第一篇：英語六級寫作備考之創造閃光點

高分作文標志:

1：是否長短句交叉;

2、是否會使用插入語;

3、用詞是否多樣，準確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞;

4、關鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復詞;

5、句型使用是否準確、地道。

下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項：

1.適當用被動替換主動，這樣能更客觀的反映事實, 句子開頭不要總是用we / I(比如寫結尾時不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.)舉個經典結尾2004年六月六級作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入語，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語放在中間，一般放在主語、動詞或者助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。

如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間，一般放在動詞，助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。

比如說： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that ?

3.一定要學會換詞，換形象，具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現good, bad , many, thing, think，people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替換proper, approaches替換ways, implement替換carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替換enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物競爭力)

下面舉一篇南京工程學院某位同學寫的優秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何運用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

四六級英語資料免費下載

Computer and I(By Simmy)

I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替換 very

thrilling 替換 exciting

sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb.be interested in sth.google 替換 search

an army of 替換 a lot of

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個精彩句型，用來描述在某個時期發生了什么事情;Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular

Coincident with ?非常地道的句型，表達“與?一致”的意思，替換 With ?

Advancement 替換 development

Pour into(flood into / swarm into)替換 enter into

Current(currently)替換 now

Appeal to sb.替換 sb.be interested in sth.Growing individuals 替換 more and more people

It is no exaggeration to say 經典句型，說某事是毫不夸張的

For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替換 To begin with

We can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法

our knowledge will be well enriched,and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被動

Additionally 替換 In addition / Besides

Deliver 替換 send

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個句子有三個精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個句型，還有however作為插入語，function in the disservice of 替換 do harm to

Emerging 替換 appearing(fading 替換 disappearing)

Net citizen 網民，屬于精彩用詞

As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替換 Every coin has two sides

Computers do play，do 強調

Positive 替換 important / good 等

A slice of 替換 a part of 滬江四六級 http://cet.hjenglish.com

Unfavorable 替換 bad

Impacts 替換 effects / influences

We should, therefore, take advantage of ?使用插入語

Fruits(而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替換 advantage(defects 替換 disadvantage)Facet 替換 aspect

各位同學，上面的作文里有這么多精彩的閃光點，作文怎么會不得高分呢!

第二篇：英語六級寫作寫作技巧之創造閃光點

英語六級寫作寫作技巧之創造閃光點

高分作文標志： 1：是否長短句交叉;

2、是否會使用插入語;

3、用詞是否多樣，準確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞;

4、關鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復詞;

5、句型使用是否準確、地道。下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項：

1.適當用被動替換主動，這樣能更客觀的反映事實, 句子開頭不要總是用we / I(比如寫結尾時不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.)舉個經典結尾2004年六月六級作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入語，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語放在中間，一般放在主語、動詞或者助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間，一般放在動詞，助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。比如說： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that … 3.一定要學會換詞，換形象，具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現good, bad , many, thing, think,people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替換proper, approaches替換ways, implement替換carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替換enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物競爭力)

下面舉一篇南京工程學院某位同學寫的優秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何運用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

Computer and I(By Simmy)

I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替換 very thrilling 替換 exciting

sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb.be interested in sth.google 替換 search an army of 替換 a lot of

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個精彩句型，用來描述在某個時期發生了什么事情;Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular

Coincident with … 非常地道的句型，表達“與…一致”的意思，替換 With …

Advancement 替換 development

Pour into(flood into / swarm into)替換 enter into Current(currently)替換 now

Appeal to sb.替換 sb.be interested in sth.Growing individuals 替換 more and more people

It is no exaggeration to say 經典句型，說某事是毫不夸張的 For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替換 To begin with

We can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法

our knowledge will be well enriched,and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被動 Additionally 替換 In addition / Besides Deliver 替換 send

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個句子有三個精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個句型，還有however作為插入語，function in the disservice of 替換 do harm to

Emerging 替換 appearing(fading 替換 disappearing)Net citizen 網民，屬于精彩用詞

As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替換 Every coin has two sides Computers do play，do 強調 Positive 替換 important / good 等 A slice of 替換 a part of Unfavorable 替換 bad

Impacts 替換 effects / influences We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入語 Fruits(而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替換 advantage(defects 替換 disadvantage)Facet 替換 aspect 各位同學，上面的作文里有這么多精彩的閃光點，作文怎么會不得高分呢!

