第一篇：英語六級高分作文閃光點

作文寫完檢查集中點

1.每個句子是否都有謂語動詞；

2.動詞的時態和語態；

3.主謂搭配是否恰當；

4.標點符號。高分作文標志

1：是否長短句交叉；

2、是否會使用插入語；

3、用詞是否多樣，準確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞；

4、關鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復詞；

5、句型使用是否準確、地道。

具體例子下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項：

1.適當用被動替換主動，這樣能更客觀的反映事實, 句子開頭不要總是用we / I(比如寫結尾時不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.)舉個經典結尾2004年六月六級作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入語，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語放在中間，一般放在主語、動詞或者助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。

如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間，一般放在動詞，助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。

比如說： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that ?

3.一定要學會換詞，換形象，具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現good, bad , many, thing, think，people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替換proper, approaches替換ways, implement替換carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替換enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物競爭力)

下面舉一篇南京工程學院某位同學寫的優秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何運用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

Computer and I

I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替換 very

thrilling 替換 exciting

sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb.be interested in sth.google 替換 search

an army of 替換 a lot of

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個精彩句型，用來描述在某個時期發生了什么事情；

Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular

Coincident with ? 非常地道的句型，表達“與?一致”的意思，替換 With ?

Advancement 替換 development

Pour into(flood into / swarm into)替換 enter into

Current(currently)替換 now

Appeal to sb.替換 sb.be interested in sth.Growing individuals 替換 more and more people

It is no exaggeration to say 經典句型，說某事是毫不夸張的

For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替換 To begin with

We can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法

our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被動

Additionally 替換 In addition / Besides

Deliver 替換 send

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個句子有三個精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個句型，還有however作為插入語，function in the disservice of 替換 do harm to

Emerging 替換 appearing(fading 替換 disappearing)

Net citizen 網民，屬于精彩用詞

As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替換 Every coin has two sides

Computers do play，do 強調

Positive 替換 important / good 等

A slice of 替換 a part of

Unfavorable 替換 bad

Impacts 替換 effects / influences

We should, therefore, take advantage of ? 使用插入語

Fruits(而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替換 advantage(defects 替換 disadvantage)

Facet 替換 aspect

各位同學，上面的作文里有這么多精彩的閃光點，作文怎么會不得高分呢！

以下是30個最經典的替換詞，各位同學可以參考一下。

1.individuals,characters, folks替換(people ,persons)

2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising

(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替換good

3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill(有害的)替換bad 4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替換many.注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有詞。

Eg.Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that?.同理 用most, if not all ,替換most.5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替換some

6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think(因為是書面語，所以要加that)

7:affair ,business ,matter 替換thing

8: shared 代 common

9.reap huge fruits 替換get many benefits)

10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替換 in my opinion

11:Increasing(ly),growing 替換more and more(注意沒有growingly這種形式。所以當修飾名詞時用increasing/growing.修飾形容詞，副詞用increasingly.12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替換hardly

13..beneficial, rewarding替換helpful，14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替換customer

15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替換very

16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable...替換 unnecessary, avoidable

17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替換sb take interest in / sb.be interested in

18.capture one's attention替換attract one's attention.19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect

20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear

21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替換cause.22.There are several reasons behind sth 替換..reasons for sth

23.desire 替換want.24.pour attention into 替換pay attention to

25.bear in mind that 替換remember

26.enjoy, possess 替換have(注意process是過程的意思)

27.interaction替換communication

28.frown on sth替換 be against , disagree with sth

29.to name only a few, as an example替換 for example, for instance

30.next to / virtually impossible,替換nearly / almost impossible

應當承認:

Admittedly, a few governments have taken timid measures.2.simply 簡而言之:

The answer is simply money.3.discreetly 小心謹慎地:

point out discreetly that?

4.conceivably 可以想象地:

Smoking may, conceivably, be harmful.5.surely 肯定地:

This is surely the most short-sighted policy you could imagine.6.eagerly 渴望地

7.increasingly 不斷增長地

While money is eagerly collected in vast sums with one hand, it is paid out in increasingly vaster sums with the other.8.honestly: 誠實地:

the government is honestly concerned about the welfare of its people政府真心實意地關心它的人民的福利

9.certainly: 當然地

As individuals we are certainly weak, but if ?作為個人,我們當然是弱小的,但是如果?

