第一篇：中考英語書面表達訓練教案

一． 教學課題：

中考英語書面表達訓練教案

二． 教案背景：

外研版、九年級、中考專項復習-書面表達訓練。

英語書面表達題是學生比較頭疼的題型。學生表達思想時往往寫成了漢語式。錯誤多，不連貫。近幾年的中考作文失分很大，有的學生還養成了抄前面閱讀理解的習慣。三． 教材分析：

外研版教材每個模塊后都設計了針對模塊內容writing。這對于學生習作有一定的幫助，但由于題型設計與中考作文要求有差別，加之英語課時較少，有時僅用幾分鐘時間說說而已，甚至是放棄。缺少系統的練習，學生對作文有畏懼心理，寫作方面的障礙自然就多了。

四．教學方法：

本節課針對學生作文練習少，對作文有恐懼心理的特點，設計了低層次，小梯度練習。從句子結構、動詞的時態、常用作文的開頭、結尾，到作文實戰練習，中考作文評析、作文修改。采用自主練習、小組互評、范文共賞的形式調動學生寫作的積極性。五． 教學過程： 導入：

Step1：同學們，今天我們針對書面表達題進行專項復習。書面表達題就是要求同學們針對題目的要求用英語寫作文，我們在日常作文

中主要出現的錯誤有： 1.句子結構錯誤。

eg.I very like music.→I like music very much.I am want to be a doctor.→ I want to be a doctor.2.動詞時態、語態使用不當。

eg.He goes to the hospital last Sunday.→

He went to the hospital last Sunday.She chose to give a speech at the party.→ She was chosen to give a speech at the party.3.詞匯運用錯誤。名詞、動詞、形容詞、副詞/連詞等，也包含短語、不定式使用不當。

eg.They had to work very hardly when they were young.→

They had to work very hardly when they were young.Discuss:小組討論一下，平時自己在作文過程中常出現的錯誤。Step2:師：怎樣減少出錯呢？首先讓我們看一下常用的句子結構。句子成分可分為主語,謂語,賓語,表語,定語,狀語,同位語。但我們常用的簡單句的結構有： 主語 + 謂語(及物動詞)+ 賓語 People enjoy music.主語 + 謂語(不及物動詞)He often swims in a river.主語 + 系動詞 + 表語 You look lovely.I’m impressed.所以我們下筆時要分清句中的主語、謂語、賓語、表語，注意他們的位置。

小組活動：請同學們翻譯下列句子。

1.她母親是一位教師。（Her mother is a teacher.）

2.昨天湯姆去了網球俱樂部。（Tom went to a table tennis club.）Step3：師：接下來讓我們討論一下怎樣減少動詞時態或語態錯誤。

生：關鍵是確定文章的要求，是記敘過去的事還是描寫現在或將來的事。

師：很對，2009年濰坊市初中學業水平考試考試書面表達題的要求是：豐富多彩的初中生活即將結束，有哪件事情讓你至今印象深刻，甚至難以忘懷？請以An unforgettable experience為題，寫一篇英語短文。你們覺得應該用什么時態來寫呢？

生：多用動詞的一般過去時態。

師：很好。

Step4: 當然文章寫作自然有一些常用的開頭、結尾可以借鑒。那么常用的開頭有： 1.時間開頭法：

eg.Today is Thursday,----------

It is 7 o’clock , my father is reading newspaper.2.天氣開頭法： eg.It was rainy today.It happened on a wet day of July.3.開門見山：

eg.Last weekends we went out for a walk.4.名言引人：

eg.When in Rome, do as the Romans do.------------------常用的結尾有： 1.總結法

eg.Tough we were tired, we felt very tired.2.發出號召或倡議

eg.I’m proud of what I’ve learned.If everyone makes a contribution to protecting our environment , our world will become much more beautiful.3.表達祝愿

eg.I hope you will have a wonderful time.師：當然常用的開頭結尾還有不少，希望同學們多總結學習。Step5最后，作文的關鍵還在于審題：一定要讀懂要求。如要求寫得體裁、字數、必須包含的內容、書寫等等。我們就以2010年濰坊市中考英語試題為例：大家熱熱身：

某英語網站進行了一次中學生健康情況調查，發現很多中學生的健康狀況令人擔憂。主要原因有：飲食結構不合理；體育鍛煉不足；心理壓力大，不能與人很好地溝通等等。為此，他們發起了題為How Io Keep Fit的征文活動，倡導中學生的健康生活方式。請你寫一篇 80詞左右的英語短文，說明如何保持身體健康。（文中不要出現作者

本人的真實信息）

小組活動：把寫好的作文在小組之內交流，選出寫得較好的在班內展示。

（小組優秀者到講臺讀自己文章）Step6.Sum-up

這節課我們學習了書面表達題的一些解題技巧，當然在實際學習中還需要不斷的總結練習，如養成記筆記的習慣。學生個人總結自己學習體會。Step7.Homework:

我們以2011年濰坊市初中學業水平考試作文題為作業：

假設你是某文雜志的“知心姐姐”（Agony Sister）, Helen, 請閱讀下面的這封求助信，并根據信的內容寫一封回信。要求：1.80詞左右；2.文中不要出現作者本人的真實信息。

Dear Helen, Last Sunday, my classmates and I went to the park.I wanted to take some photos.My father was out at that time, so I took his camera without telling him.Unfortunately, the camera was out of my bag and dropped on the ground when I was climbing the hill.It didn’t work at all.I put it back quietly after I returned home.And I haven’t told him till now.when I face to my father, I feel terrible.What should I do?

