第一篇：2011年高考改錯真題

改錯真題

1.（2011?陜西卷）短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1.5分，滿分15分）Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor.I didn’t have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get.Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and actor couldn’t be seen everywhere.I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building.He was right there in the front of me!I couldn’t believe my luck-not only did I had my photo taken wuth him, but he signed his name on my shirt!2.（2011?全國II）短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1.5分，滿分15分）Dear George, It's been a week after we left your family and we are now back home.Thank you very much for showing them around your city and providing us for the wonderful meals.After we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C., where we stayed for three days.My brother was so much fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying another couple of day.However, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon.It was really a nice experience.If you'd like to make trip to our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide.Yours, Mike 3.（2011?四川卷）短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1.5分，滿分15分）Tom was having much troubles getting up in the Morning and was always late with work..His boss wanted to fire him if he didn’t start coming on time,but he went to the doctor for a help.The doctor gave him some medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed.The man did is told and slept.leally will,wake up before the alam had even gone off.He had time for a properly breakfast and was still the first reach the factory.”Boss,”he said ,”that medicine really works!””I’m pleasing to hear it ,”said his boss,”but where were you yesterday?”

4.（2011?全國新課標卷）短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hang Zhou.I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday.I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes.I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.5.（2011?重慶卷）短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1份，滿分10分）Today is Sunday.I′ve been in Canada for two months.This is the first time that I′ve been away my family for such a long time.With the help of Katia, a roommate of me, I′ve soon got used to live without my parents around.Katia,like many other Russian girls, are nice and lively.We became friends shortly after we meet each other.Although her English is a little hardly to understand, we enjoy chatting and we usually talk a lot about our own family.We’re both surprised that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different.Now, we are planning a small party for the next Sunday.There ,Katia will introduce me to some of her friends,one of who has been to China several times.I just can’t wait.【答案】

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第二篇：作文+改錯高考英語真題專練2

作文+改錯高考真題專練

（二）2012年高考英語作文真題：全國卷1

假定你是李華，從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)（（the Internet）上得知一個國際中學生組織將在新加坡（Singapore）舉辦夏令營，歡迎各國學生參加。請寫一封電子郵件申請參加。

內(nèi)容主要包括：1.自我介紹（包括英語能力）;

2.參加意圖（介紹中國、了解其他國家）;

3.希望獲準。

注意：1.字數(shù)約100左右;

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫;

3.郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好.Dear Sir or Madam,Li Hua

【2010·陜西】短文改錯

My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day.She liked it at once.Then she bent down and picked up to look at a price on it.As she did this, lots of tea splashed on his T-shirt!I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face!My sister wanted get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us.It was turned out to be her own cup, that she’d left on the shelf by mistake.The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister, for I just thought it was funny!

【2011·浙江卷】短文改錯

I was playing at my cousin house.Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did.There was one on particular I'd always wanted.I put into my pocket when he wasn't looking.I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again;I would always know, I'd done something wrong.Late on, my aunt drove me home.When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back.She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.

第三篇：高考英語短文改錯高考真題單句分類訓(xùn)練

高考英語短文改錯高考真題單句分類訓(xùn)練

名詞

一、考點規(guī)律分析

短文改錯的名詞考點主要涉及名詞的單復(fù)數(shù),即在該用復(fù)數(shù)的地方誤用其單數(shù),或在該用單數(shù)的地方誤用其復(fù)數(shù)。

二、真題單句歸納

1.Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew making a new film with one of my favourite actor.（2011·陜西卷）2.He was right there in the front of me!（2011·陜西卷）

3.My brother was so fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to stay another couple of day.（2011·全國II）

4.In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports was steady,around three per weeks.（2011·遼寧卷)5.Tom was having much troubles getting up in the morning and was always late for work.（2011·四川卷)6.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.（2011·全國新課標卷）

7.When I finally arrived at my friend he lent me lots of clothes.（2011·全國新課標卷）8.I was playing at my cousin house.（2011·浙江卷）

9.Although her English is a little hard to understand, we enjoy chatting and we usually talk a lot about our own family.（2011·重慶卷）

三、改正方法:(1)根據(jù)名詞前的修飾限定成份;(2)根據(jù)上下文的邏輯關(guān)系。

四、模擬單句演練

（1）Women live longer than men in most country.（2）The film is very interesting.I have seen it many time.（3）It's said that all the ticket have been sold out.（4）The children spend a lot of times watching TV.（5）I met a lot of interesting peoples on holiday.（6）Computer are becoming more and more popular in the country.（7）He made his first time visit to China when he was 18.（8）There's a paper's factory near our school.（9）It's one of the most interesting book that I've ever read.（10）Hearing the news, the woman burst into tear.時態(tài)

一、考點規(guī)律分析

動詞時態(tài)考點主要涉及一般現(xiàn)在時與一般過去的區(qū)別,其命題方式通常是在一個一般現(xiàn)在時的背景下誤用某個一般過去時；或者反過來,在一個一般過去時的背景下誤用某個一般現(xiàn)在時。從所涉及的動詞來看,主要涉及be 和 have兩個常用動詞。有時也涉及其他時態(tài),如一般將來時,現(xiàn)在完成時等,但很少見。

二、真題單句歸納

1.Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and actor couldn't be seen anywhere.（2011·陜西卷）

2.When I finally arrived at my friend's he lent me lots of clothes.I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.（2011·全國新課標卷）

3.She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and never mentioned it again.（2011·浙江卷）4.We became friends shortly after we meet each other.（2011·重慶卷）

三、改正方法:現(xiàn)在時與過去時的誤用,句中一般沒有時間狀語。每年都考。要注意聯(lián)系上下文,著眼于整個語篇的時態(tài)。通常整篇都是過去,突然一個句子用現(xiàn)在時。其中又以一般現(xiàn)在時和過去時互改為多。

