第一篇：2012年北京卷高考英語滿分作文

第一節 情景作文（20分）

假設你是紅星中學高三（1）班的學生李華，校報英文版正在開展“續寫雷鋒日記”活動。請根據以下四幅圖的先后順序，將你所做的一件好事以日記形式記述下來，向校報投稿。

注意：1.日記的開頭已為你寫好。

2.詞數不少于60。

Saturday, June 2 Fine This morning, I walked on the street.Suddenly, I caught sight of two travelers, who seemed to lose their way.The man, wearing a pair of sun glasses and with a big bag on his back, studied a map carefully, while the woman beside him talked to him, looking around for the road.It was obvious that they got lost.Therefore, I came quickly towards them and asked: “Excuse me!Can I help you?” They smiled at me with gratitude and explained that they planned to go to the Tiananmen Square but could not find the way.Then, I led them to the nearby bus stop and advised them to take No.20 bus.After a while, the bus arrived and they got on the bus, waving at me and saying: “It’s so kind of you!Thank you for your kind help!”

第二篇：2014年高考英語滿分作文●北京卷

2014年高考英語滿分作文●北京卷

2014年高考英語滿分作文北京卷第一節(15分)【作文題目】你給英國朋友Chris寫一封信，內容包括：1.你們原計劃7月份一同去云南旅游；2.由于腳部受傷，你無法按原計劃前往；3.表達你的歉意并建議將旅行推遲到8月份。注意： 1.詞數不少于50。2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。3.開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。范文：Dear Chris,How is it going?I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July.But now, because my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned.I’m sorry about it.Can I suggest that we put it off until early August? I wish you could understand.I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours,Joe 譯文：克里斯，你好？你最近好嗎？我記得我們曾計劃在七月訪問云南。但現在，因為我的左腳受傷了，我不能按計劃和你一起去了。我對此感到很抱歉。我能建議我們把計劃推遲到8月初嗎？我希望你能理解。我期待著盡快收到你的來信。此致喬第一二節(20分)【作文題目】假設你是紅星中學高三（1）班的學生李華，請根據以下四幅圖的先后順序，為校刊“英語園地”寫一篇短文，記述你和同學們向學校提建議，解決自行車存放問題的過程。

注意：1.詞數不少于 60.2.短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。范文：There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school.I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked.So my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report.Then we went to meet the school master in his office and gave the report to him.He accepted our suggestions.Soon afterwards, a second entrance was opened to the parking place.Now it is easy to park our bikes there.譯文：我們學校自行車停放處有一個問題。我注意到入口很小，幾乎被堵住了。所以，我和我的同學進行了討論，寫了一份報告。然后我們去校長辦公室見校長，將報告交給了他。他接受了我們的建議。不久之后，第二個停車場的入口開啟了。現在我們能很容易的把自行車停放在那里了。

第三篇：2006高考英語滿分作文北京卷

北京卷

[作文真題]

第一節：情景作文

國際文化交流中心將組織一次由各國學生參加的“和平·友誼”夏令營活動，要求報名者提交英文個人簡介。假設你是王姍，請根據下列信息寫一篇個人簡介。┏━━━━┳━━━┳━━━┳━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━┓ ┃姓名┃王姍┃性別┃女┃ ┣━━━━╋━━━╋━━━╋━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━┫ ┃年齡┃16歲┃學校┃北京陽光中學┃ ┣━━━━╋━━━┻━━━┻━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━┫ ┃┃愛好音樂、攝影；善于與人交流，樂于助人；熱愛自然，熱愛和平。┃ ┃其他┃┃ ┃┃參加夏令營的目的：結交朋友，了解外國文化┃ ┗━━━━┻━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━┛注意：(1)詞數不少于60。(2)可根據內容要點適當增加細節，以使行文連 貫.COMPOSITION ONE

I am a 16-year-old girl by the name of Wang Shah．and I’m currently studying in Beijing Sunshine Middle School．

My interests include music，photography，and I believe that communication is the most essential skill and have developed a liking for communication skills．My biggest strength is my ability to communicate with others，and I can speak both Chinese and English fluently and am good at speaking even with those who are shy and withdrawn．

I look forward to a world of beautiful nature and peace，and I think the most meaningful topic in the world will be War，and dealing with racial discrimination，starvation and protecting the environment．

