第一篇：短文改錯經典

短文改錯專項練習

（1）

I was delighted to receive your letter.Thank you on the English dictionary you bought it for me.I received it this morning.There is no doubt which it is of great help to me.I’m deep grateful for your advice that I should pay more attentions to practising my spoken English.I’ve made up my mind to speak English both in and out of class.Next month I’ll take trip to Australia, which is organizing by my school.I hope I can practise my spoken English there as many as possible.By the way, I am sending you a set of stamps with this letter, but I’ll send you more if I got any.I do hope you will have a good holiday.（2）

It was our English teacher's birthday yesterday.Though English is a hard subject, but I like my English teacher a lot，and so are my classmates.She is nice to us and always tells us stories of the days when she was in her twenty.Sometimes she even stayed in school to help students make up their lessons.She always encourages us and tells us do our best.We are gratefully to her, so that day we bought him a cake and a gift.We even made a big card for her, on it we wrote all our names.Seeing these, she was moving and had a big smile in her face.（3）

Attention please, everyone.I have announcement to make.You will pay a visit to the museum on October 1st.I think we will be interest in it.In the course of the visit, the guide will give us an account of the past or the development of the city.She say something about the advanced workers, included some teachers.We will see many pictures there.I’m sure of that we can learn a lot.After the visit, we’ll have a discussion in group and each of us must write a composition.We are to start out as earlier as 7:00 am.We must gather against time at the school gate.That’s all.Thanks.（4）

My interest has been in books instead in food since I went to high school.In the past I was real interested

in all kinds of food.In summer day I liked to buy ice cream and cold drink , while in winter I liked to buy sweets and some another food.Whenever I went for a walk with my parents I would ask them buy me something.Therefore, after I went to high school , I found I was putting on weight.So , I had to give up habit of eating my favorite foods.Now I like to spend money on all kinds of books , and my parents were always complaining that I am a money spender.（5）

Dear Sally，Glad to have received the letter of you sent me two week ago.I have been thinking about the question you

asked me.In my opinion, you should go back after you finish your studies abroad.For one reason, that you are studying is bad needed now in China.It will be quite easy for you to find a good job.In fact, I know few big companies in our city are hoped to hire people like you.For another reason, I think it will be more convenient for you to look after your parents as you are getting old.However, I think it is a good idea for you to return.So are you waiting for?

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Half a year before I went abroad for further study.I received a lot of present.All were wrapped in color papers.Between them were two presents which were really interested me.My sister buy me a book with color pictures about body language and with words about customs of different countries in them.My brother gave me a note, which read, “My present has been put in your bedroom.” While I hurried into my bedroom, I found a box in it.Open the box, I got a pocket computer.I was very glad.I understood these two presents would help me using body

language to communicate people and improve my English.(7)

I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Wei.She is our monitor and one of the excellent students in our class.She is clever, and she works very hardly.We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about.One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out.She was doing her homeworks on Sunday morning when She smelt something burning.She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her daughter’s house.She called 119 immediate.Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire.Her daughter was very thankful for her help.(8)I often read English aloud and try to learn something of important in heart.It helps me remember what I have

learned and form a good habit thinking in English.I listen a lot and communicate with others in English.In this way, I’ve improved both my listening ability or my spoken English.I keep diary in English every

day and my writing English is becoming better and better.Beside, I try my best to master the necessary

grammar knowledge.By this means, I can express me correctly.That' s why I have been learnt English.(9)

Dear Sir，Thank you for you offer of invite me to the summer English course in your school.As for your choice between the two courses,I prefer the four-week course for 60 hours of study.Because of this would allow me more times to do some travelling and make a few new friends either.Of all the subjects I’m learning at school,I like English best.I had been learning English for 6 years but my spoken English remains poorly.So I hope to take this chance to improve it.If is possible,I’d like to stay with a family for a couple of days in order I can know some customs in England.I believe I will have wonderful time this summer.(10)Wall street is famous street in New York City.It got its name from the wooden wall that was used to stand what the street now runs.The wall was built in 1600s.New York was then a Dutch city set up by people come from Holland in Europe which was called New Amsterdam.The America Indians were not always friend of the Dutch,nor were the English.But the Dutch built the wooden wall to protect themselves.The wall has gone now.But Wall Street reminds the people to New York of the Dutch who settled there.(11)Dear Jin Jing，Your problem is common one among middle school students．Maybe the following advices can help you．First in all, believe in yourself．Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence．The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates．One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word．Your smile will show that you are friendly to him．Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest as you．You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies．Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her．Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly．

