第一篇：09年12月英語四級真題作文及參考(新東方)

題目：

Create a green campus

1.建設綠色校園十分重要

2.綠色校園不僅指綠色環境

3.為了建設綠色校園我們應該……

范文：

Create a Green Campus

It is of great importance to make and maintain a green campus in our university or college.Obviously, a growing number of people are beginning to realize that it is our duty to do that in the present days, since the concept of “a green world” has become the focus of the society.The idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment.To begin with, the development on the campus is to be sustainable and recyclable.Some of the authorities’ budget should be on how to reduce of the waste.What’s more, we’d better be aware of the seriousness of pollution around us.Thus the idea of environmental protection may become a common occurrence in our daily life.It is necessary that effective actions should be taken to protect our campus from waste and pollution, and hence these activities are to play an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.Certainly, there is little doubt that further consideration must be paid to our green campuses.本次作文還是延續四級一貫成熟的風格，偏重校園生活。當然也結合了時下流行的話題，綠色環保。上面這篇文章盡管有些不妥當之處，但能較好的符合四級考試作文的核心：無論題目怎么變，都是以考察學生的語言為核心，不是考查思維和知識面的。所以只需關注語言的應用就行了。還是可以靈活套用固定的套路，中心句＋邏輯詞的方式，做到不變應萬變。相信大多新東方學員應該能夠習慣的應用新路老方法走的思路。但是，還是這句話，無錯表達才是四級語言表達合格的核心。

第二篇：英語四級作文真題及參考

英語四級作文真題及參考范文

【題目1】

１．許多人喜歡在除夕夜觀看春節晚會

２．但有些人提出取消春節晚會．

３．我的看法．

【參考范文】The approach of the Chinese Lunar New Year poses a national issue concerning the necessity of holding the CCTV Spring Festival Gala.Its established status is being challenged by a growing number of people, especially by younger generations.It is increasingly difficult to cater for all tastes.Some individuals deem that it should be canceled or replaced by other programs.These young people focus their attention on other forms of celebration instead of immersing themselves in TV.Despite that, the majority of mid-aged people and senior citizens uphold the importance of the traditional performance.The most striking feature of this gala is its traditionally close link with ordinary people's lives.Most of people view this gala as an annual staple on the traditional Chinese Spring Festival Eve.They all have a restless night and glue their eyes on the television.I am not supportive of the view that the grand gala should be abandoned.Undoubtedly, it plays a vital role in the celebration of Chinese New Year.To increase its appeal and meet young adults' need, the upcoming performance should invite some big names including super stars from Hongkong and Taiwan.We are all eagerly anticipating this unforgettable evening show.【點評】

本次四級考試作文總體上來說并不是很難。但表現出兩個出人意料：一是體裁，二是題材。

對于體裁來說，本次四級作文屬于正反對比論證類的文體。比較出人意料，又回到了老的考查模式。很多學生把考前死背的作文模板派上了用場。但是這只能得到最基本的分數。雖然模板對于考查學生的語言表達并不益處，但還能測試出考生的語言基本功。從四級考試寫作的測試目的來看，還是注重考查學生對基本語法、基本詞匯運用能力的掌握情況。所以除了模板之外，考生還要在基本表達上狠下功夫，只有在平時多操練，在考場上才游刃有余。除此之外，學生還要在作文中多采用閃光點，這樣就會使作文在基本分數上有所提升，有所突破。

對于題材，本次四級作文的話題是關于人們對于春節晚會的不同看法，屬于社會生活類話題，一反常態，沒有再次考查校園類話題。但是對于當代大學生來說，與大學生有關的社會話題也是需要關注的，這也說明考試方向的變化：校園類話題與社會熱點話題同等重要,這一點對于未來考四級的學生的作文備考的方向有的指導意義。

【題目2】1.校學生會將組織一次暑期志愿者活動，現招募志愿者。2.本次志愿者活動的目的，內容、安排等。3.報名條件及聯系方式。

這是一封公開信或會議通知，格式與信相同。An announcement for a voluntary program

【范文一】 Follow Students:

The hard and hectic(busy and bustling)semester is drawing to close.The Students’ Union is scheduled to organize a clean-up program to the Zhongshan Lake.The purpose of this program is to enhance the environment awareness of general public.We are now recruiting new members of volunteers for the event.The program procedure goes like this: next Saturday morning at 9:00 volunteers of 50 will go to the Zhongshan lake.Around the lake we will put up signs and posters calling people’s attention to the importance of in environment protection and pick up the trash by some tourists.This will certainly attract a lot of people since it is a weekend and the park is particularly popular with tourists.Each day there is an estimated number of 2000 people visiting the place, sight-seeing and picnic-going.This must be both exiting and rewarding.We welcome any students who like to take the time and trouble to do something for environment conservation.Interested students can register yourselves with us now.(or sign up your names at our office.)Our number is 88807777.The Students Union 【范文二】

Follow Students:

The hard and hectic(busy and bustling)semester is drawing to close.Have you got any plan for the summer vacation? Want anything interesting and exciting for a change? This is maybe for you.The Students Union is recruiting new members of volunteers for a clean-up program to the Zhongshan lake.The program is intended to promote the environment awareness of general public.The procedure goes like this: next Saturday morning at 9:00 volunteers of 50 will go to the Zhongshan lake.Around the lake we will put up signs and posters calling people’s attention to the importance of in environment protection and pick up the trash by some tourists.This will certainly attract a lot of people since it is a weekend and the park is particularly popular with tourists.Each day there is an estimated number of 2000 people visiting the place, sight-seeing

and picnic-going.This must be both exiting and rewarding.We welcome any students who like to take the time and trouble to do something for environment conservation.Interested students can register yourselves with us now.(or sign up your names at our office.)Our number is 88807777.The Students Union 【題目3】

1、近十年來某城市越來越多人選擇出去旅游

2、出現這種現象的原因

3、這種現象可能產生的影響

表格：1995

2000

20051萬人

近4萬 12萬以上

【范文一】

From the table, we can see that in the past 10 years, the number of people in a given city who have gone traveling abroad has increased considerably.Especially in the recent 5 years, the figure has been more than tripled, surging from 40,000 to 120,000.There are several reasons for the change.Firstly, with the development of economy, more and more people become better off.And their ability to finance their trip abroad is growing.Secondly, tourism has greatly developed over the decade.Travel agencies offer not only domestic packages but also travel specials abroad.In addition, individuals today are expected and encouraged to go outside to widen their horizon and to face the real world of globalization.In this way they hope to keep themselves informed of what is going on around the world.From the changes reflected in the table, we can predict that the number of individuals going out of the country will boost.This encouragingly and inevitably facilitates the cultural exchange between ours and the rest of the world and this trend will be irreversible.【范文二】Currently, people in growing numbers are seeking to make tours in other countries.As is vividly indicated in the above chart, the numbers of foreign-travelling people in X city has reached to more than 120,000 in the year of

2005, compared with about 12,000 in 1995 and less than 40,000 in 2000.From the chart, we can also predict that this trend is likely to continue in the following years.The reasons for the increasing of traveling abroad are obvious as follows.Firstly, as the development of people’s life style and economy, they are rich enough to afford to go travel abroad.Secondly, the world has become a small village as the information age and internet improve.Thirdly, more and more people are interested in the cultue of other countries, therefore they are eager to visit them in their eyed.As we can see from the chart, this trend mentioned above will bring lots of benefits for us.For one thing, traveling abroad will help connect our world closely and enhance the friendship between countries.For another, tourists can leran great amount of experiences and cultures, which will be unquestionably beneficial for our countries development

【題目4】

Part V.Writing(30 minutes)

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? You should write at Least 120 words following the outline given below :

1．名校校園正成為旅游新熱點

2．校園是否應對游客開放，人們看法不同

3．我認為……

［參考作文］Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?

