第一篇：深圳廣州新版七年級英語上冊各單元作文

Unit 1: My e-friend

I have an e-friend called Bob.He is 13 years old.He’s tall and strong.He has two big eyes and short hair.He lives with my parents in Shenzhen.He has a happy family.His father is an engineer and his mother is a teacher.He has a pet dog.He likes his family very much.He is now a student in Grade seven, he studies at Taoyuan Junior High School.He is good at Engish, Chinese and PE.His favourite subject is PE because he likes sport best.His hobbies are playing football and collecting stamps.his dream is to be a sportman.He is friendly and polite to everyone.Unit 2: My daily life

Hello, everyone.Now let me tell you something about my daily life.I get up at 7:00 in the morning.I quickly brush my teeth and wash my face.I go out to do morning exercises.Then after I have breakfast, I go to school.My classes start at 9:00 a.m.and I have lunch at 12:30.I play football at 15:00 in the afternoon.Then I go home.I do my homework after supper.I usually goes to bed at 9:00.This is my day.Unit 3: We must protect the Earth

Now the Earth is in danger, so we must do something to protect the Earth.First, we mustn’t throw rubbish everywhere.We must put it into the rubbish bin.Second, we should plant more trees.Trees can keep the air cool and clean and make the Earth more beautifull.Third, we had better ride bicycles or take buses more often.We should not drive cars too often.It is useful to fight against air pollution.In a word, we have only one Earth.It is our duty to protect our home.Unit 4: My favourite season

Summer is hot,we can go swimming.Autumn is cool and dry, we can go on a picnic.Winter is cold, we can make snowmen.But my favourite season is spring.It is the first season of the year and I think spring is lovely season.In spring, the weather becomes warmer and warmer.The trees become green and the flowers begin to blossom.Sometimes it rains.It usually rains quietly and it is very good for trees and flowers.On sunny days, you can fly kites and take a trip.Spring is a beautiful season!Don’t you think so?

Unit 5:一般將來時

班級明天開展秋游活動—去歡樂谷玩，假如你是班長，請你告訴同學們這次活動的計劃。詞數(shù)：60左右。

計劃：1）早上8點在學校門口集合，準備好足夠的事物和水以及傘。2）八點半出發(fā)；3）中午野餐；4）下午4:30回家。

We are going to Happy Valley tomorrow.Here is our plan.We’ll meet at the school gate at 8:00 a.m.Then we will start at 8:30.At noon, we will have a picnic there, so bring enough food and water with you for lunch.After lunch, we will take part in many kinds of activities and take photos.We will go home at 4:30 p.m.At last, bring an umbrella with you in case it rains.I am sure we will have a good time tomorrow.Don’t be late tomorrow morning, please!

Unit 6: Place of interest

根據(jù)提示，簡單介紹以下深圳市的三處著名旅游景點，不少于60詞。提示：1）世界之窗（the Window of the World）:世界各地的著名建筑

2）歡樂谷(Happy Valley): 孩子們的歡樂天堂

3）中國民俗文化村（Chinese Folk Culture Village）:了解傳統(tǒng)文化

If you come to Shenzhen, you can visit many places of interest, such as Window of the World, Happy Valley and Chinese Folk Culture Village.In the Window of the World, you can see many famous “buildings” around the world, like the Eiffel Tower and the Tower of London.Happy Valley is a wonderful place for children to have fun.If you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, you can visit Chinse Folk Culture Village.Welcome to Shenzhen and enjoy yourselves.Unit 7 一般過去時

你喜歡旅游，并參加了學習的旅行俱樂部（Travel Club）。上周末該俱樂部組織你們去廣州游玩了一天，你玩得很開心。請你以A Trip to Guangzhou 為題寫一篇短文，記述你的經(jīng)歷和感受。可適當發(fā)揮。不少于60詞。

A Trip to Guangzhou

I love travelling a lot and I joined the School Travel Club.Last weekend, I visited Guangzhou with School Travel Club.The night before, I was so excited that I could not sleep!I got up early on Saturday morning.We met at the school gate and then took the school bus to Guangzhou.We visited some interesting places.Guangzhou is really beautiful and I like it very much.When we were back, I felt tired but happy.I cannot wait for another trip to Guangzhou.Unit 8 My collection

I like collecting coins.I started the collection five years ago.Now I have over 500 different coins from many countries.Some show places of interst.Some show great work of art.Some show great men.My favourite coin is from the UK.It has a picture of Elizabeth on it.Sometimes my father gives me some coins when he return from other countries.I love collecting coins, because they are beautiful and teach me a lot about the history and culture of different countries.

第二篇：七年級英語下冊_英語各單元作文

(一)假設你有一位筆友北京，請把他介紹給你的同學。（姓名`年齡`國籍`語言`學校`愛好`家庭等）

I have a pen pal in Beijing, China.He is Nancy King.He is 15 years old and his birthday is on October 17.He lives in Beijing.He thinks China is a very interesting country.He can speak Chinese and a little English.He studies in No.5 Middle School.He likes playing ping-pong very much.He often plays ping-pong with his classmates.His favorite subjects in school are English and art.Because he thinks they are very relaxing.He has a happy family.And he usually reads with his brother, Sam and a sister, Jenny.They often help the old people, too.This is my pen pal.We are very friendly.Would you like to make a friend with him?

(二)你的朋友將要來你家拜訪你，請你告訴他，去你家的路線。

I know you are arriving next Sunday.Let me tell you the way to my house.Take a taxi from the airport.You pass a bank on your right and then go down Long Street.You go through Six Avenue, Seven Avenue, and Eight Avenue.When you see a big supermarket, turn left.Then go down Bridge Street and turn left at New Park.Go down Center Street and my house is on your right.I hope you have a good trip.(三)描寫你最喜歡的動物，從以下方面描述：姓名、年齡、國籍(from)、喜好、性格特征等。

My favorite animal are dogs.I have one at home.His name is Tom.He is two years old.He is from China.He is1

white.He is very cute and clever.He often plays with me and brings the shoes to me.He likes to eat meat and run around me.He is lazy, too.He often sleeps and relaxes 10 hours every day.He doesn’t like vegetables, but he likes sweet food.What a lovely dog!I love him very much.Do you like him?