Yours, David

Dear David ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes，Helen

六．教學反思：

本節課我從學生習作易出現的錯誤入手，分析出錯的原因，進行及時的練習。開頭結尾進行了適當的總結，小組之內交流合作。以濰坊市近三年中考作文為題例，讓學生感受中考作文的要求、難度。不足之處是學生練習時間相對少一些。

七．教學資源

2010年山東省濰坊市初中學業水平考試寫作答案（滿分15分）One possible version: How to Keep Fit

As we all know，health is very important．But how to keep fit? Firstly, we should have a good diet．That’s eating more fresh fruit and vegetables, but less junk food.Drink more water instead of coke or other unhealthy drinks.Secondly, it's good for us to take more exercise, such as running, walking, ball games and so on.At last, we should learn to relax ourselves.We can listen to some light music, chat with families or friends and have a good sleep.To keep fit is not difficult if you care it a lot.評分標準：詞數在70—100之間；如果少于70詞，應酌情扣分。1．內容充實、語言流暢，能恰當地運用較復雜句式及習慣用法等，語法、拼寫錯誤極少（13—15分）：

2．較通順完整，有少量語法、拼寫錯誤（10—12分）； 3．基本要點寫出，有稍多語法、拼寫錯誤（6—9分）； 4．篇幅不足，錯誤較多，語句小通順（3—5分）； 5．雙寫了個別句子或單詞（0—2分）。

2011年濰坊市初中學業水平考試英 語 試 題 寫作答案及評分標準： One possible version: Dear David, First, I think you'd better tell your father immediately.It you tell him the truth, he'll be angry with you.But at least you'll prove how honest you are.Then I think you should offer to pay.But you shouldn't use your pocket money.Yes, a camera is expensive, maybe you can't afford it.If you offer to do some jobs around the house, he'll realize that you're truly sorry.Oh, remember to be careful next tune.Best wishes, Helen 評分標準：詞數在60—100之間；如果少于60詞，應酌情扣分。

1.內容充實、語言流暢，能恰當地運用較復雜句式及習慣用法等，語法、拼寫錯誤極少（13—15分）；

2.較通順完整，有少量語法、拼寫錯誤（10—12分）； 3.基本要點寫出，有較多語法、拼寫錯誤（6—9分）； 4.篇幅不足，錯誤較多，語句吧通順（3—5分）； 5.只寫了個別句子或單詞（0—2分）。

第二篇：英語書面表達限時訓練

英語書面表達限時訓練

國內某英文報招聘兼職記者，報道2012年奧運會。假設你是李 目前在英國做交換生，想應聘這份工作，請按下列要點寫一封自薦信。

1.個人情況：熟悉本地情況，有相關工作經歷。

2.能力優勢：英語好、愛好體育、善于交往、團隊合作等。

3.承諾：保證按要求完成任務。

注意：詞數100-120，參考詞匯：交換生 exchange student Dear Sir or Madam:,I am writing to apply for the job as a part-time repoter for The london Olympic Games.

第三篇：初三英語書面表達訓練

中考作文】2013中考英語作文預測

2012中考英語作文預測：8個要準備的話題 1.關于學習英語的話題: 復習要點 Learn English 請你以“How to learn English well?”寫份演講稿80字左右.范文: Dear classmates: We have been learning English for over 6 years and really love it.English is one of the most important langnages in the world.It’s necessary for us to learn it well.How do you study? Everyone learns English in different ways.I think the best way to improve your English is to improve your English skills.They are/include listening reading and writing.We should practice them every day.we should remember more words and grammar.Reading more English story books or novels Watching more English cartoon TVs or moves.Listening English tapes and repeating after the speaker.Second you are not afraid to make any mistakes you speak English as much as possible.Third you ask the teachers when you don’t understand any knowledge.It’s very good for you if you are interested in Egnlish.You will find studying Egnlish is interesting and helpful.One more thing remember “Practice makes perfect”!I hope everyone makes progress.Thanks!

2.衛生健康飲食:健康一直是人們關注的問題我校要舉行以“關愛健康”為題的主題班會,請根據下表內容談談你的看法,寫一篇80字左右的演講槁。

保持健康的重要性

保持健康的方法

保持健康的結論

(你的看法?)1.多吃水果蔬菜保持飲食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物2.多鍛煉健身強體;3.鄙棄不良習慣

(你的看法?)How to stay our health /fit? 范文1: Dear boys and grils : I’m talking about / Here is my advice about how to keep health/fit? As a middle shool student first you’d better do more exercise such as playing ball games running swimming and jumping rope(繩子).Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals Don’t eat too much meat and sugar but more vegetables and fruit.Third you need enough sleep or rest.Next keep yourself happy.As people often say smiling makes younger.Last you mustn’t drink wine or smoke.They are bad for your health.That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.Thank you bye!范文2:Dear boys and girls: I’m talking about / Here is my advice about how to keep health/fit? Today many teenagers are unhealthy because they do less exercise eat more junk food isn’t enough time to sleep.If we keep fit we must keep taking exercises every day.Eat lots of fruit and vegetables.Sleep for about 8 hours a night.Stay away from cigarettes/smoking/drugs毒品.Early to bed early to rise/get up.Breathe(呼吸)the fresh air in the open air.Keep happy every day.That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.3.假如你叫李華,你校初三年級同學正在開展一場討論,主題是“初三學生要不要參加體育鍛煉”。請根據下面所提供的信息,用英語總結出討論情況。

提示: 70%的學生

30%的學生

應該每天進行體育鍛煉,但不要時間過長

鍛煉浪費時間、使人疲勞

鍛煉能增強體質,保持健康

鍛煉以后很興奮,較長時間不能投入學習

鍛煉能使大腦休息,使學習效果更好

鍛煉中可能會受傷

要求:語句通順,句意連貫;詞數為80詞左右;發言稿的開頭已寫好,但不計入總詞數。

Dear classmates: I’m Li Hua.After the discussion we found that 70% of the students think they should take all kinds of exercise every day but not spend too much time.They think exercise builds body and can keep them healthy.Sports also let them have a good rest so that their study will be more effective.On the other hand 30% students believe taking exercise is tiring and it’s a waste of time.They say that after having sports they are too excited for a long time to focus on their lessons.And it’s possible to be hurt while doing sports.4.環境問題:今天環境變得越來越糟糕環境問題影響著人們的工作學習生活等而我們的工作生活生產等又使環境污染越來越嚴重..........如何保護我們的環境?請以“ How to protect/save our environment/world? ”為題寫一篇短文。提示:存在問題:1.水污染越來越嚴重 2.砍伐森林嚴重 3.大氣污染嚴重 4.白色垃圾 等 要求 : 如何改善/保護環境?至少:3---4個方面, 80字左右的。

