第一篇：2011年6月英語四級作文(高分版)

2011年6月英語四級作文范文（高分版）

My views on Online Shopping

1.現在網購已經成為一種時尚

2.網上購物有很多好處，但也有不少問題

3.我的建議

Nowadays, can we find a person who has not experienced online shopping? Definitely not.Online shopping is coming into fashion in most of cities due to the rapid development of internet technology.Online shopping is welcomed by most people due to various reasons.From the perspective of consumer, it can save some time for people who don’t have much spare time.Just click the mouse, they can get whatever they want while staying at home.For the retailers, it can cut some costs for those who don’t have much circulating funds.They don’t have to rent a house and spend money on employees compared with the traditional trade mode.However, there are still some defects in online shopping.First, face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy.Second, people will lose the fun of bargain.It is undeniable that shopping on the internet has become an irresistible trend in modern society.It’s of great urgency that we need to regulate the relative laws in accordance with the rapid growth of online shopping.Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being treated.點評：本次四級作文探討的是最近的熱點話題之一——互聯網網購。目前網購的風靡程度是眾所周知，因此，考生對于該話題還是比較熟悉的。但是，比較特殊的是，題干所列出的要求的是考生從一個客觀的角度來闡述該話題，而不是簡單陳述自己的意見。所以，考生應當審清楚題，在寫作時不僅僅要列出網購的優點，還必須給出相應的缺點。

按照四級作文的要求，考生在第一段時應該總述現象并引出話題；

第二段考生應當從正反兩方面來論述網購，分別鋪陳其優缺點；關于優點，網購的優點很多，考生可擇其最突出顯著的方面來闡述，比如說網購可以節省很多時間；網購可以節省很多成本開支等；其次，缺點方面考生可以把重心放在誠信方面；為了不至于跟優點相比，缺點方面太輕，考生可以考慮稍微提一下其他缺點，比如說與傳統購物相比，網購少去了很多砍價的樂趣；

第三點要求考生對于第二段列出的缺點給出自己的建議。此處我們可以根據第二段列出的缺點方面給出相應的防范應對措施。

整篇作文話題比較好展開，難度不大，只要考生審好題，列出相應點，相信作文不會是難題。

第二篇：四級英語作文高分句子

It pays to be honest

誠實是有回報的

The net is increasingly popular

網絡越來越流行 Students of universities and colleges Pop music appeals to me

我對流行音樂很感興趣 Everything cuts both ways

任何事情都有兩面性 English is intensely important=English matters much 1.As the economy advances at a fast pace, English plays an increasingly important role in our lives Simply put

簡而言之

He believes women cannot be too thin

他相信女人再瘦也不為過

2.It pays to cultivat the innovative spirit among students of colleges and universities.3.On college campuses across the nation,playing online game is intensely popular.E-books/digital books/paperless books

電子書 Online courses/web courses

網絡課程

A green campus=an environment-friendly campus 4.It pays to maintain a positive mental attitude when facing adverse situations.put in another way, remaining optimistic in adversities pays off.5.A growing number of college students are hopelessly addicted to matters unrelated to their studies, a worrying trend that should spark public attention.6.We are supposed to be fully aware of the fact that if we continue to harm the environment we are bound to pay heavily/dearly for it.7.As an ancient land enjoying a splendid civilization spanning over 5,000 years.China currently falls behind advanced countries on many fronts.On many fronts

在很多方面

8.It pays to foster the cooperative spirit on many fronts.9.Thanks to advances in technology and economy, a variety of/diversity of digital products, from mobile phone to digital camera, are intensely popular on the Chinese mainland.10.Recent years have witnessed the growing popularity of the topic of a green campus.11.The past decades have seen the fast-paced development of the nation’s economy.On doubly

毫無疑問的是

12.I doubt that she married him for money There is no doubt that=it is beyond doubt that…

13.There is no doubt that this reform is aimed at sharpening the competitive edge of the students in the tough job market.14.It is beyond doubt that far too many college students fail to be aware that achieving/striking a balance between entertainment and studies matters much.15.Undoubtedly, what you do on campus will have profound impact on you in the days ahead.Individual colleges and universities

各個大學

16.He bought/purchased/acquired this public company 17.With the nation’s economy still in the red, a growing number of college graduates find it is increasingly hard to land a decent job.Loving our country means more than words 18.On my personal level, effective measures should be taken to crack down on piracy/reverse the trend 19.We , college students, are supposed to take the leading role in fighting against this evil trend 20.Only by taking concrete moves can we enjoy a pollution-free environment.Making painstaking efforts

付出艱苦努力

21.Only by making painstaking efforts can we climb the social ladder higher.22.It is not uncommon that far too many Chinese fail to focus on details.place a high value on

