第一篇：GRE作文例子

伽利略的所有試驗(yàn)中，最著名的該算是“質(zhì)量相異者同時(shí)落地”，這個(gè)試驗(yàn)推翻了亞里士多德的關(guān)于落體速度與其質(zhì)量成正比的理論。但事實(shí)上，并沒有紀(jì)錄表明伽利略真的做了這個(gè)著名試驗(yàn)。

Galileo was an Italian physicist, mathematician, astronomer and philosopher who played a major role in the Scientific Revolution.A biography by Galileo's pupil Vincenzo Viviani stated that Galileo had dropped balls of the same material, but different masses, from the Leaning Tower of Pisa to demonstrate that their time of descent was independent of their mass.This was contrary to what Aristotle had taught: that heavy objects fall faster than lighter ones, in direct proportion to weight.While this story has been retold in popular accounts, there is no account by Galileo himself of such an experiment, and it is generally accepted by historians that it was at most a thought experiment which did not actually take place.Charles Robert Darwin was an English naturalist who established that all species of life have descended over time from common ancestors, and proposed the scientific theory that this branching pattern of evolution resulted from a process that he called natural selection.He published his theory with compelling evidence for evolution in his 1859 book On the Origin of Species.Journey of the Beagle貝格爾號(hào)旅程

Movements

The term labor movement or labor movement is a broad term for the development of a collective organization of working people, to campaign in their own interest for better treatment from their employers and governments, in particular through the implementation of specific laws governing labour relations.Martin Luther King, Jr.(January 15, 1929 – April 4, 1968)was an American clergyman, activist, and prominent leader in the African American civil rights movement.His main legacy is securing progress on civil rights in the United States.Because of this work, he has become a human rights icon.In 1964, King became the youngest person to receive the Nobel Peace Prize for his work to end racial segregation and racial discrimination through civil disobedience and other non-violent means.“I Have a Dream” is the famous name given to the sixteen minute public speech by Martin Luther King, Jr., in which he called for racial equality and an end to discrimination.伊斯蘭教婦女The study of women in Islam investigates the role status of women within the religion of Islam.The complex relationship between women and Islam is defined by both Islamic texts and the history and culture of the Muslim world.Sharia(Islamic law)provides for differences between women's and men's roles, rights, and obligations.Majority Muslim countries give women varying degrees of rights with regards to marriage, divorce, civil rights, legal status, dress code, and education based on different

interpretations.Scholars and other commentators vary as to whether they are just and whether they are a correct interpretation of religious imperatives.Conservatives argue that differences between men and women are due to different status and), p.278 while liberal Muslims, Muslim

feminists, and others argue in favor of other interpretations.Some women have achieved high political office in Muslim majority states.Sartorial hijab（頭蓋）, and the veil（面紗）in particular, has often been viewed by Westerners as a sign of oppression of Muslim women.婚禮Wedding traditions and customs vary greatly between cultures, ethnic groups, religions, countries, and social classes.Most wedding ceremonies involve an exchange of wedding vows by the couple, presentation of a gift(offering, ring(s), symbolic item, flowers, money), and a public proclamation of marriage by an authority figure or leader.Special wedding garments are often worn, and the ceremony is followed by a wedding reception.Chinese wedding customs

Main articles: Chinese marriage and Southern Chinese wedding

Traditional Chinese marriage is a ceremonial ritual within Chinese societies that involve a

marriage established by pre-arrangement between families.Within Chinese culture, romantic love was allowed, and monogamy was the norm for most ordinary citizens.A band of musicians with gongs and flute-like instruments accompanies the bride parade to groom's home.Similar music is also played at the wedding banquet.Depending on the region that the bride hails from, Chinese weddings will have different traditions such as Tea Ceremony or the use of a wedding emcee.Also in modern times, Chinese couples will often go to photo studios to take “glamour shots” posing in multiple gowns and various backgrounds.Most regional Chinese wedding rituals follow the main Chinese wedding traditions, although some rituals are particular to the peoples of the southern China region.In most southern Chinese wedding, the bride price is based on the groom's economic status.The idea of “selling the daughter” or bride isn't a phrase that is used often therefore the price of the bride isn't too

demanding.Most of the time the bride price is in the form of gold jewelry, fine fabric, or money, even a roast pig which symbolizes the bride to be a virgin.Wedding presents are given by the elderly couples or couples that are older than the newlyweds and tea is served by the younger family members.A number of cultures have adopted the traditional Western custom of the white wedding, in which a bride wears a white dress and veil.This tradition was popularized through the wedding of Queen Victoria.Some say Victoria's choice of a white gown may have simply been a sign of

extravagance, but may have also been influenced by the values she held which emphasized sexual purity.Within the modern 'white wedding' tradition, a white dress and veil are unusual choices for a woman's second or subsequent wedding.The notion that a white gown might symbolize sexual purity has been long abandoned, and is criticized by etiquette writers like Judith Martin as distasteful.The use of a wedding ring has long been part of religious weddings in Europe and America, but the origin of the tradition is unclear.Historians like Vicky Howard point out that belief in the

“ancient” quality of the practice are most likely a modern invention.“Double ring” ceremonies are also a modern practice, a groom's wedding band not appearing in the United States until the early 20th Century.The wedding is often followed by a reception, in which the rituals may include toasting the newlyweds, their first dance as spouses, and the cutting of a wedding cake.

第二篇：GRE寫作名人例子

在練習(xí)作文的過程中,發(fā)現(xiàn)很多人名在很多人名在很多題材的作文中都可以反復(fù)用到,在沒有總結(jié)這些名字之前,老是寫新文章時(shí)就忘記了以前用過的人名的拼寫.所以就開始積累常用人名了.由于論壇里其它形式的資料帖都有了,為求有點(diǎn)新意,能給g友們更快地提升作文,遂決定把本人的人名總結(jié)及其適用文章貢獻(xiàn)出來.:)

由于適用的文章是我臨時(shí)回憶的,所以肯定不止下面列舉的這些適用文章.歡迎補(bǔ)充!

