第一篇：第11屆 全國創新英語作文大賽

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第十一屆 全國創新英語作文大賽 范文

范文一：

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范文二：

Parents: Call us when you are in trouble and we'll spare no effects to help you.Boy: No, mom and dad, I will make it by myself.Parents: But you'll make mistakes and be hurt.Boy: Don't worry, Mom and Dad.I promise to only make mistakes you never made.Don’ be Afraid of Mistakes

For a long time, we teenagers are looking forward to the outside world.We always think about

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the excellent job and the friendly people we will meet.Unknown as they are, we firmly believe that they are always there, appearing sooner or later and helping us live a perfect live.With this sweet expectation about the future, we have grown up day by day, but only to find the huge difference beyond our expectation.We make mistakes and live an unhappy live.Why there is such huge difference between fact and expectation? Teens are unwilling and positive to accept the fact.Couldn’t they change this situation? Personally, too much help from the parents constantly cause a lack of teens’ self-reliance and independence.On the other hand, teens’ lack of confidence and courage narrows themselves down to accept the mistakes they have made.To be honest, parents play an important part in children’s lives because the power of examples is always much stronger than any words.Parents’ action will influence children’s behaviors unconsciously and easily.Did the parents accept ample outside help when they were teens? Most never.It’s their self-reliance and independence that encouraged themselves to carry on when they make mistakes even failed.It’s the never say-die attitude from the depth of their hearts that drove them to try again, Therefore, parents must be strict with teens, encourage them to try again and help them build a independent character.Just let them go and experience failure and success.If they make mistakes, let them make.Maybe the children would be hurt, but only experiencing the mistakes and correcting them will make their children more independent.What’s worth mentioning is that example is the most powerful thing rather than money and too much help.As for teens, when we make mistakes, should we stop attempting? Should we give up our dreams because of such one mistake? Clearly the answer is no.Life is an endless way with mistakes and the process of correcting mistakes.Every coin has two sides.We may lose something and become desperate when we make mistakes.However, making the lessons we learn from it inside our heart, we will be powerful enough to face the next new problem ahead of us.Greatly approved of this view, we should realize that mistakes are a part of our lives.Try to live with ourselves and don’t be afraid of making mistakes.Face them, experience them, love them and overcome them.If we lack confidence of face mistakes, stop going ahead and give up our beginning goal easily, how hopeless our world will be? Youth is the best gift god gives us.There is no reason to fear of making mistakes.All of us are able to correct mistakes, to experience our own lives, to control the fate of our own and beyond ourselves.Objectively, parents shouldn’t offer too much help to children.Subjectively, teens are supposed to aware of the significance of mistakes.When take both two sides into reality, one man can live a real perfect life.愛心

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第二篇：2013年全國英語創新大賽作文

外語屋教育

2013年全國英語創新大賽模板作文

How to Eliminate Fake Diplomas

As is known to us all, jobs or something else.What’s worse, someone even takes faking diplomas as their jobs.It is generally accepted that faking diplomas does no good to not only the universities or companies but also the owners.The universities or companies may have some low-skilled students or workers, which will make the institutions suffer a lot.For the owners, faking diplomas may cause a bad thought in their mind, because they hold the opinion that faking diplomas can solve all the problems.If this trend came into being, the whole society would be in such a mess.Therefore, how to solve the problem is worth paying more attention to.What’s worse, our country may fall behind compared with other countries, if the trend continues.The following ways can be adopted to eliminate fake diplomas.Firstly, the universities and companies can have a search to see whether the diplomas are real or not online.Secondly, they can give exams to check whether they have skills.Thirdly, our government should take measures.For example, the government can set an online data base store to help universities or company check online conveniently.Last but not least, we, the civil, should set up a proper attitude to faking diplomas, and refuse to do that.And if we see someone is faking diplomas, we should give an alarm to the police in order to make a harmonious society.It's true that we need high-skilled workers, but what we need more is honesty.Only if we treat others in honesty can we set up a world in harmony.However, eliminating fake diplomas is still on the way.We need to spare no effort to do that.Only when we stop this trend can we live in a fair society.Never Give Up

