第一篇：商務信函寫作：投訴信
商務信函寫作：投訴信范文Directions:
You found something wrong with the telephone bill you have received from the local post office.You made a call to inquire about this however the person who answered the call was very rude.Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the post office, explaining the situation and giving your suggestions for improvement.Your letter should be no less than 100 words.You dont need to write the address.Dont sign your own name at the end of the letter, use Donna instead.Dear Sir,I am writing to let you know the deplorable attitude of one of your staff member.I received my telephone bill for the previous month from you and thought there were some errors in calculation: I had been overcharged for two overseas calls.However, when I called your Complaints Department, the girl who answered my phone was very rude.For one thing she interrupted me continually, for another she even said that the fault was my own.Needless to say, such a way of dealing with customers is unacceptable.I would like to suggest that the girl in question should be disciplined, and instructed on the proper way to deal with clients.And I hope she can make formal apology to me.An early response will be appreciated.Sincerely yours,Mary
譯文親愛的先生：我寫這封信是想讓你知道你們的一個員工的服務態度。我收到你們上個月的話費單后發現有一些計算錯誤，我認為我被多收了兩個國際長途費用。但當我打電話詢問客服部門時，接電話的女孩態度非常粗魯。一方面她總是打斷我的話，另一方面她甚至說錯誤在我。這樣對待客戶的態度實在讓人難以接受。我建議對這個女孩進行懲罰，另外告訴該如何對待客戶。我希望她能向我正式道歉。請早日回復。真摯的：瑪麗
第二篇：商務信函寫作
邀請函
邀請人：
人事部經理，張建國
被邀請人：各有關公司人事部門經理
時間：12月3日——4日
地點：濱海友誼酒店
會議內容：就有關新形勢人事管理模式和方法進行討論和發言
信函
以李明的名義給Mr.Black寫一封信，內容：您已收到他寄來的禮物（一本精美的相冊）你非常喜歡這份禮物，你得知他將來上海參加你的生日派對，非常高興，請他告知你所乘坐的航班，你到時去機場接
他，要求：按標準的寫信格式，寫明時間，地點，地址，發信人等
投訴信
寫一封投訴信給學校領導
1.八個人住一間宿舍，太擁擠了
2.宿舍上不了網，學習不方便
3.希望可以延遲熄燈時間，特別是在考試期間
4.要求裝空調，否則夏天太熱無法入睡
㈠ Dear mangers,I’m the Personnel Manger of the Blue Sky Bloc.Our bloc is going to hold a conference at Coastal Friendship Hotel in December from third to fourth.The conference is aimed at discussing about new personnel management mode and method and making a statement.I’m looking forward to attending the conference.Yours sincerelyZhangjianguoPersonnel Manger
㈡Li Ming
Box408
No.18 Nanjing Road
Mr Black
Dep.Of Business College
Leland Stanford Junior University
California
U.S.A Shanghai 200001 P.R.China December.9.2012
Dear Mr Black,Thank you for sending me the gift, a elegant photo album.I like it very much.Since I knew you would come to Shanghai to join my birthday party, I’ve been so pleased.If you’re planning to come to Shanghai , please inform me that the flight in advance and I’ll be there to meet you at the airport.Friendly yoursLi Ming
㈢ Dear sir(madam),I am writing to complaint about the dormitory problems ,which have affected our normal life.Firstly, eight people live in a dormitory ,too crowded.Secondly, it’s not handy to study without network in the dorm.Thirdly, we hope the dorm supervisor can delay turning off the lights, especially during the test period.Finally, we require to set an air conditioning in the dorm, for we can’t fall asleep because of the hot weather in summer.Could you please look into these and we’d really appreciate if you could solve all of the problems for us.Thanks.Yours cordiallyLi Hua