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Importance of Reading Classics.You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.1.讀經典書籍對人的成長至關重要。

2.現在愿意閱讀經典的人卻越來越少，原因是。。3.我們大學生應該怎么做

The Importance of Reading Classics

第二篇：英語六級寫作高分經驗總結

英語六級寫作高分經驗總結

來源: 文都教育

英語六級作文一直是考生頭疼的考試內容，似乎除了死背單詞和范文找不到更好的方法，其實好的作文在寫作中卻是存在一定的技巧的，為了方便大家復習，文都老師就在下面這篇文章里來跟大家分享一些六級寫作的高分經驗。

開端長短句相結合，畫龍點睛

考生都知道六級作文的得分點其中之一便是復雜句，好的作文中無疑會有很多優秀的復雜句，但是整篇作文全部都是復雜句構成的話，也會給人晦澀穿鑿的感覺，然而，在文章的開頭寫一個短小精辟的句子卻可以起到畫龍點睛的作用。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主題。考生在文章開端時可以選擇用一個長句一個短句，長句在前短句在后的形式，如果要對觀點進行闡述的話，可以就每一個小點采用先短后長的句式，這樣顯得短小精悍并具有總結性。

主題句放在開頭，清晰點題

作文老師在閱卷時時間緊迫，一般都會喜歡盡快找到文章的主題，所以考生在寫作時可以在第一段開頭就寫明主題句，后面的文章就緊緊圍繞這一主題展開，這樣不僅可以讓老師一目了然，也可以使自己的文章主題明確，條理清晰，如果把主題句放到文章中間，那么閱卷老師稍一倉促可能就找不到這樣就會認定考生的作文偏題或跑題了，再想得高分就不容易了。

句式多變，靈活運用復合句和連接詞

英語作文要想給人一種很精深有水平的感覺那就必然少不了運用復合句。所謂復合句就是那些主句里面套從句，句式較長的語句，考生高中時就學過定語從句、賓語從句、主從復合句等等基本的語法知識，在作文中可以加以運用。除此之外，英語作文的寫作中，構成復雜句還有一個很重要的方式就是連接詞的運用，在寫作中通常會用到的就是轉折、因果和并列關系的連接詞，考生在復習時可以總結一下這些連接詞，作文中用來寫出漂亮的長句式。以上關于六級作文的寫作經驗看起來很簡單，但是真正堅持做到卻不那么容易，考試之前的時間不多了，考生要注意有效率地運用這段時間，加緊對作文進行復習。

第三篇：英語六級寫作備考之創造閃光點

高分作文標志:

1：是否長短句交叉;

2、是否會使用插入語;

3、用詞是否多樣，準確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞;

4、關鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復詞;

5、句型使用是否準確、地道。

下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項：

1.適當用被動替換主動，這樣能更客觀的反映事實, 句子開頭不要總是用we / I(比如寫結尾時不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.)舉個經典結尾2004年六月六級作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入語，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語放在中間，一般放在主語、動詞或者助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。

如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間，一般放在動詞，助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。

比如說： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that ?

3.一定要學會換詞，換形象，具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現good, bad , many, thing, think，people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替換proper, approaches替換ways, implement替換carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替換enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物競爭力)

下面舉一篇南京工程學院某位同學寫的優秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何運用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

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Computer and I(By Simmy)

I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替換 very

thrilling 替換 exciting

sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb.be interested in sth.google 替換 search

an army of 替換 a lot of

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個精彩句型，用來描述在某個時期發生了什么事情;Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular

Coincident with ?非常地道的句型，表達“與?一致”的意思，替換 With ?

