第一篇：創(chuàng)新英語(yǔ)大賽作文的優(yōu)秀

創(chuàng)新英語(yǔ)大賽作文的優(yōu)秀

在日常學(xué)習(xí)、工作或生活中，說(shuō)到作文，大家肯定都不陌生吧，作文是人們以書面形式表情達(dá)意的言語(yǔ)活動(dòng)。寫起作文來(lái)就毫無(wú)頭緒？下面是小編整理的創(chuàng)新英語(yǔ)大賽作文的優(yōu)秀，歡迎閱讀，希望大家能夠喜歡。

Directions:

Read the following paragraph and write a composition as stated at about 300 words in 60 minutes.Your composition will be graded according to clarity, accuracy and meaningfulness.In accordance with CRI news, the spirit of Chinese volunteers, from responding to the May 12 earthquake to the 20xx Beijing Olympic Games, not only touched the Chinese people, but also generated worldwide attention.Official statistics show that china has accumulated about 8 billion hours of volunteer work from 380 million volunteers since 1993 and is going to have more and more volunteers, especially the youth.How do you understand volunteer workIn what way(s)is it important to promote the well-being of individuals, families, communities and the world at largeYour writing ought to contain three parts, your viewpoint, the supporting ideas, and the conclusion.Come and join us in volunteer work right now!

第二篇：全國(guó)創(chuàng)新英語(yǔ)大賽優(yōu)秀作文

題目：

Directions:

Read the following paragraph and write a composition as stated at about 300 words in 60 minutes.Your composition will be graded according to clarity, accuracy and meaningfulness.In accordance with CRI news, the spirit of Chinese volunteers, from responding to the May 12 earthquake to the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, not only touched the Chinese people, but also generated worldwide attention.Official statistics show that china has accumulated about 8 billion hours of volunteer work from 380 million volunteers since 1993 and is going to have more and more volunteers, especially the youth.How do you understand volunteer work? In what way(s)is it important to promote the well-being of individuals, families, communities and the world at large? Your writing ought to contain three parts, your viewpoint, the supporting ideas, and the conclusion.Come and join us in volunteer work right now!

On Volunteer

黃昕彤 遼寧省鞍山市鞍山一中108班

The definition of the word volunteer in Lougnan（Longman）Dictionary is someone who helps others sponstaneously（spontaneously）and willingly.That's true!Life is a style of enjoying yourself, not only by entertaing and enriding yourself, but also by the process of helping others.Undoubtfully, those volunteers reveal their great love and passion for their country.Love is the eternal theme of the world, Without hove(love), it's like birds without wings, failing to show its talents of flying, It's like spring without flowers, burying is charming fragrants in the deep soil.Their volunty work unites China, shouing the world how united Chinese people are shocking the world of its cooperation.People around the country are making their efforts to helping others, which leaves the world an impression that China is a veal country, and all the people here are like brothers and sisters, who cares a lot for others.You can never imagine how touched I was when I watched the TV program called “Moving China”.13 peasants from tangshang volunteered to help those victims of Sichuang on hearing the tremendous earthquake happened there, leaving all their farm work done in the field they sacrifiled anything and helped others at any cost, for they knew the glant pains the earthquake brings to people.They can never forget how much pains they havendertaken in the earthquake and how much help they have received from the world.They compared their own feelings to the victims and passed the splrit on.In this sense, people will pass the spirit from generation to queneration, from China to all over the world.Then, how sweet will the World be!

I have a dream that one day, I will be a member of the volunteer team.I have a dream that oneday, I'll make contributions to China however slightest it may be.I have a dream that one day I'll be a founder of a world Charity, helping people all over the world.I'm firmly convinced that it will not only be a drean for me, but also a drean for people all over China, all over the world, and for the great Global Village.專家建議：

整篇文章條理清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，總體感覺很好。但有個(gè)別語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，固定搭配有些用得不夠準(zhǔn)確，建議多用課本學(xué)過(guò)的固定搭配或是詞組造句。

專家點(diǎn)評(píng)：

文章語(yǔ)言流暢，運(yùn)用了修辭手法，展現(xiàn)出一定的語(yǔ)言功底。此外，論據(jù)生動(dòng)有力，讓人信服。如果句子之間的多用些關(guān)聯(lián)詞就更好了。

陳茜 江蘇省哈爾濱市第三中學(xué)高三18班

Dear grandfather:

How are you?

