第一篇：(上海中考)初三英語作文點評

世外初三英語范文點評

優(yōu)秀習作1上海市世界外國語中學吳思怡

作文題目

“Sow a habit, reap a destiny.” What do you think of habits? What can our habits bring us?Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Habits”.優(yōu)秀習作

Good habits are foundations on our way to success, while bad ones get in the way and hold us back.To begin with, good habits help us work more efficiently.If we get into the habit of tidying up our rooms, we will find it easy to obtain the things we need.Moreover, good habits leave others positive impressions.Showing our warm smiles is a habit which enables us to get along with our classmates and teachers well.On the other hand, bad habits can be destructive.Lots of people develop lung cancer just because of their habits of smoking.As you can see, habits really make a difference in our lives.作文評析

本文開門見山陳述觀點，說理清晰。能運用舉例對比等手法使本文觀點更具說服力，如通過整理房間、微笑和吸煙三個習慣的后果正反兩方舉例，體現(xiàn)出小作者思維的寬度和縝密度。

從語言駕馭能力看，本文句式豐富，語言流暢，既善于活用考綱詞組如 “get into the habit of”，又有如“l(fā)eave others positive impressions”等地道的表達，既有較復雜的主從復合句，又有短小有力的簡單句，錯落有致，一氣呵成。

朱萍

作文題目

Your class would like to make time boxes for people in 2040.You start collecting things today and put them in the boxes.The people in 2040 will be able to compare their life with life now.You also need to write a letter to the people in 2040 introducing one thing in the box.【Oxford 9B Unit 2 Writing】

優(yōu)秀習作

To the people of 2040,In the box you can find an energy-saving lightbulb.They all come from 2014.By holding the little bulb in your hand, you can sense its smooth, transparent glass-made shell, which is of oval shape.Inside the shell, some metal-made wires tangle with each other in a regular order.This is used to enable electricity to pass through the whole bulb to provide energy.Attach the bulb to a base and then turn on the switch, you’ll find the little bulb lighting up the dark room.Another characteristic of it is that it saves more energy than other kinds of bulbs.So this lightbulb is “green”.We hope this will give you some information about life in 2014.Yours faithfully, Angel

作文評析

此篇作文題來自牛津9B第二單元課后Writing練習，它的內(nèi)容是向未來2040年的人們寫一封信，介紹一件我們這個時代所用的物品。作文題材是學生平時不常操練的說明文。

本文作者選取了節(jié)能燈泡作為對象。在描述過程中，她首先對燈泡的外形進行了細致的描寫，從光滑、橢圓型的玻璃外殼，到內(nèi)部互相纏繞在一起的金屬絲。繼而寫到當電流通過，燈泡會照亮房屋的功能。最后還不忘介紹此種燈泡的特殊之處在于比起其它燈泡，它“節(jié)能環(huán)保”的特點。

全文脈絡(luò)清晰，描寫細膩、形象、生動，句式豐富，語言流暢，銜接自然，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。充分體現(xiàn)了作者的語言表達能力，是一篇很好的說明文范例。

包琪瑞

作文題目

Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “The thing that made me angry”.(以“讓我生氣的事”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。)Use the following points as a guide:

? What made you angry?

? Describe the thing that made you angry in detail.? How did you deal with the situation?

(注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、班級及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。)優(yōu)秀習作

There are few things in life more annoying than being laughed at.When I failed to solve the question on the blackboard and just stood in front of it without saying a word, I could hear those annoying whispers.This really made a perfectionist like me get angry.But I couldn’t let the anger get me out of control.Instead, I chose to ignore those ironic words and focus on the question.In addition, I decided to work harder after school to get myself improved.Due to all the changes I made, I believe I can avoid being laughed at in the future.作文評析