第三篇：考研創造閃光點

創造閃光點，作文亮一點！

作文是各類英語考試中得分率最低的題型之一。同學們在掌握了一定的作文模板，和基本的語法、詞匯、句型用法之后，如果能在作文中創造一些詞匯和句型的閃光點，必定會使你的作文如虎添翼！

高分作文標志 1：是否長短句交叉；

2、是否會使用插入語；

3、用詞是否多樣，準確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞；

4、關鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復詞；

5、句型使用是否準確、地道。

下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項：

1.適當用被動替換主動，這樣能更客觀的反映事實, 句子開頭不要總是用we / I(比如寫結尾時不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.)舉個經典結尾2004年六月六級作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入語，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語放在中間，一般放在主語、動詞或者助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。

如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間，一般放在動詞，助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。

比如說： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that ?

3.一定要學會換詞，換形象，具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現good, bad , many, thing, think，people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替換proper, approaches替換ways, implement替換carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替換enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物競爭力)

下面舉一篇南京工程學院某位同學寫的優秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何運用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

Computer and I By Simmy

I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替換 very

thrilling 替換 exciting

sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb.be interested in sth.google 替換 search

an army of 替換 a lot of

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing numbers of individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個精彩句型，用來描述在某個時期發生了什么事情；

Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular

Coincident with ? 非常地道的句型，表達“與?一致”的意思，替換 With ?

Advancement 替換 development

Pour into(flood into / swarm into)替換 enter into

Current(currently)替換 now

Appeal to sb.替換 sb.be interested in sth.Growing numbers of individuals 替換 more and more people

It is no exaggeration to say 經典句型，說某事是毫不夸張的

For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替換 To begin with

We can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法

our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被動

Additionally 替換 In addition / Besides

Deliver 替換 send

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個句子有三個精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個句型，還有however作為插入語，function in the disservice of 替換 do harm to

Emerging 替換 appearing(fading 替換 disappearing)

Net citizen 網民，屬于精彩用詞

As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替換 Every coin has two sides

Computers do play，do 強調

Positive 替換 important / good 等

A slice of 替換 a part of

Unfavorable 替換 bad

Impacts 替換 effects / influences

We should, therefore, take advantage of ? 使用插入語

Fruits(而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替換 advantage(defects 替換 disadvantage)

Facet 替換 aspect

各位同學，上面的作文里有這么多精彩的閃光點，作文怎么會不得高分呢！

以下是30個最經典的替換詞，各位同學可以參考一下。

1.individuals,characters, folks替換(people ,persons)

2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising

(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替換good

3readful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill(有害的)替換bad

如果bad做表語，可以有be less impressive替換

eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms.When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替換many.注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有詞。

Eg.Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that?.同理 用most, if not all ,替換most.5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替換some

6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that，hold the view that, it is widely shared that，it is universally acknowledged that)替think

(因為是書面語，所以要加that)

7:affair ,business ,matter 替換thing

8: shared 代 common

9.reap huge fruits 替換get many benefits)10or my part ,from my own perspective 替換 in my opinion

11:Increasing(ly),growing 替換more and more(注意沒有growingly這種形式。所以當修飾名詞時用increasing/growing.修飾形容詞，副詞用increasingly.Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替換hardly

13..beneficial, rewarding替換helpful，14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替換customer

15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替換very

16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable...替換 unnecessary, avoidable

17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替換sb take interest in / sb.be interested in

18.capture one's attention替換attract one's attention.19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect

20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear

21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替換cause.22.There are several reasons behind sth 替換..reasons for sth

23.desire 替換want.24.pour attention into 替換pay attention to

25.bear in mind that 替換remember

26.enjoy, possess 替換have(注意process是過程的意思)

27.interaction替換communication

28.frown on sth替換 be against , disagree with sth

29.to name only a few, as an example替換 for example, for instance

30.next to / virtually impossible,替換nearly / almost impossible

希望各位朋友能夠在平時的學習中多總結精彩、地道的詞匯和句型閃光點，并與大家共享！

163分到340分

--------------致同等學歷的師弟師妹

十一假期如期來臨,我也終于有足夠的時間坐下來寫點東西．我構思了好長時間才最終寫出了這些，如果我寫的這些東西對同等學歷的師弟師妹們考研復習有一點幫助的話，那對我將是莫大的榮幸.我于2005年畢業于河南洛陽某專科學校，畢業后在鄭州某電子衡器公司從事機械設計,2007年一月參加研究生入學考試以163分的成績敗北.2007年6月1日正式辭職開始復習考研,并在2008年的入學考試中以340分的總成績被江蘇省某大學順利錄取.我知道340的成績對于一般的本科應屆生來說不算什么,可是它對于一個高等數學只學過一點皮毛;線形代數學了一半;概率論與數理統計根本沒有接觸過;英語沒有過四級,甚至連一點語法都沒有;專業課教材是在工作后自己買的人來

說是多么的可貴!

