第一篇：各種英語寫作 萬能例子1 林肯

萬能例子1 林肯

Probably the greatest example of persistence is Abraham Lincoln.If you want to learn about somebody who didn't quit『放棄；認輸』, look no further.Born into poverty, Lincoln was faced with defeat throughout his life.He lost eight elections, twice failed in business and suffered a nervous breakdown『精神崩潰；衰弱』.He could have quit many times－but he didn't and because he didn't quit, he became one of the greatest presidents in the history of our country.Lincoln was a champion and he never gave upHere is a sketch『概述；簡述』of Lincoln's road to the White House.1816 His family was forced out of their home.He had to work to support them.1818 His mother died.1831 Failed in business.1832 Ran for state legislature－lost.1832 Also lost his job－wanted to go to law school but couldn't get in.1833 Borrowed some money from a friend to begin a business and by the end of the year he was bankrupt『破產』.He spent the next 17 years of his life paying off this debt.1834 Ran for state legislature again－won.1834 Was engaged to be married, sweetheart『心上人；戀人』died and his heart was broken.1836 Had a total nervous breakdown and was in bed for six months.1838 Sought to become speaker of the statelegislature－defeated.1840 Sought to become elector『選舉人；選舉團成員』－defeated.1843 Ran for Congress－lost.1846 Ran for Congress again―this time he won―went to Washington and did a good job.1848 Ran for re-election to Congress―lost.1849 Sought the job of land officer in his home state―rejected.1854 Ran for Senate of the United Sates―lost.1856 Sought the Vice-Presidential nomination『提名』at his party's national convention got less than 100 votes.1858 Ran for U.S.Senate again―again he lost.1860 Elected president of the United States.The path was worn and slippery.My foot slipped from under me, knowing the other out of the way, but I recovered and said to myself, “It's a slip and not a fall.”

Abraham Lincoln

After losing a senate race

中文對照版：能堅持到底的最佳實例可能就是亞伯拉罕·林肯。如果你想知道有誰從未放棄，那就不必再尋尋覓覓了！

生下來就一貧如洗的林肯，終其一生都在面對挫敗，八次選舉八次都落敗，兩次經商失敗，甚至還精神崩潰過一次。

好多次，他本可以放棄，但他并沒有如此，也正因為他沒有放棄，才成為美國歷史上最偉大的總統之一。

林肯天下無敵，而且他從不放棄。以下是林肯進駐白宮的歷程簡述：

1816年 他的家人被趕出了居住的地方，他必須靠工作來養活他們。

1818年 他母親去世。

1831年 經商失敗。

1832年 競選州議員――但落選了！

1832年 工作也丟了――想就讀法學院，但進不去。

1833年 向朋友借一些錢經商，但年底就破產了，接下來他花了17年，才把債還清。

1834年 再次競選州議員――贏了！

1834年 訂婚后就快結婚了，但未婚妻卻死了，因此他的心也碎了！

1836年 完全精神崩潰，臥病在床六個月。

1838年 爭取成為州議員的發言人――沒有成功。

1840年 爭取成為選舉人――失敗了！

1843年 參加國會大選――落選了！

1846年 再次參加國會大選――這次當選了！前往華盛頓特區，表現可圈可點。

1848年 尋求國會議員連任――失敗了！

1849年 想在自己的州內擔任土地局長的工作――被拒絕了！1854年 競選美國參議員――落選了！

1856年 在黨的全國代表大會上爭取副總統的提名――得票不到100張。

1858年 再度競選美國參議員――又再度落敗。

1860年 當選美國總統。

此路破敗不堪又容易滑倒。我一只腳滑了一跤，另一只腳也因而站不穩，但我回過氣來告訴自己，“這不過是滑一跤，并不是死掉都爬不起來了。”

（亞伯拉罕·林肯）

（在競選參議員落敗后如是說）

Abraham Lincoln(16th)

維護國家統一Lincoln thought secession illegal, and was willing to use force to defend Federal law and the Union.When Confederate batteries fired on Fort Sumter and forced its surrender, he called on the states for 75,000 volunteers.Four more slave states joined the Confederacy but four remained within the Union.The Civil War had begun.As President, he built the Republican Party into a strong national organization.Further, he rallied most of the northern Democrats to the Union cause.On January 1, 1863, he issued the Emancipation Proclamation that declared forever free those slaves within the Confederacy.偉人奮斗As a son of a Kentucky frontiersman, Lincoln had to struggle for a living and for learning.His parents were both born in Virginia, of undistinguished

families--second families.Lincoln made extraordinary efforts to attain knowledge while working on a farm, splitting rails for fences, and keeping store in Illinois.He was a captain in the Black Hawk War, spent eight years in the Illinois legislature, and rode the circuit of courts for many years.His law partner said of him, “His ambition was a little engine that knew no rest.”

