第一篇：考研英語(yǔ)作文預(yù)測(cè)十

2012考研英語(yǔ)作文預(yù)測(cè)（名師預(yù)測(cè)）

一、社會(huì)公德

As is shown above , on the sky fly a group of doves symbolizing the volunteers who are deeply involved in the shanghai world exposition.In the middle of another picture happily walks a young volunteer, holding a heart shape symbol representing the spirit of volunteer.Just as a proverb says, the fragrance always stays in the hand that gives therose.There has been a heated discussion about these pictures recently in the newspaper.Simple as the pictures are , they do demonstrate certain thought-provoking social phenomenon.如圖所示，一群象征著志愿者的白鴿正在飛想上海世博會(huì)。在另一幅圖中，一位志愿者正高舉著象征著志愿者精神的標(biāo)志。下面有一行諺語(yǔ)：送人玫瑰，手有余香。

The picture tells us that volunteer spirit is flourishing in china.Nearly 30 million registered volunteers in China have made the outstanding contributions to the relief for the May 12 earthquake ,the success of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games ,and the wonder of Shanghai World Exposition ,which has left a deep impression on the world.After the devastating earthquake hit southwest China's Sichuan Province, more than one million volunteers plunged into relief work within days.They went all out to save the victims, provide psychological counseling and donate money and materials.The spirit of volunteerism featuring altruism and charity is a social concept held by individuals or groups who are willing to help others and improve society without pay.Just as many volunteers said , they cherish the experience and love the volunteer work, which enriches their lives , enlightens them and brings them spiritual wealth.這兩幅圖告訴我們志愿者在中國(guó)大量涌現(xiàn)。近3000萬(wàn)注冊(cè)的志愿者在512地震，奧運(yùn)和當(dāng)下的世博中都作出了重大的貢獻(xiàn)。這給整個(gè)世界都留有深刻的印象。四川地震以后，(可以是玉樹和舟曲)他們搶救傷員，提供心理救援，捐錢捐物。志愿者精神就是無(wú)私的，為他人的，由個(gè)人和團(tuán)體實(shí)施的不計(jì)回報(bào)的旨在促進(jìn)社會(huì)發(fā)展的精神。就如很多志愿者說(shuō)的，他們珍惜和熱愛(ài)志愿者的工作。這豐富了他們的人生，啟發(fā)了他們，給他們帶來(lái)了巨大的精神財(cái)富。

In my view, Chinese volunteers are young, promising, proud and patriotic.Their spirit has not only touched Chinese people, but also generated worldwide attention.I believe that China is going to have more and more volunteers, especially the youth.With this spirit ,we are expected to witness a harmonious scene in which the people can enjoy their life to the uttermost.在我看來(lái)我們的志愿者確實(shí)年輕充滿朝氣，愛(ài)國(guó)自豪，這些精神不僅感動(dòng)了中國(guó)人民，還產(chǎn)生了世界性的關(guān)注。我相信我們將來(lái)還會(huì)有更多的志愿者，特別是青年志愿者。有了這樣的精神，我們一定能見(jiàn)到一個(gè)和諧的景象：人們能最大的享受他們的生活。

二、誠(chéng)信

As is ironically shown above ,in front of a pile of so-called “famous brand” fake leather shoes and under a signboard of “honest dealer” stands a business man, asking an old man “what are looking for ” , with a reply from the old man---honesty/credibility.(with the old man replying that I am looking for honesty/credibility.)There has been a heated discussion about this kind of pictures in the newspaper.Simple as the picture is, it does demonstrate certain thought-provoking social phenomenon.The picture tells us that the credibility remains to be an integral part in our society, especially in the commercial world.Nowadays, individuals, enterprises and organizations do attach due attention to this issue.By gaining credibility , people and organization can make money , take profits and even obtain wealth.With credibility and sincerity, not only can they accumulate wealth , bur will also establish their careers, fit into society and finally attain social status.Honesty can promote communication between people, rid of barriers between people and bridge gaps between people.what’s more, were there no credibility in our society, never could we survive the fierce competition in the age of globalization.As a consequence, honesty is not something that we can afford to lose or leave it at large.It is imperative that corresponding regulations and mechanisms with the joint efforts of the media should be introduced and enforced to promote honesty.The awareness of honesty should be enhanced, which will lead us to make every effort to keep our promise and boycott fakes which are shown in the picture.Only in a reasonable, prosperous and healthy atmosphere can we hope to avoid the scene in the cartoon and witness the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost.附加學(xué)術(shù)誠(chéng)信的語(yǔ)料：

（Honesty is paramount not only in the commercial world but in other domains.In the academic world, for instance, the plagiarizing of others research results can have damaging effect, which makes it easier to dismiss all scientific pronouncements.when we learn that the distinguished professor assuring us of the safety of a particular product holds a consultancy with the company making it, we cannot be blamed for wondering whether his fee might conceivably cloud his professional judgment.誠(chéng)信不僅在商業(yè)領(lǐng)域中是重要的，而且在其他領(lǐng)域中也是重要的。在學(xué)術(shù)界，剽竊他人的成果可能會(huì)有毀滅性的后果。這會(huì)使人們不相信一切的科學(xué)論斷。當(dāng)我們得知一個(gè)著名的科學(xué)家在向我們保證一種商品的安全時(shí)，我們卻得知他就是這家生廠商的顧問(wèn)。那么我們就有理由去懷疑他所收的費(fèi)用會(huì)不會(huì)影響他的判斷呢。

三、隱私保護(hù)

As is ridiculously shown above , in the darkness happily runs a man , shouldering the privacy of the celebrities as a bomb to attract public’s attention , rushing to the news press, with another one from the news office welcoming his arrival.In the middle of the second picture stands a naked man , astonished by the huge amount of personal privacy pouring out of the mobile phone.There has been a heated discussion about these pictures recently in the newspaper.Simple as the pictures are , they do demonstrate certain thought-provoking social phenomenon.如圖所示，黑暗中一個(gè)人開心的扛著一個(gè)寫著名人隱私的炸彈，沖進(jìn)了報(bào)社，而門口的那個(gè)人正在歡迎著他的到來(lái)。另一幅圖的中央站了一個(gè)的人，正吃驚的看著從手機(jī)的屏幕中涌出的大量的個(gè)人隱私。最近報(bào)紙上對(duì)這樣的圖片有著熱烈的討論。盡管圖畫很簡(jiǎn)單，但是卻揭示了某種令人深思的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象。

The pictures tell us that the intrusion on other’s privacy and revealing it in the press are not only harmful but also detrimental.what’s more , our society fails to attach due attention to this problem.Firstly, some practitioners of low moral standards in the journalism, however, are tempted to focus on other’s privacy , especially some newsworthy celebrities’ , such as love affairs, family relationship, medical history and its like, to attract more readers to buy their magazines or to increase their website’s PV(page view), and ultimately to lure more clients to pour money for advertisements.Secondly, The regulator and the authority turn a blind eye to this situation and make it a real grey area.Furthermore , the public’s aesthetictaste of elegance is still far behind.這些圖畫告訴我們窺探他人的隱私并把其暴露于媒體上是非常有害的。我們的社會(huì)并沒(méi)有足夠的關(guān)注這個(gè)問(wèn)題。首先，有一些道德標(biāo)準(zhǔn)不高的新聞從業(yè)者為了吸引更多的讀者購(gòu)買他們的雜志，為了提高他們網(wǎng)站的訪問(wèn)量，并能最終吸引更多的廣告客戶，他們會(huì)去關(guān)注其他人的隱私，尤其是有新聞價(jià)值的名人的隱私，這些隱私包括緋聞，家庭關(guān)系，病史等等。其次，政府和監(jiān)管者對(duì)于這一現(xiàn)象往往是視而不見(jiàn)，這樣使其成為了真正的灰色區(qū)域。進(jìn)一步的講，大眾的高雅的審美情趣還遠(yuǎn)未形成。

In my view , we are deeply convinced that everyone has the right to the privacy , the basic right which should be respected, protected and guaranteed by our laws and regulations under whatever circumstances.Princess Diana shows how bad things could end.It is also imperative that the public’s aesthetictaste be so enhanced and promoted that eventually build up a harmonious scene in which people can enjoy their live tranquilly and.peacefully.在我看來(lái)，我們相信每個(gè)人都有權(quán)擁有自己的隱私。在任何環(huán)境下，我們的法律和法規(guī)都應(yīng)該尊重，保護(hù)，保障這樣的基本權(quán)利。戴安娜王妃的事例就已經(jīng)表明了事情會(huì)有多糟糕。同樣，大眾的審美情趣應(yīng)該得到足夠的提升，這樣我們才有可能最終形成一個(gè)和諧的場(chǎng)景，人們能安靜祥和的享受他們的生活。

四、科技一類

As is shown above , in front of a computer happily sits a teenager ,attempting to work on his homework effortlessly , with the help from the internet finishing the job for him.There has been a heated discussion about this picture in the news paper recently.Simple as the picture is , it does demonstrate certain thought-provoking social phenomenon.如圖所示，在電腦前坐著一個(gè)年輕人呢，正準(zhǔn)備著不花力氣就把作業(yè)給完成，來(lái)自網(wǎng)絡(luò)的幫助很快就完成了所有的學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)。最近報(bào)紙上對(duì)這樣圖畫的討論有很多。圖雖然簡(jiǎn)單，但是卻確實(shí)表明了一個(gè)發(fā)人深思的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象。

The picture tells us that our life has been greatly influenced and changed by scientific and technological advances, an integral part to every aspect of modern life.What’s more, individuals , organizations and governments attach due attention to this phenomenon.On the one hand, the progress can enhance people’s understanding on a subject, improve people’s learning capacity and skills, shrink the distance between cities and even continents;smooth the communication between residents and rid of the barrier between people.Technical advances offer all people in the world a quality of life what was unimaginable when personal computer first appeared 60 years ago.Our factory hum to the rhythm of robot assembly arms.Our banking is done

at automated teller terminals that thank us with mechanical politeness for transaction.Our subway trains are controlled by tireless robot drivers.On the other hand, while computers , as have been mentioned above, help students finish the academic job, but this technology ,at the same time , kills their creative thinking and exploration spirit.The effect of board-dependence brought by it causes the young, nowadays, even can seldom spell correctly, let alone the negative effects triggered by porn movies , violent video clips and their like.這幅圖告訴我們，我們的生活已經(jīng)被科技的進(jìn)步極大地影響了我們的生活，科技是現(xiàn)代生活中重要的一部分。個(gè)人，組織，政府都很關(guān)注這一現(xiàn)象。一方面科技的進(jìn)步提高了人們對(duì)事物的認(rèn)識(shí)，提高了人們的學(xué)習(xí)能力和技能，縮短了城市和城市之間，甚至各大洲之間的距離。使人和人之間的溝通更加的順暢。科技的進(jìn)步給世界人民帶來(lái)的生活在60年前第一臺(tái)個(gè)人電腦出現(xiàn)的時(shí)候是不可想象的。我們的工廠里轟鳴著機(jī)器人組裝臂的節(jié)奏聲；我們的銀行業(yè)務(wù)在自動(dòng)柜員機(jī)完成，他們用禮貌的語(yǔ)言感謝我們辦理業(yè)務(wù)；我們的地鐵由不知疲倦的機(jī)器人司機(jī)駕駛。但是另一方面，雖然計(jì)算機(jī)在幫著孩子們完成作業(yè)，但是與此同時(shí)也在扼殺著他們的創(chuàng)造思維和探索精神。多于鍵盤的依賴使得很多孩子很少能正確的拼寫和書寫。就更不提由于和暴力視頻帶來(lái)的負(fù)面影響了。

解釋：這段寫的很長(zhǎng)，是作文論據(jù)讓同學(xué)們熟悉和運(yùn)用的。在考場(chǎng)上不必全寫上去

加油背吧！

In my view , while we are enjoying the conveniences of the science and technology, we should keep a watching eyes on those negative practice, and aim to reduce the problems it has caused.Then the benefits of these advances will out weigh the serious problems.在我看來(lái)，我們?cè)谙硎芸萍嫉谋憷臅r(shí)候，一定要小心負(fù)面的應(yīng)用。并且想辦法去克服這些問(wèn)題，這樣才能利大于弊。

五、交通問(wèn)題 Directions:

Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay in which you should

1)describe the pictures briefly;

2)interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them, and

3)give your point of view.The pictures vividly reveal that heavy traffic is becoming increasingly serious all over the world.In the first photo, there is traffic congestion on the road with

numerous cars, trucks and buses.In the second picture, hundreds of people are waiting for a train.We can deduce from the pictures that the photographer is trying to attract our attention to the issue of heavy traffic.First of all, every year men and women crowd into cities in search of employment, a decent living, and the excitement and stimulation of urban life.As people in mounting numbers flood into cities, city services and facilities have been strained to a breaking point.In addition, since in a city with booming industry, land is precious and cannot be extravagantly used by traffic, traffic flows constantly rise to fill whatever scale of roads and highways are provided for them.It is imperative for us to improve this situation.For one thing, the number of private cars should be limited while more bus routes should be opened up because buses can accommodate more passengers.For another, more streets and roads should be constructed.Since neither of the suggestions can effectively solve the problem, there is an increased awareness that the two solutions may be combined with other possible solutions to produce the best effect.六、關(guān)于愛(ài)心

Love is of utmost importance to us humans.Everybody not only needs love, but also should give others love.As can be seen from the picture, “l(fā)ove is a lamp which is brighter in darker places.” This is indeed true.People in darker places need more light than other people.Maybe even a dim light can give them much hope for a better life.Maybe just a thread of light will call forth their strength and courage to help them step out of their difficulties.I can think of no better illustration of this idea than the following example(s).For instance when someone is starving to death, just a little food and water from you may save his(her)life.Again, when a little girl in a poor rural area drops out of school because of poverty, just a small sum of money from you may support her to finish school and change her life.In these case/circumstances you have given love which is like a lamp in a dark place where light is most needed.To sum up, we should offer our help to all the needed.We expect to get love from others and we also give love to others.So when you see someone in difficulty or in distress and in need of help, don’t hesitate to give your love to him(her).I believe that the relationship between people will be harmonious and that our

society will be a better place for us to live in.Love is of utmost importance to us humans.Everybody not only needs love, but also should give others love.As can be seen from the picture, “l(fā)ove is a lamp which is brighter in darker places.” This is indeed true.People in darker places need more light than other people.Maybe even a dim light can give them much hope for a better life.Maybe just a thread of light will call forth their strength and courage to help them step out of their difficulties.I can think of no better illustration of this idea than the following example(s).For instance when someone is starving to death, just a little food and water from you may save his(her)life.Again, when a little girl in a poor rural area drops out of school because of poverty, just a small sum of money from you may support her to finish school and change her life.In these case/circumstances you have given love which is like a lamp in a dark place where light is most needed.To sum up, we should offer our help to all the needed.We expect to get love from others and we also give love to others.So when you see someone in difficulty or in distress and in need of help, don’t hesitate to give your love to him(her).I believe that the relationship between people will be harmonious and that our society will be a better place for us to live in.六、低碳與環(huán)保