全文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，層次分明，銜接流暢。本文從內(nèi)容來看觀點新穎、構(gòu)思巧妙，以”being laughed at”被動語態(tài)的結(jié)構(gòu)體現(xiàn)作者內(nèi)心的不情愿，緊扣題目中的angry。作者側(cè)重對于第二個問題的回答，以生動、細膩的文筆描寫了站在黑板前的心理活動，讓人讀來有生臨其境之感。而在結(jié)尾，作者不忘傳播一絲正能量，驅(qū)趕了這個作文題可能帶來的負面情緒。本文的內(nèi)涵和語言都反映出作者的語言駕馭能力，以開頭”There are few things … more … than …”來看，作者有豐富的語言積淀和極強的語言運用能力，因而全篇行文流暢，句式豐富，用詞精準。本文值得初三學生學習借鑒。

李婧

作文題目

Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “I like reading ________(detective stories, newspaper, magazines, comic strips, etc.)best.”

Use the following points as a guide:

? What do you like reading best?

? Why do you like reading them best?

? How do they influence your life?

(注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、班級及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。)優(yōu)秀習作

Magazines, as one form of ways to wisdom, are my favorite.Magazines combine the advantages of all forms of books.They have the diversity of information and at the same time, hold deep thoughts.There is rarely a thing that you can’t find in magazines.Reading magazines has provided me with the opportunity to broaden my horizon, gain knowledge and meanwhile, relax.Since they are more portable than others, you can roll them up and take them with you.In brief, reading magazines has brought laughter and knowledge to my life.I like reading magazines best.作文評析

該篇文章開宗明義，點名文章意圖。從內(nèi)容上看，從雜志包羅萬象，開拓讀者視野；到雜志放松讀者心情；再談到雜志攜帶方便可以隨時取閱等優(yōu)點，清晰詳實地表達出了作者的觀點。文章結(jié)尾再次點題，全文簡短卻簡練，切題又精煉。從語言而言，作者具有較強的語言功底，能夠熟練運用多樣的句式和詞組，如meanwhile, since, in brief, provide with等，使文章更富有變化和可讀性。語句之間銜接通暢，用詞準確自然。詞匯量豐富，如wisdom, diversity, opportunity, laughter等。如果文章能在三點優(yōu)點前用明顯的詞匯加以區(qū)分，如first, furthermore, what’s more等，能使其更加一目了然。

賁方

作文題目

Someone says, “Sow an action, reap a habit;Sow a habit, reap a destiny.” What’s your opinion on this? Please write an article of 60-80 words on the topic “Habits”.有人說：“播種行為，收獲習慣；播種習慣，收獲命運。”對這種說法你怎么看？請以“習慣”為題寫一篇60-80字的作文，談?wù)勀愕挠^點。

優(yōu)秀習作

Habits

No one can deny that habits play an important role in our life.Everyone should have good habits and break their bad habits as well.In my opinion, habits can change your living style or standard.For instance, if you are an efficient person, you certainly won’t stay up late.This is a good habit that leads to a healthy life.Obviously, little habits undoubtedly change our life and even our destiny.作文評析

本文語言簡練流暢，表達自然。句型句式較多樣靈活。

本文開門見山地給出觀點:習慣在我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪姓紦?jù)著非常重要的位置。我們應(yīng)該養(yǎng)成好習慣改掉壞習慣。之后給出習慣何以重要的理由，并且以舉例子的形式來輔助強調(diào)好習慣養(yǎng)成的重要性。最后一句總結(jié)首尾呼應(yīng)，再次點題，全文雖短，卻流暢通順，一氣呵成。

何怡文

作文題目

John’s friend, Dick, has mixed feelings before studying abroad.He is worried that his English is not good enough and he is too shy to talk with strangers.Also he doesn’t want to leave his friends.Write him an email in at least 60 words to give him some suggestions.優(yōu)秀習作

Thank you for telling me your problem.Firstly, you should be more outgoing and confident.Learning a foreign language requires you to speak a lot to others.Since you’ll study abroad soon, it’ll be a great opportunity to improve your English.Remember not to be shy.Maybe you can watch some American TV series.That might help you know how people communicate in their daily life.Then you’ll find the confidence in communicating with strangers.Secondly, if you miss your friends here, you can call them and email them as well.The Internet makes it easy to communicate with people in different countries.Thirdly, you should try to be a brave boy.Life is always filled with ups and downs, but you should face all the obstacles bravely.No cross, no crown.I wish you no longer worry about your life there after reading my letter.作文評析