四、模擬單句演練

（1）Just now Jim tells me his mother was ill.（2）I phone my friend the other day.（3）We often played together when we are children.（4）What are you doing when I called you？

（5）In the last two weeks, we met people from different countries.（6）We'll stay at home playing cards if it will rain tomorrow.（7）Work hard and you pass the final exam.（8）It's years since I come here in China for my further study.動詞

一、動詞考點規(guī)律分析

動詞考點歸納的是除動詞時態(tài)與非謂語動詞之外的動詞考點,它包括被動語態(tài)、情態(tài)動詞、動詞形式的變化、動詞用法辨析、動詞 be 的誤加與漏用等。

二、真題單句歸納

1.I couldn't believe my luck-not only did I had my photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt!（2011·陜西卷）

2.However, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon.（2011·全國II）3.I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy playing with the toy or faced my cousin again;（2011·浙江卷）

三、模擬單句演練

（1）He lied down by the side of the path to rest.（2）Books may be keep for four weeks.（3）Uncle Ben will also go back for Christmas.（4）?and let you know when the book you want has returned.（5）I'd like to your pen-friend, and get to know more about your country.（6）They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of questions.（7）Because of so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of reading and the ability to enjoy themselves.（8）What your favourite sport？

（9）I use to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interested in football.（10）I followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each day.主謂一致

一、考點規(guī)律分析

從廣義來說,英語中的一致問題涉及多個方面,如主謂一致、人稱的一致、并列結(jié)構(gòu)的前后一致等。由于人稱的一致已歸入“代詞”考點、并列結(jié)構(gòu)的前后一致已分別歸入非謂語動詞、時態(tài)等,所以這里只歸納主謂一致問題。

二、真題單句歸納

1.In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports were steady,around three per week.（2011·遼寧卷）2.Luckily I had all my money in my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on.（2011·全國新課標卷）3.Katia,like many other Russian girls, are nice and lively.（2011·重慶卷）

三、改正方法:分清主語

四、模擬單句演練

（1）Her parents were in Shanghai, and so was his.（2）As is known to us all, remembering English words are not easy.（3）The police was looking for the murderer everywhere in the city.（4）Writing English and speaking it is different things.（5）It is the parents and their son who wants to buy the bicycle.（6）What he said at the meeting were very important to us.多詞

一、考點規(guī)律分析

多詞錯誤主要涉及英語中一些“小”詞,如冠詞、介詞、不定式符號、人稱代詞、動詞 be、比較級more等。具體說來,多詞錯誤可能涉及的問題有：及物動詞后接賓語時誤加介詞,在該用動詞原形的地方誤加不定式符號to,在物質(zhì)名詞、抽象名詞、復(fù)數(shù)名詞等表示泛指時誤加定冠詞,在一些可直接用作狀語的短語前誤加介詞in, on, for 等,誤加一些導(dǎo)致語義重復(fù)的小詞（如two 與both連用,all 與whole 連用等）,在本身已是比較級的詞前誤加more,在不是從句的地方誤加從句“引導(dǎo)詞”,在一些習慣用語和固定表達中誤加不該用的“小詞”（如冠詞、介詞、副詞等）,等等。

二、真題單句歸納

1.My brother was so much fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to stay another couple of days.（2011·全國II）

2.He wrote an article,which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements.（2011·遼寧卷）

3.His boss wanted to fire him if he didn't start coming on time,so he went to the doctor for a help.（2011·四川卷）

4.When I finally arrived at my friend's he lent to me lots of clothes.（2011·全國新課標卷）

5.I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or face my cousin again;（2011·浙江卷）

6.Now, we are planning a small party for the next Sunday.（2011·重慶卷）

三、模擬單句演練

（1）David pointed to a path which it he thought would probably lead to a village.（2）Modern people know more about the health, have better food, and live in clearer surroundings.（3）Most people can quickly get for help from a doctor or go to a hospital when they are ill.（4）As a result, people in the modern world generally live much more longer than people in the past.（5）I never knew about a ride down a river could be so exciting.（6）Today I visited the Smiths — my first time visit to an American family.（7）I'll spend all the whole weekend reading and preparing for it.（8）Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd.（9）Because of so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of reading and the ability to enjoy themselves.（10）Though I am a student now, I will work as very hard to make my dream come true.缺詞

一、考點規(guī)律分析

與多詞錯誤的情形相似,缺詞也主要涉及英語中一些“小”詞,如冠詞、介詞、不定式符號、人稱代詞、動詞 be等。具體說來,漏詞錯誤可能涉及的問題有：不及物動詞后接賓語時漏加必要的介詞,在該帶不定式符號to的地方漏加 to,在單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞表示泛指意義時漏加必要的限定詞（尤其是漏加不定冠詞）,漏掉表特指的定冠詞,漏掉被動語態(tài)中的助動詞 be,漏加系表結(jié)構(gòu)中的連系動詞 be,漏加一些常用結(jié)構(gòu)或表達中的介詞（如漏掉 a lot of 中的 of,漏掉 because of 中的 of,漏掉 instead of 中的 of等）,漏掉某些從句的“引導(dǎo)詞”（通常會導(dǎo)致意義不通）,等等。

二、真題單句歸納

1.I didn't have my camera with me at that time, so I rushed back home to get.（2011·陜西卷）2.The commanding officer,Wayne Tyler,who directly responsible for the study of all such repsorts,decided to make his findings known.（2011·遼寧卷）

3.He had time for a proper breakfast and was still the first reach the factory.（2011·四川卷）

4.I was going to visit a friend there and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday.（2011·全國新課標卷）

5.I put into my pocket when he wasn't looking.（2011·浙江卷）

6.This is the first time that I′ve been away my family for such a long time.（2011·重慶卷）

