第一篇：2013高考英語二輪復習 寫作專題 第一部分 萬能句子 常用詞組及句型精品教案

第一部分 高考英語作文高分萬能句子

常用詞組及句型

提出主題

There is a widespread concern over the issue that…

The topic of(主題)is becoming more and more popular recently.…has attracted extensive(廣泛的)attention of the society.There is no consensus(一致)of opinion among people as to the view of…

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Firstly…secondly(besides)…thirdly(finally)For one thing…for another…what's more… On one hand…on the other hand…moreover…

轉折

On the contrary…

however, a coin has two sides…

You can't take your cake and eat it.自己的看法

In my opinion

As far as I am concerned

From my point of view，With reference to my standpoint ，喊口號

I think / I firmly support…

Only through…can we…

說明事物現狀(一句帶過)

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)作文題目.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in 題目議題.事物本身的優缺點

Its advantages can be seen as follows…

Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows…

The negative aspects are also apparent…

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Firstly, 優點一.And secondly 優點二.To begin with, 缺點一.In addition, 缺點二.To make matters worse，…… 你對現狀(或前景)的看法

Through above analyses, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh(勝于)the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to……

From the comparison between……

We should do it according to the circumstances we are in.2-

第二篇：高考英語寫作必備詞組500個句型匯總

高考英語寫作必備詞組547個句型匯總

首先，尤其重要的，最重要的 above all 2 偶然，無意中 by accident 3對(于)…很積極 be active in 4合計為

add up to 5承讓錯誤 admit one’s mistake

6接受某人的建議 take / follow one’s advice 7就…提出建議 give advice on 8建議某人做某事 advice sb.to do sth.9后天 the day after tomorrow 10畢竟;終究 after all 11違心

against one’s will 12在…歲時 at the age of 13實現目標 achieve one’s aim 14在空中;懸而未決 in the air 15在戶外，在露天里 in the open air 16在機場 at the airport 17火警

the fire alarm 18滿腔怒火

be filled with anger 19因某人之言行而生氣 be angry at sth.20生某人的氣

be angry with sb.21通知

make an announcement 22相繼地，按順序地 one after another 23相互，彼此(三者或三者以上之間)

one another 24相互(指兩者之間)each other 25沒有回答

give no answer 26為…而擔心

be anxious about 27急于做某事

be anxious to do sth.28分開住

live apart 29除了

apart from 30因某事向某人認錯或道歉 make/offer an apology to sb for sth.31與某人爭論某事

argue with sb.about sth.32放在一邊 lay sth.aside 33請某人指點 / 幫助

ask sb.for advice / help 34驚訝于… be astonished at sth.35以前，曾經

at one time 36注意

pay attention to 37對…抱正確的態度

take a correct attitude towards sth.38引起(注意，興趣等)attract one’s attention 39仰臥/仰泳 lie / swim on one’s back 40重感冒

a bad cold 41兩件行李 two pieces of baggage 42保持/失去平衡 keep / lose one’s balance

43在舞會上 at the ball 44洗冷水澡 have / take a cold bath 45陣亡

be killed in battle 46在海灘

on the beach 47整理床鋪 make the bed 48以…開始 begin with 49在…起始，開始

at the beginning of 50自始自終

from beginning to end 51形成…局面;產生 come into being 52安全帶

a safety belt 53三思而后行。

Second thoughts are best.54盡力，盡最大的努力 do / try one’s best 55盡量利用，善用

make the best of 56一切順利，萬事如意 all the best 57黑體地，粗體地 in bold 58出身于農民家庭

be born in a peasant’s family 59鞠躬

make a bow 60動動腦子 use one’s brains 61打破紀錄 break the record 62深吸一口氣 take a deep breath 63屏息;憋住氣 hold one’s breath 64上氣不接下氣 out of breath 65刷牙

brush one’s teeth 66突然哭起來 burst into tears 67突然一陣大笑 a burst of laughter 68要不是 but for 69呼救聲 a call for help 70保持鎮靜(別慌)keep calm 71保持安靜(別吵)keep quiet 72保持不動(別動)keep still 73保持沉默(別說話)keep silent 74夏令營 a summer camp 75去野營 go camping 76情不自禁… cannot help doing 77打牌 play cards 78照顧，保管 take care of 79醫療護理 medical care 80假若那樣的話 in that case 81以防萬一 in case 82下傾盆大雨 rain cats and dogs 83趕上(或超過)catch up with 84偶然 by chance 85免費 free of charge 86主管，在掌管之下 in charge

87由…負責 in the charge of 88掌管，負責 take charge 89高興起來 cheer up 90童年時 in one’s childhood 91挑選，選擇 make a choice 92圣誕節時 at Christmas 93去做禮拜 go to church 94煙頭

cigarette end 95為…鼓掌 give sb.a clap 96接近get close to 97 一塊桌布 a table cloth 98 一套衣服 a suit of clothes 99 童裝 children’s clothing 100 集郵 collect stamps 101.產生，發生 come about 102.(偶然)遇見或發現 come across 103.走過來;長出，發芽，上升;抬頭 come up 104.共同，共有 in common 105.參加比賽 compete in a contest 106.舉辦音樂會 give a concert 107.條件是 on condition that 108.祝賀某人 congratulate sb.on sth.109.相反地 on the contrary 110.失控 out of control 111.與…談話;交談 have a conversation with sb.112.在…期間/過程中 in / during the course of 113.被…覆蓋 be covered with 114.因某事和某人發脾氣 be cross with sb.at sth.115.劃掉 cross out 116.對…殘忍 be cruel to sb.117.立方米 cubic meter 118.對…感到好奇 be curious about sth.119.對…造成巨大損害 do great damage to 120.處境危險 in danger 121.過時 out of date 122.在不久前，前幾天 the other day 123.對…充耳不聞 be deaf to sth.124.對付，應付 deal with 125.負債 in debt 126.還清債務 out of debt 127.相反地 on the contrary 128.失控 out of control 129.與…談話;交談 have a conversation with sb.130.在…期間/過程中 in / during the course of

131.被…覆蓋 be covered with 132.因某事和某人發脾氣 be cross with sb.at sth.133.劃掉 cross out 134.對…殘忍 be cruel to sb.135.立方米 cubic meter 136.對…感到好奇 be curious about sth.137.對…造成巨大損害 do great damage to 138.處境危險 in danger 139.過時 out of date 140.在不久前，前幾天 the other day 141.對…充耳不聞 be deaf to sth.142.對付，應付 deal with 143.負債 in debt 144.還清債務 out of debt 145.做…有困難，難以… have difficulty in doing sth.146.應邀赴宴 be invited to dinner 147.向四面八方 in all directions 148.做出新的發現 make a new discovery 149.正在討論中 under discussion 150.洗盤子 wash dishes 151.在遠方，在遠處 in the distance 152.對…冷淡 be distant toward sb.153.對…有益 do good to 154.做壞事，犯罪 do wrong 155.挨門挨戶 from door to door 156.隔壁的 next door 157.下樓 go downstairs 158.到市區去 go downtown 159.緩慢前進，拖延 drag one’s feet

160.催人淚下 draw tears from sb.161.渴望做某事 dream of doing sth.162.在墻上鉆孔 drill a hole in the wall 163.趕走 drive off 164.使某人發狂 drive sb.mad 165.掙錢 earn money 166.謀生 earn one’s living

167.究竟 on earth 168.別著急，別緊張，放松些 take it easy 169.對…有很大影響 have a great effect on 170.努力做某事 make efforts to do sth.171.鼓勵某人做某事 encourage sb.to do sth.172.量入而出;使收支相抵 make ends meet 173.美滿的結局 a happy ending 174.說英語的國家 English-speaking countries

175.報名比賽 enter oneself for a contest 176.劇場的入口 the entrance to the theater 177.在除夕 on New Year’s Eve

178.雖然，即使 even if / even though 179.時事 current events

180.參加考試 have / take an examination 181.進行體格檢查 carry out a medical examination 182.考試及格 pass an examination 183.為…樹立榜樣 set an example to sb.184.做早操 do morning exercises 185.產生，成立 come into existence 186.摸某人的脈 feel one’s pulse

187.覺得想做… feel like doing sth.188.傷害某人的感情 hurt one’s feelings 189.春節 the Spring Festival 190.發高燒 have a high fever 191.科學領域 the field of science 192.五十多歲時 in one’s fifties

193.關鍵人物 a key figure 194.填寫表格 fill in the form 195.剎那間 in a flash 196.一場大洪水 a big / great flood 197.掃地 sweep the floor 198.在三層 on the third floor 199.三層樓的建筑 a building of three storeys 200.正在開花 be in flowers 201.放(風箏等)fly a kite 202.糊里糊涂 in a fog 203.欺騙，愚弄某人 make a fool of sb.204.在山腳下 at the foot of the mountain 205.空軍 the air force 206.靠武力，強行 by force 207.用很大力氣 with great force 208.對外貿易 foreign trade 209.養成好習慣 form a good habit 210.碰碰運氣 try one’s fortune

211.每四個一組(一批);四個四個地 in fours 212.?？?a frequent visitor 213.新手 a fresh hand 214.同…交朋友 make friends with 215.那時起 from then on 216.不時地，時常 from time to time 217.不勞而不獲。No pains, no gains.218.做游戲 play games