Political skill.A consummate politician, Lincoln sought to maintain harmony among the disparate elements of his party by giving them representation in his cabinet.For example, he honored local factions by appointing Simon Cameron of Pennsylvania secretary of war.Although Lincoln was much closer to the radicals and gradually moved toward ever more radical measures, he did not needlessly offend the conservatives and often collaborated with them.His careful handling of the slavery issue is a case in point, as is his appointment of Democratic generals and his deference to the sensibilities of the border states.演講——感染力+分歧與統一：Lincol’s political influence was enhanced by his great gifts as an orator.Able to stress essentials in simple terms, he effectively appealed to the nation in some classical short speeches and his second inaugural address.Moreover, he was a capable diplomat.Firmly rejecting Seward’s proposal in April 1861 that the country be united by means of a foreign war, he sought to maintain friendly relations with the nations of Europe, used the Emancipation Proclamation to win friends for the Union, and effectively countered Confederate efforts to gain

foreign recognition.師生關系教育地位Plato was a Classical Greek philosopher, who, together with his mentor, Socrates, and his student, Aristotle, helped to lay the foundations of Western philosophy.Plato was also a mathematician, writer of philosophical dialogues, and founder of the Academy in Athens, the first institution of higher learning in the western world.Plato was originally a student of Socrates, and was as much influenced by his thinking as by what he saw as his teacher's unjust death.Plato's sophistication as a writer can be witnessed by reading his Socratic dialogues.The dialogues have since Plato's time been used to teach a range of subjects, mostly including philosophy, logic, rhetoric, mathematics, and other subjects about which he wrote.

第二篇：英語寫作西方名人例子

Great Souls

? Nelson Mandela

Mandela, the South African black political leader and former president, was awarded 1993 Nobel Peace Prize for his efforts to antiracism and antiapartheid.Nelson Mandela is one of the great moral and political leaders of our time: an international hero whose lifelong dedication to the fight against racial oppression in South Africa won him the Nobel Peace Prize and the presidency of his country.Since his triumphant release in 1990 from more than a quarter-century of imprisonment, Mandela has been at the centre of the most compelling and inspiring political drama in the world.As president of the African National Congress and head of South Africa's antiapartheid movement, he was instrumental in moving the nation toward multiracial

government and majority rule.He is revered everywhere as a vital force in the fight for human rights and racial equality.(138)

? Gandhi

Mahatma Gandhi was the pre-eminent political and spiritual leader of India during the Indian independence movement.He was the pioneer of the resistance to tyranny through mass civil disobedience, firmly founded upon total non-violence—which led India to independence and has inspired movements for civil rights and freedom across the world.He is officially honored in India as the Father of the Nation.After assuming leadership of the Indian National Congress in 1921, Gandhi led nationwide campaigns to ease poverty, expand women's rights, build religious and ethnic amity, and increase economic self-reliance.Above all, he aimed to achieve the

independence of India from foreign domination.Later he campaigned against the British to Quit India.Gandhi spent a number of years in jail in both South Africa and India.(128)

Additionally, Gandhi influenced important leaders and political movements.Leaders of the civil rights movement in the United States, including Martin Luther King and James Lawson, drew from the writings of Gandhi in the development of their own theories about non-violence.Anti-apartheid activist and former President of South Africa, Nelson Mandela, was inspired by Gandhi.Prior to becoming President of the United States, then-Senator Barack Obama noted that: Throughout my life, I have always looked to Mahatma Gandhi as an inspiration, because he embodies the kind of transformational change that can be made when ordinary people come together to do extraordinary things.That is why his portrait hangs in my Senate office: to remind me that real results will come not just from Washington – they will come from the people.(129)

??Martin Luther King

Martin Luther King, Jr.was an American clergyman, activist and prominent leader in the

African-American civil right movement.His main legacy was to secure progress on civil rights in the United States and he is frequently referenced as a human rights icon today.King led the 1955 Montgomery Bus Boycott and helped found the Southern Christian Leadership Conference in 1957, serving as its first president.King's efforts led to the 1963 March on Washington, where King delivered his “I Have a Dream” speech.There, he raised public

consciousness of the civil rights movement and established himself as one of the greatest orators in U.S.history.By the time of his death in 1968, he had refocused his efforts on ending poverty and opposing the VietnamWar, both from a religious perspective.In 1964, King became the youngest person to receive the Nobel Peace Prize for his work to end

racial segregation and racial discrimination through civil disobedience and other non-violent means.He was posthumously awarded the Presidential Medal of Freedom in 1977 and Congressional Gold Medal in 2004;Martin Luther King, Jr.Day was established as a U.S.national

holiday in 1986.(192)

? Mother Teresa

Mother Teresa was an Albanian Roman Catholic nun with Indian citizenship who founded the Missionaries of Charity in Calcutta, India in 1950.For over 45 years she ministered to the poor, sick, orphaned, and dying, while guiding the Missionaries of Charity?s expansion.Mother Teresa's Missionaries of Charity continued to expand, and at the time of her death it was operating 610 missions in 123 countries, including hospices and homes for people with HIV/AIDS,leprosy and tuberculosis, children's and family counseling programs, and schools.By the 1970s she was internationally famed as a humanitarian and advocated for the poor and helpless.She won the Nobel Peace Prize in 1979 and India's highest civilian honor, the Bharat Ratna in 1980 for her humanitarian work.(122)

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? Susan B.Anthony

Although I am not a feminist, I admire Susan B.Anthony for her daring to hold on to her view even being mocked cruelly by her contemporaries.A tireless civil rights worker, Anthony devoted her life to the work which has guaranteed women‘s basic right, including suffrage and equal protections under law.She believed that men and women are created equal and persevered unremittingly in opening doors and expanding acceptable modes of behavior for women.In the patriarchy society of her time, people considered her unladylike and ridiculous.However, 19th Amendment to the Constitution gives women‘s rights to vote, which established Susan B.Anthony as a bold revolutionary feminist in history.(111)

