第一篇：雅思：如何正確應(yīng)用寫作的高分

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雅思：如何正確應(yīng)用寫作的高分范文

有些學(xué)生認(rèn)為寫作無非就是提前背誦一些優(yōu)秀范文，到考試的時候就能套就套，能扯就扯，分?jǐn)?shù)應(yīng)該就不錯了。有些學(xué)生的高考作文或四六級作文就是靠這種方式“快速提高”的。那你一定要注意了：“雅思考試中抄襲范文一律0分！”

那如何對待優(yōu)秀范文呢？我們從以下幾個方面來說明一下。

(一)讀書要有篩選。由于每個人的水平都不一樣，所以提醒同學(xué)們不是每篇文章都要精讀，首先要有選擇，選擇里面最適合自己的水平或要求的段落或篇章。

(二)抓住詞匯。作文中詞匯缺乏是大多數(shù)同學(xué)的問題，而背單詞本身又很枯燥，然在范文中背單詞有句子有情景，至少不會混淆單詞的意思。在范文里背單詞主要把握里面的動詞，非實物的名詞，以及形容詞和副詞等。

(三)短語和句型。短語能擴大自己表達(dá)意思的長度，有價值的搭配需要掌握，尤其是一些自己不熟但作文常用的詞的固定搭配，一定要牢記。句型多變是作文高分的重要因素，所以在范文里若見到好的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，不妨摘抄下來，并做一些類似的句子造句。如：

1.Modern device such as computer has wide applications in our daily life.2.Another reason for my perference of computer is that it can improve our working effiency.這兩句我們只需換一下黑體的單詞就可以用在別處了。

(四)注意文中的銜接與連貫。最簡單的銜接與連貫就是連詞了，在雅思范文中注意出現(xiàn)的自己不常用的那些詞如：nevertheless,whereas,consequently，enhance等;比較高級的銜接與連貫就是分詞，從句了，如“Zidane decided to retire from football,claiming that he had accomplished all the goals he had wanted to achieve.”;如果文章里有表示順序的詞,要特別注意那些我們不常用的詞。

(五)段落的寫作方法。如何引入？如何展開？引用事實，數(shù)據(jù)，或者說理？有什么方法值得我們借鑒？有哪些內(nèi)容我們可以引用？同學(xué)們須多思考總結(jié)。

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(六)英漢對比。這一步一定要做，同學(xué)們可以看著范文的漢語翻譯自己再用英語重反一次，對比英語原文找差距，找不同，體會英漢差異。改正自己漢語味較濃的句子。

如:目前，關(guān)于人和動物之間的關(guān)系出現(xiàn)了不同層次的討論。

Nowadays,about people and animals’ relationship appear severl differentlayers of discussions.這句顯然是chinglish,尤其是黑體的部分尤為突出，漢語里的出現(xiàn)有及物動詞的性質(zhì)，但直譯為appear就講不通了，因為appear是不及物動詞。這句正確說法應(yīng)該用there be 句型。

Nowadays there are discussions on several different levels about the relationship between humans and animals.下面以劍橋文章舉例說明：

A successful uniform needs to balance two key sets of needs.(大意為：成功的制服主要需要平衡兩種需求。跟自己想到的表達(dá)方式對比一下，黑體部分值得借鑒)On the one hand,no uniform will work if staff feel uncomfortable or ugly.Giving the wearers a choice has become a key element in the way corporate clothing is introduced and managed.On the other , it is pointless if the look do not express the business’s marketing strategy.The greater chanllenge in this respect(短語“在這個方面”)is time.When it comes to human perceptions , first impressions count.(句型)Customers will size up the way staff look in just a few seconds , and that few seconds(習(xí)慣表達(dá)，強調(diào))will color their attitudes(動詞color極其到位，可擴展為短語整體記憶)

from then on.Those few seconds can be so important that big companies are prepared to invest(動詞，形象是否比自己想到的spent 要好？)years,and millions of pounds ,getting them right

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第二篇：印-如何正確應(yīng)用雅思寫作的高分

如何正確應(yīng)用雅思寫作的高分范文

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有些學(xué)生認(rèn)為寫作無非就是提前背誦一些優(yōu)秀范文，到考試的時候就能套就套，能扯就扯，分?jǐn)?shù)應(yīng)該就不錯了。有些學(xué)生的高考作文或四六級作文就是靠這種方式“快速提高”的。那你一定要注意了：“雅思考試中抄襲范文一律0分！”