As an old proverb goes, never give up.At anytime, whether giants in any field or common people, the old saying can refer to them.No doubt, only with the determination of “Never giver up” can we achieve the final success.Many remarkable reasons contribute to this argument.First of all, success usually can’t be achieved until after a lot of failures.It is not unusual for us to fail in our first attempt at something new, so we should not feel discouraged by our failures but should try again, which is the main basic spirit of “never give up”.What’s more, a lot of scientific achievements are created under the spirit.For example, if Edison had given up his research after a few failures, we might not have the electric light today.If WangXizhi once had given up his ambition to write excellently, I’m afraid we might not have the brilliant handwriting.Besides, we can develop confidence from our mistakes and failures.In addition, it also helps us to improve our skills.All mentioned above tell us that it is necessary for us to do the right things without giving up.If we give up, we will not achieve anything.Besides, if we give up, it may make us lose heart.And if we always give up when confronted with difficulties, we will not be able to develop new skills and see miracles come out

All in all, “never give up” is a basic requirement for us.Not only can we achieve success but also make us confident.We should never give up when working towards our goals.Therefore, there is no denying that we should have the determination of “Never give up”, whatever we do.Only with this belief in mind can we really achieve something.The Difference in Income Sources between American and Chinese Student

As is described in the chart, we can clearly learn that Chinese students depend on parents much more than American students.It is reported that American students get a large amount of income from their part-time jobs rather than from parents which suggests that American students are much more independent.愛心用心專心 1

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There are many reasons accounting for that case.First of all, as we all know, Chinese students are ordered to keep on studying for a long time in order to pass exams while American students have much more free time when they can earn money.Secondly American students are taught to be independent when they are young.On the other hand, Chinese students’ priority is to study well since they set foot into schools.Thirdly, American government allows children to do part-time jobs, while Chinese government doesn't.Last but not least, the college scholarships in China are not enough to meet most of Chinese students' needs.As a result, it's quite evident that why there exists such a big difference in income sources.As we all know, the way American students use to earn money will make

them much more independent, while we Chinese students will never catch up with up with them.So it’s high time that we were supposed to take measures.In my opinion, the Chinese should learn from Americans.The students should find more chances for part-time jobs in spite of parents' help, because they can not only lighten the heavy load of high tuitions fees on their family, but also gain necessary social skills and experience in communication or others.By means of doing part-time jobs, they can also have an objective view on this country, and even develop their creative ability.Therefore, Chinese students' income source should be diversified.Telephone or letter

Quite a few people take it for granted that telephone has taken the place of letters.Even some hold the opinion that we don't need letters anymore.On the other hand, some prefer to write rather than make a phone call.In my view, I'm in favor of the former.Of course, writing can organize one's thoughts more logically.By writing they express themselves more easily.But writing a letter takes a lot of time and sometimes it makes one so eager to receive his letter that he may get worried.Besides, it will cost us a lot of money if we want to write to a friend far from us.As we all know, as a convenient way to making a phone call gets more and more popular.The following reasons can account for my argument.First, the telephone provides us a quick way to get connected tothe person who we want to contact.A good example is that it takes us only a few minutes to call an ambulance by phone.Second, by making a call, we can listen to the speaker's voice on the line as if we are talking face to face, which, I believe, can strengthen the relationship between each other.Third, it suits the world's fast current on economy and life style.If we wrote instead of making a phone call, we would lose chances or right time to earn money or to develop our companies.Last but not least, with the development of Internet, the Internet telephone is more popular, which costs a little.All in all, I still hold the opinion that writing must be set aside(建議用make way)for making a phone call, because the former doesn't suit our fast steps at all.What we need is a much cheaper and fast way for daily life.（302）

