第一篇：英語作文小整理

第一篇：詞匯篇

1、經濟：

economic globalization（經濟全球化）sustainable development（可持續發展）unfair competition（不正當競爭）crack down on fake commodities（打假）boom（繁榮）fierce competition（激烈競爭）credit crisis（信用危機）stabilize prices（穩定物價）

2、文化：

great and profound（博大精深的）integration and interaction（融合交匯）crash（碰撞）charming（極具魅力的）splendid（壯麗輝煌的）English fever（英語熱）

3、環保：

environment-friendly（生態型的，環保的）threat of global warming（全球變暖的威脅）promote fundamental shifts in the economic system and mode of economic growth（促進經濟體制和經濟增長方式的轉變）curb environmental pollution/ bring the pollution under control（治理環境污染）develop renewable resources（開發可再生資源）a low-carbon economy（低碳經濟）

4、科技：

science and technology（科學技術）web-addiction（沉迷網絡）computer crime（電腦犯罪）e-commerce（電子商務）virtual life（虛擬生活）information era（信息時代）cyber romance（網戀）surf the Internet（網上沖浪）

5、就業：

applicant（申請人）position available/ vacant position（空缺職位）competent（能勝任的）be qualified for（合格的）proficiency（熟練程度）

job arrangement and benefit（工作待遇和福利）promotion(晉升)gender-biased（性別歧視的）appearance-biased（相貌歧視的）

6、大學生活/教育：

cultivate（培養）further one’s study（深造）quality education（素質教育）foster abilities（培養能力）relieve the burden on students（減輕學生負擔）be occupied with so much schoolwork（忙于功課）place emphasis on（以…為重心）comprehensive（全面的，廣泛的）practical capability（實際能力）duck-stuffing（填鴨式）

7、社會現象：

enlightening（富有啟發的）cause alarm and attention（引起了警惕和重視）

set good example for（為…樹立榜樣）dedicate（做貢獻）take action（采取行動）ensure

implementing activities（確保執行）vulnerable（易誘惑的，易受影響的）be supposed to（應該）

8、人物特征、情感描寫：

strong-minded（堅強的）industrious（勤奮的）promising（有前途的）dynamic（有生機的；有活力的）responsible（有責任心的）influential（有影響力的）profound（淵博精深的）devoted（忠實的，投入的）warm-hearted（熱心的）

第二篇：句型詞組搭配

1.隨著經濟的繁榮 with the booming of the economy

2.隨著人民生活水平的顯著提高 with the remarkable improvement of people's living standard

3.先進的科學技術 advanced science and technology

4.為我們日常生活增添了情趣 add much spice / flavor to our daily life

5.人們普遍認為 It is commonly believed that…

6.我同意前者（后者）觀點 I give my vote to the former / latter opinion.7.引起了廣泛的公眾關注 sth.has aroused wide public concern./ sth has drawn great public attention.8.利遠遠大于弊 The advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.9.開闊眼界 widen one's horizon / broaden one's vision

10.考慮到諸多因素 take many factors into consideration

11.從另一個角度 from another perspective

12.致力于/ 投身于 be committed / devoted to…

13.日益激烈的社會競爭 the increasingly keen social competition

14.有其自身的優缺點 has its own merits and demerits / pros and cons

15.對…有害 do harm to / be harmful to / be detrimental to

16.交流思想/ 情感/ 信息 exchange ideas / emotions / information

17.跟上…的最新發展 keep pace with / keep abreast with the latest development of…

18.…的健康發展 the healthy development of…

19.把時間和精力放在…上 focus one's time and energy on…

20.導致很多問題 give rise to / lead to / spell various problems

21.可以替代think的詞 believe, claim, maintain, argue, insist, hold the opinion / belief / view that

22.優先考慮/發展… give(top)priority to sth.23.與…比較 compared with…/ in comparison with 24.提供就業機會 offer job opportunities25、abide by 忠于;遵守(法律、承諾)=be faithful to , obey26、be absent from….缺席，不在，沒到場、沒參加=default27、absence of mind心不在焉= being absent-minded28、be absorbed in 全神貫注于…= be engrossed in;be lost in;be rapt in;be concentrated on;be focused on;be centered on29、(be)abundant in富于,富有=be rich in;be well supplied with

第三章英語寫作中常用連接詞匯總

1.增補(Addition)in addition, furthermore, again, also, besides, moreover, what`s more, similarly, next, finally.2.比較(Comparison)in the same way, likewise, similarly, equally, in comparison, just as

3.對照(Contrast)whereas, in contrast, on the other hand, instead, however, nevertheless, unlike, even though, on the contrary, while

4.因果(Cause and effect)because, because of, for, since, due to, owing to, thanks to, as a result(of), accordingly, hence, so, thus

5.強調(Emphasis)certainly, above all, indeed, of course, surely, actually, as a matter of fact, chiefly, especially, primarily, in particular, undoubtedly, absolutely, most imprtant

6.讓步(Concession)although, though, after all, in spite of, nevertheless, still, provided, while it is true....7.例證(Exemplification)for example, for instance, that is, namely, such as, in other words, in this case, by way of illustration.8.總結(Conclusion)to sum up, to conclude, in a word, in short, in brief, all in all, in all, to put it in a nutshell, in summary

9.推斷(Inference)therefore, as a result(of), consequently, accordingly, so, otherwise

10.時間和空間(Time and space)afterward, after, first, later, then, soon, outside, near, beyound, above, below, on the right(left), in the middle, opposite, in front of

第四章英語作文句型起承轉合起

1、Nowadays, there is a growing concern over the issue of……

2、Recently, the issue of……has been brought to public attention.3、When it come to……,people’s notions may vary from one to another.4、When asked about……,different people will hold different opinions.5、With the development of ^^^,the problem of ^^^ has become increasingly serious.承

1、to understand the point of^^^, it is necessary to discuss/analyze2、there is no doubt that^^^

3、it is reported that4、a close study of^^^will probably make this point clear5、some people hold the view that^^^while other people argue that

轉

1、some people have expressed the opposite opinion

合1、on the basis of the analyses above, we may confidently come to a conclusion that2、all the evidence supports a sound conclusion that3、there is certain truth in both arguments, but I believe the advantages of^^^is

disadvantages4、it’s high time that we tried every means to put an end to^^^ it is obvious that effective measures must be immediately taken to solve the problem

第五章詞語替換

1.individuals, characters, folks替換people ,persons。

2.positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替換good。

3.dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill(有害的)替換bad(如果bad做表語，可以用be less impressive替換)

4.an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most替換many。注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有詞。

5.a slice of, quiet a few 替換some。

6.harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that替換think(因為是書面語，所以要加that)。

7.affair ,business ,matter 替換thing。

8.shared 替代 common。

9.reap huge fruits 替換get many benefits。

10.for my part ,from my own perspective 替換 in my opinion。

11.Increasing(ly)，growing 替換more and more(注意沒有growingly這種形式。所以當修飾名詞時用increasing/growing。修飾形容詞，副詞用increasingly。)