?Margaret Sanger

Margaret Sanger sparked the birth control movement with the publication of The Woman Rebel, in which she encourages women to view conception as a choice rather than an obligation.In 1923, her tireless efforts resulted in the establishment of America's first legal birth control clinic, which served as a contraceptive dispensary and research facility under the auspices of the American Birth Control League(one of the groups that eventually morphed into Planned Parenthood).The birth control movement has had far-reaching, worldwide implications, from women's rights to population control to the sexual revolution.(92)

l Bright Minds

? Newton

Newton‘s aim at Cambridge was a law degree.Instruction at Cambridge was dominated by the philosophy of Aristotle but some freedom of study was allowed in the third year of the course.Newton had a golden opportunity to study an abundance of great minds: the philosophy of Descartes, Gassendi, Hobbes, and in particular Boyle.The mechanics of the Copernican

astronomy of Galileo attracted him and he also studied Kepler‘s Optics.It is a fascinating account of how Newton‘s ideas were formed.He collected all these thoughts and developed his own system by which he successfully explained a wide range of previously unrelated phenomena: the eccentric orbits of comets, the procession of the Earth‘s axis, and motion of the Moon as perturbed by the gravity of the Sun, as well as the three laws of motion that made him an international leader in scientific research and the greatest pilot in human‘s civilization.(157)

? Darwin’s Origin of Species

The theory of evolution is one of the great intellectual revolutions of human history.Hundreds of years ago, people were confused with the complexity of different species of the world, and believed that species were created by the mysterious God.However, Darwin did not believe so.After several years' study, he eventually demonstrated that species, however complex seemingly, all evolved by natural selection from simple and preliminary conditions.When Darwin published his famous research results on the Origin of Species by Means of Natural Selection, the book encountered lots of controversies.Members of the religious community, as well as some

scientific peers, were outraged and protested.However, Darwin's idea of evolution eventually defeated the traditional belief and was accepted and acknowledged by some insightful scientists and finally by the society.It is now reverenced as one of the greatest intellectual revolutions of human history.(144)

??Nicolaus Copernicus

Nicolaus Copernicus was a Polish mathematician and astronomer who proposed that the sun was stationary in the center of the universe and the earth revolved around it.Disturbed by the failure of Ptolemy's geocentric model of the universe to follow Aristotle's requirement for the uniform circular motion of all celestial bodies, Copernicus decided that he could achieve his goal only through a heliocentric model.He thereby created a concept of a universe in which the distances of the planets from the sun bore a direct relationship to the size of their orbits.At the time

Copernicus's heliocentric idea was very controversial;nevertheless, it was the start of a change in the way the world was viewed, and Copernicus came to be seen as the initiator of the Scientific Revolution.(129)

? Galileo Galilei

Galileo Galilei was an Italian physicist, mathematician, astronomer, and philosopher who played a major role in the Scientific Revolution.His achievements include improvements to the

telescope and consequent astronomical observations, and support for Copernicanism.Galileo's observations about four satellites of Jupiter with his new telescope convinced him of the truth of Copernicus's sun-centered or heliocentric theory.Galileo has been called the “father of modern observational astronomy,” the “father of modern physics,” and “the Father of Modern Science.” Stephen Hawking says, “Galileo, perhaps more than any other single person, was responsible for the birth of modern science.”(96)

? Christopher Columbus

In 1485, Columbus presented his plans to John II, King of Portugal.He requested he be made “Great Admiral of the Ocean”, appointed governor of any and all lands he discovered, and given

one-tenth of all revenue from those lands.The king submitted the proposal to his experts and rejected it.In 1488 Columbus appealed to the court of Portugal once again, and once again it also proved unsuccessful.Then, Columbus travelled from Portugal to both Genoa and Venice, but he received encouragement from neither.In1486, Columbus presented his plans to Queen Isabella.After the passing of much time, these savants of Spain, like their counterparts in Portugal, pronounced the idea impractical, and advised their Royal Highnesses to pass on the proposed venture.But after endless attempts at establishing a settlement of Hispanism, Catholic Monarchs finally gave him an annual allowance of 12,000 maravedis and furnished him with a letter ordering all cities and towns under their domain to provide him food and lodging with which Columbus successfully initiated widespread contact between Europeans and indigenous Americans and carved out the cross-continental trade market.(183)

? John Nash

Before 1950, Adam Smith was respected as ―the father of Game Theory‖, he wrote a famous book named The Wealth of Nations and demonstrated ―perfect competition‖ which was

commonly accepted by people.There is a sentence from the book ―Individual ambition serious the common good‖ which means when each individual pursue his own interests, the benefits of the group will be improved most effectively.However, John Nash, a normal mathematician in Princeton University, created a theory ―Nash Equilibrium‖ which laid the foundation of Game Theory in 1950.He doubted the statement from Adam Smith, and he succeeded.John Nash wrote a 28 pages dissertation to argue a new theory.Due to the fact that personal benefits

conflict each other, the interest of a group will be harmed.To ensure the interests of whole group, individuals should find equilibrium between the personal and group interests.Consequently, John Nash received the Nobel Prize in economics and fundamentally reformed the arena of economics.(160)

