第一篇：【英語口語學(xué)習(xí)】四、六級考試作文是怎么評分的

【英語口語學(xué)習(xí)】

四、六級考試作文是怎么評分的一、評分強(qiáng)調(diào)一致性

大學(xué)英語四、六級考試的作文部分不是自由作文，而是有規(guī)定命題的作文。對考生寫什么內(nèi)容有比較明確的要求，用各種明確的方式如提綱、圖表、關(guān)鍵詞等加以限制，但提綱常用中文給出，以避免考生將提綱中的文字直接抄錄進(jìn)作文。采用有控制的作文也有利于提高評分的一致性。

對作文評分影響最大的是評分過程。同一篇作文，不同的閱卷員可能給出不同的分?jǐn)?shù)。只有保證評分的一致性，才能提高作文閱卷的信度。這個(gè)一致性包括閱卷員本人的一致性、閱卷員之間的一致性和閱卷點(diǎn)之間的一致性，要采取一定的質(zhì)量控制措施，盡量減少和濾除閱卷員評分的主觀性對分?jǐn)?shù)客觀性的影響。

二、作文題的評分通常有兩種方法

一種是綜合法，一種是分析法。分析法是把一篇作文分解為若干要點(diǎn)，如內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)、文章連貫性、語法、詞匯等，不同的要點(diǎn)也可作不同的加權(quán)處理，各要點(diǎn)得分的總和即為全篇得分。綜合法是憑閱卷員通讀一遍的總體印象打分。綜合法的優(yōu)點(diǎn)是能從總體上把握全文，評卷速度比較快，效率高。

此外，為了提高閱卷的信度也有采用“兩讀”的方法，即每篇作文由兩名閱卷員各自獨(dú)立評分，若分?jǐn)?shù)差兩檔以上，由第三名閱卷員重判。考慮到大學(xué)英語四、六級考試規(guī)模太大，不可能進(jìn)行兩讀，因此，通常采用綜合法和“一讀”的評分方法，然后根據(jù)考生的客觀題得分進(jìn)行調(diào)整，盡量減少系統(tǒng)誤差。

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第二篇：六級考試作文評分原則和評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

六級考試作文部分要求考生在30分鐘之內(nèi)寫出一篇不少于120詞的短文（四級為100詞）。從近幾年實(shí)考看，四、六級均采用同樣的作文題，題型多為提綱式作文，即給出一個(gè)英文標(biāo)題下面用漢語給出三段（或兩段）的提綱，即要求寫的中心內(nèi)容。今天育路教育網(wǎng)就為考生詳細(xì)解讀一下六級作文的評分原則和評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。

六級考試作文評分原則和評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

（一）評分原則

１、CET是檢查考生是否達(dá)到大學(xué)英語教學(xué)大綱規(guī)定的四級和六級教學(xué)要求，對作文的評判應(yīng)以此要求為準(zhǔn)則。

２、大學(xué)英語六級作文題采用總體評分（Global Scoring）方法。閱卷人員就總的印象給出獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)分，而不是按語言點(diǎn)的錯(cuò)誤數(shù)目扣分。

３、從內(nèi)容和語言兩個(gè)方面對作文進(jìn)行綜合評判。內(nèi)容和語言是一個(gè)統(tǒng)一體。作文應(yīng)表達(dá)題目規(guī)定的內(nèi)容，而內(nèi)容要通過語言來表達(dá)。要考慮作文是否切題，是否充分表達(dá)思想，也要考慮是否用英語清楚而適切地表達(dá)思想，也就是要考慮語言上的錯(cuò)誤是否造成理解上的障礙。

４、避免趨中傾向。該給高分的給高分，包括滿分；該低分的給低分，包括0分。一名閱卷人員在所評的全部作文卷中不應(yīng)只給中間的幾種分?jǐn)?shù)。

（二）評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

1、本題滿分為15分。

2、閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)共五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有標(biāo)準(zhǔn)樣卷一至二份。

3、閱卷人員根據(jù)閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，對照樣卷評分，若認(rèn)為與某一分?jǐn)?shù)（如8分）相似，即定為該分?jǐn)?shù)（即8分）；若認(rèn)為稍優(yōu)劣于該分?jǐn)?shù)，則可加1分（即9分）或減1分（即7分）。但不得加或減半分。

4、評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：2分——條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。

5分——基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴(yán)重語言錯(cuò)誤。

8分——基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫；語言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重的錯(cuò)誤。

11分——切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯(cuò)誤。

14分——切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順。連貫性較好。基本上無語言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。［注：白卷，作文與題目毫不相關(guān)，或只有幾個(gè)孤立的詞而無法表達(dá)思想，則給0分］