三、模擬單句演練

（1）When I have free time I go a long walk.（2）Good health is person's most valuable possession.（3）In some places you may borrow many books as you want.（4）We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ourselves.（5）My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure that I get a good education.（6）There is public library in every town in Britain.（7）But then there is always more mysteries look into.（8）I'd like very much come but I have an examination on Monday morning.介詞

一、考點規(guī)律分析

短文改錯對介詞的考查主要涉及在及物動詞后接賓語時誤加介詞和在不及物動詞后接賓語時漏加介詞、可直接用作狀語的副詞短語前誤加介詞、介詞與其他詞的常用搭配、常用介詞的基本用法、習語中的介詞用法等。

二、真題單句歸納

1.I was really disappointed and about to leave when he walked out a building.（2011·陜西卷）2.Thank you very much for showing us around your city and providing us for the wonderful meals.（2011·全國II）

3.When, however, on Monday, January 16, a science fiction film about visitors to outer space was shown on television,there was an immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States.（2011·遼寧卷）

4.Tom was having much trouble getting up in the morning and was always late with work.（2011·四川卷）

5.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had were those I had on.（2011·全國新課標卷）

6.There was one on particular I'd always wanted.（2011·浙江卷）

三、模擬單句演練

（1）We must serve for the people heart and soul.（2）I followed the man for a while, and saw him enter into the bank.（3）Soon the nurse married with my friend Jim.（4）I took a great many of photographs in the mountains.（5）In English class,we often talk each other in English.（6）Don't talk.What the man says is well worth listening.（7）The chair looks hard, but it is comfortable to sit.（8）She was very kind and insisted lending her car to us.（9）I asked to her what she would be doing on Saturday.（10）On his way to home, he met one of his old friends Jack.從句及并列連詞

一、考點規(guī)律分析

短文改錯對從句引導(dǎo)詞的考查主要涉及根據(jù)句意正確選用引導(dǎo)詞、引導(dǎo)詞的誤加與漏用、將不是從句的東西誤認為是從句而誤加引導(dǎo)詞等。

二、真題單句歸納

1.I didn't have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get it.（2011·陜西卷）2.It's been a week after we left your family and we are now back home.（2011·全國II）

3.Following this explanation,there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings,because the rate remained above the previous level.（2011·遼寧卷）4.His boss wanted to fire him if he didn't start coming on time,but he went to the doctor for help.（2011·四川卷）

5.I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag form the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.（2011·全國新課標卷）

6.We're both surprised that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different.（2011·重慶卷）7.There ,Katia will introduce me to some of her friends, one of who has been to China several times.I just can't wait.（2011·重慶卷）

三、改正方法：

1）根據(jù)句意確定錯誤；主要考查and、or、but、so等并列連詞的誤用。

2）根據(jù)句子的邏輯關(guān)系確定錯誤。

四、模擬單句演練

（1）He is the man his car was stolen.（2）That's the hotel which we were staying last summer.（3）That's the palace where we visited last summer.（4）I suddenly woke up in mid-night.And it was a long time I got to sleep again.（5）In the past few years when we've planted thousands of trees along the river.（6）At the airport where all the baggage must be examined.（7）He wrote me a letter and asked I was getting on.（8）She stayed in France for 10 years.That's she spoke French so well.（9）It's really a beautiful place, where everyone hopes to visit.（10）It cost nothing.Anyone can get it unless he likes it.非謂語動詞

一、考點規(guī)律分析

短文改錯對非謂語動詞的考查主要涉及不定式符號 to 的有無,介詞后該使用動詞的什么形式（用動名詞）,并列結(jié)構(gòu)中幾個非謂語動詞是否一致,動詞用作主語時用何種形式（可用動名詞或不定式,但不能用動詞原形）等。

二、真題單句歸納

1.Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actors.（2011·陜西卷）

2.My brother was so fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying another couple of days.（2011·全國II）

3.The commanding officer,Wayne Tyler,who was directly responsible for the study of all such repsorts,decided to making his findings known.（2011·遼寧卷）

4.Follow this explanation,there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings,but the rate remained above the previous level.（2011·遼寧卷）

5.The man did as told and slept really well,wake up before the alam had even gone off.（2011·四川卷）

6.He had time for a proper breakfast and was still the first reach the factory.（2011·四川卷）

7.“Boss,” he said ,“that medicine really works!” I'm pleasing to hear it ,”said his boss,”but where were you yesterday?”

（2011·四川卷）

8.My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hang Zhou.（2011·全國新課標卷）

9.With the help of Katia, a roommate of mine, I′ve soon got used to live without my parents around.三、改正方法：1）謂語動詞和非謂語動詞的錯用；2）動詞不定式和動名詞的錯用；3）現(xiàn)在分詞和過去分詞的錯用等。

四、模擬單句演練（1）David and I wanted go off to find help but Bill insisted on staying near the car.（2）I want to thank you again for have me in your home for the summer holidays.（3）It was very kind of them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home.（4）I went back to get David and helped him to stood up.（5）I look forward to hear from you soon.（6）I'd like very much come but I have an examination on Monday morning.（7）I'll spend the whole weekend reading and prepare for it.（8）Play football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also gives us a sense of fair play and team spirit.（9）After learn the basics of the subject, nothing else seemed very practical to me.（10）As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories.（11）But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports.(12）I am thinking of making a trip to London, and visit the British Museum and some parks.冠詞

一、考點規(guī)律分析

短文改錯對冠詞的考查主要涉及冠詞的誤加和漏用,有時也考查不定冠詞與定冠詞以及零冠詞的用法區(qū)別（包括 a 與 an 的區(qū)別）。其中,涉及最多的是,當一個單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞表示泛指時,其前漏用不定冠詞；另外,冠詞在一些習語中的用法也是一個重要考點。

