第一篇：初中英語(yǔ)《閱讀積累與寫作》作文課課堂紀(jì)實(shí)

韓建芳老師《閱讀積累與寫作》課后紀(jì)實(shí)

----艾佳

經(jīng)過兩周的精心準(zhǔn)備，韓建芳老師的《閱讀積累與寫作》課在今天上午順利結(jié)束。作為英語(yǔ)組下學(xué)期活動(dòng)的最后一位教師，韓建芳老師的課屬于壓軸出場(chǎng)了，今天他的課堂內(nèi)容正如標(biāo)題顯示這是一堂有關(guān)英語(yǔ)寫作方面的訓(xùn)練課。對(duì)于英語(yǔ)教師來說這樣的課型是比較有難度的，課堂容量要大，理論知識(shí)及基本功都要扎實(shí)。初四這一年，我在英語(yǔ)教學(xué)方面和韓老師學(xué)會(huì)很多東西，今天主要抱著學(xué)習(xí)的態(tài)度來看待這節(jié)寫作課，通過英語(yǔ)組各位老師對(duì)著唐寫作課的點(diǎn)評(píng)，我也收獲頗多，下面我將把各位老師對(duì)這堂課的分析總結(jié)如下：

首先，韓老師把在哈爾濱學(xué)到的最新的教學(xué)方法運(yùn)用到了這堂課中，他提出學(xué)生如果單獨(dú)學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)寫作則是很枯燥難懂的，不如把相應(yīng)主題的閱讀放在寫作前，讓學(xué)生已閱讀段落做切入點(diǎn)，根據(jù)問題尋找段落中的理論依據(jù)，在學(xué)生尋找依據(jù)的過程中，就潛移默化的在學(xué)生心中植入了。然后讓學(xué)生繼續(xù)在段落中找出正反兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)在課件中填空，這就是在有意識(shí)的引導(dǎo)學(xué)生進(jìn)行背誦例句，為寫作進(jìn)行鋪墊。再填空之后，要求學(xué)生復(fù)述課文，再?gòu)?fù)述課文的時(shí)候就是在訓(xùn)練的口頭表達(dá)能力。接下來老師展示三段式范文的提綱，讓學(xué)生根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)提示進(jìn)行書寫訓(xùn)練。通過這堂課我們可以很清楚直觀地了解到從簡(jiǎn)到難的整個(gè)的寫作過程，在韓老師的精心準(zhǔn)備下，課件，提綱，范文都得到了充分的利用，效果很好。但是課堂教學(xué)是一門不完美的藝術(shù)，課后經(jīng)過大家一直討論，也提出了關(guān)于英語(yǔ)寫作課一些很有幫助的建議，整理如下：

1.課件制作雖然很精心，但是實(shí)際用的時(shí)候，容量稍大，字體太小，在后面的同學(xué)有些看不清楚。

2.給學(xué)生申通的范文是兩段式的，要求寫作時(shí)，是三段式的。應(yīng)統(tǒng)一范文格式。

3.閱讀的片段若能和命題作文的主題銜接更密切一些。學(xué)生吸收效果能更好。

4.課堂容量大，所以需要的時(shí)間較多，最后沒有在幻燈片中展示學(xué)生的范文，本堂課的一大亮點(diǎn)沒來得及展示，有些可惜。

這堂寫作課是我們英語(yǔ)組這學(xué)期的最后一次活動(dòng)，在這個(gè)學(xué)期，我們英語(yǔ)組開展了很多形式多樣的英語(yǔ)活動(dòng)，在活動(dòng)中，大家共同研討，彼此交流經(jīng)驗(yàn)，心得，這些活動(dòng)都為我們的教學(xué)提供了很多寶貴的想法，為英語(yǔ)組教師提高專業(yè)技能起到了重要作用。

2012-6-6

第二篇：初中英語(yǔ)《閱讀積累與寫作》作文課反思

教 學(xué) 反 思

七 星 二 中 韓 建 芳

教 學(xué) 反 思

六月六日，我們英語(yǔ)組進(jìn)行了一次英語(yǔ)課堂教學(xué)的初探，由我的一節(jié)作文課作為載體，之后大家對(duì)于我的這節(jié)作文課做出了客觀的評(píng)價(jià)，下面我談?wù)勎覍?duì)于這節(jié)課的課后反思。

首先，說說這節(jié)英語(yǔ)課的優(yōu)點(diǎn)；應(yīng)該說這節(jié)課的設(shè)計(jì)理念還是比較先進(jìn)的，但是由于這兩個(gè)班級(jí)的學(xué)生的基礎(chǔ)不是很好，所以有點(diǎn)事與愿違了，總體來說，思路清晰，課堂環(huán)節(jié)緊湊，在本課中，我根據(jù)一條龍英語(yǔ)教學(xué)環(huán)節(jié)和教材內(nèi)容，將閱讀單獨(dú)提出來，設(shè)計(jì)不同的課堂活動(dòng), 引導(dǎo)學(xué)生進(jìn)行閱讀方法的總結(jié)及訓(xùn)練，并與寫作相結(jié)合。幫助學(xué)生掌握閱讀技巧。學(xué)生在閱讀過程中不是逐字、逐句地去理解，而是結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)驗(yàn)和老師提供的方法，在文章中找出有關(guān)的信息。既改變了傳統(tǒng)的閱讀課教學(xué)方式只是把課文作為單純向?qū)W生傳授語(yǔ)法及語(yǔ)言知識(shí)的載體，也改變了閱讀理解提問方式只停留在對(duì)所閱讀文章的表層理解層次上的問題。從閱讀方法的積累，到寫作方法的積累，形成了閱讀積累的輸入到寫作的輸出，培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的寫作能力，而且還給學(xué)生留出思維想象的空間，啟發(fā)學(xué)生動(dòng)腦用英語(yǔ)思考,發(fā)展學(xué)生的創(chuàng)新能力。能夠從閱讀當(dāng)中總結(jié)閱讀方法，并運(yùn)用閱讀策略獲取信息。

但是同時(shí)這節(jié)課也有很多值得改進(jìn)的地方；

一，我把兩個(gè)班級(jí)的學(xué)生放在一起上課，那就可以利用競(jìng)爭(zhēng)的形式來激發(fā)他們的學(xué)習(xí)積極性，可是我預(yù)先沒有考慮到這一點(diǎn)，是我的疏忽；

二，課件制作有點(diǎn)失誤，背景有些亂，然后字有點(diǎn)小了，導(dǎo)致后面的同學(xué)看不清楚；

三，時(shí)間調(diào)配上有點(diǎn)問題，前面滲透閱讀策略的時(shí)間有點(diǎn)長(zhǎng)，所以導(dǎo)致了后面的寫作練習(xí)完成的不是很好，以后在這方面要多注意。

通過此次教研活動(dòng)，我們英語(yǔ)組就作文課這個(gè)話題談?wù)摿撕枚嘤嘘P(guān)作文課該如何去上，很多問題也借此機(jī)會(huì)一一解決，這次活動(dòng)給我的最大感受就是大家的智慧是無窮的，所以我覺得，在以后的教學(xué)中多舉行一些這樣的活動(dòng)是非常有意義的，既可以解決在教學(xué)中遇到的一些難題，而且還能使我們大家的智慧得以分享和傳遞，這對(duì)我們英語(yǔ)組的各位老師來說都是積累經(jīng)驗(yàn)的機(jī)會(huì)，同時(shí)也是讓大家快速成長(zhǎng)的絕好機(jī)會(huì)，最后感謝英語(yǔ)組的每位教師不吝賜教。