My aim for this year’s summer camp is to make friends and learn more about foreign culture and customs．I wish to be reviewed for acceptance

to this year’s summer camp based on my motivation，skills and personality．Thanks，Wang Shan

COMPOSITION TWO

Hello，My name is Wang Shan and I’m a 16-year-old girl studying at Beijing Sunshine Middle School．

I’m fond of music and taking photos and I think I have a great talent for both．I have recently joined a digital video competition and won the prize for the first place．

I like to make friends with other people who are outgoing，as I myself am very out．

going．I am glad to socialize as well as help others．

I often spend my free time hiking，or exploring to have a better understanding of the

peaceful and natural surrounding in which I live．wish to attend the summer camps to make friends and increase my knowledge in foreign culture and customs．

Thank you．

Wang Shan

COMPOSITION THREE

My name is Wang Shan．I’m a girl of 16, currently studying at Beijing Sunshine Middle schoo1.I’m so excited to heal about the summer camp．and I'd like to offer my introduction as an application to be invited to attend．

I’m happy to hear that this year’s camp will be attended by many students from all over the world，and hosted by the International Culture Exchange Centre．My interests are in photography and music，as well as learning about and understanding foreign customs and culture，and I think this camp is suited for a person just like me．

I think joining this summer’s camp will be a great place to make friends and gain much knowledge about foreign customs and culture，and I hope you can consider me for an invitation to attend．

Yours truly，Wang Shan

COMPOSITION FOUR

Hi，I'm Wang Shan，a 16-year-old girl．studying in the Sunshine Middle School in Beijing．Having many hobbies--which include a love of music，and photography--makes me a very outgoing and likable girl．

My interest in taking photos comes from my love of peace，and nature．Because I find that the wonders and mysteries in nature appeal to me，I like to record them in photos．The generosity of nature allows me to grasp the meanings of peace and love and find greater understanding in life．

I’m experienced with communication with others and take great pleasure in helping others as well，and I hope to be considered to be an attendee at this year’s summer camp hosted by the International Culture Exchange Center，and in this way，I Can improve my knowledge of foreign culture and customs．

Sincerely，Wang Shan COMPOSITION FIVE

My name is Wang Shan and I’m a student who presently studies at Beijing Sunshine Middle School．My interests include music，because it Can help me to relax，and photography；so I can record all of the beautiful moments in my life．

I’m very outgoing and find it very easy to make new friends．who I am always willing to help out in their times of need．My goals in life are to promote peace and the love of nature．

I’d like to join the“Peace--Friendship Summer Camp”．because it can give me some great opportunities to make friends and learn much about foreign culture and customs．

Yours truly，Wang Shan

[作文真題]

第二節：開放作文

請根據下面提示，寫一篇短文。詞數不少于50。

You and your Australian friend Jim are visiting a city in China where you see the street sculptures as shown on the right．You and Jim are discussing what the artist is trying to say．Now you are telling Jim how you understand this piece of art and what makes you think so．提示詞：雕塑sculpture筆記本電腦laptop

COMPOSITION ONE

Upon viewing a sculpture within my city，I noticed upon first sight how interesting it really is．It doesn’t take long before I understand the importance that the sculptor may have had in mind．There is a man in old fashioned dress，staring curiously upon a young，fashionably dressed woman working furiously away on a laptop．

We can guess that the old man may be wondering what this small black item is，while the young lady continues to work skillfully away．This is a visible contrast between two very different periods in our history but so closely understood．

We should not forget the history and culture of our country，but we should make great efforts to move with the fast changes happening around us within our society．Only by continuing to learn of our rich history，while moving forward and understanding what is to come．can we continue to be a successful country．

COMPOSITION TWO

While viewing a sculpture recently，I wanted to tell people what I thought this sculptor may have been trying to tell us．My view of this sculpture is that it tells US of the long

history of the city in which it is located，and the open mind spirit that lives among its people．

I believe that the young woman with the laptop represents the modem and fashionable culture，while the old man wearing fashion from the Qing dynasty represents the history，culture and style that have lived within the city．

Despite being ancient or modern，this sculpture shares with us the fact that our city has both a long history，and，while keeping with the history and culture，has adapted to the change of pace and modern ideas within a modern society．

COMPOSITION THREE

While looking at a sculpture in my city recently，I tried to have a better understanding of what the artist may have been trying to say．I believe the artist is trying to represent the ground shaking changes that are happening daily within our cities around the world．Portrayed in the sculpture is an old man，wearing clothes that are long out of style，representing the many residents from older generations．

