第一篇:海天考研英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作沖刺策略
由于2011年的考研寫(xiě)作大綱和去年基本雷同,所以,準(zhǔn)備考研作文按照傳統(tǒng)套路即可。本文只講兩點(diǎn)。第一:簡(jiǎn)單解析考研英語(yǔ)大綱對(duì)于作文的要求;第二:寫(xiě)作沖刺提分策略。第一.大綱對(duì)于作文的要求
寫(xiě)作分為兩個(gè)部分,小作文和大作文。
1.小作文要求考生根據(jù)情景寫(xiě)出一片字?jǐn)?shù)在100詞左右的應(yīng)用文,第一類包括私人和公務(wù)信函(通常為感謝信,道歉信,投訴信及抱怨信等)、通知、告示和報(bào)告。第二類包括根據(jù)提供的漢語(yǔ)文章,寫(xiě)出一篇80—100詞的摘要。首先必須明確的是,在離考研還有兩個(gè)月的時(shí)間里,我不建議同學(xué)們?nèi)グ衙恳粋€(gè)板塊都通過(guò)背誦大量范文來(lái)解決,這樣既耗時(shí),也不一定能產(chǎn)生效果。在此,根據(jù)歷年的考題趨勢(shì)分析后,請(qǐng)大家重點(diǎn)準(zhǔn)備私人和公務(wù)信函,還有通知。小作文部分因?yàn)槲捏w簡(jiǎn)單,寫(xiě)作思路清晰,尤其是接受過(guò)新東方培訓(xùn)的學(xué)員,這個(gè)部分只要保證結(jié)構(gòu)正確,語(yǔ)言正確,表達(dá)清楚思想,就可以獲得比較好的分?jǐn)?shù)。
2.大作文仍然是“看圖說(shuō)話”,需要根據(jù)圖畫(huà),寫(xiě)作180詞左右的議論性的文章。雖然這樣的說(shuō)法不一定絕對(duì)而且完全的準(zhǔn)確,但為了更好的提高復(fù)習(xí)效果,請(qǐng)?jiān)谶@兩個(gè)月里認(rèn)真準(zhǔn)備傳統(tǒng)的“看圖說(shuō)話”。它要求:包含所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),使用豐富的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯,語(yǔ)言質(zhì)量較高,基本沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤,層次清晰,行文連貫。在最后兩個(gè)月里,大家至少首先應(yīng)該認(rèn)真背誦08、09和10年已經(jīng)考過(guò)的作文范文。在背誦這些范文的過(guò)程中,認(rèn)真做好一下幾個(gè)點(diǎn),分別從詞匯短語(yǔ)、句子和篇章結(jié)構(gòu)上重點(diǎn)關(guān)注即可。
二、寫(xiě)作提分策略
最后兩個(gè)月,除了在上文提到過(guò)的要求至少背誦近三年的考研英語(yǔ)作文真題意外,為了提高沖刺效果和結(jié)果,請(qǐng)務(wù)必在以下三方面做準(zhǔn)備。
1.詞匯短語(yǔ)
直到現(xiàn)在這個(gè)時(shí)候,很多同學(xué)仍然無(wú)法寫(xiě)出文章,仍然覺(jué)得下筆無(wú)神。根本原因就是大家能夠遣詞造句的基本詞匯很少。下面給大家總結(jié)一些在考研大作文中必須使用的高頻詞匯短語(yǔ)。
Important: significant, crucial, critical, decisive, indispensable, be of utmost importance
Think: take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that
Good: superior, positive, promising, excellent, do more good than harm to--,Bad: dreadful, unfavorable, do more harm than good to--,Try one’s best to do: do one’s utmost to, spare no effort to, go to great lengths to, take relentless efforts to do,Many: a great many, enormous sums of, many a+(可數(shù)單數(shù)名詞,謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)),a large number of,Cause: bring about, give rise to, lead to, result in,More and more: an increasing number of, a rising number of, a growing number of,(上述三個(gè)短語(yǔ)后+可數(shù)復(fù)數(shù)名詞)
More and more+adj: have/has become increasingly +adj
Problem: case, issue, trouble,Think: hold, support,(上述的詞匯可以采用插入結(jié)構(gòu))be of an opinion that, be in favor of the opinion that,(上述的短語(yǔ)后跟的從句為完整的從句—同位語(yǔ)從句)
Very——extremely, intensely,exceptionally, tremendously(上述單詞要注意程度)
2.句型、句式
定語(yǔ)從句的使用:主語(yǔ), 定語(yǔ)從句,謂語(yǔ),賓語(yǔ);
主語(yǔ)從句的使用:why/what/whether+完整句子作主語(yǔ),注意后面的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù);
It is + adj+that +完整句子—
It is +said/accepted/believed/acknowledged/estimated/ +that---
賓語(yǔ)從句特殊結(jié)構(gòu)的使用:I think/hold/support 作插入語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)出現(xiàn);
原因狀語(yǔ)從句的使用:, for+句子表示原因(注意for前面有個(gè)逗號(hào))
In that +句子表示原因
As a result of +n
Due to +n
讓步狀語(yǔ)從句的使用: no matter how +adj +主語(yǔ)+be 動(dòng)詞
倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)的使用:never fail to(表示總是,從來(lái)都---)
Although +主語(yǔ)+be 動(dòng)詞+adj,---倒裝成:adj +as+主語(yǔ)+be動(dòng)詞,--(注意這個(gè)倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)的后面主語(yǔ)不能加but)
Only+狀語(yǔ)(when+句子,prep +n)置于句首,后面把(be動(dòng)詞,情態(tài)動(dòng)詞,助動(dòng)詞緊跟其后)
備注:上述結(jié)構(gòu)是希望所有的同學(xué)都能掌握的,可以根據(jù)自己的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的布局選擇自己擅長(zhǎng)和保證正確使用的結(jié)構(gòu)。注意,一定要至少使用上述結(jié)構(gòu)的40%。
3.篇章結(jié)構(gòu)
