第一篇：2011年上海中考英語一模各區(qū)作文仿寫

(浦東)

Why do we come to school? Different people may have different answers.Some people say that they come to school to study just because they dream of a better job, a better future.But in my viewpoint, study brings me happiness.It is said that everyone who is interested in studying may find pleasure in reading.Exactly!Study can not only enrich my knowledge and broaden my mind, but bring me lots of fun as well.What's more, study always teaches me how to be honest, confident and knowledgeable.In a word, I like studying very much.（97）I'd like to say goodbye to what I used to be(虹口)

What did I use to be? I was not a clever boy and I never thought I should study hard.I hated school and disliked the teachers who were too strict with me.Maybe playing computer games and running after fashions were the only interesting things to me.But now I've changed a lot.Looking at the boys and girls who are studying hard all day, I feel lonely.Study hard, and try my best!

Chase my dream and never regret!This is who I am.Say goodbye to what I used to be!I feel good!

（98）

Changes the world expo has brought us(楊浦)

As we all know, the 2010 world expo was held in our city last year.It was a great success.Millions of visitors from home and abroad came to Shanghai to visit it.Changes have taken place after the great event.First, we can see “Haibao” here and there.The smiling mascot stands for the friendliness and confidence of people in Shanghai.Second, streets are wider and our

transportation is more convenient than before.There are flowers and trees on either side of the roads.Besides, more and more foreign companies are being built in Shanghai.Shanghai will be more prosperous in the future!“Better city, better life”.As a Shanghainese, I feel very proud.（115）

Li hua's visit to Julia's family(徐匯)

Li hua is in London on his study trip.Last Sunday he paid a visit to Julia's family.This was her first visit to a British family, so she arrived early in the morning.Julia welcomed her warmly.She introduced her parents to Li hua.Li hua gave them a traditional Chinese painting as a present.They liked it very much.Julia showed Li hua around her house.At noon, Jilia's mother cooked much western food.Li hua enjoyed it very much.What a good time Li hua had!(89)

I can learn about cooperation from our school activities(普陀)

All work and no play make Jack a dull boy.So our school always has various activities.They are good for our studies.Among them, I liked playing basketball best.I can learn about

cooperation from basketball.We know basketball needs team spirit, and a player on a basketball team should cooperate with the others.How will we live and work with others in the future? Maybe cooperation with others is the best choice.(74)

The best TV programme I've ever watched(青浦)

The best TV programme I've ever watched is《Tom and Jerry》《.Tom and Jerry》is a cartoon TV series and it is very famous in the world.The story is about a house cat(Tom)and a little cute

mouse(Jerry).Tom always chases Jerry and fights with him.But Tom hardly succeeds in catching Jerry mainly because of Jerry's cleverness, abilities, and luck.This cartoon TV series brings me a lot of fun.It also teaches me what friendship is.I love it very much.(90)

The best TV programme I've ever watched(青浦)

The best TV programme I've ever watched is《human and nature》.The programme is broadcasted on CCTV1 every week.It is about animals、plants and the relationship between human and nature.From this TV programme , I've got to know that nature is full of mysteries.I also realize that humans are responsible for the bad environment.If we don't care about nature, we will pay much more.The TV programme brings me much knowledge.I love it very much.(84)

Getting on well with friends(長寧)

Everyone needs friends.One can't imagine a life without friends.I always make friends with others, so I have many good friends.We share our joy as well as our sadness together.Of

course ,sometimes friends don't get on well.We may have problems.If so, we need to cool down.After all, trust and tolerance are the best ways to settle these problems.In a short time, we will make up and become friends again.(76)

The best way to make me happy(松江)

Sometimes things go wrong and I may feel rather upset/blue/depressed.When I'm not in a good mood, I like reading a funny story or playing games with my friends.But the best way to make me happy is to listen to music.For one thing, music can relax me and give me much pleasure.For another thing.Listening to English songs can improve my English skills.In one word, I feel happy while listening.(74)

How to use computers correctly(盧灣)

Dear friends,How time flies!I'm very glad here to tell you something about computers.Computers have both advantages and disadvantages.We can search the Internet for information, listen to music, chat with our friends, play computer games...But some students have problems.They spend too much time on the computers.This is not good for their eyes and does harm to their studies as well.Even worse, some students may watch bad web sites.So it is necessary for us to use computer correctly.Here is some advice: firstly, homework first and surf the Internet regularly.Secondly, don't give your personal information to a stranger.Thirdly, do things that are good to your studies.I wish you a colorful school life!(123)

Yours,Li Fei

New Year's Day 2011(黃浦)

My New Year's Day 2011 was a wonderful day.I had a three-day holiday.During the holiday, my grandma, who lives in the countryside ,came to see my family.She hasn't been in Shanghai for several years.So I showed her around Shanghai.We visited Nanjing walkway road, the Bund, the Jinmao Building ad so on.We also bought lots of things in shopping malls.Grandma felt surprised that Shanghai has changed a lot.She almost lost her way.We were both very tired, but we were very happy, too.(90)

