第一篇：MBA聯考英語作文（大全）

投訴信

日期 Dear sir,(第一段)I am sorry to inform you that I am unhappy about__________________，so I regret to have to complain _____________（提出投訴，表示遺憾）(第二段)There are ________________(問題1)，______________(造成的影響)；___________________(問題2)，_________________(造成的影響)；（該段主要用于陳述不滿的原因）。（第三段）

I would appreciate it very much if your company could look into the matter and arrange for a replacement of the faulty goods promptly.So I propose that you___________________________________________, I am looking forward to your earliest reply.（該段主要提出補救的建議）

Sincerely yours XXX

常見詞和關鍵詞：late delivery，cause，fulfill order，on checking the goods receive(當驗貨時)，I found that, since the late delivery has caused dissatisfaction among our customers, I considering, discount, I suggest that, I propose that, recently, refuse, as you known, after-sales service, breakdown, immediate, shipment, delay，道歉信

日期 Dear sir，（第一段）

Thank you for your letter of ______（時間）.I am very sorry to hear about your problems with my faulty.I had no idea that you were in any way dissatisfied.(感謝對方告知實情，并表示道歉)（第二段）

If you had let me know earlier, I could have investigated this immediately.Please allow

me

to

explain

what happened.__________________________________(解釋原因)； ————————————（提出解決方案）；if you experience any difficulties, please call me or fax me at once and I will take immediate action.（該段用于解釋原因并提出解決方案）（第三段）

Please let me apologize to express how sorry I am.I will make efforts to prevent a recurrence.(我們將盡力防止此事再次發生)

Sincerely yours XXX

常見詞和關鍵詞：excellent,apologize

感謝信

日期 Dear Sir,（第一段）

I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for your warm reception while I ______________________。（告之感謝對方什么）（第二段）

Your sincerity was most impressive.Without your help, things would not have gone so smoothly.___________;_____________;______________(l列舉對方如何幫助我們)。It is hard to imagine what my life have been like without your care and help.（恭維對方，描述如何幫助我們）（第三段）

I am anticipating further cooperation.In return for your hospitality, I would like to invite you to ____________（邀請來做什么），I am looking forward to seeing you again at that time.（對未來關系展望）

Sincerely yours XXX

常見詞和關鍵詞：hospitality，warm reception,heartfelt thanks,colleagues

邀請函

日期 Dear XXX，（第一段）

I am delighted to invite you and your delegation of 10 people to pay a working visit to china for a week in September or October 2011.the propose of visit is_____________________(邀請來做什么事情)；（第二段）

I highly appreciate our undergoing the discussion on_____________(在什么地方的討論)，and expect a have fruitful meeting with you in China.By the way, your group’s board,lodging and all other expenses will be coverd by us.Should you have some questions, please do not hesitate to contact me.Very truly yours XXX

圖表作文

（第一段）

The chart gives us an overall picture of the ____________（圖表主題）。The first thing we notice is that_____________（圖表最大特點）/the changes in the number of _____over the period from______to_____.This means that as ___________________（進一步描述）。(該段描述圖表的性質，簡單闡述其特點)

（第二段）

As can see from the above chart, _____________（圖表細節一）。After ving_________（細節一的變化），the ____________（緊跟著的變化）。The figures also tells us that___________________圖表細節二）。In the secondary，we can see that ______________accounts for _________（進一步描述）。

A number of factors may have contributed to this situation.Above all,________________（原因1）,second,_________________(原因2),A major reason is that_________________________（原因3）。（該段對圖表的數據進行說明，并闡述原因）

（第三段）

Judging from this chart，we can draw the conclusion that___________（結論）。It is high time that we ______________（發出倡議）。/there is every reason to believe that the trend will continue in the foreseeable future.總結 關鍵詞匯：

increase,decrease,fell,decline,sharply,dramatically,significantly,rapidly,steadily,slightly,remained unchanged, rise gradually, peaked at, low level, reached the peak, three-fold increase, A increase gradually while B decrease, A and B are closely related, table，對比觀點型

（第一段）

In recent years, there has been a heated debate over the relative importance of _________versus_______.Whereas some people hold that __________is more important than _________, others argue that the reverse is true.(對全文進行概述)（第二段）

Those who take the first view assume that ___________(對觀點進行介紹),in contrast, the second opinion is based on the assumption that_________________(對觀點進行介紹).（第三段）

As for me, I advocate the first view point.The reasons are as follows: Firstly, _____________________________________________________ Secondly, ___________________________________________________ Finally, _________________________(闡述自己選擇的觀點的理由)In my opinion, it does not make sense to generalize about which is more important, ___________ or ____________.Their relative importance depends on specific contexts.So the debate is essentially a chicken-and egg problem.關鍵詞：nowadays, for example，問題解決型

（第一段）

In recent years, there has been a lot of debate over____________（問題）/ scandal was disclosed, people and government and international communities were shocked.It is reported that________________(寫一個報道內容)，this situation calls for close attention from the general public.(該段對問題進行描述)（第二段）

A number of factors have contributed to the emergence of this problem.Firstly, _________________________________________________ Secondly, ________________________________________________ Thirdly, ________________________________________________ Another factors worth mentioning is that_____________________(該段要寫問題產生的原因或者影響)（第三段）

To solve the problem, several measures can be taken.Premerily, ____________________________________________ Secondly,_________________________________________ The most significant measure is___________________________(該段要寫解決問題的方法)關鍵詞匯：positive effect , negative effect, to reduce the negative effect, A large number of ,the situation is associated with several factors, incident，accident, is likely to harm the reputation of , address, issue, It is necessary to, domestic-brand, distributor, fundamental，對立觀點型

（第一段）

Across the world throughout history, it often happens that different people perceive the same objective thing differently.For example, two typical points of view have been expressed concerning_____________________(引出文章討論的對象)(第二段)Some people think that ________________, they cite the following as major reasons: firstly, ______________,secondly,__________________.（介紹第一種觀點，并解釋原因）(第三段)Others argue that _________________.they base this argument mainly on The following grounds: first, _______________.second,_____________.（介紹第二種觀點，并解釋原因）

For my point, I advocate the first viewpoint.My reasons are as follow: First,_______________.second,______________.third,____________.(發表自己的觀點并說明原因)或者都不同意，自己提出新觀點：

I do not agree with other of the view.In my opinion,_______________, The reason why_______________________________________ 關鍵詞匯：disagreement, whereas, different people have different view, thereby，獨立觀點型

(第一段)In recent years, more and more people tend to______________________ /there has been a growing trend among___________________________ /with the development of economic globalization, more and more people___________________。This phenomenon is receiving more and more attention from the general public.(該段要求對事實進行描述)（第二段）