重視

23.It is not uncommon that far too many Chinese students fail to place a high value on learning Chinese, their mother tongue The bulk of=the majority of

24.The bulk of Chinese take pride in the country’s abundant natural resources Do all in one’s power to

盡某人最大努力去…

25.While my command of English is not outstanding, I am doing all in my power to improve it Favor A over B

支持A而不支持B 26.While Romney won the first debate, I favor Obama instead of/rather than over him You deserve it

1.你應該獲得

2.你活該 Digging into

仔細閱讀

Stress A over B

強調A 而不強調B 27.Traditionally, Chinese education stresses mechanical thinking over creativity A to B is what C to D In an effort to=in order to

28.In an effort to reverse the trend, the government has pumped a wealth of resources into this campaign.Launch a campaign

發起運動

29.Personally, the government should launch a campaign to crack down on illegal manufactures Be designed to do=be aimed at doing Awaken sb to the crucial importance of sth

喚醒某人，某事的重要性

30.The government should awaken people across the nation to the crucial importance of respecting intellectual property rights Senior citizens

老人（尤指退休者）be responsible for

…的原因

31.The shrinking population is responsible for this trend.Get actively involved in

積極參與

32.In their leisure hours, they consume a good portion of time getting actively involved in serving as volunteers.It is virtually impossible for sb to do sth

某人做某事幾乎是不可能的

33.It is virtually impossible for you to land a decent job without superb professional knowledge and an outstanding command of English.Nothing new

絕非先見，很常見

34.Devoting a good portion of leisure time to learning English is nothing new among my fellow students 35.Setting a grand goal but not taking concrete moves is nothing new among my peers.Be capable of

能夠的，有能力的

36.Fat too many Chinese are incapable of thinking independently and critically 37.Others, however, are supportive of this campaign.Others, however, see a different picture.Claiming it pays to devote much time to taking optional courses Generate impacts

產生影響

sth concerns sb

某事使某人擔心

38.How to reverse the trend concerns folks from every walk of life Every walk of life

各行各業

As the pillar of our society

作為我們社會的棟梁支柱

39.As the pillar of our society, we ,college students, should shoulder more responsibility to respect intellectual proerty rights/should take the leading role in serving as volunteers in the earthquake-stricken area.40.I am striving to earn more money to relieve my parents’ financial load

41.Folks from all walks of life should strive to play a part in building a pollution-free society Sharpen one’s edge

增強競爭力

42.Our course focuses on teaching the students how to sharpen their edge when taking the interview Last but definitely not the least

最后，但絕不是最不重要的

43.People focusing on immediate benefits are bound to pay dearly for it

44.Last but definitely not the least, our lack of attention on this issue is mostly responsible for it.Move oneself beyond

擺脫

45.It’s my hope that in my college days I could gradually move myself beyond my dependence on parents.In the hope of

以希望

46.I am doing all in my power to earn credits in the hope of graduating earlier.Lend A B’s support

B支持A 47.I sincerely hope that you could lend me your support in the election for class president.48.I sincerely hope that you could do everything you can to promote the environmental awareness among your fellow students.49.He , with his superb performance, is gaining growing popularity on campus.Giant leaps

巨大進步

50.Thanks to giant leaps in technology, could computing is gaining growing popularity across the world.51.If You Are The One, a TV reality show, is gaining growing popularity on the Chinese mainland.52.Sina weibo , the Chinese clone of Twitter, is gaining enormous popularity among net citizens.Enable sb to do sth

使某人能夠干某事

53.The nets enables us to communicate with each other in ways that were beyond our imagination.Far outweigh

遠遠超過，遠遠大于

54.The strengths of the net far outweigh it’s weakness.55.The virtual world has generated far more positive impacts on us than negative ones.As sb put it

正如某人所言

56.As Kobe Bryant,a legendary figure of NBA, put it ,”it is the teamwork spirit that helps Los Angeles Lakers weather hard times all these years” Taste success

取得成功

57.Mo Yan ultimately tasted success.Be equipped with

擁有

58.High achievers are equipped with a wealth of personal qualities that others lack.A series of=a string of

59.School authorities attribute a string of suicides to our lack of attention on the students’ psychological mental health.60.He stays far ahead of his fellow students on many fronts thanks to his painstaking efforts Attach growing importance to(doing)sth

越來越重視某事

61.After having suffered some major setbacks in his career, he attaches growing importance to execution.As a consequence

結果 I would argue

我認為 At current stage

現階段

Matter much more

重要的多

62.I would argue that at current stage studies matter much more than entertainment.Be closely linked to

與…有緊密聯系

63.Whether you could taste success is closely linked to whether you have a strong will.I couldn’t care less about it