二、真題單句歸納

1.If you'd like to make trip to our city some day, I will be more than happy to be your guide.（2011·全國II）

2.When, however, on Monday, January 16, a science fiction film about visitors from outer space was shown on television,there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States.（2011·遼寧卷）

三、模擬單句演練

（1）Her sister, who is nurse, will marry one of the doctors in the hospital.（2）It was such wonderful dinner that we enjoyed it very much.（3）It was raining hard, so I had to borrow a umbrella.（4）My friend Mary comes from an European country.（5）Mr Smith used to be physics teacher till he turned writer.（6）In the word, he is a good student and all of us like him.（7）People made the fun of her because she wore such strange clothes.（8）You don't know what wonderful time we've had.代詞

一、考點規(guī)律分析

短文改錯對代詞的考查主要涉及人稱代詞的前后一致性（包括指代的一致性和單復(fù)數(shù)的一致性）、人稱代詞的主格與賓語變化、各類代詞的誤加與漏用（尤其是一些易受漢語影響的結(jié)構(gòu)）、某些不定代詞的用法（尤其是在意思上用錯）、代詞在某些習語中的用法等。

二、真題單句歸納

1.Thank you very much for showing them around your city and providing us with the wonderful meals.（2011·全國II）

2.The commanding officer,Wayne Tyler,who was directly responsible for the study of all such repsorts,decided to make his findings known.They wrote an article,which said that all UFO reports could be explained quite naturally by aircraft movements.（2011·遼寧卷）

3.The doctor gave him some medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed.（2011·四川卷）

4.With the help of Katia, a roommate of me, I′ve soon got used to living without my parents around.5.I didn’t have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get.6.There was one on particular I’d always wanted.I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking

三、模擬單句演練

（1）David pointed to a path which it he thought would probably lead to a village.（2）When we walked to the car, Bill smiled and shook head.（3）I think I liked those classes because I felt that it helped me understand what the world works.（4）And I can't forget the good food you cooked for I.（5）But his parents think going to college is more important than playing sports and college is the only place for a smart boy like his son.（6）The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.（7）In any other words, I am an only child.形容詞和副詞

一、考點規(guī)律分析

短文改錯對形容詞與副詞的考查主要涉及形容詞和副詞比較等級的誤用（尤其是在本身已是比較級的詞前誤加more）、形容詞與副詞的混用（如修飾動詞時誤用形容詞或修飾名詞時誤用副詞）等,另外,用作表語時該用形容詞的卻誤用了名詞、簡短副詞（如 in, down 等）的誤加與漏用、涉及形容詞搭配的as?as 結(jié)構(gòu)、how 與 what 的混用等也是常考的考點。

二、真題單句歸納

1.Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they had finished the scene and the actor couldn't be seen everywhere.（2011·陜西卷）

2.I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out of a building.（2011·陜西卷）3.If you'd like to make a trip to our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide.（2011·全國II）

4.He had time for a properly breakfast and was still the first to reach the factory.（2011·四川卷）5.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buying a ticket to Hang Zhou.I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for a long holiday.（2011·全國新課標卷）6.Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did.（2011·浙江卷）Late on, my aunt drove me home.（2011·浙江卷）

7.When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back.（2011·浙江卷）

8.She knew what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.（2011·浙江卷）9.Although her English is a little hardly to understand, we enjoy chatting and we usually talk a lot about our own families

三、改正方法：主要考查形容詞和副詞的誤用、形容詞及副詞的比較級等。1）根據(jù)adj.或adv.的基本用法確定錯誤；2）修飾連系動詞或名詞用形容詞；3）修飾行為動詞、形容詞、過去分詞及整個句子用副詞。

四、模擬單句演練

（1）I'll try to be more carefully next time.（2）China is much more bigger than the United States.（3）There are few boys than girls in our class.（4）He says that skiing is much exciting than skating.（5）Strange, they even know everything about me.（6）He found someone was following her, so she felt frightening.（7）It was real very dangerous.You might have injured yourself.（8）In fact, they finally came back home,safely and sound.（9）The fish tastes well； why not have a try？ 動詞形,名詞數(shù), 還要注意形和副； 非謂語,細辨別,習慣用法要記住；

句子成分多分析, 邏輯錯誤須關(guān)注； 冠詞連詞常光顧。

第四篇：公文寫作改錯及真題

公文寫作改錯及真題

一、發(fā)文字號：

1、序號不能有虛位，即數(shù)字前不得有0，不得有“第”字樣

2、年號份號顛倒

3、年號使用的標點符號錯誤。

4.秘級錯誤。只有秘密機密，絕密字樣 5.絕密機密要有右上要有序號

6.一些上行文要有簽發(fā)人,簽發(fā)人和文號左右平行

二、標題部分：標題是由發(fā)文機關(guān)、事由、文種組成。

1．有的標題不全

2.有的文種不對，特別常見亂用‘公告’，還有“批復(fù)”成了“指示”,通知成了通告 3，有的批轉(zhuǎn)性公文不是法規(guī)條文仍用《》 4.公文種類共用，如“請示報告” 5.緊急的在標題中要體現(xiàn)出來

三、主送機關(guān)：

1．上行文多頭主送

2.有的是請示平級，越級請示；

3.有的是直接送單位而不送人(除非是領(lǐng)導(dǎo)個人交辦事項)，但請示不可以直接給領(lǐng)導(dǎo) 4.有的主送機關(guān)未寫全，特別是簡要寫法要寫全，省市不分等，以及什么省，什么市。5.主送機關(guān)名稱，即抬頭要頂格寫 6.必須要有的缺了收文機關(guān)