The old man is concentrating on a young，fashionable woman，who is skillfully typing away on a laptop．The older man looks on with great curiosity．It seems as though he is trying to understand what the young woman is doing，as he has never seen a laptop computer before．

While the young woman continues to work skillfully，the man peers on．I feel the artist must be trying to represent the rapid change in culture from generation to generation．It shows that we as a people are willing to embrace change with curiosity and open arms and minds．

COMPOSITION FOUR

Last week，my Australian friend Jim and 1 were visiting the downtown shopping district when a sculpture drew our attention．The sculpture was showing a young woman surfing the Internet on a laptop and an elder man watching carefully．While the young woman was fashionably dressed，the elder man was dressed in an older fashion．

I wondered to myself what the elder man’s facial expression was trying to portray．Was it curiosity．．．?Surprise．．．? Suspicion．．．?

I guessed that it must have been curiosity．While the old man didn’t know what the laptop may have been，the young woman was using it skillfully．Is it possible the artist was trying to allow as to reflect up on the rapid changes within our society and the differences between the old and the young?

COMPOSITION FIVE

Jim，in my opinion of the sculpture you have shown me．the artist wants to tell us about the importance of both modem and traditional culture．Let’s look at the whole sculpture.A modern，fashionable woman with a laptop；and an older，solemn gentleman who appears to be a scholar from Qing dynasty．

This represents the popularity of traditional culture．mixed with the fast pace of our development as a society．An understanding of the changes happening in our culture and society is just as important as an understanding of our past history．

As we know，the cultures and traditions of Our past are a precious treasure．“When a country’s culture is alive．the country is alive．”we can hear people speak．Everyone should succeed in their present time，while doing their best to keep their past history alive．

[附：北京卷標準樣文]

第一節：情景作文

I’m Wang Shan，a girl of sixteen，presently，attending Beijing Yangguang Middle school．I like music．especially classical music．I’m also interested in photography because it allows me to record the beautiful moments in my life．Through my hobbies．I’ve made many friends．In fact．I like meeting new people and enjoy talking with them．Believing we all need help from each other，I appreciate friends’help，and I’m willing to help anyone in need．

I love life；I love Mother Nature；and I love peace．I hate any form of violence． I would like to join the Peace ＆ Friendship Summer Camp since it would be a great opportunity to make friends with young people from different countries and learn about

their cultures．

第二節：開放作文

I think the artist wants to show changes in the city．The man stands for the old generation in China：he is wearing old—fashioned clothes that date back to the beginning of the twentieth century；he is looking at the laptop in great curiosity，unable to figure out what it is．The girl，on the other hand，is totally different；she has long hair，and wears a fashionable short skirt．While the man doesn’t know anything about the laptop．she plays with it skillfully．The striking differences between the two show rapid changes in people’s life in China．

第四篇：2016高考滿分作文(北京卷)[范文模版]

2016高考滿分作文（北京卷）

【真題再現】

北京卷：老腔、神奇的書簽 作文題：

1、《白鹿原上奏響一支老腔》記述老腔的演出每每“撼人肺腑”，令人有一種“酣暢淋漓”的感覺。某種意義上，老腔已超越了其藝術形式本身，成為了一種象征。請以“‘老腔’何以令人震撼”為題，寫一篇議論文。要求：從老腔的魅力說開去，不局限于陳忠實散文的內容，觀點明確，論據充分，論證合理。

2、書簽，與書為伴，形式多樣。設想你有這樣一枚神奇的書簽，它能與你交流，還能助你實現讀書的愿望??你與它之間會發生什么故事呢？ 請展開想象，以“神奇的書簽”為題，寫一篇記敘文。要求：表現愛讀書、讀好書的主題；有細節，有描寫。

【滿分佳作1】

“老腔”何以令人震撼

北京一考生

猴年的春晚，我聽到一聲之前從沒有聽過的曲子“老腔”——那黃土地黑皮膚鑼鼓喧天吼聲震顫八百里山川河岳的歌！

我愿意把它令人震撼的力量歸結為一個詞——接地氣！

“老腔”不是曲高和寡的陽春白雪，它不適合淺斟吟唱。很簡單，在大西北粗礪的風沙中，陽春白雪扎不下根來，淺斟吟唱傳不到遠處，它吼出的是底層草根心里的吶喊，它體現的是生民發展的原生態艱難歲月。