I think we should take a positive/negative attitude towards it.The reasons are as follows.First, _________________, second,_________________.Finally,_______________.(該段表明自己的觀點，并說明原因)（第三段）

From the above analysis, we can see that _____________________.there is every reasons that this trend will continue and even grow stronger in the future, because_____________________./I firmly believe that_____________________(該段總結展望)關鍵詞匯：

opportunity, personally, oppose, convinction, rethink, strategy, owing to, appeal, on the practical side, as well as, benefit from this sort of, not only…but also, obviously,

第二篇：MBA聯考英語寫作例題及

便條就是一種簡單的書信，內容簡短，大多是臨時性的留言、要求等。是在有急事需告訴別人而又不能面談時，就可以寫便條，如請假條、留言條等等，一般不寫地址，與普通書信基本相同。具有用途廣泛、形式簡單、文字要求不嚴格的特點。便條都不用郵寄。例一：請假條。寫請假條時，如有醫生出具的證明，最好一起附上。Dear Mr.Pike，I very much regret I was unable to attend school this morning owing to a severe attack of illness.I am enclosing here with a certificate from the doctor who is attending me, as he fears it will be several days before I shall be able to resume my study.I trust my enforced absence will not give you any serious inconvenience.Sincerely yours Jack 親愛的派克先生：

非常抱歉，我因今晨突然生病不能前來上課。現附上醫生證明，醫生擔心我也許要幾天后才能上課。希望我這次身不由己的缺勤不致給您帶來很大的麻煩。

忠實于您的杰克

例二：留言條。可用于說明一件事、做一次活動安排以及詢問等等，應直截了當。寫留言條，日期部分寫在右上角，一般只寫星期幾，或星期幾上午、下午或具體鐘點。Dear peter: I have done all my things here.i sincerely thank you for the trouble you have taken for my sake.I am leaving for home by train at two this afternoon.this is to say good-bye to you.Please kindly remember me to your wife.Yours ever, Jack 親愛的彼特：

我在這里的事情已經全部辦好。這次麻煩你了，我萬分感激。我定于今天下午兩點乘火車返家，特來辭行，并請代向你的妻子問好。

摯友

杰克

The bar chart above demonstrates clearly that some changes havetaken place in terms of the situation of part-time jobs in a certain university.Although the participation percentage of part-time jobs from university thefirst year to the third year almost remain stable, we can see that percentageof university the fourth year has been on a sharp rise。

In the freshman year, based upon the data of the chart, the participationpercentage of part-time jobs is nearly 67.77%;the second year, 71.13%;thethird year, 71.93%.Surprisingly, the percentage rises dramatically to 88.24%in the senior year。

For my part, it’s of no difficulty for us tocome up with some possible factors to account for this trend.For example, dullnessand loneliness are common problems of seniors, therefore more seniors take partin part-time jobs.But the sources of this phenomenon go way deeper.It is theturbulent employment environment that shapes this trend.For hunting jobs andthen broadcasting their ambition, seniors try all means to gather workingexperience.I believe that finding reasons can be described as a bridge betweenproblems and solutions.(187words)(文都 徐可風)

網絡綜合a blessing or a curse?

As TV enters more and more families, people begin to wonder about its advantages and disadvantages.Some believe that it is a blessing, while others hold that it is a curse to society.Let's look at the good points of TV.Firstly, it can bring people new information in time from every corner in the world.People can enjoy their favourite programs at home.For example, Discovery is the program I like most, not only because it is interesting, but also because it provides some knowledge I cannot get from books.But on the other hand, TV may exert bad influence on people.A case in point is that some programs are full of violence and these programs unwittingly set terrible examples for audience.As a result, people, especially juveniles, are led to commit crimes.In my opinion, the attitude toward TV all depends on oneself.Mature persons are always capable to keep themselves away from its bad influence.But one thing is important： we should make full use of its advantages and avoid its disadvantages.● How to...題型

模板1

Along with the great economic development/the development of people's living standard in China and the high call for dealing with 主題 , more and more people are coming to realize the serious problem caused by 主題.But how to solve this problem?

As a matter of fact, there are many ways can contribute to solving this serious problem, but I think the following ones may be most effective.First of all is 方法1.Another way to solve the problem of 主題 is 方法2.Finally 方法3.These are not the best and the only several measures we can take.But there is no doubt that attention must be paid and it is clear that the task demands great efforts.The government/We should take considerable efforts to achieve the goal.(119 words)

范文:

How to solve unemployment problem?

Along with the great economic development in China and the high call for dealing with unemployment problem , more and more people are coming to realize the serious problem caused by unemployment.But, how to solve this problem?

As a matter of fact, there are many ways that can contribute to solving this serious problem, but I think the following ones may be most effective.First of all is to change people's traditional idea and encourage them to channel their own career.Another way to solve the problem of unemployment is to develop the tertiary industry.Finally we can find other ways to solve this problem.For example, increasing government investment.These are not the best and the only several measures we can take.But there is no doubt that attention must be paid and it is clear that the task demands great efforts.The government should take considerable efforts to achieve the goal.模板2

主題 is an annoying problem for people all over the world.I believe it can be dealt with on three levels: internationally, nationally, and last but not least, on a personal level.In my opinion, strict international regulations should be made.At the same time, 方法1.On the national level, government must see to it 方法2.Lastly, what can we do as individuals? First, 方法3.For instance, 例子.Second, 方法4.In a word, 主題 is a problem that can be solved if people take actions in cooperation.(81 words)

范文:

How to fight against pollution?

Pollution, with the development of modern industry, is becoming an annoying problem for people all over the world.I believe it can be dealt with on three levels： internationally, nationally, and last but not least, on a personal level.In my opinion, strict international regulations should be made.At the same time, every country should realize the seriousness of pollution and put all our heads together to fight against it.On the national level, government must see to it that severe measures should be carried out.These measures could help to reduce pollution and protect our environment.Lastly, what can we do as individuals? First, I think we should make changes to our life styles.For instance, we can try and use public transport or bicycles as much as possible.Second, we can protest against any bad actions.In a word, pollution is a problem that can be solved if people take actions in cooperation.模板3

主題 is the foundation of our future development.If 主題 become poor/sick/worse, it is impossible for us to attain our goal.On the other hand, if 主題 become strong/good, we can achieve our dreams.How can we have good 主題 ? First, we should 方法1.Second, we should 方法2 , such as 例子.Third, there is a proverb that says, “ 諺語.” If we pay attention to 主題 , we can avoid 缺點1 or at least 缺點2.In conclusion, nothing is more valuable than 主題.In good 主題 , we can get more development.In good 主題 , we can lead a happy life.(90 words)

范文:

How to improve our health?

