第一篇:【英語】總結經典 對照復習拿高分
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【英語】總結經典范文 對照復習拿高分
健康類
(1)1997年真題。Directions:
Study the following set of pictures carefully and write an essay in no less than 120 words.Your essay must be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET 2.Your essay should cover all the information provided and meet the requirements below:
1.Interpret the following pictures.2.Predict the tendency of tobacco consumption and give your reasons.真題分析:
這是典型的圖表+提綱式的命題,題目中提供的材料十分豐富,包括柱狀圖、餅狀圖以及其他相關數據。通過對組圖的分析,我們可以看出煙草在全世界有著十分龐大的消費群體規模,每年因為煙草消費消耗的資金數額大得驚人,同時也有數以百萬計的人由于煙草消費而被奪去了生命。當然,我們從圖中也可以發現一個令人欣喜的趨勢,那就是煙草的總產量在近幾年呈下降的態勢,一定程度上說明了煙草消費引起的健康問題開始得到了人們的重視,并出現了相關的解決措施。
本題的難點在于圖表給的信息量太大,考生如何最恰當地在全文中使用數據將決定文章的質量。如果一味將所有數據都堆在第一段,會造成第一段過于冗長,全文頭重腳輕。在下面的范文中,圖表數字得到了靈活的運用,比較得體。比如文章在一開始先用煙民人數占全世界人數的比例來說明了煙草消費的巨大規模,然后又通過該行業消耗的人民財產和生命進一步說明產業之大、對人類危害之重。而至于第一幅圖中關于煙草產量的數字則被用到了第二段中來說明未來的趨勢,非常得體、恰當。
范文:
Tobacco is one of the commodities that are consumedin an immense amountworldwide.From the pictures, we can learn thatthe global smoking populationamounts to1.1 billion,approximately20% of all the worlds’ residents.200 billion dollars are spentannually in order topurchasetobacco and relevant products, which furtherstimulatethe business’flourishingdevelopment.Meanwhile,the harm caused by tobacco consumption is experiencing a similar upward trend—statistics indicates that3,000,000 people die of smoking and related diseases every year.Nevertheless, given the pessimistic statistics at the present, we can still predict optimistically thattobacco consumption willdeclinebased on several new tendencies that areemerging.In the first place, there is an extensive public awareness of the negative impact of smoking, and as a result, more people resist thetempetationof cigarettes.In the second place, governments are setting more
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regulations to limit tobacco production.The effectiveness of such a policy wastestifiedby the prompt drop of the tobacco production from 14.364 billion in 1994 pounds to 14.2 billion pounds in 1995 as seen in the picture.In short, I firmly believe that, with the efforts of the whole society, we canlaunchmore movements to realize a cleaner world with less smoking.道德類
(1)1998年真題。Directions:
Study the following set of pictures carefully and write an essay in no less than 150 words.Your essay must be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET 2.Your essay should cover all the information provided and meet the requirements below:
1.Write out the message conveyed by the cartoon.2.Give your comments.真題分析:
本題是考研短文作文中采用漫畫來作為試題的第一次嘗試。圖中一只母雞在高唱產品承諾,但是我們看一看其承諾會不禁啞然失笑,因為所謂的“承諾”只不過的它的本分。漫畫形象生動了反映了當今社會上一個普遍而又奇怪的現象,也就是商家故意混淆“吹噓”和“分內事”之間的關系,從而誤導消費者。
本題的難點在于考生需要從大量的文字信息中找到中心思想。這里的一大忌諱就是盲目翻譯打油詩和母雞的承諾,因為這不僅會占用很多字數,而且不倫不類的翻譯還會降低文章的質量。這就進一步說明了在寫作圖畫作文的時候,抓住中心思想、提煉觀點才是關鍵。
范文:
The cartoon presentsa hen singing proudly about her promise of producing good-quality eggs.However, a quick glance ather wordsreveals ironically thattheso-called“promise”—round eggs composed of the three necessary parts of shell, white and yolk—is,as a matter of fact, what a hen is supposed to produce.The henmirrors a phenomenon that permeates our society, that is, businessesutilizethe basic features of their products and services as theselling pointsfor their advertisement campaigns.These “beautiful promises”tend toshape a false impression in the consumers’ mind that the products and services are of extraordinary characteristics.In this sense, the promise of one’s own responsibility is like a method of cheating, and is quite against professional morals, although there is no evidence of dishonesty if the words are examinedliterally.In my point of view, other than promising what one should do, the secret for business success is to have the consumers understand what extra advantages they would be provided with.Such an initiative can push businesses to conduct profound research, dedicate themselves to innovation, and concentrate on quality improvement and perfection, thus leading to healthy industry development and positive social effects.Consequently,businesses themselves are surely to benefit more from a wholesome market environment.凱程考研集訓營,為學生引路,為學員服務!