(12)My name is Julie.As a nurse I work in a school to make sure that our children are health and able to learn.I work with teachers, school doctors and other to offer them some advice and help them when they had difficulties.I enjoy my job because I love being with children They are very actively and lovely.I was very glad to stay with them so I feel much young than before.They are honest about what they feel-glad or sad.When children are ill.I try my best to take a good care of them.When they are sad, I always make them happy.They also love me but sometimes give me apples and candies by return.(13)My cousin Tim is pupil.He is clever, and he is very naughty.Today he fails in his math and English exam.Getting his report, he was deep worried.His poor report was required to be signed by his father at home.On the way to home an idea appeared on his mind.He found his father was reading a newspaper before he got home.Tim said to his father jokingly, “Dad, can you write your name with all of your eyes shut?” His father replied.“Of course not, my dear.” And his father did so.Tim was satisfied with the report already signed by his father.(14)Tim, I am Li Hua． This is my last year of high school, and I'll graduate this summer．I'm eighteen year old．

There is three people in my family and I'm the only one child, who is very common in Chinese families．My father work in a factory and my mother is a teacher． We lived a happy life together．

I'm cheerful boy． Besides my courses, I have much hobbies, like playing football, basketball and swimming．In the past, I collected in a lot of stamps, which are very preciously now because we seldom post a letter nowadays．I wonder if you can tell me something about myself, your family and daily school life．(15)ear Mr Smith, I was so please to hear from you and I'm writing to tell you something about my school.You are right, quite few changes have been taken place.On the one side of the road, there has a new classroom building.On the other side which a playground used to be now stand another new building, our library.In it there are all kind of books, newspapers or magazines.The playground is now in front of school.We've also plant a lot of trees in and around the school.I hope you come and see for yourself some days.(16)My name is Li Hua.I was born in Dalian, Liaoning province on February 1977.I started school in 1984 while I was seven.I studied in Guangming Primary School 1984 to 1990.After that I went to No.6 Middle School of Dalian and graduate this summer.The main subjects I studied at school including Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemical and computer.I like English and computer best but I am very good at them.Last year I had won first prize in the school computer competition.In my spare time I enjoy listening to popular music and collect stamps.My favourite sport are swimming in summer and skating in winter.(17)

第二篇：短文改錯

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（一）I am interested at swimming very much.At first, I went swimming just to keep health.Now my dream was to swim for my country in the Olympics.Though practicing in the pool is very bored, but I still work very hard in order to realize my dream.Because my hard work, I have already come first in much important competitions.In the competitions, I’ve made lot of friends and we’re very close.It’s much easier to have friends which are swimmers because they also have to get up early to practice like you and they understand this kind of life.短文改錯

（二）One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later.Tony saw parents.Mom said,” How nice to see you again!Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.短文改錯

（三）Last summer vacation, I went on a school trip with mine classmates.We visited a farm in a countryside.We took a bus for a while, and then we walked here.We saw a lot of different kinds trees and villages along the way.Some farmers were worked hard in the farm when we arrived.One of the farmer showed us around, introducing differently crops to us.We fed chickens, picked some green apples and took up many beautiful photos.It was really interesting and at the same time, I learned a lot about farming.What an excited school trip!

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（四）I’ve been playing baseball for six year and I’m the only girl on an all-boys baseball team.Our strict coach wants us do our best when we are playing.So it’s not always about winning.He also tells us to just smile and enjoyed ourselves.I take advice he gives me and bring them to my game.Some people say girls can’t play baseball.Hear that doesn’t get me mad.Instead, it makes me play more harder.I want to be knew for being a good player, not just for being the only girl on the team.If you’re a girl who want to play ball, just play you heart out!

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（五）My uncle drove his car meet his friends.When he found there was still some time leaving before the train had arrived, he wanted to take a short sleep.He was falling sleep when a woman came and asked him the time.He opened his eye and answered, “Half past eight.” With a “Thank you!” a woman left.On a short while this happened again.So my uncle wrote “I don’t know the time” on a piece of paper and put them on the window of the car.A few minutes late, an old man came and woke him up, “Hi, young man.I can tell you that time it is.It’s nine o’clock now.”

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（六）When I began my senior high school years, I had difficulty to learning English.I dared not speak English in the public because of my poor pronounce.I could not get high marks, but I always used bad grammar.Afraid of be laughed at, I never put up my hand answer questions in class.When my English teacher Miss Li learned about this, she encouraged me and lend me a hand, that helped improve my English.With her help, I became interest in English and finally got high marks.Miss Li, like a shining star, shines on her path to success.短文改錯

（七）Dear Tim, How time flies!It has been a month since you go to America.What is everything going? Next weekend I will take part in a national English speaking competition to be holding in Shanghai.It will be a good chance to improve your English and make friends with students from other part of China.But right now I’m not sure that I can remember all the words for a competition.Anyway, I will hope I can get a good result.I am looking forward seeing you again and hope we can have a true great time then.Yours, Li Hua

