第一篇：新東方王江濤四級作文解析及—手機與上學

新東方王江濤四級作文解析及范文—手機與上學

新東方在線

王江濤

2015年6月的大學英語四級、六級考試已全部結束，新東方在線四、六級教研、輔導團隊第一時間對四級真題進行解析。以下是新東方名師王江濤對在對四級作文的真題命題規律進行解析的同時，對三篇作文逐一進行了解析并提供了參考范文，供廣大考生參考。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below.You should start you essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on the kid’s understanding of going to school.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 150 words.命題解析

本題要求首先簡要描述圖畫，然后評論這個孩子對上學的理解。圖畫顯示：一個小孩問母親：如果我的手機已經知道一切，為什么我還要上學呢？顯而易見，本題主旨為手機是否可以取代上學。

國內寫作考試中已經反復考察手機這一熱點話題。2009年MBA寫作考察“手機短信”，2010年考研英語

（二）寫作考察“手機入網”，2013年12月四級寫作考察“手機在人們生活中越來越多的使用”，也考查了“網絡對學習的影響，以及教育是否僅僅是獲得信息”。2014年12月，考研英語

（一）寫作再次考察“手機時代的‘聚會’”。如果考生研究過之前的寫作真題，諸多表達均可使用。本題尤其和13年12月四級寫作考察的“網絡對學習的影響”異曲同工，幾乎就是原題重考。

寫作思路：

1、本題首段應簡要描述圖畫，指出當代有些年輕人認為手機可以取代上學。

2、次段最好進行正反論證，說明手機雖然可以幫助獲得大量信息，但無法取代教育，教育絕非僅僅是獲取信息。

3、第三段最好提出建議措施：我們應該合理使用手機，同時學校教育必不可少、不可或缺。

新東方在線王江濤老師參考范文：

It is subtly revealed in the portrayal that a young boy is talking with his mother in their house.The boy asks confusingly, “Why am I going to school if my phone already knows everything?”

We often hear of successful people who are largely “self-taught”.I say largely because, in all cases, they have received some formal teaching, whether it was from a teacher in a classroom, or from parents or a relative at home.In my case, I am glad I always learned from teachers, from fist grade all the way through my Master’s degree.A good teacher adds considerably to the materials contained in the textbooks.In conclusion, it takes a great deal of self-discipline to learn a subject via mobile phones with only self-study, having no guidance or instruction from a teacher.A skilled and talented teacher can add so much richness to what is being learned.I believe it is always better to have a teacher to some degree.如圖所示，一個小孩正在家中和他的母親談話。這個男孩疑惑地問：“如果我的手機已經知道一切了，我為什么還要去上學呢？”

我們常聽人說某某成功人士多半靠“自學”成才。之所以說“多半”是因為所有的成功人士都曾接受過正規教育，有的是在教室里聽老師講課，有的是在家里由父母或親屬給上課。拿我來說，我很慶幸從大一一直到碩士研究生畢業我都在跟著老師學。一位好的老師可以教給你許多課本材料以外的東西。

總之，在沒有老師指點的情況下，通過手機自學一門學科需要嚴格的自律。而一位經驗豐富且有才華的教師能教給你許多書本知識以外的東西。所以我想，在某種程度上，有老師教總歸更好。

第二篇：新東方 王江濤 四級寫作筆記&十大必背

新東方·王江濤·四級寫作筆記&十大必背范文

新東方·王江濤

四級寫作筆記&十大必背范文

王江濤四級寫作筆記

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第一原則：書寫工整，卷面清晰。

第一：是否寫滿（字數）。是否三段？是否兩頭小、中間大。

第二：首句是否是主題句。

第三：掃描，往往是首末句。一定要寫好。以及第一句。

只要有些亮點就可以了。

第二原則：字數原則。120——150

一行十個詞比較合適。12-15行

就是十句話，就要三段。

長短結合，以段句為主。長句——15到20個次。6短10長。

提高實力；掌握技巧。

1）十遍精讀；（范文）

第一角度：語言：精彩詞匯/精彩詞組/精彩句型/句子結構[簡單句/ 從句（3-5個）/時態（四級已現在時為主，只有舉例論證、圖表用過去時]/冠詞/主謂一致]

第二角度：結構、關聯詞（3-5）、同義替換、代詞替換（英語多用代詞）。

第三角度：內容：觀點、原因建議、2）背誦（最好方法）

背到滾瓜爛熟、脫口而出。

3）默寫（語法、拼寫、標點錯誤。修改了錯誤，分數就上去了）

4）中譯英。（找出不同——自己差的地方）

5）寫作。考前5-十篇（模仿的過程）

技巧：

萬能框架；

總結框架——從一篇文章；或不同文章。

每段每句話都來自不同文章。60個詞就夠了。不能多。

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詞匯：

1）記憶法

新東方·王江濤·四級寫作筆記&十大必背范文

4500詞。而需要的只有2-3千

背單詞【記憶法：7是一個神奇的數字！1：快速突破！（混個臉熟）

詞匯弱點，集中記憶。

當天要重復一遍。大多是閱讀詞匯，只需要認識。2：了解用法；3：做題體會。】

用紙挖個小洞，只能露出詞就好了。

第一遍——正序

第二遍——逆序！

第三遍——亂序！

建立對應干系。

詞匯書不用很復雜。基礎好一天450。

上午背單詞在12點之前結束。沒有前攝干擾。

不需要讀出來，只要建立外形之意義。

蓋中文，說意思。

每隔5分鐘，重復前五分鐘內容。半小時重復前半小時內容。

晚上沒有后攝干擾，有助于記憶。

必須有3次沒有后攝干擾才會深刻。

詞匯量上去問題就不大。

2）詞根詞綴法

3）聯想法

4）泛讀法

應用文

書信——重點

11分之七都是應用文。書信（5次一次——目擊見證書——來自國內的高考。感謝信——感謝老師；建議信——投訴食堂屬于公務書信所以要表揚）或口頭作文（導游詞、競選演講）

機構：不認識負責人（希望工程）——DEAR SIR,（DEAR MADAM)(TO WHOME INCONCERN(老師喜歡英國英語，用逗號）

PRESIDENT（有六個意思）

經理（manager）

個人：關系不親密——

私人書信：直呼其名。

3-5個從句。

新東方·王江濤·四級寫作筆記&十大必背范文

提綱一般有三點。第一句：提綱可以選作主題句。第二句作自我介紹（公務書信）；第三句寫寫作目的（英文開門見山）。

第二段：改寫提綱二。第二句寫兩點原因或情況。第三句：小結（也可不寫）。

第三段：第一句改寫提綱三；第二句：表示感謝（英文比較虛偽）（只有建議信不需要感謝，投訴信都需要感謝的）習慣句型：

my thanks to you for your generous help are beyond the words.(大膽使用主系表替代主謂賓，顯得比較書面化。）

words fail me when i want to express my sincere gratitude to you.i take this opportunity to show my heartfelt(衷心的）appreciation to the kind assistance（幫助）you render（給與）me.第三句：期待回信。i am looking forward to hearing from you soon.i look forward to your favourable（好意的）reply atyour earliest（盡早的）convenience.YOUR PROMPT ATTENTION TO MY INQUIRY（需要）WOULD（委婉，多用）BE HIGHLY Appreciated。（英文多用被動，——以理服人）