第三篇：解析初中英語(yǔ)寫作課堂教學(xué)策略

解析初中英語(yǔ)寫作課堂教學(xué)策略

福建師范大學(xué)第二附屬中學(xué)

【摘要】英語(yǔ)寫作能力是初中生應(yīng)該掌握的一種重要能力，這就需要教師在實(shí)際教學(xué)中依據(jù)學(xué)生特點(diǎn)及寫作教學(xué)目標(biāo)，有針對(duì)性地選用有效的教學(xué)的教學(xué)策略，努力激發(fā)學(xué)生的英語(yǔ)寫作興趣，使得他們都能充分發(fā)揮主觀能動(dòng)性學(xué)習(xí)與探究英語(yǔ)寫作方面的知識(shí)與技巧，最終逐漸增強(qiáng)自身的英語(yǔ)寫作能力。本文就初中英語(yǔ)寫作課堂的教學(xué)策略，進(jìn)行了詳細(xì)的探究。

【關(guān)鍵詞】初中英語(yǔ)寫作課堂教學(xué)策略

隨著全球經(jīng)濟(jì)文化一體化發(fā)展趨勢(shì)的不斷加劇，英語(yǔ)寫作在經(jīng)濟(jì)與生活中的應(yīng)用更加頻繁，這就使得人們對(duì)人才的英語(yǔ)寫作能力提出了新的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。而初中階段是學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)課程的關(guān)鍵時(shí)期，也是培養(yǎng)學(xué)生寫作能力的重要階段。因此，初中英語(yǔ)教師在日常的寫作教學(xué)中，應(yīng)大膽創(chuàng)新傳統(tǒng)的寫作教學(xué)模式，為學(xué)生組織出符合他們學(xué)習(xí)興趣及認(rèn)知規(guī)律的寫作教學(xué)活動(dòng)，努力提高課堂教學(xué)的有效性，以幫助學(xué)生快速提高自身的寫作能力。那么，如何才能切實(shí)提高初中英語(yǔ)寫作課堂教學(xué)的有效性，是教師急需思考的問題。

一、遵循循序漸進(jìn)原則

英語(yǔ)寫作是一種典型的信息輸出活動(dòng)，只有確保學(xué)生積累有豐富寫作素材、寫作經(jīng)驗(yàn)及寫作技巧，才能使得他們寫出高質(zhì)量的英語(yǔ)作文。而對(duì)初中生來將，他們的寫作能力還較為低下，難以寫出要求過高的英語(yǔ)作文。因此，在初中英語(yǔ)寫作教學(xué)中，教師應(yīng)依據(jù)學(xué)生的英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言認(rèn)知規(guī)律，恰當(dāng)安排寫作教學(xué)流程，一般來講，初中英?Z寫作教學(xué)的教學(xué)順序應(yīng)先從詞匯積累開始，逐漸引導(dǎo)學(xué)生仿寫一些簡(jiǎn)單的句子，然后激勵(lì)學(xué)生連句成篇。在初中英語(yǔ)寫作活動(dòng)中，“詞匯”是寫作的基礎(chǔ)，也就是原材料；“句子”是橋梁，是寫作中的基本單位；“篇章”是寫作教學(xué)的最終目的。這就需要英語(yǔ)教師在寫作教學(xué)中嚴(yán)格根據(jù)“詞不離句，句不離篇”的基本原則組織寫作教學(xué)活動(dòng)，從簡(jiǎn)到繁、從易到難，循序漸進(jìn)地提高學(xué)生的英語(yǔ)寫作能力，最終實(shí)現(xiàn)教、學(xué)及用的和諧統(tǒng)一。在具體的初中英語(yǔ)寫作教學(xué)中，教師設(shè)計(jì)寫作教學(xué)流程時(shí)，應(yīng)做好以下幾點(diǎn)：1.引導(dǎo)學(xué)生探究巧記單詞的方法，借助語(yǔ)境運(yùn)用、關(guān)聯(lián)詞聯(lián)想、音節(jié)拼讀等途徑幫助學(xué)生鞏固、識(shí)記及理解單詞。另一方面，教師在寫作教學(xué)中，還應(yīng)將教材中單詞的形似詞、反義詞、近義詞、同義詞等羅列出來，供學(xué)生對(duì)比學(xué)習(xí)，以顯著提高學(xué)生的詞匯量。2.指導(dǎo)學(xué)生熟練掌握教材中的常用句型及短語(yǔ)。教師在寫作教學(xué)中加大單句練習(xí)比重，使得學(xué)生在大量的訓(xùn)練活動(dòng)中扎實(shí)掌握這些單句句型之后，再慢慢過渡到復(fù)雜句型的教學(xué)中。為了讓學(xué)生掌握盡可能多的句型，教師可在教學(xué)中為學(xué)生布置“一句多譯”任務(wù)，以逐漸增強(qiáng)學(xué)生的造句能力。比如，教師可讓學(xué)生嘗試用兩種句型翻譯“我最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)項(xiàng)目是踢足球。”學(xué)生就可用兩種句型翻譯為“My favorite sport is playing football”及“Playing football is my favorite sport.”

二、密切聯(lián)系聽說訓(xùn)練

學(xué)生的英語(yǔ)寫作能力與聽說能力之間有著很密切的關(guān)系，通常來講，英語(yǔ)聽說能力較高的學(xué)生，其寫作能力也較高。究其原因，是因?yàn)闀嬲Z(yǔ)言均是在口語(yǔ)的基礎(chǔ)上形成與發(fā)展的，可見口語(yǔ)是學(xué)生書面語(yǔ)形成的基礎(chǔ)。在這種情況下，要想有效培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的寫作水平，就應(yīng)重視對(duì)學(xué)生口語(yǔ)能力的培養(yǎng)。因此，在初中英語(yǔ)教學(xué)中，教師應(yīng)依據(jù)教材中的聽說訓(xùn)練內(nèi)容，在教學(xué)中積極為學(xué)生營(yíng)造出多種生動(dòng)的口語(yǔ)交際情境，使得學(xué)生更加自然、主動(dòng)地參與到各種英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)訓(xùn)練活動(dòng)中，并獲得更多的聽英語(yǔ)的機(jī)會(huì)，最終使得學(xué)生在闡述觀點(diǎn)、小組討論、表演短劇、伙伴對(duì)話、講述故事、復(fù)述課文、看圖說話等口語(yǔ)交際活動(dòng)中逐漸提高英語(yǔ)表達(dá)能力與理解能力。在引導(dǎo)學(xué)生就教材中的某個(gè)話題進(jìn)行了一定的口語(yǔ)訓(xùn)練之后，教師就可為學(xué)生布置一些書面寫作任務(wù)。教學(xué)實(shí)踐表明，由于有了口語(yǔ)交際訓(xùn)練活動(dòng)做鋪墊，學(xué)生已經(jīng)擁有了英語(yǔ)寫作的素材及表達(dá)方式，因此將這些口語(yǔ)材料整理成書面內(nèi)容，也是很容易的，從而可使得學(xué)生自信滿滿、興致勃勃地參與到英語(yǔ)寫作教學(xué)中去，并且還可寫出質(zhì)量很高的英語(yǔ)作文。比如，在學(xué)習(xí)仁愛版初中英語(yǔ)教材九年級(jí)上冊(cè)Unit2《Saving the Earth》這一單元時(shí)，教師就可讓學(xué)生以“I am a little guardian of the earth”為話題進(jìn)行口語(yǔ)交際訓(xùn)練，引導(dǎo)學(xué)生以小組為單位就“What are the behaviors that pollute the earth in our daily life？”及“How to deal with the pollution of the environment？”進(jìn)行廣泛的交流與探討。然后，讓學(xué)生將口語(yǔ)交際內(nèi)容整理成書面語(yǔ)言。最終，筆者發(fā)現(xiàn)很多學(xué)生都能寫出內(nèi)容豐富的英語(yǔ)作文來。