“老腔”牽系著那么多，承載著那么多——俗稱之為民俗，雅稱之為文化！它有令人震撼的力量，因為它的真實，它的本色，它的溫情，也因為它深深扎根于這片熱土的執著——它榮，他們榮；它辱，他們辱；它興，他們興；它衰，他們衰！

陳道明曾在一次電視節目上發飆，幾十個來自山西稷山的農村孩子表演了一出高臺花鼓，滿堂喝彩，卻被幾位評委貶低得一無是處。陳道明怒斥：你們對傳統文化毫無理解，居然就直接否定了這個節目。你們可能讀過不少書，有很高的知識水平，但對中國傳統文化和農耕文明卻知之甚少、理解不了??

震撼，真的不在于文化程度有多高，無所謂見識有多廣，而在于能不能放棄那種矯揉造作的勢態，以赤子之心感受到一種發自心底的沖動與虔誠。老腔、秦腔、花鼓的傳承者們，骨子里就是一種這樣動人的虔誠。只是我們誤解了這種虔誠，甚至蔑視地稱它為“愚昧”。

于是我們看到令人落淚的一幕——

義務宣發方負責人方勵現身某直播平臺用下跪、磕頭的極端方式，懇求全國院線經理為《百鳥朝鳳》增加排片！《百鳥朝鳳》僅僅是吹嗩吶嗎？錯，它堅守的是在東西方文化八面來風中，可貴的文化自覺和文化定力；它表達的是對中國優秀傳統文化的認識和傳承，以及對現實中普通人的細致關懷??

中華大地，沉默無言，山重水復，莽莽蒼蒼，它的激情，只為生于斯長于斯逝于斯的人而奔瀉，而我們的文化便被這種奔瀉所裹卷，吞吐千年，涵納古今！

為什么我的眼里常含淚水？因為我對這土地愛得深沉。期待如“老腔”般的傳統藝術能更多地走進人們的視野，老腔變紅腔！

【名師點評】 這是一篇考場佳作。本文以立論深刻、流暢自然、層層深入而被閱卷組評為一類卷。具體特點如下：

1.文思泉涌，立意高卓。作者的思維與情感應問而筆尖舞動，直擊要害，一針見血地指出，“它令人震撼的力量”在于“接地氣”。深刻地揭示出老腔粗獷個性的根源在于大西北這一片粗獷的熱土。

2.底蘊深厚，自成一格。作者的筆觸并不停滯于對老腔的感悟，而是把老腔擴展到“秦腔、花鼓”等傳統的接地氣的藝術唱腔形式；作者又對以“老腔”為代表的中華民間傳統藝術演唱形式所遭遇的逼仄與尷尬處境給予揭示與評價，體現作者對老腔的歷史文化價值的理解、憂思和贊美。

3.層層深入，引人思考。全文層層深入，思緒縱橫，開闔自如，力透紙背，激情磅礴，在感人肺腑的同時，帶給讀者深刻的思考和啟迪。

成功公式：立意高卓+底蘊深厚

【滿分佳作2】

神奇的書簽

北京一考生

我，是一枚書簽，一枚神奇的書簽。由竹子切下雕成，也透著修竹獨有的芬芳。或許是在油墨中浸潤了太久的緣故，將我拿在手中的人總會不由自主地靜心，將身心托付在書中。

初來世間，我毛刺未脫。扎手的身體被放入一本《海國圖志》中。我什么都不懂但卻隱約感到從手上傳來的炙熱。天演論、沉淪、彷徨、家春秋??漸漸地我身上的毛刺被磨滅，我越發的看清了這布滿硝煙的天空，看清了那雙燃燒著希望的雙瞳。一個時代下，一個民族在屈辱中守護著千年文明奮身站起的形象印在了我的身上。

時光流轉，清風吹散了烽火，漸漸一股如早春的復蘇氣息盈溢在空氣里。我又被夾在了一些新朋友中。《邊城》里溫潤的鄉土氣；《平凡的世界》里充斥的倔強感；《繁花》里飄逸的落寞情。王小波、王火、畢飛宇、北島??這些名字帶著這個時代獨有的奔放與內斂、激昂與沉思填滿了我的又一份記憶。在那陣狼藉席卷過后殘存的剛強，挾裹著年輕與朝氣，染就了人們的心魄。晨光之中我甘做橋梁，在字與心之間勾勒了一份安逸，一份靜謐。