書面作文——送分！

落款：

yours sincerely，li ming

這種落款是萬能的。

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論說文寫作

另一種題型。

1）語言（第一位、結構第二位、內容第三位）

如今常考夾敘夾議文章。（時間順序）

描寫文——如今偶爾考描寫性段落（目擊）。（空間順序）

論說文-——重點。

語言：第一標準——基本正確

extansive knoledge（廣泛的知識)

第二標準——豐富多變。

不要反復用一個詞匯。

i hold the opinion that。

新東方·王江濤·四級寫作筆記&十大必背范文

句型、詞組（可以輕易改造成句型）、詞匯（精彩的）（think——reckon、assume、assert、）due——enough

be of importance。

結構問題：

英文尤其講究！思維差異！中文情感分段，英文邏輯分段。

中文：讀者體會。英文：作者交代

中文迂回模式。（重心放在最后）英文直線模式。（中心放在最先）

邏輯，一般是總分總。

1，關聯詞體現結構

啟（啟動觀點、文章）

承（觀點承接，正面論證：分類論證、first and formost【最重要】to begin with，more over，further more，因果論證；英文前果后因in that……for【不能放句首】

舉例論證：）

轉（yet，whereas……）

合（合并歸類。

末端首句，23短尾句）

2、同義替換

3、代詞替換（名詞）

內容第三

觀點不重要。

it is high time that……

三大優秀句型：倒裝句；強調句；虛擬語氣。都會幫你長分。

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不能為了過四級而考四級。

看碟！多看原版影視；（阿甘正傳，西雅圖夜未眠，情歸巴黎）

老友記。紐約最地道口語。

欲望都市

獅子王、冰河世紀

聽英文歌曲

流行音樂原版在歐美。

新東方·王江濤·四級寫作筆記&十大必背范文

多讀寫。

女生《羅密歐與朱麗葉》

《簡愛》（簡寫版）

《愛情故事》

男生《圣經》（語言是最優秀的！希伯來文翻譯來的！）

《希臘羅馬神話》（西方文明源頭）（中國對外翻譯出版社）

《老人與海》

海明威的作品。

千萬不要查字典，懂多少算多少。

教父！

掌握方法。聽寫！很多來自于托福——世界最難，把語速放慢罷了。

男生一般形象負面，女生常正確。比薩一般不好吃，蘋果派好吃！

聽寫！聽寫一盤磁帶——必及格。

聽一句、寫一句（基礎差者，可以用四級聽力）

聽一段寫一段（翻來覆去）

聽力最好教材：

listen to this（外研社）（中級足夠）

step by step（華東師大出版）

口語：跟讀模仿！

閱讀——背誦！對聽說讀寫都有好處！

被新概念三，閱讀的最好教材！

寫作：中譯英！

聽寫新概念

先看中文，翻譯，再聽寫，跟讀模仿或背誦！

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快速閱讀：

先看題干，再看文章！

尋找明顯信號！

中心話題！

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王江濤四級寫作十大必背范文

1、留學

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Studying Abroad.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:

1、目前很多中國學生出國留學，2、出國留學的好處，3、我的看法。

Nowadays, going abroad for studies is enjoying a striking popularity among adolescents.Importance should be attached to studying abroad.There are a great many advantages of studying overseas.First and foremost, living and studying abroad offers students a different perspective of the world.On a university campus, international students are likely to encounter their

counterparts from various countries and areas and are exposed to diverse ideas and values.What is more, overseas experience is the best opportunity for the real-life use of foreign languages.There is no better opportunity to improve

second-language skills than living in the country in which it is spoken.Generally peaking, it is my view that although going abroad is expensive and perhaps painful, the payoff is worthwhile.In the first place, in addition to knowledge, overseas students can gain precious experiences that those who stay at home will never have.Furthermore, overseas experience, frustrating and painful as it may be, is conducive to the growth of adolescents.新東方·王江濤·四級寫作筆記&十大必背范文

2、就業

Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Jobs for Graduates.You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline Job hunting has always been a headache for college students.Though many graduates are employed right after graduation, some are not.Most serious of all, some still have no idea where to go working even a long time after graduation.below:

1、大學生難找工作，2、原因很多，3、解決的辦法。

The reasons for this phenomenon are various.On the one hand, a few years ago colleges and universities enrolled so many students in popular majors, such as economy, finance and so on that the number of graduates was greater than the need in the market.On the other hand, most graduates would rather stay in large cities without suitable job to do than go to the country.I reckon this problem can be solved if both colleges and students take measures.First, they should research the market and develop special skills to suit its need.Second, students’ attitude towards employment should be changed.They should go to small cities and country.There they can also give full play to their professional knowledge.In a word, if we pay much attention, the situation can be improved.新東方·王江濤·四級寫作筆記&十大必背范文

3、網絡

Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Internet.You should write at least In recent years, people are developing an inseparable relationship with Internet.As is known to all, it is convenient for us to click the mouse when surfing on line, either to entertain ourselves or to meet the work’s needs.120 words and base your composition on the outline below:

1、互聯網使用的現狀，2、大學生是否應該使用互聯網，人們的看法不同，3、我的看法。

On the one hand, no one denies that Internet is currently one of the most useful media in our daily life.As a college student, I get on line every day to exchange information through e-mails with my net friends.But on the other hand, a good many people admit that they are too much addicted to Internet to maintain a regular and wholesome lifestyle.Thus, it is necessary for us to use Internet in a reasonable way and restrain from overindulgence.After all，Internet is invented to enrich our life, and to improve the efficiency of our work rather than shackle us with a chain.新東方·王江濤·四級寫作筆記&十大必背范文

4、考試

Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My Views on Examinations.You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:

1、大學都用考試來衡量學生的成績，2、考生可能帶來的副作用，3、我對考試的看法。

In most colleges and universities the examination is used as a chief means of deciding whether a student succeeds or fails in mastering a particular subject.Although it does the job quite efficiently, its side effects are also enormous.To begin with, examinations lower the standards of teaching.Since teachers are often judged by examination results, they are reduced to training their students in exam techniques.No subjects can be taught successfully merely through being approached with intent to take examinations.In addition, the most undesirable effect is that examinations encourage bad study habits.As the examination score is the only criterion for his academic performance, a student is driven to memorize mechanically rather than to think creatively.In fact, few of us admit that examinations can contribute anything really important to the students’ academic

development.If that is the case, why cannot we make a change and devise something more efficient and reliable than examinations?

