英文學術論文的難度，的確是其他類型的考試無法類比的。國內的四六級英語考試是30分鐘寫150字左右的生活或者日常應用類型的話題。TOEFL，IELTS是30分鐘寫300字左右的獨立話題作文，話題也是一般社會大眾現象或者是學習生活類型的話題。即使是專四專八英語考試的作文題目也沒有達到GRE這種即學術又抽象化的題目上，而且字數也同樣是300字左右，也沒有像GRE這樣的寫作如此“變態”。然后我們說歸說，抱怨歸抱怨，可是問題依然存在，所以明智的人應該想如何破解這個難題，如何擊破和突破這個GRE-AW的第一道語言層次上的障礙。

事實上據我調查來看，很多準備GRE考試的朋友們在開始的初期時，思維都是如此運作的：寫作時80%以上用在語言支配和組織上，不到20%的精力用在文章的組織和分析上。他們告訴我說，語言上實在困難的令我難以為繼。但是我想說的是這很正常，幾乎任何人開始準備的時候都是這種狀態，并沒有什么奇怪的。那么考前應該達到什么水平才可以比較穩的去參加考試呢？我想是把上面兩種狀態調過來：80%用在思路思想和文章結構的安排上，20%的精力用在語言組織遣詞造句和其他部分上。如果你后期?？嫉臅r候你的思維和精力是這樣分配的，那么恭喜你，你的語言表達已經完全不是你寫作的障礙了。語言關過了，你攻克GRE的信心也就會與日俱增了。說到這里，也許有人問了：這怎么可能呢，這不是達到漢語母語寫作的境界了嗎？怎么可能在短短2-3個月內做到呢？ 可我想說的是：你只說對了一半，雖然我們畢竟是中國人，母語是漢語，但是如果有方法能令你在相對短的時間內把

自己的能力無限逼近于母語的境界呢？答案是肯定的。首先提升自己就要先明白自己的問題在哪里？要分別從哪幾個角度提升自己？很多人在提升前根本就沒有想過這些，只是一味的仿效別人去做，不停的寫，這只是為了使自己活動心理上的滿足，可對于自己的實力提升卻只有微末之功，因為他從來沒有分析過自己的問題到底在哪里，何能談及如何改成和提高呢？因此認識到問題的關鍵也就等于為解決了問題打下了良好的基礎。下面我來說說具體的操作方法吧：

提升寫作語言表達能力不外乎有兩個層面：詞匯+句子，這也就是我們平時所說的遣詞造句的能力。筆者認為這是提升寫作語言表達能力的關鍵所在。但是我們受到傳統國內英語教育的影響，總聽說詞匯和寫作能力的提升不是一朝一夕的功夫，需要長年累月的積累才能發生質的變化。所以很多人聽之聞之，慢慢的也就真的害怕起來了。但是以我自己來說，我認為上面那句話說對了一半。詞匯和寫作表達的能力提升絕對不是一朝一夕的功夫，但是也絕非需要長年累月才可以去應對GRE啊。當然大家現在寫作遇到的首要問題可能就是在規定的限時內無法寫出滿意的語言來，要么字數少的可憐，要么整篇文章語言表達問題嚴重使之完全不能托起自己在ISSUE或者ARGUMENT上的邏輯思維表達。這是致命性的問題，也是最棘手的問題了。剛才說過了，要想解決這個矛盾的話，首先要突破來自異國語言表達的禁錮，如果不能突破和根除這種禁錮的話，你將永遠不能去做到和題目直接的交心，不能做到和ETS的考官們面對面的“討論”這個GRE-AW的寫作話題。因此我分詞匯和句型兩個部分來分別說下如何做到在只有2-3個月的時間內使自己的寫作語言能力比起以前來得到大幅度本質性的提升，從而輕松應對GRE寫作。請你相信我，只要你肯按照我下面說的付出努力并且堅持2個月以上，那么你的寫作能力一定會有質的飛躍，載體語言能力上去了，題目思想結構等等經過事先提綱的反復修改也基本已經臻至完美。這個時候你不沖擊高分，高分也會來沖擊你??！