三、激勵(lì)學(xué)生大量朗讀

要想切實(shí)提高初中生的英語(yǔ)寫作能力，就需要教師在日常教學(xué)中重視對(duì)學(xué)生英語(yǔ)思維能力的培養(yǎng)及應(yīng)用，只有這樣才能顛覆學(xué)生的中式英語(yǔ)思維方式，逐漸養(yǎng)成用英語(yǔ)思維設(shè)計(jì)作文結(jié)構(gòu)、遣詞造句及表達(dá)思想，最終寫出更正宗的英式英語(yǔ)作文。而朗讀是培養(yǎng)學(xué)生語(yǔ)感及英語(yǔ)思維的主要方法。俗話說“讀書破萬(wàn)卷，下筆如有神”，意思是說朗讀多了，自然就可寫出較高水平的作文。從這里我們可以看出，熟讀英語(yǔ)文本對(duì)初中生英語(yǔ)寫作能力的提高有很大促進(jìn)作用。另一方面，朗讀還可幫助學(xué)生積累大量的英語(yǔ)詞匯、句型及素材，這都是英語(yǔ)寫作中學(xué)生所必須具備的一些東西。因此，在初中英語(yǔ)教學(xué)中，教師應(yīng)激勵(lì)學(xué)生大量朗讀英語(yǔ)文本，以最大限度培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)感、英語(yǔ)思維能力，從而為寫作教學(xué)質(zhì)量的大幅提高奠定基礎(chǔ)。比如，在學(xué)習(xí)仁愛版初中英語(yǔ)教材九年級(jí)下冊(cè)Unit5《Knowing About China》這一單元時(shí)，教師就可引導(dǎo)學(xué)生反復(fù)朗讀教材文本，以熟練掌握文本中介紹中國(guó)文明及名勝的方式是什么，是用什么樣的思維組織語(yǔ)言及文章結(jié)構(gòu)的，并且使得學(xué)生在反復(fù)誦讀中增強(qiáng)語(yǔ)言，為寫作時(shí)更恰當(dāng)?shù)厍苍~造句做好準(zhǔn)備。在實(shí)際教學(xué)中，為充分激發(fā)學(xué)生的朗讀興趣，教師可用分角色朗讀的方式組織教學(xué)活動(dòng)，使得可積極參與到朗讀教學(xué)中，以促進(jìn)他們英語(yǔ)思維能力的快速發(fā)展。

四、有效結(jié)合閱讀教學(xué)

筆者在教學(xué)中發(fā)現(xiàn)，寫作教學(xué)與閱讀教學(xué)之間關(guān)系密切，究其原因，是因?yàn)殚喿x是學(xué)生寫作的基礎(chǔ)，是學(xué)生習(xí)得表達(dá)方式、積累寫作素材的有效途徑。初中生借助閱讀英語(yǔ)文本，可以拓展知識(shí)面、增強(qiáng)語(yǔ)感、豐富詞匯量，從而積累海量的英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言信息，最終為寫作能力的快速提升打下基礎(chǔ)。仁愛版初中英語(yǔ)教材中的課文體裁很多，有議論文、說明文、記敘文、詩(shī)歌、日記、書信等；涵蓋的內(nèi)容有體育、地理、天文、旅游、友誼等。另一方面，這些文本都具有很高的實(shí)用性及代表性，是學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)寫作知識(shí)的最佳范本與素材。因此，在初中英語(yǔ)寫作教學(xué)中，教師應(yīng)引導(dǎo)學(xué)生先細(xì)致閱讀教材內(nèi)容，然后仿寫類似內(nèi)容與體裁的作文，由于有學(xué)習(xí)與模仿的對(duì)象，學(xué)生在親自寫作時(shí)就不會(huì)覺得無話可寫、難以安排結(jié)構(gòu)，就可提高英語(yǔ)寫作的自信心與積極性，從而促進(jìn)他們英語(yǔ)寫作能力的明顯提升。比如在學(xué)習(xí)仁愛版初中英語(yǔ)教材九年級(jí)下冊(cè)Unit4 《Amazing Science》這篇閱讀文本時(shí)，教師就可引導(dǎo)學(xué)生重點(diǎn)學(xué)習(xí)本課的寫作結(jié)構(gòu)、主要句型及關(guān)鍵詞匯。在此基礎(chǔ)上，教師就可為學(xué)生設(shè)計(jì)一節(jié)以“My favorite scientific knowledge”為主題的寫作課，提醒學(xué)生可以模仿教材閱讀文本的結(jié)構(gòu)，也可以運(yùn)用閱讀文本中的句型與詞匯。教學(xué)實(shí)踐表明，把寫作與閱讀教學(xué)結(jié)合在一起，可幫助學(xué)生逐漸掌握各種主題及體裁的寫作格式及寫作方向，使得學(xué)生在寫作活動(dòng)中都胸有成竹，有助于他們寫作興趣的提升及??作質(zhì)量的優(yōu)化。

總之，寫作教學(xué)是初中英語(yǔ)教學(xué)中的核心內(nèi)容與難點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，其教學(xué)成效的優(yōu)劣對(duì)學(xué)生英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言應(yīng)用能力的高低及綜合能力的高低有很大影響作用。因此，在實(shí)際教學(xué)中，英語(yǔ)教師應(yīng)深度分析寫作教學(xué)與朗讀教學(xué)、閱讀教學(xué)、口語(yǔ)交際教學(xué)之間的關(guān)系，然后積極將寫作教學(xué)滲透到其他教學(xué)活動(dòng)中，并始終遵循循序漸進(jìn)的基本原則組織教學(xué)活動(dòng)，從而不斷提高學(xué)生的英語(yǔ)思維能力、增強(qiáng)學(xué)生的詞匯量及語(yǔ)感、豐富學(xué)生的寫作素材及寫作經(jīng)驗(yàn)，最終真正提高初中英語(yǔ)寫作課堂教學(xué)質(zhì)量。

參考文獻(xiàn)：

[1]宋簡(jiǎn)容.讀寫結(jié)合的課堂教學(xué)對(duì)初中英語(yǔ)寫作能力影響的實(shí)證研究[D].廣州大學(xué)，2013.[2]胡明珠.以閱讀文本為基礎(chǔ)的初中英語(yǔ)寫作教學(xué)策略探析[J].教學(xué)與管理，2015，36.[3]廖雪梅.運(yùn)用詞塊教學(xué)策略，促進(jìn)初中英語(yǔ)寫作[J].校園英語(yǔ)，2016，27.