介紹一些關于你的照片，談論那時你在干什么。

Let me show you some photos.Here is a photo of our village.Isn’t it beautiful? Our village is between two hills and near a river.There’s a small bridge over the river.Here are some photos of my family.In the first photo, my parents are talking a walk in the village.My father is talking to my mother.They like to take a walk after dinner.In the second photo, I’m swimming.That’s my favorite sport in summer.In the last photo, my sister Nancy is writing a story.She’s a reporter and works for a magazine.She says she likes her work because it’s really interesting.I like the village.It has clean water, fresh air and friendly people.Come and visit it for yourself.(六)描寫你最喜歡的季節(jié)，你為什么喜歡它？在那個季節(jié)你經(jīng)常干什么？（spring、summer、autumn、winter）

My favorite season

Summer is my favorite season.It’s an exciting season, so I like it very much.In summer, sometimes it’s sunny and hot, but sometimes it’s raining.When it’s sunny, I usually go swimming with my friends.I like swimming, and it’s my favorite sport.When it’s raining.I usually stay at home and watch TV.It’s very relaxing.I have a good time in summer.I love summer!)

第三篇：七年級英語各單元作文練習

初一英語下冊作文練習專項

Unit1 1.鹿晗經(jīng)常和關曉彤談話，他想加入成武藝術俱樂部。2.關曉彤喜歡彈鋼琴 拉小提琴及敲鼓 3.鹿晗擅長講故事說英語游泳及唱歌 4.關曉彤會彈吉他嗎？不，她不會。5.關曉彤擅長畫畫及下棋

6.鹿晗和老年人很劃得來，相處不錯 7.對他來說，和老年人交朋友是困難的 8.鹿晗有時和迪麗熱巴打電話88888888 9.在周末，鹿晗幫助迪麗熱巴成為一名音樂家 10.今天鹿晗在音樂方面會幫助關曉彤嗎？是的，他會

Unit2 1.吳亦凡通常在六點四十起床，穿衣服、刷刷牙然后洗澡 2.宋茜幾點上學？幾點吃早餐？什么時候鍛煉？ 3.在7點鐘，宋茜上班從來沒有遲到過。4.吳亦凡在廣播電視臺有一份有趣的工作 5.從上午8點到11點，他有很多時間 6.宋茜通常晚上七點差一刻吃晚飯 7.西紅柿嘗起來好，它對健康有好處 8.吳亦凡到家后，總是先做作業(yè)

9.吳亦凡有一個健康的生活方式，他散步大約半個小時，然后上床睡覺 10.要么吳亦凡的朋友們要么他晚上喜歡玩游戲

Unit3 1.楊洋怎樣到達文亭實驗學校？乘火車，坐地鐵還是公交車？ 2.鄭爽的家離學校多遠？60、70、80、90、100公里？ 3.楊洋每天開他的寶馬上班

4.它花費鄭爽大約105分鐘來到學校，楊洋到學校需要多長時間？ 5.對于11歲的男孩，楊洋來說，到學校是容易的

6.在文亭實驗學校和鄧爽的家有一條河，對她來說，到學校是困難的 7.鄭爽害怕上學，大約走十分鐘路，接著騎自行車，然后坐索道穿過河 8.鄭爽離開她的村莊去了菏澤，在菏澤沒有一條河，鄭爽的夢想實現(xiàn)了 9.多謝楊洋的幫助，你認為楊洋咋樣？ Unit4

1、在文亭實驗學校有太多的規(guī)矩，在教室里有太多的噪音。

2、劉昊然上課沒有遲到過，他務必守時。

3、劉昊然不在走廊里亂跑，聽音樂

4、歐陽娜娜不在教室里吃東西，她在餐廳里吃東西

5、劉昊然穿著校服在外面和娜娜打架

6、娜娜晚上不出去；現(xiàn)在她起床了整理她的床鋪，早飯前，她幫助媽媽洗盤子

7、劉昊然的父母對他要求嚴格，他在家不得不安靜，他經(jīng)常在家練習吉他

8、娜娜的父母對她的作業(yè)要求嚴格，娜娜感覺不錯，總是記得在家讀更多的書

9、劉昊然不遵守規(guī)章制度，他總是把臟碗留在廚房里，他留著長發(fā)，還把音樂播放器帶到學校；

10、對劉昊然來說，學英語是重要的也是可怕的翻譯后：背熟 寫熟

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Unit5

1、在成武動物園有很多考拉、長勁鹿、大象。

2、咱們先看看熊貓吧，張翰最喜歡熊貓了，因為它們非常聰明可愛。

3、古力娜扎為什么不喜歡老虎？因為它確實可怕還有點乏味懶惰

4、獅子來自哪里？它們來自南非及澳大利亞；它們整天睡覺。

5、張翰更喜歡獅子，獅子是黑白相間的有點好玩，可以兩條腿走路

6、大象是對我們友好動物之一，它是幸運的象征

7、大象可以走很長時間的路，從來不會迷路，它不會忘記幫助古力娜扎

8、大象畫畫得好，可以找到有水和食物的地方

9、但是大象處在極大的危險中，因為人們砍掉了超過100,000樹木并殺死了很大象

10、我們必須拯救美麗的樹木，拒絕買象牙制品。

Unit61、2、3、4、5、6、7、王一博的家人在做什么？他爺爺在讀報紙，他爸爸在洗碟子；他媽媽在看電視，他姐姐通過電話聊天

他弟弟喝著茶聽著CD，他奶奶在做湯，他妹妹去看電影了； 王一博在干嘛？他在做作業(yè)嗎？他在使用電腦。他父母沒在家，他下館子吃飯了，然后他去了美國

他爺爺在讀一本有用的書，他奶奶在打掃房間，明天，她去億客隆超市去購物

在美國，王一博來到了他的寄宿家庭；他經(jīng)常給美國小孩講故事； 端午節(jié)來了，他在看龍舟比賽，那天晚上就像任何其它晚上一樣然后他在為一次考試而學習

王一博非常想家并希望吃上媽媽包的美味粽子

8、Unit7

1、成武的天氣咋樣？天正在下雨和雪，有時，多風，多云有時，多雨，陽光燦爛

2、近來可好，吳亦凡？馬馬虎虎 謝謝；聽起來你玩的很開心3、4、5、6、7、8、9、吳亦凡正在娜娜家學習，你能給唐嫣捎個信？你能否告訴吳亦凡馬上給唐嫣回個電話？沒問題

