第一篇：2018年8月25日托福考試 獨立寫作解析

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獨立寫作考題：

You may choose between two professors who will be teaching a course that you must take at your university.If the following statements are the only information available to you about the differences between the two professors, which professor would you choose? Why?--One professor was voted most popular in a survey of students about their teachers.--One professors has just been given an award for outstanding research.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.Be sure to use your own words.Do not use memorized examples.題目特征：

雙選題，教育類話題，題干信息量相對較大

題干信息解讀

該題信息可以精煉為：

大學選課時，更加傾向于選擇哪位教授的課程？ 1）學生票選中最受歡迎的教授 2）剛因杰出研究獲獎的教授

該題整體來說，難度不大，學生拿到手之后應該是有話可說——畢竟選課對每位學生來說，已然不陌生。針對自己選課時考慮的因素以及為何會有該考慮因素，再結合題干中所提供的兩種教授特點，自然會找到展開作文的思路。

比如，選課時，我們會考慮“whether is the course academically beneficial to us or not?”，”whether is the professor friendly and attractive or not? ”等等，思考之后，再結合題目中所給特點(voted most popular;just awarded for outstanding research)進行分析即可

針對該題的參考思路，針對“教授受歡迎”，很容易想到，理由如下：

01、教授風趣，講解清楚簡單，讓學生積極參與，很會激起學生的參與熱情和興趣。The class offered by the popular professor can be rendered to be interesting rather than inflexible or vapid, easier for students to be attracted and then concentrated, inspire students to participate more actively/more opportunities can be created for students to interact, spark off the passion and interest from students, study more effectively and efficiently.02、教授受歡迎，意味著學生與老師的互動或者交流很多，因此更容易發(fā)現(xiàn)學生們的相關問題，必然可以針對性的給出建議，從而讓學生在學習中獲得更多提高

It cannot be denied that students are more willing to interact with the most popular professor, more interaction or communication in or after class, easier for the professor to notice where the student is not good or proficient enough academically, offer some

第二篇：托福考試寫作評分標準

1、內容的完整性和準確性。簡單地說，就是文章是否有將講座中的關鍵信息點完整、準確地提取出來(通常情況下有三點)，并和閱讀材料中的相關內容有效地一一對應。如果講座中的信息點有缺失，那么會有一定程度的扣分；如果只寫了有關閱讀材料的觀點，得1分。

2、文章的組織機構，詞匯和語法的正確性和準確性。高分的作文需要做到條理清晰，結構連貫，用詞恰當，能夠準確地表達講座中的觀點與閱讀材料中的觀點是如何相互聯(lián)系的，只要作文中的錯誤不至于使內容表述出現(xiàn)誤解，一些偶爾出現(xiàn)的語言錯誤，如單詞拼寫、單復數(shù)問題等，不會對作文成績產生很大影響，當然，錯誤肯定是越少越好的。

1、有效回應題目，闡明文章主題。一般來說，獨立寫作完全跑題的情況很少，但是很多考生在展開討論時所采用的論據(jù)，比較容易出現(xiàn)跟主題關聯(lián)性不大的情況，即局部答非所問的現(xiàn)象，從而影響了得分。

2、邏輯條理清楚，論證充分展開。這一點的關鍵在于文章論證的展開，是否提供了大量的細節(jié)和例子來支持觀點，而非泛泛而談地說理。比如說某位同學的英文寫作能力很強，我光說很強，很厲害，寫得很好都很表面，但是我如果說這位同學托福寫作考了29分，那么就是很細節(jié)很有說服力的論據(jù)了。

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3、內容連貫一致，銜接自然流暢。達到內容連貫一致的文章通常全文圍繞中心論點展開，而不會論據(jù)自相矛盾，也不會重復論證，有時候通過一些表示因果、先后、遞進的關系連詞可以起到粘合劑的作用。