Advancement 替換 development

Pour into(flood into / swarm into)替換 enter into

Current(currently)替換 now

Appeal to sb.替換 sb.be interested in sth.Growing individuals 替換 more and more people

It is no exaggeration to say 經典句型，說某事是毫不夸張的

For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替換 To begin with

We can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法

our knowledge will be well enriched,and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被動

Additionally 替換 In addition / Besides

Deliver 替換 send

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個句子有三個精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個句型，還有however作為插入語，function in the disservice of 替換 do harm to

Emerging 替換 appearing(fading 替換 disappearing)

Net citizen 網民，屬于精彩用詞

As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替換 Every coin has two sides

Computers do play，do 強調

Positive 替換 important / good 等

A slice of 替換 a part of 滬江四六級 http://cet.hjenglish.com

Unfavorable 替換 bad

Impacts 替換 effects / influences

We should, therefore, take advantage of ?使用插入語

Fruits(而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替換 advantage(defects 替換 disadvantage)Facet 替換 aspect

各位同學，上面的作文里有這么多精彩的閃光點，作文怎么會不得高分呢!

第四篇：英語六級寫作寫作技巧之創造閃光點

英語六級寫作寫作技巧之創造閃光點

高分作文標志： 1：是否長短句交叉;

2、是否會使用插入語;

3、用詞是否多樣，準確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞;

4、關鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復詞;

5、句型使用是否準確、地道。下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項：

1.適當用被動替換主動，這樣能更客觀的反映事實, 句子開頭不要總是用we / I(比如寫結尾時不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.)舉個經典結尾2004年六月六級作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入語，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語放在中間，一般放在主語、動詞或者助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間，一般放在動詞，助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。比如說： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that … 3.一定要學會換詞，換形象，具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現good, bad , many, thing, think,people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替換proper, approaches替換ways, implement替換carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替換enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物競爭力)

下面舉一篇南京工程學院某位同學寫的優秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何運用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

Computer and I(By Simmy)

I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替換 very thrilling 替換 exciting

sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb.be interested in sth.google 替換 search an army of 替換 a lot of

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個精彩句型，用來描述在某個時期發生了什么事情;Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular

Coincident with … 非常地道的句型，表達“與…一致”的意思，替換 With …

Advancement 替換 development

Pour into(flood into / swarm into)替換 enter into Current(currently)替換 now

Appeal to sb.替換 sb.be interested in sth.Growing individuals 替換 more and more people

It is no exaggeration to say 經典句型，說某事是毫不夸張的 For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替換 To begin with

We can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法

our knowledge will be well enriched,and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被動 Additionally 替換 In addition / Besides Deliver 替換 send

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個句子有三個精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個句型，還有however作為插入語，function in the disservice of 替換 do harm to

Emerging 替換 appearing(fading 替換 disappearing)Net citizen 網民，屬于精彩用詞

As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替換 Every coin has two sides Computers do play，do 強調 Positive 替換 important / good 等 A slice of 替換 a part of Unfavorable 替換 bad

Impacts 替換 effects / influences We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入語 Fruits(而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替換 advantage(defects 替換 disadvantage)Facet 替換 aspect 各位同學，上面的作文里有這么多精彩的閃光點，作文怎么會不得高分呢!

第五篇：2013年6月英語六級作文高分版

2013年6月英語六級作文高分版

Keep Our Hearts Strong

As the proverb goes, constant drops wear out the stone.Good habits help pave our way to success.However, during the cultivation of good habits we are frequently bewildered and baffled by temptations from the world around us.Only when we are alert and determined enough to resist these temptations can we take a right and unswerving road to success.In our daily life, it is essential for us to be self-disciplined.A healthy lifestyle, which may consist of regular exercise and balanced diet, is what most people are pursuing in contemporary society.Yet many people cannot resist the coziness of staying in and temptation of tasty but fatty food, thus giving up half way cultivating healthy habits and getting decreasingly robust.In addition, our progress in academic performance depends on good habits.We must restrain ourselves from endless entertainment.Otherwise, distracted and indulged, we can never maintain a good learning habit, let alone achieve academic excellence.In summary, good habits rely on strong hearts that are not disturbed by temptations.With persistence and perseverance, we are heading to success.【點評】：

本次作文要求以“Good habits result from resisting temptation.”即“良好的習慣源自抵制誘惑”，這一諺語為話題發表議論，在寫作時需要對諺語的寓意進行闡釋，并且表達自己的觀點和看法，相比更為常見的話題型和觀點型作文題來說，有一定的難度。首先要求能夠對諺語進行準確的理解，抓住諺語表達的中心意思，明確的提出觀點，然后圍繞這個意思進行闡述。所以在寫作時需要強調抵制誘惑對于保持或者培養良好習慣的重要性，以這一論點進行展開闡述，注意行文的邏輯性和語言的準確、流暢。

