第一篇:專題07書面表達仿真模擬(慰問信+咨詢信),年高考英語書面表達搶分秘籍
慰問信 【文體概述】
慰問信是指同學親友考試失利、生病、受傷或遇到火災、水災、被盜等不幸事件,給對方表示慰問的信件。慰問信要寫得真誠并注意措辭。要圍繞一個中心,鼓勵對方并讓其從中得到安慰和鼓舞。寫信時常包括:對不幸事件表示同情→進行安慰和幫助→鼓勵其努力→再次表示同情并希望其早日復原。
【常用語塊】
1.很抱歉/震驚得知……______________________________ 2.聽到……我深感難過______________________________ 3.請接受我最深切的慰問______________________________ 4.我想送你我最美好的祝愿______________________________ 5.我無法相信……______________________________ 6.對……表示同情______________________________ 7.我們充滿了……______________________________ 8.請轉達我對……的同情______________________________ 9.最好的祝愿……______________________________ 10.我們都希望……______________________________ 11.我相信你會成功……______________________________ 12.取得完全康復______________________________ 13.出院______________________________ 14.我祝愿你快速康復______________________________ 15.渡過難關______________________________
【套用句式】
1.聽說火災毀了你漂亮的住宅,我難過極了。
________________________________________________________________________ 2.我們感到很悲痛。
________________________________________________________________________ 3.請轉達我向你家人的慰問。
________________________________________________________________________
4.祝你很快康復。
________________________________________________________________________ 5.大家都希望你早日歸來。
________________________________________________________________________
【短文改錯】(做短文改錯,背經典范文)Dear John, I am shocking to hear that you have severe flu and now are in hospital.I get this news from your mother and knew you must be absent for half a month at the classes.Do are careful while you are ill.Don’t worry about your lesson and I am willing to help you learn from them when you return.We are best friends so I will never allow you to fall behind.You can watch television or listen to radio programs to help pass the time but forget your pains while you recover.I did hope that I can see you soon and bring you any funny cartoons.Yours truly, Li Hua
【課堂練習】
假定你是李華,你的同班同學王剛家鄉10月4日遭受臺風“彩虹(Typhoon Mujigae)”襲擊,洪水毀壞了家園,你作為班長給正在抗洪的他寫一封慰問信,要點如下:
1.對該同學表示關心; 2.向其提供一些幫助,如捐助和補習; 3.表達希望和對其重建家園的信心。
注意:1.詞數 100 左右;2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;3.開頭語和結束語已為你寫好。
Dear Wang Gang, We’re so sorry to hear that a horrible and severe Typhoon Mujigae hit your hometown and your house is in ruins.________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,Li Hua
【課外作業】
假定你是李華,你的好友李明參加了今年的中國好聲音(The Voice of China)比賽,沒有進入決賽,感到很傷心。請你給他寫一封慰問信,要點如下:
1.表示難過和理解; 2.失敗原因不在于他,而是另有別的緣故; 3.勉勵他不要灰心,來年再戰必能成功。
注意:1.詞數 100 左右;2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;3.開頭語和結束語已為你寫好。
Dear Li Ming, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes!Yours sincerely, Li Hua
慰問信 常用語塊 1.I was so sorry/shocked to learn of the news that… 2.I am deeply sorry to hear that…/ I just can’t tell you how sorry I am to hear that… 3.Please accept my deepest sympathy… 4.I want to send you my best wishes for… 5.I couldn’t believe that…
6.have/show sympathy for… 7.We are filled with… 8.Please convey my sympathy to… 9.Best wishes for… 10.We are all hoping… 11.I am sure you will succeed in… 12.make a full recovery 13.leave the hospital / be discharged from the hospital 14.I wish you swift/quick/speedy recovery 15.go through the difficulty 套用句式 1.I was so sorry to hear of the fire that destroyed your beautiful house.2.We are filled with deep sorrow.3.Please convey my sympathy to your family.4.Best wishes for your speedy recovery.5.We are all hoping you will be back soon.短文改錯 作者寫信給約翰,對其生病表示慰問。
1.shocking→shocked
主要是人,要用 shocked。
2.在 severe flu 前加 a
因 flu 是可數名詞。
3.knew→know
因要與并列謂語 get 時態保持一致。
4.at→from
固定搭配 be absent from 意為“缺席”。
5.are→be
祈使句,故要用 be。
6.lesson→lessons
根據后面的 them 可知要用復數。
7.去掉 them 前的 from
根據文意可知,此處是指“幫助你學習功課”,而不是“向功課學習”。
8.but→and
此處顯然是“順承”關系,而非“轉折”關系。
9.did→do
全文主體時態是一般現在時。
10.any→some
肯定句要用 some。
課堂練習Dear Wang Gang,We’re so sorry to hear that a horrible and severe Typhoon Mujigae hit your hometown and your house is in ruins.We’re filled with deep sorrow.Please convey my sympathy to your family.Thinking about your present situation, we cannot wait a minute to make every bit of our effort to help you.I, as a monitor, on behalf of our class, express our most sincere pity and care for you.Besides, we make a donation of some money, expecting that it can help you go through the difficulty.We believe that with the help of so many kind people, a better house can be rebuilt.Finally, we’re all hoping you’ll be back soon and we will make up the lessons for you.Best wishes!