【范文一】

One can always find visitors taking pictures and enjoying the scenery in university compus.During the May Day Holiday, National Day Holiday, summer and winter vacations, many University campuses become popular tourist sites.In my opinion, university campus should be open to tourists.In fact, there are many royal gardens and parks, all of them obviously better than the scenery in the Universities.Why do you think people prefer visiting here with their children? That is because it is a dream goal for many Chinese parents and young ambitious students.Besides this, as more tourists come to visit universities, these universities can widen their influence as well and they can also make some profit from the tourism.In a word, I think the university compus should be open to the tourists 4

【范文二】

In university compus, especially in some famous ones, such as Peking University and Qinghua University, tourists are always seen looking around everywhere.Although most of them visit with hope and repect, I think university compus should not be open to tourists.First, tourists' visit will disturb the normal teaching.They always get into teaching buildings, libraries and so on.They will make noise and throw rubbish everywhere.Second, some tourists trample grass to take photos, and sculpture on trees to leave words.These will affect the environment of the compus badly.The university is a holy place for study, not for tourism.So It should not be open.【題目5】Part V.Writing(30 minutes)Directions:For this part.you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a company declining a job offer.You should write at Least 150 words following the outline given below:

1.對公司提供職位表示感謝

2.解釋為何不能接受所提供職位的原因

3.希望予以諒解，并表達對公司的良好祝愿.【范文一】Dear Mr.Smith,Thank you very much for giving me so much time for last week's interview.I was very exciting you could provide the position for me as I'm a student who just graduate from college now.But I must say sorry for your believing in me.I could not be able to take this job.Because I have passed the examination to graduate school.As I have mentioned to you at the interview that I have attended the graduation exam half a year ago.At that time, I don't know the results.But now I received the acceptance letter from the school.So I couldn't be able to join in your company.I'm sorry for it.But here, I still want express again my deep gratefulness to your job and warm welcome.I hope and am sure we will have opportunite to cooperate in the future.Sincerely yours, Li Ming

第三篇：英語四級作文真題

2008年大學英語四級作文講座

2008年6月大學英語四級考試真題 一.寫作部分（9：00－9：30）Part Ⅰ Writing(30 minutes)Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write according to the outline given below.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.Recreational activities 1.娛樂活動多種多樣

2.娛樂活動可能使人們受益，也可能有危害性 3.作為大學生我的看法

College students are enjoying various kinds of recreational activities which involve the following ones: hanging out with friends in parties and clubs, watching films, etc.Those activities bring about benefits as well as disadvantages.Participating in such leisure activities, on the one hand, provides them with great benefits.To begin with, it helps to enhance the communication between undergraduates who are often busy themselves in their homework and researches.It invigorates their off-class lives.Moreover, it will lesson their anxiety and pressure and give them fresh feeling, thus enabling them engage in their works by heart and soul.On the other hand, it does harm to them.Firstly, it distracts students from their studies.To some extent, they can’t find a good balance between the entertainment and study.As a university student, I will spare no efforts to strike a balance between recreation and study.Only in this way can we develop ourselves in an all-around way.2008年1月

What Electives to Choose 1.各大學開設了各種各樣的選修課

2.學生因為各種原因選擇了不同的選修課 3.以你自己為例······

We all know that elective course can make a free space for everyone to show their strong points, develop their imaginations, creations and personal styles.Every term our school would offer a range of elective courses which you can choose according to your own areas of interest.I always read all course information and analysis which one is suitable for us study.This semester, I took an course about psychological health as my elective course.Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that people go to have some psychological consultations, including students in school.I always face great pressure from study and life.Being depressed for a long time, I doubt if I am physically healthy.So I choose it as my eclective course of this term.During the course, my mental state improved greatly.First and foremost, I tried to build up a healthy lifestyle.Furthermore, I realized that we need to find different ways to relax ourselves when we face severe competition.Thirdly, we should be sympathetic.Thanks to the electives course.范文2

All the universities offer various electives for students to choose.They may make different choices due to different reasons.But as far as I am concerned, Fashion and Image Design course is worth studying for each individual.First, a good appearance may help us make a better impression in social contacts.The way we are dressed helps us to preserve a sense of our own value and personality.Second, Fashion adds spice to life with its rich color, variety, and beauty.The world will be a dull place to live in if we always wear clothes of the same style and color.And the third, also the most important, being well-dressed is of psychological importance.Because dress properly can enhance our self-confidence in appearance, which will lead to confidence in our success in life.That’s the reason why I choose this course.The confident people are the most charming people, I believe that Fashion and Image Design will give you an unusual life.范文3

Nowadays, there usually exists a wide selection of electives for college students to choose from.However, students have quite different plans for their future so they always end up learning courses based on their own ideas.Some students may choose to learn a certain course in order to obtain an extra certificate for their job hunting after graduation.Because they assume that some more knowledge could ensure more chances of winning in finding a good job.Others may have their choice made just for fun.They tend to hold the idea that college life could be more colorful if they could widen their knowledge through elective courses.As far as I’m concerned, I’m inclined to choose electives based on both the value of the courses and the interest of my own.范文4

Nowadays many college students prefer to have electives in their spare time because the courses can offer a variety of skills and abundant knowledge apart from what they learn in the daily courses.There are many factors that may account for it, and the following are the most conspicuous aspects.To start with, many students want to get another degree besides their own, so that they can have more competence when they seek a job.Furthermore, as for me, I don’t care about degree or job, I just want to obtain some necessary skills to make my college life worthwhile.What I’m concerned most is how to own more skills that may be necessary for my future.Finally, some students want to learn anything that is different from what they are learning now.The science students, for example, want to know about Shakespeare while the art students want to tell how a vehicle works and how to deal with it when it breaks down.So, they can all get what they think is useful to their college life.On the whole, the phenomenon is one of the results of multi-demand of the employment market.There is still a long way for us to improve the elective itself, but as a student myself, I find it rewarding and interesting

2007年6月

Part I Writing(30 minutes)注意：此部分試題在答題卡1上。

Directions:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Welcome to our club.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow:

歡迎辭，歡迎加入俱樂部。

Welcome to our club

1、本社團的主要活動內容

2、參加本社團的好處

3、如何加入本社團

范文1

There is a general discussion today about the issue of clubs in universities.This club is to help graduates get suitable jobs.Obviously, now students in growing numbers are beginning to realize that it is a good way for us to put our leanings into practice.A lot of reasons or benefits are responsible for joining us.To begin with, many students have no ideas of getting a post after graduation, however it may offer you a chance to touch the field of the job-hunting.In addition, it is free of change.What’s more, you may have relationships with these graduates, who are likely to help you in future.In other words, you are to be exposed to opportunities.From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that it is beneficial for you to join this organization.You can email us by love@sina.com with your application.Please act without delay!

