第一篇：50字英語小作文

50字英語小作文

Here are some emergency numbers in China.If there is a fire accident,you should call 119 immediately.For any other emergent incidents,you can reach the police office as soon as you call the number 110.Remember these numbers in heart.Whenever you and somebody else are in danger,be calm down and find a telephone first!

第二篇：寒假英語作文200-300字

寒假生活英語作文一：

I have got a happy winter holiday this year.In this year, I haappy day winter holiday.In the first day, I went back to my hometown with my parents.When I got there, I saw my grandparents.Then we had lunch together.At that time, we not only had dilicious food,we also talk about our wonderful life.We laughed and sang, it was so happy then.After lunch, I got out and found my old friends in the field.They were all taller and stronger than before.We sat down on the ground and talk about funny things.It was so interesting and fun.We also played some funny games.I have never play such a funny game since I leave my hometown for a big city.I was so happy that day.It was the happiest time in my holiday.And it was so funny.寒假生活英語作文二：

January 15th,Sunny

As the winter vacation is drawing near, I have a plan about my vacation.I'm going to do what I want to do.I'm going to study harder in order to get good grades in the following term.After finishing all my homework, I'm going to enjoy myself in the sea of knowledge.Reading must be a good idea.I'm going to keep fit at the same time.I'll get up eary in the morning everyday and play sports.I really love sports.Besides that, Eating a balanced diet is also good for my health.I'm going to help my mom and dad with the housework as well in the vacation.I'll learn to cook.As for travelling, I'm planning to go to Hainan.But whether going there or not will be decided on the weather.During the vacation,I'm going to learn more about history,as I'm really poor on it.So you see, I'll have a terrific vacation!

寒假生活英語作文三：

It was a very busy evening, I was doing my homework at my home.My father was writing a composition in the study room.My mother was interested in Shanghai opera.She was watching a Shanghai opera contest.The apartment was very quiet.Suddenly the light went out.It was a blackout, but I liked it very much.It came and I didn’t have to do my homework.We went to the living room very slowly.After 5 minutes, we all sat in the sofa.It was a lucky, fortunate day.I said that let’s held a concert.My parents agreed with me.I took out some candles and lighted up.We were singing, laughing and talking.We had a really good time.But while I was singing, the light suddenly turned on.Oh, my God.My father went back to his room went on writing.My mother turned on the TV and said to me “Dear, do your homework!” I felt very frustrated.I sat at the desk and thought I hated light.I hoped there would be a blackout the next day.I thought I would enjoy myself more and more.I went into a dream……

Many children are always looking forward to the winter vacation;this is because during the vacation, children needn’t go to school;They can do everything they like, such as playing, watching TV, traveling, or even sleeping all the day and so on.and when winter vacation come on ,it means that spring festival will come on soon.I spent the whole day at home nearly every day, I played with my computer.I played computer games and surfed the internet.during the vacation ,I still stayed in touch with my classmates and my friends.I think I have been a potatoes mouse.During the spring festival, I visited my relatives ,and I got a lot of red bags.Even though my vacation was crazy and exciting, but I really learnt a lot.It was good for relaxing, and I am getting ready for the coming new term now.Good-bye, my winter vacation.寒假生活英語作文四：

I like the winter holiday very much.Though it's very short,I can enjoy the Spring Festival.I can watch cartoon every day.I needn't go to school frepuently.Sometimes I can go to play with my friend outside.With the festival coming,I can play all the time.I can play video game with my brother.I am good at playing PC game.So I often beats my brother.Then more and more relative came to my home.We had dinner together.It's so lively that I'am very happy.But I still have to do my homework.During the holiday,I learned a lot.I love the winter holiday.

第三篇：高三英語作文必備字詞句

高三英語作文必備字詞句

一、作文單詞

Writer作者，passage 文章，understand 理解

Offer 提供，disaster 災(zāi)難，hit/happen 襲擊/發(fā)生

Rescue 救援，destroy 毀壞，injure 傷害achievement 成就 Volunteer 志愿者，voluntary 志愿的，percent 本分之

History 歷史，area 地區(qū)，population人口，hold 舉行 Activities活動，purpose 目的，host主辦，take up 占 Percentage 百分比，increase 增加，reduce減少 change 變化Exchange交換，community社區(qū)，improve 提高，ideal理想

Convenient方便的education 教育 surroundings 環(huán)境 confident自信的 Arrange 安排 attract 吸引 ability 能力 accept 接受

Pollution 污染 pollute 污染 behave 行為behaviour行為

Become 變成 healthy健康的 health 健康 succeed成功

Agree 同意 disagree 不同意 important重要的 necessary 必要的 Advertisement 廣告 adviser 顧問 affect 影響 support 支持 Agriculture 農(nóng)業(yè) culture 文化 aim 目標(biāo) experience 經(jīng)歷，體驗(yàn)