It is known to us all that health is the foundation of our future success.If our health become poor, it is impossible for us to attain our goals.On the other hand, if our health becomes good, we can finally achieve our dreams.How can we have good health ? There are some advices for you as follows.First, we should keep on doing exercise every day.Second, we should form some good habits , such as early rising, taking exercise regularly.Third, there is a proverb that says, “Prevention is better than cure.” If we pay enough attention to our health , we can avoid getting sick or at least cure ourselves of a disease while it is still at an early stage.In conclusion, nothing is more valuable than health.In good health , we can get more development in our career.Only being in good health , we can lead a happy life.模板4

Today the problem of 主題 has become more and more serious.現象1,2,3.If the problem continues to become worse like this, we will suffer the serious bad effect.Concerned people have put forward some methods to deal with the problems.The government has established laws to protect 主題.Still more measures should be taken to solve the problems.People should be further educated to recognize the importance of the problems and use more reasonable methods to cope with the problems.Only in this way can we have a better and wonderful future.(88 words)

范文：

How to protect environment?

Today the problem of environment has become more and more serious.The world population is rising so quickly that the world has become too crowded.We are using up our natural resources and at the same time polluting our environment with dangerous chemicals.If the problem continues to become worse like this, we will suffer the serious bad effect.What we will leave to our offspring might be a desperate future.Concerned people have put forward some methods to deal with the problems.The government has established laws to protect air, forests and sea resources and to stop environmental pollution.Although we have already achieved some success, we still have a long way to go.Still more measures should be taken to solve the problems.People should be further educated to recognize the importance of the problems and use more reasonable methods to cope with the problems.Only in this way can we have a better and wonderful future.模板5

When asked about one of the biggest problems today, many people say that 主題 is most threatening.They are afraid of the bad influence caused by 主題.To this problem, most people respond with the demand for 方法1.Indeed, this is urgently needed, for 原因.If we adopt this method, we can partially solve the problem.Moreover, we should take more effective ways to cope with the problem.So in the long run we must 方法2.Man is highly adaptable and creative.Since we can solve a lot of thorny problems, why can't we deal with this problem successfully?(97 words)

范文：

How to solve the energy problem?

When asked about one of the biggest problems today, many people say that energy crisis is most threatening.They are afraid of the bad influence caused by energy crisis.Although many people have realized this and some concerned experts have taken many measures, the crisis is still threatening.To this problem, most people respond with the demand for more rigid conservation of natural resources.Indeed, this is urgently needed, for the present habitual waste of energy is very serious.If we adopt this method, we can partially solve the problem.Moreover, we should take more effective way to cope with the problem.So in the long run we must develop new sources of energy instead of merely conserving the limited supplies.No mountain can never be conquered and no problem can never be solved.Man is highly adaptable and creative.Since we can solve a lot of thorny problems, why can't we deal with this problem successfully?

第三篇：2012年MBA聯考必備作文

2012年MBA聯考必備作文(1)

1.信仰是精神的支柱和動力

古代楚國有個卞和，在山中發現了一塊璞玉，于是將那塊璞玉獻給楚厲王，厲王讓玉匠鑒別，而玉匠說那是石頭，結果厲王把卞和當作騙子而砍去了左腳。然而卞和對那塊璞玉依然深信不疑，后來再次把它獻給武玉，結果與上次一樣又被砍去了右腳。武王死后，文王即位，卞和抱著那塊璞玉在楚山下哭，一連哭了三天三夜，眼淚流盡繼而流血，卞和癡心不改，最后那塊璞玉終于通過玉匠的鑒定，證明是塊罕見的寶玉。這就是歷代傳頌的“和氏璧”。

“和氏璧”的故事告訴我們這樣一個真理，那就是：信仰是人們的精神支柱和動力。

人有了堅定的信仰，才能為實現自己的理想而進行不屈不撓的斗爭。正是這種對真理的堅信不移，卞和才有著如此堅定的決心，才不惜舍去自己的雙腳，要讓美玉展現它的光彩，要讓真理得到公認。

為了信仰就要付出代價，甚至生命。每年全世界億萬伊斯蘭教徒都要去麥加朝圣，每年也因此要發生因酷熱和擁擠而造成的大量傷亡。那么究竟是什么力量驅使他們那樣虔誠地涌向麥加呢?我們只要看看他們深深跪下的雙腿、低低俯下的脊背，還有每一張臉上那誠摯的表情，就會明白--那就是信仰。

人不能沒有信仰，就是說人不能沒有目標，不能沒有追求。曾經是社會主義國家的“老大哥”的蘇聯如今江山易幟。蘇聯的解體固然有著多方面的原因，但是喪失了對共產主義信仰卻是其中最根本的一個。信仰正如人的骨架，失掉了，人便垮了。面對社會主義蘇聯的結局，人們無不痛惜地說：“共產主義信仰不能丟，丟掉了，社會主義江山就要垮臺。

從古到今，有無數志士仁人為捍衛自己的信仰曾獻出了自己寶貴的生命。不管是羅馬百花廣場的火刑柱上印著的為科學的信仰而被活活燒死的布魯諾的無畏形象，還是天安廣場上人民英雄紀念碑上記載的無數為了他們的信仰而付出血的代價的革命先烈，無不是因為有堅定信仰的支柱和鼓舞，才表現出一往無前的獻身精神的。

今天，我們要振興中華，要建設有中國特色的社會主義，萬萬不可丟掉共產主義信仰，相反，要準備為之付出更高的代價。我們只有把共產主義的信仰化作全國人民的精神支柱和動力，具有中國特色的會主義，才能早日建成。

讓我們進一步堅定共產主義的信仰，并在這一信仰的支柱和鼓舞下，為振興中華奮勇前進吧!

2.有效率的樂觀主義

古時候有這樣一個笑話：一人從集市上買回一罐油，由于急著趕路，不幸罐索朽腐，油罐墜地摔碎，他頭也不回地繼續前行。路人提醒他：“你看你的油罐碎了。”他回答說：“已經碎了，看有什么用，只能耽誤走路。”我想，這大概就是人們常常想到、常常念著的“樂觀主義”了。

可見，樂觀主義能幫人戰勝許多愁慮、困難、窮苦、失望。

人生總會碰到惡魔的。一個人的目的愈遠，計劃愈大，他的工作所經過的途徑也愈遠;在前進的時候，有許多愁慮、困難、窮苦、失望，都是當然要碰到的惡魔。樂觀主義的人，就像這個扛油罐的人一樣，是不怕這些惡魔的摧沮的，反而會振起精神，抱著希望，向前干去!因為他們知道，倘被惡魔所屈服，便滅亡了;只有抱著樂觀主義的態度，才能戰勝惡魔，取得勝利!

