第一篇:新材料作文“咫尺與天涯”的寫作指導與例文。
新材料作文“咫尺與天涯”的寫作指導與例文。
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詩人顧城有句出名的詩:“你看云時,我覺得很近,你看我時,我覺得很遠。”這里說的是人與人之間的隔膜。
成語中有“咫尺天涯”一詞,意思是說雖然近在咫尺,卻遠如天涯。
海南省海邊有一塊石碑,上書“天涯海角”,那里就是人們常說的“天涯”,現在飛機幾小時就到了。
美國在地球的那一邊,似乎也是“天涯”,但衛星電視一下子將它拉到我們面前。這是現代科技的神威,它使我們生存空間的距離相對縮短了,難怪有地球村之說。
要求全面理解材料,但可以選擇一個側面、一個角度構思作文。自主確定立意,確定文體,確定標題;不要脫離材料的含意作文,不要套作,不得抄襲。
審題提示
由材料我們可以進行發散性思維,如從美學角度寫“距離產生美”,從交往角度寫“距離可以保持一個人的獨立個性”,從認知角度寫“距離可以保證客觀性”,從物理角度寫“距離可以提供活動空間,保證安全”等,但結合材料聚合思維,則不能這樣隨意去寫了,材料告訴我們距離的遠近是相對的,有條件的:
一、二兩則材料,從心理角度講咫尺可以成為天涯,這是因為人與人之間心靈的隔膜;
三、四兩則材料從科技角度講天涯可以變為咫尺,這是因為科技進步的力量。寫作時從這兩個角度切入方為正點。至于文體選擇,“你有這樣的體會嗎”,暗示你寫記敘文,從心理或者科技角度寫距離由遠變近或由近變遠的體會,“同意這樣的觀點嗎”,則是要寫議論文,同意不同意皆可,體現話題的開放性。如同意,則是因心靈隔膜,人與人之間咫尺如天涯,不同意可寫只要人與人心靈溝通,“海內存知己,天涯若比鄰”。
這些材料說明距離的遠和近是相對的,有條件的。
一、二則材料從心理角度講咫尺可以成為天涯,這是因為人與人之間心靈的隔膜;
三、四兩則材料從科技角度講天涯可以變為咫尺,這是因為科技進步的力量。寫作時從這兩個角度切入方為正點。
例文五篇
咫尺與天涯
高三(13)班
李林盛
近在咫尺,遠在天涯,一些事物,看似在咫尺,卻遠在天涯;相反的一些事物看似在天涯,卻近在咫尺。
在每年的高考中,很多人因一分而落榜,一分,雖說不多,但也取得關鍵性的作用。多一分,也許你可以超越千人,而少一分,亦可使人落后千人。就差一分,使你不能踏入大學大門,一分之差,雖說很近,但也由于這一分,使你遠離了你理想的學校,使你與你理想的大學相隔天涯。
被稱為“兵乓皇后”的鄧亞萍,身高僅有1.55米,她曾被認為是不可造之材,數次被拒于省隊和國家隊大門之外,獲得奧運會冠軍對她來說,應該是非常遙遠的距離,奧運會冠軍,應是在她的天涯之外。對此,她非常刻苦的訓練自己,在不斷的磨礪自己當中,不斷地使自己強大起來,因此,她獲得了許多的世界冠軍和奧運會冠軍,所以,天涯的距離并不是不可以改變,只要你努力了,天涯之外也可以變為咫尺之內的距離。
中國的科技發展水平曾非常落后于西方國家。在鴉片戰爭、甲午戰爭和八國聯軍侵華戰爭中,中國都處于劣勢之中,被列強欺壓侮辱,原因在于中國的軍事實力跟列強的相差太 1 大。后來,我國不斷發展經濟和軍事實力,使中國的經濟和軍事實力于列強相匹敵,甚至超越了其他國家。可見,以前與列強實力相距甚遠的國家,經過努力也可以拉近距離了。所以,天涯的距離可以拉近,拉近為咫尺的距離。
三國時期的劉備,他當初也只是一個編草鞋的普通人。當做皇帝的事情,對他來說,是觸手而不可及的、是無法達到的。可以說這跟劉備是相隔天涯之遠。但到了后來,劉備善于把握機遇,廣招賢才猛將,最終建立了蜀國。可見,以前認為是不可能做到的事情,但通過了努力還是有可能達到的。
天涯雖遠,但通過努力也可以拉近距離;咫尺雖近,但不好好把握,也可令你不能到達。
沒有永遠的天涯,也沒有永遠的咫尺,一切都需靠自己的努力。
評語:本文符合題意,且能夠辯證地分析“咫尺與天涯”,所列舉事例也較恰當。
(評分47分)
距離幫我們把愛永恒 高三(13)班
鄒沁蘭
我一直在尋找,尋找一種縮短距離的方法。或許是站在高樓上試圖拉近與藍天的距離;或許把腳伸入小溪想要靠近五彩斑斕的魚兒;或許把水棒在手心想留住這份清爽。
在這個物欲橫流的時代,人們更多關注的是物質的多少和錢財的多少,而把我們中國的傳統美德拋之腦后,使得人與人之間只有利益關系,心與心的距離更加遙遠。如果這樣下去,那么世界將會變成什么樣子呢?或許社會將會變成一個沒有硝煙的戰場——明爭暗斗;或許人與人之間更加冷漠,沒有感情可言;或許世界上充滿“冷氣壓”,把每個人的心凍結。這時候你還能忽視距離嗎?