5、字?jǐn)?shù)不足的應(yīng)酌情扣分：累計(jì)字?jǐn)?shù)CET4〖〗CET6扣分99~99〖〗110~119〖〗180~89〖〗100~109〖〗270~79〖〗90~99〖〗360~69〖〗80~89〖〗550~59〖〗70~79〖〗7＜49〖〗＜69〖〗9

［注：（1）如題目中給出主題句，起始句，結(jié)束句，均不得計(jì)入所寫字?jǐn)?shù)。

（2）只寫一段者：0～4分；只寫兩段者： 0～9分。（指規(guī)定三段的作文）］

6、為了便于閱卷人員掌握評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。現(xiàn)將各檔作文分相當(dāng)于百分制的得分，列表如下，稱分率。其中9分的得分率為60（相當(dāng)于百分制的60分）。作文分〖〗15〖〗14〖〗13〖〗12〖〗11〖〗10〖〗9〖〗8〖〗7〖〗6〖〗5〖〗4〖〗3〖〗2〖〗1得分率〖〗１００〖〗94〖〗87〖〗80〖〗74〖〗67〖〗60〖〗54〖〗47〖〗40〖〗34〖〗27〖〗20〖〗14〖〗7

（三）關(guān)于作文最低分的有關(guān)規(guī)定

1、作文分最低分定為6分。

2、考生作文分為0分時(shí)，若總分高于60分，一律按59分報(bào)道；若總分低于60分，則按“總分－6分”報(bào)道。

3、考生作文分大于0分，小于6分時(shí)，則按下列公式報(bào)道成績：最后報(bào)道分＝原計(jì)算總分－6分+實(shí)得作文分。

轉(zhuǎn)自:育路英語六級考試網(wǎng)

第三篇：六級作文訓(xùn)練(四)

Self-Protection Awareness

培養(yǎng)自我保護(hù)意識

Recently, a large number of affairs about sexual assault were disclosed and reported by mass media.As far as I am concerned, people should get some enlightenment from these affairs, such as enhancing and strengthening education in self-protection awareness, especially for children and students.最近，有很多關(guān)于性侵的事件媒體揭露和報(bào)道。我認(rèn)為人們應(yīng)該從這些事件中得到一些啟示，比如，提高和加強(qiáng)自我保護(hù)意識教育，特別是對于兒童和學(xué)生。

Children and students are hurt most in this kind of affairs.As a result, to enhance and strengthen their self-protection awareness is indispensable.In addition, to strengthen the awareness of defending danger is also important.If they can realize the potential danger from someone or something before it happens, they can make some preparations to avoid the danger and reduce the rate of being hurt.因這類事件傷害最大的是兒童和學(xué)生。因此，提高和加強(qiáng)自我保護(hù)意識是必須的。此外，加強(qiáng)防范危險(xiǎn)的意識也是很重要的。如果他們能在事情發(fā)生前意識到某人或某事的潛在危險(xiǎn)，他們就可以做一些準(zhǔn)備來以避免和減少受傷率。

Therefore, I advocate that parents should help their children develop self-protection awareness from birth, such as designing some situation for them to cope with.In addition, parents should teach their children to recognize the danger and how to avoid and reduce the danger from outside.Besides, children also need to develop an excellent ability of observation.因此，我認(rèn)為父母應(yīng)該幫助他們的孩子從出生開始就培養(yǎng)自我保護(hù)意識，比如，設(shè)計(jì)一些情況來讓他們應(yīng)付。父母還應(yīng)該教導(dǎo)孩子認(rèn)識危險(xiǎn)，如何避免和減少來自外界的危險(xiǎn)。此外，孩子也需要培養(yǎng)優(yōu)秀的觀察能力。