在這個(gè)部分,要提醒每一位同學(xué)都要注意考研大作文的最最重要的藥店是要保證結(jié)構(gòu)完整和正確,其次考慮語(yǔ)言質(zhì)量。考研命題者已經(jīng)通過(guò)題干明確告訴了我們考研寫(xiě)作的最佳分段方式——黃金三段!請(qǐng)各位注意,大作文寫(xiě)而且只寫(xiě)三段。結(jié)構(gòu)是:
第一段:描述圖畫(huà)(裸描即可)
第二段:闡釋寓意(圖畫(huà)背后的含義)
第三段:作者觀點(diǎn)(有正反觀點(diǎn)的區(qū)別)
第一段要求考生用一兩句話描述圖畫(huà)中的重要信息。
第二段要闡釋寓意,要求考生先說(shuō)明圖畫(huà)背后反映的隱含社會(huì)問(wèn)題,然后舉出2個(gè)例子左右來(lái)進(jìn)行證明;
第三段要做出自己的評(píng)論,一般需要寫(xiě)兩方面的內(nèi)容,即:全文總結(jié)和對(duì)于問(wèn)題給出解決措施。
總而言之,考研寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)可以在短時(shí)間內(nèi)實(shí)現(xiàn)突破的部分。雖然考研的路走到今天多少有些“麻木”了,但真誠(chéng)希望所有的考研朋友能夠擁有重新站到起跑線上的沖動(dòng),繼續(xù)全力以赴,因?yàn)椋蛟S今天多背一篇文章,多寫(xiě)一句話就能夠?qū)崿F(xiàn)生命的飛躍。
1Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling
Correct spelling is a basic skill in English study.However, nowadays many students do not pay much attention to it.They have their own reasons for misspelling.First of all, they like an easy way of studying, which causes some omissions and changes in spelling.Second, the teachers might not be very
strict in students’ spelling.In China, teachers seem to be more concerned with grammar and vocabulary but not spelling.To change this situation, in my opinion, the teachers and the students should work together.On one and, the teachers should give more attention to students’ spelling, asking the students to be conscious of the importance of correct spelling from the very beginning of their English study.On the other hand, the students themselves are supposed to be aware that correct spelling is a must in English study.To sum up, correct spelling is so important that both students and the teachers should spare no efforts to achieve correct spelling.2Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling(北京新東方學(xué)校 李艷華)
They say “mind breeds physiognomy”, which implies the importance of one’s appearance.Similarly, a correct and neat spelling of a composition can not only reflect a success of the composition but embodie the decent disposition of the writer as well.Unfortunately , a great number of students pay little attention to their spelling though their composition turns out quite good either in content or in logic, thus leaving the teacher in a dilemma whether to give a high score or not.Tracing the reasons hidden behind, we can easily find it is mainly because some students are unaware of the importance of the spelling.In their minds, the content absolutely outweighs the form so the attention to spelling can be pleasantly spared.Objectively speaking, in the examination, the limited time and urgent situation make students have no more effort to care about their spelling and the fact is that they have to write as quickly as possible to finish it on time, leaving some characters vague or incorrect.Just as is said above, spelling, in a sense , mirrors the content, so a direct result of the bad spelling is the low academic score in the exam for it is hard to expect a text full of undistinguishable words to receive a good appreciation.Further, once the habit of lax spelling was formed, in a long run the quality of being negligence could also be gradually shaped, which would undoubtedly exert negative impact for our future work and life.3Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling
What is hot for 2010 in our colleges? It is the spelling mistakes.Countless students lack due attention to spelling.Taking a look around, we can find examples too numerous to list, the one may be “challenge”.Freshman and sophomore almost write this word as “chanllege”.How careless they are!