人口增長類
1999年真題。Directions:
Study the following set of pictures carefully and write an essay in no less than 150 words.Your essay must be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET 2.Your essay should cover all the information provided and meet the requirements below:
1.Effect of the country’s growing human population on its wildlife
2.Possible reason for the effect.3.Your suggestion for wildlife protection.真題分析:
本題為多年來考研作文短文題目中僅有的一道純圖表題目。圖中只給出了一大一小兩幅簡單的線形圖,要求考生分析兩幅圖之間的關系,總結出題目的主題和內涵。
針對本題,我們所要做的第一步是仔細閱讀圖中的文字說明和數據,特別注意數據的變化趨勢。但是,在文章中切忌簡單羅列所有數據,不僅會使文章無端地增加長度,還會使考官無法抓住文章主題。對于數據的處理一般都是進行概括分析,僅舉幾個典型的數據為例來說明問題。
第一幅線形圖中,美國人口在1800年至1980年至短短200年之間增長了近250倍,而從1700年至1900年200年間美國的生物滅絕速度卻增加了70倍。人口增長的速度和物種滅絕的速度正好成正比。由此可以推斷,題目要求考生認清這兩者之間的關系,認識到人口的增長和擴展嚴重威脅到了物種的生存,從而要求考生在文章中分析問題產生的原因,提出解決方案。
范文:
Currently, there is a widespread concern about the previously neglected connection betweengrowing human population and decreasing wild species.As the two graphs obviously portrayed, American population in 1980 was 250 times than that in 1800,a trend accompanied bythe extinction of nearly 70 kinds of wildlife in the past 300 years.A clear correlation is suggested thatmankind hasexerted atremendously negativeinfluenceon natural species.There are many factors responsible for the aforementioned tendency.First and foremost, to satisfy the space demand for theboomingpopulation,the only available solutionfor Americans is totake occupation offorests and grassland.that used to be habitat of wild animals and plants.Furthermore, the process of industrialization and urbanization hasgeneratedsevere pollution that essentially destroys environment andecosystem.In my point of view, thedearthof wildlife today forecasts anunpromisingfuture for humans tomorrow.In order toeliminatespecies extinction, relevant laws and regulations must be established and enforced to maintain a large portion ofunspoiledareas.Effective measures should also be applied to ensure thatthe impact of pollution be removed.環境保護類
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(1)2000年真題。Directions:
Study the following set of pictures carefully and write an essay in no less than 150 words.Your essay must be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET 2.Your essay should cover all the information provided and meet the requirements below:
1.Describe the pictures
2.Deduce the purpose of the artist of the pictures.3.Suggest counter-measures.真題分析:
本題的題目是一組圖,其中上下兩幅圖形成了鮮明的對比。考生需要抓住的細節包括年代的差別(分別是1900年和1995年,相隔約一個世紀)、漁船數量的差別、海洋中魚的數量差別。這時只要簡單地加以分析就可以發現,畫圖者的意圖是警告人們,如果人類繼續無節制地開發自然資源,那么總有一天自然資源將會徹底枯竭,最終威脅到人類自己的生存。考生需要分析畫圖者的本意,并提出相應的解決措施。
這里需要再次提醒的一點是,在第一段描述圖中內容時,要用過去時來說明兩個不同年代的情況。
范文:
The picture unveils a drastic change ofocean ecology during the past century due to theexpandingscaleof world commercial fishing.There were few fishing ships on the sea in 1900 when anenormousnumber of fish swam freely;in contrast, in 1995 a large fleet of ships were endeavoring tosearch forthe only fish in the sea.The tremendous contrast presented by the drawing alarmingly reminds usof thedetrimentaldeteriorationof oceanic ecosystem by the greediness of mankind.The industry of commercial fishing had undergone a booming expansionalong withthe growing public awareness of the merits of seafood, which made fishing unusuallyprofitable.Lacking knowledge regardingthe significance of ecological balance, businessmen sent out ships thatinsatiablychased fishes and thusposed a severe threat toall life in the sea.However, this trend may in turnendangerhumankind.To prevent theexhaustionof ocean resources, governments should unite to work out effective measures against commercial fishing.For instance, there should be limitations on fishing time and location so as to reduce theexploitationof the sea.Moreover, people alsocall forlaws and regulations that are responsible for punishingexcessivefishing.Last but not the least, the public attachment to the importance of balance preservation would play a decisive role in saving ocean species from extinction.情感類
(1)2001年真題。Directions:
Among all the worthy feelings of mankind, love is probably the noblest, but everyone has his/her own understanding of it.凱程考研集訓營,為學生引路,為學員服務!
