第一篇:2014中考作文熱點預測背誦
誰不看誰吃虧周末一定要看!(考前讀至少五遍)
小伊語錄:
1,拿到作文后,不能下筆就寫,先要弄清楚這篇文章主要使用的人稱是第幾人稱,什么時態、什么體裁。
2.、高分作文有個特點是要點齊全。如果漏掉一個要點,則要扣分。但遇到不會翻譯的怎么辦? 如:幫助同學,可以增進友誼。很多學生翻譯不來“增進”,面對這樣的問題怎么辦呢?怎么不換個說法呢?你看,If we help our classmates with their study and other things , we can make our friendship longer.不就達到目的了嗎?同一個意思有很多種表達方式!耐心一些,一定會寫出來!
3.這時為了展示你與眾不同的能力,你務必要選擇高級的詞匯和句型。我們將一些簡單句子改為感嘆句,復合句、強調句、反意疑問句、將句子改得更能顯示你的高水平和能力。
4.全文中同一個意思,基本沒有重復使用某一個詞、短語或者句型等。如:you should,你可以用you supposed to ,you’d better do,why not 等 說明這個同學的詞匯量不同尋常、老師自然就對該作文有好感了。
5,段與段之間,句與句之間,有合適的連接詞自然過渡,如,firstly,secondly ,what is more,however, in a word.6,一些常用句型,it is said that…it seems that …it is necessary that ……we should try our best to donot only…but also In my opinion, …如果你不……,你就會……If you don't..., you'll...7.根據大家常犯的錯誤,最后再提醒一下:
1.such as 列舉跟名詞,或doing
for example 舉事例
2,一個句子只能有主語和謂語,再有其他動詞必須變非謂語!寫完作文后要檢查,動詞的第三人稱單數,時態。
3,可數名詞不能單獨使用,要么有復數,要么前面加a /an /the
8,可能會用到的諺語
1.Every coin has two sides.每個硬幣都有兩面,比喻事物的兩面性。
2.Health is better than wealth.健康勝于財富。
3.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一蘋果,不用請醫生。
范文
1.怎樣學好英語世界在發展,文化在交融,英語已經成為人們溝通的橋梁。怎樣學好英語是我們一直在探索的問題。幾年的學習經歷你一定積累了許多成功的經驗,請從聽、說、讀、寫四方面談談你的建議。
How to learn English well
English is important and useful to us.How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions.First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs.Watching English movies is also helpful to us.Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible.Don’t be afraid of making mistakes.The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make.We'd better join the English club and practice with others.Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines.It’s good for us.At last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries.(日記)
In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.2.保持健康The ways to stay healthy
Health is the most important for any of us.In order to stay healthy, we need some common knowledge.Firstly, we should pay attention to the diet.It’s best to eat lots of fruit and vegetables.“ An apple a day keeps the doctor away,” so fruit is good for health.Besides, we are not supposed to have a lot of junk food.Secondly, exercise is necessary.On the one hand, we are not easy to get fat.On the other hand, we can be stronger.Finally, we’d better have good living habits.We should sleep for about 8 hours at night, and never work too hard.What’s more, we must stay away from cigarettes.In a word, these are things we’d better follow if we want to stay healthy.3.如何跟別人相處How to get on well with others
As we all know, students should learn how to get on well with others.But in what ways? First of all, we should respect others.Everybody has their own way to do things, so we should understand each other.Besides, it is important for us to communicate with each other and share(分享)our happiness and sadness.What's more, we should be kind to others and offer necessary help to those who are in trouble.In my opinion, we should treat(對待)others in an honest(誠實的)way.Only in these ways can we get along well.4.6月5日(June 5)是世界環境保護日,我們周圍的環境變得越來越糟糕,污染越來越嚴重?假如你是學生Jone.,你校要進行“如何保護我們的環境?”專題演講比賽,要求:(1)、舉例說明環境存在的問題1—3方面;(2)、如何保護好我們的環境,采取怎樣的措施,字數80左右。
As we all know,the environmemt around us is getting worse and worse.In some places, we can’t see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills.Some people even have no clean water to drink.So I think we must do something to protect the environment.But what can we do? How to protect our environment ? For example ,we can go to school on foot or by bike.we can use shopping baskets not plastic bags(塑料袋)when we go shopping ,and we can use both sides of the paper when we write.In a word ,if everyone pays more attention to our environment ,there will be less pollution and our life will be better.“There is only one earth”.I hope everyone will protect our environment well.5.假定你是李華,最近你們班就“低碳”生活方式進行了討論,你的美國朋友Jack來信向你詢問討論情況,請你用英語寫封回信,簡單參照作文地帶介紹的以下討論結果:
1.節水節電;2.垃圾分類;3.少用紙巾,重拾手帕;4.步行,騎自行車或乘坐公交車。Dear Jack,Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle.Here is something about it.We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of living low carbon life.First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet.Saving water is also very important.Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, and we might recycle some of them.What’s more, we suggest using handkerchiefs(手帕)instead of paper so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down.More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes(貢獻)to a cleaner world.6.人們對于學生網上交友持不同意見。請你用英語寫一篇關于學生網上交友的短文,介紹人們的不同觀點,并表達自己的看法。贊成的理由 1.廣交朋友2.可自由表達思想3.有利于外語學習反對的理由 1.浪費時間 2.影響學習3.可能上當受騙你的看法是?
