第一篇：-2010考研英語強化寫作講義
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2010考研英語強化寫作講義
主講：王江濤
第一節 考研寫作總論
一、課程安排：
1、考研寫作總論：復習計劃、時間分配、寫作學習、大綱解讀
2、段落寫作：框架結構、啟承轉合、段落寫作經典范文
3、圖畫作文：
4、詞匯寫作、句子寫作
5、應用文：書信、備忘錄、報告、摘要、告示
二、復習計劃：
1、攻克詞匯：
1）詞匯書：
2）軟件：《新東方背單詞》（5）
3）記憶法：blog.sina.com.cn/jtwang分類：考研復習：十天攻克考研詞匯
2、精研真題：96-09共14年真題 1）詞匯： 2）選項： 3）句子結構：
4）背誦：閱讀A節經典文章 5）英譯漢：閱讀A節、C節經典文章 6）寫作真題：
3、適當模考：2010年1月
三、時間分配：
1）14：00－14：15 寫作A節
2）14：15－14：50 寫作B節
3）14：50－16：00 閱讀A節
4）16：00－16：20 閱讀B節
5）16：20－16：40 閱讀C節
6）16：40－17：00 完型填空
四、寫作學習：
（一）提高實力：
1、中譯英：仔細對比原文，尋找差距
2、背誦：滾瓜爛熟、脫口而出、多多益善
3、默寫：仔細對比原文，發現寫作弱點
4、仿寫：
（二）掌握技巧：萬能框架 附：20大必背范文：
（一）小作文：
1、新版考研寫作教材（09年6月版，下同）P.3 最新考研英語大綱樣題
2、P.5 2005年高分作文
3、P.5 2006年高分作文
4、P.6 2007年高分作文 5、2008年范文：題目見P.6 1
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Dear Bob，I’m writing to apologize for having forgotten to return the “the Beatles” CD to you when I left Canada.I was in such a hurry that I packed everything in my luggage without checking carefully.Had I paid more attention then, I wouldn’t have made such a stupid mistake.Now something must be done to solve the problem because I understand you cherish the CD enormously.I can either send it to you by express mail or alternatively compensate you at a reasonable price.If you do not mind, I may bring it back to you next time I go to Canada.Please let me know which solution you prefer at your earliest convenience.I really hope you will accept my sincere apology.Faithfully yours，Li Ming
6、P.7 2009年范文 Dear Editors, I have been reading your newspaper for many years with a great enthusiasm and interest.It is my view that limiting/prohibiting the use of disposable plastic bags is of utmost significance.To crack this hard nut, I would like to give/offer/render/propose several useful/practical recommendations as follows.First and foremost, it is imperative for us to ban the free use of disposable plastic bags.In addition, we should develop possible alternative forms to replace them, such as paper or clothing bags.Last but not least, plastic bags should be offered in a much higher price in department stores or supermarkets.I hope you would find the above proposals conducive and I would like to discuss this matter to further details.Your prompt attention to my suggestions would be highly appreciated.Yours sincerely，Li Ming
7、Directions:
You live in a room in college which you share with another student.You find it very difficult to work there because your roommate always has friends visiting and has parties in the room.Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term.You would prefer a single room.Explain your reasons.Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express/air dissatisfaction/disappointment/concern regarding accommodation.I would prefer to move into a single room next semester, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate’s inconsiderate behavior.For one thing, his friends are constantly visiting him;for another, he regularly holds noisy parties.To solve this problem/surmount this difficulty/improve this situation/crack this hard nut, I hope to draw the attention of the authorities concerned.I am sure you will agree that the only solution for me is to move into a room of my own.Therefore, I would be grateful if you could find a single room for me, preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible.Yours sincerely, Li Ming 8.Directions:
One of your friends wants to apply for a job working with foreign teenagers.Write a letter to recommend him/her, describe his/her past experience, and explain the reasons.2010考研英語強化寫作講義Page 3 3/25/2013
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to recommend one of my best friends, Zhou Botong, for this post.With his outstanding leadership and cheerful personality, he was elected chairperson of the Student Union of Tsinghua University several times.Busy as he was, he completed his major, teenage psychology, with an outstanding school record.Upon graduation he was assigned to be a teacher in Tsinghua Middle School.What is more, he loves his job and enjoys working with children.This won him great popularity among his students.Therefore, I do not hesitate to recommend him as an ideal candidate for the post you advertised.I am sure you will make a wise decision in hiring him.Yours sincerely，Li Ming 9.Directions: After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by Mr.Shakespeare.Write a special letter to express your thanks.Dear Mr.Shakespeare, I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude.I am referring to that unfortunate accident the other day, when I was knocked off my bike by a taxi.If it had not been for your timely assistance in giving me first aid, I fear that the consequences might have been much serious.Everyone agrees that it was your quick-witted response in that emergency that has led to this satisfactory outcome.Although nowadays people in mounting numbers talk about the need to be unselfish, we see very few people practice what they preach.If there were more people like you, this world would be a much nicer place.Yours sincerely, Li Ming
10、Directions:
The Students’ Union of your department is planning a Chinese Speaking Contest.Write an announcement which covers the following information:
1)the purpose of the contest，2)time and place of the contest，3)what is required of the candidates，4)details of the judges and awards.You should write about 100 words.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use Department of Chinese Language and Literature at the end of the announcement.Chinese Speaking Contest
January 10, 2009 To improve students’ ability to speak Chinese and enrich after-class activities, the Students’ Union of Department of Chinese Language and Literature is organizing a school-wide Chinese-speaking contest to be held on Saturday next week(17 January)at the Students’ Auditorium.Those who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before Tuesday next week.Five professors will be invited to be judges.The first six winners will be given awards.Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest.The Students’ Union
Department of Chinese Language and Literature
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1、尊敬的先生或女士：
我寫信是為了詢問關于雅思考試的考試準備資料的信息。
我想知道您是否有一本包括雅思考試所需詞匯的詞匯書，以及有答案和范文的歷年試卷。其次，我應該如何付款——通過現金、支票還是其他任何方式？如果可能的話，我想使用信用卡。最后，這些書如何送來，我大約什么時間可以收到？如果額外費用不多的話，請您最好使用特快郵件。
如果您能盡快答復，我將非常感謝。
您真誠的，李明
2、尊敬的王先生：
十分感激您兩個月之前聘用我為雜志《設計與時尚》的編輯。我非常珍惜這個和您以及其他同事共事的機會。這將是我一生中的難忘經歷。
但是，對于一個喜歡計算機科學遠多于時尚設計的年輕人來說，我認識到目前的工作并不符合我的教育背景與個人能力。因此，我決定辭職，找一份與我從前教育背景相關的工作。
我為離開可能造成的不便深表歉意。
您真誠的，李明
3、尊敬的先生或女士：
希望工程這項高尚的事業感動了我，同時這項工程迄今所取得的成就也鼓舞了我。因此，我想通過給貴省偏遠地區的一個孩子提供經濟幫助，來為希望工程貢獻我的微薄之力。
如果您能幫助我找到一個剛開始上學但家庭無法為其負擔學費的小女孩，我將不勝感激。本人計劃按年度支付她的學費直至她中學畢業。我希望把捐款直接匯給她的家人在當地開設的銀行帳戶中。
您真誠的，李明
4、尊敬的先生/女士：
我是本校的一名學生，常來圖書館度過業余時間。總而言之，您這里提供的服務相當不錯，但我有一些建議希望您采納。如果您能好心考慮我的建議，我將非常感謝。
首先，是否可以請您延長閱讀時間？在白天，大多數學生在上課，來不了圖書館。其次，書架上有些書已經過時了。如果您能好心提供一些例如最新雜志等的書籍，我們將非常感謝。
我確實希望擁有一個更加舒適的圖書館。再次感謝您的時間和關注。
您真誠的，李明
5、親愛的鮑勃：
我寫此信的目的是為了向你道歉。在離開加拿大時，我忘了把那盤披頭士樂隊的CD還給你。走的時候太匆忙了，我把所有東西都塞到行李中，沒有仔細檢查。當時要是多加注意的話，就不會犯這種低級錯誤了。
因為我知道你特別珍愛那盤CD，所以一定要想辦法解決這個問題。我可以寄快遞包裹給你，也可以按合理的價格賠償你的損失。如果你不介意的話，我也可以在下次去加拿大的時候把它給你帶回去。
請在方便的時候盡快讓我知道你傾向哪一種解決方案。希望你能接受我真誠的道歉。
您真誠的，李明
6、尊敬的編輯：
多年來我一直懷著極大的熱情與興趣閱讀貴報。我認為限制使用一次性塑料袋非常重要。
為解決這個難題，我想提出如下幾個實用的建議。首先，我們急需禁止免費使用一次性塑料袋。其次，我們應該開發取代塑料袋的替換方式，如紙袋或布袋。最后，在商場或超市應以更高的價格提供塑料袋。
我希望您覺得上述建議有益，同時希望進一步討論這一問題。十分感謝您對我的建議給予及時的關注。
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您真誠的 李明
7、尊敬的先生或女士：
我寫信是為了表達關于住宿的不滿。由于我發現目前的居住狀況很不方便，我想下學期搬到一個單間。
我需要解釋的是，我不滿的原因是我室友不體諒的行為。首先，他的朋友經常來訪。其次，他經常舉辦一些吵鬧的聚會。
為了解決這個問題，我希望引起有關當局的注意。我相信您也會同意，唯一的解決措施是搬到一個我自己的房間。因此，如果您可以給我找一個最好不在同樓，但離校園越近越好的單間，我將非常感謝。
您真誠的，李明
8、尊敬的先生或女士：
我寫信是為了推薦我最好的一個朋友周伯通申請這個職位。由于擁有杰出的領導能力和令人愉快的個性，他多次當選清華大學學生會主席。
盡管他很忙，但他完成了自己的學業——青少年心理學，并取得了出色的學習成績。畢業之后，他被分配到清華附中做一名教師。此外，他熱愛自己的職業并喜歡和孩子們工作。這使他在學生中很受歡迎。
因此，我毫不猶豫推薦他作為您招聘職位的理想候選人。我確信您將做出雇用他的明智選擇。
您真誠的，李明
9、尊敬的莎士比亞先生：
我寫信是為了表達我衷心的感謝。我指的是那天我被一輛出租車從自行車上撞下來的不幸事件。
如果沒有您給予我的第一手的及時幫助的話，恐怕后果會更嚴重。大家都認為正是您在那個緊急事件中的快速反應才導致了滿意的后果。
盡管現在越來越多的人談論到大公無私的必要性，但是我們看到很少有人言行一致。如果有更多人像您的話，世界會更加美好。
您真誠的，李明
10、中文演講比賽
2009年1月10日
為提高同學們中文演講的能力并豐富課外活動，中文系學生會將于下周六（1月17日）在學生大禮堂組織全校中文演講比賽。有興趣參加的同學請于下周二之前在本班班長處報名。我們將邀請五位教授擔任評委，并將給前六名獲獎者者頒獎。歡迎大家積極參加。
中文系學生會
（二）大作文
1.98年范文：考題見教材16頁
The past several years have witnessed a phenomenon that a variety of promises have been arising from all walks of life.Regretfully, quite a lot of promises are sheer nonsense, just as the hen in the given cartoon commits herself to lay eggs which are round without any angles and corners and have shells, egg whites and yolks.Odd and funny as they sound, such false promises can be seen and heard everywhere in our country.Administration departments assure to perform their tasks effectively and fairly without taking any bribes;manufacturing units guarantee to turn out products of good quality;commercial enterprises swear to provide genuine commodities and polite and enthusiastic services.Can you find anything new and substantial other than their obligations, duties and jobs in these so called promises? I guess your answer will be negative.As a matter of fact, their intention to make such commitments is nothing but to put on civilized outer clothing to please or deceive the public.I dare say that our society is suffering corruption and cheat which are causing damage to society both materially and 5
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morally.But the hen and her like should know that by dishonest words no one can survive the intense competition under market economy system.They should remember the old saying, “Honesty is the best policy”.2.01年范文：考題見教材18頁
When we use the word “love”, we do not simply mean an attraction to a person of the opposite sex, which is a very narrow definition of the word.The picture below illustrates the real meaning of love, by stressing the fact that love is emotional strength, which can support us no matter how dark the world around us becomes.As a matter of fact, throughout history people of many different cultures have regarded love as the most sublime of human emotions.As an illustration of the power of love, we should remember how the Chinese people of all nationalities respond to the call to help the victims of the deadly earthquake in Sichuan Province.Although their incomes are still low by international standards, people all over the country do not hesitate to donate whatever they can——be it money or goods——to help their needy fellow citizens.Furthermore, they do this with no thought of gain for themselves.It is my view that the best way to show love is to help people who are more unfortunate than we are.We should always be ready to give a helping hand to those who are in trouble, no matter whether they are family members or complete strangers.Only by doing so can we help to make the world a better place, for, as the picture shows, the darker the shadows of sorrow become, the more brightly the lamp of love shines.3.02范文：考題見教材18頁