There has been a discussion recently on the issue in a newspaper.Write an essay to the newspaper to:
1)show your understanding of the symbolic meaning of the picture below,2)give a specific example, and
3)give your suggestion as to the best way to show love.You should write about 200 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.真題分析:
本題的出題者預設了一個情景,即最近報紙上正在進行關于“愛”的大討論,要求考生根據給出的圖為報社寫一篇相關的文章。其實無論題目中是否給出了一個具體的情景,對于考生的寫作基本上沒有什么大的影響。考生可以簡單考慮或者忽略給定情景,而專注于對圖畫的分析和解讀。
這幅圖內容非常簡單,一盞畫著笑臉火焰的油燈,以及上面的一行字“愛心是一盞燈,在越黑暗的地方越明亮”,相當于中國古語中“雪中送炭”的效果。該圖的寓意非常深刻,說明人們在困境中得到的幫助是非常珍貴的,從而鼓勵人人在他人困難的時候獻出愛心,互相幫助。
范文:
The light of an oil lamp isapproximatelyinsignificant in the daytime;however, the darker the environment is, the more brilliant it seems,just as is depicted in the picture.The importance of love,to some extent, can be interpreted according to a similar logic—love is more precious when it is given to those who are in difficulties andadversities.To specify this statement, I would like to takeKong Fansenas an example.Kong, instead ofsettling forhis comfortable official position in the rich andwell-offProvince of Shandong,volunteeredto serve in a most backward area in Tibet where the weather isnotoriouslyabominable.Kong was consistentlydedicated tothe fulfillment of the principle of “serving the people”, and he always appeared at the most critical moments of local residents’ hardship andimpediment.Freezing as it was in Tibet, Kong’s love and care largely warmed people’s hearts.Kong’s story, suggest that the best practice to show love is to help those who are in need.We should always be ready to provide assistance to others, even if it is merely minor things like listening to others’ troubles.A little of our generosity might brighten the whole world of the unfortunate.文化交流類
2002年真題。Directions:
Study the following picture carefully and write an essay entitled “Cultures-National and International”.In the essay you should:
{C}1){C}describe the picture and interpret its meaning, and
{C}2){C}give your comment on the phenomenon.You should write about 200 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.真題分析:
本題體現了考研短文出題的多樣性,采用了一張照片而不是傳統的圖畫。這張照片十分
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具有感染力,但其中的難點是考生如何分析出圖畫的主題。我們可以看到題目中提示我們照片是一個美國女孩,因此我們可以將她引申為西方文化和思想的代表。而她身穿的中式服裝則是中國傳統和文化的代表。這身中式服裝顯然很適合美國女孩,而且女孩臉上甜蜜的笑容也說明她非常喜歡自己的裝束。因此,我們可以認為這種和諧的氛圍代表了西方人對于中國文化的接受、欣賞和認同。這就是本題的大致分析思路。
考生可以結合當今世界的全球化趨勢來說明文化既是民族的,也是世界的。中國應當在國內外大力弘揚其優秀的傳統文化,吸引全世界的眼球,并達到中國和世界各國文化的共同發展。
范文:
It is a very eye-catching photo in whichan American girl is content in showing her traditional Chinese costume.She fits perfectly in the well-decorated hat, earrings, andsplendidrobe that apparentlyoriginate froma Southern Chinese ethnic group.What makes this picture extraordinary is the girl’s moving smile, which clearly indicates a westerner’s recognition and appreciation of Chinese culture.The sense of harmony thatpermeatesthis picture is representative of a new global tendency, that is, people of different nations begin to seek profoundmutualunderstanding and friendly communication.As a result, cultures become international.China, in particular,unveilsits previously mysterious image to the rest of the world by its open policy, and thus provides foreigners with the access of a rich anddiversifiedgalleryof traditional Chinese culture.The effect of such communication can be best exemplified by the recent years’ fashion to celebrate the traditional Chinese new year—the Spring Festival globally.While people belong to nations, cultures know no boundary.Thecontemporaryglobalization is not onlyfeaturedby frequent international trades, economic and political exchanges, but more importantly, by global citizens’ awareness andcomprehensionof the cultures in the world.I firmly believe that theblendof cultures is contributing, and will contribute more, to world peace, development, and prosperity.教育類
(1)2003年真題。Directions:
Study the following set of drawings carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1)describe the set of drawings, interpret its meaning, and
2)point out its implications in our life.You should write about 200 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.真題分析:
這又是一組對比的組圖,非常簡單明了。兩張圖的大背景都是暴風雨交加的惡劣天氣,在左邊的圖中,花朵在溫室中絢爛地開放;而右圖中,同樣的一朵花在離開了溫室之后就黯然凋謝了。組圖題為“溫室花朵經不起風雨”,考生稍加分析就可以發現該圖并不只是談論花朵,而更是指向了我們平時所說的“祖國的花朵”們,也就是孩子們,這就自然而然地和社會問題聯系在了一起。中國在實施了計劃生育之后,獨生子女們成為了家里的“小皇帝”、凱程考研集訓營,為學生引路,為學員服務!
“小公主”,受到全家人的百般呵護,從小就在蜜罐中長大。這些孩子們人生道路幾乎都是一帆風順,沒有經歷過大的困難和挫折,因此一旦離開了父母的保護,就很容易由于經不起各種社會現實的打擊而一蹶不振。通過這番分析,我們就可以得出文章的主要論點,即受到過分溺愛的孩子們經不起挫折和逆境。
范文:
As the title indicates, “greenhouse flowers cannot survive unpleasant weather”,the set of pictures apparently reminds us thatexcessiveprotection only leads to negative results.When a flowerblossomsin the greenhouse despite of theexternalrain and thunder, itwithersimmediately once being moved out of itscozyhaven.Children in China are always compared to “the flowers of our motherland”.It is alarming thata large portion ofthem are in danger of experiencing a similarmisfortuneto the flower in the picture.This is partly attributed tothe birth of a generation of “only children”, who are quite pampered and spoiled by their parents.Leading a life full of success, love and sweetness, these children are quite ignorant of failure, hardship, and the taste of tears thatabound inreal life.Therefore, when they leave home, they might be overly sensitive to frustration and easily suffer depression that prevents them from a happy and promising future.This type of child is not what we hope for the future of our country.On the contrary, we need tonurturea generation that is fully prepared for independent life, so that it is ready to confront any challenge, adapt to changes of environment, and survive the heated competition in today’s world.人生價值類