Yours sincerely, Li Hua 課外作業 Dear Li Ming, I am deeply sad to hear that you could not enter the finals of The Voice of China of this year.I quite understand how you feel now.You have been doing well and your failure is not your own fault, I am sure.However, as we know, failure is the mother of success.I do hope you won’t lose heart and will get ready to try again.Still you have many more chances to try for you are so young.Fate(命運)only can be changed by working hard, so if you go on practising singing, I am sure you will succeed next year.Best wishes!Yours sincerely, Li Hua
咨詢信 【文體概述】
咨詢信是寫信人對某方面的信息感興趣,希望了解詳細信息的信件。通常包括三部分內容:1.說明自己的計劃或目的,也就是詢問信息的原因;2.征詢具體信息;3.期待回復并表示感謝。
【常用語塊】
1.尋求幫助_________________________________ 2.向某人提供某物_________________________________
3.首先_________________________________ 4.盼望著_________________________________ 5.更多的信息_________________________________ 6.即將到來_________________________________ 7.為……向某人收取……費用_________________________________
8.為……而表示感激之情_________________________________ 9.對……來說很重要_________________________________ 10.寄回_________________________________ 11.對......感興趣_________________________________ 12.參加_________________________________ 13.決心要做某事_________________________________ 14.希望......_________________________________ 15.缺乏/缺少_________________________________
【套用句式】
1.如果能給我提供……方面的信息我將不勝感激。
__________________________________________________________________ 2.我寫信是想知道您能否給我提供有關……的信息。
__________________________________________________________________ 3.此外,有沒有我要特別注意的事情? __________________________________________________________________ 4.您能告訴我……嗎? __________________________________________________________________ 5.期待您及時答復。
__________________________________________________________________
【短文改錯】(做短文改錯,背經典范文)Dear Sir/Madam, I am a student in China or I plan to go to Britain to attend summer school during the vacation.I had seen your advertisement, and I would like to know anything more about your six-week English course.First where will the course start and how many class hour are there per week? Beside, I wish there would not be too many students in a class.What I would also like to know how much I have to pay to the course and whether accommodation is including.Would there be host family or university dormitory? I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully, Li Hua
【課堂練習】
假定你是李華,最近你在當地報紙上看到一則游泳培訓班的廣告,稱其有稱職教練(instructor),一周包會。你會一點游泳,但水性不太好,想在暑假參加訓練。請你寫一封咨詢信了解相關情況,要點如下:
1.訓練的具體時間和地點; 2.條件和費用; 3.其他特別注意的事項。
注意:1.詞數 100 左右;2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;3.開頭語和結束語已為你寫好。
Dear Sir/Madam,I have read your advertisement in the newspaper._______________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours sincerely, Li Hua
【課外作業】
假定你是李華,寒假中你去澳大利亞旅游,可是回國后發現你的相機落在旅館了,所以你要給旅館負責人寫一封咨詢信。要點如下:
1.入住時間:1 月 27 日~2 月 5 日;房間號:608 2.相機:型號 Canon Ixus860,白色;你的 17 歲生日禮物,很重要 3.請他/她幫你尋找并寄回,表示感謝 4.你的地址在信封上 注意:1.詞數 100 左右;2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;3.開頭語和結束語已為你寫好。
Dear Sir/Madam, I am very grateful for your great service while staying at your hotel, but____________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to your early reply!Yours sincerely, Li Hua
咨詢信 常用語塊 1.ask for help 2.provide sb.with sth.3.to start with 4.look forward to 5.further information 6.round the corner 7.charge sb.for…
8.be grateful for… 9.be important to… 10.post back 11.be interested in…/take interest in… 12.take part in/participate in 13.make up my mind to do sth.14.in the hope of/that 15.be short of / be in lack/demand of 套用句式 1.I would be most grateful if you could send me information regarding/concerning… 2.I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding… 3.Besides, is there anything that I should pay special attention to? 4.Would you be so kind as to tell me…? 5.I am looking forward to your immediate response.短文改錯 作者寫信 咨詢 參加暑期英語培訓課程的一些情況。
1.or→and
兩句之間是“順承”關系,而非“選擇”關系。
2.在 summer 前加 a
單數可數名詞前用不定冠詞表泛指。
3.had→have
根據上下文語境,此處應用現在完成時。
4.anything→something
肯定句要用 something。
5.where→when
根據上下文邏輯,此處應該是表“什么時候”的疑問句。故填 when。
6.hour→hours
因 how many 后須用名詞的復數形式。
7.Beside→Besides
此處表示補充說明關系“此外/而且”,beside 意為“在......旁邊”。
8.去掉 I would also 前的 What
后面是一個完整的句子,What 在此顯然是多余的。
9.to→for
固定短語 pay for 意為“為......付費”。
10.including→included
此處為被動結構,意為“......包含在內”。
課堂練習Dear Sir/Madam, I have read your advertisement in the newspaper.You mentioned in it that your instructors are fully qualified and you ensure that learners will be able to swim well after one week’s training.I can swim a little but I’m not very confident in the water.So I’m interested in taking part in the training course.Fortunately, the summer holiday is around the corner.I’m writing to inquire when and where the course will be given, and how long the training course will last each day.I also want to know how much you will charge me for that.Besides, would you be so kind as to tell me whether there is anything special that should be prepared or does your company provide everything necessary? Looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours sincerely, Li Hua 課外作業 Dear Sir/Madam, I am very grateful for your great service while staying at your hotel, but I’m writing to ask for your help with sending back my camera that I left in your hotel.I checked in on January 27 and out on February 5 and stayed in Room 608 for the whole time.Perhaps because I left in such a rush for the airport, I made the mistake of leaving my camera in the room.Since it was a gift from my parents on my 17th birthday, it’s very important to me.It’s a white Canon Ixus860.I would be very grateful if you could help me find it.If found, the camera can be posted back to me by using the address on the envelope.I am looking forward to your early reply!Yours sincerely, Li Hua