219.代溝 generation gap

220.開始認真(做某事)get down to sth.221.陷入麻煩 get into trouble

222.有音樂天分 have a gift for music

223.用盡，耗盡，筋疲力盡 give out

224.朝…看了一眼 take a glance at

225.向人瞪眼，怒目而視 glare at

226.(燈，火)熄滅 go out

227.復習功課 go over the lesson

228.進了一個球 score a goal

229.犯語法錯誤 make mistakes in grammar

230.懂某人的意思 grasp one’s meaning

231.勿踏草地 keep off the grass

232.養成…的習慣 get into the habit of

233.用手 by hand

234.分發 hand out

235.一方面…另一方面… on the one hand…on the other hand

236.少量的 a handful of

237.過幸福生活 live a happy life

238.損害，傷害 do harm to

239.一個好收成 a good harvest

240.保持鎮靜 keep one’s head

241.身體好 in good health

242.記住某事 learn / know sth.by heart

243.緊握某物 keep a tight hold on sth.244.握住;抓住 catch / take / get hold of

245.趾高氣揚 hold one’s head high

246.暑假 the summer holidays

247.休假 on holiday

248.為(向)… 表示敬意;為了紀念… in honour of

249.對某人抱很大希望 have high hope for sb.250.懷著…的希望 in the hope of doing sth.251.住院 be in hospital

252.大約一小時 an hour or so

253.挨餓 go hungry

254.打獵 go hunting

255.匆匆忙忙 in a hurry

256.不知道 have no idea

257.但愿，要是…就好了 if only

258.給某人留下好印象 make a good impression on sb.259.慢慢前進 inch one’s way forward

260.患難之交才是真朋友。A friend in need is a friend indeed.261.告訴某人某事 inform sb of sth 262.堅持要做 insist on doing

263.視察工廠 inspect a factory 264.激動人心的演講 an inspiring speech 265.急需幫助 in instant need of help 266.打斷談話 interrupt a conversation 267.介紹信 a letter of introduction 268.收到請帖 receive an invitation 269.邀請信 a letter of invitation 270.講笑話 tell a joke 271.和某人開玩笑 play a joke with sb.272.旅行 make a journey 273.使某人高興的是 to one’s joy

274.不可以貌取人 Don’t judge a man by his looks.275.初中 a junior high school 276.正在那時 just then 277.與…保持聯系 keep in touch with 278.使…不進入… keep out of 279.成功的秘訣 the key to success 280.踢門 kick the door 281.踢掉鞋子 kick off one’s shoes 282.跪下 go down / fall on one’s knees 283.敲門 knock at the door 284.最遲，至遲 at the latest 285.遲早 sooner or later 286.哈哈大笑起來 burst into laughter 287.違(守)法 break / obey the law 288.制定一條法律 make a law 289.擺設餐具(準備吃飯)lay the table 290.過著簡樸的生活 lead a simple life 291.忽略，遺漏 leave out 292.聽關于…的講座 attend a lecture on 293.給某人一個教訓 teach sb.a lesson 294.從…在中吸取教訓 take a lesson from 295.驚訝地叫了一聲 let out a cry of surprise 296.透漏消息 let out the news 297.大寫字母 a capital letter 298.仰臥 / 俯臥 lie on one’s back / stomach 299.復活，蘇醒過來 come back to life 300.交通信號燈 traffic lights 301.列一張購物清單 make a shopping list 302.謀生，度日 make a living 303.喪生，死;犧牲 lose one’s life 304.泄氣;灰心 lose heart 305.失音 lose one’s voice 306.輸一場 lose a game

307.祝你好運 Wish you good luck.308.洗衣機 a washing machine 309.欣喜若狂 be mad with joy 310.郵寄包裹 send the parcel by mail 311.賺錢 make money 312.交朋友 make friends 313.取得進步 make progress 314.利用 make use of 315.編造故事 make up a story 316.彌補某人的過失 make up for one’s mistake 317.有禮貌 have good manners 318.商標 a trade mark 319.滿分 full marks 320.觀看一場籃球比賽 watch a basketball match 321.進行比賽 have a match 322.祝你成功。May you success.323.五一節 May Day 324.通過這種方式 by this means 325.用…方法，依靠 by means of 326.決不 by no means 327.按…尺寸做 make…to one’s measure 328.采取措施 take a measure 329.量身高 measure one’s height 330.獲得金牌 get a gold medal 331.醫療隊 a medical team 332.體檢 medical examination 333.吃藥 take / have some medicine 334.滿足…的需要 meet the needs of 335.遇到風暴 meet with a storm 336.去開會 go to a meeting 337.開會 have a meeting 338.舉行會議 hold a meeting 339.為紀念 in memory of 340.對…一點兒也不憐憫 have no mercy on sb.341.毫不容情地;殘忍地 without mercy 342.在…支配下;任由…擺布 at the mercy of 343.給某人捎個信兒 take a message for sb.344.中秋節 Mid-autumn Day 345.上百萬的，許許多多的 millions of 346.改變主意 change one’s mind

347.當心油漆未干。Mind the wet paint!348.下決心 make up one’s mind

349.外交部長 the minister of foreign affairs 350.錯過機會 miss an opportunity

351.犯錯誤 make a mistake 352.由疏忽所致 by mistake 353.現代 in modern times 354.零錢 small money 355.某人身上沒(帶)錢 have no money with sb.356.選某人為班長 make sb.monitor 357.某一天清早 on the early morning 358.在山頂上 at the top of the mountain 359.參加海軍 join the navy 360.如果有必要的話 if necessary 361.需要幫助 in need of help 362.呈現一片新面貌 take on a new look 363.打某人的鼻子 hit sb.on the nose 364.做筆記 make / take notes 365.與…無關 have nothing to do with 366.張貼通知 put up a notice 367.對某人毫不在意 pay no notice to sb.368.運轉著，實施中 be in operation 369.訂購某物 place an order for sth.370.失業了 out of work 371.一副眼鏡 a pair of glasses 372.頤和園 the Summer Palace 373.此處禁止停車!No parking here!374.在…方面起積極作用 take an active part in 375.在過去的幾天里 in the past few days 376.對某人有耐心 be patient with sb.377.熟能生巧。Practice makes perfect.378.演出，表演 put on performances 379.親自，當面 in person 380.給某人照相 take a photo of sb.381.彈鋼琴 play the piano 382.摘花 pick flowers 383.撿錢包 pick up a wallet 384.去野餐 go out for a picnic 385.一堆書 a pile of books 386.可憐某人(因同情而幫助某人)have / take pity on sb.387.出于同情 out of pity 388.代替 in place of 389.坐某人的座位，代替某人的職務 take one’s place 390.舉行，發生 take place 391.代替，代理 take the place of 392.訂計劃 make a plan 393.玩牌 play cards 394.對某人開一個玩笑 play a joke on sb.395.與…一起玩 play with sb.396.在操場上 on the playground 397.對…感到滿意 be pleased with 398.喜歡做某事 take pleasure in doing sth.399.生活富裕 live in plenty

400.正要…的時候 on the point of 401.對某人有禮貌 be polite to sb.402.受某人喜愛 be popular with sb.403.占有，擁有 take possession of 404.發電站 power station 405.當權，執政 take power 406.因為某事贊揚某人 praise sb.for sth.407.贊揚 in praise of 408.出席會議 be present at a meeting 409.眼下 at present 410.互贈禮物 exchange presents 411.在壓力下 under pressure 412.防止某人做某事 prevent sb.from doing 413.以…為代價 at the price of 414.無論花多少代價(不惜任何代價)at any price 415.以…為自豪;對…感到得意 take pride in 416.小學 primary school 417.入獄，被監禁 go to prison 418.在獄中服刑 be in prison 419.將某人送進監獄 throw / put sb.into prison 420.越獄 escape from prison 421.解決問題 solve the problem 422.回答問題 answer the question 423.遵守諾言 keep one’s promise

424.答應，許下諾言 make a promise 425.以…自豪 be proud of 426.養家糊口 provide food and clothes for one’s family

427.公共事務 public affairs 428.輿論 public opinion 429.當眾，公開 in public 430.出版社 publishing house 431.故意地 on purpose 432.把…推到一邊 push aside 433.推倒，(風)刮倒 push over 434.拖延，推遲 put off 435.不可能 out of the question 436.接力賽 a relay race 437.通過無線電廣播 on the radio 438.衣衫襤褸，穿破衣服 in rags

439.在火車站 at the railway station 440.小(大)雨 light / heavy rain 441.一線希望 a ray of hope 442.伸手去拿 reach for sth.443.夠不著 out of ones’ reach 444.樂意干某事 be ready to do 445.事實上 in reality 446.實現希望 realize one’s hope 447.為此，為此理由 for this reason 448.接待處 reception desk 449.參考;談到 refer to 450.留在某人的記憶中 remain in one’s memory 451.提醒某人做某事 remind sb.to do sth.452.使某人想起 remind sb.of sth.453.應…請求 by request 454.因此，結果 as a result 455.盛產;有大量的… be rich in 456.除掉 get rid of 457.搶走某人某物 rob sb.of sth.458.起重要作用 play an important role 459.扮演…的角色 play the role of 460.給…騰出地方 make room for 461.對某人無禮 be rude to sb.462.用完 run out of 463.高峰時間，擁擠時間 rush hour 464.滿足某人的需要 satisfy one’s needs 465.節省體力 save one’s strength 466.也就是說 that is to say 467.為某事責備某人 scold sb.for sth.468.就座，坐下 take one’s seat

469.不讓人知道某事，保密 keep sth.a secret 470.抓住小偷的衣領 seize a thief by the collar 471.與某人握手 shake hands with sb.472.店員;營業員 shop assistant 473.領某人出去/進來 show sb.out / in 474.炫耀 show off 475.對岸;在…另一面 on the other side of 476.支持某人(方)take the side of 477.站在…一邊 take sides in 478.看不見 lose sight of 479.看到，發現 catch sight out 480.看不見 out of sight 481.靜靜地 in silence 482.和…類似的 be similar to

483.單程票 single ticket 484.量…的大小(尺寸)take the size of 485.偷偷塞給某人一張紙條 486.slip a note into one’s hand