2004年真題。Directions:
Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1)describe the drawing,2)interpret its meaning, and
3)support your view with examples.You should write about 200 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.真題分析:
本題承襲了考研漫畫內容簡潔、寓意深刻的風格。一個滿頭大汗的運動員正沖破了一次長跑比賽的終點,而在終點的不遠處,赫然標著兩個大字“起點”。通過漫畫的題目“終點又是新起點”,考生很容易就可以抓住本題的中心論點:在人生道路上,我們不能僅僅滿足于一兩次的成功,而只有不斷地追求,我們才能取得進步和發展。這也符合哲學上事物是不斷發展的這一趨勢和真理。針對這類人生奮斗類的題型,一般提綱都會要求考生舉出事例,即使提綱沒有要求,考生最好也能夠寫出一兩個事例,以增強文章的說服力。一般來說,在這種情況下,舉殘疾人、先進人物等的例子會比較切題,有效地加強文章的力度。
范文:
The picture presentsa young runner who just finishes a long run and arrives at the finish line,sweating and smiling.While he stand at the end, a sign stating “beginning” lies not far away from his position, indicating that “an end means
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a new beginning”.It is true thatwhen a runner reaches the end of one race, he needs to realize that his immediate task is how toachievethe next goal, instead of indulging the pastgloryandaccomplishment.Theidenticaltruth applies to every individual, organization, and nation, that setting new goals continuously is the source ofadvancement.Thedeaf and muteAmerican girl Helen Kelleris a typical example of our case, as she had spent her whole life struggling and striving for one goal after another.It is not surprising thatshe finallyturned out to bean excellent writer.Equally, businesses and industries should keep setting new tasks in order to preserve their competitiveness.Microsoft, for instance, never ceases creating new products the companylaunchedVista, Office 2007 and Exchange Server recently though it is already being such a hugeconglomerate.In short, it isnon-stopefforts that lead to progress.家庭關系類
(1)2005年真題。Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing.In your essay, you should first describe the drawing, then interpret its meaning, and give your comment on it.You should write on ANSWER SHEET 2.真題分析:
本題是非常典型的看圖作文。乍一看這是一場非常奇怪的足球賽,竟然有四個球門。仔細一看才發現原來這是一場贍養老人足球賽。我們很容易就可以發現其中人物關系。守著四個球門的是老人的三個兒子和一個女兒,他們的衣著顯示出了他們有足夠的經濟能力來贍養父親,但是他們都不愿意承擔這個責任。很明顯出題者要求考生批判這種不良社會風氣,對那些不愿意贍養老人的兒女們提出譴責,并指出尊敬老人是我們中華民族的傳統美德,應該繼續發揚。
范文:
The cartoon displays a very special and thought-provokingsoccer game: the four goals are kept by an old man’s three sons and one daughter, while the old man himself becomes the ball, being kicked among the four corners by his “beloved” children.It is clearly indicated that none of them is willing to spare atinyportion of time and money to repay their old father who have raised them.Through the artistic presentation, we can be easily remindedof a popular phenomenon in today’s society, that is,disrespecttowards elders andshirkingof the responsibility ofnursingaging parents.The boosting economic development in China sadly witnesses adeteriorationof the public awareness offilialduty, which had taken anindispensableposition in traditional Chinese values for thousands of years.However, as the society grows morebenefit-oriented, the once unbrokenbondbetween parents and children is fundamentally shaken and begins tocollapse.In my point of view, the trend goes quite against the genuine and original purpose ofour pursuit of wealth and welfare, that is, to shape a rich life both materially
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and mentally.Thinking of the love we received from our parents whenswaggeringbabies, we must realize that repaying parents by a happy life with financial and psychological support is not only a duty that should not beshrugged off, but a key element to achieve a harmonious society.社會熱點類
(1)2006年真題。Directions:
Study the following photos carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1)describe the photo briefly,2)interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them, and
3)give your points of view.You should write about 200 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.真題分析:
本題又出現了照片,而且這一次是兩幅照片。但是這兩幅照片沒有對比關系,只是并列關系,用來說明同一個問題。左圖中一個男子將貝克漢姆的名字寫在自己的臉上,右圖另一個男子不惜花300元來做一個“小貝頭”,這兩種現象都是源自他們對于貝克漢姆的瘋狂崇拜。明星崇拜在我們現在這個社會中已經見怪不怪了,正是人們的追星使得娛樂業發展成為了一個巨大的產業。許多青少年和年輕人只是因為某個明星歌唱得好,或者戲演得好,或者長得帥氣或者漂亮,就盲目地對他們進行崇拜,模仿明星的一言一行,而對于其中良莠不齊的影響不加辨別、全盤吸收,從而影響了他們自身的成長和發展。因此,我們很容易就可以判斷出本題的目的在于指出年輕人應該樹立正確的世界觀、人生觀、價值觀,樹立積極向上的人生追求和生活方式。
范文:
The two pictures illustrate vividlythe popularity of the famous British soccer star David Beckham.In the left picturea man painted Beckham’s name on his face to show his support for Beckham,while in the rightanother is willing to spend three hundred yuan to have a hairstyle that is exactly the same as Beckham’s.From the two pictures we can sensea crazy tendency of idol worship in today’s China.Star fans, the majority of whom areteenagersand young adults, are used toblindlyfollowing every aspect ofcelebrities’behavior, accepting both positive and negative influences asuniversaltruths.Aside fromBeckham, anothertellingexample is the nation-wide “Super-Girl competitions” held in past two years in China.They were so successful in drawing fans’ attention and emotions that theups and downsof the “super girls” had almostconstitutedthe whole lives of theirfreneticfollowers.Admittedly,it is natural thatthose cool and fashionable stars seem attractive to the youth.Nevertheless, it is the responsibility of our government and society to guide young people in building awholesomeoutlook towards the world and life.In my opinion, what’s most important is to have themadoreworthyvalues and qualities, such as honesty,diligence, andpersistence.考研成功難又不難,一旦大家開始準備就要全力以赴。自制力差的學生可以找幾個研友,互相激勵,因為堅持下來也確實不容易,也看個人習慣,有的同學可能一個人學習更有效率;
凱程考研集訓營,為學生引路,為學員服務!