第三篇：商務信函寫作
商務信函寫作
書信是日常生活中常用的文體，是用以交涉事宜、傳達信息、交流思想、聯絡感情、增進了解的重要工具。書信一般可分為商務信件或公函（Business Letter or Official Correspondence）和私人信件（Private Letter）兩大類。值得注意的是，英語書信的寫法與漢語書信有一些明顯區別，應特別加以區分。英語書信通常包括下面幾個組成部分：信端、信內地址、稱呼、正文、結束語、簽名、附件、再啟等。下面我們將逐個進行介紹。
1、信端（Heading）
信端即信頭，一般包括寫信人的地址和寫信日期。一些正式信函的信端還包括發信人或單位的電話號碼、電報掛號、電傳、傳真和郵政編碼等。西方國家中有些信端甚至還有單位負責人的姓名、職務和職稱等。信端的目的是使收信人一看便知道書信來自何處，何時發出，便于復信和查閱。用一般的信紙寫信時，信端應寫在信紙的右上角，若字數較多，可從信紙中間或偏右的地方寫起。若字數較少，可適當多向右移一些，使整個信端的重心落在右上角。
信端的寫法主要有并列式和斜列式兩種。從目前情況來看，前者更為常用。采用并列式時，每行開頭要左對齊；采用斜列式時，每行開頭逐次向右移二三個字母的距離。例如：
（1）并列式
Fuxing Street
Haidian District
Beijing
Post Code: 100035People’s Republic of China
Tel: 63211234
Aug.20, 2004
（2）斜列式（Indented Form）Fuxing Street
Haidian District
Beijing
Post Code: 100035
People’s Republic of China
Tel: 63211234
Aug.20, 2004
寫信端時，先寫發信人的地址，地點的名稱按由小到大的順序排列，然后是其它項目和發信日期。具體次序是：第一行寫門牌號和街名；第二行寫區名、市（縣）名、省（州、邦）名，往國外寄的信，還要寫上國家的名稱；國家名稱的前面加上郵政編碼，其后可寫上電話號碼，最后一行寫發信日期。如果寫信人的地址是機關單位的名稱，則將其作為第一行。如果寫信人的單位沒有門牌號碼和街名，則第一行可寫上所在班級或專業組的名稱；第二行寫系、科、室名稱；第三行寫學校名稱；第四行寫市（縣）、省（州）名稱；然后再寫郵政編碼、國名、電話號碼、發信日期等項。
如果使用標點符號，則在每行末尾加逗號，最后一行的末尾加句號。但當前的信件中行末大都不加標點符號，但在每行之內該用標點符號的地方，仍要用標點。特別要注意的是，門牌號碼和街名之間要加逗號。月份和日期之間不可用逗號。在西方國家，城市名稱之后往往寫有字母或數字（如 New York, 103），表示城市的郵政編碼。
關于發信日期的寫法，應注意以下幾點：
①年份應完全寫出，不能簡寫。
②月份要用英文名稱，不要用數字代替。
③月份名稱多用公認的縮寫式。但 May, June, July, 因為較短，不可縮寫。
④寫日期時，可用基數詞1，2，3，4，5，……28，29，30，31等，也可用序數詞 lst, 2nd, 3rd, 4th, 5th, ……28th, 29th, 30th, 31lst等。但最好用基數詞，簡單明了。
日期可有下列幾種寫法：
① Oct.20, 2004
② 10 May., 2004
③ 3rd June, 2004
④ Sept.16th, 2004
其中，①最為通用。
2、信內地址（Inside Address, Introductory Address）
信內地址收信人的姓名和地址，寫在信紙的左上角，從信紙的左邊頂格開始寫，低于寫信人地址和發信日期一二行，也分并列式和斜列式兩種，但應與信端的書寫格式保持一致。其次序是，先寫收信人姓名、頭銜和單位名稱，占一二行，然后寫地址，可占二至四行，例如：
①并列式
Ms.Joanna Kerry
Peking University
Haidian District, 100871
Beijing
China
②斜列式
Ms.Joanna Kerry
Peking University
Haidian District,100871
Beijing
China
3.稱呼（Salutation）
對收信人的稱呼應自成一行，寫在低于信內地址一二行的地方，從信紙的左邊頂格開始寫，每個詞的開頭字母要大寫，至于末尾處的符號，英國人用逗號，但美國和加拿大英語則多用冒號。稱呼用語可視寫信人與收信人的關系而定。給外國人寫英文信時，稱呼用語要注意以下幾點：
①對沒有頭銜的男性一般稱呼 Mr.。Mr.用在姓氏之前或姓氏和名字之前，不可只用在名字之前，例如對的稱呼，應該是：Mr.或 Mr.White, 不可是：Mr.Phil。若稱呼多個男性，則在姓名前用 Mr.的復數形式 Messrs.。對一般以人名為名稱的公司和企業常用這種稱呼，例如：Messrs.Black and Brothers 布萊克兄弟公司。
②對女性一般稱呼 Mrs.，Madam 或 Miss。Mrs.用在已婚女子的丈夫的姓氏之前，或姓氏和名字之前，一般不用在名字前 Madame 此詞可以單獨使用或加在丈夫的姓名之前 Mrs.沒有復數形式。若稱呼多個女性，則在姓名前用 Mme.的復數形式 Mmes.而對以女子名字為名稱的公司、企業可用 Mesdames 稱呼。Miss 多用于未婚女子，此詞可縮寫為 Ms，用于姓氏之前或姓氏和名字之前，一般不用于名字之前。
③對收信人的稱呼，也可用頭銜或職位的名稱，不分性別。例如 Professor（縮寫為 Prof.），Doctor（縮寫為 Dr.），General(縮寫為 Gen.)。這些稱呼都放在姓氏之前或姓氏和名字之前，如 Prof.（Phil）White等。
④對外公函中對收信人的稱呼，可用 Gentlemen（而不是 Gentleman），Dear Sir(s)和 My dear Sir(s)等。Gentlemen 之前不能加 Dear，后面也不能帶姓名。用 Sirs 時，前面常用 Dear 一詞，但也可單獨用 Sir。若收信人是婦女，則無論已婚或未婚，都可單獨使用 Madam 或其復數 Mesdames。
⑤對外國高級官員的稱呼，如國家元首、政府首腦、部長、大使、公使和特使等，可用（Dear）Sir，（Dear）Mr.Chairman，（Dear）Mr.Premier，（My dear）Mr.Ambassador，Your Excellency（復數為 Excellencies）。