新東方·王江濤·四級寫作筆記&十大必背范文

5、老師

Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The most unforgettable Teacher I ever In my life I have met a great many teachers who are really worth recalling.But perhaps the most unforgettable one I ever know is my English teacher.Know.You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:

1、我生活中最難忘的老師是……

2、為什么他（或她）令我難以忘懷，3、結論。

What frequently brings back memories of my school teacher is his special qualities.First of all, he gave us the greatest gift a teacher can offer—an awakening of a passion for learning.He not only led us to an appreciation of the beauty and perfection of English language and literature, but also aroused our great interest in exploring something deeper in this field.Second, I was attracted by his lively wit.I remember that we students always anticipated his class with great eagerness because his lecture were humorously delivered, never failing to provoke chuckles or loud laughs.Although it is nearly two years since I attended his last class, he is the talk of our old classmates, and I know part of him has already stayed in my heart.新東方·王江濤·四級寫作筆記&十大必背范文

6、求學信

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter applying for admission into a college or university.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1、入學條件，2、學費和獎學金，3、住宿情況。

Dear Sir or Madam，I am a Chinese student who wishes to apply for admission into your prestigious university.My plan is to start my course next term, and I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to provide me with certain essential information.First, what qualifications do I need to follow a course of study at your university? I already have a bachelor’s degree from Beijing University, but I wonder if there are any further

academic requirements.Second, how much are the tuition fees? Although I intend to be self-supporting, I would be interested to hear if there are any scholarships available for

international students.Third, what is the situation regarding accommodation?

I look forward to your reply, and to attending your esteemed institution.Yours sincerely，Li Ming

新東方·王江濤·四級寫作筆記&十大必背范文

7、邀請信

Directions: You want to invite some friends to a party.Write an invitation letter to them individually: Dear Snoopy，I am greatly honored to formally invite you to participate in Mr.Guo Jing’s wedding ceremony with Ms.Huang Rong to be held

1、邀請參加晚會，2、說明舉辦晚會的原因，3、將安排哪些活動。

at Beijing Grand Hotel from 8 to 10 p.m.on April 1, 2007.As you are a close friend of us, we would very much like you to attend the celebration and share our joy.The occasion will start at seven o’clock in the evening, with the showing of their wedding ceremony.This will be followed by a dinner party.At around ten, we will hold a small musical soiree, at which a band will perform some works by Bach and Strauss.If you do not have any prior appointment on April 1, we look forward to the pleasure of your company.Yours sincerely，Li Ming 新東方·王江濤·四級寫作筆記&十大必背范文

8、投訴信

Directions: You live in a room in college which you share with Dear Sir or Madam，I am writing to inform you that I wish to move into a new room another student.You find it very difficult to work there because your roommate always has friends visiting.Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college.1、要求下學期換一個新房間，2、解釋原因，3、要求單間。

next semester.I would prefer a single room, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate’s inconsiderate behavior.For one thing, his friends are constantly visiting him;for another, he regularly holds noisy parties.In these circumstances, I find it difficult to concentrate on my studies, and I am falling behind in my assignments.I am sure you will agree that the only solution is for me to move into a room of my own.Therefore, I would be grateful if you could find a single room for me, preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible.Yours sincerely，Li Ming

新東方·王江濤·四級寫作筆記&十大必背范文

9、致辭

Directions: Write a speech on the opening of a conference of no less than 120 words.In your speech, you should: Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, welcome to Beijing!To begin with, I would like to make a brief introduction to myself.I am the president of Motorola(China)Electronics Ltd.1、進行自我介紹，2、詳細介紹大會內容，3、結束語。

The following is my introduction to the conference.First, it is my great honor to be here with all of you and declare open the Conference of International Trade Cooperation.Second, on behalf of our company, I would like to express my heartfelt welcome to all the guests and delegates.Last, I believe our cooperative efforts are sure to be productive.I wish all of you enjoy yourselves during this conference and hope the above information will help you.If you have any question for me, please feel free to ask at any time.Thank you for your attention.新東方·王江濤·四級寫作筆記&十大必背范文

10、告示

Directions: The Students’ Union of your department is planning a Chinese Speaking Contest.Write an announcement which covers You should write about 120 words.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use Department of Chinese Language and Literature at the end of the announcement.the following information:

1、比賽目的、時間、地點，2、參賽者的要求，3、裁判和獎勵的細節。

Chinese Speaking Contest

February 3, 2008

To improve students’ ability to speak Chinese and enrich after-class activities, the Students’ Union of Department of Chinese Language and Literature is organizing a school-wide Chinese speaking contest to be held on Saturday next week(10 February)at the Students’ Auditorium.Those who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before Tuesday next week.Five professors will be invited to be judges.The first six winners will be given awards.Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest.The Students’ Union

Department of Chinese Language and Literature

第三篇：新東方【王江濤】考研英語指導：考

考前寫作突破-輕松三步走

第一步：通讀教材，消化筆記。要把我們網絡課堂發的教材，寫作教材，包括講義，再通讀一遍。另外我們講課的課堂筆記需要整理好，消化掉。每年都有很多同學聽課的時候記了很多筆記，之后也不看，那是沒用的。我們講的筆記都是考研的精華，要消化掉。每一個單詞，應該掌握拼寫；每一個句子，應該至少把它背下來。這個問題要在11月之前給解決掉。第二步：背誦、默寫、仿寫20大必備范文

1、背誦

我們給大家提供了20大必背范文：10篇小作文和10篇大作文。(王老師編寫的《高分寫作》)如果你還沒有背下來，應該在1月1號之前，把它們都背下來。而且要背到滾瓜爛熟，多多益善。為什么要這么做呢？因為如果背得不熟，上了考場什么都想不到。有同學反映，20篇文章全都背完了，但上了考場頭腦一片空白，這就是因為背得不夠熟練。我們在課堂上講過，老師是根據你現場發揮的句子打分的，如果全用模板去寫，那是零分。要怎么現場發揮呢？就是要靠平時所背的這些文章。上了考場，看到考題，如果你背過相關的表達，把它寫上就可以了。所以如果背得不熟根本就沒法用。

2、默寫

光背是不夠的。有些同學基礎不太好，好多單詞自己覺得會了，其實還是不會拼寫。所以一篇文章背熟了之后，把書合上，把它默寫下來。默寫下來之后對照一下范文，會發現，如果和范文的意思一致，但有些錯誤，比如語法、拼寫、標點的錯誤。文章背得滾瓜爛熟還是寫錯了，那么上了考場更不可能寫對了。這就是你寫作的弱點。然后對照范文，尋找差距。哪些地方寫錯了，把它糾正過來。我們這20篇必背范文中的每一個單詞，都要掌握拼寫。尤其是一些基礎不太好的同學，比如還沒有通過四級的同學。我們這20篇文章已經囊括了考研寫作最常用的詞匯，核心詞匯大概要3000個。掌握了，考研基本就夠用了。

3、仿寫模仿進行寫作。背完一篇文章之后，要有意識地積累表達。比方說，這篇文章中有沒有萬能詞匯，或者常用的句型。背完每篇文章之后，使用這篇文章的表達，去寫另一道題目。比如背完07年的作文，用它去練08年的作文。換一道題目，這些表達盡可能多的去使用。如果平時不用，上了考場是想不到的。