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第三篇：全國創新英語大賽優秀作文

題目：

Directions:

Read the following paragraph and write a composition as stated at about 300 words in 60 minutes.Your composition will be graded according to clarity, accuracy and meaningfulness.In accordance with CRI news, the spirit of Chinese volunteers, from responding to the May 12 earthquake to the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, not only touched the Chinese people, but also generated worldwide attention.Official statistics show that china has accumulated about 8 billion hours of volunteer work from 380 million volunteers since 1993 and is going to have more and more volunteers, especially the youth.How do you understand volunteer work? In what way(s)is it important to promote the well-being of individuals, families, communities and the world at large? Your writing ought to contain three parts, your viewpoint, the supporting ideas, and the conclusion.Come and join us in volunteer work right now!

On Volunteer

黃昕彤 遼寧省鞍山市鞍山一中108班

The definition of the word volunteer in Lougnan（Longman）Dictionary is someone who helps others sponstaneously（spontaneously）and willingly.That's true!Life is a style of enjoying yourself, not only by entertaing and enriding yourself, but also by the process of helping others.Undoubtfully, those volunteers reveal their great love and passion for their country.Love is the eternal theme of the world, Without hove(love), it's like birds without wings, failing to show its talents of flying, It's like spring without flowers, burying is charming fragrants in the deep soil.Their volunty work unites China, shouing the world how united Chinese people are shocking the world of its cooperation.People around the country are making their efforts to helping others, which leaves the world an impression that China is a veal country, and all the people here are like brothers and sisters, who cares a lot for others.You can never imagine how touched I was when I watched the TV program called “Moving China”.13 peasants from tangshang volunteered to help those victims of Sichuang on hearing the tremendous earthquake happened there, leaving all their farm work done in the field they sacrifiled anything and helped others at any cost, for they knew the glant pains the earthquake brings to people.They can never forget how much pains they havendertaken in the earthquake and how much help they have received from the world.They compared their own feelings to the victims and passed the splrit on.In this sense, people will pass the spirit from generation to queneration, from China to all over the world.Then, how sweet will the World be!

I have a dream that one day, I will be a member of the volunteer team.I have a dream that oneday, I'll make contributions to China however slightest it may be.I have a dream that one day I'll be a founder of a world Charity, helping people all over the world.I'm firmly convinced that it will not only be a drean for me, but also a drean for people all over China, all over the world, and for the great Global Village.專家建議：

整篇文章條理清晰，結構完整，總體感覺很好。但有個別語法錯誤，固定搭配有些用得不夠準確，建議多用課本學過的固定搭配或是詞組造句。

專家點評：

文章語言流暢，運用了修辭手法，展現出一定的語言功底。此外，論據生動有力，讓人信服。如果句子之間的多用些關聯詞就更好了。

陳茜 江蘇省哈爾濱市第三中學高三18班

Dear grandfather:

How are you?

