第一篇:2014中考英語書面表達復習學案
2014年初三英語書面表達復習學案
中考英語作文九個話題:
一、寫人(自己、家庭、朋友、老師、個人變化、個人感受等)
二、介紹地點(介紹風景名勝、旅游等)
三、校園生活(春游、校規、科目、學習方法,學習困難,同學之間的關系,高興或傷心之事的經歷,等)
四、課外生活(家庭生活、家務勞動、個人愛好,與父母之間的關系,高興或傷心之事的經歷等)
五、假期安排(未來計劃、過去經歷等)
六、節假日活動(志愿者活動、過去經歷的事)
七、健康(疾病、食品健康等)
八、個人觀點建議(提建議、勸告,感謝,對某事的評論,等)
九、社會熱點問題(節約、環境、故鄉變化,城鎮化,留守兒童,安全,網上購物,中學生使用手機等,)
滿分作文范例
請背誦仿寫滿分作文,經典單詞、短語和句子用黑體字標出, 注意積累!節約食物,健康飲食Save Food And Eat Healthily
(號召)the citizens(公民)to save food and eat healthily so that we can enjoy our happy life.We middle school students
should do something about it.First, we are not supposed to waste our food(吃完)all the food we order(點菜)while going out to dinner.Second, we shouldn’t
eat junk food.It’s bad for our health.To eat healthily ,we should eat a balanced diet.Besides,we’d better not eat in restaurants.The food and the oil they
use are not clean or healthy enough.We’d better eat at home as often as possible.節約資源,保護環境
Dear Jack,Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on the environment.Here is something about it.We can do a lot of things in our daily life to protect the environment.First, we should save electricity ,we’d better turn off lights if we leave a
room ,and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet.Second ,Saving water is also important.For example,we should turn off the shower when
we are washing hair.Third, we should take our own bags when we go shopping.Besides, people should stop riding in cars and start riding bikes.we can
also recycle books and paper ,we shouldn't use paper towels or napkins so that we can stop more trees from being cut down.I think the environment is really important.If everyone cares about protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.3新城鎮變化
There have been great changes in our hometown these years.Our lives are getting better and better.More and more buildings are being built.We
are proud of our hometown.What should we do to make our hometown more beautiful?
In my opinion , we should plant more trees and flowers.We must obey traffic rules ,we mustn't cross the streets when the traffic lights are red.We
shouldn't spit here and there(隨地吐痰)or throw litter everywhere(到處丟垃圾).We'd better not pick flowers or step on the grass(踐踏草坪)it's always
good to be kind, friendly and helpful to others.If everyone makes contributions(做出貢獻),our hometown will be more and more beautiful..留守兒童
為解決留守兒童的問題提建議:
Dear Mayor(市長):
I'm a middle school student.I'm writing to tell you something around us.Nowadays, there are many children whose parents are away from their
hometowns to make money.The children have many problems.They are always lonely and stressed out.How to solve their problems? In my opinion,You can raise money for these children.If everyone gives their love, the world will be better.It's very important for us to pay more attention to these
children
Best wishes to you!
Yours, Sincerely
Li Hua手機問題
Dear Editor,Nowadays,mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students.Some students think that it is easy to use them
to keep in touch with parents and classmates.Also, they can be used for listening to music,taking photos or playing games.But others think that we
don’t need to talk with parents and classmates with mobile phones, because we meet them every day.And mobile phones may have an influence on our
study.In my opinion, it’s not wrong to 追求時尚), but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way.Can you
give some suggestions?
Yours truly,Wang Lin學習英語的方法
How to learn English well
English is important and useful to us.How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions.First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs.Watching English movies is also helpful to us.Second, we should speak English
in class as much as possible.Don’t be afraid of making mistakes.The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make.We'd better join the English club
and practice with others.Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines.It’s good for us.At last, we should recite some good passages and
keep diaries.(寫日記)in English everyday.In a word(總而言之we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.7我難忘的初中生活
My Unforgettable Middle School Life
How time flies!My middle school life is coming to an end(快要結束了).I can’t forget the happy time that I’ve spent with my classmates and
teachers.At school, I am busy with my studies.I’m interested in English, because my English teacher, Miss Wang, is kind and helpful.I like playing
basketball and reading books.After class, I join some clubs at school.In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life.I learn how to
face difficulties, and I also learn how to get on well with friends.My school life is meaningful(有意義)and colorful(豐富多彩).In a word, it is unforgettable, isn’t it?8 課外閱讀
要點:不重視課外閱讀的原因: 1.作業太多2.沒有讀書習慣3.時間花在電腦或網絡上
課外閱讀的好處: 1.更多地了解世界2.學會如何思考3.生活更加豐富多彩
對學校或同學的建議(至少一點)
At present only a few students do some reading after class.Here are several reasons.First of all, some students have too much homework.Others haven’t a habit of reading.They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the
Internet.However, it's good for us to do some reading.We can learn more about the world.Besides, it can help us think better.It also can make our life
more colorful.Here are my suggestions.On the one hand, teachers aren't supposed to ask us to do too much homework ,so that we can have more time to read.On the other hand, it’s a good idea to form(組成)reading clubs and learn from each other.-我的業余生活