487.在雪地上滑倒 slip on the snow 488.克服困難 smooth away difficulties 489.大約 or so 490.與…有關系 have something to do with 491.國歌 the national song 492.大膽地說，清楚并響亮地說 speak out 493.發言，演講 make a speech 494.以…的速度 at a speed of 495.平方公里 square kilometers 496.代表，象征 stand for 497.餓死 starve to death 498.處于良好狀態 in a good state 499.逐步地，一步一步地 step by step 500.遵守諾言 stick to one’s word / promise 501.趴在地上 lie on one’s stomach

502.四層樓的住宅 a house of four storeys 503.趕上風暴 be caught in the storm 504.對…要求嚴格 be strict with sb.in sth.505.擦火柴 strike a match 506.掙扎著起來 struggle to one’s feet 507.仔細研究 make a study of 508.突然，冷不防 all of a sudden 509.暑假 summer holidays 510.向某人供應/提供 supply sb.with sth.511.使某人驚奇的是 to one’s surprise 512.擦臉上的汗 sweat off one’s face 513.坐下吃飯 sit down to table 514.納稅 pay one’s taxes 515.沏茶 make tea 516.用望遠鏡 through a telescope 517.講故事 tell a story 518.辨別，分清 tell one from the other 519.量體溫 take one’s temperature 520.數以萬計 tens of thousands of 521.被…嚇了一跳 be terrified at 522.因某事感謝某人 be thankful to sb.for sth.523.扔掉 throw away 524.吐出(食物)，嘔吐 throw up 525.立刻，很快 in no time 526.交通堵塞 traffic jam

527.跟某人開玩笑，欺騙某人 play a trick on sb.528.處于困境(苦惱)中 be in trouble 529.一條褲子 a pair of trousers 530.上大學 attend university 531.拜訪某人 pay a visit to sb.532.高聲地(喊)at the top of one’s voice 533.在交戰 at war 534.穿舊;使筋疲力盡 wear out 535.拔草 pull out the weeds 536.穿著白色衣服 be dressed in white 537.通盤，作為整體 as a whole 538.總的來說 on the whole 539.有志者事竟成。

540.Where there is a will, there is a way.541.樂意做某事 be willing to do sth.542.擦掉灰塵 wipe off the dust 543.創造奇跡 make wonders 544.不足為奇;難怪 no wonder 545.插話 get in a word 546.和某人說句話 have a word with sb.547.總之，簡言之 in a word 13

第三篇：2011年高考二輪復習：寫作

創新點一 深刻 ◎特征點解讀

《考試大綱》對高考作文發展等級中的“深刻”作了界定，即透過現象深入本質，揭示事物內在的因果關系，觀點具有啟發作用。

1．透過現象深入本質。要求考生透過現象的迷霧深入思考，對現象進行“去偽存真，去粗存精，由表及里”的加工，發掘出寓于事物中的本質來。

2．揭示事物內在的因果關系。任何事物的存在都不是孤立的、偶然的，有后果就必然有前因，要善于探究事物的本源，以敏銳的目光，借助事物發展變化的脈絡，探尋問題發生的原因，從而找到解決問題的方法。

3．觀點具有啟發作用。陳舊的、大眾化的觀點，不能產生振聾發聵的效果，所持觀點應該具有時代感、前瞻性、震撼力，能夠啟人心智。

◎失誤作文

荷之秋思 安徽考生

一莖殘荷，掙扎于荷田之中，在冷風中瑟瑟發抖，顯得格外凄涼。殘荷似乎從噩夢中醒來，長嘆一聲。隨著這聲深深的嘆息，往日的遭遇一齊涌上心頭。

2008年的春天，我的主人突然心血來潮，說是這年頭，沒有什么不可能，硬要把我的根埋得深深的，把水灌得滿滿的，還美其名曰：“根深才能葉茂，水深才能養魚?！庇谑牵麄內胰艘黄鸪鰟樱钢@鎬，來到塘邊，深挖塘泥。完工之后，再放進肥料，把我埋入塘泥下面。我周圍還埋了許多我的兄弟姐妹。開始我也以為這樣能夠豐產豐收，長出許多藕崽，開出許多荷花，結出許多蓮子，那不是我這一生最大的造化嗎?可是，被埋入深泥深水之后，我就像被打入了冷宮，天天黑暗，日日陰沉，不能呼吸，不見光明，魚兒蝦兒不時騷擾，蛙兒蟲兒經常嬉鬧。終于有一天，我的身體騷動起來，不幾天，便長出了一個幼小的嫩芽?？墒俏覜]辦法向上伸展，根部沒底氣，胸中無營養，結果我一天天萎縮，終于沉睡在深泥之中。這就是我的第一次遭遇。

2009年，我的主人坐在塘邊，長吁短嘆，不時滴下幾滴悔恨的淚水。他的淚水震撼了荷塘，也將我那死去的心靈喚醒。原來，主人從鎮農技員那里獲知，種荷花時水位不能太深了，越深越沒有出頭之日。于是，主人將奄奄一息的我撈起，還有我的那些兄弟姐妹，移栽到水田之中。這是一塊長方形的瘦田，三四寸的浮土下面，全是石板。主人邊栽邊說：“這下將你栽得淺淺的，定會豐產豐收的吧？！”我聽了也怪高興的，從深塘到淺田，水位變了，我的好運也該到了。我躺在田泥里，天天盼，日日等，終于，我發芽了，長葉了，粗壯了，我呼吸著新鮮的空氣，沐浴著燦爛的陽光，憧憬著報答主人的那一刻?？墒牵镁安婚L，到了端午節的時候，我突然覺得渾身無力，我的葉子漸漸變黃，花蕾慢慢枯癟，剛剛發育的蓮子，也開始變小。難道厄運再一次降臨到我的頭上，難道主人就這么倒霉，難道農技員是個冒牌專家，難道……“這水太淺了，頭重腳輕根底淺，藕芽怎能長成？”田埂上，農技員對主人說著。

◎誤區警示

本文采用第一人稱，以“荷之秋思”為行文線索，從反面立意，寫荷的兩次不幸遭遇。但作者沒有能很好地揭示荷的兩次不幸遭遇的根本原因，沒有能揭示事物內在的因果關系。另外，兩次不幸遭遇之間也缺少必要的過渡。

◎升格作文 荷之秋思

山高月小，秋風蕭索，一莖殘荷，掙扎于荷田之中，在冷風中瑟瑟發抖，顯得格外凄涼。

殘荷似乎從噩夢中醒來，長嘆一聲。隨著這聲深深的嘆息，往日的遭遇一齊涌上心頭。

那是公元2008年的春天，我的主人突然心血來潮，說是這年頭，沒有什么不可能，硬要把我的根埋得深深的，把水灌得滿滿的，還美其名曰：“根深才能葉茂，水深才能養魚。”于是，他們全家人一起出動，扛著鍬鎬，來到塘邊，深挖塘泥。完工之后，再放進肥料，把我埋入塘泥下面。我周圍還埋了許多我的兄弟姐妹。開始我也以為這樣能夠豐產豐收，長出許多藕崽，開出許多荷花，結出許多蓮子，那不是我這一生最大的造化嗎?可是，被埋入深泥深水之后，我就像被打入了冷宮，天天黑暗，日日陰沉，不能呼吸，不見光明，魚兒蝦兒不時騷擾，蛙兒蟲兒經常嬉鬧。終于有一天，我的身體騷動起來，不幾天，便長出了一個幼小的嫩芽?？墒俏覜]辦法向上伸展，根部沒底氣，胸中無營養，結果我一天天萎縮，終于沉睡在深泥之中。這就是我的第一次遭遇。

時過境遷，轉眼又跨進了公元2009年，我的主人坐在塘邊，長吁短嘆，不時滴下幾滴悔恨的淚水。他的淚水震撼了荷塘，也將我那死去的心靈喚醒。原來，主人從鎮農技員那里獲知，種荷花時水位不能太深了，越深越沒有出頭之日。于是，主人將奄奄一息的我撈起，還有我的那些兄弟姐妹，移栽到水田之中。這是一塊長方形的瘦田，三四寸的浮土下面，全是石板。主人邊栽邊說：“這下將你栽得淺淺的，定會豐產豐收的吧?！”我聽了也怪高興的，從深塘到淺田，水位變了，我的好運也該到了。我躺在田泥里，天天盼，日日等，終于，我發芽了，長葉了，粗壯了，我呼吸著新鮮的空氣，沐浴著燦爛的陽光，憧憬著報答主人的那一刻?？墒?，好景不長，到了端午節的時候，我突然覺得渾身無力，我的葉子漸漸變黃，花蕾慢慢枯癟，剛剛發育的蓮子，也開始變小。難道厄運再一次降臨到我的頭上，難道主人就這么倒霉，難道農技員是個冒牌專家，難道……“這田太瘦了，這水太淺了，頭重腳輕根底淺，荷花無法扎深根，藕芽怎能長成?古人云，?不深不淺種荷花?，你去年步入了深的誤區，今年又走向了淺的極端，不從實際出發，不因地制宜，不實事求是，不按荷花的生長規律辦事，必然要付出慘重的代價！”田埂上，農技員對主人說著，語重心長。那聲音鏗鏘有力，擲地有聲，回蕩在田間地頭、荷塘上空?！安簧畈粶\種荷花”，這就是真理——荷花沉思著。

◎特征點突破技巧

1．打破思維定勢，在創新意識的支配下求深刻。運用逆向思維立意，就是要打破常規的思維定勢，對一種客觀事物或現象從不同的角度進行求異思維，擇其對立的一面，“反彈琵琶”。譬如名人名言、警句成語，都有一定的哲理性，但是，不少成語警句往往是從某一個角度而言的，隨著時代的進步，人們的觀念也在不斷更新，這些名言警句的內容就顯露出一定的局限性。2．進行思維系列訓練，培養良好的思維品質。通過對思辨意識的系列訓練，能使學生在文章中明辨是非，辨別優劣，分析前因后果，形成自己的獨特的觀點和看法。