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??Alfred Bernhard Nobel-1

Alfred Bernhard Nobel was a Swedish chemist, engineer, innovator, armaments manufacturer and the inventor of dynamite.To be able to detonate the dynamite rods he also invented a detonator which could be ignited by lighting a fuse.The market for dynamite and detonating caps grew very rapidly and Alfred Nobel also proved himself to be a very skillful entrepreneur and businessman.He later produced ballistite, one of the first smokeless powders.At the time of his death, his will provide his enormous fortune of the major portion of $9 million estate to

institute the Nobel Prize, a yearly prize for merit in physics, chemistry, medicine and physiology, literature, and world peace.The synthetic element nobelium was named after him.(119)

? Thomas Edison

In 19th century, people could only get light from candles, but it suffered from several

disadvantages, including exorbitantly high price and in adequate lightness.Thomas Edison, one of the most prominent inventors in the 20th century, overcame 1500 failure and suitable filament for electric light bulb which were affordable for all people to buy and use.He tried numerous

materials such as iron, copper, aluminum, silver, hair, even his colleague‘s brown beard, but he fails all times.Nevertheless he did not give up and dedicated himself in finding the best material.The belief held by him was that ―we will make the electricity so cheap that only the rich will burn

candles.‖ He had the first successful experiment in 1879, finding that carbon filament can last over 40 hours, but he and his team were not satisfied for that.Through hundreds of tough trying, they finally found carbonized bamboo filament which could last over 1200 hours.Furthermore, the light bulbs invented by Edison with the most suitable filament have not only lighted up the world, but influenced people‘s lives all over the world until now.(185)

第三篇：英語例子

821.I saw him playing football on the playground.我看見他在操場上踢足球。822.It is tomorrow that they will have a meeting.就在明天(而不是在別的某一天)他們要開會。

823.Let me tell you some details about clearance.讓我告訴你一些通關的細節。824.The brain needs a continuous supply of blood.大腦需要連續不斷地供血。825.The doctor's words made him feel comfortable.醫生的話讓他感覺很舒服。826.The truth is quite other than what you think.事實真相和你所想的完全不同。827.They stopped talking when their boss came in.當老板進來的時候；他們停止了交談。

828.They were glad of the examination being over.他們為考試結束了而高興。829.This i*y far the largest cake in the world.這是目前世界上最大的蛋糕了。830.Whichever you choose, you won't be satisfied.不論你選擇哪一個，你都不會滿意。

831.Will you connect this wire to the television ?你把這根電線和電視機連上好嗎?832.His words are strongly impressed on my memory.他的話深深地銘記在我的心頭。

833.Is this the fight bus for the Capital Library?這輛車到首都圖書館嗎?

834.One third of this area is covered with forest.這一地區三分之一的地方都是森林。

835.They are arguing over who should pay the bill.他們為誰應該付款而爭論不休。836.Wait a moment, I'll be with you in an instant.等一下，我立刻就來。837.You'll save time not waiting for the elevator.你可以節省等電梯的時間。838.A clear conscience laughs at false accusation.只要問心無愧，無端的指責可以一笑置之。

839.I have a headache, and she has a stomachache.我頭疼，她胃疼。

840.He glared at Bill, ready to teach him a lesson.他怒視著比爾，準備教訓他一頓。

841.I assure you that you will feel no pain at all.我保證你根本不會覺得疼的。

842.I can't afford to go to a restaurant every day.每天都去餐館吃飯，我真是支付不起。

843.I left at 6:00 so that I could catch the train.我六點鐘出門，以便趕上火車。844.I'm afraid I have some rather bad news for you.我恐怕有些很壞的消息要告訴你。

845.Learn to say the fight thing at the fight time.學會在適當的時候說適當的話。846.No wonder you can't sleep when you eat so much.你吃這么多難怪睡不著。847.Please ask her to call me back when she'*ack.她回來時請讓她給我回個電話。

848.There are a lot of people in the swimming pool.游泳池里擠滿了人。

849.They have to work hard to support their family.他們必須努力工作來支持他們的家。

850.This way, he can kill two birds with one stone.這樣他就能兩全其美。851.We are all taking medicine against the disease.我們都服藥治療疾病。

852.Would you please go to a dancing party with me?請你跟我一起去參加一個舞會好嗎?

853.He usually drops in at my place on his way home.他常常在回家的路上順便來看看我。

854.His vanity was hurt by their talking so frankly.他們坦率的談話傷害了他的虛榮心。

855.How would you go to Beijing, by air or by train?你怎樣去北京，是乘飛機還是坐火車?