Why such a phenomenon sweeps every university? Some experts attribute it to students’ inattention, because students always pay no attention to spelling.However, other experts argue, the teachers should be blamed for this situation.In my opinion, it is far beyond any reasonable doubt that both of them should exert themselves to change the spelling mistakes.The spreading of the spelling mistakes has extremely negative effects on the education.For one
thing, the special age that none of students can spell correctly will come soon.For another, while communicating with foreigners, we will be laughed at the spelling mistakes made by ourselves.As a result, due attention should be given to spelling immediately
第二篇:哈爾濱海天:考研英語(yǔ)閱讀沖刺復(fù)習(xí)
1.對(duì)題目進(jìn)行分析
很多考生,包括英語(yǔ)實(shí)力比較強(qiáng)的部分考生,沒(méi)有給予題目及選項(xiàng)足夠的關(guān)注。他們認(rèn)為英語(yǔ)水平夠了就可以在考研中獲得不錯(cuò)的成績(jī)。誠(chéng)然,英語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ) 和實(shí)力是考研成敗的重要因素,然而考研英語(yǔ)從某種程度上說(shuō),就是用英語(yǔ)包裝的了一種思維方式的考察。如果說(shuō)在前期大家都是在做知識(shí)性儲(chǔ)備的話,那么到了后 半期,大家水平和實(shí)力相當(dāng)?shù)那闆r下,就是看誰(shuí)更能夠把自己的解題思路不斷靠到考研命題專家的思路上去。因此,考研準(zhǔn)備的過(guò)程,也就是把自己的思路不斷貼近命題專家的思路的一個(gè)過(guò)程。
2.做題要進(jìn)行錯(cuò)誤分析
許多考生在最后的沖刺階段都會(huì)花大量的時(shí)間和精力去做許多模擬試卷。這種復(fù)習(xí)方法不僅耗時(shí)耗力,事倍功半,而且甚至?xí)驗(yàn)槟M題的仿真程度不夠 好,導(dǎo)致自己的做題思路發(fā)生偏差。因此,即便是在最后的階段,建議同學(xué)們也不要大量做題,而是應(yīng)該保證做題的效率和成效。模擬題可以做,但是量不要太大,否則就會(huì)陷入題海之中不能自拔。一般程度的同學(xué)一周做一套模擬題足矣,而且應(yīng)該注意自己的英文實(shí)力應(yīng)該和做題數(shù)量呈正比,自覺(jué)水平高的同學(xué),做題的量可以 大一些,而如果到目前為止感覺(jué)基本大綱詞匯和真題還沒(méi)有完全吃透的同學(xué),模擬題可以少做甚至不做。在做模擬題的時(shí)候,很多考生會(huì)對(duì)題目只停留在一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的 對(duì)答案的程度上,這是遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)不夠的。既然我們花了時(shí)間和精力來(lái)做模擬題,就應(yīng)該在投入點(diǎn)時(shí)間把它們徹底的研究透徹。在這里,向同學(xué)們建議至少要進(jìn)行一下錯(cuò)誤 分析,即把所有做錯(cuò)的題目挑選出來(lái),進(jìn)行分類整理研究,找出自己錯(cuò)誤的原因,并進(jìn)行改正。這樣才能真正做到有的放矢,有針對(duì)性地進(jìn)行沖刺。
在復(fù)習(xí)階段,大家要花大力氣做的一個(gè)工作,就是對(duì)每個(gè)題,每個(gè)選項(xiàng)認(rèn)真揣摩和分析。為什么對(duì),為什么錯(cuò)。對(duì)的選項(xiàng)是以一種什么方式設(shè)置出來(lái)的,錯(cuò)誤的選項(xiàng)到底具有什么特征,跟我們?cè)O(shè)置了什么陷阱。在這樣不斷的分析的過(guò)程中,我們會(huì)慢慢把自己解題的錯(cuò)誤思路一個(gè)個(gè)堵住,最后只剩下了正確的思路和答 案。這就是我們說(shuō)的,復(fù)習(xí)到最后的境界:文章看完后,看題目和選項(xiàng)的時(shí)候,就發(fā)現(xiàn)正確答案在眼前“閃閃發(fā)光”。
3.提高閱讀速度