Should students make friends on line? Some people say yes.They think Internet helps people make many friends.Chatting on line, students can express more freely their feelings and opinions, and even it can improve their foreign language.Others, however, think students should not.They think making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study.Besides, some students get cheated(欺騙)on line.It is my opinion that students should place 放置their study, health and safety before other things.As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.
第二篇:中考英語作文熱點預測
關于環境保護問題(熱點)
環境保護問題是中考熱門話題,出現頻率高,難度較大,必須掌握。
典型句子
1.It’s our duty to save water
2.As we know , water is very important to man,3.we can’t live without water.4.The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.5.But some people don’t care about it.6.Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.Something must be done to stop the pollution.7.It“s our duty to protect our environment。
8.It is very important to take care of our environment
9.We should not throw litter onto the ground
10.We should not spit in a public place/cut down the trees
11.We should plant more flowers and trees。
12.We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin
13.If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful。
15.Trees are very helpful and important for us.17.We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future.t’s everyone’s duty to love and protect the environment.例文
1.假如你是新華中學的學生,名叫MIKE。去年6月1日,我國已經禁止使用塑料袋,你對此有何看法和什么好的建議?
I’m Mike.I am a student in Huaxing Middle School.Do you know the plastic bags? Do you often use the plastic bags? I don’t like them.I think they use the wasting valuable oil their production.And they can’t decompose(分解)in a short time.The plastic bags will
make our world worse.I agree with the rule, which people can’t get the free plastic bags in the shops, supermarkets.It encourages people to use their cloth bags and baskets.It’s good for our environment.So I hope all the students in our class stop to use the plastic bags, and use our own cloth bags.I hope we can take care of our environment.Let’s make our world more and more beautiful.、6月5日(June 5)是世界環境保護日,我們周圍的環境變得越來越糟糕,污染越來越嚴重……。假如你是學生Jone.,你校要進行“如何保護我們的環境?”專題演講比賽,要求:
1、舉例說明環境存在的問題1—3方面;
2、如何保護好我們的環境,采取怎樣的措施,舉例1—3方面進行說明,字數80左右。
Dear headmasters,teachers,classmates and friends:
I’m very proud that I have chosen to speak to you all today, I’m a bit nervous as I’ve never made a speech before to so many people ,so please forgive me if it shows.As we all know,the environmemt around us is getting worse and worse.In some places we can’t see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills.Some people even have no clean water to drink.So I think we must do something to protect the environment..But what can we do? How to protect our environmemt ?For example ,we can go to school on foot or by bike.we can use shopping baskets not plastic bags.when we go shopping and we can use both sides of the paper when we write.In a word ,if everyone pays more attention to our environment ,there will be less pollution and our life will be better.“There is only one earth”,I hope everyone will protect our environment well.Thanks!