朋友,如果你的基礎和我的差不多,我認為你可以一試,如果你的基

礎遠比我好,那你還猶豫什么?！

能夠給予大家激勵和動力的文章考研加油站(www.tmdps.cn)里“同等學歷”版塊里有很多(注：此處決不是做廣告，而是本人考研之初經常受到考研加油站里面熱心研友的幫忙和鼓勵，事實求是不由得不提及)。在此本人僅向那些奮斗在考研一線的同等學歷的戰友們致敬！你們工作了兩年，并最終能決定考研，實在難能可貴！

下面我將會詳細的介紹我復習的一些細節和經驗，大家可以根據自

己的情況選擇。

首先說英語。

選擇題部分。最初我把大量的精力都放在了單詞上，我用的是一款記單詞軟件，后來發現效果不甚理想，就干脆記大綱上的詞匯表，我認為效果很好。我堅決反對“單詞不重要”的說法，因為試想，拿到一篇文章，即便你沒有一點英語語法的知識，但認識所有的單詞，并以你20多年的人生閱歷，搞定它還不是小菜一碟。但換過來，你的語法即使達到博士水平，可一個單詞不認識，你能保證能搞定嗎？答案是顯而易見的。一句話，單詞很重要！

接下來說主觀題部分。我認為如果基礎不好，又想在最短的時間內拿到最高的分數，那就只能靠主觀題部分了,因為對于大綱要求的5400多單詞不是一時半會能搞定的,而主觀題部分則不然,只要你在最后兩

個月突擊一下,準能拿個高分.翻譯題我認為一定要寫,無論你寫的對還是不對,記住:只有你寫了

答案才有可能得分.小作文要求是一百單詞,一般是要求寫一封信,其實如果你很熟悉英文書寫格式的話很容易搞定,下面給一個例子:

Dear xxx

First of all, thank for …./ am apologize to…

I’m writing this letter in order to …..It will be a favor to me to receive you letter lately.And thanks

for you attention.Your sincerely

Xxxx

這不就是二三十個單詞嗎?中間根據要求再填七十多個單詞還不簡

單? 大作文是200單詞,其實也很簡單,一般是根據一幅圖片寫議論文,記住第一段提出觀點;第二段具體寫出能支持或者論證你的觀點的若干條理由,最好帶點實例以證明你的觀點;第三段總結.其實絕大多數考生的英語水平都是一般般的,尤其是寫作,所以一定要讓你的作文里面出現一兩個讓人的眼睛能為之一亮的,而且很多地方都可以用上的句子,當然最好是英文諺語,或者是極其經典的句子,譬如: what we are doing willingly is easy.It may become one tool that opens windows to the world, unlocks doors to opportunities, and expands our minds to new ideas.等等.這些句子如果在你的文章當中能用上三四個，當然會讓你的文章光芒四射，高分也自然是順理成章。順便說下，千萬被寫跑了題，看準了圖片和題意要求再寫，去年有好戰友就是失蹄于此,教

訓非常沉痛。

記得考試下來我根據網上的答案60分的選擇題我估了23分，當時很是郁悶，可成績下來一看英語53分，我感到很是意外。細細想來是主觀題做的好的原因。同時我建議做英語題先寫作文，再做翻譯，然后閱讀理解，最后完形填空，原因自己想。最后，字一定要寫好。記住，一手好字和一手爛字的可能差距在6分左右。我想至少也應給能做到書

寫認真吧。

數學，數學基礎很重要，課本一定要透徹。建議提前開始復習，并給最后的總復習留出三個月的時間。同時我不建議做很多的模擬題，因為模擬題和真題的水平相差甚遠。做五套足矣，但要做三遍以上。要搞懂每一道真題，尤其近幾年的。我建議真題做四遍以上。不要以為我是在故弄玄虛，做四遍不能得滿分的大有人在。數學我不想多說，總結就