凡高 Van Gogh: 藝術(shù)類文章里引用,如arts and critics, greatness總是超前時(shí)代的所以只能由后人評(píng)判, history強(qiáng)調(diào)individual(因?yàn)樵谒囆g(shù)歷史領(lǐng)域只能強(qiáng)調(diào)individual),還有percive world with different eyes也可以引用這個(gè)例子.此人的另類抽象painting風(fēng)格和當(dāng)時(shí)的審美標(biāo)準(zhǔn)不符,故遭排擠,而幾百年后的critics才發(fā)現(xiàn)他的價(jià)值.哥白尼 Copernicus:引用題目有:greatness超前時(shí)代,挑戰(zhàn)權(quán)威(當(dāng)時(shí)是church),history強(qiáng)調(diào)individual(因?yàn)樵诳茖W(xué)研究領(lǐng)域只能強(qiáng)調(diào)individual).此人是日心說,當(dāng)時(shí)宗教教育說是地心說,死前才公布自已的論斷(因?yàn)榕略缢?.莫扎特 Mozart: greatness只能由后人判斷的反面例子.此人音樂才華在世時(shí)就被教皇看重,給以了很多贊助,使其.......畢加索 Picasso: greatness只能由后人判斷的反面例子,arts反映hidden ideas的反面例子.此人是20世紀(jì)最偉大的畫家,其畫風(fēng)格為cubism,很多人說他的畫只反映個(gè)人的ideocyncratic,而沒有反映社會(huì)的hidden ideas,此人在世時(shí)就被判為greatness了.林肯 Abraham Lincoln: history關(guān)注individuals,effective leader要隨機(jī)應(yīng)變,justand unjust laws.此人南北戰(zhàn)爭,解放黑奴,沒有他,可能就沒有今天這樣的美國了.據(jù)說他在南北戰(zhàn)爭前是不支持解放黑奴的,而之后又支持了.馬丁路德金 Martin Luther King: leaders要有很高的moral and ethical standards, history關(guān)注individuals的重要性,just and unjust laws,學(xué)習(xí)歷史的重要性.此人為黑人獲得與白人相同的權(quán)利發(fā)起了黑奴運(yùn)動(dòng),他的“I have a dream”演講教育了一代一代人.他的moral and ethical standards是不用說的,沒有這個(gè)individual,美國黑人現(xiàn)在可能還要坐在汽車后面的座位.莎士比亞 Shakespeare: greatness由后人評(píng)判的反面例子,survive and arts里強(qiáng)調(diào)arts可以培養(yǎng)人什么的.此人的介紹我就不多說了.貝多芬 Beethoven: arts的重要性,arts and critics.此人為著名作曲家,'命運(yùn)'激勵(lì)了多少人,當(dāng)時(shí)的critics也批斗過他,因?yàn)閟tandards很rigid and stale.希特勒 Hitler:

不能迷信權(quán)威啊,學(xué)習(xí)歷史的重要性啊(不重蹈覆轍),history強(qiáng)調(diào)individual啊.此人是著名戰(zhàn)爭狂,由于全國人都迷信他的言論才能坐上首相位置,學(xué)習(xí)他的例子可以使現(xiàn)在的社會(huì)不重蹈他的覆轍,他這個(gè)individual也反映當(dāng)時(shí)common people/multitude的普遍value:戰(zhàn)爭主義,chauvinism.加利略 Galileo:不迷信權(quán)威,history強(qiáng)調(diào)individual(因?yàn)樵诳茖W(xué)研究領(lǐng)域只能強(qiáng)調(diào)individual),beginner and expert.當(dāng)時(shí)的expert和authority就是Aristotle,認(rèn)為物體越重下降越快.而此人證明了其實(shí)都是一樣快的.亞力士多德 Aristotle: 和加利略一起舉例.愛因斯坦 Einstein: 不迷信權(quán)威.greatness由后人判斷的反面例子.beginner andexpert中expert的劣勢(shì).此人證明了權(quán)威牛頓三大定律只能在宏觀世界有效,而不適于微觀世界.其greatness在其在世時(shí)就確立了,他曾說過,自從他成名后,就沒能找出一段完整屬于自己的時(shí)間來深入思考這個(gè)世界了.牛頓 Newton.不迷信權(quán)威,greatness由后人判斷.此人是個(gè)權(quán)威,被愛因斯坦挑戰(zhàn)見愛因斯坦那條.華盛頓 George Washington: history研究individual的重要性.leaders 要有moralstandards.此人為美國開國總統(tǒng),沒有他開了連續(xù)任兩屆總統(tǒng)就得下臺(tái)的先河,可能美國在他之后好久都是專制國家,因?yàn)楫?dāng)時(shí)有人要他當(dāng)皇帝.凱薩 Caesar.history研究individual的重要性.此人即是亞利山大大帝,所建立的亞力山大帝國地跨三大陸.研究那個(gè)帝國如果研究他,只研究multitude怎么能研究得下去?

托馬斯.杰佛森 Thomas Jefferson: 這個(gè)有點(diǎn)想不起來用在哪里了.此人說過all men are created

equal->the declaration of independence:

甘地 Gandhi: greatness的文章,leaders and moral standards的文章.此人是印度的建國祖師,坐過很多牢,stoic,情操很高,結(jié)果可以只demenstration來和平解放印度.拿破侖 Napoleon: individual的重要性.此人是著名戰(zhàn)爭狂,他的發(fā)起的戰(zhàn)爭雖然很荒唐,但卻被法國中場階認(rèn)為很浪漫,他的individual反映當(dāng)時(shí)的普遍價(jià)值觀.肯尼迪 Kennedy: scandals,leaders should have moral standards.此人在位時(shí)很大程度緩解了蘇美關(guān)系.卻有marital scandals.所以scandals會(huì)distract us from

people's real responsibility.羅斯福 Roosevelt(FDR): individual的重要性,領(lǐng)導(dǎo)要聽取群眾意見,隨機(jī)應(yīng)變.此人有兩大貢獻(xiàn):發(fā)動(dòng)反德戰(zhàn)爭,帶美國走出Depression.沒有他的發(fā)動(dòng)戰(zhàn)爭宣言,可能WWII不會(huì)這么快結(jié)束.據(jù)說一位英國著名經(jīng)濟(jì)學(xué)家曾寫信給他說要他采取蘇聯(lián)模式來政府介入自由經(jīng)濟(jì),操控經(jīng)濟(jì),才使他在1930年代出臺(tái)各種政府措施來改善經(jīng)濟(jì),使得經(jīng)濟(jì)復(fù)蘇(大國崛起里說的).成吉斯汗 Genghis Khan: 領(lǐng)導(dǎo)要聽取群眾意思,而不是有強(qiáng)硬持久的原則和目標(biāo): 這個(gè)也不用介紹了.斯大林 Stalin: 同成吉斯汗.達(dá)爾文 Darwin: 挑戰(zhàn)權(quán)威.進(jìn)化論的祖師爺,寫過'the origin of species'.挑戰(zhàn)當(dāng)時(shí)普遍的神創(chuàng)論.孟德爾 Mendel: expert and beginner,data的重要性.因?yàn)槭莈xpert,因?yàn)樽隽耸暄芯糠e累了大量data,才由統(tǒng)計(jì)學(xué)原理發(fā)現(xiàn)了law of Inheritance.瓦特 Watt James: 很多都適用,如creativity很重要啊,興趣很重要而不是老去考慮對(duì)社會(huì)會(huì)有什么貢獻(xiàn)啊.此人發(fā)明了蒸汽機(jī),從小喜歡機(jī)械,并一直研究.里根 Reagon: 投資類題目適用.他發(fā)起了星球計(jì)劃.為將來的太空軍備競賽作準(zhǔn)備.結(jié)果由于工程浩大而放棄,浪費(fèi)了很多錢,所以投資都應(yīng)該用在對(duì)社會(huì)有實(shí)在好處上.居里 Mary Curie: 學(xué)習(xí)歷史人物的重要性,失敗是成功之母.此女人經(jīng)過十年才找到radium這種元素,并把提取方法毫無保留地與全世界共享,獲得了若貝爾獎(jiǎng).其堅(jiān)持不懈的品質(zhì)值得學(xué)習(xí),其十年失敗,終成功的例子說明了失敗是成功之母.克里克 Crick: imagination and knowledge.此人很變態(tài),發(fā)現(xiàn)DNA結(jié)構(gòu)是由于做夢(mèng)!