In a word, to protect children needs both the effort of parents and children

themselves.總之，保護(hù)兒童需要家長和孩子他們自己的努力。

第四篇：四、六級作文心得

四、六級作文心得

慎用套詞！現(xiàn)在很多老師都建議學(xué)生在臨考前背一些范文、重點(diǎn)句式，幾乎所有的作文參考書上也羅列了一大堆此類范文、重點(diǎn)句式。在應(yīng)試作文中，這些句式“放之四海而皆準(zhǔn)”，曾經(jīng)讓無數(shù)考生從中嘗到了甜頭。但是請大家注意了，時(shí)光已經(jīng)走到了公元2004年，閱卷老師的觀念也正在“與時(shí)俱進(jìn)”。現(xiàn)在那些閱卷老師普遍對那些套詞恨之入骨。這也不奇怪，雖然有的句子很好，但是如果用的人多了，也就失去了新鮮，甚至?xí)獾椒锤小Ｈ绻黄獔D表或圖畫作文，一上來就是：“Simple as the picture(table/photo/cartoon/drawing/)is，the symbolic meaning it conveys is deep and profound。”很好的句子，不知是哪位傳授的，但其影響之大，受眾之廣，讓閱卷老師始料不及。閱卷老師一看就知道是套詞，所有的看圖作文都能用，于是就當(dāng)考生沒寫這句話。再看到這句話，開始反感，覺得考生水平不高，就會用別人的話，反而會留下不好的印象，自然不會給高分；換了份卷子，怎么還是這句話？！直接就給你打入冷宮。這也不奇怪，就算是滿漢全席也有吃厭的時(shí)候，更何況一個(gè)十分鐘能見八回的句子？這樣出彩的句子尚且如此，更別提那些俗上加俗、倒人胃口的套詞了：how interesting the picture is！As can be seen from the picture等等。最讓人深惡痛絕的一句是as far as I am concerned…撇開其用法不確切不說，你讀一下，算算用了幾秒？[a：] [e:] 都是長音，老師在一個(gè)段落上不會耗費(fèi)超過3秒的時(shí)間，你想讓他看些什么呢？如果你覺得I think 太俗，可以選些不太常用但是語法上毫無錯(cuò)誤的表達(dá)方法來發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)。如：I`m convinced that，I strongly believe that，總之，既然你想發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)，就直接說明，讓老師盡快了解，讓他1秒鐘之內(nèi)就能判斷出你沒有跑題就是最成功之處！切記：慎用套詞！

長度適中！要求150字左右(四級120字)，不要寫太短，免得字?jǐn)?shù)不夠，降兩檔處理。我估計(jì)字?jǐn)?shù)大家都不會成問題，我在這里要強(qiáng)調(diào)的是：字?jǐn)?shù)可千萬別寫太多了。要知道，應(yīng)試作文，按照要求去做是最實(shí)惠的，人家要求150字，你為什么偏要奔著200去呢？記住：寫得越多，錯(cuò)的必然也就越多！老師閱卷的過程，不就是一個(gè)給你作文挑錯(cuò)的過程么？既然如此，何必自討苦吃呢？

第五篇：2010六級考試預(yù)測作文

大學(xué)英語六級考試預(yù)測作文（2010.6）

預(yù)測作文

（一）Global Shortage of Fresh Water

1.人們以為淡水是取之不盡的（提示：雨水、河水、井水??）

2.實(shí)際上淡水是非常緊缺的（提示：人口增長、工業(yè)用水增加、污染??）

3.我們應(yīng)該怎么辦

【范文】

At present, many people take it for granted that fresh water will never be used up because we can find it not only from the rain, but also in the rivers, lakes and wells.Consequently, it is not necessary for us to worry about global shortage of fresh water.In fact, the situation has become so serious that everyone should be aware of it and take immediate actions.With the world population increasing rapidly year after year, water resources are being consumed at an appalling speed.What's more, with the development of science and technology, modern industry needs much more water than before.Thirdly, pollution is also a worrying problem—water in rivers and wells becomes undrinkable because of industrial wastes.We should take urgent measures to protect fresh water resources.The government should increase the efficiency of water usage by such methods as water recycling and purification of sea water.The people, on the other hand, should form the habit of cherishing every drop of water.Last but not least, pollution must be effectively controlled, if we ever want to improve the quality of life.【點(diǎn)評】

本篇范文的最大特色是將批駁類與辦法類結(jié)合，首段指出一些人的錯(cuò)誤認(rèn)識；第二段從三方面進(jìn)行批駁；第三段指出我們的做法。

范文首先指出，一些人認(rèn)為淡水是取之不盡的，然后在第二段中進(jìn)行批駁。首先，水資源正在被以驚人的速度消費(fèi)。其次，現(xiàn)代工業(yè)需要更多的水資源。另外，因?yàn)楣I(yè)污染，有些水已經(jīng)不適宜飲用了。第三段闡述正確做法，即政府提高水資源的利用率、人人養(yǎng)成節(jié)約用水的習(xí)慣以及有效地控制水污染。

第一段第一句中的take it for granted表示“想當(dāng)然”，be used up表示“用完，耗盡”。第三段第一點(diǎn)中的efficiency，recycling和purification分別指“效率”、“再循環(huán)”和“凈化”。

預(yù)測作文

（二）Why Are There So Many Rural Laborers in Big Cities?

1.近年來越來越多的民工涌入大城市 2.產(chǎn)生這一社會現(xiàn)象的原因

【范文】

For a number of years, there has been a steady rise in the number of rural laborers who flood into big cities.Many men work on construction sites, while many women work as dishwashers in restaurants or babysitters for city dwellers.Three reasons, in my mind, can account for this social phenomenon.First and foremost, the limited land can no longer produce enough crops for an ever-increasing rural population.In the second place, there are far more opportunities in big cities—rural laborers dream of earning money through hard work.Last but by no means least, many of them want to live permanently in big cities, because they admire the way of living there, and wish their children to receive good education.I firmly believe that if we try our best to create a healthy social atmosphere, rural laborers will make greater contribution to our nation.【點(diǎn)評】