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（八）As a service dog, Sandy’s job is help manage a medical condition I have.My condition can be dangerously.When something bad happen, Sandy will tell my parents immediately.Of course, I help take care of Sandy, too.I feed him, walk him, but even take him just about everywhere I go.If I don’t bring Sandy to me, he will get upset.Once he stays with my grandparents for a few hours while my parents and I went to the beach.Sandy was upset in the whole time.He never stopped look for me.When I got home, he was such happy that he rushed to me.I love his dog very much.4

第三篇：短文改錯

短文改錯

高考英語短文改錯題要求考生判斷一篇短文中十行(自1995年以來)文字是否有錯，如果有錯誤就將其改正。

此題型旨在測試考生發現、判斷并改正短文中錯誤的能力，以及考查考生準確運用詞法、句法、行文邏輯等的綜合能力。

本題型側重考查考生的詞匯和語法基礎知識，但并不是單純的知識檢測，而是考查考生在閱讀的過程中運用語法知識解決實際問題的能力。

縱觀近幾年高考短文改錯，不難發現其設題方式比較固定：正確為1個，多詞或缺詞共計3個，錯詞為6個，其比例為1：3:6。

下面引用近幾年的高考題來分析一下此題的三種錯誤類型：多詞、缺詞和錯詞。

一、多詞

1.多冠詞

(l)Suddenly,I caught a sight of my English teacherin the crowd.【解析lsight是不可數名詞，且catch sight of是固定搭配，意為“看見”。

(2)For e】cample, when l was a child, the rain was amystery.【解析】，am為不可數名詞，泛指時前面不用冠詞。

【知識拓寬】

(1)不可數名詞表示泛指時不用冠詞。

Modern people know more about the health, havebetter food，and?

(2)與by連用的交通工具及air，land，sea等名詞前不用冠詞。

by bike騎自行車，by sea由海路，乘船

(3)有些名詞(如school，class，hospital，church，prison，bed，table，town等)與相應介詞連用，表示進行和這些詞直接相關的活動時，前不用冠詞。

___ _去上學，_______坐牢，_______在吃飯

(4)球類運動、棋類游戲前，不用冠詞。

___ _打籃球，_______下棋

(5)mo。t副詞作“非常”解時，前面不用定冠詞the。

She is most pretty.她非常漂亮。

(6)。或though引導讓步狀語從句，構成倒裝結構，前置的單數名詞前不用任何冠詞。

Child as he is,he knows a lot.雖然他只是孩子，知道的卻很多。

2.多介詞

(l)ln fact,they are planning to visit China in next yeaL

(2)We practice for three times every week..(3)So l'm really sorry that l won't be able to come inthis time.【解析】以上三例都是作時間狀語的名詞短語前多了介詞。

(4)?but we do not seem to get much time to talkabout together.【解析】talk about意為“談到??”，是及物動詞短語，后須接介詞賓語，但根據本句語境，此處不必接賓語，故去掉about。

【知識拓寬】

(1)last night, next week, this year, one day,threetimes等名詞詞組直接充當時間狀語，前面不用介詞。

(2)有些動詞在漢語中是不及物動詞，在英語中卻是及物動詞，由于受漢語影響，可能多一個介詞。

serve for the people, follow after the teacher, marrywith her,make him as our monitor,play with Tom in amatch(畫線介詞多余)

(3)有些表示地點的副詞，其意義中已包含to，如果再加to，則多余。

on one's way to there, return to home, go to upstairs(畫線介詞均多余)

(4)有些副詞或介詞詞組后加另一個介詞，構成復合介詞，若后面沒有介詞賓語，介詞則多余。同樣，有些動詞短語是“動詞十介詞”結構，若后面沒有介詞賓語，介詞則多余。

①If you won’t go，I'll go instead of.(畫線介詞多余)

②She listened to but heard nothing(畫線介詞多余)

(5)有些動詞或形容詞后接名詞或代詞時，須加一個介詞，但接從句時，必須去掉介詞。

①l never knew about a ride down a river could be soexciting.(畫線介詞多余)

②I am sorry for that he won't come(畫線介詞多余)

3.詞義重疊

(1)Whenever I see them l will often think of myEnglish teacher.【解析】在whenever l see them這一時間狀語從句后再用often顯得重復，應去掉。

(2)1'11 spend all the whole weekend reading andpreparing for it.【解析】the whole weekend意為“整個周末”，再加上all，詞義重疊。

【知識拓寬】

(1)有些詞受漢語影響，多一副詞或介詞，造成詞義重疊。

return back回來，repeat again重復，flee away逃走，enter into進入，blue color藍色，stop down停下來，raiseup舉起來，unpack open打開