Importance 重要性 benefits 好處 information 信息 communication交流，通訊 drought 干旱 serous 嚴(yán)重 嚴(yán)肅 chat 聊天

University /college 大學(xué) from 畢業(yè)于 athlete 運(yùn)動員

Gym 體操館 stadium 體育館 champion 冠軍 enlarge 擴(kuò)大

Widen 拓寬 publicize/introduce 宣傳/介紹 waste 浪費(fèi)

Encourage 鼓勵 pessimistic 悲觀的 rule 規(guī)則 control 控制

二、短語

Asian games 亞運(yùn) donate money to 向捐錢lead to/result in導(dǎo)致 Make contributions to 對作出貢獻(xiàn) sign up 報(bào)名 be concerned about 關(guān)心 keep the balance of study and relaxation 保持學(xué)習(xí)和休閑的平衡 follow one’s advice 采納建議 take me for example 以我為例 Be located in 位于 deal with/ solve problem 解決問題

Apply for a job 申請工作 because of 因?yàn)?avoid sth/ doing sth 避免 face the failure bravely 面對失敗 follow natural rules 遵循自然規(guī)律 communicate with sb 交流 set up confidence 建立自信 Become independent 變得獨(dú)立 with the help of 在…的幫助下 Give performance 表演 overcome difficulties 克服困難

Traffic accidents 交通事故 allow sb to do sth 允許某人作做某事 Set a good example for us 為我們樹立好榜樣 protect environment 保護(hù)環(huán)境 polish out characters 塑造人格 common social problem 普遍社會問題 enrich our knowledge 豐富知識 widen out eyesight 擴(kuò)大視野 advantages and disadvantages 優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn) try one’s best to do sth 盡力 enrich social experience 豐富社會經(jīng)驗(yàn) live a happy life 過幸福生活 make progress in study 學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)步 keep up the pace of society 跟上時代 be thankful to parents 感激父母 make more friends 交朋友 be concerned about 關(guān)心 adapt to/ adjust to 適應(yīng)

Focus on 聚焦于 重視 be addicted to 對…上癮 be admitted to 被錄取到… improve the living level 提高生活水平

In a competitive and challenging society在競爭與挑戰(zhàn)社會中 Think highly of 高度評價(jià) start one’s own business 自主創(chuàng)業(yè) Public transportation 公共交通 social insurance system 社保體制 Lack the awareness of environmental protection 缺乏環(huán)保意識 Contribute to the economic growth 刺激經(jīng)濟(jì)增長

Keep healthy both in mind and body 身心健康

Get on well with others 與他人和睦相處 out of order 混亂 Relax oneself 放松 be satisfied with 對…感到滿意

I am writing to complain about a pair of shoes.我寫信來投訴一雙鞋子的質(zhì)量問題。

save energy and resources 節(jié)約能源和資源

we did a survey among sb on sth在某人中做了一個關(guān)于某事的調(diào)查 they devote their life to bringing me up致力于，撫養(yǎng)

it is beneficial/good/helpful for us to grow up有利于我們成長 I apologize to him for misunderstanding him由于…向某人道歉 senior three students are living under pressure

高三學(xué)生生活在壓力下

we should share our sadness and happiness with our parents 分享苦樂

only in this way can we build a harmonious society

只有這樣才能建立和諧社會

as for me, I prefer to choose stars as my idols至于我，我更喜歡懸著明星作為我的偶像。

the government should pay more attention to the social problem and take some actions/measures to solve it政府應(yīng)重視這一社會問題并采取行動/措施來解決它。

he is considered as the hero and is respected and remembered by ordinary people他被當(dāng)成英雄，受到老百姓的尊敬與紀(jì)念。

in order to achieve our goal, we should spare no effort to study為了達(dá)到目標(biāo)，不遺余力

provide free medical care for us 提供免費(fèi)醫(yī)療

smoking does harm to/is bad for/has a bad effect on our health吸煙不利于健康

teamwork plays an important part in our daily life起重要作用 people should take an active/optimistic attitude to the failure對…持積極樂觀的態(tài)度;樂觀面對…

it reminds me of my personal/own experience 這讓我想起了自己的經(jīng)歷

from the passage, I learned that...從文章，我知道...there are different opinions about whether...關(guān)于是否...有不同的觀點(diǎn)

some people hold the opposite opinion that...一些人持相反觀點(diǎn)

we spend the weekend in surfing the Internet花時間做某事 the rain stop me from going out阻止某人做某事

the reasons are as following理由如下

every coin has two sides事物是一分為二的with the development of the science and technology/economy/modern society隨著...的發(fā)展