第三步：總結框架，考前模考。這個階段放在2010年1月1-9號。把作文的框架總結一下。小作文框架總結：

小作文一般考書信，寫7句話左右。小作文100個詞，框架最多50個詞，另外一半的字數，一定要上了考場現場發揮。第一段：自我介紹，寫作目的； 第二段：改寫提綱。

第三段：表示感謝，期待回信。這四個句子就是萬能句型。可以占大約四五十個詞。

2、大作文框架總結：

大作文主要是準備圖畫作文。大作文的框架字數不要太多，最多占一半的字數。大作文160個詞，框架最多80個詞。

第一段：圖畫描述段，怎么去描述一幅圖畫。挖掘細節詞，串連成句。細節挖掘的越多越好。把圖畫的細節詞一網打盡。

第二段：意義闡釋段，去分析這個圖畫的意義。第二段一般寫5句話左右。第一句就是主題句，再次點出圖畫的象征寓意，像08年的作文，象征寓意是合作。第二部分是論證，寫3句話。有很多種論證手段，任何問題可以從5個角度展開論證，可以使用6種論證手段。而判卷老師喜歡看到3種論證手段：第一種，因果論證。第二種論證手段是舉例論證。舉一到兩個例子。可以舉自己的例子，也可以舉社會熱點例子。第三種論證手段是聯系現實，把圖畫和現實進行聯系。第三個部分是小結：概括論證，總結本段。第三段：建議措施段，去發表評論，總結。寫4句話：第一句話就是結論句，也就是整篇文章的結論句，也是第三段的主題句。第二個部分就是針對雙方，提建議。提兩點建議。最后一部分是結尾，展望未來。使用幾種句型，如倒裝句、虛擬語氣等。給老師最后來一個好的印象。

第四篇：新東方四級作文

一、對比觀點題型

（1）要求論述兩個對立的觀點并給出自己的看法。

1．有一些人認為……

2．另一些人認為……

3．我的看法……

The topic of ①________（主題）is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②________（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③________（理由二）.Moreover, ④________（理由三）.While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,________（支持B的理由一）.Secondly（besides）,⑥____________（理由二）.Thirdly（finally）,⑦____________（理由三）.From my point of view, I think ⑧________（我的觀點）.The reason is that ⑨____________（原因）.As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice

（2）給出一個觀點，要求考生反對這一觀點Some people believe that ①________（觀點一）.For example, they think ②________（舉例說明）．And it will bring them ③________（為他們帶來的好處）.In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④____（我不同意該看法的理由一）.For another thing, ⑤____（反對的理由之二）． Form all what I have said,I agree to the thought that ⑥____（我對文章所討論主題的看法）．

二、闡述主題題型

要求從一句話或一個主題出發，按照提綱的要求進行論述．

1． 闡述名言或主題所蘊涵的意義．

2． 分析并舉例使其更充實．

The good old proverb ________（名言或諺語）reminds us that ________（釋義）.Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of all,________（理由一）.For example, ____________（舉例說明）.Secondly,________（理由二）.Another case is that ________（舉例說明）.Furthermore , ____________（理由三）．

In my opinion, ________（我的觀點）.In short, whatever you do, please remember the say____A.If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.三、解決方法題型

要求考生列舉出解決問題的多種途徑

1． 問題現狀

2． 怎樣解決（解決方案的優缺點）

In recent days, we have to face a problem——A, which is becoming more and more serious.First, ________（說明Ａ的現狀）．Second, ________（舉例進一步說明現狀）Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing, ________（解決方法一）.For another ________（解決方法二）.Finally, ________（解決方法三）.Personally, I believe that ________（我的解決方法）.Consequently(作為結果，因此), I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ________（帶來的好處）.四、說明利弊題型

這種題型往往要求先說明一下現狀，再對比事物本身的利弊，有時也會單從一個角度（利或弊）出發，最后往往要求考生表明自己的態度（或對事物前景提出預測）

1． 說明事物現狀

2． 事物本身的優缺點（或一方面）

3． 你對現狀（或前景）的看法

Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First ________（Ａ的優點之一）.Besides ____________（Ａ的優點之二）

.But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that ________（Ａ的第一個缺點）．To make matters worse,____________（Ａ的第二個缺點）．

Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to ________（我的看法）．

（From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way, ________（對前景的預測）

五、議論文的框架

（1）不同觀點列舉型（選擇型）

There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文題目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 觀點一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___觀點一_____.People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___觀點二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand，___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___觀點二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __觀點一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.（2）利弊型的議論文

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over（the issue that）___作文題目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __題目議題_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___優點一______.And secondly ___優點二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __討論議題______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺點一______.In addition, ____缺點二______.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __討論議題____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____討論議題___.（3）答題性議論文

Currently, there is a widespread concern over（the issue that）__作文題目_______.It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.First of all, __途徑一______.In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途徑二_____。

Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文題目______, we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.（4）諺語警句性議論文

It is well know to us that the proverb: “ ___諺語_______” has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study.It means ____諺語的含義_______.The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows.（also theoretically）

A case in point is ___例子一______.Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____諺語_____.With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____諺語_____.The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job.（一）

Nowadays many people prefer(______)because it plays a significant role in our daily life.Generally speaking,its advantages can be seen as follows.On one hand,(______).One the other hand,(_______).But every sword has two blades.The negative aspects are also aparent.One of the prominent disadvantages is that(______).To make matters worse,(______).Through the above analysis,I believe that The Positive aspects far outweighs its negative aspects.Whatever effects it has,one thing is certain,(_____)itself is neither good nor bad.It is the uses which is put on it that determines its value to our society.Some,others and I

（二）There is no consensus among people as to the view of(_____).The opinions vary from person to person.Some people hold the idea that(____).A case in point is that(_____).On the other hand, other may have a quite different view.According to them,(_____).The most typical example is that(______).Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments,I am inclined to agree with the latter.Admittedly, the former point of view seems reasonable in saying to some extend,but(_____)is more convincing.My view

（三）When asked about(_____),some people hold the idea that(_____).As far as they are concerned,(______).But I could not agree with them in several points.In my opinion,(_____).The reason for my choice are listed as follows.First of all,(______).In addition,(______).Last but not the least,(______).For the reasons mentioned above,I firmly believe(______).一、篇章連貫：可以通過文章內容的內在聯系來表現篇章的連貫性。

1、具體到一般： 表現形式為先舉例具體的事例進行分析、說明，進而得出論證或結論，在段末往往以主題句的形式表現出來。

2、一般到具體：表現為在文章段首以主題句的形式出現，然后通過具體的敘述、說明、舉例使主題句變得具體、明白、易懂。

二、常用句型

１、開頭

It's well known to us that...Recently,...has been brought to popular attention/has become the focus of public concern.One of the universal issues we are faced with / that cause increasing concern is that...People's view/opinions /ideas on...vary from person to person.Some people think that...they hold this opinion because...However,others hold that...2、主要論述方法

A is to B what C is to D

According to..., but there is no evidence whatsoever to show...The example cited,while suggestive of these trends,is insufficient to warrant their truth because there is no reason to belivev that the data drawn form...is representative of...As it stands, this argument suffers from three critical flaws.3、結尾

