第一篇：中考英語作文及點評：自由作文3

中考英語作文范文及點評：自由作文3

【習作要求】

請以My….為題寫一篇短文。要求：有時間、地點、人物，字數不少于80個單詞。

【學生習作】

【名師點評】

第二篇：中考英語作文及點評：自由作文1

中考英語作文范文及點評：自由作文1

【習作要求】

Write eight or more sentences about the season you like best.【參考范文】

I like winter best.Though it is very cold, it is good for

skating.I often go skating on Sundays with my father.When it snows, everything turns white.Trees and houses are covered with thick snow.How beautiful the world looks!My friends and I like to make snowmen.Sometimes we make snowballs and throw them at each other.That's a very interesting game.I like winter holiday very much because the Spring Festival is the happiest time of the year.【名師點評】

作者用流暢的語言描述了冬天的景色。全文意思表達清楚，結構緊密。

第三篇：中考英語作文及點評：自由作文1

中考英語作文范文及點評：自由作文1

【習作要求】

Write eight or more sentences about the season you like best.內容要點

1．四個季節中任選一個季節。

2．被選季節的特點（氣候、時間、事物、活動等）。

3．人們在此季節所從事的活動。

4．作者自己喜愛的活動和感受。

【參考范文】

I like winter best.Though it is very cold, it is good for

skating.I often go skating on Sundays with my father.When it snows, everything turns white.Trees and houses are covered with thick snow.How beautiful the world looks!My friends and I like to make snowmen.Sometimes we make snowballs and throw them at each other.That's a very interesting game.I like winter holiday very much because the Spring Festival is the happiest time of the year.【名師點評】

這是一篇描寫季節的文章，文章難度一般。要求從自己的角度描寫季節和感受季節。應注意以下幾個問題：

(1)確定全文的時態。此文一般選用一般現在時。

(2)除了對季節的描述，一定要有自己的見解，這是得分的重要內容和關鍵所在。

作者用流暢的語言描述了冬天的景色。全文意思表達清楚，結構緊密。

第四篇：中考英語作文及點評：自由作文2

中考英語作文范文及點評：自由作文2

【習作要求】

Write about what you are going to do after you leave school.【參考范文】

When I finish school, I want to be a teacher.Though teachers are poorly paid and they have no power, teachers are kind, respectable and learned, like angels.They lead the pathway to succeed.It's quite sure that teachers are very important in modern world.We can't develop our country without knowledge.Teachers teach us knowledge.I like all of my teachers in my school.I would like to be an English teacher.It's very important for the students to learn English well today.I'll try my best to be an ideal teacher.My students can make our country better in the future.【名師點評】

這是一篇闡述觀點的議論文，作者用簡潔而流暢的語言表達了長大后想成為一名老師的愿望。論據充分，觀點明確，并且字里行間滲透了對祖國的無比熱愛之情和把祖國建設更加美好的決心。

第五篇：中考英語作文范例+點評

中考英語作文范例：我們的住宅小區

Our Housing Estate 我們的小區

There are many nice housing estates in Pudong New Area.Our housing Rainbow Estate, is one of them.浦東新區有很多漂亮的小區，我們的小區——彩虹小區，是其中之一。

You can see three in the middle.There is a beautiful garden in front of Block 2.In the gardon there is a.There is a shop on the right of Block 1.A big playground lies on the left of Block 3.You can see many men, women, boys and girls having exercise there.小區中間有三條街道。在第二條街道前面是一個美麗的花園，花園里有個噴泉。在第一條街道的右面是一個商店，而第三街道的左邊是一個巨大的運動場，可以看到男男女女在那邊做運動。

There is a small in our housing estate.It is and comfortable for us to live in our housing estate.在我們的小區有一個小小的幼兒園。對于我們來說，住在小區十分方便和舒服。點評：文章的結構與布局較合理，有一定的順序，層次分明。

中考英語作文范例：我們的語音室

編輯點評：中考英語作文的另一種類型是說明文。說明文是就某一件事說明清楚，一般總是以空間順序展開的。寫物的文章常用“某處有某物”的句子表示物的存在。

說明文是就某一件事說明清楚，一般總是以空間順序展開的，可以自上而下，自左而右，從里到外，從整體到局部等等。寫物的文章常用“某處有某物”的句子表示物的存在。常用的句型如： There be...I have got a/ an...It is red/ green/ colour/ round...I like...best.It looks like...I like it very much.I will keep it forever.Our Language Lab 我們的語音室