在這個過程中更主要的還有大家堅持的信念,堅持完成一件事情本身就是成功。
在三百多天的日子里,老師會一直陪伴著大家,里邊的每條微博、微信、咨詢都是溫暖大家并激勵大家前行的動力。奔跑吧,2016的考生們!
雖然有突破口、也有規律可循,但這并不意味著我們可以一勞永逸、高枕無憂,要知道,想要精通世界上任何一門語言,除非有天生的語言天分,否則偷不得半分懶,只能勤勤懇懇反復練習。一遍不懂讀兩遍,默念不行就大聲念出來,遇到不認識的單詞就查,不懂的句子就靜下心來拆分結構。總之,讀書百遍、其義自現,英語學習之路上沒有笨蛋,只有懶人。綜上就是小編給大家提供的高分技巧,技巧就是牢固的知識點和強悍的答題思路,預祝所有考生2016考研有個好成績。
小提示:目前本科生就業市場競爭激烈,就業主體是研究生,在如今考研競爭日漸激烈的情況下,我們想要不在考研大軍中變成分母,我們需要:早開始+好計劃+正確的復習思路+好的輔導班(如果經濟條件允許的情況下)。2017考研開始準備復習啦,早起的鳥兒有蟲吃,一分耕耘一分收獲。加油!
第二篇:考研英語作文怎么拿高分
考研英語作文怎么拿高分
眾所周知,考研試卷滿分100分,而在在考研英語的五大項目之中,閱讀的分值最高,占到到滿分的40分,其次是寫作,占到30分。從比例上而言,閱讀和寫作這兩大塊就占據了整個考研英語的70%,其在備考過程中的重要性不言而喻。下面,【考研1號】就以《寫作160篇》為例,給大家講講在備考過程中如何準備寫作方面的備考,提高自己的寫作水平?
首先,對于考研英語的寫作備考,大家必須學習和掌握大量的不同話題的范文、句式、詞匯及詞組搭配,擴充自己知識面,只有在見多識廣時才能有東西寫,才能寫出你想要的東西。《寫作160篇》作為第一本全面涵蓋當年可考話題的寫作書,其精華正體現在一個“全”字上——每年都會精心篩選、分類當年全部可考話題,使得每年的考研作文話題完全不能跳出其話題圈子以外。所以,其連續7年命中考研英語作文北非偶然,而是一種必然。
很多考生在備考過程中,并沒有注意到考研作文選材的一個特點:考研英語作文的選材均為當今社會的熱門話題,并且十分貼近生活,從電視廣告到網絡,從父母與子女的關系到擁有健康的重要性,從環境保護到“樂觀主義”,無不反映了當前公眾最為關注的話題。所以,如何系統的了解當年的熱點話題,并在平時的備考中加以練習,就顯得十分重要。而《寫作160篇》涵蓋話題之廣泛,選擇范文之新穎,正好滿足了廣大考生擴充自己知識面,全面了解考研可考話題的需求。寫作的分數高低取決于兩個方面:
一、語言功底;
二、思想深度、文章結構。而第二點的提高則主要主要取決于的見多識廣。因為我們誰也不知道,命題人會出哪方面的作文。我們只有全面撒網,重點培養,瀏覽《寫作160篇》中的各種不同類型話題,多看多練,提高我們的寫作能力,縮小寫作的命題范圍。平時對各種寫作素材加以積累,準備和練習,在考試中遇到同類話題時,大家才不會驚慌,覺得話題陌生,久久沒有思路,無法下筆。
其次,我們來討論一下話題與模板到底哪個更為實用。《寫作160篇》王林老師認為,對于模板的問題,應該分情況來看。如果準備考試的時間比較短,特別是對于在職考研的研友而言,準備一些80-100字的萬用模版可以減輕很多的工作量,畢竟工作和考研兩者都是個巨大的消耗。而對于應屆或者時間比較充裕的研友來說,4-5個月的時間,完全可以突破作文,并沒有必要刻意去準備模版。通過考試前的寫作練習,總結出自己適用的模版,在考試時候發揮出來,既順手又可以出彩,效果比準備現成的模版要好處許多。因為萬能模范的適用范圍畢竟有限,有些情況下硬套這些模版寫出來的作文讀起來會很不自然。總結起來,《寫作160篇》的目標就是要讓考生,在廣泛閱讀熟悉,甚至背誦記憶書中各類話題作文范文的基礎上,總結出屬于自己的模板,因為自己在平時的練習與積累中總結出來的模板,肯定比照搬別人的模板用起來順手嘛。并且,也避免了往年考研英語作文中出現的幾大問題。
問題
一、模板中的句型套用不正確,不完整。