雖然社會中有許多“冷氣壓”的現象,但也不缺少制造暖氣的“火爐”。
茫茫人海,鱗次櫛比的樓群,無意間聽到的一個聲音,或是偶然間瞥見的沒有人注意到的情景,都讓我停下匆忙的腳步,在燈火闌珊處,細心品味兩顆心靠近時心靈感到的溫暖。一個六七歲的小女孩小心翼翼地幫助老奶奶過馬路,我看到了兩顆心在向彼此靠近,我看到愛的光環在她們身旁。其實,心與心的距離,只需要一個動作或一句話語,就能讓他們彼此靠近,那我們何妨不去嘗試一下呢?
還記得那個托舉生命的最美媽媽吳菊萍嗎?一個年輕的母親,在路過一棟10多層高的大樓時,用她最柔弱的雙臂接住了從10層樓掉下來的一位兩歲多的女孩,事后她說:“這是本能,是一個母親都會做的事。”她的一句話,讓世界為之觸動,讓心與心更加靠近,讓距離幫我們把愛永恒。
相隔兩地時,距離也許會把我們的心拉的更遠,也許會讓兩顆心更加靠近。為什么這么說呢?當兩個好朋友即將分開各奔前程時,他們往往會更加懷念對方。“海內存知己,天涯若比鄰。”即使他們相隔兩地,只要對方一封信,一個電話,都能感到對方好像從沒有離開過自己,反而更加懷念和對方在一起的快樂時光,而讓彼此更加靠近,這時就會覺得對方“遠在天邊,近在眼前”。這難道不是距離幫我們把愛永恒嗎?
當我們離藍天近一點時,更能感受到空氣的清新;當我們離魚兒近一點時,更能感受到魚兒的自由歡樂;當我們把水捧在手心時,更能體會到水的清爽給我們內心帶來的舒適。其實,距離從來都不是阻礙我們的絆腳石,而是能幫我們把愛心永恒的時光機。
2(評分48分)
拉近心的距離 高三(16)班
宋佳佳
曾經在一張試卷上看到過這樣一句話;擁抱真是一個奇怪的東西,明明靠得那么近,卻遠得看不見彼此的臉。我們生活在社會、經濟、科技都高速發展的21世紀,從北京到廣州不再需要好幾天的時間;登上珠峰不再是可望不可及的事??一切事情似乎都越來越近了,但是,人與人之間的心靈卻好像漸行漸遠,脫離了相知的軌道。
我們可以用真誠寬容的“磁鐵”來粉飾我們的心靈,使每顆心都能漸漸被相互吸引。在與同學一起學習時,如果總能懷著一顆敬佩但又努力拼搏的心,我相信同學之間就不再存在猜疑嫉妒;與父母交流時,如果常常用一種尊敬和感激的心態來對待父母,我相信子女與父母的爭吵與代溝就會少一些;在面對社會時,如果時常抱著憧憬與包容的態度時,我相信會減少很多社會**與不滿。正是因為有這樣那樣的嫌隙,拉遠了我們心與心的距離,那我們不妨讓真誠寬容重新拉近心的距離,讓心與心相伴。
我們可以用一股股的外來正能量,作為發動機的動力,拉近我們的心靈。在抗震救災時,人民軍隊與自愿者們一起奮力搶救被困人員,這就是可貴的正能量釋放的體現。在電視熒屏中,一幕幕的“最美司機”、“最美教師”、“最美媽媽”,是可貴的正能量;在音樂播放器中,一首首贊頌偉大人性的勵志歌曲,是可貴的正能量。當心與心不能很順利的拉近距離時,我們可以用這些正能量來拉動,當心與心固執不前時,我們可以用這些正能量來感化心靈。
我們不應當成為“隔膜制造器”,在心與心之間構造一張張的隔膜,增加拉近距離的阻礙。因為一些閑言細語,因為一些負面消息,因為一些未經證實的謠言,或者因為對方犯過一些小錯誤??,因為這種種而否定他人,是不可取的。我也會因一面之詞而拒絕拉近彼此心的距離,所以我時常告誡自己:要以寬容的心看問題,用真誠的心去與人相處。因為“以誠感人者,人亦誠而應”。
在經濟快速發展的今天,許多東西都從“遙不可及”變得“舉手可得”,我們的心也不能落后,要努力拉近心的距離,讓心交心,讓我們的世界真正達到了“海內存知己,天涯若比鄰”的崇高境界。
(評分46分)
讓隔閡消失在人們的大愛中 高三(16)班
李莉雅
時間似鳥翩翩過,世事如棋局局新。歲月的流逝并沒有淡化余老對祖國的熱枕,余老的鄉愁超越了臺灣海峽,毫不保留地訴說對大陸的愛。可見,雖臺灣還未回歸祖國,但臺灣同胞對祖國的熱愛沒有隔閡,讓兩岸同胞的咫尺相連。
人與人之間的隔閡不是距離問題,而是人們心靈溝通的缺失。網上有句流傳很廣的話:世界上最遙遠的距離不是不能相見,而是我們坐在一起,你卻在玩手機。我們在家庭聚餐中經常是忙著玩手機,對爺爺奶奶的關愛較少,甚至出現老人摔杯離席而去的場面。現在很多年輕朋友回家后的漠然傷透了老人敏感的心靈。這難道不是我們生活中的悲涼嗎?人近在咫尺,情卻如隔天涯。原本沒有的隔閡就是在與家人缺少交流的生活中產生,我們完全能將這隔閡去掉,我們常回家看看,和老人聊聊天,那也是為老人所稱道的天倫之樂啊!