范文: How to protect/save our environment/world? The environmental pollution is worse and worse /more and more seriously today.Water is polluted we have no clean water to drink Many trees are cutting down some animals is getting less and less.Some factories is poring dirty air in the sky the population is increasing faster and faster resources is getting less and less…etc.Not only does it affect our lives and health it also has a great affection in the future.people's health has been greatly affected by air noise and water pollution.Many people died of diseases.In order to live a better life we need protect our world.We shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere.We want to recycle reduce reuse things.Don’t waste things This saves money and reduces pollution.Use things for as long as possible.We don’t use plastic bags.We must plant more trees and stop the people cutting them.We hope our world is more and more beautiful.5.關于“人口問題 POPULATION ”

6.關于中學生使用手機的優缺點,談談你的看法(見2008年初中畢業寫作專題復習)。范文:略

7.介紹自己的興趣余愛好(單元四)。

8.春節習俗與計劃,如何過2009年的春節,假如你是LINGLING給外國朋友JHON發一份電子郵件。

The spring Festival Dear John, The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China.It is on January 1st according to the Chinese lunar calendar(中國的農歷).It’s China’s New Year’s Day.So usually a month before the festival people begin to buy food clothes and decorations(裝飾)for houses.About a week before the festival housewives are busy preparing the new year dinner.And they will do a lot of washing and cleaning in the houses.People who are far away on business are hurrying to return home for the new year’s family reunion(團聚).On New Year Eve each family will gather tighter eating talking and watching TV for almost the whole night.And there will be some interesting programmes on TV.The children are the happiest of all because they can get presents from parents or grandparents.On Lunar New Year’s Day after getting up people will eat dumplings.When they meet their neighbours or friends they’ll say: “Happy New Year!”

I am ready to spend with together my family on the Spring Festival I’am going to see my grandparents and friends.I ’m going to Disneyland in HONGKONG with my parents I will revise lessons do exercise every day help the old and children.Welcome to China.Waiting for your e –mail.Yours

Lingling

Happy new year to everyone!

英語書面表達

一、人物

1、以“The Most Interesting Teacher”為題，根據下面的提示，寫一篇90詞左右的英語短文，可以作適當的發揮。

注意：如果是女教師，則稱她為“Sue”;如果是男教師，則稱他為“Oliver”.1.Who is the most interesting teacher in your heart? And what does the teacher teach? 2.What is the teacher like? 3.Why do you think the teacher is the most interesting? The most interesting teacher

The Most Interesting Teacher I think my history teacher is the most interesting teacher in our school.His name is Oliver.He is a tall man with glasses.He is kind to everyone.In my mind, Oliver is the most knowledgeable person.He often tells us some interesting historical stories in class, such as Cao Cao and Liu Bei.I became interested in history when I was very young.I fell in love with Oliver and his classes.I regard Oliver as the most interesting teacher.2、Write at least 60 words about the topic “I’m proud of myself”.(以“我為自己感到自豪”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不計入總詞數。)（注意：短文中不得出現任何人名、校名及其他相關信息，否則不予評分）Use the following points as are reference(以下內容僅供參考)What kind of person are you? What makes you proud of yourself?(Give an example/examples.)Why are you proud of yourself?

I'm proud of myself I used to be a shy girl and I used to be afraid of speaking in public.But now I am outgoing.All is because of the last speech competition.I am good at English, so the teacher asked me to enter the speech competition.My classmates supported me and they were sure I could win the competition.I didn't want to let them down.So I encouraged myself to be brave.I took a deep breath and kept smiling.I practiced so }lard that I won the competition successfully.My teacher and classmates are proud of me, and I am proud of myself, too.二、假期計劃

3、同學們很快就畢業了, 馬上要迎來快樂的暑假和2012年的倫敦奧運會,你的心中是否充滿期待?請用英語寫一篇90詞左右的短文, 和大家分享你心中的暑期計劃.寫作要求: 1.主要選擇通過電視或現場看哪幾種比賽項目? 最喜歡哪幾位體育明星?為什么? 2.主要安排哪幾項體育鍛煉活動?(包括時間,地點和目的意義等)注意: 短文中不允許出現與考生本人相關的相關的真實姓名,地名,校名等信息.The summer vacation and the 2012 London Olympic Games are coming.It's a pleasure for me to tell you my plan of this coming summer vacation.During these days, I'll choose to watch the Olympic Games by TV, especially I will spend my time on the table tennis, badminton and weight lifting because I like these sports.Of all the players I like Zhang Yining, Lin Dan and l.iu Xiang best.1 think they are very excellent players.As for myself, I'll also plan for several PE exercise activities.Firstly, I'll do morning exercises every morning to build up my body.Secondly, I'll play table tennis with my friends to be a second Zhang Yining.Through these activities, I believe I'll be stronger and more energetic to get prepared for the study of senior middle school.Hello, everyone!Summer vacation is coming.I'd like to talk about my plan for the summer vacation.I have two plans.The first plan is to teach stay-at-home kids in the village.I'm always looking forward to being an English teacher.I will prepare for the class and teach the children carefully.If I do it, I can get much experience about being a teacher.That will be useful for me.As for the second plan, it's to raise money for the children in Yushu.I think we should try our best to help them rebuild their new home.I am sure I can have a special and exciting vacation.Let's be helpful and useful in the summer vacation.That's all.Thank you.4、暑假是每個中學生期盼的一段時光，請你圍繞如何過一個輕松、愉快、有意義的暑假，寫一篇90詞左右的英語短文。

注意：

1、文中不得出現真實的姓名、校名；

2、下列詞匯可供參考：summer holiday, travel, do sports, do some reading, help… with housework, take part in …

A Meaningful Summer Holiday Many students maybe look forward to having a good summer holiday.I think traveling is the best choice on holiday.We could have a good rest and go to visit lots of places of interest.We could do some sports, like basketball, football and so on.What's more, we can have fun doing some reading.()f course, we can't forget to help our parents with housework.If we do something to help others who need help, we will have a more meaningful summer holiday.三、一次經歷

5、在你成長的歷程中，有些日子會讓你開心快樂，經久難忘。請以“My Pleasant Day”為題，用英語寫一篇80詞左右的短文，記述你那天的活動和感受（如exciting, fun…）Ways to relax? TV, Computer, Sports, Music, Shopping… Work? Homework, Housework, Cooking, Cleaning… Other things? Enough sleep, Delicious food… 寫作要求：1.參考所給提示，可適當發揮； 2.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整。

My Pleasant Day

Yesterday I was busy, but I was really happy.After breakfast, my parents took me to the amusement park.We took some photos over there.My mother bought me a toy car.I even played the roller coaster and that made me felt excited.After leaving the amusement park, we went to visit my grandparents.I spent the whole afternoon chatting with my grandfather.My parents prepared delicious food for us.We had a wonderful dinner together.What a pleasant day it was!