7.黨政不分，黨對政府部門下命令

四、正文：

1.有的是一文多事，見于請示；

2.有的正文引用發(fā)文不規(guī)范，如批復(fù)等，引用要先文件名，后文號； 3.有的正文數(shù)字該用阿拉伯數(shù)字，卻用漢字； 4.有的是用詞不當。“反映”成了“流言”，“發(fā)布”成了“散布” 5.標點符號。特別是序列，標準是

一、（一）1.（1）

6.量詞。要有法定計量單位，如寸不適用 7.用英文無翻譯 8.表彰性通報無名單 9.請示報告送下級

10.平行文，上行文不禮貌，要用“貴局”，不能用“你局” 11.錯別字

12.用語或敘事違反公文要則如簡練明確等要素 13.一些公文要有聯(lián)系人，電話等

五、結(jié)尾：

1.有的結(jié)尾不合作者本意； 2.有的是不合公文格式要求。

3.有的是表現(xiàn)在上行文語氣不尊。特別是上行文結(jié)尾催辦，請即批復(fù)等六、一些人稱的用法

1.推薦名單表上要先寫人名，再寫單位，職稱等

2.主文中提到了某某人等，隨附名單要先列出某某人

七、抄送

請示未獲批準抄送下級。抄送兩字不能頂格,相對的主題詞頂格

八、附件

1.該標明附件卻未標出。

2.標明附件要在印章前(尚未找到明確根據(jù))3.附件的順序和名稱 4.附件名稱后不用標點

九、發(fā)文機關(guān)（印章）與發(fā)文日期

1）標題上的發(fā)文機關(guān)與簽署（蓋章）的發(fā)文機關(guān)不對應(yīng)。2）混用漢字與阿拉伯數(shù)字，或直接用阿拉伯數(shù)字.3）年月日不全

4）亂加字，如 年 月 日“發(fā)” 5）發(fā)文機關(guān)日期上下顛倒

6）印章沒有蓋或蓋錯地方或蓋反 7）沒有發(fā)文日期。

8）發(fā)文機關(guān)（印章）與發(fā)文日期位置左錯 9)發(fā)文時間不能超過發(fā)文機關(guān)

十、主題詞 1）沒有主題詞

2）太少或太多，3-5，不超7(尚未找到明確根據(jù))

十一.版式問題

重要公文制發(fā)單位只能是辦公室 歷年公考公文改錯真題

公文改錯題(指出下列公文的8處錯誤)抬頭 關(guān)于辦理商標注冊附送證件問題的批復(fù)

主送機關(guān) 某某《關(guān)于辦理商標注冊附送證件問題的請示》收悉，國務(wù)院大致同意關(guān)于辦理商標變更、轉(zhuǎn)讓或者續(xù)展注冊時不再附送原商標注冊證的意見，但考慮到這一問題涉及《商標法實施細則》的修改，特批復(fù)如下，盼遵照執(zhí)行。

本批發(fā)第一項、第四項由你局在1995年12月15日前發(fā)布。第二項、第三項由你局在一九九八年十一月一前發(fā)布。

國務(wù)院

1995年4月23日制發(fā)

①標題不完整

②缺主送機關(guān)

③“大致同意”用法不當

④實施細則應(yīng)用全稱

⑤語氣不當“盼......” ⑥“一九九八......”表達錯誤

⑦作者位置不當

⑧“制發(fā)”二字多余。

中國人民銀行××市分行 位置

關(guān)于轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)總行《儲蓄工作座談會紀要》的通知 ×銀發(fā)［2002］×號 現(xiàn)將總行的《儲蓄工作座談會紀要》轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)給你們，請立即組織研究，展開討論，并根據(jù)《紀要》精神，認真貫徹執(zhí)行。當前，首先要抓好第一季度的工作，以便為全年工作打下基礎(chǔ)。

中國人民銀行××市分行 二〇〇二年七月二十四日

一般來說，轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)性通知只能有一個目的，或為執(zhí)行，或為討論，或為參考，二者不能兼得，更不能三者兼得。上面這則通知一方面讓人家“研究討論”，一方面又讓人家“貫徹執(zhí)行”，這二者是不可兼得的。因為“研究討論”意味著轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)對象尚不成熟，還沒有達到“執(zhí)行”的程度；而“貫徹執(zhí)行”卻意味著轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)對象已經(jīng)成熟，已經(jīng)沒有“研究討論”的必要了。作者在這里顯然犯了自相矛盾的錯誤，違背了形式邏輯中的不矛盾律。這是轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)性通知中的一種多發(fā)病和常見病。

××市人民政府 標題

××鎮(zhèn)人民政府：biaoti 對你鎮(zhèn)的數(shù)次請示，經(jīng)研究作答復(fù)如下：

其一，原則同意批準你鎮(zhèn)建立聯(lián)合貿(mào)易公司，負責本鎮(zhèn)的內(nèi)、外貿(mào)易工作。你鎮(zhèn)應(yīng)盡快使聯(lián)合貿(mào)易公司開始營業(yè)。其二，你鎮(zhèn)提出試行“關(guān)于違反計劃生育規(guī)定的處罰辦法”最好不執(zhí)行，因為這個辦法違反上級有關(guān)文件精神。

其三，對你鎮(zhèn)提出要建一俱樂部活躍居民文化生活一事，予以批準，但規(guī)模要適當控制，量力而行。

其四，同意你鎮(zhèn)組團參加在上海舉辦的服裝節(jié)和在服裝節(jié)上進行引資促銷活動。××市人民政府 2001年×月×日

一是違反一文一批的原則。市政府在積存了某鄉(xiāng)四件請示之后，才合在一起給了這樣一個批復(fù)，這樣做有多種弊端：（1）延誤時間，耽誤下級工作；（2）多種事項集于一篇公文之中，內(nèi)容雜亂；（3）一份公文涉及多方面工作，給下級落實帶來困難。因為這些工作在下級機關(guān)是由不同單位和不同負責人分管的，由哪個負責人承擔批復(fù)的落實工作，不好確定。正確的做法是，下級報來一份請示，就及時回復(fù)一份批復(fù)。對方的四份請求，應(yīng)有四份相應(yīng)的批復(fù)。