本題談?wù)摰氖且环N社會現(xiàn)象。第一段首句引入某一現(xiàn)象，第二句舉例說明，第三句是個(gè)過渡句，引起下面解釋原因段落的第二段；第三段是簡潔的結(jié)束語，其中的賓語從句嵌套一個(gè)狀語從句。

范文首先指出大量農(nóng)民工涌入大城市這一現(xiàn)象，并引出第二段所闡述的三個(gè)原因。首先，農(nóng)村有限的土地不能滿足日益增長的人口消費(fèi)。其次，大城市有更多的工作機(jī)會。最后，農(nóng)民工向往大城市的生活，想永遠(yuǎn)居住在大城市。末段總結(jié)指出，如果創(chuàng)造一個(gè)健康的社會環(huán)境，農(nóng)民工就可以為國家做出更大的貢獻(xiàn)。

第一段第二句中的construction site表示“建筑工地”，babysitter表示“幫人看孩子的人”。第二段第一點(diǎn)中的rural指“農(nóng)村的”；第三點(diǎn)中的permanently和admire分別指“永久地”和“羨慕”，receive education指“接受教育”。

預(yù)測作文

（三）Silence Is Gold 1.許多場合中“沉默是金”是正確的 2.但也有例外的情形 3.結(jié)論

【范文】

When we talk of the famous proverb “Silence is Gold”, we should not simply label it as right or wrong, but explore it in depth.This proverb is especially true under several situations.First, if we have made a promise not to let out a secret, we should always keep silent.Second, we should avoid talking over facts or statistics of which we are not sure.Third, whenever we are expressing our ideas, brevity is the soul of wit and talking too much will always lead to faults and mistakes.Nevertheless, there are also some exceptions.If we find out a flaw in other's speaking or writing, we should not hesitate a moment to point it out.And to friends or acquaintances seeking advice, we should feel free to help them.In a word, we can draw the conclusion that in most cases “silence is gold”, but in certain circumstances, talking is the right choice.【點(diǎn)評】

本文的特色在于其并未完全肯定或完全否定所提到的諺語，而是從正、反兩個(gè)方面去分析，即第二段指出其正確性，第三段談例外情況；末段總結(jié)，呼應(yīng)全文。

范文首先提出所要討論的諺語“沉默是金”。第二段分三個(gè)方面闡述其正確性，即發(fā)誓保守秘密，對于不確定的事情要保持沉默，而在表達(dá)自己的思想時(shí)，力求簡潔。第三段指出例外，為別人指出錯(cuò)誤或?yàn)榕笥训忍峤ㄗh時(shí)，不要堅(jiān)持“沉默是金”。末段總結(jié)，呼應(yīng)第二、三段。

第一段中的label...as...表示“將??看作??”，而explore...in depth表示“深入探究??”。第二段第一點(diǎn)中的make a promise表示“允諾”，let out a secret表示“泄露秘密”，keep silent表示“保持沉默”；第三點(diǎn)中的brevity is the soul of wit也是個(gè)諺語，表示“言貴簡潔”。第三段第二點(diǎn)中的acquaintance指“熟人”。

預(yù)測作文

（四）A Letter of Application

1.表達(dá)自己對該工作的渴求態(tài)度 2.盡量展示自己的技能和經(jīng)歷 3.信中應(yīng)包括自己的聯(lián)系方式

【范文】

January , 2010

Dear Sirs，I am writing you this letter to show my keen interest in the post of assistant manager which you advertised in yesterday's China Daily for, as is indicated in the enclosed resume, my major and experiences closely parallel your requirement.I have always been a top student in my specialized area, biochemistry.I took several other courses in my spare time and excelled in all of them due to my hard work.I am sure such courses as British and American literature and culture, business management and statistics will lend me an edge in the fierce competition in the job market.Another point I want to draw your attention to is that I have been taking an active part in a variety of campus activities.In the due process teamwork spirit has been enhanced and my interpersonal skills improved.I would like to meet you at your earliest convenience and discuss the possibility of working with your company.Or, if you are too busy these days, you can contact me at 64543575 for further information.Thank you for your favorable consideration.Best wishes.Yours sincerely，Jenny Green

【點(diǎn)評】

這篇文章是一篇非常成功的求職信。首段表明了自己對經(jīng)理助理這一職位的渴望，其中包括了自己如何得知這一職位的，而后說明自己的條件符合要求，引起下段。次段分五句，說明自己在專業(yè)上是個(gè)尖子生，并指出對于其他課程自己做得同樣出色，為將來的工作奠定了堅(jiān)實(shí)的基礎(chǔ)；后兩句說明自己參加了各種學(xué)校活動(dòng)，培養(yǎng)了多方面的能力。第三段首句說明自己非常希望能早日獲得面試的機(jī)會；次句說如果對方太忙，可以打電話聯(lián)系；末句對對方表示感謝，是一句客套話。