麥克斯維 Maxwell: imagination and knowledge,greatness由后人判斷.此人是著名物理學(xué)家,他大膽推測(cè)出電磁場理論electromagnetism并給予理論證明,但當(dāng)時(shí)很多人不能相信,在他死后就有人從實(shí)驗(yàn)室證明了他的理論.

第三篇：新GRE寫作例子使用原則

新GRE寫作例子使用原則

相關(guān)性很重要，不要提供不相關(guān)的信息，和大家眾所周知又對(duì)你論證不是非常必要的內(nèi)容。舉個(gè)不恰當(dāng)?shù)睦樱f愛因斯坦和相對(duì)論的時(shí)候，不需要說愛因斯坦的其他理論;說萊特兄弟發(fā)明飛機(jī)的時(shí)候，沒有必要說他們當(dāng)時(shí)在哪個(gè)州。這些看似比較顯而易見，但是如果自己比較隨意，就會(huì)有很多不相關(guān)的信息傳遞出去。

不能只提供例子，不提供對(duì)例子的分析，哪怕只有一句話。例子出現(xiàn)的時(shí)刻，應(yīng)該是分析到了一定程度，水到渠成了自然出現(xiàn)。然后例子之后，最好再加1-2句為什么這個(gè)例子能支撐我的觀點(diǎn)，或者是，我們能從這個(gè)例子看出什么，或者是，這個(gè)例子為什么很重要。這樣就顯得飽滿。

上述就是有關(guān)新GRE作文例子使用的問題解答，此外，例子其實(shí)不能展得太開。一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)段，大概只有6-8句話。那么例子差不多也就2句話。有些例子可能只有一句話，或者只有一個(gè)such as blablabla.一定要精練，才能真正的助力GRE作文高分。

第四篇：GRE issue寫作之自己總結(jié)的萬能例子

Renaissance

For example, the helpless fate can be felt from the tragedy works, written by Shakespeare.Mona Lisa, created by Beethoven, revealed the mysterious and implicit smile.Although works completed by different artists and writers revealed slight variations in the access, performing form, and social aspect focusing on, as far as common theme and hidden ideas were concerned, the obvious similries to each other seemed much more than any of the minute differences, namely, resisting the feudalization and corrupt institution and enlightening freedom of human being.This is called “Renaissance” in the history.Genetic engineering

迄今為止，基因工程還沒有用于人體，但已在從細(xì)菌到家畜的幾乎所有非人生命物體上做了實(shí)驗(yàn)，并取得了成功。事實(shí)上，所有用于治療糖尿病的胰島素都來自一種細(xì)菌，其ＤＮＡ中被插入人類可產(chǎn)生胰島素的基因，細(xì)菌便可自行復(fù)制胰島素。基因工程技術(shù)使得許多植物具有了抗病蟲害和抗除草劑的能力；在美國，大約有一半的大豆和四分之一的玉米都是轉(zhuǎn)基因的。目前，是否該在農(nóng)業(yè)中采用轉(zhuǎn)基因動(dòng)植物已成為人們爭論的焦點(diǎn)：支持者認(rèn)為，轉(zhuǎn)基因的農(nóng)產(chǎn)品更容易生長，也含有更多的營養(yǎng)（甚至藥物），有助于減緩世界范圍內(nèi)的饑荒和疾病；而反對(duì)者則認(rèn)為，在農(nóng)產(chǎn)品中引入新的基因會(huì)產(chǎn)生副作用，尤其是會(huì)破壞環(huán)境。

誠然，仍有許多基因的功能及其協(xié)同工作的方式不為人類所知，但想到利用基因工程可使番茄具有抗癌作用、使鮭魚長得比自然界中的大幾倍、使寵物不再會(huì)引起過敏，許多人便希望也可以對(duì)人類基因做類似的修改。畢竟，胚胎遺傳病篩查、基因修復(fù)和基因工程等技術(shù)不僅可用于治療疾病，也為改變諸如眼睛的顏色、智力等其他人類特性提供了可能。比如，運(yùn)用此技術(shù)，可使患兒的父母生一個(gè)和患兒骨髓匹配的孩子，然后再通過骨髓移植來治愈患兒。

So far, genetic engineering has not been used in human, but it has achieved successful experiment in almost all the objects on non-human life--from bacteria to livestock already.In fact, all the insulin treatment for diabetes come from a kind of bacteria which can be inserted into a human genes to make copies of insulin by bacteria oneself.Genetic engineering technology makes many plants have the disease-resistant ability and herbicide, In the USA, about half of soybean and a quarter of corn is genetically modified.At present, whether the transgenic plants used in agriculture has become the focus of debate, transgenic supporters think: the agricultural is faster to growth, and easier to contain more nutrition(even medicine), to help slow down worldwide famine and disease, But opponents argued, introducing new genes into agricultural will occur side effects, especially destroy the environment.Advantage: Admittedly, ethicist rejected the innovative development of genetic engineering because, although it resolved some problems, it also produced new complications.Nevertheless，there are still many genes function and work principle beyond human knowledge, but using genetic engineering can make the tomatoes have anti-cancer effects, make the salmon bigger than in nature, and also make pet no longer allergy, many people are expect to do similar human genetic modification.After all, gene engineering technology can not only cure the disease, also make most possibility for change human characteristics, such as eye color, intelligence and others.For example, by using this technology, it is possible to make the parents pregnant to born a baby whose bone matches one needs homogenous bone, and then through the bone marrow transplants to cure patients.We said the advantages and disadvantages of biological technology, is mainly refers to the genetic engineering.弊:1)克隆將減少遺傳變異，通過克隆產(chǎn)生的個(gè)體具有同樣的遺傳基因，同樣的疾病敏感性，一種疾病就可以毀滅整個(gè)由克隆產(chǎn)生的群體。可以設(shè)想，如果一個(gè)國家的牛群都是同一個(gè)克隆產(chǎn)物，一種并不嚴(yán)重的病毒就可能毀滅全國的畜牧業(yè)。