二是標題不合要求。本批復(fù)的標題只有文種品稱，沒有發(fā)文機關(guān)和主要內(nèi)容，不夠認真嚴肅，也影響工作效率。

三是用語含糊不清，觀點不明確。如“原則同意”、“最好不執(zhí)行”、“違反上級有關(guān)文件精神”，都沒有明確指出自己的觀點，使下級無法執(zhí)行。四是時間要用漢字，不能用阿拉伯數(shù)字。

××市工業(yè)局文件 ××字（2002）××號

簽發(fā)人：張平

××市工業(yè)局關(guān)于印發(fā)“關(guān)于節(jié)減行政經(jīng)費的幾項規(guī)定”的通知

我局同意××市財政局關(guān)于節(jié)減行政經(jīng)費的幾項規(guī)定”中提出的意見，認為切實可行，請結(jié)合本單位的情況參照執(zhí)行。

附：××市財政局文件 2002.10.16 主題詞：印發(fā)、規(guī)定、通知

抄送：××市人民政府、××市財政局

（1）發(fā)文字號不規(guī)范，應(yīng)為××〔2002〕23號；（2）下行文不應(yīng)標注簽發(fā)人，應(yīng)取消，發(fā)文字號居中排列；

（3）標題不規(guī)范，應(yīng)將“印發(fā)”改為“轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)”，引號應(yīng)改為書名號《》；（4）缺主送機關(guān)，應(yīng)寫明收文單位名稱；

（5）轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)同級機關(guān)公文，不應(yīng)用批示語氣，如“我局同意”、“所提意見切實可行”等；（6）《規(guī)定》屬規(guī)范性公文，應(yīng)認真執(zhí)行而不應(yīng)寫“參照”執(zhí)行；（7）附件說明不規(guī)范，應(yīng)具體寫明附件的標題；

（8）成文日期不規(guī)范，應(yīng)用漢字寫全年月日，即二〇〇二年十月十六日；應(yīng)加蓋印章；（9）主題詞不規(guī)范，應(yīng)表明公文的主題項：行政經(jīng)費；主題詞之間空一個漢字位置，不用標點符號；

（10）轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)公文不應(yīng)再向其他機關(guān)抄送，應(yīng)取消抄送機關(guān)。

各省、自治區(qū)、直轄市人民政府：

今年初，枝江縣董鎮(zhèn)信用社職工××同志為保衛(wèi)國家財產(chǎn)，面對英勇歹徒，頑強搏斗，最后擒獲歹徒。為此決定：授予××同志先進工作者稱號。

國務(wù)院希望各條戰(zhàn)線的群眾、工人、農(nóng)民、知識分子認真貫徹十三屆四中、5中、6中全會精神，胸懷全局，艱苦奮斗，努力工作，為社會主義現(xiàn)代化建設(shè)做出更大貢獻。

中共中央、國務(wù)院90年4月24日

1.標題結(jié)構(gòu)不完整，應(yīng)改為“中共中央、國務(wù)院關(guān)于授予××同志先進工作者稱號的決定”。2.“今年初”這一時間概念表達不當，應(yīng)改為“1990年初”。3.枝江縣前應(yīng)冠以省名。4.“英勇歹徒”的表達有誤。

5.“群眾、工人、??”等搭配不當。6.數(shù)字表達不一致，不應(yīng)用阿拉伯數(shù)字。7.作者排列有誤，應(yīng)分兩行排列。8.日期書寫有誤，應(yīng)用漢字。

公文改錯題（找出下列公文中的錯誤并說明理由，本題10分。）

關(guān)于申請撥給災(zāi)區(qū)貸款專項指標的報告

省行：

江兩岸鄉(xiāng)、村同時發(fā)生洪水，災(zāi)情嚴重。經(jīng)初步不完全統(tǒng)計，農(nóng)田受災(zāi)總面積達38000多畝，各種農(nóng)作物損失達100多萬元，農(nóng)民個人損失也很大。災(zāi)后，我們立即深入災(zāi)區(qū)了解災(zāi)情，并發(fā)動干部群眾積極開展生產(chǎn)自救。同時，為幫助受災(zāi)農(nóng)民及時恢復(fù)生產(chǎn)，我們采取了下列措施：

一、對恢復(fù)生產(chǎn)所需的資金，以自籌為主。確有困難的，先從現(xiàn)有農(nóng)貸指標中貸款支持。

二、對受災(zāi)嚴重的困難戶，優(yōu)先適當貸款，先幫助他們解決生活問題。到×月×日止，此項貸款已達××萬元。

由于這次災(zāi)情過于嚴重，集體和個人的損失都很大，短期內(nèi)恢復(fù)生產(chǎn)有一定的困難，僅靠正常農(nóng)貸指標難以解決問題。為此，請省行下達專項救災(zāi)貸款指標××萬元，以便支持災(zāi)區(qū)迅速恢復(fù)生產(chǎn)。

以上報告當否，請批示。××銀行××市支行 一九九八年×月×日

一、文種選擇有誤

從標題看，這篇公文是向省行提出災(zāi)區(qū)貸款專項指標的申請，目的是獲得省行的批準。從正文的主體部分看，兩條措施確屬報告性質(zhì)，但隨后出現(xiàn)的專項貸款請求，就不是報告應(yīng)有的內(nèi)容了。從結(jié)語看，“以上報告妥否，請批示”，有著很強的期復(fù)性。因此，綜合起來看，這篇公文應(yīng)改為《關(guān)于撥給災(zāi)區(qū)貸款專項指標的請示》。