6、反思可以使每個人成長進步，為未來做好計劃可以鑄就成功。初中的即將結束，新的高中學習將要學習將要到來。請你用英語記錄下一兩件最讓你感動或遺憾的事，同時為你將來的生活做一點設計，下列句型可以幫助你完成作文：One thing in my mind is …., I am happy that …, It is a pity that I didn’t …., I will…

寫作要求：內容真實，要點齊全，行文邊貫，詞數90詞左右。

My life in junior school will come to an end soon.I am happy that I am going to have another chance of beginning my study again.It is a pity that I didn't study harder in the past because I spent a lot of time playing computer games.Once I even fell asleep in front of a computer.However, in last year's Paralympics, Nataliya, a ping-pong player, changed my attitude towards life.She was known as “Venus in Poland” for having only one arm and set: a good example for me.So I will take part in more activities and make more friends to make my life more meaningrul.四、英語學習

7、回想你三年的英語學習歷程，豐富多彩的英語課堂活動一定給你留下了許多難忘的印象。請你以“What should we do in English class?”為題寫一篇英語短文，談談你在英語課堂上學生應該怎樣做，才能使英語學習更有效。

寫作提示：1.Listen to the teacher;2.Take part in activities;3.Be confident in ourselves.寫作要求：1.文稿須包括所有提示內容，可適當發揮。

2.文稿中不得出現真實的人名、校名和地名；3.詞數：80詞左右

What should we do in English class?

In English class, we should listen to the teacher carefully.This is the most important for us.When we have any questions, we should ask the teacher or classmates at once.It's necessary for us to take notes in class, too, because reading notes is helpful to review what we have learned in class.When the teacher asks us to practice English in groups, we should take an active part in the activity.We should be confident in ourselves and not be afraid of making mistakes.If we keep on working hard at English, we'll be able to be good at it one day.五、健康

8、某英語網站進行了一次中學生健康情況調查，發現很多中學生的健康狀況令人擔憂。主要原因有：飲食結構不合理；體育鍛煉不足；理壓力過大，不能與人很好地溝通等。為此，他們發起了題為“How to keep Fit”的征文活動，倡導中學生的健康生活方式。請你寫一篇80詞左右的短文，說明如何保持身體健康。（文中不要出現作者本人的真實信息）寫作參考：

1、保持健康的重要性

2、保持健康的方法

3、談談你的看法

How to Keep Fit

Everyone wants to keep healthy.But how to keep fit? Firstly, you should eat more vegetables and fruits, because they are good for your body, just as the old saying, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” Secondly, you'd better go to bed early and get up early.As we all know “Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy.” Thirdly, you should do more exercise.For example, you can run in the park and the street in the morning.No sports, no life.At last, you should always try to make yourself happy.If you can do these, I think you can keep healthy.Keeping Health

Health is very important for us.Good health can make us enjoy our life and do well in everything.While poor health means nothing.So, we mus keep healthy.How to keep healthy then?

First, it is very important for us to take more fruits and vegetables because they give us enough vitamins, and we have to keep a balanced diet.So we should not eat the food with lots of sugar and fat.Second, we'd better take enough exercise every day to make our bodies strong.Besides, we should be happy every day.Finally, we have to give up those had habits such as drinking and smoking.In a word, to be in good health, we must be in high spirits and take good care of ourselves.六、畢業留言

9、初中生活即將結束，新的生活即將開啟，請為你最好的同學寫一段畢業留言：他（她）給你留下的深刻印象、你們在一起的快樂時光及對他（她）最美好的祝愿。

寫作要求：1.可參考下圖所給提示詞,也可適當發揮,開頭已給出(不計入總詞數)2.80詞左右.How time flies!We have been studying together for 3 years.You are always so happy that your smiles seem to be more shining than the sunlight.!shall never forget that monthly-examination, in which I got a really low mark.I just felt the sky was going to fall down.Just then, you came out.You comforted me a lot, which encouraged me to keep studying hard.You touched me deeply.You are so diligent a person that you certainly will have a bright future.Good luck to you.七、愛好

10、現在網絡越來越發達，中學生上網的利弊已成為人們討論的焦點。請參考下面的信息并結合自己的觀點寫一篇90詞左右的短文談談你的看法。

網絡的優點：課后放松，輔助學習，傳遞信息，開闊視野，網絡交友等…

網絡的缺點：上網時間長有害健康，沉迷網絡游戲，不思學業，不良網站，誤導學業，虛擬網絡，真假難辨…

Internet plays an important role in my daily life.But it has both positive and negative points.On the one hand, surfing the Internet is very easy and it is becoming more and more popular

among teenagers.They are so interesting and enjoyable that students all love playing them.It's true that it can not only do good for the students but also be of great interest and make them happy and relaxed.On the other hand, surfing the Internet has some disadvantages.Some students are so addicted to the games that they can't get out of them, which would waste time and do harm to their study.What's more, there are some bad materials in the games or on the Internet, which would have a had influence on their health.I think that Internet is a good thing, but we also need to get rid of it sometimes.Habits Habits whether good or bad, are gradually formed.When a person does a certain thing again, he'll be obligea to it in the same way by some unseen force.Thus habit is formed.Once a habit is formed, it is difficult and sometimes almost impossible to get rid of it.It is therefore very important that we should take care in the formation of habits.Good habits have many advantages.Going to bed early and getting up early makes us healthy.Diligence helps to succeed.Honesty helps win the respect and trust of others.If we form bad habits, such as rudeness, laziness, lying and stealing,we might be ruined by them.We ought to keep away from bad habits and try to acquire habits good ourselves and others.八、關系處理