我不關心 I couldn’t care more about it

我很關心

This movie couldn’t be worse

很糟糕的電影 not simply…but…

不僅…而且 push up=drive up

推動某物上升 to be more specific

更具體地說

excessive exploitation

過度開發，過度開采

64.To be more specific, our excessive exploitation of natural resources not only costs us dearly in the short run but may generate profound negative impacts on future generations

In the short run

從短期看來 the post-90s generation

90后 turn around

扭轉…趨勢 pay lip service

只說不做

65.All parties involved in this pressing issue are supposed to stop paying lip service.Curb the prevalent trend

遏制（不好的）趨勢 Wage campaigns

發起運動

Governments at all levels

各級政府 Bring…under control

控制…

66.Governments at all levels are supposed to wage massive campaign to bring the soaring commodity prices under control.Bear fruits

結果實

Bear the costs

承擔成本

Bear the consequence

承擔成本

67.I harbor a sincere hope that our combined efforts would pay off.68.People from all walks of life should combine their efforts to build our society into a harmonious noe 5

第三篇：四級英語作文高分詞匯總結

英語四六級高分作文技巧

1、是否長短句交叉;

2、是否會使用插入語;

3、用詞是否多樣，準確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞;

4、關鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復詞;

5、句型使用是否準確、地道。

下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項：

1.適當用被動替換主動，這樣能更客觀的反映事實，句子開頭不要總是用we / I（比如寫結尾時不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.）舉個經典結尾2004年六月六級作文的最后一段：It is，therefore，high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入語，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語放在中間，一般放在主語、動詞或者助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。

如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間，一般放在動詞，助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。

比如說： Other individuals，however，take the attitude that …

3.一定要學會換詞，換形象，具體的替換太寬泛的。（考試中一般不要出現good，bad，many，thing，think，people，opinion 等等）比如上面例子中，applicable替換proper，approaches替換ways，implement替換carry out，sharpen one?s competitive edge替換enhance one?s competitiveness（提高某物競爭力）

下面舉一篇南京工程學院某位同學寫的優秀作文（14分）的例子，看看他是如何運用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

Computer and I（By Simmy）

I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present，which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected，and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless，feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替換 very

thrilling 替換 exciting

sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb.be interested in sth.google 替換 search

an army of 替換 a lot of

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology，computers pouring into the curren

t society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them，in large measure！

The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個精彩句型，用來描述在某個時期發生了什么事情;Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular

Coincident with … 非常地道的句型，表達“與…一致”的意思，替換 With …Advancement 替換 development

Pour into（flood into / swarm into）替換 enter into

Current（currently）替換 now

Appeal to sb.替換 sb.be interested in sth.Growing individuals 替換 more and more people

It is no exaggeration to say 經典句型，說某事是毫不夸張的For a start，we can，freely，search desired information at any moment。Little by little，our knowledge will be well enriched，and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally，we can get huge recreations online by chatting，playing games，or delivering email.For a start 替換 To begin with

We can，freely，search 用了插入語的寫作手法

our knowledge will be well enriched，and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被動

Additionally 替換 In addition / Besides

Deliver 替換 send

There is no denying that，however，computers can function in the disservice of human beings，in a way，especially the growing violence，***，porn pictures，AV-films emerging on the screen，which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that，however，computers can function in the disservice of human beings，這個句子有三個精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個句型，還有however作為插入語，function in the disservice of 替換 do harm to

Emerging 替換 appearing（fading 替換 disappearing）

Net citizen 網民，屬于精彩用詞

As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people? lives，despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should，therefore，take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替換 Every coin has two sides

Computers do play，do 強調

Positive 替換 important / good 等

A slice of 替換 a part of

Unfavorable 替換 bad

Impacts 替換 effects / influences

We should，therefore，take advantage of … 使用插入語

Fruits（而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues）替換 advantage（defects 替換 disadvantage）Facet 替換 aspect

第四篇：2011年6月英語四級作文高分版

2011年6月英語四級作文范文高分版

My views on Online Shopping

1.現在網購已經成為一種時尚

2.網上購物有很多好處，但也有不少問題

3.我的建議

Nowadays, can we find a person who has not experienced online shopping? Definitely not.Online shopping is coming into fashion in most of cities due to the rapid development of internet technology.Online shopping is welcomed by most people due to various reasons.From the perspective of consumer, it can save some time for people who don’t have much spare time.Just click the mouse, they can get whatever they want while staying at home.For the retailers, it can cut some costs for those who don’t have much circulating funds.They don’t have to rent a house and spend money on employees compared with the traditional trade mode.However, there are still some defects in online shopping.First, face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy.Second, people will lose the fun of bargain.It is undeniable that shopping on the internet has become an irresistible trend in modern society.It’s of great urgency that we need to regulate the relative laws in accordance with the rapid growth of online shopping.Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being treated.點評：本次四級作文探討的是最近的熱點話題之一——互聯網網購。目前網購的風靡程度是眾所周知，因此，考生對于該話題還是比較熟悉的。但是，比較特殊的是，題干所列出的要求的是考生從一個客觀的角度來闡述該話題，而不是簡單陳述自己的意見。所以，考生應當審清楚題，在寫作時不僅僅要列出網購的優點，還必須給出相應的缺點。