Water shortage(寶山)

As we all know, water is very important in our life.We can't imagine life without water.But now, lots of rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.Clean water is less and less.The problem of water shortage is becoming more and more serious.We should take some actions to solve this problem.First, government should make laws to

prevent factories from pouring waste water into rivers or lakes.Second, we should take a shower instead of taking a bath.Finally, we shouldn't leave the tap running when we are brushing our teeth.If we don't save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.(94)

I want to be an environment protector(金山)

Nowadays the problems of environment are becoming more and more serious.Factories pour dirty water(chemical waste)into rivers or lakes.Cars give off waste gas and the air is unhealthy for us to breathe.More and more trees are cut down.The earth is our only home and we have the duty to take care of it.So I want to be an environment protector.First, I will tell the people around me to protect environment.Second, I'd like to plant more trees with my friends.Finally, I will shop with a reusable bag instead of a plastic bag.I believe if every one of us do something to protect our environment, our world will be greener and more beautiful.(119)

Something I will never forget(崇明)

I will never forget the experience(I went through)when I was in Junior Two.It was an

English lesson.My English teacher, Mr.Wang, gave us a topic “Be confident in yourself”.We had only five minutes to prepare, and then someone would be asked to give a speech in front of the whole class.I was a shy boy/girl and I was not good at spoken English as well.But suddenly I found that Mr.Wang.was looking at me.His eyes seemed to tell me that I could be the first

volunteer.I was shocked but full of courage.Of course, I was the first to go onto the platform and gave my classmates a speech, not perfect but wonderful.Today I'm still thankful to Mr.Wang.This experience teaches me “Be confident in myself and nothing can beat me.”(137)

A thing happened in my class(奉賢）

Last Friday afternoon, our class held a special class meeting——Contest of singing English songs.We sang a lot of English songs , such as “Far away from home”, “big big world”, “my heart will go on”, “seasons in the sun” and so on.The whole class were excited and full of laughter.Through this activity, I began to love English songs.Also This contest is instructive and it makes me interested in learning English now.(78)

第二篇：2018上海各區(qū)中考一模作文

2018年一模作文匯總

寶山區(qū)

四、寫作（60分）

27.題目：進步，就從這里開始

要求：（1）字?jǐn)?shù)在600字左右，文體不限（詩歌除外）；（2）文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、校名等，請用A老師、B學(xué)校、C學(xué)生等字樣代替；（3）不能抄用本試卷中的閱讀材料；（4）請注意字跡端正，卷面整潔。

崇明縣

四、作 文（60分）

27．題目：風(fēng)景在路上

要求：（1）寫一篇600字左右的文章；（2）不得透露個人相關(guān)信息；（3）不得抄襲。

奉賢區(qū)

四、寫作（60分）

27．題目：這不是一件小事

要求：（1）寫一篇600字左右的文章；（2）不得透露個人相關(guān)信息，不得抄襲。

虹口區(qū)

四、寫作（60分）

27．題目：愛在我身邊

要求：（1）寫一篇600字左右的文章。（2）不得透露個人相關(guān)信息。（3）不得抄襲。

黃浦區(qū)

四、寫作（60分）

27.題目：我的動力之源

要求：⑴寫一篇600字左右的文章。⑵不得透露個人相關(guān)信息。⑶不得抄襲。

嘉定區(qū)

四 寫作（60分）

25.題目：我明白，這樣做得對

要求：1.寫一篇600字左右的文章。2.不得透露個人相關(guān)信息。3.不得抄襲。

金山區(qū)

四、寫作（60分）

28．味覺，是人所具有的一種重要的感覺。很多生活感受，甚至生活經(jīng)歷，都會在味覺上留下記憶。請以《舌尖上的滋味》為題，寫一篇不少于600字的文章。

要求：⑴不要透露個人相關(guān)信息。⑵不得抄襲。

靜安區(qū)

四、寫作（60分)

26.題目：打開另一扇門

要求：①這份試卷中出現(xiàn)過的素材請不要使用。②字?jǐn)?shù)600字左右。③不要透露個人相關(guān)信息（如與本人有關(guān)的校名和姓名），若不可避免，用代號表示，如A中學(xué)、B老師，小C。④卷面整潔，字跡清楚。

閔行區(qū)

四、寫作（60分）

27.題目： 成長路上，一直有陽光

要求：（1）寫一篇600字左右的文章。（2）不得透露個人相關(guān)信息。（3）不得抄襲。

浦東區(qū)

四、寫作（60分）

27．題目：慢慢地，學(xué)會了欣賞

要求：（1）寫一篇600字左右的文章。（2）不得透露個人相關(guān)信息。（3）不得抄襲。

普陀區(qū)

四、寫作（60分）27．題目：這才是值得珍愛的

要求：（1）寫一篇600字左右的文章。（2）不得透露個人相關(guān)信息。（3）不得抄襲。

青浦區(qū)