3．通過妙言警語顯示深刻。通過妙言警語顯示觀點的深刻性，就是運用判斷句和修辭句寫出令人深思、耐人尋味、富有哲理的警句妙語。

創新點二 豐富

◎特征點解讀

“豐富”是高考作文發展等級的第二項要求，具體指材料豐富、論據充實、形象豐滿、意境深遠。1．“材料豐富”是寫作各種文體文章的總要求。是指文章使用的材料種類多、數量大，內容豐贍，血肉豐滿。

2．“論據充實”主要是針對議論性文章而言的。在確立了富有新意的正確觀點之后，還要選用真實、典型、新鮮的論據來證明。這些在行文中的理論引證、事實例子、數字資料等要充分而有力，避免空洞的分析。

3．“形象豐滿”是就寫人敘事類文章而言的。它需要考生能夠熟練地掌握幾種描寫方法，寫環境，繪聲繪色，讓人如臨其境；寫人物，個性鮮明，讓人物栩栩如生地站在讀者面前。4．“意境深遠”是就寫景抒情類文章而言的。“意境”，就是指文章中那種情景交融、形神兼備的藝術境界。要創造深遠的意境，就需要考生有寫景狀物的本領，做到寓情于景，寓理于形。

◎失誤作文與你為鄰

廣東考生

“媽！隔壁的開門聲，吵死了！”我皺著眉頭，對著答案在自己剛做完的一道題目旁邊打了一個大大的叉。我瞥了瞥桌子上無聲走動著的鬧鐘，果然，又是11點半。

我們家在老城區一座舊樓里，住了多少年了，我從來沒有想到這幾天這么敏感地難以忍受哪怕游絲般的聲響。要不是學校說高考前自習，要不是爸媽一再催促我回家吃好睡好補好身子，我就不用像現在這般忍受鄰里三姑六婆不時的高談闊論和這晚上11點半到訪的惱人打擾了。老媽說：“孩子，你知道的，隔壁小王早出晚歸，也夠辛苦的，你知道環衛工人得一天掃多少地……”“我不管!這家真不講文明，他有啥理由天天準時吵著我？甚至有時有嬰兒的哭聲!明天趁著周日，他輪休吧？你和我過去同他講清楚!”說完我離開位置，上了床，用被子一層又一層地捂著自己的耳朵。

今晚，出奇地，很安靜。我失眠了，躺在床上，睜大眼干盯著墻壁，仿佛要看穿墻壁對面任何一絲的喧擾。

天剛剛亮，我就拉著老媽，來到了對門。這戶人家的門，是那種破舊的舊式鐵柵門，上面早被歲月侵蝕得七七八八了。伴隨著我急促的敲門聲，是鐵柵門發出的聲響，出來—個小伙子，滿臉胡茬，和一身似乎和鐵門可以稱兄道弟的褪了色的凌亂的衣服?！靶⊥醢?，我是隔壁的張阿姨，謝謝你啊，樓道這幾天可干凈了?！崩蠇屚现?，把我的話蓋了下去?！澳睦铮瑧摰?，這是您家的娃兒吧？多大了？長得可真俊?！蔽艺f：“十八了，就要高考了……”“那一定要加油??！我給你點補身子的。”說完，他便一轉身，走進了屋子，留下了滿臉驚詫的我和老媽。

那是怎樣的屋子呀！房間里滿滿地擠著一張床，旁邊是席地而放的飯鍋、電風扇，甚至破破爛爛的玩具。床上坐著小王的妻子，還有她懷里對我們微笑的嬰兒。我呆住了。

小王走了出來，拿給我兩個紅雞蛋?！斑@孩子，好好學習，上大學了給我們鄰居也增添光彩！”

與你為鄰，謝謝你，待我以真誠和愛。

◎誤區警示

本文作者選取了高考前夕與鄰居之間發生的事情，借以表達鄰里之間要以真誠和愛相待的主題。但內容不夠豐富，人物形象不夠豐滿，細節描寫不夠生動，對人物的語言描寫、神態描寫也不能給人如聞其聲、如見其人的感覺。

◎升格作文 與你為鄰

“媽！隔壁的開門聲，吵死了！”我皺著眉頭，對著答案在自己剛做完的一道題目旁邊打了一個大大的叉。我瞥了瞥桌子上無聲走動著的鬧鐘，果然，又是準時的夜里11點半。

我們家在老城區一座舊樓里，住了多少年了，我從來沒有想到這幾天這么敏感地難以忍受哪怕游絲般的聲響。要不是學校說高考前自習，要不是爸媽一再催促我回家吃好睡好補好身子，我就不用像現在這般忍受鄰里三姑六婆不時的高談闊論和這晚上11點半準時到訪的惱人打擾了。要知道，晚上正是我最清醒的時候，可也是我最敏感的時候。

老媽穿著睡衣，輕輕地，又或者說，躡手躡腳地走到我房間?！昂⒆?，你知道的，隔壁小王早出晚歸，也夠辛苦的，你知道環衛工人一天得掃多少地……”“我不管我不管!管他是誰，他有啥理由天天準時吵著我？甚至有時還附送一兩聲嬰兒的哭聲！我不管！明天趁著周日，他輪休吧？你陪我過去和他說清楚！”說完我便轉身而去，一頭扎到床上，用被子一層又一層地捂著自己的耳朵。床“咿呀”了一下，像是一聲痛苦而又無奈的呻吟。

今晚，出奇地，特別的安靜。我失眠了，躺在床上，睜大眼干盯著墻壁，仿佛要看穿墻壁對面任何一絲的喧擾。

天蒙蒙亮，拽著老媽，我挺著身板來到了對門。這戶人家的門，是那種破舊的老式鐵柵門，上面早被歲月侵蝕得七七八八了，仿佛只需輕輕—碰，便頃刻粉碎。伴隨著我急促的敲門聲，是鐵柵門“吱呀吱呀”的呻吟，還有一個小伙，滿臉胡茬，和一身似乎和鐵門可以稱兄道弟的褪了色的凌亂的衣服。

“小王啊，我是隔壁的張阿姨，謝謝你啊，樓道這幾天可干凈了?！崩蠇屚现遥盐业脑捝厣w了下去。“哪里，應該的，這是您家的娃兒吧？多大了？長得可真俊?！薄笆肆?，”終于讓我插上話了，“就要高考了……”“呀！那可得加油啊!來，叔叔給你點補身子的。”說完，他便一轉身，走進了屋子，留下了滿臉驚詫的我和老媽。

那是怎樣的屋子呀！房間里滿滿地擠著一張床，旁邊是席地而放的飯鍋、電風扇，還有破破爛爛的玩具。床上坐著小王的妻子，還有她懷里對我們微笑的嬰兒。我呆住了。

小王走了出來，塞給我兩個紅雞蛋?！澳峭迌?，好好念書，上大學了給咱鄰居也添添光！”說完輕輕地拍了拍我的頭。我用力地點點頭，踮起腳尖對小寶寶做了個鬼臉。

與你為鄰，謝謝你，待我以真誠和愛。

◎特征點突破技巧

1.要做到材料豐富，需要：①注重材料的積累和整理。各種材料中，最需要關心的是生活材料。身邊小事要留意觀察，身外大事更要注意了解，如通過報刊、影視、網絡等各種途徑，從大量的信息中篩選出社會熱點事件。當然還要注重經典作品的閱讀?！白x萬卷書”可以使我們的文章具有深厚的文化內涵。②善于在寫作實踐中運用材料。一般來說，寫人寫事的文章盡量不少于三件事，也可以一個主體事件為主，以其他事件來作鋪墊。

2.要做到論據充實，需要：①加強兩個方面的積累；事實論據和理論論據的積累。②論據是因“論”而有“據”的，所以要盡量把中心論點切分為幾個分論點，這樣每一個分論點都需要一定的論據，于是論據也就派上用場了，文章就會變得論據充實。

3.要做到形象豐滿，需要：①寫出人物性格的不同側面。人的性格是復雜的，往往包含著不同的甚至是矛盾的方面，所以我們要避免把人物形象簡單化、平面化，而要追求人物形象的立體化。②盡可能地多描寫、少敘述。必要的敘述當然是需要的，但細膩的描寫可以使人物形象活起來、站起來。③運用不同手法來表現人物形象，如能全方位地進行描寫，人物形象就會豐滿起來。

4.要做到意境深遠，需要：①善于寄情于景，做到情景交融。②善于化實為虛，多給讀者一點想象的空間。③善于采用比喻象征手法，給全文增添濃厚的藝術氛圍。④善于把詩意與哲理結合起來。單純的詩意，易失之晦澀；單純的哲理，易失之直白。若能把二者有機地結合起來，可以避免晦澀和直白，而使文章顯得含蓄，有深意。⑤努力寫一個“意料之外和情理之中”的結尾，營造出“言有盡而意無窮”的藝術境界。

創新點三 有文采

◎特征點解讀

“有文采”是高考作文在“語言通順”的基礎上提出的高一個層次的語言標準。”《考試大綱》的四個評分點是：用詞貼切、句式靈活、善于運用修辭手法、文句有表現力。

1．詞語生動，就是根據語境條件使用語言，即符合外部語境的各種要求。就是要求在幾個可用的詞中，選出最恰當、最得體的那個，把所要表達的意思恰如其分地表達出來。究竟使用哪個詞語最合適，要從具體語境出發，仔細斟酌，反復推敲。

2．句式靈活，根據抒發感情、體現思想或表達內容的不同需要，有變化地、豐富地使用不同句式，以變換節奏，可以使語言抑揚有致。

3．善于運用修辭手法，指修飾文字詞句，運用各種表現方式，使語言表達得準確、鮮明而生動有力，可以化抽象為具體，變枯燥為生動，使語言表達文采斐然。

4．文句有表現力，是指語言不直白，不淺露，言簡意賅，蘊含深邃的意境和深刻的哲理，讓讀者有咀嚼、回味的余地，能給人以啟迪和教益。

◎失誤作文

別讓環境決定你的命運

寧夏考生

中國自古就有“時勢造英雄”這說法，很早就強調環境對命運的影響。不錯！一個人縱使擁有滿腹才華，一身武藝，但倘若社會不能為人提供良好的發展，展示空間，那么想要成功也只是空想罷了。