低碳與環(huán)保

構(gòu)思點(diǎn)撥

圖片中一個(gè)小男孩，早已進(jìn)入甜蜜的夢(mèng)鄉(xiāng)，電視卻依然在播放，這時(shí)候媽媽走過(guò)來(lái)幫他關(guān)了電視，還責(zé)備他為什么總是忘記關(guān)電視。顯然，直觀看來(lái)，這幅圖是在告訴我們要節(jié)約用電。但是，我們?nèi)绻麖母暧^，更深層次的角度去思考，這幅圖正是在告訴我們一個(gè)流行的生活理念：低碳生活。所以本文旨在倡導(dǎo)一種低碳環(huán)保的生活方式。因此本文的內(nèi)容和結(jié)構(gòu)可如下：

第一段：描述圖畫；第二段：列舉現(xiàn)象，分析影響；第三段：建議措施，展望未來(lái)。

思維拓展

環(huán)保話題，例如節(jié)約能源、拼車、交通問(wèn)題等圖片都可以與低碳生活的理念相聯(lián)系，從低碳的角度入手展開寫作。

高分范文

As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, a boy is sleeping soundly① and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again②。

This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life.Many people are used to doing③ everything with the television on, not actually watching it at all.Such a habit can cause waste of much electricity and energy, and result in the emission of carbon.This deviates from the popular concept of “l(fā)ow carbon life” — to reduce the emission of carbon, especially carbon dioxide, to protect our environment and realize sustainable development.According to statistics, if we can decrease the time for having the television on by one hour each day, we can deduce

the amount of carbon emission by 4.71 kilogram each month。

To serve as responsible stewards of the planet④, we must promote and popularize a low carbon life among the public from every detail in our daily life.We must change the past practice of sacrificing long-term environmental health for short-term rapid economic development, and shift to developing green economy, circular economy and low carbon economy.All these effective measures can help us to reach harmony between development of the society and health of the nature。

佳作妙譯

如上圖生動(dòng)地展示，一個(gè)小男孩正在沙發(fā)上舒適地睡覺(jué)，電視還開著。這時(shí)候媽媽走過(guò)來(lái)幫他關(guān)了電視，責(zé)怪小男孩又忘了關(guān)電視。

這種現(xiàn)象在我們的生活中隨處可見(jiàn)。很多人習(xí)慣于做什么事情都開著電視，實(shí)際上并不看。這種習(xí)慣會(huì)導(dǎo)致電力和能源的浪費(fèi)，這會(huì)導(dǎo)致碳排放。這偏離了流行的“低碳生活”的理念。低碳生活是指，減少碳，尤其是二氧化碳的排放，以保護(hù)環(huán)境，實(shí)現(xiàn)可持續(xù)發(fā)展。根據(jù)統(tǒng)計(jì)數(shù)據(jù)，如果我們每天把開電視的時(shí)間減少一小時(shí)，則每個(gè)月可以減少4.17千克的碳排放量。

作為對(duì)地球負(fù)責(zé)任的管理者，我們必須在公眾中推廣并普及低碳的生活方式，從日常生活中的每個(gè)細(xì)節(jié)開始。我們必須要改變?yōu)榱双@得短期的快速經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展，犧牲長(zhǎng)期的環(huán)境健康的做法，轉(zhuǎn)向發(fā)展綠色經(jīng)濟(jì)、循環(huán)經(jīng)濟(jì)以及低碳經(jīng)濟(jì)。所有這些有效的措施可以幫助我們實(shí)現(xiàn)社會(huì)發(fā)展與自然有序發(fā)展之間的和諧。

名師點(diǎn)評(píng)

① is sleeping soundly: 熟睡，也可以表達(dá)為 A boy is fast asleep。“soundly and comfortably”這類副詞的加入，使得描述更生動(dòng)活潑，而不是單調(diào)的主謂賓。

② A boy is sleeping soundly and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again。

該句主干結(jié)構(gòu)是：A boy is sleeping, when his mother comes and turns off the television。

這個(gè)句型的含義是：一件事情正在發(fā)生(正在睡覺(jué))，突然發(fā)生了另一件事(媽媽來(lái)關(guān)電視)。

“with the television on”： with 引導(dǎo)的伴隨結(jié)構(gòu)，即A boy is sleeping, while the television is on.也可以寫成伴隨狀語(yǔ)A boy is sleeping, forgetting to turn off the television。

“blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again”，這句是媽媽關(guān)電視的伴隨動(dòng)作，一邊關(guān)電視，一邊責(zé)怪孩子忘記關(guān)電視。

圖畫描述這句，寫得越精彩越好，這句是先入為主的句子，也是閱卷老師重點(diǎn)看的句子。

③ are used to doing:習(xí)慣于做某事，使用短語(yǔ)表達(dá)，地道準(zhǔn)確。

④ to serve as responsible stewards of the planet:這是2005年真題閱讀中的原句，的文章里面的句型，引用的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)到位。

一般而言，環(huán)保類話題，都可以用這句話，引出第三段的個(gè)人評(píng)論。

歷年真題是一座巨大的寶庫(kù)，我們一定要充分利用，舉一反三。

七、網(wǎng)絡(luò)的利與弊

到底聽誰(shuí)的？

思路點(diǎn)撥

本圖中，一個(gè)女孩正在因一個(gè)問(wèn)題感到困惑，“10牛的水是否產(chǎn)生10牛的浮力？”。于是她上網(wǎng)求助于網(wǎng)友，網(wǎng)友的答案更是五花八門，說(shuō)對(duì)說(shuō)錯(cuò)的都有。女孩更加困惑。由此可見(jiàn)，這幅圖反應(yīng)了這樣一個(gè)現(xiàn)實(shí)：網(wǎng)絡(luò)文化有利也有弊。因此本文可以這樣設(shè)計(jì)：

第一段：描述圖畫；第二段：網(wǎng)絡(luò)的利+舉例，網(wǎng)絡(luò)的弊+舉例；第三段：提出建議措施——取其精華，去其糟粕。

思路拓展

所有利弊型的文章，均可按照本范文提供的思路進(jìn)行論述。例如，城市化的利與弊。大學(xué)擴(kuò)招的利與弊等。

高分范文

Just as what is shown in the picture, a girl is asking a question online.Answers

from different netizens differ so greatly that the girl is very confused about whom she should follow①.It is obvious that it is becoming a fashion for people to ask questions online when confronting a dilemma。

The implication implicit in the drawing can be elaborated as follows.On the one hand, the Internet has provided us with great convenience.For example, we can get knowledge about nearly all aspects on the Internet with only several keyboard commands and a few clicks of the mouse through search engines such as Baidu and so on.On the other hand, with an explosive amount of information on the Internet②, it can be difficult to tell good information from bad③.For example, teenagers and adolescents may mistake the bad information online as good, the result of which can be rather devastating.Some dirty information on the net may exert negative impacts on people。

In conclusion, on the one hand, it is important for us to take full advantage of Internet to enhance our efficiency and save our time.On the other hand, effective steps should be taken to educate people to avoid and elude inappropriate and even wrong data online so as not to be misguided.Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work④。

佳作妙譯

如圖所示，圖片中一個(gè)女孩正在網(wǎng)上問(wèn)一個(gè)問(wèn)題，來(lái)自于網(wǎng)友的答案差異太大了，以至于女孩很困惑到底該聽誰(shuí)的。很明顯，人們面臨困境的時(shí)候上網(wǎng)提問(wèn)的現(xiàn)象已經(jīng)成為一種時(shí)尚。

這幅圖所隱含的意義可以闡釋如下。一方面，因特網(wǎng)為我們提供了很大便利。例如，通過(guò)百度等搜索引擎鍵入一些命令、點(diǎn)擊幾下鼠標(biāo)，我們就可以獲得幾乎各個(gè)領(lǐng)域的知識(shí)。另一方面，由于因特網(wǎng)上有海量的信息，很難區(qū)分好的信息和壞的信息。例如青少年可能會(huì)把錯(cuò)誤的信息誤認(rèn)為是正確的，其結(jié)果是非常具有毀滅性的。網(wǎng)上的一些不健康信息也可能會(huì)給人們帶來(lái)負(fù)面影響。

總之，一方面，充分利用因特網(wǎng)來(lái)提高效率，節(jié)約時(shí)間，這很重要。另一方面，應(yīng)該采取有效的措施教育人們?nèi)ヅ懦W(wǎng)上不合適的甚至錯(cuò)誤的數(shù)據(jù)，以免被誤導(dǎo)。只有這樣，網(wǎng)絡(luò)才能更好地為我們的生活、學(xué)習(xí)和工作服務(wù)。

名師點(diǎn)評(píng)

① so? that 句型：如此??以至于??。

② with an explosive amount of information on the Internet: 這是2004年真題閱讀第一篇中的句型。

③ it can be difficult to tell good information from bad: 這是2003年真題閱讀第一篇中的句型。可見(jiàn)，充分了解真題閱讀，對(duì)于提高寫作的幫助作用也很大。

④ Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work：倒裝句。

倒裝句的寫法(部分倒裝)：

原句：The net can better serve for our life, study and work only in this way。

only放在句首，把情態(tài)動(dòng)詞can和主語(yǔ)交換一下位置就寫成了倒裝句。

八、醉酒駕車與安全意識(shí)、社會(huì)責(zé)任

醉酒駕車與安全意識(shí)、社會(huì)責(zé)任

思路點(diǎn)撥

圖畫中一個(gè)已經(jīng)喝得爛醉如泥的司機(jī)，車頂上還馱著一瓶巨大的啤酒，汽車卻依然在路上飛馳。雖然這幅圖有點(diǎn)夸張，但是它卻反映了一個(gè)觸目驚心的安全問(wèn)題：醉酒駕車。寫作時(shí)可以按照以下的脈絡(luò)展開論述：

第一段：描述圖畫；第二段：分兩個(gè)分論點(diǎn)進(jìn)行論述：提高安全意識(shí)、提高社會(huì)責(zé)任感；第三段：建議措施、強(qiáng)調(diào)后果。思維拓展

實(shí)際上，本文的內(nèi)容和行文思路，不僅僅適用于醉酒駕車，還適用于所有關(guān)于安全事故和社會(huì)責(zé)任的圖片話題。

例如，火災(zāi)、漏油事故、施工事故、違反交規(guī)等等一系列與安全或社會(huì)責(zé)任感相關(guān)的話題，都可以參考此文。

只需要把第一段中間那句圖畫描述替換掉即可。

參考下圖片：

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高分范文

What a scary and sensational scene it is!In the drawing, the driver, as drunken as a fiddler①, is driving fast on the road, with a large bottle of beer on the top of his car.What is conveyed by the picture has both realistic and alarming implications for each member of the country。

The profound meaning of the vivid drawing can be elaborated in terms of both awareness of security and social responsibility.For one thing, consciousness of safety should be one of our top priorities.Life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice.So life is to be respected and awed②.It is cruel to and inhumane to spell the end of any life, with a careless driving under the influence(DUI)③.For another, to act as a responsible member of the society, each of us should bear social responsibility.We do not live only for ourselves but also for those whom we love and who love us.It is irresponsible to claim either lives of drivers or lives of other victims are not important, leaving the families and relatives into deep grief and, may be, great living burden④。

In short, it is imperative that legislative measures should be taken by the authority to punish drunk drivers severely such as suspending their driving licenses or even putting them into jail.Besides, the mass media, such as TV, radio and website, should work together to enhance awareness of security and sense of responsibility to reduce the rate of car accident。

佳作妙譯

這是一幅多么可怕的觸目驚心的場(chǎng)景啊！在這幅圖中，爛醉如泥的司機(jī)正在馬路上飛速行駛，車上還頂著一大瓶啤酒。這幅圖所傳達(dá)的意義，對(duì)我們國(guó)家的每一位成員，都具有現(xiàn)實(shí)和警醒的意義。

這幅栩栩如生的圖畫的深刻意義可以從安全意識(shí)和社會(huì)責(zé)任感兩個(gè)角度闡釋。一方面，安全意識(shí)應(yīng)該是我首要重視的問(wèn)題。生命是一次單程旅行：你不能經(jīng)歷兩次生命。所以我們應(yīng)該敬重生命、敬畏生命。由于醉酒駕車的疏忽而宣告任何一條生命的結(jié)束是殘忍的、不人道的。另一方面，作為這個(gè)社會(huì)負(fù)責(zé)任的一員，我們每個(gè)人都應(yīng)該去承擔(dān)社會(huì)責(zé)任。我們不僅僅是為了自己活著，我們也為那些我們所愛(ài)的和愛(ài)我們的人活著。無(wú)論是聲稱司機(jī)的、還是受害者的生命不重要，都是不負(fù)責(zé)任的。因?yàn)檫@會(huì)給他們的家人和親戚帶來(lái)巨大的悲痛和沉重的生活負(fù)擔(dān)。

簡(jiǎn)言之，官方應(yīng)該制定立法措施嚴(yán)厲地懲罰醉酒駕車的司機(jī)，例如吊銷駕照或進(jìn)行監(jiān)禁。立法措施勢(shì)在必行。此外，電視、收音機(jī)、網(wǎng)站等大眾傳媒應(yīng)該共同努力來(lái)提高公民的安全意識(shí)和責(zé)任感，以降低交通事故的發(fā)生率。

名師點(diǎn)評(píng)

① as drunken as a fiddler: 醉得像一個(gè)游蕩者。實(shí)際上是一個(gè)比喻，相當(dāng)于漢語(yǔ)中的爛醉如泥。用語(yǔ)非常形象生動(dòng)，一個(gè)酩酊大醉的司機(jī)形象躍然紙上！

② Life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice：非常富有哲理性，語(yǔ)言優(yōu)美、地道。respected and awed: 敬重和敬畏，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔、有力、到位。