I am writing to invite you to join us, in the next year, to be a voluntear in the great event, which is to hold in Shanghai.We, a generation born in the 90s in our city, have made a team to do the volunteer work.And you are welcomed by all our team members awing to your great amount of knowledge about Chinese traditions and culture.Please don't tell me you are too old to do this job.I believe you are sure to accept my invitation after reading my following explannation of the importance of the volunteer work.Nowadays, volunteer work, which has raised public interest and concern, is becomming more and more popular throughout the world.As is known to all, volunteer work is not only meaningful but also necessary.One my personal wete, what's more, it's interesting and pleasant!It help us develop oursel.Firstly, for individuals, especially those young, to do volunteer work is an awailuabe wany to goin social experience.By doing volunteer work, they can meet vorrious people and they may run across all kinds of troubles.They however, can become mature and determined by solving these problems.You know, no pains, no gains.Also, individuals will realize that they do make a difference in someone else's life, even the whole event, the world!Their confidence can be rovised and confidence is what it takes to do any job well.For families, if you're the side that received the help of the volunteers, of couse your issue will be more easily dealt with.If you're the side who give others your hand, you will realize there exists no better way to educate your children that “a virtwre deserues amother” because you'll get the best presentsmall at first, contained within its banks, flood passionally then merged into the sea, for the sense of moral considerations.And now, I quite support to be a volunteer.We can never forget these moving scenes: A group of adolecents from Beijing dashed to the City of Wenchuan who gave up their comfortable living situations and picked up the heavy burden to save people buried into the ground, while a middle aged white collar who threw away his computer and salary came here to fetch wictims' lives from the death.It is volunteers who rushed to this place which has suffered from the catastrophe that gave a great help to those victims in need.A volunteer can support a piece of sky, and this one reason I am eager to join them.Secondly, only a volunteer who is in active part in Beijing Olympic Games will he give a great help to those losers.It is volunteers who gave us a warm welcome to Beijing that put the glorious sports meeting from in chaos to in order.A person, as we know, who hasn’t join into the group of volunteer is one of the unfortunate victims of this society which is occupied with love.All of us are in high pressure in this adverse circumstance.Our mind catches hold of something and will not let it go, if we choose the way to argue with the mind, the stronger the will, the more fuitile the task, so we, should choose a way to help others, to see the smile from others.Then the pressure get out suiftly.I always go into rapture at a mere mention of being a volunteer and regard it as a person who is eager to help others or a group not in the same class with the suburban social-climbers.It seems a cliché but a saying which is an infallibility that a splendid case can not leave a volunteer just as a fish can not live without water.專家點(diǎn)評(píng)：作者盡量用到了一些高級(jí)詞語(yǔ)和句型，表明作者有一定的英語(yǔ)功底，但是小的錯(cuò)誤頻發(fā)，如單詞拼寫，語(yǔ)法問題，句子邏輯，這在某一方面也表明作者的基本功有待提高，繼續(xù)努力。

專家建議：用詞準(zhǔn)確是寫作的基礎(chǔ)。對(duì)于學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的中國(guó)學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)，背單詞擴(kuò)大詞匯量是有必要的，但遺憾的是，學(xué)生們背的大都是單詞的“外殼”，記的大都是單詞的表意或字典提供的大致意思，而基本上忽視了詞在語(yǔ)境中的作用和詞的“精神”。這種只記單詞表意的學(xué)習(xí)方法對(duì)提高語(yǔ)言的運(yùn)用能力，特別是寫作能力是極其不利的。