這是一篇有篇幅限制和內(nèi)容要求的考試作文。它很好地做到了結(jié)構(gòu)整齊，條理清晰的要求。開頭直入主題。主體部分以“firstly，secondly，thirdly”這些詞匯清晰地亮出三點建議，并且使前后連貫。每一點建議都因為有總起句的概括，以及進一步闡述說明的支撐，而顯得層次分明，內(nèi)容充實而有說服力。語言方面，行文簡凝流暢，詞匯恰當豐富，句型準確多變，雖然未見很多課外詞匯或有難度句型，但是小作者很好地做到了活學活用，這是我們應(yīng)該推崇的學習意識和習慣。從文章結(jié)尾處的句子“Life is always filled with ups and downs, but you should face all the obstacles bravely.No cross, no crown.”，可以看出小作者平時注重了閱讀和積累。

張櫻

第二篇：2012上海初三中考英語作文

2012上海初三中考英語作文范文（5）Write a passage at least 60 words on the topic “When I met a

difficulty?”(以“當我遇到困難時??”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文)

Use the following points as a guide（短文須包含下列要點）What difficulty did you meet with?

How did you solve the problem?

How did you feel after you solved it?

What do you think of you way?

? When I met difficulty studying English

A famous saying goes “What ever difficulties you meet with, never give up half way”.I remember I had difficulty improving my English when I entered junior high school.Though I tried my best to recite the passages and spell new expressions,it was still difficult for me to communicate with the native speakers and understand some long sentences in newspaper articles.With the tips from my English teacher, I was determined to listen to the English programmes over the radio every day and follow it to practice my spoken English.Meanwhile, I picked up some key words to guess the meanings in the context and looked up them in the dictionary later.“Practice makes perfect”.All these practice helps to improve English in a short time.When I found my English was not what it used to be, I felt very excited.Now I think if a good way is matered, it will not difficult for anyone to improve English.2012上海初三中考英語作文范文（6）Describe how you did something successfully.The title of the story is “A Success Story of My Own”.I was not very good at sports.Last summer some friends of mine went to swim one afternoon.I went with them and saw what fun it was to jump into the water in the hot sun.Then I made up my mind to learn how to swim.Jimmy gave me some advice.She said, “Why not join the

morning training course in the swimming pool? But you have to get up a bit earlier.It begins at 6:30.They have very good coaches there.” I was glad to take her advice, though I used to stay in bed in the morning.I was sure nothing could stop me.I went to the training course the very next day.Learning to swim was no easy job for me.It took me quite some time to pick up

enough courage to jump into water for the first day.I worked very hard, overcoming difficulties one after another.My coach was kind and patient.When I had learned the movements of the feet and hands and how to move them in harmony, I began to learn how to breathe in water.It proved the hardest thing in the world.The coach showed me many times, but every time I tried I swallowed water instead of fresh air.I didn’t give up, keeping trying until suddenly I found I could.I succeeded!

2012上海初三中考英語作文范文（7）

Use the following points as a guide

My Wish

What is you wish?(what do you want to be in the future? What do you want to have one day?)

Why is it you wish?

What will you do to make your wish come true?

My wish is to be teacher when I grow up because both my parents are teachers.My father teaches Chinese and my mother is teacher of English.So I am growing up on the school campus.I almost know every teacher in the school.They all like me and some of them say I should do something else when I grow up.However, I still want to be a teacher like my parents and have students all over the country because I like children.Of course I must study hard and do well in all the subjects.Thus I can enter a normal university after I finish my middle school.