詞匯部分：

先來看看ETS官方評語針對低分作文語言方面缺陷的說明吧：weak control of sentence structures and language usage, with errors that often result in vagueness or lack of clarity.由此可見低分作文一個很重要的flaw就是由于遣詞造句能力不佳直接導致語言上的失誤，評分人根本無法理解作者寫作的本意，嚴重影響了文章語言表達的clarity.首先要認識到寫作詞匯和閱讀詞匯的不同點，很多人盲目的認為英語的詞匯在聽說讀寫上都是一樣的，也就是說自己對于他們掌握的程度可以劃上等號。但實際上呢？絕對不是這樣的。閱讀和聽力中你能夠認識的和聽出來的詞匯叫做被動詞匯（passive words），而在寫作和口語中能夠寫出來和說出來的叫做主動詞匯(active words)。兩種詞匯的最大區別就在于前者是你不會使用的，只能依靠被動的接受而能有所反應的詞匯。但是后者是你必須能正確應用的詞匯，也就是不僅要知道單詞的拼寫，發音，意思，就是連詞匯的用法和搭配也必須要

知道的一清二楚，否則你無法正確運用的。我們看上面的定義就知道我們同學之所以寫作詞匯能力差就是我們大家的主動詞匯無論從質還有量上都太少了，而通過機械般的背單詞，被動詞匯倒是提升了不少?？墒悄悴灰浾嬲饬磕阌⒄Z水平的一項重要標準就是：一個人掌握主動詞匯的質量與他掌握一門語言的能力成正比例。現在大家看到了，寫作要求我們的就是主動詞匯的能力的提升。現在確定了我們詞匯要進步提升的目標了就好辦多了。接下來就是要具體說說提升的方法了。在談這個方法前，我們先要說說GRE-AW寫作到底要我們有多少主動詞匯才夠？其實這個問題很難回答，以前寄托作文版的一位老前輩名叫：星夜無夏。以她的觀點來說：有了四級的4500詞匯就已經能夠應付GRE寫作了。平心而論我覺得這話說的也不無道理，因為我們看看那些ETS公布的范文和諸如其他類似文體的美文用詞也僅僅就在四六級的6000核心詞匯內。但是我想大家應該明白一個道理，用詞簡單要表達復雜邏輯和學術話題的話的確難度不小，這需要語言上非常高且精妙的能力技巧。很顯然，作為漢語為母語的我們，我們平時用漢語寫這種話題的時候也不敢保證用詞都會那么的基礎，那么的簡單。因此掌握一定的高級詞匯是很有必要的，也是十分迫切的。那么有多少才夠呢？我給各位的建議是最好有6000以上的詞匯，也就是國內大學英語六級的詞匯的水平。請注意我這里說的詞匯水平不是說閱讀中能認識，聽力中能聽懂。而是寫作中能夠正確的使用出來，這里面包括該詞匯的常用用法和固定常用搭配等等。而我在準備AW的時候自己的寫作主動詞匯量大概在8000這個等級上。因為除了四六級詞匯外，我還練習了部分TOEFL層次甚至GRE紅寶書中的常用寫作詞匯。當我已經達到了8000主動詞匯寫作表達的時候，寫作中再也沒有來自詞匯的羈絆，自己的思想和對于題目的觀點看法便如滔滔江水一樣，由腦海中傾瀉而出，45分鐘后即成一篇不少于650字的ISSUE文章了，那種感覺是如此的美妙絕倫，是我以前從來沒有感受到過的。