I am writing to invite you to join us, in the next year, to be a voluntear in the great event, which is to hold in Shanghai.We, a generation born in the 90s in our city, have made a team to do the volunteer work.And you are welcomed by all our team members awing to your great amount of knowledge about Chinese traditions and culture.Please don't tell me you are too old to do this job.I believe you are sure to accept my invitation after reading my following explannation of the importance of the volunteer work.Nowadays, volunteer work, which has raised public interest and concern, is becomming more and more popular throughout the world.As is known to all, volunteer work is not only meaningful but also necessary.One my personal wete, what's more, it's interesting and pleasant!It help us develop oursel.Firstly, for individuals, especially those young, to do volunteer work is an awailuabe wany to goin social experience.By doing volunteer work, they can meet vorrious people and they may run across all kinds of troubles.They however, can become mature and determined by solving these problems.You know, no pains, no gains.Also, individuals will realize that they do make a difference in someone else's life, even the whole event, the world!Their confidence can be rovised and confidence is what it takes to do any job well.For families, if you're the side that received the help of the volunteers, of couse your issue will be more easily dealt with.If you're the side who give others your hand, you will realize there exists no better way to educate your children that “a virtwre deserues amother” because you'll get the best presentsmall at first, contained within its banks, flood passionally then merged into the sea, for the sense of moral considerations.And now, I quite support to be a volunteer.We can never forget these moving scenes: A group of adolecents from Beijing dashed to the City of Wenchuan who gave up their comfortable living situations and picked up the heavy burden to save people buried into the ground, while a middle aged white collar who threw away his computer and salary came here to fetch wictims' lives from the death.It is volunteers who rushed to this place which has suffered from the catastrophe that gave a great help to those victims in need.A volunteer can support a piece of sky, and this one reason I am eager to join them.Secondly, only a volunteer who is in active part in Beijing Olympic Games will he give a great help to those losers.It is volunteers who gave us a warm welcome to Beijing that put the glorious sports meeting from in chaos to in order.A person, as we know, who hasn’t join into the group of volunteer is one of the unfortunate victims of this society which is occupied with love.All of us are in high pressure in this adverse circumstance.Our mind catches hold of something and will not let it go, if we choose the way to argue with the mind, the stronger the will, the more fuitile the task, so we, should choose a way to help others, to see the smile from others.Then the pressure get out suiftly.I always go into rapture at a mere mention of being a volunteer and regard it as a person who is eager to help others or a group not in the same class with the suburban social-climbers.It seems a cliché but a saying which is an infallibility that a splendid case can not leave a volunteer just as a fish can not live without water.專家點評：作者盡量用到了一些高級詞語和句型，表明作者有一定的英語功底，但是小的錯誤頻發，如單詞拼寫，語法問題，句子邏輯，這在某一方面也表明作者的基本功有待提高，繼續努力。

專家建議：用詞準確是寫作的基礎。對于學習英語的中國學生來說，背單詞擴大詞匯量是有必要的，但遺憾的是，學生們背的大都是單詞的“外殼”，記的大都是單詞的表意或字典提供的大致意思，而基本上忽視了詞在語境中的作用和詞的“精神”。這種只記單詞表意的學習方法對提高語言的運用能力，特別是寫作能力是極其不利的。

Let us shine

徐葉子 江蘇省張家港市張家港外國語學校高二4班

Volunteers are just like diamonds in the sun, and the diamonds are forever, especially the youth.Volunteer work is just like a miracle.From the May 12th earthquake to the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, volunteer work made unbelievable contributions.60 years ago our country was set up, today we will celebrate its 60th birthday.In this process, volunteer work did a lot of help and now our country is standing in the world just like a giant.In the past years, volunteers have helped a large number of people, the old, the young, the poor and the homeless.All the volunteers know that the road ahead will be long and cragged, but no matter what obstacles stand in their way they will never stop.Because they have a creed and they believe everything is possible.Oh the creed of volunteer work, you make volunteers keep on going without hesitation.Oh the creed of volunteer work, you make volunteers hand in hand and be with together forever.Oh the creed of volunteer work, you make volunteers go to the edge of the world and let them know the true meaning of life.Do you know what the creed is? Yes, it is love.With love, volunteer work makes people open their mind and let them find the sky is theirs.With love, volunteer work makes people look into their hearts and let the sunshine in.With love, volunteer work makes people believe that smilers will never lose and frowners will never win.I know something has changed because of volunteer work.I know it for real because it feels so right and the world looks so much brighter.Love is important to volunteer work and volunteer work is important to the whole world.The infinite sky is motionless and the blue ocean is boisterous.This moment is perfect.Let us become volunteers and try our best in volunteer work.It can be the start of something new and it's our turn to learn some or win some.So, let's make a wish and get ready to shine like diamonds.專家建議：