The picture vividly depicts a lovely American girl in traditional Chinese costume with a sweet smile on her face.She wears ribbons, necklaces and other accessories that are characteristic of the clothes of a certain Chinese minority group.Undoubtedly, the costume has added oriental charm/glamour to her beautiful look/appearance/features.What the picture conveys goes far beyond only/merely a new fashion trend.Instead, it carries cultural meanings/implications as well.The fact that people from different countries are attracted to mysterious Chinese culture indicates that to some extent a culture can be accepted, respected, appreciated and shared internationally.In other words, a nation’s unique/distinctive culture can become international through worldwide economic and cultural exchanges.Since the trend of globalization become irresistible, the increasing cultural exchanges can effectively improve mutual understanding and friendship.It is my view that national culture as priceless spiritual treasure should be preserved and cherished.Meanwhile, there are good reasons to advocate international culture for those ideas from the other cultures, controversial or even absurd at first sight, can provide a different perspective for us to observe the world in the long run.Nevertheless, when we are confronted with a different culture, we should be sensible enough to absorb its essence and to resist its dark side.Only in this way can we promote cultural development positively and make our world dimensional, colorful and vigorous.4.03年范文：考題見教材19頁
The set of drawings above vividly depicts the destiny of a flower in different circumstances.As is shown in the first cartoon, the flower is placed in a comfortable greenhouse that shelters it from the threatening lightning and storm.With proper temperature, moisture and fertilizer, the flower is growing in full bloom.On the contrary, when removed from the greenhouse and exposed to the driving rain, the flower soon fades and withers, with the petals scattered on the ground.To begin with, the purpose of the drawings is to show us that the flower growing in the green house cannot withstand the test of the storm, yet the symbolic meanings subtly conveyed should be taken more seriously.The delicate flower is naturally associated with young people, to be specific, the only children in our current society;the greenhouse epitomizes parents’ doting care and abundant material supplies that can shield the children from the storms, or the harsh reality.Once the young people begin to seek independence and accept challenges from the real world, they are found too spoiled to be strong enough in the face of difficulties.Accordingly, it is vital for us to derive positive implications from these thought-provoking drawings.On the one hand, we can frequently use them to enlighten the youth to be more independent in life.On the other hand, parents should be sensible enough to give their children more freedom to deal with troubles and problems.Only by undergoing more challenges and toils in adversity can young people cultivate strong personality and ability, and only in this way can they become winners in this competitive world.5.06年范文：考題見教材20頁
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As is vividly depicted in the photos above, Beckham, the smart British football superstar, is enjoying a striking popularity among the adolescents.In the first picture, Beckham’s name appears on a young man’s face.The caption indicates that worship for the idol is written on the face.In the second photo, another young man is doing Beckham’s chic hairstyle in a barbershop.We are informed that he is spending 300 yuan imitating his idol’s haircut.Undoubtedly, the pictures have subtly reflected the social phenomenon that idol worship is prevalent among the teenagers nowadays.Beckham represents the image of sport hero whose handsome appearance and unparalleled football skills are passionately adored by all the sports fans.Likewise, several teenage girls won their fame overnight in The 2005 Super Girl Contest in China, which provoked nationwide noisy debates on the value and harm of admiring these idols.Briefly speaking, young people are inclined to idolize the people who excel in appearance, intelligence or talent.Hence, idolatry, the thought-provoking social phenomenon, is a double-edged sword which can exert profound influence on the growth of young people.If we simply worship the idols by imitating their hairstyles or pursuing fashions unreasonably, the obsession will certainly waste us a great deal of money or time, endangering the efficiency of our work.On the contrary, we will lead a positive and fruitful life if we endeavor to improve ourselves by bridging the gap between our models and us.Accordingly, the latter attitude should be adopted to direct our way of life.6.08年范文：教材43頁 7.09年范文：考題見教材22頁
As is symbolically illustrated in the cartoon, a large number of people are surfing on line within a stretching spider web, either to entertain themselves or to meet the work's needs.Unfortunately, it seems rather ironic to present people separated from each other by the spider web when they attempt to communicate.Undoubtedly, the spider web serves as a symbol of Internet, both connecting people and isolating them from each other.The metaphorical and impressive portrayal has subtly revealed the duality of the relationship between man and Internet.On the one hand, there is no denying that Internet is currently one of the most efficient media used for interpersonal communication.As a college student, I get on line every day to discuss news with other people on BBS, to study English by registering for web courses, to chat freely through MSN Messenger with my friends.But on the other hand, a good many people admit that they are too much addicted to Internet to maintain face-to-face contact with their friends and colleagues.Once indulged in the fictitious world, people feel reluctant to approach others and to concentrate on real life.That's why some people have lost the skill of direct contact and get alienated from others.Hence, it is necessary for us to use Internet in a reasonable way and restrain from overindulgence.After all, Internet is invented to connect you and me, and to bring conveniences to our life rather than set a barrier to keep people beyond reach.8、教材27頁：2000年高分作文（1）
9、教材40頁：05年高分作文
10、教材42頁：07年高分作文
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1、過去幾年發生了一個現象：各行各業開始出現了各種各樣的承諾。遺憾的是，相當多的承諾純粹只是空話，正如漫畫中的這只母雞一樣，承諾下蛋不見棱見角，并保證有蛋皮、蛋清、蛋黃。
盡管這些承諾聽起來奇怪有趣，但在全國各地都可以看到聽到這樣的虛假承諾。管理部門保證不接受任何賄賂，公正有效地履行指責；生產廠家保證生產高質量產品；商業企業發誓提供真貨和禮貌熱情的服務。在這些所謂的承諾中，除了他們的義務、責任和工作之外，你還能發現任何新的和實質性的東西嗎？我想你的答案將是否定的。事實上，他們做這種承諾的目的只是披上華麗的外衣以便取悅并欺騙公眾。
我認為這個社會正在受到腐敗和欺騙的影響，這在物質和道德上都在對社會造成了傷害。但這只母雞及其同類應該知道：在市場經濟體系的激烈競爭中，沒人能通過欺詐的言語而生存下去。他們應該牢記這條諺語：“誠實為上策”。
2、當我們用到“愛”這個詞時，我們不僅僅指對異性的吸引，這是對這個詞非常狹隘的解釋。下面的圖畫注解了愛的真正含義，它強調了愛心是情感的力量，不論我們周圍的世界多么黑暗，愛心都能支撐我們。事實上，歷史上處于不同文化中的人們 7
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都把愛當作人類最高尚的情感。
舉一個例子證明愛心的力量，我們應該記得中國各族人民如何響應號召去支援四川地震中的受難者。盡管他們的收入按照國際標準衡量還是處于低水平，但是全國人民毫不猶豫地盡他們所能捐獻——不管是錢，還是物品——去幫助那些受難的同胞們。并且，他們這么做不考慮自己的得失。
我認為，表示愛心的最好方式是幫助比我們更加不幸的人。我們應該隨時準備向有困難的人伸出援助之手，無論他們是家庭成員還是素昧平生。這樣，我們能夠助一臂之力把世界變成一個更美好的地方，因為，正如圖畫所描繪的，悲傷的陰影越黑暗，愛心之燈的光芒就越閃亮。
3、這幅圖畫生動描述了一位可愛的美國小女孩身穿傳統的中國服裝，面帶甜蜜的微笑。她戴著具有某個中國少數民族服飾特征的發帶、項鏈和其他裝飾品。毫無疑問，這套服裝為她美麗的外表增添了東方的魅力。
這幅圖畫所表達的遠遠不只是一種新的時尚潮流。反之，它具有文化內涵。神秘的中國文化吸引了各國人民這一事實，顯示了在某種程度上，一種文化可以被國際性地接受、尊重、欣賞和分享。換而言之，一個民族獨特的文化可以通過全球性的經濟和文化交流走向世界。由于全球化潮流不可阻擋，所以文化交流可以有效增進相互間的理解和友誼。
在我看來，我們應該保存和珍惜作為無價精神財富的民族文化。同時，我們很有必要推廣世界文化，因為來自其他文化的觀點，即使乍看起來相互矛盾或荒謬，但從長遠看來，可以為我們觀察這個世界提供一種不同的視角。然而，在我們面臨不同文化時，應該充滿理智地取其精華、去其糟粕。只有這樣我們才能積極發展民族文化，并使我們的世界豐富多元、五顏六色、充滿活力。
4、上述這組圖生動描述了一朵鮮花在不同環境中的命運。如第一幅漫畫所示，這朵鮮花被放在舒適的溫室里，保護它免于可怕的閃電和風雨。擁有合適的溫度、濕度和肥料，鮮花正在充分綻放。相反，當被搬出溫室并暴露在風雨之下時，鮮花很快就凋謝枯萎了，花瓣散落一地。
首先，這些圖畫的目的是告訴我們溫室花朵經不起風雨，然而我們應該認真對待它們所微妙傳達的的象征含義。這朵嬌弱的鮮花自然和我們的年輕人聯系起來，具體而言，就是當代社會的獨生子女。溫室是保護孩子免受風雨的父母溺愛和優越物質條件的縮影，而風雨就是嚴峻的現實。一旦年輕人開始尋求獨立并且接受來自現實世界的挑戰，人們發現他們已經被慣壞了，在困難面前無法足夠堅強。
總之，我們很有必要從這些發人深思的圖畫中得出積極的含義。一方面，我們可以經常利用它們來啟發年輕人在生活中更加獨立。另一方面，父母們應該充滿理智給孩子們更多自由來處理困難和問題。只有經歷更多的挑戰和磨練，年輕人才能培養強大的個性和能力，而且只有這樣他們才能成為這個競爭世界中的強者。
5、以上的照片生動地顯示出來，相貌英俊的英國足球巨星貝克漢姆在年輕人中廣受歡迎。在第一張照片中，貝克漢姆的名字出現在一個年輕人的額頭上。文字表明：對偶像的崇拜寫在了臉上。在第二張照片中，這個年輕人正在理發店中做貝克漢姆的時髦發型。我們得到的信息是他正花300元來模仿偶像的發式。
毫無疑問，照片巧妙地反映了這樣一個社會現象：偶像崇拜目前在青年人中非常盛行。貝克漢姆代表了體育界英雄的形象，他的英俊外表以及高超的球技正是球迷們熱情追捧的。同樣，2005年中國舉辦的“超級女生”大賽中，幾個十幾歲的女孩一夜成名。圍繞著崇拜這些偶像的意義和危害，這個事件激起了全國性的爭論。總之，青年人往往容易崇拜那些在外表、才華和特長方面極其出色的人。
在我看來，偶像崇拜這個發人深思的社會現象，其實是把雙刃劍，可以深刻影響青年人成長。如果我們只是靠模仿偶像發型或追逐時尚的方式來崇拜他們，這種癡迷將必定浪費我們大量的金錢和時間，影響我們的工作效率。相反，如果我們靠彌補我們和榜樣之間的差距來努力提高自己，我們就會過一種積極和收獲顯著的生活。因此，我們應當采取后面一種態度來指引我們的人生。
6、如圖畫中生動所示，盡管每人只有一條腿，但是兩個殘疾人通過團隊合作正在快速奔跑。顯而易見，正是合作才使得他們走南闖北成為可能。
盡管這幅圖畫很簡單，但它向我們表達了發人深思的含義。隨著經濟和社會的發展，競爭日漸激烈。任何人都無法完全獨 8
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立完成一份工作。因此，越來越多的人開始重視團隊合作。事實上，普遍公認合作的能力是想要獲得成功的任何人都應該具備的最重要的素質。
因此，我們迫切需要采取措施來提高人們的合作意識。我們應該牢記合作對于社會和自身都非常重要。每個人都應擁有合作的能力。只有這樣我們才能獲得成功，而且只有這樣社會才能變得更加和諧。
7、這幅漫畫象征性地闡釋了無論是為了自我娛樂還是適應工作的需求，很多人在一個拉伸的蜘蛛網之內網上沖浪。然而，看來相當諷刺的地方是，這幅圖呈現了他們在試圖互相交流的同時，卻被蜘蛛網彼此隔開。毫無疑問，這個蜘蛛網作為互聯網的一種象征，既連接了人們，又使他們彼此隔離。
這幅比喻并使人印象深刻的圖畫象征性揭示了人與互聯網之間的雙重關系。一方面，不可否認網絡目前是用于人際交流的最高效媒介之一。作為一名大學生，我每天上網與他人在BBS上討論新聞，通過注冊網絡課程來學習英語，借助MSN和我的朋友們免費聊天。但另一方面，很多人承認他們太沉迷于網絡而不愿與朋友和同事保持面對面接觸。一旦沉迷于這種虛幻世界，人們不愿接近他人并關注現實生活。這就是一些人喪失了直接溝通技能并與他人疏遠的原因。
因此，我們很有必要以一種合理的方式使用互聯網，避免過度沉迷。畢竟，人們發明互聯網是為了連接你和我，為我們的生活帶來方便，而非設置障礙使人彼此疏遠。
8、如圖所示，我們可以清楚看出隨著商業捕魚的發展，魚的數量明顯下降。在一幅圖中，1900年有很多種魚，只有一艘捕魚船。相反，在1995年，只有一條魚，但是漁船很多。
這些圖畫的目的是告訴我們應該充分重視海洋資源的減少。由于過渡捕撈，魚的數量明顯下降。如果我們讓這種情況聽之任之，我們不知道魚的未來在哪。到那個時候，我們的環境將遭受巨大的破壞。
因此，我們很有必要采取嚴厲措施。一方面，我們應該呼吁政府制定嚴格的法律控制商業捕魚。另一方面，我們應該提高人們的意識：海洋資源對我們非常重要。只有這樣才能保護我們的海洋資源。同時，我認為我們人類能夠克服這個困難，并將擁有美好的未來。
9、這幅圖畫反映了一些中國家庭中普遍存在的現象——子女成年后如何對待他們的父母。當父母年齡太大，不能照顧自己的時候，他們就成了負擔，被自己的子女們像足球一樣踢來踢去。這是一種不公正的可鄙現象，引起了很多中國人的憤慨。
作為一個以很多美德聞名于世的民族，中國人民自古以來一直奉行孝道。許多廣為傳頌的故事反復強調了這種歷史悠久的愛老敬老的傳統，如西漢時緹縈舍身營救蒙冤的父親免于肉刑的故事。
那些千方百計逃避照顧雙親的責任的子女們應該牢記，他們在出生和成長的過程中虧欠父母太多了。沒有父母關懷備至的照料和不懈的工作，他們怎能健康成長并且取得成功？他們怎能虐待父母而不受到良心的譴責？
我們每個人都應該遵守從祖先那里傳承下來的美德。只有這樣我們才能無愧為中國人。
10、如圖所示，一場足球賽正在進行。左邊的人似乎在守一個對于射門輕而易舉、不可避免的“大門”，而右邊的人由于擁有關于“巨大守門員”的幻覺，踢球很猶豫。顯而易見，他們兩個人都夸大了面前的困難。
這幅圖畫確實反映了一個目前在中國很普遍同時發人深思的社會現象。由于問題超出他們應對的能力，年輕人總是放棄。表面上看，這幅圖畫似乎有一些道理，但當我們仔細思考時，我們就會發現在這個現象之下有一個明顯的趨勢：缺乏自信。首先，眾所周知，我們生活在一個充滿各種困難的多元化世界。我們別無選擇，只能面對。其次，態度是采取第一步的關鍵。擁有勇氣和信心來解決問題，你就會發現問題并非你想象的那么“嚴重”。以我們自己為例，研究生入學考試似乎是我們面前的一個可怕的怪物。有些人放棄了，而有些人則堅持了下來。因此，擁有信心和對困難的正確估計，并且竭盡全力，我們就將解決所有的問題。
總而言之，我認為我們年輕人應該以正確的方式面對困難。世上無難事，只怕有心人。
五、大綱解讀：兩大黃金原則（大綱見新教材PP.1-2）
1.2.印象原則：書寫工整、卷面整潔、字跡清晰 語言第一位、結構第二位、內容第三位
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1）語言：
（1）基本正確（2）豐富多變 2）結構：邏輯性
（1）段落結構：總分總
A.主題句：1句 B.描述或論證：2-3句 C.（小結：1句）
（2）評分標準：
A.關聯詞 B.同義替換 C.代詞替換
3）內容：不跑題
第二節 段落寫作
一、考研論說文框架結構：3段，12句，160－200詞，5－7個關聯詞，5－7個從句
（一）第一段：引言/起始/淘金段，圖畫描述，3句
1、總體描述：人物/動物/事物＋動作＋環境，1句
2、挖掘細節詞、串連成句：1－2句
3、文字說明/象征寓意：1句
（二）第二段：主體段，意義闡釋，5句
1、主題句：象征寓意，1句
2、論證：3句
1）因果論證：2007年考題見教材P.21，2008年考題見P.22 We are facing/encountering different/various kind of difficulties/challenges.Competition is becoming increasingly fierce.Everyone has his or her own advantages/benefits and disadvantages/shortcomings.We are lack of experience Stress/pressure 2）舉例論證：
A.Numerous examples can be given, but this/these will suffice.B.I can think of no better illustration than the following one(s).C.This/These case(s)effectively clarify that…
3）
2002年考題參見教材P.18 The American girl represents a great many foreigners.The traditional Chinese costume symbolizes Chinese culture.聯系現實：圖畫作文創作原則（以小見大，把握象征寓意，個體想為群體，具體想為抽象）
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The fact that the American girl wears traditional Chinese costume indicates that national culture can be accepted internationally.4）正反論證
3、小結：1句，概括論證，總結本段
（三）第三段：結論段，建議措施，4句
1、結論句：1句
2、針對雙方提建議：2句
3、包裝結尾、展望未來：1句
Only in this way can we solve this problem.It is high time that we solved this problem.二、啟承轉合：