就考研英語(yǔ)的閱讀題來(lái)說(shuō),一定要千方百計(jì)給自己留出充裕的時(shí)間,每篇材料精讀兩遍,理解上一定不會(huì)有什么大的偏差。所以說(shuō),最后準(zhǔn)備時(shí)間,你一 定要意識(shí)到速度是至關(guān)重要的。如果你注意力高度集中而且讀得快,在相同的時(shí)間里,就能比別人多讀一遍,有更深一分理解,答題的準(zhǔn)確率也就大大提高了。
那么怎樣提高閱讀速度呢?必須鍛煉出自己一目十行的習(xí)慣和速度來(lái)。當(dāng)然這必須是在讀懂70-80%關(guān)鍵信息的基礎(chǔ)上!我們?cè)诰毩?xí)的時(shí)候,必須 給自己規(guī)定一定的時(shí)間,有緊迫感,模擬考場(chǎng)環(huán)境,給自己一個(gè)安靜的環(huán)境,每天一套模擬題,按照前面建議的方法,精神高度集中。爭(zhēng)取每個(gè)篇章你都可以精讀兩 遍!對(duì)歷年考研英語(yǔ)上線及合格分?jǐn)?shù)的統(tǒng)計(jì)表明,只要在閱讀部分你拿到了一個(gè)中等偏上的分?jǐn)?shù),那英語(yǔ)總分最終才可以在及格線之上。總之,沖刺階段的復(fù)習(xí)我們首先要戒驕戒躁,對(duì)自己的閱讀水平有個(gè)正確的判斷,然后再找到薄弱環(huán)節(jié),進(jìn)行有針對(duì)性地復(fù)習(xí)。行百里者半九十,只要方 法得當(dāng),系統(tǒng)復(fù)習(xí),相信在最后考試中一定會(huì)有個(gè)良好的成績(jī)。閱讀是考研英語(yǔ)的重頭戲,誰(shuí)都不可以輕視。最后祝福廣大考生得到“閱讀”這個(gè)天下!
第三篇:考研英語(yǔ)沖刺:英語(yǔ)小作文寫(xiě)作格式和策略(小編推薦)
考研英語(yǔ)沖刺:英語(yǔ)小作文寫(xiě)作格式和策略
考研英語(yǔ)小作文要求考生根據(jù)所給情景寫(xiě)作約100次(標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不計(jì)算在內(nèi))的應(yīng)用性短文,包括私人和公務(wù)信函、備忘錄、報(bào)告等。認(rèn)為小作文重點(diǎn)是信函,信函主要有:求職信、投訴信、邀請(qǐng)信、訂購(gòu)信、詢問(wèn)信、感謝信、道歉信、推薦信等八種,專家提醒考生而在這八種信函中前五種是重點(diǎn)。
英語(yǔ)小作文寫(xiě)作格式(資料來(lái)源 思睿廈大考研網(wǎng))
英語(yǔ)小作文的一般都可分為三段,同學(xué)們?cè)趯?xiě)作的時(shí)候要注意開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾。從第一段中就可得知是何種類型的小作文,說(shuō)的什么問(wèn)題。在稱呼上,如果是不認(rèn)識(shí)的人,一般稱呼為敬詞+尊稱。例如,DearSirorMadam;如果是寫(xiě)給關(guān)系正式的某團(tuán)體或個(gè)人,稱呼為敬詞+尊稱+名。例如,DearMr.xx或DearMs.xx;對(duì)于關(guān)系較親密的人可以直呼其名。
正文格式一般格式為首段開(kāi)頭空四個(gè)字母,段落之間不空行;現(xiàn)在流行的格式,每段開(kāi)頭不空格,但是各段之間空一行。考生在格式方面可以根據(jù)自己的習(xí)慣進(jìn)行選擇。只要讓閱卷人看得舒服,且完全符合應(yīng)用文要求的文體就可以。
最有一段一般是回應(yīng)第一段,或者再次表達(dá)感謝,期待回復(fù)等。簡(jiǎn)練在特別注意的。最后一段不需要含有很多的信息點(diǎn),側(cè)重固定詞語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用。
英語(yǔ)小作文寫(xiě)作策略
1,求職信首先要標(biāo)明信息來(lái)源,說(shuō)明自己的寫(xiě)作意圖,然后介紹自己的工作經(jīng)歷,學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷,以及自己對(duì)該職業(yè)的看法和規(guī)劃等,并證明自己能夠勝任該職位。
2,投訴信主要寫(xiě)明自己投訴的原因,并展開(kāi)論述該問(wèn)題的具體情況和對(duì)自己造成的損失,最后表達(dá)對(duì)上述問(wèn)題需要及時(shí)得到解決的強(qiáng)烈愿望。
3,邀請(qǐng)信開(kāi)篇表明寫(xiě)作意圖,向某人發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)。然后說(shuō)明邀請(qǐng)的具體原因,邀請(qǐng)的內(nèi)容。最后表明強(qiáng)烈的期盼,并希望盡快得到答復(fù)。
4,訂購(gòu)信開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)出寫(xiě)信的目的,定購(gòu)你要的東西。接著詳細(xì)說(shuō)明你訂購(gòu)貨物的規(guī)格、大小、顏色、尺寸等。最后表示對(duì)方回函以便確認(rèn)。
5.詢問(wèn)信首先明確寫(xiě)信的目的,說(shuō)明寫(xiě)這封信的目的是尋求某信息或幫助。然后詢問(wèn)具體問(wèn)題,強(qiáng)調(diào)所需信息的重要性。最后表達(dá)獲取信息的強(qiáng)烈愿望,提供聯(lián)系方式以便收信人與你聯(lián)系,并對(duì)有關(guān)人員表示感謝。