目前中學生學習任務重,壓力大。而豐富多彩的業余生活,有利于開拓視野,調節身心,提高學習效率。提示詞語:busy,play,healthy,knowledge,housework,relax,volunteer, colorful
My Spare Time
I am a middle school student.Though I’m busy with my lessons, my spare time is still colorful..After school I usually play sports.I like basketball and football very much.Sports help me to keep healthy and study better.I often do some reading
in the evening.I think books are our best friends.They give us much knowledge that we can’t learn at school.So reading books is the best way of
spending my spare time.Sometimes I watch TV or surf the Internet.I find it’s a good way to relax myself.At the same time it can also help me open up
my eyes to the outside world.At the weekends I often help my parents with the housework.I clean the house, wash clothes and learn to cook.During the
summer or winter vacation, I have enough time to do things like volunteering.I help those people who are in need.It’s a good experience for me.I enjoy myself in my spare time.10網上交友(利與弊)
Should students make friends on line? Some people say yes.Internet helps people make many friends.Chatting on line, students can express more
freely their feelings and opinions, and even get help for their foreign language studies.Others, however, think students should not make friends on line.They say making friends on line is a waste of time.Besides, some students get cheated
(被騙)on line.In my opinion, students should place their study, health and safety before other things.As for friendship, we can find it in our classmates and other
people around us.11網上購物(利與弊)
隨著網絡的發展,人們消費觀念的轉變,購物方式也在悄然地發生變化。
提示詞匯:網購shopping on line;避免做某事avoid doing sth;商品goods;導致cause
With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line.It has become a fashion in our daily life.Some of us students also
join the group.Shopping on line has many advantages.Just click the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors.You can avoid getting(陷入)the crowded people and cars ,so you can save time.When shopping on line, you can choose from more different goods.But shopping on line has disadvantages.On the one hand, the goods you buy may be different from the pictures you see on the Internet.On the other
hand, shopping on line may cause people to buy goods that are not really needed.That’s a waste of money.In a word, I love shopping on line..12給別人建議,解決問題
假如你是Jane,你的好友Mary在微博上說最近很累很不開心,而且很擔心即將到來的考試,請你在Mary的微博中回復,給她一些建議,使她振作起來。
提示:1.分析Mary 不開心的原因;2.給她一些建議使她減少壓力;3.給她美好的祝福。
Dear Mary,Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world.I know you are under too much pressure.You can’t get on well with your classmates;you may worry
about your exams.I’m always stressed out, too.My parents want me to be the top student in class.So they send me to all kinds of training classes(輔導班)at weekends.Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother.I told her I was not lazy.I really felt tired.I needed time to relax.My mother agreed with me at last.So I
think a conversation with your parents is necessary to solve the problem.Less pressure, better life!Best wishes to you!
Yours,Jane
13如何放松自己
學校英語角將于本周末舉行以 “How to relax ourselves after the exam” 為主題的討論會,請你用英語寫一篇發言稿。內容包括以下要點:
1.去旅游,親近大自然;2.參加娛樂活動,比如:聽音樂、看電影……;
3.進行體育鍛煉;4.你的建議。How to relax ourselves after the exam
It is necessary to relax ourselves after the exam.There’re kinds of activities for us to take part in.First of all we can travel around to get closer to
nature ,this can open our mind.We can also go to the movies or listen to music.What’s more(更重要的是), we should take more exercise, it can keep us
healthy.For example,we can do some running in the morning and play football in the afternoon.I hope all of us can have a wonderful time.14 安全問題
Safety is very important to everyone.Safety is very important to everyone.What should we do to keep safe?
First, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out.Don’t cross the street when the traffic lights are red.Keep to the right in the street.Second, we should eat healthy food.Don’t eat junk food.Eat more fruits and vegetable.Eat less meat and eggs.Besides, don’t hurt ourselves while we are
playing.For example , it’s dangerous to swim in the river alone, so don’t go to the river 不經允許).In a word, it’s important to remember these for us all.15對不良行為說不
上周日你和朋友去人民公園游玩,賞心悅目之時卻看到公園內一些大煞 風景的現象:亂涂亂畫、踐踏草坪、亂丟垃圾等,你隨手拍了下面幾幅
照片:請你根據以上提示,為校報英語專欄寫一篇報道(題目已給)。字數:80字左右
供你參考的詞匯有:bad behaviors不良行為 everywhere亂丟垃圾 scribble(v.)亂涂亂畫 throw the rubbish
Say no to bad behaviors!
Last Sunday I went to the People’s Park with my friends.There are some beautiful sights in the park.We had a good time there.But at the same time I
found some bad behaviors in the park.Some people scribbled on the wall.Some people walked on the grass.Even some people threw the rubbish
everywhere.I think they are bad behaviors.It makes the park look ugly.So we should take care and keep off the grass.I believe if everyone should protect
the environment in the park, it will get more and more beautiful.16用英語寫―篇日記(注意格式)
Saturday, May, 28th
It was fine.I went for an outing with my classmates today.At 8:00, we met at the school gate and then set off for the People’s Park.The bicycle ride took us half an hour.The sun was shining and there were
many people in the park.In the morning, we played all kinds of games.After the picnic at noon, we took many pictures in the afternoon.Before we went
back at 5:00, we spent about one hour visiting the zoo.Although I’m a little tired, I felt very happy.