范文2 Welcome to Our Club

June 23, 2007

The Speech Club is organizing school-wide speech training and contests to be held on each Saturday at the Students’ Recreational Center.Five prestigious experts and professors will be invited to be speech lecturers and contest judges.For each speech contest, the first six winners will be given awards.Attending our club has substantial advantages.Firstly, it can improve your ability to deliver a speech which is of utmost significance to your future career and development.Secondly, it can help you to possess self-confidence, enrich your extra curricula activities and make your campus life dimensional, colorful and vigorous.To sum up, the experiences in our club will be extraordinarily unforgettable throughout your life.Students who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before Tuesday next week(June 26).Everybody is welcome to attend our club.2007年1月

Spring Festival Gala on TV 1.許多人喜歡在除夕觀看春節聯歡晚會 2.有些人卻提出取消春節聯歡晚會 3.在我看來······

【參考范文】

Spring Festival Gala on CCTV

Since its very advent CCTV’s Spring Festival Gala has made every effort to present grand parties to its gigantic audience with a galaxy of stars and wonderful performances.It has become a custom for millions of Chinese people to sit through the variety show following the traditional family reunion feast.They simply cannot step into the new year without the gala which seems as indispensable to the New Year’s Eve celebration as firecrackers.With the passage of years however a growing number of people begin to view the gala as “ chicken rib” unappealing and worthless when people can feast themselves on other evening entertainment.Some even suggest throwing away the show which fails to give its increasingly demanding and diverse audience a convincing excuse to be rooted in the sofa and stay glued to the TV.To my eye the existence of the gala is still justifiable.For one thing with the variety show characteristic of Chinese tradition aired both home and abroad it provides the Chinese people especially those overseas with a good opportunity to establish their cultural identity on this unique evening.For another the gala a rare occasion of gathering of those performers is undoubtedly a treat for those in the remote or poverty-stricken areas.【參考范文】

The approach of the Chinese Lunar New Year poses a national issue concerning the necessity of holding the CCTV Spring Festival Gala.Its established status is being challenged by a growing number of people, especially by younger generations.It is increasingly difficult to cater for all tastes.Some individuals deem that it should be canceled or replaced by other programs.These young people focus their attention on other forms of celebration instead of immersing themselves in TV.Despite that, the majority of mid-aged people and senior citizens uphold the importance of the traditional performance.The most striking feature of this gala is its traditionally close link with ordinary people's lives.Most of people view this gala as an annual staple on the traditional Chinese Spring Festival Eve.They all have a restless night and glue their eyes on the television.I am not supportive of the view that the grand gala should be abandoned.Undoubtedly, it plays a vital role in the celebration of Chinese New Year.To increase its appeal and meet young adults' need, the upcoming performance should invite some big names including super stars from Hongkong and Taiwan.We are all eagerly anticipating this unforgettable evening show.2006年6月新題型

Our Students Selecting Their Lecturers 1． 有些大學允許學生自由選擇某些課程的任課老師 2． 學生選擇老師時所考慮的主要因素是······ 3． 學生自選任課老師的益處及可能產生的問題

Nowadays many universities entitle students to choose lecturers freely for some courses, which is welcomed by most students, and is becoming the focus of the students and lecturers concern.There are many factors which will influence students’ selecting lecturers.First of all, it is generally accepted that a lecturer’s professional knowledge and ability is the most important factor, since students choose his /her courses to learn knowledge.Moreover, quite a few students think teaching methods and skills are essential to a good lecturer.A lecturer must know how to teach.In addition, a lecturer’s sense of humor is also an important factor many students will consider.Undoubtedly, freely choosing of lecturers is very beneficial to both lecturers and students.On one hand it can provide a good chance for lecturers to prove and show their ability.On the other hand, in this way students can choose lecturers they like and obtain more initiative in learning.However, since it is a free choice, a small number of excellent lecturers will become the focus of most students, which will lead to an unreasonable class size and influence teaching effect seriously.2006年6月英語四級作文

題目：An announcement for a voluntary program

1、校學生會組織依次暑假志愿活動現招聘志愿者

2、本次志愿者活動的目的、內容及安排

3、報名條件和聯系方式

Volunteers Needed

范文A：

Ladies and gentlemen, our Student Union is calling for your due attention for a voluntary program to be launched in this imminent summer vacation and we are looking forward to your keen concern and active participation in earnest.This Program is designed to offer the young kids from a certain poverty-stricken area of Yun Nan Province an opportunity of tree education, which means a two-month stay there.We are convinced it is bound to help us university students to put our learning to full play, to foster a meaningful conception of life of being more caring and tolerant and to assume new tasks and responsibilities after graduation.Dear fellow students, we are beneficiaries of a rare privilege of formal education, meanwhile, there are many people, as innately talented as us, have been deprived of this equal chance, therefore, we hope sophomores and juniors, if interested and willing to help, in this university to contact us at www.tmdps.cn or by 021-12345678.2005年12月24日英語四級作文及范文

Part V.Writing(30 minutes)

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? You should write at Least 120 words following the outline given below :

1．名校校園正成為旅游新熱點

2．校園是否應對游客開放，人們看法不同 3．我認為……

［參考作文］Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?

［參看范文一］

One can always find visitors taking pictures and enjoying the scenery in university compus.During the May Day Holiday, National Day Holiday, summer and winter vacations, many University campuses become popular tourist sites.In my opinion, university campus should be open to tourists.In fact, there are many royal gardens and parks, all of them obviously better than the scenery in the Universities.Why do you think people prefer visiting here with their children? That is because it is a dream goal for many Chinese parents and young ambitious students.Besides this, as more tourists come to visit universities, these universities can widen their influence as well and they can also make some profit from the tourism.In a word, I think the university compus should be open to the tourists

［參看范文二］

In university campus, especially in some famous ones, such as Peking University and Qinghua University, tourists are always seen looking around everywhere.Although most of them visit with hope and respect, I think university campus should not be open to tourists.First, tourists' visit will disturb the normal teaching.They always get into teaching buildings, libraries and so on.They will make noise and throw rubbish everywhere.Second, some tourists trample grass to take photos, and sculpture on trees to leave words.These will affect the environment of the campus badly.The university is a holy place for study, not for tourism.So It should not be open.2005年6月18日英語四級作文及范文

Teacher’s Day ：

1.向老師致以節日的問候。

2.回憶件老師的教誨中難忘的事情。3.我如何報答老師。

［參考范文之一］

This is Teachers’ Day and a time to be grateful to all teachers.This profession deserves the special recognition and respect.There is no more appropriate time than this to honor you and others in your chosen field.You have my eternal gratefulness.Have a happy Teachers’ Day.The whole secret of the teacher’s force lies in the conviction that men are convertible.Teacher, who educate children, deserve more honor than parents, who merely gave them birth;for the latter provided more life, while the former ensure a good life.What sculpture is to a block of marble, education is to the soul.My heartfelt thanks to you, dear teacher.On the voyage of life, you have kindled the light of hope for me.What you have done enriches my mind and broadens my view.On this day I honour you sincerely.No one deserves a bigger thank you than you.One day is hardly enough to show our gratitude.［參考范文之二］

National Teacher Day is always the Tuesday of the first full week of May.And it is always for our students to give our special thanks to our lovely teacher.I still remember last year when I was feeling lost, down and out, I had no idea about my life,my love, my study even doubt why I was here in the world.So then came so much wine and smoke, I was tired, physical and mental.I even wanted to end my life just jumping from the top of our building.Then my teacher came to me, she said she knew what I was afraid of, she also told me that’s very common like many young people of my age.She told me to call her anytime I need her help.I did so ,we often chat ems and made some phone call.I just can’t remember when come the mirical.I have found myself now!