三、句型

1.It is a pity that…很遺憾

2.As is well-known to all…眾所周知

As we know

It is well-known that…

3.There is no doubt…毫無疑問

There is no doubt that parents hope we have a bright future and will not lose our competition in the society.There is no denying the fact that…不可否認(rèn)事實(shí)

There is no denying the fact that some parents arrange everything for their children.It is obvious that…很明顯

It is obvious that he is wrong.4.It is …that…強(qiáng)調(diào)句

It is my teacher helps me a lot.It is not until…that直到…才

It is not until he told me the truth that I knew I was wrong.5.It is one’s duty to do sth某人又職責(zé)做某事

It is the government’s duty to take some actions to solve the social problem.6.Only when… can we …只有。。我們才能。。

Only when everyone realize the importance of it can we solve the social problem and built harmonious society.Only at that time did I realize the importance of study.只有在那時。。

Only in this way can we…只有這樣我們才能。。

7.It is necessary for us to take part in many activities and develop teamwork spirit.某人做某事有必要、很重要、方便、普遍、自然

It is necessary for us to take part in many activities and develop teamwork spirit.8.It is high time that…該做某事的時候了

It is high time that we took some actions to protect our environment.9.It is a waste of time doing sth做某事浪費(fèi)時間

It is no use/good doing sth做某事沒用

10.To one’s surprise/happiness/sadness/joy/disappointment…讓某人吃驚、高興、悲傷、高興、失望的是。。

To our happiness we won the game at last.With the help of my teacher, I overcome my difficulties.11.So…that…如此。。至于

He is so unselfish and warm-hearted that he is always willing to help others.12.No matter who/what…無論。。

No matter what you meet, you should keep optimistic.13.It is a good way for sb to do sth是做某事的好方式

It is helpful/beneficial/good for sb to do sth有利于某人做某事

It is good for students to develop their ability of self-independence and improve social skills of communication.14.Have a chance to do sth有機(jī)會做某事

We will have a chance to exchange ideas with students from other schools.15.It is said/reported that…據(jù)說

第四篇：高二年級英語作文FreedominmyDream750字（定稿）

寫寫幫文秘助手(www.tmdps.cn)之高二年級英語作文：Freedom in my Dream_750字

as the whole world has its boundaries, limits and freedom coexist in our life.i don’t expect complete freedom, which is impossible.i simply have a dream that supports my life.i dream that one day, i could escape from the deep sea of thick schoolbooks and lead my own life.with my favorite fictions, i lie freely on the green grass, smelling the spring, listening to the wind singing, breathing the fresh and cool air and dissolve my soul in nature at last.simple and short enjoyment can bring me great satisfaction.i dream that one day the adults could throw their prejudice of comic and cartoon away.they could keep a lovely heart that can share sorrow and happiness with us while watching cartoon or doing personal things.that’s the real communication of heart to heart.i have the belief that my dreams should come true.i am looking forward to some day coming when i am like a proud eagle, which flies to the blue and vast sky.

第五篇：英語小作文

1、A Happy Day

2、A Little Wish

3、A Pen and a Pencil

4、Fly Kites

5、Four Seasons

6、Have a fun holiday

7、I Like My Village

8、My Bedroom

9、My Best Friend

10、My Best Friends

11、My Dog

12、My Dream

13、My English Teacher

14、My Family 1

15、My Family 2

16、My Family 3

17、My Favourite Sport

18、My Favourite stamp

19、My Good Friend 1 20、My Good Friend 2

21、My Grandfather's Garden

22、My Hometown.23、My Little Cat

24、My Lovely Home

25、My School

26、My Uncle

27、My Winter Holiday

28、Myself

29、Spring

A Happy Day The weather is getting hotter and hotter.The summer holiday is coming.What a happy day!Birds are singing in the trees.Butterflies are dancing in the garden.Children are playing in the park.Some boys are playing on the slide(滑梯).Some boys are listening to music.Other boys are reading under the big tree.Some girls are drawing pictures.Other girls are playing on the swings(秋千).I like roller-skating(滑旱冰)in the square.And my classmates are playing football.We are very happy!

點(diǎn)評臺：這篇文章描寫了同學(xué)們和自己在假期里快樂的一天，表達(dá)了他們對假期的喜愛以及在假期里自由自在、放松自我的心情。讀后有種很想加入他們當(dāng)中，與他們分享快樂的愿望。整篇文章用詞準(zhǔn)確，語言生動，中心明確、突出，是一篇很成功的文章。文章級別：A。

A Little Wish Look!What's that? It is our homeland's spaceship.The spaceship is as bright as the stars.It can move.I am proud of our astronaut because I have a wish.I want to be an astronaut.In space, there are many materials.If I were an astronaut, I will be able to know more about space.I think the scene will be very great.On the one hand, I am going to enjoy the scene of the earth.On the other hand, I am going to see some stars.This is my wish.I hope my wish will come true!