吳亦凡現(xiàn)在在加拿大看望唐嫣，玩的非常開心

娜娜的暑假過怎樣？她在周子齊公園度假，她正在給唐嫣寫信； 娜娜坐在游泳池邊3個小時，她喝著橙汁，很高興的學著英語 唐嫣去俄羅斯了，俄羅斯的天氣干燥寒冷多雪；

在歐洲的山上，吳亦凡在堆雪人接著滑冰，他給唐嫣照了一些相片 下個月，他們將不久回國了。

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Unit81、2、3、4、5、6、7、8、Unit91、2、3、4、5、6、7、Unit101、2、3、4、5、6、7、8、吳磊喜歡吃點啥？請他點菜吧；他喜歡羊肉、餃子、魚及橙汁

他喜歡什么面？帶有胡蘿卜的牛肉面 帶雞蛋的西紅柿面還是帶蔬菜的肉面？

吳磊喜歡什么碗的面？一大碗、一小碗、一中碗？ 吳磊不喜歡洋蔥、也不喜歡綠茶和粥，他喜歡長壽面 不同種類的生日宴會在世界各地變得流行起來 在不同的國家有不同的觀念；壽星一口吹滅蠟燭

吳磊在英國給歐陽娜娜一些帶有蠟燭的蛋糕及糖果；如果娜娜許愿，她的夢想會實現(xiàn)

娜娜把蛋糕切碎，這能給娜娜帶來好運。王俊凱長得什么樣？他留有卷發(fā)還是直發(fā)？他不高也不矮，他個頭一般，他不胖也不瘦，中等身材，他確實很帥氣 他圓臉，小嘴，大鼻子帶著眼鏡留著金黃色頭發(fā)

趙麗穎有一份很有趣的工作，她是歌手演員及警察局繪畫師

首先，趙麗穎穿著運動鞋牛仔褲，她可以在報紙上畫一個罪犯的畫像 最后，電視上，趙麗穎留有一頭直棕色頭發(fā)

人們并非總是以同樣方式看待事物，所以他們會將同一個人描述不一樣。成武圖書館在哪里？它在郵局和警察局之間

為了去那兒，薛之謙通常步行外出然后在大橋路向右拐

薛之謙是新來此鎮(zhèn)的，他沿著中心大街在第一個十字路口向左拐，文亭湖酒店就在他的右邊

在成武醫(yī)院附近有個付費電話，在成武銀行對過有個飯店

在一條大路前面有個南隅學校，后面有個喧鬧的社區(qū)，在社區(qū)旁邊有個圖書館

薛之謙很容易來到了圖書館，但他花費了3個小時找到它

圖書館里很安靜，薛之謙喜歡在那兒讀書，生活中最美好的事情就是免費

薛之謙喜歡清新的空氣和陽光，他看見趙麗穎在購物

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Unit111、2、3、4、5、6、黃子韜昨天參加學校郊游了，他和農民聊聊天并問了一些問題 上周在鄉(xiāng)下他拜訪了皮皮的祖父母，皮皮帶領黃子韜在他家逛了逛 黃子韜擠了牛奶，騎騎馬，喂了喂小雞摘了相當多的草莓

黃子韜給楊冪照了一些相片，他學會了很多；楊冪種了蘋果釣釣魚 楊冪參觀一下科技博物館、消防站然后爬了爬山

黃子韜在成武學習一下如何制作機器人模型，在禮品店他為楊冪買一些便宜禮品，相當多的禮品是貴的7、8、9、Unit121、2、3、李沁上周末做什么了？她做做作業(yè)然后去電影院了 李易峰去海灘了，劃劃船在湖邊宿營

在周六早上，李沁打一下羽毛球接著為了英語考試而學習；她感覺有點累，參觀自然歷史博物館和蝴蝶館

4、他們有一個漂亮的房子里有200多種蝴蝶，李易峰當了一名導游，他告訴了李沁一些生活習慣

5、作為一份特殊禮物，李易峰帶李沁去了印度，李沁在高中學習語言，在第一天晚上，李易峰開始搬到了森林

6、李沁昨天聽說李易峰丟了東西，她看見蛇和老鼠上下跳竄；她向李易峰大喊大叫；7、8、9、楊冪對禮品一點都不感興趣，她對畫畫很感興趣

上周黃子韜和楊冪的旅游怎么樣？精彩極了；他們玩的非常開心 總之，這是令人振奮的一天

在那兒，李易峰搭起來帳篷，然后生火取暖，在火上烤食物。一只老鼠爬到了李易峰背上，李易峰醒來大吃一驚、趕緊跑開 李沁放了風箏然后熬夜看了足球賽；李易峰是如此害怕以至于睡不著

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第四篇：人教版七年級英語下冊各單元作文

人教版七年級下冊英語各單元作文范文

Unit 1 Can you play the guitar? Dear Sir，I want to join your club to help kids with sports, music and English.My name is Mike.I am 15 years old.I’m a student in No.1 Middle school.I can play the guitar well.I can sing many songs.I can swim and speak English well, too.I think I can be good with the kids.I also do well in telling stories.I hope to get your letter soon.Yours，Mike

Unit 2 What time do you go to school? 談論日常作息習慣 ：《 My School Day》

I am a student.I usually get up at seven, and I eat breakfast at seven thirty.Then I go to school at eight.School starts at eight thirty.I eat lunch at twelve.I go home at 17:00.I often eat dinner at 19:00 and then play the piano.I do my homework at 20:00.At 22:00, I go to bed.Unit 3 How do you get to school? 1.主題：上學的交通方式 ；2.寫作思路：開篇點題，點出自己的出行方式；3.具體內容：自己選擇這種交通方式的原因；4.結束語: 表明自己的觀點。

《The Best Way for Me to Go to School》

Different students go to school in different ways in our school, but I llike to go to school on foot.First, I live near the school, so my home is not far from my school.And it takes me a few minutes to get there.Second, there is a crossing on my way to school, and sometimes the traffic is very busy.I think it is safer to go to school on foot.Third, I think walking is good for my health.It’s a kind of sport and it makes me study better.So in my opinion, the best way to go to school is on foot.What about you?

Unit 4 Don’t eat in class.Dear Tom，Thanks for your last letter.You want to know the rules in our school.Now let me tell you about them.We can’t arrive late for class.We can’t talk loudly in class.We should keep quiet.When we meet our teachers on our way, we should say hello to them.We can’t eat or drink in class, and we can’t listen to music or play games in class.I think we have too many rules.What about yours? Please write and tell me.Yours, Li Ming

Unit 5 Why do you like pandas?