一個字：精。

我的數學只的了88分，原因很簡單，我從6月分看教材，到11月才結束，根本沒有時間做真題和模擬練習。最后買的復習資料全新轉手

買給了別人。

政治。政治大綱的變化每年都會有很多，但是基本的東西是不會變的，所以大可不必擔心大綱的變化。而且不用復習的太早，最后留出兩三個月的時間就OK了。有人會問有沒有必要報班，我的回答是沒有必要，報班純粹是給自己找個心理安慰。試想，一個班少則幾十人，多則幾百人，每個人的基礎都不一樣，老師怎么能照顧的過來？作為一名合格的準研究生，我們都已經不再是孩子，我們需要獨立思考：我們需要什么。去年我們一起復習的我身邊戰友絕大多數都報了培訓班,可是當我問及他們最終的感覺怎么樣,他們的回答是:沒用!我建議買套任汝芬的政治資料，切不說權威與否，至少他們搞這個很多年，經驗還是有的。最好弄套MP3。在吃飯，上廁所的時候都能聽聽政治課，豈不美哉！MP3很容易搞到，網上也有。（我認為為了考研買一個MP3是很必

要的）

專業課 專業課拿不到120分以上就是沒有考好。最好通過關系弄點真題，一般來說網上有下載，如果沒有，就要自己想辦法了。最好和你想報的學校的往屆研究生取得聯系。最后，提幾點建議：

1，如果你有一臺電腦，并且可以上網，可以打游戲，我建議你把網線去掉，把游戲刪掉。因為你需要時間。2，如果你有女朋友并且正在一起為考研而奮斗，我建議最好兩個人保持一定的距離，最好不要住在一起，因為你需要時間和精力去學習,男女搭配干活不累,在這里不適用。3，如果你在自己舒適的家里學習，我建議你去某大學的自習室，最好是研究生專用的那種。（鄭州的同學可以去鄭大核心教學區南三，那棟樓有水，有暖氣，有電，而且全是考研的同胞。本人就曾在次學習，感謝鄭大！）4，如果你是在孤軍奮斗，我建議你找幾個同專業，最好是報考同一個學校的同學共同學習，大家有個商量，信息共享，相互鼓勵。俗話說聽君一席話，勝讀十年書。你會體會到的。5，如果你有很多親朋好友，請暫時和他們斷絕聯系，等考研究生之后再和他們聯系不遲。而且到時候你們的關系不會因為暫時的斷絕而冷淡，反而會更親近。6，如果你是同等學歷，并且準備報考211院校或者34所，除非你很牛很牛，或者你很年輕很年輕，成功的把握很大很大，并且完全有時間承受N次的失敗，否則就不要報。因為很有可能即使你的分數很高很高卻會在復試的時候被莫名其妙的淘汰，原因是——門第觀念！7,曾經參加過一個企業的培訓,時間是一個禮拜,講的內容當然很多很多,但只有一句話我記得最清楚:人生或許是一場游戲,但是,如果你以一種游戲的心態去對待你的人生,那么你得到的必將是一種游戲的結果.同理,考研也不是一場游戲,我們同樣不能用一種游戲的心態對待,不是

嗎?

第四篇：英語六級高分作文閃光點

作文寫完檢查集中點

1.每個句子是否都有謂語動詞；

2.動詞的時態和語態；

3.主謂搭配是否恰當；

4.標點符號。高分作文標志

1：是否長短句交叉；

2、是否會使用插入語；

3、用詞是否多樣，準確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞；

4、關鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復詞；

5、句型使用是否準確、地道。

具體例子下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項：

1.適當用被動替換主動，這樣能更客觀的反映事實, 句子開頭不要總是用we / I(比如寫結尾時不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.)舉個經典結尾2004年六月六級作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入語，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語放在中間，一般放在主語、動詞或者助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。

如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間，一般放在動詞，助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。

比如說： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that ?

3.一定要學會換詞，換形象，具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現good, bad , many, thing, think，people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替換proper, approaches替換ways, implement替換carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替換enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物競爭力)

下面舉一篇南京工程學院某位同學寫的優秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何運用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

Computer and I

I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替換 very

thrilling 替換 exciting

sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb.be interested in sth.google 替換 search

an army of 替換 a lot of

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個精彩句型，用來描述在某個時期發生了什么事情；

Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular

Coincident with ? 非常地道的句型，表達“與?一致”的意思，替換 With ?