12.little if anything或little or nothing替換hardly。

13.beneficial, rewarding替換helpful。

14.shopper, client, consumer, purchaser 替換customer。

15.overwhelmingly,.exceedingly,.extremely, intensely 替換very。

16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable...替換 unnecessary, avoidable。

17.indispensable替換necessary

18.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替換sb take interest in / sb.be interested in。

19.capture one's attention替換attract one's attention。

20.facet, dimension, sphere代aspect。

21.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear。

22.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替換cause。

23.There are several reasons behind sth 替換..reasons for sth。

24.desire 替換want。

25.pour attention into 替換pay attention to。

26.bear in mind that 替換remember。

27.enjoy, possess 替換have(注意process是過程的意思)。

28.interaction替換communication。

29.frown on sth替換 be against , disagree with sth。

30.to name only a few, as an example替換 for example, for instance。

31.next to / virtually impossible替換nearly / almost impossible。

32.regarding/concerning 替換about。

33.crucial/paramount 替換important。

34.第一(in the first place/the first and foremost);第二(there is one more point ,I should touch on, that…。);第三(the last but not the least)。

35.assiduous替換hard-working

36.arduous替換difficult

37.underdeveloped/financially-challenged 替換poor(因為poor通常含有貶義)

38.demonstrate /manifest 替換show

39.invariably 替換always

40.perilous/hazardous替換dangerous(寫社會類作文時常用，說什么社會現象是不好的，有害的)

41.formidable 替換difficult

42.quintessential 替換typical(舉例時常用，例如：a quintessential example should be cited that=for example;for instance)

43.distinguished 替換famous

44.feasible替換possible

45.consequently, accordingly替換so

★ 形容詞：

1.貧窮的：poor = needy = impoverished = poverty-stricken

2.富裕的：rich = wealthy = affluent = well-to-do = well-off

3.優秀的：excellent = eminent = top = outstanding

4.積極的，好的：good = conducive = beneficial=advantageous

5.消極的，不良的：bad = detrimental= baneful =undesirable

6.明顯的：obvious = apparent = evident =manifest

7.健康的: healthy = robust = sound = wholesome

8.驚人的：surprising = amazing = extraordinary = miraculous

9.美麗的：beautiful = attractive = gorgeous = eye-catching

10.有活力的：energetic = dynamic = vigorous =animated

11.流行的： popular = prevailing = prevalent= pervasiv

★ 動詞：

1.提高，加強：improve = enhance= promote = strengthen = optimize

2.引起：cause = trigger = endanger

3.解決：solve =resolve =address = tackle =cope with = deal with

4.拆除：destroy = tear down = knock down = eradicate

5.培養: develop = cultivate = foster = nurture

6.激發，鼓勵：encourage = motivate = stimulate = spur

7.認為： think = assert= hold = claim = argue

8.完成：complete = fulfill = accomplish= achieve

9.保留：keep = preserve = retain = hold

10.有害于：destroy = impair = undermine = jeopardize

11.減輕: ease = alleviate = relieve = lighten

★ 名詞：

1.影響：influence= impact

2.危險：danger = perils =hazard

3.污染：pollution = contamination4.人類：human beings= mankind = human race

5.老人： old people= the old = the elderly = the aged = senior citizens

6.幸福：happiness = cheerfulness = well-being

7.老師：teachers = instructors = educators = lecturers

8.教育：education = schooling = family parenting = upbringing

9.青少年：young people = youngsters = youths = adolescents

10.優點：advantage = merits = superiority = virtue

11.責任： responsibility = obligation = duty = liability

12.能力： ability = capacity = power = skill

13.職業： job = career = employment = profession

14.娛樂： enjoyment = pastimes = recreation= entertainment

15.孩子： children = offspring = descendant= kid

★ 短語：

1.充滿了：be filled with = be awash with = be inundate with = be saturated with

2.努力：struggle for = aspire after = strive for = spare no efforts for

3.從事： embark on = take up = set about = go in for

4.在當代: in contemporarysociety = in present-day society= in this day and age

5.大量的: a host of = a multitude of = a vast number of = a vast amount of

第六章句型突破---十大功能段落句型

1）話題引出段

Nowadays, there is a growing concern over the issue of ……

People in growing numbers are directing their attention to ……

With the development of ……, the problem of …has become increasingly serious.When it comes to ……, people’s notions may vary from one to another.Recently, a heated discussion has sprung up as to ……

Traditional virtue/value has it that……, yet people are……currently.2）圖畫圖表描述段

As is vividly shown in the picture,……

It is clearly depicted in the picture that……

This picture depicts a thought-provoking scene of ……

According to the figures given in the chart,…..The chart above provides a series of essential figures, illustrating the changes taking place in a time span of …years.3)觀點對比段

Opposite voices are now rising in the debate.Some people firmly believe that…….On the contrary, quite a few people argue that……

The controversial issue has aroused opposite opinions.One focuses on ……..;the other opinion revolves around……

4）利弊列舉段

Every coin has two sides, and this issue is no exception.Above all, …In addition…More importantly… However, the negative influence it renders should not be neglected...not only …but also

Is this phenomenon a blessing or a curse.? The following list of advantages and disadvantages can explain everything.5）舉例說明段

For instance;Take…for an example;A case in point is……

The following illustrations can serve as strong evidence of the phenomenon.6）原因列舉段

Why should this phenomenon take place? There are generally three factors accounting for it.Having taken everything into consideration, we may attribute the sharp change to three aspects.7）意義闡釋段

The purpose of the picture is to show us that due attention has to be paid to….The fact/phenomenon that……indicates that … …

Having scrutinized the details of the picture, we can discuss the implications subtly conveyed from it.8）歸納結論段

In conclusion,In my opinion,As far as I am concerned,Taking into account all the analyses above, we may confidently come to the conclusion that……

9）預測趨勢段

There is no denying that ……will continue increasing/decreasing in the better/worse direction.Undoubtedly, the tendency reflected from the chart will undergo a continuous increase/decrease in the near future.10）建議措施段

Therefore, it is imperative that we should take some drastic measures.As far as I am concerned, two effective measures must be immediately taken to pull through the crisis.第七章

1）表示感謝（私人建議信除外）

My appreciation to you for your generous help is beyond words.Words fail me when I want to express my sincere gratitude to you.I take this opportunity to show my heartfelt appreciation for the kind assistance you rendered me.2）期待回信

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.第八章特殊難句

1.倒裝句Thepastfew years havewitnessed a sharp increase in the production of …

Onlyin this way can we solve this problem.Only by these means can laid-off workers shrug off poverty and regain their dignity in life.So considerably have the resources been wasted that China is now facing a serious crisis.2.強調句

In conclusion,it is through persistent work that we can grasp a large vocabulary.3.虛擬句

Given all the arguments above,it is high time that authorities launched a campaign against corruption.Therefore,it is imperative that we should take some effective measures.4.雙重否定句

Hardly can anyone achieve success without opportunity and teamwork.5.插入語結構

The two men,disabled and left in the wilderness,support each other with firm hands.