(2)定語從句中的一個名詞，已由關系代詞取代，再用其替代詞是多余的。

I do remember you having apologized to the old lady Imet her last week

(3)單音節的形容詞或副詞比較等級加-er.-est，多音節加more、most，但二者不能同時重疊使用。

As a result, people in the modern world generally livemuch more longer than people in the past.4.出現冗言現象

(l)Today l visited the Smiths-my first time visit toan American family.【解析】本句中的first修飾visit，visit此處為名詞，意為“我的第一次訪問”，time多余。

(2)Now I can't watch much television,but?【解析】根據上下文，此處應是“我根本不能看電視”，因此受漢語影響，多了much，造成冗言。

【知識拓寬】

(1)狀語從句與主句之間多一并列連詞。

①Though he tried his best, but he failed.②The more he has, and the more he wants.(2)充當狀語的介詞短語與主句之間多一關系代詞或關系副詞。

①In the last five years that they have climbed churches一②?in other places where you are limited to a certainnumber...(3)充當狀語的分詞與主句之間多一并列連詞。

Sitting down,and he began to work.(4)從屬連詞后多一個that。

She was absent from the meeting because that she was ilL(5)復合賓語前多一個that。

I found that her lying on the ground.5.固定搭配中多詞

(1)I was used to watch it every night.【解析】此處屬于used to do與be used to兩個固定搭配的誤用，應去掉was，取“過去常常”之意。

(2)?in any other words,Iam only a child.【解析lin other words為固定搭配，意為“換句話說”，而any other意為“任何別的??”，與本文上下文不符。

6.行文邏輯上多詞First, let me tell you something more about myself.【解析】由first可知是剛開始向別人講述自己的故事，故只能說something，而不能加more。

二、缺詞

1.名詞前缺限定詞

(1)Each player must obey^captain, who is theleader of the team.the【解析】此處應加上the，特指“球隊的隊長”。

(2)The day before the speech contest^Englishteacher talked to me.my【解析】根據上下文分析，此處English teacher是有所指的，指的是“我的”英語老師，故加上my，表達一個更確切的概念。

(3)I'1I take this chance to wish you^ wonderful timeon your birthday.a【解析lwish sb.awonderful time為固定搭配，意為“祝某人玩得愉快”。

【知識拓寬】

(1)在“so+形容詞十可數名詞單數”結構中，名詞前不能缺a或an。

This is so good a book that we will buy it.=This is such a good book that we will buy it.(2)little,few表示肯定時，前面不能缺a，意為“一些”。

如a little water，但是“每隔幾分鐘”應說成every fewminutesa

(3)有些不可數名詞(如metal, beauty, iron, tea,coffee, ice, youth, pleasure, success, failure等)，表示“一種”“一個“一份”時，應加上a或an。

Work is a pleasure to me.(4)“the+姓氏復數”表示一家人時，the不能省。

The Browns like to go skating.(5)表示“兩者之中比較??的一個”時，比較級前應加the。

He is the taller of the two boys.(6)在句中可數名詞不可單獨使用，前面應有限定詞，如his,that,Tom's,the,a等。

When we walked to the car, Bill smiled and shook^head.his2.缺動詞不定式符號to(1)I'd like very much^come but I have anexamination on Monday morning.to【解析】like后面不能直接加動詞，需加to，構成固定搭配“would like to do”，意為“想做??”。

(2)一.and will do all they can^ make sure that l geta good education to【解析】不定式作目的狀語，不定式符號to不可省。

【知識拓寬】

(1)不定式作后置定語，不定式符號to不能省。

But then there are always more mysteriesAlook into:_____to

(2)-般說來，兩個實義動詞不能并列使用，中間常用to連接。

①7Ihe World Health()rganization and other organizationsare workingAimprove health all over the world_____to

②i had always wantedA retum to the village _____to

(3)feel, hear, let, make,have, see, notice, watch,ob。rv。等動詞變成被動結構時，充當主語補足語的不定式不能省去to。

Little Tom was made to do heavy work

(4)為了避免重復前面的動詞，后面的不定式常常省略，但要保留不定式符號to。

We wanted to go to the lecture, but we weren't able to

3.缺系動詞

(l)neyA eager to Imow everything about China：.'were【解析】eager為形容詞，必須加系動詞構成系表結構。

(2)What^ your favourite sport?IS【解析】本句缺謂語動詞，應加is。

(3)I'd like to^ your pen-friend, and.be/become【解析】本句考查I'd like to do結構，根據上下文，必須加上系動詞。

