第一篇：雅思寫作高分不可生硬套用

在雅思考試的聽說讀寫四門科目中，大多數考生最擔心的莫過于寫作了，時常會出現投入精力最多、耗費時間最長、考試分數最低的現象，這往往和考生備考方式不合理有關。在雅思寫作備考中，考生比較容易進入的一個誤區就是“題海戰術”。到處收集作文題目，然后每天寫2-3篇，以期寫作水平在能在短期內迅速提高。其實不然，適當數量的寫作實戰練習是必不可少的，但是并非批量生產、機械運動，最重要的是能從題目中以小見大、舉一反三，掌握相關類型題目的解題精髓。在此，筆者以劍橋系列C5T1的Task 1為例，探討如何從一道曲線題中學到這一類圖型的應對策略。

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.這是一幅典型的多線圖，圖中有三條曲線，分別代表美國、瑞典和日本三國老年人的比例變化情況。在正常情況下，這類圖形可以采用分線描述的方法，把每條曲線的信息都描寫清楚，最后再進行總結和對比。但是可以發現，圖中代表美國和瑞典曲線的走勢大體相仿，只有在2000年到2030年這段時間里有所差異，可以采用分組思想并為一組來寫，而日本的曲線走勢比較不同，因此可以單獨描寫。

但是與常規圖形不同的是，這幅圖的時間跨度比較大，包含了過去、現在和將來。那么在描述的時候如果完全是按照曲線的順序來進行，肯定會碰到時態表達的問題，比如在2000年到2030年這段時間里的變化趨勢到底應該用什么時態來寫，而且在描述每條線變化的時候，都會碰到同樣的問題，這時就應該考慮多線圖是否有其他的解題思路。

這時，出自雅思考官之手的范文可以給我們一些啟發。

The graph shows the increase in the ageing population in Japan, Sweden and the USA.It indicates that the percentage of elderly people in all three countries is expected to increase to almost 25% of the respective populations by the year 2040.In 1940 the proportion of people aged 65 or more stood at only 5% in Japan, approximately 7% in Sweden and 9% in the US.However, while the figures for the Western countries grew to about 15% in around 1990, the figure for Japan dipped to only 2.5% for much of this period, before rising to almost 5% again at the present time.In spite of some fluctuation in the expectedpercentages, the proportion of older people will probably continue to increase in the next two decades in the three countries.A more dramatic rise is predicted between 2030 and 2040 in Japan, by which time it is thought that the proportionof elderly people will be similar in the three countries.范文采用的是按時間分段，也就是按時態的不同，進行分塊說明。主體段第一段是描述過去發生的數據變化情況，第二段則是預計將來的發展趨勢。這種按時態劃分的思路，使得文章脈絡清晰，讓人眼前一亮。

那么如果時態一致，也就是說，時態不再成為劃分圖形依據的時候，是否又只能按曲線一條一條地寫呢?其實不然，我們可以假設這幅圖上的時間區間不是從 1940到2040，而是從1840到1940，那么這時同樣還是可以按照時間來劃分的。當然，劃分時間段不是絕對的，唯一的目的就是為了便于把內容清晰地表達出來。基于這個原則，這張圖可以劃分為三個時間段：第一段(1840-1880)，美國和瑞典是在逐漸上升的，而日本則是緩慢下降到最低值;第二段(1880-1930)，美國基本保持穩定，瑞典繼續保持上升趨勢，但是伴隨著較明顯的波動，日本從最低值開始穩步上升;第三段(1930-1940)，美國、瑞典和日本三國的比例都是在快速上升的，其中日本的上升幅度最大。這樣劃分下來，可以發現，每個時間段內，各條曲線圖的趨勢還是相對單一的，因此比較好寫，而且條理也清楚。