Another teacher’s day,to all the teachers,to our parents.［參考范文之三］

The Once per year ’s Teacher’s Day will come soon.At first, I will extend the greeting of festival to my teacher.Last week, I suddenly had a stomachache terribly in the school.My teacher was very worried, sent me to the hospital in a hurry.After checking , doctor verified that I have got the acute enteritis.My teacher came with me all the night in the hospital, so kind as to look after me.My teacher fed me food and medicine on time.After struggling with the serious illness in one days and one nights, I left hospital.Then my teacher helps me to make up a missed lesson of English in a few days in succession.I express gratitude to my teacher, I can’t recover so fast without my teacher.Because of my teacher I can participate today’s CETD.I want to repay my teacher.No present can express my grateful feeling to my teacher.And the best repayment is that I can pass the CETD this time.2004年6月四級作文題及范文

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction.You should write at least 120 words according to the following guidelines:

Your role: a tour guide

Your audience: a group of foreign tourists Your introduction should include: some welcoming words the schedule for the day

a description of the place the tourists will be visiting

(e.g.a scenic spot or a historical site, etc.)You should make the introduction interesting and the arrangements for the day clear to everybody.范文：

Good morning, ladies and gentleman, welcome to Beijing.To begin with, I would like to introduce myself: I am the tourist guide from China Travel Service and it’s great honor to stay here with all of you for a whole day.Just as the old saying goes, “It is always a pleasure to greet a friend from afar”，I wish all of you to enjoy yourselves during this trip.The following is schedule of the day.The first spot we are going to visit is the Great Wall, the grandest fortification in ancient China.The next sight to look around is the Ming Tombs, which is one of the best-preserved tombs for 13 emperors in Ming Dynasty more than one thousand years ago.In the afternoon, we will go for the Summer Palace, the royal park for Chinese ancient emperors.Currently we are on the way to the Great Wall.Dating back to the seven century B.C., the Great Wall is constructed by respective states for fortifying against invasion of neighboring states.By the reasons of long history and its length, it becomes one of the eight wonders in the world and represents the highest wisdom and crafts.From the top of the Great Wall, we can enjoy a magnificent view of continuous mountains, green trees and blooming wild flowers.It is no doubt that one says, “He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man”。

Above is my introduction to the Great Wall.If any of you have questions, please feel free to ask me at any time.

第四篇：英語四級作文真題

Part Ⅰ Writing

審題謀篇

本次四級作文主題為“綠色校園”，這是一個看似簡單普通的話題，寫起來卻不是那么容易。因為很多考生對于“綠色校園”所表達的內涵感覺比較生僻。假如對“綠色校園”這一主題感到難以把握，考生可以從作文提綱入手進行分析以獲取對“綠色校園”這一概念的相關信息。根據作文提示2，可以看出此處的“綠色校園”指的決不僅僅是青青的草地和高大的樹木構成的校園綠色風景，也不僅僅指對校園環境的珍視和愛護，而是指一種環境保護的文化氛圍和師生具有的環境素養，以及由此帶來的和諧的人文環境和社會績效。在深入理解概念的基礎上，考生還應對 “綠色校園”的重要性進行剖析，這時，考生可以從多個角度組織素材，比如從校園的環境問題出發，進而擴展到師生的環境意識對“綠色校園”所產生的長遠意義以及為未來環境改善所做的貢獻。最后是闡述建設“綠色校園”所要采取的措施。需要注意的就是作文給分的重點在于考生如何用恰當的語言詞匯表達自己的思想觀點。而不是寫得越多，得分就越高。一般分成三個自然段，大概十句話，基本的分布為首段、末段合起來五句或六句，中間段五句或四句，做到結構清楚，重點突出，就可以了。參考范文

Creating a Green Campus

Recently, with the idea of making and maintaining “a green earth” being the focus of the society, “green campus” has become a more and more popular concept in universities or colleges, which, undoubtedly, will bring us an ever-lasting benefit to both our campus and our society.The concept of “green campus” does not only mean a green environment but also refers to an environmental sense in people’s mind.Campus plays a crucial role in educating the young generation and the consciousness of “green campus” will definitely produce a profound effect on students’ various environmental protection activities after their graduation.What’s more, the young generation is under the burden of severe environmental pollution and there are many problems waiting for them to solve.To make “green campus” come true, firstly, it is necessary to work out effective principles for the development of sustainable and recyclable campus.Secondly, it calls for people’s awareness of the serious pollution around us and actual action to reduce the waste.Last but not least, it is necessary to strengthen the ties between campus and society, so as to ensure that “green campus” can work smoothly with the co-effort of the whole society.建設綠色校園

近來，隨著建設并保持“綠色地球”的觀念成為社會關注的焦點，“綠色校園”也成為校園里流行的話題。這無疑會給我們的校園和社會帶來長遠的利益。

“綠色校園”不僅僅指綠色的環境，還包括人們頭腦中的環境意識。學校在培養年輕一代上起著關鍵作用，“綠色校園”的意識必定會對學生畢業后的環境保護意識產生長遠影響。更為重要的是，年輕一代面臨著嚴重的環境污染，有太多問題等待他們去解決。

為使“綠色校園”成為現實，首先應該制定出可持續發展、可長遠發展的有效政策。其次，還需要人們對環境污染的嚴肅性有正確認識并采取實際行動切實減少污染。最后但同樣重要的是，有必要加強學校和社會的聯系以便在全社會共同努力下使“綠色校園”順利實施。范文點評

范文以“綠色校園”開篇，保證了文章切題。第一段開門見山，強調當今環保理念下構建“綠色校園”的長遠意義。第二段，著重討論“綠色校園”的含義，指出“綠色校園”不僅指校園中的綠化，還指生活在校園中的人們的綠色和環保意識，把校園這個小環境和社會這個大環境結合起來，說理更加深刻。第三段是談及具體的做法，分一、二、三點進行論述，無疑是使“綠色校園”的理念落在實處。結構完整，首尾呼應，用詞準確。關系詞的正確使用讓句與句之間、段與段之間銜接緊湊，思想表達成熟有深度。

【生動的用詞】 maintain保持;concept概念;profound長遠的;sustainable可持續的;recyclable可循環的。

【豐富的短語】bring benefit to帶來利益;play a crucial role in發揮關鍵作用;under the burden of在??重負下;come true實現;call for要求。

【多變的句式】

范文中長句、短句、簡單句、復雜句交叉使用。不同句型之間的轉換，能讓閱卷老師更好地了解考生對句子結構的掌握運用，從而獲得高分。

避錯指導

本次作文在題材上，雖然仍然延續了我們所熟悉校園類話題，但與社會背景有很大關系。剛剛閉幕的哥本哈根世界氣候大會使環保減排這個主題成為焦點，在全世界都提倡可持續發展、和諧發展這一背景下的“綠色校園”，同時也是一個社會熱點話題，這是我們審題時所必須考慮的。另外開篇時，切忌拖泥帶水，應直截了當，使閱卷老師對文章主題一目了然。除正確審題之外，考生還應注意語言的準確運用，不落俗套。不同句型之間轉換時，考生應對句子結構全面掌握，避免句式錯誤造成扣分。

