第一篇：小語2011高考書面表達

2011年安徽英語(論壇)高考卷的的英語書面表達屬于開放式作文。提示材料要求以“My Approach to Difficultiea in Learning”為題，為某校英文報“Experience”專欄寫一篇短文，談談自己在解決學習困難的一些做法，詞數100左右。

試題材料是關于學生學習生活方面的，情景貼近實際，試題整體難度適中。本題考查了考生英語語言運用能力，分析問題及解決問題的能力。材料沒有給出具體的寫作內容要點，因此，考生可以根據材料要求，進行思考和展開想象，自由發揮的空間很大。考生在寫作時，要以學習困難的解決方法為中心，細審題，列提綱，謀篇布局，遣詞造句，連句成篇。注意采用的時態應該是過去時和現在時相結合，以第一人稱為主，恰當準確使用過渡詞匯，做到短文結構緊湊，層次分明，通順自然，上下連貫。同時，還要注意卷面整潔，避免低級錯誤，寫好開頭結尾。

附：高考(微博)英語作文評分原則和評分標準

高考的評分原則以及評分標準是考生平常進行寫作訓練的指導原則，是考生在高考時進行寫作的規范，也是高考閱卷老師評分給分的一個重要依據和標準。

（一）評分原則：

1、本題總分為25分，按5個檔次給分。

2、評分時，先根據文章的內容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調整檔次，最后給分。

3、詞數少于80和多于120的，從總分中減去2分。

4、評分時應注意的主要內容為：內容要點、應用詞匯和語法結構的數量和準確性及上下文的連貫性。

5、拼寫與標點符號是語言準確性的一個方面。評分時應視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。

第二篇：高考書面表達

書面表達范文

例文一：

據說，中國有一半人在吸煙。許多男孩和女孩都有吸煙的習慣，盡管他們還是中學生。

眾所周知，吸煙對人身體是有害的。越來越多的人們認識到這個問題的嚴重性，但他們仍然樂此不疲。

吸煙能導致很多疾病。由于吸煙，一些人一直在咳嗽。肺癌是吸煙導致的最嚴重的疾病。同時，吸煙很浪費金錢。除此而外，粗心的煙民還可能引起火災。

為了保證人們的身體健康，我們應當改掉吸煙的壞習慣。請立即停止吸煙吧。

It is said that there are about half of people in China are smoking.Many young boys and girls have the habit of smoking, though they are middle school students.As we all know, smoking does great harm to human beings.More and more people have come to realize how serious this problem is.But they are never bored with it.Smoking causes many illnesses.A lot of people always cough because of smoking.The most serious illness caused by smoking is lung cancer.Meanwhile smoking is a waste of money.Besides, careless smokers may cause dangerous fires.In order to keep healthy, we should get rid of the bad habit of smoking.Please stop smoking at once.例文二：

What is happiness in my mind?

Happiness means different things to different people.For example, some students, believe that if they have much money, they will be happy.They believe that they will be able to do anything they want to if they have much money.Some students think that they should be in good health, and enjoy whatever they like.Many students wish to have much wealth from their parents.In this way they don’t have to work hard, and they can own everything.I don’t quite agree with the above points.I don’t think money means happiness.We can’t buy many of the things with money, such as health and knowledge, I value knowledge, which makes me happy, for I can do much for mankind with knowledge.Although different people value happiness differently, my happiness comes from my study.例文三：

進入2l世紀，環保是引起世界各國重視的大問題。請你根據以下要點寫一篇80字左右的短文，談談你對環境污染的看法。

1．污染現已成為全球問題。空氣、河流、海洋、土壤的污染對人類和動物十分有害。

2．列舉2-3種產生污染的原輛以及由此造成的嚴重后果。

3．希望人們都能采取有效辦法，控制污染，凈化環境，保護生態平衡。（平衡：balance）In the world today, pollution has become a serious problem facing man and his planet.The air, seas, rivers and soil have been seriously polluted by all kinds of waste and poisonous matter.It does great harm not only to human beings but also to aninmls and plants.We can’t have fresh air.Fish died front polluted water.It is reported that strange diseases havc appeared in many places

because of pollution.I hope that all the people in the world will take necessary steps and effective

measures to solve this serious problem.We arc looking forward to the coming of the day when we

see pollution effectively controlled and air cleaned.It is indeed our urgent task to do everything

possible to protect our ecological environment and to keep nature in good balance.例文四（2012高考題）