四、寫作（60分）

27.題目：以自己的方式

要求：（1）寫一篇600字左右的文章。（2）不得透露個人相關(guān)信息。

松江區(qū)

四、寫作（60分）

27．題目：這一次，我要大聲喝彩

要求：寫一篇不少于600字的文章，不得透露個人相關(guān)信息，不得抄襲。

徐匯區(qū)

四、寫作（60分）

26．題目： 意外的收獲

要求：（1）寫一篇600字左右的文章。（2）不得透露個人相關(guān)信息。（3）不得抄襲。

楊浦區(qū)

四、寫作（60分）

27．請以“陪伴”為題，寫一篇作文。

要求：1.不少于600字。

2.作文中不得出現(xiàn)所在學(xué)校的名稱和師生姓名。3.不得以本試卷中的閱讀材料作為寫作內(nèi)容。

長寧區(qū)

四、寫作（60分）

27．題目：我的世界還有你

要求：⑴寫一篇記敘文，不少于600字；

⑵不要透露個人相關(guān)信息；

⑶不得抄襲。不得使用試卷中出現(xiàn)的材料。

第三篇：2014中考一模各區(qū)作文

24．每個人對快樂的理解都是不一樣的，有人說考試得了高分很快樂，受到他人的贊賞很快樂，擁有自

己喜愛的玩具很快樂；也有人說一次探險的經(jīng)歷很快樂，一次戰(zhàn)勝失敗的過程很快樂；還有人說幫助他人很快樂，看到別人快樂很快樂??房山一模

請以“也快樂”為題，寫一篇文章。

要求：（1）在橫線處填上適當(dāng)?shù)脑~語，構(gòu)成你的作文題目，抄寫在作文紙上。

（2）不限文體（詩歌除外）。

（3）字?jǐn)?shù)在600—l000之間。

（4）作文中不要出現(xiàn)所在學(xué)校的校名或師生姓名。

作文（共50分）昌平

23.根據(jù)情境，按要求寫作（共10分）

母親節(jié)就要到了，為了表達對母親“教我做人”的感激之情，請你依據(jù)生活中的一個具體事例，寫一段表示感謝的話。（要表明感謝的內(nèi)容，表達感謝的心意，語言準(zhǔn)確得體，不超過200字）

24.根據(jù)題目，按要求寫作（共40分）

請你以“________是這樣煉成的”為題目，寫一篇文章。

要求：

（1）將題目補充完整后抄寫在答題卡上。

（2）不限文體（詩歌除外）。

（3）字?jǐn)?shù)在600—800之間。

（4）作文中不要出現(xiàn)所在學(xué)校的校名或師生姓名。

一）根據(jù)情境，按要求寫作。（10分）朝陽

24．新學(xué)期開始，朝陽中學(xué)舉行了隆重的開學(xué)典禮。作為校報的通訊員，請你寫一則消息，報道此次開學(xué)典禮的情況。（自擬標(biāo)題，內(nèi)容符合要求，語言通順，不超過200字）

（二）根據(jù)題目，按要求寫作。（50分）

25.請以“因為有你”為題，寫一篇文章。

要求：（1）請將題目寫在答題卡上。

（2）文體不限（詩歌除外）。

（3）不少于600字。

（4）作文中不要出現(xiàn)所在學(xué)校的校名或師生姓名。

（一）根據(jù)情境，按要求寫作。（1）與（2）任選其一。（10分）大興

（1）李暢要獨自去市里參加特長考試。周六早上他匆忙出門，上了公交車，一摸口袋發(fā)現(xiàn)沒帶交通卡，再一摸錢包也落家了。于是忐忑不安地來到招呼他買票的售票員面前，支支吾吾說明了自己的情況。售票員看他這么著急，幫他妥善解決了問題，使他順利趕到考場。

請你以李暢的名義給售票員寫一段感謝的話。

要求：寫明感謝的內(nèi)容，表達感謝的心意，語言準(zhǔn)確得體，不超過200字。

（2）趙一鳴酷愛讀書。經(jīng)過精心準(zhǔn)備，代表學(xué)校參加了區(qū)少年宮組織的“走進經(jīng)典，感悟成長”的演講比賽，獲得了全區(qū)第一名的好成績。

請你以趙一鳴同班同學(xué)的身份對他說一段祝賀的話。

要求：寫明祝賀的內(nèi)容，表達祝賀的心意，語言準(zhǔn)確得體，不超過200字

（二）根據(jù)題目，按要求寫作。（40分）

“腳踏實地”，形容做事踏實認(rèn)真，不虛浮。我國先賢荀子說：“不積跬步無以至千里，不積小流無以成江河。”西方哲人維特根斯坦說：“我貼在地面步行，不在云端跳舞。”這些話詩意形象，寓意深刻，能引發(fā)我們諸多想象或感悟。