In my opinion,it is more advisable to do...than to do

Taking into account all these factors,we may reasonably come to the conclusion that...It is time to take the advice of...and to put special emphasis on the improvement of...We should solve the problems that we are confronted/faced with

It is high time that we put an end to...Otherwise,...分析型作文

根據內容的不同，分析型作文一般可分為分析原因型、分析作用型、分析優劣型、分析影響型、分析狀況型、分析決定因素型及分析解決方法型等不同類型。

引出原因的四種表達：There are three/various reasons for...;What are the possible reasons for.../Why...?;Possible reasons for...may be as follows;Possible reasons for...may be a , b and c;

引出具體解決方法的四種表達方式：There are three/various solutions to the problem;What are the possible solutions to it?;Possible solutions to it areas follows;Possbile solutions to it may be part-time job,scholarship and financial aid.常用句型

１、分析影響／利弊

There are three/a number of consequences of......brings about some great/serious consequences

...involves/entails some great/serious consequences

Its side effects are enormous

Perhaps the most serious/obvious consequence is...The immediate result is......deprives/strips people of......is/becomes the victim of...2、分析原因

There are probably three / a number of reasons for...why...?/What are the reasons for...?

This phenomenon involves / entails several complicated factors /reasons

...is mainly because of/due to/owing to...It is due to...,rather than..., let alone......ont only because...,but(also)because......partly/in part because..., partly/in part because...Corrupts/erodes one's minds/virtues

One/We may lay/place blame for B on A

...Contributes to...Some may attribute.../it to......undermines......poses a threat to...3、分析問題／現象

There are too many examples/instances of...Nowa days, every one of us is confronted/faced withtoo many examples/instances of...Some...Others...Still others...Even there are those who..Sometimes,...More often,...4、分析解決方法

Such a tragedy would not happen if we knew the following ways to handle...(虛擬語氣)The key words are...,...and...Only in this way,could/can...(倒裝結構）

It is high time that...The impact could be minimized if we follow the ways / suggestions above

These are the secrets of a successful...

第五篇：2011新東方英語四級作文(免費下載)

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模板一 How to Deal with Stress-如何面對壓力

How to Deal with Stress(如何面對壓力)1．為什么會有壓力? 2．如何面對壓力? [寫作導航]第一段先用定義法指出壓力是什么，以及壓力的危害；第二段寫壓力的各種來源；第三段寫如何面對壓力，可針對第二段的來源，舉例說明各種解決辦法；最后一段提醒人們面對壓力方法要對頭，不可走歪路。

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Stress is a state of being upset that happens when we are under pressure.Both our feelings and our bodies get upset.We can even get emotionally and physically sick if we have too much stress for too long.Stress can come at us from every direction.For instance, it can come from fights with other people.It can come when we have too many things to do and too little time to do them.It can also come when we do not have enough money to pay for what we want.Since stress can make us sick, we have to learn how to deal with it.There are good ways and bad ways to do so.We should deal with stress in good ways, of course.Good ways to cut down on stress include changing our lifestyles.For example, we can learn either to get along with people or to stay away from them.We can decide what to do now, what to do later, and what to leave off doing forever.We can also figure out how to get money or we can cut down on what we want.We should not deal with stress in bad ways because bad ways to cut down on stress just lead to more troubles, for example, skipping out and leaving our work undone, blaming our problems on someone else, stealing or cheating.模板二 My View On Private Tutoring-家教之我見

My View On Private Tutoring(家教之我見)1．家教與日俱增； 2．家教的優缺點； 3．我的看法。

[寫作導航]第一段可先圍繞提綱開始，然后引出家教也有優缺點；第二段主要圍繞優點來寫，可從對家長、對從事家教的大學生以及對孩子本人等幾方面來談；第三段談缺點，可從孩子的娛樂、從事家教的大學生的學習等方面來談；第四段談我的看法，弊大于利。[范文]

Nowadays, an increasing numbers of parents ask college students to act as private tutors to their kids.Like everything else, private tutoring also has advantages and disadvantages.Generally speaking, the advantages can be listed as follows.First, private tutoring is helpful to the parents.Many parents are so busy with their work that they have no time to help their children with their lessons.Besides, private tutoring is good for the tutors themselves.They can make some money while providing a service for others.Most important of all, private tutoring is beneficial for kids.Since the parents can't help when the kids have problems, private tutoring seems to be a wise choice.However, private tutoring also has disadvantages.To begin with, it takes so much of the kid's time that they can hardly find time for rest and amusement, which is harmful to their health.To

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make matters worse, some tutors have too many kids to teach so that they neglect their studies at school.Worst of ail, some tutors only offer tips for test taking rather than teaching kids what is really needed.According to the above analysis, it is clear that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.Therefore, it is proposed that great emphasis be laid on the stimulation of the kid' s learning and the cultivation of their potential Moreover, kids should be given more time to play so that a new and healthy generation will emerge.模板三 English Teaching at College-大學英語教學

English Teaching at College(大學英語教學)1．有人認為大學英浯教學非常成功。2．有人認為大學英語教學是個失敗。3．我的看法或建議。

[寫作導航]開始先分述兩種看法，認為大學英語教學成功的人以大學英語考試人數一直猛增及英語能力強的人在各行各業所做的貢獻為依據支持自己的觀點；認為大學英語教學失敗的人則以大學生口語差、翻譯和寫作水平低為依據支持自己的看法；而“我”認為大學英語教學有進步，但仍存在問題，如教師一言堂，應試教育等；“我”建議大學英語教學應徹底改革，大力培養學生的各項語言技能。[范文]

Some people say that English teaching at college in China has proved to be successful Take College English Test as an example, more than four million students have taken it and the number is still increasing year by year.This means that increasing numbers of people are aware of the necessity and importance of English learning.What is more, large numbers of students who are competent in English are making their contributions to the county in all walks of life.Others, on the other hand, suggest that English teaching at college in China is a complete failure.They suggest that, on the whole, most graduates still can't communicate with native speakers properly in spoken English.Besides, they are incompetent in both translation and writing.I think great progress has been made in English teaching at college in China over the past 15 years.Yet, there are still some problems.On the one hand, English teaching at college in China is still teacher centered, although the student centered approach has been advocated for years.The teacher dominates the class, leaving students little time to practice.On the other hand, English teaching at college in China is still test oriented.Passing College English Test has been regarded as a prerequisite for graduates to get jobs on the job market.So great emphasis is given on how to pass the tests rather than on how to develop the students' language skills.As a result, students do not have the language competence though most of them have passed College English Test.Therefore, it is my strong feeling therefore that English teaching at colleges in China should go through some radical reform.Priority should be given to the development of the four language skills rather than to develop the skills in passing the examination.模板四 How to Use Our Brain-用腦之道