北大校長周其鳳便是以身作則,在母親90大壽時當眾給母親下跪懺悔,感動了全場的親友。樹欲靜而風不止,子欲養而親不待。我們不要存在親情隔閡,長輩們給予我們的愛,厚重如山。隔閡的存在會讓我們的人生充滿不幸與遺憾;隔閡的消失能使我們發現周圍身邊的小確幸,發現生活中的美好。
國家之間的隔閡會給國民帶來不幸,讓國家瀕于紛亂與戰爭。古往今來,有多少跨國界的殺戮都是因人為的隔閡而產生,猶太人幾百萬的生命讓納粹黨輕易奪去,因為國民種族生存的隔閡傷害無辜的生命真的不值得。即使有隔閡,我們也因揚長避短,讓隔閡的傷害降到最低。
譬如中日關系的曲折發展,也許兩國的意識形態不同,會讓中日兩國人民間互抱成見,但是并不影響兩國之間的經濟合作。日本需要中國的市場,中國需要日本的先進技術來改造自身的技術。可見,隔閡是相對而言的,沒有哪種隔閡是永遠存在的,不論是人與人之間還是國與國之間的隔閡,都會被人們的大愛,隨著時間、地點、條件而轉移。
詩人顧城曾有一句詩:“你看云,我覺得很近;你看我,我覺得很遠。”雖說是人們之間存在的隔閡,但只要我們放下對他人的成見,以平和欣賞的態度去和人交往,那么隔閡便會消失在人們的大愛中,細水長流。
(評分47分)
距離,產生美
高三(16)班
邱淑楠
一個世紀的距離,阻擋不了泰戈爾低聲淺吟“世界上最美的距離??”生存與死亡的距離,阻擋不了哈姆雷特搜尋在一千個讀者眼中的身影。寂寞與繁華的距離,阻擋不了張愛玲輕輕褪去整個上海的光怪陸離。
“海內存知己,天涯若比鄰。”當意氣風發的王勃遭遇友人間無法避免的離別時豪邁如他,自然是一種樂觀。弱冠之年,就可以辨出距離的意義,彌足珍貴。“我寄愁心與明月,隨風直到夜郎西。”當遙聞王昌齡左遷龍標的李白不再年輕,歲月的刀在他的眉頭刻下紋路,落寞的詩人們還可共瞻一輪明月,當離別的距離碰上真摯的友情,距離也只會讓友情更加美麗,正像遙看草色。
距離,勾勒出戀人們的輪廓,讓愛情更加甜蜜。心與心的距離,像是背靠背的距離,明明近在咫尺,卻看不見彼此的身影。一晃五十多年過去,每當記起林徽因的點點滴滴,金岳霖先生還是百感交集。但凡了解兩人故事的人,無不對二人彼此相知卻無法相愛的結局唏噓不已。理想及背景的差距,讓有夫之婦的林徽因不敢越雷池半步,也讓高潔的金岳霖秉承“君子之交淡如水”的態度不能求愛。距離,又是這段令人嫌惡的距離。然而,距離也讓當局者做到了真正的“清”。這段感情距離,便成了人們心中的鵲橋,如牛郎織女一般,即便是天涯,亦是咫尺。
世界上最遙遠的距離,莫過于人心與人心的距離。物欲橫流的社會,每個人都在忙于升職加薪,忙于察言觀色。只有在失意困厄時,方才想到朋友,更可悲的是,昨天還春風得意的你,今天就兩手空空,這其中的落差竟是你“最親密”的朋友一手導演的鬧劇。現代科技拉近了人與人之間的距離,卻怎么也拉不近人與人的心靈距離。
人,總是在這個世界上尋尋覓覓,想要得到自己想得到的東西。越是得不到,就越想要得到。因為有距離,因為很刺激。追求完美的東西,本來是一件美好的事情,但不能不擇手段,不顧一切,否則就會成為一種病態,拿捏得當很重要。
不管世人如何庸俗,我還是相信距離產生美。
(評分50分)
第二篇:天涯不能咫尺優美散文
芙蓉花盛開,如粉紅色的云團,停在樹冠,溫潤柔和;每一朵芙蓉花又十分精致,纖纖巧巧的花蕊,輕柔地落在花正中,甚是可愛。早一批開的芙蓉花謝了,落了一地,行走的人往往要繞過去,保持它徹頭徹尾的美麗。
我又憶起柳絮飄飛的情景。六月的柳樹褪去了初春的鵝黃,在漸漸步入初夏的時候,越發妸娜多姿。千條柳絲如千縷秀發,在微微的風中搖曳,煞是迷人。若你看慣了柳絲,潔白的柳絮登場了:柳樹突然變得大手筆,豪邁地向天空拋灑,那些柳絮在空中打旋、飛揚,被風吹著,尋找適合自己的沃土。植物的新陳代謝本是規律,卻往往觸動詩人的思緒,往往與漂泊無依、分散天涯聯系起來,有了一些悲涼的意味。詩人偏執地喜歡悲涼,可能是在悲涼中,更容易讓自己靈魂安靜下來,不致于得意忘形抑或失魂落魄。
我在六月的時候往往悲傷,中考是六月、高考是六月,大學畢業是六月。六月的人很忙碌:忙升學、忙工作、忙給十多年的苦讀找一個合理的說法;六月的人很浮躁:一件事情的結束往往意味著另一件事情的開始,你還沒做好上高中、大學的準備,你還沒做好走入社會的準備,兩段時光倉促交匯,你有些心浮氣躁;六月的人很傷懷:幾年相聚的時光就這樣無情地劃上句號,你不想長大,可時光催促你,你不想分離,可學校催促你。再也不會和同桌約好誰上課睡覺誰下課買冰點、再也不會與同舍生交談,真話出自肺腑、再也不會與暗戀的人擦肩而過、再也不會與鄰班男生在籃球場上拼殺。你不能無掛無礙,歲月在強迫你長大。這是你用過的書桌、這是你在墻上的涂抹:你曾認為你的愛刻骨銘心,于是你把心上人名字鐫刻,可如今她在哪里?她只是一個過客。你曾認為人要堅強向上地活著,于是教室里你第一個來,最后一個走,那門前的白玉蘭記得。如今你雖畢業,卻仍想再把過去的日子重新來過。
只有分離,才明白人生的重量,才珍惜下一次的相聚。畢業十年,我那相知相惜的同窗啊,你在哪里?是否如歌中所唱:散落在天涯。芙蓉花落、柳絮飄飛,我會憶起你;年終歲尾、良辰佳節,我會思念你。只是,你是否偶爾會想起多愁善感的我?
第三篇:寫作指導與練習
寫作指導與練習
---高三復習資料
要學會寫以下文體
學會寫問候卡、便條及簡單信函(Greeting cards, notes and short messages)*寫日記、書信與電子郵件
(Diaries, letters and emails)
*填寫表格、申請表等(Application forms)
*根據用文字及圖表提供的信息寫短文或報告(Short passages and reports)*寫故事類文章(stories)
(敘述發生在過去的各種事件的文章)
下面是寫問候卡或寫信有用的表達方式
Thanks:
Thanks a lot!
Thank you so much for your invitation!