首段中的keen表示“熱切的”，parallel這里做動(dòng)詞，表示“與??相當(dāng)，比得上”。第二段首句中的specialized area表示“專業(yè)領(lǐng)域”；第二句中的excel是不及物動(dòng)詞，表示“突出，超常，勝過他人”；第三句中的edge表示“優(yōu)勢”；第四句中的a variety of等于various,表示“多種多樣的”；第五句中的teamwork spirit表示“團(tuán)隊(duì)精神”，interpersonal skills表示“人際交往的能力”。

預(yù)測作文

（五）People's Use of the Internet

1.上圖所示為2001年7月、2002年7月、2003年1月我國上網(wǎng)用戶總?cè)藬?shù)，請描述其變化；

2.請說明發(fā)生這些變化的原因；

3．你認(rèn)為目前用戶在因特網(wǎng)使用中有什么困難或問題。

【范文】

From the chart we can see clearly that the number of Internet surfers in our country has increased from 26.5 million in July 2001 to 45.8 million in July 2002, and then to 59.1 million in January 2003.In my mind, the reasons why the Internet surfers are on the rise are as follows.First, the Internet can help us accomplish many tasks, including both work and play—searching for information has become more convenient than ever, and safe online business is no longer a dream.Besides, surfing the Internet is becoming cheaper and cheaper—more and more people can afford it.The negative effects of the Internet are also clear.To begin with, sitting too long before the computers is harmful to our body, especially our eyes.Second, more and more people become indulged in playing video games or chatting online, which are time-consuming.All in all, I should say the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.The key lies in whether we can make good use of it to enhance both work and study.【點(diǎn)評】

首段敘述從2001年至2003年我國上網(wǎng)用戶總?cè)藬?shù)的變化趨勢。第二段分兩方面給出其中的原因：首先是因特網(wǎng)方便快捷、作用巨大；其次是費(fèi)用降低。第三段分兩個(gè)方面指出面臨的困難和問題：首先是上網(wǎng)時(shí)間過長有害健康；其次是有些人上網(wǎng)玩游戲、聊天，這都是不好的習(xí)慣。第四段做總結(jié)：第一句指出利大于弊；第二句說關(guān)鍵在于好好利用因特網(wǎng)。第二段首句中的in my mind意思是“依我看，在我看來”；第三段中的be harmful to意為“對……有傷害”，become indulged in意思是“沉迷于”，time-consuming是“浪費(fèi)時(shí)間”的意思；最后一段首句中的outweigh意為“比……重要”。熱點(diǎn)一：國慶60周年

新中國成立60周年來，我國發(fā)生了翻天覆地的變化，請你據(jù)此寫一篇120字的英語作文，談?wù)勛约旱母邢搿?/p>

要求:

1.列出生活中反映一兩件家鄉(xiāng)變化的事, 如購新車、住新房等。

2.列出最近發(fā)生的一兩件國家大事，如成功舉辦奧運(yùn)、“神舟七號” 順利升空等。

3.要表達(dá)出你的喜悅和自豪之情，并談?wù)勀愕母邢搿?/p>

Great changes have taken place since our country was founded 60 years ago.In the past we lived in the small and old houses and now we move into new broad ones which are more than one hundred square meters.At the same time, many families have own their new cars.Besides, our country hosted the 29th Olympic Games successfully in 2008 and we took the first place in winning gold medals.Another inspiring event was that the Shenzhou Ⅶ was sent into space smoothly, which shows our scientific research get great achievements.We are very happy and proud of all these achievements.I am sure our country will become even stronger and richer.I love our motherland very much.Let’s work hard to make contribution to our country in the future.熱點(diǎn)二：甲型流感：(1)

假如你是李華，你學(xué)校內(nèi)有人得了豬流感，正在接受治療，你校學(xué)生非常害怕，請你寫一篇短文談?wù)勅绾晤A(yù)防豬流感?

1.平時(shí)外出戴口罩，少去人群集中的公共場所, 避免接觸病人等。

2.勤洗手，保證充足睡眠，多鍛煉多運(yùn)動(dòng)等。

3.詞數(shù): 120字左右

4.文章的開頭已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯: 豬流感swine flu;口罩 face mask.Swine flu has come to our School!However, there is no vaccine to protect its virus.How do we protect us from it?

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Swine flu has come to our School!However, there is no vaccine to protect its virus.How do we protect us from it?