最后，應盡量避免單詞拼寫錯誤。本次作文常見的卷面拼寫錯誤如下表：

正確拼寫 詞性及詞義 錯誤的拼寫

focus n.焦點 focuse

effect n.影響 effection /affect

environment n.環境 envirment/invironment

burden n.負擔 burdon solve v.解決 slove serious a.嚴肅的 serous true a.真的 ture

society n.社會 soceity

theory n.理論 thery

總之，考生在構思和寫作過程中要盡可能做到思路完整，恰如其分地選擇詞匯。畢竟，無錯表達才是四級語言表達合格的核心。

能力拓展

【同義詞轉換】

作文表達除了準確，還要做到句式多變，詞匯靈活多樣。

1.realize → be aware of 意識到

We’d better be aware of the seriousness of pollution around us.我們最好意識到周圍污染的嚴峻性。

2.keep → preserve 保持

It is necessary to educate the students to be conscious of the importance to preserve the environment.有必要教育學生意識到保護環境的重要性。

3.lead → conduct 引導

This will help conduct the activities of the college students.這有助于引導大學生的行為。

【話題備考錦囊】

6.The idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment.“綠色校園”絕不僅僅是一個綠色環境。

7.The construction of “a green campus” will greatly stimulate students to take part in

various environmental protection activities.建設“綠色校園”將會極大激勵學生參與環境保護。

8.To bring “a green campus” to its full play, effective measures should be taken.為全面實施“綠色校園”，必須采取有效措施。

9.Campus construction is of vital importance not only to the physical development of students but to their mental health as well.校園建設不僅對學生的身體發展很重要，而且對他們的心理健康也很重要。

10.There is little doubt that further consideration must be paid to our green campus.毫無疑問，對于綠色校園應該給與更多的思考。

【話題詞匯拓展】

devastation n.毀壞disastrous a.損失慘重的doom v.厄運，毀滅existence n.存在，生活

healthful a.健康的messy a.骯臟的，凌亂的participation n.分享，參與preserve v.保存，保護

preventive a.預防性的purify v.澄清，凈化

stimulation n.激勵，鼓舞arouse consciousness 喚起意識

命題風向標

本次作文難度適中，與之前考試中出現的“限塑”主題有千絲萬縷的聯系。考生要想在本次作文中獲取高分，除了審題恰當獨到，還要有扎實的語言基礎。如本文主題“綠色校園”可以采用多種表達：green campus和environmental-friendly campus;“綠色校園的構建”可以使用create，build up，establish和construct等，以體現考生對詞匯多樣性的積累。

從關注白色污染到關注博物館免費開放，再到綠色校園構建，四級作文命題重點在側重校園類話題的同時開始向與大學生生活有關的話題轉移。由此也凸顯了對歷年真題分析的重要意義。更多地立足真題，總結規律，切實提高自己語言能力，始終是四級作文備考的根本。

第五篇：2011新東方英語四級作文(免費下載)

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模板一 How to Deal with Stress-如何面對壓力

How to Deal with Stress(如何面對壓力)1．為什么會有壓力? 2．如何面對壓力? [寫作導航]第一段先用定義法指出壓力是什么，以及壓力的危害；第二段寫壓力的各種來源；第三段寫如何面對壓力，可針對第二段的來源，舉例說明各種解決辦法；最后一段提醒人們面對壓力方法要對頭，不可走歪路。

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Stress is a state of being upset that happens when we are under pressure.Both our feelings and our bodies get upset.We can even get emotionally and physically sick if we have too much stress for too long.Stress can come at us from every direction.For instance, it can come from fights with other people.It can come when we have too many things to do and too little time to do them.It can also come when we do not have enough money to pay for what we want.Since stress can make us sick, we have to learn how to deal with it.There are good ways and bad ways to do so.We should deal with stress in good ways, of course.Good ways to cut down on stress include changing our lifestyles.For example, we can learn either to get along with people or to stay away from them.We can decide what to do now, what to do later, and what to leave off doing forever.We can also figure out how to get money or we can cut down on what we want.We should not deal with stress in bad ways because bad ways to cut down on stress just lead to more troubles, for example, skipping out and leaving our work undone, blaming our problems on someone else, stealing or cheating.模板二 My View On Private Tutoring-家教之我見

My View On Private Tutoring(家教之我見)1．家教與日俱增； 2．家教的優缺點； 3．我的看法。

[寫作導航]第一段可先圍繞提綱開始，然后引出家教也有優缺點；第二段主要圍繞優點來寫，可從對家長、對從事家教的大學生以及對孩子本人等幾方面來談；第三段談缺點，可從孩子的娛樂、從事家教的大學生的學習等方面來談；第四段談我的看法，弊大于利。[范文]

Nowadays, an increasing numbers of parents ask college students to act as private tutors to their kids.Like everything else, private tutoring also has advantages and disadvantages.Generally speaking, the advantages can be listed as follows.First, private tutoring is helpful to the parents.Many parents are so busy with their work that they have no time to help their children with their lessons.Besides, private tutoring is good for the tutors themselves.They can make some money while providing a service for others.Most important of all, private tutoring is beneficial for kids.Since the parents can't help when the kids have problems, private tutoring seems to be a wise choice.However, private tutoring also has disadvantages.To begin with, it takes so much of the kid's time that they can hardly find time for rest and amusement, which is harmful to their health.To

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make matters worse, some tutors have too many kids to teach so that they neglect their studies at school.Worst of ail, some tutors only offer tips for test taking rather than teaching kids what is really needed.According to the above analysis, it is clear that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.Therefore, it is proposed that great emphasis be laid on the stimulation of the kid' s learning and the cultivation of their potential Moreover, kids should be given more time to play so that a new and healthy generation will emerge.模板三 English Teaching at College-大學英語教學

English Teaching at College(大學英語教學)1．有人認為大學英浯教學非常成功。2．有人認為大學英語教學是個失敗。3．我的看法或建議。

[寫作導航]開始先分述兩種看法，認為大學英語教學成功的人以大學英語考試人數一直猛增及英語能力強的人在各行各業所做的貢獻為依據支持自己的觀點；認為大學英語教學失敗的人則以大學生口語差、翻譯和寫作水平低為依據支持自己的看法；而“我”認為大學英語教學有進步，但仍存在問題，如教師一言堂，應試教育等；“我”建議大學英語教學應徹底改革，大力培養學生的各項語言技能。[范文]