Thanks for coming.Thank you for your suggestion.Thank you for your help.Thank you all the same.Hopes:
Hoping that you are well and happy.Hoping that you have a wonderful New Year!
Hoping you’ll enjoy the party.Hoping that you feel better.Hope that you pass your exams.Hope that you enjoy your new job.Hope that everything works out well.Wishes:
Have a nice weekend.With every good wish.Best wishes.All our good wishes.Wishing you success!
Wishing you a happy day!
Wishing you a very merry Christmas!
Farewell:
We’ll miss you.Take care.Hope to see you again soon.It has been wonderful to meet you.Thank you for being my friend.Until we meet again.I’ll always remember you.Congratulations:
Many congratulations!
Congratulations on winning the medal.Congratulations on your exam results.Congratulations on your achievements!
I congratulate you on your graduation.I’d like to offer my sincere congratulations on winning the football championship.May的正式用法:
Mayshe bring much happiness to your life.May you have a happy life!(祝你幸福)
May you be healthy and happy!(健康快樂)
May all your wishes come true!(心想事成)
II.常見的應用文:
1.問侯卡(greeting cards)
常用以may 開頭的句子。
常用動詞ing形式來表達想法、祝福、希望、感謝等。
有時以動詞的命令式來表達信息。
2.便條(notes)
請假條
留言條
其他便條
Guess:what kinds of these notes are?
Dear Mr Chen,I'm sorry to tell you that I won't be in school today.I caught a cold when I swam in Kunming Lake yesterday.This morningI had a headache.After taking my temperature , my mother found that I had a high fever.She took me tosee a doctor.The doctor advised me to stay in bed for two days.Now I am writing to ask for two days' sick leave.Yours
Wang Zhigang
Feb 21st
Dear Wei Feng, You happened to be out.when I called you.I’ve got something to tell you.Wang ping,our old classmate, has just come from Shanghai on business.She plans to stay in Beijing for a week.I’d like to have a party for her with a few of our old classmates in my house at two o’clock this Saturday afternoon.It would be nice if you could come..Fang Qun
Passing on a message(轉告電話)
3:15 pm,Friday
Dear Ying Liu,Our monitor has just rung me, saying that our sports meet will have to be put off till next Monday because of bad weather.He wants you to pass on the information to the other students in your group.III.如何寫各種信件
英文書信(應用文)是歷年高考的一個重點,根據不同的寫作目的和書信內容,書信可分為:
1.邀請信(Letters of invitation)
2.回復信(Letters of reply)
3.感謝信(Letters of thanks)
4.自薦信(Letters of self-recommendation)5.致歉信(Letters of apology)
6.祝賀信(Letters of congratulations)
a.如何寫自薦信?
注意:
英語國家書信習慣于開門見山,切忌繞彎子。
可以根據要點分段落進行表達。
切忌文不對題,胡亂發揮。
要求:
分段落表達意思;層次清楚,詳略得當;
用必要的連接詞使行文連貫,可讀性強。
先學習以下文章,對你有何啟示?