856.I cannot express how glad I am to hear from him.我無法表達我接到他的信時有多高興。

857.If Tom cannot keep his promise, he'll lose face.如果湯姆不能信守諾言，他就會丟面子。

858.I'll still love her even if she doesn't love me.即使她不愛我，我還仍然愛她。859.I received an invitation, but I did not accept it.我收到-份請帖，但沒有接受。

860.If I were you, I would not be bothered by English.如果我是你，就不會為英語煩惱了。

861.If you don't work, you will fail to pass the exam.如果你不學習，你考試就會不及格。

862.I'm thinking of hanging the lamp from the ceiling.我打算把燈吊在天花板上。863.It is more important to be healthy than bony slim.健康永遠比皮包骨頭好。864.Long ago, people believed that the world was flat.很久以前人們相信地球是平的。

865.Old tunes are sweetest and old friends are surest.老調最甜美，老友最可靠。866.She makes it clear that she doesn't like swimming.她明確地表示她不喜歡游泳。

867.The constitution guards the liberty of the people.憲法保護人民的自由。868.The doctor examined the soldier's wound carefully.大夫仔細檢查了戰士的傷口。

869.The harder I study, the better my English will be.我越努力，我的英語就會越好。

870.The sun was shining and the sky was crystal clear.陽光閃爍，天空湛藍。871.This cellar room is very damp in the rainy season.這間地下室在雨季非常潮濕。

872.Computers are becoming a part of our everyday life.電子計算機正漸漸成為我們日常生活的一部分。

873.Every man is fool sometimes, but none at all times.每個人都有愚蠢的時候，但是沒有一個人永遠愚蠢。

874.He dreamed of traveling to remote South Sea Islands.他曾夢想到遙遠的南海諸島去旅游。

875.How can I climb up that wall!I wish I were a bird!我怎么能夠爬得上那堵墻?我要是一只鳥就好了!

876.However, Susan has not really made up her mind yet.然而，蘇珊卻還沒有決

定。

877.I really think a little exercise would do you good.我真的覺得做點運動對你有好處。

878.I will never forget the days that I spent with you.我永遠都不會忘記和你一起度過的日子。

879.we got a bad headache, and my nose is running.我頭痛得厲害，還流鼻涕。880.Many young girls dream of being a fashion model.許多年輕女孩夢想成為時裝模特兒。

881.Most of the earth's surface is covered by water.大部分的地球表面被水覆蓋著。

882.Somebody's knocking at the door.I'll answer it.有人在敲門，我去開。883.The number 13 bus will take you to the hospital.13路車會帶你去醫院。

884.They celebrated hi*irthday with a dance party.也們舉辦舞會來祝賀他的生日。885.They misplaced thi*ook under other categories.他們把它錯放到另一個類別去了。

886.They played a shameful part in the whole affair.他們在這一事件中扮演了可恥的角色。

887.As a matter of fact, he was pretending to be ill.實際上，他是在裝病。

888.I will speak against anything I know to be wrong.我會對所有我認為不對的事情直言不諱。

889.In spite of the heavy rain, she went to the shop.盡管下著大雨，她還是去了商店。

890.No matter what happened, he would not say a word.不管發生什么事，他也不會說一句話。

891.No one knows the location of the hidden treasure.誰也不知道藏寶地點在哪里。

892.The old lady enjoys a quiet life with her family.老太太和她的家人安享寧靜的生活。

893.The population of the city is close to a million.這個城市的人口接近一百萬。894.We are prohibited from smoking on school grounds.我們被禁止在校園內抽煙。

895.Growth, however, brings new problems and concerns.不過，發展也帶來了新的問題和顧慮。

896.He appears to be your friend but I doubt if he is.他看上去像是你的朋友，但我懷疑他是否是真心的。

897.I am so full that I would burst with another bite.我吃得如此之飽，我感覺我再吃一口肚子就要脹破了。

898.I have two cats.One is white, the other i*lack.我有兩只貓，一只是白貓，另一只是黑貓。

899.I'm sorry, these 2 books are 3 days overdue.小姐，對不起，這兩本書已經過期3天了。

900.Jalu has forgotten falling off hi*icycle.詹露早忘掉他從白行車上摔下來這件事了。

第四篇：消息寫作例子

按語：消息寫作中，一些同學寫出了非常優秀的作品，抓住了所給材料的核心，同學們閱讀他們的作品可以給你們帶來收獲，增強你們的消息寫作能力。請認真學習他們的寫作方法，同時注意避免一些不必要的新聞寫作錯誤。注意語言的簡煉和寫作的邏輯性。

跪拜禮成奴性象征

孟非呼吁民眾樹立平等、民主觀念

本報訊

2011年5月6日江蘇衛視“非誠勿擾”節目主持人孟非在央視博客上發表文章《我最厭惡的禮數——跪拜禮》，文章發表后，引起讀者廣泛議論。

2011年5月4日青年節，廣東實驗中學首創“青年禮”。“青年禮”采取“跪父母、接家書”的形式進行。對此，孟非發表自己的態度——特別反感跪拜禮。孟非認為，跪拜與奴性就像孿生兄弟。尊敬父母有很多種方式，不一定要下跪，而且，他還論述了傳統文化在跪拜問題上的矛盾。孟非還根據青年報在“冰點時評”發表評論《“跪父母”的青年禮有悖于五四精神》發表自己的見解；中國的跪文化有違五四精神，下跪是臣服的代名詞，而五四是讓國民成為國的主人，成為家的主人，而這首先要實現人人平等。下跪正是有違人人平等這個觀念。由此孟非又對這些年學校組織的“感恩教育”活動發表看法，對于弘揚中華傳統美德，不應搞那些純粹形而上學的儀式表演，中華民族的偉大復興使命也非奴才能完成。

文章最后，孟非提出自己的擔憂：如此的教育者能否讓受教育者樹立民主、平等的理念，培養他們成為具有獨立人格的現代公民。“成不成人才或許沒那么重要，重要的是千萬別成奴才。”孟非說。