4、遣詞造句地道，語言駕馭嫻熟。托福考試終究是語言考試，最終還是要考查考生的語言運用能力，但是要注意的是，并不是要求考生通篇都用難詞偏語長句，而是要會變化著用一些美國人常用的語句把自己的想法表達清楚，所以建議考生盡量多閱讀和模仿英文原版材料，這樣寫出來的文章才能夠原汁原味。托福考試寫作評分標準責任編輯：曾老師 閱讀：人次

第三篇：2015年8月22日大陸托福考試寫作真題和解析

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2015年8月22日大陸托福考試寫作真題和范文解析

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第一部分

綜合寫作： 有關“計劃燒除”的問題

閱讀：

1.“計劃燒除”對動物有害;

2.“計劃燒除”會造成煙氣和二氧化碳污染;

3.即使不進行“計劃燒除”也會有自然火災的發(fā)生，所以“計劃燒除”會浪費財力。

聽力反駁：

1.因為有幾個月動物是不繁殖的，而且成年動物在遇火時可以成功逃脫，因此“計劃燒除”不會對動物造成危害;

2.“計劃燒除”可以讓植物吸收二氧化碳;

3.“計劃燒除”會消除可燃物，減少自然火災的發(fā)生。

綜合寫作思路：

1、閱讀支持“計劃燒除”對動物有害;聽力則贊成，動物是不繁殖的，而且成年動物在遇火時可以成功逃脫，因此“計劃燒除”不會對動物造成危害。

2、閱讀部分提出“計劃燒除”會造成煙氣和二氧化碳污染;但是，聽力提出“計劃燒除”可以讓植物吸收二氧化碳。

3、閱讀部分提出，即使不進行“計劃燒除”也會有自然火災的發(fā)生，所以“計劃燒除”會浪費財力;但是，聽力部分則反駁說“計劃燒除”會消除可燃物，減少自然火災的發(fā)生。

范文：

The lecturer contends that prescribed burns prevent larger forest fires.This directly contradicts the reading passage’s claim that there are more disadvantages than advantages.http://bailiedu.com

First, in spite of the concerns some people have, only a few animals die from the burns;there is enough time for animals to escape.Moreover, the professor cites the example of Yellowstone National Park, where animals have no difficulties finding new habitats because of the park's huge size.This refutes the reading passage’s claim that forest animals die from prescribed burns and that even if they manage to survive, they have a hard time because of the competition for food in their new territory.On top of that, the lecturer says there has been a misunderstanding about the environmental damage of prescribed burns.It is true that prescribed burns produce smoke;however, the amount of smoke is much less than the amount of smoke generated during major forest fires.This rebuts the reading passage’s claim that since many prescribed burns take several days, smoke coming from the burning causes air pollution.Finally, prescribed burns are deliberately carried out.The forest officials put a lot of thought and efforts into the burns before they intentionally set a forest on fire;accordingly, it is less feasible that the forest officials would conduct the burns if conditions are not suitable.This contradicts the idea mentioned in the reading passage that prescribed burns can change into major forest fires by spreading unexpectedly.第二部分

獨立寫作：

題目：Do you agree or disagree: the most effective way for governments to encourage energy conservation is to increase the price of gasoline and electricity?

命中情況：命中8月22日前程百利獨立寫作大范圍——社會類“第四題”。

是否新題：否

重復情況：2008年9月21日中國考試，2008年9月28日中國考試，2009年11月22日中國考試

題材：社會類

獨立寫作思路：

1.同意

(1)提高汽油費和電費會在一定程度上抑制消費者對能源的使用，從而節(jié)省能源;

(2)提高汽油費和電費會讓消費者養(yǎng)成節(jié)省能源的習慣，從長遠看來，有利于能源節(jié)約。

2.不同意

(1)隨著經(jīng)濟的發(fā)展，人們的消費水平提高了，提高汽油費和電費對消費者來說影響不大;

(2)提高汽油費和電費不能從根本上節(jié)約能源，要真正做到能源節(jié)約，根本措施在于開發(fā)新技術，提高能源利用效率。

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范文：(不同意)