而我認為，我們不能改變環境的惡劣，我們阻止不了時間帶來的成長，我們回避不了成才路上的波折和磨難，所以，我們要求自己有頑強不屈的毅力和適應環境的勇氣。

狼對自己身處的環境，總是不斷體驗，以躲避危險，發現食物，從而頑強地生存下來。它懂得，物競天擇，適者生存，面對弱肉強食的自然界的殘酷，它只有依靠自己的強大，才能生存。它不能改變自然界的生存法則，于是，它改變自己。它沒有屈服于環境，所以，它是生命的強者。

蓮，出淤泥而不染，濯清漣而不妖。扎根在骯臟的污泥中，蓮卻沒有自甘墮落，而是不斷凈化自己，使自己變得美麗，變得高潔。盡管成長環境如此惡劣，它還是堅守住了自己。面對人們驚羨的目光，它笑了，它知道自己的付出是值得的，它知道自己的堅守是正確的。

阿里巴巴的總裁馬云，出生在一個貧困的家庭，鄰里也大多是沒有文化的社會最底層的人，他們的孩子大都早早輟學，或跟著媽媽去市場賣菜，或跟著爸爸去建筑工地上搬磚遞瓦?？粗@些，小馬云心里非常清楚，只有努力學習才能讓自己走出這種命運，不再成為那些孩子的“翻版”。他成績優異，英語這門課卻讓他頭疼，爸媽沒有能力支付高額的英語輔導費，他便趁著放假的時候，去高級賓館等外國人經常出入的地方，目的只有一個，練習英語。當時有一個外國人說，相信這個孩子長大后肯定有不平凡的成就。的確，他成功了，環境并沒有把他嚇住，家庭的貧困也沒能阻擋住他那顆有夢的心。

環境可能會制約一個人的成長，但是，環境卻不能決定一個人的命運，惡劣環境中成長起來的人才比比皆是，我們沒有什么理由喋喋不休地抱怨父母、家庭、學校、社會。

別讓環境決定你的命運!◎誤區警示

本文論述了“別讓環境決定你的命運”這一中心論點，中心明確，結構清楚。但語言不夠生動，不能有效地運用一些句式與修辭，缺少一定的文采。

◎升格作文

別讓環境決定你的命運

陡峭的懸崖上，也有挺立的孤松；寒冷的冬天里，也有傲雪的紅梅；猛烈的暴風雨下，也有翱翔的海鷗；湍急的流水中，也有溯流而上不屈的鮭魚。

我們不能改變環境的惡劣，我們阻止不了時間帶來的成長，我們回避不了成才路上的波折和磨難，所以，我們要求自己有頑強不屈的毅力和適應環境的勇氣。

狼對自己身處的環境，總是不斷體驗，以躲避危險，發現食物，從而頑強地生存下來。它懂得，物競天擇，適者生存，面對弱肉強食的自然界的殘酷，它只有依靠自己的強大，才能生存。它不能改變自然界的生存法則，于是，它改變自己。它沒有屈服于環境，所以，它是生命的強者。

蓮，出淤泥而不染，濯清漣而不妖。扎根在骯臟的污泥中，蓮卻沒有自甘墮落，而是不斷凈化自己，使自己變得美麗，變得高潔。盡管成長環境如此惡劣，它還是堅守住了自己。面對人們驚羨的目光，它笑了，它知道自己的付出是值得的，它知道自己的堅守是正確的。

人才的成長之路也是如此：不屈服于環境，不安于現狀，不斷向前，永不言棄。

阿里巴巴的總裁馬云，出生在一個貧困的家庭，鄰里也大多是沒有文化的社會最底層的人，他們的孩子大都早早輟學，或跟著媽媽去市場賣菜，或跟著爸爸去建筑工地上搬磚遞瓦?？粗@些，小馬云心里非常清楚，只有努力學習才能讓自己走出這種命運，不再成為那些孩子的“翻版”。他成績優異，英語這門課卻讓他頭疼，爸媽沒有能力支付高額的英語輔導費，他便趁著放假的時候，去高級賓館等外國人經常出入的地方，目的只有一個，練習英語。當時有一個外國人說，相信這個孩子長大后肯定有不平凡的成就。的確，他成功了，環境并沒有把他嚇倒，家庭的貧困也沒能阻擋住他那顆有夢的心。

環境可能會制約一個人的成長，但是，環境卻不能決定一個人的命運，惡劣環境中成長起來的人才比比皆是，我們又有什么理由喋喋不休地抱怨父母、抱怨家庭、抱怨學校、抱怨社會，止步不前呢？

人的發展潛力是無窮無盡的，別讓環境決定你的命運！

◎特征點突破技巧

1．妙用生動的詞語。詞語生動是指在恰當的基礎上增強詞語的表現力，就是要求我們選用恰當精妙的、新鮮傳神的、具有形象性的、極具表現力的詞語，使所描述的對象給人如聞其聲、如見其形、如臨其境的感覺，以增強感染力；把所闡發的事理表達得清楚明白，深刻透徹，以增強說服力。

2．巧用漂亮的修辭。巧用修辭，指在文章中巧妙地運用比喻、擬人、夸張、排比、對偶、借代、反問和設問等辭格。修辭手法的巧妙運用，能增強語言的表現力和感染力，是保證語言精彩的一個最簡單也最有效的手段。運用排比，敘述則氣韻流暢，描寫則文筆奔放，議論則汪洋肆意，抒情則一瀉千里，極易撩動人的心弦；運用比喻，語言形象生動，文章激情飛揚；運用擬人，行文新穎，精巧別致；運用反問，加強語氣，搖曳多姿。

3．活用靈動的句式。在一篇文章中，能根據文章內容、體裁等特點，從強化表情達意的效果出發，恰當而自如地變換使用各種不同句式，既不顯單

一、貧乏，而是豐富多樣；又不顯單調死板，而是變化多姿。文言語句含蓄典雅，口頭用語簡練潑辣，長句周詳嚴密，短句簡潔明快，獨詞句鮮明突出，感嘆句便于抒情，對偶句鏗鏘凝練，反復句余韻悠然，排比句氣勢磅礴，反問句加重強調，引人深思?？傊?，要句隨意轉，活潑靈動。

4．善用哲理的文句。所謂有哲理的文句，往往是在精短的語句中包含著深刻的道理，其道理可以說是人們在實際生活中的體驗或感悟?？梢杂妹跃浔磉_哲理，可以用深厚意蘊表達哲理，可以用濃郁思辨表達哲理。

創新點四 有創意

◎特征點解讀

“有創意”是對文章立意、選材、結構等方面的要求。它包括見解新穎，材料新鮮，構思新巧，推理想象有獨到之處，有個性特征。

1．見解新穎，針對的是作者的認識、看法，考生要用自己的眼光去看別人見過的事物，在深刻感悟、真切體驗的基礎上，提出創造性的新見解。

2．材料新鮮，針對的是寫作素材的選用，考生寫進文章中的事例要具有濃郁的生活氣息和時代感、新鮮感。不要使用陳舊俗氣的事例材料，多多了解社會的熱點問題對滿足這一要求極有幫助。

3．構思新巧，主要是就結構而言的，指文章的謀篇布局應當以新立意，不落俗套，以巧構造，引人入勝?？忌鑼Σ牧线M行正面、側面、反面等多角度的分析思考，體會和領悟所要表達的思想的深刻與重要，再結合立意選定一個恰當的角度切入，下筆成文時能夠選用合適的體裁并能靈活運用多種寫作方法。

4．推理想象有獨到之處，是就思維過程而言的。考生應該對材料進行正面、側面、反面等多角度的分析思考，選定一個恰當的角度切入，能夠變換角色，體會和領悟所要表達的思想的深刻與重要，能夠靈活運用象征、擬人、科幻等手法與形式，改變那種僵化死板的說教方式。5．有個性特征，針對的是文章的特色、風格。指文章的整體風格有鮮明的個性特色，這是對“有創意”的最高要求。

◎失誤作文 光與影的合奏 山東考生

光與影有著和諧的旋律，如梵婀玲上奏著的名曲。

——題記

看光影變幻，斑斑駁駁，抑揚頓挫，于人生添一抹傳奇色彩?！芭e世渾濁而我獨清，眾人皆醉而我獨醒?！鼻樱昧硕啻蟮挠職獠诺挚棺∪碎g的凜冽寒風，踽踽獨行？他是個柔弱的文人，卻也是一位堅貞的楚國大夫，正道直行，不同流合污。他是那個龐大的污濁池中一點明亮的星光，執著地堅守著內心的高潔。他眼看山河破碎，心痛滴血；他緊握手中酌筆，將正義情懷傾瀉而出，至今還刺痛無數人的神經?！耙嘤嘈闹瀑?，雖九死其猶未悔。”他以一曲《離騷》響徹云霄。但現實的殘酷最終摧毀了他內心的光明，破滅的陰影揮之不去。于是，汨羅江邊，他衣袂飄飄，將頭顱高高揚起，縱身躍入江中。這一躍，成就了人世間最永恒的堅守。光與影的迷離中，幻化出一位驚世駭俗的正人君子，傳唱千秋。“獻我最熱的一滴眼淚，我的信仰，至誠，和愛的力量，永遠膜拜，膜拜在你美的面前?！绷只找颍窃娙?，是建筑家，更是人間四月天。她曾經在陰影中艱難前行，病魔纏身讓她痛苦不已，戰爭歲月的陰郁和悲愴讓她的內心無法平靜，但她依舊堅強，在窮鄉僻壤中奔走，去深山荒郊尋訪古廟、文物、遺跡，在艱苦的環境下堅持做學問，只因現實的陰影永遠熄滅不了她內心的熾熱光芒。她嬌小柔弱，卻和力與美交融的建筑凝為一體。她是幽晦林中的一抹光，回響成精神空谷中的一串清音。她的堅強，在與困難環境的交融下，奏出的音樂竟如此高亢，如此美麗動人。