3、(江蘇南通)目前南通市正在積極創建全國文明城市,中學生也在為之努力。假如你是你是某中學的一名學生張通,請根據下列圖表所示內容,給筆友John寫一封電子郵件,介紹有關情況。
注意:1.郵件內容應包含所有要點,不要簡單翻譯,可適當發揮;
2.文中不得使用真實姓名、校名等信息;
3.詞數90左右(郵件中已經寫好了的部分,不計入總詞數)。
4.參考詞匯:civilized 文明的respect尊敬
Dear John,I’m glad to hear from you.Now let me tell you something about our city.Nantong is
trying to set up a national civilized city.We middle school students are also doing something for it.______________________________________________________________________________________________________
Zhang Tong
參考答案:
Dear John,I’m glad to hear from you.Now let me tell you something about our city.Nantong is trying to set up a national civilized city.We middle school students are also doing some things for it.We are all polite to our teachers.(In class, we listen careful to them./When we meet them, we always say hello to them./…)We also respect the old.For example, we help them cross the streets.We are always ready to help each other.(When one has difficulty with his studies, others will help him at once./...)We often show our love to those in trouble.Last month, the students of my class donated money to the earthquake-hit areas.Besides, we plant trees to protect the environment and make our city more beautiful.Nantong is my hometown.I will do my best to turn Nantong into a civilized city.Zhang Tong4、保護環境
(四川樂山)從2008年6月1日起,國家將禁止商家免費提供塑料袋,掀起全國“拒塑”的環保運動。假如你是李華,準備以“What Can We Do for the Environment”為題,寫一篇保護環境的英語演講稿。
內容包含:1.在購物時用布袋子替代塑料袋;2.盡可能地再利用使用過的課本; 3.離開教室應關燈; 4.最好走路或騎自行車上學;5.簡述理由:保護環境,減少污染,節約能源等注意:1.詞數:80詞左右。開頭和結尾已經為你寫好,不計入總詞數;
2.可根據要點適當增加細節,使行文連貫;3.文章中不能出現真實姓名和校名,否則以零分處理。3.參考詞匯:布袋子cloth bag塑料袋plastic bag保護protect能源energy污染pollution課本textbook
What Can We Do for the Environment
Hello, everyone.I’m Li Hua.It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the
environment,and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this
problem.___________________________________________________
In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment.I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.Thank you for your listening!
參考作文:What Can We Do for the Environment
Hello, everyone.I’m Li Hua.It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the environment, and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags in stead of plastic bags when we go shopping.It helps to protect the environment.The second thing we can do is to reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can.We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy.What’s more, it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school.We should try our best reduce pollution and waste.In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment.I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.Thank you for your listening!
5.環境問題:今天環境變得越來越糟糕,環境問題影響著人們的工作,學習,生活等,而我們的工作,生活,生產等又使環境污染越來越嚴重..........,如何保護我們的環境?請以“ How to
protect/save our environment/world? ”為題寫一篇短文。提示:存在問題:1.水污染越來越嚴重2.砍伐森林嚴重3.大氣污染嚴重4.白色垃圾等。要求:如何改善/保護環境?至少:3---4個方面,80字左右的。
范文:
How to protect/save our environment/world?
The environmental pollutionis worse and worse /more and more
seriouslytoday.Water is polluted ,we have nocleanwater todrinkMany trees are
cutting down, some animals is getting less and less.Somefactories is poring dirtyair in the sky , the populationis increasing faster and faster ,resources is getting less and less…etc.Not only does it affect our lives and health, it also has a greataffectionin thefuture.people”s health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution.Many people died of diseases.In order to live a better life, we need protect ourworld.We shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere.We want to
recycle ,reduce ,reusethings.Don’t waste things ,This saves money and reduces pollution.Use things for as long as possible.We don’t useplastic bags.We must plant more trees and stop the people cutting them.We hopeour world is more andmore beautiful.6.為了保護地球有限的資源,我們應該采取什么措施呢?請根據下面的提示寫一篇約80詞的短文,短文開頭已經給出。提示詞;1.save water, the source of life , protect drinking water, stop polluting, make full use of it;2.save electricity, crucial, turn off, other electric
machines;3.save forests, useful ,stop cutting down;4.recycle useful rubbish, save resources參考作文:
Although the world develops much faster and better, the resources on the earth get fewer and fewer.In order to protect them,something must be done.Save water.Water is the source of life.No water, no life.So it’s very important for us to do so.Not only should we protect drinking water and stop polluting it, but also make full use of it.Save electricity.It is crucial.We can’t imagine what the life will be like without it.Everyone should do his best to save electricity.Don’t forget to turn off lights or other electric machines when we finish working.Save forests.They are useful.Please stop cutting them down and use recycled paper instead.Make our world a green one to live in.Recycle useful rubbish.Plenty of rubbish can be recycled like cans,paper, bottles, and so on.We can save resources in this way.