(Sample one)
Dear sir,Nowplease allow me to introduce myself to you.My name is Li Hua and I was born on the first of May in1982.Twenty –four years of age.I graduated from Beijing University.I am very fond of English.And I am quite fluent in English.And I can talk with English native speakers without any difficulty.I’m good at dancing and interested in secretarial work.Also, have studied bookkeeping, typewriting,computer and public relationship.I’m sure I can do my work well if I am accepted.Thank you.(題目要求:
假設你是李華,前去應聘,公司代表要求你用英語按表中內容做自我介紹 姓名:李華出生年月:1982年5月1日學歷:大學
簡介:畢業于北京大學,酷愛英語。英語聽說能力強,能用英語流利交談,學過速記,打字,電腦和公關。
其它:擅長舞蹈,對文秘工作有興趣。)
Sample two :
Dear Sir or Madam,I’m a student from Xinhua Middle School.I’m glad to learn that you want afew part-time English reporters.I’m interested in this opportunity.I think I’m qualified for the job.As a student, I’ve read a lot and have knowledge in many fields.I like English and do well in both speaking and writing.Besides, I’m easy to get along with and enjoy working with others.I once worked as a reporter from school broadcasting station,so I’m sure I can do the job well if I get the position.I’m looking forward to your reply.(要求和要點:
假設你是新華中學的學生李華,得知某英文報招聘兼職記者,你有意應聘,請按下列要點給報社寫一封自薦信:
表示感興趣
說明優勢:知識面、英語水平、合作精神、相關經歷;
希望得到回復。
注意:1.字數:100左右
2.可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫)
yours faithfully,Li Hua
Sample three:
Dear Sir or Madam,I am grateful to you for reading my letter of application.As the coming of the 2012 London Olypic Cames, it is my honor to apply for the position of a volunteer.I have been expecting this special event for a long time.I think I have the ability to be an excellent voluntee.First of all , I can serve all the guests from all over the world with hear and soul.Besides, I have a rich knowledge about Chinese history, so thatI can do the work well and spread the Chinese culture.What's more, I can speak fluent English ,which will play an important role in communciation during the 2012 London Olympic Games.I will value it and do whatever I can if I could be accetped to be a volunteer.I am looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua
(要求如下:假如倫敦奧運會組委會正在向全世界招聘奧運會志愿者,條件如下:
1.有熱情為他人服務的思想
2.有豐富的文化知識,既能做好服務工作,也能傳播文化;
3.有流利的英語表達能力和良好的溝通能力。
假如你叫李華,你想申請成為一名奧運會志愿者,請根據要求,寫一份申請信。)Exercise:
假定你是李華,將于今年七月從新興外語學校畢業。你從報紙上得知B&B公司要招聘一名英文秘書,你很感興趣。請給該公司寫一封求職信,包括以下要點:
1.年齡;
2.學習情況及英語水平
3.情趣和特長
4.性格特點
注意:詞數100左右;可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;開頭、結束語已寫好。Dear sir/Madame,I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary.I 'm looking forward to your help.Sincerely yours,Li Hua
Answers:
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常用描寫人物的形容詞有:
tall/ short /big/ small/ ugly/ beautiful/ slim/broad/ deep/ white/ gray/ strong/weak/ honest/
brave/ calm/ careful/ clever/ cruel/ enthusiastic /faithful/ foolish/ friendly/ nice/ funny/ generous
/gentle/ /greedy/ helpful /impatient/ loyal/ reasonable /sensible /serious/ stubborn/talkative/timid /thoughtful /troublesome /wicked/witty
第四篇:新作文與結尾句
明星代言問題
On the Celebrity Spokesperson
Currently, we could hardly live a single day without seeing a celebrity spokesperson promoting a product or a social campaign on TV, net or other media.This is an intensely popular trend that we cannot fail to notice.There is no doubt that the celebrity spokespeople could boost the sale of a product.A host of celebrity spokespersons, however, have emerged as the marketing tool of some companies, even companies producing and selling fake and inferior items.This kind of behavior has produced negative impacts on consumers and whole society, which should be severely criticized and penalized.Of course, as is known to all, everything has both bright and dark sides.Some stars’ endorsement of social activities and public campaigns
raises public awareness, giving rise to changes in public behavior.In this case, they serve as positive role models of the general public.To name only one case: Pu CX, a household figure, acting as the celebrity spokesman of the China AIDS Foundation, contributes greatly to the cause of AIDS prevention and cure in China.關于選秀節目
Over the past couple of years, a variety of talent shows have emerged on TV channels across the nation, from Super Girls to Happy Boys and so forth.This type of entertainment program is intensely popular, especially among young adults and has produced profound impacts on their studies and life.There are a couple of reasons behind the tide.To start with, young folks need role models to learn from.So many of them are crazy for contestants participating in these programs.This gives rise to the increasing emergence of these shows because TV networks naturally need to cater to young audiences.Plus, thanks to economic and political reforms carried out by the government, this crop of young generation have more freedom and desire to express and showcase themselves.Therefore, a growing number of young people desire to get involved in these shows.This is a divisive topic.On my personal level, the talent show is a superb means of relaxing and amusing and can hugely relieve our strains.As college students, however, we could not afford to indulge in them and should be aware of the utmost importance of studies.食品安全問題