2)克隆技術(shù)的使用將使人們傾向于大量繁殖現(xiàn)有種群中最有利用價(jià)值的個(gè)體，而不是按自然規(guī)律促進(jìn)整個(gè)種群的優(yōu)勝劣汰。從這個(gè)意義上說，克隆技術(shù)干擾了自然進(jìn)化過程.7)克隆技術(shù)對(duì)家庭關(guān)系帶來的影響也將是巨大的。一個(gè)由父親的DNA克隆生成的孩子可以看作父親的雙胞胎兄弟，只不過延遲了幾十年出生而已。很難設(shè)想，當(dāng)一個(gè)人發(fā)現(xiàn)自己只不過是另外一個(gè)人的完全復(fù)制品，他（或她）會(huì)有什么感受？

所以說,科學(xué)技術(shù)有時(shí)就是一把雙刃劍,有利也有沒弊,沒有標(biāo)準(zhǔn)答案!就看人們這樣利用了!Disadvantages:

1)genetic engineering would reduce the genetic variation of individuals and own the same diseases sensitivity , as a result, a disease can destroy whole colony by cloning.So we can imagine that, if a nation is the same cloned cattle, a kind of the virus could destroy the animal husbandry.2)The use of genetic engineering will make people tend to propagate the most value individual within existing colony, rather than the natural law of survival.In this sense, the cloning technology will interrupt the procession of natural evolution.Interference

7)genetic engineering will lead a great influence on family relationships.A father of the DNA can be seen as twin brothers, but only delayed for decades.It is hard to imagine that, when a man found himself was just another man's fully reproductions, what feelings will he or she have?

So, science and technology is a double-edged sword, sometimes, there are no harm and no standard answer!Just look like people to use!

Galileo

Galileo, Italian astronomer and physicist, discovered law of uniform acceleration of falling bodies.For example, Galileo, the great astronomer and physicist in X century, overthrowed the famous theory ,established over 2000 years ago by great people—Aritle, through the experience and thus led to discover law of uniform acceleration of falling bodies.Therefore, the question on the science might usually contribute the unexpected devotion to the progress of science, not obstacle one.Bearing generation “垮掉的一代”是美國戰(zhàn)后的一代，他們成長在一個(gè)循環(huán)發(fā)生戰(zhàn)爭的世界上，他們中的一些成為了一種新的文化的杰出代表，即“垮掉”哲學(xué)。他們的思想在絕對(duì)自由的軀體里得以升華，在美國戰(zhàn)后憂傷失望讓人窒息的精神“荒原”時(shí)代拔地騰空而起，劃破了迷茫的天空，給人們以極大震撼的同時(shí)也給了人們面對(duì)現(xiàn)實(shí)的勇氣，在很程度上決定當(dāng)時(shí)社會(huì)的發(fā)展趨勢(shì)。

“Beat generation is indicated that American who grew up in a cycle of world war, but some of them became a outstanding representatives of tendency of new culture, named ” the collapse “philosophy.Their thought is updated in absolute freedom body, skyrocketed in the ”wasteland" era which make the people feel disappointed during the world war two, ripped out of the sky and over to people with great shock also gives people the courage of facing reality, certainly, they determined the social development trend at that time..Thatcherism 撒切爾主義

Thatcherism inferred to the policies put forward by Margaret Thatcher, the first woman prime minister in England in 1979.the main contents of her policies included the return to private ownership of state-owned industries, the use of monetarist policies to control inflation, the weakening of trade unions and the strengthening of the role of markets forces in the economy, and an emphasis on law and order.To some extant their her program was successful and she led to one of the most remarkable period in the British economy.Measures taken by Mrs.Thatcher’s government to improve the economy 撒切爾政府為改善經(jīng)濟(jì)為采取的措施。

Mrs.Thatcher’s government took numerous measures to improve the efficiency of the economy during the past decade, using both macroeconomic and microeconomic policies.(1)Macroeconomic measures were directed toward bringing down the rate of inflation and achieve price stability.(2)Microeconomic policies were aimed at working with the gain of market forces by encouraging enterprise, efficiency and flexibility.geophysics地球物理

1.想象與現(xiàn)實(shí)（理論指導(dǎo)實(shí)踐）

大陸漂移學(xué)說----由魏格納提出，的提出深化了人們對(duì)地球板塊構(gòu)造的認(rèn)識(shí)，同時(shí)也對(duì)地球的板塊構(gòu)造做出了一個(gè)合理的解釋，并進(jìn)一步在達(dá)爾文的進(jìn)化學(xué)說中得到了驗(yàn)證。這一理論至今指導(dǎo)了地質(zhì)學(xué)家，地球物理學(xué)家，以及有關(guān)地質(zhì)方面的專家對(duì)地球進(jìn)行進(jìn)一步的分析和研究。

Continental drift assumption，proposed by Wagner, put forward to deepen the understanding of plate construction, and also made a reasonable explanation for it, and also verified further by the theory of revolution.Nowadays, this theory has guided geologists, geophysicists, and relevant geological experts for further analysis and research.從上面這個(gè)生動(dòng)的例子可以看出，一種合理的想象----建立在一定的事實(shí)基礎(chǔ)之上，不但會(huì)對(duì)已有的事實(shí)進(jìn)行合理的解釋，而且還可以指導(dǎo)人們進(jìn)一步對(duì)現(xiàn)有事實(shí)進(jìn)行歸納，整理和分析，從而發(fā)現(xiàn)其共同規(guī)律，協(xié)調(diào)著他們相互之間的復(fù)雜關(guān)系。

From vivid example mentioned above, we can infer that a reasonable imaginationpeople's umbrella, which insulate almost harmful radiation from outer space.3.知識(shí)在懷疑和證實(shí)中積累和進(jìn)步

當(dāng)大陸漂移學(xué)說—由魏格納提出，剛剛被提出來的時(shí)候，人們對(duì)這個(gè)新的理論充滿了熱情和好奇，紛紛支持和贊揚(yáng)它的偉大和新穎，但是后來隨著一些歷史事實(shí)的發(fā)掘，卻不但被無情的批判，而且最終遭到了地質(zhì)學(xué)家和地球物理學(xué)家的拋棄---隨著另一種假說的提出，地幔熱柱學(xué)說。現(xiàn)在，隨著人們對(duì)更多地質(zhì)事實(shí)的綜合和分析，又重新對(duì)大陸漂移學(xué)說燃?xì)饬思で椋J(rèn)為它是最好能解釋那些難以理解的地質(zhì)現(xiàn)象的理論。

When the continental drift assumption, proposed by Wagner, firstly comes, the mostly people, who are full of enthusiasm and curiosity, completely support and praise.But later, with some relatively historical facts occurring, continental drift assumption is not only criticized ruthless, but discarded ultimately by the geologists and geophysicists as another hypothesis of plume appears.Now, by analysis more new historical evidence and summarizing geological phenomenon, the continental drift assumption is accepted again, they view that it can explain more difficult geological phenomena comparing with other assumption.從大陸漂移學(xué)說的提出到最終被人們所接受的過程中可以看出，一個(gè)學(xué)說，總是不斷的在人們的懷疑和證實(shí)中進(jìn)步，而不是一開始就完全正確或者完全錯(cuò)誤，最終成為可以為人類服務(wù)的科學(xué)理論。