《The Animal I Like》

There are many kinds of animals in the world.What animal do I like? Let’s know her.Many people like her very much.I also like her.She is from China.She is very cute.She doesn’t eat grass and meat at all.She eats bamboo every day.She is so nice.She is black white.She has two big black ears and eyes.And she also has black legs and arms.What animal is she? She is a panda.I like panda very much.Do you like her? What animal do you like?

Unit 6 I’m watching TV.It’s seven o’clock in the evening.Kate’s family are all at home.Kate is doing her homework.Her father is reading a book.Her mother is watching TV.Her grandfather is listening to the radio and her grandmother is cleaning the room.Her sister, Betty, is playing computer games.They are all enjoying themselves.Unit 7 It’s raining!《The Weather in Beijing》

Hello, everyone!I’m from Beijing.Do you want to know the weather in Beijing? Now let me tell you something about the weather here.In Beijing, spring is very short and warm.In summer, it’s very hot, but it often rains.We often go swimming in the river.In autumn, the weather is very dry and cool.We often go to the farm to work with the farmers to help them.In winter, it’s very cold, and sometimes it’s snowy and windy.I like swimming, so summer is my favorite season.Unit 8 Is there a post office near here?

《Where is the hotel?》

Let me tell you how to get there.Go down this road and then turn left.Go through First Street and second Street.When you come to Third Street, turn right and walk on.You can see a bridge over a river.Go across the bridge.Then you can see the hotel.It’s on your right, across from the post office, You will find it.Unit 9 What does he look like? 《Lost》

Kate, a twelve –year-old girl, is lost in the street.She is of medium height with short hair.She has a round face and small eyes.She wears a pair of glasses.She wears a white shirt, a pair of blue jeans and a pair of black sports shoes.If anyone knows her, please call Mr.Green at 26458132.Thanks a lot.Unit 10 I’d like some noodles.《My Favorite Food》

Iam a middle school student.I like to eat healthy food.I have milk, eggs and bread for breakfast.For lunch I would like rice, fish and vegetables.I like chicken, juice, rice and hamburgers for supper.Of all the food, my favorite food is chicken and apple juice.Unit 11 How was your school trip?

I had a busy weekend.On Saturday morning, I did my homework, and then I played computer games.In the afternoon, I visited my grandmother.We talked for a long time.On Sunday morning, I cleaned my room and did some reading.Then I cooked for m parents.In the afternoon, I watched a football match on TV and listened to music.I had a good time.Unit 12 What did you do last weekend?

My friend Li Hua came to visit me on May Day.During the following days I showed him around the city.We went to the Guangzhou Museum on the morning of May 2.We learned much about the history of Guangzhou.In the afternoon., we climbed the Baiyun Hills.It was really great fun!In the evening.I took Li Hua to the night zoo.It was interesting to see animals at night.The next day, we went to the bookshops to buy books.Though we were very tired, we enjoyed ourselves very much.

第五篇：新人教版七年級英語上冊各單元創(chuàng)新寫作指導與訓練

新人教版七年級英語上冊各單元創(chuàng)新寫作指導與訓練

Unit 1 My name is Gina.創(chuàng)新寫作指導

【三步五要素法介紹自己】 ★寫作思路分三步

第一步：確定自我介紹的內容和順序。第二步：列舉自我介紹的句型，多多益善。第三步：成段成篇，修訂完善。★文章的內容五要素 1．姓名：（姓、名、中文名／英文名）My name is…／My first/last name is… 2．年齡：I am…years old.3．性別：I am a girl/ boy.4．所在學校和班級：I am at…Middle School,I am in Class…，Grade… 5．聯(lián)系方式（電話號碼、QQ號碼、郵箱等）：My telephone number is… 可拓展內容：生日、出生地、職業(yè)、興趣愛好等。【易錯點提示】 ★1．代詞的使用

形容詞性物主代詞my一定要放在名詞之前，如My name is…，My telephone number is…；人稱代詞的主格I和賓格me一定要正確使用：I作主語，me用作賓語跟在動詞之后。如：I am a middle school student.Please tell me your name.★2．句型的靈活運用 在介紹自己的時候，有很多方面的內容可以寫，也有很多種不同的句型可以表達同一個意思，在寫作時要選擇句型相對復雜但是自己絕對有把握的句子使用，使文章結構看起來層次更分明，更高于同等水平。

如：我叫吉娜。My name is Gina.I'm Gina.Gina is my name.我是一個中學生。I am a middle school student.I study at a middle school.我12歲了。I am 12.／I am 12 years old.／I am at the age of 12./ I am a girl of 12./ ／I am a 12-year-old girl.★3．恰當使用連詞：英語中每個句子之間應該用適當?shù)倪B詞連接，這樣才是一篇完整的文章，而不是一個個孤立的句子。常用連詞and，but。

【典例】新學期開學了，請你在同學們面前做一個自我介紹。要求：1．詞數(shù)60左右。

2．介紹中包括你的姓名、年齡、聯(lián)系方式等。3．可適當發(fā)揮。【參考詞匯】

單詞：and, but, student, my, old

短語：first name, phone number, last name, full name 句子：I am...years old.I am a boy/girl.展拓：I am a girl named…我是一個叫……的女孩。I am at the age of…我……歲了。

brief introduction about myself個人簡介 Primary School小學 【范文欣賞】

Brief introduction about myself

Hello, everyone, now I want to give you a brief introduction about myself.My name is Gina Green.Gina is my first name and Green is my family name.I am a girl at the age of 12, and I graduated from Nanjing Foreign Language Primary School.I like chatting on the Internet（上網(wǎng)）,and my QQ number is 7845362.What's yours?