On the Food Security
Over the past couple of years, several cases of the food scandal have been disclosed on various media.The problem of food security has become a hot button across society.The prevalence of food insecurity has greatly impacted public health, which the government could not afford to ignore, according to the online edition of the People Daily.There are a couple of driving forces, I would argue, behind this
undesirable tide.First, in the course of the rapid economic evolution, we ignore moral education, giving rise to the rising rate of the problem.More importantly, the lack of adequate regulation and punishment on those illegal producers enforces the trend.As Confucius instructed, it is better late than never.Prompt and strict
measures should be taken to turn back this evil trend.The government should launch a massive moral campaign to educate all citizens and draw up tougher laws to crack down on those irresponsible corporations and prohibit them from entering the food industry again.I am firmly convinced that through our combined efforts we are bound to enjoy more risk-free foods in the days ahead.社會不文明現象
On Uncivilized Behaviors
We cannot fail to notice that countless uncivilized behaviors exist in our daily lives, such as spitting, talking loudly, littering, saying nasty words in public places and so forth.All these are bad manners that we should not lose sight of.As an ancient land enjoying a splendid civilization spanning over 5,000 years, China is witnessing a surge in improper acts that every Chinese citizen should feel ashamed of.Uncivilized behaviors by a host of Chinese both at home and abroad have seriously affected China’s image, according to an editorial posted on People Daily’s official website.As Chinese, we should not get offended when others point out our
weaknesses but should focus more attention on improving ourselves.We should strive to identify the causes of those improper behaviors and find ways to eliminate them.There are a host of causes, I would argue, behind this trend.To name only one: the lack of moral education.The government should wage a massive moral campaign to fight against this trend and we ourselves should endeavor to behave decently in our daily lives.As college students of the new age, we should take the leading role.感恩
On Cultivating the Sense of Gratitude
On college campuses across the nation, there is a noticeable
phenomenon that we cannot afford to ignore: far too many young college
students lack the sense of gratitude, one of the countless traditional virtues of this ancient land with a splendid civilization spanning over 5,000 years.These young adults were not and are not aware of the huge importance of expressing gratitude to those who once helped them, from teachers to parents and so forth.Personally, I deem that the root cause of students without a graceful heart is that they receive an education not valuing the moral sphere.I strongly
believe that joint efforts from folks across society are the final remedy for this
social headache.As young university students of the new era, we should make our own contributions to this cause.Imagine a world without the sense of gratitude.This kind of world is doomed to failure.Simply put, we should join our hands to heighten our awareness of fostering a graceful heart.Only in this way can we build our society into a harmonious one.My fellow students, I beg you to act from now on.大學生使用信用卡現象
On Credit Card
At present, a wide vareity of credit cards issued by major banks and
shopping malls are thriving in colleges and universities across the nation, with a multitude of college students making up a growing population of card holders.Indeed, one out of five students is estimated to be in possession of at least one credit card, and the figure is expected to be on the steady increse, the latest data published by Yangtze Evening Post suggests.Like anything prior to the emergence of this small piece of plastic, the increasing popularity of credit card on campus has both bright and dark sides.On the one hand, young adults in college, free from the trouble of pocketing a considerable sum of cash, could enjoy the convenience of credit cards and purchase expensive goods by installments.On the other hand, however, the irresponsible and excessive use of the cards by these youngsters, the majority of whom are fresh out of middle school incapable of budgeting their money, can make them heavily in debt which will take them years to pay off.On my personal level, while enjoying a host of conveniences the credit card may bring, we couldn’t afford to ignore a conspicious fact: in most cases, parents are our sole financial sources.Instead of spending without any restrict, we are supposed to put studies on the top of our agenda and move ourselves beyond heavy dependence upon our parents