From the continental drift assumption mentioned above, we can infer that knowledge, especially occurred firstly, is always doubted and verified as the development of relative course, but not completely right or wrong at begin, eventually becoming authentically scientific theory.Leonardo Da Vinci 1.達(dá)芬奇懷疑權(quán)威：

Leonardo Da Vinci question authority

在天文學(xué)上，達(dá).芬奇對(duì)傳統(tǒng)的“地球中心說”持否定的觀點(diǎn)．他認(rèn)為地球不是太陽系的中心，更不是宇宙的中心，而只是一顆繞太陽運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)的行星，太陽本身是不運(yùn)動(dòng)的．達(dá).芬奇還認(rèn)為月亮自身并不發(fā)光，他只是反射太陽的光輝．他的這些觀點(diǎn)的提出早于哥白尼“太陽中心說” For example, rather than asserting the traditional view—the central of earth, Leonardo Da Vinci argues that the earth is not the central of solar galaxy, only a planet orbiting the sun.The sun itself is still quiescent.And also, he argue that the moon itself only reflect the light coming from the sun, not lighting itself.2.知識(shí)經(jīng)驗(yàn)的積累（歷史對(duì)現(xiàn)在的作用）

他提出的知識(shí)起源于實(shí)踐的這種方法，后來得到了伽利略的發(fā)展，并由英國哲學(xué)家弗蘭西斯．培根從理論上加以總結(jié)，成為近代自然科學(xué)的最基本方法． Truth coming from practice, mentioned firstly by Leonardo Da Vinci, is developed by Galileo latter, and then summarized theoretically by Francis Bacon, and at last, it becomes the most fundamental access of current science disciplines.3.全才 通才

達(dá).芬奇在物理學(xué)方面，重新發(fā)現(xiàn)了液體壓力的概念，提出了連通器原理．在解剖學(xué)和生理學(xué)上也取得了巨大的成就，被認(rèn)為是近代生理解剖學(xué)的始祖．他的研究和發(fā)明還涉及到軍事和機(jī)械方面.可以說，達(dá).芬奇的研究涉及到自然科學(xué)的每一部門，他的思想和才能深入到人類知識(shí)的各個(gè)領(lǐng)域．他是世界上少有的全面發(fā)展的學(xué)者．

Leonardo Da Vinci discovered the conception of liquid pressure on physics;he also attained a great achievement on anatomy and physiology, is thought the originator of physiological anatomy.Also, his innovations and creations involve in military an mechanics.In one words, his study arrange almost involve in every section of natural science.His thought and talents penetrated into every realm of knowledge of human being.His is a less fewer one who developed comprehensively.4，學(xué)科交叉

達(dá).芬奇把藝術(shù)和科學(xué)、理智和情感、形體和精神熔于一爐，繼承和發(fā)揚(yáng)了前人的人文主義思想和現(xiàn)實(shí)主義表現(xiàn)手法，把藝術(shù)推進(jìn)到一個(gè)前所未有的高度，為自然科學(xué)的發(fā)展作出了巨大貢獻(xiàn)，是當(dāng)之無愧的“文藝復(fù)興時(shí)代最完美的代表人物”．

Leonardo Da Vinci fused art and science, intelligence and emotion, form and spirit together.And at the same time, he inherited performance of realism and developed ideas of humanism of the past.Which pushed the art to a unprecedented height, making a great contribution to the development of natural science.In one words, he is the most perfectly incontrovertible delegation in Renaissance.5.達(dá)芬奇畫雞蛋 從基礎(chǔ)做起 1467年，達(dá)·芬奇到佛羅倫薩的委羅基俄藝術(shù)工場學(xué)藝，當(dāng)時(shí)他十四歲。他的老師委羅基俄對(duì)學(xué)生要求很嚴(yán)，他對(duì)達(dá)·芬奇說：“字畫要有個(gè)好的開端，我不要你首先臨摹古人名畫，也不給你講解繪畫理論。你每天照著雞蛋寫生，這是畫畫的一個(gè)部分，而且是重要的組成部分。” In 1467, Leonardo Da Vinci, aged fourteen, was sent to study in artistic workshop, located in Florence.His mentor instructed him as follows(and I paragraph): it is very important to have a well beginning for painting, I do not ask you imitate famous art firstly and instruct any theory of painting.For you, painting egg from different angles is your necessary and indispensable task everyday.And you should know it is a vital part of painting.Even more important than others.6.想象與課本獲取知識(shí)

他具有超越當(dāng)時(shí)的廣泛構(gòu)思與想象力，著名的概念性發(fā)明比方直升機(jī)、坦克車、太陽能聚焦使用、計(jì)算機(jī)、板塊構(gòu)造論基本原理、雙層殼等許多構(gòu)想。

Sometimes, the imagination is more important than knowledge acquiring from the books.One compelling argument can favor this.Leonardo Da Vinci, great painter in Renaissance periods, owns a extensive idea and imagination that has suppressed contemporary society.Such as the innovation such as helicopter, tank, utilization of energy of concentrated sun, the principle of.computer, and fundamental principle of constituent construction is far suppressed temporal society.7.交叉學(xué)科（學(xué)科之間的關(guān)系）

文藝復(fù)興人文主義(Renaissance humanism)在科學(xué)與藝術(shù)之間并無相互排斥的極端現(xiàn)象。達(dá)芬奇鉆研科學(xué)、工程領(lǐng)域就像他的藝術(shù)作品般令人難忘與突出。手稿中約13,000頁的筆記與繪畫全是混合藝術(shù)與科學(xué)所組成的紀(jì)錄。

There is no vital discrimination between science and art in the Renaissance humanism periods.The achievement of science and engineering by Leonardo Da Vinci is impressed groups of people just like art domain he did.The manuscript records associated with art and science takes a large amount of total number, about 13000pages.8.知識(shí)來源于實(shí)踐與正式教育的相互關(guān)系(教育的重要性)達(dá)芬奇的手稿紀(jì)錄是在歐陸行程中透過觀察周遭并不斷的創(chuàng)作而來，在科學(xué)上，達(dá)芬奇是一個(gè)巨細(xì)靡遺的觀察家，能以極精細(xì)的描述手法表示一個(gè)現(xiàn)象。因?yàn)槿狈εc科學(xué)相關(guān)的正式教育，所以不是透過理論與實(shí)驗(yàn)來驗(yàn)證，他打算發(fā)表一系列包含各種主題的論文，也因?yàn)槿狈ο到y(tǒng)的理論基礎(chǔ)終未實(shí)現(xiàn)。

The manuscript, drafted by Leonardo Da Vinci, is created on the way of Europe by observing around.On science, Leonardo Da Vinci is an very careful observer, describing a phenomenon by vital careful describing access.Due to lack of formal education with relative science, so the phenomenon is not tested by the theory and experience.And also, he failed to public a series papers including kinds of themes.9.不遵循傳統(tǒng)或者懷疑權(quán)威/ 理論和實(shí)踐的關(guān)系