We advise that you should wear face mask and avoid going to the crowded place when you go out.We remember not to be in close contact with the patients infected with swine flu.On the other hand, the best way to stay away from this virus is to wash your hands often, and make sure that you have enough sleep.At the same time, we should do more exercise so that we can build up our body.We are sure that we must overcome the threat against swine flu as long as we take proper measures and insist on taking exercise every day.熱點(diǎn)三：甲型流感：(2)

不同人都有著不同的習(xí)慣，個(gè)人習(xí)慣直接關(guān)系著公共衛(wèi)生。請根據(jù)下列要求，寫一篇120字的英語短文，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

1.介紹有些人不同的好習(xí)慣和壞習(xí)慣。

2.習(xí)慣與衛(wèi)生的關(guān)系：習(xí)慣是衛(wèi)生基礎(chǔ);不好的習(xí)慣，會導(dǎo)致一些傳染疾病傳播，如AIDS，SARS，H1N1流感等。

3.你的看法……。

It is generally believed that different people have different habits.Some people are addicted to habits like drinking and smoking, while others pay special attention to healthy diet and never taste things like alcohol and cigarettes.It goes without saying that there is close relationship between personal habits and public health.On the one hand, good habits serve as the necessary basis of public health, that is to say, without good habits, public health can’t be guaranteed.On the other hand, infectious disease is the natural result brought by dirty habits, like

AIDS, SARS, H1N1 flu and so on.Personally, I think it is high time we placed emphasis on improving personal habits and public health.If we mind our manners and behave ourselves well, there must be a bright and encouraging future.熱點(diǎn)四：上海世博會

2009年5月1日世博會志愿者招募儀式正式啟動(dòng)，志愿者是辦好世博會的一支重要的工作力量。另外，志愿者或做家教，教小孩子閱讀、算術(shù)，或打掃公園與街道，或到醫(yī)院或療養(yǎng)院幫忙。你愿意做志愿者嗎?請陳述理由寫一篇100字左右的短文。

I would like to be a volunteer in my spare time.My reasons are as follows:

First of all, it is a good virtue to help others, even in modern society.We all need others’ help in case we get into trouble.Secondly, we are able to better ourselves by helping others because we gain valuable experience and build up our confidence while serving others.What’s more, volunteering makes us feel better about ourselves, thus making our life more enjoyable.More importantly, we can make the world a better place to live in by volunteering to improve it.In summary, volunteering can make a difference to our life, so I think it is very rewarding to be a volunteer.熱點(diǎn)五：金融危機(jī)下大學(xué)生就業(yè)

當(dāng)今我國大學(xué)生就業(yè)成功率很低，除了全球性的金融危機(jī)影響外，還有就是大學(xué)生對工作的選擇。有的人認(rèn)為應(yīng)該優(yōu)先選擇自己喜歡的工作，而不是自己擅長的;另一部分人相反。你班學(xué)生就此事進(jìn)行討論，請客觀地介紹情況并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>

觀點(diǎn) 理由

一部分人 喜歡比擅長重要。興趣是最好的老師，精通與擅長的可能性會大大增加等。

另一部分 擅長比喜歡重要。擅長更容易成功，后天努力培養(yǎng)興趣。

你 …………

注意：1.短文須包括所有要點(diǎn), 可適度發(fā)揮。

2.開頭已為你寫好, 但不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。

3.詞數(shù):120左右。

Recently the students in our class have discussed the following topic: which is more important for college graduates to choose jobs, being interested in it or being good at it?___________________________________________

Recently the students in our class have discussed the following topic: which is more important for college graduates to choose jobs, being interested in it or being good at it?

Some agree that the love of job is very important because interest is the best teacher.People are often willing to do what they like doing.If you are not good at it in the beginning, you can work hard and gradually improve your skills to make you good at it.Others hold their view that if you are good at it, you have more chances to achieve success very soon.While you work, you can do all you can to gain the interest in it little by little.From my point of view, I think we should make full use of our strengths to change them each other regardless of the fact that you like it or you are good at it.熱點(diǎn)六：“快樂女聲” 等選秀熱

2009年 “快樂女聲” 的火爆已無需渲染。你對此現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行簡單的調(diào)查，結(jié)果如下: 有些人認(rèn)為 “平民平等參與，有機(jī)會一夜成名等”。也有些人認(rèn)為 “快女” 中還存在一些不盡人意的地方, 如 “浪費(fèi)時(shí)間和精力，影響學(xué)習(xí)，產(chǎn)生一夜成名的不良志向(bad ambition)等”。請根據(jù)以上情況為 “無為論壇” 寫一篇報(bào)告并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。

注意: 1.包括以上全部要點(diǎn)可適當(dāng) 發(fā)揮，使上下文連貫。

2.詞數(shù): 100-120。

3.文章的格式和開頭已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

To: Wuwei Forum

From : Li Hua

Date: June 20, 2009

Subject: Super Girl

Super Girl has already been very hot all over China since it started on May 7, 2009 in Beijing.We have had a survey about the phenomenon recently._________________________________________________.To: Wuwei Forum