【知識拓寬】

(1)由于受漢語語法規則的影響，有些形容詞作表語時，常常缺少系動詞。

She is afraid of her boss.(2)在被動結構中，由于缺少助動詞，變成了主動語態，造成錯誤。

?and let you know when the book you want has^returned and is ready for you to pick up.been4.缺介詞(l)We must keep in mind that we play for the teaminstead^ ourselves._____ of【解析linstead of為固定短語，意為“而非，而不是”，后接賓語。

(2)?but the others spent a lotA time arguing_____of【解析la lot of是固定習語，意為“許多，大量”，后加賓語。

【知識拓寬】

改錯題對介詞的考查，重點是一些固定搭配，再如：

WhenI have free timeI go^along walk..for，因此，同學們在學習和復習中應牢記一些固定搭配。

5.缺連詞In one class,l learned^ it rained.why【解析】本句因缺連詞而造成句子成分殘缺，只有加上why，句子的意義才完整。

【知識拓寬】

(1)在漢語中，分句與分句之間往往不用連詞，但在英語中卻不行。

It began to rain,^ they had to stop working.and

(2)受母語影響，幾個同類詞并列連用時，它們之間往往缺一連詞。

CDi told Mother, Father, Sister,^ all my friends herewhat a great time I had.and②He looked inside but saw nothing.(3)that引導的主語從句置于句首時，that常常不能省。

That light travels in straight line is known to all.(4)引導同位語從句的連詞that，when等常不可省。

(DThe doctors came to the conclusion that the patientwas suffering from cancer.②i have no idea when he will return(5)在even if，even though，as if'as though等短語中，第二個連詞不能少。

He walks as if/though he were drunk

三、錯詞

1.可數名詞單復數誤用

(l)They were eager to know everything about Chinaand asked me lots of question

(2)We study quite a few subject, such as maths,Chinese, English and physics.(3)We practise three times every week and oftenwatch football match on TV together.(4)She said that she and my schoolmate' all.wishedme success,.(5)?so that l'11 get good marks in all my subject.___

(6)?and many happy return of the day_____

(7)I used to love science class-all of them-biology,chemistry, geography, physics.【知識拓寬】

對名詞單復數的考查是高考的熱點之一，幾乎每年考查一處。因此，為了對名詞錯誤判斷準確，應該：

(1)弄清名詞是可數名詞還是不可數名詞。

We stopped to rest for a while and to drink somewaters from a stream water

(2)掌握好可數名詞復數的變化規則。

There are branch library in many villages libraries

(3)要熟練運用名詞的所有格。

2.時態誤用

(l)We havea good tinte talking and laughing together.had

(2)I learn about you from my English teacher, MissFang.learned

(3)I was a member of our school football team am

(4)I arn happy with any programme but the othersspent a lot of time...was

(5)I remembered her words and calm down calmed

(6)They did not want me to do any w,ork at home do【知識拓寬】

動詞時態是短文改錯考查的熱點之一，一般說來每年考查一處，而且近幾年高考主要考查現在時與過去時的使用，再如：I had an examination on Monday moming.have

3.非謂語動詞誤用

(l)It was very kind of them to meet me.at the railwaystation and drove meto their home drive

(2)I look forward to hear from you soon hearing

(3)Play football not only makes us grow up...Playing

(4)I was often alittle tired after a day's work andwatch TV demands very little effort.watching【知識拓寬】

(1)由以上考例可見，v.-mg形式作主語、賓語或狀語是考查的熱點。

CDi'ii spend the whole weekend reading and preparefor it.preparing②After learn the basics of the subject, nothing elseseemed very practical to me.learning

(2)過去分詞與現在分詞的區別是另一考查熱點。此時重點要看分詞與主語或邏輯主語的關系。

①After an hour or so, we began to feel veryfrightening.frightened②?but now l am interesting in football.interested(3)被動語態中的過去分詞誤用成動詞原形。

Books may be keep for four weeks.kept(4)掌握好動詞不定式帶to與不帶to的差異。

(5)有些動詞后接不定式，有些動詞后接動名詞，應分別牢記這些動詞。

4.主謂不一致

(1)Playing football not only makes us grow up talland strong but alsoglve us a sense of fair play and teamspirit.gives

(2)Now my picture and the prize is hanging in thelibrary.are【知識拓寬】

(1)謂語動詞的單復數一般取決于前面主語的單復數。

Anyone may borrow books, and it cost nothing toborrow them.costs

(2)not only;一but also, neither.—nor.一，either.or..-等并列連詞連接兩個主語時，謂語動詞的單復數應采取就近一致原則。

(3)There be結構中，謂語動詞也應采取就近一致原則。

But then there is always more mysteries to look into.are

(4)注意把集合名詞(如family，class，team等)和不定代詞(如all，none等)放在具體語境中，判斷其謂語動詞的單復數。

5.代詞不一致

(l)The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.their

(2)And they must not break the rules too often if wewant to win the game.we(3)Now someone at home reads instead.everyone/everybody【知識拓寬】

