第一篇：英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文得高分技巧及分析

四級(jí)作文高分策略 一、四級(jí)作文親密接觸 1． 評(píng)分：作文部分在整個(gè)四級(jí)卷面（滿分為 100 分）中占 15

分。國(guó)家教委明確規(guī)定，從 1997 年 6 月起，四級(jí)考試中，如果 學(xué)生作文得零分，那么即使前面得了滿分（即 85 分），其總成 績(jī)?nèi)詫⒁暈椴患案瘛Ｗ魑牟粔?6 分則實(shí)行倒扣分。2． 文體：縱觀歷年來(lái)的考題，我們不難發(fā)現(xiàn)議論文占據(jù)著七成

以上的比例，近幾年還常常是以較為實(shí)用的形式出現(xiàn)，如書信、演講稿、導(dǎo)游解說(shuō)詞或圖表分析的形式出現(xiàn)。例如，2004 年 6 月 19 日大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文題目為 A brief introduction to a tourist attraction；2005 年 1 月的題目為競(jìng)選學(xué)生會(huì)主席演 說(shuō)；2003 年 6 月 CET 作文題目為 An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident：假設(shè)你在某日某時(shí)某地目擊一起車禍，就 此寫一份見(jiàn)證書。見(jiàn)證書須包括以下幾點(diǎn)：

1、車禍發(fā)生的時(shí)間 及地點(diǎn)；

2、你所見(jiàn)到的車禍情況；

3、你對(duì)車禍原因的分析。2001 年 6 月題目為 A Letter to a Schoolmate, 提綱： 對(duì)來(lái)

1、訪的同學(xué)表示歡迎；

2、提出對(duì)度假安排的建議；

3、提醒應(yīng)注意 的事項(xiàng)； 2002 年 1 月題目要求給校長(zhǎng)寫一信，就食堂的狀況寫一 信。從以上今年的出題趨勢(shì)可以看出，四級(jí)作文對(duì)應(yīng)用文的格式 還沒(méi)有更嚴(yán)格的要求，但對(duì)實(shí)際生活中的應(yīng)用能力，已經(jīng)提出了 要求。很顯然，現(xiàn)在的四、六級(jí)考試作文有些向考研英語(yǔ)的作文

考查方式轉(zhuǎn)化。也就是說(shuō)，四、六級(jí)作文也開始注重考生觀察問(wèn) 題、分析問(wèn)題和解決問(wèn)題的能力，當(dāng)然還有用英語(yǔ)思維的能力。值得注意的是，但是從近些年看，四級(jí)作文往往不是單一的議 論文體裁，而是幾種體裁的雜合體。例如： １.做合格大學(xué)生的必要性 ２.做合格大學(xué)生的必備條件（可以從德智體方面談）３.我計(jì)劃這樣做 很多人說(shuō)這種類型的作文是議論文。這是片面的，因?yàn)椋谝欢我髮憽??必要 性”，這說(shuō)明本段體裁是議論文；

第二段要求寫“??必備條件”，這說(shuō)明本段要求寫說(shuō)明文；兒 地三段要求寫“??這樣做”，這說(shuō)明本段要求寫描述文。所以 在大多數(shù)情形下，四級(jí)作文是三種體裁的雜合體。僅僅學(xué)會(huì)寫議論文是不夠的，近兩年四級(jí)考試加大了應(yīng)用文和記敘 文的考查力度，這就要求考生在熟悉議論文的基礎(chǔ)之上加強(qiáng)應(yīng)用文和 記敘文的訓(xùn)練。應(yīng)用文主要考寫信，考生必須明確寫信的基本格式以 及寫信的流程： 1.尊敬語(yǔ)氣先開頭； 2.開門見(jiàn)山說(shuō)意圖； 3.咨詢建議一二三； 4.感謝客氣不可少。

常用的客套話必須熟記： 1.It is with the greatest pleasure that I write th is letter to? 2.We will be very glad if you can take our suggest ion into consideration.3． 命題形式：接下來(lái)談?wù)撘幌伦魑摹＿^(guò)去十幾年四級(jí)短文寫作

也是有一定的變化的。自 1986 年實(shí)行四級(jí)英語(yǔ)統(tǒng)考以來(lái)，出現(xiàn) 過(guò)的作文題目主要可以分為以下幾類：提綱式作文、段首名作文 和圖表作文。下面對(duì)此作簡(jiǎn)要的分析。★ 提綱式作文：即給出漢語(yǔ)概要，并要求的據(jù)此寫出不少于 12 0 詞不達(dá)意的作文。這種類型的作文在 90 年代大約占 40%左右。這類作文相對(duì)而言簡(jiǎn)單一些。因?yàn)樵趯忣}材時(shí)，如果只有題目，考生受到的限制少，頭緒太多，結(jié)果可能文章缺少統(tǒng)一性。提綱 式作文一般寫成 3 段式，可分為比較類、對(duì)比類、駁論類、立論 類和解釋說(shuō)明類。

1、比較類：19992 年 1 月作文題目是：Positive and Negative Aspects of Sports.所給的 outline 是

1、參加體育運(yùn)動(dòng)有許多 好處。2.但也有副作用。3。你的體會(huì)。

2、對(duì)比類：1995 年 1 月作文題目是：Can Money Buy Happine ss? 所給的 outline 是：1 有人認(rèn)為金錢是幸福之本（source o f happiness）。2 也有人認(rèn)金錢是萬(wàn)惡之源..(root of all ev

il).3。我的看法。

3、駁論類：和對(duì)比類作文有相似之處，但著重點(diǎn)是對(duì)一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤 觀點(diǎn)的批駁。如 1998 年 6 月的作文題目：Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? 所給的 outline 是：1 有些人認(rèn)為某 些數(shù)字會(huì)帶來(lái)好運(yùn)。2 我認(rèn)為數(shù)字和運(yùn)氣無(wú)關(guān)。

4、立論類：1994 年 1 月作文的題目是：The World Is Gettin g Smaller and Smaller.所給的 outline 是： 現(xiàn)代化的交通 1。工具越來(lái)越發(fā)達(dá)。2。人與人之間的交往越來(lái)越頻繁。3。結(jié)論。

5、解釋說(shuō)明類：1993 年 6 月作文的題目是：My Most Favorit e Program.所給的 outline 是：1 我最喜歡的電視節(jié)目是。2 這類節(jié)目的內(nèi)容和特點(diǎn)。3 我喜歡它的原因。★ 段首句作文：給出每一段句子的第一句英文，然后根據(jù)段首 句進(jìn)行擴(kuò)寫。1990 年 1 月試題的題目是：What Would Happen I f There were No Power.所給的段首句分別是：1.Ever since early this century, electricity has become an essential part of our modern life..2.If there were no electric power,.3.There fore,.★ 圖表作文：1991 年 1 月、1994 年 1 月、2002 年 6 月都是圖表 作文。

二、主題與邏輯

統(tǒng)一性(Unity)(Unity)原則 1.統(tǒng)一性(Unity)原則 首先，句子應(yīng)具有統(tǒng)一性，也就是說(shuō)，一個(gè)句子要表達(dá)一個(gè)明確 的意思。同樣,段落也應(yīng)有統(tǒng)一性。正如一個(gè)句子是由一系列的詞語(yǔ)組成, 并表達(dá)一個(gè)完整的意思,一個(gè)段落是由系列的句子圍繞一個(gè)中心 思想所組成的一個(gè)完整的統(tǒng)一體。段落的統(tǒng)一性指的是在一個(gè)段 落里只討論一個(gè)主題。由于一個(gè)段落只圍繞一個(gè)中心思想,所以 展開句中的各個(gè)事實(shí)、例子、理由等都必須與主題相關(guān)。比如你 的主題是有關(guān)出國(guó)深造的好處,那么就只談其好處如果要談壞處 的話就得另起一段。此外,段落的統(tǒng)一性還指的是:段落中的各個(gè)展開句都必須由主題 句中的主導(dǎo)思想展開。在寫作中,學(xué)生有時(shí)容易犯離題的毛病。比 如在談到出國(guó)深造的好處時(shí),你也許會(huì)提到好處之一是培養(yǎng)獨(dú)立性, 至于其原因,你也許會(huì)提到遠(yuǎn)離家人是一個(gè)因素,但假如你的筆墨 過(guò)多地停留在“遠(yuǎn)離家人”這一方面,那你就離題了,你的落就缺乏 統(tǒng)一性。所以要寫好作文,必須遵守統(tǒng)一性原則。因此，在段落的寫作過(guò)程中，段內(nèi)各句都應(yīng)緊扣段落的主題。對(duì)于 那些與主題無(wú)關(guān)的句子，無(wú)論多好，也要毫不猶豫地將其刪去，否 則就會(huì)破壞段落的統(tǒng)一性。