由此，我們可以得出，曲線圖的寫作思路主要有兩種：一種是按線條劃分來寫，一種是按時間劃分來寫。一般來說，線條數量較少的情況下，可以考慮前者，也是最常規的寫法。

如果圖中線條數量較多，且圖形特征不是很明朗，則可以斟酌后者是否可行。

當然，時態的一致性，以及范文中的一些地道的表達都是值得學習和注意的，而一道題的價值不僅僅在于練習一下，更重要的是要學會邊練習邊思考，在練習的過程中充分發掘規律性的東西，從而推而廣之到一類題型，以小見大，舉一反三，把自己從盲目而疲憊的“題海戰術”中解脫出來，有選擇、有針對、有想法地進行練習，這樣才能達到事半功倍的效果，攻克雅思寫作難關。

誠然，靈活、合理地運用雅思寫作模板能在短時間內幫助雅思寫作基礎比較差的考生提高不少，但是如果想要真正獲得高分的雅思寫作，那么就必須突破突破雅思寫作模板才能獲雅思考官的青睞。環球雅思建議大家可以被模板，但是在使用時切忌靈活與恰當地運用，而非生硬得套在文章中留下明顯的“套模板”痕跡。最后環球雅思還是預祝考友們雅思寫作獲得高分！

第二篇：雅思寫作高分

雅思寫作大作文必看高分范文

TASK 2: 高分范文一

Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment;only governments and large companies can make a difference.To what

do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about environmental protection and regard it as one of the most important challenges.However, whether only governments and big firms have resources and powers to preserve our environment is a controversial issue.My view is that every single citizen could also make a huge difference.In the first place, it is clear that it is human activities that have the greatest impact throughout the history.Both environment contamination and conservation are the long-term process, and no single government or big company can meet this challenge alone.So whoever created the problem should be responsible for solving it;environment protection needs every one of us to continuously participate in.Moreover, the public’s wills and behaviors have critical influence on government’s policies and companies’ strategies.For example, if everyone says “no” to plastic shopping bags and paper cups, the companies that manufacture such products will switch to environmental-friendly substitutes in order to survive in the market.However, that is not to say that governments and large companies cannot positively contribute.Indeed, governments can enact laws and introduce programs to raise the public’s low-carbon awareness;companies can promote green products to change the public’s consuming habits.But they also need every citizen’s appreciation and support to bring good results.In sum, no effort is too small when we are protecting the environment.Meanwhile, local authorities and organizations must shoulder their responsibility to develop low-carbon economy at the macro level.Only by doing so can we assure that we could hand this beautiful planet to our next generation and the next generation after.TASK 2: 高分范文二-----Argumentation

The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades.Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive.What are your opinions on this?

The Internet has brought significant changes to our lives in recent years.However, there remains some disagreement as to whether the overall effect of this technology has been positive or negative.While there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary, I personally believe that the benefits of the Internet far outweigh its drawbacks and these benefits are twofold.First of all, it is an indisputable fact that the Internet has revolutionized the way we communicate.Despite the risk of social isolation-a problem occasionally seen in people who spend too much time at their computer terminal rather than relating to people in the real world-most of us have benefited greatly from e-mails and Internet chat programs like MSN Messenger.These incredibly useful and powerful tools of communication facilitate both contact with loved ones in faraway places and global trade.Moreover, the Internet has placed the entire world(and all of the information in it)at our fingertips.In earlier times, conducting research entailed long hours searching library shelves.Now, however, the same information can be accessed at the click of a button.Admittedly, not all of the information available on the Internet is reliable or helpful-there is a vast amount of material online that some would consider offensive or dangerous, ranging from pornography to instructions on how to make bombs.Nonetheless, I would contend that this free flow of information has generally been a very positive development.By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that the Internet has had a positive impact on modern life because of its influences on communication and the flow of information.TASK 2: 高分范文三-----Report

With divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globally, it is generally accepted that families today are not close as they used to be.Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it.Divorce and family breakdown were virtually unheard of just 100 years ago.Now, however, almost half of all marriages fail.This phenomenon is symptomatic of the growing distance between family members in modern society.In this essay, I intend to explore the sources of this problem along with some possible solutions to it.Chief among the causes of this problem is the modern lifestyle.Today’s parents have to work harder than those of previous generations to support their families.Traditionally, one parent assumed the role of breadwinner, while the other-typically the mother-acted as the homemaker.Recently, though, double income families have become the norm.Consequently, an increasing number of children now grow up in a parentless environment.Little wonder, then, that they feel alienated.Another contributing factor is the passive and solitary nature of many modern forms of entertainment.In order to solve this sense of alienation within families, I believe we must first address its root causes.Perhaps the most effective method of doing this would be for governments to offer financial incentives to parents who choose to remain at home and take care of their families.Admittedly, such incentives would probably not fully compensate couples for lost income;however, they would at least soften the hardship of living on a single income and provide an alternative for parents who would rather remain at home but are unable to do so because of financial constraints.One further measure would be to promote more interactive leisure activities in the community through public education campaigns.In conclusion, I believe that this is clearly a problem of such complexity that no solution is likely in the short term.However, I believe that the measures outlined above would constitute a good first step.Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions.Some people think this is fully justified while other think it is unfair.Discuss both these views and give your opinion.As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries.Just like movie stars, they live extravagant lifestyles with huge houses and cars.Many people find their rewards unfair, especially when comparing these super salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientists, or even leading politicians who have the responsibility of governing the country.However, sports salaries are not determined by considering the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he or she holds.Instead, they reflect the public popularity of sport in general and the level of public support that successful stars can generate.So the notion of “fairness” is not the issue.While those who feel that sports stars’ salaries are justified might argue that the number of professionals with real talent are very few, and the money is a recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful.Competition is constant and a player is tested every time they perform in their relatively short career.The pressure from the media is intense and there is little privacy out of the spotlight.So all of these factors may justify the huge earnings.Personally, I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicates that our society places more value on sport than on more essential professionals and achievements.In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing.Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on society?

In more and more developed countries we see the following trends: incomes rise, people get married later and have fewer kids.The result is the demographics change and the population ages.While having more old people sounds like a good thing(as they tend to be kind and warm-hearted), it can have a serious impact on economies and societies.Consider, for example, that in order for a country’s GDP to grow it needs to produce more goods and services each year.With an aging population and more people retiring, fewer are left to work, creating an economic hole.The result is that such countries have to rely on immigration to fill the gap and this is a less-than-desirable solution.Consider also, that as more people reach their twilight years they will face increasing health problems and this puts huge pressure on health care and other social programs.In most countries the government pays for at least some of the costs of health care, not to mention things like pensions, all of which means a big bill someone has to pay for.To be fair, however, we should be careful not to direct our anger towards old people themselves.Old people can still make contributions to society, whether it means helping look after grandchildren, working part time or even doing voluntary work.On an individual level, old people can be a real treasure.To sum up, governments should recognize the challenges of an aging society and take the appropriate action.But in addition to fixing the short-term impact of an older society, they should also look at the bigger picture and do their best so that in the future we have a better age balance.

第三篇：雅思寫作高分

雅思寫作高分模板分享

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目前最常見的雅思寫作類型為分析型和一面倒類型，理所當然的也成為烤鴨們在雅思備考中練習最多的，下面是為烤鴨們準備好的模板，大家可以根據自己的喜好和特點選擇適合自己的，并且能拿到高分的模板，祝烤鴨們考試順利。

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第四篇：雅思高分寫作范文

下面是三個雅思高分寫作模板，都是關于選擇觀點類型的。觀點選擇類型的雅思寫作話題在雅思寫作考試中是最常見的一類，對于這類話題，大家一定要準備一個適合自己的雅思寫作模板，這樣在考試的時候，就可以有備無患的應對了。下面是詳細內容。

雅思寫作觀點選擇類型的題目：A or B ,which one do you agree with? Give specific reasons for your answer.(A,B 表示供選擇的兩種觀點。Do C 指題目中提及的某件事情。如：some people prefer A in order to Do C.雅思寫作觀點選擇類型的寫作模板：