春節是中國的傳統節日。請以Spring Festival為題，寫一篇英語作文，介紹一下人們是

如何歡度春節的。

作文必須包括以下要點：

1.春節是一個家人團聚的節日，人們從四面八方回到家。

2.除夕夜，家庭成員坐在桌邊，享用豐盛美味的食物。

3.在春節期間，孩子們會很開心。他們可以整天地玩耍，不用上學。而且，他們還能

得到許多壓歲錢。

4.春節也是人們休閑和走親訪友的日子。人們彼此祝福“新年快樂”，并希望來年有好

運。

The Spring Festival is a traditional Chinese holiday and is celebrated on the first day of the

lunar year.It is a time for family members to get together.People go back home from all parts of

the country.On New Year’s Eve, the family sit at the table with a lot of dishes and enjoy delicious foods.During the Spring Festival, school children will have a good time.They can play all day long

instead of going to school.And they can get money from their parents.The Spring Festival is also a time for people to relax and visit their relatives and friends.They wish each other “A Happy New Year” and hope they will have good luck in the coming year.To us Chinese, the Spring Festival is the most important festival throughout the year.例文五：（2011高考題）

在一個人的成長過程中，常會遇到煩惱。其中之一就是我們的父母親經常翻看我們的書包和日記。假設你將參加校園英語演講比賽，請就這一現象寫一篇英語演講稿，陳述你的觀點。

演講稿的主要內容應包括：

有些同學覺得父母不尊重我們，沒有給我們足夠的空間。我們不必為此苦惱，因

為我們還不夠成熟，有時，無法作出自己的決定，我們需要父母親的幫助。同時，我們必須和父母親進行交流和溝通。畢竟，我們要成長。我們要發展自己的個性。我們

需要有自己的觀點、自己的想法以及自己對事物的判斷。但總有一天，我們會相互理

解的。

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or

read our diaries.Some students feel parents don’t respect us and aren’t giving us enough space to

do what we like.In my opinion, we don’t have to be bothered about this.After all, there are times

when we are not old enough to make our own decisions and are in need of our parents’ help.Meanwhile, we can communicate with our parents, telling them we’re growing up and it’s good

for us to develop our own identity.Besides, we need to have our own opinions , thoughts and form

our own judgement about things.Sooner or later, I believe , we’ll understand each other.Thank you.例文六（2010高考題）

假如你是王紅，今年暑假即將畢業。請以第一人稱給某公司林先生寫一封80-100字的英文求職信。內容要點可用不同方式表達。

求職信必須包括如下要點：

1.今年暑假，我將于東方職業學校畢業。

2.在校期間我的專業是計算機科學。我曾獲得計算機輔助設計（CAD）一等獎。

3.去年，在業余時間，我在一家公司兼職，我學了很多東西。

4.我想在貴公司申請一份職位。我相信我能勝任今后的工作。

5.希望林先生能考慮我的申請。期待著公司能給我一次面試的機會。

A Letter of Application

Dear Mr.Lin,I’m Wang Hong.I’ll graduate from Dongfang Vocational school this summer.My major

is Computer Science and I like it.Once I entered for a CAD competition and I was awarded

the first prize.Last year, in spare time, I took a part-time job in a company, where I learned

quite a lot.Now, I’m writing to apply for a post in your company with the hope that I can do

something for you.With my experience and my knowledge, I’m sure I’ll be qualified for my

future job.I sincerely hope Mr.Lin will take my request into consideration, and I would

appreciate an early interview.Yours faithfully,Wang Hong

假如你是李華，請根據提示的要點寫一份60～80詞的請假條給張老師。

要點：

1、李華病了，感覺不舒服，頭痛，疲勞，不想吃東西。

2、從昨晚開始就這樣，看了醫生。

3、醫生仔細地給他作了檢查，說他患了重感冒，開了藥。要求他臥床休息兩、三天，多喝開水。

4、今天不能到校，請假兩天

Dear Miss Zhang,I’m sorry to tell you that I don’t feel well today.My head hurts and I feel tired.I don’t feel like eating anything.I have been like this ever since last night.I have seen the doctor.She looked me over carefully and told me that I have got a bad cold.She gave me some medicine and told me to stay in bed for two or three days and drink much water, so I’m afraid I can’t go to school today.I’d like to take two days off.Thank you.Yours,Li Hua 例文七：