③ DUI: 醉酒駕車，也可以寫成：drunk driving。

④ leaving?:動(dòng)詞的ing形式作伴隨狀語(yǔ)。句型經(jīng)典。

九、大學(xué)生就業(yè)：放低姿態(tài)、平常心做人

大學(xué)生就業(yè)

思路點(diǎn)撥

在畫中，一位正在找工作的年輕女孩，毫不猶豫地拒絕了一份服務(wù)崗位的工作，不屑一顧地說(shuō)：“伺候人的工作我不干”。這幅圖表明，很多年輕人找工作時(shí)，眼光過(guò)高，不切實(shí)

際，沒(méi)有用平常心對(duì)待就業(yè)問(wèn)題。實(shí)際上，可以先就業(yè)后擇業(yè)。所以這篇圖畫作文可以這樣創(chuàng)作：

第一段：描述圖畫；第二段：兩個(gè)角度分析這種現(xiàn)象的原因：志存高遠(yuǎn)，不愿意從底層做起；好逸惡勞；第三段：建議措施：教育年輕人要腳踏實(shí)地；根除好逸惡勞的思想。

思維拓展

關(guān)于平常心態(tài)做人、腳踏實(shí)地的話題還可以有很多，例如城市選擇問(wèn)題、院校報(bào)考問(wèn)題、專業(yè)選擇問(wèn)題、股市問(wèn)題，均可以從這個(gè)角度出發(fā)，進(jìn)行展開論述。請(qǐng)參考下圖：

參考圖片

高分范文

As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, the job-hunting girl refuses a service post without any hesitation, complaining that she will never take a job of serving others①.At the same time she is wondering why finding a promising job is so difficult in modern society②。

This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life③, especially on campus.On the one hand, many job-seekers are reluctant to take jobs that they consider to be humble and trivial, such as being a secretary or an assistant, because they have great ambitions and they only want to ride on the peak of success.What

is amazing is that they are not conscious that ambition is to be achieved step by step④.On the other hand, wanting to gain more but pay less, both the jobless and graduating students aspire to seek a job that is well-paid, relaxed and comfortable.This kind of “no work, all play” attitude toward life can be destructive to both personal and social development.We should not look down upon service industry, the third industry, because it does provide us with many employment opportunities and positions⑤。

Therefore, it is high time that we took effective measures to improve the current situation.For one thing, an education campaign should be launched to popularize the idea that “the longest journey starts with a single step” and to cultivate a down-to-earth attitude toward life.For another, the tendency of being lazy must be eradicated from the mind of the young.Only in this way can people realize their value of life better and can unemployment rate be reduced and thus can social harmony be achieved⑥。

佳作妙譯

正如上面的漫畫所示，這個(gè)找工作的女孩毫不猶豫地拒絕了一個(gè)服務(wù)崗位，她還抱怨一直找不到工作。同時(shí)她還納悶為什么在如今找個(gè)有前途的工作這么難。

這種現(xiàn)象在我們的生活中隨處可見(jiàn)，尤其在校園里更加明顯。一方面，很多求職者不愿意從事秘書或助理等工作，他們認(rèn)為這些是卑微且無(wú)足輕重的。他們有更大的抱負(fù)，想直接登上成功的頂峰。可是他們沒(méi)有意識(shí)到理想抱負(fù)是需要一步一步實(shí)現(xiàn)的。另一方面，很多失業(yè)者和畢業(yè)生都想少勞多得，想得到一份輕松舒適而且薪水不菲的工作。這種“好逸惡勞”的生活態(tài)度對(duì)個(gè)人和社會(huì)的發(fā)展都是很不利的。我們不應(yīng)看不起服務(wù)業(yè)，第三產(chǎn)業(yè)，因?yàn)樗_實(shí)為我們提供了很多工作機(jī)會(huì)和職位。

因此，采取一些必要措施來(lái)改善這種情況已經(jīng)是當(dāng)務(wù)之急。一方面，應(yīng)該發(fā)起一場(chǎng)教育運(yùn)動(dòng)來(lái)普及這種“千里之行，始于足下”的理念和腳踏實(shí)地的生活態(tài)度。另一方面，要把懶惰的思想從青少年的思想中根除。只有這樣人們才能更好地實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的人生價(jià)值，才能讓失業(yè)率大幅下降，才能實(shí)現(xiàn)社會(huì)和諧。

名師點(diǎn)評(píng)

① complaining that she will never take a job of serving others: 伴隨狀語(yǔ)。

② why finding a promising job is so difficult in modern society: 這個(gè)句子充當(dāng)了整個(gè)句子的賓語(yǔ)，叫做賓語(yǔ)從句。

特殊疑問(wèn)詞why, what, when等引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句必須使用正常的陳述語(yǔ)序，不得使用主謂倒裝的形式。

例如，這句就不能寫成：why is finding a promising job so difficult in modern society？finding a promising job是主語(yǔ)。is是系動(dòng)詞。

再如：I don’t know what his name is。

絕對(duì)不能寫成：I don’t know what is his name。

③ 2008年真題閱讀選項(xiàng)中的句子。

原句為：Political compromises are easily found throughout the U.S.history。

稍加改動(dòng)，變成了一個(gè)個(gè)性化的句子引入第二段內(nèi)容的模板，雖然沒(méi)有華麗的辭藻，但是非常精彩和純正。

④ be conscious that: 意識(shí)到，that后邊必須接完整的主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)。

這個(gè)表達(dá)等同于be aware that，可以進(jìn)行同意替換。

此外：be conscious of 和be aware of 在意思上也等同于這兩者，表示意識(shí)到。

但是：be conscious of 和be aware of后邊要接單詞或者短語(yǔ)，一般不能加句子。

⑤ the third industry: 第三產(chǎn)業(yè)，是service industry(服務(wù)業(yè))的同位語(yǔ)。

同位語(yǔ)其實(shí)一般都是廢話，等同于前面的詞。

巧妙地使用同位語(yǔ)，可以把單調(diào)的句子變得錯(cuò)落有致、抑揚(yáng)頓挫。

it does provide us with: does在句中表強(qiáng)調(diào)，翻譯成“確實(shí)”。

⑥ Only in this way can? realize? and can? be? and thus can? be?：排比句，短促有力，氣勢(shì)強(qiáng)大，使得對(duì)未來(lái)的展望顯得信心十足！

普通的被考生用爛了的這個(gè)句型：Only in this way can we live in a harmonious society，被本文的作者巧妙地改寫成了一個(gè)精彩的排比句。

這樣的作文，怎么能不得高分呢！

10、節(jié)約資源

儲(chǔ)蓄水滴，儲(chǔ)蓄幸福

思路點(diǎn)撥

本圖描述的場(chǎng)景是一副令人喜聞樂(lè)見(jiàn)的圖畫，圖畫中，一只可愛(ài)的小豬造型的儲(chǔ)蓄罐，正在接住自來(lái)水里滴下來(lái)的水滴，像存錢一樣，存儲(chǔ)水滴。實(shí)際上，它儲(chǔ)存的不是水，它儲(chǔ)存的是幸福。我們可以看出，人們有了節(jié)水意識(shí)。但是，從正在滴水的水龍頭看，還是有人忽略了節(jié)約用水這一問(wèn)題。因此，本文可以這樣寫作：

第一段：描述圖畫；第二段：分析有些人浪費(fèi)水的心理，并闡述水資源的寶貴；第三段：建議措施。

思維拓展

實(shí)際上，積極正面的圖片寫作，和揭示負(fù)面現(xiàn)象的文章沒(méi)有什么本質(zhì)上的區(qū)別，只要我們筆鋒一轉(zhuǎn)，就能把它繼續(xù)按照原來(lái)的套路寫。

本文也可以從低碳、環(huán)保的角度出發(fā)進(jìn)行寫作。

關(guān)于節(jié)約能源的話題，都可以按照這個(gè)行文思路和語(yǔ)言模式進(jìn)行展開。

參考下圖：

參考圖片

高分范文

Water used to be mistaken to be an unlimited and renewable resource.Actually, water resource is very limited and precious.It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention①.Just as is depicted in the picture, just like saving money, the lovely and smiling piggy bank is collecting every drop of water falling from the water tap。

However, water shortage is still a serious problem threatening the existence and survival of the whole human being, and yet the phenomenon of wasting water can still easily be found anywhere in our daily life②.For example, water taps are frequently left on by careless users.Someone even assumes that they have the right to waste water because they pay for it so that it has nothing to do with others.In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it③.Water resource is indispensable④ not only in our daily life but also in the industry and agriculture.And water is the wealth of the whole mankind, and it is hard to imagine what the world would be like⑤ when there is no more water。

Even though an increasing number of people have become aware of⑥ this emergency, further measures still need to be taken.On the macro level, the whole world should make a joint effort to fight against waste of water.On the micro level, publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water on TV and other media, should be conducted.To store water means to store happiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring。

佳作妙譯

水資源一度被誤認(rèn)為是一種無(wú)限的可再生資源，實(shí)際上，水資源是非常有限且寶貴的。有幸的是現(xiàn)在公眾開始關(guān)注這一問(wèn)題了。如圖所示，一只可愛(ài)的快樂(lè)小豬存錢罐積攢著水龍頭里流出的每一滴水，就像存錢一樣。

然而，水資源短缺問(wèn)題仍然威脅著全人類的生存和發(fā)展。浪費(fèi)水的現(xiàn)象在日常生活中仍然隨處可見(jiàn)。例如，經(jīng)常有粗心大意者忘記關(guān)水龍頭。更有甚者認(rèn)為自己繳了水費(fèi)就有權(quán)浪費(fèi)，與他人無(wú)關(guān)。事實(shí)上，水資源不僅在生活中必不可少，在工農(nóng)業(yè)生產(chǎn)中也是不可或缺的。水資源是全人類共同的財(cái)富，很難想象當(dāng)沒(méi)有水的時(shí)候世界會(huì)是什么樣子。

雖然越來(lái)越多的人已經(jīng)認(rèn)識(shí)到了這種緊迫性，但是仍然要采取進(jìn)一步的措施。從宏觀層面上講，全世界應(yīng)該共同努力反對(duì)浪費(fèi)水。從微觀層面上講，要進(jìn)行廣泛的宣傳活動(dòng)。比如在電視臺(tái)播出關(guān)于如何節(jié)水的節(jié)目。節(jié)約用水就是存儲(chǔ)幸福，只有節(jié)約用水才能為子孫后代存儲(chǔ)更好的生活。

名師點(diǎn)評(píng)

① It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention: 來(lái)自于2005年閱讀真題，原句是這樣的：Fortunately, the White House is starting to pay attention。

歷年真題是一座巨大的寶庫(kù)，廣大考生一定要學(xué)會(huì)充分利用這寶貴的資源！

② 第二段開頭，用了一個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)折詞，也就是“起承轉(zhuǎn)合”中的所謂的“轉(zhuǎn)”，把這篇作文改造成了一篇社會(huì)問(wèn)題型作文，也就是大家最擅長(zhǎng)寫的作文。

③ In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it: 倒裝句，表語(yǔ)提前，句子倒裝。

倒裝句寫法：

第一步：寫正常原句：Water is so precious that we cannot afford to waste it。

第二步：表語(yǔ)precious提前。

第三步：主謂倒置，變成So precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it。

普通的so? that? 句型，也能被化腐朽為神奇，成為鉆石加分句型！

④ indispensable: 不可或缺的，替換important的一個(gè)很好的詞匯。

順便講一個(gè)英譯漢的技巧：大家可以看到，在譯文中，這句話被翻譯兩次：必不可少、不可或缺。

因?yàn)樵闹谐霈F(xiàn)了：not only? but also，所以這個(gè)單詞被拆開翻譯成了兩個(gè)近義詞，以使行文更加通順。

⑤ what the world would be like：注意賓語(yǔ)從句必須用陳述語(yǔ)序。

⑥ become aware of: 意識(shí)到。意思和用法都等同于be conscious of。后邊接詞語(yǔ)。

⑦ 非常重要：一般而言，歷年真題中談到的正面話題，或者人生哲理類的文章，有可能題目要求會(huì)變成：

Directions:

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing.In your essay, you should

(1)describe the drawing briefly，(2)explain its intended meaning, and then

(3)support your view with an example/examples。

也就是第三段并非發(fā)表個(gè)人評(píng)論(建議措施)，而是舉例，這時(shí)候就需要我們?nèi)フ{(diào)整一下文章的敘述方法。

這種情況下，我們可以把結(jié)尾段調(diào)整為：

Examples of people’s increasing awareness on saving water can easily be found anywhere in our life.On the macro level, the whole world is making a joint effort to fight against waste of water.On the micro level, publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water on TV and other media, can be seen nearly anywhere and every day.In short, to store water means to store happiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring。

這樣的話，結(jié)尾段就從建議措施，變成了論證文章的示例。

可見(jiàn)，隨機(jī)應(yīng)變，對(duì)寫好考研作文也很重要。

11、面對(duì)人生與社會(huì)：樂(lè)觀與豁達(dá)

樂(lè)觀與豁達(dá)

思路點(diǎn)撥

圖畫中的一只小綿羊，正呆在一塊大石頭的陰影下面。但是它樂(lè)觀、豁達(dá)地認(rèn)為，有陰影，那么就說(shuō)明有陽(yáng)光。這幅圖無(wú)疑向我們傳達(dá)了一種健康的人生哲學(xué)：樂(lè)觀生活、達(dá)觀處世。由于這是一篇人生哲理類文章，所以文章安排可以相對(duì)自由一些：

第一段：描述圖畫；第二段：利用正反舉例論證悲觀與樂(lè)觀的差距+總結(jié)句；第三段：倡導(dǎo)一種樂(lè)觀生活、達(dá)觀處世的人生態(tài)度和人生哲學(xué)。思維拓展

本文也可以從世界觀、人生觀的角度入手。

相反，如果是一幅表明悲觀厭世的圖片，我們也可以采取同樣的手法進(jìn)行處理。

高分范文

As is apparently revealed in the cartoon above, the sheep lives happily in an optimistic state of mind, ignoring the threat of a dark shade, because he believes that where there is shadow, there is sunshine①.What is conveyed in the picture is both positive and illuminating。

As far as the purpose of the drawer is concerned, I think he intends to remind us of the importance of optimism.If the sheep in the cartoon feels anxious and pessimistic about the dark shade all day long, he can by no means have a comfortable and happy life.Examples like this are numerous, but I think the following one will be convincing enough.If there is half a cup of water, the pessimist may cry over it because they have only a half, while② the optimist may cheer for it because they still have a half.Obviously, they will have different perceptions and feelings③ toward the same life。