There is a language in our school.It's on the third floor.It's big and clean.我們學校有一個語音室，它位于三樓，大而整潔。

There are 50 desks and 50 chairs in it.There are 50 computers and a in it.There are 50 s on the desk.語音室里有50張桌椅，50臺電腦和一個操縱臺，桌子上還放著50副耳機。

Every week we have our English lessons here.We watch , TV, video and listen to tapes.Then the teacher asks us questions.We like our language lab and always keep it clean and tidy.我們每周都會在這兒上英語課，我們在這里看幻燈片，電視，視頻和聽磁帶。然后老師會向我們提問。我們很喜歡這個語音室，并且總是保持它的干凈整潔。

點評：這篇文章寫了“我們的語音室”,按照一定的空間順序，先寫設備，再寫功能，讓人對語音室的概貌有一個全面，準確的了解。

中考英語作文范例：溫泉讓我得到休息

編輯點評：中考英語作文敘事文章要拿高分，除了要說清楚整件事情的來龍去脈，更關鍵的是要說得生動有趣，讓評卷人獲得情感上的共鳴。我們仔細觀察下今天的作文范例是如何做到這一點的吧。

Hot spring Let Me Have A Rest 溫泉讓我得到休息

We took off our coats and ran quickly into the spring.When I first put my feet into the water.I cried out, “Wow, it is hot!” I didn't know the water was so hot, and I was a little that it would burn me...So I walked carefully into the spring.One step,two...I felt the heat slowly ing up my body.我們脫下外套，快速奔向檸檬泉，當我第一次把腳伸進水中時，我大聲喊道：“哇，水是熱的！”我一開始不知道水如此熱，所以我有點兒擔心會被熱水燙到。于是，我小心翼翼地走進溫泉，一步，兩步......我能感覺到熱量慢慢地進入我的身體。

點評：要寫出生動有趣的事，除了把事情的來龍去脈說清楚，還一定要注意增加文章的細節，這是必不可少的，豐富的細節描寫能為你的文章增色不少，使人讀起來具有一種身臨其境的感覺。另外，本篇時態運用十分得當，整篇文章的動詞過去時一脈相承。

中考英語作文范例：我最好的朋友

編輯點評：中考最后一大版塊通常是作文(也稱寫話)，今天我們來看看記敘文中描寫人的一個范例。描寫人的方面有很多，介紹姓名、年齡、職業、興趣愛好、外貌、特長等，我們看看這篇文章注重的是哪一方面。My Best Friend 我最好的朋友

My best friend is one of my s.Her name is.Every day, we go to school together and go back home together.We often help each other and learn from each other in study.我最好的朋友是我的一個同班同學，她的名字叫瑪麗。我們每天一起上學，一起回家。我們經常互相幫助，并向對方學習。

We have the same-ing s.She has many nice stamps.She is very proud of them.Sometimes she gives some of them to me.I think she is a very good girl.We will be good friends forever.我們有著相同的愛好——集郵。她有很多漂亮的郵票，并為此十分自豪。有時，她會把其中的一些郵票給我。我認為她是個非常好的女孩。我們會成為永遠的朋友。

點評：這是一篇記人的敘述文。先交代了My Best Friend是誰，接著通過事例交代了為什么“我們是最好的朋友”。最后闡述了主題。

中考英語作文范例：我的班主任

編輯點評：記敘文是中考作文的一個主要題型，它的寫作要求是重點突出，用詞得當，60詞左右，我們來看看今天這篇描述老師的文章是怎么寫的吧，另外還有常用句型奉上哦。

My Class Teacher 我的班主任

My class teacher is Mr.Wang.He is but kind.He has taught us Chinese for two years.我的班主任是王老師，他是一個要求嚴格而親切的老師。他已經教了我們兩年語文。He always tells us to study hard but not all the time.Sometimes he plays with us.He says, “All work and no play makes Jack a boy.” I think he is a good.他總是告訴我們要好好學習，但不是時時刻刻學習。有時他會和我們一起玩。他說：“只會用功不玩耍，聰明孩子也變傻。”