11、父母與孩子之間常有摩擦.父母想讓孩子聽他們的,按他們說的做,但孩子更愿意自己選擇朋友,自己設計(design)未來，更加獨立（independent）地生活，所以不和往往在所難免。解決（solve）這一問題的最好辦法只有相互理解。孩子們應學會尊重父母，聆聽他們的意見，因為他們有更豐富的人生閱歷（experiences）.父母也應盡量和孩子交換（exchange）意見，不能過分地責備（scold）和打罵，那樣會使孩子遠離父母。把孩子當作朋友，這樣他們會信任父母，會使家庭生活更幸福。

請根據中文提示，用英語寫一篇短文，把以上觀點正確表達出來，不少于90詞

Parents and Children Parents and children often disagree with each other.Parents want their children to listen to them and do what they ask their children to do.But children want to be free to choose their friends, design their future and live a life in a more independent way.So the disagreement between them can't be avoided.The best way to solve the problem is to understand each other.Children should learn to respect their parents' opinions, for parents have richer experiences of life.Parents should also try to exchange opinions with their children.Don't scold or beat them too much.These will make them away from parents.Treat them as friends.Then children will believe in their parents.It will make family life much happier.How to Get along Well with Others

In our daily life, we have to come into contact with people in every walk of life.Therefore, it is very important for us to know how to get along with other people.To get along well with others and win their friendships, we must observe strictly the following words.To begin with, we need to be honest with others and should always say what we mean.Lies will surely make people stay far away from us in the long run.After all, honesty is the best policy.Second, we have to be humble enough.If we are proud in public, we can hardly win other's respect, not to mention “friendship”.Finally, we must not be selfish.We should learn how to show concern for others.As long as we abide by get along well with others.what mentioned above, we will find it easy

九、夢想

12、請你以未來計劃為話題,根據以下提示寫一篇90詞左右的短文.1.你的夢想職業及居住地等 2.你做出這些選擇的理由;

3.你為實現未來計劃應做的努力;4.有一天你實現了你的理想,你怎樣回報父母,回報社會.My Dream in the Future I have a great dream.I want to be adoctor when I grow up.I will work in the hospital in my hometown.On the one hand, to work as a doctor is very important and useful.Because a doctor can help people who are ill.And a doctor can help people to keep healthy and also help sick people enjoy their life.On the other hand, I can keep not only other people but also my family healthy.When they are ill, I can give them some advice on health.I love my hometown and I love the people there.So I want to be a doctor.At present.I must study hard so that I can learn more knowledge.Then I may go to a medical university.If I am a doctor, I will work hard and try my best to help other people.I hope my dream will come true.十、最喜愛的學科

13、My Favourite Subject My favourite subject is Chinese teacher.I like it because I have a lovely Chinese teacher.She is very kind to us.She teachers us very carefully.And her classes are very interesting and funny.In Chinese class, I always listen carefully ahd take notes.I am not afraid of making mistakes in learning.I often read Chinese novels and watch the TV program-Quiz Show after school.That not only makes me know great Chinese culture and history, but also helps me improve my Chinese skills.Thanks to my Chinese teacher, I will learn Chinese better!

English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old.But at the very beginning,listening seemed a little difficult for me.So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs.And I found it really helped a lot.In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well.For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries.I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.十一、環保

14、從2008年6月1日起，國家將禁止商家免費提供塑料供袋，從而掀起了全國性的“拒塑”環保運動。假如你是李華，準備以“What Can We Do for the Environment”為題，寫一篇保護環境的英語演講稿。

寫作提示：1.在購物時用布袋子替代塑料袋.2.盡可能地再利用使用過的課本.3.離開教室應關燈.4.走路或騎自行車上學齡前5.簡述理由: 保護環境,減少污染,節約能源等 寫作要求: 1.詞數90詞左右

2.可根據要點適當增加細節,使文章連貫，3.文中不能出現真實姓名和校名,否則以零分處理.What Can We Do for the Environment Hello, everyone.I'm Li Hua.It's nice to speak about what we can do for the environment, and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags in stead of plastic bags when we go shopping.It helps to protect the environment.The second thing we can do is to reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can.We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy.What's more, it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school.We should try our best reduce pollution and waste.In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference the environment.I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.Thank you for your listening!

第四篇：中考英語書面表達 命題作文

中考英語書面表達 命題作文

命題作文就是我們依據所給題目,確定中心,選擇材料,寫出符合題意,內容表達具體、充分的文章。

寫命題作文通常要注意以下幾點：

一、審準題目：文章的中心要對題目的分析來確定,一定要弄清主題的內涵,確立與文章聯系的主題思想,表達不能游離于主題,否則即使內容再精彩,也是“跑題”作文,得分將會大打折扣,因此,寫命題作文最重要的是先審清題目,確立要表現的中心。

二、構思結構：就是開放思路,啟動聯想,構想表現形式,勾勒出文章的結構層次,依次寫出引言段,主題句,發展段和結尾句,努力使之新穎,別致。

三、選擇材料：這一點很重要,一定要圍繞想表現的中心去選擇組織材料,所選的材料必須典型精要。

四、表達：就是用最確切明了的語言貫穿材料,表達自己的思想,力爭用符合英語語法規則。英語表達習慣,最順暢自然的詞,句,段去表達中心思想,與表現中心無關的話即使再生動形象也不要去寫。就寫作的目的表現形式來看,命題作文分為三種形式：

