第一篇：優智雅思高分作文分班教育

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優智雅思核心高分作文（1）：分班教育

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Students ought to be educated separately according to their different levels of intelligence.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Generalizing from several findings, a sizable number of educators find separate education a more pragmatic methodology for intelligent and average students to grasp the curricular that they are genuinely talented in.Nonetheless, the teaching method may bring about a couple of undesirable repercussions, unless the following factors are taken into account.Young geniuses, when trained in special programs, are inclined to the sense of detachment from social mainstream, with all their attention being engrossed in the study of obscure theories or the specific fields they are believed to be gifted in.It is because of this, the development of their adaptability to changing society, as one of the most precious assets for successful adulthood, is retarded.More importantly, psychotherapists, although not all, warn the extraordinary students isolated from the ordinary against introverted mood for fierce competition or the lack of communication.In comparison, the ones marginalized from elite classes, feeling hostile to teaching staff and prejudiced education, may be resigned to their backwardness due to the undisguised discrimination.In addition, the average and their families complain that it is arbitrary for the departments in charge to overstate the value of intelligence but neglect that of other capabilities, for example emotional quotient.In the final analysis, separate education not only lays a barrier between top students and social life but also integrates the average with a biased world, regardless of their actual needs and inherent distinctions.Therefore, the teaching system is under no circumstances acceptable on account of its possible adverse effects on the young.致電優智：0411-84517080優智官網：優智微博：http://weibo.com/uject

第二篇：雅思高分作文

The increase of food production owns much to fertilizers and better machinery, but some people say it has a negative impact on human health and community.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Write at least 250 words.It it evidentially true that advanced machinery and fertilizers, to a large degree, optimize food production.However, by giving it all negative comments, I believe it unreasonable and irrational since it merely represents only one single step rather than the entire processing procedure.It cannot be repudiated that side-effects fertilizers and machinerybring about are somehow obvious.For instance, the chemical substances detrimental to health seep into crops and vegetables along withfertilizers.Sometimes, overdose of any chemical may directly result in certain degrading of body organs.More seriously, the universal application of machinery may replace human labor force as a more efficient substitute, which may lead to the rise of unemployment.Besides, the waste gas generated by all those units will definitely contribute to local air quality or perhaps global warming.Nevertheless, is it true that we, as human beings, should leave all these inventions behind and pretend they have never made a great difference?

On the other side, it is a logical error to take one certain step as the whole process.Currently, along with scientific advancement, people rarely take raw food as in the past.Thanks to the perfection of food processing industry, there are more procedures, such as filtering, degerming, or low-temperature evaporating, to guarantee food quality harmless to human bodies.In addition, many trace elements and other nutrient vitamins are, through advanced operation, compoundedin the food in order to improve the nutrient composition of the food itself.Therefore, it is fairly assertive and parochial to claim fertilizers and machinery have a negative impact.And more ironically, if human beings did not apply them in food production today,there would be no way to feed growing world population.As was previously stated and well discussed, the role and function of fertilizers and machinery in food production is overgeneralized and misinterpreted.Personally, they both serve well in food production, and their flaws are avoidable most of time.

第三篇：雅思高分作文- 教育類

1.It is generally believed that education is of vital importance in individuals’ development and well-being of societies.What should education consist of to fulfill both these functions?

With the rapid development of modern society, education is becoming more and more crucial to both individuals and societies.The issue over what education should consist of has considerably aroused people’s wide concern.In this essay, I seek to explore this complicated topic from diverse perspectives and what influence could be brought.Among the most important aspects education should consist of, one should be stressed is professional knowledge education.On one hand, under the fierce competitive circumstance, people who have professional skills and experience attract many big companies.Therefore, study about one special area gives people more opportunities to hurt an ideal job.On the other hand, this education is also significant to develop societies in a long run.At the second place, what is also worth noticing is that physical education is necessary for students, especially for teenagers.If you want to achieve successfully in the modern societies, strong body is the first premise, which makes you always in sharp.So education should push people to take care themselves and this could bring great benefits to the healthy society.Last but not least, we should not lose sight of psychological education.Psychological problems are serious nowadays and a sizable percentage of people suffer from them.A survey conducted by a famous research organization indicates that over 40 percent of students have various psychological problems, who really need help from school and society.Even worse, if such problems cannot be solved, they could hamper the progress of well-being society.Judging from what I have been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that three aspects cannot be separated in education, which play vital important roles in the growth of individuals and societies.The fulfillment of both people and societies can be done as long as we lay emphasis on three aspects mentioned above.2.Human Society is a long period of building and developing.From