（一）（二）啟：啟動觀點、開篇點題 承：觀點承接、正面論證
1、First(ly), In the first place, First and foremost, Above all, On the one hand, For one thing，2、Second(ly), In the second place, Besides, In addition, What is more, Furthermore, Moreover, On the other hand, For another
3、Third(ly),(The)Last but not(the)least, More importantly, Even worse，（三）轉：觀點轉折、反面論證
Conversely, Nevertheless, Unfortunately, Whereas, Yet, Instead, In/By comparison/contrast, On the contrary
（四）合：文章結尾、合并歸納
As a result/consequence, Consequently, Accordingly, Thus, Hence, Generally/Briefly speaking，三、段落寫作經典范文：參見第一節大作文（7）（2009年范文）
四、范文學習五大步驟：
1、讀透：十遍精讀：
1）精彩詞匯 2）精彩詞組 3）精彩句型
4）句子結構：簡單句、從句、時態、冠詞、主謂一致、名詞單復數 5）段落結構：總分總，主題句＋論證＋小結 6）關聯詞：小作文3－5個，大作文5－7個 7）同義替換：詞匯＋句型 8）代詞替換： 9）精彩觀點： 10）分析評論：
2、造句
3、大聲朗讀
4、背熟
5、運用
第三節 圖畫作文
一、2007年范文：見教材P.42
二、2008年范文：見教材P.43 11
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第四節 詞匯與句子寫作
一、遣詞造句四大要素：
1、ACCURACY：extensive(a wide range of)knowledge, fierce competition
2、VARIETY：
1）
（1）I hold the opinion that, As far as I am concerned,（2）cling to the idea, in my opinion/view, point out，（3）maintain, reckon, assert, hold, claim, emphasize, insist, suppose, assume 2）（1）（2）（3）Due attention has to be paid to, Importance should be attached to, be of great importance/significance vital, essential, crucial, significant 3）people in growing/expanding/increasing/mounting numbers 4）for the purpose of, aim to/at, in a bid to
3、DIFFICULTY：primary/fundamental factors/causes.4、SPLENDOR：
1）My eyes were sparkling with delight.2）He flied into a stormy rage.3）I fell into the abyss of unspeakable pain.4）Such is human nature, that a great many people are willing to sacrifice higher pay for the privilege of becoming white-collar workers.二、詞匯寫作經典范文：見第一節大作文（1）（98年高分作文）
三、七大亮點設置：
1、1）Natural disasters claim hundreds of lives every year.2）I do appreciate your efforts.3）Once in front of me, lay a real chance.Yet, I did not value it.Not until the moment I lost it, did I realize how regretful I was.If God gave me another opportunity, I would never stop making progress.4）I sat outside in the hall.Everything inside me has gone away.I didn’t think.I could not think.I knew she was leaving me, but I prayed she not.(Ernest Hemingway: The Sun Also Rises)
2、A culture can be accepted, respected, appreciated and shared.3、environmental protection/awareness
4、with due consideration of, take into account/consideration5、1）
（1）（2）（3）
2）
（1）Only in this way can laid-off workers completely shrug off poverty and regain their dignity in life.只有這樣下崗工人才能徹底擺脫貧困并且重新獲得他們生命中的尊嚴。
總而言之，只有長期學習才有助于你掌握大的詞匯量。
考慮到上述所有論證，政府早就該實行改革把傳統教育模式轉變為素質教育。
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（2）In conclusion, it is persistent work that is conducive to your grasping a large/considerable vocabulary.（3）Given all the above arguments, it is high time that the authorities enforced reforms to convert traditional education strategy into education for all-round development/quality-oriented education.6、As John F.Kennedy put it, “Ask not what your country can do for you;ask what you can do for your country.”
7、1）Just as an old saying goes, “All work and no play make Jack a dull boy.”
2）Just as an old saying goes, “God only helps those who help themselves.”（天助自助者/自助者天助之！）
四、句子寫作經典范文：見第一節大作文（2）（01年范文）
第五節 應用文
一、課后復習：
1、消化筆記：
2、中譯英、背誦、默寫、仿寫：20大必背范文，滾瓜爛熟、脫口而出、多多益善
3、總結框架、考前模考：
二、書信格式：
（一）稱呼
1、題目無人名：Dear Sir or Madam，2、題目有人名：Dear＋人名，（二）正文：3段、7句、100－120詞、3－5關聯詞、3－5從句
1、第一段：1－2句
1）自我介紹
（1）I am a staff member from your company/corporation.I am a staff member from Motorola(China)Electronics Ltd.（2）I am a freshman/sophomore/junior/senior/undergraduate/graduate from the Department of Chinese Language and Literature of Beijing University.2）寫作目的：
（1）I am writing the letter in purpose of resigning from my current post/position.（2）I am writing to inform you that I wish to request if you could help me find a potential beneficiary of the Project Hope.2、第二段：3-6句
1）改寫提綱一：1句
2）改寫提綱二：1句
3）改寫提綱三：1句
3、第三段
1）表示感謝（私人建議信除外）
（1）（2）（3）2）期待回信
（1）I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.（2）I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.（3）Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.（三）落款 My appreciation to you for your generous help is beyond words.Words fail me when I want to express my sincere gratitude to you.I take this opportunity to show my heartfelt appreciation for the kind assistance you rendered me.13
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1、結尾客套：Yours sincerely，2、簽名：Li Ming
三、經典書信：2009年范文（見第一節小作文6）
四、其他應用文：
（一）告示：見第一節小作文（10）
（二）備忘錄/報告： Directions:
You are the president of a company.Write a memo to Percy Shelley, the vice-president on the employee’s training on computer, telling him the need to train the employees, detailed information, and ask him to write a plan.Date：January 20, 2008 To：Percy Shelley, Vice President From：Li Ming, President Subject：Computer Training of the Staff As we discussed earlier this week, I agree with you that our firm is faced up with problem of the high rate of computer illiteracy of the staff.We need to make up a plan for training our employees in the new field.I would like you to design our own in-house computer-training program.We had better classify the employees and put them through the program in turn.Write up a brief proposal, describing what you think the program should cover.Assume the class runs four hours a week for ten weeks.Also, assume people have no prior computer knowledge or any formal course work in computer science.（三）摘要：
Directions: Write a summary of the following essay.A third kind of thinking is stimulated when anyone questions our beliefs and opinions.We sometimes find ourselves changing our minds without any resistance or heavy emotion, but if we are told that we are wrong we resent the imputation and harden our hearts.We are incredibly heedless in the information of our beliefs, but find ourselves filled with an illicit passion for them when anyone proposes to rob us of their companionship.It is obvious not the ideas themselves that are dear to us, but our self－esteem, which is threatened.We are by nature stubbornly pledged to defend our own from attack, whether it be our person, our family, our property, or our opinion.We may surrender, but rarely confess ourselves vanquished.In the intellectual world at least, peace is without victory.Few of us take the pains to study the origin of our cherished convictions;indeed, we have a natural repugnance to so doing.We like to continue to believe what we have been accustomed to accept as true, and the resentment aroused when doubt is cast upon any of our assumptions leads us to seek every manner of excuse for clinging to them.The result is that most of our so-called reasoning consists in finding arguments for going on believing as we already do.參考答案
A third kind of thinking occurs when we are told that our beliefs and opinions are wrong.We may have been heedless in their information, but our self-esteem will not permit us to change.We may have to give up, but we are not convinced.We do not study the origin of our beliefs;we believe as we have been accustomed to believe, and we seek arguments for continuing to believe as we already do.14
第二篇：考研寫作講義
考研寫作講義
考試類型: 應用文寫作(俗稱小作文, 10分, 建議考場15分鐘完成, 建議字數在100-120之間最好, 低于75字會扣分, 分值10分)
看圖說話作文(中國特色之”看圖大作文”類型, 20分, 建議考場35分鐘完成, 建
議字數在200-230之間最好, 低于160會扣分, 分值20分)
攻克重點: 通常講,所有的國內外高端考試(國內考研, 國外雅思托福GRE/GMAT, 都是字數
要求多的要寫好), 但考研是”雙管齊下”, 小作文重在詞匯，大作文重在內容和表
達。
評分標準:
1． 一共6個檔次，對于坐在這個教室的同學來說只需要關注”四五六”三檔,其他的無意義, 三檔會得到14-18分, 四檔會得到20-24分, 五檔會得到26-30分.2． 所有的作文考試基本都是從四個角度去考察和評分: 觀點, 結構, 論證, 語言,考研也一樣.3． 針對于具體的評分, 我們把握這么一個順序: 很好完成任務, 較好完成任務,基本完成任務.(考研的評分標準依然借鑒的是雅思)
考試內容:
1.小作文包括信件(商務信函和私人信函), 備忘錄, 摘要, 報告, 告示.(前兩種最
可能考到, 從2005年開始小作文到現在這4年考的均為信件, 其他形式沒有出
現過, 05年辭職信, 06年尋找被資助人, 07年建議信, 08年道歉信)
2.大作文主要為圖畫作文, 這是中國人具有”中國特色”的一部分, 目前兩圖和一
圖均出現過, 具體統計為: 兩圖寫作（99、00、03、06、07）一圖寫作（98、01、02、04、05）98年母雞承諾下蛋;99年人口上升和野生動物滅絕加重;00
年海上捕魚95年之對比;01年愛心是盞燈;02年文化影響;03年溫室花朵的兩
種反應;04年終點與起點的意義;05年養老足球賽;06年貝克漢姆崇拜;07年個
人自信;08年一起走南闖北
3.不需在開頭寫題目.4.格式選擇”齊頭空行”或者”每行縮進”均可.5.語言需要使用書面語，比如 ad—advertisement, TV—television, lab—laboratory,exam—examination, dorm—dormitory, can’t—can not（疑問句除外）
6.拼寫選擇美式英語和英式英語均可, 但盡量保持一致, 同時盡量不要出現
chinglish.應考策略:
1.三表原則
表述要……………………..表達要………………………
(詞, 句, 篇, 語法錯誤分析)
表演莫………………………..2.熟悉題型與內容
小作文的類型: 私人信函和商務信函
小作文的內容: 感謝信, 投訴信, 邀請信, 致歉信, 失物招領信, 求職辭職信, 建
議咨詢信.(注意現在的”合二為一”趨勢)
3.確定結構
無論大小作文, 都需要”總分總”模式.4.理由分類（后面有英文部分）/ 5
A.健康(飲食營養/心情放松/生活習慣/煙酒傷害/生命財產安全)
B.便利(交通/娛樂/吃喝/休閑/購物)
C.交流(技巧提高/家人/朋友/同學/同事/領導/網友)
D.習慣與心理(習慣/興趣/樂趣/風俗/傳統)
E.成就感(成功/榮譽感/自信/財富/動力)
F.環保(生態平衡/從植物保護/環境污染)
G.經濟(就業/旅游/收入/稅收/投資)
H.品格(自信/有經驗/堅韌/上進/獨立/負責任/寬容等)
I.教育培訓(科技發展/知識增加/職業選擇)
J.國家文明(民族/社會/世界/文明)
5.語言潤色（復雜句式的練習）
6.話題預測
熱點話題: 房子, 股票, 油價的價格上升
地震給人們心靈和社會帶來的影響
奧運會舉辦的積極意義
網絡道德的嚴重性和法律干涉的必要性
恒久話題: 人際關系(自己與周圍的人以及和社會或者政府的關系)
教育問題(素質教育等)
環保(重要性, 改善狀況, 嚴重后果)
文化差異(積極影響或者消極影響)
個人健康(身體健康和心靈健康)
詞匯匯總：
健康
Dietary nutrition,飲食營養 mentally-relaxed,心理放松 personal life habits個人生活習慣, hazards caused by drinking and smoking抽煙喝酒所帶來的傷害, property security財產安全, life security生命安全
便利
Convenient life方便生活(a wide range of transportation means各式各樣的交通方式, entertainment娛樂, amusement娛樂, recreation休閑, shopping購物)
交流
Communication(communicative skills交流技巧, with family members, classmates, colleagues and netizens網民)
習慣和心理
Personal habits個人習慣
Personal mentality/state of mind個人心態
Local custom/habitual activities當地風俗
Personal interest/preference/fondness/keenness個人興趣和喜好
Family ties/emotional ties/affectionate ties/loving relation/intimate relation家庭關系/情感紐帶/親密關系
Personal likes and dislikes 個人好惡
Sense of achievement 成就感
Succeed/ successful /success/successfully成功
Sense of honor榮譽感
Reputation/fame 名望和聲望
Privilege特權
Fortune/wealth/property/prosperity財富
Well-off/wealthy/rich/prosperous/better-off有錢的Poor/badly-off/worse-off/impoverished貧窮的Confidence/be sure of oneself/hold a strong belief in oneself自信
Motivation/stimulation動機
Mental pressure/stress/tension心理壓力
Environment/environmental protection/conservation/preservation 環境保護
Hold an environmentally-friendly attitude持有環保態度
Ecological balance生態平衡
The preservation of plantation and animals動植物保護
Endangered species/extinct species/fossil瀕危物種/滅絕物種/化石
Pollution/contamination(water/air/light/noise/radiation)污染
Acid rain/global warming/decreased level of icecap/greenhouse effects/stagnant air/gases---dioxide nitrogen/sulphur 酸雨/全球變暖/冰帽水平下降/溫室效應/污染空氣/二氧化氮/二氧化硫/二氧化碳）
Carbon-dioxide)
Economic/economical/financial 經濟
Fund-raising activities 募集資金活動
Investment/input of money, material and labor投資/投入錢物力和人力
Save/conserve/conservation of water/land/material/resources節約用水/土地/資料/資源
Tour/trip/journey/travel/tourism/tourism resources have been overly exploited旅游/旅游資源杯過渡開發
/packed tour/self-help tour/tourguide打包游/自助游/導游
Employment rate/unemployment rate 就業率/失業率
Salary/wage/income/revenue/additional income/earnings/收入
Live within/below/beyond one’s means收支平衡/量入為出/入不敷出
Expense/expenditure/the money one expends花費
Taxation稅收
Quality: experienced/veteran 素質
Competent/competence有能力
Brilliant/intelligent/quick-witted/quick-minded/bright/people with bright mind聰明
Humorous/a strong sense of humor幽默
Cooperative/a strong sense of cooperation/coordination/competition富有競爭力
Persistent/persevering/strong-willed堅持
Aspiring/aggressive/ambitious上進
Independent/a strong sense of independence/live on my own獨立
Responsible/reliable/trustworthy/a sense of responsibility 負責任
Tolerate of/be tolerant of /tolerance寬容