1、記敘文類；

2、說明文類；

3、議論文類。

下面就談一談記敘文的寫作

記敘文就是以記敘人物的經歷或事物發展變化過程為主的一種文章。在初中寫作訓練中,記敘文是最基本,最常見,最重要的書面表達形式。記敘文有“六要素”即指“時間,地點,人物和事 件的起因,經過和結果”。一篇記敘文只要把這些要素寫清楚,文章就會內容具體, 眉目清晰,中心意思明確。一般情況下,這六要素中的人物,時間,地點作為開端,要寫在文章的開頭。事件,原因常作為記敘文的段落發展,又稱為文章的主體部分,應該放在文章的中間。結果作為記敘文的結局常放在文章的末尾處。

記敘文從寫作的線索上來看,有三種表現形式：

1、以人物為主,圍繞人物組織材料。

2、以事物為中心,圍繞事件組織材料或圍繞事件寫人。

3、以寫景狀物,描寫為主。

寫好記敘文應注意以下幾點:

1、明確寫作目的:寫文章的目的就是確切表達一個中心思想,文章的一切內容應自始自終地為展開中心服務。

2、選擇細節材料:選擇好的細節材料就是為了更好地表現主題,所選擇的材料要有代表性,典型性。寫作內容要詳略得當,主要情節應詳細寫,次要內容要簡略或概述。

1)關于寫人物,一般要把某人的年齡,外貌和性格特征,人物行為,心理活動等方面簡要概括出來。同時要略加點評或感想。

2)關于寫事件,事件是記敘的核心,往往有它的起因,經過和結局。寫事件要比較詳細地交代事情的來龍去脈,同時要重點突出,表達精練,防止渲染。

3、恰當的選擇寫作方法:記敘文的寫作方法就是指寫作的順序,文章先寫什么,后寫什么都要有一定順序。

中考經典展示：

(1)以My Mother為題寫一篇短文。(2003揚州)

內容要點:1.我的媽媽是護士,工作努力。2.上個月去北京,抗擊SARS(fight against)。3.一個月沒有回來。4.保護我們免受侵害。5.我愛媽媽,為媽媽自豪。

標題已給出，要求1.寫清時間 2.要點要完整 3.可適當增加內容 4.字數在60個詞左右

(2)班會上,老師要求每位同學用英語介紹自己的一位朋友,請你根據所提供的要點為題寫一篇短文。(2003南京)

要點:1.Who is he / she。2.When and where did you get to know him / her。3.Why do you like him / her。注意:1.文章的開頭和結尾已給出(不計入詞數)2.詞數60-80,須包括以上要點,可適當增加細節使短文意思通暢。3.條理清楚,語意連貫,句式規范,字跡工整。4.文中不得出現真實的人名。校名等相關信息。

寫作實踐范例

以“My Chinese Teacher”為標題寫一篇字數為80-100之間的英語短文。提示內容如下:

1、孫老師今年36歲,中等身材。

2、她關心。熱愛學生,工作認真負責。

3、她語文課講得生動。有趣。My Chinese Teacher Of all the subjects, I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher.Though she has been teaching us for only three years, I respect and love her very much.My Chinese teacher is thirty-six years old and she is neither tall nor short.Ms Sun works very hard.She is always the first to come and the last to leave her office.She tries to make her classes lively and interesting.And we enjoy her lessons very much.Ms Sun is very kind and friendly to us.And we're getting on well with each other.But she is very strict with us in our studies.Ms Sun teaches us so well that we all enjoy learning Chinese.All the students think she is one of the most popular teachers in our school.新題導練

請以“My Classmate”為標題寫一篇記敘文

要求:

1、主題明確。語言流暢。思路清晰。

2、字數在100字以內。

思路點撥

寫記敘文要按照事物發展的客觀規律敘述,所敘述的內容要交代清楚,條理清晰,重點突出,主次分明,詳略得當。

這篇文章也是記敘文,主人公應該用第三人稱,時態以一般過去時為主。本文以主人公為中心線索,以

一、兩件事件為重點內容去組織材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整個內容情節要合情合理,有真實感,敘述時可按事情發展的順序進行,同時加以點評。

參考范文： My Classmate

Liu Kai is my classmate.He is a good student and always ready to help others.One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road.A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move.The car nearly hit her.Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm.The little girl was saved.She told him where she lived, and he took her home.When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson.He told the teacher why he was late.He was then praised for what he had done.

第五篇：2014年中考英語書面表達

2014年廣東中考預測之書面表達

2007-2013年廣東韶關真題寫作 07廣東

I think the most important invention of all the time is the mobile phone.We all know that many years ago it was very difficult for us to send and get information from one place to another.It is the mobile phone that makes it very easy to get information from all over the world.Parents can use the mobile phone to get in close touch with their kids.And we can also enjoy the music or films/a film through the mobile phone.08廣東SaturdayJune 12thCloudy

badly ill when Hong was 11 and his mother left them.He had to look after his father and sister.He didn’t accept helps from others and depended on his own.He was a superman in my eyes.No one can avoid facing difficulties.But many teenagers are too weak to face troubles.Learn to be strong and never say “I can’t”, tomorrow will be another fine day.(82 words)

09廣東The Teacher I Never Forget

How time flies!Three years has passed since I became a middle school student.I had very good memories of my classmates and teachers.The teacher I never forget is Mr Zhang, an English teacher.He’s a tall man with thick glasses.He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us.He’s humorous and always makes his class lively and interesting.He’s kind but is strict with us.He never allows us to pretend that we know what we don’t know.He often tells us that it’s no use memorizing new words without understanding.My English has greatly improved with his help.I must say many thanks to Mr Zhang.I wish him a healthy and happy life in the future.10廣東How to Keep Safe in School

Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough? For example，one day, two students ran after each other in the hallway．Suddenly, one of them fell down and hurt his leg because of the wet floor．Therefore, he had to stay in hospital for two weeks.So I think students should always walk but not run in the hallways．And the teachers had better keep an eye on the students after class and stop them from running．At last, I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety in school．(82 words)

11廣東My Earth Hour 2011（有參與）

The Earth Hour was from 8:30 pm to 9:30 pm on Saturday, March 26th this year.It was the moment my friends and I

waited for a long time.We talked and played games at home with all the lights off.We were glad to be in the Earth Hour.As a student, I have done lots of things to protect the environment.For example, I always carry a cloth bag while shopping.Besides, I often ride a bike to school instead of taking a car.I think we can care for the earth by doing so.Let's take part in the Earth Hour next year.I believe that we can make our earth a better place to live in.(90 words)