第二篇:2014年中考英語書面表達
2014年廣東中考預測之書面表達
2007-2013年廣東韶關真題寫作 07廣東
I think the most important invention of all the time is the mobile phone.We all know that many years ago it was very difficult for us to send and get information from one place to another.It is the mobile phone that makes it very easy to get information from all over the world.Parents can use the mobile phone to get in close touch with their kids.And we can also enjoy the music or films/a film through the mobile phone.08廣東SaturdayJune 12thCloudy
badly ill when Hong was 11 and his mother left them.He had to look after his father and sister.He didn’t accept helps from others and depended on his own.He was a superman in my eyes.No one can avoid facing difficulties.But many teenagers are too weak to face troubles.Learn to be strong and never say “I can’t”, tomorrow will be another fine day.(82 words)
09廣東The Teacher I Never Forget
How time flies!Three years has passed since I became a middle school student.I had very good memories of my classmates and teachers.The teacher I never forget is Mr Zhang, an English teacher.He’s a tall man with thick glasses.He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us.He’s humorous and always makes his class lively and interesting.He’s kind but is strict with us.He never allows us to pretend that we know what we don’t know.He often tells us that it’s no use memorizing new words without understanding.My English has greatly improved with his help.I must say many thanks to Mr Zhang.I wish him a healthy and happy life in the future.10廣東How to Keep Safe in School
Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough? For example,one day, two students ran after each other in the hallway.Suddenly, one of them fell down and hurt his leg because of the wet floor.Therefore, he had to stay in hospital for two weeks.So I think students should always walk but not run in the hallways.And the teachers had better keep an eye on the students after class and stop them from running.At last, I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety in school.(82 words)
11廣東My Earth Hour 2011(有參與)
The Earth Hour was from 8:30 pm to 9:30 pm on Saturday, March 26th this year.It was the moment my friends and I
waited for a long time.We talked and played games at home with all the lights off.We were glad to be in the Earth Hour.As a student, I have done lots of things to protect the environment.For example, I always carry a cloth bag while shopping.Besides, I often ride a bike to school instead of taking a car.I think we can care for the earth by doing so.Let's take part in the Earth Hour next year.I believe that we can make our earth a better place to live in.(90 words)
12廣東 社會公共行為舉止 when I traveled in Guangzhou.I can't stand bad manners in public, either.In fact, I really get angry when people jump the queen and smoke in non-smoking areas.I think it's wrong to break the rules in public.In my opinion, we should know more about good manners.On the other hand, we had better stop people around us from being rude.If we can't stop them, we can always ask the police or someone like that for help.13廣東 面對謊言 Hongxing Middle School.Yesterday afternoon, the student on duty said he had to see the doctor.I offered to do the cleaning for him.Later I found him playing basketball on the playground.I was quite unhappy.He didn’t tell the lie.I would do the duty for him if he asked.As students, we should always tell the truth even if others might not agree with us.When others tell lies, we’d better make them understand that honesty is the best policy.13廣東面對騙局 Hongxing Middle School.Last year, I received a chain letter saying that only kind people could receive the letter.If I sent if to as many people as possible, I would get good luck.But if I didn’t , I would die the next day.I was so scared that I sent it to
some of my friends.As students, we shouldn’t forward such chain letters.If we don’t know how to deal with them, we’d better ask our teachers or parents for help.13廣東面對謠言 Hongxing Middle School.I heard a rumor of the same kind this year.It is said that a Chinese medicine called Banlangen could kill the flu of H7N9 or some diseases like that.So it was sold out in our city very soon.I thought it was so silly and I didn’t believe it at all.I would rather ask the doctor for advice than buy the medicine.As students, we should keep calm when we face such rumors.Besides, we shouldn’t believe or spread them.2014年廣東中考書面表達預測——十大考點
(一)時事新聞, 國家政策, 家鄉變化(六)旅游和介紹地方篇
(二)健康問題(七)新生事物評價
(三)關于環境保護問題(節約用水、用電、保護動物)(八)夢想和未來
(四)語言學習(九)煩惱篇
(五)寫人記事篇(重點+好人好事)(十)社會準則, 公共道德
1.作弊問題
今年1月央視新聞頻道報道,個別培訓機構在2014年MBA招生考試中,通過考前發放無線電作弊器材、考中傳送考試答案等方式組織考生在哈爾濱理工大學考點進行作弊。目前,學生考試作弊現象嚴重,請圍繞以下要點談談其中原
因以及個人建議。原因:1.考試太濫 2.自身勤奮不夠3.考生自擬4.考生自擬看法與建議:至少兩點(考生自擬)
At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit-cheating in examinations.There are three main reasons.First, schools have given students too many exams, some of which are too difficult.Second, some students are not hard-working and they don't work hard at their lessons.Third, they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet.So they haven't enough time to prepare for the exams.Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study.We students should be honest and diligent, and only in this way can we improve our study and make progress.Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves.2.珍惜時間
2014年2月7日,國家主席習近平在俄羅斯索契接受俄羅斯電視臺專訪時談到:“今年春節期間,中國央視春晚上一首《時間都去哪兒了》唱入了人們的心中。對我來說,問題在于我個人的時間都去哪兒了?當然是都被工作占去了。我經常能做到的是讀書,讀書已成了我的一種生活方式。”而對于我們中學生來說,又應該怎樣節約時間呢?