How to Use Our Brain(用腦之道)1．人腦的重要性及作用。

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2．如何科學用腦。

[寫作導航]先寫大腦的特性和作用(復雜、智能的器官，使人區別于動物等)；再寫大腦越用越靈，但過度使用也會出問題，為第三段作鋪墊；第三段從兩方面說明如何合理用腦：一是勞逸結合，手腦交替；二是從科學的角度，利用數據，說明過度用腦可能給大腦帶來的傷害。

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Human brain is the most complex and intelligent mechanism in the world.It is the major factor that distinguishes man from animals.With our brain we get to know the world and make a good use of the world to our benefit.Our brain is a product of constant use through millions of years.Other things can be used up, but used properly, our brain can never be exhausted.In fact, the more we use it, the more capable and efficient it will become.Excessive use of the brain, however, will causea lot of problems.So it is useful to know how to use our brain wisely.First, handwork or physical labor is good exercise as well as rest for our brain.Doing handwork and brain work alternatively can help develop both our brain and hands.Secondly, we should avoid doing brainwork for long hours on end.The brain, though 3% of the body weight, when at work, consumes 20% of the oxygen carried by 16% of the blood in circulation.A long period of brainwork may cause, through lack of bodily activity, slow blood circulation and inadequate oxygen supply to the brain, resulting in inefficiency and possible damage to the brain.模板五 Student Use of Computers

Student Use of Computers Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Student Use of Computers.You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the chart and the outline given below:

上圖所示為1990年，1995年，2000年某校大學生使用計算機的情況，請描述其變化。

1．請說明發生這些過程的原因(可從計算機的用途，價格或社會發展等方面加以說明)； 2．你認為目前大學生在計算機使用中有什么困難或問題? Student Use of Computers

This chart shows the increase of student use of computers from the year 1990 to 2000.As we can see, in 1990 the average number of hours a student spends on the computer per week is 2.In 1995, however, the number doubles and in 2000, it soars to 20 hours per week.There are many causes for this change.For one thing, computers can do a lor of things

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that may be difficult for man to do, making man's work easier.So, many people turn to computers for help when they want to have their job done.For another, computers are becoming cheaper day by day.As a result, many universities install them in large numbers and many families can afford to buy one, consequently, they are always available for the students to use.But the prime reason, I think, is that with the development of society, computers are used in ahnost all walks of life.Those who are specialized in operating computers are badly needed.If a student is good at computer, chances will be greater for him to get a job.Many problems also arise in students use of computers.One problem is that some students spend too much time sitting in front of their computers, as a result, their bealth is affected.The other problem is that some students chat or play video games for a long time on computers, wasting a lot of their precious time.So it is suggested that these students make a scientific and positive use of the computers.模板六 Ownership of Houses in a Big City Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Ownership of Houses in a Big City in China.You must base your composition on the following instructions(given in Chinese):

1．根據上圖描述該市住房產權的變化； 2．分析產生這些變化的原因；

3．說明這些變化對個人和社會產生的影響。

Your composition should be no less than 120 words.Remember to write it neatly.Ownership of Houses in a Big City in China

Great changes have taken place in the ownership of houses in cities in China from 1990 to 2000.While the number of state owned houses decreased, that of private houses increased.In 1990, seventyfive percent of the houses were state owned whereas only twenty five percent of the houses were private.In 2000, however, the proportion of state owned houses reduced to twenty percent and that of private houses increased to eighty percent.There are many reasons for the great change in the ownership of houses in cities.The development of the economy is the most important one.Thanks to this development, people make more money than they used to.As a result, they can set aside some money to buy houses after their daily necessities are satisfied.The measures the government adopts may be the next incentive.Nowadays, people can have access to various kinds of loans from banks when buying the house.The large supply of housing may be the last reason.Wherever you go, you can see houses of various designs and sizes available for people to choose.These changes will have a great influence on both the living standard of the individual and the productivity of the society.People can live in the spacious houses of their own and the

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government can increase the productivity by using the money from selling the houses.The Problem of Human Population時間:2009-05-07 14:00作者: 點擊:1051次

模板七 The Problem of Human Population

1．據統計一千年前地球上有不到4億人口。2．人口暴漲的原因。3．因此……

It has been estimated that a thousand years ago there were less than 400 million people on earth.However, in the recent thousand years human population has increased nearly 20 times.Nowadays the world population has reached more than 7000 million.The population.First, a lot of people can't get employment, which is a universal problem in the world.Second, in developing countries there are not enough shelters for too many people and so some people are not properly housed and even are exposed to the elements.Third, in underdeveloped countries a lot of people suffer from hunger because of food shortage, which in turn causes many other problems, malnutrition, disease, etc.Fourth, there are not enough schools for so many people and so a lot of people are illiterate.Therefore, to eliminate these problems, human beings should take effective measures to control population.模板八 How to Reduce Stress-如何減少壓力

How to Reduce Stress(如何減少壓力)1．現代社會人們的壓力與日俱增； 2．壓力太大的危害； 3．減少壓力的辦法。

[寫作導航]首先陳述隨著現代生活節奏的加快，人們的壓力也在增大，雖然適當的壓力對人有好處，但壓力太大就會產生副作用，從而影響工作、學習和健康，所以要學會減輕壓力；第二段闡述減輕壓力的辦法，比如降低對自己的要求、接受現實、不要攀比，多與朋友

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溝通等；最后總結全文，提出希望。

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As the pace of modern life continues to quicken, many people are in the habit of rushing through life.Some admit that stress seems to be on the increase all the time.A certain degree of stress is beneficial to us, but too much stress is certainly harmful, and sometinles may even harmful to our health and physique.So it is necessary to know how to reduce stress.There are many ways that can help us solve this problem, but the following may be the most effective.First, learn to COllie to terms with yourselves.Don't set a goal that is too high because there are many things in this world that are beyond your reach.Learn to be content to go as far as you can.Second, learn to COllie to terms with the world around you.Don't try to change other people or other things.There are people and things in this world that you can do nothing about.So learn to accept them.Third, don't be too interested in material things and don't try to “keep up with the Joneses.” Don't harbor any jealousy, vanity or resentment to others.Be satisfied with what you have.Finally, keep in touch with your friends.Talk with them, share with them your happiness and misery.This will help to make you feel better.These are not necessarily the only ways to solve the problem, and it is my hope that everyone can reduce the too much stress in his work and study and live a relaxed happy life.模板九My View on Job-hopping

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic My View on dob-hopping.You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below: 1．有些人喜歡始終從事一種工作，因為…… 2．有些人喜歡經常更換工作，因為…… 3．我的看法。

My View on Job-hopping

People have different attitudes towards their work.Some prefer to stick to one occupation as their lifelong career.These people are of the opinion that one can never do his work well unless he is devoted to only one job in his lifetime.So if one changes his job frequently, he will not get the necessary experience needed in his work.Others, on the other hand, like to change their jobs at times.In their opinion, people work in order to make more money.If they havea chance to get a better paid job, they will certainly try to get this chance.Besides, if a person does only one job all his life, he will certainly be bored with it.My idea is that interest is the most important if one wants to excel others in his job.So if a person is not interested in his job, job hopping is normal and even necessary.Otherwise, he will suffer from his work, and inevitably, he is not likely to succeed in his career.模板十 How to Read Better and Faster