人生因為有了光明而耀眼，也因為有了陰影而富有內涵。前途是光明的，道路是曲折的。我不會再為身處困境而惆悵，也不會為取得—點成績而驕傲，因為我明白，無論是光還是影，都是人生樂譜中美妙的音符。

請讓光與影合奏，譜出屬于我們的奇跡。

◎誤區警示

本文運用屈原和林徽因的例子很好地說明了“看光影變幻，斑斑駁駁，抑揚頓挫，于人生添一抹傳奇色彩”這一主題。但文章構思不夠新巧，視角不夠新穎（如用第三人稱給人以疏遠感），分析也缺少理性。

◎升格作文 光與影的合奏

光與影有著和諧的旋律，如梵婀玲上奏著的名曲?！}記

看光影變幻，斑斑駁駁，抑揚頓挫，于人生添一抹傳奇色彩。

是你告訴我，光是堅守，影是破滅，光和影的交織下，奏出一首鏗鏘激昂的交響曲——“舉世渾濁我獨清，眾人皆醉我獨醒?！鼻樱阌昧硕啻蟮挠職獾挚棺∪碎g的凜冽寒風，踽踽獨行？你是個柔弱的文人，卻也是一位堅貞的楚國大夫，正道直行，不同流合污。你是那個龐大的污濁池中一點明亮的星光，執著地堅守著內心的高潔。你眼看山河破碎，心痛滴血；你緊握手中酌筆，將正義情懷傾瀉而出，至今還刺痛無數人的神經。“亦余心之所善兮，雖九死其猶未悔?！蹦阋砸磺峨x騷》響徹云霄。但現實的殘酷最終摧毀了你內心的光明，破滅的陰影揮之不去。于是，汨羅江邊，你衣袂飄飄，將頭顱高高揚起，縱身躍入江中。這一躍，成就了人世間最永恒的堅守。光與影的迷離中，幻化出一位驚世駭俗的正人君子，傳唱千秋。

屈子，你是一抹光，在與陰影的合奏中，譜寫了一曲傳奇。

是你告訴我，光是堅強，影是困苦，光和影的交織下，奏出一曲溫暖人心的輕音樂——“獻我最熱的一滴眼淚，我的信仰，至誠，和愛的力量，永遠膜拜，膜拜在你美的面前?！绷只找?，你是詩人，是建筑家，更是人間四月天。你曾經在陰影中艱難前行，病魔纏身讓你痛苦不已，戰爭歲月的陰郁和悲愴讓你的內心無法平靜，但你依舊堅強，在窮鄉僻壤中奔走，去深山荒郊尋訪古廟、文物、遺跡，在艱苦的環境下堅持做學問，只因現實的陰影永遠熄滅不了你內心的熾熱火焰。你嬌小柔弱，卻和力與美交融的建筑凝為一體。你是幽晦林中的一抹光，回響成精神空谷中的一串清音。你的堅強，在與困難環境的交融下，奏出的音樂竟如此高亢，如此美麗動人。

林徽因，你是一抹光，在與陰影的合奏中，譜寫了一段如此不可思議的旋律。

托爾斯泰說過：“人生的一切變化，一切魅力，一切美都是由光明和陰影構成的?！辈辉廊松诠饷髋c陰影交織下原來如此豐富多彩。梵·高的成與敗，謝娜的當紅與背后的辛酸……他們，他們的光與影，都演奏著動人的音樂。

人生因為有了光明而耀眼，也因為有了陰影而富有內涵。前途是光明的，道路是曲折的。我不會再為身處困境而惆悵，也不會為取得點成績而驕傲，因為我明白，無論是光還是影，都是人生樂譜中美妙的音符。

請讓光與影合奏，奏出屬于你的奇跡。

◎特征點突破技巧

1．可在構思立意與選材取材上進行創新。文章要寫得視角獨特，富有新意，關鍵在于立意與選材。這就要求考生，立意要善于跳出陳舊的框框，力求“言前人所未言，發前人所未發”?；蚺c時俱進以求新，或自出機杼以求新，或打破定勢以求新，或老歌翻唱以求新。觀察事物要視野開闊，要善于聯系社會時代背景，關注現實人生；并能多角度、多層面地進行觀察和分析，從而透過表面現象看清事物的真實本質。2．可在文體形式與表現手法上進行創新。①選取比較得心應手的文體形式。如日記、書信，這是抒發情感、刻畫內心的最好形式；章回體（可以擬寫小標題），可使許多復雜的故事和情感變得條理有序；劇本，能夠在有限的時間和空間中，將故事情節壓縮在幾個人物、幾個場景和幾段對話中，表現獨特的主題；童話、寓言和科學幻想，有利于學生發揮自己的想象力，寫出生動、新穎、神奇的故事；其他如小小說、調查報告、網絡聊天、新聞、演講詞等，都可成為文體的創新形式。②采用新穎而得體的表現手法來布局結構。如日記綴連式，用之于考場作文的布局，具有層次分明、過渡簡便、感情真摯等優點；鏡頭組接式，可以把發生在不同時間、不同地點、不同場景的不同鏡頭按一定的順序有機地連接起來，可以突破時空局限，靈活自由，變而不亂，視覺強烈；散點式，即圍繞一個中心，從數個點上進行發散、鋪排，每個點都有一個精美的句段，數個點連成一體就是一篇優美的散文，這種“散點式”習作最突出的優點是層次明晰、語言優美、情感濃郁；小劇本式，因其時空情節集中，矛盾沖突尖銳，臺詞簡練生動等優點而引人入勝。

3．可在語言方式上進行創新。形式的創新要落“實”，必須通過語言標志來突出文體特征，如出現年、月、日、星期、天氣可表明是日記體；出現標題、電頭、導語、主體可表明是新聞體；出現四、五、七字對仗句和“話說”“欲知后事如何且聽下回分解”等套語可表明是章回體等等。

“有創意”的前提是有個性。在命題、立意、選材、結構、語言、表達方式等方面個性突出，別具一格，令人信服和感動的文章就是“有創意”的文章。

第四篇：高考英語作文萬能寫作及句型

歡迎關注@高考直通車 微博：http://weibo.com/gaokao96040 社會熱點的兩種寫作模式

一種以社會熱點引出的問題開頭，著重于現象背后的緣由以及其解決方案。另一種以分析可爭議問題的兩面性為主。Hot Issue型(1)模板一

With the development of modern industry, more and more people are concerned about the problem that ______________(主題問題).Accordingly, _______________________________(伴隨主題問題出現的新問題)is becoming more and more serious。

Confronted with ___________________________(主題問題)，we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing, _________________________(解決方法1).For another, _________________________________(解決方法2).Finally, _________________________________(解決方法3)。

As far as I am concerned, the best way out is ________________________(解決方法3).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ____________________(解決方法3的優點和好處)。(2)模板二

With the development of the society, with the advent of _____________(相關事物或現象)，we have to face a problem that ______________________(主題問題)。

What are the reasons for it? In the following paragraphs, I’ll venture to explore the reasons.To start with, _____________________(闡述原因1).Moreover, __________________(闡述原因2).In addition, _______________________(闡述原因3)。

In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures should be taken.For one thing, it is high time that people all over China realized the importance of __________________(解決主題問題).For another, the government should issue strict laws and regulations in order to put the situation under control。

利弊型(1)模板一

Nowadays many people prefer __________(主題)because it plays a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.On the one hand, 高考直通車網站：http://www.tmdps.cn/ 歡迎關注@高考直通車 微博：http://weibo.com/gaokao96040 ________________(主題的優點1).On the other hand, ___________________(主題的優點2)。

But everything can be divided into two.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that ___________________(主題的缺點1).To make matters worse, __________________________(主題的缺點2)。

Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects far outweigh its negative aspects.Whatever effects it has, one thing is certain, ________(主題)itself is neither good nor bad.It is the uses to which it is put that determine its value to our society。(2)模板二

With the development of science and human civilization, many formerly unimaginable things come into reality.Some of them have positive effects on our life, but some are distasteful.The phenomenon of ________(主題現象)is an example of the former / latter one。

There are many factors that may account for it, and the following are the most conspicuous aspects.To start with, __________________(原因1).Furthermore, ______________________(原因2).Eventually, __________________________(原因3)。Good as ____________(主題現象)is, it has, unfortunately, its disadvantages.The apparent example is that ___________(缺點例子1).In addition, ___________(缺點例子2)。

On the whole, the phenomenon is one of the results of the progress of the modern society.There is still a long way for us to improve / eliminate __________(主題現象)and make our life more comfortable。

高考直通車網站：http://www.tmdps.cn/ 歡迎關注@高考直通車 微博：http://weibo.com/gaokao96040 對比觀點題型（1）要求論述兩個對立的觀點并給出自己的看法。1． 有一些人認為…… 2． 另一些人認為…… 3． 我的看法……

The topic of ①------------（主題）is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------(理由二).Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥------------------（理由二）.Thirdly(finally),⑦------------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的觀點）.The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.（2）給出一個觀點，要求考生反對這一觀點

Some people believe that ①----------------（觀點一）.For example, they think ②-----------------（舉例說明）．And it will bring them ③-----------------(為他們帶來的好處).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④-------------(我不同意該看法的理由一).For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反對的理由之二)．

Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我對文章所討論主題的看法)．

闡述主題題型

要求從一句話或一個主題出發，按照提綱的要求進行論述． 1． 闡述名言或主題所蘊涵的意義． 2． 分析并舉例使其更充實．

The good old proverb----------------（名言或諺語）reminds us that----------------(釋義).Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of all,-----------------(理由一).For example,-------------------(舉例說明).Secondly,----------------(理由二).Another case is that---------------(舉例說明).Furthermore ,------------------(理由三)．

高考直通車網站：http://www.tmdps.cn/ 歡迎關注@高考直通車 微博：http://weibo.com/gaokao96040 In my opinion,----------------(我的觀點).In short, whatever you do, please remember the say------A.If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it 解決方法題型

要求考生列舉出解決問題的多種途徑 1． 問題現狀

2． 怎樣解決(解決方案的優缺點)In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.First,------------(說明A的現狀)．Second,---------------(舉例進一步說明現狀)Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,---------------(解決方法一).For another-------------(解決方法二).Finally,--------------(解決方法三).Personally, I believe that-------------(我的解決方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because--------------(帶來的好處).說明利弊題型

這種題型往往要求先說明一下現狀，再對比事物本身的利弊，有時也會單從一個角度（利或弊）出發，最后往往要求考生表明自己的態度（或對事物前景提出預測）1． 說明事物現狀

2． 事物本身的優缺點（或一方面）3． 你對現狀（或前景）的看法

Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First----------------(A的優點之一).Besides-------------------（A的優點之二）.But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that----------------(A的第一個缺點)．To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二個缺點)．

Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to---------------(我的看法)．

(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way,---------------(對前景的預測)．)

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(1)不同觀點列舉型（選擇型）

There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文題目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 觀點一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___觀點一_____.People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___觀點二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand，___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___觀點二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __觀點一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.（2）利弊型的議論文

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文題目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __題目議題_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___優點一______.And secondly ___優點二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __討論議題______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺點一______.In addition, ____缺點二______.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __討論議題____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____討論議題___.(3)答題性議論文

Currently, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)__作文題目_______.It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.First of all, __途徑一______.In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途徑二_____.高考直通車網站：http://www.tmdps.cn/ 歡迎關注@高考直通車 微博：http://weibo.com/gaokao96040 Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文題目______, we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.(4)諺語警句性議論文

It is well know to us that the proverb: “ ___諺語_______” has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study.It means ____諺語的含義_______.The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows.(also theoretically)A case in point is ___例子一______.Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____諺語_____.With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____諺語_____.The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job..圖表作文的框架

as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文題目的議題_____ has been on rise/ decrease(goesup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____.From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______.On the one hand, ________.On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________.In addition, ________ is responsible for _______.Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________.But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______.I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.實用性寫作(申請信)Your address Month, Date, year Receiver's address Dear..., 高考直通車網站：http://www.tmdps.cn/ 歡迎關注@高考直通車 微博：http://weibo.com/gaokao96040 I am extremely pleased to hear from you./ to see your advertisement for the position in....And I would like to write a letter to tell you that.../ I am confident that I am suitable for the kind of the job you are advertising..../ I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed.On the one hand,....On the other hand,....I am enclosing my resume for your kind consideration and reference.I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview.I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/ I am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience.Best regards for your health and success.Sincerely yours, X X X

英語作文模板：現象說明文

Recently ____,what amazes us most is_______,it is ture that__________.There are many reasons explaining____.The main reason is_____.What is more________________.Thirdly______________.As a result_______________.Considering all there,____________.For one thing_______,for another________ ____.In Conclusion____________________.高考直通車網站：http://www.tmdps.cn/ 歡迎關注@高考直通車 微博：http://weibo.com/gaokao96040 句型 一.開頭句型

1.As far as...is concerned

2.It goes without saying that...3.It can be said with certainty that...4.As the proverb says，5.It has to be noticed that...6.It`s generally recognized that...7.It`s likely that...8.It`s hardly that...9.It’s hardly too much to say that...10.What calls for special attention is that...需要特別注意的是

11.There’s no denying the fact that...毫無疑問，無可否認

12.Nothing is more important than the fact that...13.what’s far more important is that...二.銜接句型

A case in point is...As is often the case...As stated in the previous paragraph 如前段所述

But the problem is not so simple.Therefore 然而問題并非如此簡單，所以……

But it’s a pity that...高考直通車網站：http://www.tmdps.cn/ 歡迎關注@高考直通車 微博：http://weibo.com/gaokao96040

For all that...In spite of the fact that...Further, we hold opinion that...However , the difficulty lies in...Similarly, we should pay attention to...not(that)...but(that)...不是，而是

In view of the present station.鑒于目前形勢

As has been mentioned above...In this respect, we may as well(say)從這個角度上我們可以說

However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, that is...然而我們還得看到事物的另一方面，即 …

三.結尾句型

I will conclude by saying...Therefore, we have the reason to believe that...All things considered,總而言之

It may be safely said that...Therefore, in my opinion, it’s more advisable...From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that….The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that….It can be concluded from the discussion that...從中我們可以得出這樣的結論

From my point of view, it would be better if...在我看來……也許更好

四.舉例句型

Let’s take...to illustrate this.試舉例以茲證明

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let’s take the above chart as an example to

illustrate this.Here is one more example.Take … for example.The same is true of….This offers a typical instance of….We may quote a common example of….Just think of….五.常用于引言段的句型

1.Some people think that ….To be frank, I can not agree with their opinion for the reasons below.2.For years, … has been seen as …, but things are quite different now.3.I believe the title statement is valid because….4.I cannot entirely agree with the idea that ….I believe….5.My argument for this view goes as follows.6.Along with the development of…, more and more….7.There is a long-running debate as to whether….8.It is commonly/generally/widely/ believed /held/accepted/recognized that….9.As far as I am concerned, I completely agree with the former/ the latter.10.Before giving my opinion, I think it is essential to look at the argument of both sides.六 表示比較和對比的常用句型和表達法

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1.A is completely / totally / entirely different from B.2.A and B are different in some/every way / respect / aspect.3.A and B differ in….4.A differs from B in….5.The difference between A and B is/lies in/exists in….6.Compared with/In contrast to/Unlike A, B….7.A…, on the other hand,/in contrast,/while/whereas B….8.While it is generally believed that A …, I believe B….9.Despite their similarities, A and B are also different.10.Both A and B ….However, A…;on the other hand, B….11.The most striking difference is that A…, while B….七 演繹法常用的句型

1.There are several reasons for…, but in general, they come down to three major ones.2.There are many factors that may account for…, but the following are the most typical ones.3.Many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the following ones may be most effective.4.Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows.5.The reasons are as follows.八 因果推理法常用句型

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3.We read the book;as a result / therefore / thus / hence / consequently / for this reason / because of this, we’ve learned a lot.4.As a result of /Because of/Due to/Owing to reading the book, we’ve learned a lot.5.The cause of/reason for/overw eight is eating too much.6.Overweight is caused by/due to/because of eating too much.7.The effect/consequence/result of eating too much is overweight.8.Eating too much causes/results in/leads to overweight.高考直通車網站：http://www.tmdps.cn/ 歡迎關注@高考直通車 微博：http://weibo.com/gaokao96040

一、英語書信的常見寫作模板：

開頭部分：

How nice to hear from you again.Let me tell you something about the activity.I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr.9th.I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.結尾部分：

With best wishes.I’m looking forward to your reply.I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.二、口頭通知常見寫作模板：

呼語及開場白部分：

Ladies and gentlemen，May I have your attention，please? I have an announcement to make.正文部分：

All the teachers and students are required to attend it.Please take your notebooks and make notes.Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups.Please come on time and don’t be late.結束語部分：

Please come and join in it.Everybody is welcome to attend it.I hope you’ll have a nice time here.That’s all.Thank you.高考直通車網站：http://www.tmdps.cn/ 歡迎關注@高考直通車 微博：http://weibo.com/gaokao96040

三、議論文模板

1.正反觀點式議論文模板

導入：

第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should...（導入話題）

Our opinions are divided on this topic.（觀點有分歧）

正文：

第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.（正方觀點）

Here are the reasons.First...Second...Finally...(列出2~3個贊成的理由)

第3段：However，the others are strongly against it.（反方觀點）

Their reasons are as follows.In the first place...What’s more...In addition...(列出2~3個反對的理由)

結論：

第4段：Personally speaking，the advantages overweigh the disadvantages，for it will do us more harm than good，so I support it.（個人觀點）オ

2.“A或者B”類議論文模板：

導入：

第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways.Others，however，argue that B is much better.Personally，I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.正文：

第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A.The main reason is that...Another reason is that...(贊同A的原因)

第3段: Of course，B also has advantages to some extent...(列出1~2個B的優勢)

結論：

第4段: But if all these factors are considered，A is much better than B.From what has been discussed above，we may finally draw the conclusion that...(得出結論)オ

3.觀點論述類議論文模板：

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導入：

第1段：提出一種現象或某個決定作為議論的話題

As a student，I am strongly in favour of the decision.（亮明自己的觀點是贊成還是反對）

The reasons for this may be listed as follows.（過渡句，承上啟下）

正文：

第2段：First of all...Secondly...Besides...(列出2~3個贊成或反對的理由)

結論：

第3段：In conclusion，I believe that...（照應第1段，構成“總—分—總”結構）

4.“How to”類議論文模板：

導入：

第1段：提出一種現象或某種困難作為議論的話題

正文：

第2段：Many ways can help to solve this serious problem，but the following may be most effective.First of all...Another way to solve the problem is...Finally...(列出2~3個解決此類問題的辦法)

結論：

第3段：These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take.But it should be noted that we should take action to...(強調解決此類問題的根本方法)

四、圖表作文寫作模板：

The chart gives us an overall picture of the 圖表主題.The first thing we notice is that 圖表最大特點.This means that as(進一步說明).We can see from the statistics given that 圖表細節一.After 動詞-ing 細節一中的第一個