How to save time
We have ever heard of “Time is money.Time is life.” Time is very important to everyone.But we can see people waste their time everywhere.They spend much time playing computer games, drinking, sleeping late in the morning and so on.It’s necessary for us to save our valuable time.We have to listen to our teachers carefully in class so that we can save more time to learn others after class.We should make a plan to study at home so that we can learn more with less time.If we can make good use of time, we are sure to get more.3.環境問題
在全國各地召開的2014年地方“兩會”上,參會者都不約而同瞄準了“治霾”。造成霧霾這一現象的主要原因是工廠排出的廢氣和汽車尾氣等。現請你根據以下三個方面的提示,以 “Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment”為題寫一篇80詞的短文。
提示:1.重要性:只有一個地球2.主要問題:污染、疾病、災難 3.措施:停止污染、保護大自然
參考詞匯:disaster n.災難protect v.保護
Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment
We all live in the earth.The earth is our home.We have only one earth.We must take care of it.It gives us the best environment.If we harm it, it will be angry.And then we will have a terrible end.There are three problems in our earth, they are pollution, disaster and illness.It’s our duty to protect our environment.So we must plant more trees, protect the flowers and the trees, save energy, reduce the pollution.We should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories.Protecting the nature is very important.It’s our duty to keep our environment clean and tidy.If everyone makes a contribution to protect the environment, the earth will become much more beautiful.4.衛生健康飲食
健康一直是人們關注的問題我校要舉行以“關愛健康”為題的主題班會,請根據下表內容談談你的看法,寫一篇80字左右的演講槁。
1.保持健康的重要性2.保持健康的方法3.保持健康的結論(你的看法?)(1)多吃水果蔬菜保持飲食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物(2)多鍛煉健身強體(3)鄙棄不良習慣(你的看法?)
How to keep healthy?
Dear boys and girls,It's very important for the teenagers to have good health.We are growing up.We need to study hard.If we don't have good health, we can't do anything well.And it's bad for our future.Here are some of my suggestions.First we’d better do more exercise such as playing basketball, running or swimming.Then we should have a balanced diet.Don’t eat too much meat and sugar but more vegetables and fruit.Third we need enoughsleep or rest.Next keep ourselves happy.As people often say smiling makes younger.Last we mustn’t drink wine or smoke.They are bad for our health.I hope we are healthy and enjoy our life.健康問題典型例句
1.It is very important to keep healthy.7.I didn't feel like eating anything.2.How can we keep healthy? 8.I decided to see the doctor.3.We can't go to sleep too late.We can't get up too late.9.In the doctor's office, the doctor looks over me carefully.4.We should eat the food healthily.10.A nurse gave me an injection.It was a little painful.5.We should do more exercise.11.The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a
6.Last Tuesday I got a cold and had a pain in my head.day.12.He said, “Nothing is serious.” And he told me to take a rest and drink more water.13.A few days later, I felt better.From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world.5.網上購物Shopping Online
So far the Internet has been popular with people especially teenagers.People can do many kinds of interesting thing on it.With the help of the Internet, shopping is not a difficult job.Just click your mouse to choose the article you like, and the shopping is finished.You needn't step out of the room.It seems easy and quick.However, there's always a trap(陷阱)online.If you are careless, it will bring you some trouble.You may find the color of the article is different from what you want, or the size is either too small or too big.If you want to be different, you'd better not buy clothes online.Once you put on the clothes you bought online and go out, you will find many people wear the same clothes in the street.So you must be careful, because everything has two sides.6.你有微博嗎?請寫一篇短文,內容包括:1)青少年使用微博的利與弊(至少兩點);2)青少年應該如何使用微博。
On the one hand, it’s probably one of the fastest ways to send and receive messages.And it’s fun in playing micro-blog as well as getting the latest news.On the other hand, it takes time and energy to play it.Sometimes it’s not good for our study and health if we spend too much time on it.So I think as teenagers, we should concentrate more on our schoolwork.We should make good use of it and be careful of all the information on it because some of it is not true.7.關于汽車普及的現象的看法
目前,在中國汽車越來越普及,你對這一現象的看法,內容包括: 1)汽車普及的現象;2)它給人們帶來的好處和壞處;3)你提出一些好的建議。
cheaper and cheaper.Having a car, you can travel to anywhere you like.You don’t have to wait for the bus and you can go to a far place with your family on holiday.Although cars can make people’s life easier, it brings problems.There may be more traffic jams and it will bring about more air pollution.In my opinion, some roads should be widened(拓寬)and more new roads should be constructed.The government should take measures to control the air pollution from the cars.Only in this way will people enjoy the life with cars.8.與父母相處的話題
(一)假如你是Han Mei, 下面是一封你的筆友Alice 給你發來的e-mail,請你根據e-mail 的內容給她寫一封回信,與她交流看法,并幫她排憂解難。提示詞語:listen to, mother's love, care about, communicate with, get along with, smile寫作要求:1.語句通順,書寫工整;2.可用所給提示詞語,也可以適當發揮;3.詞數在80左右
Dear Han Mei,I'm afraid I've got a big problem recently.My mother talks too much to me.She always tells me, “Be careful while crossing the street.” “Put on more clothes.” “Did you do a good job at school?” and so on.I'm annoyed.What shall I do?
Alice
Dear Alice,As a teenager, I met the same problem as you.But now I can get along better with my mother.Here are some ideas for you.Your mother talks much, because she cares about you.Maybe it's not a good way, but it shows your mother's love.So I think you should listen to her.If your opinions are different from your mother's, you can communicate with her, and tell her what you are thinking about.If your mother doesn't take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile.I hope what I say here can help you a lot.(二)對父母的感恩
Through it I know that we should live with a thankful heart.At that time, I think of my parents who are the first people I should thank.They gave me life.They give me home, bring me up and look after me.I cannot thank them too much.Maybe I should think how to pay back the love my parents give me.But now I think the best way to be appreciated of my parents is to study well and then being a useful person to the society when I grow up.9.建設和諧社會
假設你是張濤,是“某某一中”的學生。請你圍繞“建設和諧社會’’的主題,根據下面所給出的要點提示,用英語給全省中學生寫一封倡議書。
要點提示:1.人與社會:祖國、家鄉、學校,熱愛關心2.人與人:家人、師長、同學,誠信互助
3.人與自然:能源、環境、動植物,愛惜保護4.你的態度:(內容由考生自己擬定)
Dear fellow students,Our government is aiming to build a “harmonious society”.I think it is every citizen’s duty to work hard to achieve this goal.As high school students, what should we do?