Say No to Temptation

We are living in a world full of temptations.Due to lack of experience and determined will, many people cannot discriminate right from wrong and make bad decisions.For example, some students wallow in internet and lose themselves.Finally, they abandon their studies and ruin their future.Such things are horrible.As the saying goes, good habits result from resisting temptation.For us college students, it is particularly important to say no to temptation and form good habits.To achieve this, firstly, distinguish between right and wrong.Stay away from adverse temptations such as smoking and playing computer games.Secondly, it is necessary to have a long-term program, in other words, a dream.Once we have a dream, we will be conscious that our time is precious.Then we could have a strong will to say no to temptations and focus on meaningful issues.At last, in face of temptations, encourage yourself and refuse self-indulgence.Awards can be given yourself if you successfully resist a temptation.Meanwhile, good habits are formed in this process.Only by resisting adverse temptations and developing good habits can we achieve happiness and success.Otherwise, we would pay a heavy price.2013年6月六級作文范文

Good habits resultfromresistingtemptation

Good habits are a valuable thing and a bridge reaching desirable results.Evidently, good habits include teamwork, optimistic attitude, confidence and so on.It is well known that teamwork always leaves us less mean-spirited and more inclusive.Again, optimistic attitude and confidence can encourage us to never give up and find silver linings in desperate situations.Why should we actively cultivate good habits? For one thing, good habits can jump our trains of thought onto correct tracks, in turn, we can bypass the wrong path.For another thing, persisting what we are good at and doing even more of it creates excellence.This is where developing good habits comes in.As a result, we should take some effective steps to cultivate our good habits.For instance, we can frequently inform young people that opportunities for errors abound, so we must develop good habits to cope with them.To sum up, we cannot deny it that good habits do carry a positive connotation.A smile is the shortest distance between two people

Mark Twain once said, “The human race has one really effective weapon, and that is laughter.”A smile will unconsciously pull short distance between hearts, which is the charm of a smile.So never stop smiling, even when you are sad, for someone might fall in love with your smile.Undoubtedly, it is smile that keeps us continually shortening the distance among people.When you fall down, a smile from others will bring you the power to stand up.Besides, smile is a name card which will make the people around you feel comfortable and pave the way for you to make good friends.When you feel disappointed with the life and get heartbroken with the love, just smile, it's a good medicine for your hurt soul.Were there no smile, never would we taste a happy and healthy life.Consequently, from what has been discussed above, it can be safely concluded that a smile is beneficial for us bridge gaps of social interaction and sweep disorders of human communication.On Maintaining Trust

Trust is the most frequently used word when we are talking about interpersonal relationships.However, it is hard to build trust but easy to destroy it.Therefore, how to build and maintain trust is very important for us.In my opinion, some factors play a primary role in it.First comes honesty.There’s an old saying in Chinese: once bitten, twice shy.Thus, never lie to your partners.If they find out you’re lying or cheating, the existing trust will be broken.Once broken, it’s always hard to rebuild it.Promise-keeping is the second one.If you always break your promise, you will not be trusted by others any more.Another important aspect is attitude.People with good attitude are always welcome.They show their good manners, patience, modesty, willingness to communicate and, most important of all, sincerity to others, which contributes greatly to eliminating apathy and coldness.There are, still, other influential factors.However, from my perspective, honesty, promise-keeping and good attitude stand out among them.1.more and more：越來越多

= is / are(increasing, getting increasingly, growing)

2.think：認為

=(acknowledge, hold the, consider)that

3.in my opinion：以我看來

= as for me, from my part, from my own perspective

4.popular：流行的= is / are(prevailing, prevalent)

5.but：但是

= however, although, on the contrary, nevertheless

6.because: 因為

= for, result from, due to, caused by, on account of

7.improve：提高

= enhance, promote, boost, soar

8.finish：完成= complete, fulfill, accomplish, achieve

9.fast：快地

=quickly, rapidly, in a fast speed

10.important：重要的=vital, significant, critical, crucial