文章中所有的句子都是為全文的中心服務(wù)的。就各段而言，其中 的每一句話都要緊緊圍繞著該段的主題句進(jìn)行，不能說(shuō)與主題句 無(wú)關(guān)的東西。有人也將其稱為統(tǒng)一性。請(qǐng)看一例：

The weather has been changeable.On Sunday we had a hig h wind that blew down some trees.Monday was so cold th at we had to turn on the heat and wear out winter coats.On Tuesday we formed a group to go roller skating.By Wednesday the weather cleared and the sun came out.Thu rsday was as hot and humid as an August day.Friday mor ning it began to rain, and it looks as if we’ have a ll cold, steady wind for a few days.這一段寫“最近天氣多變”，首句為主題句。擴(kuò)展句敘述了星期日、星期

一、星期

三、星期四和星期五的天氣情況，用以展開關(guān)鍵詞 changeable。但星期二沒(méi)有提天氣，而是說(shuō)當(dāng)天的活動(dòng)安排，偏 離了主題，打斷了段落敘述的連貫性，破壞了段落邏輯意義的統(tǒng) 一性，應(yīng)刪去或改為與天氣有關(guān)的話。

再如：

Sports benefit us in many respects.When taking part in

sports, we get the chance to train almost all parts of our body.There is no doubt that properly balanced phy sical activities keep us physically fit.Furthermore, s ports can enrich our life and maintain our psychologica l health.Through participation, everyone can learn tha t on the playing field he not only competes for himself but also for his team.Sports teach us about considera tion, cooperation and optimism, and how to cope with di fficulties.第一句是本段的主題句，接下來(lái)作者從體育運(yùn)動(dòng)對(duì)身體的好處說(shuō) 了兩句，第四句講述體育運(yùn)動(dòng)對(duì)心理方面的益處，第五句從團(tuán)隊(duì) 的方面加以論述，最后一句既是論據(jù)，同時(shí)也是對(duì)前面三點(diǎn)的概 括。全段沒(méi)有一句話脫離主題句。

連貫(coherence)(coherence)的原則 2.連貫(coherence)的原則 連貫就是指文章的段落之間、段落中各句子之間要有一定的銜 接。段落結(jié)構(gòu)和句與句之間的銜接應(yīng)遵照一定的順序。段落之間的連 接也應(yīng)符合邏輯。這樣使文章連貫緊湊，自然流暢，層次分明，脈絡(luò)清晰。段落只有在具有含義一致性的同時(shí)又具有表達(dá)的連貫

性才能充分有效地傳達(dá)信息，真正實(shí)現(xiàn)寫作目的。

內(nèi)容的連貫性是表達(dá)連貫性的前提，一組互不相干的句子放在一 起，無(wú)法取得表達(dá)的連貫性；只有把一組意義緊密相關(guān)的句子有 機(jī)地組合起來(lái)，才能真正充分有效地闡述其主題思想。就上面 的例一來(lái)說(shuō)，雖然它是以時(shí)間為線索將這幾天串在一起，但仍讓 人感覺(jué)太亂。每個(gè)句子都是以星期某一天的名子開頭，太單調(diào)了。各個(gè)句子之間似乎沒(méi)有什么關(guān)系，應(yīng)該說(shuō)是一篇連貫性較差的文 章。下面讓我們對(duì)它稍加修改一下：

The weather has been changeable.On Sunday we had a hig h wind that blew down some trees.Monday was so cold th at we had to turn on the heat and wear out winter coats.And it remained gloomy the next day.To our pleasure, by Wednesday the weather cleared and the sun came out.But Thursday tuned out to be as hot and humid as an Aug ust day.Worse still, it began to rain this morning, an d it looks as if we’ll have a cold, steady wind for a few days.那么，如何使文章連貫?zāi)兀?/p>

就議論文而言，獲取連貫主要有三種方法：一是使用代詞或有意 地重復(fù)一些詞，二是替代的使用，三是使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞語(yǔ)。代詞和有意的重復(fù)可起到銜接的作用。例如在上面的例子中，在 提到星期二時(shí)，沒(méi)有用 Tuesday，而是用了 the next day，避免 重復(fù)，并把這兩天連在一起，讓人感覺(jué)到了前后的承接。再如最 后一句中原文用的是 Friday morning，改為 this morning 后，意 義并沒(méi)有改變，但一下子把距離拉近了，既承接起前面的五天，又能與后一分句中的將來(lái)時(shí)有效的結(jié)合。關(guān)聯(lián)詞和插入語(yǔ)的使用是四級(jí)考試作文中最明顯的連接手段，如 上例中的 and，to our pleasure，but，worse still。需要注意的是，關(guān)聯(lián)詞的使用是與段落（文章）的展開方法密切 相關(guān)的，不要為了使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞而使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞。下面結(jié)合段落的展 開方法具體加以說(shuō)明。1．舉例法 列舉事實(shí)或舉出實(shí)例來(lái)說(shuō)明中心思想, 是簡(jiǎn)單易行、具有說(shuō)服力 的寫作方法。

Communicating with other people by telephone is very co nvenient, especially when you have something urgent.Fo r example, if one of your family members is seriously i ll at right, and you don’t know how to deal with it an d where to find a doctor, what can you do? A telephone

is the answer.Dial 120 and you will get services from the hospital very soon.2.列舉法 列舉的模式通常是 主題句example 1example 2example 3 列舉時(shí)常用 for e xample, for instance, such as, like, take?as an example, to ill ustrate 等詞語(yǔ).3.分類法 一般是在主題句之后，依次羅列段落指示詞所表達(dá)的幾個(gè)部分或 幾個(gè)方面。然后，選用豐富的事例對(duì)所羅列的各個(gè)部分或各個(gè)方 面進(jìn)行具體地說(shuō)明或解釋。

There are three basic kinds of materials that can“ be f ound in any good library.First, there are books on all subjects, both in English and in many other languages.These books are organized according to subject, title, and author in a central file caned the card catalog.B ooks can generally be checked out of the library and ta ken home for a period of two to four weeks.Second, the re are reference works.which include encyclopedias, di ctionaries, bibliography, atlases, etc., and which gene rally must be used in the library itself.Third, there

are periodicals-magazines, newspapers, pamphlets-which are flied alphabetically in racks, or which have been filmed to conserve space.Like reference works, periodi cals cannot usually be removed from the library.分類時(shí)常用：most of all，next，moreover，in addition，besi des，furthermore，to begin with，to start with，first of all，fir st，second，third?