點(diǎn)評中心：文章題材新穎，標(biāo)新立意，讓我們了解到雖然只是一個小小的愿望但卻包含了對探索宇宙的好奇及對我們地球家園的熱愛，同時也感受到小作者立志成為一名宇航員的偉大理想。最后希望小作者能夠再接再勵，寫出更多、更優(yōu)秀的小文章，同時也祝愿你夢想成真！

A Pen and a Pencil

I have a pen and a pencil.The pen is very nice, but the pencil is so dirty.One day, the pen met the pencil.The pen said to the pencil:“ What a dirty pencil!” The pencil said :“Yes.I'm dirty.But I can write words.” “I can write words，too.Now,let's see who can write more words.”

They began to write.They wrote and wrote.The pen wrote lots of words on the paper.The pencil wrote lots of words on the paper, too.After a long time ,the pen hadn't any ink(鋼筆水)left(剩下).The pencil became short, but he could still write.At last ,the pencil won.The pencil said :“Ha ha...ha ha...Who won, you or me ?”The pen drooped(低下)his head.Then he said to the pencil :“I shouldn't laught at(嘲笑)you.You are good, too.”

點(diǎn)評臺：這是一篇很成功的文章。文章不僅立意新穎，更重要的是寓意深刻。同時，也能看出小作者有著豐富的想象力。希望在今后的學(xué)習(xí)中充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，寫出更多、更好的文章。文章級別：A。

Fly Kites Today is a shining day, the sky is blue, the wind is strong.My grandfather and I are going to the park to fly kites.My grandfather takes me to the People's Park.We fly my “Rocket”.“The wind is too strong, the kite can't fly!” I say.My grandfather looks and says, “Let me try!” “Sure!” So my grandfather catches the string and I hold the kite.“Follow me, one, two, three, run!” I run with my grandfather quickly.Oh!It's so wonderful!The kite is flying up with the wind.I am so happy and ask my grandfather, “Why can't I fly it up, but you can?” My grandfather says with a smile on his face, “Because you fly the kite against the wind.” “Oh, I see.” I nod my head happily.We play in the park until late.We enjoy ourselves.點(diǎn)評中心：小作者用平實(shí)的語言描述了風(fēng)箏從飛不上天到飛上天的過程，特別生動、形象，同時又結(jié)合小作者與爺爺?shù)膶υ挘屓丝赐暌院笥蟹N身臨其境的感覺，仿佛放風(fēng)箏的活動歷歷在目。

Four Seasons

Spring is green.Do you know why? It is because when spring is here, the plants and the trees sprout new leaves and turn green.The flowers start to blossom.It is so beautiful and green everywhere.Summer is bright.Can you guess the reason? It is because when summer arrives, the sun is shining.For the very strong sunlight, everything is bright.How beautiful and bright it is!Autumn is golden.Why is this? It's because when autumn comes, the wind blows through the golden trees and carries the golden leaves away, flowing slowly down to the ground one after another and thickly covering the ground.It is golden everywhere.Winter is white.Why? It's because when winter reaches us, the white snowflakes fly slowly down, so pure and white.The wide fields and the great high mountains all wear white coats.Oh!The four seasons are all beautiful and charming.I like spring, summer, autumn and winter, but spring, the best!For spring is full of life.點(diǎn)評中心:小作者以“四季”為題目,開篇直接切入四個季節(jié),以闡述四季的不同為主線,分別進(jìn)行描述.文章用詞準(zhǔn)確,語言豐富、生動,語法基本正確.希望繼續(xù)努力,成為未來的作家。

Have a fun holiday!Come to Shenzhen and have a fun holiday.Shenzhen is a new and modern city.The weather here is very pleasant.The trees and grass are green every season.In spring, the weather is warm.You can go hiking.In summer, the weather is hot, but you can go to the beautiful beach.You can swim there.You can make a sandcastle(沙堆城堡), too.In autumn.the weather is cool, but not dry.You can fly kites in the parks.In winter, it's not cold.You don't need to put on more clothes.You can play sports then.There is lots of delicious food here.You can drink morning tea and afternoon tea.You can eat seafood(海鮮), too.In Shenzhen there are many famous places.You can go to the Window of the World.You can go to Happy Valley, too.Don't wait.Come to Shenzhen and have fun, fun and fun!點(diǎn)評中心:通過對深圳四季的描寫,給我們展現(xiàn)出了一幅四季如春的美麗畫面。在深圳,可以到海邊堆沙堡, 可以吃海鮮, 還可以去美麗的世界之窗游玩…… 所有這些都深深地吸引著小讀者們,不愧為一篇成功的小作文。

I Like My Village Hello,dear friends!Welcome to my village.It's big and beautiful!I like it very much.Look!There are many houses in the village.They are small.There are many high and beautiful mountains near the houses.There is a big forest behind the houses.There are many big trees in it.There are many rivers in front of the houses.The water is clean.There are many fish in the rivers.There are many bridges over the rivers.There are many big trees on the river banks.And there is grass and flowers on it.The grass is green.The flowers are colourful and beautiful.There is a lake in the village.There are many ducks in the lake.The sky is blue.The rivers flow.The air is fresh and clean.My village is very beautiful!I like it very much!