假設你是李華，在互聯網上看到英國高中生David登的一則啟事：希望結識一位中國朋友，以便學校中國的語言、文化。請你以李華的名義用英文給David發一封電子郵件，主要內容包括：

（1）你怎樣得知David的愿望；

（2）你愿意成為他的朋友；

（3）你打算如何幫助他；

（4）你盼望他的回復。

注意：（1）電子郵件的格式以為你寫好，不計入總詞數；[來源:學&科&網][來源:Z。xx。k.Com]

（2）詞數：100左右。

Dear David,I’ve learned it from the Internet that you want to make a Chinese friend so as to learn the Chinese language and culture.I’m glad that you show such great interest in China and I world like to be your friend.I will try my best to write to you as often as possible to introduce you the Chinese culture.When you have an opportunity to come to China, I’ll teach you how to speak Chinese and show you around some famous historical places of interest.Anyway, I am going to help you as much as I can.How do you think?

I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua

第三篇：高考書面表達壓題

（一）感謝信：

假如你是四川某地區一名失學學生，名叫李華。你幸運地得到在北京工作的一位稱作Mr Smith的美國人的贊助，于是重新回到校園學習。為了表示感謝，你于5月14日給Mr Smith寫了一封信。信的內容如下：

1.得以重返校園，非常感謝。

2.在老師的幫助下，學習成績進步很快。

3.受到老師的表揚，家長的鼓勵。

4.決心更加努力學習，爭取考上大學。

5.盼望見到Mr Smith，希望Mr Smith寄張照片來。

Dear Mr Smith,I’m glad to have received your money and books.Now , I can go to school again.I am happy and thank you so much.I have been studying hard since I accepted yourgifts.With the help of my teachers, I have made great progress in my studies.So our teacher praised me for it and my parents encouraged me.I have made up my mind to study harder and try to go to college this year.I’m looking forward to seeing you, but at present I am busy preparing for the college entrance examinations.I hope you can post me one of your photos.Best wishes!

Yours sincerelyLi Hua

親愛的斯密斯先生，很高興收到你的匯來的錢和書。現在，我又能回到學校了。我真高興，對你十分感謝。自從接受了您的贊助以來，我一直在努力學習。在老師的幫助下，我在學習上取得了很大進步。因此，我得到了老師的表揚和父母的鼓勵。我下定決心要更加努力地學習，今年爭取考上大學。

我一直盼望見到您，但是現在我忙于準備考大學。我希望您能給我寄一張您的照片。

致以最好的祝福！

李華

（二）邀請信：

假如你是李明，請你給你的美國筆友John寫一封信，邀請他參加你班學生將要舉行的暑期夏令營活動并請他回信告訴你他是否能來。信的內容還包括以下幾點：

時間： 7月20日至7月27日

地點：北京度假村

活動內容：參觀北京名勝古跡（長城、故宮）；文化學習班（語言學習、相互介紹自己的國家、學校及學習和生活等）；文藝會（唱歌、跳舞、游戲等）

Mar.6th

Dear John,I’m writing to tell you that the students of my class are planning to go for a

summer camp at the Beijing Holiday Village, from July 20th to 27th this summer.I’d

like to invite you to come and join us.We will visit some famous places, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum and

so on.We’ll talk about our countries, schools, life, study and other things.We’ll give

parties at which the students will sing,dance and play games together.Would you

please write back to let me know if you could come?

Looking forward to hearing from you soon!

Yours,Li Ming

親愛的約翰,我給你寫信，是要告訴你，我班同學計劃要舉行的暑期夏令營活動，地點是

北京度假村，時間是從七月二十日到二十七日。我想邀請你和我們一起來參加。

我們要參觀一些著名的地方，像長城，故宮等等。我們會談論我們的國家，學校，生活，學習等等。我們還要舉行派對，同學們將一起唱歌，跳舞和做游戲。

你能給我回信，告訴我你是否能來嗎？

盼望盡快得到你的回信！

李華

（三）求職信：

假設你是新華中學的學生李華，得知某英文報招聘兼職記者，你有意應聘，請按

下列要點給報社寫一封自薦信。

1.表示感興趣

2.說明優勢：知識面、英語水平、合作精神、相關經歷

3.希望得到回復

注意：

1.詞數：100左右

2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫

Dear Sir or Madam,_____________________________________

Dear Sir or Madam,I’m a student from Xinhua Middle School.I’m glad to learn that you want a few

part-time English reporters.I’m quite interested in it.I would like to apply for the

position.I think I’m fit for the job.As a student, I’ve read a lot and have much knowledge

in many fields.I’m fond of English and do well in both speaking and writing.Besides, I’m easy to get along with and enjoy working together with others.Above

all, I once worked as a reporter for my school broadcasting station.So I’m sure I can

do the job well if I get the position.I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua

先生/女士，我是新華中學的學生。聽說你們想要招聘業余英語記者。我對之非常感興趣。我想要申請這個職位。

我認為我適合這個職位。作為一名學生，我讀書很多，擁有許多領域的知識。我喜歡英語，并且擅長口語和寫作。

而且，我易于與人相處，喜歡跟別人合作。首要的是，我曾經在學校廣播站當過記者。因此，我相信，如果得到這個職位，我能把這份工作做好。

盼望你的答復。

李華

（四）介紹地點：

假定你是李華。應應該朋友Bob的要求，寫一封短信介紹你校圖書館的基本情況。

Dear Bob,Thank you for your last letter asking about our library.Our library is in the center of the school.There is a beautiful garden in front of it and our classroom building is right behind it.The library is big.When you get inside, you will see many shelves full of books on different subjects.There are also lots of newspapers and magazines.We borrow books and do some reading in the library.According to the rule, every student can borrow up to 5 books each time and keep them for 10 days.It is open from 9 am to 7 pm from Monday to Friday and closed on weekends.We all like our library very much.Best wishes,Li Hua

親愛的鮑伯，感謝你上一封信問到我們學校圖書館的情況。

我們的圖書館在學校的中央。它的前面是一個美麗的花園，而我們的教學樓恰好在它的后面。圖書館很大。但你步入其中時，你會看到許多書架，上面裝滿了不同學科的書籍。也有許多報紙、雜志。我們在圖書館借書和閱讀。根據規定，每個學生一次最多可以借5本書，可以看10天。圖書館周一到周五，從上午9點開到下午7點，周末閉館。

我們都非常喜歡我們的圖書館。

致以最好的祝愿，李華

（五）咨詢信：

假如你是李明，正在澳大利亞學習，打算在暑假期間學習繪畫。在一網站上

你發現一則招生廣告，但一些具體信息不明確。請你根據提示，發一郵件詢問有關情況。

提示：1.初學者是否可以參加學習？

2.是否上暑假班？

3.是否需要自帶材料？

4.如只在7、8月學習，費用如何？

Dear Sir or Madam,I saw your advertisement on your website and I’d like to know more about your course.First of all, I should explain I’m just a beginner in painting.Can I take your course? As a student, I’ll have a few weeks’ holiday in July and August.Is there a course running at that time? If I decide to go ahead, do I have to take my own brushes or pencils with me or are they provided by your company? Is there anything else I need to take? Finally, how much does it cost if I learn painting for only two months?

I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Ming

先生女士你好，我在您的網站上看到了廣告，我想進一步了解課程情況。

首先，我得（像您）解釋下，我是個初學者。我能參加學習嗎?作為一名學生，我在七、八月份有幾周的假期。那時候開設課程嗎？如果我覺得去了，我必須攜帶畫筆和鉛筆嗎？還是你們公司提供？我還需要帶別的什么嗎？最后，如果我只學習兩個月的話，費用是多少？

盼望著你的答復。

李明

特別提示：

1.高考英語的作文一定要字跡工整，卷面整潔。因此，建議你好好用筆記本練練書寫；

2.范文要背誦下來，可以參照翻譯，弄懂句意；而且要背著寫一寫。可以一篇一篇攻克。寫的時候注意句子可能存在的變化。

3.加粗的斜體字大多是常用的句式，要弄懂和記住。

4.高考中的作文能夠被壓中的可能性不大，但是，一些常見的句子可以套用，尤其寫作的第一段，非常重要，盡量記住幾個結構。寫作一定要分段，一般都分三段：第一段，點題；第二段，表述過程；