那如何對待優(yōu)秀范文呢？我們從以下幾個方面來說明一下。

(一)讀書要有篩選。由于每個人的水平都不一樣，所以提醒同學(xué)們不是每篇文章都要精讀，首先要有選擇，選擇里面最適合自己的水平或要求的段落或篇章。

(二)抓住詞匯。作文中詞匯缺乏是大多數(shù)同學(xué)的問題，而背單詞本身又很枯燥，然在范文中背單詞有句子有情景，至少不會混淆單詞的意思。在范文里背單詞主要把握里面的動詞，非實物的名詞，以及形容詞和副詞等。

(三)短語和句型。短語能擴大自己表達(dá)意思的長度，有價值的搭配需要掌握，尤其是一些自己不熟但作文常用的詞的固定搭配，一定要牢記。句型多變是作文高分的重要因素，所以在范文里若見到好的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，不妨摘抄下來，并做一些類似的句子造句。如：

1.Modern device such as computer has wide applications in our daily life.2.Another reason for my perference of computer is that it can improve our working effiency.這兩句我們只需換一下黑體的單詞就可以用在別處了。

(四)注意文中的銜接與連貫。最簡單的銜接與連貫就是連詞了，在雅思范文中注意出現(xiàn)的自己不常用的那些詞如：nevertheless,whereas,consequently，enhance等;比較高級的銜接與連貫就是分詞，從句了，如“Zidane decided to retire from football,claiming that he had accomplished all the goals he had wanted to achieve.”;如果文章里有表示順序的詞,要特別注意那些我們不常用的詞。

(五)段落的寫作方法。如何引入？如何展開？引用事實，數(shù)據(jù)，或者說理？有什么方法值得我們借鑒？有哪些內(nèi)容我們可以引用？同學(xué)們須多思考總結(jié)。

(六)英漢對比。這一步一定要做，同學(xué)們可以看著范文的漢語翻譯自己再用英語重反一次，對比英語原文找差距，找不同，體會英漢差異。改正自己漢語味較濃的句子。

如:目前，關(guān)于人和動物之間的關(guān)系出現(xiàn)了不同層次的討論。

Nowadays,about people and animals’ relationship appear severl different layers of discussions.這句顯然是chinglish,尤其是黑體的部分尤為突出，漢語里的出現(xiàn)有及物動詞的性質(zhì)，但直譯為appear就講不通了，因為appear是不及物動詞。這句正確說法應(yīng)該用there be 句型。Nowadays there are discussions on several different levels about the relationship between humans and animals.下面以劍橋文章舉例說明：A successful uniform needs to balance two key sets of needs.(大意為：成功的制服主要需要平衡兩種需求。跟自己想到的表達(dá)方式對比一下，黑體部分值得借鑒)On the one hand,no uniform will work if staff feel uncomfortable or ugly.Giving the wearers a choice has become a key element in the way corporate clothing is introduced and managed.On the other , it is pointless if the look do not express the business’s marketing strategy.The greater chanllenge in this respect(短語“在這個方面”)is time.When it comes to human perceptions , first impressions count.(句型)Customers will size up the way staff look in just a few seconds , and that few seconds(習(xí)慣表達(dá)，強調(diào))will color their attitudes(動詞color極其到位，可擴展為短語整體記憶)from then on.Those few seconds can be so important that big companies are prepared to invest(動詞，形象是否比自己想到的spent 要好？)years,and millions of pounds ,getting them right

第三篇：雅思寫作高分

雅思寫作大作文必看高分范文

TASK 2: 高分范文一

Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment;only governments and large companies can make a difference.To what

do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about environmental protection and regard it as one of the most important challenges.However, whether only governments and big firms have resources and powers to preserve our environment is a controversial issue.My view is that every single citizen could also make a huge difference.In the first place, it is clear that it is human activities that have the greatest impact throughout the history.Both environment contamination and conservation are the long-term process, and no single government or big company can meet this challenge alone.So whoever created the problem should be responsible for solving it;environment protection needs every one of us to continuously participate in.Moreover, the public’s wills and behaviors have critical influence on government’s policies and companies’ strategies.For example, if everyone says “no” to plastic shopping bags and paper cups, the companies that manufacture such products will switch to environmental-friendly substitutes in order to survive in the market.However, that is not to say that governments and large companies cannot positively contribute.Indeed, governments can enact laws and introduce programs to raise the public’s low-carbon awareness;companies can promote green products to change the public’s consuming habits.But they also need every citizen’s appreciation and support to bring good results.In sum, no effort is too small when we are protecting the environment.Meanwhile, local authorities and organizations must shoulder their responsibility to develop low-carbon economy at the macro level.Only by doing so can we assure that we could hand this beautiful planet to our next generation and the next generation after.TASK 2: 高分范文二-----Argumentation

The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades.Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive.What are your opinions on this?