4.因果關(guān)系 在段落一開頭，就用主題句點(diǎn)明其因果關(guān)系，然后選用有關(guān)材料，客觀的羅列某些原因或結(jié)果，以證闡述的中心思想。

Growing numbers of well-to-do Americans are making the deci sion to move abroad.They find it impossible in America to w alk the streets at night without fear of being raped, mugged, o r murdered, nor do they see a way to escape the poisonous ai r of the cities.They maintain that even American food has be come increasingly dangerous to eat.Last but not least, they ins ist that they are sick of the pace of American life, a pace that leaves no time for relaxation or pleasure.因果關(guān)系常用語(yǔ)匯: because of, so, owing to, thanks to, thus, as a result of, hence, for this reason, consequently, is caused b y, lead to, result in

5．比較法 主題句必須明確表明所要比較的對(duì)象和所要比較的范圍，實(shí)際上 就是羅列兩個(gè)或兩個(gè)以上比較對(duì)象的相同點(diǎn)。

Learning English is like building a house.Laying a sol id foundation is the first and most important step.In other words, you should reads, you should read and spea k English every day.Memorizing new words and phrases i s also helpful.Like building a house, learning English takes some time.So don’t be impatient.Remember, Rom e wasn’t built in a day.常用語(yǔ)匯：at the same time, similar to, accordingly, bo th, show a degree of similarity, similarly, lie and so , the same as, and? too, in the same way, in a like man ner

三、段落結(jié)構(gòu)(Paragraph Structure)段落結(jié)構(gòu)(Paragraph 句子是組成段落的基本要素。一個(gè)段落是由一組語(yǔ)義相關(guān)的句子構(gòu)成 的。一般來(lái)講,段落中的句子可分為主題句、發(fā)展句、結(jié)論句。段落 是圍繞一個(gè)中心思想所展開的一系列相關(guān)的句子。它可以獨(dú)立成章, 也可以是文章的一部分。英語(yǔ)段落的一個(gè)最基本的特征就是按照一條 直線發(fā)展,也就是說(shuō),每個(gè)句子須按照統(tǒng)一性和連貫性原則與前一個(gè) 句子相連接。事實(shí)上,英語(yǔ)段落就是以主題句、展開句和結(jié)尾句所組 成的一個(gè)統(tǒng)一的整體。

一、主題句(Topic Sentence)主題句是英文段落的典型特點(diǎn)。主題句是一個(gè)段落中最具有概括性的 句子,它表明該段落要討論的內(nèi)容,所以主題句就是一個(gè)段落的中心 思想,它不僅點(diǎn)明了主題(topic)而且也給該主題確立了主導(dǎo)思想(co ntrolling idea)。例如: It is difficult for Chinese students to write compositions in English.其中,for Chinese students to write compositions in English 是主題,而 difficult 是主導(dǎo)思想。根據(jù)這一主題句,作者接著便會(huì)就 ”中國(guó)學(xué)生用英語(yǔ)寫作文“這一主題在”難“方面加以展開。同樣，讀者 也可以預(yù)料在段落的其余句子里,作者可能會(huì)在遣詞造句或其他方面 來(lái)說(shuō)明中國(guó)學(xué)生用英語(yǔ)寫作困難這一情況的。1.主題句的位置 一般情況下,主題句出現(xiàn)在段落的開頭,作為段落傳遞信息的出發(fā)點(diǎn), 簡(jiǎn)明扼要地告訴讀者段落的線索和范圍。但是,段落主題句的位置并 不是固定不變的,它可以位于段首、段中、段尾,也可以首尾兼而有之。現(xiàn)就常見(jiàn)的三種情況分述如下: 主題句位于段首,直接點(diǎn)明段落的主題。這種段落結(jié)構(gòu)有助于作者確 定段落的主線,使段內(nèi)各句緊緊圍繞段落的主題思想自然展開。例如: Hurricanes, which are also called cyclones, exert tremendou s power.These violent storms are often a hundred miles in diameter, and their winds can reach velocities of seventy-f ive miles per hour or more.Furthermore, the strong winds a nd heavy rainfall that accompany them cm completely destroy a small town in a couple of hours.The energy that is rele ased by a hurricane in one day exceeds the total energy con sumed by humankind throughout the world m one year.2.主題句的特點(diǎn) 主題句置于段首,開宗明義,一開始就規(guī)定和限制了段落的發(fā)展方向, 對(duì)段落的成敗起著關(guān)鍵作用。所以,主題本身尤應(yīng)把握準(zhǔn)確。段落主 題句有以下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn): 1.概括性(general)主題句首先應(yīng)概括,也就是說(shuō),主題句應(yīng)涵蓋全段所有的思想內(nèi)容。2 具體性（specific）也就是必須具有一定的限定性,即有一個(gè)或一組核心詞對(duì)主導(dǎo)思想的 范圍進(jìn)行限定,避免在段落展開中偏離主題方向。段落主題句所限定 的內(nèi)容要有助于段落的鋪開和抒發(fā)。換句話說(shuō),段落主題句限定的范 圍要符合段落寫作目的。一個(gè)段落的容量是有限的,限定的范圍太寬, 其內(nèi)容無(wú)法在一個(gè)段落中闡述清楚;限定范圍太窄,則不利于段落主 題的發(fā)展。因此,寫主題句既要注意其概括性,又要注意其具體性。也就是說(shuō),主 題句不能過(guò)于寬泛,否則,續(xù)寫發(fā)展句時(shí)就會(huì)令人感覺(jué)如墮煙海,無(wú)從 下筆。欲使主題句具備具體性,首先要對(duì)段落的主題進(jìn)行收緊。二 展開句(supporting sentences)

1.定義： 展開句就是對(duì)主題句所陳述的思想觀點(diǎn)加以展開這類,提出 各種細(xì)節(jié)或例證以闡述或證明主題的各個(gè)方面.展開句必須切題、明 確、層次分明。寫擴(kuò)展句時(shí)要注意條理性，比如引出三條不同的理由 可以分別用： First of all, furthermore, the last but not the least。請(qǐng)閱讀下文,注意展開句如何對(duì)主導(dǎo)思想加以展開的： How to Help a Choking Person You ought to know what to do to help a person who is chokin g.First，stand behind choking victim and put your arm aro und his or her waist.Second, you make a fist and place the thumb side against the person’s stomach just above the na vel, but below the ribs.Third, grasp your fist with your o ther hand and press into the victim’ abdomen with a quick s upward thrust.Repeat the action if necessary.三、結(jié)尾句(Concluding Sentence)在一個(gè)段落里,結(jié)尾句并不是必不可少的,但是因?yàn)榻Y(jié)尾句具有段落 結(jié)束的標(biāo)志(如 summary, in conclusion, in a word 等)以及能夠 提醒讀者作者的重要觀點(diǎn),所以結(jié)尾句對(duì)讀者有益。結(jié)尾句的作用是 第一,復(fù)述主題句;第二,對(duì)整個(gè)段落加以總結(jié);第三,對(duì)主題加以評(píng) 論。下面的例子分別說(shuō)明結(jié)尾句的三個(gè)作用。

Good manners are important in all countries, but ways of ex pressing good manners are different from country to country.Americans eat with knives and forks F Japanese eat with ch opsticks.Americans say ”Hi“ when they meet Japanese bow.M any American men open doors for women Japanese men do not.On the surface, it appears that good manners in America are mot good manners in Japan, and in a way this is true.But in any country, the only manners that are important are tho se involving one person’s behavior toward another person.In all countries, it is good manners to behave consideratel y towards other and bad manners not to.It is only the way of behaving politely that differs from country to country.四、句子寫作 明確段落的寫作思路之后，讓我們具體來(lái)看句子的寫作。考試實(shí)踐 表明，多數(shù)考生在寫作上的主要欠缺不是系統(tǒng)的寫作理論和方法，而 是最基本的單句寫作能力。有些同學(xué)因?yàn)閷?duì)自身的實(shí)力缺乏自信所以 考場(chǎng)上采取抄襲閱讀文章里的句子這種方法來(lái)湊字?jǐn)?shù)。這種做法實(shí)不 足取，因?yàn)橐环矫嫒菀妆桓木砝蠋煱l(fā)現(xiàn)而認(rèn)為該考生有偷懶的嫌疑，另一方面考生從閱讀文章里抄來(lái)的優(yōu)美句子和考生自己寫的錯(cuò)誤百 出的句子拼湊在一起令文章整體有不和諧之感，從而令改卷老師懷疑 該考生有作弊的嫌疑。通過(guò)句子寫作這一關(guān)，可參考如下步驟：