Let us shine

徐葉子 江蘇省張家港市張家港外國(guó)語(yǔ)學(xué)校高二4班

Volunteers are just like diamonds in the sun, and the diamonds are forever, especially the youth.Volunteer work is just like a miracle.From the May 12th earthquake to the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, volunteer work made unbelievable contributions.60 years ago our country was set up, today we will celebrate its 60th birthday.In this process, volunteer work did a lot of help and now our country is standing in the world just like a giant.In the past years, volunteers have helped a large number of people, the old, the young, the poor and the homeless.All the volunteers know that the road ahead will be long and cragged, but no matter what obstacles stand in their way they will never stop.Because they have a creed and they believe everything is possible.Oh the creed of volunteer work, you make volunteers keep on going without hesitation.Oh the creed of volunteer work, you make volunteers hand in hand and be with together forever.Oh the creed of volunteer work, you make volunteers go to the edge of the world and let them know the true meaning of life.Do you know what the creed is? Yes, it is love.With love, volunteer work makes people open their mind and let them find the sky is theirs.With love, volunteer work makes people look into their hearts and let the sunshine in.With love, volunteer work makes people believe that smilers will never lose and frowners will never win.I know something has changed because of volunteer work.I know it for real because it feels so right and the world looks so much brighter.Love is important to volunteer work and volunteer work is important to the whole world.The infinite sky is motionless and the blue ocean is boisterous.This moment is perfect.Let us become volunteers and try our best in volunteer work.It can be the start of something new and it's our turn to learn some or win some.So, let's make a wish and get ready to shine like diamonds.專家建議：

建議該考生在語(yǔ)言流暢的基礎(chǔ)之上，注意兩方面問題。第一，用詞更具體些，避免使用語(yǔ)義較為空泛的表達(dá)，如learn some or win some。第二，文章華美有余，但邏輯層次不足。需加強(qiáng)句子與句子之間以及段落與段落間的邏輯性。

專家點(diǎn)評(píng)：

該作文使用了很多修辭方式，從這一點(diǎn)上看，作者在學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的過(guò)程中一定是位有心人，注重邊閱讀邊積累背誦。同時(shí)能看出，作者一定是一位喜愛英文歌曲的人，文中很多表達(dá)都來(lái)自于音樂歌詞。但在遣詞造句時(shí)，需要區(qū)分口頭表達(dá)和較書面表達(dá)，在這點(diǎn)上，文章還有提高的空間。

第三篇：創(chuàng)新英語(yǔ)作文大賽作文

注意事項(xiàng)：

1、答題前請(qǐng)參賽選手仔細(xì)閱讀考試注意事項(xiàng)。

2、建議參賽選手先在word文檔中編輯作文，并且留好備份，然后拷貝到答題區(qū)，進(jìn)行提交。

3、參賽選手可以先閱讀作文題目及要求，在考試結(jié)束之前在線提交作文即可（請(qǐng)注意考試結(jié)束時(shí)間）。

4、作文在“預(yù)覽提交”后系統(tǒng)會(huì)提醒考生進(jìn)行提交確認(rèn)，從而進(jìn)入下一頁(yè)對(duì)文章進(jìn)行預(yù)覽，只有當(dāng)進(jìn)入下一頁(yè)點(diǎn)擊“確認(rèn)提交”按鈕之后才完成考試。

5、作文中不可出現(xiàn)個(gè)人信息，否則視為作弊。

6、初賽第二階段考試時(shí)間：2014年2月6日09:00——2月25日18:00。

7、初賽第二階段成績(jī)公布時(shí)間：2014年3月1日。

8、初賽第二階段入圍選手復(fù)賽報(bào)名時(shí)間：2014年3月1日-2014年3月10日。

9、完成考試后，作文將只能查看，不可修改。

Topic:

第二部分題目

Directions: Addison said,“Every man should have a purpose in life.A man without a purpose lives on, like a cabbage in a field, but he knows no life.” According to him, having a purpose in life is very important for us.With Addison’s words as your point, write an essay with no less than 300 words.You can add a title by yourself.用法：艾迪生說(shuō)，“每個(gè)人在生活中應(yīng)該有一個(gè)目的。一個(gè)人要有目標(biāo),否則根本就不懂生活”據(jù)他介紹，而有個(gè)生活目標(biāo)對(duì)于我們來(lái)說(shuō)是非常重要的。艾迪生的話，你的觀點(diǎn)，不少于300個(gè)詞寫一篇文章。你可以自己添加標(biāo)題。