第二篇:高考英語書面表達技巧
高考英語書面表達技巧
通常,英語學習,聽、說、讀、寫、譯五項基本技能缺一不可。《普通高中英語課程標準》,對九級語言技能目標英語寫作有6點明確的要求。同時列出了寫作技能與試題設計的要求和寫作評價標準,其測試方式有五種。學生作文主要從內容要點、語言使用效果、結構和連貫性、格式和語域及與目標讀者的交流五個方面進行評價。英語書面表達是英語語言基礎知識和語法基礎知識的綜合運用,還要具有較強的語言表達能力和邏輯思維能力,要求內容清楚、意思連貫、結構完整、邏輯性強、主題突出、用詞準確、文體恰當。一般,要文理通暢,非單純地翻譯。要答卷滿意,平時確實需要長期的信心的培養,耐心的啟發,由易到難,從簡單到復雜,循序漸進地堅持內容、語言、語法、表達、結構、邏輯和卷面等進行規范地訓練,而且訓練有素。現在,不少學生對英語書面表達不予或不夠重視。這并非完全意義上的寫作,只要求用書面語言基本表達出要表達的東西。一般原則是:不多寫、不少寫和不錯寫。現結合存在的問題和多年的教學積累,談談高考英語書面表達應注重的五方面。用順
審準題義,明確情景,看清要求。不少考生寫作時,還有不看要求或不看完看全要求就解題的習慣,特別是不注意生詞或短語提示,或干脆完全根據所給材料先后順序逐一翻譯。前后不連貫,層次不清晰,邏輯性不強。因此應認真思考材料,找到所要表達的主旨文意及線索,在線索引導下通暢地表達內容,增加可讀性。為此,應注意使用and, so, then, at the same time, on the one hand, on the other hand, first, second,at last, what''s more, I''m afraid, I think等表示過度及連接的詞匯,使之有較強的感情色彩。用對
對每一個句子都盡可能避免語法錯誤。通常錯處出在:
2.1動詞錯誤
(1)多用。
1)There were five hundred students couldn’t go to school because of the earthquake.(劃線部分改為Five hundred)
2)A hero comes from Beichuan will give us a talk tomorrow afternoon.(劃線部分改為coming或去掉comes)
(2)缺失。
1)He wouldn’t ∧ able to work out the math problem.(遺漏處加be)
2)It isn’t said that they ∧ often careless in class.(遺漏處加are)
(3)時態錯誤。
1)Hurry up!Here is coming the bus.(劃線部分改為comes)
2)Class start at 8:00 am.(劃線部分改為starts)
書面表達可能出現多種時態,但特定時間背景下時態相同。如人事物現狀的介紹,應以一般現在時為主;過去的介紹,應以一般過去時為主;日記應以一般過去時為主;通知應以一般現在時為主。千萬不要隨心所欲,不假思索地使用,造成大面積失分。
(4)語態錯誤。由于漢語被動色彩不濃,因此英語表達易受影響,該用而不用,不該用而用be動詞。如:
1)He remembered his wallet had ∧ lost in the bus.(遺漏處加been)
2)The matter was happened two years ago.(劃線處去掉was)
還有喜歡在動詞前面加be動詞。如:
3)I am think that I’ll learn how to use a computer.(劃線處去掉am)
4)They are decide that they will study harder.(劃線處去掉are)
2.2名詞單復數混用
1)He wrote an 800-words article yesterday.(劃線處改為800-word)
2)It is a ten-minutes walk from here to there.(劃線處改為ten-minute或ten minutes'')
2.3冠詞錯誤
冠詞屬小詞,重視不夠,影響表達。
1)How do you spell the computer?(劃線處去掉the)
2)We should treasure the time because the time is money.(劃線處去掉the)用準
用準確地道的語言,不能生澀難懂,不合英語表達習慣。常見現象如下:
3.1單詞堆砌
寫句子,用語不準,而根據漢語句序進行相應的英語單詞堆砌而成。如:
1)Study hard, are because they know is the Hope project give their chance to go to school.(錯)→They study hard because they know it is the Hope project that gives them a chance to go to school.(正)
2)Welcome you come back to our school to visit.(錯)
→You’re welcome back to visit our school.(正)
另外,不重視掌握單詞,寫作時碰到生詞難句就委婉地去解釋,用模糊定義,語言生澀難懂,文意混亂,表達不清。如:
Mr.Zhao is good at teaching English;he has many good ways to use to teach us.(錯)
→Mr.Zhao is good at teaching, and he has many methods of teaching us English.(正)
3.2使用Chinglish
英語作文,受漢語影響,雖語法正確,卻不符英語表達習慣。如:
1)Our friends are all over the world.(錯)→We have friends all over the world.(正)
2)My height is 180 centimeters and my body is healthy.(錯)
→I am 180 centimeters tall and I’m healthy.(正)
語言轉換功在平時。簡明扼要,表達清楚,是關鍵所在。冰凍三尺,非一日之寒。用全
初學寫作要簡單完整清楚地表達,就要把握兩個關系:
4.1完整不一定就句式復雜
一味追求新、奇、特、難,容易出錯。如:
1)Li Lang, a brave boy who is only 6 years old and that is a middle school student and that comes from the northwest of the Sichuan province.(錯)→Li Lang, a brave boy who is only 6 years old , and he is a middle school student from the northwest part of the Sichuan province.(正)
2)It is not only we students but also our parents and our teachers are kind to the children.(錯)→Not only we students but also our parents and our teachers are kind to the children.(正)
4.2簡單也不一定就用省略句
在不可省的地方省略,結構就不完整,句意就不明確。如:
1)He studies very hard and kind.(錯)→He studies very hard and he is very kind.(正)
2)He doesn''t know what and how to do.(錯)→He doesn''t know what to do and how to do it.(正)
另外,考試是根據內容和表達給分的,要點齊全,是直接因素。必須注意要點來源:
標題。有些需要標題,卻粗心漏掉不寫,造成失分。書寫標題應力求簡潔明了,有較強概括力和針對性,并注意單詞字母大小寫。
格式。不少應用文需要正確的格式,如通知的開頭,常常要交待通知的對象;日記開頭,常常交待時間和天氣;信件的左上角必須注明寫信人的地址和時間,下一行要頂格寫上稱呼,正文結束后,要有結束語,并簽名。
正文。這是全文要點集中之處,應認真思考材料含義,理清大意,將所有要點逐一落實,并檢查有無遺漏。
常識性。原材料不一定反應,但仍然重要,既屬內容,又承上啟下,增強文章可讀性。如寫通知結尾可用“Don’t forget the time and address.”,“I’m sure you’ll have a pleasant time/a lot of fun.”或“That’s all, thank you.”;寫參觀歡迎詞開頭可用“You’re welcome to visit our city.”,“Now, let me tell you something about our school.”或“Let me introduce something about our school to you.”,結尾可用“Now, I’d like to introduce something about our school/LI ping to you.”,介紹結束也可用“That’s all, thank you.”;寫信結尾可用“please give my best regards/love /wishes to your parents.”或“Remember me to your parents!”,“I hope to hear from you soon.”或“Waiting for your early reply.”
必須注意原則:不多不少。該有的不少,不該有的不寫。整潔
文章寫好后,應認真修改,不忙于提前交卷,避免大小寫及標點符號錯誤,謄寫應盡可能書寫工整,布局美觀。卷面整潔清爽就會增加得高分機會。
總之,了解、掌握、運用好以上五個方面,就容易得高分。
第三篇:2011福建高考英語書面表達
2010福建高考英語書面表達
寫演講辭
去澳大利亞做演講——主題是“水資源短缺”
材料提供三點措施:1.回收利用 2.海水淡化 3.自己的觀點
水資源問題:
Water is important to all living things.Without water, there can be no life on earth.Humans also need water to drink, to cook and to clean.But now people waste a lot of water.Some people even pour rubbish into rivers and lakes.So clean water is becoming less and less.It’s important for us to protect and save water.But what can we do to save water? First, we should call on people to protect water.Second, as a student, I think we should remember to turn the taps off when we leave.Third, We should not only collect but also reuse the waste water.After we wash our faces, we had better use that water to water flowers or do something else.If everyone can do something useful, there will be more and more clean water.作為一名中學生,你是如何參與環保這項活動?