There is no denying that, most optimists have a high happiness index, which can hardly be experienced by pessimists.Therefore, we must read our life with a positive attitude.What’s more, the optimistic attitude can infect others strongly, meaning that we will find that all the friends around us are optimistic if we observe them in the same perspective.As a result, an atmosphere of optimism and happiness could be naturally set up.Therefore, let’s keep the famous line of Shelley, the well-known poet, in mind for ever, that is, “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”④

佳作妙譯

上面的漫畫清楚地表現(xiàn)出這只山羊不顧陰影的威脅仍然保持樂(lè)觀，因?yàn)樗嘈庞嘘幱暗牡胤骄鸵欢ㄓ嘘?yáng)光。圖片中反映的問(wèn)題是積極的和富有啟發(fā)性的。

我認(rèn)為作者要表達(dá)的意義是要提醒我們保持樂(lè)觀心態(tài)的重要性。如果漫畫中的山羊終日悲觀地生活在陰影中，它將永遠(yuǎn)無(wú)法獲得舒適和幸福的生活。類似的例子千千萬(wàn)，但是我認(rèn)為下面的例子就足夠有說(shuō)服力。如果這里有半杯水，悲觀的人會(huì)抱怨只剩下半杯了，而樂(lè)觀的人在慶幸還有半杯可以喝。顯然，面對(duì)同樣的生活，他們會(huì)有不同的感受。

毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，樂(lè)觀者擁有更高的幸福指數(shù)，而悲觀者永遠(yuǎn)也體會(huì)不到。因此我們必須以積極的態(tài)度面對(duì)生活。而且樂(lè)觀的情緒能強(qiáng)烈地感染他人，這就意味著如果我們以樂(lè)觀的視角面對(duì)周圍的朋友們，他們也會(huì)同樣地樂(lè)觀。于是，樂(lè)觀和幸福的氣氛自然而然地就建立起來(lái)了。因此，讓我們把著名詩(shī)人雪萊的名句銘記在心吧：冬天來(lái)了，春天還會(huì)遠(yuǎn)么？

名師點(diǎn)評(píng)

① where there is shadow, there is sunshine: 這句話讀起來(lái)是不是很熟悉？

沒(méi)錯(cuò)，它正是仿寫了我們非常熟悉的諺語(yǔ)“Where there is a will, there is a way”：有志者，事竟成。

作者將這句話仿寫得惟妙惟肖，可見(jiàn)作者對(duì)語(yǔ)言駕馭是何等的嫻熟。

② while: 表示兩種現(xiàn)象的對(duì)比、反差，常翻譯成“而”。

③ perceptions and feelings:近義詞疊加。

近義詞疊加也是一種向閱卷老師展示自己語(yǔ)言能力和詞匯量的一種極為有效的手段。

翻譯：只翻譯出一種意思即可。即，這兩個(gè)詞合譯為：感受。

④ Therefore, let’s keep the famous line of shelley, the well-known poet, in mind for ever, that is, “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”

全文的點(diǎn)睛之筆，堪稱經(jīng)典。

首先：keep sth.in mind 這個(gè)詞組用得很地道。

其次：引用了雪萊的詩(shī)歌，表現(xiàn)出了深厚的文化底蘊(yùn)。

第三：the famous line=“If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”即后者為前者的同位語(yǔ)。

同位語(yǔ)的介入，使句子結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)落有致，層次分明，朗朗上口。

第四：著名詩(shī)句“If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”淋漓盡致地詮釋了樂(lè)觀的生活態(tài)度。

實(shí)際上，歷年真題的閱讀中又何曾沒(méi)有出現(xiàn)過(guò)這種模仿呢？廣大考生可以去查閱2007年text 3中的最后一句：The financial fallout has begun, and the political fallout may not be far behind。

⑤ 非常重要： 本題題目要求最后一段也可能會(huì)變成：

support your view with an example/examples。

這時(shí)候，我們可以把文章的結(jié)尾改寫為：

Examples of optimistic attitude toward life can easily be found anywhere in our world.How would have Zhang Haidi, suffering from the high paraplegia, made such glowing achievements in life, without her strong mind and optimistic attitude? Facing the serious diseases and hardships in life, she did not choose to hold back.Instead, she has been courageous and optimistic enough to defeat them.She has set an excellent example for us。

12、商業(yè)行賄

商業(yè)行賄

構(gòu)思點(diǎn)撥

上圖表現(xiàn)的是在“尚方寶劍”嚴(yán)懲的威嚴(yán)下，一位從事商業(yè)賄賂的人落荒而逃。不言而喻，這幅圖反映的是當(dāng)今一種比較猖獗的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象：商業(yè)賄賂。深層次來(lái)講，就是道德問(wèn)題、責(zé)任問(wèn)題。本文的內(nèi)容和結(jié)構(gòu)安排如下：

第一段：描述圖畫；第二段：從兩個(gè)角度分析影響+分析動(dòng)機(jī)；第三段：建議措施。

思維拓展

此類文章可以展開的角度有：金錢觀，商業(yè)道德建設(shè)、職業(yè)道德建設(shè)，公平競(jìng)爭(zhēng)。相似的圖片比比皆是。請(qǐng)參考下圖：

參考圖片

高分范文

There is no doubt that this cartoon vividly depicts a negative but rampant scenario in modern society: commercial bribery.Frightened by the sharp punishment sword, the man, carrying a large pile of money used as bribery①, is trying his best to escape.What is conveyed by the drawing is both realistic and thought-provoking。

The implication of the given picture can be elaborated in terms of the decline of work-moral values and the view on money.For one thing, commercial bribery has a very damaging and destructive② effect on the whole society.Firstly, moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weakness revealed in the action of bribery③ may stain and pollute the atmosphere of professional ethics and cause others to copy.Secondly, fair competition may be threatened because bribery puts honest businessmen at a disadvantaged position.For another, the bad behavior of commercial bribery is largely driven by “profit”，showing that those people who are involved in bribery do not have a right view on money.It is true that money is indispensable④, but, there is no denying that money should be obtained and spent in a reasonable, wise and legitimate way。

To eliminate the immoral behavior of bribery thoroughly⑤, drastic actions should be taken and severe punishment measures should be adopted.Besides, a positive mental guidance on the right attitude to money should be popularized among the public.Only in this way can we have a fair and sound social environment。

佳作妙譯

毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)這幅漫畫生動(dòng)地描述了現(xiàn)代社會(huì)一種負(fù)面的但是卻十分猖獗的現(xiàn)象：商業(yè)賄賂。由于懼怕嚴(yán)厲的懲罰，這個(gè)人背著一大堆賄賂用的錢落荒而逃。漫畫的寓意是十分現(xiàn)實(shí)并發(fā)人深思的。

上圖的寓意可以理解為詳細(xì)闡述了在金錢沖擊下職業(yè)道德的淪陷。一方面，商業(yè)賄賂對(duì)全社會(huì)造成惡劣的、毀滅性的影響。首先在賄賂行為中表現(xiàn)出的道德缺陷和人性弱點(diǎn)會(huì)破壞和污染職業(yè)道德的氛圍，不良分子也會(huì)效仿。其次，行賄者將破壞公平競(jìng)爭(zhēng)，誠(chéng)信經(jīng)營(yíng)的商人被置于不利地位。另一方面，商業(yè)賄賂行為大多是被利益驅(qū)動(dòng)的，這說(shuō)明這些人對(duì)金錢沒(méi)有正確的態(tài)度。沒(méi)有金錢的確是萬(wàn)萬(wàn)不能的，但對(duì)待金錢，無(wú)疑需要取之有道，用之有度。

為了徹底根除賄賂這種道德敗壞的行為，應(yīng)該采取嚴(yán)厲的懲罰措施。另外，應(yīng)該在公眾中逐漸普及正確的金錢觀。只有這樣，我們才能擁有公平、健全的社會(huì)環(huán)境。

名師點(diǎn)評(píng)

① money used as bribery: 過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ)=定語(yǔ)從句。

寫過(guò)去分詞做定語(yǔ)的步驟：

第一步：寫成定語(yǔ)從句：money which is used as bribery；

第二步：省略引導(dǎo)詞“which”和be動(dòng)詞“is”變成money used as bribery。

這樣，一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句就變成了過(guò)去分詞做定語(yǔ)。

② damaging and destructive:近義詞疊用，押韻：頭韻

③ revealed in the action of bribery: 過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ)，修飾前面的moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weakness，寫法參考本文點(diǎn)評(píng)第① 條。

④ It is true that money is indispensable: It作形式主語(yǔ)，真正的主語(yǔ)是that從句。

⑤ To eliminate the immoral behavior of?: 為了??。作目的狀語(yǔ)。

13、城市交通

城市交通

思路點(diǎn)撥

此圖片描述的是一幅交通堵塞的場(chǎng)景。圖片中，車一輛接著一輛地堵在街上，各種抱怨聲不斷。毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，這幅圖反映的是城市交通的壓力問(wèn)題。同時(shí)，汽車過(guò)多就意味著尾氣排放過(guò)多，所以這幅圖同時(shí)又反映了環(huán)保和低碳問(wèn)題。

第一段：描述圖畫；第二段：分析交通堵塞給人和環(huán)境帶來(lái)的影響；第三段：建議措施。

思維拓展

建議措施部分，還可以從如下角度提出：

呼吁政府：投資完善基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施、繼續(xù)堅(jiān)持限行的制度。

倡導(dǎo)低碳出行：步行、騎自行車。

倡導(dǎo)理智選擇城市：人全部擁擠在大城市帶來(lái)的負(fù)面影響。

高分范文

How horrible the traffic is!The picture depicts a scenario of a terrible traffic jam in the street.In fact, the traffic jam is so heavy that it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street①.Anxious passengers cannot take buses because there are few buses.Instead, the street is filled with too many private cars。

Exaggerated as it is, the phenomenon is not uncommon nowadays.With the number of private cars increasing②, traffic jams in metropolitans are bound to happen.Heavy transportation pressure in large cities may bring much inconvenience to people and exert negative impacts on the environment.On the one hand, when traffic jam happens, short distance in the past now seems to become terribly long, and drivers could do nothing but to wait.Therefore, a lot of precious time has been wasted on the road.On the other hand, exhausted gas emitted by cars③ has increased the burden of environment and caused carbon emission, which has diverted from the concept of living a low carbon life。

Therefore, effective measures should be taken to alleviate the traffic jam.Firstly, taxes levied on the sales of private cars④ should be raised so as to restrict private car ownership rate.Secondly, public transportation such as buses and subways, which are low-carbon transportation means, should be encouraged and promoted so that we can have a smooth transportation。

佳作妙譯

交通狀況真是一團(tuán)糟！這幅漫畫描述了街上糟糕的交通堵塞的場(chǎng)景。實(shí)際上，交通堵塞嚴(yán)重到了一定程度，與其說(shuō)這是一條擁擠的街道，還不如說(shuō)這是一個(gè)停車場(chǎng)。焦急的乘客等不到數(shù)量稀少的公交車，而私家車卻到處都是。

雖然這幅圖有點(diǎn)夸張，但是當(dāng)今這種現(xiàn)象并不罕見(jiàn)。私家車的增多必然產(chǎn)生大城市交通堵塞。大城市沉重的交通壓力會(huì)給人民生活帶來(lái)不便，也會(huì)對(duì)環(huán)境造成負(fù)面影響。一方面，一旦發(fā)生堵車，原來(lái)很近的路程似乎變得十分漫長(zhǎng)，除了等沒(méi)有別的辦法，大量的寶貴時(shí)間被浪費(fèi)在路上。另一方面，汽車排放的尾氣更增加了環(huán)境的負(fù)擔(dān)、導(dǎo)致了碳排放，這和低碳生活的理念相違背。

因此，應(yīng)該采取有效措施緩解嚴(yán)重的交通堵塞問(wèn)題。第一，通過(guò)提高稅費(fèi)限制私家車擁有率(保有量)。第二，應(yīng)該鼓勵(lì)和推廣低碳的公交車、地鐵等公共交通工具，以便我們擁有更順暢的交通。

名師點(diǎn)評(píng)

① it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street: more of A than B的結(jié)構(gòu)，通過(guò)字面可以理解成：更多的是A而不是B。

翻譯的時(shí)候，往往翻譯成：與其說(shuō)是B，不如說(shuō)是A。

反過(guò)來(lái)，當(dāng)我們想用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)“與其??不如??”的時(shí)候，我們可以采用這個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)。

實(shí)際上，這個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)在歷年真題閱讀中曾多次出現(xiàn)。如2000年Text 3中的選項(xiàng)：Futurist poetry is more of a transient phenomenon than literature。

② With the number of private cars increasing: with 短語(yǔ)表伴隨，翻譯成“隨著”。

③ exhausted gas emitted by cars: 其中emitted by cars是過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)作后置定語(yǔ)。

相當(dāng)于定語(yǔ)從句：gas which is emitted by cars(被汽車排放的尾氣)。

寫法：請(qǐng)參考《商業(yè)行賄》點(diǎn)評(píng)第①條。

④ taxes levied on the sales of private cars: 其中l(wèi)evied on the sales of private cars(針對(duì)私家車被征的稅)，為過(guò)去分詞做定語(yǔ)。寫法：請(qǐng)參考《商業(yè)行賄》點(diǎn)評(píng)第①條。

14、科技與生活

科技與生活

思路點(diǎn)撥

圖中描述的是武廣高鐵的開通，給城際交通帶來(lái)了極大便利。表面上看，它反映的是城市與城市之間距離被“縮短”的問(wèn)題，但是更深層次來(lái)講，是科技帶來(lái)了這一切，所以這幅圖可以有兩個(gè)切入點(diǎn)：城際交通、科技改變生活。本文作者選取了第二個(gè)角度為主要論述視角。

第一段：圖畫描述；第二段：兩個(gè)角度論述科學(xué)技術(shù)是第一生產(chǎn)力；第三段：提出建議、展望未來(lái)。

思維拓展

科技的話題，實(shí)際上是映射熱點(diǎn)問(wèn)題：上海世博。

世博的主題“城市讓生活更美好”，其中一個(gè)側(cè)面就是城市與科技。

可以反映“科技”主題的圖片有很多，如現(xiàn)代通訊、網(wǎng)絡(luò)等。

例如下圖，表面上看是反對(duì)迷信，深層含義實(shí)際上就是崇尚科學(xué)。

崇尚科學(xué)