第二篇：英語小作文

1、A Happy Day

2、A Little Wish

3、A Pen and a Pencil

4、Fly Kites

5、Four Seasons

6、Have a fun holiday

7、I Like My Village

8、My Bedroom

9、My Best Friend

10、My Best Friends

11、My Dog

12、My Dream

13、My English Teacher

14、My Family 1

15、My Family 2

16、My Family 3

17、My Favourite Sport

18、My Favourite stamp

19、My Good Friend 1 20、My Good Friend 2

21、My Grandfather's Garden

22、My Hometown.23、My Little Cat

24、My Lovely Home

25、My School

26、My Uncle

27、My Winter Holiday

28、Myself

29、Spring

A Happy Day The weather is getting hotter and hotter.The summer holiday is coming.What a happy day!Birds are singing in the trees.Butterflies are dancing in the garden.Children are playing in the park.Some boys are playing on the slide(滑梯).Some boys are listening to music.Other boys are reading under the big tree.Some girls are drawing pictures.Other girls are playing on the swings(秋千).I like roller-skating(滑旱冰)in the square.And my classmates are playing football.We are very happy!

點評臺：這篇文章描寫了同學們和自己在假期里快樂的一天，表達了他們對假期的喜愛以及在假期里自由自在、放松自我的心情。讀后有種很想加入他們當中，與他們分享快樂的愿望。整篇文章用詞準確，語言生動，中心明確、突出，是一篇很成功的文章。文章級別：A。

A Little Wish Look!What's that? It is our homeland's spaceship.The spaceship is as bright as the stars.It can move.I am proud of our astronaut because I have a wish.I want to be an astronaut.In space, there are many materials.If I were an astronaut, I will be able to know more about space.I think the scene will be very great.On the one hand, I am going to enjoy the scene of the earth.On the other hand, I am going to see some stars.This is my wish.I hope my wish will come true!

點評中心：文章題材新穎，標新立意，讓我們了解到雖然只是一個小小的愿望但卻包含了對探索宇宙的好奇及對我們地球家園的熱愛，同時也感受到小作者立志成為一名宇航員的偉大理想。最后希望小作者能夠再接再勵，寫出更多、更優秀的小文章，同時也祝愿你夢想成真！

A Pen and a Pencil

I have a pen and a pencil.The pen is very nice, but the pencil is so dirty.One day, the pen met the pencil.The pen said to the pencil:“ What a dirty pencil!” The pencil said :“Yes.I'm dirty.But I can write words.” “I can write words，too.Now,let's see who can write more words.”

They began to write.They wrote and wrote.The pen wrote lots of words on the paper.The pencil wrote lots of words on the paper, too.After a long time ,the pen hadn't any ink(鋼筆水)left(剩下).The pencil became short, but he could still write.At last ,the pencil won.The pencil said :“Ha ha...ha ha...Who won, you or me ?”The pen drooped(低下)his head.Then he said to the pencil :“I shouldn't laught at(嘲笑)you.You are good, too.”

點評臺：這是一篇很成功的文章。文章不僅立意新穎，更重要的是寓意深刻。同時，也能看出小作者有著豐富的想象力。希望在今后的學習中充分發揮自己的想象，寫出更多、更好的文章。文章級別：A。

Fly Kites Today is a shining day, the sky is blue, the wind is strong.My grandfather and I are going to the park to fly kites.My grandfather takes me to the People's Park.We fly my “Rocket”.“The wind is too strong, the kite can't fly!” I say.My grandfather looks and says, “Let me try!” “Sure!” So my grandfather catches the string and I hold the kite.“Follow me, one, two, three, run!” I run with my grandfather quickly.Oh!It's so wonderful!The kite is flying up with the wind.I am so happy and ask my grandfather, “Why can't I fly it up, but you can?” My grandfather says with a smile on his face, “Because you fly the kite against the wind.” “Oh, I see.” I nod my head happily.We play in the park until late.We enjoy ourselves.點評中心：小作者用平實的語言描述了風箏從飛不上天到飛上天的過程，特別生動、形象，同時又結合小作者與爺爺的對話，讓人看完以后有種身臨其境的感覺，仿佛放風箏的活動歷歷在目。

Four Seasons

Spring is green.Do you know why? It is because when spring is here, the plants and the trees sprout new leaves and turn green.The flowers start to blossom.It is so beautiful and green everywhere.Summer is bright.Can you guess the reason? It is because when summer arrives, the sun is shining.For the very strong sunlight, everything is bright.How beautiful and bright it is!Autumn is golden.Why is this? It's because when autumn comes, the wind blows through the golden trees and carries the golden leaves away, flowing slowly down to the ground one after another and thickly covering the ground.It is golden everywhere.Winter is white.Why? It's because when winter reaches us, the white snowflakes fly slowly down, so pure and white.The wide fields and the great high mountains all wear white coats.Oh!The four seasons are all beautiful and charming.I like spring, summer, autumn and winter, but spring, the best!For spring is full of life.點評中心:小作者以“四季”為題目,開篇直接切入四個季節,以闡述四季的不同為主線,分別進行描述.文章用詞準確,語言豐富、生動,語法基本正確.希望繼續努力,成為未來的作家。

Have a fun holiday!Come to Shenzhen and have a fun holiday.Shenzhen is a new and modern city.The weather here is very pleasant.The trees and grass are green every season.In spring, the weather is warm.You can go hiking.In summer, the weather is hot, but you can go to the beautiful beach.You can swim there.You can make a sandcastle(沙堆城堡), too.In autumn.the weather is cool, but not dry.You can fly kites in the parks.In winter, it's not cold.You don't need to put on more clothes.You can play sports then.There is lots of delicious food here.You can drink morning tea and afternoon tea.You can eat seafood(海鮮), too.In Shenzhen there are many famous places.You can go to the Window of the World.You can go to Happy Valley, too.Don't wait.Come to Shenzhen and have fun, fun and fun!點評中心:通過對深圳四季的描寫,給我們展現出了一幅四季如春的美麗畫面。在深圳,可以到海邊堆沙堡, 可以吃海鮮, 還可以去美麗的世界之窗游玩…… 所有這些都深深地吸引著小讀者們,不愧為一篇成功的小作文。

I Like My Village Hello,dear friends!Welcome to my village.It's big and beautiful!I like it very much.Look!There are many houses in the village.They are small.There are many high and beautiful mountains near the houses.There is a big forest behind the houses.There are many big trees in it.There are many rivers in front of the houses.The water is clean.There are many fish in the rivers.There are many bridges over the rivers.There are many big trees on the river banks.And there is grass and flowers on it.The grass is green.The flowers are colourful and beautiful.There is a lake in the village.There are many ducks in the lake.The sky is blue.The rivers flow.The air is fresh and clean.My village is very beautiful!I like it very much!