12廣東 社會公共行為舉止 when I traveled in Guangzhou.I can't stand bad manners in public, either.In fact, I really get angry when people jump the queen and smoke in non-smoking areas.I think it's wrong to break the rules in public.In my opinion, we should know more about good manners.On the other hand, we had better stop people around us from being rude.If we can't stop them, we can always ask the police or someone like that for help.13廣東 面對謊言 Hongxing Middle School.Yesterday afternoon, the student on duty said he had to see the doctor.I offered to do the cleaning for him.Later I found him playing basketball on the playground.I was quite unhappy.He didn’t tell the lie.I would do the duty for him if he asked.As students, we should always tell the truth even if others might not agree with us.When others tell lies, we’d better make them understand that honesty is the best policy.13廣東面對騙局 Hongxing Middle School.Last year, I received a chain letter saying that only kind people could receive the letter.If I sent if to as many people as possible, I would get good luck.But if I didn’t , I would die the next day.I was so scared that I sent it to

some of my friends.As students, we shouldn’t forward such chain letters.If we don’t know how to deal with them, we’d better ask our teachers or parents for help.13廣東面對謠言 Hongxing Middle School.I heard a rumor of the same kind this year.It is said that a Chinese medicine called Banlangen could kill the flu of H7N9 or some diseases like that.So it was sold out in our city very soon.I thought it was so silly and I didn’t believe it at all.I would rather ask the doctor for advice than buy the medicine.As students, we should keep calm when we face such rumors.Besides, we shouldn’t believe or spread them.2014年廣東中考書面表達預測——十大考點

(一)時事新聞, 國家政策, 家鄉變化(六)旅游和介紹地方篇

(二)健康問題(七)新生事物評價

(三)關于環境保護問題(節約用水、用電、保護動物)(八)夢想和未來

(四)語言學習(九)煩惱篇

(五)寫人記事篇（重點+好人好事）(十)社會準則, 公共道德

1.作弊問題

今年1月央視新聞頻道報道,個別培訓機構在2014年MBA招生考試中,通過考前發放無線電作弊器材、考中傳送考試答案等方式組織考生在哈爾濱理工大學考點進行作弊。目前，學生考試作弊現象嚴重，請圍繞以下要點談談其中原

因以及個人建議。原因：1.考試太濫 2.自身勤奮不夠3.考生自擬4.考生自擬看法與建議：至少兩點（考生自擬）

At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit-cheating in examinations.There are three main reasons.First, schools have given students too many exams, some of which are too difficult.Second, some students are not hard-working and they don't work hard at their lessons.Third, they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet.So they haven't enough time to prepare for the exams.Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study.We students should be honest and diligent, and only in this way can we improve our study and make progress.Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves.2.珍惜時間

2014年2月7日，國家主席習近平在俄羅斯索契接受俄羅斯電視臺專訪時談到：“今年春節期間，中國央視春晚上一首《時間都去哪兒了》唱入了人們的心中。對我來說，問題在于我個人的時間都去哪兒了？當然是都被工作占去了。我經常能做到的是讀書，讀書已成了我的一種生活方式。”而對于我們中學生來說，又應該怎樣節約時間呢？

How to save time

We have ever heard of “Time is money.Time is life.” Time is very important to everyone.But we can see people waste their time everywhere.They spend much time playing computer games, drinking, sleeping late in the morning and so on.It’s necessary for us to save our valuable time.We have to listen to our teachers carefully in class so that we can save more time to learn others after class.We should make a plan to study at home so that we can learn more with less time.If we can make good use of time, we are sure to get more.3.環境問題

在全國各地召開的2014年地方“兩會”上，參會者都不約而同瞄準了“治霾”。造成霧霾這一現象的主要原因是工廠排出的廢氣和汽車尾氣等?，F請你根據以下三個方面的提示，以 “Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment”為題寫一篇80詞的短文。

提示：1.重要性：只有一個地球2.主要問題：污染、疾病、災難 3.措施：停止污染、保護大自然

參考詞匯：disaster n.災難protect v.保護

Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment

We all live in the earth.The earth is our home.We have only one earth.We must take care of it.It gives us the best environment.If we harm it, it will be angry.And then we will have a terrible end.There are three problems in our earth, they are pollution, disaster and illness.It’s our duty to protect our environment.So we must plant more trees, protect the flowers and the trees, save energy, reduce the pollution.We should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories.Protecting the nature is very important.It’s our duty to keep our environment clean and tidy.If everyone makes a contribution to protect the environment, the earth will become much more beautiful.4.衛生健康飲食

健康一直是人們關注的問題我校要舉行以“關愛健康”為題的主題班會,請根據下表內容談談你的看法,寫一篇80字左右的演講槁。

1.保持健康的重要性2.保持健康的方法3.保持健康的結論(你的看法?)(1)多吃水果蔬菜保持飲食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物(2)多鍛煉健身強體(3)鄙棄不良習慣(你的看法?)

How to keep healthy?

Dear boys and girls,It's very important for the teenagers to have good health.We are growing up.We need to study hard.If we don't have good health, we can't do anything well.And it's bad for our future.Here are some of my suggestions.First we’d better do more exercise such as playing basketball, running or swimming.Then we should have a balanced diet.Don’t eat too much meat and sugar but more vegetables and fruit.Third we need enoughsleep or rest.Next keep ourselves happy.As people often say smiling makes younger.Last we mustn’t drink wine or smoke.They are bad for our health.I hope we are healthy and enjoy our life.健康問題典型例句

1.It is very important to keep healthy.7.I didn't feel like eating anything.2.How can we keep healthy? 8.I decided to see the doctor.3.We can't go to sleep too late.We can't get up too late.9.In the doctor's office, the doctor looks over me carefully.4.We should eat the food healthily.10.A nurse gave me an injection.It was a little painful.5.We should do more exercise.11.The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a