點評：該文作者開開門見山地介紹了自己的姓名，并運用到了本單元的重點句型；文章恰當運用連接詞now, and分層介紹自己的個人信息，而且在結尾時候介紹了自己的聯(lián)系方式，符合文章寫作要求；最后收篇提出了了解其他同學QQ的想法，作為自我介紹很自然的收尾。【寫作針對性訓練】 假設你是Kate Jane Brown，你剛剛結交了一位新的筆友Jennifer。請寫信告訴她你的個人情況和在校的情況。要求：1.詞數(shù)60左右。

2.敘事清楚，語句通順，語意連貫。3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名與校名。參考詞匯

1．單詞：and，but，student，my，old

2．短語：first name，phone number, last name, middle name, full name 3．句子:I am...years old.I am a girl.Dear Jennifer, Yours, Kate

Unit 2 This is my sister.創(chuàng)新寫作指導 【總分總三步法介紹家庭】

★總：第一步總體介紹家庭人口數(shù)量。

★分：第二步分述各自家庭成員的職業(yè)，也可加上興趣愛好等。★總：第三步再進行對家庭的感情表達或評價，起到畫龍點睛的作用。【易錯點提示】

注意介紹人的句型使用This is…。

【典例】請以Zhan Hui的身份，給Tom寫信介紹自己的家庭成員及他們的情況，如父母的職業(yè)等。【參考詞匯】

單詞：family, father, mother, sister, brother, photo, picture, friend, dear 短語：thanks for, thank you for, a photo of, here is 句子：1.There are...people in my family.2.This is...3.Let me tell you about my family...4.I love my family.5.1 have a happy family.【范文欣賞】 Dear Tom，Thank you for your letter and the photo of your family①.It's a nice photo.I like it very much.Now let me tell you about my family②.There are three people in my family.They are my father, my mother and I.Here is my family photo.This is my father③.He is a worker.This is my mother.She is a nurse.This is me.I am a middle school student.I love my family.Wish you happy every day!See you soon!

Your friend, Zhan Hui 點評：

用到的短語，如①中的of所有格為本單元中內容；在正文介紹家庭部分中，首先用一句話過渡，即②；之后用there be句型介紹家庭中人員的數(shù)目以及成員，然后用③介紹人的句型，之后介紹三人的職業(yè)，最后點明自己的感情。全文行文流暢、自然、完整。【寫作針對性訓練】

假如你是Vera，準備將自己全家福寄給在上海的筆友Rosie，并寫信向她介紹你的家庭成員。

要求：1．詞數(shù)：60詞左右；2．介紹家庭成員，可添加姓名、職業(yè)、年齡等。參考詞匯：

1．單詞：father，mother，family 2．句型：There are...People in my family.Unit 3 Is this your pencil? 創(chuàng)新寫作指導

【六要素法寫失物招領／尋物啟事】 【易錯點提示】 ★1．體裁：首先審題確定是Lost還是Found。

★2．格式：通常Lost，F(xiàn)ound放在左上角并且用冒號或正中間，首字母要大寫，落款處為人名。

★3．寫作重點：正文描述物品名稱、特征、時間、地點、姓名及聯(lián)系方式，可用句型為：Please call...at...，My telephone number is...★4．注意禮貌感謝。

【典例】假如你是Jane，你丟了你的黃色的筆記本，并且你的學生卡也在你的筆記本里。寫一則尋物啟事，希望有人撿到你的筆記本并打833-9669聯(lián)系你。【參考詞匯】

單詞：lost, yellow, notebook, number 短語：ID card, call...at...,thank you 句式：I lost...，My phone number is...【范文欣賞】 Lost ①: I lost my notebook.It's yellow②

.My school ID card is in it.My phone number is 833~9669③.Please call me at this number.Thank you④.Jane 點評：①首先用Lost點明是尋物啟事。②說明筆記本的特征。③介紹聯(lián)系方式以方便拾到者歸還。④此句表示感謝。全文內容全面、條理清晰、結構合理，寫得不錯。【寫作針對性訓練】

假如你是露西，1月1日你把你的一個黑色筆記本遺失在學校操場，你的手機號碼是***，請寫一則30詞左右的尋物啟事。Unit 4 Where’s my schoolbag?創(chuàng)新寫作指導

【三步三層法介紹物品的位置】 ★1.寫作思路分三步

第一步：確定介紹的對象，如“我的房間／我家的客廳”等。第二步：運用方位介詞來談論物品的位置。第三步：對描述對象的感受及其他拓展性語言。★2.文章的結構分為三層 第一層：起篇（開頭句）

第二層：正文主體部分，談論各個物品的位置，以及對個別物品的感受。第三層：收篇（結尾句）【易錯點提示】

★1．注意順序。文章的第二層為主體部分，介紹物品位置時應按照一定順序進行描述，或自

上而下，或從左到右，或從右到左。盡量不要東一句西一句，使讀者不清楚。

★2．注意句型的靈活運用。在介紹物品的時候，可以使用.…is/are in/on/under..的句型，也可以使用There be句式來表示“某地有某物”。也可將兩種句式結合起來使用，以避免句子的形式太過單一。eg：表達桌下有一本書。

A book is under the desk./There is a book under the desk.★3．描述物品時，一定要注意單復數(shù)的搭配，避免句中主語與謂語動詞在數(shù)上不一致的錯誤。eg:描述單數(shù)物品時可以使用...is in/on/under...或There is a/an...in/on/under...；描述復數(shù)物品時可以使用...are on/in/under…或There are some.,.on/in/under...句型。

★4．注意代詞的使用，代替上文中所提到的單數(shù)物品時可用it，代替復數(shù)物品時可用they，盡量減少名詞的重復。eg:Look at my socks.They are on the bed.★5．恰當?shù)厥褂眠B詞：句子與句子之間應用恰當?shù)倪B詞連接，這樣才能使文章有自然的過渡，以使整篇文章流暢。常用連詞有and，可以表并列、承接或遞進．but表示轉折。【典例】請你介紹一下自己的房間。要求：1．詞數(shù)60左右；2．可適當發(fā)揮。【參考詞匯】 單詞：bed, sofa, desk, computer, in.on.under, beautiful, tidy...短語：my room/on the wall/between...and...句式：This is my room.The...is/are in/on/under the...There is a/an...in/on/under...the...There are some/many...in/on/under the...【范文欣賞】 Hi, every one!This is my room.It is not very big but very nice.There are many things in it.First, you can see the desk.Some books and a computer are on it.Under the desk, it is my chair.Beside the desk there is a bookcase.I like books very much.So I have a lot of books.Where's my bed? It's beside the bookcase.I like my room.What about you? 【寫作針對性訓練】

介紹一下你的臥室(bedroom)。要求：1.不少于60詞； 2.可適當發(fā)揮。Unit 5 Do you have a soccer ball?創(chuàng)新寫作指導

【三步三層法談論物品收藏】 ★1．寫作思路分三步：

第一步：確定談論的對象，如“我的體育用品收藏／我爸爸的郵票收藏等”。第二步：運用動詞have/has來具體談論收藏品的數(shù)量、顏色及其他特征。第三步：結束語來說明此人對收藏的感受或對收藏喜愛 的程度等。