the time man lived in dank caves to nowadays when he lives in such a

modern life with a lot of excellent facilities.The modern life, the

excellent facilities was not a present from god.It was made by people of

all generations who always learned from the past and developed

everything they had learned from it.Thus, I totally disagree with the

statement above that learning about the past has no value.The first reason for this is that learning about the past brings us all the

knowledge and information in the past.Without yesterday, there is no

today.A society can develop only when its people inherit and

understand the achievements of the precursors because the precursors'

achievements were the foundation for everything to develop..For

example, before 1964 there was only black-and-white television but

until now there are kinds of colour televisions that are slim and

innovative such as LCD TV...The black-and-white television made the

basis and gave inventors idea to develop the modern TV nowadays.Consequently our knowledge, success today is the result of constant

work of our ancestors before.Secondly, learning about the past is very essential because it makes us

doubt and take consideration into earlier assumptions.For that reason,people will find out mistakes that were made in the past.This will show

us which roads not to ever go down again and put human in a right way

to develop.Learning about the past is not only learning about the

history but also is learning from our and the others' mistakes.By this

way of learning, people will become more and more experienced and

never make the same mistakes again.Additionally, if learning about the past has no value, people in the world

could speak, could write by themselves without learning from anyone.This is impossible so the value of the past, in this case are the parents,are undeniable.In a nutshell, the past is always a good teacher and we are still bad

students who crave for knowledge.Denying the past also means that we

are destroying the present and our future because no one can jump

without ground to stand on.3.When it comes to the value of history, the discussion of this issue

among individuals and in society as a whole has come into vogue during

the last decade.The statement declares that “learning about the past

has no value for those of us living in the present.” I disagree with

the...there is a thing you have to know.The main reason for my propensity to the importance of history is

that in the business world, there is a saying that you have to know

where you have been and where you are in order to know where you are

going...Furthermore, I agree that business corporations find it critical to

have regular views of the past business performance without

reservations since each corporation has to see what mistakes were

made in order to avoid repeating them.Naturally, they learn from the

past mistakes which prepare them for the future.Let’s bring our discussion to a more present and practical context.It can be given an example that Microsoft usually has regular views of

its past performance, usually in the form of quarterly or annual review.Another equally essential aspect accounting for why I advocate the

value of learning about the past involves the realm of politics and

society.No one can deny that in the international arena, one must

possess a thorough knowledge of history in order to understand the

current dynamics and complex relationships among countries.Obviously, it is imperative that the politicians should learn from the

past political mistakes.History is replete with evidence to demonstrate

this point that the world community learned the great lesson from WWII

that there must not be another world war thus we entered into 40 plus

years of the cold war.However, we should concede that despite the merits of learning

about the past, over extended referring to the past will be indeed

counterproductive, even harmful.The harm it produces is, in my view,both palpable and profound.For the individual, it has a debasing

impact on people’s originality;for the society, it may promote a

tendency toward mechanism ossification.In sum, the advantages of referring to the past outweigh the

disadvantages, but it is imperative to point out that whether historical

information can actively affect our present life depends on whether we

could take rational cognizance of the past and whether we could try to

make breakthrough and whether we could learn from the past failures

and success, especially from the failures.

第四篇：雅思作文高分實用

雅思小作文高分模版

小作文結構

開頭段1-2句 轉述原題

主體段11+X句 每個主體段第一句話概括本段，X句介紹數字

…

主體段N

結尾段1-2句 第一句介紹總數total（如果沒有就不寫），第二句作結論

開頭段

時態：一般現在時

替換詞

proportion/ percentageinformation/ datanumber/ figures

family/ householdmales/ menfemales/ women

influence/ affect(v.)effect(n.)categories/ kinds/ typesdemand/ need

subway/ underground railwaystore/ shopuniversity/ college show/ describe/ illustrate/ demonstrate/ summarize/ indicate

國家的替換（如美國，英國等）

主體段

時態：由題目的時間決定

1.數據按順序介紹，不要跳躍

2.4類關鍵數據：maximum最大值，minimum最小值，trend變化趨勢，intersection交叉點（線圖）

第一句，由圖可見：

As can be seen from the table that…

It can be seen from the table that…

We can see from the table that…

According to the xx chart, …

It is interesting to note that…

Noticeably,(Interestingly)