高分范文

As is vividly depicted by the picture above, a traveler happily starts his journey by high-speed railway from Guangzhou to Wuhan.In the year of 2009, Wuhan-Guangzhou high-speed railway went into operation, reducing travelling time from 12 hours to 3 hours, bringing much convenience to the transportation between the two cities①.No wonder the caption in the picture says “with the Wu-Guang high-speed railway, cities far away is just like a place nearby”。

Science and technology are the primary productive forces② and have been playing a key role in the national economy development.On the one hand, progress in science and technology has promoted economic and social progress greatly.Take the high-speed railway as an example.Firstly, the railway becomes a new engine③ of booming of regional economic.Secondly, the railway helps to attract a lot of tourists, so that tourism in these cities flourishes.Last but not the least, the load of the existing transportation network can be released to a great extent.On the other hand, with the development of science and technology, such as the operation of high-speed transportation, video phone, webcam meeting, the world has become smaller and smaller。

It has long been a tradition for Chinese government to attach great importance to the advances④ in science and technology.Science and technology has successfully shaped an entirely new image of China on global stage via the two grand world events, 2008 Olympic Games and 2010 Shanghai World Expo.It is strongly advised that young people should devote themselves into the study of science and technology for “better city, better life”。

佳作妙譯

如上圖所示，一位旅客從廣州踏上了去往武漢的高速鐵路。2009年，武廣高鐵正式建成通車，將兩地之間的行程從12小時(shí)縮短到3小時(shí)，極大地方便了兩地的交通。難怪這幅漫畫上寫道“有了武廣高鐵，每個(gè)城市都在家門口”。

科技是第一生產(chǎn)力，在國(guó)民經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展中扮演著重要角色。一方面，科技的進(jìn)步促進(jìn)了經(jīng)濟(jì)社會(huì)的快速進(jìn)步。高速鐵路就是鮮活的例子。首先這條鐵路成為地區(qū)經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展新的引擎。其次鐵路吸引了大量游客，這些城市的旅游業(yè)隨之繁榮起來(lái)。再次這條鐵路很大程度上緩解了現(xiàn)有線路的運(yùn)輸壓力。另一方面，隨著科技的發(fā)展，高速鐵路，視頻電話，視頻會(huì)議等應(yīng)用會(huì)越來(lái)越多，世界將變得越來(lái)越小。

中國(guó)政府一直很重視科技的發(fā)展，通過(guò)2008北京奧運(yùn)會(huì)和2010上海世博兩件盛事，科技成功地重塑了中國(guó)在世界舞臺(tái)上的國(guó)際形象。因此青少年要懷著“城市，讓生活更美好”的信念，積極投身到對(duì)科技文化知識(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)上。

名師點(diǎn)評(píng)

① reducing?, bringing?: 并列的兩個(gè)現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)。

② Science and technology are the primary productive forces: 科學(xué)技術(shù)是第一生產(chǎn)力。這是任何一篇與科技相關(guān)的文章都可以用的萬(wàn)能句型。

③ a new engine: 一個(gè)新的引擎，這是一個(gè)形象的比喻，把科技對(duì)經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展的動(dòng)力表達(dá)得非常具體、形象。

涉及到科技、發(fā)展、環(huán)境等題目時(shí)，不可避免的就需要用到發(fā)展這個(gè)詞，本文中 “發(fā)展”，多次出現(xiàn)，作者采用了多樣化的詞匯： “development(n。)”，“progress(n。)”，“flourish(v。)”，“boom(v./n.)”，“advance”。

這類詞匯還有： “prosperous(adj。)”，“improve(v。)”等。

近義詞的多種替換方式，使得文章在統(tǒng)一中富于變化。廣大考生可以把這些詞匯積累下來(lái)，應(yīng)用到自己的寫作中去，也能起到妙筆生花的效果。

④ 如果題目要求最后一段舉例，則我們可以把文章的結(jié)尾改成例子：如手機(jī)、因特網(wǎng)等是如何提高了生活效率的。

15、弘揚(yáng)民族文化

弘揚(yáng)民族文化

思路點(diǎn)撥

圖片中共有三個(gè)內(nèi)容：陶瓷花瓶、功夫熊貓、麻將牌。這三種形象都是典型的中國(guó)元素。正如圖片的名稱“歐洲的‘中國(guó)熱’”所說(shuō)，一種學(xué)習(xí)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化和漢語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言的熱潮正在歐洲悄然興起。毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，本圖的主題是：弘揚(yáng)中國(guó)文化，以及中國(guó)國(guó)際形象、國(guó)際地位的上升。全文行思路可如下：

第一段：分別描述圖畫中體現(xiàn)出的中國(guó)元素；第二段：分析外國(guó)人對(duì)中華文化的興趣提升的原因+舉例；第三段：對(duì)待民族文化的正確態(tài)度。

思維拓展

保護(hù)文物、文明遺產(chǎn)、名勝古跡的圖片也可以從捍衛(wèi)和弘揚(yáng)民族文化的角度入手加以分析論證。參考下圖：

參考圖片

高分范文

In the picture, we can see that there are some vases made of china, which are

typical products in China since ancient time.An image of a panda playing Kung Fu① is carved on the surface of the vases, in which both Panda and Kung Fu are the symbols of Chinese elements.Besides, the Chinese mahjong which is growing out of a vase is also a typical Chinese element。

It is obvious that the main purpose of the picture is to reflect the phenomenon of “China fever”，referring to a foreign passion and enthusiasm② on Chinese elements, especially culture.There are reasons accounting for the growing interest in Chinese elements.For one thing, for the past decades, China has made conspicuous progress in all fields such as economy, science and technology, and comprehensive strength of China has been enhanced greatly.For another, due to the progress, China presents a new image to the world and is becoming increasingly attractive and appealing③ to the whole world.Nearly every day news stories are reported and broadcasted④ about what is going on in and around China.And By 2010, there are 72 Confucius Institutes in 26 European countries established to spread Chinese language and culture⑤。

Toward this kind of “China craze”，we should hold a right attitude.On the one hand, we should take pride in the “China craze” by foreigners, which originates from the increasing prestige of China.On the other hand, it is the responsibility of each Chinese citizen to popularize and promote excellent traditional Chinese culture and guard a favorable image of our motherland。

佳作妙譯

這幅圖中我們可以看到一些瓷制的花瓶，這是中國(guó)自古以來(lái)的典型產(chǎn)品。瓶身上畫著一只正在練習(xí)中國(guó)功夫的熊貓，熊貓和功夫同樣是中國(guó)文化的代表。此外，花瓶中長(zhǎng)出的“麻將”也是典型的中國(guó)元素。

這幅漫畫的主要目的是反映“中國(guó)熱”的現(xiàn)象，即國(guó)外對(duì)中國(guó)元素尤其是中華文化的一種追捧和熱情。國(guó)外對(duì)中國(guó)元素興趣上升的這種現(xiàn)象是有原因的。首先，過(guò)去的幾十年中，中國(guó)在經(jīng)濟(jì)、科技等各個(gè)領(lǐng)域都取得了顯著的進(jìn)步，中國(guó)的綜合國(guó)力已經(jīng)大幅提升。另一方面，由于這些進(jìn)步，中國(guó)以嶄新的形象出現(xiàn)在世人面前，在全世界越來(lái)越有吸引力。幾乎每天都有很多關(guān)于中國(guó)及其周邊正在發(fā)生的新聞報(bào)道。截止到2010年，已經(jīng)有26個(gè)歐洲國(guó)家建立了72所孔子學(xué)院來(lái)傳播中國(guó)語(yǔ)言和文化。

對(duì)于這種“中國(guó)熱”的現(xiàn)象我們應(yīng)該持有正確的態(tài)度。一方面我們應(yīng)該為外國(guó)人的“中國(guó)熱”感到自豪，這源于中國(guó)聲望的提高。另一方面，弘揚(yáng)優(yōu)秀的中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化和捍衛(wèi)祖國(guó)的形象，是每一位中國(guó)公民的責(zé)任。

名師點(diǎn)評(píng)

① a panda playing Kung Fu: 正在練中國(guó)功夫的熊貓。其中playing Kung Fu 是后

置定語(yǔ)修飾panda。

現(xiàn)在分詞作后置定語(yǔ)的寫法：

第一步：寫出定語(yǔ)從句：a panda that is playing Kung Fu；

第二步：把引導(dǎo)詞“that”和be動(dòng)詞“is”一起省略；

② passion and enthusiasm:近義詞疊加，加強(qiáng)語(yǔ)氣和氣勢(shì)。

③ attractive and appealing:近義詞疊加，加強(qiáng)語(yǔ)氣和氣勢(shì)。

④ reported and broadcasted:近義詞疊加，加強(qiáng)語(yǔ)氣和氣勢(shì)。

⑤ Confucius Institutes in 26 European countries established to spread Chinese language and culture: 其中“established? culture”是Confucius Institutes(孔子學(xué)院)的后置定語(yǔ)。寫法：請(qǐng)參考《商業(yè)行賄》點(diǎn)評(píng)第①條。

第二篇：2018考研英語(yǔ)大作文預(yù)測(cè)

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Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures.In your essay , you should

1)describe the pictures briefly，2)interpret the meaning , and

3)give your comments.You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET II.范文：

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children tell her to prepare the dinner for them.Obviously, what the drawing has subtly conveyed should be given more concern.Filial piety has always been the traditional virtue of Chinese culture for thousands of years.Respectingour parents is the first priority.However, ridiculous as it is, the phenomenon in the picture is not infrequent in today’s society.For one thing, enormous economic development brings not only wealth, but also public’s obsession for material possessions.They only care about individual gain and loss, which undermine the once sacred bond between parents and children.For another, people seem to be fond of boasting of how they abide by traditions through holding grand meals for their parents.As a matter of fact, some even compete about the extravagance of the event.I argue that those who behave as the picture miss the essence and profound values of our traditions.Filial piety should not be expressed by means of superficial “performance”, but by ways of children’s genuine care and love for their parents.Thinking about how parents took care of us when we were babies in cradles, we should realize that they all need due attention when aging.Piety is the foundation of all virtues.中外文化交流

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1)describe the picture briefly，2)interpret its meaning, and

3)give your comments.You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET II.范文：

As is vividly depicted in the simple but educational photo, two foreigners humbly ask if they can be the students of the Confucius, which successfully captures our eyes.If we give it a closer watch, it is not difficult to find that they are very interested in traditional Chinese culture.Obviously, what the drawing has subtly conveyed should be given more enlightening.http://kaoyan.wendu.com/

The reason why increasingly more foreigners begin to learn Chinese culture is varied.To begin with, the long history and effulgent culture of the Chinese nation contribute to the improvement of human beings, which account to the current enthusiasm of Chinese in the world.What is more, due to the practice of reforming and opening-up policy,our national strengthhas improved the comprehensive national power.So more and more countries, international organizations and people become interested in Chinese culture and come into contact with China.Then studying Chinese is the only road for them to understand China better.According to the above analysis, it is my view that national culture is a priceless spiritual treasure that should be preserved and cherished.Only in this way can we promote cultural development positively and make our society colorful and vigorous.堅(jiān)定信念(Ⅰ)

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As is vividly depicted in the simple but educational photo, the elderly man in the picture makes every effort to remove the mountain with an unbreakable faith that only by continuous endeavor can people achieve what they want, which successfully captures our eyes.And the other man with two extremely heavy burdens of ideals on his shoulders assists the elderly to remove the mountains.Obviously, what the drawing has subtly conveyed should be given more enlightening.Theoretically, several reasons may cause the phenomenon conveyed in the picture, but for my part, the following two are of utmost importance.On the top of the list is that both of them adhere to their primal ideals and beliefs, that is, people should never forget why they started, and their mission can be accomplished.This founding aspiration is what inspires them to advance.In addition, there is the other point that no one can ignore.It is universally admitted that people with great determination and courage will succeed eventually, especially when they encounter difficulties.According to the above analysis, it is advisable for us to take steps to reverse this evil trend.Of all the steps, mass media tend to function essentially in the job.Only in this way can we resolve this problem and embrace a bright future.堅(jiān)定信念(Ⅱ)

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Here are two pictures, interesting and provoking.In the first picture, the man, at the very beginning, makes every effort to dig diamonds with an unbreakable faith that only by continuous endeavor can people achieve what they want.By contrast, the second picture describes that, one year later, he doesn’t persist in his initial unswerving faith, and abandons his original ideas completely.Obviously, what the drawing has subtly conveyed should be given more concern.Theoretically, several reasons may trigger the problem conveyed in the picture, but for my part, the following two are of utmost importance.On the top of the list is that he does not adhere to his primal ideals and beliefs, that is, people should never forget why they started, and their mission can be accomplished.This founding aspiration is what inspires them to advance.In addition, there is the other point that no one can ignore.It is universally admitted that the last leg of a journey marks the halfway point and our initial motivation will inspire us to finish the last leg.According to the above analysis, it is advisable for us to take steps to reverse this evil trend.Of all the steps, mass media tend to function essentially in the job.Only in this way can we resolve this problem and embrace a bright future.