曾經迷蒙幽邃的天空，慢慢被燈光照亮；曾經清新沁心的空氣，慢慢紛揚了塵土；曾經靜謐安寧的世間，慢慢被噪音不留空隙的填滿。時光荏苒，我竟是再也抓不住人心，再也看不清人們的瞳孔。書頁越發的白了，越發的軟而光滑，我掙扎著不閉上雙眼，卻抵不過外邊的黑暗——我罕見天日。我被長久的夾在一本雜志里，只能透過縫隙看見人們的目光，流連在刺眼的屏幕上。手，緊緊地握著冰涼的手機。他們越發的孤獨，蜷縮在心中黑暗的角落里，瑟瑟發抖。

長久地等待，長久地窺視，我終于看懂了人們的心，他們在年華中遺失了曾經的記憶，迷茫在無知的昏暗中。他們狡辯說他們可以看手機中的文字，卻不懂得我較之他們更多了一份溫度，多了一份記憶。多了風花雪月之外的家國天下，紙醉金迷之外的微言大義，醉生夢死之外的血氣方剛。正因為他們缺失了對這個悠久文明的曾經苦難心酸的體察，才有悵惘與迷茫??

我，是一名考生，一名普通的考生。書簽為我講述了它非凡的經歷，渴望并向往著將一份人文記錄、流傳。我想，這就是我在這個時代的使命與光榮。

【名師點評】

這是一篇考場佳作。本文以角度新穎、啟示深刻、結構嚴謹而被閱卷組評為一類卷。具體特點如下：

1．角度新穎，條理清晰。本文以“神奇的書簽”的視角，縱觀歷史的變遷，用簡潔凝練并富有文學性的語言，截取三個歷史節點，為我們清晰地勾勒出文化發展的脈絡，結尾結合實際點題升華，結構嚴謹。

2．緊扣現實，啟示深刻。本文作者沒有僅僅停留在書簽的暢游上，在敘述中緊密聯系現實，深刻地折射出在當代快節奏的生活下，人們對閱讀的忽視。立意深刻，具有較強的思辨性和時代性。

3．內容充實，底蘊深厚。本文內容豐富，字里行間盡顯文化底蘊，考生在有限的考試時間內，涉及到的作家作品多達十幾處，足見平日書香浸潤，功力十足。

成功公式：角度新穎+啟示深刻

第五篇：2012北京高考英語滿分作文

2012北京高考英語滿分作文

This morning, I was jogging along the road near my neighborhood when I came across a foreign couple with a city map.Confusion was clear on their face and immediately it dawned on me that they must have been lost.Without hesitation, I walked up to them and offered to help.Thankfully, my English was fluent enough to make myself understood.They smiled in relief and said they wanted to visit the Heaven Temple but failed to locate it in the map.Quickly, I pointed it out on the map and showed them the direction as well.Worried by the thought that they might again get lost on their way, I walked them to a nearby bus stop so that they could arrive there without trouble.After a while, the bus No.20 pulled at the stop which would take them to the Heaven Temple.Upon leaving, the couple thanked me warmly again, expressing their appreciation for my kind help.Seeing the No.20 Bus disappearing into the distance, a sense of delight filled my heart.It made me so happy and proud to offer others in need a helping hand, and in this case, I was also able to show foreigners how friendly the city of Beijing was.(208 words)20分

As we can see in the picture, a half-new pencil is laughing at an aged pencil whose eyebrows are snow-white.The “young” pencil is thinking “you are nearing the end.” However, the old pencil, which is almost end up, is not being pitiful or regretful for the fact that he is nearing the end of his life.With all the years spent in arduous paper work, he is not leaving this world with nothing to be remembered.I believe it is likewise when it comes to life.What young people have is a long future.But that is not to say we teenagers are qualified to tease at the old.Old people are to be respected, not because of that simple fact that they have lived for so long, but to show some esteem to the fact that they have devoted all the years of diligence and concentration to their occupation and thus, to our society.Old people are once young kids.We are all, sooner or later to become what we now tease at.Why can’t we show our love to them and make the world a better place to live in?

I hope all of us can have a content smile to ourselves when our lives are nearing the end and, young as we are, we can love the old to build a harmonious society from now on.(230)15分