6.Last Tuesday I got a cold and had a pain in my head.day.12.He said, “Nothing is serious.” And he told me to take a rest and drink more water.13.A few days later, I felt better.From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world.5.網上購物Shopping Online

So far the Internet has been popular with people especially teenagers.People can do many kinds of interesting thing on it.With the help of the Internet, shopping is not a difficult job.Just click your mouse to choose the article you like, and the shopping is finished.You needn't step out of the room.It seems easy and quick.However, there's always a trap(陷阱)online.If you are careless, it will bring you some trouble.You may find the color of the article is different from what you want, or the size is either too small or too big.If you want to be different, you'd better not buy clothes online.Once you put on the clothes you bought online and go out, you will find many people wear the same clothes in the street.So you must be careful, because everything has two sides.6.你有微博嗎？請寫一篇短文，內容包括：1）青少年使用微博的利與弊（至少兩點）；2）青少年應該如何使用微博。

On the one hand, it’s probably one of the fastest ways to send and receive messages.And it’s fun in playing micro-blog as well as getting the latest news.On the other hand, it takes time and energy to play it.Sometimes it’s not good for our study and health if we spend too much time on it.So I think as teenagers, we should concentrate more on our schoolwork.We should make good use of it and be careful of all the information on it because some of it is not true.7.關于汽車普及的現象的看法

目前，在中國汽車越來越普及，你對這一現象的看法，內容包括： 1）汽車普及的現象；2）它給人們帶來的好處和壞處；3）你提出一些好的建議。

cheaper and cheaper.Having a car, you can travel to anywhere you like.You don’t have to wait for the bus and you can go to a far place with your family on holiday.Although cars can make people’s life easier, it brings problems.There may be more traffic jams and it will bring about more air pollution.In my opinion, some roads should be widened(拓寬)and more new roads should be constructed.The government should take measures to control the air pollution from the cars.Only in this way will people enjoy the life with cars.8.與父母相處的話題

(一)假如你是Han Mei, 下面是一封你的筆友Alice 給你發來的e-mail,請你根據e-mail 的內容給她寫一封回信，與她交流看法，并幫她排憂解難。提示詞語：listen to, mother's love, care about, communicate with, get along with, smile寫作要求：1.語句通順，書寫工整；2.可用所給提示詞語，也可以適當發揮；3.詞數在80左右

Dear Han Mei,I'm afraid I've got a big problem recently.My mother talks too much to me.She always tells me, “Be careful while crossing the street.” “Put on more clothes.” “Did you do a good job at school?” and so on.I'm annoyed.What shall I do?

Alice

Dear Alice,As a teenager, I met the same problem as you.But now I can get along better with my mother.Here are some ideas for you.Your mother talks much, because she cares about you.Maybe it's not a good way, but it shows your mother's love.So I think you should listen to her.If your opinions are different from your mother's, you can communicate with her, and tell her what you are thinking about.If your mother doesn't take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile.I hope what I say here can help you a lot.(二)對父母的感恩

Through it I know that we should live with a thankful heart.At that time, I think of my parents who are the first people I should thank.They gave me life.They give me home, bring me up and look after me.I cannot thank them too much.Maybe I should think how to pay back the love my parents give me.But now I think the best way to be appreciated of my parents is to study well and then being a useful person to the society when I grow up.9.建設和諧社會

假設你是張濤，是“某某一中”的學生。請你圍繞“建設和諧社會’’的主題，根據下面所給出的要點提示，用英語給全省中學生寫一封倡議書。

要點提示：1．人與社會：祖國、家鄉、學校，熱愛關心2．人與人：家人、師長、同學，誠信互助

3．人與自然：能源、環境、動植物，愛惜保護4．你的態度：(內容由考生自己擬定)

Dear fellow students,Our government is aiming to build a “harmonious society”.I think it is every citizen’s duty to work hard to achieve this goal.As high school students, what should we do?

First of all, we should love our motherland.Let’s take a great interest in the development of our hometowns and take an active part in our school and activities.Secondly, let’s fill the world with love.We should show our respect for old people, our parents and our teachers.We should also care for each other and help those in need.More importantly, all of us must be faithful and honest in our daily life.Finally, let’s work together to save energy and protect our natural environment, including animals, trees, flowers and grass.As for myself, I will study even harder and try my best to do all the above.Dear fellow students, let’s start fight now and spare no effort(不遺余力地)to do a little bit every day, every hour, and every minute!

Zhang Tao

10.計劃愿望

I have made up my mind to do something meaningful after senior high school entrance examination(中考).First I amgoing to travel so that I can feel beauty of the nature and enjoy the fresh air as well as relax after the busy middle school.Nextin order to get ready for my high school life, I will preview(預習)the lessons during the summer holiday.What’ more, I willmake up English, such as reading English every morning, memorizing English words and write five sentences in English.At last I will do some chores at home for my parents.My parents are busy with their work and spend a lot of time looking after me.I want to do something for them and make them relax.I am looking forward to my coming holiday.I hope I can have a relaxing holiday.11．朋友

人的一生離不開朋友，在人生的不同階段有著不同的朋友。初中三年的學習生活即將結束，請以“The Friendship Between My Friends and Me”為題寫一篇作文。

內容包括：1）你交了幾個好朋友？2）你們成為好朋友的理由（至少兩條）。

The Friendship between My Friends and Me

school life, I have made three good friends.Here are the reasons why we can be good friends.First, we can learn from each other.If someone has anything in his study, we will discuss it together.Second, we can help each other.When someone is in trouble or unhappy, the others will try their best to help him out and cheer him up.Third, we mostly agree with each other and never argue with each other.I think I am so lucky to have such good friends.We will be good friends forever.12．成功與失敗

Failure is so common in our life.When we fail in doing something, we often feel so sad that we have no interest in other things.Sometimes failure can also make us lose heart.Therefore, no one wants to be a failure.Success is what we all hope for, because it can bring us a sense of pride and happiness.However, failure is the mother of success.One failure doesn’t mean you can never be successful.It depends on what we do to deal with failure.Those who are always afraid of failure and can’t get over it will never win.But as long as we can get some lessons and experience from our failure, we’ll be sure to succeed.