在文藝復(fù)興早期，人們盲目地接受傳統(tǒng)觀念，達(dá).芬奇反對(duì)經(jīng)院哲學(xué)家們把過去的教義和言論作為知識(shí)基礎(chǔ)，他鼓勵(lì)人們向大自然學(xué)習(xí)，到自然界中尋求知識(shí)和真理．他認(rèn)為知識(shí)起源于實(shí)踐，只有從實(shí)踐出發(fā)，通過實(shí)踐去探索科學(xué)的奧秘．達(dá).芬奇提出并掌握了這種先進(jìn)的科學(xué)方法，采用這種科學(xué)方法去進(jìn)行科學(xué)研究，在自然科學(xué)方面作出了巨大的貢獻(xiàn)．

In the early periods of Renaissance, groups of people accepted blindly the traditional ideas.But Leonardo Da Vinci encouraged people to embrace the nature and seek the truth rather than accepting the past doctrine and assertion as a foundation of knowledge.In his point of view, knowledge is derived from the practice.Only beginning from the practice, it is possible to achieve the truth.Leonardo Da Vinci made a significant contribution to the science by this advanced access.葉紅郵箱：albble1988@126.com

第五篇：作文例子

以下例子適合在議論文中用到,知道這幾個(gè)人就好，不會(huì)用的話就先不用了。

● 莫言：一個(gè)小學(xué)輟學(xué)的放牛娃，胸懷一書，手執(zhí)一筆，走進(jìn)山東高密鄉(xiāng)的紅高粱，注寫了中國當(dāng)代文學(xué)的一個(gè)符號(hào)，魔幻現(xiàn)實(shí)主義的寫法讓莫言成為2012年諾貝爾文學(xué)獎(jiǎng)的得主，可見（后面加上作文的主題，比如堅(jiān)持讀書，愛好，奮斗，攀登，小人物大作為等等，必須用自己的話寫上這句話，否則這個(gè)例子就沒有價(jià)值了）

● 霍金：霍金在正值壯年的時(shí)候得了盧伽雷氏癥，在輪椅上禁錮了40多年，但他并沒有因此而放棄生命的突破，他超越相對(duì)論、量子力學(xué)、大爆炸等理論，邁入了創(chuàng)造宇宙的“幾何之舞”的進(jìn)程，給物理學(xué)的版布上畫上了濃重的一筆，的確，（后面加上作文主題的話，用自己的話說即可）

● 希特勒：希特勒宣揚(yáng)人性泯滅論，作為德國納粹黨的元首，他直接導(dǎo)致第二次世界大戰(zhàn)的爆發(fā)，阻礙了人類歷史進(jìn)程的發(fā)展，不得不說，（加上作文的主題）

● 馬諾：因?yàn)椤胺钦\勿擾”欄目而走紅的拜金女馬諾，讓我們知道有一種人寧愿在寶馬車?yán)锟抟膊辉冈谧孕熊嚿闲Γ覀儾⒎遣蝗ス膭?lì)人們要設(shè)定遠(yuǎn)大的目標(biāo)，但如果為了一個(gè)浮躁的“向上”理念而丟失自己，人生又又何意義呢，我相信，我們的生活里，蘇紫紫們、郭美美們、獸獸們僅僅是小眾的一部分，我們的大眾正用自己的勤勞和心靈為自己的未來鑄就美好的天空，（加作文主題）

______以上材料名字事例記住就可以，到時(shí)候自由發(fā)揮，如果有自己喜歡的材料，也可以加進(jìn)去。

以下是幾篇滿分記敘文：

●與你為鄰（890字）（高考滿分）

與你為鄰，我很幸運(yùn)。同桌的你，水靈的像一朵帶著露水的睡蓮。

課堂上，你像我的戰(zhàn)友，一絲不茍地聆聽老師的教誨，埋頭做筆記，抬頭回答問題。我們收獲知識(shí)碩果時(shí)，會(huì)相視而笑。多才多藝的你站在舞臺(tái)上時(shí)，會(huì)用火紅的綢緞和優(yōu)美的舞姿演繹我們絢麗的年華。當(dāng)我犯錯(cuò)誤時(shí)，你嚴(yán)厲的目光灑下來，我便垂下眼簾，委屈的滿眼含淚。現(xiàn)在我知道這是朋友真情的流露，朋友，請(qǐng)?jiān)徫耶?dāng)時(shí)的任性與乖戾。

與你為鄰，我很幸運(yùn)。同桌的你，豁達(dá)得像一片掛著燦星的天際。

你是男生的理性與感性完美的結(jié)合，你把這種天賦融匯到你所衷愛的數(shù)學(xué)課中，面對(duì)難題屢戰(zhàn)屢勝，在我們班的數(shù)學(xué)領(lǐng)域撐起了一片天。你的五官總是那樣靈動(dòng)，隨便地一挑眉，惟妙惟肖地模仿某個(gè)大牌明星的經(jīng)典動(dòng)作，就為自己的個(gè)人秀拉開了帷幕，為同學(xué)們帶來陣陣歡笑，驅(qū)散畢業(yè)沖刺帶來的緊張壓抑的氣氛。

與你為鄰，我很幸運(yùn)。同桌的你，可愛的像墜入凡間的天使。

六月的天氣格外的沉悶，熱空氣在風(fēng)扇的抽動(dòng)下慵懶的游弋在教室中，是你貼心的話語鼓勵(lì)我繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)；老師劈頭蓋臉的批評(píng)讓我無地自容，眼淚不聽話地直往下掉，是你明亮的眼眸安慰我不要在意；面對(duì)激烈的競爭與考試的壓力，是你手心的溫度伴我前行，以積極樂觀的心態(tài)應(yīng)對(duì)一切。

耳畔回蕩起風(fēng)鈴清脆的聲音，閉上眼睛，同學(xué)間的往事還歷歷在目：體育訓(xùn)練時(shí)，早晨5點(diǎn)鐘爬起來跑步那汗流浹背的樣子；晚自習(xí)后，為了爭分奪秒地學(xué)習(xí)，不去餐廳吃飯，而啃方便面的樣子；同學(xué)們一起外出踏青游玩的樣子；老師提問時(shí)，由于緊張手足無措的樣子……那一切，宛如發(fā)生在昨天一樣，帶著時(shí)間的溫度，流逝了。

畢業(yè)了，我們帶著低年級(jí)的懵懂，中年級(jí)的歡笑，高年級(jí)的勤奮畢業(yè)了。六月是離別的季節(jié)，是花兒的海洋。我們無須傷感，因?yàn)槿松南乱粋€(gè)顛峰還在等待我們?nèi)フ鞣覀円脧垞P(yáng)的青春去譜寫生命的傳奇，我們要用奮斗闖出屬于自己的天空，我們?cè)谄诖嗄旰竽莻€(gè)同學(xué)重逢的約定。