請以“腳踏實地”為題目，寫一篇文章。

要求：

（1）將題目抄寫在答題卡上。

（2）不限文體（詩歌除外）。

（3）字?jǐn)?shù)在600-800之間。

（4）作文中不要出現(xiàn)所在學(xué)校的校名和師生姓名。

東城

21．妞妞是個兩歲的小姑娘，她最心愛的小白兔丟了，非常傷心。上初三的學(xué)生王紅在家門口遇見了走失的小白兔，她把小白兔抱回家，抽出自己寶貴的時間，細(xì)心照顧，還在小區(qū)出口處寫了一張告示，寫明小白兔的特點和自己的聯(lián)系方式。幾天后，妞妞的媽媽從王紅的手中接過完好無損的小白兔。請你以妞妞媽媽的名義給王紅寫一段表示感謝的話。（要寫明感謝的內(nèi)容，表達感謝的心意，語言準(zhǔn)確得體，不超過200字）

（二）根據(jù)題目，按要求寫作。（40分）

22．愛是一種美好的情感，看不見，摸不著，但是它總是出現(xiàn)在你最需要的時候。有了愛，生活變得無限美好。愛的甜美，讓你體驗了愛，懂得了愛，學(xué)會了愛。請以“愛”為題目，寫一篇文章。要求：

（1）將題目抄寫在答題卡上。

（2）不限文體（詩歌除外）。

（3）字?jǐn)?shù)在600-800之間。

（4）作文中不要出現(xiàn)所在學(xué)校的校名或師生姓名。

(一)根據(jù)情境，按要求寫作。（10分）

24．育人中學(xué)學(xué)生李明做完值日最后一個回家，到車棚發(fā)現(xiàn)自行車爆胎了。正在李明不知所措的時候，居委會的一位叔叔發(fā)現(xiàn)了李明的情況，找來工具，幫他修好了車胎。請你以李明的名義給居委會的叔叔寫一段表示感謝的話。(要寫明感謝的內(nèi)容，表達感謝的心意，語言準(zhǔn)確得體，不超過200字)

(二)根據(jù)題目，按要求寫作。（40分）

25．改變，指的是事物發(fā)生了顯著的變化。個人因改變而美好，集體因改變而和諧，生活因改變而精彩??請以“改變”為題目，寫一篇文章。

要求：

（1）將題目抄寫在答題卡上。豐臺一模

（2）不限文體（詩歌除外）。

（3）字?jǐn)?shù)在600-800之間。

（4）作文中不要出現(xiàn)所在學(xué)校的校名或師生姓名

（一）根據(jù)情境，按要求寫作。（10分）海淀一模

24．任選一個活動，自擬標(biāo)題，寫一則消息，報道此次活動的情況。以“厚德中學(xué)”代替學(xué)校的名稱，不超過200字。

（1）學(xué)校初三體育模擬測試活動。

（2）學(xué)校近期舉辦的某項大型活動（運動會除外）。

（二）根據(jù)題目，按要求寫作。（40分）

25．請在“感謝您，我的手”中的橫線上填寫詞語“牽著”或“放開”，構(gòu)成你的作文題目，寫一篇字?jǐn)?shù)600—800字的文章。不限文體（詩歌除外），作文中不要出現(xiàn)所在學(xué)校的校名或師生姓名。

19．依據(jù)情境，按要求寫作。（10分）門頭溝一模

李大爺今年81歲，是一位孤寡老人。心臟不好，老伴兒去世的早，膝下一子，也因疾病早亡。因此，李大爺沒有人照顧。至今，住進養(yǎng)老院中已經(jīng)11年了。重陽節(jié)就要到來，屆時養(yǎng)老院準(zhǔn)備為