我覺得他是個很好的班主任。

點評：這篇文章取材的是身邊熟悉的人，作者也有東西可寫，更具有可讀性。另外，寫人時把主語稍作調整，讀起來輕松多了。

I am a 15-year-old girl.My name is.Now I am studying in the middle school.I want to be an because I think it is a funny and exciting job...寫人的常見句式如： This is my friend, Mary.She is...years old.She is a teacher/ an artist/ a singer...She/ He gets up at 6/5.../ early/ late.She/ He has sports at school.She/ He likes...She/ He is strong/ fat/ / kind/ thin/...She/ He looks like...She/ He is good at English/ maths/ Chinese/ physics...中考英語作文范例：我的班會

編輯點評：前面介紹了寫人的作文，今天，我們看看敘事的作文又是怎樣的呢。寫事一定要交代時間、地點、人物、情節，這跟語文中的記敘文其實是相通的。先來觀察下面這篇范文吧。Our Class Meeting 我們的班會

Last Friday afternoon we had our last class meeting in our classroom.All the students and our class teacher took part in it.上周五下午，我們在教室舉行了最后一次班會。班上的所有同學和班主任都參加了。We held a warm about our future life.Each of us spoke at the meeting.After the discussion, we all to study hard so as to make our life better and better.我們熱烈討論了今后的生活，每個人都在會上積極發言。討論完后我們都下定決心好好學習，讓我們的生活更加美好。

點評：這篇文章條理清楚，記敘完整，短短的五句話有簡單句，也有復合句，交代了時間、地點、人物、原因、經過、結果六要素。常用的敘事句型有：

It took place/ happened...Last week/ year/ Monday/ Tuesday...One Friday morning...中考英語作文范例：樹為什么重要

編輯點評：今天我們來看看議論文的寫法吧。議論文要有自己的觀點，要有論證過程，強調觀點。先來讀一讀這篇范文吧。Why Are Trees Important 樹為什么重要

Trees are very important to us.Do you know why? Let me tell you.樹對于我們非常重要，你知道為什么嗎？讓我來告訴你吧。

Trees take in from the air and make.That's important.People and animals need oxygen to live.Many small animals and s live in the trees.Some of them also get food from trees.Trees can also stop water and from going away.If we have a lot of trees, we stop s from being large.I think this is very important.You know, trees are green.They can make our country even more beautuful.樹木可以吸收二氧化碳，并釋放氧氣，這非常重要。人類和動物需要依靠氧氣生存。很多小動物和昆蟲居住在樹里，有些從樹里獲取食物。樹木還可以防止水土流失。如果我們有很多樹就可以阻止沙漠擴大。我認為這非常重要。眾所周知，樹是綠色的，它們能使我們的國家更加美麗。

Trees are our good friends.We should plant more trees and take good care of them.樹是我們的好朋友。我們應該種更多的樹，并好好照料它們。點評：文章先闡明觀點，接著論證，最后重申自己的觀點。

中考英語作文范例：英語回信

編輯點評：寫信是為了交流，有來信，必然也會有回信。在上期，我們介紹了英文書信的寫法，今天我們來看看回信在格式和內容方面又要注意哪些問題呢。

Dear Bob, 親愛的鮑勃，Yesterday I heard from you.I am very glad to be your pen friend.My name is Peter Zhang.I am sixteen years old.I live in...昨天我收到了你的來信，我很高興成為你的筆友。我的名字叫張彼德。我今年十六歲，我住在......I am a middle school student, too.I like English and maths very much.I also like sports.I am good at singing.I know a little about America.Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter? 我也是一名中學生，我非常喜歡英語和數學。我還喜歡體育運動，我很擅長唱歌。我對美國的了解不多，下次來信時能多跟我聊聊你們國家的事嗎？ Please write to me soon.期待著你的來信。Yours 你的

Peter Zhang 張彼德

點評：回信簡潔明了，句子間的銜接自然、緊湊，文中作者把自己的情況大致向美國朋友作了介紹，達到了回信的目的。

中考英語作文范例：通知的翻譯

編輯點評：看完了書信的寫作，接下來該說說便條的寫作了。其實便條的用處還是挺大的，請假要請假條，留言要留言條，備忘也要有個備忘錄，今天的作文范例就是關于一則“觀眾須知”的英文便條解釋。

假如你陪你校的外籍教師Smith先生去音樂廳聽音樂，在門口的布告欄里看見一張觀眾須知，內容如下： 觀眾須知

1、一人一票，憑票入場；

2、場內嚴禁吸煙；

3、食品和飲料請勿帶進場內；

4、演出時請勿照相；

5、演出時請勿使用傳呼機和移動電話；

6、提前30分鐘入場。

Smith先生不懂中文，他很想知道布告欄里寫著什么。現在，請你把觀眾須知的內容用英語告訴Smith先生，并把要講的話寫出來。

Mr.Smith, it is a notice to the.It says that we should enter the concert hall 30 minutes earlier before the concert starts.to the hall is by ticket only, each one each ticket.史密斯先生，這是一則觀眾須知。上面說我們應該在音樂會開始前30分鐘入場，每人憑票進入。