Some people say that English teaching at college in China has proved to be successful Take College English Test as an example, more than four million students have taken it and the number is still increasing year by year.This means that increasing numbers of people are aware of the necessity and importance of English learning.What is more, large numbers of students who are competent in English are making their contributions to the county in all walks of life.Others, on the other hand, suggest that English teaching at college in China is a complete failure.They suggest that, on the whole, most graduates still can't communicate with native speakers properly in spoken English.Besides, they are incompetent in both translation and writing.I think great progress has been made in English teaching at college in China over the past 15 years.Yet, there are still some problems.On the one hand, English teaching at college in China is still teacher centered, although the student centered approach has been advocated for years.The teacher dominates the class, leaving students little time to practice.On the other hand, English teaching at college in China is still test oriented.Passing College English Test has been regarded as a prerequisite for graduates to get jobs on the job market.So great emphasis is given on how to pass the tests rather than on how to develop the students' language skills.As a result, students do not have the language competence though most of them have passed College English Test.Therefore, it is my strong feeling therefore that English teaching at colleges in China should go through some radical reform.Priority should be given to the development of the four language skills rather than to develop the skills in passing the examination.模板四 How to Use Our Brain-用腦之道

How to Use Our Brain(用腦之道)1．人腦的重要性及作用。

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2．如何科學用腦。

[寫作導航]先寫大腦的特性和作用(復雜、智能的器官，使人區別于動物等)；再寫大腦越用越靈，但過度使用也會出問題，為第三段作鋪墊；第三段從兩方面說明如何合理用腦：一是勞逸結合，手腦交替；二是從科學的角度，利用數據，說明過度用腦可能給大腦帶來的傷害。

[范文]

Human brain is the most complex and intelligent mechanism in the world.It is the major factor that distinguishes man from animals.With our brain we get to know the world and make a good use of the world to our benefit.Our brain is a product of constant use through millions of years.Other things can be used up, but used properly, our brain can never be exhausted.In fact, the more we use it, the more capable and efficient it will become.Excessive use of the brain, however, will causea lot of problems.So it is useful to know how to use our brain wisely.First, handwork or physical labor is good exercise as well as rest for our brain.Doing handwork and brain work alternatively can help develop both our brain and hands.Secondly, we should avoid doing brainwork for long hours on end.The brain, though 3% of the body weight, when at work, consumes 20% of the oxygen carried by 16% of the blood in circulation.A long period of brainwork may cause, through lack of bodily activity, slow blood circulation and inadequate oxygen supply to the brain, resulting in inefficiency and possible damage to the brain.模板五 Student Use of Computers

Student Use of Computers Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Student Use of Computers.You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the chart and the outline given below:

上圖所示為1990年，1995年，2000年某校大學生使用計算機的情況，請描述其變化。

1．請說明發生這些過程的原因(可從計算機的用途，價格或社會發展等方面加以說明)； 2．你認為目前大學生在計算機使用中有什么困難或問題? Student Use of Computers

This chart shows the increase of student use of computers from the year 1990 to 2000.As we can see, in 1990 the average number of hours a student spends on the computer per week is 2.In 1995, however, the number doubles and in 2000, it soars to 20 hours per week.There are many causes for this change.For one thing, computers can do a lor of things

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that may be difficult for man to do, making man's work easier.So, many people turn to computers for help when they want to have their job done.For another, computers are becoming cheaper day by day.As a result, many universities install them in large numbers and many families can afford to buy one, consequently, they are always available for the students to use.But the prime reason, I think, is that with the development of society, computers are used in ahnost all walks of life.Those who are specialized in operating computers are badly needed.If a student is good at computer, chances will be greater for him to get a job.Many problems also arise in students use of computers.One problem is that some students spend too much time sitting in front of their computers, as a result, their bealth is affected.The other problem is that some students chat or play video games for a long time on computers, wasting a lot of their precious time.So it is suggested that these students make a scientific and positive use of the computers.模板六 Ownership of Houses in a Big City Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Ownership of Houses in a Big City in China.You must base your composition on the following instructions(given in Chinese):

1．根據上圖描述該市住房產權的變化； 2．分析產生這些變化的原因；

3．說明這些變化對個人和社會產生的影響。

Your composition should be no less than 120 words.Remember to write it neatly.Ownership of Houses in a Big City in China

Great changes have taken place in the ownership of houses in cities in China from 1990 to 2000.While the number of state owned houses decreased, that of private houses increased.In 1990, seventyfive percent of the houses were state owned whereas only twenty five percent of the houses were private.In 2000, however, the proportion of state owned houses reduced to twenty percent and that of private houses increased to eighty percent.There are many reasons for the great change in the ownership of houses in cities.The development of the economy is the most important one.Thanks to this development, people make more money than they used to.As a result, they can set aside some money to buy houses after their daily necessities are satisfied.The measures the government adopts may be the next incentive.Nowadays, people can have access to various kinds of loans from banks when buying the house.The large supply of housing may be the last reason.Wherever you go, you can see houses of various designs and sizes available for people to choose.These changes will have a great influence on both the living standard of the individual and the productivity of the society.People can live in the spacious houses of their own and the

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government can increase the productivity by using the money from selling the houses.The Problem of Human Population時間:2009-05-07 14:00作者: 點擊:1051次

模板七 The Problem of Human Population

1．據統計一千年前地球上有不到4億人口。2．人口暴漲的原因。3．因此……

It has been estimated that a thousand years ago there were less than 400 million people on earth.However, in the recent thousand years human population has increased nearly 20 times.Nowadays the world population has reached more than 7000 million.The population.First, a lot of people can't get employment, which is a universal problem in the world.Second, in developing countries there are not enough shelters for too many people and so some people are not properly housed and even are exposed to the elements.Third, in underdeveloped countries a lot of people suffer from hunger because of food shortage, which in turn causes many other problems, malnutrition, disease, etc.Fourth, there are not enough schools for so many people and so a lot of people are illiterate.Therefore, to eliminate these problems, human beings should take effective measures to control population.模板八 How to Reduce Stress-如何減少壓力

How to Reduce Stress(如何減少壓力)1．現代社會人們的壓力與日俱增； 2．壓力太大的危害； 3．減少壓力的辦法。

[寫作導航]首先陳述隨著現代生活節奏的加快，人們的壓力也在增大，雖然適當的壓力對人有好處，但壓力太大就會產生副作用，從而影響工作、學習和健康，所以要學會減輕壓力；第二段闡述減輕壓力的辦法，比如降低對自己的要求、接受現實、不要攀比，多與朋友

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溝通等；最后總結全文，提出希望。

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As the pace of modern life continues to quicken, many people are in the habit of rushing through life.Some admit that stress seems to be on the increase all the time.A certain degree of stress is beneficial to us, but too much stress is certainly harmful, and sometinles may even harmful to our health and physique.So it is necessary to know how to reduce stress.There are many ways that can help us solve this problem, but the following may be the most effective.First, learn to COllie to terms with yourselves.Don't set a goal that is too high because there are many things in this world that are beyond your reach.Learn to be content to go as far as you can.Second, learn to COllie to terms with the world around you.Don't try to change other people or other things.There are people and things in this world that you can do nothing about.So learn to accept them.Third, don't be too interested in material things and don't try to “keep up with the Joneses.” Don't harbor any jealousy, vanity or resentment to others.Be satisfied with what you have.Finally, keep in touch with your friends.Talk with them, share with them your happiness and misery.This will help to make you feel better.These are not necessarily the only ways to solve the problem, and it is my hope that everyone can reduce the too much stress in his work and study and live a relaxed happy life.模板九My View on Job-hopping

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic My View on dob-hopping.You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below: 1．有些人喜歡始終從事一種工作，因為…… 2．有些人喜歡經常更換工作，因為…… 3．我的看法。