院內(nèi)的孤寡老人們舉辦慶祝活動。活動中將有快板、歌舞、詩歌朗誦等文藝演出。請你寫一封慰問信，提前祝愿李大爺身體健康，節(jié)日快樂。

（要寫明慰問的內(nèi)容，表達慰問的心意，語言準(zhǔn)確得體，不超過200字）

20．（40分）

“百尺竿頭，更進一步”常用來比喻學(xué)問、成績等達到了很高的程度以后仍繼續(xù)努力。請你以此俗語為題，寫一篇作文。

題目：百尺竿頭，更進一步

20.小作文（10分）密云一模

很快你就初中畢業(yè)了，三年來，你的媽媽和爸爸為你學(xué)習(xí)與成長付出了很多很多，請你給媽媽（或爸爸）寫一段感謝的話。

要求：要寫明感謝的內(nèi)容，表達感謝的心意，語言準(zhǔn)確得體，不出現(xiàn)真實姓名，不超過200字。

21.大作文（40分）

在人生的旅途中，我們總在不斷地出發(fā)，伴我們的，有親情、友情、理想、知識、叮囑……而這一切激勵鞭策著我們勇往前行。

請以“帶著出發(fā)”為題，寫一篇文章。

要求：

（1）在橫線處填上合適的詞語，將題目填充完整。

（2）不限文體（詩歌除外）。

（3）字?jǐn)?shù)在600—800之間。

（一）根據(jù)情境，按要求寫作。（10分）

22.幸福社區(qū)開展“保護生態(tài)環(huán)境、爭做文明使者”公益活動，初三一班的全體同學(xué)積極響應(yīng)社區(qū)的號召，利用周末時間到小區(qū)挨家挨戶回收廢電池，然后交由居委會統(tǒng)一處理，解決了人們無處存放廢電池苦惱，得到居民們的好評。請你以社區(qū)居委會主任的名義給初三一班的同學(xué)們寫一段感謝的話。（要寫明感謝的內(nèi)容，表達感謝的心意，語言準(zhǔn)確，不超過200字）

（二）根據(jù)題目，按要求寫作。（40分）順義

23．在每一個成長的日子里，不可能總是充滿著燦爛的陽光與和煦的微風(fēng)，可以說當(dāng)代社會，壓力無處不在。壓力面前你可能有過氣喘吁吁，也可能有過痛苦不堪。然而，也正是壓力，能激發(fā)出或許連我們自己都不清楚的內(nèi)在潛質(zhì)；是壓力，讓不懈奔跑的我們縮短了與目標(biāo)的距離；是壓力，讓我們觸摸到夢想實現(xiàn)的快樂與滿足??請以“面對壓力”為題寫一篇作文。

要求：

（1）將題目抄寫在作文紙上。

（2）不限文體（詩歌除外）。

（3）字?jǐn)?shù)在600-800之間。

（4）作文中不要出現(xiàn)所在學(xué)校的校名或師生姓名。

作文一（10分）通州一模

學(xué)校的保潔員們，無論春夏秋冬，每天都一絲不茍地清掃校園，擦洗樓道，使我們能在清潔舒適的環(huán)境里學(xué)習(xí)成長。你很快就要初中畢業(yè)了，請你以“2014屆畢業(yè)生”的名義給他們寫封感謝信。不超過200字。

作文二（40分）

姿態(tài)，是容貌神態(tài)，姿態(tài)是風(fēng)格氣度，姿態(tài)是思維高度。好的姿態(tài)可以體現(xiàn)人的文明程度，好的姿態(tài)可以促進學(xué)業(yè)事業(yè)的成功。請以“最美的姿態(tài)”為題目，寫一篇不少于600字的文章，除詩歌外，文體不限。注意不要透露個人和學(xué)校的真實信息。

（一）根據(jù)情境，按要求寫作。（10分）西城

24．請從下列兩個情境中任選一個，按要求寫作。

（1）趙華要參加學(xué)校的辯論賽，王紅作為陪練一直幫她收集材料，模擬演練。臨近比賽，趙華嗓子沙啞了，王紅幫她找藥救急。最終，趙華順利參賽，并獲得了好成績。請你以趙華的名義給王紅寫一段表示感謝的話。（要寫明感謝的內(nèi)容，表達感謝的心意，語言準(zhǔn)確得體，不超過200字）

（2）4月14日（周一）下午，平安中學(xué)各班組織了以“校園安全”為主題的班會活動，作為初三（1）班的校報通訊員，請你給校報寫一則消息，報道你們班此次班會活動的情況。（自擬標(biāo)題，內(nèi)容符合要求，語言通順，不超200字）

（二）根據(jù)題目，按要求寫作。（40分）

25．當(dāng)你想解決生活、學(xué)習(xí)中的某個問題，了解某個自然現(xiàn)象、科學(xué)原理時，你就會開始探

索的歷程，有過這個經(jīng)歷，無論結(jié)果如何，你的能力、認(rèn)識都會得到提高，情感、經(jīng)驗

都會更加豐富。請以“在探索中成長”為題寫一篇作文。

要求：

（1）將題目抄寫在答題卡上。

（2）不限文體（詩歌除外）。

（3）字?jǐn)?shù)在600-800字之間。

（4）作文中不要出現(xiàn)所在學(xué)校的校名或師生姓名。

22.根據(jù)情境，按要求寫作。（10分）燕山一模

臨近中考，李萌同學(xué)的物理成績總是不理想，每次月考都因物理成績拉總成績的后腿。他很苦惱。班長張洋看到這種情況，主動幫助李萌同學(xué)補習(xí)物理。有時周日張洋還約李萌到自己家里給李萌輔導(dǎo)。在班長張洋的幫助下，李萌成績有了明顯提升。

請你以李萌家長的名義給張洋同學(xué)寫一段表示感謝的話。

（要寫明感謝的內(nèi)容，表達感謝的話，語言準(zhǔn)確得體，不超過200字）

答：

23.根據(jù)題目，按要求寫作。（40分）

歌手齊秦曾唱過一首歌《給我一個空間》，“給我一個空間，沒有人走過……”是啊，生活需要空間，心靈需要空間，成長需要空間，就是植物的生長也是如此……留一點空間，給自己、給他人、或給它們，以此讓生命活得愜意，活出精彩。