As we know, there are many kinds of pollution around us, such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.They are bad for us in many ways.So it’s important for us to protect our environment.As a middle school student, I often do a lot of things for the Greener China.I spread message about protecting the environment, such as the 3Rs.Also I teach the people around me how to deal with rubbish.In my daily life, I often turn the light off when I leave.What’s more, I use both sides of paper and so on.In a word, if everyone can do something useful for our homes, our home will become greener and greener.目前地球面臨水資源危機,請你根據以下提示寫一篇100詞左右的短文。1.人們以為淡水是取之不盡的(提示:雨水、河水、井水??)2.實際上淡水是非常緊缺的(提示:人口增加,工業用水增加,污染??)3.人類應該怎么辦? Global Shortage of Fresh Water One possible version: Global Shortage of Fresh WaterMany people believe that the world’s supply of fresh water will never be used up.They think that fresh water comes from such a variety of sources that it is always sufficient for use.Such an opinion leads to a shocking waste of water.As a matter of fact, the earth is short of fresh water.Furthermore ,with the rapid growth of the world’s population ,the rising demand for water by industry ,and the serious pollution of our surroundings ,the world is facing the danger of running out of fresh water.Actually ,in some big cities ,fresh water cannot meet the daily needs.Therefore ,to find new ways to save water is an urgent task.First ,we should pass strict laws to control any waste of water.Second ,scientists must wor
k even harder to purify sea water and polluted water ,and try to find substitutes to reduce the use of fresh water.有關環境保護水資源的英語作文5篇
有關環境保護的英語作文:水資源是有限的人們總以為淡水是取之不盡的,實際上淡水資源是很有限的。請談談你的看法。
It is generally believed that there is a good supply of fresh water.But to our disappointment, the fact is just the opposite.As we can see, the world population is growing rapidly day by day.So enough fresh water is needed to feed such a big population.What’s more, with the development of industry, factories and vehicles produce poisonous gases or wastes, which consequently results in the pollution of water.Though fresh, a good amount of it can no longer be used.Only quite limited fresh water resource is available to human beings.So it’s high time for us human beings to take quick action to protect water resource.Stop pollution and save water, otherwise, we cannot survive on the earth.With fresh water, the world will be prosperous.Water
Water is very important for living things.Without water there can be no life on earth.All animals and plants need water.Man also needs water.Water is found atmosteverywhere.Even in the driest part of the world there is some water in the air.As we all have found out, water may be a solid, or a liquid or a gas.When it isa solid, it may be as hard as brick, When itis a liquid, you can pour it out of a container.When it is a gas, you cannot see or feel it.Although about 70 percent of the earth's surface is covered with water,there are many places in the world still running out of water.So we should make good use of water on earth.水
水對生物很重要,沒有水,地球上就沒有生命。所有的動植物都需要水。人
類也需要水。
水幾乎無處不在。即使在世界上最干燥的地方,空氣中也有水。
水,正如你所了解的,有固態、液態和氣態。當它是固態時,它可以像磚一樣硬;當它是液態時,你可以將它從容器中倒出;當它是氣態時,你看不見或感覺不到它。
雖然地球表面70%是水覆蓋著,世界上仍有許多地方缺水。所以我們要好好利用地球上的水。
The Importance of Water
As we all know, plants and animals need water.So do the people's life and production, t,ife couldn't go on without water.With the rapid development of agriculture and industry, more and more water is needed.Therefore, water is becoming scarce in many places.What's more, a lot of rivers and lakes are beginning polluted by the waste watcr from factories.Fish can't live in them any longer.At the same time, thc waste water does great harm to people's health.In order to make rivers and lakes clean and prevent water from being polluted,we must do something to stop all sorts of pollution.水的重要性
正如我們所了解的,動植物需要水,人類的生產生活也需要水。沒有水便沒有生命。
隨著工農業的迅速發展,水的需要量越來越大。因此,許多地方缺水。而且,許多河流湖泊被工廠排放的污水所污染,魚不能生存。同時,廢水給人們的健康帶來極大的危害。
為了保持河流湖泊清潔,防止水污染,我們必須采取措施,阻止各種污染。
環境日英語作文:關于河水污染的感想
根據下列提示寫一篇關于河水污染的感想。
1.上星期天,你隨父親去釣魚,看見河水污染,幾乎釣不到魚。
2.河水被污染的原因。
3.倘若全國各地的河水都被污染,后果如何?
4.環境污染對人類危害極大,我國政府正在努力采取措施與污染作斗爭。
5.希望在不久的將來,河水會變干凈。
詞數 100~130.Last Sunday my father and I went fishing along a river.We found the water so dirty that we could hardly catch fish in it.A lot of factories along the river always poured their waste water and rubbish straight into the river which made the river water polluted.In this way most of the fish in the river were killed.If the river water all over the country is polluted like this,no living things will exist in the water.As we all know,environmental pollution does great harm to living things and human beings.Now more and more people have come to realize how serious this problem is.Our government is doing her best to take measures to fight against pollution.We expect that the water in every river will be made cleaner and cleaner before long.環境日英語作文:Water Pollution-水污染
Spring is tht best season of the year.The weather gets warmer and warmer.My clas i'amates and I took a one-day sightseeing around our city.The scene was pretty.But when we saw the rivers along our city, I felt very sorry, and thoughit a lot.With the development of modern agriculture and industry, more and more waste water is being poured into rivers.It has caused serious pollution.The river is becoming so dirty that no living things can live in it.The river is giving off a terrible smell.We make an urgent appeal that measures should be taken to cope with the situation.Our government should start building various facilities such as sewage treatment!plant and encourage scientists to work out more and better ways to reduce the pollution of water.Water is tho source of our lives.It is very important to protect water.春天是一年中最好的季節,天氣變得越來越暖和。我和我的同學們進行了一次環城一日游,所到之處景色宜人。但當我看到沿著城區流過的河流時,我感到很惋惜,想了很多。
隨著現代工農業的發展,越來越多的污水排進河里,河水被嚴重污染。河水變得如此的骯臟以致于生物不能在里面生活。河水發出難聞的氣味。
我們急切呼吁采取措施改變這種狀況。政府應當建立各種設備,例如污水處理廠,并且鼓勵科學家們想出更多更好的辦法以減少水污染。
水是生命之源,保護水資源十分重要。
My classmates and I had an outing this spring.We had a good time.But meanwhile I noticed that water pollution in our city was becoming more and more serious.On our way, we could see women washing clothes in the river.Litter was floating on the river.Waste water produced by a chemical factory was being discharged into the river.We did not see any fish in the river.The fiver was not so clear as before.Water quality was very bad.I am worried
about it because water is important to all living things.Man can not live without water.I hope people pay more attention to this problem, especially the government.Try to control the pollution of water as early as possible.At last I would like to say, “To protect water is to protect life.”