Optimistic/pessimistic 樂觀/悲觀
Modest謙虛
Brave/with courage/heart/daring 勇敢
Kind/warm-hearted/upright/sincere善良
科技
Technology/technological/technician/科技
Technological innovation 科技創新
Education/schooling/upbringing教育/教學/培養
Training 培訓
Advance/progress/development發展
Computer science(cyberize, computerize, insecurity and immorality in the cyber world, addiction in online games)電腦科技（網絡化，電子化，網絡世界的不安全和不道德性，沉迷于網絡游戲
Television(commercial, advertisement, couch potato)電視（廣告，電視迷）
Satellite/man-made satellite/artificial intelligence)衛星（人造衛星，人工智能）
Robots(physical hazards, a big threat to the human beings because of the possible result of unemployment, free the humans from the laborious work)機器人（身體傷害，由于導致失業而對人類產生的威脅，把人類從辛勞的工作中解救出來）
Knowledge(knowledge accumulation, knowledge upgrading, career selection)知識（知識積累i/知識升級/職業選擇）
Job satisfaction, high/low work efficiency)工作滿意，高效工作/低效工作）
About: regarding, concerning, involving, as regards, relating to, with reference to, with respect to, with relation to
Very: fairly, considerably, extraordinarily, remarkably, amazingly, extremely, overwhelmingly, strikingly, exceedingly, dramatically關于
小作文可用詞匯:(開頭目的)
道歉: apologize, make apologetic comments, express my personal sincere apology, express my regret, being apologetic/sorry/regretful.感謝: being grateful/thankful/benedictory for…, thank sb for doing sth, express my appreciation/gratitude/thanks/acknowledgement
投訴: complain about, make my complaints to you, express my disappointment/concern/discontentment/complaints with your…, draw the possible attention from the authority
求學: inquire about the admission to your school, apply for your school, know the detailed procedure of admission to your school
邀請: write this invitational letter to you, invite you to do …, invite you to participate in …, wish you to accept my invitation to do…
求職: being interested in the job/post/position you offered, write the letter to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for the job you offered, as a new applicant of the job you advertised in China Daily, apply for the vacant position of being a … in your company.辭職: quit my job, make the resignation, show my final decision of resigning, send in my papers, leave my current position, find another one to replace me
建議: offer/make my sincere advice/suggestion/suggested ideas/proposal/recommendation, inform you of some of suggested ideas, provide you with some reasonable suggestions for you to consider
結尾詞:
期待: expect, look forward to doing, wish, hope that/hope to do/hope for, long for, desire for, look towards
收到回信: hear from you, receive your early response, be formally notified, await your reply, wait for your early reply if possible
沒有打擾到對方: hope for no inconvenience this might cause, be deeply sorry for the possible trouble, be wholeheartedly indebted to you
盡可能早: as soon as possible, if possible, as early as possible
中間段落的銜接詞:
首先,其次, 然后, 最后: firstly, secondly, thirdly;in the first place, in the second place, in the final place;first and foremost, moreover, additionally, furthermore, eventually, last but by no means least;to start with, to end with, on top of that, in addition to that, added to that, besides, finally, lastly.因果關系: because of/due to/thanks to/owing to/by virtue of/on account of;
Because/for/since/as;as a result/consequence/output;
In consequence/in the end/consequently/accordingly/therefore/thereby/hence/thus 轉折關系：however, nevertheless, on the contrary, by contrast, on the other hand
越來越多: more and more;the number of … is growing/increasing/on the rise/on the increase
A growing number/an increasing number/a rising number of/an expanding numberPeople in growing numbers/in increasing numbers/in expanding numbers
越來越少: 對應換詞即可
第三篇：2015年考研英語二寫作補充講義
考研英語
（二）真題寫作講義
2010年考研英語
（二）真題寫作
Part A 范文 ：
Dear xxx,I am xxx.(交代個人身份)。I am now back to China.I would like to extend/ convey /express my heartfelt / sincere thanks / gratitude to you and your wifeas well as your children for you kindness/ friendliness and hospitality to host me in xxx（New York city / Los Angeles）city。Your considerate / careful / generous help and care made me feel happy and relaxed.I will never forget this beautiful memory / I will remember this beautiful memory for ever.Anyway , I hold that it is an honor for me to make friends with you and I will cherish the photos we took together.I'm now quite interested in American culture and hope to further know it in the future.I sincerely hope that one dayyouwill come here to visit some places of interest.In order that I can have the chance to reward you for your kindness.Hope to see you in China.I feel grateful to you once more.Yours sincerely,XXX
感謝信件中使用的閃光詞匯及詞組：
convey: v.傳達，轉達
heartfelt: adj.衷心的，真心實意的generous: adj.大方的，慷慨的tender: adj.溫柔的pay a visit: 訪問
cherish ：珍視，珍惜
萬能句型：
I would like to convey my heartfelt thanks to…
Your generous help and tender care made me feel warmly welcomed.I feel grateful to thank you again.2010年考研英語二真題寫作
Part B:
About theIncreaseofCellphones ’Number
As can be seen from the above chart, between 2000 and 2003,the number of users from the
developing countries is almost the same as that of the developed ones.Obviously, the gap of the number is not so large.However, as time goes by, from 2004 to 2008, more and more people from developing countires own / possess more cellphones than those from the developed ones.In 2008, the number of cellphone users is about 4 billion in the developing countries, while in the developed ones, the number is just one billion.As a matter of fact, the reasons , in my opinion, are as follows.To begin with , the economy in
developing countries has developed much faster than that of the developed countries.In addition / Moreover, the population is much larger that of the developed countries.Last but not least, the price is not high and it’s easy for people to buy one cellphone.As far as I am concerned,the mobile phones may have strong radiation and may be unhealthy for the users.I suggest that people who always use them should put on earphones and turn off before they fall asleep.2011年考研英語寫作
47寫信表示祝賀，祝賀李明被大學錄取了。
祝賀信書信模板參考如下：
Dear ________,1)I’ m happy / pleased / excited / delighted to learn that …(you have been
admitted to a famous university.)2)It is a very joyful news that I have heard for a long time.3)I would like to extend / express / convey my heartfelt congratulations and good wishes to you.或者說 I would like to convey my … / congratulate you on your success.4)In order to better adapt to the college life, I ’d like to show/ give /
put forward some valuable suggestions as follows.5)To begin with , _________.6)Moreover , _________.7)Last but not least , _________.8)Once more,please accept my sincere congratulations.9)Ihope you may strive for the next goal at college and realize more dreams through your own efforts.10)l am looking forward to hearing from you.Best wishes.Sincerely yours,xxx
PartB(2011年寫作真題
參考范文：
As is shown from the above chart, in 2009, Chinese cars account for more than 30% which is larger than that of American cars as well as the Japanese cars.But in 2008, there are about 35 percent of Japanese cars while only 25 percent of China’s home-made cars.In 2009, the Japanese cars’ market share decreases to about 25 percent and that of the Chinese cars has increased by at least by 8 percent or so.As far as I am concerned, the reasons are as follows.To begin with, Chinese economy has developed faster than before.What’s more, the better quality and the more reasonable price attract more customers in the domestic car market.While the poor after-sale service of Japanese cars has made many Chinese users feel disappointed.Surely , the home-made
cars have won over a great number of customers by comparatively preferential price as well as the service.Meanwhile , Chinese people are more wealthy and the living standard has been improved greatly since the reform and opening up policy was carried out.Last but not least, we Chinese always support our own car industry.As a result , the Chinese cars have won a larger market share than the American or Japanese cars.As a matter of fact , as long as the products are excellent, reliable and qualified and the after-sale service is pretty good , our home-made cars surely occupy a larger / the largest market share.2012年 英語
（二）真題寫作
投訴信寫作模板：
關于抱怨信和投訴信
Dear __________,1)I am a _______and I am _____.2)I am writing to complain about xxx / Iam writing to show my complaint aboutxxx.3)The complaint details are as follows._________________________.4)To begin with/ firstand foremost , ________________.5)What’s more / In addition / Moreover ,__________________.6)Last but not least , _______________.7)Inaword,it isurgentfor you to ___________________.8)If you can’t____________ , Iwill sue you and dial the number 12315.9)anyway Ido hopethat you may pay attention to my own problem.10)Your early reply will be highly appreciated.11)I am looking forward to your early / prompt reply.Sincerely yours
Xxx
2012 年真題 寫作參考范文：
Dearxxx,I am a _____and I am ______.Ibought an electronic dictionary from your Internet store last week.But it is of low quality and I feel annoyed about it.I am writing to extend/ express / convey my complaint about your product.The details are as follows.To begin with , some keys on the keyboard even can’twork.In addition, there are some spelling mistakes in terms of the words or phrases.Last but not least, it even sometimes automatically turns off and the screen may appear the problem of “be black ”.All in all, it is urgent that you should resolve my problem and change a new one for
me.If you can’t do it in time, I will dial the number of 12315.Anyway , I sincerely hope that you can resolve my problem and pay attention to my complaint.Your early / prompt reply will be highly appreciated.I look forward to your prompt reply as soon as possible.Sincerely,ZhangWei
2011年
As is seen from the above chart, we may find that the percentage of job satisfaction of the working staff in one company may vary from person to person.We can see the percentage of people who are satisfied with their jobs is the highest among the people who are over 50 years old at about 40.while the percentage of the staff not satisfied with their jobs is about 64 percent among the people between 41 and 50 years old.The main reasons, from my own perspective , are as follows.To begin with, the staff between the age of 41 and 50surely have greater pressure from their own families and the competition of the working units.After all.They must pay much money for the education of their children and even pay much for the medicine for the aged parents.Moreover, the people over 50 years old, will retire sooner or later and surely show less complaint.As we all know, people under the age of 40 will easily choose to hunt jobs and work in another company if they are not satisfied with the current job or position.Therefore, they are the group who are more dissatisfied with their jobs.In my opinion / form my viewpoint, as the leaders , the should do their utmost to improve the working conditions and enhance the salary for the staff.On the contrary , the employees should try their best to make greater contribution and should not always complain about the current working conditions.補充： 辭職信
Dear boss / manager ,I am______.Now I am writing to inform you of my decision to resign from my current position.I plan to leave_______________(時間)。