How to Read Better and Faster(如何讀得好又快)1．閱讀的重要性；

2．如何克服不良閱讀習慣；

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3．如何讀的又快又好；

[寫作導航]第一段舉例說明閱讀的重要，并引出如何才能讀得好又快；第二段詳細列舉各種閱讀的不良習慣，如出聲讀、搖頭晃腦讀、用手指著讀等；第三段是如何成為讀得好又快的讀者的具體建議，如地方要安靜、精力要集中、靠上下文猜詞義等；最后簡練結尾。

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Reading is not only relaxation.To keep up with their work, many people must read letters, reports, publications, office documents, a never ending flood of words.In an examination, the ability to read and to comprehend quickly can mean the difference between success and failure.But the fact is that most of us are poor readers.Fortunately, almost anyone can learn to read faster and with greater comprehension.Here are some suggestions on how to deal with some bad reading habits.If you mouth each word as you read, this slows down you toa snail's speed.The best way to correct this problem is to place a finger on your lips and hold them firmly shut till you've broken the habit.If your head swings as your eyes move along a line, lock your head between your hands as you read.If you point to each word with your finger, grip the reading material firmly with both hands or sit on your hands while you read.Here are more suggestions to train you to read better and faster: Read in aquiet spot, as free from distraction as possible.But don't daydream;force yourself to concentrate on what you are reading.If you come across unfamiliar words, try to guess the meaning from the context, then check the meaning in a dictionary later.Don't reread.Pretend the words disappear as your eyes pass over them.You'll probably be surprised to find that you didn't miss anything important.Try to glance only at nouns and verbs in sentences to see how much you can get out of reading this way.The secret of success is constant practice.What you get will be worth the effort 模板十一

Is It Harder for an Adult to&n Is It Harder for an Adult to Learn New Languages?(成人更難學外語嗎?)1．成人學習一種新的語言是否比兒童困難? 2．闡述原因。[寫作導航]第一段從人們的普遍看法入手，即年齡越大，學外語越難，然后提出質疑：這是真的嗎?否定之后指出，這并不一定，通常隨著年齡增加，學語言的能力也增強；第二段陳述原因，一是因為成人社會閱歷豐富，二是因為成人邏輯思維能力強，三是因為成人自控能力超過兒童；最后一段以鼓勵成人學好外語結尾。[范文]

Most people think that the older you get, the harder it is to learn a new language.This is because they believe that children learn languages more easily and efficiently than adults.Thus, at some point in our lives, maybe around ages 12 or 13, we lose the ability to learn languages well.Is it true that children learn a foreign language more efficiently than adults? It may not necessarily be the case.In fact, the ability to learn language increases as the age increases, from childhood to adulthood.There are several possible explanations for these findings.For one thing, adults know more about the world and, therefore, are able to understand things more easily than children.Moreover, adults can use logical thinking to help them see patterns in the language.Finally, adults have more self discipline than children.All in all, the common conception that children are better language learners than adults may

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not necessarily be true.Hopefully, this would encourage adult learners to become successful language learners, no matter what new languages they want to learn.模板十二

Why My Spoken Enslish is Poor?

Why My Spoken Enslish is Poor?(口語不佳探因)1．英浯口語很重要；

2．我的英語口語差的主要原因； 3．我的對策。

[寫作導航]本文應首先闡述英語，語的重要性，緊接著舉例支持，說明英語口語在現代社會中的重要；第二段結合“我”自己，列出英語口語不好的幾個主要原因；第三段指出，只要有決心，措施跟上，英語口語就一定會好起來。文章用漢語格言“世上無難事，只要有心人。”或英語格言“Where there is a will，there is a way．”收尾，會很有說服力。

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When we study English, we learn to listen, speak, read and write.Of these abilities, speaking is the most important.As we all know, the fundamental means of commUnication is speaking.Onlyby speaking to each other directly can two people exchange their ideas freely and efficiently.This is especially true in modern times when we live in a “global village”, where joint ventures and overseas tourism become commonplace.Many employers in joint ventures speak English, so do most of the tourists.Many difficulties will arise if we can't express ourselves fluently in English.In spite of my awareness of its importance, I seldom find chances to practice and improve my oral English.So, I am still very weak with regard to this respect.one reason is that my pronunciation and intonation aren't good enough.The other is that I am so shy that I am always too nervous to find the exact words to express my ideas and feelings.As a result the best way for me to do is to remain silent when others are practicing and making great progress in their oral English everyday.Now I am attaching much more importance to oral English and I have made up my mind to seize every opportunity to practice.I begin to participate actively in all kinds of English activities, such as going to “English Corners”, talking in English with my classmates and with native speakers.“Nothing is difficult in the world if you really put your heart to it.” as the Chinese saying goes.If I can build up my confidence, if I am not afraid of losing face any more, if I really work hard on it, I am sure my oral English will be excellent someday.模板十三 Advantages and Disadvantages of Cell&nbs Advantages and Disadvantages of Cell Phones(手機的利弊)1．手機使用的普遍性； 2．手機的優點；

3．手機的危害及我的建議。

[寫作導航]先指出當前手機使用很普遍，然后用事實(隨處可見人們用手機通話，許多大學生、高中生都有手機)來支持主題句；手機的優點主要是方便通信，甚至上網，還體現在突發事件(疾病、交通事故)的求助上；手機的缺點主要是輻射和干擾他人，因此我建議盡量少用，重要場合(開會、上課時)關機。

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Cell phones have become increasingly popular in China these days.Wherever you go you can see people using cell phones.Many college students, even high school students, have cell phones.Cell phones have brought people a lot of benefits, but the most important is that they are convenient.With cell phones in their hands, they can keep in touch with anybody they want.If they want to get some information from the Internet, they can easily have their dream realized via cell phones too.Furthermore, if someone has a heart attack or a traffic accident, a call to emergency hospital or to the police can quickly bring him the help he wants.However, cell phones can also bring people problems.The most serious is the electric wave radiation which is thought to be harmful to users' brains.Another problem is that when people are having a meeting or having a class or at a concert etc, the ring of the cell phone may interrupt others.So I think people should use cellphones as little as possible and turn them off when they are attending important meetings or attending classes.模板十四

Why Living Off Campus Is Popular?