(1)根據上下文判斷，出現了代詞不一致。

①1 felt that it helped me understand how the worldworks.they②They have been to Europe many timesWe

(2)傾向于考查學生對不定代詞、形容詞性物主代詞、名詞性物主代詞以及代詞的主格與賓格等諸方面知識的掌握與運用能力。

And I can’t forget the good food you cooked forl me

(3)人稱代詞性別上的誤用也是常見的錯誤形式之一。

6.連詞誤用

(l)~esaid that she and my schoolmates all wished mesuccass,but it didn’t matter thatI would win or notwhether【解析】it為形式主語，whether l would win or not是真正的主語，意為“我是否能贏”。

(2)lt looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor andaguest.or【解析】句意為：看起來我的父母親把我當成了“visitor”或“guest”。二者為選擇關系而非并列關系，故將and改為or。

(3)It is a very important exam butI can't afford tofail it.and/so【解析】此處應是并列或因果關系，而非轉折關系。

【知識拓寬】

(1)正確掌握各連詞的含義及其在從句中的應用。

①?because I felt that they helped me understandwhat the world works.how②Most people can quickly get help from a doctor orgo to a hospital sir ce they areill when/if

(2)熟練應用表示并列、選擇、轉折、因果等關系的連詞：and, or, but, so, therefore, however等.①She was smiling but nodding at me.and②Therefore, there are still some countries wherepeople have shorter lives.However

(3)弄清whether和if的含義及用法區別。

?and whether you pay the cost of sending apostcard,the librarian will write to you.if

7.關系代詞與關系副詞誤用

I live inBeijing,where is the capital of China.which【解析】此處是非限制性定語從句，關系代詞which作主語。

【知識拓寬】

(1)正確區分關系代詞之間的區別，尤其是that和which的區別。

?in other places you are limited to.a certainnumber, of that some may be novels.which

(2)正確區分關系代詞與關系副詞的區別，并掌握它們的用法。

However,there are still some countries there peoplehave shorter lives.where

8.詞性誤用

(1)Also the sport teaches us the important ofobedience.importance【解析】本句應該用名詞importance作動詞teach的直接賓語。

(2)Unfortunate, there are too many people in myfamily.Unfortunately【解析】此處應該用副詞unfortunately作狀語，意為“不幸的是”。

(3)After learning the basics of the subject,nothingelse seemed very practically to me.practical【解析】。eem為系動詞，后面應接形容詞作表語。

【知識拓寬】

詞性誤用指的是動詞與名詞混淆，副詞與形容詞混淆等。這就要求我們在平時學習中重視詞性及各類詞在句中的基本功能。再如：

I'm sure we'IIhave 8 wonderfully time together.wonderful

9.限定詞誤用

(1)Today I visited the Smiths-my first visit to aAmerican family.an【解析】American為元音音素開頭的單詞，故應用部定冠詞 an

(2)wemay be one family and live under a sameroof，?the【解析】same意為“同樣的”，前面應加定冠詞the。

10.近義詞混用They did not want me to do any work at family......home【解析】family側重指“家庭這個結構或家里的人。，而home則側重指“家庭的所在地”。因此，“在家里”應用athome。

【知識拓寬】

在英語中，有許多同義詞、近義詞和反義詞，在平時學習中應抓好基礎，牢記每一個詞的基本含義。再如：.Uncle Ben will alsogo back for Christmas.come總之，平時學習中應加強對基礎知識的積累，熟練掌握高考詞匯、基本詞法、句法，同時還應加強閱讀能力的訓練。因為，較快的閱讀速度、較好的語感和牢固的基礎知識是做好短文改錯的重要前提。平時訓練短文改錯時，不應只是為了做題而做題，而應善于總結、摸索答題的規律。

參考答案

一、1.(3)go to school;in prison;at table(4)play basketball;play chess

三、1.(1)question-*questions(2)subject—subjects(3)match-*matches(4)schoolmate—+ schoolmates(5)subject-+ subjects(6)return—.retums(7)class-classes