同學(xué)們?cè)趯?xiě)小作文的時(shí)候還要注意簡(jiǎn)化描述語(yǔ)言。用簡(jiǎn)短的語(yǔ)句代替冗長(zhǎng)的語(yǔ)句。在作文完成的時(shí)候,應(yīng)該檢查、修改,以免遺漏一些需要表達(dá)清楚的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)。
第四篇:2014考研英語(yǔ)沖刺階段復(fù)習(xí)策略
2014年考研[微博]即將拉開(kāi)帷幕,經(jīng)過(guò)數(shù)十個(gè)月的緊張備考,這場(chǎng)戰(zhàn)役的號(hào)角即將吹響,在距離2014年考研開(kāi)始的前十天里,老師針對(duì)最后沖刺階段的備考方向和策略給予同學(xué)們一定的指導(dǎo),為辛苦了一年的同學(xué)們的最后一段征程保好駕護(hù)好航。
首先,現(xiàn)階段的備考重點(diǎn)問(wèn)題。考研英語(yǔ)一直以來(lái)以考研的“生命線”廣為同學(xué)們熟知,在這一年的備考過(guò)程中同學(xué)們將絕大部分的精力都投入到了考研英語(yǔ)的備考中,特別是對(duì)于有著考研英語(yǔ)“半壁江山”之稱的閱讀理解部分更是投入了相當(dāng)大的時(shí)間和精力,那么是否對(duì)于閱讀理解的備考要自始至終的堅(jiān)持到考試開(kāi)始呢?答案是否定的。在備考進(jìn)入距離考試開(kāi)始僅10天的時(shí)間里,同學(xué)們的重心決不再是對(duì)于閱讀理解的深入研讀,而是將重心放在對(duì)作文部分的備考上。考研英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作部分是一個(gè)能夠在短期內(nèi)迅速提高分?jǐn)?shù)的題型,提分效果明顯,對(duì)于英語(yǔ)學(xué)科整個(gè)分值的提升是非常有幫助的一個(gè)模塊,所以,在考研英語(yǔ)最后階段備考中,同學(xué)們要在寫(xiě)作部分投入足夠多的時(shí)間和精力以求通過(guò)寫(xiě)作部分的分值增長(zhǎng)實(shí)現(xiàn)對(duì)英語(yǔ)學(xué)科整體分?jǐn)?shù)的提升。
其次,是備考心態(tài)問(wèn)題。考研學(xué)子數(shù)十個(gè)月的辛苦付出在即將面對(duì)結(jié)果的時(shí)候顯得特別焦躁,同學(xué)們心中不斷重復(fù)的那個(gè)聲音無(wú)非是“我還沒(méi)準(zhǔn)備好,怎么辦?”“我投入了一年的時(shí)間精力如果沒(méi)考好是不是太虧了?” “一起準(zhǔn)備考試的同學(xué),如果他們都考上了,我沒(méi)考上多丟臉啊”。作為過(guò)來(lái)人的老師們對(duì)同學(xué)們這樣的擔(dān)憂是非常理解的,但是,考研學(xué)子就是要和自己戰(zhàn)斗,戰(zhàn)勝內(nèi)心阻礙自己進(jìn)步的聲音,能夠不被這樣的雜音困擾,努力保持一顆淡定從容的心情,把焦躁和擔(dān)憂的時(shí)間和精力用來(lái)記憶哪怕一個(gè)單詞,一個(gè)句子,也是自己的勝利,就值得給自己一個(gè)贊賞的微笑。
再次,考研生物鐘的養(yǎng)成。2014年考研時(shí)間是1月4號(hào)5號(hào)的早上8:30-11:30,下午2:00-5:00,同學(xué)們數(shù)十個(gè)月的備考可以說(shuō)過(guò)的是“沒(méi)黑沒(méi)白”的日子,根本沒(méi)有注意培養(yǎng)自己的答題“敏感”時(shí)間,那么,在這里,老師們強(qiáng)烈建議同學(xué)們從現(xiàn)在開(kāi)始注意培養(yǎng)自己的生物鐘,努力做到每天的早上8:30和下午的2:00就能夠打起精神來(lái),能夠精神飽滿的坐得住3個(gè)小時(shí)的時(shí)間。
最后,老師預(yù)祝2014考研學(xué)子們都能夠收獲一份屬于自己的成功,凱旋歸來(lái)。
第五篇:考研英語(yǔ)作文沖刺備考策略和模版
考研英語(yǔ)作文
鐘方源
60分鐘做完寫(xiě)作(20分鐘小作文,40分鐘大作文)
一般來(lái)說(shuō)把左邊一頁(yè)寫(xiě)滿就已經(jīng)是最合適的了,正好差不多270。字?jǐn)?shù)超了(超過(guò)350個(gè)字)會(huì)扣3分。
第一段的展開(kāi):
第一句:圖畫(huà)描述句:
As is shown above,in the middle of the picture stands a man(主系表倒裝表系主),rushing to final(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞),which is defined another new start.(獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu))
Step1:完全倒裝(中心事物的位置)Step2:非謂;非限(中心事物的狀態(tài))Step3:獨(dú)立主格
P.S.:……,with the caption reading that:
……,with a line going like this:
第二句:圖畫(huà)影響句
This picture has sparked a heated discussion on Wechat friend circle,the most attractive and influential social network form these day in China.第三句:圖畫(huà)意義句
The picture,at the first glimpse,seem to be simple,but only a penetrating sight can capture its essence.第二段的展開(kāi):
第一句:提出論點(diǎn)
重要主題:
1.The picture tells us that nothing can be compared with +重要主題 when it comes to the cultivation of individual characteristics.(個(gè)人)
2.The picture tells us that 重要主題 remains to be an integral(不可或缺)part in this ever papid(快速)changing modern society.(社會(huì))
有害主題:
1.The picture does reveal that 有害主題 is not only harmful, but also damaging for the personal growth.(個(gè)人)
2.The picture does reveal that 有害主題 is in large measure(很大程度上)detrimental(有害的)not only to the personal life,but to the further development of the whole society.第二句:加強(qiáng)論點(diǎn)(附加句)
1,重要主題:
In no country other than China,is has been said,is this phenomenon more obvious.有害主題:
In no country other than China,is has been said,is this problem more urgent and serious.3.The past decade has witnessed a huge development in economy owing to some policy being carried out,bringing some problems at the same time,with the above one being the foremost(首要的).第三句:公眾態(tài)度 重要主題:
1.The public does attach due(適當(dāng)?shù)模゛ttention to importance of the 重要主題 有害主題
2.The public fails to attach due attention to the bad effects brought by 有害主題
第四句:加強(qiáng)態(tài)度(附加句)
People form all over the world,governments and international organizations stress the fundamental role of 重要主題。
People form all over the world,governments and international organizations fail to notice the damaging consequences of 有害主題。
Individuals,enterprises,organizations and even the whole society stress the fundamental role of 重要主題。
Individuals,enterprises,organizations and even the whole society fail to notice the damaging consequences of 有害主題。
第五句:段落展開(kāi)(為一個(gè)句群)第一種展開(kāi)法:平行展開(kāi)法
物質(zhì)回報(bào)
句子:1.(主題)can offer people with not only delicious food but fashionable clothes and such benefits as comfortable dwelling and handsome automobiles.2.Individuals and organizations can make money,take profits and even obtain wealth by doing(主題)。