第三篇：2013上海徐匯區(qū)初三中考英語作文

2013上海徐匯區(qū)初三中考英語作文范文一：1.我最難忘的一課。2.具體說明為何難忘

We have lessons every day.To be honest, few lessons struck me deeply until two foreign exchange students came to our English class to talk with us the other day.It was really an unforgettable lesson.The two students, who were from Germany, came to our class to give us a presentation.At first we were all very nervous.However, our nervousness disappeared soon after we started talking with each other.To my great surprise, the German students couldn't speak English as well as expected.Their pronunciation sounded strange to us.They couldn't even understand a common word.But this didn't prevent them from communicating with us at all.They tried to say what they could with the help of body language and facial expressions.From this unforgettable lesson I have learned that we should take every chance possible to practice speaking English instead of just sitting and keeping silent in English class.范文二：國際青年藝術(shù)節(jié)（the International Youth Arts Festival）即將舉行。作為一名志愿者，談?wù)勀愕拇蛩恪?/p>

The International Youth Festival will be held in Shanghai soon and I am honoured to be a volunteer.As a volunteer, it is my duty to do my best for the International Youth Festival.First, I'll help to organize the festival.For example, I can send out leaflets and put up posters in the streets.I can offer my suggestions to the Festival Organization Committee.Second, I have a good command of foreign languages.I can speak English and Japanese.Therefore I am capable of being a guide and translator for the visitors.I'd like to answer their questions to help them solve problems so that they can have a good time during their stay in shanghai.Also, I can benefit from the work as it can enrich my social experience and broaden my horizons.I hope the International Youth Arts Festival will be a great success and make a deep impression on the foreign visitors who attend.范文三：

How to make wise use of the computer

With the rapid development /fast growth of modern science /new technology, the computer has played a more and more important role in our society.Meanwhile, how to make wise use of the computer is also very important.First, I will learn what is happening / have access to immediate international events through the internet to widen my knowledge.What's more, I can depend on the computer to write my blog and down load pop music.With the help of the computer, I find my life interesting and fascinating.范文四：有些學生喜歡報刊閱讀，有些學生喜歡電腦了解新聞信息，我的選擇。

Nearly one-third of the students still prefer the traditional reading pattern---newspaper while the rest have turned to the computer.I take the newspaper.First, compared with the headline reading on the net, newspaper covers a wider range.What's more, newspaper reading does less harm to eyes than on-line reading because the computer screen flashes from time to time.Finally, we can take the newspaper to read wherever there is no electricity or no web signal.So, I have developed the habit of reading newspaper to learn what is happening all over the world.范文五：以假期去做一名志愿者服務(wù)為內(nèi)容，字數(shù)不少于60字。

As a Junior Three student, I think I should not only study hard, but also serve the society well if I am given a chance.The end of the junior school life will provide me with a good chance to work as a volunteer in the coming summer holiday.What I most want to do is to take care of the old living alone without relatives，I can read newspapers and interesting stories to them, help them wash the clothes, and cook for them.Besides, I will try my best to collect the rubbish in my neighbourhood to make the surroundings clean and beautiful.Finally, I can follow the adult volunteers to advise those who smoke in public not to smoke.I believe I will have interesting experience as a volunteer.范文六：“我最難忘的一課”為題，不少于60字

Last summer I went to U.S.A to spend three weeks study with the local students, where I learned a lot of new things and I will never forget the Astrology class.That morning we went to the local space museum to have my first lesson abroad.During the class, we had a discussion on whether we should carry out the space project.With the advanced teaching materials and the experienced professor, we had a general idea of our space success and failure as well.I first realized how serious the population explosion and the pollution was.What's more, I learned the earth was faced with more difficulties than ever before.This class was not only my first class abroad but also helped me learn how important space exploration was to us.范文七：化名李明向李老師寫一個請假條，因淋雨感冒發(fā)燒下周不能參加學校的春游。時間為4月6日

April 6,2011

Dear Mr.Li,I'm very sorry that I can't follow the class to go on a trip next week.I have to ask for a sick leave because I was caught in the heavy rain on my way back home yesterday.When I felt uncomfortable, my mother took me to the hospital.The doctor there took my temperature and told me I got a high fever.So the doctor asked me to have a good rest at home and have some medicine.I hope my classmates will have a good time while travelling.What a pity I can't go with you.Yours truly,Li Ming

Dear Mr.Li

Wang Fei can speak English quite well because she works very hard at it.One day, her teacher, Mr.Wu asked her to come to his office and side, : There will be a story-telling contest(競賽)next week, Wang Fei.Would you like to take part in it?”