第四篇：創(chuàng)新英語(yǔ)大賽作文

“The more you do, the more mistakes you will make.” This is true, but we can not avoid making mistakes.Mistakes are indispensable.When we grow up and on the way to success, we have to face all sorts of problems and make many choices.Sometimes we make mistakes—we are in big trouble and we However, as long as we are doing what we like, we feel happy.Also, making mistake is a kind of “I was so stupid at that time”, but we will never regret—what we have done are for our dreams!Yes, mistakes may make our life journey difficult and challenging, but that is what really makes life meaningful and beautiful, isn’t it?

But what can we do now? Parents always want to “protect” us from making mistakes, so they don’t give us too many chances to try.They don’t want us to be someone who is “unusual”, but tell us to be what they want us to be.We are in a hard situation—we want to achieve our own dreams, but our parents want us to do things as they tell us to.We also love our parents, we don’t want to let them down.So we choose to listen to them instead of following our heart most of the time.However, I really want to say: dear parents, can you give us an opportunity to be ourselves? We will never really grow up and learn until we start making our own mistakes.Mistakes are our valuable wealth.Without them, our lives will be incomplete.Finally, it is natural for us to make some mistakes.Though we may be hurt sometimes, we learn more from them.The things we learn and the experiences we have will be of good help in the future, and we will have a better tomorrow.“The more you do, the more mistakes you will make.” This is true, but we can not avoid making mistakes.Mistakes are indispensable.When we grow up and on the way to success, we have to face all sorts of problems and make many choices.Sometimes we make mistakes—we are in big trouble and we really want and need in our lives.Also, as long as we are doing what we like, we feel happy.Many years later, when we think about the mistakes we have made, we may laugh and say: “I was so stupid at that time”, but we will never regret—what we have done are for our dreams!Yes, mistakes may make our life journey difficult and challenging, but that is what really makes life meaningful and beautiful, isn’t it?

But what can we do now? Parents always want to “protect” us from making mistakes, so they don’t give us too many chances to try.They don’t want us to be someone who is “unusual”, but tell us to be what they want us to be.We are in a hard situation—we want to achieve our own dreams, but our parents want us to do things as they tell us to.We also love our parents, we don’t want to let them down.So we choose to listen to them instead of following our heart most of the time.However, I really want to say: dear parents, can you give us an opportunity to be ourselves? We will never really grow up and learn until we start making our own mistakes.Mistakes are our valuable wealth.Without them, our lives will be incomplete.Finally, it is natural for us to make some mistakes.Though we may be hurt sometimes, we learn more from them.The things we learn and the experiences we have will be of good help in the future, and we will have a better tomorrow.

第五篇：英語(yǔ)創(chuàng)新作文大賽題目

題目

Directions: Addison said,“Every man should have a purpose in life.A man without a purpose lives on, like a cabbage in a field, but he knows no life.” According to him, having a purpose in life is very important for us.With Addison’s words as your point, write an essay with no less than 300 words.You can add a title by yourself.人生目標(biāo)（詞語(yǔ)解析）

常常有人問；我從哪里來(lái)，我要到哪里去，卻不問我到這里干什么，有什么任務(wù) 人生目標(biāo)的不選擇，可以看看豬是沒有選擇的，牛是沒有選擇的，春去冬來(lái)，與葉同腐。是一種自然現(xiàn)象。牛其以耕地卻不懂鳥會(huì)飛翔。人生目標(biāo)的錯(cuò)誤選擇 人生目標(biāo)有什么任務(wù)呢？當(dāng)然是來(lái)這里適應(yīng)這個(gè)世界，適應(yīng)及促成這個(gè)宇宙的從無(wú)到有的規(guī)律。如果反對(duì)規(guī)律，此乃毀滅，這在宇宙沒出生之前的時(shí)間已經(jīng)度過(guò)了，沒意思的，所以一定要促成這個(gè)宇宙的從無(wú)到有的規(guī)律，才有意思，再說(shuō)反對(duì)規(guī)律就是到處碰壁，拿石頭砸自己的腳，是自毀，是很痛的，是下下策，是不動(dòng)腦子的，被貧窮所迫的，被自己腦子惰性限制所迫的，被因?yàn)檫x擇反對(duì)規(guī)律被規(guī)律折磨的造成腦子惰性限制所迫