1.確保句子的正確性，即準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)思想而且沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。以＂ There be＂句型為例，錯(cuò)誤的句子：There are many people like to go to the movies.正確表達(dá)：There are many people who li ke to go to the movies.考生最容易犯的錯(cuò)誤是在 there be 之后 又用了一個(gè)動(dòng)詞作謂語(yǔ)，使句子結(jié)構(gòu)出現(xiàn)嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。除了要小心避免 語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤外，我們也不能忽視作文中經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)的嚴(yán)重漢化的英語(yǔ)，即 中式英語(yǔ)，比如：”Man is iron, and food is steel.", ＂Women are half side sky.＂ “The food in the dining hall is diffi cult to eat”。如何克服漢化思維關(guān)鍵在于動(dòng)筆前先思考一下類似 的英文句式，并且注意諺語(yǔ)的翻譯不能隨心所欲，盡量找到規(guī)范的翻 譯方式。正如我們所知道的,英語(yǔ)句子通常包含主語(yǔ)和謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu),才能 表達(dá)某一完整意思。真正理解和掌握這一點(diǎn),可以幫助我們避免許多 語(yǔ)法上的毛病。在句子結(jié)構(gòu)方面避免下列幾種毛病： 1． 串句（run-on sentences）2． 破句（fragmentary sentences）3． 贅句（wordy sentences/ redundancy）4． 修飾語(yǔ)錯(cuò)位（modifiers in wrong position）5． 懸垂修飾語(yǔ)（Dang1ing Modifiers）6． 結(jié)構(gòu)不平行（Non-parallelism）

7． 主謂不一致（subject-verb disagreement）1． 所謂串句,是指兩個(gè)或多個(gè)句子串在一起,誤當(dāng)成一個(gè)句子。串句 的表現(xiàn)形式主要有三種 1）兩個(gè)完整句子只用逗號(hào)隔開 English is a required course in most colleges，a student m ust pass it before he earns his degree.2)兩個(gè)完整句子不適當(dāng)?shù)赜眠B詞 and 連接 I intend to go with your brother and you may do as you plea se.3)兩個(gè)完整句子串在一起 Students should be careful of punctuation trouble will resu lt if they are careless.2． 破句是串句的另一個(gè)極端把句子的一部分當(dāng)成一個(gè)句子。In ten seconds I made my decision.A decision that changed the next seven years of my life.If a person possesses the ability and desires to go to coll ege, I don’t think money should stop him.Even though in s ome cases it does.第一個(gè)例子中 “A decision that changed the next seven years of my life.”是一個(gè)帶有定語(yǔ)從句的名詞詞組, 實(shí)際上只是這個(gè)句 子的一部分。第二個(gè)例子中，從句“Even though in some cases it does.”被錯(cuò)當(dāng)成一個(gè)句子.3.懸垂修飾語(yǔ) 一個(gè)修飾語(yǔ)必須非常明確地修飾句中的某一個(gè)詞或某一組詞.有些修 飾語(yǔ)初看好像修飾某個(gè)詞語(yǔ),但實(shí)際上什么也沒(méi)有修飾,那么這個(gè)修 飾語(yǔ)就是懸垂修飾語(yǔ)。誤：Losing sixteen pounds，her clothes began to look baggy.正： Losing sixteen pounds, she found that her clothes began to look baggy.以下是幾種主要的懸垂修飾語(yǔ) 1)分詞短語(yǔ)懸垂 當(dāng)句子中的主語(yǔ)不是分詞短語(yǔ)所表達(dá)的動(dòng)作發(fā)出者,這個(gè)分詞短語(yǔ)就 懸垂了。Looking to the future，the computer field may seem very at tractive to many.2)動(dòng)名詞懸垂

誤：On hearing the news, my heart sank down.正：On hearing the news, I felt my heart sinking down.3)不定式懸垂 誤：To pass the exam, this exercise must be done.正：To pass the exam, you must do this exercise.4)省略句懸垂 誤：When a baby, his parents abandoned him.正：When he was a baby, he was abandoned by his parents.4.結(jié)構(gòu)不平行平行結(jié)構(gòu)是把兩個(gè)或兩個(gè)以上意思并列的成分，用同等的語(yǔ)法形式來(lái) 表達(dá)的一種修辭手段.They expect to hear lectures this morning, join discussions this afternoon, and attend the dance tonight.They always enjoy listening, talking, and dancing.這種結(jié)構(gòu)整齊對(duì)稱,使句子流暢,語(yǔ)意貫通并富有節(jié)奏感.誤:Students need textbooks, notebooks, and they need pens.正:Students need textbooks, notebooks and pens.誤:Knowing how to study and to learn to budge time are impo rtant for college students.正:Knowing how to study and learning to budge time are impo rtant for college students.誤:What we want and the thing we do are often opposite.正:What we want and what we do are often contradictory.2.注意句式的多樣性，語(yǔ)言生動(dòng)且富于變換才能最終打動(dòng)評(píng)卷 老師從而獲得高分。不能從頭到尾都是 I am?, he is?, I like?, 這樣的簡(jiǎn)單句。增加句子形式的多樣性。應(yīng)避免全文使用同一長(zhǎng)度、結(jié)構(gòu)相似的句子，使長(zhǎng)句與短句、單句與復(fù)句，倒裝句與強(qiáng)調(diào)句相結(jié) 合，增加文章的說(shuō)服力與生動(dòng)性。1）適當(dāng)運(yùn)用同位語(yǔ)，插入語(yǔ)，非限定性定語(yǔ)從句，讓逗號(hào)出現(xiàn) 在你的文章中。同位語(yǔ) Environmental pollution, a phenomenon w hich lasted a number of years, has grown more and more seri ous.推薦用于開頭對(duì)核心名詞做出解釋。2）倒裝，Only in this way can we solve the problem.建議 最好使用在文章結(jié)尾處更顯得擲地有聲。

3）無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)，即沒(méi)有生命的東西充當(dāng)主語(yǔ)。當(dāng)我們要講述一個(gè) 經(jīng)驗(yàn)性的事實(shí)或者常理時(shí)，不要過(guò)多使用“I think that”議論文中 過(guò)多使用“I” 容易影響文章的客觀性。使用無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)就可以解決這 個(gè)問(wèn)題 Past experience has taught us that we should not depe nd on others for everything.(Past experience 就是無(wú)靈主語(yǔ))T he past decade witnessed her change from a beautiful young lady into a shabby woman.4）排比，可以增強(qiáng)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的力度和整個(gè)文章的氣勢(shì)。例如在 95 年 1 月的考題“Can money buy happiness”中運(yùn)用排比就可以收 到比較理想的效果。Many people die for money, lie for money, fight for money, and even sell their souls to the Devil for money.以上是講述寫好句子的方法，但因?yàn)榭紙?chǎng)上時(shí)間比較緊迫，所以 建議考生務(wù)必在考前背誦一些常用的理由句以防在考場(chǎng)上臨時(shí)思路 受阻而束手無(wú)策。如 It can enrich our knowledge and widen our horizon.或者 It can increase the government revenue and re lieve the pressure of unemployment.等等。4． 注意措辭的力度(句型與詞匯的選擇,盡量將所學(xué)句型和詞匯

運(yùn)用到寫作中)

a.As I came out of the farmhouse I heard an unusual noise in the distance, one which I had never heard before.I look ed up the valley in the direction from which the sound seem ed to come, but could see nothing.The noise grew, a low ru mbling that grew louder by the second.Then all at once I s aw it, a towering wall of water filling the valley from sid e to side.I turned and rushed back into the house.Anythin g left in the wake of that flood was bound to be swept away.I scooped up my small daughter and, grabbing my startled w ife by the arm, rushed for the stairs.Reaching the top I h ad only a moment to think.Which room? My daughter’s bedro om was furthest from the river bank at the back of the hous e.I thrust my wife and daughter through the door and close d it behind us.By now the roar of the river is deafening.b.I came out of the farmhouse and heard an unusual noise.I had not heard it before and looked up the valley to see w hat was making it.I saw nothing, the noise grew louder and louder, then I saw a great deal of water rushing down the valley.It looked dangerous so I went inside very quickly a nd took my wife and daughter upstairs, but was not sure whi ch room to go in.as my daughter’s room seemed best we wen

t in there as quickly as possible as the noise of the water was so loud.5．改錯(cuò)練習(xí)1．Born in a small town in South china in 1937, he grew up to be a musician.2.The girl is too young.3.He likes to sing, to swim, and table tennis.4.We thought she was charming, intelligent, and a very cha rming young woman.5.She told my sister that she was wrong.6.He was knocked down by a bicycle, but it was not seriou s.7.To get up early, the clock was set at six.8.Rotten in the cellar, he had to throw the potatoes away.9.In Dreiser’s Sister Carrie, he describes a penniless gi rl’s way to success.10.An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, you should not plagiarize.11.In college, students should learn to analyze problems o n their own.Try to help them to acquire this ability.12.His job was a policeman.13.By taking a No.10 bus is one way to get there.14.They were waiting for the meeting to begin.They talked with each other.They talked about women’s volleyball tea m.The team had won victories in Tokyo.15.Walking into the classroom, the teacher carried a big b ook under his arm.16.he saw an old man get on the bus, quickly standing up t o offer him the seat.17.The girl’s bag was full of new books and big.18.His spectacles, an English dictionary, a cup of tea, bo oks and notes lay on the small desk.1