凡是要做得好的事情，都不是隨隨便便就行的，都不是容易的。你自己要立于什么地位?要達到什么地步?情愿付什么代價?你所希望的地位或地步總在那里，不過必須先付足了代價的人，才能“如愿以償”。沿著大成功的一條路上，有許多小失敗排列著，最后的成功是在能用堅毅的精神，伶俐的眼光，從這許多小失敗里面尋出教訓，盡量地利用它，向前猛進。而這種”尋出“和”盡量地利用“，惟有抱樂觀主義的人才能夠辦到。

有許多人，對樂觀主義有一種誤解，以為樂觀主義的人不過是“喜皮笑臉”“隨隨便便”“一切放任”“撤撤爛污”“得過且過”“唯唯諾諾”。請君切莫誤信這種謬說。真正的樂觀主義的人是用積極的精神向前奮斗的人，是戰勝愁慮窮苦的人。這類的苦境，常人遇著，要”心膽俱碎“"一蹶而不能復振”的;只有真正樂觀主義的人才能努力奮斗，才敢努力奮斗!所以講到樂觀主義還不夠，要有“有效率的樂觀主義”才行。

古今中外，因了有極強烈而有效的樂觀主義，戰勝各種艱難險阻取得勝利的大有人在。牛頓發明地心吸力學說的時候，全世界人反對他;哈費(Harvey)發明血液循環學說的時候，全世界人反對他;達爾文宣布進化論的時候，全世人反對他;貝爾(Bell)第一次造電話的時候，全世界人譏笑他;萊特(Wright)初用苦工于制造飛機的時候，全世界人譏笑他。講到孫中山先生，最初在南洋演講革命救國的時候，有一次聽的人只有三個。這許多人都因抱著樂觀主義的精神，而為世人所稱道。

極強烈而有效的樂觀主義，能使人們戰勝全世界的胡涂、盲從、冷酷、恐怖、怨恨和反抗。而且工作愈偉大，所受的反抗也愈厲害，簡直成為一種律令，對付這種厲害的反抗，最重要的武器就是樂觀主義。一個人，缺少了樂觀主義精神，難免在各種惡魔面前敗下陣來。

你要想使自己的事業取得成功么?那就請你拿起樂觀主義這一降魔鎮妖的法寶吧!

3.我知道得太少

氣象、地理學家竺可楨，在離他逝世兩個星期前的一天里，當他得知外孫女婿來到他家，便迫不及待地叫他講授高能物理基本粒子的基本知識。老伴勸他：“你連坐都支持不住，還問這些干什么?”竺老聽了老伴的話兒，一邊咳嗽一邊說：“不成，我知道得太少。”

好一個“我知道得太少”!這種謙遜好學，不恥下問，甘拜人師，永不滿足的精神，正是我國人民的傳統美德，也是人生道路上走向光輝頂點的基本要素。

竺可楨在氣象學上辛勤耕耘，數十年如一日地進行長期觀察研究，一生碩果累累。誰能想到，一個蜚聲中外的大科學家，竟還在84歲的高齡，在生命處于垂危之際，先后五次向晚輩求教“補課”，孜孜不倦。不能不說這正是我國謙遜好學，不恥下問，甘拜人師，永不滿足的精神這一傳統美德在一個大科學家身上的生動體現，正是他能走向人生光輝頂點的基本要素。怎能不令人深深敬 佩呢?

人類史上，一個巨人的誕生，一門科學的創立，給社會帶來了巨大的進步，但它并沒有結束認識真理、認識客觀世界的進程，科學真理的路兒仍在不斷地仲延。隨著時代的進步，科學的發展，學科愈來愈多，社會分工也越來越細，因此要不斷進步，就必須不斷學習。因此，謙遜好學，不恥下問，甘拜人師，永不滿足的精神，永遠是走向人生光輝頂點的基本要素。

這使我想起牛頓這位一代杰出的學者、現代科學的奠基人，他發現了萬有引力定律，建立了成為經典力學基礎的牛頓運動定律，出版了《光學》一書，確定了冷卻定律，創制了反射望遠鏡，還是微積分學的創始人……功績顯赫，光彩照人，可當聽到朋友們稱他為“偉人”時，卻說：“不要那么說，我不知道世人會怎么看我。不過我自己只覺得好像一個孩子在海邊玩耍的時候，偶爾拾到幾只光亮的貝殼。但對于真正的知識大海，我還是沒有發現呢。”有這樣謙遜好學，永不滿足的精神，牛頓的成功是必然的!

古今成大事業、大學問者，無不是因為有了這種謙遜好學，不恥下問，甘拜人師，永不滿足的精神，才達到人生的光輝頂點的。

中國有句古話：“學海無涯”。面對大千的世界，知識的寶山，惟有謙遜好學，不恥下問，甘拜人師，永不滿足的精神，才能在人生的漫漫征途中不掉隊，為祖國做出應有的貢獻。

我們要有勇氣像竺可楨老人那樣說出“我知道得太少”。有這樣，才能在求知的崎嶇道路上奮然前行。

第四篇：MBA全國聯考作文

備戰2014年復旦托業模擬考試A3卷答案

語文：

有效性分析：

1.宮斗劇講的是“斗”，是爭寵奪權，因此，看這些劇，會刺激人們在生活中賣弄權術、使用陰謀。是因果無關。就好比，人們看警匪片就會搶銀行，看功夫片就會上少林寺去學武術一樣荒唐。

2.只要你人在社會中，終究不能逃脫一個“斗”字資源和空間，在特定的范疇內，比如公司，比如朝廷，比如江湖。混淆了“斗”在不同場合的內涵。在不同的場合，“斗“的含義不同，“斗”的激烈程度也不同。

3.人性有個共同的弱點：即我們在一個有限的資源環境內，必然會為了擴大自身的利益而進行斗爭。不當假設，人性本惡。其前提也不必然推出結果，人們除了斗爭還有別的選擇。

4.這個判斷是沒有標準的，就像“一萬個人有一萬個哈姆雷特”，道德評價的標準也是沒有標準的。混淆了個人標準與公眾標準的區別，也就混淆了“標準”的概念。

5.批判這個電視劇是沒有必要的，作為電視劇，反倒能為我們提供更多的思索空間，這空間沒有拋棄道德，缺少前提依據。再有，即便這個電視劇沒有拋棄道德，也不意味著提升和尊重道德。

論說文： 【參考文】

生活，需要經常的清點

我們都知道要定期地對自己的物品清理查點，哪些是生活必要的，哪些又是對生活并不太重要的，以此來決定對它們的取舍。其實生活也是如此，需要經常地清點，我們在清點生活的過程中，清點著生命。