Advancement 替換 development

Pour into(flood into / swarm into)替換 enter into

Current(currently)替換 now

Appeal to sb.替換 sb.be interested in sth.Growing individuals 替換 more and more people

It is no exaggeration to say 經典句型，說某事是毫不夸張的

For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替換 To begin with

We can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法

our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被動

Additionally 替換 In addition / Besides

Deliver 替換 send

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個句子有三個精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個句型，還有however作為插入語，function in the disservice of 替換 do harm to

Emerging 替換 appearing(fading 替換 disappearing)

Net citizen 網民，屬于精彩用詞

As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替換 Every coin has two sides

Computers do play，do 強調

Positive 替換 important / good 等

A slice of 替換 a part of

Unfavorable 替換 bad

Impacts 替換 effects / influences

We should, therefore, take advantage of ? 使用插入語

Fruits(而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替換 advantage(defects 替換 disadvantage)

Facet 替換 aspect

各位同學，上面的作文里有這么多精彩的閃光點，作文怎么會不得高分呢！

以下是30個最經典的替換詞，各位同學可以參考一下。

1.individuals,characters, folks替換(people ,persons)

2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising

(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替換good

3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill(有害的)替換bad 4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替換many.注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有詞。

Eg.Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that?.同理 用most, if not all ,替換most.5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替換some

6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think(因為是書面語，所以要加that)

7:affair ,business ,matter 替換thing

8: shared 代 common

9.reap huge fruits 替換get many benefits)

10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替換 in my opinion

11:Increasing(ly),growing 替換more and more(注意沒有growingly這種形式。所以當修飾名詞時用increasing/growing.修飾形容詞，副詞用increasingly.12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替換hardly

13..beneficial, rewarding替換helpful，14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替換customer

15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替換very

16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable...替換 unnecessary, avoidable

17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替換sb take interest in / sb.be interested in

18.capture one's attention替換attract one's attention.19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect

20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear

21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替換cause.22.There are several reasons behind sth 替換..reasons for sth

23.desire 替換want.24.pour attention into 替換pay attention to

25.bear in mind that 替換remember

26.enjoy, possess 替換have(注意process是過程的意思)

27.interaction替換communication

28.frown on sth替換 be against , disagree with sth

29.to name only a few, as an example替換 for example, for instance

30.next to / virtually impossible,替換nearly / almost impossible

應當承認:

Admittedly, a few governments have taken timid measures.2.simply 簡而言之:

The answer is simply money.3.discreetly 小心謹慎地:

point out discreetly that?

4.conceivably 可以想象地:

Smoking may, conceivably, be harmful.5.surely 肯定地:

This is surely the most short-sighted policy you could imagine.6.eagerly 渴望地

7.increasingly 不斷增長地

While money is eagerly collected in vast sums with one hand, it is paid out in increasingly vaster sums with the other.8.honestly: 誠實地:

the government is honestly concerned about the welfare of its people政府真心實意地關心它的人民的福利

9.certainly: 當然地

As individuals we are certainly weak, but if ?作為個人,我們當然是弱小的,但是如果?

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Importance of Reading Classics.You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.1.讀經典書籍對人的成長至關重要。

2.現在愿意閱讀經典的人卻越來越少，原因是。。3.我們大學生應該怎么做

The Importance of Reading Classics

第五篇：大學英語六級翻譯備考材料之傳統節日

大學英語六級翻譯備考材料之傳統節日

端午節翻譯材料：

中文材料：

端午節是中國農歷五月初五，千百年來，人們都以吃粽子和賽龍舟來紀念這個節日。端午節最出名的是賽龍舟，尤其是在有很多河流和湖泊的南方省份。賽舟會（regatta）是為了紀念傳說投河自盡的正直大臣屈原。龍舟賽象征著人們搶救和追回屈原的努力，典型的龍舟長50至100英尺，寬5.5英尺，并排坐著兩位劃槳人。

參考譯文：

The Dragon Boat Festivalis celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar.For thousands of years, the festival has been marked by eating Zongzi and racing dragon boats.The festival is best known for its dragon-boat races, especially in the southern provinces where there are many rivers and lakes.This regattacommemorates the death of Qu Yuan, an honest minister who is said to have committed suicide by drowning himself in a river.The dragon-boat race symbolizes the many attempts to rescue and recover Qu's body.A typical dragon boat ranges from 50-100 feet in length, with a beam of about 5.5 feet, accommodating two paddlers seated side by side.元宵節翻譯材料：