【評語】這則新聞，為一類作文優秀。語言簡練，邏輯性強，抓住了所給材料的核心內容和精神實質。導語，開門見山給出新聞來源：2011年5月6日央視博客文章《我最厭惡的禮數——跪拜禮》；主體，邏輯層次清晰，嚴格按照文章內容的先后順序，以新聞眼的方式給出自己的概括和評論：先是?青年禮?信息，繼而是孟非對此事的態度，再是孟非對中青報文章的引用和評論，最后是孟非對當下?感恩教育?形式化的批駁；結尾，抓住孟非的一句話?我真的很擔心?，概括出?孟非提出自己的擔憂?，并引用孟非的話?成不成人才或許沒那么重要，重要的是千萬別成奴才。?結束新聞，抓住了孟非這篇社會評論的思想精髓。

主持人孟非博客抨擊跪拜禮

本報訊 江蘇衛視“非誠勿擾”節目主持人孟非于5月6日上午在央視博客上發表文章，就五四青年節一日廣東實驗中學首創“跪父母，接家書”的“青年禮”一事，表示強烈反感。

據5月5日的《新快報》報道，廣東實驗中學決定“青年禮”以“跪父母，接家書”的形式進行，是經老師和家長委員會的討論得出的結果，而其理由是“跪是中國的最高禮節”。孟非在博客中表示：“在咱們的傳統禮數中我是特別反對跪拜的，我覺得跪拜和奴性就像孿生兄弟一般，不管是跪天跪地，還是跪皇帝跪父母都是一樣。我們應該尊敬父母，甚至應該對天地懷有敬畏，但為什么一定要下跪呢?”孟非引用了中青報上的一篇評論《“跪父母”的青年禮有悖五四精神》。強調無論出于什么目的，誘導學生下跪都違背了現代教育的宗旨，有違五四精神。“五四”先賢高舉反封建大旗，目的之一就是要讓匍匐于權利腳下的中國人站立起來。而要讓國民成為國的主人，前提是成為家的主人，首先實現家庭成員之間的平等。

孟非在央視博客發表的這篇文章中還提到了近年來有些學校熱衷于搞“給父母洗腳”之類的感恩教育，同樣表示不解：“感恩父母的方式很多，為什么非要洗腳？”文章最后很辛辣而又深意：“有些人熱衷于弘揚傳統文化，這是好事”，但“靠這些不倫不類的小玩意兒無法弘揚我們優秀的傳統文化”，“在五四這一天行跪拜禮我總覺得，成不成才或許沒有那么重要，重要的是千萬別成奴才。”

【評語】這則新聞，為一類作文優秀。語言簡練，邏輯性強，抓住了所給材料的核心內容和精神實質。與第一則新聞在寫法上有異曲同工之效。不同的是，本則新聞采用了多處引語式進行新聞報道，讓讀者更多的看到博文的原貌。

孟非批中學“青年禮”行跪拜是培養奴性

本臺消息，本臺記者汪善霆報道：

“成不成才或許沒那么重要，重要的是千萬別成奴才。”5月6日，一向備受關注的江蘇衛視“非誠勿擾”節目主持人孟非撰文這樣批評中學“青年禮”上行跪拜禮。

5月4日，廣東實驗中學首創“青年禮”.用“跪拜禮，接家書”的形式感謝父母。校方給出的理由是“跪是中國的最高禮節”。孟非對此在其央視博客上進行批評。博客言辭激烈，大肆批駁行跪拜禮是奴性的表現。他說“跪拜和奴性就像兄弟一般”。博文中他指出，把跪當成崇高禮儀，跪成習慣，也就養成屈服權貴的心理。他還援引中青報5月6日“冰點時評”文章《“跪父母”的青年禮有悖五四精神》，說明感恩父母的方式不在跪拜，不應培養學生“臣服”的性格。

孟非還就近年來“給父母洗腳”等活動提出了質疑。他說這樣形式化的作業，冠以“感恩教育”的名號，沒有任何的實質意義。弘揚傳統文化是好事，但是不要讓傳統文化的糟粕沉渣泛起，也不要搞純粹形而上學的儀式表演。最后他表示了對教育者培養學生民主、平等、獨立能力的擔憂。

據悉，孟非在“非誠勿擾”節目以其搞笑的風格而受到廣泛關注，曾多次在自己的博客中撰文談論某些現象，受到網民的火熱追捧。

【評語】這則新聞，為一類作文優秀。語言精練，層次分明，抓住了博文的主要精神實質。作者將孟非博文的主旨作為新聞的標題；開頭則引用孟非的主旨話語（引語式），揭示了新聞的主題，與新聞標題形成了呼應；導語介紹了本新聞的寫作由頭；主體分為兩個部分，第一部分報道介紹孟非撰文批駁?青年禮?及其奴性的表現，第二部分則介紹孟非在博文中聯系現實批駁?感恩教育?形式化的問題，抓住了孟非對教育者培養學生民主、平等、獨立能力的擔憂；新聞以背景資料的方式結尾，將新聞事件主要人物孟非撰文談論某些現象受到網民火熱追捧的新聞事實，再一次表明了作者對新聞的把握能力。

跪拜易與奴性起共鳴

孟非歷反行“跪拜禮”