二、內(nèi)容含糊

這是由于原文混淆了報告和請示的界限而造成的。寫請示，只需寫明請示緣由、請示事項，最后提出請示要求即可，與此無關(guān)的內(nèi)容不應(yīng)寫入。而原文提出的兩條措施：“對恢復(fù)生產(chǎn)所需的資金，以自籌為主”、“對受災(zāi)嚴重的困難戶，優(yōu)先適當貸款”，既不是請示緣由，也不是請示事項，不應(yīng)該寫入文中。

三、語言不準確

文中有多處語言不確切。如“×江兩岸鄉(xiāng)、村同時發(fā)生洪水”，×江兩岸所有村莊都遭受洪災(zāi)似不可能，“同時發(fā)生”更不可能。“災(zāi)情較重”跟后面“這次災(zāi)情過于嚴重”的說法相齟齬；“據(jù)初步不完全統(tǒng)計”，“初步”和“不完全”語意重復(fù)。

第五篇：歷年公考公文改錯真題

歷年公考公文改錯真題

公文改錯題(指出下列公文的8處錯誤)關(guān)于辦理商標注冊附送證件問題的批復(fù)

《關(guān)于辦理商標注冊附送證件問題的請示》收悉，國務(wù)院大致同意關(guān)于辦理商標變更、轉(zhuǎn)讓或者續(xù)展注冊時不再附送原商標注冊證的意見，但考慮到這一問題涉及《商標法實施細則》的修改，特批復(fù)如下，盼遵照執(zhí)行。

本批發(fā)第一項、第四項由你局在1995年12月15日前發(fā)布。第二項、第三項由你局在一九九八年十一月一前發(fā)布。

國務(wù)院

1995年4月23日制發(fā)

①標題不完整

②缺主送機關(guān)

③“大致同意”用法不當

④實施細則應(yīng)用全稱

⑤語氣不當“盼......” ⑥“一九九八......”表達錯誤

⑦作者位置不當

⑧“制發(fā)”二字多余。

中國人民銀行××市分行

關(guān)于轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)總行《儲蓄工作座談會紀要》的通知 ×銀發(fā)［2002］×號

現(xiàn)將總行的《儲蓄工作座談會紀要》轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)給你們，請立即組織研究，展開討論，并根據(jù)《紀要》精神，認真貫徹執(zhí)行。當前，首先要抓好第一季度的工作，以便為全年工作打下基礎(chǔ)。

中國人民銀行××市分行

二〇〇二年七月二十四日

一般來說，轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)性通知只能有一個目的，或為執(zhí)行，或為討論，或為參考，二者不能兼得，更不能三者兼得。上面這則通知一方面讓人家“研究討論”，一方面又讓人家“貫徹執(zhí)行”，這二者是不可兼得的。因為“研究討論”意味著轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)對象尚不成熟，還沒有達到“執(zhí)行”的程度；而“貫徹執(zhí)行”卻意味著轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)對象已經(jīng)成熟，已經(jīng)沒有“研究討論”的必要了。作者在這里顯然犯了自相矛盾的錯誤，違背了形式邏輯中的不矛盾律。這是轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)性通知中的一種多發(fā)病和常見病。(公布性公文比如：公告、通告、通報、會議紀要等是不需要主送機關(guān)的的)

××鎮(zhèn)人民政府：

對你鎮(zhèn)的數(shù)次請示，經(jīng)研究作答復(fù)如下：

其一，原則同意批準你鎮(zhèn)建立聯(lián)合貿(mào)易公司，負責本鎮(zhèn)的內(nèi)、外貿(mào)易工作。你鎮(zhèn)應(yīng)盡快使聯(lián)合貿(mào)易公司開始營業(yè)。

其二，你鎮(zhèn)提出試行“關(guān)于違反計劃生育規(guī)定的處罰辦法”最好不執(zhí)行，因為這個辦法違反上級有關(guān)文件精神。

其三，對你鎮(zhèn)提出要建一俱樂部活躍居民文化生活一事，予以批準，但規(guī)模要適當控制，量力而行。

其四，同意你鎮(zhèn)組團參加在上海舉辦的服裝節(jié)和在服裝節(jié)上進行引資促銷活動。

××市人民政府

2001年×月×日

一是違反一文一批的原則。市政府在積存了某鄉(xiāng)四件請示之后，才合在一起給了這樣一個批復(fù)，這樣做有多種弊端：（1）延誤時間，耽誤下級工作；（2）多種事項集于一篇公文之中，內(nèi)容雜亂；（3）一份公文涉及多方面工作，給下級落實帶來困難。因為這些工作在下級機關(guān)是由不同單位和不同負責人分管的，由哪個負責人承擔批復(fù)的落實工作，不好確定。正確的做法是，下級報來一份請示，就及時回復(fù)一份批復(fù)。對方的四份請求，應(yīng)有四份相應(yīng)的批復(fù)。

二是標題不合要求。本批復(fù)的標題只有文種品稱，沒有發(fā)文機關(guān)和主要內(nèi)容，不夠認真嚴肅，也影響工作效率。

三是用語含糊不清，觀點不明確。如“原則同意”、“最好不執(zhí)行”、“違反上級有關(guān)文件精神”，都沒有明確指出自己的觀點，使下級無法執(zhí)行。四是時間要用漢字，不能用阿拉伯數(shù)字。

××市工業(yè)局文件 ××字（2002）××號

簽發(fā)人：張平

××市工業(yè)局關(guān)于印發(fā)“關(guān)于節(jié)減行政經(jīng)費的幾項規(guī)定”的通知 我局同意××市財政局關(guān)于節(jié)減行政經(jīng)費的幾項規(guī)定”中提出的意見，認為切實可行，請結(jié)合本單位的情況參照執(zhí)行。