第三篇:2013中考作文熱點壓軸預測
2013年中考英語作文熱門話題之一---雅安地震
2013年4月20日,四川省雅安市蘆山發生強烈地震,造成很大損失。學校號召全體師生向災區捐款。請你擬一個發言稿,在學校捐款動員大會上使用。發言稿主要內容應包括:1.對災區情況的簡單介紹(包括地震發生時間、地點、造成的財產和人員損失等);2.捐款的意義(幫助災區人民渡過難關、幫助災區重建);
3.如何捐款(自愿、多少不限、以班級為單位,收齊后交到學校紅十字會)參考范文:
Dear teachers and students,As we all know, a terrible earthquake happened in Lushan, Sichuan Province on April 20, in which many buildings were destroyed and many people were injured.In order to help the earthquake victims to go through the hard times and rebuild their hometown, the school has called on everyone in our school, including both teachers and students, to donate money to the area.This donation is voluntary.You can give away however much you want to.The money will be collected by each class before it is handed to the Red Cross Society of our school.We hope that everyone will be kind enough to do what you can to help others out of the difficulty.Thank you.2013
年中考英語作文熱門話題之二---“中國夢”
最近,你們班召開了以“我的中國夢”為主題的班會活動。請寫一篇日記,記述班會情況及自己的感受。內容要點如下:
1.每位同學都暢談了自己對中國夢的理解;2.你談到了自己的夢想;3.如何實現自己的夢想。
注意:
1.總詞數不少于100。2.不可逐條翻譯。
3.開頭已給出,不計入總詞數。參考范文:
April 8MondayFine
Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream.Inspired by(受啟發)President Xi’s Chinese Dream, everyone talked about his understanding of the Chinese Dream.We all believe that this dream will come true in the future.I also talked about my own dream.I have always wanted to be a doctor.Not only can doctors save people’s lives but also they are doing an important job.Doctors can also help people to live a better life with their knowledge.To realize my dream, I must try to work hard from now on.I must learn as much as I can so that I can get into a good medical college, Only in this way can I achieve my goal.2013年中考英語作文熱門話題之三---中學生使用iPad
假如你是李華,是一名高中生。隨著科技的發展,iPad已成為中學生的新寵。用iPad既可以聽音樂,閱讀純文本電子書,又可玩電子游戲。請你用英語給某英語報社寫一封信,談談中學生使用iPad的情況。信的內容必須包括以下幾點:
1、使用iPad對學習的好處:
2、對課堂紀律和學習可能產生的負面影響:
3、提出自己的建議并說明理由。
注意:開頭已經給出,不計入總數。詞數120字左右參考范文:Dear Editor',I'm a senior high school student named Li Hua.Now many students have iPads and think it's a fashion to use them.Using an iPad, we can listen to music, download a lot of learning materials and read them on the screen.Apparently, it's helpful to our study, especially to our English listening.Some students, however, bring their iPads to the classroom and listen to music without earphones, which makes the teacher and other students greatly angry.Some of them even waste valuable time in class playing video games.In my opinion, as students, we should make good use of iPads to help achieve success.The classroom is a place for students to study, and therefore it is necessary for us to put all our effort into learning our lessons.What’s more, the school should make a rule to guide the students to use iPads in a proper way.Yours sincerely,Li Hua
2013年中考英語作文熱門話題之四---H7N9流感
假設你是李華,從電視上看到H7N9流感仍然在上海流行,并有少部分人因
此而喪生,你為你正在上海上學的筆友Anderson的健康與安全擔心。請你給他寫一封信詢問他的情況,并給他提出防護建議。要點:
1、詢問(他的健康狀況;人們對流行疾病的反應:是否感到恐懼等)
2、建議(至少三點)注意:詞數:120左右;Dear Anderson,From TV I know there are still many H7N9 flu cases reported recently in Shanghai and some people are even killed as a result.I’m so worried about you.So I’m writing to get to know some information about you.Are you all right? Are there any H7N9 flu cases in your school? Are you still afraid of this widespread disease?