今年春天,我和我的同學去春游,我們玩得都很高興。但同時,我也注意到我們城市的水污染變得越來越嚴重了。
沿途我們看到許多婦女在河邊洗衣,河面上漂著垃圾,一家化工廠正將廢水排入河中。河中看不到一條魚,河水也不像從前那樣清澈了,水質很差。對此我深感擔憂,因為水對于所有生物都非常重要。沒有水人類將無法生存。我希望人們能多關注這個問題,特別是政府部門,爭取及早解決水污染問題。最后,我想說“保護水就是保護生命。”
第四篇:英語高考書面表達結尾模版
英語高考書面表達結尾模版
結尾萬能公式
1. 結尾萬能公式一:如此結論
說完了,畢竟要歸納一番,相信各位都有這樣的經歷,領導長篇大論,到最后終于冒出個“總而言之”之類的話,我們馬上停止開小差,等待領導說結束語。也就是說,開頭很好,也必然要有一個精彩的結尾,讓讀者眼前一亮,這樣,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
Obviously(此為過渡短語), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果讀者很難“顯而見之”,但說無妨,就當讀者的眼光太淺罷了!
更多過渡短語:
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus 更多句型:
Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
2. 結尾萬能公式二:如此建議
如果說“如此結論”是結尾最沒用的廢話,那么“如此建議”應該是最有價值的廢話了,因為這里雖然也是廢話,但是卻用了一個很經典的虛擬語氣的句型。拽!
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.這里的虛擬語氣用得很經典,因為考官本來經常考這個句型,而如果我們自己寫出來,你說考官會怎么想呢?
更多句型:
Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.英語實戰演練:
十五、(2009.遼寧卷)假定你住在一個涉外小區。社區委員會請你幫忙用英文以短文的形式寫一封電子郵件,將周末農家采摘活動的安排傳達給住戶。
要點:
時間:下周六上午8:00至11:00 內容:采摘蘋果
報名:辦公室,下周四下午5:00前 提示:帶帽子、手套 注意:
1.詞數100左右,開頭已為你寫好。2.可適當增加細節以使行文連貫。3.參考詞匯:社區 community 第二節:
一、評分原則
1.本題總分為25分,按5個檔次給分。
2.評分時,先根據文章的內容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次,然后以該檔次的要求來衡量,確定或調整檔次,最后給分。
3.詞數少于80和多余120的,從總分中減去2分。
4.評分時應注意的主要內容為:內容要點、應用詞匯和語法結構的豐富性和準確性及上下文的連貫性。
5.拼寫與標點符號是語言準確性的一個方面。評分時,應視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。
6.如書寫較差以至影響交際,將其分數降低一個檔次。
二、內容要點
1.時間:下周六上午8:00 至 11:00
2.內容:采摘蘋果
3.報名:辦公室,下周四下午5:00前
4.提示:帶帽子、手套
5.歡迎踴躍參加
【參考范文】 Dear neighbors, We are very happy announce that our community is going to organize an activity for all the community members.Next Saturday, we going to pick apples in a village 20 kilometers away from our town, and all are welcome.We will meet at 8:00 am at the gate, where a blue bus will be waiting.Our outdoor activity will last 3 hours, and we’ll be back at about 11 o’clock.If you are interested, please sign up at the office before 5:00 pm next Thursday so that we will make necessary arrangements.We suggest that you bring with you a hat and a pair of gloves.We are looking forward to your joining us.Community Office 【解析】 本題命制穩健,是中學教學中最為常見的提綱式作文。給出要點學生有話可說。
第一步:審題
1、看要求:本題要求以短文的形式寫一封電子郵件,將周末農家采摘活動的安排傳達給住戶。開頭已經寫好,這樣格式應該已經給出,審題的重點放在要點和要求上:要點有五項,注意有三項,但注意的第一項是重要的一項。
2、理思路:調整要點,講清本次活動的安排。可以先將活動的時間,活動的內容,要求、注意事項表達出來;然后再寫5和3要點,這樣邏輯清晰表達合理。第二步:寫作
可以先在草紙上起草,用自己最有把握的句型、單詞、短語去表達,要嘗試最簡單的復雜句,如用定語從句、賓語從句等,但句式不易過于復雜,要用一些恰當的連詞,使句與句之間、段與段之間過渡自然。第三步:檢查
作文寫完后,最后要進行檢查。重點放在要點寫全了嗎?時態、語態、動詞的數、單詞拼寫對了嗎?標點符號、大小寫用對了嗎?檢查完后再抄寫在試卷上,注意卷面的整潔。
【專家簡評】
主題與考生學習生活或學校活動無關,但由于是以涉外小區為背景所開展的社區活動,主題空間更為開闊,因此該主題大體符合高考英語寫作話題的一般思路,可以歸類為外事活動。通常,命題以要點形式給出和以漢語題干形式給出,對考生而言,前者的難度要大于后者。因為要點內容的呈現一般看不出英語的句式結構,而如果是完整或半完整句式的漢語題干卻能讓考生比較容易辨別出英語句式結構。這本身就是一種便利。因此,對于各命題單位而言,這幾種形式都應該依據整卷難度的分布情況加以合理配備使用,以免過難或過易。
十六、(2009.浙江卷)
5月1日,高二(3)班的學生志愿者Li Yue 和 Zhang Hua 去陽光敬老院(Sunshine Nursing Home)開展志愿者活動(送水果.打掃.聊天等)。假如你是校英語報的記者,請按下列要點用英語寫一則100-120個詞的新聞報道。
1.時間.地點.任務.活動;
2.老人們的反應;
3.簡短評論。
注意:報道的標題和記者姓名已給出(不記詞數)。
Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly s5【參考范文】
Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly
On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work.Upon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits.Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor.Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.When it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness.They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy.What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.By Chen Jie, School Newspaper
【解析】
本文仍屬于提綱式半開放性體裁的作文,選材貼近學生實際,有利于考生的正常發揮,考生只要按照所給要點的思路來寫即可。
【專家簡評】
09浙江卷的話題和07湖北卷相似,又是志愿者,又是敬老,了無新意。但這并不就說明該卷乏善可陳。若從以考生為本的角度看,該卷第一次出現在題中直接給出漢語拼音人名,而不是漢語人名,這也算是一個首創。目的只有一個:避免考生出錯。其實,遮掩在漢語拼音中的人名也讓人看不出這個人名究竟是漢語中的哪幾個字,因為對于外國人而言,字母人名只是一個符號,他們是無法想象漢字人名所攜帶著的鮮活感和親切感的。
浙江卷前幾年基本上是選擇疑問句式的標題作文。例如:“Film or book, which do you prefer?”(06),請你圍繞“How do you prefer your English classes to be taught? In English only, or in both English and Chinese?”這個問題…(07),“Working Individually or Working in a Team”(08)。09年不在題中給出標題,卻在文中直接給出標題,不知何意?不知這個對于檢測考生的實際能力有何幫助?另外,雖然說的是新聞報道,但實際上是一個典型的敘事性質的短文寫作。08年僅北京考了一篇敘事性質的寫作。09年,除了北京繼續考了敘事外,浙江也出現了敘事性質的文體要求。對于浙江考生而言,其寫作難度應該遠遠低于前五年的寫作要求了,應該是福。
十七、(2009.重慶卷)
國外某網站舉辦新一輪網上討論活動,正面向全球中學生征集話題。假設你是新華中學的學生李華,經常訪問該網站。現請你用英文給該網站發送一封電子郵件,向其推薦話題。
內容包括: 自我簡介 寫信目錄
話題:我們應該感恩(thankful)推薦的理由 預祝活動成功 注意: 1.詞數100左右 2.郵件格式已為你給出 3.郵件中不能出現本人真實信息 4.請在答題卡上作答
【參考范文】