本報訊： 針對5月5日《新快報》所報道的，五四青年節這天廣東實驗中學首創“青年禮”這一事件，孟非表示不滿，并嚴厲反對行跪拜禮。

5月5日《新快報》報道，五四青年節這天廣東實驗中學首創“青年禮”。孟非在央視博客上發表一篇文章，針對這一事件寫出自己的觀點。孟非表示在傳統禮數中特別反感跪拜。孟非認為“跪拜和奴性就像過孿生兄弟一般，不管是跪天跪地，還是跪皇上跪父母都一樣。我們應該尊敬父母，甚至應該對天地懷有敬畏，但為什么一定要下跪呢？”另外孟非引用了中青報在“冰點時評”發表評論《“跪父母”的青年禮有悖五四精神》的一段話，表明誘導學生下跪違背現代教育的宗旨，有違五四精神。孟非由行“跪拜禮”這事又聯想了學校這些年搞的“給父母洗腳”之類的活動，來表明要選擇正確的方式來弘揚傳統文化。靠那些不倫不類的小兒科的玩意無法弘揚我們優秀的傳統文化。中華民族的偉大復興的使命也非奴才才能夠完成的。

孟非表示很擔心某些教育者如何讓受教育者樹立民主，平等的理念。培養他們成為具有獨立人格的現代公民。并表示，成不成人才沒那么重要，重要的是千萬別成奴才。

【評語】這則新聞，為二類作文。與第一則新聞內容、結構上極為相似，也寫出了博客文章的主要內容和精神實質。但語言不及上文精辟，未表達孟非民主、平等的思想。在標點符號的使用上也略有瑕疵。

跪拜禮成為“青年禮”引起社會爭議

本報訊 五四青年節這天，廣東實驗中學首創“青年禮”，形式是“跪父母，接家書”。此舉引發社會廣泛爭議。

據5月5日《新快報》報道，廣東實驗中學首創“青年禮”，即在五四青年節這天“跪父母，接家書”此事一經報道，引起社會廣泛關注。對于此舉，社會評論眾說紛紜。據了解，江蘇衛視“非誠勿擾”主持人孟非對此曾在央視博客上發表一篇文章《我最厭惡的禮數——跪拜禮》，在文章中指出，跪拜禮是傳統文化中的糟粕，不能讓這類糟粕沉滓泛起，同時，中華民族的偉大復興也不能靠這些形而上學的儀式表演。5月6日的中青報在“冰點時評”也發表評論《“跪父母”的青年禮有悖五四精神》，文章說，誘導學生下跪是違背現代教育的宗旨，有違五四精神。但對于此舉，也有人贊同，認為這是恢復傳統文華的“禮教”，“跪是中的最高禮節”，跪拜禮表達了我們對父母的尊敬，同時也有利于繼承和弘揚傳統文化。

跪拜禮成為“青年禮”一事，引起了社會的廣泛爭議，也引起我們思考。【評語】這則新聞，為二類作文。從一個完全第三方的視角，將孟非博文中的所有信息進行整理，一一例舉。以報道?跪拜禮成為‘青年禮’引起社會爭議?這樣一個新聞事實為主要內容，拋棄了主要新聞人物孟非以及他的主要思想和主張，僅僅將孟非當成一個背景資料，一筆帶過，這是這則新聞寫作最大的失誤。雖不比肯定語氣的新聞來得差，但也沒能將博文的精神實質反映出來。

跪父母等于尊敬父母嗎？

本報訊 2011 年5月6日上午，江蘇衛視著名主持人孟非在央視博客上發表了一篇名為《我最厭惡的禮數—跪拜禮》的文章，把矛頭直指廣東實驗中學在五四青年節首創的“青年禮”。

廣東實驗中學首創的“青年禮”采取“跪父母，接家書”的形式進行，這引起了社會大眾的廣泛爭議，而著名主持人孟非則在博文中旗幟鮮明的亮出了自己的觀點：在咱們的傳統禮數中他是特別反感跪拜的。在孟非看來“跪拜和奴性就像孿生兄弟一般”。而選擇在五四青年節這天進行“青年禮”：對父母進行跪拜，不但有作秀之嫌，而且有違五四先賢的意志，甚至有悖于五四反封建的精神。

孟非在博文中進一步指出:“這些年有些學校熱衷于搞什么‘給父母洗腳’之類的活動，除了讓一些父母感動的涕淚長流，大多數孩子恐怕是沒有任何知覺的。”感恩父母的方式有很多種，為什么要選擇下跪？也許這些人熱衷于弘揚傳統文化，但孟非一針見血的指出：“靠這些不倫不類的小兒科的玩意兒無法弘揚我們優秀的傳統文化，中華民族偉大復興的使命也并非奴性才能夠完成的。”

在文章的最后，孟非又發掘到了五四“青年禮”背后的深層問題，即某些教育者自身的覺悟不夠，他們的教育理念和方法是有悖于培養獨立人格的現代公民的。在孟非看來：在‘五四’這一天又見跪拜禮，很有一點諷刺意味。”

在一定程度上說，跪父母并不等于尊敬父母。近年來社會上掀起的諸如給父母洗腳的熱潮，也許是當今社會浮躁情緒的反映。教育者應從實際出發，制定良好的教育方式培養學生孝敬父母的意識和弘揚中華優秀傳統文化的最好方法。正如孟非所說：“成不成才或許沒那么重要，重要的是千萬別成奴才。”