3.The industrious(勤勞)and insightful(有見(jiàn)地的)people will never fail to benefit from doing(主題).4.It can improve one’s living standards and make an easy and conforable life.5.It can bring people fresh air,clean water,bright sunshine ,clean food and comfortable dwelling.時(shí)間角度saves time/takes up little time/occupies little time.句子
(節(jié)約時(shí)間)
(主題,e.g.Confidence)saves people a great deal of time by eliminating hours spent on hesitation, so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on their meaningful work.(浪費(fèi)時(shí)間)
As is well known,the days of youth should not be idled away and time should be cherished,but(主題,e.g.star worship)wastes hours,lavishes days and even squanders(浪費(fèi))years,which leads us to say it kills and even murders youngster’s prime time.效率角度
(主題,e.g.Star worship/Addiction to the internet)makes people weary(疲憊)of other important things,discourages him to learn more.身心健康
句子:(主題)can relieve not noly pressure but also anxiety and such problem as depression,stress,isolation and solitude(孤獨(dú)).有助成長(zhǎng)和成功
It can promote communication between people,rid of barriers between people and bridge gaps between people.People who treat others with love,sincerity,sympathy,enthusiasm,hospitality or generosity always win respect from others.社會(huì)宏觀角度
It means that people can have equal opportunity to college education,employments,self realizetion,and pursuit of material wealth.第二種展開(kāi)法:科學(xué)論據(jù)法
1.According to a survey conducted by Chinese Academy of Sciences(CAS),……
According to a survey conducted by Chinese Academy of social Sciences(CASS),……
According to a survey conducted by the Organization for Economic Co-operation and Development(OECD),……
結(jié)論:Those who worship stars are more likely to squander time,compared with those who do not.Those who are of cooperation are more likely to establish the career,compared with those who are not.2.China Daily interviewed four people from four prefessions——a surgeon(外科醫(yī)生),a white collar worker,a carpenter(木匠)and a farmer.the survey discovers that all of them are of the idea that+主題重要或有害。
第三種展開(kāi)法:舉例法(盡量只舉例不展開(kāi))
1.Nowadays,our society has been filled with a variety of example of sth,with Sb being the foremost(主要的).2.Numerous cases exist to illustrate this point.Take sb.for example,but for 主題,sb could not have done sth,let alone doing sth.3.Take sb for example, without 主題,how can sb do sth? Without 主題,how can sb do sth?Withou 主題,how can sb do sth?