Dear____, I am Li Hua, a student from Xin Hua Middle School.I often visit your website.I am very glad to know that you will make a new round of courses and are collecting topics facing the middle school students.As a student, I really want to recommend a topic to you wholeheartedly.It is that we should be thankful.Living in this world, we have many people that we should be thankful to.We should be thankful to our parents because it was they that brought us into this world;we should be thankful to our teachers because they taught us everything we know and we should be thankful to our friends because when we meet difficulties, they always give us a hand.So I can say we live in a grateful world.I hope that the activity will be a great success.【解析】
這是一篇命題巧妙地書寫體半開發性提綱式作文。話題樹有教育意義,符合中學實際引導學生思考問題。在寫作中應注意如下幾點:
1.緊緊圍繞話題“我們應該感恩”。
2.但自我簡介、寫信目錄、推薦的理由、預祝活動成功都是圍繞話題展開。3.注意分清段落層次,上下文的過渡。
【專家簡評】
從寫作文體要求看,重慶卷04年要求寫記敘文,05年則改成議論文,近四年基本上是陳說性質的文體。就話題而言,近四年都與外事活動或外語學習相關。不過,09年的話題是涉外的話題征集,有些特點。六年來,三次短文寫作,三次郵件(其中兩次電子郵件)。李華同學出現3次(06,07,09)。總的說來,重慶卷一直比較謹慎,命題基本上沒有超出全國卷I的范式。
十八、(2009.上海卷)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.某海外學校舉辦英語夏令營,開設了如下課程:園藝(gardening),烹飪(cooking),防身術(self-defence),護理(nursing)。假如你是王躍華(不可以用自己的真實姓名),寫一封申請信,報名參加其中一門課程的學習。信的內容必須包括:
你感興趣的課程
你期望從這門課程中學到什么 為什么想學這些內容 【參考范文】
Dear leader,I am very glad that your school will hold the English Summer Camp that contains many courses,such as gardening、cooking、self-defence、nursing and so on。I want to register to attend a course bout gardening,because I have liked flowers、grasses etc since I was a little child。I especially like playing in the garden where I can enjoy the beauty of nature。For one thing,I hope to gain a bit more knowledge of gardening so that it can help me to major in the gardening after attending college。Besides I wish to get much more information about gardening so as to study it more easily when I enter the university。What's more,I can realize the bitterness of the gardeners to treasure the plants much more。For another,after graduation from college I will devote my life to cultivate the flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state and make many more foreigners come to visit our country。
Yours,Wang yue hua 【解析】
本文是書信格式,報名參加其中一門課程的學習,屬于半開放式作文。學生在寫作時應注意如下幾點:
1.先談自己感興趣的學科,從四科中選取自己最有把握和有話可說學科,這是寫作的關鍵,過渡要自然;
2.再寫自己希望學到什么,要把握實用性。
3.然后談出想學這些內容的原因,結合現實,理由合情合理。4.在寫作過程中可以嘗試句型的復雜化,適度增加情節
【專家簡評】 上海卷的一貫特點有以下幾條:題干短,話題一般與學習或學校生活相關,寫作形式主要是議論性質,間或插以混合性質,給考生的思維空間大。還有一點,從不給出范文。09年的Guided Writing屬于混合性質:陳說+議論。話題涉外,且與教育教學課程相關,是很好的話題。但對于上海考生而言,材料的提供是否過于豐富了些?!參看一下惜墨如金的歷年上海卷,你就會發現上海卷習慣于提供簡練的題干信息,以利于考生的發揮。這次算是一個異數了。
【總評】
2009年高考英語全國卷地方卷共19套,短文寫作共20篇(上海卷和廣東卷各2篇,寧·海卷共享全國卷I的短文寫作題)。綜觀2009年高考英語短文寫作試題,我們發現最重要的一個特點就是關于地方或傳統特色話題,也就是母語文化輸出類話題增多(5篇),以前只是在某個年份、某個卷種中有這種話題的點綴,現在看來已經蔚成風氣。這說明各卷種的命題者們已經認識到了母語文化輸出的重要性、緊迫性和現實性,這是最令人感到欣慰的。
強化訓練
11、(1分)
假設你是你校京劇愛好者協會的成員,在一次同英國中學生代表團的聯歡活動中,你協會將出一個京劇節目。在演出前,由你向外國朋友介紹京劇的由來,按以下提示介紹:
1.京劇在中國很受歡迎,歷史悠久,有200年歷史,在清朝乾隆年間,乾隆對地方劇
有興趣。
2.1790年,為慶祝乾隆80歲生日,他召集各地方劇團來京為他演出,4個來自安徽
的劇團在慶典后留在北京。
3.1828年,一個湖北劇團來京,在京常與安徽劇團一起演出,兩種唱派合在一起,逐
漸形成了一種新劇種,被稱為京劇。
4.下面演出開始,希望朋友們喜歡。參考詞匯:
地方劇:local opera
乾隆年間:the reign of Qianlong
表演:perform
劇團:troupe
12、(1分)
你昨天去游泳患了感冒,今天早上頭痛,醫生讓你休息兩天。你用英語給老師寫一個請假條。
13、(1分)
假設你是學生會的負責人,你們要組織一次英語講座,請用英語寫一個通知,把講座的安排:時間,地點,主講人,內容,以及注意事項通知大家。
14、(1分)
李華父親的朋友陳偉是在美國居住多年的華裔。因陳偉的兒子陳小明明年要來大陸李華學校學漢語,陳小明來信詢問學校情況,以下是小華回信的內容。
1.聽說你明年來我校學習,我們很高興。
2.我校是一所具有80年歷史的老學校。
3.學校很美,有許多花草樹木,兩座教學大樓,一座宿舍樓。
4.學校設備優良,有體育館、計算機室和大圖書館等。學生除正式課程外,還有許多
選修課,如:油畫、打字、烹調等。
5.最重要的是,學校有許多優秀教師,課程有趣,老師既有知識又和藹,非常愿意幫
助我們,我愛我們的學校,我真希望你也能喜歡我們的學校。參考詞匯:
選修課:elective
體育館:gym
宿舍樓:dormitory building
15、(1分)
寫信向友人介紹作家魯迅。
魏明的美國朋友杰克開始學習中國文學,來信詢問魯迅其人及作品。魏明回信介紹魯迅:
1.魯迅是著名的中國作家。他不僅是作家,思想家,而且還是中國現代文學的開創者。
2.他的小說被譯成多種文字,并被制成電影,如《阿Q正傳》、《祝福》這兩部影片
深刻地揭露了舊社會。毛主席對他有高度評價。他的一些作品還被選入了中學和大
學課本。
3.認為讀魯迅作品對他很有益處。參考詞匯:
創始人:Founder
中國文學:Chinese Literature
阿Q正傳:The True Story of AH Q
祝福:The New Year’s Sacrifice16、(1分)
提示:為引進外資,進一步加快你家鄉A城改革開放。你向一位外商介紹你家鄉A城。
1.A城是一新開發的經濟特區。它是一座具有三十萬人口的臨海小城。
2.解放前是一個小漁村,以漁業為主,沒有工業,只有幾所小學。
3.改革開放以來,許多外商到這里投資,經濟增長很快,建立了許多大工廠、一個大
港口。港口與國內外許多城市連接。
4.教育有很大的發展,建立了該城第一所大學。已有三千人從該校畢業。我相信,A
城在不久的將來將更加現代化。參考詞匯:
投資:invest
經濟開發區:an economic-zone
港口:port
17、(1分)
11月11日,你將在家里為你的妹妹15周歲開一個生日晚會,寫信給你的外國朋友Peter,邀請他來參加。晚會開始時間是晚上6點,將持續到很晚。告訴Peter每天晚上你都在家,請他給你打個電話告訴你他是否來參加生日晚會,并表達你盼望見到他的心情。
在信的開頭告訴Peter你已收到他10月25日的來信,但由于最近一直忙于期中考試未能及時回信。
假設你現在的住址是北京西城區云梯胡同1號樓4門2號。
18、(1分)
給筆友保羅(Paul)的一封信 提示:
1.過了一個很好的寒假,在寒假中與父親一起回老家河北農村。
2.吃驚于家鄉的巨大變化。幾乎村里每家都有彩電,許多家蓋了新房。有的家還有了
摩托車和小汽車。