The reasons for my own resignation are as follows.First and foremost / To begin with, _____________.in addition , ____________________.Last but not least,________________.In a word , ________________________.I will be very grateful if you accept my resignation.I should show my gratitude for your promotionand tender care.I will later choose _____________ as my new career.Please forgive and understand me.Thank you for allowing me to resign.Sincerely ,XXX
考研英語
（二）真題寫作
申請信件 ：
Dear xxx，I am xxx.I am writing to apply for a __________in the___________in order that I could_____________.My personal information is as follows.To begin with , __________________.In addition,________________.Last but not least , _____________________.If my application could be taken into consideration , I will be very grateful.I am confident that I can ________________.I am looking forward to your prompt reply.Yours, XXX
第四篇：考研英語之新東方寫作強化必背
小作文
1、十大必背范文之一：08真題：道歉+建議信 Directions: You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob, your landlord there.Write him a letter to 1）make an apology, and
2）suggest a solution Dear Bob: I’m writing to apologize for having forgotten to return the “the Beatles” CD to you when I left Canada.I was in such a hurry that I packed everything in my luggage without checking carefully.Had I paid more attention then, I wouldn’t have made such a stupid mistake.Now something must be done to solve the problem because I understand you cherish the CD enormously.I can either send it to you by express mail or alternatively compensate you at a reasonable price.If you do not mind, I may bring it back to you next time I go to Canada.Please let me know which solution you prefer at your earliest convenience.I really hope you will accept my sincere apology.Faithfully yours
Li Ming 親愛的鮑勃：
我寫此信的目的是為了向你道歉。在離開加拿大時，我忘了把那盤披頭士樂隊的CD還給你。走的時候太匆忙了，我把所有東西都塞到行李中，沒有仔細檢查。當時要是多加注意的話，就不會犯這種低級錯誤了。
因為我知道你特別珍愛那盤CD，所以一定要想辦法解決這個問題。我可以寄快遞包裹給你，也可以按合理的價格賠償你的損失。如果你不介意的話，我也可以在下次去加拿大的時候把它給你帶回去。
請在方便的時候盡快讓我知道你傾向哪一種解決方案。希望你能接受我真誠的道歉。
您真誠的
李明
2、十大必背范文之二：2009真題：建議信/致編輯信（=短議論文）教材115頁 Directions: Restrictions on the use of plastic bags have not been so successful in some regions.“White Pollution” is still going on.Write a letter to the editor(s)of your local newspaper to 1)give your opinions briefly, and
2)make two or three suggestions.Dear Editors:
I have been reading your newspaper for many years with a great enthusiasm and interest.It is my view that limiting the use of disposable plastic bags is of utmost significance.To crack this hard nut, I would like to propose several practical recommendations as follows.First and foremost, it is imperative for us to ban the free use of disposable plastic bags.In addition, we should develop possible alternative forms to replace them, such as paper or clothing bags.Last but not least, plastic bags should be offered in a much higher price in department stores or supermarkets.I hope you will find the above proposals conducive and I would like to discuss this matter to further details.Your prompt attention to my suggestions would be highly appreciated.Yours sincerely，Li Ming 尊敬的編輯：
多年來我一直懷著極大的熱情與興趣閱讀貴報。我認為限制使用一次性塑料袋非常重要。
為解決這個難題，我想提出如下幾個實用的建議。首先，我們急需禁止免費使用一次性塑料袋。其次，我們應該開發塑料袋的替代品，如紙袋或布袋。最后，商場或超市應以更高的價格提供塑料袋。
我希望您覺得上述建議有益，同時希望進一步討論這一問題。十分感謝您對我的建議給予及時的關注。
您真誠的
李明
3、十大必背范文之三：2010英語
（二）真題：感謝信 Directions: You have just come back from the U.S as a member of Sino-American cultural exchange program.Write a letter to your American colleague to 1）express your thanks to his/her warm reception, 2）welcome him/her to visit China in due course.Dear Bob:
I have just arrived at my home from the airport.As I sit behind the desk, I just want to write a letter to you.I am grateful for your warm reception in this cultural exchange program.You and your family gave me a deep impression.The program is one of the most wonderful memories in my life.In once talk you said you want to travel in China.Well, you will be welcomed and it will be my pleasure to be your guide.By the way, send me a list and write down the places where you would like to visit.Please give my best regards to your family.(110 words)
Sincerely yours
Zhang Wei 親愛的鮑勃：
我剛從機場回到家里。我在書桌前坐下就想給你寫這封信。在這次文化交流項目中，非常感謝你的熱情接待。你和你的家人給我留下了深刻的印象。這個項目是我一生中最美好的回憶之一。
你曾經說過你想來中國旅行。那么，非常歡迎，而且我很榮幸做你的導游。順便說一句，給我寄一張清單，寫下你想去的地方。
請向你的家人致以誠摯的祝福。
你真誠的
張偉
4、十大必背范文之四：2011真題：推薦信 Directions: Write a letter to a friend of yours to 1)recommend one of your favorite movies and 2)give reasons for your recommendation.Dear Neo: I’m so glad to hear from you.How have you been theses days?
In your last letter, you talked about movies you love.I agreed with you that Matrix is a great movie.Guess what? If you lose some weight, you’ll be as cool as “Neo” in the film!
Anyway, here is one of my favorite movies that I would like to recommend to you.The title of the movie is The Legend of 1900 and there’re some reasons for my recommendation.Firstly, the director is very famous and respected all over the world.Its story is very moving and its hero is a very talented pianist named “1900”.More importantly, the sound track of the movie is extraordinarily beautiful.I know you like music and you are learning to play piano.I hope you’ll enjoy the movie and learn something about playing piano.I am looking forward to your reply.Take care!
Yours, Li Ming 利奧：
很高興收到你的來信。近來過得怎么樣？
在上封信里，你提到了喜愛的電影。我也認為《黑客帝國》是一部偉大的電影。你猜怎么著？如果減點肥的話，你會像電影里的“利奧”一樣酷。
無論如何，我想給向推薦我最喜愛的一部電影。電影的名字是《海上鋼琴師》，推薦原因如下。首先，這位導演全球聞名，并且受人敬重。它的故事非常感人，主人公是名叫“1900”的一位天才鋼琴師。此外，電影的音效尤其優美。我知道你喜歡音樂，而且你正在學習彈鋼琴。希望你喜歡這部電影，并且從中學習一些鋼琴技巧。期待著你的回信。保重！
李明
5、十大必背范文之五： 2011英語
（二）真題：祝賀+建議信 Directions: Suppose your cousin Li Ming has just been admitted to a university.Write him/her a letter to: 1)congratulate him/her, and 2)give him/her suggestions on how to get prepared for university life.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use “Zhang Wei” instead.Dear Li Ming: I’m so glad to hear that you have received the offer from Beijing University.Congratulations!There’s nothing surprising——I remember seeing how hard you have been working since childhood.Now you have the opportunity to learn physics, which you have a huge interest in, in one of the best universities in China.I feel extremely happy for you.Well, I want to share some reminders for university life with you.First of all, don’t forget your study.Second, take some time to know yourself well and make your own decisions.Third, enjoy your life as long as it’s under your control.I hope you will have a wonderful time!
Yours Zhang Wei 李明：
很高興得知你收到了來自北京大學的錄取通知。祝賀你！沒什么好奇怪的——我現在還記得你童年以來一直在多么努力地學習。現在你終于有機會在中國最好的大學之一學習物理學，你有強烈興趣的專業。我格外為你高興。
下面，我想和你分享一些大學生活的建議。首先，別忘了學習。其次，花點時間好好了解自己，自己做出決定。第三，只要你能掌控，盡可能享受生活。希望你過得開心。
張偉
6、十大必背范文之六： 2012真題：歡迎+建議信（教材121頁）Directions: Some international students are coming to your university.Write them an email in the name of the Students' Union to 1)extend your welcome and 2)provide some suggestions for their campus life here.Dear Friends: On behalf of the Students’ Union of Beijing Foreign Studies University, I would like to extend our heartfelt welcome to all of the overseas students from all over the world to study in our university.It is my great pleasure to offer you several practical suggestions.In the first place, life in this prestigious university perhaps is not as easy as you have expected.You may be tightly bound by continual classes, abundant homework and exams.Then, be prepared for the hectic life here.In the second place, in spite of all those burdens, various extracurricular activities such as sports meets, speech contests, social gatherings still will provide ample opportunity to make friends.So, enjoy your life in this esteemed institute!All in all, although there is a lot of pressure, the time you spend on our campus will be worthwhile in your whole life.Hope you like it here!
Yours sincerely
Li Ming 親愛的朋友們：
我謹代表北京外國語大學學生會，向來我校學習的留學生表達衷心的歡迎。
我很榮幸地向你們提出一些實用的建議。首先，這所著名學府的生活也許不像你們所設想的那么輕松。你們可能會陷入面臨繁重的課程、大量的作業和考試。因此，做好準備迎接這里的繁忙生活吧。其次，盡管有以上負擔，運動會、演講比賽、聯誼會等各種各樣的課外活動仍會提供大量結交朋友的機會。所以，盡情享受這所著名大學里的生活吧！
總之，盡管有很多壓力，但你們在我們校園里度過的時光仍將是你一生中一段有意義的歲月。希望你們喜歡這里！
您真誠的
李明
7、十大必背范文之七： 2012英語
（二）真題：投訴信（教材122頁）Directions: Suppose you have found something wrong with the electronic dictionary that you bought from an online store the other day.Write an email to the customer service center to 1)make a complaint, and 2)demand a prompt solution.Dear Sir or Madam: I bought an electronic dictionary from your online store on January 1st, but I found it has some problems after using it for a short period of time.To begin with, the battery needs recharging after a mere 2 hours of use.This means that I need to carry my charger with me when I go out for a day.In addition, the buttons on the electronic dictionary are so small that it is nearly impossible to type anything with them.Personally, I find this to be completely unacceptable.Therefore, I would like to either change the electronic dictionary for another model that works well or a full refund.Your help is greatly appreciated.Yours sincerely
Zhang Wei 尊敬的先生或女士：
1月1日我在貴網店購買了一部電子詞典，但在使用了一段時間之后，我發現它有一些問題。
首先，在僅僅使用兩小時之后，電池就需要充電。這就意味著當我出門一天時，就需要隨身攜帶充電器。此外，這部電子詞典的按鍵如此之小，以至于幾乎無法通過鍵盤輸入任何東西。對我個人而言，我認為這一點完全不能接受。
因此，我希望要么為我換一個能運行正常的型號，要么全額退款。非常感謝您的幫助。
您真誠的
張偉
8、十大必背范文之八：2010英語
（一）真題： Directions: You are supposed to write for the postgraduate association a notice to recruit volunteers for an international conference on globalization.The notice should include the basic qualification of applicant and the other information you think relative.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the notice.Use “ postgraduate association ” instead.(10 points)
Notice Volunteers are needed for the International Conference on Globalization to be held on this campus in early July.Basic requirements are familiarity with the theme of the conference and proficiency of English.Other requirements include interpersonal communication ability, familiarity with our city in terms of its tourist attractions and its history, proper manners, and sense of responsibility.Priority and preference will be given to those experienced, either in international conference or in other similar activities.Call 86754321 or send messages to postgr_ass@ccc.edu.cn for an application and for information on the interview.Enquiries are encouraged but visits declined.（97 words）
The Postgraduate’s Association
告示
七月初將于本校舉行關于全球化的國際研討會，現招募志愿者。基本要求是熟悉本次會議的主題以及精通英語。其他要求包括人際溝通能力、熟悉我市的景點及歷史，舉止適當，有責任感。優先考慮參加過國際會議或其他類似活動的有經驗者。
申請職位以及咨詢面試相關信息，請致電86754321或發送郵件到postgr_ass@ccc.edu.cn。歡迎垂詢，謝絕來訪。
研究生會
9、十大必背范文之九：備忘錄/報告： Directions: The environmental protection club is going to organize some activities with the theme of “Creating Green Culture and Building Low-Carbon Campus”.As the club leader, you will write a memo to the members to explain the importance and arrangements of those activities.Do not sign your own name.Use “Li Ming” instead.To: All club members From: Li Ming Date: January 19, 2013 Subject: Creating Green Culture and Building Low-Carbon Campus We are going to launch a series of activities to promote low-carbon lifestyle, or more specifically to advocate energy efficiency, waste minimization and recycling.This green lifestyle is a potential recipe for a healthier and more habitable environment and highly recommendable to every person.To attract more schoolmates to accept this low-carbon lifestyle, we will hold lectures to introduce the new life concept, make broadcast programs to record low-carbon experience around us and host an exhibition of fruits of recycling to encourage students to make the best use of old stuff.In addition, we will hand out leaflets to every dormitory, recommending students to switch off unused lights and other electrical equipments, recycle paper, batteries and plastic bottles, and travel by bicycle, bus or subway.All members are required to take part in those above activities.Other creative thoughts and brilliant ideas about activity plan will be encouraged.(148 words)致：全體成員 自：李明