第四篇：積累與作文寫作

淺談材料積累與作文寫作

高一語(yǔ)文組韓曉麗

提起寫作文學(xué)生就頭疼，是因?yàn)閷W(xué)生無話可說，東拼西湊，800字寫得異常艱難。一般情況下能湊出一篇文章就不錯(cuò)了，更別說材料充足、語(yǔ)言優(yōu)美等要求了。其實(shí)寫作文并沒有那么艱難，有個(gè)很實(shí)用的辦法那就是天天積累。任何學(xué)習(xí)都是一個(gè)積累的過程，特別是在學(xué)生的習(xí)作中,要經(jīng)過再創(chuàng)造,平時(shí)的積累是寫好作文的基礎(chǔ)。怎樣積累？接下來我將談一些我的想法。

一、材料來源于生活

生活是作文素材的最大存儲(chǔ)庫(kù),因?yàn)樯钪械淖魑牟牧鲜侨≈槐M、用之不竭的。每天同學(xué)們之間，師生之間，家人之間要發(fā)生許許多多事。加上學(xué)生現(xiàn)在還可以借助手機(jī)、電視等媒體借助不少人不少事。每件事認(rèn)真推敲和思考都會(huì)寫出自己的見解，所以學(xué)生無話可說是因?yàn)樗麄兒苌僬J(rèn)真觀察周圍的生活。因此,教師要有目的性、有計(jì)劃地指導(dǎo)學(xué)生。把孩子們的豐富的日常生活和社會(huì)百態(tài)呈現(xiàn)在作文里。我在每堂課前都安排課前演講，鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生自己創(chuàng)作就寫最近的事，說感受，說看法，同學(xué)點(diǎn)評(píng)。每次三分鐘的演講都成為師生期盼的必備環(huán)節(jié)。慢慢地學(xué)生演講的內(nèi)容豐富了，學(xué)生自信了，寫起文章來能把身邊的事恰當(dāng)入文了。前幾天，學(xué)生談起同學(xué)之間打架的事，說到了如何處理同學(xué)關(guān)系，大家暢所欲言說了不少。老師告訴大家2013年咋們考區(qū)的高考作文就是這個(gè)，大家完全可以把那些見解寫進(jìn)文章。同學(xué)頓時(shí)覺得作文離我們真近，高考作文也不例外，不用害怕。

二、材料來源于課本

我們的課本是專家精選的一些優(yōu)質(zhì)篇目，所以無論是從手法上還是從思想性上看都是上乘之作。學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)完就扔在一邊了，其實(shí)利用起來也是不錯(cuò)的資源。比如寫關(guān)于“積累”的作文，學(xué)生能想起《勸學(xué)》里的“積土成山”“積水成淵”。寫“反省”的文章，學(xué)生可以寫到《小狗包弟》里給大家呈現(xiàn)的那個(gè)敢于懺悔自己的巴金??那些閃爍著智慧光芒的語(yǔ)言、事例在筆下靜靜流淌。學(xué)生立刻感到那些圣賢書到今天依然受用。

三、材料來源于資料

現(xiàn)在的作文資源是海量的，各種作文書，美句佳段俯拾皆是。學(xué)生可以“占為己有”，這是寫美文的捷徑。首先把作文話題分成若干話題如樂觀、執(zhí)著、堅(jiān)韌、思考、踏實(shí)等，然后按照話題給材料歸類。觀點(diǎn)、事例安放在對(duì)應(yīng)話題下，摘抄在美文本上。每天都保證一篇作文800字左右的閱讀量，200字左右的摘抄量。一周保證背誦精挑細(xì)選的段落200字，每周固定一個(gè)早讀抽查背誦情況，有好例子、好文章全班分享。每個(gè)學(xué)期有近二十周，能檢查十五次也可背下3000字左右的素材。三年下來資源驚人的多呀，何況一旦學(xué)生嘗到這種“移花接木”的甜頭背誦的量會(huì)自己加大。寫一篇好文章會(huì)在很短的時(shí)間內(nèi)完成。

我們常講要做生活中的有心人，多看、多思、多記時(shí)刻積累就不怕寫不出好文章來。這恰如蜜蜂采花釀蜜的過程，蜜蜂不辭辛勞遍嘗百花才釀出蜜來，我們寫作文也要博采生活之花，才能釀出作文的甘甜之蜜。

第五篇：初中英語(yǔ)寫作集錦

初中英語(yǔ)寫作范文集錦 [一] 圍繞：學(xué)校讓學(xué)生打掃廁所和學(xué)校不讓學(xué)生打掃廁所兩種情況。寫一不少于80個(gè)詞的主題為“孩子的獨(dú)立教育”英語(yǔ)作文。給出詞：only child，moral education nowadays in china，many students are the only child in their family.they are the apple of their parents’ eyes or even their granparents’，so they are free of any house work or menial labor.and moral education is no more than some bookish thing.studentsare largely dependent on their parents and teachers.to educate them to be independent，the most effective way is to let them experience on their own.therefore，they are better to be given the opportunity to get some train at school-to clean the washing room，which can be regarded as part of the moral education.范文：關(guān)于國(guó)慶節(jié)的英語(yǔ)作文 例1 National Day is coming，and we can have a seven-day.My family are going to Hainan.It’s a good seaside city.We are staying there for a week.We are going to the beach and going swimming in the sea.We’re visiting Tianya Haijiao，Wanquan River and many other beautiful places.I think we’ll have a good time there.國(guó)慶節(jié)來了，我有七天的假期。我們一家去海南。那是一個(gè)美麗的海濱城市。我們?cè)谀抢锎弦粋€(gè)星期。我們?nèi)ド碁€在海里游泳。我們游覽“天涯海角”，菀泉河還有別的許多好地方。我想我們?cè)谀抢飼?huì)玩得很開心。例2 National Day Holidays I went to my cousin’s house on the first day of the holidays and got a piece of good news that his wife was pregnant；She said she’s worrying about getting fat，but on her face there was a unconcealable pleasure of conceiving a baby.My cousin told me that he’ll educate his child in a severe way，with a future father’s matureness.I’m happy for them.：）

Yesterday，our research school’s soccer team had a match with the graduate students from the department of international business.It was almost a close game in the first half，but we seemed lacking of vigor in the second half，so，we lost the gameHalf of the National Day holidays have passed by??life still goes with good and bad times.范文：中學(xué)生該不該上網(wǎng)

最近你們學(xué)校要舉行一次“中學(xué)生該不該上網(wǎng)”的討論。你是贊成者之一，認(rèn)為我們不應(yīng)該因噎廢食。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容寫一篇發(fā)言篇。要求：字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右注意：不要逐句翻譯。益處

1.看國(guó)內(nèi)外新聞，獲取信息。2.發(fā)e-mail，打電話。3.上網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)校，閱讀各種書籍，自學(xué)外語(yǔ)。4.欣賞音樂，觀看體育比賽，玩棋牌等游戲，網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物，豐富我們的生活。5.提高我們操作電腦的能力 注意事項(xiàng)

1．不要沉湎于（be given to）上網(wǎng)以免影響生活和學(xué)習(xí)。2．不要上不健康的網(wǎng)站。參考范文：

In my opinion，the Internet is helpful rather than harmful as someone else thinks.As is known to all，the Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life.On the Internet，we can read news at home and from abroad and get as much information as we can.We can send e-mails or make phone calls to our family as well as to our friends.We can also attend the net school，read many books and even teach ourselves English.We can also enjoy music，watch matches and play computer games on the Internet.We can even do shopping on line.Besides，we can improve our ability to operate the computer.But we should not be given to the Internet，or we'll get our life and study destroyed.Besides，we should keep off the harmful websites.Anyhow，this doesn't prevent the Internet becoming our friend.We can't throw away the apple because of the core，can we？