第二篇：四級(jí)英語(yǔ)作文高分句子

It pays to be honest

誠(chéng)實(shí)是有回報(bào)的

The net is increasingly popular

網(wǎng)絡(luò)越來(lái)越流行 Students of universities and colleges Pop music appeals to me

我對(duì)流行音樂(lè)很感興趣 Everything cuts both ways

任何事情都有兩面性 English is intensely important=English matters much 1.As the economy advances at a fast pace, English plays an increasingly important role in our lives Simply put

簡(jiǎn)而言之

He believes women cannot be too thin

他相信女人再瘦也不為過(guò)

2.It pays to cultivat the innovative spirit among students of colleges and universities.3.On college campuses across the nation,playing online game is intensely popular.E-books/digital books/paperless books

電子書 Online courses/web courses

網(wǎng)絡(luò)課程

A green campus=an environment-friendly campus 4.It pays to maintain a positive mental attitude when facing adverse situations.put in another way, remaining optimistic in adversities pays off.5.A growing number of college students are hopelessly addicted to matters unrelated to their studies, a worrying trend that should spark public attention.6.We are supposed to be fully aware of the fact that if we continue to harm the environment we are bound to pay heavily/dearly for it.7.As an ancient land enjoying a splendid civilization spanning over 5,000 years.China currently falls behind advanced countries on many fronts.On many fronts

在很多方面

8.It pays to foster the cooperative spirit on many fronts.9.Thanks to advances in technology and economy, a variety of/diversity of digital products, from mobile phone to digital camera, are intensely popular on the Chinese mainland.10.Recent years have witnessed the growing popularity of the topic of a green campus.11.The past decades have seen the fast-paced development of the nation’s economy.On doubly

毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)的是

12.I doubt that she married him for money There is no doubt that=it is beyond doubt that…

13.There is no doubt that this reform is aimed at sharpening the competitive edge of the students in the tough job market.14.It is beyond doubt that far too many college students fail to be aware that achieving/striking a balance between entertainment and studies matters much.15.Undoubtedly, what you do on campus will have profound impact on you in the days ahead.Individual colleges and universities

各個(gè)大學(xué)

16.He bought/purchased/acquired this public company 17.With the nation’s economy still in the red, a growing number of college graduates find it is increasingly hard to land a decent job.Loving our country means more than words 18.On my personal level, effective measures should be taken to crack down on piracy/reverse the trend 19.We , college students, are supposed to take the leading role in fighting against this evil trend 20.Only by taking concrete moves can we enjoy a pollution-free environment.Making painstaking efforts

付出艱苦努力

21.Only by making painstaking efforts can we climb the social ladder higher.22.It is not uncommon that far too many Chinese fail to focus on details.place a high value on

重視

23.It is not uncommon that far too many Chinese students fail to place a high value on learning Chinese, their mother tongue The bulk of=the majority of

24.The bulk of Chinese take pride in the country’s abundant natural resources Do all in one’s power to

盡某人最大努力去…

25.While my command of English is not outstanding, I am doing all in my power to improve it Favor A over B

支持A而不支持B 26.While Romney won the first debate, I favor Obama instead of/rather than over him You deserve it

1.你應(yīng)該獲得

2.你活該 Digging into

仔細(xì)閱讀

Stress A over B

強(qiáng)調(diào)A 而不強(qiáng)調(diào)B 27.Traditionally, Chinese education stresses mechanical thinking over creativity A to B is what C to D In an effort to=in order to

28.In an effort to reverse the trend, the government has pumped a wealth of resources into this campaign.Launch a campaign

發(fā)起運(yùn)動(dòng)

29.Personally, the government should launch a campaign to crack down on illegal manufactures Be designed to do=be aimed at doing Awaken sb to the crucial importance of sth

喚醒某人，某事的重要性

30.The government should awaken people across the nation to the crucial importance of respecting intellectual property rights Senior citizens

老人（尤指退休者）be responsible for

…的原因

31.The shrinking population is responsible for this trend.Get actively involved in

積極參與

32.In their leisure hours, they consume a good portion of time getting actively involved in serving as volunteers.It is virtually impossible for sb to do sth

某人做某事幾乎是不可能的

33.It is virtually impossible for you to land a decent job without superb professional knowledge and an outstanding command of English.Nothing new

絕非先見(jiàn)，很常見(jiàn)

34.Devoting a good portion of leisure time to learning English is nothing new among my fellow students 35.Setting a grand goal but not taking concrete moves is nothing new among my peers.Be capable of

能夠的，有能力的

36.Fat too many Chinese are incapable of thinking independently and critically 37.Others, however, are supportive of this campaign.Others, however, see a different picture.Claiming it pays to devote much time to taking optional courses Generate impacts

產(chǎn)生影響

sth concerns sb

某事使某人擔(dān)心

38.How to reverse the trend concerns folks from every walk of life Every walk of life

各行各業(yè)

As the pillar of our society

作為我們社會(huì)的棟梁支柱

39.As the pillar of our society, we ,college students, should shoulder more responsibility to respect intellectual proerty rights/should take the leading role in serving as volunteers in the earthquake-stricken area.40.I am striving to earn more money to relieve my parents’ financial load

41.Folks from all walks of life should strive to play a part in building a pollution-free society Sharpen one’s edge

增強(qiáng)競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力

42.Our course focuses on teaching the students how to sharpen their edge when taking the interview Last but definitely not the least

最后，但絕不是最不重要的

43.People focusing on immediate benefits are bound to pay dearly for it

44.Last but definitely not the least, our lack of attention on this issue is mostly responsible for it.Move oneself beyond

擺脫

45.It’s my hope that in my college days I could gradually move myself beyond my dependence on parents.In the hope of

以希望

46.I am doing all in my power to earn credits in the hope of graduating earlier.Lend A B’s support

B支持A 47.I sincerely hope that you could lend me your support in the election for class president.48.I sincerely hope that you could do everything you can to promote the environmental awareness among your fellow students.49.He , with his superb performance, is gaining growing popularity on campus.Giant leaps

巨大進(jìn)步

50.Thanks to giant leaps in technology, could computing is gaining growing popularity across the world.51.If You Are The One, a TV reality show, is gaining growing popularity on the Chinese mainland.52.Sina weibo , the Chinese clone of Twitter, is gaining enormous popularity among net citizens.Enable sb to do sth

使某人能夠干某事

53.The nets enables us to communicate with each other in ways that were beyond our imagination.Far outweigh

遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)超過(guò)，遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)大于

54.The strengths of the net far outweigh it’s weakness.55.The virtual world has generated far more positive impacts on us than negative ones.As sb put it

正如某人所言

56.As Kobe Bryant,a legendary figure of NBA, put it ,”it is the teamwork spirit that helps Los Angeles Lakers weather hard times all these years” Taste success

取得成功

57.Mo Yan ultimately tasted success.Be equipped with

擁有

58.High achievers are equipped with a wealth of personal qualities that others lack.A series of=a string of

59.School authorities attribute a string of suicides to our lack of attention on the students’ psychological mental health.60.He stays far ahead of his fellow students on many fronts thanks to his painstaking efforts Attach growing importance to(doing)sth

越來(lái)越重視某事

61.After having suffered some major setbacks in his career, he attaches growing importance to execution.As a consequence

結(jié)果 I would argue

我認(rèn)為 At current stage

現(xiàn)階段

Matter much more

重要的多

62.I would argue that at current stage studies matter much more than entertainment.Be closely linked to

與…有緊密聯(lián)系

63.Whether you could taste success is closely linked to whether you have a strong will.I couldn’t care less about it