附：××市財政局文件

2002.10.16 主題詞：印發(fā)、規(guī)定、通知

抄送：××市人民政府、××市財政局

（1）發(fā)文字號不規(guī)范，應(yīng)為××〔2002〕23號；

（2）下行文不應(yīng)標注簽發(fā)人，應(yīng)取消，發(fā)文字號居中排列；

（3）標題不規(guī)范，應(yīng)將“印發(fā)”改為“轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)”，引號應(yīng)改為書名號《》；（4）缺主送機關(guān)，應(yīng)寫明收文單位名稱；

（5）轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)同級機關(guān)公文，不應(yīng)用批示語氣，如“我局同意”、“所提意見切實可行”等；（6）《規(guī)定》屬規(guī)范性公文，應(yīng)認真執(zhí)行而不應(yīng)寫“參照”執(zhí)行；（7）附件說明不規(guī)范，應(yīng)具體寫明附件的標題；

（8）成文日期不規(guī)范，應(yīng)用漢字寫全年月日，即二〇〇二年十月十六日；應(yīng)加蓋印章；（9）主題詞不規(guī)范，應(yīng)表明公文的主題項：行政經(jīng)費；主題詞之間空一個漢字位置，不用標點符號；

（10）轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)公文不應(yīng)再向其他機關(guān)抄送，應(yīng)取消抄送機關(guān)。

各省、自治區(qū)、直轄市人民政府： 今年初，枝江縣董鎮(zhèn)信用社職工××同志為保衛(wèi)國家財產(chǎn)，面對英勇歹徒，頑強搏斗，最后擒獲歹徒。為此決定：授予××同志先進工作者稱號。

國務(wù)院希望各條戰(zhàn)線的群眾、工人、農(nóng)民、知識分子認真貫徹十三屆四中、5中、6中全會精神，胸懷全局，艱苦奮斗，努力工作，為社會主義現(xiàn)代化建設(shè)做出更大貢獻。

中共中央、國務(wù)院90年4月24日

1.標題結(jié)構(gòu)不完整，應(yīng)改為“中共中央、國務(wù)院關(guān)于授予××同志先進工作者稱號的決定”。2.“今年初”這一時間概念表達不當，應(yīng)改為“1990年初”。3.枝江縣前應(yīng)冠以省名。4.“英勇歹徒”的表達有誤。

5.“群眾、工人、……”等搭配不當。

6.數(shù)字表達不一致，不應(yīng)用阿拉伯數(shù)字。7.作者排列有誤，應(yīng)分兩行排列。8.日期書寫有誤，應(yīng)用漢字。

公文改錯題（找出下列公文中的錯誤并說明理由，本題10分。）

關(guān)于申請撥給災(zāi)區(qū)貸款專項指標的報告

省行：

江兩岸鄉(xiāng)、村同時發(fā)生洪水，災(zāi)情嚴重。經(jīng)初步不完全統(tǒng)計，農(nóng)田受災(zāi)總面積達38000多畝，各種農(nóng)作物損失達100多萬元，農(nóng)民個人損失也很大。災(zāi)后，我們立即深入災(zāi)區(qū)了解災(zāi)情，并發(fā)動干部群眾積極開展生產(chǎn)自救。同時，為幫助受災(zāi)農(nóng)民及時恢復(fù)生產(chǎn)，我們采取了下列措施：

一、對恢復(fù)生產(chǎn)所需的資金，以自籌為主。確有困難的，先從現(xiàn)有農(nóng)貸指標中貸款支持。

二、對受災(zāi)嚴重的困難戶，優(yōu)先適當貸款，先幫助他們解決生活問題。到×月×日止，此項貸款已達××萬元。

由于這次災(zāi)情過于嚴重，集體和個人的損失都很大，短期內(nèi)恢復(fù)生產(chǎn)有一定的困難，僅靠正常農(nóng)貸指標難以解決問題。為此，請省行下達專項救災(zāi)貸款指標××萬元，以便支持災(zāi)區(qū)迅速恢復(fù)生產(chǎn)。

以上報告當否，請批示。

××銀行××市支行

一九九八年×月×日

一、文種選擇有誤

從標題看，這篇公文是向省行提出災(zāi)區(qū)貸款專項指標的申請，目的是獲得省行的批準。從正文的主體部分看，兩條措施確屬報告性質(zhì)，但隨后出現(xiàn)的專項貸款請求，就不是報告應(yīng)有的內(nèi)容了。從結(jié)語看，“以上報告妥否，請批示”，有著很強的期復(fù)性。因此，綜合起來看，這篇公文應(yīng)改為《關(guān)于撥給災(zāi)區(qū)貸款專項指標的請示》。

二、內(nèi)容含糊

這是由于原文混淆了報告和請示的界限而造成的。寫請示，只需寫明請示緣由、請示事項，最后提出請示要求即可，與此無關(guān)的內(nèi)容不應(yīng)寫入。而原文提出的兩條措施：“對恢復(fù)生產(chǎn)所需的資金，以自籌為主”、“對受災(zāi)嚴重的困難戶，優(yōu)先適當貸款”，既不是請示緣由，也不是請示事項，不應(yīng)該寫入文中。

三、語言不準確

文中有多處語言不確切。如“×江兩岸鄉(xiāng)、村同時發(fā)生洪水”，×江兩岸所有村莊都遭受洪災(zāi)似不可能，“同時發(fā)生”更不可能。“災(zāi)情較重”跟后面“這次災(zāi)情過于嚴重”的說法相齟齬；“據(jù)初步不完全統(tǒng)計”，“初步”和“不完全”語意重復(fù)。