Wang Fei wanted to go, so she asked what she had to do.Mr.Wu told her that she had to tell an English story in front of the whole school.Mr.Wu said:” If you try your best, I’m sure you’ll win.”

Wang Fei decided to have a try.On Sunday night, she stayed up late to get ready for her story for the contest.It was interesting story, she didn’t go to bed until midnight.On Monday morning, she overslept(睡過頭).When she woke up, it was already seven 0’ clock.She did some washing quickly.Then she had a light breakfast.After that she ran all the way to her school.It was a warm morning, so Wang Fei felt very hot when she reached school.Mr.Wu was waiting outside the school hall, he looked very worried.“ Why are you so late, Wang Fei?” he asked.“ Sorry, Mr.Wu, I woke up late.” Wang Fei said.“ The contest will start in a minute.Remember, speak slowly and clearly.” Mr.Wu said.Wang Fei remembered his words.She told her story very well.In the end, she came out first.“You have done very well.Congratulations!” said the teacher.“All is well that ends well.But remember, don’t oversleep again!”

第四篇：2011年上海初三中考英語高分作文范例

2011年上海初三中考英語高分作文范例

范文一：1.我最難忘的一課。2.具體說明為何難忘

We have lessons every day.To be honest, few lessons struck me deeply until two foreign exchange students came to our English class to talk with us the other day.It was really an unforgettable lesson.The two students, who were from Germany, came to our class to give us a presentation.At first we were all very nervous.However, our nervousness disappeared soon after we started talking with each other.To my great surprise, the German students couldn't speak English as well as expected.Their pronunciation sounded strange to us.They couldn't even understand a common word.But this didn't prevent them from communicating with us at all.They tried to say what they could with the help of body language and facial expressions.From this unforgettable lesson I have learned that we should take every chance possible to practice speaking English instead of just sitting and keeping silent in English class.范文二：國際青年藝術(shù)節(jié)（the International Youth Arts Festival）即將舉行。作為一名志愿者，談?wù)勀愕拇蛩恪?/p>

The International Youth Festival will be held in Shanghai soon and I am honoured to be a volunteer.As a volunteer, it is my duty to do my best for the International Youth Festival.First, I'll help to organize the festival.For example, I can send out leaflets and put up posters in the streets.I can offer my suggestions to the Festival Organization Committee.Second, I have a good command of foreign languages.I can speak English and Japanese.Therefore I am capable of being a guide and translator for the visitors.I'd like to answer their questions to help them solve problems so that they can have a good time during their stay in shanghai.Also, I can benefit from the work as it can enrich my social experience and broaden my horizons.I hope the International Youth Arts Festival will be a great success and make a deep impression on the foreign visitors who attend.范文三：

How to make wise use of the computer

With the rapid development /fast growth of modern science /new technology, the computer has played a more and more important role in our society.Meanwhile, how to make wise use of the computer is also very important.First, I will learn what is happening / have access to immediate international events through the internet to widen my knowledge.What's more, I can depend on the computer to write my blog and down load pop music.With the help of the computer, I find my life interesting and fascinating.范文四：有些學生喜歡報刊閱讀，有些學生喜歡電腦了解新聞信息，我的選擇。

Nearly one-third of the students still prefer the traditional reading pattern---newspaper while the rest have turned to the computer.I take the newspaper.First, compared with the headline reading on the net, newspaper covers a wider range.What's more, newspaper reading does less harm to eyes than on-line reading because the computer screen flashes from time to time.Finally, we can take the newspaper to read wherever there is no electricity or no web signal.So, I have developed the habit of reading newspaper to learn what is happening all over the world.范文五：以假期去做一名志愿者服務(wù)為內(nèi)容，字數(shù)不少于60字。