我不關(guān)心 I couldn’t care more about it

我很關(guān)心

This movie couldn’t be worse

很糟糕的電影 not simply…but…

不僅…而且 push up=drive up

推動(dòng)某物上升 to be more specific

更具體地說(shuō)

excessive exploitation

過(guò)度開發(fā)，過(guò)度開采

64.To be more specific, our excessive exploitation of natural resources not only costs us dearly in the short run but may generate profound negative impacts on future generations

In the short run

從短期看來(lái) the post-90s generation

90后 turn around

扭轉(zhuǎn)…趨勢(shì) pay lip service

只說(shuō)不做

65.All parties involved in this pressing issue are supposed to stop paying lip service.Curb the prevalent trend

遏制（不好的）趨勢(shì) Wage campaigns

發(fā)起運(yùn)動(dòng)

Governments at all levels

各級(jí)政府 Bring…under control

控制…

66.Governments at all levels are supposed to wage massive campaign to bring the soaring commodity prices under control.Bear fruits

結(jié)果實(shí)

Bear the costs

承擔(dān)成本

Bear the consequence

承擔(dān)成本

67.I harbor a sincere hope that our combined efforts would pay off.68.People from all walks of life should combine their efforts to build our society into a harmonious noe 5

第三篇：英語(yǔ)四級(jí)技巧

英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考試復(fù)習(xí)技巧詳解

[聽(tīng)力]

精聽(tīng)VS泛聽(tīng)

準(zhǔn)備四級(jí)聽(tīng)力，要精聽(tīng)，不要泛聽(tīng)。這是第一個(gè)需要明確的問(wèn)題：精聽(tīng)歷年四級(jí)考題。雖然從宏觀上來(lái)看，任何聽(tīng)力資料都是有益的，但是鑒于有限的可利用時(shí)間，復(fù)習(xí)資料的選擇一定要有針對(duì)性。因?yàn)橐タ怂募?jí)考試，一個(gè)與提高能力同樣重要(而且簡(jiǎn)單得多)的任務(wù)是迅速地熟悉考題。考前一到2個(gè)月要堅(jiān)持聽(tīng)1個(gè)小時(shí)左右的聽(tīng)力

[詞匯]

四級(jí)詞匯大概有三四千，很厚的一本，不全背，但要挑選背。

精研歷年真題。

1.熟悉常考的語(yǔ)法難點(diǎn)和詞匯題型。做題的關(guān)鍵是每一題必須能從原文中找到出處，也就是能夠證明這道題正確答案的部分，千萬(wàn)不要憑印象。

[閱讀]

把握細(xì)節(jié)，養(yǎng)成習(xí)慣

1.首先精研歷年真題

2.重視閱讀理解中的細(xì)節(jié)性問(wèn)題、3.養(yǎng)成適合自己的閱讀習(xí)慣

4.作真題，提高考試閱讀能力

考前一個(gè)月要進(jìn)行針對(duì)性的訓(xùn)練，在做閱讀的過(guò)程中，一定要把握好時(shí)間，不能一味追求準(zhǔn)確而花費(fèi)大量的時(shí)間

對(duì)于快速閱讀，具體方法，先大概看一下十個(gè)題，查找出現(xiàn)頻率最的幾個(gè)詞，記在大腦里，然后回頭看第一題，記下幾個(gè)關(guān)鍵詞去原文里定位，快讀其實(shí)很簡(jiǎn)單，只要定位準(zhǔn)確，一般一眼就出答案。

閱讀分為選詞填空和精讀，選詞填空考查大家的四級(jí)詞匯量，這個(gè)要大家平時(shí)多積累，精讀方法也選讀題干，帶著問(wèn)題去原文里找答案，具體方法和快讀差不多，只是精讀有的時(shí)

候你讀懂也答不出題目來(lái)，說(shuō)明你理解的還不夠。平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)的辦法就是把歷年的真題都做一篇，做的時(shí)候不要速度要質(zhì)量，搞懂每一題目在原文里哪里出現(xiàn)，怎樣出題考你。做多了你自然會(huì)摸出他出題的規(guī)律。

選詞填空

第一步：快速閱讀全文，獲取有用信息。

第二步：簡(jiǎn)單標(biāo)注所給單詞的詞性和詞義。

第三步：結(jié)合上兩步進(jìn)行解題。

[完形填空]

綜合全文，著眼細(xì)節(jié)

1.對(duì)于首句應(yīng)該給與足夠的重視，因?yàn)橥褪侵行木浠蚴且龑?dǎo)句，它的時(shí)態(tài)往往決定了全文的時(shí)態(tài)，所以多花一點(diǎn)時(shí)間看首句是值得的。

2.然后以句子為單位一句一句地讀，一句一句地填空，主要考慮語(yǔ)法、句意、邏輯和上下文聯(lián)系。暫時(shí)填不出來(lái)的就空在那里。

3.最后通讀一遍，完成沒(méi)有填的空，再看看填的順不順，不順的地方大膽修改。

[英譯漢]

掌握原則按部就班

英譯漢首先要掌握4個(gè)原則：

一、翻譯時(shí)既要忠實(shí)于原文，又要符合漢語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣;

二、翻譯不可太拘泥，否則很容易因死守原文語(yǔ)言形式而損害了原文思想內(nèi)容，好的譯文應(yīng)該是形式與內(nèi)容的統(tǒng)一;

三、能夠直譯盡量不意譯;

四、翻譯的過(guò)程應(yīng)該是先理解后表達(dá)。

具體如下：首先，英文段落的首句一般為topicsentence，然后展開說(shuō)明。展開的寫法有多種，可分可總，可下定義，可同義重復(fù)，可以代詞復(fù)指等。利用這一技巧，先通讀全文，便能更好理解文章的意思，把握段與段之間的關(guān)系，在翻譯時(shí)就能在上下文中確定詞義，譯。正確理解原文后，還要通過(guò)適當(dāng)?shù)姆g技巧用規(guī)范的漢語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。這些技巧有：

(1)增詞法。根據(jù)需要增加一些詞語(yǔ)，如名詞等。

(2)減詞法。根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，刪去一些詞。

(3)肯否表達(dá)法。原文為肯定句，譯成漢語(yǔ)是為增強(qiáng)修飾效果，可以譯為否定句。反之亦然。

(4)變換法。名詞譯成動(dòng)詞或動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)譯成名詞等。

(5)分合法。一個(gè)長(zhǎng)句可分成若干部分來(lái)譯，或者把原文的幾個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句用一個(gè)句子表達(dá)出來(lái)。

(6)省略法：兩種語(yǔ)言由于存在差異，表達(dá)時(shí)不可能總是對(duì)等，經(jīng)常可以省略一些詞和句子成分，如英語(yǔ)中的冠詞漢語(yǔ)里沒(méi)有，譯時(shí)可以省略。

最后一定要核對(duì)原文是否準(zhǔn)確、通順，還要注意關(guān)鍵詞的采分點(diǎn)。

[寫作]

借助閱讀善打草稿

寫作文時(shí)要放松情緒，消除恐懼感，必要時(shí)可借助深呼吸來(lái)緩解緊張的心情。

試卷一、二(作文在試卷2)同時(shí)發(fā)下來(lái)，應(yīng)在做完聽(tīng)力部分后，迅速地看一下作文題，讓其在大腦中留有一席之地，這樣便于在做詞匯、閱讀時(shí)隨時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)寫作可借用的詞匯句型而不至于在寫作時(shí)，大腦一片空白，無(wú)從下手。

作文無(wú)非就考一下記敘文和說(shuō)明文，偶爾會(huì)考寫信圖表作文等，但這些都?xì)w于記敘文和說(shuō)明文兩大類，這兩類能寫了就不怕什么題材了。考試之前自己準(zhǔn)備作文的大框架，比如說(shuō)，大結(jié)構(gòu)為總分總，總分等等，漂亮的連詞要用進(jìn)去。

一定要認(rèn)真審題，弄清文章及各段主題，實(shí)現(xiàn)由提綱到主題句的轉(zhuǎn)換。可以打一下草稿：擺事實(shí)，理清思路，從易于表達(dá)，且論證豐富的觀點(diǎn)入手，不局限于一種看法、一種表達(dá)法或一種句式。

具體寫作時(shí)最好分段來(lái)寫，各段之間空二至三行，以利于隨時(shí)增減或刪改。而且字跡要工整，卷面要保持清潔，給判卷人一個(gè)好印象。寫完后仔細(xì)檢查作文中用詞、句法方面有無(wú)不準(zhǔn)確的地方;句式有無(wú)變化;句與句之間，段與段之間有無(wú)合適的連接及過(guò)渡等.注意 ：作文和選擇是分開齊的,所以一定要先涂卡,再寫作文,否則提前半個(gè)小時(shí)齊選擇題卡的時(shí)候很倉(cāng)促.最重要的一點(diǎn),在考試前一個(gè)月,把前10次的考試題目集中做一遍,卷紙大同小異,思路,方法,包括很多知識(shí)點(diǎn)總是反復(fù)出現(xiàn),一定是有用的.一定不能不做.有時(shí)間的話應(yīng)該至少做3遍.最后一個(gè)具體的建議,目前,每周做兩套聽(tīng)力,一天一篇真題閱讀(不能超過(guò)10分鐘),一周一篇寫作.等到離考試還有20天,每天做一套真題,循環(huán)做2次,正好可以做兩遍.