點評中心：I Like My Village。本篇文章采用生動、細致的描寫方法，勾勒出一幅美麗、和諧的鄉村圖畫。文章在用詞方面比較準確，多處采用There be句型。但有些地方可用連詞連接，無需再重復使用There be句型。

My Bedroom My name is Mike.I have a comfortable bedroom.There is a desk, a bookshelf and a bed in my bedroom.I do my homework in my bedroom every evening.The desk is in front of the bookshelf.There are many textbooks, English books and story books on the shelf.My bed is near the windows.There are some flowers on the windowsill.The curtain and the sheets of my bedroom are blue.Because my favourite colour is blue, too.Dear friend, do you like my bedroom? 點評中心：My Bedroom針對自己臥室里的幾件物品進行了介紹，為同學們展示了一個干凈舒適的小天地，值得一提的是文中使用了一些生詞，使文章增色不少。在這里建議其他同學學習，努力多掌握些單詞，從而寫出更加精彩的英語作文。“Very Good!”。

My Best Friend Ma Qi is my best friend.She is a girl.she is ten years old.She has short black hair and big eyes.she likes to sing.Ma Qi and I are in the same class.We always study, draw pictures and play ping-pong together.After the school, we often go to the park.We often play a game of Hide And Seek there.We have a good time.點評臺: My Best Friend語言流暢，敘述清楚，描述了自己與好朋友一起學習、生活的快樂時光，如果小作者能夠運用已學過的知識再對好朋友的外貌特征和衣著作一番細致地描寫的話，相信文章內容就會更加充實。“Good!”。千萬不要驕傲呀，還要繼續練習寫作，使自己能夠寫出更好的文章。

My Best Friends

Jim and Kim are my best friends.Jim is short, thin and quiet.But Kim is tall and strong ,but not fat.After class, Jim is different from Kim and I.Kim and I like to play soccer.We often kick the ball on the playground.But Jim doesn't play with us.He likes to read books in the library.Sometimes he likes to listen to music.In the evening, Jim often helps Kim and me with our English.We talk a lot and laugh a lot.We are best friends.點評臺：向大家介紹了自己的兩個好朋友。語言流暢，用詞準確，沒有語法錯誤，字里行間能體會到小作者與兩位好朋友之間的深厚友情。另外，從整篇文章中也可以看出小作者的英語基礎知識掌握得很牢。希望今后的學習中寫出更多，更好的文章。文章級別：A。

My Dog Hello, everyone!I am Wang Ze.My English name is Mike.I have a cat and a dog.I like my cat, but I like my dog better than my cat.My dog is two years old.It has two black eyes, a black nose and a small mouth.Its body is white.It is as white as snow.My dog is very lovely.I like my dog very much.點評臺：文章My Dog首先向讀者問候，并簡單介紹了自己，隨后通過簡略的描寫使一只可愛的小狗形象躍然紙上，能夠吸引讀者的注意力。對于初學者而言，能寫出這樣的習作確實不容易，值得大家學習。“Good！”，繼續加油啊！

My Dream I am a handsome boyl.My name is Mike.I like drawing.My dream is to have a white house with a white wall, a white roof, a white floor.I can draw a red car on the wall, and I can drive the car around the world.I can draw a plane on the roof, and I want to take the plane to the sky.i can draw a sailing-boat on the floor, and I want to take the sailing-boat across the sea.點評臺:這篇作文“My Dream”，形式新穎，風格獨特，用詞得當，語句通順。此文章充分地體現了小作者豐富的想象力和較強的寫作能力，是一篇成功的文章。同時，希望張燦小朋友能堅持練習英文寫作，相信你一定會寫出更好的英語作文。“Very good!”。

My English Teacher Miss Shan is my English teacher.She has two big eyes.She is thin and short.Her hair is very long.She is very beautiful.Her English is very good.She always play games with us in English class.So her class is very interesting and shi is kind to us.She like us and we like her too.I like my English teacher.How about you? 點評中心: 文章寫得比較簡單,詞語使用準確, 語言樸實無華,字里行間表達了小作者對英語老師的喜愛之情, 但不夠具體, 如果能指出老師的愛好、習慣等，文章會更加充實，希望你繼續努力,寫出更加優秀的文章來。

My Family I have a happy family.There are six people in my family.They are grandpa, grandma, father, mother, elder sister and I.My name is Yang Yuan.I am a pupil, I'm in Grade 5.I like English very much, I read them every morning.I often listen to the English tape.My grandpa is an accountant(會計).He is very busy.My grandma is a farmer.She does the housework.My mother is a farmer, too.She cooks every day.My father is a worker.In the evening he likes watching TV.While he is watching TV, he often tells us not to talk.My elder sister is a middle school student, she isn't good at English, but she likes maths very much.All of them love me, and I love them, too.I have a happy family.I love my family.點評中心:這篇文章主要描寫了家庭成員的職業，My Family更適合做這篇文章的標題，整篇文章條理清楚，語言簡練，用詞準確，沒有語法錯誤，可見小作者的英語語言基本功很好，希望楊園同學在今后的學習中繼續發揚這個優點，不要驕傲，寫出更多的好文章。文章級別:B。

My Family Hello, everyone!Today I am going to talk about my family.My name is Mike.I am in Class 1, Grade 4.l like English very much.I like hamburgers.I have a happy family.There are three people in my family.Look, this is my father.He has two brown eyes, a big nose and a small mouth.He is an engineer.He is very handsome.Look, that is my mother.She has two big eyes.She is an engineer too.She is very pretty and kind.My family is not big, but we have many friends.We are happy.I love them very much and they love me too.講評中心：文章寫得比較簡煉，詞語使用準確，語言生動，字里行間表達了小作者對家人的愛。但不要驕傲，繼續努力啊！文章級別：A。

My Family There are three people in my family, my father, my mother and I.My father is a driver.He is 37 years old.He like eating oranges.My mother is a worker.She like eating apples.My name is Mike.I am 9 years old.I am in Class 3, Grade 3.l like eating hamburgers.I am good at English.I study hard every day.點評中心：My Family 語言流暢，描寫得當，用平實的語言向讀者介紹了家庭中的每一位成員的基本情況，美中不足之處就是缺乏對家人之間和睦關系的描述，使文章略顯平淡了一些。“Good！”,還要繼續努力啊

My Favourite Sport My favourite sport is swimming.I often swim in the pool.I swim twice a week.When I am swimming in the pool, I am very happy.I look like a lovely fish in the pond.I enjoy swimming, because swimming can make me strong and healthy.It can also bring me a lot of happiness.Of course, I like watching this sport.I hope I will become a swimmer in the future.點評中心:這篇小文章語言精煉、準確,短短幾句便勾畫出了一幅生動、活潑的畫面。

My Favourite stamp I have a lot of stamps and my favourite stamp is an animal stamp.Look, there is a chick in this stamp.The chick has a red cockscomb, two bright eyes, a long neck and a short tail.Its feathers are yellow and brown.This stamp is very beautiful.I like this stamp very much.Miss Wang點評臺集郵不僅可以增長我們的見識，同時也可以陶冶我們的情操。本文的小作者就是一個集郵愛好者，看小作者所描述的小雞郵票多么可愛呀！感興趣的小朋友可以試著收集郵票啊！Miss Wang要獎給姚晗小朋友一個“Very Good!”,繼續加油啊！