范文：我的同學(xué) My Classmate 請(qǐng)以“My Classmate”為標(biāo)題寫一篇記敘文要求：

1、主題明確，語(yǔ)言流暢，思路清晰。

2、字?jǐn)?shù)在100字以內(nèi)。思路點(diǎn)撥：

寫記敘文要按照事物發(fā)展的客觀規(guī)律敘述，所敘述的內(nèi)容要交代清楚，條理清晰，重點(diǎn)突出，主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。

這篇文章也是記敘文，主人公應(yīng)該用第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)為主。本文以主人公為中心線索，以

一、兩件事件為重點(diǎn)內(nèi)容去組織材料，反映主人公的形象特征。整個(gè)內(nèi)容情節(jié)要合情合理，有真實(shí)感，敘述時(shí)可按事情發(fā)展的順序進(jìn)行，同時(shí)加以點(diǎn)評(píng)。參考范文 My Classmate Liu Kai is my classmate.He is a good student and always ready to help others.One day on his way to school，he saw a little girl crossing the road.A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move.The car nearly hit her.Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm.The little girl was saved.She told him where she lived，and he took her home.When LiuKai hurried into the classroom，the teacher had already begun his lesson.He told the teacher why he was late.He was then praised for what he had done.初中英語(yǔ)寫作范文集錦 [二] 范文：介紹學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)情況

It is my honor to show you around，and now I will introduce something about our study.At present we learn not only from the textbook but also from optional courses.We can study what we are interested in.In this way，we can develop ourselves in different aspects.And we can also study on the Internet.范文：A piano player What do I want to do when I’m older？ Someone wants to be a doctor.Someone wants to be a basketball player because they are good at sport.Someone wants to be a writer and to make the writing.Someone wants to be a teacher because they like teaching children.I like playing the piano and I good at it.So I want to become a piano player.Play the piano is very interesting.And you can learn something of music.Piano can make you like music.A lot of musician and singer are love playing piano.I play the piano when I’m ten years old.Now I’m in grand five.I hope when I’m sixteen years old，I can become grand eight.I’ll be harder and harder to practise.Become a piano play is a hard job.But I believe I can do it.范文：my dream place The winter vacation passed quickly.In those days，I have done some things.Playing，doing homework and so on.Sometimes I helped my mother doing some housework.She thanked to me.Though，I was proud of myself.I also went over my English learning.I think I have known more than before.In the new term，I will study hard.范文：The thing that I'll never forget How time flies！I’m fifteen years now.During the long time，there was one thing that I will never forget.The Spring Festival is our traditional festival.During the Spring Festival，people usually visit their friends and relatives.When I was 9 years old，my family took the bus to my grandparents’ to say “Happy New Year” to them.In the bus，I had a good seat.At 7：30，the bus came to a village.A woman got on with a baby in her arms.At that time，there was no seat.But she must look after her baby carefully.She had to stand next to me.I wanted to stand up and let her sit down，but I was afraid of hearing the other people say“That girl want to be praised.”I looked around.Most people were looking out of the windows and some were sleeping.Suddenly，a little boy behind me，stood up and made room for the woman.She said “Thank you very much” with a big smile.The boy smiled，too.When I told my cousin about it after that，he said “The child is the father of a man.” I’m very ashamed.Why could’t I do the same thing as the little boy did？ From that I learn that we should do our best to help people who need help.If everyone makes a contribution to helping others，the world will become much more beautiful！

范文：怎樣學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ) How to study English？ 作文一：

Study English，You do need to use English with speakers who are not teachers of English.This isn't easy，since everyone feels constrained speaking English with friends with whom it would be natural to use a shared mother tongue.Joining an English Club is a good idea and joining a club with an international membership（where English is in use at least some of the time）is，for many people，even better.If nothing like this is accessible，you might consider what would be involved in getting something going.你需要常常和英語(yǔ)教師以外的人士用英語(yǔ)交談。這當(dāng)然很不容易，因?yàn)榕c母語(yǔ)相同的人自由交談時(shí)，彼此若用英語(yǔ)交談總會(huì)覺得很不自在。亦可參加英語(yǔ)俱樂部或國(guó)際會(huì)員的俱樂部（至少有時(shí)使用英語(yǔ)溝通），這樣對(duì)很多人而言更有益。如果沒有合適的社團(tuán)可加入，也不妨考慮任何足以提高英語(yǔ)能力的機(jī)會(huì)。作文二：

There are four key points to study English：listening，speaking，reading and writing.Firstly，we should be brave to talk with others in English.By doing this，we can improve ore talking and listening skill.Secondly，we should try to listen to all kinds of English programmes as much as possible.In this way，we can gradually improve our pronunciation.Thirdly，we should often read English books.When we come across a new word.We should guess its meaning through the contest first.then look it up in the dictionary to have a check.I thin，it is a good way of reading.Fourthly，we should practice our writing skills.Whenever we have any idea，we should get the pen and write it down at once.It is very important to avoid writing in Chinese way and using the Chinese grammar.As long as we listen，speak，read and write more，we are sure to make remarkable progress！初中英語(yǔ)寫作范文集錦 [三]It is my honor to show you around，and now I will introduce something about our study.At present we learn not only from the textbook but also from optional courses.We can study what we are interested in.In this way，we can develop ourselves in different aspects.And we can also study on the Internet.范文：風(fēng) Wind Each season has wind.The warm wind in spring，the hot wind in summer，the gold wind in autumn and cold wind in winter are all called wind，but their tempers are quite different.When spring comes，warm wind wakes up everything；many flowers come out.It can bring us joy.In hot summer，the sweats roll down from our checks.Everything needs wind，but wind often hide and seek with us.Autumn comes.Cool wind blows yellow leaves down.The corn is ripe and all the fields become yellow.The farmers are busy getting in crops.It can bring us the happiness of harvest.In cold winter，cold wind blows so hard that everyone can hardly open his eyes Wind，we welcome you，need you，but sometimes hate you.Will you please obey us and do good things for us.范文：找媽媽 Looking for Mum One day Li Ming caught a little bird.He tied it with a piece of thread and played with it happily.At that time，he saw a little girl crying by the roadside.A policeman saw her，came over and asked her why she was crying and where her house is.When he learned that girl had got lost and she was then looking for her mother，he decided to lead the girl to be back home.Seeing this Li Ming thought the little bird also had its mother and he should set the little bird free so that it could be with its mother again.Then Li Ming untied the thread and returned the little bird to the blue sky.范文：介紹學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)情況范文：能源 Energy As we all know we need energy in our daily life.There are many kinds of energy.We can get our energy from food.The energy in food comes from sunlight which helps plants grow.Plants store up energy from the sun，much of our food comes from plants.Some of our food comes from animals，but animals depend on plants for food too.范文：英語(yǔ)作文自我介紹 To introduce myself Hello，everyone！

My name is Winnie.I'm a 15 years old girl.I live in the beautiful city of Rizhao.I'm an active，lovely and clever girl.In the school，my favourite subject is maths.Perhaps someone thinks it's difficult to study well.But I like it.I belive that if you try your best，everything can be done well.I also like sports very much.Such as，running，volleyball and so on.I'm kind-hearted.If you need help，please come to me.I hope we can be good friends！OK.This is me.A sunny girl.初中英語(yǔ)寫作范文集錦 [四] 范文：給父親的信

Directions：you have decided to start jogging next month，but you haven't got any suitable shoes to wear.Now you are writing a letter to your father asking him to send you some extra money so that you can but the shoes.in you letter，you will include： * your hard work；