To stay away from the disease, I strongly suggest you doing the following things.Firstly, you’d better stay at home as much as possible and not go to places where there are many people.Then it would be a good idea to wash your hands more often to keep them clean.Besides, open the window to have more fresh air in the room.And last but not least, eat more fruit and vegetables to keep fit and strong.So far the disease is not so serious as it seems to be.Do be at ease!Take care and you’ll be OK.Yours,Li Hua
2013年中考英語作文熱門話題之五---霧霾
假如你是李華,你的筆友Mike從電視上得知前段時間北京多個地方出現霧霾
(haze),非常擔心,寫E-mail詢問有關情況,請回復。回復應包括以下要點:1.實況描述;
2.對生活造成的影響;3.成因簡析與教訓;4.你個人的情況。
要求:
1.詞數100-120;
2.email的開頭與結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。
Dear Mike,Thank you very much for your care.Last months several places in Beijing were covered with thick yellow fog.Everything around disappeared from our sight.Some highways were closed.Traffic jams were commonly seen in the streets.Many people, especially children and teens, even found it difficult to breathe.As a result, local hospitals were crowded with people who had problems with their noses and lungs.Part of the cause was the dry weather, but the seriously damaged environment contributed a lot to this nightmare.Personally I didn’t get any health problems in the haze because I stayed mostly indoors.But to make a meaningful change we really have to do more to protect our environment.To live a better life we have to improve our economy, but it wound be meaningless if we have to achieve it at the cost of our breathing air.Regards!
Yours,Li Hua
第四篇:2014年中考歷史熱點預測
2014年中考歷史熱點預測
中國歷史部分
1、紀念毛澤東誕辰120周年——中國共產黨領導的革命和建設
2、國共風雨90年——臺灣問題、祖國統一和民族團結
3、紀念鄧小平誕辰110周年——中國特色的社會主義建設
4、十八屆三中全會——改革開放任重道遠
5、糧食產量十年增、中央一號文件連續11年——鎖定三農問題
6、嫦娥三號、天河二號、霧霾天氣——科技創新引領時代
7、習式外交——中外交往歷史及成就
8、興中會成立120周年——孫中山的革命史實
世界歷史部分
1、紀念一戰爆發100周年——一戰、二戰、冷戰以及戰后世界格局的變化
2、甲午中日戰爭120周年——中日關系
3、美英盟軍諾曼底登陸、歐洲第二戰場開辟70周年——二戰、歐洲聯合4、大國領導人訪華——中美、中英、中俄、中法、中非關系
5、烏克蘭危機、習近平訪歐、敘利亞戰爭——政治多極化、經濟全球化等與中國的應對
第五篇:熱點作文預測
荷浣女發表于13/02/22 09:39
原文地址:2013高考作文熱點預測作者:彭大意 高考作文千變萬化,任何對高考題目的猜測都是徒勞的。一是因為高考作文的命題材料浩如煙海,二則因為高考作文的命題者“反猜”意識強得很。