變化，the動詞-ed+幅度+時間(緊跟著的變化).The figures also tell us that圖表細節二.In

the column，we can see that accounts for(進一步描述).Judging from these figures，we can draw the conclusion that(結論).The reason for this，as far as I am concerned is that(給出原因)./ It is high time that we(發出倡議).高考直通車網站：http://www.tmdps.cn/ 歡迎關注@高考直通車 微博：http://weibo.com/gaokao96040

五、圖畫類寫作模板

1.開頭

Look at this picture./The picture shows that.../From this picture，we can see.../As is shown in the picture.../As is seen in the picture...2.銜接句

As we all know，.../As is known to all，.../It is well known that.../In my opinion，.../As far as I am concerned，.../This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.3.結尾句

In conclusion.../In brief.../On the whole.../In short.../In a word.../Generally speaking.../As has been stated...高考直通車網站：http://www.tmdps.cn/

第五篇：全國高考英語作文寫作句型及

結尾句：however, ____ does more good than harm to ____.擴展句：what we should do is to ______.范文

china finally succeeded in jointing the WTO after many's efforts.this event will influence the economy in china greatly.jointing the WTO brings china many benefits and opportunities.as a member coutry, china can enjoy many rights that can boost the development of the economy in china.what's more, the chinese people can buy products of high quality with less pay.every thing has two aspects.joining the WTO can also bring us some challenges.for example, some producers may be wiped out because of the intense competition.in addition, it will be more difficult for us to get a job, as the requirement for the employees will become higher.however, this great event does more good than harm to us.what we should do is to improve ourselves to become qualified for certain positions and live a better life.···

三。英文信函題型作文

寫作步驟：

people just bring us steamed bread with their dirty bare hands.and what's more, the fare is also a little higher at university.Some people may argue that measures have been taken and things are improving there.for instance, cards have taken the place of money in the canteen, and the attitude of the service people is also changing.but in my opinon, progress is not so quick and thorough.(徹底的)

四．圖表作文常用句型

As is shown in the graph… 如圖所示… The graph shows that… 圖表顯示…

As can be seen from the table, … 從表格中可以看出… From the chart, we know that… 從這張表中,我們可知…

All these data clearly prove the fact that…所有這些數據明顯證明這一事實,即… The increase of ….in the city has reached to 20%.這個城市的….增長已達到20%.In 1985, the number remained the same.1985年,這個數字保持不變.There was a gradual decline in 1989.1989年,出現了逐漸下降的情況.五。百變句子開頭使你的句型多變

1.以同位語作為句子的開頭。

The most popular teacher in Neworiental, Ma Zihui, will attend the party.2.以單個修飾語作為句子的開頭。

這個修飾語可以是形容詞、分詞或副詞。

Young and ambitious,JieYu works hard to teach Englsih.Secretly, the girl entered the room.With a book in her hands, Fang Meng talked to a foreigner.Exhausted, the students reached the top of the mountain.3.以短語修飾語作為句子的開頭。

短語修飾語可以是介詞短語、不定式短語、分詞短語以及獨立主格結構。

In front of me stood a beautiful girl.To pass the exam, the students worked hard.Confused about the problem, he went to ask for his teacher.Your homework finished, you may go home.4.用從句作為句子的開始。

If I am free, I will attend your lecture.Whenever one goes, whatever one does, one needs money.六。英語高分作文必須要記住的二十六句式

一、~~~ the + ~ est + 名詞 +(that)+ 主語 + have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read, etc)例句：Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.海倫是我所看過最美麗的女孩。Mr.Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.常老師是我曾經遇到最仁慈的教師。

二、Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容詞 + than to + V 例句：Nothing is more important than to receive education.沒有比接受教育更重要的事。

三、~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much.（再怎么強調...的重要性也不為過。）例句：We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.我們再怎么強調保護眼睛的重要性也不為過。

四、There is no denying that + S + V...（不可否認的...）

例句：There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.不可否認的，我們的生活品質已經每況愈下。

五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~（全世界都知道...）

例句：It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.全世界都知道樹木對我們是不可或缺的。

六、There is no doubt that + 句子~~（毫無疑問的...）

例句：There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.毫無疑問的我們的教育制度令人不滿意。

七、An advantage of ~~~ is that + 句子（...的優點是...）

例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won’t create(produce)any pollution.使用太陽能的優點是它不會制造任何污染。

八、The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子（...的原因是...）

例句：The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air.The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.我們必須種樹的原因是它們能供應我們新鮮的空氣。

九、The + ~er + S + V, ~~~ the + ~er + S + V ~~~（愈./越..愈/越...）：The harder you work, the more progress you make.你愈努力，你愈進步。The more books we read, the more learned we become.我們書讀愈多，我們愈。十、By +Ving, ~~ can ~~（借著...，..能夠..）

e.g：By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.借著做運動，我們能夠始終保持健康。

十一、~~~ enable + Object（受詞）+ to + V（..使..能夠..）

例句：Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.聽音樂使我們能夠感覺輕松。

十二、It is time + S + 過去式（該是...的時候了）

例句：It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the trafficproblems.該是有關當局采取適當的措施來解決交通問題的時候了。

十三、Those who ~~~（...的人...）

例句：Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.違反交通規定的人應該受處罰。

十四、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V（不得不...）例句：Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports.既然考試迫在眉睫，我不得不放棄做運動。

十五、It is conceivable that + 句子（可想而知的）

It is obvious that + 句子（明顯的）

It is apparent that + 句子（顯然的）

例句：It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.可想而知，知識在我們的一生中扮演一個重要的角色。

十六、That is the reason why ~~~（那就是...的原因）

例句：Summer is sultry.That is the reason why I don’t like it.夏天很燠熱。那就是我不喜歡它的原因。

十七、Since + S + 過去式，S + 現在完成式。例句：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.自從他上高中，他一直很用功。

十八、be based on（以...為基礎）

例句：The progress of the society is based on harmony.社會的進步是以和諧為基礎的。

十九、be closely related to ~~（與...息息相關）

例句：Taking exercise is closely related to health.做運動與健康息息相關。

二十、Get into the habit of + Ving= make it a rule to + V（養成...的習例句：We should get into the habit of keeping good hours.= we should make it a rule to keep good hours.我們應該養成早睡早起的習慣。二

十一、What a + Adj + N + S + V!= How + Adj + a + N + V!（多么...！)例句：What an important thing it is to keep our promise!How important a thing it is to keep our promise!遵守諾言是多么重要的事！二

十二、Leave much to be desired（令人不滿意）

例句：The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired.我們的交通狀況令人不滿意。

二十三、Have a great influence on ~~~（對...有很大的影響）

例句：Smoking has a great influence on our health.抽煙對我們的健康有很大的響。二

十四、do good to（對...有益），do harm to（對...有害）例句：Reading does good to our mind.讀書對心靈有益。Overwork does harm to health.工作過度對健康有害。

二十五、Pose a great threat to ~~（對...造成一大威脅）

e.g：Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.污染對我們的生存造成一大威脅。二

十六、do one’s utmost/best to + V = do one’s best（盡全力去...）例句：We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.我們應盡全力去達成我們的人生目標。

七。

作文套句總結

開頭

1.Recently, the problem of … has aroused people’s concern.最近,…問題已引起人們的關注.2.Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.互聯網已在我們的生活中扮演著越來越重要的角色.它給我們帶來了許多好處,但也產生了一些嚴重的問題.3.Nowadays,(overpopulation)has become a problem we have to face.如今,(人口過剩)已成為我們不得不面對的問題了.4.It is commonly believed that… / It is a common belief that…人們一般認為… Many people insist that…很多人堅持認為…

5.With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that … 隨著科技的發展,越來越多的人認為…

6.A lot of people seem to think that…很多人似乎認為… 結尾

1.Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that… 把所有這些因素加以考慮,我們自然會得出結論…

2.Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that … 考慮所有這些因素, 我們可能會得出合理的結論…

3.Hence/Therefore, we’d better come to the conclusion that… 因此,我們最好得出這樣的結論…

4.There is no doubt that(job-hopping)has its drawbacks as well as merits.毫無疑問,跳槽有優點也有缺點.5.All in all, we cannot live without… But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.總之,我們沒有…是無法生活的.但同時,我們必須尋求新的解決辦法來對付可能出現的新問題.過渡詞 1.強調

still, Indeed, apparently, oddly enough, of course, after all, significantly, interestingly, also, above all, surely, certainly, undoubtedly, in any case, anyway, above all, in fact, especially, obviously, clearly.2.比較

like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same manner, equally.3對比

by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas, on the other hand, unlike, instead, but, conversely, different from, however, nevertheless, otherwise, whereas, unlike, yet, in contrast.4列舉 for example, for instance, such as, take …for example.Except(for), to illustrate.5.時間

later, next, then, finally, at last, eventually, meanwhile, from now on, at the same time, for the time being, in the end, immediately, in the meantime, in the meanwhile, recently, soon, now and then, during,nowadays, since, lately, as soon as, afterwards, temporarily, earlier, now, after a while.6.順序

first, second, third, then, finally, to begin with, first of all, in the first place, last, next, above all, last but not the least, first and most important.7可能presumably(可能), probably, perhaps.8解釋 in other words, in fact, as a matter of fact, that is, namely, in simpler terms.9遞進What is more, in addition, and, besides, also, furthermore, too, moreover, furthermore, as well as, additionally, again.10.讓步although, after all, in spite of…, despite, even if, even though, though, admittedly, whatever may happen.11轉折however, rather than, instead of, but, yet, on theother hand, unfortunately.whereas 12原因

for this reason, due to, thanks to, because, because of, as, since, owing to.13結果

as a result, thus, hence, so, therefore, accordingly, consequently, as consequence.14總結

on the whole, in conclusion, in a word, to sum up, in brief, in summary, to conclude, to summarize, in short.15其他

Mostly, occasionally, currently, naturally, mainly, exactly, evidently, frankly, commonly, for this purpose, to a large extent, for most of us, in many cases, in this case.