From : Li Hua

Date: June 20, 2009

Subject: Super Girl

Super Girl has already been very hot all over China since it started on May 7, 2009 in Beijing.We have had a survey about the phenomenon recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some people say Super Girl is their favorite.They hold their view that Super Girl can offer a stage for ordinary people to take part in it equally and have the chance of becoming famous overnight.While others think that Super Girl makes the girls waste time and energy so that it can have some bad effects on their study.In addition, it can cause some teenagers to have bad ambition about becoming famous overnight.From my point of view, it is wrong of young people to admire Super Girl too much, because they may mislead young people.I think to learn more and work hard is the real way to success.熱點(diǎn)七：低碳經(jīng)濟(jì)下的環(huán)境保護(hù)(1)

“低碳經(jīng)濟(jì)”是一個(gè)具有廣泛社會性的經(jīng)濟(jì)前沿理念，最早是在2003年英國政府發(fā)布的能源白皮書《我們能源的未來：創(chuàng)建低碳經(jīng)濟(jì)》正式提出的。低碳經(jīng)濟(jì)包括低碳發(fā)展、低碳產(chǎn)業(yè)、低碳技術(shù)和低碳生活等經(jīng)濟(jì)形態(tài)，是指在不影響經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展的前提下，通過技術(shù)創(chuàng)新和制度創(chuàng)新，降低能源和資源消耗，盡可能最大限度地減少溫室氣體和污染物的排放，實(shí)現(xiàn)減緩氣候變化的目標(biāo)，促進(jìn)人類的可持續(xù)發(fā)展。

Protection of Environment

1.目前環(huán)保還存在著許多問題。

2.為了保護(hù)環(huán)境，3.各國政府做了大量的工作。

4.我的看法。

There are still many problems of environmental protection in recent years.One of the most serious problems is the serious pollution of air, water and soil.the polluted air does great harm to people’s health.The polluted water causes diseases and death.What is more, vegetation had been greatly reduced with the rapid growth of modern cities.To protect the environment, governments of many countries have done a lot.Legislative steps have been introduced to control air pollution, to protect the forest and sea resources and to stop any environmental pollution.Therefore, governments are playing the most important role in the environmental protection today.In my opinion, to protect environment, the government must take even more concrete measures.First, it should let people fully realize the importance of environmental protection through education.Second, much more efforts should be made to put the population planning policy into practice, because more people means more people means more pollution.Finally, those who destroy the environment intentionally should be severely punished.We should let them know that destroying environment means destroying mankind themselves.熱點(diǎn)八：低碳經(jīng)濟(jì)下的環(huán)境保護(hù)(2)

根據(jù)題目《師父被熏暈過去了》的漫畫和下面要求寫一篇關(guān)于河水污染的感想。

1.情況。2.原因。3.后果。4.措施。

詞數(shù) 100~120。

One day Sun Wukong together with his master and brothers was walking across a river.Suddenly his master fell off the horse by the bad smell of river water.They found the water so dirty that they could hardly breathe.A lot of factories along the river always poured their waste water and rubbish straight into the river which made the river water polluted.In this way most of the fish in the river were killed.If the river water all over the country is polluted like this, no living things will exist in the water.Now more and more people have come to realize how serious this problem is.Our government is doing her best to take measures to fight against pollution.We expect that the water in every river will be made cleaner and cleaner before long.熱點(diǎn)九：低碳經(jīng)濟(jì)下的環(huán)境保護(hù)(3)

全世界的環(huán)境問題在變得越來越嚴(yán)重。請你根據(jù)漫畫內(nèi)容和下面要求給China Daily寫一封信反映這一情況，并提出保護(hù)環(huán)境的建議。

注意：1.信的開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)算在總詞數(shù)內(nèi)。

2.字?jǐn)?shù)要求: 120左右。

人口膨脹population expansion;過度開發(fā)overdevelopment。

Dear editor，Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world._________________________________________________________

Yours truly

Li Hua

Dear editor，Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world.With the development of industry and agriculture, cars make great noises and give off poisonous gas.Because of population expansion and overdevelopment, resources has become less and less.Trees on the hills have been cut down, and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers.The whole ecological balance of the earth is changing.Massive destruction of environment has brought about negative effects and even poses a great threat to man’s existence.We must face the situation that exists and take actions to solve our environmental problems.We hope that all these measures will be effective and bring back a healthful environment.Yours truly Li Hua

On the Celebrity Spokesperson

Currently, we could hardly live a single day without seeing a celebrity spokesperson promoting a product or a social campaign on TV, net or other media.This is an intensely popular trend that we cannot fail to notice.There is no doubt that the celebrity spokespeople could boost the sale of a product.A host of celebrity spokespersons, however, have emerged as the marketing tool of some companies, even companies producing and selling fake and inferior items.This kind of behavior has produced negative impacts on consumers and whole society, which should be severely criticized and penalized.Of course, as is known to all, everything has both bright and dark sides.Some stars’ endorsement of social activities and public campaigns raises public awareness, giving rise to changes in public behavior.In this case, they serve as positive role models of the general public.To name only one case: Pu CX, a household figure, acting as the celebrity spokesman of the China AIDS Foundation, contributes greatly to the cause of AIDS prevention and cure in China.關(guān)于選秀節(jié)目