★2．文第一層：起篇（開頭句）

第二層：正文主體部分，談論收藏品內容，如數(shù)量、顏色、大小、外形等，以及對個別物品的感受。第三層：收篇（結尾句）【易錯點提示】 ★1．注意人稱代詞與謂語動詞及助動詞的搭配。說到他人的收藏時，可以用He/She has...；說到自己的收藏時，可以使用I have...。★2．注意名詞單復數(shù)的問題。在說到多個物品時，可數(shù)名詞一定要變?yōu)閺蛿?shù)，如：three basketballs（三個籃球），seven pens（七支鋼筆）等。★3．注意代詞的使用。代替上文中所提到的單數(shù)物品時用It/it，代替復數(shù)物品時用They/them。盡量減少名詞的重復。

eg: I have four ping-pong balls.They are white.I play them after school． ★4．恰當?shù)厥褂眠B詞。句子與句子之間應用恰當?shù)倪B詞連接，使之達到自然過渡的目的，以使整篇文章流暢。

eg：I have three basketballs,and I like them very much.我有三個籃球，而且我很喜歡它們。I have many balls，but I don't play them.我有很多球，但是我玩。

【典例】請你介紹一下Sam的運動品收藏。要求：1．詞數(shù)60左右；2．可適當發(fā)揮。【參考詞匯】

單詞：basketball, football，volleyball，ping-pong，bats，shoes，T-shirt，like，and，but，great，at，in，with，one，two，six，eight...短語：a sports collection，play sports，ping-pong bats，on TV...句式：...have/has...，...like/likes sports，...play/plays sports at.../with...【范文欣賞】

Sam has a great sports collection.He has six basketballs,eight volleyballs and ten ping-pong balls.He has four baseball bats and two ping-pong bats.And he has a sports T-shirt and three pairs of sports shoes.Sam likes sports,but he doesn't play sports-he only watches them on TV.【寫作針對性訓練】

Unit 6 Do you like bananas?創(chuàng)新寫作指導 【三層次三要素法寫談論好惡及餐飲食】

★1．寫作思路二層次：表達喜歡的事物；表達不喜歡的事物。★2．寫作內容三要素：早餐、午餐、晚餐 【易錯點點提示】

★1．本文主要用like句型like+sth.，可數(shù)名詞復數(shù)表示一類。★2.like的否定形式don't/doesn't like...★3．談論三餐飲食用句型For breakfast／lunch／dinner...，注意介詞for。★4．注意可數(shù)名詞和不可數(shù)名詞。

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章的結構分三層：broccoli, apples, lunch, vegetables, meat, dessert, chicken, dinner 短語：for breakfast/lunch/dinner

句子：1.I like...for breakfast/lunch/dinner.2.He likes...【范文欣賞】 I like eggs and hamburgers for breakfast.①Mike doesn't like tomatoes or bread for breakfast.② I don't like broccoli or apples for lunch.③Mike likes cola and French fries for lunch.④Mike likes vegetables and meat for dinner.I don't like dessert or chicken for dinner.點評：本文談論自己和朋友Mike-日三餐喜歡的食物和不喜歡的食物。短文從早餐到晚餐，列舉具體喜愛的食物或不喜愛的食物，條理清晰，所用語言簡潔，全篇行文流暢。從句子①②③④可以看出，文中使用了句型“I like...”和“Mike likes...”表達喜愛。用“I don't like...”和“Mike doesn't like...”來說出不喜歡的食物，作者正確地表達了喜惡。【寫作針對性訓練】

根據(jù)實際情況，描寫自己及一位家庭成員的一日三餐好惡。Unit 7 How much are these socks?創(chuàng)新寫作指導 【首尾呼應法寫廣告詞】

★1.開門見山進行宣傳，多為號召性語言。

如：Come and buy your clothes at great sale!Come and look at the clothes for yourself...★2．介紹產品物美價廉，有各種樣式可供選擇，針對不同人群有不同樣式，達到激發(fā)顧客購買欲望的目的，細節(jié)要具體到品種、顏色、價位等句式可有：

品種：Do you need...? / Do you like…？/ For…，we have…/ You can buy…/ We sell… 顏色：We have…in…

價位：We have…at very good prices．/We have…only for…/We sell...only for...★3．畫龍點睛，首尾呼應，再次號召：Come to buy some good clothes!【易錯點提示】

在寫價錢的時候，注意美元“$”，元“RMB”的符號，如果用符號，錢數(shù)要跟在其后，yuan單復數(shù)同形，而dollar的復數(shù)需加~s。

【典例】毛毛服裝店開張了，請你根據(jù)提示寫一篇60詞左右的廣告。要求：①廣告簡單易懂，同時突出商品的亮點。②要求靈活運用所學過的單詞、短語及句子。③要寫清商品及價格。【參考詞匯】：

單詞：store, hat, bag, socks, skirt, sweater.price, yourself, color

短語：at a very good price, bags for sports, football socks, come and see, have a look at..., different colors

句子：We have...for...For boys, you can buy...For girls, we have...【建議模塊】 開頭：（點出商店名字）Come and buy your clothes at Maomao Clothes Store!正文：（所售商品及價格）We have + 商品名(hats, bags, skirts...)+ for +(價格)...For boys...For girls...所談商品如句②和句③，親切而自然，句式靈活；句子運用準確如句④，We have...；短語運用也恰當如⑤in different colors，讓人印象深刻，語言流暢，重點突出；最后句⑥與首句呼應，再次點題。Come to Liangli

Unit 8 When is your birthday?創(chuàng)新寫作指導

【三步五要素法介紹自己／朋友／家人】 ★1.寫作思路分三步 第一步：確定介紹的對象、內容及其順序。

第二步：列舉介紹自己／朋友／家人的句型，多多益善。第三步：成段成篇，修訂完善。★2．文章內容的五要素 ①姓名／性別：（姓、名、中文名／英文名）My name is.../My first/ last name is...②年齡／出生日期／出生地：I am...years old.③愛好：I like playing the piano.第5/9頁 ④所在學校和班級：I am at...Middle School．I am in Class...，Grade.…。⑤聯(lián)系方式（電話號碼、郵箱等）：My telephone number is...補充：如果所介紹的朋友是外國人還需要介紹其國籍。【易錯點提示】 ★1．代詞的使用

形容詞性物主代詞my／his／her等一定要放在名詞之前，如My name is...，My telephone number is...；人稱代詞的主格和賓格一定要正確使用：he作主語，him作賓語，跟在動詞之后。如He is a middle school student． ★2．日期表達法