第三段，收尾。平時練的時候就這樣去練。在橫線格上多寫寫。

第四篇：高考書面表達

書面表達（2011遼寧）

假定你是李華，將于今年七月從新星外語學院畢業，你從報紙上得知BB公司要招聘一名中文秘書，你很感興趣。請給該公司寫一封求職信，包括下列要點：

1.年齡；

2.學習情況及英語水平；

3.興趣和特長；

4.性格特點.注意：1.詞數120左右；

2.可適當增加細節，使行文連貫

Dear Sir/Madam,I am Li Hua—17 years old,and I ’m a confident and outgoing boy.I’ll graduate from XinXing English School in July.I happened to get the information from the newspaper that you are looking for an English secretary.I’m much too interested in it,so I’d like to apply for the job.When it comes to my study,I’d like to say that I’m very hard-working and I achieve good results in my study.It has been twelve years since I began learning English and I have had a primary command of the communication and hand-writing of English.What’s more ,I enjoy reading novels and history books ,in addition,my favourite sports is basketball.Last but not the least,I can most probably meet your demand.I’ll appreciate it if you give me an opportunity to make a contribution to the BB.Sincerely yours,Li Hua

文章注意事項：

1.17-year-old 不能用作定語修飾Li Hua，2.I’ll表示一種客觀事實而I will多表主觀意愿

3.Begin to do表示即將開始而begin doing多用于陳述過去發生的事

4.Enjoy表示做某件事的時候，喜歡享受，也就是邊做邊喜歡，而like只表示喜歡，沒有去做的含義

5.History book直接名詞修飾名詞,表示直觀屬性

6.在文章中盡量不要用I think，需用時應該用It’s up to me(如果讓我說，做決定的話),In my mind;In my opinion;I’d like to convey my view/point/idea/feeling that....;personally I think來替換

積累句型：

When it comes to....(I would like to say....)

I can most probably meet your demand(我應該比較符合你的要求)

書面表達（2011浙江）

假設你是高中生李越，有感于校園中存在的隨意涂寫（to scribble）和亂丟垃圾（to litter)的行為，請用英語給校長寫一封100—120個詞的心。信中應包括以下內容：

1.說明寫作目的2.對這些行為提出批評

3.提出建議

注意：信的開頭、落款及信的第一句話已給出

June 8,2011

Dear Mr.headmaster

I feel it a great honour to write to you!The purpose of my writing is simple but the issue is significant I think.These days,I noticed that some students in the school litter the ground with used paper or scribble on walls at random.After thinking about it for a long a long time.I decide to reflect to you.As far as I’m concerned,such behaviours are very rude manners and have a bad effect on the environment of the campus.In consequence,It’s high time that we took measures to prevent these phenomena from occuring again.What do you think?For one thing,you are expected to enact severe rules to prohibit littering and scribbling.Meanwhile,publishing the students who have the similar behaviours is also necessary.For another,you may as well call on us to pick up the rubbish on the ground.How I wish you could take my advice into consideration!I’m really convinced that with the efforts of every body,our school will grow better.Yours faithfully,LiYue

文章注意事項：

1.第一段最后一句I think 不放在句中要放在句尾，而在疑問句中I think常放在句中

2.沒有In recent days要用These days替換

3.Notice指無意中地觀察到，而observe多指專門觀察（有時用于天文觀察、顯微觀察等）

4.Wall可數the wall表示特指一面墻walls表示泛指

5.一定要注意and連接的兩個并列結構或句子，例如連接兩句話若同意主語一句用be動詞一句用實意動詞則and后加出主語，若都是be動詞或都是實意動詞則省略主語

6.注意主語，一定要看清，若上文沒有提到或指代不明容易引起歧義的情況下要補出實實在在的主語，比如such behavious就不能用they來替換

7.Happen和occur

若事件用發生（happen）：accident,incident等

若現象用出現（occur）：phenomenon等

8.you should 如果想表達地更委婉用you are expected to do或you are supposed to do

9.I believe一般換成I’m really convinced that

10.I do wish語氣生硬，換成How I wish that....較委婉

11.Grow 比be更加生動形象具體，還含有變的過程

積累詞匯、短語、句型：

Reflect反應

For one thing....for another....May as well不妨...做好

You are expected to do

You are supposed to do你應該...I’m really convinced that我相信

How I wish that....With the effort

書面表達（2013-2014全市統考）

據最新統計，目前中國有2/3的城市缺水，大約3億人喝不上健康潔凈的水。你校學生會計劃在高二年級開展“節約用水，從我做起”的英語演講比賽。假如你叫劉暢，請你撰寫一篇演講稿，主題為“Save water,save ourselves”內容主要包括：