點(diǎn)評中心：I Like My Village。本篇文章采用生動、細(xì)致的描寫方法，勾勒出一幅美麗、和諧的鄉(xiāng)村圖畫。文章在用詞方面比較準(zhǔn)確，多處采用There be句型。但有些地方可用連詞連接，無需再重復(fù)使用There be句型。

My Bedroom My name is Mike.I have a comfortable bedroom.There is a desk, a bookshelf and a bed in my bedroom.I do my homework in my bedroom every evening.The desk is in front of the bookshelf.There are many textbooks, English books and story books on the shelf.My bed is near the windows.There are some flowers on the windowsill.The curtain and the sheets of my bedroom are blue.Because my favourite colour is blue, too.Dear friend, do you like my bedroom? 點(diǎn)評中心：My Bedroom針對自己臥室里的幾件物品進(jìn)行了介紹，為同學(xué)們展示了一個干凈舒適的小天地，值得一提的是文中使用了一些生詞，使文章增色不少。在這里建議其他同學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)，努力多掌握些單詞，從而寫出更加精彩的英語作文。“Very Good!”。

My Best Friend Ma Qi is my best friend.She is a girl.she is ten years old.She has short black hair and big eyes.she likes to sing.Ma Qi and I are in the same class.We always study, draw pictures and play ping-pong together.After the school, we often go to the park.We often play a game of Hide And Seek there.We have a good time.點(diǎn)評臺: My Best Friend語言流暢，敘述清楚，描述了自己與好朋友一起學(xué)習(xí)、生活的快樂時光，如果小作者能夠運(yùn)用已學(xué)過的知識再對好朋友的外貌特征和衣著作一番細(xì)致地描寫的話，相信文章內(nèi)容就會更加充實(shí)。“Good!”。千萬不要驕傲呀，還要繼續(xù)練習(xí)寫作，使自己能夠?qū)懗龈玫奈恼隆?/p>

My Best Friends

Jim and Kim are my best friends.Jim is short, thin and quiet.But Kim is tall and strong ,but not fat.After class, Jim is different from Kim and I.Kim and I like to play soccer.We often kick the ball on the playground.But Jim doesn't play with us.He likes to read books in the library.Sometimes he likes to listen to music.In the evening, Jim often helps Kim and me with our English.We talk a lot and laugh a lot.We are best friends.點(diǎn)評臺：向大家介紹了自己的兩個好朋友。語言流暢，用詞準(zhǔn)確，沒有語法錯誤，字里行間能體會到小作者與兩位好朋友之間的深厚友情。另外，從整篇文章中也可以看出小作者的英語基礎(chǔ)知識掌握得很牢。希望今后的學(xué)習(xí)中寫出更多，更好的文章。文章級別：A。

My Dog Hello, everyone!I am Wang Ze.My English name is Mike.I have a cat and a dog.I like my cat, but I like my dog better than my cat.My dog is two years old.It has two black eyes, a black nose and a small mouth.Its body is white.It is as white as snow.My dog is very lovely.I like my dog very much.點(diǎn)評臺：文章My Dog首先向讀者問候，并簡單介紹了自己，隨后通過簡略的描寫使一只可愛的小狗形象躍然紙上，能夠吸引讀者的注意力。對于初學(xué)者而言，能寫出這樣的習(xí)作確實(shí)不容易，值得大家學(xué)習(xí)。“Good！”，繼續(xù)加油啊！

My Dream I am a handsome boyl.My name is Mike.I like drawing.My dream is to have a white house with a white wall, a white roof, a white floor.I can draw a red car on the wall, and I can drive the car around the world.I can draw a plane on the roof, and I want to take the plane to the sky.i can draw a sailing-boat on the floor, and I want to take the sailing-boat across the sea.點(diǎn)評臺:這篇作文“My Dream”，形式新穎，風(fēng)格獨(dú)特，用詞得當(dāng)，語句通順。此文章充分地體現(xiàn)了小作者豐富的想象力和較強(qiáng)的寫作能力，是一篇成功的文章。同時，希望張燦小朋友能堅(jiān)持練習(xí)英文寫作，相信你一定會寫出更好的英語作文。“Very good!”。