第二句，具體來說：

To be more specific, … = more specifically

To be more exact,… = more exactly

替換詞

上升

increased/ an increaserose/ a rise

急劇上升

rocketed(boomed)a rocket(a boom)

下降

dropped/ a dropdecreased/ a decreasereduced / a reduction

急劇下降

slumpeda slump

持平

stabilizedremained / maintained / stayedstable / constant / steady

波動

fluctuateda fluctuation

最高點

peaked atreached the highest point at(as high as)

最低點

reached the bottom at

速度快/慢

rapid rapidly/ slow slowly

幅度大/小

significant significantly/ gradual gradually/ steady steadily/ slight slightly

大約：about/ around/approximately / just over/ just under

到達某個數量

reached/ stood at / arrived at

預期值（將來時間必須用這個寫）

A is expected/ predicted / estimated / projected to reach …

分別

respectively

占比

accounted for/ made up/ represented the percentage of / was responsible for / provided

一些例句：

As can be seen from the graph, the number of … fluctuated during the period of ….As can be seen from the graph, there was a slight rise in the number of *** from *** to ***

The period between *** and *** experienced a slight rise of …, with the number reaching ***.It can be seen from the chart that *** accounted for the greatest proportion of ***

As for other categories, …

After that, an opposite trend occurred.The highest … was A, followed by…

結尾段

Therefore, it can be clearly seen from the table that …

流程圖

The process diagram illustrates in *** stages how …

由圖可見

In the first stage(picture, period), … / Initially,In the next step, …

After that(Next/ Then), …

Finally, …(the whole cycle starts over again.)

追加描述

at this stage/ at this point/ as the diagram shows

Therefore, the process diagram clearly shows that …

雅思大作文高分模版 –(1)

立場類文章

開頭段

1.As the world continues to increase in complexity, **(點題目的范圍，比如education, crime, environmentalpreservation等)has triggered a wide public concern and discussion.2.When it comes to whether …(這句從句一定要寫對，就是點題), people hold conflicting opinions.3.Personally, I strongly think that …

第二段(你反對的那一方的有道理的部分。一般1-2個觀點)

雙邊結合：On the one hand, there is no doubt that sth.has certain advantages(disadvantages).只選擇一邊立場：One’s first inclination might be to argue that sth.has certain advantages(disadvantages).第一個觀點To begin with, ….第二個觀點Moreover, ….論據部分可能的連接詞：

as a result/ to be more specific/ in other words/ for instance

第三段(你支持的那一方的觀點，一般2-3個觀點)

雙邊結合：On the other hand, we should not ignore the disadvantages it may bring along.只選擇一邊立場：A quick look at the following facts, however, may show us a different picture.連接詞注意不要重復即可，如on top of that / besides / apart from

結尾段（此類文章結尾必須要寫）(僅以抽煙好不好為例)

只選擇一邊立場：Overall, despite the advantages smoking may bring, I think it has more disadvantages in terms of individual health and other aspects.Therefore, people should not be encouraged to take up smoking.如果為雙邊結合的，結尾可用not only, but also 連接

如果支持那方有新觀點，也可以放在結尾段。

雅思大作文高分模版 –(2)

解決問題類文章

開頭段

As the world continues to increase in complexity, **（點題）has triggered a wide public concern and discussion.New solutions to this problem are being proposed, trialed and implemented with ever increasing speed.This essay aims to analyze the reasons for and potential influences(effects)brought by this problem and tries to give some possible solutions.一定要看清楚題目問了哪幾個問題，cause, effect, solution不一定都問的。

第二段

The causes of the problem facing the world are diverse.第三段

Obviously, the situation has had various influences(consequences)on our society,(both positive and negative ones).如果沒有好的影響，逗號后面就寫mostly negative ones.第四段

Considering these causes, actions should be taken in several fields.(The role of governments in environmental management is difficult but inescapable.)這句話很好，但不適用所有的題目。

結尾段(可以不寫)以下兩種寫法根據題目任選一種

1.In conclusion, I think there are many reasons why …, and corresponding measures should be taken.Only by

concerted efforts of governments and individuals, can this demanding challenge be addressed.2.Progress is being made.The problem, though, remains the same.Will the change come quickly enough?

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