日期：2013年1月19日
主題：創建綠色文化，建設低碳校園
我們將舉辦一系列推廣低碳生活的活動，更準確的說，就是推廣有效利用能源，減少浪費和回收利用。綠色生活是實現更健康更宜居環境的訣竅，應該推薦給每個人。
為了吸引更多的校友接受低碳生活，我們將舉辦講座介紹新的生活理念，制作廣播節目記錄我們身邊的低碳經歷并且舉辦回收成果展覽以鼓勵學生利用舊東西。另外，我們將向各寢室發放傳單，以建議同學關掉不用的電燈、電器；回收紙、電池和塑料瓶；乘自行車、公交、地鐵出行。
所有成員要求參加上述活動。大家可以提出其他關于活動計劃的創意和好點子。
10、十大必背范文之十：經濟類摘要（教材98頁）
Directions: Read the following Chinese text and write an abstract of it in 80-100 English words on ANSWER SHEET 2.(10 points)摘要：summary, thesis
經濟全球化的主要原因
第一段：20世紀50年代初以來，經濟全球化獲得迅猛發展。簡單歸納，其原因主要包括以下幾個方面： 第二段：全球化的技術基礎。科技進步為全球化快速發展提供了物質基礎和技術手段。科技革命是經濟全球化發展的最根本的物質基礎和動力，歷史上歷次科技革命都促進了社會生產力的飛躍發展，同時也促進了整個世界的融合。20世紀50年代以電子技術和信息技術等為主要 標志的新的科技革命的興起，使科技日益成為社會生產力發展的先導，成為影響生產力發展的至關重要的因素。科技知識在社會生產的各個領域中得到廣泛傳播和運用，勞動者的智能和技能得到進一步的開發，創造出越來越多的物質和精神財富，極大地促進了世界生產力的發展，生產社會化程度日益提高，國際分工日益深化，各國經濟以此為基礎緊密相聯,世界經濟進入一個全新的繁榮時期。同時，新科技革命使得科技成果積累的速度大大加快，新材料、新產品不斷涌現，大量高技術產業不斷產生，在世界范圍內促進了產業結構的調整和轉移，新的產業布局開始形成,以信息技術和產業為主導，以高新技術為基礎的新興產業部門也蓬勃興起并迅速發展，快速取代了傳統產業而逐漸成為經濟的主導部門推進的重要動力源。
第三段：全球化的經濟基礎。市場經濟體制的強勢地位不斷增強，跨國公司的突飛發展，國際經濟組織的不斷完善為經濟全球化奠定了堅實的經濟基礎。
第四段：首先，市場經濟體制成為世界各國發展經濟的首選。20世紀80 年代末至90年代初，世界形勢發生了重大變化，東歐劇變，蘇聯解體, 40多年的冷戰格局最終結束。冷戰結束后，國際形勢總體上走向緩和。各國紛紛把發展經濟列為首要目標，普遍擴大了對外開放，和平與發展成為當今時代的兩大主題。前蘇聯和東歐國家先后走上了向市場經濟過渡的軌道，改行自由市場經濟，并積極致力于融入西方經濟體系。中國在長期的實踐中，也逐漸認識到計劃經濟的不足和弊端，自1978年起開始實行以市場為導向的、全面的經濟改革，大力推行對外開放，努力實現同世界經濟的接軌，目前已成為世界經濟的重要組成部分。這一切都說明，市場經濟體制已成為不同制度、不同發展層次國家的共同選擇，市場經濟已基本實現了全球化，經濟全球化是以市場為基礎的，沒有市場經濟就沒有生產要素在國際間的自由流動，就談不上經濟全球化。
第五段：其次，力量不斷壯大的跨國公司成為經濟全球化的中堅力量。跨國公司是以本國作為基地，通過對外直接投資，在世界各地設立分支機構和子公司，從事國際化生產和經營的企業。跨國公司憑借其雄厚的經濟實力和靈活的經營戰略，以全球為工廠，以它所在的各個國家為車間，在全球范圍內充分利用各地的優勢組織生產和流通，通過自己廣泛的經營活動，實現了商品和資本等生產要素在全球范圍內的整合，促進了生產在國家間的水平分工和垂直分工，使之密切聯系在一起，從而為經濟全球化的發展打下了堅實的微觀基礎，并成為經濟全球化的主要推動力量和主要載體。
第六段：最后，國際經濟組織是經濟全球化發展的組織保障。二戰結束以后，生產力的不斷提高，生產力的國際化使得越來越多的商品、資本、勞動進入國際交流.各國的國際分工和相互依賴性不斷增強。這種日益增強的經濟聯系要求突破原有的國家間的障礙，實現全球范圍內的更高層次的經濟合作，這就要求有超脫于國家之外的國際經濟組織發揮重要作用。戰后，國際經濟日益明顯，國際經濟協作不斷加強。在當今國際經濟關系中，世行、世貿組織、國際貨幣基金組織等世界性經濟組織的調節作用越來越大，而且還出現出進一步增強的趨勢。世貿組織（WTO）所制定的關于貿易、投資等方面的制度和規則，成為規范全球經濟運行，創造自由、公平競爭環境的統一制度和規則，作為世界金融領域的重要國際組織，即國際貨幣基金組織（IMF）和世界銀行(WB)也在國際金融全球化進程中扮演了重要的角色。這些國際經濟組織的成立使得國際貿易和國際金融運行有了統一的規則，對成員國的經貿活動和經濟行為起著協調和規范作用。這些都為經濟全球化的發展起著制度保障作用。（1590字）中文摘要
20世紀50年代初以來，經濟全球化獲得迅猛發展。簡單歸納，其原因主要包括以下幾個方面。全球化的技術基礎。科技進步為全球化快速發展提供了物質基礎和技術手段。全球化的經濟基礎。首先，市場經濟體制成為世界各國發展經濟的首選。其次，力量不斷壯大的跨國公司成為經濟全球化的中堅力量。最后，國際經濟組織是經濟全球化發展的組織保障。（155字）
Main Reasons of Economic Globalization Since the early 1950s, economic globalization has been developing rapidly.Briefly speaking, its reasons mainly include the following ones.The first reason is the technical foundation of economic globalization.Advancements in science and technology have provided the material basis and the technical means for the rapid development of globalization.The second reason is the economic foundation of globalization.Firstly, the market economy has become the first choice of promoting economy for every country in the world.Secondly, multinationals which are expanding continuously have become the center of economic globalization.Lastly, international economic organizations have been the organic safeguards for the development of economic globalization.(104 words)
大作文
1、十大必背范文之一： 2000年考研真題（教材159頁）Directions: A.Study the following two pictures carefully and write an essay in at least 150words.B.Your essay must be written neatly on the ANSWER SHEET2.C.Your essay should meet the requirements below: 1）Describe the pictures.2）Deduce the purpose of the painter of the pictures.3）Suggest counter measures.第一段：As is shown in the pictures, with the rampancy of commercial fishing, the number of fish has dramatically shrunk.In the first picture, we learn that the year 1900 witnessed a quite encouraging scene of world fishing.There were various kinds of fish and only one fishing-boat.On the contrary, in 1995 there was only one fish swimming freely but many fishing-boats sailing in the sea.It is apparent that a disastrous change has occurred.第二段：The purpose of the pictures is to tell us that due attention has to be paid to the reduction of ocean resources.Owing to the over-exploitation of marine resources, the number of fish has declined at an accelerating rate.If we let this situation continue as it is, we do not know where fish will be in the future.By that time, our environment will suffer a great destruction.第三段：Hence, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to reverse this disturbing trend illustrated in the above pictures.For one thing, we should appeal to our authorities to make strict laws to control commercial fishing.For another, we should cultivate the awareness of people that the ocean resources are of great significance to us.Only in this way can we protect our ocean resources.Also, I believe that we humans can surmount this difficulty, and we will have a brilliant future.如圖所示，隨著商業捕魚的泛濫，魚的數量已經顯著下降。在第一幅圖中，我們可以看到在1900年，世界捕魚業是鼓舞人心的，畫面上有很多魚，只有一艘漁船。而在第二幅圖中，在1995年，只有一條魚在游動，但有很多漁船在海上航行。顯而易見，災難性的變化已經發生。
這組畫的目的是告訴我們應該對海洋資源的減少給予充分重視。由于海洋資源的過度開發，魚的數量已經明顯下降。如果聽任這種情況發展，我們不知道魚的未來在哪兒。到那時，我們的環境將會遭受巨大的破壞。
因此，我們急需采取嚴厲措施扭轉圖畫中所示的令人困擾的趨勢。一方面，我們應該呼吁各級政府制定嚴格的法律來控制商業捕魚。另一方面，我們應該增強人們的意識：海洋資源對我們非常重要。只有這樣才能保護我們的海洋資源。同時，我相信我們人類能夠克服這個困難，并將擁有美好的未來。
2、十大必背范文之二：2005年真題 Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing.In your essay, you should first describe the drawing, then interpret its meaning, and give your comment on it..圖畫描述：This picture reveals a not-uncommon phenomenon of how elders are treated by their grown-up children in some of the families in China.When they are too old to take care of themselves, the elders become burdens to be kicked around by their sons and daughters like a football, a pitiful and unjust sight that will arouse indignation among many Chinese.意義闡釋：As a nation renowned in the world for many of its virtues, the Chinese people have been practicing filial piety throughout history.Many much-told stories reiterate this time-honored virtue of loving and respecting the elders, like the story of Tiying in the West Han Dynasty who risked her life in order to save her wronged father from corporal punishment.Those who try every means to avoid their duties of looking after their elders should bear in mind that they are much indebted to their parents for their birth and growth.Without the loving care and unrelenting work of their parents, how could they have grown up healthily and successfully? How could it be possible for them to go about without the pricks of conscience? 建議措施：Everyone of us should live up to the virtues passed down to us by our ancestors.Only in this way can we be worthy of the name of a Chinese.(214 words)
這幅圖畫反映了一些中國家庭中普遍存在的現象——子女成年后如何對待他們的父母。當父母年齡太大，不能照顧自己的時候，他們就成了負擔，被自己的子女們像足球一樣踢來踢去。這是一種不公正的可鄙現象，引起了很多中國人的憤慨。
作為一個以很多美德聞名于世的民族，中國人民自古以來一直奉行孝道。許多廣為傳頌的故事反復強調了這種歷史悠久的愛老敬老的傳統，如西漢時緹縈舍身營救蒙冤的父親免于肉刑的故事。那些千方百計逃避照顧雙親的責任的子女們應該牢記，他們在出生和成長的過程中虧欠父母太多了。沒有父母關懷備至的照料和不懈的工作，他們怎能健康成長并且取得成功？他們怎能虐待父母而不受到良心的譴責？
我們每個人都應該遵守從祖先那里傳承下來的美德。只有這樣我們才能無愧為中國人。
3、十大必背范文之三：2006年真題 Directions: Study the following photos carefully and write an essay in which you should 1)describe the photos briefly;2)interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them, and 3)give your point of view.圖畫描述：As is vividly depicted in the photos above, Beckham, the smart British football superstar, is enjoying a striking popularity among the adolescents.In the first picture, Beckham’s name appears on a young man’s face.The caption indicates that worship for the idol is written on the face.In the second photograph, another young person is doing Beckham’s chic hairstyle in a barbershop.We are informed that he is spending 300 yuan imitating his idol’s haircut.意義闡釋：Undoubtedly, the pictures have subtly reflected the social phenomenon that idol worship is prevalent among the teenagers nowadays.Beckham represents the image of sport hero whose handsome appearance and unparalleled football skills are passionately adored by all the sports fans.Likewise, several teenage girls won their fame overnight in The 2005 Super Girl Contest in China, which provoked nationwide noisy debates on the value and harm of admiring these idols.Briefly speaking, young people are inclined to idolize the people who excel in appearance, intelligence or talent.建議措施：Hence, idolatry, the thought-provoking social phenomenon, is a double-edged sword which can exert profound influence on the growth of young people.If we simply worship the idols by imitating their hairstyle or pursuing fashions unreasonably, the obsession will certainly waste us a great deal of time and money, endangering the efficiency of our work.On the contrary, we will lead a positive and fruitful life if we endeavor to improve ourselves by bridging the gap between our models and us.Accordingly, the latter attitude should be adopted to direct our way of life.(255 words)以上的照片生動地顯示出來，相貌英俊的英國足球巨星貝克漢姆在年輕人中廣受歡迎。在第一張照片中，貝克漢姆的名字出現在一個年輕人的額頭上。文字表明：對偶像的崇拜寫在了臉上。在第二張照片中，這個年輕人正在理發店中做貝克漢姆的時髦發型。我們得到的信息是他正花300元來模仿偶像的發式。
毫無疑問，照片巧妙地反映了這樣一個社會現象：偶像崇拜目前在青年人中非常盛行。貝克漢姆代表了體育界英雄的形象，他的英俊外表以及高超的球技正是球迷們熱情追捧的。同樣，2005年中國舉辦的“超級女生”大賽中，幾個十幾歲的女孩一夜成名。圍繞著崇拜這些偶像的意義和危害，這個事件激起了全國性的爭論。總之，青年人往往容易崇拜那些在外表、才華和特長方面極其出色的人。
在我看來，偶像崇拜這個發人深思的社會現象，其實是把雙刃劍，可以深刻影響青年人成長。如果我們只是靠模仿偶像發型或追逐時尚的方式來崇拜他們，這種癡迷將必定浪費我們大量的金錢和時間，影響我們的工作效率。相反，如果我們靠彌補我們和榜樣之間的差距來努力提高自己，我們就會過一種積極和收獲顯著的生活。因此，我們應當采取后面一種態度來指引我們的人生。
4、十大必背范文之四：2007年真題 Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing.In your essay, you should 1)describe the drawing briefly, 2)explain its intended meaning, and then 3)support your view with an example/examples.圖畫描述：As we can see from the picture, a football match is going on.On guarding the goal, the man on the left seems to be keeping a “huge one” that is easy and inevitable for a goal, while the person on the right hesitates to kick the ball with an illusion about the “huge keeper”.It is obvious that both of them exaggerate the difficulties in front of them.意義闡釋：This picture does reflect a thought-provoking social phenomenon which is not uncommon in China now.The young always give up because the problem is beyond their ability to cope with.Superficially, it seems to be somewhat reasonable, but when weighing in the mind, we find there is an apparent tendency underlying this phenomenon: the lack of confidence.Firstly, it is well-known that we exist in a dynamic world with various difficulties.We can do nothing but face them.Secondly, attitude is the key point to take the first step.Assuming bravery and confidence to solve the problem, you will find the question is not as “huge” as you imagine.Take us for example, the entrance exam for graduate students even seems to be a horrible monster before us.Some people give up, some persist.So, with confidence and the right assessment of the difficulties, try and exert our strength, and then we will overcome all problems.On the whole, I believe we young people should face the difficulties in right manner.And nothing is impossible, just do it.(243 words)如圖所示，一場足球賽正在進行。左邊的人似乎在守一個對于射門輕而易舉、不可避免的“大門”，而右邊的人由于擁有關于“巨大守門員”的幻覺，踢球很猶豫。顯而易見，他們兩個人都夸大了面前的困難。