The Internet has brought significant changes to our lives in recent years.However, there remains some disagreement as to whether the overall effect of this technology has been positive or negative.While there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary, I personally believe that the benefits of the Internet far outweigh its drawbacks and these benefits are twofold.First of all, it is an indisputable fact that the Internet has revolutionized the way we communicate.Despite the risk of social isolation-a problem occasionally seen in people who spend too much time at their computer terminal rather than relating to people in the real world-most of us have benefited greatly from e-mails and Internet chat programs like MSN Messenger.These incredibly useful and powerful tools of communication facilitate both contact with loved ones in faraway places and global trade.Moreover, the Internet has placed the entire world(and all of the information in it)at our fingertips.In earlier times, conducting research entailed long hours searching library shelves.Now, however, the same information can be accessed at the click of a button.Admittedly, not all of the information available on the Internet is reliable or helpful-there is a vast amount of material online that some would consider offensive or dangerous, ranging from pornography to instructions on how to make bombs.Nonetheless, I would contend that this free flow of information has generally been a very positive development.By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that the Internet has had a positive impact on modern life because of its influences on communication and the flow of information.TASK 2: 高分范文三-----Report

With divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globally, it is generally accepted that families today are not close as they used to be.Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it.Divorce and family breakdown were virtually unheard of just 100 years ago.Now, however, almost half of all marriages fail.This phenomenon is symptomatic of the growing distance between family members in modern society.In this essay, I intend to explore the sources of this problem along with some possible solutions to it.Chief among the causes of this problem is the modern lifestyle.Today’s parents have to work harder than those of previous generations to support their families.Traditionally, one parent assumed the role of breadwinner, while the other-typically the mother-acted as the homemaker.Recently, though, double income families have become the norm.Consequently, an increasing number of children now grow up in a parentless environment.Little wonder, then, that they feel alienated.Another contributing factor is the passive and solitary nature of many modern forms of entertainment.In order to solve this sense of alienation within families, I believe we must first address its root causes.Perhaps the most effective method of doing this would be for governments to offer financial incentives to parents who choose to remain at home and take care of their families.Admittedly, such incentives would probably not fully compensate couples for lost income;however, they would at least soften the hardship of living on a single income and provide an alternative for parents who would rather remain at home but are unable to do so because of financial constraints.One further measure would be to promote more interactive leisure activities in the community through public education campaigns.In conclusion, I believe that this is clearly a problem of such complexity that no solution is likely in the short term.However, I believe that the measures outlined above would constitute a good first step.Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions.Some people think this is fully justified while other think it is unfair.Discuss both these views and give your opinion.As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries.Just like movie stars, they live extravagant lifestyles with huge houses and cars.Many people find their rewards unfair, especially when comparing these super salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientists, or even leading politicians who have the responsibility of governing the country.However, sports salaries are not determined by considering the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he or she holds.Instead, they reflect the public popularity of sport in general and the level of public support that successful stars can generate.So the notion of “fairness” is not the issue.While those who feel that sports stars’ salaries are justified might argue that the number of professionals with real talent are very few, and the money is a recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful.Competition is constant and a player is tested every time they perform in their relatively short career.The pressure from the media is intense and there is little privacy out of the spotlight.So all of these factors may justify the huge earnings.Personally, I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicates that our society places more value on sport than on more essential professionals and achievements.In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing.Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on society?

In more and more developed countries we see the following trends: incomes rise, people get married later and have fewer kids.The result is the demographics change and the population ages.While having more old people sounds like a good thing(as they tend to be kind and warm-hearted), it can have a serious impact on economies and societies.Consider, for example, that in order for a country’s GDP to grow it needs to produce more goods and services each year.With an aging population and more people retiring, fewer are left to work, creating an economic hole.The result is that such countries have to rely on immigration to fill the gap and this is a less-than-desirable solution.Consider also, that as more people reach their twilight years they will face increasing health problems and this puts huge pressure on health care and other social programs.In most countries the government pays for at least some of the costs of health care, not to mention things like pensions, all of which means a big bill someone has to pay for.To be fair, however, we should be careful not to direct our anger towards old people themselves.Old people can still make contributions to society, whether it means helping look after grandchildren, working part time or even doing voluntary work.On an individual level, old people can be a real treasure.To sum up, governments should recognize the challenges of an aging society and take the appropriate action.But in addition to fixing the short-term impact of an older society, they should also look at the bigger picture and do their best so that in the future we have a better age balance.