第四篇：短文改錯24-41

24.Our neighbor has two sweet dogs which seems lovely.I fell in love with the at the moment I saw them.For several days, I had been able to ask them to come near me by offer ‘doggie treats’.Today all of them took treats from my hand.I was happy that I was able to final gain their trust.It occurs to me that there are people of my acquaintance also seem fearful, and distant for me.I promise today that I will not judge them, and will simply extend my hand.I hope that they will trust their attempts at friendship.25.I was sitting on the train commuting to work in this morning.I notice a lady who was pregnant.However, no one offered him a seat, even those who were sitting in the disabled seats.I was really enjoying sit down as I suffered vertigo and struggled bear it on the train.However, I eventual offered my seat and stood for my commute.To be honesty, my feet hurt badly.But I did feel such good because I let someone who needed a seat much more than me have what she needed.If someone needs help in the future, I can’t still lend a hand.I have to share this wonderful story sharing by my cousin Jane.She is in her first competition and went into a panic when another one swimmer swam over her.She felt very frightened and call out to the life guard.Immediate a 17-year-old young man jumped in and came near him and talked to her.He said “I can’t touch you and you won’t be qualified.However, if you like, I will swim a rest of the way with you”.And he did that, and my precious cousin was able finish her challenge.Isn’t that absolute wonderful?

Yesterday, I got an opportunity help an injured neighbor.His right leg was injuring with some major infection.Obviously, he was seemed very worried, for no one else was at home.So I took her to hospital at once.When we arrived there, I discuss his treatment with a doctor.The doctor advised him to receive proper treatment or to rest for a long time, that I thought was quite right.I either bought some medicines for him.Three hours passed quickly before I had everything arrange.Then I drove home, tried but happily.To help children living in poor mountainous areas, the Students’ Union organize an activity of donating books.It took place in our school hall in the afternoon of last Saturday.Students present were very pleasing to be able to help those children.And some of it wrote encouraging words on the donated books.Meanwhile, they expected the Students’ Union organize this activity as often as possibly.At last, we received about five hundred book.The activity turns out to be the success.Because of not only does it help those children in poor mountainous areas but also lets us treasure which we have now.Today was so a peaceful day.I go to see my friend and her boyfriend earlier in the day.She is getting her kidney stone remove later this week.I wanted to spend some times with her before the operation.Her boyfriend is recovering from her own surgery from 2 weeks before.I brought her some sweet food or a pair of earrings.In the return she sent me home with a cake.I had a small piece and it was deliciously.I plan share the cake with others tomorrow.I was laying on my bed relaxing after a long day.Music was playing and I was taking the time to reading a book.Just as I turned on the page an old song started playing who always reminded me of Mom.I put the book down but listened.Mom had been died for 23 years, but sometimes I still felt like it was only yesterday.I closed my eye and allowed the flood of memories to wash over me.And my heart ached as I thought of how I still missed him.I wiped the tears from my cheeks as song finished.Then I looked out of my window at the night sky, and send an “I love you, Mom” from my lips to Heaven’s ear.31

I was having a rough morning, feeling rather tiring.So I went to our school coffee’s shop to calm down.I was in my own world, and then saw the woman in front of me in line.She tells the cashier that she was going to pay for whichever I wanted to get.I was grateful and rather confused.As a result, I asked him why.In my surprise, she said, “You are a student, right? This is my way helping students.” I was touched and what she had said really made me happy.32

I went to a supermarket nearby to buy few things.There were two lady collecting food for a winter food drive for a charity.I had bought a few cans of food and two chocolate bars, where I handed to them.I thanked them for spend time at their weekends collecting for those in need.They all smiled and thanked me.They said it was just that they needed.Honestly spoken, their kind action really touched me.After this experience I wouldn’t have done that, but now I’m brave enough for personally greetings and eye contact

Today I got stick behind a mini bus on the narrow street of my neighborhood.As I sat there angrily, I had looked up and saw a man.He was wearing an uniform coming out of a house.I could tell that the bus block my way was for him.He turned around and waved goodbye to his very elderly mother whom was watching him from the house.Then, as he was about board the bus, he turned, smiled, and waved at myself.My anger left and tear were rolling as I smiled and waved back.I was late for work but I had the good day ever!I smiled to everyone I saw.34

In July 21, I, together with some people gathered at Youth Square at 5 am.Then we boarded a bus, where took us to Wuling Mountain, taking us two and a half hour.To tell the truth, Wuling Mountain is a really attractive spot, where the scene was beautiful enough.When first climbing mountain, I felt excited, and walked fast, only take some pictures now and then.There was a large number of tourists that day, making the path crowded.At noon, I had a simply lunch, for I took some food with me.We had returned at four o’clock, laughing and talking.Tired but happy, we arrived home safely and sound.35

I like many sport.But swimming is my favorite sport.When I am six years old, my parents often took me to a swimming pool.He taught me how to swim and told me not be afraid of water.Later I became very interesting in swimming.Now I go swim every afternoon in the swimming pool.Swimming is really a great fun.Unless you swim in the water, you will feel like a lovely fish, feeling very free.In the way, I took part in the swimming match last week in our city.But I won the match!