Over the past couple of years, a variety of talent shows have emerged on TV channels across the nation, from Super Girls to Happy Boys and so forth.This type of entertainment program is intensely popular, especially among young adults and has produced profound impacts on their studies and life.There are a couple of reasons behind the tide.To start with, young folks need role models to learn from.So many of them are crazy for contestants participating in these programs.This gives rise to the increasing emergence of these shows because TV networks naturally need to cater to young audiences.Plus, thanks to economic and political reforms carried out by the government, this crop of young generation have more freedom and desire to express and showcase themselves.Therefore, a growing number of young people desire to get involved in these shows.This is a divisive topic.On my personal level, the talent show is a superb means of relaxing and amusing and can hugely relieve our strains.As college students, however, we could not afford to indulge in them and should be aware of the utmost importance of studies.食品安全問題

On the Food Security Over the past couple of years, several cases of the food scandal have been disclosed on various media.The problem of food security has become a hot button across society.The prevalence of food insecurity has greatly impacted public health, which the government could not afford to ignore, according to the online edition of the People Daily.There are a couple of driving forces, I would argue, behind this undesirable tide.First, in the course of the rapid economic evolution, we ignore moral education, giving rise to the rising rate of the problem.More importantly, the lack of adequate regulation and punishment on those illegal producers enforces the trend.As Confucius instructed, it is better late than never.Prompt and strict measures should be taken to turn back this evil trend.The government should launch a massive moral campaign to educate all citizens and draw up tougher laws to crack down on those irresponsible corporations and prohibit them from entering the food industry again.I am firmly convinced that through our combined efforts we are bound to enjoy more risk-free foods in the days ahead.社會不文明現(xiàn)象

On Uncivilized Behaviors We cannot fail to notice that countless uncivilized behaviors exist in our daily lives, such as spitting, talking loudly, littering, saying nasty words in public places and so forth.All these are bad manners that we should not lose sight of.As an ancient land enjoying a splendid civilization spanning over 5,000 years, China is witnessing a surge in improper acts that every Chinese citizen should feel ashamed of.Uncivilized behaviors by a host of Chinese both at home and abroad have seriously affected China’s image, according to an editorial posted on People Daily’s official website.As Chinese, we should not get offended when others point out our weaknesses but should focus more attention on improving ourselves.We should strive to identify the causes of those improper behaviors and find ways to eliminate them.There are a host of causes, I would argue, behind this trend.To name only one: the lack of moral education.The government should wage a massive moral campaign to fight against this trend and we ourselves should endeavor to behave decently in our daily lives.As college students of the new age, we should take the leading role.感恩

On Cultivating the Sense of Gratitude On college campuses across the nation, there is a noticeable phenomenon that we cannot afford to ignore: far too many young college students lack the sense of gratitude, one of the countless traditional virtues of this ancient land with a splendid civilization spanning over 5,000 years.These young adults were not and are not aware of the huge importance of expressing gratitude to those who once helped them, from teachers to parents and so forth.Personally, I deem that the root cause of students without a graceful heart is that they receive an education not valuing the moral sphere.I strongly believe that joint efforts from folks across society are the final remedy for this social headache.As young university students of the new era, we should make our own contributions to this cause.Imagine a world without the sense of gratitude.This kind of world is doomed to failure.Simply put, we should join our hands to heighten our awareness of fostering a graceful heart.Only in this way can we build our society into a harmonious one.My fellow students, I beg you to act from now on.大學(xué)生使用信用卡現(xiàn)象

On Credit Card At present, a wide vareity of credit cards issued by major banks and shopping malls are thriving in colleges and universities across the nation, with a multitude of college students making up a growing population of card holders.Indeed, one out of five students is estimated to be in possession of at least one credit card, and the figure is expected to be on the steady increse, the latest data published by Yangtze Evening Post suggests.Like anything prior to the emergence of this small piece of plastic, the increasing popularity of credit card on campus has both bright and dark sides.On the one hand, young adults in college, free from the trouble of pocketing a considerable sum of cash, could enjoy the convenience of credit cards and purchase expensive goods by installments.On the other hand, however, the irresponsible and excessive use of the cards by these youngsters, the majority of whom are fresh out of middle school incapable of budgeting their money, can make them heavily in debt which will take them years to pay off.On my personal level, while enjoying a host of conveniences the credit card may bring, we couldn’t afford to ignore a conspicious fact: in most cases, parents are our sole financial sources.Instead of spending without any restrict, we are supposed to put studies on the top of our agenda and move ourselves beyond heavy dependence upon our parents