第一篇：入學申請

The Best College Application Essay We've Ever Read If we describe a college application essay as the best we have ever read, that is saying a lot, because we must have read through hundreds of them.Some of the models we have produced through our own efforts are also quite good, if we do say so ourselves.But our hat is definitely off to the author of the essay reproduced here, attributed to one Hugh Gallagher, who reportedly submitted it in 1990, at the age of 18, to New York University, where he was admitted.The essay won first prize in the humor category of the 1990 Scholastic Writing Awards, appeared in Literary Cavalcade and Harper’s.We would like to thank Susie A.Chang of San Francisco for passing this essay our way, thereby making it possible to share it with you here.3A.In order for the admissions staff of our college to get to know you, we ask that you answer the following question: Are there any significant experiences you have had, or accomplishments you have realized, that have helped to define you as a person? “I am a dynamic figure, often seen scaling walls and crushing ice.I have been known to remodel train stations on my lunch breaks, making them more efficient in the area of heat retention.I translate ethnic slurs for Cuban refugees, I write award-winning operas, I manage time efficiently.Occasionally, I tread water for three days in a row.I woo women with my sensuous and godlike trombone playing, I can pilot bicycles up severe inclines with unflagging speed and I cook 30-Minute Brownies in 20 minutes.I am an expert in stucco, a veteran in love and an outlaw in Peru.Using only a hoe and a large glass of water, I once single-handedly defended a small village in the Amazon Basin from a horde of ferocious army ants.I play bluegrass cellos, I was scouted by the Mets, I am the subject of numerous documentaries.When I'm bored, I build large suspension bridges in my yard.I enjoy urban hang gliding.On Wednesdays, after school, I repair electrical appliances free of charge.I am an abstract artist, a concrete analyst and a ruthless bookie.Critics worldwide swoon over my original line of corduroy evening wear.I don’t perspire.I am a private citizen, yet I receive fan mail.I have been Caller Number Nine and have won the weekend passes.Last summer I toured New Jersey with a traveling centrifugal force demonstration.I bat.400.My deft floral arrangements have earned me fame in international botany circles.Children trust me.I can hurl tennis rackets at small moving objects with deadly accuracy.I once read Paradise Lost, Moby Dick and David Copperfield in one day and still had time to refurbish an entire dining room that evening.I know the exact location of every food item in the supermarket.I have performed several covert operations with the CIA.I sleep once a week;when I do sleep, I sleep in a chair.While on vacation in Canada, I successfully negotiated with a group of terrorists who had seized a small bakery.The laws of physics do not apply to me.I balance, I weave, I dodge, I frolic and my bills are all paid.On weekends, to let off steam, I participate in full-contact origami.Years ago, I discovered the meaning of life but forgot to write it down.I have made extraordinary four-course meals using only a Mouli and a toaster oven.I breed prize-winning clams.I have won bullfights in San Juan, cliff-diving competitions in Sri Lanka and spelling bees at the Kremlin.I have played Hamlet, I have performed open-heart surgery and I have spoken with Elvis.But I have not yet gone to college.”*

Need we say more? Chancellor, sign this young man up for a B.S.!*To minimize clutter, we have disregarded the convention of placing a new open quotation mark at the beginning of each new paragraph.案例1：

Department of Electrical Engineering

Henan Polytechnical University Zhengzhou City, Henan Province

People's Republic of China

April 2, 1997 Admissions Officer Graduate School of Engineering Massachusetts Institute of Technology Cambridge, Massachusetts 02139 United States of America Dear Sir, I left ×× University as a graduate in electrical engineering in Aug.1991.Now I am an assistant and experimenter, working in the Department of Electrical Engineering of the Henan Polytechnical University.To pursue further studies I wish to enter the Graduate School of Engineering of the Massachusetts Institute of Technology to read for the degree of Master of Science.Your institute has a long history and a fine tradition of scholarship.It is well staffed and equipped, enjoying world-wide fame.To find a place in such an ideal school of higher learning is indeed a matter of the greatest honour.It is my long-cherished hope that I will be fortunate enough to be admitted into it.I should be grateful to know the conditions under which the applicants are accepted.Would you please send me an application form and some related information? I am looking forward to your early reply.Respectfully yours, Zhao Zhigang 案例2：