建議該考生在語言流暢的基礎之上，注意兩方面問題。第一，用詞更具體些，避免使用語義較為空泛的表達，如learn some or win some。第二，文章華美有余，但邏輯層次不足。需加強句子與句子之間以及段落與段落間的邏輯性。

專家點評：

該作文使用了很多修辭方式，從這一點上看，作者在學習英語的過程中一定是位有心人，注重邊閱讀邊積累背誦。同時能看出，作者一定是一位喜愛英文歌曲的人，文中很多表達都來自于音樂歌詞。但在遣詞造句時，需要區分口頭表達和較書面表達，在這點上，文章還有提高的空間。

第四篇：2013年全國英語創新大賽作文

2013年全國英語創新大賽模板作文（2）

The Difference in Income Sources between American and Chinese Student

As is described in the chart, we can clearly learn that Chinese students depend on parents much more than American students.It is reported that American students get a large amount of income from their part-time jobs rather than from parents which suggests that American students are much more independent.There are many reasons accounting for that case.First of all, as we all know, Chinese students are ordered to keep on studying for a long time in order to pass exams while American students have much more free time when they can earn money.Secondly American students are taught to be independent when they are young.On the other hand, Chinese students’ priority is to study well since they set foot into schools.Thirdly, American government allows children to do part-time jobs, while Chinese government doesn't.Last but not least, the college scholarships in China are not enough to meet most of Chinese students' needs.As a result, it's quite evident that why there exists such a big difference in income sources.As we all know, the way American students use to earn money will make

them much more independent, while we Chinese students will never catch up with up with them.So it’s high time that we were supposed to take measures.In my opinion, the Chinese should learn from Americans.The students should find more chances for part-time jobs in spite of parents' help, because they can not only lighten the heavy load of high tuitions fees on their family, but also gain necessary social skills and experience in communication or others.By means of doing part-time jobs, they can also have an objective view on this country, and even develop their creative ability.Therefore, Chinese students' income source should be diversified.(294)

第五篇：第十一屆 全國創新英語作文大賽 (經典)

Topic: Moms and dads, please let us fly.Conversations:

Parents: Take good care of yourself, my boy.Boy: Yeah, I’ll.And you，too.Parents: Don’t forget to check your passport again before boarding the plane.Watch out your belongings, and don’t be shy to ask your host family for help if you make any mistakes, of course you can call us as well.And, oh…

Boy: Don’t worry, mom and dad.I promise to only make mistakes you never made.Composition:

As can be seen in the picture, there stands a merrily boy who is well-packed.Maybe he is going to be an exchange student.And his parents are saying goodbye to him by their house.This picture conveys the message that the couple gives the freedom of practice to their child.They allow him to break a path by himself so that he can adapt to the society easily and finally lead a rich and varied life although they worry a lot about their little boy.Just as the message above shows, our parents usually think too much of us, because they want us to be a perfect one.They tell us what we should do and what shouldn’t, ignoring our thoughts.They just don’t think what we are interested in is beneficial to our growth.They love us in an unsuitable way.Actually, in our opinions, we think we need chances to make mistakes.Because we will go through a process of making mistakes, during which we experience

and learn a lot.So, for this point of view, I advice parents respecting and encourage the personality of their children.And the most effective way is taking part in society activities.For one reason, with the rapid development of information technology in the 21st century, our society needs an increasing number of talents who have not only extraordinary ability of knowledge but also the teamwork spirit and sense of cooperation, but not the ones who are spoilt by their parents.Another reason is that there exists intense competition in modern society.So in order to have our own places in society, we must make full preparations through experiencing setbacks and challenge them.If parents follow the principles above, there will be a much happier and more harmonious relationship between parents and us.What’s more, for us, these experiences and rebirths will also be invaluable to character building, making them more independent, diligent and enterprising.Moms and dads, we need opportunities to make mistakes, only in this way can we stand a better chance.So you may rest assured that we will not fail your expectations.If you love us, just let ourselves go!