1.目前問題

2.提出辦法（在家中刷牙，洗手時關閉水龍頭：不要使用干凈水沖廁所：提醒父母檢查是否水管漏水：在學校不要扔掉未喝完的瓶裝水等）

3.發出呼吁

注意：

1.信的開頭和結尾已經給出，但不計入總詞數

2.可根據內容要點適當發揮，但不要逐條翻譯

3.詞數120左右：參考詞匯：瓶裝水bottled water：沖洗廁所flush toilet：

I’m LiuChang from Grade 2.The topic of my speech is“Save water,save ourselves”.As is known for us all,with the development of society,the issue of lacking water is becoming serious day by day.Believe it or not,nearly seventy percent of the cities in China are lacking in water resources and around thirty hundred million people are not able to drink healthful and fresh water.Consequently,something must be done to solve the problem,for example,taking off the tap when you are washing your hands and brushing your teeth,not using clean water to flush toilets,reminding your parents of checking whether the water pipe is normal.Last but not the least,don’t throw the bottled water away until you have finished drinking the water.To sum up,only if all of us make contributions to saving water can we eventually solve the water problem.Thank you for your listening.

第五篇：高考英語書面表達技巧

高考英語書面表達技巧

通常，英語學習，聽、說、讀、寫、譯五項基本技能缺一不可。《普通高中英語課程標準》，對九級語言技能目標英語寫作有6點明確的要求。同時列出了寫作技能與試題設計的要求和寫作評價標準，其測試方式有五種。學生作文主要從內容要點、語言使用效果、結構和連貫性、格式和語域及與目標讀者的交流五個方面進行評價。英語書面表達是英語語言基礎知識和語法基礎知識的綜合運用，還要具有較強的語言表達能力和邏輯思維能力，要求內容清楚、意思連貫、結構完整、邏輯性強、主題突出、用詞準確、文體恰當。一般，要文理通暢，非單純地翻譯。要答卷滿意，平時確實需要長期的信心的培養，耐心的啟發，由易到難，從簡單到復雜，循序漸進地堅持內容、語言、語法、表達、結構、邏輯和卷面等進行規范地訓練，而且訓練有素。現在，不少學生對英語書面表達不予或不夠重視。這并非完全意義上的寫作，只要求用書面語言基本表達出要表達的東西。一般原則是：不多寫、不少寫和不錯寫。現結合存在的問題和多年的教學積累，談談高考英語書面表達應注重的五方面。用順

審準題義，明確情景，看清要求。不少考生寫作時，還有不看要求或不看完看全要求就解題的習慣，特別是不注意生詞或短語提示，或干脆完全根據所給材料先后順序逐一翻譯。前后不連貫，層次不清晰，邏輯性不強。因此應認真思考材料，找到所要表達的主旨文意及線索，在線索引導下通暢地表達內容，增加可讀性。為此，應注意使用and, so, then, at the same time, on the one hand, on the other hand, first, second,at last, what''s more, I''m afraid, I think等表示過度及連接的詞匯，使之有較強的感情色彩。用對

對每一個句子都盡可能避免語法錯誤。通常錯處出在：

2.1動詞錯誤

（1）多用。

1）There were five hundred students couldn’t go to school because of the earthquake.（劃線部分改為Five hundred）

2）A hero comes from Beichuan will give us a talk tomorrow afternoon.（劃線部分改為coming或去掉comes）

（2）缺失。

1）He wouldn’t ∧ able to work out the math problem.（遺漏處加be）

2）It isn’t said that they ∧ often careless in class.（遺漏處加are）

（3）時態錯誤。

1）Hurry up!Here is coming the bus.（劃線部分改為comes）

2）Class start at 8:00 am.（劃線部分改為starts）

書面表達可能出現多種時態，但特定時間背景下時態相同。如人事物現狀的介紹，應以一般現在時為主；過去的介紹，應以一般過去時為主；日記應以一般過去時為主；通知應以一般現在時為主。千萬不要隨心所欲，不假思索地使用，造成大面積失分。