Dear Mr.Green: Thank you very much for your courtesy in sending me an application form and some related materials.I am very happy to tell you that at the request of the Henan Polytechnical University where I am working as an assistant the Government of the People's Republic of China is willing to support my graduate studies in the U.S.It will undertake to pay all my expenses, traveling expenses included.Enclosed is the financial statement to that effect.My university diploma, my transcript of records of all the subjects I completed at the university and my resume together with a 25-dollar money order for the application fee will be mailed to you directly by my sponsor, the Henan Polytechnical University.Three of my professors under whose guidance I either studied or worked will send you separate letters of recommendation.Enclosed please find all the forms completed in accordance with your directions.I sincerely hope a letter of admission will be sent to me so that I will be able to get to Cambridge in time for any aptitude tests that might be expected.Respectfully yours, Zhao Zhigang

第二篇：入學申請

入學申請書

尊敬的各位領導(老師)：

您好！

我是周啟航同學，性別女，出生于2005年9月17日，云南彝良人，目前是官渡區福興教育集團福興學校六年級（2）班學生。

在告急的小升初測驗即將到來之際，我既將成為一名成熟的初中生，又為可否進入一個優秀的初中暗自心焦。我最大的愿望就是進入西山區實驗中學，因為我聽聞貴校教風嚴謹、學風優良，教學成果突出，多年來，貴校名聲斐然，遠近聞名，莘莘學子，無不傾慕。再加上我的家也在此片區，我的父母也在本片區工作，所以我如今正在盡本身最大的努力學習，但愿考出最優秀的成績回報老師、回報家長，也為爭取進入貴校學習一直不斷努力。

尊敬的校領導、老師們，希望你們給我一個進入貴校學習的機會，我必然會在貴校的精心培育下，認真把握好初中階段，刻苦用功，遵守校規校紀，尊敬師長，團結同學，好好學習，不辜負學校、老師、家長對我的一片期望，用學校、老師、家長教給我的知識做一個對社會有用的人。非常謝謝！

此致

敬禮！

申請人： 家長簽名：

接洽號碼：

第三篇：入學申請

入學申請

如鳥兒渴望藍天一般，我憧憬著實現夢想的那一刻。十八歲，無限活潑富有激情的年紀。十二年寒窗后，于今年夏天，我邁入了渴望已久的象牙塔，學習播音與主持藝術專業，然而，我向往的藍天是日本南山大學。

日本本就是一個令人神而往之的國家，關于教育，更是毋庸置疑。如眾人所知日本擁有豐富且高水平的大學院教育資源，而且日本的大學院教育是以導師制為最大特色。此外，日本教育包含著對學生自主管理能力的培養，并且在經濟地位僅次于美國的日本學習，可以接觸到世界領先的高水平東西。南山大學是名古屋一流的私立大學，對學生的英語水平要求高，有助于激發我學習英語的熱情。其辦學信念為“基于基督教的世界觀進行學校教育”，這一點不同于世界其他名流大學，本著這一宗旨，我可以領悟到之前從未接觸到的思想。以上就是我希望到日本南山大學學習的原因。

雖處在看似幼稚的年齡階段，但我有一種喜歡崇尚政治的情懷，因此綜合政策專業是我夢寐以求的專業。在經濟全球化的今天，合作與競爭是世界各國的交流表現形式。在這個大環境之下離不開的是政策磋商，我希望通過學習綜合政策專業，在中日合作方面做出貢獻。畢業后，我打算回國發展。中日文化一脈相承，愛國情懷是兩國間共同崇尚的情懷，因此，回國發展并對國家作出貢獻，是我愛國情懷的體現，相信，這也是南山大學的愛國理念的體現。回到中國后，我會利用所學知識，為中日友好做出貢獻，希望通過我的努力，帶動兩國