按照四級作文的要求，考生在第一段時應該總述現象并引出話題；

第二段考生應當從正反兩方面來論述網購，分別鋪陳其優缺點；關于優點，網購的優點很多，考生可擇其最突出顯著的方面來闡述，比如說網購可以節省很多時間；網購可以節省很多成本開支等；其次，缺點方面考生可以把重心放在誠信方面；為了不至于跟優點相比，缺點方面太輕，考生可以考慮稍微提一下其他缺點，比如說與傳統購物相比，網購少去了很多砍價的樂趣；

第三點要求考生對于第二段列出的缺點給出自己的建議。此處我們可以根據第二段列出的缺點方面給出相應的防范應對措施。

整篇作文話題比較好展開，難度不大，只要考生審好題，列出相應點，相信作文不會是難題。

2011年12月英語四級作文習題及范文(1)

主題：水資源缺乏

1.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic On Water Shortage.You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline given below:

1.Water shortage is becoming an urgent problem

2.Possible reasons

3.Possible solutions

參考范文：

On Water Shortage

No one can have failed to notice the fact that water shortage is a grave problem with which the whole world is confronted.Actually, it has become so widespread that it has severely affected people’s daily life and hindered the development of the global economy.A number of factors could account for the problem, but the following might be the critical ones.First, with the development of agriculture and industry, an increasing amount of water is needed.Secondly, the ever-increasing population is another leading cause of water shortage.Besides, the global tendency of warming up also contributes to the problem.What’s worse, pollution and waste of fresh water aggravate the situation.In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures must be taken before things get worse.First, it is essential that laws and regulations be worked out and enforced to protect water resources.Secondly, people should enhance their awareness of saving water.With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to expect a brighter future.2011年12月英語四級作文習題及范文(2)

主題：農民工

Why Are There So Many Rural Laborers in Big Cities?

1.近年來越來越多的民工涌入大城市

2.產生這一社會現象的原因

【范文】

For a number of years, there has been a steady rise in the number of rural laborers who flood into big cities.Many men work on construction sites, while many women work as dishwashers in restaurants or babysitters for city dwellers.Three reasons, in my mind, can account for this social phenomenon.First and foremost, the limited land can no longer produce enough crops for an ever-increasing rural population.In the second place, there are far more opportunities in big cities—rural laborers dream of earning money through hard work.Last but by no means least, many of them want to live permanently in big cities, because they admire the way of living there, and wish their children to receive good education.I firmly believe that if we try our best to create a healthy social atmosphere, rural laborers will make greater contribution to our nation.【點評】

本題談論的是一種社會現象。第一段首句引入某一現象，第二句舉例說明，第三句是個過渡句，引起下面解釋原因段落的第二段;第三段是簡潔的結束語，其中的賓語從句嵌套一個狀語從句。

范文首先指出大量農民工涌入大城市這一現象，并引出第二段所闡述的三個原因。首先，農村有限的土地不能滿足日益增長的人口消費。其次，大城市有更多的工作機會。最后，農民工向往大城市的生活，想永遠居住在大城市。末段總結指出，如果創造一個健康的社會環境，農民工就可以為國家做出更大的貢獻。

第一段第二句中的construction site表示“建筑工地”，babysitter表示“幫人看孩子的人”。第二段第一點中的rural指“農村的”;第三點中的permanently和admire分別指“永久地”和“羨慕”，receive education指“接受教育”。

第五篇：英語四級作文高分

2012年12月英語四級作文高分范文

Source: 網友供稿2012-12-22我要投稿論壇FavoriteDoes a degree alone pay off?

Judging from the table, we can see that people’s income increases along with their education levels.Above all，the average college graduates earn much more than the typical high-school graduates.The fact revealed by these data is obvious: a degree does bring distinctive financial benefits to its holders.But is it true that a degree alone can ensure a bright future? I don’t think so because, on the one hand, the financial value of high education depends heavily on what skills graduates can gain from it instead of the degree itself.After all, an employer only pays for your ability and performance, not for your certificate.On the other hand, the most valuable bless high education brings to graduates is the ability to learn quickly and efficiently.People received more education tend to keep lifelong learning habits after their graduation, which would help them gain more opportunities in their career path.In conclusion, what accounts for education pays is not the degree alone, but the graduate’s ability and learning habit.2012年12月英語四級答案匯總

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