①按月、日、年的方式：2013年12月7號，可以表達為December 7th，2013；

②按日、月、年的方式：2013年12月7號，還可以表達為the 7th of December, 2013.2013年10月13號星期天，則為Sunday，Oct 13th，2013 ★3．句型的靈活運用：在介紹朋友或自己的時候，有很多方面的內容可以寫，也有很多種不同的句型可以表達同一個意思，在寫作時要選擇句型相對復雜但是自己絕對有把握的句子使用，使文章結構看起來層次更分明，水平更高。如：她叫吉娜。可表達為：Her name is Gina./She is Gina./Gina is her name./She is a girl named Gina.我12歲了。可表達為：I am 12./I am 12 years old./I am at the age of 12./I am a girl of 12./I am a 12-year-old girl.★4．恰當使用連詞

英語中句子之間應該用適當?shù)倪B詞連接，這樣才是一篇完整的文章，而不是一個個孤立的句子。常用連詞有and和but等。

【典例】假設你是金霖，今年13歲，生于10月3號，家里有爸爸、媽媽和妹妹。爸爸的生日是4月13日，媽媽的生日是7月10號，他們都是醫(yī)生。妹妹今年9歲，生于8月14號。請寫一篇短文介紹自己和家人。要求：1.詞數(shù)60左右。2．敘事清楚，語句通順，語意連貫，要包含家庭所有成員的信息。3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名與校名。【參考詞匯】

單詞：birthday,year,old, October,April, July, August, doctor 短語：in my family, years old, how old, date of birth 句子：My name is...,My birthday is on....【范文欣賞】 When is your birthday?

點評：該文采用“三步五要素法”介紹自己和家人。作者開篇充分運用本單元重點句型介紹自己的姓名、年齡、職業(yè)、出生日期等信息，如廁線部分；接下來又介紹了自己家庭成員的信息，也都運用到了本單元重點句型及日期表達法；收篇時作者用所學句型提出問題，自然結束；該文章條理清楚，語句通順，用詞得當。將提示中的信息都寫入了文章。【寫作針對性訓練】

根據(jù)下面的信息寫一篇短文，了解和介紹這些名人。Edison愛迪生1847-2-11 America Lu Xun魯迅1881-9-25 China

Li Siguang李四光1889-10-26 China Newton牛頓1643-1-4 England Curie居里夫人1867-11-7 French 要求：1.詞數(shù)60左右。

2．介紹中包括名人的姓名、出生日期、國籍等。3．可適當發(fā)揮 參考詞匯：

be from...來自……，was born on……，出生于……（天）scientist科學家，writer作家 Unit 9 My favorite subject is science.創(chuàng)新寫作指導

【三步三層法寫信／發(fā)郵件談論個人喜好】 ★1．寫作思路分三步 第一步：確定寫信的對象及談論的話題。如最喜歡(不喜歡)的學科、老師、一天等； 第二步：運用品質形容詞來談論喜歡（不喜歡）的理由； 第三步：描寫自己最喜歡的事物及平時的一些做法。★2．文章的結構分三層 第一層：起篇（開頭句）；

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第二層：正文談論自己最喜歡的事物，同時運用品質形容詞來描述喜歡的原因； 第三層：收篇（結尾句）。【易錯點提示】 ★1．格式：

稱謂：通常要在對方的名字前冠以Dear。在電子郵件中，還常使用Hi。在稱謂之后應使用逗號（這與漢語不同，不用冒號），然后另起段落書寫正文。正文：由一段或若干段組成。

落款：較為傳統(tǒng)或偏正式的落款一般是在寫信人自己的名字前冠以Your friend，Yours等，并用逗號將其與名字隔開，或另起一行書寫名字。★2．寫作重點：正文部分是寫作重點。表達對事物的喜好句型有三種，最好交替使用，使文章結構看起來會更豐富。

My favorite subject is science.I like science best． Science is my favorite.★3.如果談論的是最喜歡做的事情，則動詞用動名詞結構。如： My favorite sports is playing basketball.I like playing basketball best.Playing basketball is my favorite.【典例】假如你是Tom，請你選擇最喜歡的一門學科，給好友Frank寫一封信，說說喜歡這門學科的理由以及平時是怎樣學習的。要求：①詞數(shù)80左右；②敘事清楚，語句通順，語意連貫。【參考詞匯】

1．表示并列、轉折或原因的詞：and，but，because...2．表示喜好的詞匯：like，love，favorite...3．表示品質的形容詞：interesting，fun，exciting.… 4．拓展詞匯：among...在……之中（三者以上）； what's more而且 get good grades取得好成績

【范文欣賞】 Dear Frank，As a middle school student,l go to school from Monday to Friday.I have seven classes every day:four in the morning and three in the afternoon.Among all the lessons, my favorite subject is English because English is very important.What's more, my English teacher Ms Li often makes her class very interesting.And she is very friendly to me.So I often listen to her carefully in class.After class I often ask her questions about English.Ms Li also tells me to watch English movies on weekends.It is really useful.I love English best,and l will study very hard to get good grades.Yours, Tom 點評：作者開篇介紹自己的身份及自己每天的課程；正文部分運用because, so.and, also, what's more等連詞分層介紹自己喜歡的課程及理由，而且介紹了自己的做法；最后收篇介紹自己今后的想法。【寫作針對性訓練】

假設你是Gina，你的筆友John寫信想了解一下你目前所在的年級和在校的學習情況，請你寫信告訴他你最喜歡的科目及原因，并向他介紹你最喜歡的老師及原因。要求：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2．敘事清楚，語句通順，語意連貫； 3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名與校名。參考詞匯： 1．表示并列、轉折或原因的詞：and，but，because...2．表示喜好的詞匯：like，love．favorite...3．表示品質的形容詞：interesting, kind, friendly...4．拓展詞匯：among...在……之中（三者以上），what's more而且，be strict嚴格的，get good grades取得好成績 Dear John，Unit 1 創(chuàng)新寫作 參考答案

Dear Jennifer，My full name is Kate Jane Brown.Kate is my first name and Jane is my middle name.Brown is my last name.I am a student at No.2 Middle School in Nanjing.I am /n Class 12,Grade l, and I am 12 years old now.My favourite color is blue.My telephone number is 184-3546.I have a good friend at school Her name is Mary.Her phone number is 254-3975 What's your telephone number? Can you write and tell me about you? Yours, Kate