* How you read about jogging in your English textbook； * The advantages ofjogging； * THe need for a pair fo quality shoes； * The price of the shoes you plan to buy； * THe time you need the mon

.Your appreciation for his help Dear dad, I am writing to you for help which I have come to a desperate need.You know I always want to be healthy and in geat shape，so I can pay more attention to teacher's instruction.Yesterday，I went to library and read some books about jogging.I think I need a good jogging shoes for my exercise.I believe a strong body can enhance my study as described by our textbook.I have found a cheap price of a pair of jogging shoes which cost only $500 nearby school.Daddy，you will help me buy this pair，wont' you？ The on sale may not last for long.Please send money as soon as possible，so I can start my jogging right away.I know you will fulfill my dream and expect my endeavor.I promise I will do my best on my study and exercise.Thank you for your consideration.Take care and wish you happiness.Yours beloved son.范文：考試 Examination Someone says examination can help us go over our lessons in time and after the examination we can find how we are getting on with our studies.But we are always having too many examinations and they are also too difficult for us to get through.I find some of us have lost interest in learning lessons.Besides，it is harmful to our health as we hardly have any time to go in for sports.I think the present system of measurement should be improved.范文：什么是成功的秘訣 What Is the Secret of Success My father is an engineer.He works very hard.Once I asked my father what the secret of success was.He didn't say a word，but wrote a few words on a piece of paper and handed it to me.I looked at the paper，it was written：A=X+Y+Z.“What does it mean？”I asked.“A means success，”explained my father.“X means hard，Y means good ways，and Z means you must stop talking and start to work.”

That's right.From then on，I tried my best to be better.范文：通知 Notice The sports meeting which was to take place this Saturday has to be put off because of the heavy rairi these days.All students are required to come to school on Saturday morning as usual，but there will be no class that afternoon.Weather permitting，the sports meeting will be held next Saturday morning.Members of the school ping-pong team must come to the Ping-pong Hall at 4：30 this Saturday afternoon.Ping-pong stars from Wuhan will come and give special training and coaching then.Office of Physical Education 10th April，2005 初中英語(yǔ)寫作范文集錦 [五] 范文：一次體育課 A PE Lesson 下面是某節(jié)體育課的有關(guān)情況，請(qǐng)你據(jù)此寫一篇日記。1．時(shí)間：5月28日，星期一，下午。2．天氣：陰。3．項(xiàng)目：跳遠(yuǎn)（jump）。4．過程：（1）打上課鈴時(shí)就在操場(chǎng)集合；

（2）做準(zhǔn)備活動(dòng)（warming—upexercises）；（3）聽老師講解并示范；（4）我因心情緊張而失敗；（5）不灰心，反復(fù)練習(xí)；（6）終于跳過了3米。5．體會(huì)：只要有恒心（perseverance）就一定能成功。注意：

1．內(nèi)容必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，但不能逐點(diǎn)翻譯。2．日記格式要正確。3．詞數(shù)100左右。A PE Lesson May 28th Monday Cloudy This afternoon we had a PE lesson.Our teacher taught us to practise the long jump.When the bell rang，we gathered on the playground.After warming-up exercises，the teacher told us the way of long jump and showed us how to do it.Then we followed the teacher and practised one after another.Soon came my turn，but I felt a hit nervous.Though I failed the first time，yet I didn't lose my heart.I kept on practising.At last I was able to jump over 3 meters.From this lesson I came to see that one will succeed if he has perseverance.范文：寫給母親的感謝信 My dearest Mother，The mother's day is coming and I would like to say “Happy mother's day” in this letter.I love you and thank you so much for everything you did for me.This day，I will stay away and can't give you my appreciation at home.I know I will watch myself，so don't worry about me.I am doing very well on my study.My schoolmates and teachers are all very nice.Though I can't be at home，I hope you have a wonderful mother's day.Love，Your son ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Dear mother ：

I am writing to express my deepest thanks to you in Mother's Day，dear mother，you devote all of your energy and blood to our.you do not have any complaint about my brother and i.You love our though various different approaches such as study，work and life，consquently，our held on the belief that the mother is only lover.please accept our appreciate again I hope that you have happiness everyday.Such is sons' nature，I really do not know how to express my thanks to you.However，I can imagine，on the day 18 years ago，when you gave birth to me，what a complex feeling you had.In the past few years，every day you struggle me up in the morning and prepare breakfast for me，then in the afternoon，you always welcome your only son with delicious foods after a day’s hardwork.Now your son has been 18 and will go to university soon，like a bird is leaving its parents.Nevertheless，your footprints on my heart will never ever fade and——I love you mum！范文：介紹校內(nèi)配套設(shè)施

I am very gladto showyou around.As you can see，my school is very small.It hasonly one building which is built like a ring.It has four floors in all.On the'first floor are the offices of leaders.The classrooms and the offices of teachers are on the other three floors.On the second floor，there is a reading room.In front of the building is the playground.初中英語(yǔ)寫作范文集錦 [六] 范文：少壯不努力，老大徒傷悲 A young idler,an old beggar “少壯不努力，老大徒傷悲”，請(qǐng)你談?wù)剬?duì)此的想法并如何行動(dòng)。

Almost everyone knows the famous Chinese saying：A young idler，an old beggar.Throughout history，we have seen many cases in which this saying has again and again proved to be true.It goes without saying that the youth is the best time of life，during which one's mental and physical states are at their peaks.It takes relatively less time and pains to learn or accept new things in a world full of changes and rapid developments.In addition，one is less likely to be under great pressure from career，family and health problems when young.Therefore，a fresh mind plus enormous energy will ensure success in different aspects of life.Of course，we all know：no pains，no gains.If we don't make every effort to make good use of the advantages youth brings us，it is impossible to achieve any goals.As students，we should now try our best to learn all the subjects well so that we can be well prepared for the challenges that we will face in the future.范文：寒假生活 Wonderful life in winter holiday From the sixteenth of January to the seventh of February is our Winter Holiday.I think everybody did a lot of things in the Winter Holiday.But I didn't.Let you to listen to my story of Winter Holiday.I spend a lot of time on the homework? Every day in my Winter Holiday，I always got up late.Then I listened to the tape，it was nine o'clock.Then I ate breakfast and then I did my homework during the daytime！I’m not very slow but the homework was too heavy！I'm unlucky on the playing too.I played firecracker but I hurt my finger with the fire.I'm careless to kindle the firecracker，so I'm very unlucky.I still unlucky on my friend's party.In the morning，I wanted to get up early but I woke up at 10：50.After ten minutes，the party would start！So I only eat a piece of bread then I go to my friend’s home！And I stay at his home for a long time when I came home.My mother and father were very angry and they scolded me！

I'm worried and feel unlucky on my weigh.Last term，I was 48 kilogram but now I am 51 kilogram！I must to do banting！

But most important，I have gone to Shanghai Ocean Aquarium，I want to go there very much because I want to see the horse，the monkey?in the sea.Now I've done it.It is a bright dot in my Winter Holiday.范文：我家的小狗 My Little Dog Last year，my friend gave me a little dog.I was fond of him very much.I liked to play with him after school and he liked to follow me wherever I went.I was very glad that I had a “body guard”。