First of all, we should love our motherland.Let’s take a great interest in the development of our hometowns and take an active part in our school and activities.Secondly, let’s fill the world with love.We should show our respect for old people, our parents and our teachers.We should also care for each other and help those in need.More importantly, all of us must be faithful and honest in our daily life.Finally, let’s work together to save energy and protect our natural environment, including animals, trees, flowers and grass.As for myself, I will study even harder and try my best to do all the above.Dear fellow students, let’s start fight now and spare no effort(不遺余力地)to do a little bit every day, every hour, and every minute!
Zhang Tao
10.計劃愿望
I have made up my mind to do something meaningful after senior high school entrance examination(中考).First I amgoing to travel so that I can feel beauty of the nature and enjoy the fresh air as well as relax after the busy middle school.Nextin order to get ready for my high school life, I will preview(預習)the lessons during the summer holiday.What’ more, I willmake up English, such as reading English every morning, memorizing English words and write five sentences in English.At last I will do some chores at home for my parents.My parents are busy with their work and spend a lot of time looking after me.I want to do something for them and make them relax.I am looking forward to my coming holiday.I hope I can have a relaxing holiday.11.朋友
人的一生離不開朋友,在人生的不同階段有著不同的朋友。初中三年的學習生活即將結束,請以“The Friendship Between My Friends and Me”為題寫一篇作文。
內容包括:1)你交了幾個好朋友?2)你們成為好朋友的理由(至少兩條)。
The Friendship between My Friends and Me
school life, I have made three good friends.Here are the reasons why we can be good friends.First, we can learn from each other.If someone has anything in his study, we will discuss it together.Second, we can help each other.When someone is in trouble or unhappy, the others will try their best to help him out and cheer him up.Third, we mostly agree with each other and never argue with each other.I think I am so lucky to have such good friends.We will be good friends forever.12.成功與失敗
Failure is so common in our life.When we fail in doing something, we often feel so sad that we have no interest in other things.Sometimes failure can also make us lose heart.Therefore, no one wants to be a failure.Success is what we all hope for, because it can bring us a sense of pride and happiness.However, failure is the mother of success.One failure doesn’t mean you can never be successful.It depends on what we do to deal with failure.Those who are always afraid of failure and can’t get over it will never win.But as long as we can get some lessons and experience from our failure, we’ll be sure to succeed.
第三篇:中考英語書面表達 命題作文
中考英語書面表達 命題作文
命題作文就是我們依據所給題目,確定中心,選擇材料,寫出符合題意,內容表達具體、充分的文章。
寫命題作文通常要注意以下幾點:
一、審準題目:文章的中心要對題目的分析來確定,一定要弄清主題的內涵,確立與文章聯系的主題思想,表達不能游離于主題,否則即使內容再精彩,也是“跑題”作文,得分將會大打折扣,因此,寫命題作文最重要的是先審清題目,確立要表現的中心。
二、構思結構:就是開放思路,啟動聯想,構想表現形式,勾勒出文章的結構層次,依次寫出引言段,主題句,發展段和結尾句,努力使之新穎,別致。
三、選擇材料:這一點很重要,一定要圍繞想表現的中心去選擇組織材料,所選的材料必須典型精要。
四、表達:就是用最確切明了的語言貫穿材料,表達自己的思想,力爭用符合英語語法規則。英語表達習慣,最順暢自然的詞,句,段去表達中心思想,與表現中心無關的話即使再生動形象也不要去寫。就寫作的目的表現形式來看,命題作文分為三種形式:
1、記敘文類;
2、說明文類;
3、議論文類。
下面就談一談記敘文的寫作
記敘文就是以記敘人物的經歷或事物發展變化過程為主的一種文章。在初中寫作訓練中,記敘文是最基本,最常見,最重要的書面表達形式。記敘文有“六要素”即指“時間,地點,人物和事 件的起因,經過和結果”。一篇記敘文只要把這些要素寫清楚,文章就會內容具體, 眉目清晰,中心意思明確。一般情況下,這六要素中的人物,時間,地點作為開端,要寫在文章的開頭。事件,原因常作為記敘文的段落發展,又稱為文章的主體部分,應該放在文章的中間。結果作為記敘文的結局常放在文章的末尾處。
記敘文從寫作的線索上來看,有三種表現形式:
1、以人物為主,圍繞人物組織材料。
2、以事物為中心,圍繞事件組織材料或圍繞事件寫人。
3、以寫景狀物,描寫為主。
寫好記敘文應注意以下幾點:
1、明確寫作目的:寫文章的目的就是確切表達一個中心思想,文章的一切內容應自始自終地為展開中心服務。
2、選擇細節材料:選擇好的細節材料就是為了更好地表現主題,所選擇的材料要有代表性,典型性。寫作內容要詳略得當,主要情節應詳細寫,次要內容要簡略或概述。
1)關于寫人物,一般要把某人的年齡,外貌和性格特征,人物行為,心理活動等方面簡要概括出來。同時要略加點評或感想。
2)關于寫事件,事件是記敘的核心,往往有它的起因,經過和結局。寫事件要比較詳細地交代事情的來龍去脈,同時要重點突出,表達精練,防止渲染。
3、恰當的選擇寫作方法:記敘文的寫作方法就是指寫作的順序,文章先寫什么,后寫什么都要有一定順序。
中考經典展示:
(1)以My Mother為題寫一篇短文。(2003揚州)
內容要點:1.我的媽媽是護士,工作努力。2.上個月去北京,抗擊SARS(fight against)。3.一個月沒有回來。4.保護我們免受侵害。5.我愛媽媽,為媽媽自豪。
標題已給出,要求1.寫清時間 2.要點要完整 3.可適當增加內容 4.字數在60個詞左右
(2)班會上,老師要求每位同學用英語介紹自己的一位朋友,請你根據所提供的要點為題寫一篇短文。(2003南京)
要點:1.Who is he / she。2.When and where did you get to know him / her。3.Why do you like him / her。注意:1.文章的開頭和結尾已給出(不計入詞數)2.詞數60-80,須包括以上要點,可適當增加細節使短文意思通暢。3.條理清楚,語意連貫,句式規范,字跡工整。4.文中不得出現真實的人名。校名等相關信息。
寫作實踐范例