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點評：該文采用“三步五要素法介紹自己”。作者開篇充分運用本單元重點句型介紹自己的姓名，如畫線部分；接下來又介紹了自己所在的學校和班級，同時也介紹了自己最喜歡的顏色，自我發(fā)揮很自然。緊接著作者又介紹了自己和朋友的電話；收篇時作者用所學句型提出問題，詢問筆友的聯(lián)系方式，合理結尾。寫作貴在學以致用。Unit 2 創(chuàng)新寫作 參考答案

Dear Rosie，① ②These are my ③ My parents are teachers.The girl is my sister.Her name is Anna.This boy is my brother, Tom.Those are my uncle and ④

⑤ Yours, Vera

點評：本文為書信，其結構分為稱呼、正文、結束語、署名四個部分，正文是主體部分。①本文開門見山說明此信目的是介紹自己的全家福。此處Here is a photo of my family.是Here融，句型，簡潔流暢。②There are ten people in my family.是There be句型，這是介紹家庭成員的常用句型。③用到this is...that is...來介紹人，距離近用this，距離遠用that。④表達自己對家庭的愛。⑤最后表達自己對對方的祝福，簡單清晰，全文流暢，思路清晰。Unit 3 創(chuàng)新寫作 參考答案 Lost:

① If you found it, ② ③ Lucy

點評：①開篇點題，簡明扼要的把丟失的物品及特征還有時間、地點全都明確表達出來，很清晰。

②本文運用please call...at…句型，學以致用。③Thank you.的運用顯得非常有禮貌。Unit 4 創(chuàng)新寫作 參考答案

Look!① ② ④ ④ some books and a computer.③ my bed is beside the desk.I like my bed very much ②（舒適的）.Next to the bed there is a sofa.You can see a dog on the sofa.② ③ ②What do you think?

點評：本文開門見山，用Look!-詞迅速吸引注意力，之后用①句直接引入主題，介紹自己的房間。并且用了一些優(yōu)美的形容詞②tidy，big，nice，comfortable等抒發(fā)了自己的感受。此外，在描述房間內物品時用到了書桌一床一沙發(fā)一狗的順序，使文章流暢、自然。文章主體部分在介紹物品時用到了there be句型，巧妙地和含有介詞的句子交錯使用，避免了重復。結構方面，小作者使用了總一分一總的結構，使文章具有層次感。

Unit 5 創(chuàng)新寫作 參考答案 ① She has six basketballs,nine volleyballs,ten tennis balls,twelve soccer balls and eight baseballs.②③

點評：該文條理清晰，按照圖表提供的信息，介紹Amy的體育藏品，文字簡潔，語言流暢。短文首句①Amy has a great sports collection.點明Amy有一個大的體育收藏，接下來依次介紹Amy的體育用品收藏，包括球拍、球棒、運動鞋和運動T恤衫等。

②處句子She has twenty pairs of sports shoes and five sports T-shirts.使用簡潔，正確使用并列連詞and。

短文結尾處③Amy likes sports，and she often plays sports.說明Amy喜愛運動，并且經(jīng)常參加體育運動。這是一種健康的生活方式，值得我們提倡，其中正確地使用了短語like sports和play sports。Unit 6 創(chuàng)新寫作 參考答案

① I like milk and eggs for breakfast.② ③I like chicken, salad and rice.My mother likes noodles and dumplings.For dinner,l like salad and soup.My mother likes rice and some meat.④ ⑤

點評：①開篇第一句話總起概括，點題精煉，并且用到短語healthy lifestyle，eating habits，學以致用。②使用本單元句型…like...for breakfast/lunch/dinner，此處是單三形式，語法不要出錯。③使用固定短語for lunch，學以致用。④文章最后總結用句型I think...使前后呼應，文章思路清晰完整。⑤用What about you?結尾引起共鳴。Unit 7 創(chuàng)新寫作 參考答案

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Big Sale!Liangli Clothes Store Come to Liangli Clothes Store.①

We have nice skirts for girls.They are ②We have white, blue,green,black and red shirts for $ 20 each.These white, yellow and blue T-shirts are only $25.For boys,the trousers in blue, black and ③④They are just $ 10.Come to the store and see for yourself!

點評：本題主要考查學生的寫作能力以及對所學知識的掌握程度。學寫廣告詞是本單元的一個難點。注意模仿，要把握廣告詞的主要內容和意圖。

談論衣服，為服裝商店寫廣告詞，介紹服裝物美價廉，使用了①“Do you want skirts?”，②“Do you like shirts?”,③“Do you like the shoes at a good price?”等疑問句，具有激發(fā)顧客消費興趣的效果。④For girls,these socks are very nice at a great price.句式結構很好，語言表達正確。

本文介紹了服裝的品種、顏色和價格，介紹了裙子、襯衫、T恤衫、褲子、鞋、短襪等，條理清晰，介紹到位，語言簡潔；want，like，have等動詞使用恰當；使用 各種句式，使文章更加精彩。Unit 8 創(chuàng)新寫作 參考答案

Brief introduction about some famous people

Lu Xun is a Chinese writer.He was born on September 25th, 1881.Li Siguang is a Chinese, too.His 1643.Her birthday is on November 7th, 1867.Did you know their birthdays before?

點評：該文作者運用了本單元的重點句型，介紹了各國的名人，主要介紹了名人的國籍和生日；主要句型有：…is from…，如畫線部分。Chinese可指中國人，所以可以說Li Siguang is a Chinese，F(xiàn)rench指法國的，所以可以說Curie is French，但不能說Curie is a French。" Her birthday is on November 7th, 1867．” 該句正確使用物主代詞，且年月日表達正確、規(guī)范。

Unit 9 創(chuàng)新寫作 參考答案 Dear John，Thanks for your last letter.I am a middle school student now.From Monday to Friday I have many subjects to learn, such as Chinese, math, English, history,geography and so on.Among all the subjects, My favorite one is English because English is very important.My English teacher Ms.I_i often makes her class very interest Sometimes she i.s very strict with me.But she is also friendly to me.So I love Ms.I_i best.I will study very hard to get good grades.Can you write to me and tell me about your favorite subject and teacher? Yours, Gina

點評：該文采用“三步三層法寫信談個人愛好”。作者開篇介紹自己的身份和每天所學的課程；正文部分恰當運用連詞介紹自己喜歡的課程及理由，同時也介紹了自己最喜歡的老師及原因，這部分作者先說原因再總結，使文章顯得更自然。收篇時介紹自己今后的做法，合理結尾。最后一段回到書信，問及對方情況。