請以“空間”為題，自選角度，寫一篇作文。

要求：（1）將題目抄寫在答題卡上。

（2）不限文體（詩歌除外）。

（3）字?jǐn)?shù)不少于600字。

（4）作文中不要出現(xiàn)所在學(xué)校的校名或師生姓名。

第四篇：上海中考各區(qū)模考英語作文題匯總

附：作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

作文滿分18分,其中總體結(jié)構(gòu)分為3分, 內(nèi)容7分和語言8分。(1)內(nèi)容：7分內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達清楚、完整。

5－6分內(nèi)容基本切題，意思大致連貫，表達基本清楚，但不夠完整。3－4分內(nèi)容不夠切題，意思不夠連貫，表達不夠清楚，離題目要求較遠。

0－2分文不對題，表達不清。

(2)語言：（本項扣分總和不得超過8分。）

詞數(shù)：每少5個詞扣0.5分, 依此類推。只寫出個別單詞、不成句子者不給分。拼寫：每錯扣0.5分, 同一錯誤不重復(fù)扣分。語法扣分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)同拼寫。

標(biāo)點符號、大小寫錯誤每2處扣0.5分，但整卷此項錯誤扣分總和不得超過1分。

(3)組織結(jié)構(gòu)：凡內(nèi)容充實，不寫廢話，上下文連貫，用語規(guī)范，表達準(zhǔn)確，無或少見語法錯誤，詞匯、句型和句式運用恰當(dāng)，多見好句型和習(xí)慣表達用語者，可給足3分。（本項分四檔給分： 3，2，1，0）注意：

1詞數(shù)不足30個者，給分以6分為限； 詞數(shù):○2詞數(shù)不足40個者，給分以9分為限； ○3詞數(shù)不足50個者，給分以12分為限；

(以上3點應(yīng)結(jié)合其余三項綜合考慮。)○4詞數(shù)在50－59個之間者，每少5個扣0.5分;○5只寫出個別單詞、詞不成句者，則給0分。○組織結(jié)構(gòu)3分參考標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：

一）內(nèi)容和語言兩項總分達15分及以上者方可得2－3分；

二）內(nèi)容和語言兩項總分在13－14分者，如文中確有好句型或表達用語，可酌情給1－2分； 三）通篇句型、句式單一，詞匯貧乏者，即使無語法錯誤，亦不予給此檔分。

各區(qū)模考作文題

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “What Can I Do for the World Expo?”.(以“我能為世博會做什么？”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）Sentence patterns for reference（以下句型僅供參考）

? As the World Expo will be held… ? As a Shanghainese, I…

? To do a bit of my share for the Expo, I…

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “ Things I want to do during this summer holiday ”.(以“今年暑假我想做的事”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)Use the following points as a reference.(以下提示僅供參考)? What are the things you want to do during this summer holiday? ? What do you like to do most? Why?

106.Write at least 60 words about the topic“Homework in our study”.(以“我們學(xué)習(xí)中的家庭作業(yè)”為題寫一篇至少60字的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格)。

Use the following points as a guide（短文須包含下列要點）? What do you think of homework in your study?

? Why do you do your homework every day?(At least two reasons)? Is there too much homework in your daily life?

? What do you want to say to your teacher or your parents?

106．Write at least 60 words about the topic “My Dream Life of Senior High School”.（以“我向往的高中生活”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。首句已給，不記入60個詞。）Use the following questions as a guide.（下列問題供參考）

? What senior high school life do you like? ? What do you hope to do in the senior high school? ? What kind of teachers and friends do you expect to have? You may begin your passage with: My dream seniorhigh school life is …

106.Write at least 60 words on the topic “My Secrets of Happiness”.(以“我的快樂秘訣”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)Everyone has his or her own secrets of happiness, so do I.… Outline for reference（以下內(nèi)容僅供參考）．．．．．．．．1.Tell your secrets of happiness.2.Give the supporting details.106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “My Summer Holiday Plan”.(以“我的暑假計劃”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)Use the following points as a reference.(以下內(nèi)容僅供參考)．．．．．．．．? Describe one thing you plan to do during the coming summer holiday.? Tell when, where and how you plan to do it.? List at least two reasons for your decision.106.Write at least 60 words about the topic “Traffic in our city”.（以“我們城市的交通”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)Use the following points as a guide.（短文須包含下列要點）? What do you think of the traffic in our city? ? Why do you think so?(Give at least two reasons)? What is /are your suggestion(s)to improve the traffic in the city?

106.Write at least 60 words about the topic “The Ways to Improve My English”.（以“提高英語學(xué)習(xí)的方法”為題，寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。）

The following points are for your reference:

1.What do you do with your English study every day?

2.What are the most effective(有效的)ways for you to improve your English?

3.What progress have you made in your English study?