【評語】這則新聞，為二類作文。標題以問句形式出現，批駁氣勢不足；導語直接寫出了孟非博文針對的問題；主體部分是針對孟非博文的主要內容進行的歸納總結；結尾段，寫出了作者的主張，即?跪父母不等于尊敬父母?，回答了標題的問題，起到了題文照應的作用，并以引語式結尾，強調了孟非博文的核心思想。

弘揚傳統文學

感恩父母 廣東實驗中學首創“青年禮”

本臺消息：為迎接月5月5日青年節廣東實驗中學首創“青年禮”。眾多學子和家長參加，“青年禮”如火如荼地舉行。

今年5月5日，廣東實驗中學首創“青年禮”為了迎接五四青年節的到來。眾多學子和家長積極響應參加，場面之大，歷來少有。

據了解，本次“青年禮”經老師和家長委員會的討論，采取“跪父母，接家書”的形式進行，理由是他們認為“跪”是中國的最高禮節。只有行跪拜禮才能讓孩子弘揚傳統文化，感恩父母，充實人生，實現自我。

記者通過走訪了解，對于行跪拜禮，有人贊同，他們認為這是恢復傳統文化的“禮教”能夠讓孩子知書達禮，建立健全人格道德情操，也有人反對，他們認為行跪拜禮讓他們反感。一位年輕人說：“我們應該尊敬父母，甚至應該對天地懷有敬畏，但為什么一定要下跪呢？我們的傳統文化在跪拜的問題多少有些矛盾。看來對于廣大實驗中學實行的青年禮中的跪拜禮人們還是有分歧的。

據悉，每年都有些學校熱衷于搞什么“給父母洗腳”之類的活動，并名由感恩教育，還把“給父母洗腳”當做寒假作業或暑假作業布置下去。這些感恩教育與“跪拜禮”本質上并沒有多大的區別。目的是讓孩子養成回歸傳統文化的習慣，感恩父母罷了。

無論是行跪拜禮，還是行洗腳禮，都是教育者為了讓受教育者樹立民主平等的理念，培養他們成為獨立人格的現代公民。或許成不成才并沒有那么重要，別讓孩子成為奴才。

【評語】這則新聞，屬于三類作文。主要原因一：新聞以?弘揚傳統文化 感恩父母——廣東實驗中學首創青年禮?為標題，字里行間沒有孟非博客文章的批駁意味，反倒具有肯定的意味，這與孟非博文的內在含義差距甚遠。此文僅僅寫出了孟非寫博客評論的動機，即評論的由頭(新聞來源)。原因二：在新聞時間上出現嚴重錯誤，五四青年節，顯而易見，應該是5月4日，而非?5月5日?，文章誤將5月5日新快報的報道日期理解為五四青年節的日子，這種失誤在新聞報道中是很忌諱的。原因三：新聞要求依照孟非博文來寫，但這則新聞出現了?記者通過走訪了解……?字眼，顯然是在杜撰，又是新聞寫作的一大忌諱。（當然，還有其他瑕疵，請大家查找。）

第五篇：英語演講稿-林肯

Emily/Canon 2012.12.26

An inspiring person to me(about five minutes)

Ladies and gentlemen:

Good morning!Abraham Lincoln, the sixteenth president of America, possessed a legendary life and exerted a tremendous inspiration on me.It is his story that motivated me and encouraged me when adversities come to me.From him, I come to realize that if one can do something by persistence, then he or she will be extraordinary and succeed sooner or later.Now please allow me to briefly tell you about him.At the age of 22, he suffered a lot from his business, which made him awfully disappointed.Then he turned his mind into being a politician.Unfortunately, without enough economic funding and reputation, he failed again.Defeated twice in one year, he was undoubtedly painful.Subsequently, he decided to run for the election of state legislator for the second time, this time, he succeeded.From then on, he grew a hope that maybe he would rapidly go up in the world.Sadly, another misfortune fell on him after several years, his wife, as well as his spiritual support, passed away because of illness.This might be an extreme shock to him and he was next to collapsed.In 1843, he lost again in his election of American representatives.However, instead of being despair, Abraham Lincoln overcame his depression and turned it into a motivation which eventually led him to become arguably one of the greatest presidents in America.Moreover, he got over constant ridicule during the Civil War even when he was a president.But he never became dejected because of it.Actually, Abraham Lincoln could have given up every time he suffered.But, he faced up to all the difficulties with a brave heart anda strong will.He was one of those who not only looked adversity in an optimistic way but also learned valuable lessons on overcoming difficult circumstances and were able to move ahead.It inspires me a lot.As we all know, 800-meter-race is the necessary item to be tested in every semester, lacking adequate exercise, I always can’t finish the whole race.Since I learned more about Lincoln, every time I want to give up half way, his deeds will linger in my mind, this always supports me to achieve my goals.Never give up and everything is promising.No quitting, so winning.It is the perseverance that keeps bright the key to the door of achievement so we have no reason but to persist in everything we are doing.As Abraham Lincoln himself said, “I am a slow walker, but I never walk backwards.” Facing up difficulties, he didn’t hang back or run away, but hold on and fight for it instead.He had never thought how he should do if he failed again, but just kept on.There is no doubt that Abraham Lincoln is so great that he could inspire us all our life.No matter what time, no matter what may happen, I will never allow myself to give up.This spirit, will become my lifelong navigation.Thank you for your attention.