As a Junior Three student, I think I should not only study hard, but also serve the society well if I am given a chance.The end of the junior school life will provide me with a good chance to work as a volunteer in the coming summer holiday.What I most want to do is to take care of the old living alone without relatives，I can read newspapers and interesting stories to them, help them wash the clothes, and cook for them.Besides, I will try my best to collect the rubbish in my neighbourhood to make the surroundings clean and beautiful.Finally, I can follow the adult volunteers to advise those who smoke in public not to smoke.I believe I will have interesting experience as a volunteer.范文六：“我最難忘的一課”為題，不少于60字

Last summer I went to U.S.A to spend three weeks study with the local students, where I learned a lot of new things and I will never forget the Astrology class.That morning we went to the local space museum to have my first lesson abroad.During the class, we had a discussion on whether we should carry out the space project.With the advanced teaching materials and the experienced professor, we had a general idea of our space success and failure as well.I first realized how serious the population explosion and the pollution was.What's more, I learned the earth was faced with more difficulties than ever before.This class was not only my first class abroad but also helped me learn how important space exploration was to us.范文七：化名李明向李老師寫一個請假條，因淋雨感冒發(fā)燒下周不能參加學校的春游。時間為4月6日

April 6,2011

Dear Mr.Li,I'm very sorry that I can't follow the class to go on a trip next week.I have to ask for a sick leave because I was caught in the heavy rain on my way back home yesterday.When I felt uncomfortable, my mother took me to the hospital.The doctor there took my temperature and told me I got a high fever.So the doctor asked me to have a good rest at home and have some medicine.I hope my classmates will have a good time while travelling.What a pity I can't go with you.Yours truly,Li Ming

Dear Mr.Li

第五篇：2014上海中考英語作文_-_副本

2014上海中考英語作文模板

要求從一句話或一個主題出發(fā)，按照提綱的要求進行論述．１． 闡述名言或主題所蘊涵的意義．２． 分析并舉例使其更充實． 中考英語作文萬能模板：解決方法題型要求考生列舉出解決問題的多種途徑１． 問題現(xiàn)狀

２． 怎樣解決(解決方案的優(yōu)缺點)

In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.First,------------(說明Ａ的現(xiàn)狀)．Second,---------------(舉例進一步說明現(xiàn)狀)

Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective

measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,---------------(解決方法一).For another-------------(解決方法二).Finally,--------------(解決方法三).Personally, I believe that-------------(我的解決方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future isawaiting us because--------------(帶來的好處).中考英語作文萬能模板：說明利弊題型

這種題型往往要求先說明一下現(xiàn)狀，再對比事物本身的利弊，有時也會單從一個角度（利或弊）出發(fā)，最后往往要求考生表明自己的態(tài)度（或?qū)κ挛锴熬疤岢鲱A測）１． 說明事物現(xiàn)狀

２． 事物本身的優(yōu)缺點（或一方面）３． 你對現(xiàn)狀（或前景）的看法

role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First----------------(Ａ的優(yōu)點之一（Ａ的優(yōu)點之二）.----------------(Ａ的第一個缺點)．worse,------------------(Ａ的第二個缺點)---------------(我的看法)．

測)．)

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_ 觀點一People,differ inon this matter.Some _______.In原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二 is no doubt that ___觀點二______.support the view that __觀點一或二______.It also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.（2）利弊型的議論文

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文題目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __題目議題_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___優(yōu)點一______.And secondly ___優(yōu)點二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __討論議題______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has

negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺點一______.In addition, ____缺點二______.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __討論議題____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____討論議題___.中考英語作文萬能模板：圖表作文的框架

as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文題目的議題_____ has been on rise/ decrease