第四篇：2014年6月英語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫作高分技巧

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英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文想獲得高分不準(zhǔn)備的話是沒(méi)有那么容易的，下面小編為大家整理了2014年6月英語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫作高分技巧，想要拿高分的同學(xué)趕緊來(lái)看看吧。

首先，要注意一些常見(jiàn)詞匯的替換形式。

舉個(gè)例子，比如說(shuō)大家在寫“很多人認(rèn)為”時(shí)，很多同學(xué)會(huì)寫many people think，像這樣一句話很明顯就不容易得高分。你應(yīng)該多考慮一些如：稍微好一些的主語(yǔ)從句：it is widely believed that(人們普遍認(rèn)為);又比如說(shuō)many hold the idea that(很多人都有這樣的觀點(diǎn))等等。像這樣一些簡(jiǎn)單的詞匯和短語(yǔ)之間的這樣一種切換是非常重要而且容易提分的。

又比如說(shuō)在詞匯方面，很多人喜歡用important、many、more and more，這都是比較老的梗了，尤其是“越來(lái)越重要”more and more important，如果這些詞匯不斷的重復(fù)出現(xiàn)，你的作文可能是得不了高分的。我們就拿more and more important舉例。記住，more and more今后我們盡量變成副詞的形式，叫increasingly。比如說(shuō)“更加重要”-increasingly important，或者是increasingly vital or increasingly crucial等等，都會(huì)比較不錯(cuò)。所以你得有一個(gè)龐大的同義替換庫(kù)，有些單詞可能改變之后感覺(jué)更好。其次，每周堅(jiān)持“一篇兩遍”

距離考試還有一個(gè)月時(shí)間，從現(xiàn)在開始大家必須要開始寫作文了，一篇兩遍是什么含義呢?首先文章一定是過(guò)去真題當(dāng)中考過(guò)的文章，模擬題當(dāng)中的文章可以在真題的文章全寫熟練之后再去寫，但是模擬題的文章它的精度和準(zhǔn)確度和真題相比會(huì)稍稍的有一些差距，所以建議同學(xué)們從現(xiàn)在開始每周以歷年真題為題一篇文章寫兩遍。

為什么要寫兩遍呢?要知道任何文章只寫一遍沒(méi)有任何的效果。第一遍計(jì)時(shí)完成，第二遍怎么辦?你有很多的方式，可以把文章給你的同學(xué)、室友看看，他們?cè)诳磿r(shí)，很可能會(huì)有一些負(fù)面的能量產(chǎn)生，比如看不懂，看不下去，很奇怪等等，你需要讓他們坦誠(chéng)地告訴你這些觀點(diǎn)，你再進(jìn)行修正;更加靠譜的方式則是去找一些英文水平比你高的師哥師姐，把文章給他們看，在提出一些可行性意見(jiàn)之后，你按照這樣一些可行性意見(jiàn)重新地對(duì)這篇文章進(jìn)行二度創(chuàng)作和修改。一篇文章寫一遍不做任何的修改是永遠(yuǎn)沒(méi)有提高的，如果能寫三遍，甚至寫到五遍，我們相信一遍一定會(huì)比前一遍更好一些。

要寫出好的文章，不僅要有豐富的詞匯和句型儲(chǔ)備，也要勤于練習(xí)，不斷修改。考試時(shí)雖然沒(méi)有很多時(shí)間修改，平時(shí)的推敲卻會(huì)讓你在考場(chǎng)上寫得更好。

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第五篇：四級(jí)作文高分模版

四級(jí)作文模板

一.對(duì)比選擇型熱點(diǎn)追蹤

Study Abroad or in China?

There is no consensus of opinions among people as to whether students should study abroad or not.Some people are of the view that the youths should go overseas for further study if possible, while others take an opposite stand, firmly believing that it is of no necessity for students to study in a foreign country.Those people who maintain that it is good for students to go abroad for further study believe that diverse culture background can broaden students’ horizon.They also claim that overseas study can shape students’ personality because they are forced to deal with all kinds of difficulties by themselves.Nevertheless, the other people who contend that domestic education is good enough for students argue that our educational quality has been greatly improved during the past decade.They also point out that domestic education is convenient and economical.As far as I am concerned, the former opinion holds more weight.For one thing, it can strengthen the learners’ abilities to understand and communicate with people from other cultures.For another, the developed countries still have a lot advanced knowledge which is worth our study.When all the factors are examined, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that studying abroad if possible is advisable.二.問(wèn)題解決型實(shí)例：2001年1月（How to Succeed in a Job Interview? 面試在求職過(guò)程中的作用、面試成功的因素：儀表、舉止談吐、能力、專業(yè)知識(shí)、自信、實(shí)事求是??），2000年1月（How I Finance My College Education?）1998年1月（My View on Fake Commodities）模板：With the development/improvement of(鋪墊),(某一問(wèn)題).It is necessary that(關(guān)注解決現(xiàn)象引出的問(wèn)題很必要).On the one hand,(理由一).On the other hand,(理由二).Therefore, how to(承上啟下句，要解決的問(wèn)題)is worth paying attention.Firstly,(辦法一).Secondly,(辦法二).For example,(舉例解釋解決辦法二).Thirdly,(辦法三).In other words,(闡明解決辦法三).In fact, the ways to(解決問(wèn)題的辦法多種多樣)are countless.It’s time that(強(qiáng)調(diào)解決問(wèn)題時(shí)不可待).真題演練：How to Succeed in a Job Interview?（2001年1月）

With the development of job market, job interview plays an important role in job-hunting.It is necessary that we should learn some tricks to perform better in a job interview.On the one hand, a job interview offers interviewees and interviewers respectively a chance to know each other within a very short time.On the other hand, excellent performance in an interview will enable the interviewees to exert a good impression on the interviewer and finally win the job.Therefore, how to succeed in job interview is worth paying attention.Firstly, interviewees should dress neatly and properly.Secondly, interviewees should be confident.For example, when asked about professional questions, interviewees should give a clear and definite answer.Thirdly, interviewees should have some knowledge about the company and the position they apply for.In other words, interviewees should prepare themselves something about the interview in advance so as to show that they attach vital importance to the job.In fact, the ways to succeed in a job interview are countless.It’s time that we laid stress on interview because it’s the first step of our work experience.熱點(diǎn)追蹤The Damage of Public Facilities公共設(shè)施破壞嚴(yán)重的問(wèn)題亟待解決，2、解決辦法有哪些，3、你的看法。