第三篇：2011考研英語(yǔ)作文預(yù)測(cè)及

2011考研英語(yǔ)作文預(yù)測(cè)及范文：相互推卸責(zé)任。

2.漫畫“相互推卸責(zé)任”---影射食品安全事件中的社會(huì)責(zé)任感和道德感缺失。

重點(diǎn)推薦： the lack of responsibility

范文演示：When the issue of poisonous milk powder gains an overwhelming focus from the public，what are these malefactors doing？ As we can see from the depiction，enterprise，milk station，milch cow and even grass are trying to find someone scapegoating for this credit crisis，in my view point，that’s nothing to do with the credit but the problem of responsibility.Responsibility is a keyword that we should never disregard，defined not only as the courage to face every foreseeable risk，but as the braveness to entail every malpractice when it really takes place as well.The causes of the shortage of responsibility or even conscience may be as follows.Firstly，inner cause ascribing probably to the destructive influence emanating from the decay of morality may result in the over-materialism.Furthermore，outerly，deficient supervisal gives rise to the fearless adventurer who is at the risk of anything，not to say to deviate from his own liability，to pursue as many as profits.A case in point is the Melamine-laced Milk Incident which almost destroyed the whole of China’s milk industry.It is imperative that drastic measures should be taken to end this thorny situation，such as enacting related law to reinforce our supervisal mechanism to avoid the behavior of kicking the ball when something bad happen and promoting social entities to regain one of Chinese traditional virtues，which is called “who would enter the hell if I wouldn’t”，that means，undoubtedly，to learn to be responsible for the blunder means sensible unflinchingness.2011考研英語(yǔ)作文預(yù)測(cè)及范文：瞎子摸到了真象

1.漫畫“瞎子摸到了真象”---影射國(guó)際對(duì)于中國(guó)認(rèn)識(shí)的前后變化。范文演示：Introduced as a widely known Chinese fable “Blind men and an Elephant”，it tells us never to draw a conclusion from incomplete data.For tremendous years，people outside China could only get narrow and unilateral knowledge about China，leaving a real China far from being unveiled.Nevertheless，the past 2008 Beijing Olympics was the very and perfect time to lift the curse.For most people who are non-Chinese，they tend to have a picture of Chinese who are just Confucius-like，living in a highly polluted place or even having no freedom to speak in public，etc.Reasons behind are usually the following two： one is that westerners are not so eager to learn about China just as our Chinese do about them，the limited information that reached them are mostly outdated or biased one which were more often than not stipulated by a third party with a special interest;the other is that Chinese government were not so open as the one today and did inadequate publicity about its country，thus the image of China is always kind of mysterious to outsiders，then the image depicted above about China，though misleading，is understandable.However，the grand Olympic Games provide an golden opportunity for people around the world to see a complete and “brand-new”China.Therefore，a better world characterized by harmony between China and all the other countries is to come.附件三：2011年考研英語(yǔ)大作文權(quán)威預(yù)測(cè)三

背景介紹：山寨現(xiàn)象

“山寨”一詞源于廣東話，是“小型、小規(guī)模”甚至有點(diǎn)“地下工廠”的意思，其主要特點(diǎn)為仿造性、快速化、平民化。如今，網(wǎng)絡(luò)上各種各樣的東西都有山寨版，山寨版明星、山寨版“神七”，山寨版“鳥巢”，山寨版的《紅樓夢(mèng)》甚至火過(guò)新版《紅樓夢(mèng)》。

從2003年開始出現(xiàn)山寨手機(jī)到各種山寨產(chǎn)品，“山寨”一詞從經(jīng)濟(jì)行為逐漸演變?yōu)橐环N社會(huì)文化現(xiàn)象。如今“山寨相機(jī)”、“山寨電影”、“山寨明星”甚至“山寨版的春晚”等諸多帶有模仿性質(zhì)的“山寨現(xiàn)象”層出不窮，形成了獨(dú)有的“山寨文化”。

KEYWORDS: “Shanzhai” or “copycat”（山寨）

MODEL ESSAY:

As is indicated in the illustration given above, one well-known historical notability named Li Kui is being astonished by his another-self, who is standing in the opposite side, with a disgraceful note in his hand announcing “giving you the parallel experience as the original edition could pay”.So, paid for what? Definitely, he would be paid for his special reputation as a so-called “Copycat Big Star” or “Shanzhai Superstar” which is rampant in today’s China.The trend of the variety of human culture is unchangeable even without the action delivered by human beings ascribing to the various individualities themselves, so is this round of culture revolution.The novelties emanating from the “Copycat Culture”---“Shanzhai Movie”, “Shanzhai Camera” and even “Shanzhai Celebration of Spring Festival” have brought a lot of entertainment to the public to some extent, but what we should never be blind to is their negative influence if they go to extremes hypothetically.Just as the exemplification demonstrated in the cartoon goes, “Shanzhai Star” is taking advantage of the fame or profitable value generating from the true superstar, sometimes this kind of behavior is a typical infringement to the intellectual property indeed, which we can never fail to recognize from TV programs or newspapers always.Then, the question goes to another orientation, that is, whether or not should we admit the existence of “Copycat Culture” or to what extent could we make efforts to protect the rights of original authority? It goes with no denying that the engine of the development of a country is subject to the nation’s creative power, which needs the much strongest protection from no matter government or civilian to fight with any behavior ravaging this kind of ecological balance.Fortunately, the first good news has been coming in---“a unique 15-digit code, the International Mobile Equipment Identity(IMEI), is being applied to China’s more than 200 types of registered mobile phones.The effort will combat “Shanzhai” mobile phones, or copycat phones, the Ministry of Industry and Information Technology said recently.”

特別提醒：2011年必背小作文三篇

訂購(gòu)及銷售信

銷售：

Last year we achieved a 15% increase in the sales of our.we believe that this happy state of affairs can be attributed to two causes.First, we managed to avoid passing on any part of our increased manufacturing costs to our majestic clients.Second, we believe our designs and colors are the most attractive that we have ever produced.And so we are happy to be able to tell you that our new season’s are, if anything, more attractive than last year’s and our prices will compare very favorably with those of any of our competitors.We believe that you will agree that our samples prove the truth of our claims.We look forward for you to favor us an order.訂購(gòu)：

Could you give us some idea about your price?

Full information as to prices, quality, quantity available and other relative particulars would be highly appreciated.It will be greatly appreciated if you will kindly send us your samples.However, we find that we can obtain a price less by 30% than yours with local firm.投訴信：

你參加了一個(gè)公司的面試，結(jié)果在面試過(guò)程中考官把你批的顏面全無(wú)，根本不顧及你的感受，請(qǐng)寫信給這個(gè)公司的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)投訴。

1，說(shuō)明來(lái)信目的 2，具體闡述投訴理由

3，期待的解決方式

點(diǎn)評(píng)：這是一封典型的combination（合體式）作文，它既涉及找工作面試用語(yǔ)，又涉及投訴信，代表了考研應(yīng)用文命題的典型思路。

MODEL ESSAY:

Dear Sir or Madam，I, the undersigned, am a job applicant who had participated in the interview held by your company last Wednesday.I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about this jod-striving experience.The reason for my dissatisfaction has nothing to do with the outcome but the tone of your interviewer, Mr Wang.First, when I was about to illuminating my deep thought, he began to blame on my so-called nonsense according to his perspective.Additionally, his cynical eyesight always made me feel that I am a reject , after all, I am a novice who has stepped into this ruthless carrer world for the first time.I appreciate it very much if you could take my letter into consideration, what I really want is just an apology delivered from him,and I would like to have this matter settled by this Friday.Yours，Li Ming

（二）2011年考研英語(yǔ)大作文命題方向前瞻

考研英語(yǔ)大作文的命題范圍雖每年千奇百變，但基于中國(guó)國(guó)情的基本事實(shí)和命題規(guī)律卻從來(lái)沒(méi)有改變過(guò)，因此命題的方向把握相對(duì)就不是太難的事，具體來(lái)說(shuō)，從宏觀角度符合以下兩點(diǎn)：

（1）高舉和諧社會(huì)大旗（Harmonious Society）

從1998年考研英語(yǔ)大作文命題至今，考題基本鎖定和諧社會(huì)的大旗，反復(fù)變換切入點(diǎn)，而命題方式，除了1999年的圖表題之外，已經(jīng)基本鎖定在圖畫題，這個(gè)規(guī)律已經(jīng)延續(xù)11年未變，具體來(lái)看，1998年的誠(chéng)信（credit）話題，1999年以及2000年連續(xù)兩年的人與自然和諧共處的話題（nature），2001年愛(ài)心話題（love），2002年的世界文化融合話題（culture）,2003年的個(gè)人、企業(yè)獨(dú)立成長(zhǎng)話題（self-independence）,2004年的人生奮斗無(wú)止境話題（it ends today but starts tomorrow）,2005年的撫養(yǎng)老人話題（to respect elders）,2006年的偶像崇拜話題（idol worship），2007年的自信話題（confidence），2008年的殘疾人合作奮斗自強(qiáng)不息話題（never give up）,2009年的網(wǎng)絡(luò)對(duì)于人類交流親疏遠(yuǎn)近之影響（interpersonal relationship immersed in Internet era）以及2010年再次重現(xiàn)的中西文化大融合話題。從這些歷年真題中無(wú)不察覺(jué)出命題者的良苦用心，即完善人格，關(guān)注生活，關(guān)心他人，最終實(shí)現(xiàn)人與人的和諧，個(gè)人自身的和諧以及人與自然的和諧。一旦把握此命題思路，在平時(shí)的訓(xùn)練時(shí)就能真正做到有的放矢，例如，一些陰暗的，過(guò)于政治化的話題，就不會(huì)成為應(yīng)試范圍，而尚未考察過(guò)的一些和諧話題，例如社會(huì)責(zé)任（responsibility），樂(lè)觀心態(tài)（optimism）亦或平心做人、腳踏實(shí)地（to try to grasp your aspiration step by step）等，就應(yīng)該在平時(shí)適當(dāng)進(jìn)行練習(xí)，這樣在走進(jìn)考場(chǎng)那一刻才能真正實(shí)現(xiàn)胸有成足，寫作時(shí)的素材才會(huì)有信手拈來(lái)的感覺(jué)。

（一）2011年小作文寫作前瞻

縱觀往年考研小作文（應(yīng)用文）命題，個(gè)人認(rèn)為規(guī)律性非常明顯。大綱規(guī)定的應(yīng)用文類型，也就那么幾種，幾乎是一年考一種。我們來(lái)看看真題：

2004年大綱第一次增加小作文，所考的第一篇作文來(lái)自于2005年1月的辭職信。當(dāng)年這篇作文令很多業(yè)界所謂的預(yù)測(cè)大師們感到非常意外，因?yàn)榘凑粘＠恚髮W(xué)生寫的第一封職業(yè)類郵件應(yīng)該是求職信，考研學(xué)子大多數(shù)都是應(yīng)屆生，還沒(méi)學(xué)會(huì)寫求職信就先寫辭職信，總感覺(jué)不大厚道。結(jié)果，不厚道的事情就是發(fā)生了，隨之而來(lái)的就是網(wǎng)上所羅列的大量預(yù)測(cè)模板徹底失效，甚至當(dāng)年有人叫囂絕對(duì)不可能考辭職信；

緊接著2006年，考了咨詢信，如何向希望工程捐款，此封信考的很常規(guī)，只需在考前做過(guò)適當(dāng)準(zhǔn)備即可；

2007年，考查的是主動(dòng)建議信，再次把考生放在了非常主動(dòng)的地位上，沒(méi)人問(wèn)你意見(jiàn)，你自己跳出來(lái)對(duì)母校的大學(xué)圖書館管理提建議。這封郵件再次使網(wǎng)絡(luò)上以及很多培訓(xùn)機(jī)構(gòu)的預(yù)測(cè)失效，因?yàn)樗麄優(yōu)橥瑢W(xué)們準(zhǔn)備的范文多半是類似于你有一個(gè)同學(xué)，要去美國(guó)讀書，寫信問(wèn)你到底是讀歷史還是計(jì)算機(jī)。實(shí)質(zhì)上，這屬于回復(fù)建議信，它的文章開頭多半是In respond to your question about whether to ? , I would like to present the following recommendations.而主動(dòng)建議信的開頭卻截然不同，因?yàn)槭侵鲃?dòng)，所以收信人多半會(huì)感覺(jué)比較突然，因此需要寫信人在開頭稍作自我介紹，并不是介紹自己的姓名，而是稍微說(shuō)明下自己主動(dòng)提建議的初衷是為對(duì)方好，首先取得對(duì)方的理解，這才是一封主動(dòng)建議信所必須具備的，基于此，開頭往往會(huì)設(shè)計(jì)為，As a warm-hearted and attentiveness-full 的人，I have spent a lot of time caring about the development of

so that I write this letter to display some of my recommendations with regard to

as follows.因此，如果不能準(zhǔn)確使用，則后果會(huì)很嚴(yán)重，從第一句話就會(huì)暴露你根本沒(méi)有審題，得分也就可想而知；

2008年考察的非常巧妙，雜交了兩種類型的郵件：道歉加失物歸還。出國(guó)旅行，把國(guó)外朋友借給你聽的CD機(jī)一不小心帶回國(guó)了。這封郵件再次使很多死板的失物招領(lǐng)信或?qū)の飭⑹滦拍０鍩o(wú)用武之地；

2009年，倡議信，倡議大家不要再使用一次性塑料袋，這封信比較常規(guī)；

到了最近一次2010年，很多同學(xué)都在驚訝于怎么考了一篇招聘通知，難道郵件時(shí)代就此終結(jié)？我認(rèn)為，實(shí)則不然。首先，通知和郵件的格式并無(wú)實(shí)質(zhì)差別，考研小作文的注意力從來(lái)就不應(yīng)該是放在格式上；其次，2009年上課我反復(fù)給大家講過(guò)求職信怎么寫，尤其是得分的關(guān)鍵---第二段，你必須說(shuō)明自己適合這份工作，因此我給大家設(shè)計(jì)了三大自證理由，英文（證書）水準(zhǔn)，著名企業(yè)實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)驗(yàn)，適合團(tuán)隊(duì)協(xié)作的性格等，而學(xué)習(xí)主動(dòng)性稍微強(qiáng)一些的同學(xué)只要?jiǎng)狱c(diǎn)腦筋，就會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)其實(shí)只要把這三點(diǎn)反過(guò)來(lái)，變成招聘要求，這篇通知就會(huì)迎刃而解。這就是為什么當(dāng)年考完試當(dāng)天就有很多同學(xué)自信的跟我說(shuō)考得不錯(cuò)的原因，因?yàn)樗麄冊(cè)敢馑伎迹R門一腳還得靠大家自己！

好了，分析了這么多，也就是為了預(yù)測(cè)未來(lái)。綜上所述，小作文考察的特點(diǎn)主要有：第一，希望把學(xué)生放在一個(gè)主動(dòng)的地位上，比如辭職，主動(dòng)建議等，都把大家放在了主動(dòng)方，而這恰恰與很多同學(xué)平時(shí)訓(xùn)練應(yīng)用文時(shí)喜歡把自己放在被動(dòng)方的思維相悖，也是大家為什么感覺(jué)總押不到題的根源。第二，考研的考察方向依舊是以郵件為主，換句話說(shuō)，只要把郵件寫好了，即使考別的應(yīng)用文類型，那也不怕！因此，經(jīng)過(guò)對(duì)2011年考研新大綱的考量，本人有七成把握今年考研會(huì)考訂購(gòu)信（或出售信，一正一反，都要會(huì)寫）和投訴信（或回復(fù)投訴信）。