以“My Chinese Teacher”為標題寫一篇字數為80-100之間的英語短文。提示內容如下:
1、孫老師今年36歲,中等身材。
2、她關心。熱愛學生,工作認真負責。
3、她語文課講得生動。有趣。My Chinese Teacher Of all the subjects, I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher.Though she has been teaching us for only three years, I respect and love her very much.My Chinese teacher is thirty-six years old and she is neither tall nor short.Ms Sun works very hard.She is always the first to come and the last to leave her office.She tries to make her classes lively and interesting.And we enjoy her lessons very much.Ms Sun is very kind and friendly to us.And we're getting on well with each other.But she is very strict with us in our studies.Ms Sun teaches us so well that we all enjoy learning Chinese.All the students think she is one of the most popular teachers in our school.新題導練
請以“My Classmate”為標題寫一篇記敘文
要求:
1、主題明確。語言流暢。思路清晰。
2、字數在100字以內。
思路點撥
寫記敘文要按照事物發展的客觀規律敘述,所敘述的內容要交代清楚,條理清晰,重點突出,主次分明,詳略得當。
這篇文章也是記敘文,主人公應該用第三人稱,時態以一般過去時為主。本文以主人公為中心線索,以
一、兩件事件為重點內容去組織材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整個內容情節要合情合理,有真實感,敘述時可按事情發展的順序進行,同時加以點評。
參考范文: My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate.He is a good student and always ready to help others.One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road.A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move.The car nearly hit her.Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm.The little girl was saved.She told him where she lived, and he took her home.When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson.He told the teacher why he was late.He was then praised for what he had done.
第四篇:2014年中考英語書面表達
2014年中考英語書面表達(1)
安徽泗縣大莊中學 彭增奎
1.低碳生活”(low-carbon life)
Low-carbon life is good for everyone on the earth.To help protect the environment, I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car or a bus.Besides, I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.I think it’s my duty to live a low-carbon life.And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment.So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible.And we’d better not throw rubbish everywhere.If everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place.2.電腦游戲
Wang Xiaowei spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others.As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him.First, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well as a student.He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games.Second, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes.So he must give it up.I can play more sports with him after school.Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games.And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study.Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects.I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying.At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too.If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon.3.畢業感想
How time flies!I have studied in my school for three years.And I will graduate from middle school in a month.I want to share my happiness and sadness with you.I had so many beautiful memories in three years’ life.One of them impressed me very much.I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult.No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up.As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well.Since then, she has kept helping me.Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and now I’m very good at it.I think I am so lucky to become one of her students.I’ve learned a lot from her.I will try to help others when they are in trouble.I think it is a happy thing to help others.4.如何減壓讓生活更美好
Less Pressure, Better Life
Hello, boys and girls!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world.The students in our class are all under too much pressure.Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, others may worry about their exams.I’m always under pressure, too.My parents want me to be the top student in our class.So they send me to all kinds of books and make me finish them at weekends.Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother.I told her I was not lazy.I really felt tired.I needed time to relax.My mother agreed with me at last.So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.That’s all.Thank you!