The Damage of Public Facilities

With the improvement of living standard, more and more public facilities, such as public telephone booths and ATMs have been installed in the streets.It is necessary that we have to pay attention to the damage of these public facilities.On the one hand, some people use them without care, which leads to inconvenience to others.On the other hand, the damaged public facilities stain the beauty of the city.Therefore, how to prevent public facilities from being damaged is worth paying attention.Firstly, public facilities should be made of hard materials so as to be more durable.Secondly, some devices should be adopted to protect them from being damaged.For example, like cars, we can install alarm devices in public facilities.Thirdly, from my point of view, it is essential that we civilize our citizens to behave morally.In other words, we should tell the citizens that it is shameful to destroy public facilities.In fact, the ways to reduce the damage of public facilities are countless.It’s time that we took most effective ones to protect them.三.觀點(diǎn)論證型實(shí)例：2003年1月（It pays to be honest）、1999年1月（Don’t hesitate to say “No”）、1997年1月（Practice Makes Perfect）模板：It is true that(指出普遍存在的觀點(diǎn)).However,(談不同的觀點(diǎn)).I think(提出自己的觀點(diǎn)，即文章的論點(diǎn)).(過(guò)渡句，轉(zhuǎn)向觀點(diǎn)的論證，根據(jù)情況選擇具體的詞)can be listed as follows.Firstly,(論證理由一).Secondly,(論證理由二).For example,(舉例具體說(shuō)明理由二).Thirdly,(論證理由三).A case in point is that(舉例具體說(shuō)明理由三).It goes without saying that(轉(zhuǎn)折句，提出執(zhí)行該觀點(diǎn)時(shí)應(yīng)注意的事項(xiàng)).There is no doubt that(得出結(jié)論).In conclusion(總結(jié)全文).真題演練：It Pays to be Honest（2003年1月）

It is true that most of us value honesty highly.However, nowadays we often confront confidence crisis such as cheating, overcharging, fake commodities and so on.I think that we should be honest because being honest is not only beneficial to ourselves but also to others and the whole society.The reasons can be listed as follows.Firstly, only honest people can be truly respected by the others and can make more friends over a long period of time.Secondly, honesty, which is the traditional virtue of the Chinese people, can make our life easier and more harmonious.For example, consumers will not be afraid of being overcharged if dealers are honest, and thus dealers can win over more customers.Thirdly, honesty can make our society more stable.A case in point is that Singapore, a society featuring trustworthiness and integrity, has a comparatively low criminal rate.It goes without saying that being honest is of great benefit to both the community and individuals.There is no doubt that we should foster the spirit of honesty.In conclusion, laying stress on honesty will become the public morals in our society.四.圖表說(shuō)明型

實(shí)例：2002年6月，1991年6月模板:(概括性詞語(yǔ)最近出現(xiàn)的總體現(xiàn)象)has become a common part of people’s life.And(題目要求討論的具體現(xiàn)象)has always aroused the greatest concern.What impresses us most is(現(xiàn)象的具體表現(xiàn)).The reasons（現(xiàn)象或現(xiàn)象帶來(lái)的結(jié)果，為下文分析產(chǎn)生的原因做鋪墊）are varied.Among the various reasons,(原因一)plays an important part.That is to say,(具體說(shuō)明原因一).What is more,(原因二).For example,(舉例說(shuō)明原因二).When talking about(作者要討論的現(xiàn)象),(作者的看法).On the one hand,(支持看法的理由一或說(shuō)明看法的第一個(gè)方面).On the other hand,(支持看法的理由二或說(shuō)明看法的第二個(gè)方面).In brief,(總結(jié)).真題演練：Student use of computers（2002年6月）

Using computers has become a common part of people’s life.And the tremendous growth of student use of computers has always aroused the greatest concern.What impresses us most is that, in 2000, college students averagely spent 20 hours per week on computer, which is the size more than ten times that of ten years ago.The reasons why computers are widely used are varied.Among the various reasons the decreasing price of PC plays an important part.That is to say, more students can afford a personal computer.What is more, the Internet provides college students an amazing world to explore, For example, people can get the latest news and information as well as conveniently make friends around the world.When talking about disadvantages and problems existing in student use of computers, I think that their lack of skills and disciplines is the point we should pay attention to, On the one hand, their lack of skills fails students to make full use of the computer and the Internet.On the other hand, their lack of necessary disciplines makes some students indulge in computer games and net world, and even other negative materials, forgetting their major tasks as college students.In brief, there is still a lot to do to help students make good use of computers.熱點(diǎn)追蹤：Cheating in Exams學(xué)生作弊現(xiàn)象越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重，2、作弊的原因，3、如何杜絕作弊。

Cheating in Exams

Trying to defeat the cheat has become a common part of people’s life.And cheating in exams on campus has always aroused the greatest concern.And cheating in exams on campus has always aroused the greatest concern.What amazes us most is that many methods are adopted by students.The reasons for cheating in exams are varied.Among the various reasons, to get higher scores or scholarships plays an important part.That’s to say, some students are under great pressure from their parents or they fear to fall behind others, so they to get high scores in exams.What is more, some students just play the time away and want to pass the exams without efforts.For example, they spend the whole night playing PC games but fall asleep in the class.When talking about how to deal with cheating in exams, I think education and punishment might work.On the one hand, we should explain the harm of cheating to the students.On the other hand, punishment or penalty should be given to those who have been found cheating.In brief, we should try our best to put an end to cheating.五.應(yīng)用文A：批評(píng)、抱怨、投訴信：Dear,My name is(姓名).I am(身份).I venture to write you a letter about(表述抱怨內(nèi)容).The focus of the complaint is(抱怨內(nèi)容的核心點(diǎn)).For one thing,(抱怨內(nèi)容的一個(gè)方面).For another,(另一方面).Honestly speaking,(客觀評(píng)論).But(抱怨產(chǎn)生的原因之一).Besides,(抱怨產(chǎn)生的原因之二).All in all, there is still much room for improvement(總結(jié)說(shuō)明所抱怨現(xiàn)象或事物還有很大改進(jìn)空間).I do hope(表達(dá)本人的愿望).Thank you for your time and kind consideration.(信件結(jié)尾常用語(yǔ))

Sincerely Yours,Signature

真題演練：2002年1月假如你是李明，請(qǐng)你就本校食堂的狀況給校長(zhǎng)寫一封信，內(nèi)容應(yīng)涉及食堂的飯菜質(zhì)量、價(jià)格、環(huán)境、服務(wù)等，可以是表?yè)P(yáng)，可以是批評(píng)建議，也可以兼而有之。

A Letter to the Editor of a Newspaper

Dear Editor,My name is Li Ming.I am a senior junior student of the civil engineering school in this university.I venture to write you a letter about the canteen service on campus, which has given rise to many complaints among students..The focus of the complaint is the poor quality of the food.For one thing, the rice is hard, the steamed breads are usually sold cold and vegetables are often overcooked.For another, the prices of the foods are surprisingly high..Honestly speaking, the dining environment has been improved since last year.But there are still enough space and seats for us to have our meals there.Besides, the attitude of the canteen staff is not hospitable at al.All in all, there is still much room for improvement.I do hope we will not suffer another year.Thank you for your time and kind consideration.Sincerely yours,Li Ming

B：建議信模板Dear

I am delighted to learn that(寫信的原因).It(引出作者的建議).In my opinion,(表達(dá)建議內(nèi)容).On the one hand,(提出建議的理由

一).On the other hand,(建議的理由二).As to the(具體到某一方面的建議內(nèi)容), I suggest().If(供被建議人選擇的條件).It is unnecessary for you to(建議內(nèi)容的另一方面).In addition,(其它的建議).I am sure(對(duì)建議內(nèi)容的評(píng)價(jià)).Please inform me(對(duì)建議內(nèi)容所做的承諾).I am looking forward to(表達(dá)本人的愿望).Sincerely Yours,Signature

真題演練：Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter.Suppose you are Zhang Ying.Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the weeklong holiday.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1、表示歡迎，2、提出對(duì)度假安排的建議，3、提醒應(yīng)該注意的事項(xiàng)。

A letter to a schoolmate

Dear Wang,I am delighted to learn that you will visit me for a week during this national holiday.It has been a pleasant surprise to hear from you again after such a long time.In my opinion, Shenyang is your best choice for this vacation.On the one hand, there are many places of interest and historical sites in Shenyang.On the other hand, Shenyang is cultural center with various artistic and musical performances..As to the famous sites, I suggest that you should visit Shenyang Imperial Palace Museum.If you are interested in gardens, Shenyang Botanic Garden won’t disappoint you.It is unnecessary for you to bring anything except your sweaters since it is a little cold in the evenings.In addition, as there will be many people at the railway station, you should not leave your belongings unattended.I am sure you will have a nice time here.Please inform me when you have come to a decision.I am looking forward to seeing you soon