My Good Friend Hello!My name is Maggie.I have a good friend.Her Chinese name is Wang Qi.Her English name is Mary.She likes fruit very much.Her favourite color is blue.She is very beautiful.She has small eyes and wears a pair of glasses.She has two small ears, a small nose and a lovely mouse.She is very tall.She likes swimming and playing football.She is a good student.We are in the same school and the same class.But we are not in the same row.I like her very much.We always play together.講評中心：文章比較詳盡、完整地描述了她的好朋友的特征，包括了好朋友的外貌、喜好等，文章詞語使用準確、語法正確、主題突出，“Good!”，不要驕傲，繼續努力啊！

My Good Friend I have a good friend.Her name is Zhang Hong.She is 9 years old.She is a pretty girl.She has long hair and big beautiful eyes.They look like stars.Her favourite colour is pink.Her favourite animals are cats and rabbits.She likes to play badminton very much.Her favourite class is English.She studies very hard.She is a good student.I love her very much.I will learn from her.本文圍繞My Good Friend這一主題，運用所學英語知識，針對好朋友的外貌、愛好進行介紹，為讀者展示了一個活潑、可愛的小女孩形象。Miss Wang要獎給孟婷婷同學一個“Very Good！”。同時，孟婷婷同學也要繼續努力練習英文寫作呀！My Grandfather's Garden

My grandfather has a small garden.There are many flowers in it.I think all the flowers are beautiful.My grandfather gets up early every mor-ning.First, he goes to his garden to have a look at the flowers.Then, he waters them.When he waters the flowers, he feels very happy.My sister and I like the garden very much.We often play in it.Sometimes we water the flowers and catch worms for them.One day, my brother picked a flower.My grandfather was very angry and sad.He said to my brother, “My child, don't pick the flowers.That's not a good deed(行為).” My brother felt very sorry for that.And we all didn't pick flowers from then on.The flowers in my grandfather's garden are more and more beautiful now.I like my grandfather's garden.點評臺：向大家描寫了爺爺的花園，雖沒有太多華麗的詞語，但能使讀者感受到花園的美麗和花兒的芳香。通過描寫爺爺對花園的精心料理以及對弟弟的教育，能看出本篇文章不僅僅是寫爺爺的花園，也從字里行間中看出了小作者對爺爺的敬佩之情。文章條理清楚、意思連貫，沒有語法錯誤，是一篇很成功的文章，希望再接再勵！文章級別：A。

My Hometown My hometown-Kaiping is a very beautiful city.It is located(座落)in the southwest(西南)part of Guangdong Province(省).My hometown is famous for Diaolous.Ruishi Tower is one of the Diaolous(Please look at the picture.).It was built in 1923.The top of the tower looks like the Italy stronghold(堡壘).It is tall and magnificent(雄偉的).People praise(贊揚)it for “the No.1 Tower” of Kaiping.I like my hometown.點評臺：小作者的My Hometown主要描寫了家鄉著名的碉樓，其中重點向大家介紹了“開平第一樓”--瑞石樓，抒發了自己對家鄉的熱愛之情。整篇文章語句連貫，沒有語法錯誤。文章中出現了一些生詞，可見小作者是用心查字典了，希望小作者繼續發揚這個好習慣，并寫出更多的好文章與大家分享。文章級別：A。

My Little Cat Hello!I'm Becky.This is my little cat.I like it very much.Its name is Do Re Mi.It's very beautiful.It's gray.It has triangular(三角形的)ears, round eyes,a black nose and a small mouth.My mother calls it “Little Baby”.When I'm at home,it often follows me in and out.My little cat loves to eat fish and sleep a lot.It's very fat,but it's nimble(機敏的).One day,I saw it run fast in the sitting room.I thought it might find a mouse.It was running after the mouse.They looked like playing hide-and-seek.About three minutes later,it brought me the mouse.I was happy.So I touched it with a smile.“You have done a good job,Little Baby.” I said.Then it jumped up and down and ran away.Do you like my little cat?Tell me, please.點評中心:向大家介紹了小貓的外貌，還主要描寫了小貓在某一天捉老鼠的情景。整篇文章主次分明，語言簡煉、生動，沒有語法錯誤。同時，字里行間能使讀者感受到小作者對小貓的喜愛之情。

My Lovely Home I live in a small village named Fengyi.I live in an old building.It was built in 1999.It has three floors.On the first floor, there is a big living room, a kitchen and a bathroom.On the second floor, there are altogether three bedrooms.One for my grandma, one for my parents, another for me.On the third floor, there is an attic.It's my study, it's quiet.I like to study there.When I am tired, I can rest in the balcony.There is some beautiful old furniture, it's tidy.My parents clean it every day.I can also do some housework.My friends, do you love my home?

點評中心：My Lovely Home開篇直接切入本文主題，首先從房子的結構開始介紹，句子簡潔、通順，接著又重點描述了與自己有關的幾個房間，語言生動、貼切，最后又抒發了自己對家的熱愛。

My School Hello, friends!Welcome to my school.My school is beautiful and very big.There are many rooms in the school building.My classroom is on the sixth floor.There are sixty-nine students in my class.You can see many desks, chairs, a blackboard, three fans, two windows, four lights and a teacher's desk.My seat is near the door.The computer room is on the third floor.There are many computers in it.I like playing computer games very much!The canteen(食堂)is on the first floor.We have lunch there.Look!This is the playground.We often play games on it.There are many flowers in the garden, some are red, some are yellow...I have a good time every day in my school.I like my school very much.點評臺：文章向大家描述了他學校的教室，食堂，微機室以及操場，其中重點描寫了自己的班級，主次分明，層次清晰，正確地運用了There be句型和一般現在時時態，是一篇很成功的文章，文章級別：A。

My Uncle My uncle is a professor.His name is Chen Hao.He teaches Chinese in a university.He is tall and thin.He wears a pair of glasses.He likes reading.He has a big study at home.It's very bright.There are many books in his study.He often reads and writes in his study.He is kind to his students, so his students like him very much.He is very kind to me, too.He often sends me books.I like him, too.點評中心：本篇小文章描寫的是小作者的叔叔，首先從她叔叔的職業、外貌開始描寫，接著又描寫了她叔叔的愛好--讀書與寫作。表達了小作者對其叔叔的崇拜與敬仰之情。文章條理清晰，用詞準確，無語法錯誤，是一篇較優秀的文章。