⑥對君主制國家的國王和皇帝等男性君主，可以 Sir 稱呼，對女王、女皇和皇后等女性君主，可用 Madam 稱呼。有時也用 Your Majesty 稱呼以表示。客氣和尊敬Your Majesty 可兼指男性和女性，其復數為 Your Majesties。
⑦對王室成員，如太子、王子、親王和公主等，一般可用（Dear）Sir 或（Dear）Madam 但在正式尊稱時，一般用 Your Highness(復數為 Highnesses)。
收信人稱呼
先生（男人）Mr./Esq.夫人（已婚）Mrs.小姐（未婚）Miss
夫人、小姐統稱Ms.夫婦倆人Mr.and Mrs.兩位或兩位以上男子Messrs
兩位或兩位以上女子（已婚）Mesdames
兩位或兩位以上小姐（未婚）Misses
常見的頭銜（漢英對照）如下：
教授Professor
博士Doctor(Dr.,Ph.D.)
醫學博士Medical Doctor(M.D.)
總統或校長President
主席或董事長Chairman
副主席或副董事長Vice Chairman
副總統或副校長Vice President
首相Prime Minister
總理Premier
省長或州長Governor
市長Mayor
參議員Senator
大使Ambassador
秘書長Secretary General
一秘First Secretary
二秘Second Secretary
院長Director,Dean
副院長Vice Director
系主任Dean,Head,Chair
館長Chief Librarian,Curator
閣下Excellency
神甫Father
4.信的正文（Body of the Letter）
信的正文每段第一行應往右縮進約四五個字母。在寫事務性信件時，正文一般開門見山，內容簡單明了，條理清楚。在寫私人信件時，信寫好之后若有什么遺漏，可用 P.S.表示補敘。
5.結束語（Complimentary Close）
結束語是寫信人表示自己對收信人的一種謙稱，只占一行，低于正文一二行，從信紙的中間或偏右的地方開始寫。第一個詞的開頭字母要大寫，末尾用逗號。結束語視寫信人與收信人的關系而定例如寫給機關、團體或不相識的人的信，一般用：
Yours(very)truly, Yours(very)faithfully, Yours(very)sincerely，等等。
寫給上級和長者的信一般可用：
Yours(very)respectfully, Yours(very)obediently, Yours gratefully, Yours appreciatively, Your obedient servant, 等等。
寫給同志或同事的信一般可用：
Fraternally yours, Comradely yours，等等。
寫給熟人或朋友的信可用：
Yours, Ever yours, Yours affectionately, As ever, Yours sincerely Yours devotedly,(Most)Fondly yours, Yours excitedly, Intimately yours，等等。
寫給親屬或摯友的信一般用：
Yours, Ever yours, Yours as ever, As ever, Yours affectionately, Lovingly yours,(Much)Love, With Love, Lovingly, Your loving son, Your most affectionate, Your devoted friend, Devotedly, 等等，意即：“您的”、“永遠是您的”、“您的親愛的”、“您的愛子（孩子、姐妹、侄、侄女、祖母）”、“您的摯友”等。
寫給摯友的信有時也可用：
Yours hurriedly, Yours hastily, Yours in haste, 等等。
寫信給摯友，表示歉意時，可用：
Contritely yours, Regretfully yours, Yours in(with)regret, Yours in(with)deep remorse 等。
在歐洲一些國家里，多把Yours 放在 sincerely等詞的前面。在美國和加拿大等國，則多用，把 yours 放在 Sincerely 等詞之后。Yours 一詞有時也可省略。
6.簽名（Signature）
信末的簽名一般低于結束語一二行，從信紙中間偏右的地方開始寫。若寫信人是女性，與收信人又不相識，則一般在署名前用括號注上 Miss, Mrs.或 Ms.，以便對方回信時知道如何稱呼。有的還有署名后寫上自己的職稱、職務或頭銜
7.附件（Enclosure）
信件若有附件，應在左下角注明 Encl.或 Enc.。若附件不止一個，則應寫出2（或3，4，5等）Encls.，例如：
Enc: Resume
Encls:Grade Certificate
8.再啟（Postscript, 縮寫為 P.S.）
再啟部分用于補敘正文中遺漏的話，一般應盡量少用，正式的函件中更應避免使用。
9.私人和公務信函--注意事項
首先，寫信者應設身處地想到對方，尊重對方的風俗習慣。
其次，英文信應該行文流暢、言簡意賅，避免冗長。這就是說，寫信者應用盡可能少的文字表達其必須傳遞的信息，而且寫信者應將其所需傳遞的信息表達清楚，以免對方產生誤解。書信交往，同樣需要以禮待人。因而在寫信過程中，要避免傷害對方感情，措辭上多選用些禮貌婉轉詞語。
最后，除了避免語法、拼寫、標點錯誤外，信中所引用的史料、數據等也應準確無誤.私人和公務信函--常用句式。常用的起首語有：
1）Thank you for your letter dated Dec.22,1969.2)Many thanks for your letter of Sept.5，1997.3)A thousand thanks for your kind letter of June 5,1997.4)Your kind letter of November 22th arrived this morning.5)Your letter which arrived this morning gave me great comfort.6)In reply to your letter dated 4th July,I want to say…
7)Thank you very much for your letter of August 2 and the gift you sent me on Christmas Eve.8)What a treat to receive your kind letter of May 5th!