與你為鄰，我很幸運(yùn)。同桌的你，是同學(xué)友誼的剪影，是一筆珍貴的記憶財(cái)富，是一個(gè)值得感謝、陪伴你走過小學(xué)全部日子的人。讓我們靜靜的珍藏這份感動(dòng)吧。

那時(shí)候，天總是很藍(lán)，日子總過得太慢，你總說畢業(yè)遙遙無期，可一轉(zhuǎn)眼我們就要各奔東西了，與你為鄰，我的幸運(yùn)……

======這篇作文的格式可以借用，但是每段開頭的第一句總感覺不舒服，建議學(xué)習(xí)它的結(jié)尾（是同桌的你的歌詞），和里面對(duì)你有啟發(fā)的句子。

● 與你為鄰（810字）（高考滿分）

城市里，有匆匆忙忙的腳步聲，有一閃而過的臉龐，也有憂愁抑郁的目光。生活中的快節(jié)奏在機(jī)器的喧囂中沉積，人的精神也在疾馳而過的汽車中變得空虛。但倘若能夠在紛繁中建造一間自己的精神小屋，便能吟嘆“心遠(yuǎn)地自偏”了。

我有一間屬于自己的精神小屋，與其真善美的人為鄰。與他們?yōu)猷彛沂芤娣藴\。借此機(jī)會(huì)，我想向他們表達(dá)我的感情。

透過左邊的窗子，我看到了與清茶為伴，與書籍為伴的季老。季老，您是一代“國學(xué)大師”，是“學(xué)術(shù)泰斗”，是“國寶”。可是您把這三頂帽子都辭掉了，您說“環(huán)顧周遭學(xué)問之深者大有人在，國學(xué)大師豈不折煞老身？”作為您的鄰居，我了解您的淡薄，明白您睿智的目光背后所經(jīng)歷的滄桑。不過是想專心致志地翻譯《羅摩衍那》，不過是想盡心盡力地保護(hù)一些經(jīng)典的文化，您卻在文革中屢遭打擊。是天欲摧人嗎？我抱著疑問，卻從您巍然的笑中找到了答案。是啊！當(dāng)上天賜給你荒野時(shí)，意味著他要你成為高飛的鷹。季老，您知道嗎？以您為鄰，我受益匪淺。您是我精神的鄰居，用您一生的淡然與執(zhí)著告訴了我什么是淡泊，又告訴了我“寧靜致遠(yuǎn)，淡泊明志”。真的，我想謝謝您！

透過右邊的窗子，我看見了躺在病床上打點(diǎn)滴的您--莫里老人。莫里老人，請(qǐng)容我像您的學(xué)生一樣喊您一聲“師傅”。您雖患重病，但作為您的鄰居，我知道您并不會(huì)自怨自艾，也不會(huì)自我放縱自我絕望。您在昔日那般瘋狂地隨歌舞蹈，舞出您的生命奇跡；您在得知病癥消息時(shí)仍那么珍惜生命，堅(jiān)持以樂觀曠達(dá)的情緒感染身邊每個(gè)人，其中包括我。您知道嗎？曾經(jīng)讓綠葉嘲笑頹廢的我因與您為鄰，受您的樂觀熏染，我也勇敢面對(duì)陽光了。謝謝您！

在我心里，還銘記著泰戈?duì)柕恼苎裕骸疤炜詹涣粝馒B的痕跡，而我已飛過”與您為鄰，我學(xué)會(huì)了很多；與您為鄰，我的精神世界得到了充實(shí)。終于，在喧囂的城市中，我找到了屬于我的藍(lán)天！

與你為鄰，與真善美的人為鄰！

======這篇作文的高分之處，在于他選擇的例子很新穎，很多同學(xué)沒有用過，甚至沒有聽說過季羨林這些人物，能夠看出的是他課下的功夫用的很深，特別是對(duì)中國當(dāng)代文學(xué)很感興趣。

● 與你為鄰（807字）（高考滿分）

你，我的同桌，我最好的朋友。

此前，我從來沒覺得我們之間有什么不同。

我們一起生活在這個(gè)高樓林立的繁華城市里，一起在公交站臺(tái)等車，一起在綠茵場上馳騁，一起傾聽啦啦隊(duì)女生的尖叫，一起討論巴薩vs國米；一起研究編程算法，一起約好報(bào)考深大計(jì)算機(jī)專業(yè)，一起夢(mèng)想著有一天我們共同開發(fā)的網(wǎng)站像youtube那樣在納斯達(dá)克掛牌上市??

你高大健碩，眉宇間透出一股俊秀，班上的女生悄悄給你取了個(gè)外號(hào)――“小柏原崇”，而我卻只得了個(gè)“許三多”的美稱，說實(shí)在的，我還真有點(diǎn)嫉妒。你的學(xué)習(xí)成績雖然在班上不是最好的，但在球隊(duì)，你是最好的，教練經(jīng)常拿你當(dāng)作榜樣來訓(xùn)斥其他隊(duì)員，用他帶著方言的普通話說：“要想踢比賽，首先學(xué)習(xí)成績要好，進(jìn)入大學(xué)里，會(huì)有更多的比賽機(jī)會(huì)。”末了總不忘補(bǔ)上一句：“像某某同學(xué)那樣，踢球?qū)W習(xí)兩不誤。”

我最忘不了的是去年那件讓我煩惱的事，我生病了，尿血，是你曠課把我送到深圳友誼醫(yī)院的結(jié)石科去。當(dāng)時(shí)數(shù)學(xué)課正上到復(fù)數(shù)這一章節(jié)，是期末考試的重點(diǎn)和難點(diǎn)。每天下課之后你都會(huì)來到醫(yī)院看我，把你做好的課堂筆記給我看，第一次翻開筆記的時(shí)候我很感動(dòng)，從沒見你這么認(rèn)真的做過筆記，幾乎是把一節(jié)課上老師所說的每個(gè)字都記錄了下來??

直到高考前那最緊張的一個(gè)月，你卻忽然說你要回安徽老家。按規(guī)定，考生必須回原籍地參加高考，你說會(huì)放棄報(bào)考深大，因?yàn)樯畲笤诶霞业恼猩藬?shù)較少，另外安徽的學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境，使用教材與深圳不同，猶豫再三，還是決定放棄。

今天，我們會(huì)同時(shí)走進(jìn)考場，為自己的明天書寫一份答卷，不同的是，我在深圳，而你在陌生的老家。

我知道，在深圳還有很多很多像你一樣的同學(xué)，他們的父母，和所有深圳人一樣，用自己辛勤的汗水推動(dòng)著城市發(fā)展，他們同樣擁有這個(gè)城市的光榮與夢(mèng)想，彼此為鄰，相互依存。然而他們卻要比我們承受的更多，不情愿卻又不得不成為“高考移民”的一員，并為此放棄心儀的學(xué)校，使夢(mèng)想走得更遠(yuǎn)??