其實,授業者和命題者之間玩的這種“石頭剪刀布”的游戲,實在是有悖語文教學的初衷。授業者旨在提高學生的寫作能力,命題者旨在檢驗學生的寫作能力,至于寫什么內容,終究不是最重要的。
話雖這么說,但我在這里還是要對2013年的高考作文揣度一下,或者說,我認為2013年高考作文應該涉及這些內容,再或者說,2013屆的高中畢業生應該對他們所處時代的這些方面有所思考。
我姑妄這么言之,信不信在你。但是,如果你能讓你的學生相信,那么他們寫起這些作文來,肯定會用心得多。果真如此,我們作文教學的初衷才有可能實現。或許,這才是我寫這篇文章的最實際的意義。
高考作文除了有考查學生寫作能力的功效外,有時還會擔起教化社會的重任。高考作文對學生的影響遠不在考試分數的高低,甚至會對學生乃至全社會的價值取向和人文精神起到矯正和修復作用。所以,高考作文涉及的主題往往帶有社會屬性和時代色彩。“選擇”和“誠信”的出現都是很好的例子。
其次,高考作文的命題也要照顧到學生的生活經歷、情感世界以及認知能力。
再次,高考作文的命題還會兼顧到地方特色和區域差異。
根據以上分析,我們不妨對2013年高考作文可能涉及的內容做大膽的猜測。
一、關于“公平”
(一)命題理由:中國人從來沒有放棄對公平的追求,溫家寶總理曾說過:“公平正義比太陽還要有光輝。”中國經濟的快速發展,讓老百姓不再僅僅為吃飯的問題擔憂,他們又一次萌發了對太陽光輝的熱望;而網絡的普及,又給草根提供了表達各種訴求的可能,他們對公平的渴望和對不公平的“人肉”表現得如此便捷,蔓延的如此迅速。網絡“劫富”“反腐”本質上源自“公平動力”,“公平”和“誠信”,都已成為這個社會不可承受之重。
(二)題目設計
閱讀下面材料,寫一篇作文。
民主政體應避免這樣兩種極端,就是不平等的精神和極端平等的精神。
——孟德斯鳩
要求:自擬題目,自選角度,文體不限,寫一篇800字左右的文章。
(三)寫作導引
1、把握材料重點。材料中有三個關鍵詞,“民主”“極端”和“平等”。“民主”不宜于作為考場作文的話題,一是因為這個內容與學生的生活經歷和認知能力都不相適應,二是因為這個話題是敏感話題,屬于高考禁區。“極端”不是材料的重點,比如說“人一生最重要的兩種品質,就是誠信和有愛心”,其重點自然不在“品質”,而是“誠信和有愛心”。所以,材料的重點在“平等”,學生應結合自己的經歷和一些社會現象,談自己對“公平”的看法。
2、注意辯證思維。辯證思維是一種高級思維,能使我們作文的觀點顯得周密而深刻。“公平是相對的,不公平是絕對的”,這不僅僅是作文的需要,更是學生走向進步與成熟的需要。
3、明確立意角度。這篇作文可以多方面立意:“公平就是給大家同一個起點”“公平應該成為一個社會的普遍原則”“公平需要公正和公開”“一個社會只有公平才能和諧”“絕對的公平是沒有的”“不公平會造成很多社會問題”“公平就是指每個人都有發展的機會”“公平是現代文明進步的尺度”“公平需要法律的保障”“實現公平需要全社會的努力”
二、關于“夢想”
(一)命題理由:夢想是人類的天空,是人生命的意義,也是人前行的動[轉載]2013高考作文熱點預測[4閱]
清荷浣女發表于13/02/22 09:39
力。它就像是一張支票,給今天以明天的承諾,用明天的陽光照亮今天的路途,讓今天變得更加美好而有意義。夢想總是高于現實,卻又映照著現實。當一日千里的時代來臨時,“夢”的翅膀便騰飛于中國大地。
(二)題目設計
云南小伙楊紹平有兩個身份。白天是北京大學南門一家傣族小飯店的傳菜工,忙碌地穿行于廳堂與后廚之間;到了晚上,他的身份則成了北大教室的一名自習學生,爭分奪秒地為自己夢想埋頭苦讀。前不久,楊紹平順利通過了國家司法考試,追逐8年的律師夢,向前邁進了一大步。楊紹平出生在云南雙江縣小富王村的貧寒之家,他在家里5個孩子中排行最小。楊紹平的父親是一名退休的水利工人,曾因被水淹過而落下一身病;他的母親多年前就身患風濕病而癱瘓在床,一直是家里的“藥罐子”。2005年,楊紹平曾考上一所大學,但因為不想讓父母負債供自己念書,他雖然坐上了離家的火車,最終卻瞞著父母沒去學校報到。他準備一邊打工一邊自考法律專科,然后通過升本科拿到畢業證后參加司法考試,實現自己的律師夢。
半工半讀期間,楊紹平當過賓館保安、綠化工、接待員、傳菜工。楊紹平每天只有兩三個小時的學習時間,這讓他在2011年的司法考試中名落孫山。這一次,他專門向老板請了一個月的假,還在北師大附近租了一間5平米的地下室。手頭的錢不寬裕,他每天在食堂只吃一個素菜;沒錢報司法考試學習班,他就請朋友將課程內容用MP3錄下來反復聽。
功夫不負有心人,付出長達8年的努力之后,楊紹平的律師夢終于即將照進現實。
(三)寫作導引
1、切入角度:材料可以從四個方面切入。一是成功源自夢想,二是實現夢想需要艱辛的付出,三是堅守,四是貧窮是一筆財富。比較容易出彩的是第一個角度。
2、擬題參考:“中國夢”“人類歷史的三大夢想”“我有一個夢想”“是什么驚擾了你的夢”“夢里人生”“我和**有個約會”“心若在,夢就在”“做不完的夢”“夢的翅膀”“曾經的夢”