比如,我們在書信結尾的時候會說I am looking forward to hearing from you.而有的學生卻把這句話寫成了I am looked forward to hear from you.這種現象非常普遍,可見,某些使用萬能模板的學生,其寫作態度并不是很端正,很認真。而《寫作160篇》則強調的是在平時的備考中,通過對題材的了解,用自己的方式寫出屬于自己的句子,注意語法點,如此一來,考生在平時的寫作中,不僅加強了對話題的了解,還會在寫作中加強了自己的語法水平,絕對不會犯這種低級的語法錯誤。
問題
二、模板中的句型和實際寫作內容不匹配。
比如:有的圖畫作文第二段要求根據圖畫所表達的含義進行深層次的論證,而學生套用的句型卻是第二段寫對比的句型,顯然是沒有正確理解模板句型使用的語言背景。再比如:小作文的摘要,是要根據漢語文章歸納出中心內容進行英語寫作,這個一般都是客觀的描述,而學生卻用了一個寫圖畫作文的模板,通篇都是“我”認為,這如何又能得高分呢?這也正是《寫作160篇》屢次強調,大家要在平時的備考中拓展自己的話題寫作素材量,爭取了解每類話題的寫作思路和行文方式,總結出屬于自己的模板的原因。
問題
三、模板套用千篇一律,沒有新意。
再好的模板,如果所有的學生都在用也,它也就變成了一張白紙,一杯白開水,讀來沒有任何亮點,寡然無味。而這個錯誤也正是很多急功近利的學生容易犯的。所以只背誦模板是不行的。我們需要的是正是對各類話題的綜合把握,在范文的基礎上寫出屬于自己的東西。《寫作160篇》中的高分佳句所提倡的“舉一反三”觀點,正是緣于這一原因。寫作時要“理論聯系了實際”,首先要練習考研英語寫作真題。只有練了真題才能對于出題思路和題目構成有清晰完整的了解。在練習的時候要注意應該在規定時間內完成。不要一味的模仿范文寫作,自己要在書的經典里提取精華,學會自己創作。
再次、怎樣使用很多寫作書中的范文,是很多考生所面臨的一個問題?很多考生會選擇歷年真題的范文和一些與寫真題作文相近的文章狂背,但最終發現,在寫作時并沒有實際用到。對此,《寫作160篇》提倡,應該多讀,多記,多背。多讀:多思考《寫作160篇》中范文對于話題的剖析方法和行文思路,寫作的常用詞匯,記住其中一些比較好的用法。如果復習時只是一味埋頭苦練的話,那只能提高寫作速度而在寫作水平上不一定會有長足的進步。只有看了好的文章,才會知道應該往哪方面努力以及自己的文章到底有什么不足。最重要的是要看歷年考生高分樣文。看的時候不要只看懂就行,而要著眼于三個方面:高分范文是如何提出觀點并進行論證的,運用了哪些論證手法;范文是怎么安排段落的,段落之間以及句子之間是怎么連接在一起的,運用了哪些銜接手段;范文里有什么精彩的詞、詞組和句型是值得我們模仿的。能夠舉一反三,仔細思考并且適當借鑒的話,那么看一篇就會有一篇的受益。
多背,不能只是懵懂的瞎背,要有注重。應該多背《寫作160篇》中總結的文章框架、精彩句構、點睛語言。對于范文的背誦也不能全面撒網,沒有計劃的亂背一氣,《寫作英語160篇》中篇和下篇范文部分的內容對于學習的要求也是不盡相同的。“經典必背”強調的一是注意此類話題的可靠性很大,其次就是要注意對于該部分話題的模板框架,行文思路和內容素材的背誦記憶,學會活用框模板,注重素材的積累,同時要適當加入自己的內容。“重點預測”部分內容,不要一字不差的照抄無誤,而是要根據自己所要表達的內容進行更改。寫作不一定要字字句句都是難詞,長句,而是要學會運用一些常見詞的常見短語去表達,這樣才能真正顯示寫作的水平。所以這部分的要求是要考生著重積累文中的常用短語或者詞組,高分佳句,以備寫作之用。“熟悉瀏覽”則要求考生擴充自己的知識面,對這部分話題加以熟悉了解,做到考試時知道怎么寫,加入那些素材。
最后、我不得不提的是《寫作160篇》除了話題較全之外的其他兩大閃光點:書中的“考生習作點評”和增值服務的“在線作文修改點評”。眾所周知,作文光靠背是不行的,畢竟作文是要自己寫出來的。那么平時應該怎樣寫,寫完之后又怎樣確實地了解自己現階段的寫作水平呢?