我祝福你，我的朋友，我們的鄰居，那些千千萬萬的農(nóng)民工和他們的孩子們。

======這篇作文是當(dāng)之無愧的第一名，也是當(dāng)年廣東省的首篇滿分，閱卷的三名老師不約而同都給了滿分，有一個(gè)老師當(dāng)場留下淚水，沒有華麗的字眼，但運(yùn)用了排比，沒有太多的抒情，但段段之間很緊密，有些句子你是可以借用的。

● 柚子中母愛的味道（47分）

推開窗，天邊的那抹云霞淡了。渲染出淡淡的柚子香，包含著母愛的味道。

夕陽淡漠了云霞，化去了心中的寒冷。我依賴在媽媽身邊，在夕陽下抓一束陽光，留在心間，吮吸這在寒冷中散著的柚子香。

秋天的夜晚，狂風(fēng)咆哮著大樹與窗戶，樹葉被吹的漫天飛舞，懵然不懂的我竟不知去呵護(hù)。燈光下，看著母親。平日里那任勞任怨的手上有了橫橫豎豎的口子。母親拿來柚子，放到桌上，開始剝柚子皮。

那手上的溝壑便會(huì)兇狠地張開，露出點(diǎn)點(diǎn)紅色，那紅色刺痛了我的心。母親忍著疼痛，身體努力前傾。依然微笑著。

母親用力剝著柚子皮，手指從其中穿梭，手掌緊握著柚子。燈光下，母親是那么地蒼老，母親總對(duì)我笑著，像是再說‘沒事，真的沒事’。仰頭，望一望星空，月亮沖我微笑，窗外一切都靜悄悄的，似乎被母親感動(dòng)了。無言。

母親剝好后，把柚子放到我手中，指與指間的相碰，我竟觸到一絲溫暖，如陽光般，我選了一瓣放到母親嘴里，四目無意識(shí)相對(duì)，無言。

窗外的樹葉又開始沙沙作響，仿佛為我和母親伴奏，空氣中彌漫著柚子的香氣散發(fā)出一種淡淡的母愛。不覺中，眼前有一層霧靄彌漫了視線。母愛如雨天的傘，為我擋雨；母愛如初生的太陽給我溫暖與力量；母愛如一本書，一本值得我一生去發(fā)現(xiàn)的書。不覺嘆一聲，何時(shí)我才能為您遮風(fēng)擋雨呢？

夜的星空被點(diǎn)亮了，一點(diǎn)一點(diǎn)的星星勾勒出母愛的味道，伴著淡淡的柚子香，我睡著了。

● 青春需要雕琢（中考滿分）

曾親見有一位學(xué)姐用“明媚“修飾青春的日子。青春--應(yīng)該是人生中最濃艷的一筆吧！

我常在想，該用什么修飾青春。是拼搏？是冷靜？是羞澀？沒有答案。

人生不過一瞬，混沌間，身邊的一切已然在發(fā)生！

突然覺著自己長大了，有了些許的不諳。社會(huì)上的爾虞我詐，校園里的明爭暗斗??就這樣周圍都慢慢熟悉。也許這就是青春，一絲懵懂。

在櫻花綻開的那天，我清晰地聽到了時(shí)間奔走的聲音，我試著去追逐，卻只感受到了眼淚灑落在身后的四分五裂。落拓的我決定躲在角落一遍一遍數(shù)我的寂寞！青春，一些漫漶。

青春，應(yīng)該是最圓滿的吧，有中、高考。因?yàn)樵腥苏f過不經(jīng)歷高考的人生是不完美的。或許真是這樣的！

“鏡花水月幾年間多少春逝過??”

也許，再回首時(shí)，我會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)原來風(fēng)雨中也會(huì)滲透陽光的燦爛，苦澀后也會(huì)流露甜蜜的曼妙。

青春，令我有些搞不懂。于是我坐下來發(fā)呆，偶爾抬頭看看天。阿蔡卻對(duì)我說：“這么好的時(shí)光就這樣浪費(fèi)了！”我想說：“你看天多自在，可以隨心所欲，可以哭，可以笑，旁若無人，肆無忌憚。”卻終究沒說，因?yàn)樗幌裎乙粯酉矚g看天。

青春的我們把自己包裹得像繭一樣，害怕在現(xiàn)實(shí)中受到傷害，卻也最終沒能逃脫。所以，努力掙破自己的網(wǎng)，幻化成蝴蝶，為自己的夢(mèng)想飛翔！

這就是青春吧，卻依然不知該怎樣修飾！● 告別（青島中考滿分）

現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)是盛夏了。每天不是烏云密布就是晴空萬里，在這種情況下，我的心也跟著時(shí)陰時(shí)晴。

上完最后一堂課，只是和老師告別。收拾一下自己雜亂的課桌，把該帶走的帶走，背著大包小包的和同學(xué)告別，最后在關(guān)上教室門之前，環(huán)視了一下空蕩蕩的教室。我的心也不禁茫然起來，似乎有太多東西留在這里了。想帶也帶不走。

我關(guān)上了教室門，隨著“吱呀“的幾聲，在那一剎那間，我的心突然有一股尖銳的痛，忽然想起了四字“青春散場‘。

慢慢地走下樓梯，我似乎想起可剛剛來到這里時(shí)，數(shù)著樓梯走進(jìn)教室的樣子，無知，單純，甚至幼稚。但隨著一年又一年的過去，現(xiàn)在我已經(jīng)在四樓讀初三了，那樓梯也越數(shù)越長。但兒時(shí)的心情已儼然不在了。童年的心也一去不復(fù)返了。而這一切的一切都變成我腦海里那泛黃的一頁了。我知道，我該和它們告別了。

最后的一堂課，是和老師告別。

最后一次考試，是和學(xué)業(yè)告別。

最后一個(gè)人離開，是和同學(xué)告別。

最后一個(gè)腳步，是和301告別。

走在通往校門的小路上，我忘不了，昔日在這里埋頭苦讀的身影；忘不了，昔日在這里傾心暢談的快樂；忘不了，昔日在這片綠茵場馳聘的快感。

在這離別之際，我們依然別情依依，走一回校園的小路，數(shù)一回教室的樓梯，心中蕩起了甜蜜的回憶。

在這離別之際，我們依然有千言萬語，看一眼校長的白發(fā)，摸一把老師的坐椅，腮邊掛滿了滾燙的淚珠。

當(dāng)我的腳跨出校門的一瞬間，我忽而明白我已經(jīng)不是這里的一員了。但也許不是永久，但也不是瞬間。

雖然這初中三年跟高中三年和大學(xué)四年相比，是多么的微不足道，但對(duì)于我們小孩來說是多么的珍貴和滿足啊啊！

再見了，我的朋友！

再見了，我的老師！

再見了，我的學(xué)校！

再見了，我的初三！