As a rule, food or drink should not be taken into the hall.Of course, smoking is not allowed in the hall either.按照規定，食品和飲料不得帶進場內，吸煙也是不允許的。

Please don't bring your with you because no photos can be taken during the concert.And what is more, and mobile phones must be off during the concert.請不要攜帶數碼相機入內，因為場內嚴禁拍照。另外，音樂會期間，傳呼機和手機必須關閉。點評：文章的用詞和句式有一定的難度，特別是關聯詞的運用，如of course，as a rule，and what is more使文章讀起來朗朗上口，層層緊扣，環環遞進，體現了作者較高的寫作技巧和水平。

中考英語作文范例：節約用水

編輯點評：節約用水是保護環境的重要一步，因此也是一個常談的話題，如何在中考作文幾十個單詞的范圍內把這個主題寫好是，是一個值得下功夫思考的問題，我們看看這篇范文是如何做到的。Saving Water What do we use water for? 2 Why water is very important in our daily life? 3 How do we save water? 參考范文

As we all know, water is in our daily life.We drink water every day, we use water to wash things and cook food, we also use water to make machines.People can't live without water.我們都知道水對于日常生活的重要性。我們每天喝水，用水洗東西和烹制食物，我們還用水來制造機器。離開水，人類就無法存活。

Though about 75% of the earth is covered with water, only 3% of it is water.So we must save water by having a instead of a.We can save water by

taps immediately and we can also save water by not washing under a running.雖然地球75%都被水覆蓋，但其中只有3%是淡水。所以我們應該用淋浴代替泡澡來節約水，同時及時修好滴水的水龍頭，并且不要開著水龍頭洗東西。

中考英語作文范例：學會互助

編輯點評：人與人之間是和諧共處的，也是要互相幫助的，如何就這一話題展開敘述，讓你的作文拿高分呢？一起來看看今天的范文是怎么寫的吧，注意文中的用詞和結構哦。Everyone Needs Help Did you get any help from others? 2 Did you give any help to people when they needed? 3 Tell your story 參考作文

In our daily life, we are with different kinds of people, no matter at home, in school, or at some other places.Everyone needs help, I think.And only who are willing to help others will also be helped.在我們的日常生活中我們會遇到各種各樣的人，無論是在家里、學校，還是在其他地方，我覺得我們都需要幫助。并且只有那些愿意幫助他人的人會獲得別人的幫助。

One day I saw a little girl in the street carrying a heavy schoolbag on her back.She was walking happily.一天，我在街上看到一個背著沉重書包的小女孩，她正開心地走著。

Then suddenly an old man fell down while he was crossing a street.She ran towards him at once, but she was too short to help him to stand.I helped her and we together brought the old man to safety.He thanked us over and over.I think the little girl was, though very young, a very person.突然，一位老人在穿過街道時摔倒了。她迅速地奔向老人，但是她太矮了，沒法把老人扶起來。我過去幫助她把老人扶到安全地帶。老人一再感謝我們。我覺得這個小女孩雖然年輕，但是一個很熱心腸的人。

中考英語作文范例：畢業離校

編輯點評：前面我們提供了各種類型的中考英語作文范例，不知道大家掌握了其中的寫法沒有呢？從這期開始，我們為大家精選了一些寫作參考題目和寫作綱要，供大家練習。Write a passage of at least 60 words on the following topic according to the given information.Leaving School Old school life 2 Teacher(s)and schoolmate(s)3 Future plan 參考作文

I don't want to leave school, because my old school life was full of fun and I had many good friends in my old school.我不想畢業，因為我的校園生活豐富多彩，我在學校有很多好朋友。

We used to share our lunch together.We used to play ball games together.We often did some during the holiday.All of my teachers and are very friendly and helpful.Now I have to leave school, I hope I will keep in touch with them and my new school life will be more.我們曾一起共享午餐，也曾一起做球類運動，我們還經常在假日里一起做調查。所有的老師和同學都很友善，并給予幫助。現在我即將畢業，我希望能和他們保持聯系，也希望新的學校生活能更加有趣。