[人物詞積累:Shakespeare,Barack Obama, George Washington]
最后一句
虛擬語(yǔ)氣結(jié)尾:
Were there no something, never would we do something.Were the situation to continue as it is, we would pay the high price.第三段的展開(kāi):(評(píng)論后舉例也可以舉例后評(píng)論)可能用到的表達(dá):
Form my perspective,…… 我認(rèn)為……
正面話題:
第一句:取其精華
It is imperative(必要)that the essence(本質(zhì))be absorbed(吸收)and the drawbacks(缺點(diǎn))be neglected(忽略),during this process, especially in the times of knowledge explosion,when the news, facts, opinions even rumors have been bombarding us from every corner of the world.第二句:全面考慮
In view of the importance and the complexity(復(fù)雜)of such an phenomenon,we must treat it socially, economically and culturally.第三句:只管面對(duì)
In a sense, it is not why sth exists in today’s world but what we should do to cope with it.第四句:展望未來(lái)
Only in a reasonable, prosperous(繁榮)and healthy atmosphere can we hope to witness the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost(最大限度).負(fù)面話題:
第一句:情況很危急
The situation being so serious, it is high time that we took effective measures to……
第二句:立法很重要
It is imperative that corresponding(相應(yīng)的)laws and regulations be introduced and enforced to harness and curb this urgent problem.第三句:公眾教育
The general(普通的)public is supposed to enhance their awareness of the harmful effects of 主題.第四句:專家想對(duì)策
In this issue, researchers, scholars and experts are expected to work out up-to-date solutions to sth.第五句:展望未來(lái)
With a proper(適當(dāng))law and an alert public, it will only be a matter of time before the problem becomes things of the past.常見(jiàn)主題詞:
順境與逆境(Favorable Circumstances and adverse Circumstances)勤奮(diligence;painstaking work)
謹(jǐn)慎和堅(jiān)毅(prudence and determination)熱情和樂(lè)觀(, enthusiasm and optimism)
博學(xué)和求知(learnedness and seeking knowledge/pursuit of knowledge)絕望和堅(jiān)持(Frustration and perseverance)獨(dú)立性問(wèn)(independence)感恩(gratitude)創(chuàng)新(creation and innovation)鼓勵(lì)(encouragement)自滿和謙遜(self-satisfied and modest)合作(cooperation)誘惑(temptations)
常見(jiàn)的話題:
1. 資源保護(hù)(Energy and Resource Saving)環(huán)境保護(hù)(Environmental protection)低碳環(huán)保(low-carbon life)
2. 人口增長(zhǎng)(The growth of China’s population)3. 社會(huì)保障問(wèn)題(Social security fund)4. 假冒偽劣產(chǎn)品問(wèn)題(Counterfeits and unqualified products)食品安全(food safety)5. 消費(fèi)者權(quán)益保護(hù)問(wèn)題(The protection of consumers rights and interests)6. 社會(huì)誠(chéng)信的缺失(Honest is the best policy.It pays to be honest.)7.知識(shí)產(chǎn)權(quán)保護(hù)問(wèn)題(Intellectual Property protection.No plagiarizing)8. 微博和微信的強(qiáng)勢(shì)崛起(The rise of the WeiBo, Wechat)9. 傳統(tǒng)文化的傳播(traditional Chinese culture)孝敬父母(caring parents)(filial piety)10. 提高學(xué)生的身體素質(zhì)(physical exercise build a strong body and relieve pressure and keep a pleasant mood)
11. 大學(xué)生的就業(yè)(sticking to our own choice of following our parent’s arrangement)12. 大學(xué)城的建造(the construction of university town)
書(shū)信作文
Dear sir/Madam, Sincerely,投訴信
開(kāi)頭:I am writing to make a complaint about……
結(jié)尾:I understand you will give immediate attention to this matter.建議信
開(kāi)頭:You have asked me for some advice on how to improve……I will try to give some useful suggestions.結(jié)尾:I hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decision-making anyway.道歉信
開(kāi)頭:I am writing to apologize for……
結(jié)尾:I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.辭職信
開(kāi)頭:I am writing to inform you about my decision of resignation.結(jié)尾:I sincerely hope that you approve of my resignation.I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.求職信
開(kāi)頭:I am writing this letter to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for the job of senior accountant you have advertised in……
結(jié)尾:I have enclosed my resume that outline in detail my qualifications and experience.推薦信
開(kāi)頭:With reference to your requirements, I shall, without reservation, recommend……as an ideal candidate.結(jié)尾:Please do not hesitate to contact me if necessary.感謝信
開(kāi)頭:I am writing this letter to thank you for…… 結(jié)尾:I must thank you again for your generous help.祝賀信
開(kāi)頭:Please accept my sincere congratulations on ……
結(jié)尾:Every good wish to you for much health, happiness, and prosperity!
邀請(qǐng)信: 開(kāi)頭:I am writing to invite you to……
結(jié)尾:I would like to meet you there and please let me know your decision.咨詢信
開(kāi)頭:I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding…… 結(jié)尾:Your immediate response is enthusiastically expected.告示
要寫(xiě)標(biāo)題:Notice或者Announcement。不要寫(xiě)抬頭(如dear sir),不僅多余而且錯(cuò)誤。落款如Postgraduate’s Association
備忘錄(考的機(jī)率幾乎為零)To、From、Subject和Date 然后是正文段落