（2）影射當(dāng)年熱點(diǎn)話題（hot spot）

2008年1月19日下午，正值08年考研第一天，我的手機(jī)從當(dāng)天的研究生入學(xué)英語(yǔ)考試結(jié)束之時(shí)起就一直響到當(dāng)天晚上21時(shí)許，大多數(shù)是來(lái)自學(xué)員和同事的祝賀以及感謝，說(shuō)我押中了08年的考研大作文題。其實(shí)，對(duì)于押題這個(gè)字眼，我內(nèi)心從來(lái)都是不太感冒的，因?yàn)橐粋€(gè)好的考研者，英文復(fù)習(xí)的重心絕對(duì)不應(yīng)該放在押題中，一個(gè)好的師者，也不應(yīng)給學(xué)員傳達(dá)押題這樣的信息，而是應(yīng)該幫助學(xué)員實(shí)實(shí)在在找到方向，真正提高寫作水平。但押終歸押到了，雖有些許驚詫，但也很欣慰的發(fā)現(xiàn)，自己一直以來(lái)對(duì)于考研命題的思路探析沒(méi)有出錯(cuò)，起碼與命題組的專家們算是有些契合了！其實(shí)用心觀察的人都會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)，近些年尤其是近5年來(lái)考研的命題，除了把握和諧社會(huì)這個(gè)大方向不變之外，影射當(dāng)年熱點(diǎn)就是另一個(gè)最直接有效切中命題的捷徑。讓我們來(lái)看看吧，2003年1月考研，正值中國(guó)加入WTO第一年，實(shí)為2002年經(jīng)濟(jì)界的一個(gè)熱點(diǎn)話題，因此圖畫選擇了“溫室里的花朵經(jīng)不起風(fēng)雨”，影射中國(guó)企業(yè)成長(zhǎng)繼而引申到個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)都需要自主獨(dú)立；2005年1月考研，“養(yǎng)老足球賽”，大家查閱2004年全年BBC評(píng)選的中國(guó)大事記，把當(dāng)年命名為中國(guó)的“司法聚焦年”，因此贍養(yǎng)父母這個(gè)小的切入點(diǎn)影射的實(shí)為中國(guó)當(dāng)年的人際全局面貌；2006年1月考研，“偶像崇拜話題”，更是明顯不過(guò)，2005年全年的超級(jí)女聲幾乎撼動(dòng)了整個(gè)中國(guó)娛樂(lè)界；2007年1月的“自信話題”，漫畫中一個(gè)守門員，一個(gè)射手，正在面臨點(diǎn)球大戰(zhàn)前的心理波動(dòng)，回應(yīng)的的正是2006年沸騰全球的德國(guó)世界杯；再到2008年1月，充分顯示了命題者的智慧，中國(guó)正式進(jìn)入奧運(yùn)年，奧運(yùn)所體現(xiàn)的一切精神就是永不放棄，自強(qiáng)不息，但如果直接選擇一幅漫畫就是關(guān)于奧運(yùn)，又太過(guò)明顯，因此，我當(dāng)時(shí)在2007年5月17號(hào)的一次考研講座現(xiàn)場(chǎng)就第一次提出了了08年考研的展望，即奧運(yùn)這個(gè)熱點(diǎn)過(guò)于強(qiáng)大，所以不可能避開，那怎么隱藏？？所以只能選擇打“擦邊球”，通過(guò)殘奧，影射殘疾人不屈不撓奮斗之話題，因?yàn)槊恳粋€(gè)觀看過(guò)哪怕任何一場(chǎng)殘疾人運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)的人都會(huì)為這個(gè)特殊群體的精神所震撼，果不其然，最終的結(jié)果如我所料！因此，我們可以大膽的推測(cè)，即將到來(lái)的11年考研，這個(gè)大規(guī)律依舊有很大的可能得到延續(xù)。

（三）2011年考研英語(yǔ)預(yù)測(cè)

以下六大話題搜集，是在充分研究2011年全年大事記的前提下，嚴(yán)格遵守以上兩大命題思路所作出的預(yù)測(cè)，具體的范文會(huì)陸續(xù)在我的元旦押題班中發(fā)布，請(qǐng)大家引起足夠重視！

1.漫畫“瞎子摸到了真象”---影射國(guó)際對(duì)于中國(guó)認(rèn)識(shí)的前后變化。

2.漫畫“相互推卸責(zé)任”---影射食品安全事件中的社會(huì)責(zé)任感和道德感缺失。

3.漫畫“股市大跌”---影射投機(jī)心態(tài)不可有，腳踏實(shí)地才是出路。

4.漫畫“地震中用自己身軀保護(hù)學(xué)生的好老師”---影射災(zāi)難事件中人性的光輝。關(guān)于災(zāi)難，此命題切入點(diǎn)還有可能為保持樂(lè)觀心態(tài)。

5.漫畫“把我整成**明星的樣子”---影射整容現(xiàn)象以及山寨現(xiàn)象

最后，衷心祝愿所有參加2011年的考研的學(xué)子都能經(jīng)過(guò)自己的努力獲得成功，其實(shí)，準(zhǔn)備考研的過(guò)程所懂得的諸多寶貴品質(zhì)，本身就是一筆巨大的財(cái)富。

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朱偉簡(jiǎn)介：朱偉，英文名Jerry，新東方教育科技集團(tuán)09優(yōu)秀教師，南昌新東方學(xué)校考試部名師，國(guó)內(nèi)考試項(xiàng)目主管，主授課程：詞匯8000，詞匯5500，四六級(jí)閱讀，考研寫作，雅思詞匯，BEC高級(jí)寫作，大學(xué)預(yù)科閱讀、詞匯、考研及四、六級(jí)閱讀、寫作、詞匯專家。民商法學(xué)碩士研究生，研究生入學(xué)考試政治，英語(yǔ)，各專業(yè)課以及總分均為當(dāng)年第一名。大學(xué)生繽紛藝術(shù)節(jié)歌唱比賽冠軍，百事新星大賽南區(qū)亞軍，“江南之星”十強(qiáng),在大學(xué)畢業(yè)時(shí)成功舉辦個(gè)人演唱會(huì)。大學(xué)期間獲各類歌唱比賽及英文競(jìng)賽大獎(jiǎng),并曾在同一首歌及周華健演唱會(huì)擔(dān)任嘉賓歌手,被考生譽(yù)為”全能天才偶像教師”。授課內(nèi)容豐富全面，對(duì)歷年考試命題規(guī)律的研究深入透徹，是新東方集團(tuán)新一代青年教師的優(yōu)秀代表。

第四篇：考研英語(yǔ)作文預(yù)測(cè)

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As is ridiculously shown above , in the darkness happily runs a man , shouldering the priva

cy of the celebrities as a bomb to attract public’s attention , rushing to the news press, with another one from the news office welcoming his arrival.In the middle of the second picture stands a naked man , astonished by the huge amount of personal privacy pouring out of the mobile phone.There has been a heated discussion about these pictures recently in the newspaper.Simple as the pictures are , they do demonstrate certain thought-provoking social phenomenon.如圖所示，黑暗中一個(gè)人開心的扛著一個(gè)寫著名人隱私的炸彈，沖進(jìn)了報(bào)社，而門口的那個(gè)人正在歡迎著他的到來(lái)。另一幅圖的中央站了一個(gè)****的人，正吃驚的看著從手機(jī)的屏幕中涌出的大量的個(gè)人隱私。最近報(bào)紙上對(duì)這樣的圖片有著熱烈的討論。盡管圖畫很簡(jiǎn)單，但是卻揭示了某種令人深思的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象。

The pictures tell us that the intrusion on other’s privacy and revealing it in the press are not only harmful but also detrimental.what’s more , our society fails to attach due attention to this problem.Firstly, some practitioners of low moral

standards in the journalism, however, are tempted to focus on other’s privacy , especially some newsworthy celebrities’ , such as love affairs, family relationship, medical history and its like, to attract more readers to buy their magazines or to increase their website’s PV(page view), and ultimately to lure more clients to pour money for advertisements.Secondly, The regulator and the authority turn a blind eye to this situation and make it the a real grey area.Furthermore , the public’s aesthetic taste of elegance is still far behind.這些圖畫告訴我們窺探他人的隱私并把其暴露于媒體上是非常有害的。我們的社會(huì)并沒(méi)有足夠的關(guān)注這個(gè)問(wèn)題。首先，有一些道德標(biāo)準(zhǔn)不高的新聞從業(yè)者為了吸引更多的讀者購(gòu)買他們的雜志，為了提高他們網(wǎng)站的訪問(wèn)量，并能最終吸引更多的廣告客戶，他們會(huì)去關(guān)注其他人的隱私，尤其是有新聞價(jià)值的名人的隱私，這些隱私包括緋聞，家庭關(guān)系，病史等等。其次，政府和監(jiān)管者對(duì)于這一現(xiàn)象往往是視而不見(jiàn)，這樣使其成為了真正的灰色區(qū)域。進(jìn)一步的講，大眾的高雅的審美情趣還遠(yuǎn)未形成。

In my view , we are deeply convinced that everyone has the right to the privacy , the basic right which should be respected, protected and guaranteed by our laws and regulations under whatever circumstances.Princess Diana shows how bad things could end.It is also imperative that the public’s aesthetic taste be so enhanced and promoted that eventually build up a harmonious scene in which people can enjoy their live tranquilly and.peacefully.在我看來(lái)，我們相信每個(gè)人都有權(quán)擁有自己的隱私。在任何環(huán)境下，我們的法律和法規(guī)都應(yīng)該尊重，保護(hù)，保障這樣的基本權(quán)利。戴安娜王妃的事例就已經(jīng)表明了事情會(huì)有多糟糕。同樣，大眾的審美情趣應(yīng)該得到足夠的提升，這樣我們才有可能最終形成一個(gè)和諧的場(chǎng)景，人們能安靜祥和的享受他們的生活。2011考研英語(yǔ)作文預(yù)測(cè)五

一個(gè)熱門話題關(guān)于誠(chéng)信的問(wèn)題：

第一段：

第一句:

As is ironically shown above ,in front of a pile of so-called “famous brand” fake leather shoes and under a signboard of “honest dealer” stands a business man, asking an old man “what are looking for ” , with a reply from the old man---honesty/credibility.(with the old man replying that I am looking for honesty/credibility.)

第二句:根據(jù)情況自己加不加都可以

There has been a heated discussion about this kind of pictures in the newspaper.總結(jié)一句：

Simple as the picture is, it does demonstrate certain thought-provoking social phenomenon.第二段：

第一句：

The picture tells us that the credibility remains to be an integral part in our society, especially in the commercial world.第二句

Nowadays, individuals, enterprises and organizations do attach due attention to this issue.第三句

By gaining credibility , people and organization can make money , take profits and even obtain wealth.With credibility and sincerity, not only can they accumulate wealth , bur will also establish their careers, fit into society and finally attain social status.Honesty can promote communication between peopl

e, rid of barriers between people and bridge gaps between people.what’s more, were there no credibility in our society, never could we survive the fierce competition in the age of globalization.第三段：

As a consequence, honesty is not something that we can afford to lose or leave it at large.It is imperative that corresponding regulations and mechanisms with the joint efforts of the media should be introduced and enforced to promote honesty.The awareness of honesty should be enhanced, which will lead us to make every effort to keep our promise and boycott fakes which are shown in the picture.Only in a reasonable, prosperous and healthy atmosphere can we hope to avoid the scene in the cartoon and witness the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost.附加學(xué)術(shù)誠(chéng)信的語(yǔ)料：

(Honesty is paramount not only in the commercial world but in other domains.In the academic wor

ld, for instance, the plagiarizing of others research results can have damaging effect, which makes it easier to dismiss all scientific pronouncements.when we learn that the distinguished professor assuring us of the safety of a particular product holds a consultancy with the company making it, we cannot be blamed for wondering whether his fee might conceivably cloud his professional judgment.2011考研英語(yǔ)作文預(yù)測(cè)三

As is shown above , on the sky fly a group of doves symbolizing the volunteers who are deeply involved in the shanghai world exposition.In the middle of another picture happily walks a young volunteer, holding a heart shape symbol representing the spirit of volunteer.Just as a proverb says, the fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose.There has been a heated discussion about these pictures recently in the newspaper.Simple as the pictures are , they do demonstrate certain thought-provoking social phenomenon.如圖所示，一群象征著志愿者的白鴿正在飛想上海世博會(huì)。在另一幅圖中，一位志愿者正高舉著象征著志愿者精神的標(biāo)志。下面有一行諺語(yǔ)：送人玫瑰，手有余香。

The picture tells us that volunteer spirit is flourishing in china.Nearly 30 million registered volunteers in China have made the outstanding contributions to the relief for the May 12 earthquake ,the success of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games ,and the wonder of Shanghai World Exposition ,which has left a deep impression on the world.After the devastating earthquake hit southwest China's Sichuan Province, more than one million volunteers plunged into relief work within days.They went all out to save the victims, provide psychological counseling and donate money and materials.The spirit of volunteerism featuring altruism and charity is a social concept held by individuals or groups who are willing to help others and improve society without pay.Just as many volunteers said , they cherish the experience and love the volunteer work, which enriches their lives , enlightens them and brings them spiritual wealth.這兩幅圖告訴我們志愿者在中國(guó)大量涌現(xiàn)。近3000萬(wàn)注冊(cè)的志愿者在512地震，奧運(yùn)和當(dāng)下的世博中都作出了重大的貢獻(xiàn)。這給整個(gè)世界都留有深刻的印象。四川地震以后，(可以是玉樹和舟曲)他們搶救傷員，提供心理救援，捐錢捐物。志愿者精神就是無(wú)私的，為他人的，由個(gè)人和團(tuán)體實(shí)施的不計(jì)回報(bào)的旨在促進(jìn)社會(huì)發(fā)展的精神。就如很多志愿者說(shuō)的，他們珍惜和熱愛(ài)志愿者的工作。這豐富了他們的人生，啟發(fā)了他們，給他們帶來(lái)了巨大的精神財(cái)富。

In my view, Chinese volunteers are young, promising, proud and patriotic.Their spirit has not only touched Chinese people, but also generated worldwide attention.I believe that China is going to have more and more volunteers, especially the youth.With this spirit ,we are expected to witness a harmonious scene in which the people can enjoy their life to the uttermost.在我看來(lái)我們的志愿者確實(shí)年輕充滿朝氣，愛(ài)國(guó)自豪，這些精神不僅感動(dòng)了中國(guó)人民，還產(chǎn)生了世界性的關(guān)注。我相信我們將來(lái)還會(huì)有更多的志愿者，特