人的生命是非常短暫而有限的，而我們渴望得到的東西，希望去做的事卻是很多的。這個好，那個也不錯，但是我們必須要清醒地意識到人的生命是有限的，人的能力也是有限的，應該對自己要做的事有所取舍選擇，將自己的精力放在自己最該去做、最想去做的事情上，專注而有目標，這樣做事情才會有希望。如果一個人在一生中不能夠經常地果斷地舍棄一些不該投入精力的事情，什么都渴望得到，時時、處處都勞心勞力，其結果只能是讓自己失望。所以，生活真的需要經常清點。

舍得舍得，有舍才有得。小草舍棄了活在大樹的濃蔭里，才生長得更加堅韌；小鯉魚舍棄了平淡地游弋在水中，逆水前行克服困難，才迎來了最終躍過龍門的成功；居里夫人舍棄對享樂的追求，潛心研究，最終為人類對放射性物質的研究作出了巨大的貢獻；陳景潤舍棄了安閑自在地做一件平凡的事，而胸懷大志，在簡陋的生活環境中埋頭苦干，實現了他多年的目標——證明出了哥德巴赫猜想。他們之所以取得成功，很重要的一個原因就是他們都將自己的精力放在一件事上，一個目標中，全身心地投入對理想的追求。

每個人都是多夢的，對未來有著各種各樣的設想，對要干的事有各種各樣的想法，但要明白的是精力有限，總會有取有舍，有失有得。將自己的精力放在最重要的事情上，他的追求才會有價值，有希望，即使到頭來沒有鮮花和掌聲，他也是成功的。因為，畢竟，他沒有遺憾。

放棄了追求享樂，才能活得更好，更有價值；放棄了紛繁世事，才能集中精力去做大事；放棄了思緒亂飛，才能平和心境，追求自然；放棄了世俗的偏見，才能尋覓到久已失去的自我。

所以，生活，真的需要經常地清點。

英語：

translation：

自由市場經濟完全建立在供求原則的基礎之上。有了這樣的原則，消費者便可以把錢花在那些他們認為最值得購買的商品和服務上，從而也就決定了那些企業能繼續生存。這樣，那些最受歡迎的企業，或是其產品、服務需求量最大的企業就得到了消費者的青睞。從這個意義上說，也就實現了高效。那些能滿足消費者需要的企業在市場中就會繁榮發展，而他們那些效率較低的同行們則因消費者不愿把錢花在他們的商品上造成資金短缺，最終被市場徹底淘汰。

在這樣的體制中，美國的企業實際上不得不達到最高的效率。通常情況下，一個地方的高效率在其他的大多數地方也會是高效的，因此，在以競爭求完美為特色的環境中形成的美國企業無論選擇在哪兒出售他們的商品，都是頗具實力的競爭者。

備戰2014年復旦托業模擬考試A4答案

語文解析

56.論證有效性分析解析

1、官方對延遲退休討論的慎重并不能說明該討論不會有實質性突破。官方的慎重只是對待該討論的態度，并不是該討論是否會有實質性突破的原因。原文顯然將兩者強加因果。把官方對討論結果的態度，看成決定討論結果的原因。

2、歐美發達國家實行延遲退休，因此推斷我國也應該實行該制度，有不當類比的嫌疑。首先因為我國即使GDP名列世界前列，但是因為人口基數大，人均GDP很小，多數人民并不如歐美富裕。何況，不同國家在經濟實力之外，在醫療衛生、文化信仰等方面有很大差異，不能說歐美發達國家實行，我國就應該實行。

3、考慮通過延長工時來代替延遲退休是犯了混淆概念的錯誤。從后文可以看出，延遲退休本質是延長勞動者供給養老金的年限，縮短領取年限，而非因為國家勞動生產力量不足。如果延長工時又按原定年齡退休，那么既擠占了組織對年輕勞動力的需求，阻礙了年輕人就業，又沒有對緩解養老金缺口產生任何幫助。

4、老教師的返聘無法推斷延遲退休對勞動者都有好處，這段話有以偏概全的嫌疑。教師只是勞動者大軍的一小部分，還有很多工人，承擔繁重的體力勞動。僅以教師群里的情況來推斷整體是不恰當的。

5、原文提到“因為制度無法實現，所以尚不到考慮的時機”，這兩者因果關系存在問題。研究論證制度的可行性和有效性是制度實施的前提，不能因為暫時無法實施而否定制度研究的必要性。

6、退休金有支付風險，并不能因此懷疑此項制度的存在基礎。保證支付是非常關鍵的大事，但是有支付難題并不代表應該質疑此項制度的存在意義。討論延遲退休就是在研究如何解決支付難題，如果真如此的話，退休金制度都沒有了意義，何必又討論延遲退休這樣的手段問題？

7、青年就業的確至關重要，但是退休問題也是全社會關心的焦點。哪一方面的重要都不是不考慮另一方面的理由。青年就業重要雖然正確，但無法推斷因此就要先解決就業問題。原文有因果關系錯誤的嫌疑。因為最終的解決方案可以是兩方面同時推進或者權衡考慮，而非僅先考慮某一方面。

57.論說文(范文)：

慎獨

孔子說他到了70歲之后，就能隨心所欲而又不破壞規矩。也就是說，70歲的孔子，隨心所欲都能做到慎獨了。至于70歲之前呢，要做到慎獨，卻必未能隨心所欲。圣人都是這樣，又何況是凡夫俗子的我們呢。

慎獨是一種境界。在一個大的集體中，大家互相約束，互相監督，那么你可能行為無過，然而這不是慎獨的境界。真正的慎獨是你獨自一個人的時候，你能否做到：桂花迎面吐香而不去折，小草汲水高長卻不去踩，垃圾滿地你欣然清掃，朋友的冒犯你毫不放在心上??慎獨的境界就是人生中可望且可即的境界，是你我應該追求的境界。

我們都是凡夫俗子，如何才能做到慎獨呢？《三字經》云：“人之初，性本善。”既然我們的本性都是善良的，那么，我們從理論上講都能做到慎獨。既然我們都可以做到慎獨，而孔子70歲之前還不能在隨心所欲的情況下做到，慎獨，所以我們的第一要務就是不能什么事都隨心所欲。“隨心”本沒有錯，但心隨所有的欲望（無論好壞）就不好了。魏征在《諫太宗十思疏》中說：“將有作，則思謙沖以自牧。”、“誠能見可欲，則思知止以安人。”我們要把握的就是“自牧”與“知止”。“自牧”就是用道德來約束自己，用正確的行為來洗滌自己的良心；“知止”就是懂得適可而止，沒有人約束自己，自己卻知道該停止時停止——這樣才能做到慎獨。