《寫作160篇》提醒大家模板只是給了考生一個寫作的思路和框架,但是要想獲得高分,就要充分了解各類話題,擴充自己的知識面和寫作素材。在框架之上填加自己的內容,把模板變成自己的東西,只有文章中有自己的內容,才會吸引判卷老師的眼球!在每年的12月前應該每周寫一篇作文并且要把每一篇寫好。臨近考試,可以按照規定時間寫作,此時寫作的題目要廣泛,對于《寫作160篇》中的各種話題都要寫一些,以增強適應性。可是寫完之后,考生該如何進行自測呢?《寫作160篇》為大家提供了兩個途徑:
一、《寫作160篇》書中包含的“考生習作點評”部分。
考研英語作文要求大家能“知己知彼”,只有深刻的了解了別人的寫作水平之后,自己才會有壓力,才能爭取做到改正自己現存的其他人也常犯的錯誤,進而超越別人,在考研寫作中超出大多數考生的寫作水平,獲取高分。《寫作160篇》中“考生習作點評”的原文收集了2012版《寫作160篇》讀者的寫作練習,從構思框架到遣詞造句等多個角度對其進行系統性的點評,明確指出讀者練習中的各類錯誤、出錯原因以及修改意見,有助于2013考生有針對性地進行比較和提高。本部分包含寫作原文、寫作點評(各段點評、總體點評、修改意見、參考分數)和修改展示三方面。習作原文的作者是2012備考學生,其基礎和大家都是處于一個水平線上,這樣大家就不僅了解同一水平線上考生的寫作水平,同時也能和自己的寫作水平作比較,便于自己的作文水平自測,以獲得不斷的提高。
二、《寫作160篇》增值服務為大家提供的“在線作文修改點評”。
雖然有部分同學意識到了作文訓練的重要作用,在平時也進行了一些訓練,但是面對自已“難產出來”的文章,怎么看怎么滿意,卻不知里面充滿了很多基本的語法錯誤,以及和考研英語寫作要求格格不入的內容。而《寫作160篇》提供的“在線作文修改點評”欄目中,參與作文批改的老師這些年接觸了大量的考研學生,深刻地了解了考研作文的要求、閱卷老師評分的批準、考生易犯的錯誤,據此會提出更為專業、有效的提升方案,能幫考生在短時間內快速提高成績。《寫作160篇》提醒大家:練習寫作要有決心、信心和恒心。要日積月累、細水長流、堅持不斷。要以滴水穿石的精神去背記、改寫和套用。同時要講究方法。
第三篇:高考作文如何拿高分
高考作文如何拿高分 評卷老師心得
高考評卷工作量非常大,要在幾天的時間完成,閱卷的速度可想而知,每份作文必須在60秒內完成。不可能細細地看,只能從審題立意、標題(含小標題)、結構安排(含開頭、結尾,層次扣題點題)、素材(或事例)的運用、字數、書寫等方面評分。
因此,考場作文應注意如下幾個方面:
一、立意要明確,觀點要鮮明。
1、“贊成什么、反對什么”必須明確。
“三明”:中心明確、結構明快、語言明朗
2、思想健康。
(1)不反黨、反社會主義,不反科學、反道德、反《中學生守則》;(2)不犯政治錯誤、情感性錯誤、偏激性錯誤(如社會沒好人、生活沒意思、同情本拉登、高考摧殘人、老師不負責、將愛情進行到底等等);(3)要積極向上,不能意志消沉。
二、結構合理,題意要點明。
1、開頭簡明,開門見山(盡量在50字內表明題意或觀點)
2、點題、扣題,在每層次開頭和結尾點題(例如《走向成熟》)
3、當立意把握不準時,要有緊扣主題的響亮而又有哲理的語句(救命句)
4、段落安排最好是5—7段
三、標題要生動。
1、題好一半文(人靠衣裝,文靠題裝)
2、好標題的原則:
(1)顯示題意(材料的主旨、作者的感情);
(2)生動新穎(運用修辭、巧妙化用)。例如①話題“答案是豐富多彩的”——標題《橫看成 嶺側成峰》②話題“誠信”——標題《美麗的背囊》、《生命誠可貴,誠信價更高》
3、修改標題
《舊事重提》改為:《朝花夕拾》
《說高考》或《愛與恨》改為:《道是無晴卻有晴》(晴——情)《行走在消逝的感傷中》改為:《傷逝》
《溺愛》改為:《有一種愛叫傷害》
《敢于模仿》改為:《可愛的東施》
四、文體要明確,不能“四不像”。
五、材料要典型、豐富,有正反例子作比較。
六、行文流暢、明快、有文采,適當引用名言名句。
七、結尾照應開頭,點題,有升華(深刻、有哲理、有韻味,有更進一層的意思)。
八、字數要超800(最好在850字左右),書寫要端莊。1
第四篇:面試如何拿高分
如果你服從了我對簡歷和求職信的發起并獲得了精良的效果,那么,你就不用客氣了。可如果你不剖析我的發起,寫了長達一零頁的求職信和二零頁的簡歷仍然得到了口試的機會,那么,我要慶賀你,而且還要向你致歉。
無論是什么環境,橫豎你靠自己的技巧、對峙不懈和運氣得到了口試機會。所以,你馬上就要單獨面對口試官們的輪番“打擊”,而且你無法寄托“退格鍵”來修改任何口誤。那么,你應該怎么辦呢?