概述

每個(gè)人都有自己的目標(biāo)，我所說(shuō)的人生目標(biāo)是：作為一名有志之士。

我的目標(biāo)是成為一個(gè)企業(yè)家，我的目標(biāo)是讓我的父老鄉(xiāng)親們共同富裕起來(lái)。也可以說(shuō)，是自己的一個(gè)人生規(guī)劃，這個(gè)規(guī)劃在某種意義上是比較人文化，社會(huì)化的。

人生目標(biāo)使我們?cè)谝?guī)劃人生的同時(shí)可以更理性的思考自己的未來(lái)，初步嘗試性的選擇未來(lái)適合自己從事的事業(yè)和生活，盡早（多從學(xué)生時(shí)代）開始培養(yǎng)自己綜合能力和綜合素質(zhì)。每個(gè)人都應(yīng)該有自己的目標(biāo)，并為之而奮斗。上帝讓每個(gè)人都玩同樣的游戲就是“人生”。只要好好走下去就會(huì)是最后的贏家！朝著自己的目標(biāo)奮斗吧！

如何制定

一、你的目標(biāo)必須是長(zhǎng)期的。

沒有長(zhǎng)期的目標(biāo)，你也許就會(huì)被短期的種種挫折所擊倒。設(shè)定了長(zhǎng)期的目標(biāo)后，起初不要試圖去克服所有的阻礙。就像你早上離家不可能等路口所有的交通燈都是綠色你才出門，你是一個(gè)一個(gè)地通過(guò)紅綠燈，你不但能走到你目力所及的地方，而且當(dāng)你到達(dá)那里時(shí)，你常常能見到更遠(yuǎn)的地方。

二、你的目標(biāo)必須是特定的。

一個(gè)獵人，當(dāng)他面對(duì)樹上的一群鳥時(shí)，如果說(shuō)他能打下幾只鳥的話，那么他肯定不是向這群鳥射擊，幾只鳥的收獲一定是獵人瞄準(zhǔn)特定目標(biāo)的結(jié)果。

三、你的目標(biāo)一定要遠(yuǎn)大。

一旦你確定只走1公里路的目標(biāo)，在完成還不到1公里時(shí)，你便有可能感覺到累而松懈自己，因?yàn)榉凑斓侥繕?biāo)了。然而，如果你的目標(biāo)是要走10公里路，你便會(huì)作好思想及其他一切必要的準(zhǔn)備，并調(diào)動(dòng)各方面的潛在力量，一鼓作氣走完7、8公里后，才可能會(huì)稍微松懈一下自己。

四、你必須實(shí)踐自己的目標(biāo)。

五、你的人生大目標(biāo)并不一定要詳細(xì)精確。只要有個(gè)較明確的方向和大致程度要求就可以，例如立志做個(gè)卓越的科學(xué)家、立志做個(gè)大企業(yè)家或是立志做個(gè)改變世界的政治家等等。

成功價(jià)值

第一、目標(biāo)能夠使你看清自己的使命；

第二、目標(biāo)能讓你安排事情的輕重緩急；

第三、目標(biāo)引導(dǎo)你發(fā)揮潛能；

第四、目標(biāo)使你有能力把握現(xiàn)在；

第五、目標(biāo)有助你評(píng)估事業(yè)的進(jìn)展情況；

第六、目標(biāo)為你提供了一種自我評(píng)估的重要手段；

第七、目標(biāo)使你未雨綢繆；

第八、目標(biāo)使你把工作重點(diǎn)從工作本身轉(zhuǎn)到工作成果上；

第九、目標(biāo)能使你認(rèn)識(shí)到自己的人生價(jià)值。