1.The most effective means to solve this problem is that ______________.In that case, ______________.2.Everything has its own two sides, no exception with AAA.For one thing, ______________.for another, ______________.3.My experience tells me that to ______________ needs a thorough and persevering process, and in this process you had better abide by the principles mentioned above.4.On the whole, it is high time that we recognized the significance of ______________.5.As a result, we should take some effective methods to ______________.6.Judging by the figures, we can draw a conclusion that ______________.7.In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______________.Only in this way can ______________ in the future.8.In my opinion, we should place much emphasis on the importance of ______________.9.But ______________ and ______________ have their own advantages.For example, ______________, while ______________.Comparing those two, however, I prefer to ______________.10.In my opinion, ______________ is just as common as ______________.If ______________, it may be very useful.Whatever ______________, the key point lies in ______________.11.Are their opinions correct? To my mind, the first idea seems ______________.As for the second idea, ______________.12.As a popular saying goes, ______________.In my opinion what really counts is not ______________, but ______________.I believer that as long as ______________, we will ______________.So I am for the opinion that ______________.13.In my opinion, both sides are partly right.When we ______________, we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems, and then make the right decision.14.Personally, I believe that ______________.Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ______________.15.In my opinion, all of the people should be brave enough to show our disapproval and criticism when confronted with ______________.16.People are coming to realize the importance of ______________.They have begun to try their best to ______________.We believe that ______________.17.All in all, we cannot live without ______________.But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with problems that would arise.18.Whatever you do, please remember the saying-______________.If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you’ll definitely benefit a lot from it.19.With the development of society, ______________.So it’s urgent and necessary to ______________.If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.20.It is difficult to say whether ______________ is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of ______________.However, from a personal point of view I find ______________.21.It is essential that effective actions should be taken to end the situation.22.It is no doubt that special attention must be paid to the problem of ______________.23.But both ______________ and ______________ have disadvantages.For example, ______________.Which to choose, ______________ or ______________? Careful consideration is necessary before you make your own choice.24.From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that ______________.25.We must search for a quick action, because the present situation of ______________ is grievous, if allowed to proceed, will certainly lead to ______________.26.No doubt, if we ignore the problem, there is every chance that ______________ will be put in danger.27.We need to take a second look at the matter from a wider standpoint, otherwise, we won’t ______________.28.It is high time that ______________.Here are some of the measures that might be taken immediately.29.In conclusion, we should know about the problem of ______________, and object to ______________.Only in this way ______________.30.Although it is affected by many factors, still there are certain ways that can make the situation better.The most import is ______________.Another way is ______________.Still another one is ______________.31.Many solutions are offered here, all of them make some sense, but none is adequate enough.The problem should be studied in depth.32.No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of ______________.But the common recognition of the importance of ______________ might be the first step on the right way.33.It is clear, therefore, that the task of ______________ demands great attention.34.We may have a long way to go before we reach the final goal.But once we are on the way, the chance to reach it is greater.35.But for me, I would rather think of the matter in an optimistic way.Because I believe ______________.36.We all know the story of ______________.this lesson tells us that ______________, we should ______________.37.My own point of view is that ______________ is a normal behavior in our society.There is no doubt that ______________.As an old saying goes, ______________.38.If we can’t