起首,你要明確,你正在申請的是一份要有人來做的工作,而且他們試圖弄清你是否便是那份工作的恰當人選。為此,口試官會依賴他們在口試過程中的感知和判斷。
比如說,我想知道一位員工盼望得到提拔、勇于進取。我的推測邏輯是,一位在口試中談及升職的員工,在工作中會越發勤勉。但是,另一位口試官或曾經遭遇過某個一心想升職卻完不可本職工作的員工。如果你對那位經理人的這種擔心不敏感,喋喋不斷地大談你是怎么通過挑燈夜讀獲得MBA學位的,那么,你就不會得到那份工作。
如果你懷有這樣的想法——自己應該傾聽并對面前的口試官做出反響,而不會自覺服從什么規矩,那么,我就把我的口試規矩呈獻給你吧:
一.妥善著裝。如果你要去特大型金融團體公司口試,穿商務套裝十分恰當。如果你是位老師,要系上領帶,哪怕是在很隨意的加利福尼亞州。
二.閉上嘴巴。我和你講過這種情況嗎——來口試的人給我講了四五分鐘他的生活故事,只給我留下一零分鐘的工夫用來表明工作?我想,你很清楚故事的末了結局。
三.傾聽。在銷售中,最重要的技巧便是傾聽——而口試的過程,也便是你在推銷自己的過程。在口試官談到他的iPho職場ne手機當前,如果你說:“我以為天下上最好的計算機便是裝有微軟操縱系統的小我私家電腦,利用蘋果機的人都是重形式輕本質的人”,那么,你就只能帶著你的觀點離開了,你自然也掙不到這份工作的薪水了。
四.提出題目。面對“你以為我們應該摧毀這里全部的小我私家電腦買蘋果機嗎?”這樣的題目,你可以以“這取決于許多因素。你的需求是什么呢?”作答,以制止呈現下面的題目。
五.表現出興趣。這也可以稱為“示好”。如果一個來口試的人不向口試官提出任何干于他的題目,那么,她不但即是在說“我對自己的成就深感自豪,無須投你所好”,她還向口試官表明她不擅長表現出對別人的興趣。這就意味著她在公司與人相處會有貧苦。既然這樣,工作機會就不會給她。
六.自己提前做調研。有些人覺得被人用谷歌搜索很不愜意。不過,如果你警惕從事,你就能向負責招聘的經理表明,你在相識他們方面是花了工夫的。不妨就服務處面臨的技能挑戰題目,直接引用他們在《首席信息官》(CIO)雜志上的發言。不過千萬不要談及你通過“谷歌地球”(Google Earth)看到他們的游泳池有多大。
七.答復你希望他們問到的題目。這是羅伯特?麥克納馬拉(Robert McNamara)(一九一六年-二零零九年,美國販子、政治家,美國共和黨人,曾任美國國防部長和天下銀行行長——譯者注)在談到與媒體打交道時所說的話,不過,對被口試者而言,它同樣是個十分好的發起。你有幾多次帶著“我始終沒有機會告訴他們我在負鼠研討上獲得諾貝爾獎的事變”的遺憾離開口試場所的呢?不要等他們提出題目。面對“你最近的那份工作是干什么的?”這個題目,你可以答復“現實上,你們可能會覺得,我最近兩份工作之前那個研討負鼠的工作與這個工作的干系最親昵”。
第五篇:2016高考英語作文-六步拿高分
一)原因
1.A number of factors are accountable for this situation.A number of factors might contribute to(lead to)(account for)the phenomenon(problem)。
2.The answer to this problem involves many factors.3.The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that……
4.The factors that contribute to this situation include……
5.The change in ……largely results from the fact that……
6.We may blame ……,but the real causes are……
7.Part of the explanations for it is that ……
8.One of the most common factors(causes)is that ……
9.Another contributing factor(cause)is ……
10.Perhaps the primary factor is that …
11.But the fundamental cause is that ……
二)比較
1.The advantage far outweigh the disadvantages.2.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.3.A may be preferable to B,but A suffers from the disadvantages that……
4.It is reasonable to maintain that ……but it would be foolish to claim that……
5.For all the disadvantages,it has its compensating advantages.6.Like anything else,it has its faults.7.A and B has several points in common.8.A bears some resemblances to B.9.However,the same is not applicable to B.10.A and B differ in several ways.11.Evidently,it has both negative and positive effects.12.People used to think ……,but things are different now.13.The same is true of B.14.Wondering as A is,it has its drawbacks.15.It is true that A ……,but the chief faults(obvious defects)are ……
三)批駁
1)It is true that ……,but one vital point is being left out.2)There is a grain of truth in these statements,but they ignore a more important fact.3)Some people say ……,but it does not hold water.4)Many of us have been under the illusion that……
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5)A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is.6)It makes no sense to argue for ……
7)Too much stress placed on …… may lead to ……
8)Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that ……
9)Contrary to what is widely accepted,I maintain that ……
四)后果
1.It may give rise to a host of problems.2.The immediate result it produces is ……
3.It will exercise a profound influence upon……
4.Its consequence can be so great that……
五)舉例
1)A good case in point is ……
2)As an illustration,we may take ……
3)Such examples might be given easily.4)……is often cited as an example.六)證明
1)No one can deny the fact that ……
2)The idea is hardly supported by facts.3)Unfortunately,none of the available data shows ……
4)Recent studies indicate that ……
5)There is sufficient evidence to show that ……
6)According to statistics proved by ……,it can be seen that ……
七)開篇
1)Many nations have been faced with the problem of ……
2)Recently the problem has been brought into focus.3)Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.4)Recently the issue has aroused great concern among ……
5)Nowadays there is a growing concern over ……
6)Never in our history has the idea that …… been so popular.7)Faced with ……,quite a few people argue that ……
8)According to a recent survey,……
9)With the rapid development of ……,……
八)結尾
1)From what has been discussed above,we can draw the conclusion that ……
2)It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop ……
3)It is necessary that steps should be taken to ……
4)In conclusion,it is imperative that ……
5)There is no easy method,but ……might be of some help.6)To solve the above-mentioned problem,we must ……
7)In summary,if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue,more problems will crop up.8)With the efforts of all parts concerned,the problem will be solved thoroughly.9)We might do more than identify the cause ;it is important to take actions to ……
10)Taking all these into account,we ……
11)Whether it is good or not /positive or negative,one thing is certain/clear……