這幅圖畫確實反映了一個目前在中國很普遍同時發人深思的社會現象。由于問題超出他們應對的能力，年輕人總是放棄。表面上看，這幅圖畫似乎有一些道理，但當我們仔細思考時，我們就會發現在這個現象之下有一個明顯的趨勢：缺乏自信。首先，眾所周知，我們生活在一個充滿各種困難的多元化世界。我們別無選擇，只能面對。其次，態度是采取第一步的關鍵。擁有勇氣和信心來解決問題，你就會發現問題并非你想象的那么“嚴重”。以我們自己為例，研究生入學考試似乎是我們面前的一個可怕的怪物。有些人放棄了，而有些人則堅持了下來。因此，擁有信心和對困難的正確估計，并且竭盡全力，我們就將解決所有的問題。總而言之，我認為我們年輕人應該以正確的方式面對困難。世上無難事，只怕有心人。
5、十大必背范文之五：2008年考研真題 Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing.In your essay, you should 1)describe the drawing briefly, 2)explain its intended meaning, and then 3)give your comments.圖畫描述：As is vividly depicted in the picture, two disabled men are running fast through teamwork although each of them has only one leg.Obviously, it is teamwork that makes it possible for them to go anywhere they want to.意義闡釋：Simple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking.With the development of economy and society, competition is increasingly fierce.It is impossible for anyone to finish a work all by himself.Hence, people in mounting numbers put great emphasis on teamwork.In fact, it has been universally acknowledged that the ability of teamwork is the most essential qualification that anyone who wants to achieve success should possess.歸納結論：Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take some measures to enhance the sense of teamwork in our society.We should bear in mind that teamwork is of great significance to both our society and ourselves.Every one should have the ability of teamwork.Only in this way can we achieve success and only in this way can our society become more harmonious to live in.(176 words)如圖畫中生動所示，盡管每人只有一條腿，但是兩個殘疾人通過團隊合作正在快速奔跑。顯而易見，正是合作才使得他們走南闖北成為可能。
盡管這幅圖畫很簡單，但它向我們表達了發人深省的含義。隨著經濟和社會的發展，競爭日漸激烈。任何人都無法完全獨立完成一份工作。因此，越來越多的人開始重視團隊合作。事實上，人們公認合作的能力是想要獲得成功的人都應該具備的最重要的素質。
因此，我們迫切需要采取措施來提高人們的合作意識。我們應該牢記合作對于社會和自身都非常重要。每個人都應擁有合作的能力。只有這樣我們才能獲得成功，而且只有這樣社會才能變得更加和諧。
6、十大必背范文之六：2009年真題 Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing.In your essay, you should 1)describe the drawing briefly，2)explain its intended meaning, and then
3)give your comments.圖畫描述：As is symbolically illustrated in the cartoon, a large number of people are surfing on line within a stretching spider web, either to entertain themselves or to meet the work's needs.Unfortunately, it seems rather ironic to present people separated from each other by the spider web when they attempt to communicate.Undoubtedly, the spider web serves as a symbol of Internet, both connecting people and isolating them from each other.意義闡釋：The metaphorical and impressive portrayal has subtly revealed the duality of the relationship between man and Internet.On the one hand, there is no denying that Internet is currently one of the most efficient media used for interpersonal communication.As a college student, I get on line every day to discuss news with other people on BBS, to study English by registering for web courses, to chat freely through MSN Messenger with my friends.But on the other hand, a good many people admit that they are too much addicted to Internet to maintain face-to-face contact with their friends and colleagues.Once indulged in the fictitious world, people feel reluctant to approach others and to concentrate on real life.That's why some people have lost the skill of direct contact and get alienated from others.歸納結論：Hence, it is necessary for us to use Internet in a reasonable way and restrain from overindulgence.After all, Internet is invented to connect you and me, and to bring conveniences to our life rather than set a barrier to keep people beyond reach.(249 words)這幅漫畫象征性地闡釋了無論是為了自我娛樂還是適應工作的需求，很多人在一個拉伸的蜘蛛網之內網上沖浪。然而，看來相當諷刺的地方是，這幅圖呈現了他們在試圖互相交流的同時，卻被蜘蛛網彼此隔開。毫無疑問，這個蜘蛛網作為互聯網的一種象征，既連接了人們，又使他們彼此隔離。
這幅比喻并使人印象深刻的圖畫象征性揭示了人與互聯網之間的雙重關系。一方面，不可否認網絡目前是用于人際交流的最高效媒介之一。作為一名大學生，我每天上網與他人在BBS上討論新聞，通過注冊網絡課程來學習英語，借助MSN和我的朋友們免費聊天。但另一方面，很多人承認他們太沉迷于網絡而不愿與朋友和同事保持面對面接觸。一旦沉迷于這種虛幻世界，人們不愿接近他人并關注現實生活。這就是一些人喪失了直接溝通技能并與他人疏遠的原因。
因此，我們很有必要以一種合理的方式使用互聯網，避免過度沉迷。畢竟，人們發明互聯網是為了連接你和我，為我們的生活帶來方便，而非設置障礙使人彼此疏遠。
7、十大必背范文之七：2010年真題（教材176頁）Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing.In your essay, you should 1)describe the drawing briefly，2)explain its intended meaning, and then
3)give your comments.文化“火鍋”，既美味又營養
畢昇、老舍、莎士比亞、愛因斯坦、儒、佛、道、仁、禮、啟蒙、人本、后現代、解構、京劇、功夫、梁祝、天鵝湖
圖畫描述： As is symbolically illustrated in the portrayal, there is a boiling hot pot containing various ingredients of multi-cultures.These pluralistic cultures can be categorized as celebrities home and abroad as Bi Sheng, Lao She, Shakespeare and Einstein, philosophical concepts as Buddhism, Taoism, Confucianism, benevolence, ritual, humanism, enlightenment, post-modernism and deconstruction, as well as performing arts as Peking Opera, kung-fu and Swan Lake.We are informed that the cultural “hot pot” is both delicious and nutritious.意義闡釋： The purpose of the cartoonist is to show us that instead of being outdated and of little value in a rapidly modernizing world, cultural blending should be encouraged and maintained.On the one hand, mosaic cultures are part of the universal heritage of humanity and they are powerful means of bringing together diverse peoples and social groups.Consequently, cultural integration has become indispensable as a means of promoting further culture development and maintenance.On the other hand, for China and many other rapidly developing countries, there is a danger that age-old customs and traditions may become lost in the shadows of modernization.If kung-fu, Peking Opera or Swan Lake Ballet ever perished from the earth, it would be a tragedy of immeasurable proportions.歸納結論： In my view, multi-cultures can be kept alive by the people with the time to do so, and is extremely vital in ensuring a community’s future development and prosperity.As a consequence of successful commercialization efforts, unwavering government support and growing interest overseas, the future of cultural blending looks brighter and more secure than ever before.(254 words)如圖象征性所示，一只沸騰的火鍋中擁有諸多多元文化元素。這些多元文化可分為畢昇、老舍、莎士比亞、愛因斯坦等國內外名人，佛、道、儒、仁、禮、啟蒙、人本、后現代、解構等哲學概念，以及京劇、功夫、《天鵝湖》等表演藝術。文字說明顯示：“文化‘火鍋’，既美味又營養。”
畫家的目的是告訴我們，在迅速現代化的世界里，文化融合并未過時或失去價值，相反還應受到鼓勵和保護。一方面，多元文化作為全體人類遺產的一部分，是將不同人群和社會群體融合的有力方式。因此，文化融合作為促進文化發展和保護的一種方式，已經不可或缺。另一方面，對于中國
和其他快速發展的國家來說，古老的習俗和傳統面臨著在現代化陰影里消失的危險。如果京劇、功夫或《天鵝湖》從地球上消失，那將是不可估量的損失。
在我看來，如果人們能為多元文化花費時間的話，那么它就能夠長存。這對確保將來社會的繁榮和發展至關重要。由于成功的商業化努力、政府堅定不移的支持和不斷增長的海外興趣，多元文化的將來會比過去任何時候都明朗、安全。
8、十大必背范文之八：2011年真題（教材180頁）Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing.In your essay, you should 1)describe the drawing briefly，2)explain its intended meaning, and then
3)give your comments.旅程之“余”
圖畫描述：As is subtly portrayed in the cartoon, two tourists are taking sightseeing on a small boat while discarding their picnic leftovers casually into a lake.Unfortunately, the lake is already littered and teamed with flow rubbish like plastic containers, fish-bones, banana peel, watermelon rind, bottles, tins, food wrappings, and so on.And below the drawing, there is a topic which says: “after” the travel or “me” in the travel.意義闡釋：From the portrayal, we can conclude that the painter wants to convey such a message: a good many scenic spots are flooded with visitors, who spoil the beauty of nature by creating and leaving behind God-knows-how-much trash.On the one hand, tourism, as a multibillion-dollar business, is booming everywhere.Some people, laboring under the belief that tourism serves as an engine of economic growth, seem to ignore its negative effects on the environment.Nevertheless, these are not concerns that we can shrug off lightly.On the other hand, tourism has exerted great pressure on the environment we are living in: water is polluted, the ecological system is disturbed, and natural resources have been excessively used.建議措施：Undoubtedly, tourism could not be banned in any country as it does help to shore up the economy in places which have few sources of income.The significant point is that the unchecked growth of the travel business may render the development of an economy unsustainable.It is high time that we enhanced people's awareness to rectify this by taking the environmental protection into consideration.如圖所示，兩名游客正在一艘小船上觀光，同時把野餐的剩余垃圾隨意丟入湖中。不幸的是，湖中已經堆滿了漂浮的塑料盒、魚骨、香蕉皮、西瓜皮、瓶子、罐頭、食品包裝等各色垃圾。在圖畫下方，有個小標題寫明：旅程之 “余”。
從漫畫中，我們可以得出結論，畫家想要表達這樣一種信息：成群的游客涌入眾多景點，制造并丟棄了大量的垃圾，影響了自然之美。一方面，旅游業作為一項產值數十億美元的產業，正在世界各地迅猛發展。有些人認為旅游業是經濟發展的引擎，似乎忽視了其對環境的負面影響。然而，我們必須充分關注這一問題。另一方面，旅游業已經對我們生存的環境造成了巨大的壓力：水受到污染，生態平衡遭到破壞，自然資源被過度開發。
毫無疑問，由于對那些幾乎沒有其他收入來源的地區而言，旅游業確實有助于發展經濟，因此任何國家都無法禁止旅游業。但重要的是，旅游業毫無節制的發展可能使得經濟發展不可持續。是時候加強人們的意識，通過多加考慮環境保護因素，來改變這一現狀了。
9、十大必背范文之九：2012年真題（教材184頁）Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing.In your essay, you should 1)describe the drawing briefly.2)explain its intended meaning, and 3)give you comments.圖畫描述：As is symbolically demonstrated in the cartoon, two individuals respond to the same event in completely diverse ways.The person on the left airs his dissatisfaction and disappointment when a bottle is overturned, while the man on the right is hurry to raise it up, with a sweet smile on his face.We are informed that various folks take different attitudes toward the same scene.意義闡釋：The aim of the portrayal is to illustrate that keeping optimistic is of utmost significance to both our society and our life.In the first place, optimism brings us creative power into play, arouses our enthusiasm for work and helps us overcome difficulties.In other words, with pessimism, achievements can hardly be made.In the second place, keeping optimistic gives us light when we are in dark and encouragement when we are dismayed.It is optimism, rather than genius and extraordinary abilities, that inspires us to finish the arduous task.With optimism, the goal we set can be reached, and the hard nut can be cracked.歸納結論：In conclusion, being optimistic enables people to behave wisely, kindly and confidently, and it is also crucial for any individual’s, in terms of both character and competence.如圖所示，兩個人對同一件事情的反應截然相反。瓶子倒后，左邊的人表達了不滿和失望，然而右邊的人卻面帶微笑，急著把它扶起來。我們由此得知，不同的人對同一事物態度不同。
這幅漫畫的目的是闡明保持樂觀對于我們的生活至關重要。首先，樂觀能使我們發揮創造力，點燃我們對工作的激情，并幫助我們克服困難。換言之，悲觀時，我們很難取得任何成績。其次，在我們身處黑暗，樂觀能給我們帶來光明；當我們灰心沮喪，樂觀能給予我們鼓勵。是樂觀而不是天才或卓越的才能，在激勵我們完成艱巨的任務。擁有樂觀，我們才能實現設定的目標，克服難題。
總之，樂觀能使人行事睿智、仁慈、自信，它也是個人性格和能力培養中不可缺少的部分。
三、圖表作文：
十大必背范文之十：2006 MBA真題（教材198頁）Directions: In this section, you are asked to write an essay based on the following diagram.Describe the diagram and analyze the possible causes.You should write at least 150 words.1998-2004年全國工程碩士招生錄取人數
（工程碩士：Master of Engineering）招生 recruitment 錄取 enrollment