My Winter Holiday This winter holiday, I went to Kunming with my family.Kunming is a very beautiful city, I think.The sky is blue and the air is clean.You can see many kinds of nice flowers everywhere.The weather there is great.It's never too hot or too cold all the year round, so people always call it “Spring City”.Kunming is surrounded(圍繞)by beautiful scenery.And one of the most famous views is “The Stone Forest”.It is really scenic(自然風景的).We just stayed in Kunming for six days, but I felt very happy, and I like Kunming very much.點評中心：寒假雖然已經過去一個多月了，但是在這個假期所發生的事大家是否還都銘記在心呢？作者就把她的這份心情用筆記錄了下來。小作者通過在寒假期間去美麗的春城--昆明游玩，抒發了對美好自然風光的熱愛。文章生動、形象，用詞準確。

Myself Look at this photo.A little boy is climbing a tree.Who is the boy? Guess, please!Yes, it's me.My name is Zhu Shaoyu.I'm ten years old.I'm very naughty and smart.I have big eyes and short black hair.I'm thin and tall.I'm a student.I'm in Xia Zhuang Primary School, Qing Zhou City.I'm in Class One, Grade Five.My favourite subject is English.I study English very hard.I think nothing is difficult, if I put my heart into it.Now I can speak English well.I obtained the First Award in the 2003 National English Competition for Primary School Students.I will study harder in future.My favourite master of ceremonies is Li Yong, because he is very funny.My favourite newspaper is English Coaching Paper, because it gives me a lot of knowledge.It makes me learn English better.My favourite food is hamburger, because it is very delicious.I like its taste.Do you like me? Would you like to make friends with me?

點評臺：幾乎每個人都很了解自己，所以要是介紹自己，可寫的內容很多。但小作者并沒有平均分配筆墨，而是重點描寫了自己的幾個“最喜歡”。整篇文章條理清楚、重點突出、語言流暢、用詞準確，可以說寫得很成功。希望同學們向朱劭宇同學學習，寫出一篇篇精彩的文章與大家共同分享。文章級別：A。

Spring I like spring because spring is beautiful.Many flowers are very lovely.Some grass and trees turn green.Look!A little girl is flying a kite with her father.She likes to fly kites.Her father is smiling.It's very warm today.So there're a lot of birds flying in the sky.They're playing together.They look very happy.A breeze is blowing over the land.The sunlight is soft.A clear river is flowing.How beautiful the spring is!點評臺:這篇文章篇幅雖短卻寫出了春天的生機與活力.特別是小作者著重描寫了春天里的某一天,使整篇文章的中心更加明確.用詞準確、生動,沒有語法錯誤也是這篇文章的另一優點.文章級別:A.29

第三篇：英語小作文模版（范文）

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一、辭職信 Dear()，I am much grateful to be employed by you two months ago as a(n)().I appreciate the opportunity of having worked here with you and other collages.The experiences will be unforgettable throughout my life.However, as a young man whose primary interest is in()rather than(), I find my present job does not fall in with my previous training and strength.I therefor decide to quite my former preparation.Please accept my sincere apologies for any inconveniences my leaving may incur.Yours truly，Li Ming

二、咨詢信

Dear Sir or Madam，I am a(n)().I would be very grateful if you would be kind enough to provide me essential information about().I would be much obliged to you if you could let me know the procedures I have to go through.Also I would appreciate it if you could send me()at your earliest conveniences.By the way, as the Chinese New Year is quickly approaching, I take this opportunity to send my best wishes to you for 2014.I sincerely look forward to continued friendly ties with you.With best wishes!Yours truly，Li Ming

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三、建議信

Dear Sir or Madam，I am a(n)().I would like to express my sincere gratitude to you；however, I have some suggestions for you to adopt.And I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions into consideration.To begin with, will you please(極其簡要說一點).Moreover,(再簡要說一點).If you are so kind as to adopt my suggestions, I would be greatly pleased.I hope you will find my these suggestions practical.Your prompt attention to my suggestions would be highly appreciated.Yours truly，Li Ming

四、投訴信

Dear Sir or Madam，I regret to inform you that I am really disappointed with().It was somewhat irritating to find that the()you send to me was really unacceptable.The()was a great disappointment, for when it arrived, it was far behind the date you promised to send it to me.Besides, it is not practical.I would greatly appreciate your doing whatever you can to send me a replacement and refund my postage(1 yuan).I also hope to draw the attention of the authorities concerned.I am looking forward to an early reply.Yours truly，Li Ming

五、祝賀信 Dear()，I am much grateful to learn the good news that you(說明一下他獲得了什么獎勵).I know all along that you have a real talent to achieve this, but this proves that it is more than just talent.You have worked really hard in the past years and devoted most of your time and energy to your work.I join with all your friends in offering you my heartiest congratulations.Your achievement is an example to us all.I also believe this will be a new beginning and a chance for you.Yours truly，Li Ming

六、邀請信 Dear()，It is with great pleasure that I invite you to attend()as we think is would be a good idea if you can join us.It is simply beautiful here now, with everything in bloom!The()will start at 8:30 p.m.and we hope nothing will prevent you from coming, as we are looking forward to your visit and I know your friends are looking forward to seeing you again, too.Be sure to let us know which bus you are taking so that I can meet you at the station.Yours truly，Li Ming

七、致歉信 Dear()，I am writing this letter to inform you that I wish to express my sincere apology to you for I(說明致歉的具體事由).To solve it,(寫一個簡潔解決方法).If there are any other solutions you like, please let me know.I am awfully sorry for this terrible mistake and any possible inconveniences incurred by it.And I will not hesitate to guarantee that such mistake will never happen again in the further.Yours truly，Li Ming

八、感謝信 Dear()，I am told by Tom that you were the good-hearted soul who(說明我為什么感謝他).If it had not been for your timely assistance, I feat that I can not().However, with the help of yours, everything is OK.I am most appreciative of everything you did for me.I do not know if this is a compliment or not, but you did things just as I would have done.Do call on me if I can ever return the favor.Yours truly，Li Ming

九、求職信 Dear()，I have learned from the newspaper that you are employing a(n)().I am very interested in this position.I graduated from Nanjing University, holding a bachelor’s degree.To begin with, I have obtained certificates of CET-4 and CET-6, I find myself fluent in both spoken and written English.In addition, I have worked as a()for a big company in Nanjing for many years, so I have some understanding of this position and its routines and duties.Your prompt attention to me would be highly appreciated.Yours truly，Li Ming

十、慰問信 Dear()，I am so sorry to learn of the unfortunate news that(具體不幸的事情).I hope you won’t feel too discouraged by it.On the one hand, you have so many friends who love you so much.On the other hand, sunshine is behind the rain, tomorrow is another day.Therefore , everything will be OK soon.I do hope that you will soon recover completely.By the way, as the Chinese New Year is quickly approaching, I take this opportunity to send my best wishes to you for 2014.I sincerely look forward to continued friendly ties with you.With best wishes!Yours truly，Li Ming

說明，這十篇小作文中有2篇小作文的結尾是這一句：“By the way, as the Chinese New Year is quickly approaching, I take this opportunity to send my best wishes to you for 2014.I sincerely look forward to continued friendly ties with you.With best wishes!”這一句可以用于任何一篇小作文的結尾。靈活使用。

第四篇：英語小作文

What is your favorite job? Reasons?