別是青年志愿者。有了這樣的精神，我們一定能見(jiàn)到一個(gè)和諧的景象：人們能最大的享受他們的生活。2011考研英語(yǔ)作文預(yù)測(cè)二

這篇作文可以用在科技一類的話題。現(xiàn)代生活的改變，如何去面對(duì)科技的作用。

As is shown above , in front of a computer happily sits a teenager ,attempting to work on his homework effortlessly , with the help from the internet finishing the job for him.There has been a heated discussion about this picture in the news paper recently.Simple as the picture is , it does demonstrate certain thought-provoking social phenomenon.如圖所示，在電腦前坐著一個(gè)年輕人呢，正準(zhǔn)備著不花力氣就把作業(yè)給完成，來(lái)自網(wǎng)絡(luò)的幫助很快就完成了所有的學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)。最近報(bào)紙上對(duì)這樣圖畫的討

論有很多。圖雖然簡(jiǎn)單，但是卻確實(shí)表明了一個(gè)發(fā)人深思的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象。

The picture tells us that our life has been greatly influenced and changed by scientific and technological advances, an integral part to every aspect of modern life.What’s more, individuals , organizations and governments attach due attention to this phenomenon.On the one hand, the progress can enhance people’s understanding on a subject, improve people’s learning capacity and skills, shrink the distance between cities and even continents;smooth the communication between residents and rid of the barrier between people.Technical advances offer all people in the world a quality of life what was unimaginable when personal computer first appeared 60 years ago.Our factory hum to the rhythm of robot assembly arms.Our banking is done at automated teller terminals that thank us with mechanical politeness for transaction.Our subway trains are controlled by tireless robot drivers.On the other hand, while computers , as have been mentioned above, help students finish the academic job, but this technology ,at the same tim

e , kills their creative thinking and exploration spirit.The effect of board-dependence brought by it causes the young, nowadays, even can seldom spell correctly, let alone the negative effects triggered by porn movies , violent video clips and their like.這幅圖告訴我們，我們的生活已經(jīng)被科技的進(jìn)步極大地影響了我們的生活，科技是現(xiàn)代生活中重要的一部分。個(gè)人，組織，政府都很關(guān)注這一現(xiàn)象。一方面科技的進(jìn)步提高了人們對(duì)事物的認(rèn)識(shí)，提高了人們的學(xué)習(xí)能力和技能，縮短了城市和城市之間，甚至各大洲之間的距離。使人和人之間的溝通更加的順暢。科技的進(jìn)步給世界人民帶來(lái)的生活在60年前第一臺(tái)個(gè)人電腦出現(xiàn)的時(shí)候是不可想象的。我們的工廠里轟鳴著機(jī)器人組裝臂的節(jié)奏聲;我們的銀行業(yè)務(wù)在自動(dòng)柜員機(jī)完成，他們用禮貌的語(yǔ)言感謝我們辦理業(yè)務(wù);我們的地鐵由不知疲倦的機(jī)器人司機(jī)駕駛。(來(lái)自考研文章真題)但是另一方面，雖然計(jì)算機(jī)在幫著孩子們完成作業(yè)，但是與此同時(shí)也在扼殺著他們的創(chuàng)造思維和探索精神。多于鍵盤的依賴使得很多孩子很少能正確的拼寫和書寫。就更不提由于色情電影和暴力視頻帶來(lái)的負(fù)面影響了。

解釋：這段寫的很長(zhǎng)，是作文論據(jù)讓同學(xué)們熟悉和運(yùn)用的。在考場(chǎng)上不必全寫上去。

加油背吧!

In my view , while we are enjoying the conveniences of the science and technology, we should keep a watching eyes on those negative practice, and aim to reduce the problems it has caused.Then the benefits of these advances will out weigh the serious problems.在我看來(lái)，我們?cè)谙硎芸萍嫉谋憷臅r(shí)候，一定要小心負(fù)面的應(yīng)用。并且想辦法去克服這些問(wèn)題，這樣才能利大于弊。

這篇作文可以用于學(xué)生就業(yè)，學(xué)生能力的提高，成長(zhǎng)和成功的問(wèn)題。

As is shown in the first picture , on a mountain of university tiredly climbs a college student, alm

ost finishing his journey in the university, and awkwardly and surprisingly finding that he has to climb another much higher mountain---hunting a job, bus as is shown below, in front of a post board for recruiting government officials stand an ocean of people, with only one in front of the board for hiring waiter.There has been a heated discussion about these pictures recently in the newspaper.Simple as the pictures are , they do demonstrate certain thought-provoking social phenomenon.如圖第一幅圖所示，在求學(xué)的大山上，一個(gè)學(xué)生疲憊的攀爬著，好不容易快到了山的頂峰，卻不得不吃驚且尷尬的發(fā)現(xiàn)還有一座高很多的山他必須去爬，那就是找到一份工作。但是在另一幅圖中我們看到，在招聘公務(wù)員的廣告牌前面站著一堆人，而在招聘服務(wù)員的牌子前卻只有一個(gè)人。最近報(bào)紙上對(duì)這樣圖畫的討論有很多。這些圖雖然簡(jiǎn)單，但是卻確實(shí)表明了一個(gè)發(fā)人深思的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象。

The pictures tell us the issue of hunting jobs for college students is increasingly and seriously important in current days.What’s more , individuals, orga

nizations and even the whole society have been attaching due attention to this issue.On one hand, when facing the pressure of finding a job, students are struggling painfully.The burden can cause not only depression but also anxiety and such problems as isolation and solitude.One’s thought , creative thinking and exploration spirit, therefore, have been stifled by pursing measurable high scores and various certificates when confronting this harsh reality.On the other hand , that college students fail to change the conventional view on jobs and to adapt their goals to the reality deepens this problem.Were there no prompt and proper solution to this problem, never would we taste the happiness of the harmonious society.圖畫告訴我們大學(xué)生就業(yè)的問(wèn)題在當(dāng)今越來(lái)越重要了。個(gè)人，團(tuán)體，政府甚至是整個(gè)社會(huì)都很關(guān)注這個(gè)問(wèn)題。一方面，當(dāng)面對(duì)找工作的壓力時(shí)，學(xué)生們痛苦的掙扎著。這樣的負(fù)擔(dān)不僅給他們帶來(lái)了抑郁和焦慮的問(wèn)題，還帶來(lái)了像孤單，孤僻這樣的問(wèn)題。這樣一來(lái)，面對(duì)這樣的殘酷現(xiàn)實(shí)，一個(gè)人的思考，創(chuàng)造性的思維，開拓的精神很可能因?yàn)樽非罂杀涣炕姆謹(jǐn)?shù)和證書的而被遏制了。另一方面，大學(xué)生沒(méi)有能改變

傳統(tǒng)的就業(yè)觀念讓自己的目標(biāo)更貼近現(xiàn)實(shí)也進(jìn)一步的加重了這個(gè)問(wèn)題。如果不能及時(shí)和恰當(dāng)?shù)慕鉀Q這個(gè)問(wèn)題，我們將不可能實(shí)現(xiàn)體會(huì)到和諧社會(huì)的幸福感。

第三段，同學(xué)們可以對(duì)照講義自己組織共性的第三段，我寫一個(gè)比較個(gè)性化的第三段給大家。

What should be done to reverse this situation ? For one thing ,instead of just earning their degrees and high exam scores ,college students are expected to cultivate their potentials such as creation, imagination and coordination.Such qualities , though cannot be measured by their college certificates, really matter in their prospective career.For another thing , the educational institutions are supposed to integrate more practical training in their programs so that more competent college graduates can be produced for our society.Above all ,the new awareness that all jobs are equal in dignity and that fame and excellence can be reached at any occupation should be promoted in the whole society.如何改變這樣的現(xiàn)狀呢，一方面學(xué)生不只是要注重文憑和分?jǐn)?shù)，學(xué)生們還需要培養(yǎng)自己的創(chuàng)造性，想

象力和協(xié)調(diào)能力。這樣的素質(zhì)雖然不能用證書來(lái)衡量卻在以后工作中非常重要。另一方面，教育機(jī)構(gòu)應(yīng)該整合課程加入一些實(shí)用課程，讓學(xué)生成為這個(gè)社會(huì)需要的一員。最重要的是，整個(gè)社會(huì)都應(yīng)該認(rèn)識(shí)到：任何工作都是有尊嚴(yán)的，優(yōu)秀和卓越在任何工作中都能成就。

第五篇：新東方2011考研英語(yǔ)作文預(yù)測(cè)

2011年考研英語(yǔ)大作文權(quán)威預(yù)測(cè)一

范文演示：Introduced as a widely known Chinese fable “Blind men and an Elephant”, it tells us never to draw a conclusion from incomplete data.For tremendous years, people outside China could only get narrow and unilateral knowledge about China, leaving a real China far from being unveiled.Nevertheless, the past 2008 Beijing Olympics was the very and perfect time to lift the curse.For most people who are non-Chinese, they tend to have a picture of Chinese who are just Confucius-like, living in a highly polluted place or even having no freedom to speak in public, etc.Reasons behind are usually the following two: one is that westerners are not so eager to learn about China just as our Chinese do about them, the limited information that reached them are mostly outdated or biased one which were more often than not stipulated by a third party with a special interest;the other is that Chinese government were not so open as the one today and did inadequate publicity about its country, thus the image of China is always kind of mysterious to outsiders, then the image depicted above about China, though misleading, is understandable.However, the grand Olympic Games provide an golden opportunity for people around the world to see a complete and “brand-new”China.Therefore, a better world characterized by harmony between China and all the other countries is to come.附件二：2011年考研英語(yǔ)大作文權(quán)威預(yù)測(cè)二

重點(diǎn)推薦: the lack of responsibility

范文演示：When the issue of poisonous milk powder gains an overwhelming focus from the public, what are these malefactors doing? As we can see from the depiction, enterprise, milk station, milch cow and even grass are trying to find someone scapegoating for this credit crisis, in my view point, that’s nothing to do with the credit but the problem of responsibility.Responsibility is a keyword that we should never disregard, defined not only as the courage to face every foreseeable risk, but as the braveness to entail every malpractice when it really takes place as well.The causes of the shortage of responsibility or even conscience may be as follows.Firstly, inner cause ascribing probably to the destructive influence emanating from the decay of morality may result in the over-materialism.Furthermore, outerly , deficient supervisal gives rise to the fearless adventurer who is at the risk of anything ,not to say to deviate from his own liability ,to pursue as many as profits.A case in point is the Melamine-laced Milk Incident which almost destroyed the whole of China’s milk industry.It is imperative that drastic measures should be taken to end this thorny situation, such as enacting related law to reinforce our supervisal mechanism to avoid the behavior of kicking the ball when something bad happen and promoting social entities to regain one of Chinese traditional virtues, which is called “who would enter the hell if I wouldn’t”,that means, undoubtedly, to learn to be responsible for the blunder means sensible unflinchingness.2

附件三：2011年考研英語(yǔ)大作文權(quán)威預(yù)測(cè)三

背景介紹：山寨現(xiàn)象

“山寨”一詞源于廣東話，是“小型、小規(guī)模”甚至有點(diǎn)“地下工廠”的意思，其主要特點(diǎn)為仿造性、快速化、平民化。如今，網(wǎng)絡(luò)上各種各樣的東西都有山寨版，山寨版明星、山寨版“神七”，山寨版“鳥巢”，山寨版的《紅樓夢(mèng)》甚至火過(guò)新版《紅樓夢(mèng)》。

從2003年開始出現(xiàn)山寨手機(jī)到各種山寨產(chǎn)品，“山寨”一詞從經(jīng)濟(jì)行為逐漸演變?yōu)橐环N社會(huì)文化現(xiàn)象。如今“山寨相機(jī)”、“山寨電影”、“山寨明星”甚至“山寨版的春晚”等諸多帶有模仿性質(zhì)的“山寨現(xiàn)象”層出不窮，形成了獨(dú)有的“山寨文化”。

KEYWORDS: “Shanzhai” or “copycat”（山寨）

MODEL ESSAY:

As is indicated in the illustration given above, one well-known historical notability named Li Kui is being astonished by his another-self, who is standing in the opposite side, with a disgraceful note in his hand announcing “giving you the parallel experience as the original edition could pay”.So, paid for what? Definitely, he would be paid for his special reputation as a so-called “Copycat Big Star” or “Shanzhai Superstar” which is rampant in today’s China.The trend of the variety of human culture is unchangeable even without the action delivered by human beings ascribing to the various individualities themselves, so is this round of culture revolution.The novelties emanating from the “Copycat Culture”---“Shanzhai Movie”, “Shanzhai Camera” and even “Shanzhai Celebration of Spring Festival” have brought a lot of entertainment to the public to some extent, but what we should never be blind to is their negative influence if they go to extremes hypothetically.Just as the exemplification demonstrated in the cartoon goes, “Shanzhai Star” is taking advantage of the fame or profitable value generating from the true superstar, sometimes this kind of behavior is a typical infringement to the intellectual property indeed, which we can never fail to recognize from TV programs or newspapers always.Then, the question goes to another orientation, that is, whether or not should we admit the existence of “Copycat Culture” or to what extent could we make efforts to protect the rights of original authority? It goes with no denying that the engine of the development of a country is subject to the nation’s creative power, which needs the much strongest protection from no matter government or civilian to fight with any behavior ravaging this kind of ecological balance.Fortunately, the first good news has been coming in---“a unique 15-digit code, the International Mobile Equipment Identity(IMEI), is being applied to China’s more than 200 types of registered mobile phones.The effort will combat “Shanzhai” mobile phones, or copycat phones, the Ministry of Industry and Information Technology said recently.”

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訂購(gòu)及銷售信

銷售：

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Could you give us some idea about your price?

Full information as to prices, quality, quantity available and other relative particulars would be highly appreciated.It will be greatly appreciated if you will kindly send us your samples.However, we find that we can obtain a price less by 30% than yours with local firm.投訴信：

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1，說(shuō)明來(lái)信目的 2，具體闡述投訴理由

3，期待的解決方式

點(diǎn)評(píng)：這是一封典型的combination（合體式）作文，它既涉及找工作面試用語(yǔ)，又涉及投訴信，代表了考研應(yīng)用文命題的典型思路。

MODEL ESSAY:

Dear Sir or Madam，I, the undersigned, am a job applicant who had participated in the interview held by your company last Wednesday.I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about this jod-striving experience.The reason for my dissatisfaction has nothing to do with the outcome but the tone of your interviewer, Mr Wang.First, when I was about to illuminating my deep thought, he began to blame on my so-called nonsense according to his perspective.Additionally, his cynical eyesight always made me feel that I am a reject , after all, I am a novice who has stepped into this ruthless carrer world for the first time.I appreciate it very much if you could take my letter into consideration, what I really want is just an apology delivered from him,and I would like to have this matter settled by this Friday.Yours, Li Ming 5