Why Living Off Campus Is Popular?(校外租房何以流行?)1．學生校外租房住宿較普遍； 2．校外租房住宿的原因； 3．我的看法。

[寫作導航]第一段從學生租房現象普遍過渡到探究其原因，結尾句引出下段；第二段首先指出校外租房住宿的好處，首先，住在校外可省去與他人相處的煩瑣，可集中精力學習；其次，住在校外可有更多自由，如熬夜、不受限制地上網等；最后，住在校外可有更多的隱私權；結尾段談“我”的看法，即事物都是一分為二的，住在校外會失去體驗校園豐富生活的機會，還會錯過學會與他人相處的機會等。

[范文]Nowadays living off campus enjoys great popularity among college students.Why, then, do students do so when they are provided with very modern apartments and good services on campus? The reasons can be listed as follows.First, living off-campus can relieve the student from time consuming and energy consuming trivialities.Since people from different places have different personalities, habits, and interests, etc, some students think that it is difficult for them to get along with their pals.If they live off-campus, they don't have to spend time worrying about and thinking of how to get along with their roommates.In this way, they will have more time for their studies.Secondly, living off-campus can offer them a lot of freedom.Freed from the regulations of the university, they can do whatever they want in whatever time they like.For example, they can stay up late, reading books or surfing on the Internet.Lastly, living off campus can give them more privacy.If they live in a dormitory, they have no “human rights” so far as privacy is concerned.I think living off-campus has both its benefits and shortcomings.If we live off campus we will not have the chance to experience the rich and colorful social life on campus.Away from our classmates, we will not have the chance to learn how to communicate with those who have divergent opinions.We will lose the chance to learn to cooperate with others.模板十五

HOW to Succeed in a dob Interv

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HOW to Succeed in a dob Interview(面試成功之術)1．求職面試非常普遍； 2．如何在面試中取得成功。

[寫作導航]第一段可寫成引入段，指出面試很普遍，但仍有些人不知如何成功面試，自然轉入第二段；第二段可從衣著、言談、自信等方面著手，也應包括自己對專業知識、工作經歷和興趣的介紹；最后一段是結尾段，可總結全篇收尾。

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When applying for a job, many people, school graduates in particular, have to have an interview with the employer before they are offered the job.Many graduates, however, do not know how to succeed in such an interview.The following are some of the rules to abide by.To succeed in an interview, the applicant should demonstrate certain personal and professional qualities.Since much of the first and lasting impression of a person is the clothes he wears, the applicant should take care to appear well but modestly dressed, avoiding the extremes of too elaborate or too casual clothes.Besides, he should pay close attention to his manner of speaking, which should be neither showy nor familiar but rather straightforward, granmatically accurate, and friendly.In addition, he should be prepared to talk knowledgeably about the requirements of the position for which he is applying in relation to his own professional experience and interests.And finally, a really impressive applicant must convey a sense of serf confidence and enthusiasm for work, a factor that att interviewer value highly.The applicant who displays these characteristics, with just a little luck, witt certainly succeed in the typical personal interview.If you can bear these rules in mind, chances are that you will succeed in a job interview The Importance of Physical Exercises-體時間:2009-05-07 14:01作者: 點擊:1231次

模板十六 The Importance of Physical Exercises(體育鍛煉的重要性)漢語提示：據報道，我國年輕人，特別是大學生的健康狀況不容樂觀。請寫一篇150字左右的文章，說明體育鍛煉的重要性。

[寫作導航]先從所給提示“我國年輕人，特別是大學生的健康狀況不容樂觀”入手，引入主題：造成這一結果的原因是忽視體育鍛煉；第；段詳細列舉體育鍛煉的重要性，如加速血液循環、增進新陳代謝、消耗多余脂肪、促進睡眠等；最后一段總結體育鍛煉的好處，呼吁人們積極參加鍛煉。

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It is reported that the health of young people in China, college students in particular, is not as good as is supposed to be.There are many reasons for this fact, but the main reason is that many people ignore the importance of physical exercises.Why, then, are physical exercises so important to our health? First, physical exercises can improve blood circulation, speeding up the supply of nutrients and oxygen to every part of the body and the removal of waste from the blood through sweating and exhalation.Secondly, physical exercises can promote a healthy metabolism.It helps with the digestion and absorption of food, thus giving everyone a good appetite.Thirdly, physical exercise can help consume excessive fat in the body, preventing people from putting on too much weight, thus keeping them in good shape.Finally, after physical exercises we usually need a good rest and a sound sleep at night, refreshing us for the next day's work.In conclusion, physical exercises not on[y keep us fit and strong, but also help us to be

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successful in our lives.It is, therefore, strongly suggested that young people spare some time to take an active part in various kinds of physical exercises.模板十七

Harmfulness of Video Games-電子游戲危害談

Harmfulness of Video Games(電子游戲危害談)1．許多年輕人沉溺于電子游戲中。2．電子游戲的危害。3．解決的辦法。

[寫作導航]第一段可陳述許多年輕人陷入電子游戲不能自拔的現象；第二段羅列電子游戲的危害，如對身體的危害、對學習和工作的影響，以及不良電子游戲對年輕人道德會產生不良影響等；第三段可從充分認識電子游戲的危害、取締非法網吧和鼓勵開發健康游戲等方面提出解決問題的辦法。

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In spite of objections from public opinion, many students can't draw themselves away from video games.It seems that the more they are prohibited from playing the games, the more they are tempted to do so.Many students indulge themselves in playing these games.Video games are harmful to both the individual and society in many ways.First, they endanger the young people's health.Sitting in front of the computer for hours on end is bad for the player's eyesight as well as his entire physique.Secondly, they distract the young people%attention from their work and study.Absorbed in the games, the player often forgets to go to work or class.Sometimes even if they are at work or in class, they are still thinking of the games they played or are going to play after work or after class.As a result, they quickly fall behind others in their work and study.Thirdly, they lead young people to moral degradation.Some young people are especially interested in games that are filled with violence.If they play these games a long time, they may also settle disagreements through violence, which may give rise to higher crime rate.Therefore, it is time we took effective measures to solve this problem.On the one hand, young people should be made fully aware of the danger of video games.On the other, illegal video game houses should be eliminated, and software producers should be encouraged to make more beneficial video games in the future.模板十八

Why More and More Students Are

Why More and More Students Are Absent from Class?(學生何故逃課?)1．有人認為學生缺課的原因在他們本身； 2．有人認為學生缺課的原因在老師； 3．我認為??

[寫作導航]第一段可從兩方面陳述提綱，然后引出“我”的看法；第二段先分析學生方面的原因：大學生自由多了，如不嚴格要求自己，就會睡過頭、上網或干其它事情；還有些學生誤認為工作經歷比書本知識更重要，因此選擇了打工而不去上課；然后分析老師方面的原因，如教學方法陳舊，教材過時，課堂乏味等；最后一段提醒人們關注并解決這一問題。

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Increasing numbers of college students are cutting classes, which has caused a great deal of social concern and criticism.Some think that the larger part of the blame should go to the

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students.Others, however, think that it is the teachers who should be responsible.But I think both the students and the teachers have fault of their own.Compared with middle school students, college students have relatively more “freedom”.If they are not strict with themselves, chances are that they will oversleep in the morning, go to the Internet or find other activities to entertain themselves during class hours.In addition, some students have the misconception that work experience is more important than theoretical knowledge when it comes to job hunting.So they busy themselves in part time jobs when they should be attending class.On the other hand, some teachers still conduct classes in the old fashioned way.Their classes are so boring that they make many students fall asleep.Besides, some textbooks are so out of date that they think it a waste of time attending classes.In a word, both the students and the teachers should be wide awake to this serious problem and make great efforts to use the time at college to its best advantage.