Last winter I was very busy with my lessons and came home very late every day.However，no matter how late I went home，my dog used to stand at a comer near my school waiting for me.When I passed there，he barked two or three times then ran towards me.It seemed that he was calling me.My dog not only，took good care of me，but also was respoasible at home.When strangers came to my house，he barked at them but not hurt them.What a lovely dog he is！范文：我的儲(chǔ)蓄罐 My Collecting-tin I have a lot of little handiwork，but the favorite one is my collecting-tin.It is a little man made of china.He wears a red hat and a pair of big glasses.His blue clothes are very nice.He has a red noseband no big eyes like stars on his face.His big and round body is very funny.Because of this collecting-fin，I have learned how to savemoney.When I was a little boy，I always put coins away，then I dropped them into his round body.Sometimes he can “eat” plenty of coins at a time，He becomes heavier and heavier day after day.初中英語(yǔ)寫作范文集錦 [七] 范文：我的外籍老師 Our Foreign Teacher Ms Jerry is a foreign teacher.She comes from America.She is thirty-one years old.She has fair hair，white skin and gray eyes.She is tall and slim.She looks very kind.And in fact，she is kind indeed.Ms Jerry is a good teacher.Although she only comes to our school twice a week，she is very responsible to her work and strict with her students.Once，she was ill，but she went on giving us lessons.When we learned this，we all listened to her even more attentively than usual.Ms Jerry teaches us English with great enthusiasm：“Each lesson she will bring us new pictures，new stories，new games and new songs.Her class is always full of happy laughter and merry songs.Ms Jerry is such a good teacher that all of us love and respect her.范文：參觀博物館 Going to the Museums During a long vacation，I usually like to go to see the exhibitsMany wonderful things are cared for in museums.There are paintings，potteries，sculptures，costumes，swords，ancient animal bones and plants，stuffed animals，antique steam locomotives，and many others.It is always a good review of history to visit those museums.范文：寄信 Mailing a Letter All large cities around the world have many post offices located throughout the city，and even the smallest village has at least one postal station.You may go to a post office to mail a letter.However，there are mail boxes located on every second or third corner in all cities and towns.Any letter or small package having sufficient postage may be dropped in any of these mail boxes.If a person wishes a letter to be delivered more quickly to the address，he may buy a special delivery stamp and delivery is made directly by the messenger instead of by the regular carrier.范文：神奇的貝殼 The Magic Shell At the beach I found a magic shell，so I brought it home in my pail；and I kept it up on my top bookshelf right under the picture whale.And now，whenever I wish I were back there by the shining sea，I hold the shell up close to my ear，till it brings the beach to me：all the hushing sound and the rushing sound of the seashore winds and waves are caught in my shell that I brought home.范文：旅游事業(yè) Ways to Improve china's tourism 【要求】

要求：旅游事業(yè)對(duì)我國(guó)具有舉足輕重的作用。請(qǐng)以Ways to Improve China＇s Tourism為題為我國(guó)旅游事業(yè)的發(fā)展提幾點(diǎn)建議。（提示：擴(kuò)大宣傳，改善旅游設(shè)施，提高服務(wù)質(zhì)量??）【范文】

Ways to Improve china＇s tourisme，China＇s tourism will definitely be improved.First，our places of interest should be better advertised throughout the world to attract more tourists.Second，facilities should be provided to ensure that tourists enjoy their trip.Finally，the quality of service should be improved.Don＇t tell people their ideas are bad unless you＇ve got a good one.初中英語(yǔ)寫作范文集錦 [八] 范文：模范學(xué)生 A Model Student Do you mind being called a bad student？Of course not.So far as I know，everybody intends to be（become）a model student.However，to be a model student is by no means an easy thing.First，he must do his best to obtain knowledge.A man without sufficient knowledge will not succeed.Secondly，he must remember to improve his health.Only a strong man can do great tasks.Thirdly，he should receive moral education.If his conduct is not good，no one will consider making friends with him.范文：通電話 A Phone Call I was tired with preparing for the Joint College Entrance Examination the other evening.And having been alone for several hours，I was eager to have someone to chat with me about anything but examinations.So I telephoned my best friend Mary，who was also busy preparing for the joint entrance examination.On the telephone，I told her that I missed her very much.And I invited her to have a cup of coffee with me in a coffeehouse near her home.But to my surprise，she declined and said that she had to devote all her time to her studies.Hearing this，I could do nothing but hang up after saying “Sorry” to her.Disappointed and discouraged，I turned back to my desk and reluctantly buried myself again in my books.范文：春天來了 Spring is coming on Winter has gone，and spring is coming on.Watching the ice melting，I know the whole earth is being rejuvenated from the winter.A variety of flowers come out to show their beauty and bring us fragrance.It is a feast for our eyes and souls.The yellow grass suddenly turn green.The young leaves grow on the branches.The swallows fly back home with the greeting of spring.Everything is coming to life.Feeling the warm sunshine，enjoying the beautiful scenery，listening to the wonderful music，drinking the new tea，my mood is perfect and I have nothing else to desire.Spring is the most fantastic season in the year.It means so much to the other three seasons.范文：一個(gè)特殊的女孩 A special girl There is a special girl.Why is she special？Firstly she looks like a boy so her classmates always call her a “hoyden”.Maybe they’re right because she also has the same hobbies as the boys.She likes playing soccer，basketball，table tennis，badminton，computer games and so on.If someone bothers her she will feel annoyed and even fight against him.Secondly she is a lovely girl.She loves life very much.You may see her smiling all the time.She likes making friends with others.She likes making jokes with them，too.She likes singing but she is not good at it.She likes dancing，but she is not good at it，either.Thirdly，she is a sentimental girl.She likes talking to birds and flowers.She likes talking to herself，too.When she’s watching TV，she will cry over a touching scene.Sometimes she is moved to cry all day and all night.Lastly she’s a fantastic girl.She has lots of dreams.She always dreams of her future such as her job when she grows up.She wants to be a scientist because scientists invent things that are helpful for our lives.She wants to be a TV hostess because she has beautiful voice and she also wants to be?

That’s why I said she’s special.Do you want to know her？If you can keep the secret I can tell you who she is.The special girl is me.范文：我的生日 My birthday My birthday is on March 23th，I celebrate it every year with my family and my friends.Every year，I hold a little birthday party and invite my friends.We chat and play a lot of games together.The best part of it is that I love the birthday cake and the gifts I get from my parents and my friends.I also get some money on my birthday.I can buy what I want with the money.I have great fun on my birthdays，but on the other hand，I also understand that I am one year older after each birthday and that means I should be more responsible for myself and I should also my self-aware.I should understand more things and be less ignorant！

Fianlly，I should be thankful for my parents，I know they have done their best in raising me up.范文：成人教育的發(fā)展 A Boom in Adult education Directions：For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Boom in Adult Education.You should write no less than 150 words and you should base your composition on the outline（given in Chinese）below： 1.現(xiàn)在許多成年人都利用業(yè)余時(shí)間去大學(xué)或夜校讀書 2.出現(xiàn)這種成人教育熱的原因是?? 范文： A Boom in Adult Education Every Tuesday and Friday evening sees Miss Li，my neighbor and a secretary in a company rush home after a hard day’s work，gulp down her meals and then hurry out to catch the bus for her English class.Miss Li’s case is not unique，and now more and more city adults spend their leisure time trying to improve themselves at school or college.There are a number of reasons for people to go back for their education.Some people，like Miss Li，are doing it to acquire another degree or diploma to impress the society.To them more knowledge，or rather，more credentials means more opportunities for better jobs and quicker promotion.Other people，especially those who are laid off or out of employment go to vocational school to prepare to return to the job market.They are eager for new skills so that they can be qualified for the jobs in retail trade，administration，education and other service categories to which they are strange because most of them were blue-collar workers in the factory.There are also people who come to take such courses as Chinese traditional medicine，painting，calligraphy and photography.As their working weeks decline people begin to have time to fulfill their old dream of their heart’s desire.Out of necessity or out of interest，people go back to school for the common goal——to improve themselves，and this boom in adult education，in turn，helps to raise the intellectual standard of the whole country.初中英語(yǔ)寫作范文集錦 [九] 范文：你喜歡哪種方式的旅行？ Which Mode of Travel Do You like? Directions：For this part you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Which Mode of Travel Do You like？ You should write noless than 150 words and base your composition on the outline（given in Chinese）below： 1.有的人喜歡參加旅行社旅游（package tours）2.有的人喜歡自己獨(dú)立行動(dòng)（travelling on one’s own）3.比較這兩種旅游方式，我喜歡的是?? 范文：