Different people have different choice to job.My favorite job is to be a teacher.because I think they are great and I love children very much.Nowadays, teachers become more and more important to the national education and the development of children.Without teacher there won't be future of education.So teacher is the most glorious career under the sun.Working with the children is an interesting thing, so I will be happy every day.If I become a teacher, I will make my best to teach my students and make contributions to the development of education.不同的人有不同的選擇到另一種工作。我最喜歡的工作是一名老師,因為我認為他們是偉大的,我愛孩子們很開心。如今,教師成為越來越重要的國家教育和孩子的成長。要是沒有老師不會有未來的教育。所以老師是最光榮的職業在太陽下。孩子們一起工作是一件有趣的事,所以我要開心快樂每一天。

然而,這不是輕易地就能成為一名好老師在這個競爭激烈的社會。它需要我們有非凡的質量和全面的知識。我決定努力學習在我的職業和實現我的愿望也來當一名老師。如果我成為一名教師,我必使我的全力來教我的學生,為教育的發展。

1.Do guns protect people or harm people? Reasons? [選一種寫]

With the recent school shooting in many places, questions about gun have begun to circulate.People have started to point out all of the incidents in the last decade that have caused many innocent lives lost due to a gun being in the wrong hands.But people need to realize that it is not the fault of the gun that causes countless deaths and injuries, but the fault of those who abuse the use of guns.Guns have the reputation of taking lives, and this reputation may correspond with the severity of the crimes that have been committed in our society.However, it needs to be known that there is a better chance of a gun saving a life than a gun taking the life of an innocent.Guns, when used correctly, can stop a criminal from killing a room full of hostages, save the lives of a family when their house is invaded, or provide a substantial part of our food and nutrition through hunting.So I am not agreeing with the opinion that guns harm people.近期校園槍擊事件在許多地方,關于槍已經開始流通。人們已經開始指出所有的事件在過去十年中,引起了許多無辜的生命損失掉一把槍在錯誤的手里。但是人們需要意識到這不是故障導致無數的槍死亡和受傷,但那些濫用的過錯使用槍支。槍有殺害生命的聲譽,這可能與名譽罪行的嚴重性已經發生在我們的社會。然而,它需要知道有一個更好的機會拯救一個生命的槍比槍以一個無辜的生命。槍支,如果操作正確,可以阻止一個罪犯殺死這個滿屋子的人質,拯救生命的一個家庭在他們家被侵入,或提供的相當一部分我們的食物和營養通過打獵。所以我不贊同的危害人們認為槍支。

3.How can people become more creative? Reasons

Being a creative person can help you to be a better employee, a better problem solver and an all around more effective person in anything you choose to do.Creativity can be expressed in many different ways.Plus, there are many techniques you can use to

develop and nurture your natural creativity.If you long to be more creative, first, think of yourselfas creative.We all have the spark of creativity inside us;Then, Put your new ideas into action.Don't worry what other people will think.By trying out your creative ideas, even if you don't succeed at first, you'll learn something and give your creativity a chance to flourish.The last but not the least, Take a break!If you're stuck for ideas, don't sit there in your workspace staring at the walls.Even the most creative people need to take some time off.This can allow a blocked well of creativity to flow again.作為一個有創造力的人能幫助你成為一個更好的(和更高的支付)的人,一個更好的問題解決者和一個更有效的人周圍任何你如何選擇。創造力可以用很多不同的方式。另外,有許多的技術,你可以用它來培養和發展你自然的創造力。如果你渴望的是更有創意,首先,把你自己當成有創造力。我們都有創造力的火花在我們里面.然后,把你的新想法付諸行動。別擔心別人的想法。當孩子們嘗試著自己創造性的想法,即使你不成功,首先,你會學到一些東西,給你的創造力有機會興盛。最后但不可忽略的是,休息一下吧!如果你困擾,不要坐在那里盯著墻上你的工作場所。即使最具創意的人需要請假。這可以讓一個封鎖的創造力再次流動。如果你渴望的是更有創意,首先,把你自己當成有創造力。

第五篇：英語小作文

一、辭職信

Dear Manager Wang, I am writing this letter to extend my rough decision for quitting the job.I really hope that you could take into account my grieving situation as losing orientation in the work.Honestly speaking, my salary appears remarkably low compared with other same-level co-workers’.After all, I have got a Bachelor’s degree so that I should have earned a little bit more.However, a merelyhumble position was given to me here.It is a great pity that I have difficulties(in)finding anyopportunity to get self-promotion.Actually, it takes me a lot of time to make up my mind for departure.Thank you a lot for granting me chances to share many brilliant experiences here in such a long time.Wish our corporation a moresplendid-shining future.sincerely yours, Li Ming Case:

1、quit job（辭職）practical 生活化

I、migrate to another city to fight for the common ideal with my girlfriend.II、find it difficult to get along with my immediate manager／ immediate superior.III、need more challenge, I’m a person who is full of passion, personality and endurance.一、感謝信 范文（背）： Dear _______，I’m writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your kindness in taking care of me after that unfortunate accidentthe other day when I was knocked down by a cab.If it had not been for your assistance in giving me first aidand taking me to a nearby hospital, I fear that the consequences might have been much more serious.The doctor says my broken leg is healing well.Additionally, the insurance company has agreed topay my hospital bills.Everyone surrounding maintains that it was your quick-witted response in this emergency that has contributed to this satisfactory outcome.Although nowadays many people talk about the need to be unselfish, we witness few people practicing what they are preaching.However, you demonstrated by your actions that you are an exception.yours, Li Ming 道歉信

1、開頭套話：

I am writing this letter to express my apology for having no time to pick up you this Friday when you are supposed to be in _NC______.2、結尾套話：

Once again, I would apologize for my malpractice in V+ing.Wish you forgive any inconvenience(which is)caused by me.四, 建議信

1、開頭：

（1）回復建議： I’m writing this letter in reply to your question about(此處說明是什么問題，用陳述句）

eg,.Whether to study abroad or pursue knowledge in domestic atmosphere.（2）自建信： As a warm-hearted and responsible reader/would-be graduate/citizen, I have paid a lot of attention to … so that I feel liable to pose some constructive suggestions to optimize / promote / rectify… as follows.2、中間：

（1）It would be beneficial if you could …（2）For the sake of...may I suggest you...Eg: For the sake of courtesy may we suggest you urinate into the lavatory.3、結尾：

I’m sure you will take my suggestions into account.／ I hope that you will find my proposals／ suggestions practical／ reliable／ helpful.If there is any confusion found, please with no hesitation to contact me for discussing further details.五、倡議信

1、開頭：

I am writing this letter to call on people in every walk of life to perk up and make efforts/dedication for the coming ….Shanghai Expo.Non-smoking era era of every elder’s virtual dependence to the adult child

2、中間：

先寫具體建議(參考建議信)再寫過渡句: Actually, we will not be making preparation merely for preparation’s sake.After ________, I have all the reasons to be optimistic that 句子.3、結尾：