間政治經濟的全面合作與發展。

現在我正在學習播音與主持藝術專業，傳媒方面的專業。我此刻的想法是，將播音與主持藝術專業和我希望到南山大學學習的綜合政策專業有效結合起來，利用傳媒的力量，有效地傳播兩國間的綜合政策，使中日兩國和諧共進。

作為炎黃子孫，感到很驕傲。中國有著五千年的璀璨文明，如今的中國也是走在迅速發展的道路上。然而，我卻不得不承認，在快速發展的同時，我們出現了諸多問題。比如氣候變化、環境污染、資源浪費、及嚴竣的經濟轉型考驗，這些問題最終將會成為中國發展道路上的絆腳石。日本，是世界上發展水平較高的發達國家，有很多先進的東西值得我們去學習，通過在日本的學習，我希望把日本科學先進的知識傳播到中國，盡快完成經濟轉型，使中國邁入科學的發展道路。

競爭激烈的環境，使我具備了不輕易放棄的品格。無論多么困苦，我都會堅持我的理想。我深信南山大學是我提高晉升的圣地，是我夢想起航的 港灣。真誠的希望貴方能給我學習提高的機會，讓我成為貴校的一份子。衷心祝福貴校！

第四篇：小學入學申請

小學入學申請

尊敬的紅旗小學校長、老師：

您好！

我們是連德多的家長，首先請允許我們就連德多小朋友的基本情況介紹如下：

連德多，女，出生于2011年1月11日，身份證號碼：***22X，籍貫云南省普洱市，戶口所在地：昆明市公安局吳井派出所，現家庭住址為：昆明市官渡區吳井街道辦事處五里多居委會民航路3號百大城市理想花園7幢2單元1203室。

自三歲八個月以來，她一直就讀于昆明市北京路幼兒園，于去年升入該幼兒園大班學習。在幼兒園里近三年的生活和學習中，通過幼兒園和家長之間良好的教育互動，連德多的生活獨立性逐步得到發展，基本樹立了正確的是非觀、道德感和美感。不僅如此，在學習中她也表現出強烈的求知欲，對各種新鮮事物都能產生深厚的興趣，學習注意力集中，也因此培養了廣泛的愛好，比如乒乓球、跳舞、英語等。更為重要的是，在集體生活中，她養成了溫和的性格和良好的自制力，能夠和其他小朋友友好相處，樂意把自己的歡樂與別人分享。

作為家長，我們致力于長期在昆明市工作和發展。考慮連德多已成長為適齡兒童，我們有責任為她提供接受義務教育的權利。同時，貴校以教學質量享譽昆明市，貴校一直以“辦規范特色學校，出德高加業精名師，育合格加特長學生”為辦學目標，形成了校風嚴、教風實、學風正的辦學特色，并成為昆明市文化廣播體育局青少年乒乓球訓練點，國家級青少年體育俱樂部。能夠讓連德多到貴校學習也一直是我們夢寐以求的愿望，所以我們為連德多申請入貴校就讀，請您審核。

此致

敬禮！

申請人：父親（連俊才）***532

聯系電話：***

母親（蘇

玫）***02X

聯系電話：***

2017年1月18日

第五篇：學校入學申請

證

明

張琬蘋，女，生于1997年 9月，系勉縣武侯中學（原勉縣一中）2015屆高中畢業生。該生在校期間熱愛共產黨，熱愛集體，學習刻苦，團結他人，積極要求進步，熱心校內外公益活動，遵紀守法，無違紀違法現象，政治清白，未參加任何邪教組織及法輪功組織。

特此證明。

2017年5月12日