9)It is always a thrill to see your nice handwriting.10)First of all I must thank you for your kind assistance and high attention to me.11)With great delight I learn from your letter of this Sunday that … 12)I wish to apply for teaching position you are offering.13)I am too excited and delighted at your good news.14)I am very obliged to you for your warm congratulations.…
15)I am very much pleased to inform you that my visit to your country has been approved.常用的結束語有：
1）Awaiting your good news，2)Looking forward to your early reply，3)Hoping to hear from you soon，4)We await your good news.5)I hope to hear from you very soon.6)We look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.7)I look forward to our next meeting there in Los Angeles.8)Your early reply will be highly appreciated.9)Any other particulars wanted we shall be pleased to send you.10)The help you give me is sincerely valued.11)I hope everything will be well with you.12)Please let us know if you want more information.13)I hope you always enjoy yourself.14)I wish you very success in the coming year.15)Please remember me to your family.16)With best regards to your family.17)All the best.18)With love and good wishes.
第四篇：商務信函寫作 Payment
Relon Brand Company Limited
No.28Queen’s Road Hong Kong, China Email：xxy2016@163.com
November.16,2016
Armanii Company No.36 Baker Street London,British.We have received your letter of11 this month, in which you suggested our accepting payment by D/A at 45 days for better cash flow and lower costs.Whilewe appreciate your trial order of $7,800for our goods, we very much regret that we are unable to entertain your request for payment under D/A terms as we generally ask for payment by Letter of Credit.In consideration of promoting business between us, we are, as an exceptional case, prepared to accept payment for your trial order on a D/P sight basis.Please understand that we can only make this concession under the circumstance, but this should not be taken as a precedence.Our products always find a good market in many counties in the world.We are confident that this product you have ordered will have a wonderful sales in your market.We hope that the above payment terms will be acceptable to you and look forward to the pleasure of hearing from you soon.Yours faithfully
Wendy
Wendy
Sales manager 題目 ：要求：Your customer Mr.Smith is placing a trial order for $7,800, and asking for payment by D/A 45 days, for better cash flow and lower costs.Please write a reply to negotiate the most suitable payment terms.
第五篇：商務信函寫作--Offer
Dear Mrs.Mary Lee, Thank you for your letter of 16 March.We are glad to to learn of the enquiries you have had from your old client for our tapestries.Over the years,we have strived to maintain the highest possible business standards while still keeping our products with high quality.From many of our clients,we have already had repeat orders,in some cases more than one.We offer mandala tapestries in twin and queen size,round with fringe and tassel.Our products can be used as beach sheet,beach throw,picnic throw,table cloth and tapestry,etc.For the quantities you mention we are pleased to quote as follows:
Fair Decor Tapestries Name of the goods Size Quantity Unit price Total price
(piece)Orange Blue Ombre Tapestry Twin 200 USD 25.00 USD 5,000.00 Green Turquoise Ombre Tapestry Twin 200 USD 25.00 USD 5,000.00 Purple Ombre Tapestry Queen 200 USD 28.00 USD 5,600.00 Blue Flower Ombre Tapestry Queen 200 USD 28.00 USD 5,600.00
USD 21,200.00 Prices in the list are all on F.O.B Shanghai basis in US dollars.Term: By L/C at sight Shipment: Within 15-21 days of receiving the L/C This quotation is subject to your reply reaching us before March 26..We feel you may be interested in some of our other products and enclose an illustrated catalog covering all the products we are handling.We trust that the above would be acceptable to you and await with keen interest your order.Any orders you place with us would be processed promptly.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours Faithfully, Shanghai Fair Decor Corp.Jane
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