Please join us in the action and switch our excitement into a sense of spirit that dares any possible difficulties!Thank you for your attention!NOTICE

1、失物招領（Lost and Found）C:你撿到了一個電子詞典)time and place(盡量寫成一句)2)特點： the feature of this electronic dictionary ★ 3)your information for contact Lost and Found To whom it may concern，On the evening of Nov.4th, 2008, I found an ED(Electronic Dictionary)in the English—reading room on the 3rd floor of the new library in the East district of our university.The ED can be generally described as follows.First, it is brand new and metallic gray／ chocolate black in color.Furthermore, this portable ED is as big as a piece of Moon Cake and as thin as a regular magazine.What’s more, there is a well-known cartoon image adhered to／ attached to its back.Here is the question, could you pleasetell me who it is? If you could, definitely, you must be the person who it belongs to.The owner of this ED may contact me via the phone number xxx.Please make an appointment in advance through short message.Sincerely yours, Li Ming

2、出售書本通知

⑴、make a self-introduction(介紹自己)⑵、introduce your reference books(參考書)⑶、your way for contact(n.)A Notice of Sales To whom it may concern, I am a senior in the Computer Science Department of...university.I will graduate next summer so that I write this notice to sell some of my old but classic reference books.Being sold at an incredibly low discount, my valuable reference books cover several scientific fields including biology, astronomy, mathematics and many of my major books, some of which are written by world famous scientists or philosophers like Dr.Hawkin.What’s more, English books concerning CET6, BEC and TOEFL are also available.Most of them contain the latest genuine test papers, with a lot of notes(that is)written down in some English training classes.Anyone who is interested in my books may contact me through mobile phone number...and QQ number...respectively.Li Ming

三、投訴信（有節有禮）

你參加了一個公司的面試，結果在面試過程中考官把你批的顏面全無，根本不顧及你的感受，請寫信 給這個公司的領導投訴。

1.說明來信目的---explaining the aim of your letter 2.具體闡述投訴理由----extending the causes of your dissatisfaction 3.期待的解決方式----your anticipation for handling this issue 點評：這是一封典型的 integration（合體式）作文，它既涉及找工作面試用語，又涉及投訴信，代表了 考研應用文命題的典型思路。MODEL ESSAY: Dear Sir or Madam, I, the undersigned, am a job applicant who had participated in the interview held by your company lastWednesday.I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about this job-striving experience.The reason for my dissatisfaction has nothing to do with the outcome but the tone of your interviewer, Mr.Wang.First, when I was about illuminating my deep thought, he began to blame on my so-called nonsense according to his “noble” perspective.Additionally, his cynical eyesight always made me feel that I am a reject.After all, I am a novice who has stepped into this ruthless career field for the first time.I appreciate it very much if you could take my letter into consideration.What I really want is just an apology delivered by him, and I would like to have this matter settled by this Friday.Yours，Li Ming

（四）回復（投訴）信

（對于別人投訴的回復和安撫）

投訴你負責的勤工助學中心某學生表現糟糕

I will not use your temporary staff any more for their disastrous performance.Dear Sir, In response to your letter of complaint about our temporary administration assistant you received from my organization, I would like to apologize.We really care about our clients and that is why we will try to give some explanation about what happened.Actually, every candidate would obtain his or her qualification only if passing our strict and systematic training.I promise the person you received last week was not an exception.Unfortunately, his family coincided with some catastrophic affairs these days so that he has made a lot of misunderstandings due to absence of mind.It is very irrational that we still send him to work for you.Knowing that this case is exceptional, I would like to give you some kind of compensation.Next week, ifyou please, I will send you another skilled free of charge.Really hope you reconsider this recommendation.Li Ming The Director of Department

(五)銷售信

To whom it may concern, Last year, we achieved a 115% increase in the sales of our.We believe that this happy state of affairs can be attributed to two causes.First, we managed to avoid passing on any part of our increased manufacturing costs to our majestic clients.Second, we believe our designs and colors are the most attractive that we have ever produced.And so we are happy to be able to tell you that our new season’s are, if anything, more persuasive than last year’s and our prices will compare very favorably with those of any of our competitors.We believe you will agree that our samples prove the truth of our claims.We look forward for you to favoring us an order.訂 購

? Could you give us some idea about your price? ? Full information as to prices, quality, quantity available and other relative particulars would be highly appreciated.? It will be greatly appreciated if you will kindly send us your samples.? However, we find that we can obtain a price 30% lower than yours with local firm.（二）申請信 application 學校組織社團評優，要寫申請。你是學校創新社（Innovation Agency）的 founder，請代表你們社參與評優，寫一封申請信。Dear Sir, I am the Director of Innovation Agency who writes this letter to apply for the prize —— “Most Improved Organization Award”.The reasons for which we consider our group as a qualified candidate are as follows.Firstly, we specialize in private tools’ rebuilding and spare no efforts to enhance the living standard of our schoolmates who are physically challenged.For example, we rebuilt the building to make it accessible /easy /friendly to wheelchairs.Furthermore, there is a whole-new positive motivation as well as atmosphere inside the organization that every member enjoys not only the process of innovative undertakings but the exalted experiences to change our lifestyle.Really hope your majesty be touched by the efforts we have made.If you have any requirement or need any further narration, please do not hesitate to call me via ×××.Yours faithfully，Li Ming（邀請信

?學術邀請（充滿敬意）

?開頭：正式邀請（參會的時間和會議主題）?主體：介紹會議安排 ?結尾：希望得到正式答復，并確認

范文:

Dear Professor Liu，I am writing this letter to send a sincere invitation to ask if it is possible for you to attend an academic forum held on Jan.1 in The Nation’s Theater, which focuses on the topic of Chinese traditional culture.The schedule is as follows.Firstly, at 8 a.m.will start the opening of the forum, which involves a brief presentation with regard to the prospects as well as plights that the promotion of Chinese culture may encounter.Afterwards, there will be another arrangement concerning a micro-movie of the cultural relic exhibition, At around half past ten, it is expected to be your personal speech lasting about one and a half hours, which could be the most critical part of this conference I really hope you can accept our invitation.If you are available at that time and willing to come with us, please reply before next Monday.Zhang Wei

（六）尋找失物

? You have just spent a weekend staying at the St.Rogers Hotel in Beijing.When you get home you find that you have left a bag at the hotel.Write to the manager of the hotel to ? inquire whether the bag has been found, ? give any relevant information about the bag and its contents, and ? ask the manager to contact you immediately if the bag is found and tell him/ her how the bag can be sent to you.Dear Manager，I am sorry to disturb you but I am afraid that I have to ask you for some help.I stayed in Room 608 in your hotel on the10th of August.Could you please check your Lost and Found Department and see if my bag is there? The bag is a small black, leather document case.Inside it, you will find several business cards and a photo of Miss Hu Luwa.These things are not very valuable in money terms, but they have a lot of personal value.I would appreciate it if you could contact me as soon as possible.If you could send the bag to me by EMS, I would be most grateful.Thank you for your help.Yours sincerely

Li Ming