1、As for the question that which is better, A or B, different people have different opinions.A has its advantages, but at the mean time, it has many disadvantages.In my point of view, I would prefer B.First of all,(1)支持 B 的原因之一。For example,(2)舉例說明支持 B 的原因之一。

Another reason is that(3)支持 B 的原因之二。

The third reason, however, goes this way:(4)支持 B 的原因之三。

So from what has been discussed, one can reach only this conclusion that(5)重申觀點。

2、Some people believe A, they point out the fact that(1)人們支持 A 的原因。However, other people believe B.They hold that(2)人們支持 B 的原因。

As far as I’m concerned, I prefer A.As we all know(3)我支持 A 的原因之一。I remember(4)舉例說明。

In addition,(5)我支持 A 的原因之二。

On the other hand,(6)從反面論證 A 的優勢。

Last but not least,(7)我支持 A 的原因之三。

As a matter of fact, there are also some disadvantages in A，such as(8)舉例說明 A 的劣勢。But these can be compensated by its advantages.3、There are two different views on the matter of DOING C.Some people believe that(1)支持的觀點 A.By this , they argue that(2)進一步闡述觀點 A.For example,(3)舉例說明。

Others hold, on the other hand, that(4)反對的觀點 B。

Furthermore,(5)進一步闡述觀點 B.For instance,(6)舉例說明觀點 B。

Considering the views on the two sides, I prefer to put weight to the pros rather than cons.personally,(7)我支持 A 的原因。

以上就是這三個雅思高分寫作模板的全部內容，總體來講就是在雅思觀點選擇類型的寫作中，考生可以選擇一種觀點進行詳細的論述，但是一定不要忘記對兩種觀點都有所涉及，這樣才客觀，同時也增加的寫作的字數。

第五篇：雅思寫作高分詞匯

雅思寫作高分的取得并不是一件容易的事，大家需要掌握一定的寫作技巧，詞匯的應用就是最基礎的。下面為大家搜集整理了兩個關于詞匯應用方面的雅思寫作高分技巧，供大家在寫作備考的過程中進行適當的參考和借鑒。

詞匯語序不準確是導致大家不能拿到雅思寫作高分的重要因素。

因為中文和英文的敘述方式的不同，詞匯的搭配順序也有很大的區別，所以在雅思寫作中，常常會造成一些中式英語的文章，也就是說會寫一些完全按照中文語序逐字翻譯的錯句。這樣的語言表達會給考官閱讀帶來困難，會對句意理解出現分歧，如此一來，當然會大大影響作文的得分。

例如：“競爭合作意識”應當被翻成“the sense of competition and cooperation”。

許多考生在情急之下，往往會翻成“competition and cooperation sense”

這樣的表達一旦出現比例較高，便會給考官造成語言不地道的感覺，也就難以取得雅思寫作高分。想要掌握正確的詞匯的表達順序這個雅思寫作技巧，大家需要在備考雅思寫作的過程中接觸更多的英語讀物，形成英語寫作的思維。

書寫上存在簡寫或縮寫也是倒是大家不能拿到雅思寫作高分的因素。

很多考生在備考雅思寫作考試的時候，不能區分口語用詞和書面用詞的區別，以至于把一些不用在書面表達的方式用在了寫作上。口語與寫作的最大區別便是口語較隨意，而寫作比較嚴謹。為了凸顯作文的書面感，建議考生應盡量避免明顯的或者大量的簡寫和縮寫形式。一來可以讓卷面看起來更加清爽，二來也可以給考官留下認真嚴謹的好印象。

典型的易寫縮寫的表達有：

It’s 應該寫成it is

What’s more應該寫成what is more,Can’t應該寫成cannot

以上就是這兩個雅思寫作高分技巧的全部內容，包括了詞匯的語序和詞匯的簡寫和縮寫兩個部分。大家在自己的雅思寫作備考的過程中，一定要注意這兩個方面，只要不按照自己思考中文的思維方式來寫作，就能大大減少這些可能性了。