With the general standard of living improvingand the working week becoming shorter，more andmore people are able to make a holiday trip toplaces of interest.While many like to joinpackage tours fro convenience，I prefer to traveln my own.I like travelling on may own not only because it costs much less but because it gives a great degree of independence and freedom.Travelling on my own，I’m my own boss；and can decide when to start on my way，where to linger a little longer and which spot can be skipped over to save energy or time for another spot.I can always adjust my plan.On the contrary，in a package tour you’re deprived of as much freedom as in a military base.At the sound of the whistle，you have to jump up from a sound sleep and，with heavy-lidded eyes，hurry to the gathering place where you are collected and counted to board a coach.At the sight of the little flag waving，you must immediately take yourself away from the scenes you are marveling at and follow the guide whose sole interest is to cover all spots according to him strict schedule，regardless of the weather or your health condition.True，you may encounter inconveniences if you travel individually，for instance，getting accommodations for the night and finding a place for meals.But nothing can be compared with the freedom which is vital to a person who takes a holiday trip mainly to escape from constraints of his routine life.范文：快樂的家 A Happy Family I have a happy family.Although it’s small，it’s full of love.There are four people in my family，my father，my mother，my elder sister and myself——we all love each other.My father is a doctor.He loves his work.Every day he works from dawn to dark.In his spare time，he likes reading and writing books.My mother is a teacher.She is very strict with her students but kind to them.Every day she goes to work early.She is not only a teacher but also a fiend of the students.My sister is a shopkeeper and she has been married for several years.I’m a middle school students.My wish is to be a university student.And my parents often encourage me to work hard.I will try my best to realize my dream.范文：全家福 A Photo of My Family Look at this photograph of my family.There are five people in it.The tallest one is my father.He is forty-eight years old.My mother is standing beside him.She is not as my father.She is three years younger than my father.Sitting in front of them are my grandparents.My grandfather is that fat one with a pair of glasses.My grandmother is as fat as he.This little one is me.I’m sitting between them.All of us love one anther.I have a happy family.范文：快樂的一天 A Happy Day Today is the National Day.It is our country＇s birthday.Now she is 56.I am very happy.Today in the afternoon，I go to the park，people all look so happy.Someone is doing exercise，someone is singing the nation song.A little girl comes to me and says to me，happy National Day.I know she loves the country，but I love her，too.Today is a happy day.范文：最好的朋友 My Best Friend I have a best friend.She has long，straight，black hair，big，black eyes and a small nose.She is very thin and kind，she is cute，too.Her English and Chinese is very good.She is hard-working.Her favorite season is summer，because it’s hot，she can eat ice-cream.She likes playing the piano，reading books and singing songs.Who’s she？She is my best friend ——Sun Mengqi.She has a very good English name，too——Angle.初中英語(yǔ)寫作范文集錦 [十] 范文講評(píng)：周末 「要求」

周末兩天的休息對(duì)于平時(shí)忙于工作學(xué)習(xí)的人們來說是非常寶貴的。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提綱寫一篇短文。

周末對(duì)于人們來說意味著什么。每個(gè)人都有自己度周末的方式。我是怎樣度周末的。「范文」 Weekends Weekends to people mean that they can have a two-day good rest.For example，people can go out to enjoy themselves or get together with relatives and friends to talk with each other or watch interesting video tapes with the whole family.Everyone spends weekends in his own way.Within two days，some people can relax themselves by listening to music，reading novels，or watching films.Others perhaps are more active by playing basketball，wimming or dancing.Different people have different relaxations.tudy or borrow some books to gain much knowledge.I also go to see various exhibition to broaden my vision.An excursion to seashore or mountain resorts is my favorite way of spending weekends.Weekends are always enjoyable for me.「評(píng)語(yǔ)」

全文思路清晰，論述充分，語(yǔ)言流暢易懂。用詞講究，注意了詞語(yǔ)搭配，沒有重復(fù)、堆砌之感。

范文講評(píng)：節(jié)日出行 「要求」

和外國(guó)朋友交談是文化生活中很重要的一部分，但是談什么話題卻要慎重考慮，因?yàn)楦鲊?guó)風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣不同，談的東西要關(guān)涉到禁忌、興趣。學(xué)校的英語(yǔ)角將要組織一次對(duì)外交流活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你以書面形式寫一些可以作為談話的材料。「范文」 Holidays and Outings It is common in English to ask people about their holidays.In the West many families go away on holiday during the summer months and so it is very usual to ask about this.If the holiday has not yet taken place，then their holiday plans can be talked about.And if it is already over，then where they went，whether they enjoyed it and so on can be discussed.Similar questions are asked before festivals and pubic holidays.Foreigners living and working in China often have frequent opportunities for travel，either at weekends or during their holiday periods，so questions on this topic can often lead to fruitful discussions.They may be particularly interested to hear comments on which places are worth visiting and why，especially if these places are a little less well known and not clearly described in the tour guides.Take vacaticn 看完上文，可知這實(shí)際上是一篇討論英語(yǔ)話題的文章。從這個(gè)角度來寫“Holidays and Outings”這個(gè)題目可謂不無新義。但是在與外國(guó)人交往時(shí)談些什么都是一個(gè)很現(xiàn)實(shí)的問題。本文提供了這一范例。全篇也圍這個(gè)問題來寫，幾乎每句話都是緊扣中心的。比如它始終突出了這是一個(gè)話題，就反復(fù)用“ask”、“discuss”、以及“comment”等詞。范文講評(píng)：介紹你的學(xué)校 「要求」

下周將有一批外賓來校參觀，請(qǐng)你給外賓簡(jiǎn)要介紹你校的情況。內(nèi)容包括三方面： 校史和成績(jī)。學(xué)校規(guī)模和主要設(shè)施。師生狀況（詞數(shù)100—120）。「范文」 An Introduction Our school was built in 1945 and a great number of students have graduated from it.Now many of them have become scientists，professors and engineers.Many students have also become workers and farmers after graduation.They have achieved great success in the development of modern industry and agriculture.Our school is a key middle school in our province.It has thirty classes with over 130students.Our school has a six-storeyed teaching building，several laboratories and a large playground.Last year，a new library was built and it has more than 1000 copies of books.All the teachers here are trying their best to do their work well.Every students is making full use of his time to train himself to be a qualified student.「評(píng)語(yǔ)」 文章簡(jiǎn)潔得體，結(jié)構(gòu)鮮明，語(yǔ)言流暢，介紹具體。讀后讓人對(duì)學(xué)校概貌了然于胸。school 還有學(xué)派的意思，另外“一群魚”叫做a school of fish.and long weekends.Never let vacation time expire.「評(píng)語(yǔ)」