There are attwo______.On theother hand, _______ is the In addition, ________ isare sometois

generally that mentionedAs faras I am am sureopinion is both and

A的話題,早已引起了廣泛的社會關(guān)注。如今在電視、報A的議論。給一個精確恒定的定義并非易事，因為它的概念涉及了科們可以這樣描述A…

A能成為公眾關(guān)注的焦點，主要是由于它對個人、集體乃至整個世界都有著不容忽視的不良影響。

認 真分析后我們可以看到，A對社會/世界 /健康的不利有很多。首先，從最直觀的角度來看，A的出現(xiàn)直接損害了（這里加入一句針對性的話，如人類的身體健康和環(huán)境的平衡）。（舉例）。其次，從更深一層次上講，它為人類的精神文明蒙上了一層陰影。更可怕的是，由于A所產(chǎn)生微小利益，卻促成了許多可悲的人們?yōu)槠渫跛裕茐牧巳祟惿娴姆▌t和空間。

事實上，A的出現(xiàn)是社會發(fā)展和人類進步的產(chǎn)物，A所帶來的危害是人類進化過程中付出的代價。同時，A的產(chǎn)生來源于部分人們的自私和趨利性，他們看到的是膚淺和片面的利益，而從未從整個全局和人類整體的利益出發(fā)去認識和分析它。這使得A始終揮之不去。對此，我奉勸他們，跳出狹小的角落，用長遠和全局的眼光去重新審視A。

而如今，我們已深受其害，要想消除它的危害，我們必須從根源上杜絕它的產(chǎn)生，我們每一個人都應(yīng)給予A高度的重視，用系統(tǒng)的和科學的方法去解決，唯有這樣，避免它帶來更多損失，我們?nèi)祟惽斑M的腳步才會更加平穩(wěn)，更加歡快的邁向輝煌的明天。中考英語作文萬能模板：說明原因型模塊（3）

Currently,XX has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate

the theory---nothing is more valuable than XX.It is clear that(1).If you(2), as a result ,your dreams willcome true.On the contrary, if you(3).Failure will be following with you.It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that(4).You donn't have to

look very far to find out the truth , in respect that we all know(5).It will exert a profound influence upon(6).With reference to my standpoint ,I think(7).附加

一、英語書信的常見寫作模板 開頭部分：

How nice to hear from you again.Let me tell you something about the activity.I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr.9th.I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.結(jié)尾部分：

With best wishes.I’m looking forward to your reply.I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.二、口頭通知常見寫作模板 呼語及開場白部分：

I have an announcement to make.正文部分：

Please listen carefully and a groups.結(jié)束語部分：

1.導入：

第1段：should...正文：

第2段：（正方觀點）列出2~3個贊成的理由)

第3段：（反方觀點）

Their reasons are as follows.In the first place...What’s more...In addition...(列出2~3個反對的理由)

結(jié)論： 第4段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.（個人觀點）オ 2.“A或者B”類議論文模板：

導入：

第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways.Others, however, argue that B is much better.Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.正文：

第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A.The main 贊同A的原因)第3段(列出1~2個B的優(yōu)勢)

結(jié)論：

第4段)オ 3.導入：

（亮 第列出2~3個贊

第（照應(yīng)第1段，構(gòu)成"總—分第2Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, following may be most effective.First of all...列出2~3個解決此類問題的辦法)

結(jié)論：

第3段：These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take.But it should be noted that we should take action to...(強調(diào)解決此類問題的根本方法)

四、圖表作文寫作模板

The chart gives us an overall picture of the 圖表主題.The first thing we notice is that 圖表最大特點.This means that as(進一步說明).We can see from the statistics given that 圖表細節(jié)一.After 動詞-ing 細節(jié)一中的第一個變化，the動詞-ed+幅度+時間(緊跟著的變化).The figures also tell us that圖表細節(jié)二.Inthe column, we can see that accounts for(進一步描述).Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that(結(jié)論).The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that(給出原因)./ It is high time that we(發(fā)出倡議).