My View on Job-hopping

People have different attitudes towards their work.Some prefer to stick to one occupation as their lifelong career.These people are of the opinion that one can never do his work well unless he is devoted to only one job in his lifetime.So if one changes his job frequently, he will not get the necessary experience needed in his work.Others, on the other hand, like to change their jobs at times.In their opinion, people work in order to make more money.If they havea chance to get a better paid job, they will certainly try to get this chance.Besides, if a person does only one job all his life, he will certainly be bored with it.My idea is that interest is the most important if one wants to excel others in his job.So if a person is not interested in his job, job hopping is normal and even necessary.Otherwise, he will suffer from his work, and inevitably, he is not likely to succeed in his career.模板十 How to Read Better and Faster

How to Read Better and Faster(如何讀得好又快)1．閱讀的重要性；

2．如何克服不良閱讀習慣；

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3．如何讀的又快又好；

[寫作導航]第一段舉例說明閱讀的重要，并引出如何才能讀得好又快；第二段詳細列舉各種閱讀的不良習慣，如出聲讀、搖頭晃腦讀、用手指著讀等；第三段是如何成為讀得好又快的讀者的具體建議，如地方要安靜、精力要集中、靠上下文猜詞義等；最后簡練結尾。

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Reading is not only relaxation.To keep up with their work, many people must read letters, reports, publications, office documents, a never ending flood of words.In an examination, the ability to read and to comprehend quickly can mean the difference between success and failure.But the fact is that most of us are poor readers.Fortunately, almost anyone can learn to read faster and with greater comprehension.Here are some suggestions on how to deal with some bad reading habits.If you mouth each word as you read, this slows down you toa snail's speed.The best way to correct this problem is to place a finger on your lips and hold them firmly shut till you've broken the habit.If your head swings as your eyes move along a line, lock your head between your hands as you read.If you point to each word with your finger, grip the reading material firmly with both hands or sit on your hands while you read.Here are more suggestions to train you to read better and faster: Read in aquiet spot, as free from distraction as possible.But don't daydream;force yourself to concentrate on what you are reading.If you come across unfamiliar words, try to guess the meaning from the context, then check the meaning in a dictionary later.Don't reread.Pretend the words disappear as your eyes pass over them.You'll probably be surprised to find that you didn't miss anything important.Try to glance only at nouns and verbs in sentences to see how much you can get out of reading this way.The secret of success is constant practice.What you get will be worth the effort 模板十一

Is It Harder for an Adult to&n Is It Harder for an Adult to Learn New Languages?(成人更難學外語嗎?)1．成人學習一種新的語言是否比兒童困難? 2．闡述原因。[寫作導航]第一段從人們的普遍看法入手，即年齡越大，學外語越難，然后提出質疑：這是真的嗎?否定之后指出，這并不一定，通常隨著年齡增加，學語言的能力也增強；第二段陳述原因，一是因為成人社會閱歷豐富，二是因為成人邏輯思維能力強，三是因為成人自控能力超過兒童；最后一段以鼓勵成人學好外語結尾。[范文]

Most people think that the older you get, the harder it is to learn a new language.This is because they believe that children learn languages more easily and efficiently than adults.Thus, at some point in our lives, maybe around ages 12 or 13, we lose the ability to learn languages well.Is it true that children learn a foreign language more efficiently than adults? It may not necessarily be the case.In fact, the ability to learn language increases as the age increases, from childhood to adulthood.There are several possible explanations for these findings.For one thing, adults know more about the world and, therefore, are able to understand things more easily than children.Moreover, adults can use logical thinking to help them see patterns in the language.Finally, adults have more self discipline than children.All in all, the common conception that children are better language learners than adults may

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not necessarily be true.Hopefully, this would encourage adult learners to become successful language learners, no matter what new languages they want to learn.模板十二

Why My Spoken Enslish is Poor?

Why My Spoken Enslish is Poor?(口語不佳探因)1．英浯口語很重要；

2．我的英語口語差的主要原因； 3．我的對策。

[寫作導航]本文應首先闡述英語，語的重要性，緊接著舉例支持，說明英語口語在現代社會中的重要；第二段結合“我”自己，列出英語口語不好的幾個主要原因；第三段指出，只要有決心，措施跟上，英語口語就一定會好起來。文章用漢語格言“世上無難事，只要有心人。”或英語格言“Where there is a will，there is a way．”收尾，會很有說服力。

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When we study English, we learn to listen, speak, read and write.Of these abilities, speaking is the most important.As we all know, the fundamental means of commUnication is speaking.Onlyby speaking to each other directly can two people exchange their ideas freely and efficiently.This is especially true in modern times when we live in a “global village”, where joint ventures and overseas tourism become commonplace.Many employers in joint ventures speak English, so do most of the tourists.Many difficulties will arise if we can't express ourselves fluently in English.In spite of my awareness of its importance, I seldom find chances to practice and improve my oral English.So, I am still very weak with regard to this respect.one reason is that my pronunciation and intonation aren't good enough.The other is that I am so shy that I am always too nervous to find the exact words to express my ideas and feelings.As a result the best way for me to do is to remain silent when others are practicing and making great progress in their oral English everyday.Now I am attaching much more importance to oral English and I have made up my mind to seize every opportunity to practice.I begin to participate actively in all kinds of English activities, such as going to “English Corners”, talking in English with my classmates and with native speakers.“Nothing is difficult in the world if you really put your heart to it.” as the Chinese saying goes.If I can build up my confidence, if I am not afraid of losing face any more, if I really work hard on it, I am sure my oral English will be excellent someday.模板十三 Advantages and Disadvantages of Cell&nbs Advantages and Disadvantages of Cell Phones(手機的利弊)1．手機使用的普遍性； 2．手機的優點；

3．手機的危害及我的建議。

[寫作導航]先指出當前手機使用很普遍，然后用事實(隨處可見人們用手機通話，許多大學生、高中生都有手機)來支持主題句；手機的優點主要是方便通信，甚至上網，還體現在突發事件(疾病、交通事故)的求助上；手機的缺點主要是輻射和干擾他人，因此我建議盡量少用，重要場合(開會、上課時)關機。

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Cell phones have become increasingly popular in China these days.Wherever you go you can see people using cell phones.Many college students, even high school students, have cell phones.Cell phones have brought people a lot of benefits, but the most important is that they are convenient.With cell phones in their hands, they can keep in touch with anybody they want.If they want to get some information from the Internet, they can easily have their dream realized via cell phones too.Furthermore, if someone has a heart attack or a traffic accident, a call to emergency hospital or to the police can quickly bring him the help he wants.However, cell phones can also bring people problems.The most serious is the electric wave radiation which is thought to be harmful to users' brains.Another problem is that when people are having a meeting or having a class or at a concert etc, the ring of the cell phone may interrupt others.So I think people should use cellphones as little as possible and turn them off when they are attending important meetings or attending classes.模板十四

Why Living Off Campus Is Popular?