5.飲食文化1
There are many differences about foods between China and Western countries.China has the history of 5000 years.We probably spend half of time on food.Chinese people choice food very carefully.They only use fresh
material to make food.For example they only eat fresh fish.Chinese have a lot of ideas and skills for cooking.We can cook chicken in over ten ways.That’s why Chinese food is so popular in the world.In Western countries like England and America, they don’t have fresh food because they buy their stored food from a supermarket.Western people would also prefer fast food like burgers and chips.They are unhealthy to human.Western people do not have many skills for cooking, most of them can only boil, steam or bake the food.By the way, western people are very good at making desert and chocolate.They can make very good cake and chocolate.They are so sweet that it make you become fat quickly.In China ,if you invite people for a meal, the person who invited other people would pay for the meal, but it’s not the good way in Western country.In western country people will think you only invited me but it’s not your responsibility to pay for me.I can afford it.They won’t be happy if you pay for them.People in China would always put dishes into customer’s plate to show their friendness, but they will think it’s not healthy because your chopsticks have been used by you.In western country like America and England, people will always give tips to a waiter after they finished meal in a restaurant.If you don’t they will not be happy because tips are one of their major income.In China this only happens in some top restaurants and hotels in large international cities like
Beijing, Shanghai and Guangzhou.Western people will also think you are rude if you make noise during the meal.Western people do not hold their bowl up even when they have a bowl of soup.6.飲食文化2 Chinese people use chopsticks and western people use forks and knives.Usually people who use forks and knives will use forks to hold the meat and cut it by knife and use a fork to help to get that piece of meat into their mouses.Chinese just use chopsticks to pick up things and pass them into their mouses.Chinese people only have three meals during a day.But Western people will have more, they have afternoon tea.Usually they would have fruits, homemade cake, tea(black tea)or biscuits with cheese.If you are a housewife and have a lot of time, you may have morning tea too.7.學習生涯
Talking about my student life, it's very interesting.We not only study many subjects but also have many parties at our school for special festivals.We learn from each other and help each other.Of course, we must study many subjects at school and do homework every day.I have learn a lot from my teachers and classmates and often discuss problems with them.Although sometimes we have many exams in our student life, they can be good for us.Everyone hates exams, but the exams can helps us realize how much we've learned from school.How interesting our school life is!Just enjoy your school life.8.保持健康生活習慣
I think healthy habits are very important for us.All of us want to be healthy.First, we should get enough sleep during the night.We can go to bed early and get up early.Staying up late is bad for our health.Second, we must have the right kinds of food.We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat.We should drink a lot of water.We should have healthy eating habits.Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies.Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day.If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.9.怎樣學好英語How to learn English well
English is important and useful to us.How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions.First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs.Watching English movies is also helpful to us.Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible.Don’t be afraid of making mistakes.The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make.We'd better join the English club and practice with others.Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines.It’s good for us.At last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries.In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.10.我的理想職業
We did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs recently.Here’s a report about my group members’ ideas.Mary wants to be a fashion designer because she likes beautiful clothes and is good at drawing.Kate loves plants and plants many flowers and trees in his garden, she wants to be a gardener, and she wants to make the cities more beautiful.Mike would like to be a writer.He’d like to share his wonderful stories with others.Tom would like to be a cook.He’d like to cook delicious food for others.I would like to be a policeman.I want to protect the people safely。
I hope everyone can realize their dreams in the future.
第五篇:中考書面表達
中考書面表達范文
1.Introduce yourself
My name is Li Lei.I was born in Fuzhou on December 15, 1994.I’m studying at Yucai Middle School.I learn Chinese, math, English, physics, chemistry, politics, and so on.I like English best.My favorite sport is football.My hobbies are drawing and computer.I’m very happy to live in a happy family.There are 3 people in my family.My father is a doctor.My mother is a teacher.We love each other very much.2.以My Hobbies為題,要求60~80個單詞。
I love collecting stamps.I collect all kinds of stamps.I think collecting stamps is great fun.It can bring me happiness, friendship and knowledge.I can also learn a lot about people, history and special times from the stamps.Some of them are very valuable.I like them very much.I am going to give you a very nice stamp.I hope you will like it.What are your hobbies? Can you tell me?
3.談談如何預防疾病,保持健康,養成良好的衛生習慣。要求60~80個單詞。
It’s very important for everyone to keep healthy.We should have good habits.For example, we should wash our hands before meals, wash our clothes often, not drink cold water and so on.At the same time, exercise is also important.We should often take exercise, because it will make us strong and germs(細菌)will have little chance to get through our bodies.We also should eat healthily.We’d better eat fruit and vegetables, because they are good for our health.If we are healthy, we can live a happy life.4.2008年北京奧運會就要到來,談談你將為奧運會作些什么。字數80字左右。Beijing will host the 2008 Olympic Games.What can we do for the Olympic Games? First , I think we must study hard from now on.We must learn to speak English better that we can help foreign visitors who come to China in 2008.Next, we must behave well and improve our environment.We can plant more trees and grass to make our country more beautiful.Then in 2008, we can go to Beijing to be a volunteer(自愿者).We are sure the 2008 Olympic Games will be successful.I can’t wait.5.根據所提示的內容寫一篇日記。(字數80左右,要求語法正確,語氣通順。)
1.時間:2007年10月1日2.和同學們去西湖公園游玩。
3.吃完冰激凌后隨手把紙扔在地上。4.一個女孩把紙撿起扔進垃圾箱。
5.我們感到慚愧,決定在公園里幫助撿垃圾,為環保盡自己的一份力量。
October l, 2007Sunny
Today is National Day and it is sunny.My classmates and I decided to go to the West lake Park.We had a very good time there.We bought some ice-cream there and after we finished it, we threw the paper to the ground.Just then a little girl ran to us, picked it up and put it into a dustbin nearby.We felt very sorry and decided to help collect rubbish in the park so that we could make contributions to protecting our environment.6.假設你是李雷,請根據下列內容給你的英國朋友吉姆寫一封信.告訴他你和同學們上周去鼓山郊游的活動和感受。字數60-80。要求:意思連貫,符合邏輯,所給的提示詞必須
都用上。
你們上午7:00在校門口集合,大約8:00到達鼓山…
meet, arrive, at the foot of, climb, on the top, have a party, play games, see, beautiful, proud, live
Dear Jim,Last Sunday, my classmates and I went to Gu Mountain.It is a very famous mountain in Fuzhou.We met at the school gate at 7: 00 and arrived at the foot of the mountain at 8: 00.As soon as we got there we began to climb the hill.It took all of us an hour to climb to the top of the mountain.Then we had a party and played games.From the top we could see the beautiful sceneries of Fuzhou.We are proud that we live in Fuzhou.Write to me soon.Best wishes.Yours,Li Lei
7.談談如何利用好網絡資源,要求60~80個單詞。
The Internet is becoming more and more important to us.Without it, we can’t do work better.We can go shopping without going out of our houses.And we can listen to music or watch movies on the Internet.It can also help a lot with our study.We can learn much knowledge on different subjects, and get information as soon as possible.But now, some of us work, study or play on the Internet for long time, especially for young people to play computer games.It’s bad for our eyes and health.If we make good use of the Internet, it will be our best friends and help us a lot.8.Great changes in my hometown
More than twenty years ago, my hometown was just a small, old and poor town.Most of people were
farmers.There were few factories.The people didn’t have enough food to eat and wore old clothes.They had a hard life.Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years.The people have found a lot of ways of making money.Now there are many tall buildings.They are very beautiful.Roads are wide and clean.People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work.Many
people have cell phones and personal computers.People’s living conditions have improved a lot.Thanks to the government’s efforts.my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful.9.Make our world more beautiful!