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “ To be a student with good manners”.(以“做一個有禮貌的學(xué)生”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)

短文需包含下列要點：

1.Are you a student with good manners or bad manners?

2.Why do you think so?

3.To be a student with good manners, what should/shouldn’t you do in public?

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic 'The most shocking news to me'.(以“最令我震驚的新聞”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的作文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)Suggested questions：

What's the most shocking news to you?

Why do you think it's the most shocking news? ?

What's your opinion about the news?

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “How to find happiness ”.(以“How to find happiness”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)Use the following points as a guide.(短文必須包含以下要點)? What’s your view on happiness ? ? Do you agree with the saying, “ Money is happiness.” ?(give two reasons)How do our students find happiness in our study and life？

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Something I Will Never Forget”.(以“令我難忘的一件事”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)Use the following points as a reference.(以下提示僅供參考)? What was the experience that you will never forget? ? Where and when did it take place?(Describe the experience)What effect does this experience have on you still?

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “I’d like to say ‘Goodbye’ to _______”“我想對_______ 說再見”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)Sentence patterns for reference（以下句型僅供參考）1.Who or what would you like to say ‘Goodbye’ to? 2.Why would you like to do so? 3.How do you feel when you do this?

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “ I want to be an environment protector” Use the following points as a guide: What are the problems of our environment? Why do you want to be an environment protector? What will you do to protect the environment?

106.Write a passage of 60-80 words on the topic “I can learn about ______ from our school activities”.（以“學(xué)校集體活動讓我懂得了。。”為題寫一篇60-80詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。）Suggested questions”

? What school activity(ies)do you like best? ? What can you learn from it/them?

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Changes the World Expo Has Brought Us”.(以“世博會給我們帶來的變化”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)

Sentence patterns for reference（以下句型僅供參考）．．．．．．．．? Has the World Expo brought us any changes? ? What are the changes that took place around you?Name at least two changes.? What should we do after the World Expo?

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic 'I like reading___________(comic strips/detective stories)better'.(以我更喜歡閱讀_____________(連環(huán)畫/偵探小說）為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，闡述你對連環(huán)畫和偵探小說故事的看法。寫作前先完成標(biāo)題，標(biāo)點符號不占格）Suggested questions(以下問題僅供參考)Which do you prefer to read, comic strips or detective stories? Why do you like to read them better?(Give at least two reasons.)What do you think of the other kind?(Give at least one reason.)

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic ”Getting on well with friends".(以“與朋友出好關(guān)系”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)短文需包含下列要點： 1.Do you have good friends? 2.Do you sometimes have problems with them? 3.How do you deal with the problems?

第五篇：上海中考各區(qū)模考英語作文題匯總

附：作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

作文滿分18分,其中總體結(jié)構(gòu)分為3分, 內(nèi)容7分和語言8分。

(1)內(nèi)容：7分內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達清楚、完整。

5－6分內(nèi)容基本切題，意思大致連貫，表達基本清楚，但不夠完整。

3－4分內(nèi)容不夠切題，意思不夠連貫，表達不夠清楚，離題目要求較遠。

0－2分文不對題，表達不清。

(2)語言：（本項扣分總和不得超過8分。）

詞數(shù)：每少5個詞扣0.5分, 依此類推。只寫出個別單詞、不成句子者不給分。

拼寫：每錯扣0.5分, 同一錯誤不重復(fù)扣分。語法扣分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)同拼寫。

標(biāo)點符號、大小寫錯誤每2處扣0.5分，但整卷此項錯誤扣分總和不得超過1分。

(3)組織結(jié)構(gòu)：凡內(nèi)容充實，不寫廢話，上下文連貫，用語規(guī)范，表達準(zhǔn)確，無或少見語法錯誤，詞匯、句型和句式運用恰當(dāng)，多見好句型和習(xí)慣表達用語者，可給足3分。

（本項分四檔給分： 3，2，1，0）

注意：

1詞數(shù)不足30個者，給分以6分為限； 詞數(shù):○

2詞數(shù)不足40個者，給分以9分為限； ○

3詞數(shù)不足50個者，給分以12分為限；(以上3點應(yīng)結(jié)合其余三項綜合考慮。)○

4詞數(shù)在50－59個之間者，每少5個扣0.5分;○5只寫出個別單詞、詞不成句者，則給0分。○

組織結(jié)構(gòu)3分參考標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：

一）內(nèi)容和語言兩項總分達15分及以上者方可得2－3分；

二）內(nèi)容和語言兩項總分在13－14分者，如文中確有好句型或表達用語，可酌情給1－2分；

三）通篇句型、句式單一，詞匯貧乏者，即使無語法錯誤，亦不予給此檔分。

各區(qū)模考作文題

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “What Can I Do for the World Expo?”.(以“我能為世博會做什么？”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)

（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）

Sentence patterns for reference（以下句型僅供參考）

? As the World Expo will be held…

? As a Shanghainese, I…

? To do a bit of my share for the Expo, I…

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “ Things I want to do during this summer holiday ”.(以“今年暑假我想做的事”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)

Use the following points as a reference.(以下提示僅供參考)

? What are the things you want to do during this summer holiday?