My English Teacher Miss Shan is my English teacher.She has two big eyes.She is thin and short.Her hair is very long.She is very beautiful.Her English is very good.She always play games with us in English class.So her class is very interesting and shi is kind to us.She like us and we like her too.I like my English teacher.How about you? 點(diǎn)評中心: 文章寫得比較簡單,詞語使用準(zhǔn)確, 語言樸實(shí)無華,字里行間表達(dá)了小作者對英語老師的喜愛之情, 但不夠具體, 如果能指出老師的愛好、習(xí)慣等，文章會更加充實(shí)，希望你繼續(xù)努力,寫出更加優(yōu)秀的文章來。

My Family I have a happy family.There are six people in my family.They are grandpa, grandma, father, mother, elder sister and I.My name is Yang Yuan.I am a pupil, I'm in Grade 5.I like English very much, I read them every morning.I often listen to the English tape.My grandpa is an accountant(會計(jì)).He is very busy.My grandma is a farmer.She does the housework.My mother is a farmer, too.She cooks every day.My father is a worker.In the evening he likes watching TV.While he is watching TV, he often tells us not to talk.My elder sister is a middle school student, she isn't good at English, but she likes maths very much.All of them love me, and I love them, too.I have a happy family.I love my family.點(diǎn)評中心:這篇文章主要描寫了家庭成員的職業(yè)，My Family更適合做這篇文章的標(biāo)題，整篇文章條理清楚，語言簡練，用詞準(zhǔn)確，沒有語法錯誤，可見小作者的英語語言基本功很好，希望楊園同學(xué)在今后的學(xué)習(xí)中繼續(xù)發(fā)揚(yáng)這個優(yōu)點(diǎn)，不要驕傲，寫出更多的好文章。文章級別:B。

My Family Hello, everyone!Today I am going to talk about my family.My name is Mike.I am in Class 1, Grade 4.l like English very much.I like hamburgers.I have a happy family.There are three people in my family.Look, this is my father.He has two brown eyes, a big nose and a small mouth.He is an engineer.He is very handsome.Look, that is my mother.She has two big eyes.She is an engineer too.She is very pretty and kind.My family is not big, but we have many friends.We are happy.I love them very much and they love me too.講評中心：文章寫得比較簡煉，詞語使用準(zhǔn)確，語言生動，字里行間表達(dá)了小作者對家人的愛。但不要驕傲，繼續(xù)努力啊！文章級別：A。

My Family There are three people in my family, my father, my mother and I.My father is a driver.He is 37 years old.He like eating oranges.My mother is a worker.She like eating apples.My name is Mike.I am 9 years old.I am in Class 3, Grade 3.l like eating hamburgers.I am good at English.I study hard every day.點(diǎn)評中心：My Family 語言流暢，描寫得當(dāng)，用平實(shí)的語言向讀者介紹了家庭中的每一位成員的基本情況，美中不足之處就是缺乏對家人之間和睦關(guān)系的描述，使文章略顯平淡了一些。“Good！”,還要繼續(xù)努力啊

My Favourite Sport My favourite sport is swimming.I often swim in the pool.I swim twice a week.When I am swimming in the pool, I am very happy.I look like a lovely fish in the pond.I enjoy swimming, because swimming can make me strong and healthy.It can also bring me a lot of happiness.Of course, I like watching this sport.I hope I will become a swimmer in the future.點(diǎn)評中心:這篇小文章語言精煉、準(zhǔn)確,短短幾句便勾畫出了一幅生動、活潑的畫面。

My Favourite stamp I have a lot of stamps and my favourite stamp is an animal stamp.Look, there is a chick in this stamp.The chick has a red cockscomb, two bright eyes, a long neck and a short tail.Its feathers are yellow and brown.This stamp is very beautiful.I like this stamp very much.Miss Wang點(diǎn)評臺集郵不僅可以增長我們的見識，同時也可以陶冶我們的情操。本文的小作者就是一個集郵愛好者，看小作者所描述的小雞郵票多么可愛呀！感興趣的小朋友可以試著收集郵票啊！Miss Wang要獎給姚晗小朋友一個“Very Good!”,繼續(xù)加油啊！

My Good Friend Hello!My name is Maggie.I have a good friend.Her Chinese name is Wang Qi.Her English name is Mary.She likes fruit very much.Her favourite color is blue.She is very beautiful.She has small eyes and wears a pair of glasses.She has two small ears, a small nose and a lovely mouse.She is very tall.She likes swimming and playing football.She is a good student.We are in the same school and the same class.But we are not in the same row.I like her very much.We always play together.講評中心：文章比較詳盡、完整地描述了她的好朋友的特征，包括了好朋友的外貌、喜好等，文章詞語使用準(zhǔn)確、語法正確、主題突出，“Good!”，不要驕傲，繼續(xù)努力啊！