3.一位村民自豪地告訴我,他和一部分村民打算參加一個旅游團到國外旅游。
4.我表示羨慕他們,我對父親說,將來大學畢業要回老家來,父親也表示說他一退休
就來。
5.你的名字小海。
19、(1分)
張紅從廣告上得知某公司需要一名秘書。寫信應聘。以下是張紅的簡歷。
年齡20歲,即將從職業學校畢業。專業:經濟管理(business management)。學英語8年,會計算機。在過去三年中一直是本校學生報編輯之一,學習成績在班上優秀。主要是本人喜歡辦公室工作,相信能勝任秘書工作。如果能得到這個機會將十分感謝。
請以張紅的名義向公司寫信寫聘。參考詞匯:
職業學校:vocational school
專業:major
20、(1分)
給朋友小林的一封信,談談寒假生活。
1.寒假很忙,因為今年七月要參加高考。
2.每天埋頭讀書,復習每門必修課,做許多練習。
3.學習刻苦,每天學習10小時以上,累時看會兒電視,聽音樂,但總不去影劇院。不
得不回絕親戚朋友的邀請,只在除夕時打電話問候。
4.多希望沒有考試,但又不可能,要盡力取得好成績。考上渴望已久的清華大學。參考詞匯:
必修課:required subject
埋頭于某事:bury oneself in sth.參考答案:
11、(1分)
Now let me say something about Beijing Opera.Beijing Opera is very popular in China.It has a history of more than 200 years.During the reign of the Qianlong emperor in the Qing dynasty, Qianlong had a interest in the local opera.In 1790, to celebrate his eightieth birthday, he summoned opera troupes from different places to perform for him in Beijing.Four famous troupes from Anhui province remained in Beijing after the celebration.In 1828, A Hubei troupe came to Beijing and often performed together with the Anhui troupes.The two types of singing mixed together and gradually a new type came into being known as Beijing Opera.Now is the performance.I hope you will like it.12、(1分)
Dear Mr.Du,I’m sorry to tell you that I can’t go to school today.I’ve caught a cold because I went swimming yesterday.This morning I had a headache and had a fever.The doctor advised me to stay in bed for two days.Now I’m writing to you to ask for two days’ sick leave.Yours respectfully,Li Qing
13、(1分)
There will be an English lecture on high school education in the U.S.by Mr.Jackson.It will be given in the Lecture Hall on Saturday afternoon from 2:00 to 4:00, May 15th, 1992.Those who are interested in it are warmly welcome.Be sure not to be late.After the lecture, please write a diary about it in English.THE STUDENTS’ UNION
14、(1分)
Dear Xiao Ming,I was excited to hear that you will come to learn Chinese in our school.Now let me tell you something about our school.Our school campus is beautiful.It has many trees, flowers and a lot of grass.We have two very nice teaching buildings and a dormitory building.In addition, the school has excellent equipment, such as a new gym, a computer room and a large library.There are also a lot of electives to choose from, such as painting, typing and cooking.Above all, there are many excellent teachers in our school.Classes are interesting, the teachers are kind and knowledgeable and willing to help the students.I like our school.I hope you will like our school too.Yours Li Hua
15、(1分)
Dear Jack,I was very glad to receive your letter on the tenth of February.You ask me something about Lu Xun and his works since you began to study Chinese literature.Now let me tell you something about him.Lu Xun was a well-Known Chinese writer, he was not only a writer, a thinker, and translator, but also a founder of modern Chinese literature.His novels have been put into many languages and some of novels have been made into films, such as The True Story of AH Q and The New Year’s Sacrifice which expose sharply the old society.The late Chairman Mao spoke highly of him.Some of his novels have been collected in high school and college textbooks.Since you are learning Chinese literature, I think reading Lu Xun’s novels will benefit a lot.Yours Wei Ming
16、(1分)
My hometown is an economic-open-zone.It is a town on the sea with a population of three hundred thousand.Before the liberation it used to be a fishing village.Most people lived on fishing.There was no industry.And there were only few primary schools here.Since the open-door policy, a lot of foreign businessmen invested here.A lot of factories have been built.Economics have developed rapidly and big port has also been built, which is connected with many ports of other ports both in and out of our country.A new university now has been founded.Three thousand students have already graduated from it.I am sure in the near future our hometown will become more modern.17、(1分)
Doorway 4, building 1
Yunti Hu Tong
Xicheng District
Beijing 100037
China
November 4th,1995 Dear peter,Thank you for your letter of October 25.I haven’t written sooner as I were busy preparing for my mid--term exams.We are having a party on 11th November at our house for my sister’s 15th birthday and we hope you can come.It only happens once a year!The party will start at 6 p.m.and will go on until late!