練習方法和工具書：

教材：以我自己的經驗來看，我推薦大家用一本名為：《TOEFL-ibt 寫作詞匯小伴侶》作者是：戴云，張宏偉。這本書雖然是TOEFL寫作用的書，但是書中收錄的詞匯非常全面，而且還都給分了類和科目，所以很便于進行分類性的高頻詞匯總結。、方法：如果你還有2個月以上的時間的話，那么就以此書中前271頁的詞匯和短語為目標進行訓練，如果你只有1個月的時間左右的話，那么就以前100頁詞匯和詞組訓練也就可以了。訓練方法同普通的背單詞方法不一樣。首先請你找出一支筆來，在前271頁中把你認為重要的和你將來寫作可能會用到的詞匯和短語統統用紅筆把它右邊的中文釋義畫下來（英文詞匯不要畫任何東西）。每天要給自己定出進度來（例如：50頁詞匯），將左面的英文單詞用卡片一類的東西擋住，練習看你畫出的后面的中文釋義和詞性來想左面被擋住的詞匯是什么（注意不會使用的詞匯要特別查詞典看用法，這里面多是動詞比較復雜；名詞，形容詞，副詞等都相對容易得多）。用這個方法將271頁的詞匯和短語在一周左右的時間迅速的過掉第一遍，這個時候請你不要著急，因為還不熟練。你需要適當的縮短時間，例如：5天，再重復上面的步驟。如此練習一個月左右，你會發現你再寫文章的時候你腦子對于詞匯的運作方式就發生變化了。以前你在寫的時候遇到一個地方會苦苦的思索有什么詞匯可以放到這里用。但是這個時候你會發現你的腦子里出現了4-5個這樣同義或者上義的詞匯或者短語，你現在需要做的工作就是選一個最好的寫上。這樣用一個月左右的時間把寫作詞匯的問題徹底解決掉。不過要注意的是此方法不到考試前的一天不能停止，一旦停止你的主動詞匯量就會發生退化，因為畢竟你還不在英語語言環境中。

其中的訓練原理其實很簡單：因為漢語是我們的母語，英語對于我們來說是相對陌生的多的。我們對于英語的語感也遠沒有漢語高。因此要想提升對于英語的敏感和運用能力，在初期的時候就必須以漢語這個令我們熟悉的語言作為媒介將我們的表達和英語思維和語言連接起來。如果一味的死背英文單詞記憶漢語釋義的話，我們的記憶還是停留在被動詞匯那個層面上，永遠也無法更有效地提高甚至突破。

造句部分：

解決了詞匯的問題，現在就剩下句式和造句的問題了。這個問題也相當棘手，很多人寫作的文章詞匯雖然沒有問題，但是句式非常的單一化，而且無法做到簡單句和復雜句的交錯使用，使文章語言上沒有層次跌宕起伏的感覺，縱然有cogent的論證和精善的思路，句式表達卻平平無奇，最終沒能托起作者的idea，遺憾終生~~~

這就好比武俠小說中所言：天下極品武學都要依賴上乘的內力催動，方能發揮出無窮的力量。故內功根基不深厚，縱有再多的上乘武學秘籍，也是徒勞無功耳。

練習方法和工具書：

教材：推薦一本書和一部資料：《GRE北美官方范文》（北美范文），帶有中英文雙解的ISSUE和ARGUMENT的題庫（XDF黃皮系列書和網上的資料也可）。注意：北美范文這本書在整個GRE-AW備考中要慎重使用?，F在中國考生GRE-AW分數偏低，除了語言不過關以外，再有就是抄襲和雷同兼死板八股化十分嚴重。而這種現象的出現和這本書可以說有著莫大的關聯。因此筆者建議北美范文這本書還是要買的，但是只能用來練習語言表達能力，千萬不能用于思路開拓和作文破題審題寫作模式等等方面。而真正這方面的東西，還有賴于大家自己積極的發揮主觀能動性吧，ETS總喜歡原創且新穎的東西。不過要為北美范文澄清的是：它對于語言表達能力培養提升還是大有裨益的，筆者當時寫作造句能力提升60%就有賴于對于這本書使用。

方法：練習ISSUE部分的范文文章即可。以此書的開始的前30篇ISSUE文章為綱要進行訓練。首先在你的計算機中GRE寫作資料中建立一個文件夾，名為：北美范文漢譯英練習。

具體操作方法為每天至少練習2篇ISSUE文章的漢譯英練習，每篇文章獨立一個txt文檔文件。打開你的北美范文，然后翻到后面中文翻譯的地方，看一句中文，然后做漢譯英的翻