《笑傲江湖》中的君子劍岳不群是出了名的偽君子，在人前他總是一副正義的面孔，好似他就是圣人一般；而私下里，他干的卻是丑惡的勾當：偷林家的辟邪劍譜，暗殺定逸師太，嫁禍自己的弟子??當然他最后也沒有得到好下場。現實中也有和岳不群一樣的人，但是他們一開始未必都是偽君子吧，只是很多人沒有做到慎獨，以為沒有人知道就可以謀得非分利益，放棄了慎獨，以致從本質上放棄了良知，也放棄了成為一名君子的最后可能。可見，慎獨雖不能隨心所欲地做到，卻是一刻都不能丟棄的。

茍子在《勸學》中說：“君子博學而日參省乎己，則知明而行無過矣。”日日反省自己，在獨處的時候省察自己，那樣我們也就不會害怕迷失自己，而能做一個不隨心所欲的自己，坦蕩著慎獨。英語答案：

翻譯

根據發表在《柳葉刀》雜志的最新研究，引起心臟病的促因并非過度鍛煉或者精神壓力過大，空氣污染才是引起心臟病的“罪魁禍首”，研究人員發現穿梭在各種交通工具之間，諸如開車或是行走，位于誘發心臟病的各種致命誘因之首。來自伯明翰大學環境與呼吸科的教授Jon Ayres說：“大氣污染不僅對中風、心臟病以及癌癥有著直接的影響，而且環境污染對人體的呼吸系統有著巨大的負面作用。關于如何保護我們的呼吸系統，我們向專家請教怎樣才能降低空氣污染對呼吸系統的危害。

有一則研究報告顯示，如果在倫敦Marylebone 路上行走，人們呼吸的污染物的量大約等于吸煙48分鐘造成的危害。為了減輕與污染物的直接接觸，專家建議我們避免在主干道上行走。這些主干道，交通最繁忙，交通堵塞也最多，交通堵塞時發動機會釋放更多的尾氣。

寫作(范文)Part A: Dear Manager，I am writing to complain about the quality of the cell-phone I bought last Saturday at your store.Sincere the day when the cell-phone was purchased, problems have emerged one after another.For one thing, the battery is annoying as it barely supports the cell-phone’s operation for one day.For another, the cell-phone sometimes shuts off automatically without my operation.Therefore, I wish to exchange it for another cell-phone or declare a refund.I would be grateful if my problem receives due attention.Yours sincerely，Zhang Wei Part B: On Oct，13th，a two-year-old girl was knocked down by a minibus when she is playing alone on the street in Foshan city, Guangdong Province.In the following seven minutes，more than 10 passers-by walked past this little girl lying in a pool of blood, turning a blind eye to her.Finally, only a woman who makes her living by collecting garbage gave a hand to this wound little girl.Recently, this issue has aroused wide concern about whether we should help strangers.People’s viewpoints vary from person to person.A small group of people tend to hold that we should not rush to help strangers under many circumstances.They seem to understand those passers-by’s behavior of not offering help to the girl.According to them, quite a number of factors contribute to this idea, of which the first and foremost one is that helping strangers involves risks of getting hurt or cheated.What is more, we may do more harm than good in urgent situations because of our physical or intellectual limitations.They assume that it is not safe to move the little girl without sufficient medical knowledge.In contrast, there are still a vast majority of people maintain that we should help the strangers as much as we can.Their first reason why we should help others, friends or strangers is that it makes us happy and gives us inner peace.In addition, helping others makes the world more livable and lovable.From my point of view, the latter viewpoint seems more convincing and acceptable to me.We should be ready to help strangers because it makes us feel better and makes our society more beautiful.

第五篇：MBA MPA考試聯考英語小作文大作文萬能

一、建議信

1、模板：

Para1 S1 寫信目的Para2 S1 處境現狀（嚴重）。S2 有建議。S3 建議1。S4 建議2。（S5 建議3。）Para3 S1 感謝。S2 期待。

2、說明：（?）部分可省略；（/?）部分可以替換；【?】部分是提示實際不要。

3、范文：

Dear Sir or Madam,(/To whom if may concern / To those concerned,)

【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of making some suggestions to improve the service of our library.【P2S1】Although our library functions positively(積極的)in enriching the students’ campus life, its service goes far from being desired.【P2S2】In my eyes, the following measures need to be taken as soon as possible.【P2S3】In the first place, why not arrange an inquiry desk at the circulation hall? 【P2S4】In addition, the students should have access to the latest issues of foreign magazines.(【P2S5】Lastly, you should(/ had)better maintain strict order at the reading room.)

【P3S1】Thank you for spending time(in)reading this letter(/I sincerely hope that you will take my advice into consideration).【P3S2】I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience(方便;合宜)(/I am looking forward to seeing some new changes in the service).Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

二、感謝信

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Para1 S1 寫信目的（感謝）

Para2 S1 原因1。S2 原因2。S3 感謝方式（邀請對方）。Para3 S1 再次感謝。S2 祝福對方。

2、說明：（?）部分可省略；（/?）部分可以替換；【?】部分是提示實際不要。

3、范文：

Dear Jack(/ Tom / Judy)，【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of expressing(/extending /conveying)my sincere thanks(/gratitude)to you for your warm reception(/hospitality)while I was in America(/While I participated(參加，參與)in the exchange program in America).【P2S1】Your generous(慷慨的, 大方的,慷慨給予的)help made it possible that I had a pleasant stay and a chance to know America culture better.【P2S2】Besides, I consider it an honor for me to made friends with you and I will cherish(珍愛, 珍視, 愛護，鐘愛)the goodwill(友誼)you showed to me wherever I go.【P2S3】I do(/genuinely /sincerely)hope that you would(/will)visit China in due course(適當的時候)so that I could enjoy the opportunity to repay yours kinds and refresh our friendship(加深友誼).【P3S1】Once again, please accept my heartfelt gratitude(由衷感謝).【P3S2】Wish you all the best.Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

三、祝賀信

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Para1 S1 寫信目的 Para2 S1 艱辛（你）。S2 激動（你）。S3 值得（你）。S4 鼓舞（我）。S5 驕傲（我）。