take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is ______________.39.However, this graph may not predict the entire situation in the future.I believe ______________.40.From the graph it is evident that ______________.41.From all the reasons above, we know that great changes had taken place in ______________.And I believe that ______________.42.Taking into account all of these factors, we may reach the conclusion that ______________.43.For the reasons given above, I strongly recommend that ______________.44.Given the factors I have just outlined, I believe that ______________.45.Therefore, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that ______________.46.Recognizing the fact that ______________ should lead us to conclude that ______________.47.In short, I support the statement that it is better to ______________ because ______________.48.After pondering this question on many occasions, I have finally reached the conclusion that ______________ is something I truly want to do and it is worthwhile.49.My point of view in ______________ largely results from the fact that ______________.50.Now after close examination, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that ______________.51.From what has been discussed above, you can get your preference.Personally, I think ______________ has more advantages.52.On the one hand, it has helped china ______________.On the other hand, it has increased china’s ______________, and at the same time, made great contributions to our national development.53.In my opinion, to solve this problem there might be two ways.One way to tackle this question is ______________.Another way that is worth adopting is ______________.54.As far as I am concerned, I trust the advantages mentioned above exceed the disadvantages.55.For me, ______________ is a glory and it is the most important thing I have to take into feasible consideration.56.As regards me, I tend to pick ______________, for ______________.What’s more, ______________.57.If I were given a choice between ______________ and ______________, I would certainly prefer ______________.For me, ______________.
第五篇:社會調查報告寫作指導與最新
社會調查報告寫作指導與最新范文
調查報告是對某項工作、某個事件、某個問題,經過深入細致的調查后,將調查中收集到的材料加以系統整理,分析研究,以書面形式向組織和領導匯報調查情況的一種文書。其特點是具有寫實性、針對性、邏輯性。
根據調查報告的要求,對我校學生調查報告格式做如下要求:
一、標題要求
標題可以有兩種寫法。
一種是規范化的標題格式,基本格式為“××關于××××的調查報告”、“關于××××的調查報告”、“××××調查”等。
另一種是自由式標題,包括陳述式、提問式和正副題結合使用三種。陳述式如《東北師范大學畢業生就業情況調查》,提問式如《為什么大學畢業生擇業傾向沿海和京津地區》,正副標題結合式,正題陳述調查報告的主要結論或提出中心問題,副題標明調查的對象、范圍、問題,如《高校發展重在學科建設――××××大學學科建設實踐調查》等。
二、列出調查的主要內容,格式如下:
調查時間:
調查地點:
調查對象:
調查方法:
調 查 人:
調查分工:(以小組形式調查的要求,小組人數不得超過3人)
三、報告正文。
正文一般分前言、主體、結尾三部分。
1.前言。有幾種寫法:第一種是寫明調查的起因或目的、時間和地點、對象或范圍、經過與方法,以及人員組成等調查本身的情況,從中引出中心問題或基本結論來;第二種是寫明調查對象的歷史背景、大致發展經過、現實狀況、主要成績、突出問題等基本情況,進而提出中心問題或主要觀點來;第三種是開門見山,直接概括出調查的結果,如肯定做法、指出
問題、提示影響、說明中心內容等。前言起到畫龍點睛的作用,要精練概括,直切主題。
2.主體。這是調查報告最主要的部分,這部分詳述調查研究的基本情況、做法、經驗,以及分析調查研究所得材料中得出的各種具體認識、觀點和基本結論。
3.結尾。結尾的寫法也比較多,可以提出解決問題的方法、對策或下一步改進工作的建議;或總結全文的主要觀點,進一步深化主題;或提出問題,引發人們的進一步思考;或展望前景,發出鼓舞和號召。
1.關于大學生暑期生活調查報告
----------------大二暑期社會調查
炎炎夏日,烈日當頭。暑假剛剛開始,七月初我參與了這次“關于大學生暑期生活”調查,調查的主要目的是了解當代大學生如何利用這短暫的時間去充實豐富自己。調查的方式為問卷調查及網上資料調查。
暑假,對于很多學生來說是一個放松身心,提高自身修養的大好時機。能夠把握這短暫的兩個月時間真正去學點什么,做點什么應該是我們當代大學生所考慮的。
跨進了21世紀,又是個新的開始,當代大學生是新一代的代表,是祖國的未來,我們必須堅持馬列主義/毛澤東思想,必須在它的指導下闊步前進。作為新世紀的大學生,就應當肩負起歷史賦予我們的重任,做一個合格的大學生。充分發揮我們的才能,壯大我們的國家,使中國走進強國之列,這就是我們21世紀大學生的偉大使命。合理支配暑假時間,充分利用把握機遇,通過調查了解到當代大學生暑期生活分為四類:一參加社會實踐兼職打工。二埋頭苦學,參加各類培訓班。三出行旅游度假觀光。四在家“無聊”一族。
社會實踐,兼職打工 :
中國社會調查事務所的調查結果顯示,現代大學生打工的主要目的是:有35%的大學生是為了增加收入;有36%的大學生是想自食其力;有29%的大學生認為要鍛煉自己的能力,對報酬無所謂。隨著社會的變革和思想觀念的轉變,大學生打工的形式開始變得異常豐富起來 22%的大學生選擇網絡公司;4%的大學生選擇暑期教師;19%的大學生選擇市場調研員;13%的大學生選擇營銷策劃員;16%的大學生選擇做志愿者;9%的大學生選擇做促銷;5%的大學生選擇到快餐廳做鐘點工;12%的大學生選擇其它。社會實踐是大學生接觸社會,了解社會的一條重要途徑。到企事業單位實習的大學生也為數不少,這樣既可鍛煉自己,提高專業水平,又可開闊視野,接觸社會,為日后工作積累社會經驗。暑假兼職打工賺錢是許多學生的選擇。“流自己的汗,吃自己的飯;自己多吃點苦,父母少花點錢。”這是時下不少大學生“打工族”秉承的至理名言。傳統的家教、推銷翻譯到現在的網吧管理員、市場調研員、快餐店鐘點工、導游,甚至是一些大膽另類的選擇,如替網絡公司試玩游戲等都成為現在大學生打工時所選擇的職業。有的大學生在暑假里建立起了自己的網上商店,或者是在自己學校附近建立起了自己的攤點,為自己打工。盡管大學生“打工族”具備“初生牛犢不怕虎”的勇氣和自信,但他們也同樣有著缺乏經驗和辨別能力有限的“先天不足”。正因為如此,大學生因打工而上當受騙的事件才層出不窮,有的甚至被騙入傳銷組織而走上違法犯罪的道路。不少專家也紛紛呼吁,大學生打工要謹防陷阱,社會也應該關注和加強對大學生打工的規范和管理。
埋頭苦讀,繼續深造:
近年來,社會競爭越來越激烈,加入WTO后就業形勢越來越嚴峻,“知識就是力量”越來越激勵著那些有志學子,“專升本”、“出國”、“考研”成為很多大學生的選擇,繼續深造以滿足未來社會對人才的更高要求,暑假則成為這些大學生備戰的“黃金時期”。參加各類培訓班早已經成為一道亮麗的風景線,各類形形色色的招生廣告在校園內隨處可見,暑假報名參加英語、電腦培訓班的大學生,大都是為了在原有基礎上“更上一層樓”。將來社會需要的是復合型人才,掌握多種專業知識,取得多個文憑、證書更有利于找到理想的工作。此外,也有不少大學生趁暑假報名參加汽車培訓,為了將來更方便找工作,即使找工作時用不上,也對自己有好處。此外,不少大學生到圖書館、書店“充電”,攝取精神食糧,完善自己的知識結構和技能等。這些大學生如果能夠勞逸結合,在用功學習的同時放松自己的心情,“兩耳不聞窗外事,一心只讀圣賢書”已經與時代不相吻合,暑假是一個充電的好機會,也是一個了解社會的良機。
外出旅游,飽覽風光:
旅游,從個人活動、群體行為發展到當今的現代旅游業,已經成為涉及旅游資源、旅游設施、旅游服務、旅游活動等的社會生活方式.大學生到大自然中去接受美的熏陶,包攬祖國山河風光,使生活張弛相濟、勞逸結合,使人腦得到精神保健、生命獲得和諧運動,現在已經成為一種時尚潮流。部分大學生利用暑期欣賞名山大川,不僅豐富了閱歷,增長了經
驗,從外出經歷中體會人生,感觸社會,同時也能體驗到出門在外的不易出行旅游,度假觀光,與同伴相互照顧,增進了解,培養提高了與人交流的能力。
“無聊”一族 :
在放假前早已經制定了周密的暑假計劃,但是回到家后睡覺、看電視、上網、看小說成了部分大學生在假期的主要活動,沒有暑假盼暑假,暑假到了又覺地無聊,短暫的兩個月就像流水一樣一去不復返。
通過對暑假生活調查,我們不由得感到欣喜,我們可以從中領略到當代大學生積極向上的風貌,同時也感悟到大學生們獨特的思想意識和價值取向。暑假成為很多大學生學習的新陣地,展現青春風采,施展一技之長的好機會。總之,大部分大學生能夠根據自己的實際情況,度過一個健康有意義的暑假。