In such a scientific-technologically developed society, energy has played an indispensable and dominant role in aspects of life, whatever in personal living or corporate expansion.However, with the rapid decline in the amount of the energy or recourse resulting from increasing demand as well as overly exploitation, it is imperative that government take measures to conserve the energy available.For example, increasing the cost of gasoline and electricity will admittedly control the use of both for a majority will not purchase or waste them as before, but it is not the only way due to some potential drawbacks in the long run.For one thing, it will create a path for some commercial producers to make profits from the price-raising illegally when they are keen on the sole material benefits instead of the initial motive of the government.Energy, whose consumption has accounted for a big proportion in the national revenue, is always a hot issue in many profit-oriented companies.For instance, some gasoline companies will expand their exploitation area for larger inventories, from which they can get greater profits once the price of the products are increased.They will also force their employees to work excessively with disregard to safety.Doing so can not only conserve the energy as planned, but also bring some negative influenced on the social life.For another, the increase in the energy may cause a financial burden for those relying on the resource, individually or corporately.If the strategy is carried out, some companies will face great difficulty in affording the energy, and consequently they cannot continue their production without resource provision.Neither can some families in some poverty-stricken areas.One of my relatives, living in a less developed village, is striving to save the money on the electricity or gas.Suffering from the pressure of tuition of his children, he has to try to live an economical life.Thus the increase in the price of electricity will inevitably become an obstacle in such occasions.In conclusion, in spite of the possible effectiveness in the energy conservation, the cost rising will lead to some illegal cases or financial burdens to some poor ones at the same time.If there are some more complementary alternatives, such as to enhance the public awareness to conserve the energy actively, the goal of the government will be fulfilled in a balanced way.以上就是8月22日托福考試寫作部分的真題。備考托福的小伙伴，趕緊來圍觀吧!前程百利小編也給8月30日參加托福考試的小伙伴提供了前程百利最權威的機經(jīng)，四個單項都很全面，敬請關注。

第四篇：獨立寫作模版（范文）

This new century has witnessed the explosive growth of science and technology, which____.When it comes to____, the discussion of this issue among individuals and in society as a whole has come into vogue during the last decade.The statement claims that __________./It is commonly accepted that_大眾觀點___.From my perspective, I agree/disagree with the statement and there are several reasons and instances as follows supporting my view./From my perspective, I prefer A rather than B and there are several reasons and instances as follows supporting my view.讓步段 Unquestionably,讓步詞

However, say XXX is an overstatement, for one thing..加2到3個支持句

For another thing…加兩到三個支持句

In conclusion, if there is anyone out there who still doubts if … who still wonders if … who still questions if … this essay is my answer.

第五篇：獨立寫作

我覺得我不管綜合寫作還是獨立寫作都是一樣的特點，那就是字數(shù)足。綜合寫作要求是185-225，我每次必300+。獨立寫作要求300+我記得考場上我至少寫了500+。

獨立作文：450字以上

第一段陳述你的觀點，支持哪一方；第二、三、四段從三個方面論述你的觀點；最后一段總結一下，綜上所述，某某觀點是正確的。

獨立寫作的八股在于它的題目很固定，OG上給出了那幾百道例題 絕大部分題目是：

**和**相比，你覺得哪個更好/更合理？/你更支持哪個觀點？

一部分題目是：*******，你怎么辦？/你是怎么看的？

而這兩種其實是一種題目。如果題目沒有給你二選一的選項，我們要做的是把它轉化為二選一或者多選一，這么多選項你只要從中挑選一個，然后把這個和其他的相比較這篇文章你就搞定了

除了題目固定之外，寫作的手法同樣很固定。其實大家只要熟讀范文100篇，不會背書也能寫。具體的方法就是在論壇找到那誰誰誰的185篇滿分作文，挑選其中你覺得寫的不錯的把其中鋪墊的句型，轉換詞挑出來，背一背，背多了你會發(fā)現(xiàn)所有的滿分作文其實是一個套路出來的流水線作品（除極少數(shù)作文）。流水線作文誰不會寫呢？那滿分作文其實很簡單的！