Why Living Off Campus Is Popular?(校外租房何以流行?)1．學生校外租房住宿較普遍； 2．校外租房住宿的原因； 3．我的看法。

[寫作導航]第一段從學生租房現象普遍過渡到探究其原因，結尾句引出下段；第二段首先指出校外租房住宿的好處，首先，住在校外可省去與他人相處的煩瑣，可集中精力學習；其次，住在校外可有更多自由，如熬夜、不受限制地上網等；最后，住在校外可有更多的隱私權；結尾段談“我”的看法，即事物都是一分為二的，住在校外會失去體驗校園豐富生活的機會，還會錯過學會與他人相處的機會等。

[范文]Nowadays living off campus enjoys great popularity among college students.Why, then, do students do so when they are provided with very modern apartments and good services on campus? The reasons can be listed as follows.First, living off-campus can relieve the student from time consuming and energy consuming trivialities.Since people from different places have different personalities, habits, and interests, etc, some students think that it is difficult for them to get along with their pals.If they live off-campus, they don't have to spend time worrying about and thinking of how to get along with their roommates.In this way, they will have more time for their studies.Secondly, living off-campus can offer them a lot of freedom.Freed from the regulations of the university, they can do whatever they want in whatever time they like.For example, they can stay up late, reading books or surfing on the Internet.Lastly, living off campus can give them more privacy.If they live in a dormitory, they have no “human rights” so far as privacy is concerned.I think living off-campus has both its benefits and shortcomings.If we live off campus we will not have the chance to experience the rich and colorful social life on campus.Away from our classmates, we will not have the chance to learn how to communicate with those who have divergent opinions.We will lose the chance to learn to cooperate with others.模板十五

HOW to Succeed in a dob Interv

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HOW to Succeed in a dob Interview(面試成功之術)1．求職面試非常普遍； 2．如何在面試中取得成功。

[寫作導航]第一段可寫成引入段，指出面試很普遍，但仍有些人不知如何成功面試，自然轉入第二段；第二段可從衣著、言談、自信等方面著手，也應包括自己對專業知識、工作經歷和興趣的介紹；最后一段是結尾段，可總結全篇收尾。

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When applying for a job, many people, school graduates in particular, have to have an interview with the employer before they are offered the job.Many graduates, however, do not know how to succeed in such an interview.The following are some of the rules to abide by.To succeed in an interview, the applicant should demonstrate certain personal and professional qualities.Since much of the first and lasting impression of a person is the clothes he wears, the applicant should take care to appear well but modestly dressed, avoiding the extremes of too elaborate or too casual clothes.Besides, he should pay close attention to his manner of speaking, which should be neither showy nor familiar but rather straightforward, granmatically accurate, and friendly.In addition, he should be prepared to talk knowledgeably about the requirements of the position for which he is applying in relation to his own professional experience and interests.And finally, a really impressive applicant must convey a sense of serf confidence and enthusiasm for work, a factor that att interviewer value highly.The applicant who displays these characteristics, with just a little luck, witt certainly succeed in the typical personal interview.If you can bear these rules in mind, chances are that you will succeed in a job interview The Importance of Physical Exercises-體時間:2009-05-07 14:01作者: 點擊:1231次

模板十六 The Importance of Physical Exercises(體育鍛煉的重要性)漢語提示：據報道，我國年輕人，特別是大學生的健康狀況不容樂觀。請寫一篇150字左右的文章，說明體育鍛煉的重要性。

[寫作導航]先從所給提示“我國年輕人，特別是大學生的健康狀況不容樂觀”入手，引入主題：造成這一結果的原因是忽視體育鍛煉；第；段詳細列舉體育鍛煉的重要性，如加速血液循環、增進新陳代謝、消耗多余脂肪、促進睡眠等；最后一段總結體育鍛煉的好處，呼吁人們積極參加鍛煉。

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It is reported that the health of young people in China, college students in particular, is not as good as is supposed to be.There are many reasons for this fact, but the main reason is that many people ignore the importance of physical exercises.Why, then, are physical exercises so important to our health? First, physical exercises can improve blood circulation, speeding up the supply of nutrients and oxygen to every part of the body and the removal of waste from the blood through sweating and exhalation.Secondly, physical exercises can promote a healthy metabolism.It helps with the digestion and absorption of food, thus giving everyone a good appetite.Thirdly, physical exercise can help consume excessive fat in the body, preventing people from putting on too much weight, thus keeping them in good shape.Finally, after physical exercises we usually need a good rest and a sound sleep at night, refreshing us for the next day's work.In conclusion, physical exercises not on[y keep us fit and strong, but also help us to be

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successful in our lives.It is, therefore, strongly suggested that young people spare some time to take an active part in various kinds of physical exercises.模板十七

Harmfulness of Video Games-電子游戲危害談

Harmfulness of Video Games(電子游戲危害談)1．許多年輕人沉溺于電子游戲中。2．電子游戲的危害。3．解決的辦法。

[寫作導航]第一段可陳述許多年輕人陷入電子游戲不能自拔的現象；第二段羅列電子游戲的危害，如對身體的危害、對學習和工作的影響，以及不良電子游戲對年輕人道德會產生不良影響等；第三段可從充分認識電子游戲的危害、取締非法網吧和鼓勵開發健康游戲等方面提出解決問題的辦法。

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In spite of objections from public opinion, many students can't draw themselves away from video games.It seems that the more they are prohibited from playing the games, the more they are tempted to do so.Many students indulge themselves in playing these games.Video games are harmful to both the individual and society in many ways.First, they endanger the young people's health.Sitting in front of the computer for hours on end is bad for the player's eyesight as well as his entire physique.Secondly, they distract the young people%attention from their work and study.Absorbed in the games, the player often forgets to go to work or class.Sometimes even if they are at work or in class, they are still thinking of the games they played or are going to play after work or after class.As a result, they quickly fall behind others in their work and study.Thirdly, they lead young people to moral degradation.Some young people are especially interested in games that are filled with violence.If they play these games a long time, they may also settle disagreements through violence, which may give rise to higher crime rate.Therefore, it is time we took effective measures to solve this problem.On the one hand, young people should be made fully aware of the danger of video games.On the other, illegal video game houses should be eliminated, and software producers should be encouraged to make more beneficial video games in the future.模板十八

Why More and More Students Are

Why More and More Students Are Absent from Class?(學生何故逃課?)1．有人認為學生缺課的原因在他們本身； 2．有人認為學生缺課的原因在老師； 3．我認為??

[寫作導航]第一段可從兩方面陳述提綱，然后引出“我”的看法；第二段先分析學生方面的原因：大學生自由多了，如不嚴格要求自己，就會睡過頭、上網或干其它事情；還有些學生誤認為工作經歷比書本知識更重要，因此選擇了打工而不去上課；然后分析老師方面的原因，如教學方法陳舊，教材過時，課堂乏味等；最后一段提醒人們關注并解決這一問題。

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Increasing numbers of college students are cutting classes, which has caused a great deal of social concern and criticism.Some think that the larger part of the blame should go to the

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students.Others, however, think that it is the teachers who should be responsible.But I think both the students and the teachers have fault of their own.Compared with middle school students, college students have relatively more “freedom”.If they are not strict with themselves, chances are that they will oversleep in the morning, go to the Internet or find other activities to entertain themselves during class hours.In addition, some students have the misconception that work experience is more important than theoretical knowledge when it comes to job hunting.So they busy themselves in part time jobs when they should be attending class.On the other hand, some teachers still conduct classes in the old fashioned way.Their classes are so boring that they make many students fall asleep.Besides, some textbooks are so out of date that they think it a waste of time attending classes.In a word, both the students and the teachers should be wide awake to this serious problem and make great efforts to use the time at college to its best advantage.