（4）語態錯誤。由于漢語被動色彩不濃，因此英語表達易受影響，該用而不用，不該用而用be動詞。如：

1）He remembered his wallet had ∧ lost in the bus.（遺漏處加been）

2）The matter was happened two years ago.（劃線處去掉was）

還有喜歡在動詞前面加be動詞。如：

3）I am think that I’ll learn how to use a computer.（劃線處去掉am）

4）They are decide that they will study harder.（劃線處去掉are）

2.2名詞單復數混用

1）He wrote an 800-words article yesterday.（劃線處改為800-word）

2）It is a ten-minutes walk from here to there.（劃線處改為ten-minute或ten minutes''）

2.3冠詞錯誤

冠詞屬小詞，重視不夠，影響表達。

1）How do you spell the computer？（劃線處去掉the）

2）We should treasure the time because the time is money.（劃線處去掉the）用準

用準確地道的語言，不能生澀難懂，不合英語表達習慣。常見現象如下：

3.1單詞堆砌

寫句子，用語不準，而根據漢語句序進行相應的英語單詞堆砌而成。如：

1）Study hard, are because they know is the Hope project give their chance to go to school.（錯）→They study hard because they know it is the Hope project that gives them a chance to go to school.（正）

2）Welcome you come back to our school to visit.（錯）

→You’re welcome back to visit our school.（正）

另外，不重視掌握單詞，寫作時碰到生詞難句就委婉地去解釋，用模糊定義，語言生澀難懂，文意混亂，表達不清。如：

Mr.Zhao is good at teaching English;he has many good ways to use to teach us.（錯）

→Mr.Zhao is good at teaching, and he has many methods of teaching us English.（正）

3.2使用Chinglish

英語作文，受漢語影響，雖語法正確，卻不符英語表達習慣。如：

1）Our friends are all over the world.（錯）→We have friends all over the world.（正）

2）My height is 180 centimeters and my body is healthy.（錯）

→I am 180 centimeters tall and I’m healthy.（正）

語言轉換功在平時。簡明扼要，表達清楚，是關鍵所在。冰凍三尺，非一日之寒。用全

初學寫作要簡單完整清楚地表達，就要把握兩個關系：

4.1完整不一定就句式復雜

一味追求新、奇、特、難，容易出錯。如：

1）Li Lang, a brave boy who is only 6 years old and that is a middle school student and that comes from the northwest of the Sichuan province.（錯）→Li Lang, a brave boy who is only 6 years old , and he is a middle school student from the northwest part of the Sichuan province.（正）

2）It is not only we students but also our parents and our teachers are kind to the children.（錯）→Not only we students but also our parents and our teachers are kind to the children.（正）

4.2簡單也不一定就用省略句

在不可省的地方省略，結構就不完整，句意就不明確。如：

1）He studies very hard and kind.（錯）→He studies very hard and he is very kind.（正）

2）He doesn''t know what and how to do.（錯）→He doesn''t know what to do and how to do it.（正）

另外，考試是根據內容和表達給分的，要點齊全，是直接因素。必須注意要點來源：

標題。有些需要標題，卻粗心漏掉不寫，造成失分。書寫標題應力求簡潔明了，有較強概括力和針對性，并注意單詞字母大小寫。

格式。不少應用文需要正確的格式，如通知的開頭，常常要交待通知的對象；日記開頭，常常交待時間和天氣；信件的左上角必須注明寫信人的地址和時間，下一行要頂格寫上稱呼，正文結束后，要有結束語，并簽名。

正文。這是全文要點集中之處，應認真思考材料含義，理清大意，將所有要點逐一落實，并檢查有無遺漏。

常識性。原材料不一定反應，但仍然重要，既屬內容，又承上啟下，增強文章可讀性。如寫通知結尾可用“Don’t forget the time and address.”，“I’m sure you’ll have a pleasant time/a lot of fun.”或“That’s all, thank you.”；寫參觀歡迎詞開頭可用“You’re welcome to visit our city.”，“Now, let me tell you something about our school.”或“Let me introduce something about our school to you.”，結尾可用“Now, I’d like to introduce something about our school/LI ping to you.”，介紹結束也可用“That’s all, thank you.”；寫信結尾可用“please give my best regards/love /wishes to your parents.”或“Remember me to your parents!”，“I hope to hear from you soon.”或“Waiting for your early reply.”

必須注意原則：不多不少。該有的不少，不該有的不寫。整潔

文章寫好后，應認真修改，不忙于提前交卷，避免大小寫及標點符號錯誤，謄寫應盡可能書寫工整，布局美觀。卷面整潔清爽就會增加得高分機會。

總之，了解、掌握、運用好以上五個方面，就容易得高分。