? What do you like to do most? Why?

106.Write at least 60 words about the topic“Homework in our study”.(以“我們學(xué)習(xí)中的家庭作業(yè)”為題寫一篇至少60字的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格)。

Use the following points as a guide（短文須包含下列要點）

? What do you think of homework in your study?

? Why do you do your homework every day?(At least two reasons)

? Is there too much homework in your daily life?

? What do you want to say to your teacher or your parents?

106．Write at least 60 words about the topic “My Dream Life of Senior High School”.（以“我向往的高中生活”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。首句已給，不記入60個詞。）

Use the following questions as a guide.（下列問題供參考）

? What senior high school life do you like?

? What do you hope to do in the senior high school?

? What kind of teachers and friends do you expect to have?

You may begin your passage with:

My dream seniorhigh school life is …

106.Write at least 60 words on the topic “My Secrets of Happiness”.(以“我的快樂秘訣”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)

Everyone has his or her own secrets of happiness, so do I.…

Outline for reference（以下內(nèi)容僅供參考）．．．．．．．．

1.Tell your secrets of happiness.2.Give the supporting details.106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “My Summer Holiday Plan”.(以“我的暑假計劃”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)

Use the following points as a reference.(以下內(nèi)容僅供參考)．．．．．．．．

? Describe one thing you plan to do during the coming summer holiday.? Tell when, where and how you plan to do it.? List at least two reasons for your decision.106.Write at least 60 words about the topic “Traffic in our city”.（以“我們城市的交通”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)

Use the following points as a guide.（短文須包含下列要點）

? What do you think of the traffic in our city?

? Why do you think so?(Give at least two reasons)

? What is /are your suggestion(s)to improve the traffic in the city?

106.Write at least 60 words about the topic “The Ways to Improve My English”.（以“提高英語學(xué)習(xí)的方法”為題，寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。）

The following points are for your reference:

1.What do you do with your English study every day?

2.What are the most effective(有效的)ways for you to improve your English?

3.What progress have you made in your English study?

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “ To be a student with good manners”.(以“做一個有禮貌的學(xué)生”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)

短文需包含下列要點：

1.Are you a student with good manners or bad manners?

2.Why do you think so?

3.To be a student with good manners, what should/shouldn’t you do in public?

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic 'The most shocking news to me'.(以“最令我震驚的新聞”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的作文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)

Suggested questions：

?What's the most shocking news to you?

?Why do you think it's the most shocking news?

?What's your opinion about the news?

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “How to find happiness ”.(以“How to find happiness”為題

寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)

Use the following points as a guide.(短文必須包含以下要點)

? What’s your view on happiness ?

? Do you agree with the saying, “ Money is happiness.” ?(give two reasons)

How do our students find happiness in our study and life？

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Something I Will Never Forget”.(以“令我難忘的一件事”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)

Use the following points as a reference.(以下提示僅供參考)

? What was the experience that you will never forget?

? Where and when did it take place?(Describe the experience)

What effect does this experience have on you still?

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “I’d like to say ‘Goodbye’ to _______”“我想對_______ 說再見”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)

Sentence patterns for reference（以下句型僅供參考）

1.Who or what would you like to say ‘Goodbye’ to?

2.Why would you like to do so?

3.How do you feel when you do this?

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “ I want to be an environment protector”

Use the following points as a guide:

What are the problems of our environment?

Why do you want to be an environment protector?

What will you do to protect the environment?

106.Write a passage of 60-80 words on the topic “I can learn about ______ from our school activities”.（以“學(xué)校集體活動讓我懂得了。。”為題寫一篇60-80詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。）

Suggested questions”

? What school activity(ies)do you like best?

? What can you learn from it/them?

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Changes the World Expo Has Brought Us”.(以“世博會給我們帶來的變化”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)

Sentence patterns for reference（以下句型僅供參考）．．．．．．．．

? Has the World Expo brought us any changes?

? What are the changes that took place around you?Name at least two changes.? What should we do after the World Expo?

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic 'I like reading___________(comic strips/detective stories)better'.(以我更喜歡閱讀_____________(連環(huán)畫/偵探小說）為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，闡述你對連環(huán)畫和偵探小說故事的看法。寫作前先完成標(biāo)題，標(biāo)點符號不占格）

Suggested questions(以下問題僅供參考)

Which do you prefer to read, comic strips or detective stories?

Why do you like to read them better?(Give at least two reasons.)

What do you think of the other kind?(Give at least one reason.)

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic ”Getting on well with friends".(以“與朋友出好關(guān)系”為題寫

一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)短文需包含下列要點：

1.Do you have good friends?

2.Do you sometimes have problems with them?

3.How do you deal with the problems?