Protecting the environment is becoming more and more important to humans.It’s our duty to take care of the nature around us.Animals and plants are our best friends, and we should share the world with them.We shouldn’t kill wild animals, and we must protect forests because they are animals’ home.We must plant more trees and grass, they can make the world greener.The more beautiful the world is, the happier lives we will have.Let’s do our best to make the world beautiful.10.How to learn English well
As we know, English has become an international language.It is more popular than any other language in China.English is widely spoken in the world and it is the most useful language around the world.But how to learn it well?
The best way is to use it all the time.If we can talk in English, think in English we can learn it well.At school, we should learn to hear, speak, read and write carefully.We should
spend enough time in practicing English.If we keep on working hard at English, we will be able to be good at it one day.11.根據提示寫一篇詞數不少于 50左右的請假條。
假如你叫陳飛,母親病了,醫生要她在家里躺兩三天。你不得不呆在家中照顧她,因為家里沒有其他人。請據此用英文給趙老師寫一張假條,請兩天的假,要求注意格式;時間是五月九日。
Dear Miss Zhao,May 9th
I’m sorry that I can’t go to school today.My mother is ill.The doctor asked her to stay at home for two or three days.I have to take care of her at home because there is nobody else.Now, I’mThank you!
Chen Fei
12.根據以下內容以Bill的名義寫一篇失物啟事。
昨天(3月20日)下午在化學實驗室丟了一副太陽鏡,請撿到的同學與他聯系,電話號碼:776600。
Lost
March 21, 2008
Yesterday afternoon(March 20th)I lost a pair of sun-glasses in the chemistry lab.Anybody who found them will you please ring me? My telephone number is 776600.Thank you very much.Bill.13.招領啟事
FOUND
A handbag with some money and a notebook was left on the school playground this morning(March 7th).Will the owner please come to Class 2 Grade3 or call me? My telephone number is 776600.14.通 知
NOTICE(口頭)
Boys and girls :
Your attention, please.Here is a piece of exciting news to tell you.There will be a concert at 7:30 p.m.tomorrow.It will be held in School Hall.Some pop singers will sing then.All of you are welcome.Please don’t forget to take chairs with you.Thank you for listening your attention.NOTICE(書面)
A lecture will be given on how to learn English well by Prof.Green from Shanghai Foreign Language Institute in School Hall at 8:00 a.m.on Saturday.Teachers and students are welcome to attend the lecture.Teaching Affairs
Office
March 3rd ,2007
NOTICE(口頭)
Boys and girls :
Your attention, please!
The English corner of our little library in our class has been opened.We hope these books are helpful and useful to us all.Everybody can borrow books from our little library now.You should do the following :
a.Borrow only one book every time;
b.Keep the book for just two weeks and return it on time;
c.Take care of the book.Welcome to our little library.Thank you.Class1 ,Grade3
15.留言條
Lin Tao :
I arrived here by plane this morning.I am staying at Room 123 of the Friendship Hotel.Please come as soon as possible.Give me a ring call as soon as you read this note.My telephone number is ***.Li Lei
9:00 a.m.Monday
16.賀 卡
To dear LiLy
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
Thank you for helping me with my English!
We hope you will be in good health and do better in study!
Good luck!
Best wishes to you!
From your good friendLi Lei
Dear Miss Zhou,Thank you for your three-year hard working and teaching us so well.Make our best wishes to you!And Happy Teachers’ Day!
Class 1,Grade1
17.條例規定
明天,初三(6)班的同學到化學實驗室去上開學以來第一節化學實驗課。假如你是班長,請將實驗課注意事項在班上宣讀。80個詞左右。
內容要點:①未經許可,不能進入實驗室;②必須仔細聽,按照要求去做;③遵循老師的指導,不準亂摸任何東西;④實驗結束后,請打掃實驗室,物歸原處;⑤關上燈和窗
戶,鎖好門后才能離開實驗室。
Boys and girls,May I have your attention, please?I have something to tell you.
1.Don' t go in if you aren't al1owed by the teacher.2.Listen to the teacher careful1y and do what the teacher tell you to do.3.Follow the teacher's instructions.Don' t touch other things that have nothing to do with your experiment.4.Tidy the 1ab and put everything where it was after your experiment.5.Be sure to turn off the lights, c1ose the window, and lock the door before you leave the lab.That's all, thank you!
18.事故報告
When : 9:30 a.m.April 25th , 2008.Where : Guangming Road
Who : A girl , she was talking with her friend while they were riding.What : Her bike hit a car , and she hurt her head and legs badly.Result : The police came and she was taken to hospital.19.電話留言條
rdMessage :
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