Para3 S1 再次祝賀。S2 期待更大成功。

2、說明：（?）部分可省略；（/?）部分可以替換；【?】部分是提示實際不要。

3、范文：

Dear Jack(/ Tom / Judy)，【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of expressing(/extending /conveying)my warmest congratulations on your graduation from the Graduate School(/your promotion to general manager of the company(榮升公司總經理)).【P2S1】I know how hard you have worked to attain(（通常經過努力）實現, 達到, 獲得，得到)this goal.【P2S2】Therefore, I can imagine your excitement when you realized such an ambition(after all these years of painstaking efforts(艱苦努力)).【P2S3】Indeed, no one could have been more deserving than you.【P2S4】On the other hand, for me, it will be a real encouragement to see your efforts rewarded(看到你的能力得到回報).【P2S5】In short, I take great pride in your current achievements.【P3S1】Once again, please accept my heartfelt(/sincere/genuine)congratulations on your success.【P3S2】I wish you will farther success(更大的成功).Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

四、推薦信

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Para1 S1 寫信目的Para2 S1（其）現狀。S2（其）目的。S3（其）困難。S4（其）愿望。S5（己）期待。

Para3 S1 感謝。S2 期待（套語）。

2、說明：（?）部分可省略；（/?）部分可以替換；【?】部分是提示實際不要。

3、范文：

Dear Jack(/Judy)，【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of introducing(/recommending)to you Li Ming, one of my best friends(/colleagues/students/classmates).【P2S1】Presently(/At present)he(/she)is studying at Sichuan University.【P2S2】He(/She)will go to Harvard University in your place for farther study.【P2S3】As it will be the first time for him to study abroad, he will most likely encounter（碰到）a variety of problems(通用句).【P2S4】He(/She)hopes to obtain your guidance in many ways.【P2S5】I would be grateful if you could can kindly offer help(通用句).【P3S1】Thank you for your due attention to this letter(/Thank you for spending time(in)reading this letter).【P3S2】I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

五、辭職信

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Para1 S1 寫信目的Para2 S1 有因。S2 原因（工作性質）1。S3 原因2。S4 強調目的（辭職）。Para3 S1 感謝（曾經提供機會）。S2 期待批準。（S3 致歉損失。）

2、說明：（?）部分可省略；（/?）部分可以替換；【?】部分是提示實際不要。

3、范文：

Dear Mr.Wang，【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of informing you of my decision to(通用句)resign(/resigning)from my current position.【P2S1】After two months of work, I find it inappropriate(不合適的)for me to take the position as an editor for the following reasons.【P2S2】Firstly(/In the first place / First and foremost), I ever expected the job to be challenging and rewarding(挑戰與回報), which has turned out to be the opposite.【P2S3】Besides, the salary has proved to be much lower than you originally promised and I have a large family to spport.【P2S4】Therefore I have made up my mind quit after much deliberation(深思熟慮;研究).【P3S1】Thanks(/Thank you)for having offered me the splendid(/golden)opportunity to work with the outstanding staff(優秀員工)here.【P3S2】I genuinely(/sincerely)do hope that you will approve of my resignation.(【P3S3】I am genuinely sorry for any inconvenience caused.)

Yours faithfully(忠實地), Zhang Wei

六、求職信

1、模板：

Para1（S1 自我介紹。）S2 寫信目的。Para2 S1 有資質（條件）。S2 條件1（教育背景）。S3 條件2（工作經驗）。（S4 條件3（自身素質）。）S4 其它詳細見簡歷。

Para3 S1 感謝。S2 期待。

2、說明：（?）部分可省略；（/?）部分可以替換；【?】部分是提示實際不要。

3、范文：

Dear Sir or Madam,(/To whom if may concern / To those concerned,)

【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of applying for the position as advertised in China Daily(/the local newspaper / on TV).【P1S2】I am an undergraduate from Sichuan University.【P2S1】My qualifications are as follows(/My qualification, I believe, amply meet your requirements).【P2S2】In the first place, my specialty(/specialty / major), English education(/marking), ensures(/guarantees(保證;商品保證))that my educational background is right(/perfectly)in line with(跟?一致)this job.【P2S3】In second, my previous experience as a middle school English teacher(/a sales manager(?/assistant))has helped lay a solid foundation(堅實的基礎)for the work here.(【P2S4】In the third, I a good team player, self-motivated and eager to learn.)【P2S5】Please refer to my attached my resume for more details.【P3S1】I would appreciate it very much if you could schedule an interview.【P3S2】Looking(/I am looking)forward to your reply(to hear from you)at your earliest convenience(方便;合宜).Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

七、邀請信（公函）

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Para1 S1 自我介紹。S2 目的。

Para2 S1 活動1。S2（套語）邀請。S3 活動2。S4（套語）邀請。Para3 S1 再次邀請。S2 期待（回復/來否）。

2、說明：（?）部分可省略；（/?）部分可以替換；【?】部分是提示實際不要。

3、范文：

Dear Sir or Madam，【P1S1】I am head(/director)of the Household Electric Appliance Plant, which is a leading manufacturer of high-quality recording equipment.【P1S2】I am writing this letter for the purpose of inviting you to an exclusive(發布會)presentation of our new models of Digital Recorders.【P2S1】The occasion(活動)(/presentation)will take place at Noble Hotel on the third of January.【P2S2】I would feel it a great honor if you could come.【P2S3】There will also be a reception at two P.M.【P2S4】I hope you will attend too.【P3S1】Since your presence(參加)is so important to this presentation, I do(/sincerely / sincerely)hope you can make it(由衷希望您想法設法前來參加).【P3S2】We are looking forward to seeing on the day.Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

八、道歉信

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Para1 S1 寫信目的Para2 S1 致歉（具體原因）。S2 深深歉意。S3 解決辦法1。S4 問題解決。Para3 S1 再次歉意。S2 期待諒解。

2、說明：（?）部分可省略；（/?）部分可以替換；【?】部分是提示實際不要。

3、范文：

Dear Bob，【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of making an apology to you for my carelessness(粗心大意)(/expressing / conveying / extending my sincere apologies to you for my carelessness).【P2S1】When I arrived(/returned)home, I found(that)I had forgotten to return the music CD that you were so kind to lend me.【P2S2】I feel badly(/awfully)sorry for it.【P2S3】As I understand this CD is one of your favorites, I’ll try my best to send it back as soon as possible.【P2S4】According to the regulations concerned, it will take almost a week to reach Canada.【P3S1】Once again, please accept my heartfelt apology.【P3S2】I sincerely hope that we can keep corresponding with each other.(/ 【P3S1】Once again, I am sorry to my inconvenience caused.【P3S2】I sincerely hope you can accept my apology.)

Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

九、投訴信（complaint）

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Para1 S1 寫信目的 Para2 S1 原因（總述）。S2 原因1。S3 原因2。S4 處境。Para3 S1 要求。S2 期待解決。

2、說明：（?）部分可省略；（/?）部分可以替換；【?】部分是提示實際不要。

3、范文：

To whom if may concern(/ To those concerned,)

【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of making a complain about the laptop I bought last week.【P2S1】The reason for my dissatisfaction(/complaint)is that a few problems occurred in the use.【P2S2】To begin with, the system often broke down for no reason and some important data were lost.【P2S3】More over(/ in addition), the color of the screen was abnormal, and could not be adjusted.【P2S4】Considering these(鑒于以上原因), I find it difficult to go on with my work.【P3S1】I believe that you will take this matter into serious consideration and gibe a satisfactory reply.【P3S2】At the same time(/In the meantime / meanwhile), I sincerely hope to see improvement in your products(/service / management).Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

十、請求信

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Para1 S1 寫信目的Para2 S1 有要求。S2 要求1。S3 要求2。S4 要求3。S5 我的計劃。Para3 S1 再次請求。S2 感謝/期待。

2、說明：（?）部分可省略；（/?）部分可以替換；【?】部分是提示實際不要。

3、范文：

Dear Sir or Madam,(/To whom if may concern / To those concerned,)

【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of finding a child in a remote area to offer financial aid(/contributing to “Project Hope” by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area).【P2S1】My requirement are as follows(/The candidate should amply meet the following requirements).【P2S2】In the first place, he must be very poor and truly in need of help.【P2S3】Besides, he must be self-motivated and eager to learn.【P2S4】Last but not the least, he must be willing to return to his home town after graduation from university.(【P2S5】And I would send him a certain sum of money each semester term from this year on until he finishes his higher education.【P3S1】I would be most grateful if you could help me in this matter.【P3S2】Your prompt reply would be highly appreciated.(通用句)

Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

十一、通知

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Para1 S1 緣由。S2 主題。S3 要求（總述）。S4 要求1。S5 要求2。S6時間/地點。S7希望/歡迎。

2、說明：（?）部分可省略；（/?）部分可以替換；【?】部分是提示實際不要。

3、范文：

Notice 【P1S1】To improve the student’ ability and enrich campus life(/extracurricular activities(課外活動)), the Postgraduates’ Association is recruiting volunteers for an international conference on globalization.【P1S2】The qualifications for the applicants are as follows.【P1S3】To begin with, the candidates should have outstanding skills at English.【P1S4】In addition, they must have a strong professional sprit, cheerful personality and be aged under 35.【P1S5】Last but not the least, the students with relevant working experience are preferred.【P1S6】Those who are interested in this activity may sign up with the monitor of their classes before February 1,2011.【P1S7】Everybody is welcome to join in it.【署通知單位】Postgraduates’ Association

【通知時間】January 15, 2011

十二、備忘錄

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Para1 S1 緣由+主題。S2 內容（有）。S3 要求1。S4 要求2。S5 報名時間地點。S6期望。(時間+收發人+事由)

2、說明：（?）部分可省略；（/?）部分可以替換；【?】部分是提示實際不要。

3、范文：

Data: January 15, 2011

To: All students of the English Department From: Class Monitor, Zhang Wei Subject: Spring Excursion(正文Message:)

【P1S1】As spring arrives and the weather turns to be agreeable(怡人的)，the department has decided to organize a spring excursion in a suburban county(Huairou District).【P1S2】The activities include mountain-climbing and picnic(爬山和野餐).【P1S3】All the students of the English Department anr encouraged to participate.【P1S4】We remind(提醒)you of the necessity(必要)of bringing some food and water as well as wearing comfortable shoes.【P1S5】Those who are interested in this activity(/excursion)may sign up with the monitor of their classed before April 1, 2011.【P1S6】Everybody is welcome to join in it.十三、報告

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Para1 S1 目的Para2 S1 主要活動（總述）。S2 活動1。S3 活動2。S4 活動3。Para3 S1 接下來。S2 期望/展望。

2、說明：（?）部分可省略；（/?）部分可以替換；【?】部分是提示實際不要。

3、范文：

To: Professor Barbara From: James Green Data: January 15, 2011

Subject: First progress report on graduation thesis(畢業論文)(正文Message:)略。

十四、大作文

1、模板：【4|5|2陣型】

Para1 【己點】S1 有現象+具體現象。S2 有不同“點”。S3 正點+反點。S4 己點。

Para2 【己據】S1 有據（總）。S2 據1。S3 例1。S4 據2。S5 據3（換句話說To put it in another way）。

Para3 【己據】S1 強化己點。S2 預測（評論）。

2、說明：（?）部分可省略；（/?）部分可以替換；【?】部分是提示實際不要。

3、范文：【2010年1月MBA 作文】

【P1S1】In this chart, it can be seen that the subscription number of mobile phones in developed countries had a steady but slight increase from 2000 to 2007 and has remained constant since then.【P1S2】Meanwhile, the subscriptions in developing countries have witnessed a dramatic increase, especially from 2004 to 2008.【P2S1】It’s no difficult job to come up with some possible factors to account for this phenomenon.【P2S2】At the top of the list is the recent huge improvement of people’s living standards in developing countries.【P2S3】It is reported that, with the rapid economic growth of these counties, mobile phones have become a life necessity overnight rather than a luxury.【P2S4】Besides we must admit that developing countries have a far larger population and accordingly a larger demand for mobile phone services than developed countries.【P2S5】Finally, what is responsible for the situation is that the mobile phone service in developing countries has been increasingly cheaper these years.【P2S6】In developed countries, however, the speed of the mobile phone service had been more efficient and therefore the market was soon saturated.【P3S1】As discussed above, it is no surprise to see this difference..【P3S2】And I firmly believe that this established trend will continue for quite a while in the forthcoming years.========================

【P1S1】These days, there is an increasingly hot topic among the general public which concerns the phenomenon that a growing number of college students are willing to work as a nurse after graduation.【P1S2】Whenever it comes to this issue, there will spring up a wide variety of voices.【P1S3】Some people view it as beneficial, while still some others consider that it is not suitable or acceptable for a developing country like China.【P1S4】So far as I am concerned, I am inclined to support the former view.【P2S1】It is of no difficulty for me to put forward some arguments to illustrate my standpoint.【P2S2】At the top of the list, with the rapid development of Chinese economy and the steady improvement of living standard, there is an increasing demand for high quality nurses.【P2S3】Based upon a recent Internet survey, about 56% of Chinese families in big cities are in need of this kind of highly educated workforce.【P2S4】What’s more, we must admit that there is a fierce competition in the current Chinese employment market.【P2S5】Last but not the least, the fact cannot be ignored that, in the long run, as an emerging profession in China, highly educated nurses will be widely recognized and respected.【P3S1】There is no denying the fact that people will have diverse views on the same issue, but my standpoint is clear and well founded in the foregoing discussions.【P3S2】Therefore, I believe, the current trend should be encouraged rather than discouraged or even banned.