We had moved house 9 months ago.Before that we had lived in a same house for 20 years.Our next-door neighbours have lived in their house even long, so we have known them for the full 20 years.They are a lovely retire couple, Bob and Jean.Bob has just gone in hospital because of a serious illness and is not expected live.We took a 2-hour-round trip to visit her on Sunday in hospital.We sang some happy songs so told him all our news.However, we couldn’t hold back tear.Then we hugged and cried together, Jean including.37

It was cloudy day with little rain in the air.I stood at the roadside waiting for a taxi while suddenly I felt a voice beside me.It was a boy who was wearing poor cloth.I felt very disgusted that I tried to pull myself away.The boy kept follow me shouting out “Big brother!Big brother!” and I didn’t answer him at all.I heard him call out again, which makes me angry.So I shouted at him that we had no money to spare.However, the boy said to me, “Brother, will you please to help me cross the road!” I held the boy’s hand firm and helped him cross the road.38

After fill my gas tank I walked in to pay.The mother of the girls were digging through her purse.She had bought some small snacks for her children but still needed five more dollar to pay for them.She sighed and started to pick out the snacks to put it back.“I got it,” I said and put the money on the counter.The Mom turned and looked me with watery eyes.Then sudden she stepped forward and hugged me.I felt the burst of warmth in my heart.The Mom let me to go and said, “Thank you.” She smiled, grabbed the snacks and hurry out to her children.I stood there watching them leave.39

I stare from the window of my hotel room.A older gentleman was helping a young girl as she struggled walk down the beach.I ate in the hotel restaurant in that evening.I watched as the same young girl continued to get up from the table and reach for her walker.She grasped it firmly with both hand, leaning heavy.She made her way out of the restaurant, smile.As I drank me coffee in the hall the next morning.I noticed a sign saying “Special Olympics Relays”.Ah, I thought, that mustn’t be what the walking lessons were all about.40

On the morning of the Olympics, I felt forcing to watch Elizabeth’s Olympic event.I cheered as she crossed a finish line—the second place.She smiled as she stood on the award platform, and tears slipped down his cheeks.She told the crowd, “I especially want thank my grandpa for believing in me when I have no one else.” I found her late.I said, “Congratulation!” As we talked, she said that she and her parents were hit by a drunken driver at three years ago.She was the only survivor.Elizabeth smiled but hugged her grandpa.“Everyone gave up hope whether I would walk again.My grandpa was the only one who doesn’t.”

Yesterday afternoon, I went back home and found the door to my house opened.On the doormat was a pair of shoes were belonging to my mom.I got into the house and headed direct to the bedroom.I found her weep uncontrollably.I tried to ask her why was wrong but she couldn’t explain.Instead, she became much sad.I seated her down on the bed and bring her a glass of waters to drink and helped her cool down.When she was stable, she told me the reason of her sadness.She thought great wrong had done to her.

第五篇：經典短文改錯

動詞形，名詞數。還要注意形和副，物ing,修人用ed。遇連詞，必停住，多詞少詞須關注，介詞冠詞占多數，固定搭配非謂語，反身代時主賓同。短文改錯錯不錯，每句至少改一個。

1.The day is my dad’s birthday.This afternoon I went to the shopping center downtown, and hesitated for 猶豫(v)a moment,and then offered my seat to her.The old lady thanked me a lot and sat [be] ready to help others in the future.2.Two years ,I travelled to BT and Ia car.Unfortunate[~ly],I had an accident and hit another car,and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two Iaway,and that my mother would not sleep if she knew.Therefore,I told them stories and how I was enjoying BT.As a result,nobody knew[the] truth.I still think that it was the righ thing to do.3.The world is not only hungry,but also 渴的(adj).this may strange,since nearly 70 % of the earth’s surface is covered with water.Man and most of the animals can only drink and use the 10% of the water---fresh water.The need for water is day by day.Only when steps are taken to deal with this problem immediate [~ly],can we avoid a serve worldwide water shortage短缺(n)later on.One of the first [is]to develop ways to reuse to a water purifying it can be separated from waste matters and treated with 4.[2012唐山is a sick friend,or attend a wedding or[a] birthday party.I still remember one day last year when Tom,a disabled some flowers to his mother to express his gratitude.He life to his mother’s patient was finally admitted to a key university.’hurt.With tears in her eyes,she could do nothing butfor help.Zhang li ran “take it easy”he said.Then he sent her to a nearby hospital.That[it] was not long before the girl’6.Mr.smith had an 8-year-old son named tony,who enjoyed listening to music very much.So he a [for]Tony,hoping that he could become [a] famous pianist one day.The little boy into the piano day after day and seemd to enjoy if you don’tAttend v.出席，到場，參加bleed n.血 v.流血handkerchief n.手絹，紗布，絲綢confidence n.自信，信心