I’m at home in the evenings.Please give me a call.We’re looking forward to seeing you.loves,Zhao Ning
18、(1分)
Dear Paul,How are you!I think you have come back to school now.I have had a wonderful winter holiday.During the holiday, my father and I went to hometown, In the countryside in HeBei Province.I was astonished to find that great changes had taken place in the village in recent years.Almost every family in the village had colour TV set, many families had their houses newly built, or rebuilt, some of them had motorcycles or cars.One of the villagers proudly told me that he and some other villagers were going to join a tour and travel abroad.How I admire them!
I said to my father that I would go back to my hometown after I graduated from college.Father also expressed he would go back as soon as he retired.Both of us were disappointed when the holiday ended so soon, and we had to leave.What did you do in your holiday? Are you busy now?
Here are my best regards to you and your family
Yours Xiao Hai
19、(1分)
Dear Sir:
How do you do? Through the ad.I know you need a secretary.I would like to have this job.Now let me introduce myself to you.My name is Zhang Hong.I am twenty and will soon graduate from a vocational school.My major is business management.I have been learning English for 8 years and I have computer experience.I have been one of the editors for the student newspaper in our school for the past three years.My grades remain upper level in my class.The most important thing is that I like office work very much.I am sure I can do it well.I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity.Thank you for your consideration.I am looking forward to hearing from you.Sincerely yours, Zhang Hong
20、(1分)Dear Xiao Lin,I have had a busy holiday these winter because I will take part in the entrance examination this September.I almost buried myself in the books every day.I had to go over every required subject and did a lot of exercises.I worked very hard, more than 10 hours a day.When I was tired I watched TV for a while and listened to music, but I never went to the cinema or theater.I had to refuse several invitations from my relatives and classmates.I only called them to greet them on the eve of the Spring Festival.How I wish there were no examinations at all, but of course it is impossible.I will try my best to get better results and go to were no examinations at all, but of course it is impossible.I will try my best to get better results and go to Qing Hua University, which I have been longing for.How is your vacation? Best wishes to you and your family!
Yours Wu Qi
第五篇:2009-2013年高考英語全國卷I 書面表達
2009年高考英語全國卷I 書面表達(滿分25分)
假定你是李華,正在英國接受英語培訓,住在一戶英國人家里。今天你的房東MrsWilson不在家,你準備外出,請給Mrs Wilson寫一留言條,內容包括:
1.外出購物
2.替房東還書
3.Tracy來電話留言:1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)見面取消2)此事已告知Susan3)盡快回電注意:1.詞數100左右;2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
Mrs Wilson,I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm.I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library.At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to.She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting.She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home.She has already told Susan about this change.Li Hua
2010年高考英語全國卷I
假設你是育才中學學生會主席李華,你校將舉辦一次英語演講比賽(speech contest),希望附近某大學的外籍教師Smith 女士來做評委,請參照以下比賽通知給她寫一份信,英語演講比賽
主題:人與自然
時間:6月15日下午 2:00—5:00
地點:501教室
參賽選手:10名學生
聯系人:李華(電話 4487665)
歡迎大家光臨
注意:詞數100左右。
Dear Ms.Smith,I’m Li Hua.Chair of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School, which is close to your University.I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speechcontest to be held in our school on June 1st.It will start at 2:00 pm and keep for about three hours.Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic ―Man andthe Nature.We hope you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you.Please call me at 446765560 if you have any questions.I am looking forward to your reply.With best wishes
Li Hua
2011年高考英語全國卷I
假定你是李華,正在一所英國學校學習暑期課程,遇到一些困難,希望得到學校輔導中心(Learning Center)的幫助。根據學校規定,你需書面預約,請按下列要點寫一封信:
1.本人簡介:
2.求助內容;
3.約定時間;
4.你的聯系方式(Email:lihua@1236 com;Phone:12345678)。
注意:1詞數l00左右;2可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;3結束語已為你寫好。Dear Sir/Madam,My full name is Li Hua, a student of summer courses here.I am writing this letter to report some of the problems and puzzles I encountered when learning the course of
Business English.My puzzle is that I don’t know whether this course mainly teaches English or teaches in English.In other words, how could I balance between business knowledge and English itself?
I hope you could give me some directions so that I can work it out without too much difficulty.I am available
at 8 am on Wednesday.Would that be OK? Please do feel free to contact me by e-mail or telephone at any time.My email address is lihua@1236.com
My phone number is 12345678.Look forward to your reply!
Yours,Li Hua
2012年高考英語課標卷
假定你是李華,從互聯網(the Internet)上得知一個國際中學生組織將在新加坡(Singapore)舉辦夏令營,歡迎各國學生參加。請寫一封電子郵件申請參加。
內容主要包括:
1.自我介紹(包括英語能力);
2.參加意圖(介紹中國、了解其他國家);
3.希望獲準。
Dear Sir or Madam,I am Li Hua, a middle school student from China.I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it.I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English.What is more, I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well.I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.Looking forward to your reply!
Li Hua
2013年高考英語課標卷
第二節 書面表達(滿分25分)
假定你是李華,自制一些中國結(Chinese knot)。給開網店的美國朋友Tom寫封信,請他代賣,要點包括:
1.外觀(尺寸、顏色、材料)
2.象征意義
3.價格
注意:1.詞數100左右;2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;3.開頭語已為你寫好。
Dear Tom,How are you doing? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me.I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials.They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wid.In China, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck.People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses.They are only 12.99 Us dollars each.If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me.Also, do let me know if you need further information.Thankyou!
Li Hua Best regards!Yours,