My Good Friend I have a good friend.Her name is Zhang Hong.She is 9 years old.She is a pretty girl.She has long hair and big beautiful eyes.They look like stars.Her favourite colour is pink.Her favourite animals are cats and rabbits.She likes to play badminton very much.Her favourite class is English.She studies very hard.She is a good student.I love her very much.I will learn from her.本文圍繞My Good Friend這一主題，運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識，針對好朋友的外貌、愛好進(jìn)行介紹，為讀者展示了一個活潑、可愛的小女孩形象。Miss Wang要獎給孟婷婷同學(xué)一個“Very Good！”。同時，孟婷婷同學(xué)也要繼續(xù)努力練習(xí)英文寫作呀！My Grandfather's Garden

My grandfather has a small garden.There are many flowers in it.I think all the flowers are beautiful.My grandfather gets up early every mor-ning.First, he goes to his garden to have a look at the flowers.Then, he waters them.When he waters the flowers, he feels very happy.My sister and I like the garden very much.We often play in it.Sometimes we water the flowers and catch worms for them.One day, my brother picked a flower.My grandfather was very angry and sad.He said to my brother, “My child, don't pick the flowers.That's not a good deed(行為).” My brother felt very sorry for that.And we all didn't pick flowers from then on.The flowers in my grandfather's garden are more and more beautiful now.I like my grandfather's garden.點(diǎn)評臺：向大家描寫了爺爺?shù)幕▓@，雖沒有太多華麗的詞語，但能使讀者感受到花園的美麗和花兒的芳香。通過描寫爺爺對花園的精心料理以及對弟弟的教育，能看出本篇文章不僅僅是寫爺爺?shù)幕▓@，也從字里行間中看出了小作者對爺爺?shù)木磁逯椤Ｎ恼聴l理清楚、意思連貫，沒有語法錯誤，是一篇很成功的文章，希望再接再勵！文章級別：A。

My Hometown My hometown-Kaiping is a very beautiful city.It is located(座落)in the southwest(西南)part of Guangdong Province(省).My hometown is famous for Diaolous.Ruishi Tower is one of the Diaolous(Please look at the picture.).It was built in 1923.The top of the tower looks like the Italy stronghold(堡壘).It is tall and magnificent(雄偉的).People praise(贊揚(yáng))it for “the No.1 Tower” of Kaiping.I like my hometown.點(diǎn)評臺：小作者的My Hometown主要描寫了家鄉(xiāng)著名的碉樓，其中重點(diǎn)向大家介紹了“開平第一樓”--瑞石樓，抒發(fā)了自己對家鄉(xiāng)的熱愛之情。整篇文章語句連貫，沒有語法錯誤。文章中出現(xiàn)了一些生詞，可見小作者是用心查字典了，希望小作者繼續(xù)發(fā)揚(yáng)這個好習(xí)慣，并寫出更多的好文章與大家分享。文章級別：A。

My Little Cat Hello!I'm Becky.This is my little cat.I like it very much.Its name is Do Re Mi.It's very beautiful.It's gray.It has triangular(三角形的)ears, round eyes,a black nose and a small mouth.My mother calls it “Little Baby”.When I'm at home,it often follows me in and out.My little cat loves to eat fish and sleep a lot.It's very fat,but it's nimble(機(jī)敏的).One day,I saw it run fast in the sitting room.I thought it might find a mouse.It was running after the mouse.They looked like playing hide-and-seek.About three minutes later,it brought me the mouse.I was happy.So I touched it with a smile.“You have done a good job,Little Baby.” I said.Then it jumped up and down and ran away.Do you like my little cat?Tell me, please.點(diǎn)評中心:向大家介紹了小貓的外貌，還主要描寫了小貓?jiān)谀骋惶熳嚼鲜蟮那榫啊Ｕ恼轮鞔畏置鳎Z言簡煉、生動，沒有語法錯誤。同時，字里行間能使讀者感受到小作者對小貓的喜愛之情。

My Lovely Home I live in a small village named Fengyi.I live in an old building.It was built in 1999.It has three floors.On the first floor, there is a big living room, a kitchen and a bathroom.On the second floor, there are altogether three bedrooms.One for my grandma, one for my parents, another for me.On the third floor, there is an attic.It's my study, it's quiet.I like to study there.When I am tired, I can rest in the balcony.There is some beautiful old furniture, it's tidy.My parents clean it every day.I can also do some housework.My friends, do you love my home?