圖表描述：The diagram above clearly illustrates that dramatic elevation has occurred in the recruitment of Master of Engineering(ME)in the past seven years.According to the statistics given above, we may conclude that the recruitment of ME was on a steady rise from 1998 to 2004.In 1998, the number was at a low level, only about 2,500.Surprisingly, it reached to more than 35,000 in 2004 within no more than seven years.原因列舉：Some driving factors that contribute to the above-mentioned changes may be summarized as follows.First and foremost, China has become particularly active in manufacturing, which leads to the increasing demand of qualified engineers.In addition, the development of job market on the whole cannot keep pace with the expansion of college graduates, which obliges a large number of students to stay on campus for another three years to get better prepared for their career.Last but not least, working pressure is another reason.Taking all these factors into account, we may predict that with speedy development of our society, the number of recruitment of ME will keep growing in the forthcoming decade.建議措施：On the other side of the coin, however, this tendency may bring about a good many problems, such as the waste of talent.It is necessary for us to take effective measures to ensure this situation doesn’t get out of hand, and encourage students to choose majors in which theoretical knowledge and practical skills will be demanded in the job market.(246 words)上述圖表清楚揭示了過去七年工程碩招生錄取人數急劇增長。根據上面給出的數據，我們可以得出結論：從1998到2004年，工程碩士招生錄取人數穩步增長。在1998年，招生人數較少，只有大約2500人。令人驚訝的是，到2004年招生人數在不到七年的時間里達到3.5萬人以上。
促成上述變化的一些主要原因可以概括如下。首先，中國在制造業方面已經變得異常活躍，這使得對高素質工程師的需求增長。此外，就業市場的總體發展無法跟上大學畢業生人數的增加，這促使很多學生在校園里再呆三年時間，為就業做更好的準備。最后，工作壓力是另外一個原因。考慮到所有這些因素，我們可以預計：隨著社會的迅速發展，工程碩士的招生人數在未來十年將會繼續增加。
第五篇：考研英語寫作
高分范文展示：
The global economy, who is sleeping over that stretcher, like a helpless-sick wreck, is being practiced emergency treatment by worldwidebanking systems, which are trying their best to save the market intensively by cooperation.Conspicuously, that’s a horrible depiction related to/concerning the the world.the top of the list which should never be overlooked.First of all, , as the case of would make its comeback every 10-30 years on the average, so would this time.Furthermore, the overestimation of economic prosperityhas resulted in a great multitude of foams/bubbles in the securities and the realties.gues, who made use of installment policy to speculate in real estate industry, thus, only spending 30% of totally-needed funds in possessing 3 apartments, with the aggregate price over RMB 2 million.Actually, it is not the Day of Judgment.What we are glad to see is the keyword – “cooperation”and we will surely get through this tough period before long.好句寫法：把句子拉長→加修飾：
(1)n.+ who/which/that… 加從句
e.g.Many peopletakeseriously the lifestyle of chasing for luxuries.那些把一個人擁有財產的數量當作評判其社會地位的唯一標準的人們，會很重視追逐奢侈品的生活方式。
(2)n./句子結尾 + v.-ed(en)(被動)/ v.-ing(主動)加分詞（定語后置）
e.g.youngsters, ranging from/who range from 20 to 30 years old ranging fromwith研究發現，和十年前的5%相比，現在有近24%的年輕白領表示不清楚自己想要什么。
(3)n.+ with + n.(修飾語)加限定詞
e.g.A pretty girl → a girl with an angel-like face and a fairy-like figure
e.g.Nowadays, a lot of riches like buying luxurious autos to show/display their success and existence.當今，很多有錢人喜歡通過買豪車來顯示自己的成功和存在。
→These days, withdefined as the typical marks of 句型模仿：
07 閱讀text3最后一段：
From the middle-class family perspective, much of this, understandably, looks far less like an opportunity to exercise more financial responsibility, and a good deal more like a frightening acceleration of the wholescale shift of financial risk onto their already overburdened shoulders.* Looks far less like… a good deal more like… 看起來不像是……而更像是……
模仿→05大作文：養老足球賽
From our conscientious and clear-minded perspective, much of this behavior, undoubtedly, looks far less like like a 依據我們的良知，毫無疑問，大多數這種行為并不能提供合理分配贍養老人義務的機會，相反，它更像是一種加劇中華傳統美德“尊老愛幼”走向大規模衰敗的危險行為
大作文——開頭what、中間why/effect、結尾how
What——虛開頭（首段首句）
(1)坊間流傳多年的所謂經典套話
As can be seen in the picture given above…
→ Asgiven above…
e.g.悲觀樂觀 man, passion-sufficient and energy-continuous, is climbing upon a ladder to reach to his shining blue print.(2)直接描述
e.g.12002年作文：美國女孩穿著中國傳統服飾
There is a beautiful American girl, who is standing over there in a Chinese traditional costume, smiling just like a flower.a Chinese traditional costume.e.g.2 2010年作文：文化“火鍋”，既美味又營養
those dishes and cooking ingredients in a Chinese traditional hot-pot, including e.g.2012年作文：悲觀樂觀 What——[描述+寬泛、宏觀的點評]（首段第二句）
It is aa significant information that 主題has been in the spotlight in current society主題 has aroused wide concern at any corner of our social consensus.e.g.家庭成員關系 * 首段第二句和第二段首句應該有一定層次感，首段第二句提出一個觀點/現象，第二段首句再將其具體化/細節化，直擊中心。
Why/Effect——實開頭：（主題句）+ 原因/影響（內部：自身 / 外部：社會、媒體）+ 例子
(1)主題句：
Among the topic concerning主題（抽象）, as the depiction/picture shows, the most cardinal tip is related to the issue of主旨中心思想（具體）.e.g.家庭關系
Among the topic concerning the depiction shows, the most e.g.出國留學人數/考研人數/公務員人數(2)引出原因
Several factors could weigh heavily for the happening of ____, yet, suspended at the top of the list are the following two aspects.To begin with, _____.Additionally, _____.e.g.中國傳統文化/美德的缺失(3)引出影響
It is hardly necessary for me to cite all the evidence of the revolutionary influences(that)the 現象 gives rise
to.To begin with, … Apart from… ,* 表示導致的短語：Contribute to Result in/trigger/induce/spell/invite
* 表示原因：inducement/incentive
e.g.人人考公務員 result in.To begin with, … Apart from … , * Apart from用法：Apart from(mentioned above), …(new information)= Besides, … , Google could owe its success to the brilliance of its founders, Sergey Brin and Larry Page.* 表示歸因于：owe/ascribe/attribute… to …
(4)舉例子
A good case blowing my mind now is 人/物, who/which …
e.g.慈善/真正的成功
A good case blowing my mind now is a world well-known man, whose name is Bill Gates, industry after his retirement.* 例子不能單獨提出，例子前面要有一個論點，或者在例子后面要有一個點評和結論，這樣才是一個完整的舉例（名人名言也同理）。
How——提出建議（Suggestion）：規則、思想、行為
(1)制定規則：
Lay down/Establish the effective/reliable/available/practical regulations to …呼應主題.（敬老）（保護環境）（留學）
(2)改變思想：
Deliver the moderate 主題詞 outlook to guide us both physically and mentally.e.g.Deliver the moderate outlook to guide us both physically and mentally.成功觀/生活觀/物質觀/世界觀/知識觀/能源觀
(3)規范行為：
Exert/Implement/Practice the rational 主題詞 manners to live in a much more harmonious/compatible atmosphere/circumstance.circumstance.(4)補充說明方法：名人名言（適用于最后一段提完建議之后）
萬能套話：
As a classic saying goes,千里之行，始于足下
應用：提完建議之后
Yet, it is very probable to say without any exaggerationthat depending on the lack of 主題詞, many citizens/youths would have immersed in such an extreme condition for a long time.Does it have opportunities for us to make achange ? / Is it possible to make a change? Actually, as a classic saying goes, “a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step”.We will surely handle/optimize/refrain from … as long as the above mentioned proposals would be implemented immediately.e.g.養老 Actually, as a classic saying goes, “a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step”.We will surely refrain from as long as the above mentioned proposals would be implemented immediately.e.g.奢侈浪費
Yet, it is very probable to say without any exaggeration that depending on the lack time.Does it have opportunities for us to make a change? Actually, as a classic saying goes, “a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step”.We will surely mentioned proposals would be implemented immediately.特別講解：主體段落的展開（第二段）
(1)單向話題：要么褒，要么貶
原因展開：
The factors contributing to… are vastly complex.Some attribute it to ….Others place the blame on / Others place the high value on ….Still the rest complain of/ attach importance to …
e.g.為什么很多年輕人最終會抽煙
The factors contributing to a big rise in are vastly complex.Some attribute it to(2)雙向話題
e.g.中國傳統風俗習慣的改變是好還是壞
According to my humble perspective, every sword is double-edged.is both positive and negative.To begin with, it goes without denying that the new-changed customs and habits have distinct advantages.On one hand, they On the other hand, they eliminate “culture gap” to Although / Whilebidding farewell to the bygones enjoys considerable merits, it still have their own drawbacks when the following point is taken into account.A good case coming to my mind now isof the Chinese virtues – raising seniors.After all, * 舉例子的時候，要實現從手段到效果的跨越（我們要怎么做來達到什么效果）
小作文——Simplified（簡明扼要）字數：100-120
* 大作文的套話和模板不能用在小作文中！
* 小作文寫作時必須覆蓋每個題目要求的要點
(1)Letter——郵件、信件：生活化/接地氣
a)邀請信
學術邀請（充滿敬意）：
開頭：正式邀請（含參會時間和主題）
主體：介紹會議安排
結尾：希望得到正式回復，并確認
Dear Professor ___,It is my great honor to extend you our sincere invitation of an academic forum held on 具體時間 in/at 地點,which focuses on the topic of主題
The forum mentioned above will be arranged as followings.Firstly at 8 a.m.will start the 主題involves.Afterwards, there will be another arrangement, including ___.Then at around 時間, 另一個安排.I really hope you can make it.If it is possible, I would like to ask you for sending me your bank
account, and I’ll pay you 40 percent of the total lecture fees as the deposit.最后期限.落款
范文：
Dear Professor Liu,It is my great honor to extend you my sincere invitation of an academic forum held on Jan.1 in The Nation’s Theatre, which focuses on the topic of Chinese traditional culture.The forum mentioned above will be arranged as followings.Firstly at 8 a.m.will start the opening of the forum, which involves a brief presentation with regard to the prospects as well as plights thatthe promotion of Chinese culture may encounter.Afterwards, there will be another arrangement concerning a micro-movie of the cultural relic exhibition, which will last 15 minutes.Then at 9 to 11 o’clock, you would be highly expected to present us a lecture named “World Needs China”.I really hope you can make it.If it is possible, I would like to ask you for sending me your bank account, and I’ll pay you 40 percent of the total lecture fees as the deposit.Reply, if you please before next weekend.Li Ming,The Supervisor of XXX
b)申請信
學校組織社團評優，要寫申請。你是學校創新社（Innovation Agency）的負責人，請你代表你們社參與評優，寫一封申請信。
范文：
Dear Sir or Madame,Innovation Agency – “Most Improved Organization Award”.private tools’ rebuilding the living.building to make it accessible/easy to wheelchairs..Yours faithfully,Li Ming
c)回復投訴信（對別人投訴的回復和安撫）：承擔責任，嘗試挽回
有人投訴你負責的勤工助學中心某學生表現糟糕，部分原文：
I will not use your temporary staff any more for their disastrous performance.范文：
Dear Sir,temporary administration assistant you received from my organization,.We really care about our clients and that is why we will try to give some explanation about what happened.candidate training.work for you.Yours faithfully,Li Mingd)銷售信（空格處填入產品名）
Last year, we achieved a 215% increase in the sales of our ______.We believe that this happy state of affairs be attributed to two causes.First, we managed to avoid passing on any part of our increased manufacturing costs to our majestic clients.Second, we believe our designs and colors are the most attractive that we have ever produced.And so we are happy to be able to tell you that our new season’s ____ are, if anything, more persuasive than last year’s and our prices will compare very favorably with those of any of our competitors.We believe that your will agree that our samples prove the truth of our claims.We look forward for you to favor us an order.e)現場筆錄證明
You’ve come across a serious crash last night when a taxi heavily knocked down a passerby.Now the police asked you to offer a certificate of witness involving following points:
1.The time and place
2.The process of this emergency
Witness on a Crash
It was 時間 in a 星期 night, 日期, when I was about to enjoy my late snack a first aid to the young and phoned ambulance at once.Signature:Li Ming
(2)Notice——通知、告示
a)失物招領（Lost and Found）：信息要有所保留，不能全部透露
Case: You’ve picked up an ED（電子辭典）
1.Time and place
2.The feature of this electronic dictionary（留一個最大特征來核實對方身份）
3.Your information for contact
Lost and Found
On the evening of 日期regular magazine.of this ED the phone number Sincerely yours,Li Ming
點擊咨詢 