第四篇：雅思寫作高分

雅思寫作高分模板分享

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目前最常見的雅思寫作類型為分析型和一面倒類型，理所當(dāng)然的也成為烤鴨們在雅思備考中練習(xí)最多的，下面是為烤鴨們準(zhǔn)備好的模板，大家可以根據(jù)自己的喜好和特點選擇適合自己的，并且能拿到高分的模板，祝烤鴨們考試順利。

雅思寫作高分模板|雅思作文高分模板一面倒

1.NO invention has received more praises and abuses than cars… Now there is a growing awareness over traffic safety.2.Although some people acclaim that… I am still prone to go along with the other side based on the following sound reasons.：

3.To embark on it, it comes as the first problem that...：

4.Should it remain unable to unfold my perspectives, it'll come as reinforcement that…

5.It is indisputable that nowhere in history has...been more visible.As far as I am

雅思寫作高分模板|雅思作文高分模板分析型

1.Recently the...has been brought into focus...Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible.In this essay, I aim to explore this complicated phenomenon from diverse perspectives, identify the relevant contributing factors and bring up some effective measures.2.As far as I am concerned, an array of integrated factors contributes to the...The first role that should be blamed is...Another equally important factor lies in… Last but not least...：

3.As a matter of fact,...gives rise to a host of problems, such as...Confronted with such a thorny issue, people come up with a variety of constructive countermeasures.Personally, the following are worth recommendation...：

4.When everyone is fully aware of the severity and take feasible measures, I firmly believe...以上雅思寫作高分模板都是以句子為單位進行列舉的，這樣的話也便于考生們自由的組合，通順的表達(dá)雅思文章的主題思想。

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第五篇：雅思高分寫作范文

下面是三個雅思高分寫作模板，都是關(guān)于選擇觀點類型的。觀點選擇類型的雅思寫作話題在雅思寫作考試中是最常見的一類，對于這類話題，大家一定要準(zhǔn)備一個適合自己的雅思寫作模板，這樣在考試的時候，就可以有備無患的應(yīng)對了。下面是詳細(xì)內(nèi)容。

雅思寫作觀點選擇類型的題目：A or B ,which one do you agree with? Give specific reasons for your answer.(A,B 表示供選擇的兩種觀點。Do C 指題目中提及的某件事情。如：some people prefer A in order to Do C.雅思寫作觀點選擇類型的寫作模板：

1、As for the question that which is better, A or B, different people have different opinions.A has its advantages, but at the mean time, it has many disadvantages.In my point of view, I would prefer B.First of all,(1)支持 B 的原因之一。For example,(2)舉例說明支持 B 的原因之一。

Another reason is that(3)支持 B 的原因之二。

The third reason, however, goes this way:(4)支持 B 的原因之三。

So from what has been discussed, one can reach only this conclusion that(5)重申觀點。

2、Some people believe A, they point out the fact that(1)人們支持 A 的原因。However, other people believe B.They hold that(2)人們支持 B 的原因。

As far as I’m concerned, I prefer A.As we all know(3)我支持 A 的原因之一。I remember(4)舉例說明。

In addition,(5)我支持 A 的原因之二。

On the other hand,(6)從反面論證 A 的優(yōu)勢。

Last but not least,(7)我支持 A 的原因之三。

As a matter of fact, there are also some disadvantages in A，such as(8)舉例說明 A 的劣勢。But these can be compensated by its advantages.3、There are two different views on the matter of DOING C.Some people believe that(1)支持的觀點 A.By this , they argue that(2)進一步闡述觀點 A.For example,(3)舉例說明。

Others hold, on the other hand, that(4)反對的觀點 B。

Furthermore,(5)進一步闡述觀點 B.For instance,(6)舉例說明觀點 B。

Considering the views on the two sides, I prefer to put weight to the pros rather than cons.personally,(7)我支持 A 的原因。

以上就是這三個雅思高分寫作模板的全部內(nèi)容，總體來講就是在雅思觀點選擇類型的寫作中，考生可以選擇一種觀點進行詳細(xì)的論述，但是一定不要忘記對兩種觀點都有所涉及，這樣才客觀，同時也增加的寫作的字?jǐn)?shù)。