點(diǎn)評中心：My Lovely Home開篇直接切入本文主題，首先從房子的結(jié)構(gòu)開始介紹，句子簡潔、通順，接著又重點(diǎn)描述了與自己有關(guān)的幾個房間，語言生動、貼切，最后又抒發(fā)了自己對家的熱愛。

My School Hello, friends!Welcome to my school.My school is beautiful and very big.There are many rooms in the school building.My classroom is on the sixth floor.There are sixty-nine students in my class.You can see many desks, chairs, a blackboard, three fans, two windows, four lights and a teacher's desk.My seat is near the door.The computer room is on the third floor.There are many computers in it.I like playing computer games very much!The canteen(食堂)is on the first floor.We have lunch there.Look!This is the playground.We often play games on it.There are many flowers in the garden, some are red, some are yellow...I have a good time every day in my school.I like my school very much.點(diǎn)評臺：文章向大家描述了他學(xué)校的教室，食堂，微機(jī)室以及操場，其中重點(diǎn)描寫了自己的班級，主次分明，層次清晰，正確地運(yùn)用了There be句型和一般現(xiàn)在時時態(tài)，是一篇很成功的文章，文章級別：A。

My Uncle My uncle is a professor.His name is Chen Hao.He teaches Chinese in a university.He is tall and thin.He wears a pair of glasses.He likes reading.He has a big study at home.It's very bright.There are many books in his study.He often reads and writes in his study.He is kind to his students, so his students like him very much.He is very kind to me, too.He often sends me books.I like him, too.點(diǎn)評中心：本篇小文章描寫的是小作者的叔叔，首先從她叔叔的職業(yè)、外貌開始描寫，接著又描寫了她叔叔的愛好--讀書與寫作。表達(dá)了小作者對其叔叔的崇拜與敬仰之情。文章條理清晰，用詞準(zhǔn)確，無語法錯誤，是一篇較優(yōu)秀的文章。

My Winter Holiday This winter holiday, I went to Kunming with my family.Kunming is a very beautiful city, I think.The sky is blue and the air is clean.You can see many kinds of nice flowers everywhere.The weather there is great.It's never too hot or too cold all the year round, so people always call it “Spring City”.Kunming is surrounded(圍繞)by beautiful scenery.And one of the most famous views is “The Stone Forest”.It is really scenic(自然風(fēng)景的).We just stayed in Kunming for six days, but I felt very happy, and I like Kunming very much.點(diǎn)評中心：寒假雖然已經(jīng)過去一個多月了，但是在這個假期所發(fā)生的事大家是否還都銘記在心呢？作者就把她的這份心情用筆記錄了下來。小作者通過在寒假期間去美麗的春城--昆明游玩，抒發(fā)了對美好自然風(fēng)光的熱愛。文章生動、形象，用詞準(zhǔn)確。

Myself Look at this photo.A little boy is climbing a tree.Who is the boy? Guess, please!Yes, it's me.My name is Zhu Shaoyu.I'm ten years old.I'm very naughty and smart.I have big eyes and short black hair.I'm thin and tall.I'm a student.I'm in Xia Zhuang Primary School, Qing Zhou City.I'm in Class One, Grade Five.My favourite subject is English.I study English very hard.I think nothing is difficult, if I put my heart into it.Now I can speak English well.I obtained the First Award in the 2003 National English Competition for Primary School Students.I will study harder in future.My favourite master of ceremonies is Li Yong, because he is very funny.My favourite newspaper is English Coaching Paper, because it gives me a lot of knowledge.It makes me learn English better.My favourite food is hamburger, because it is very delicious.I like its taste.Do you like me? Would you like to make friends with me?

點(diǎn)評臺：幾乎每個人都很了解自己，所以要是介紹自己，可寫的內(nèi)容很多。但小作者并沒有平均分配筆墨，而是重點(diǎn)描寫了自己的幾個“最喜歡”。整篇文章條理清楚、重點(diǎn)突出、語言流暢、用詞準(zhǔn)確，可以說寫得很成功。希望同學(xué)們向朱劭宇同學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)，寫出一篇篇精彩的文章與大家共同分享。文章級別：A。

Spring I like spring because spring is beautiful.Many flowers are very lovely.Some grass and trees turn green.Look!A little girl is flying a kite with her father.She likes to fly kites.Her father is smiling.It's very warm today.So there're a lot of birds flying in the sky.They're playing together.They look very happy.A breeze is blowing over the land.The sunlight is soft.A clear river is flowing.How beautiful the spring is!點(diǎn)評臺:這篇文章篇幅雖短卻寫出了春天的生機(jī)與活力.特別是小作者著重描寫了春天里的某一天,使整篇文章的中心更加明確.用詞準(zhǔn)確、生動,沒有語法錯誤也是這篇文章的另一優(yōu)點(diǎn).文章級別:A.29