中文材料：

農歷正月十五日是元宵節，緊隨春節之后。古時候，人們提前二十天為“春節”做準備，然而，元宵節為春節畫上了句號，元宵之后，一切歸于平常。元宵節是家庭團聚的傳統佳節，最隆重的活動就是展掛各種各樣美麗的燈籠，故此，元宵節又叫“燈節”。

參考譯文：

The Yuanxiao Festival is on the 15th day of the first Chinese lunar month.It is closely related to the Spring Festival.In the old days, people began to prepare for the Spring Festival about 20 days ahead.However, the Yuanxiao Festival marks the end of the New Year celebrations.And after the Yuanxiao Festival, everything returns to normal.It is traditionally a day for family reunion.The most prominent activity of the Yuanxiao Festival is the display of all types of beautiful lanterns.So the occasion is also called the Lantern Festival.以上就是有關節日的一些翻譯復習參考資料，建議考生在復習時注重一些涉及中國傳統節日的常用表述，如農歷（Chinese lunar month）、紀念（commemorate）、象征（symbolize）、傳說……（be said…）、家庭團聚（family reunion）、最隆重的活動（the most prominent activity）、一切歸于平常（Everything returns to normal.）等，在練習時，先不要看譯文，自己看中文試著譯成英文，在自己翻譯完之后對照參考譯文看看有哪些表達是自己漏譯或錯譯的，摘抄下來，每天復習一遍，只有平時多積累，才能在大學英語六級考場上在翻譯部分取得高分。天道酬勤，祝各位考生備考順利，最后取得自己理想的成績！

2013年12月份的四六級考試是題型改革后的首次考試，依據這次題型的考試內容和特點，我們可以推斷一下2014年6月的考試特點，從而為之后的復習找到側重點。可以看出，本次翻譯題材側重考察與中國傳統文化相關的內容，體裁一般為說明文或介紹類的文章。這種類型的短文還是比較好翻譯的，不會有太多的生詞或長難的句子。

特點一：文章傾向介紹類

2013年12月的翻譯考查內容涉及的基本都是中國傳統文化，例如：中國結（The Chinese knot），茶文化（Chinese tea），中餐（Chinese food）等。既然主題有關中國傳統文化，那么肯定會涉及一些有關中國傳統文化的專有詞匯，比如說：團聚、祈求好運、帝王、瑰寶、造紙、火藥、福、和、皇室成員、指南針、印刷術、瓷器等等。很多同學吐槽單詞不會寫，但也不能空著，一定要想到合適的表達。其實，這些詞匯看似很難無從下手，但其實只有：帝王、造紙、火藥、福、和、指南針、印刷術、瓷器這些的翻譯比較固定，而其他的詞或短語則可以靈活地變通。例如 “皇室成員”不僅可以說成：the royal family，也可以譯成： the emperor's family, 或 the king's family。當然要想靈活自如，備戰過程中背誦積累是必不可缺的。

特點二：相同表達反復出現

既然內容都是有關中國傳統文化，盡管主題不一樣，還是有很多表達會不可避免的反復出現，比如：“相傳，中國的??于五千年前發現了??，在明清期間，遍布全國，在六世紀傳到??”、“??常常作為禮物交換或作用飾品祈求好運和辟邪”、“??在中國各地差別很大”、“在中文里意味著愛情丶婚姻和團聚”、“在古代，人們用它來??，但現在主要是用于裝飾的目的”。這些句子具有重復出現的特點，介紹中國各種傳統習俗都頻繁用到。所以我們可以把這些表達的英文變成模板句子進行背誦。

特點三：題材貼近生活，翻譯靈活性強

改革后的四六級翻譯題材多貼近生活實際，容易引起學生的興趣。體裁多傾向于說明文或介紹性的文章，有時近似散文性質，所以不會太難。另外，四六級考的是中譯英，特別是介紹性文章，有它固定的技巧，比如切分句子，添加主語，主語為“我們人們”直接變被動，定語的三類翻譯方法，四六級翻譯不求“雅”，抓住這些基本的技巧，做到“信” 和“達”就可以了。

總之，如前文所述，改革后的四級考試翻譯側重考查中國傳統文化內容，體裁多傾向于說明文或介紹性的文章，不會太難，容易讓學生產生興趣與共鳴。鑒于中國傳統文化的題材已經考過，所以今年應該不會重復考查，但是題材易變，題材不會發生太大變化，還望大家多多練習相應體裁的文段翻譯，如此才能得到切實的長進。最后，希望大家做好充分準備，積極備考，一舉通關！