譯練習，將你翻譯的結果打字到文檔文件里保存，當一個段落或者一篇文章翻譯完后，仔細對照原文。這時候你會發現你翻譯的和英文原文有很大的不同，這里面包括詞匯和句式的差異等等。這時候你要注意，原文中使用好的詞匯和表達方式你都要統統的以其所在分句的形式抄在一個本子上（中英文都要抄上），然后每天沒事的時候就看著你抄寫的中文再次回想對應的英文是什么，就這樣每天堅持翻譯兩篇文章，然后看抄寫下的中文回想和記憶對應的英文部分，兩周后就會翻譯完這30篇文章。這個時候就要停下來不要再翻譯新的文章。你要做的是再次從第一篇到第三十篇文章做漢譯英的翻譯練習。隨著你的詞匯和句式能力的提升，你會發現你這次的翻譯結果還是和原文有所不同，但是與前者不同的是你發現它的語言和你的語言比起來比你容易得多，無論是詞匯還有句式上，這就說明你進步了。你比它好的地方你自己要保留，而你不如它的地方還要用上述辦法改進。就這樣堅持1-2個月，你的造句的能力也會發生質的飛躍。你會發現無論你想表達什么，你都能在最短的時間內在做到詞匯和句式兼顧下，高效率，低錯誤的寫完你想要寫的文章，通過英語語言完美的詮釋你的思想和觀點。注意：如果你只想高效率的練習造句能力的話也可以使用國內考研英語閱讀的長難句進行漢譯英的翻譯，那個雖然更為痛苦些，但是效果卻更加出眾。筆者當時使用的是《北美范文》和《楊鵬GRE&&GMAT難句》作為寫作漢譯英的材料練習寫作語言表達能力的，卻只練習了不到2個月便突然于一次寫作時發現自己的英文表達已經完全脫胎換骨，在表達GRE-ISSUE的時候，文字上竟然能體驗到游戲自如一般的感受，真是妙極，爽極！！其中的訓練原理同詞匯基本一致，都是要通過漢語母語來牽動英語和我們的思維連接上。在這里筆者想說的，也是想請大家記住的是提升輸出性英語表達的最好辦法就是做與之相對應的漢譯英練習。因為英譯漢實際提升的只是你漢語的表達能力，真正能在相對短時間內且有效提升英語表達能力的方法唯有：漢譯英練習?。∵@個練習你不做不知道，一做嚇一跳??！當然當你一開始練習的時候就不能停下一直要堅持2個月左右才會出先奇效，所以還是那句老話：貴在堅持??！如果說聽寫是提升聽力的唯一途徑，那么漢譯英就是有效提升英語寫作語言表達的唯一方式了。

洋洋灑灑的說了這么多，筆者只是想告訴各位G友們：只要方法正確，再配以你堅忍不拔的毅力，那么結果就一定會是輝煌的。筆者的AW部分是5.0分（估計ISSUE比ARGUMENT部分要高）。而以當初筆者的英語基礎之差我相信當世亦是十分罕有的。曾經有人對筆者說四級都沒過怎么考GRE啊？？？就是打死我，我也不行?。。」P者對于這樣的人總是愿意糾正他這個思想認識上的錯誤。如果你們要比誰的英語基礎差，筆者相信筆者絕對居于此類“超弱勢群體”的超弱勢前列。筆者在此不說具體的分數，我只說用大學英語四級來說事沒有絲毫的意義，筆者2005年參加北京高考英語部分的分數不但沒有及格，而且距離90分這個及格線也是相差甚遠，大一基礎英語上下學期都是掛科。但是筆者大二下學期為了考GRE考TOEFL，為了飛躍夢想而瘋狂拼命的學習英語。這才能以一年多前的那種英語基礎到今天能拿下GRE這個被世界上號稱最難得英語考試來。所以請你不要抱怨什么，只需要從今天開始努力做你應該做的就可以了。筆者還是那句話：方法+堅持=成功奇跡出現??！